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aces
09-13-2006, 03:51 PM
That's sick dude. I don't know if you could call it a new style cause it still has your sick style from before in it so everyone will know oh that's tricks but it is definatly an improvement and bringing the style further. I really haven't ever seen a style like it so I do like the origionality of it all.

TricksForKids
09-13-2006, 03:53 PM
Thanks man i was hoping people would still think its me

some guy from NCI...
09-13-2006, 03:53 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 13 2006, 03:42 PM
and yeah i know i mispelled "phsyk" in my handstyle as "physk"
haha I just been playing around with this word and I keep mispellin it

koper
09-13-2006, 03:54 PM
Tricks that style is fuckin SOLID man, keep it up i love it.

TricksForKids
09-13-2006, 03:59 PM
thanks inko, and yeah some guy man, ahah i sketched the Y first three times, fucking confusing

aces
09-13-2006, 04:15 PM
Yea it is awkward to say PHSYK so I've been saying PHYSK and then I got all confused and went back downstairs to check it so ya I didn't mess up. K's are a pain in the ass though at least with my style/letters because it really isn't my style it's just simple letters. I'm gunna try to step it up a little though but if it doesn't work then oh well back to the same old stuff over and over again.

AnimaniakAttack!
09-13-2006, 04:45 PM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/8099/0912062313bm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3829/0912062314vf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/7165/0912062314arx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

si0n
09-13-2006, 05:21 PM
AnimaniakAttack! - i like the 3rd page, real clean for a pen sketch

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/5417/img0239ig1.th.jpg (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0239ig1.jpg)

something i did in school

TricksForKids
09-13-2006, 05:31 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 13 2006, 03:42 PM
yeah ape man pretty nice, im a fan of the handstyle S actually, but if you best it everytime it gets boring

fuckin around with a bit of a diff style, out popped this mess, im not sure if im happy with it, but oh well, and yeah i know i mispelled "phsyk" in my handstyle as "physk"

Peace

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7713/phsykkq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits, and sion, try tweaking some shit, play around with letter sizes etc, youve got the simple part down, but i wouldnt wanna see that painted yet.

Peace

bouncingsoul
09-13-2006, 05:39 PM
Your stuff reminds of some ink stuff I used to do

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j44/zectwo/5b7dc20c.jpg

But that was a while ago

TricksForKids
09-13-2006, 05:42 PM
that E and "C"? im guessing are on fire, not feelin the first letter whatever it is..and this shit looks nicer than your newer stuff i find

bouncingsoul
09-13-2006, 05:45 PM
Haha yeah the first letter was supposed to be a Z... The style was waay too limiting so I stopped doing it... I might try something though

ceroX24X
09-13-2006, 06:01 PM
yeah dude tricks i really like that style its super original. i cant wait to see it develop more. aces thanks for the advice i was thinking of putting a simple s in there but then i dont think it would have matched. "s" is the letter i need to work on most. but thanks for the crits.

Sumoe
09-13-2006, 06:23 PM
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/1079/dsc0501ok7.jpg here's mine for the battle

afek
09-13-2006, 06:26 PM
i like the fill but the 3d is a lil fucked up

Sumoe
09-13-2006, 06:26 PM
not quite done yet... <_<

DnK/eeK
09-13-2006, 07:29 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00006.jpg

just a quick sketch any crits??

ARMAwonR
09-13-2006, 07:32 PM
Don&#39;t Mind That Wack-Ass &#39;M&#39;

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid214/p54ea9af4ad66c8d078b3b13438aa9ed9/ecfcf3ea.jpg

bouncingsoul
09-13-2006, 08:03 PM
It&#39;s looking real good...except the M. I like your handies and stuff though... The 3d is screwed up... If it goes up and right from the left part and up and right from the left part, it should go straight up from the middle part... Uuse a vanishing point from next time but otherwise it&#39;s nice

aces
09-13-2006, 08:18 PM
Yea the M looks like a P and an I.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4679/picture011rz8.jpg
Outline for the battle. Crits???

AnimaniakAttack!
09-13-2006, 08:53 PM
edit

nerdx
09-13-2006, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by wordzcantexpress@Sep 13 2006, 01:55 PM
^ That is sick... It might look a little better with a hole in the R. I don&#39;t really like the 2 block things at the end, maybe change the angle on them. But it&#39;s really good.
thanks yo. yeah all the extra bits were just a experiment.
never done them before. but other than that, it came out well.

nerdx
09-13-2006, 09:07 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 13 2006, 08:18 PM
Yea the M looks like a P and an I.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4679/picture011rz8.jpg
Outline for the battle. Crits???
this is money.
make all the letters have the same height.

perfect.

novella
09-13-2006, 09:21 PM
crits crits crits

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/sketch.jpg

fost
09-13-2006, 09:28 PM
what the hell is going on with your fill?

and isn&#39;t tesla some washed up band or something?

novella
09-13-2006, 09:32 PM
ive never heard of a band called &#39;tesla&#39; before, they might be though

this is just the outline, im still going to color it. and then ill repost

for the fill i was thinking of making it yellow, then the squares and shit would be two different tones of purple


edit* that should say &#39;there might be&#39;. not &#39;they might be&#39;

Bartic
09-13-2006, 09:34 PM
Tesla was a physicist/scientist.
Tesla: I&#39;m not likin the right top portion of the T ,E is nice. Your other letters need a bit of work aswell. The A has def potential. Try to keep them all the same height and in line. throw some 3d on that sucker

novella
09-13-2006, 09:38 PM
ya, nikola tesla, german i think

but i was actually going to work on the T, and the L a little bit.
i drew this one out of line on purpose though, just playing around with different styles

3D is either going to be down left, or into the center

nerdx
09-13-2006, 09:43 PM
tesla looks alright. i really like the S.
just for next time try and make all your letters have the same style.
like a computer font all letters have the same flow and look to them.

DnK/eeK
09-13-2006, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Sep 13 2006, 07:29 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00006.jpg

just a quick sketch any crits??
any crits for my outline????

fost
09-13-2006, 09:47 PM
yeah tesla was also hair metal band from the 80&#39;s

and i think the 3d would look sick if it was going to the center

novella
09-13-2006, 09:49 PM
hair metal? haha. ive never listned to a lot of 80s rock/metal though.

what does that say DNK? hume?

nerdx
09-13-2006, 09:51 PM
hume, style is dope but i just dont think the e fits into it.

DnK/eeK
09-13-2006, 09:51 PM
naw its nume but yeah the e is the worst letter for me lol

edit: i might just keep it num

shifty!
09-13-2006, 09:55 PM
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5838/sh042lb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
pretend the lil line on the bottom of the &#39;g&#39; isnt there...
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/15/sh041ad6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

which one do you guys like better?

novella
09-13-2006, 09:55 PM
ya, id play with the e a bit, and the extension on the n is kind of out of place

fost
09-13-2006, 09:55 PM
nume:

take that top little thing off the n and fix up the e

but keep working on that style i think it could look fresh

novella
09-13-2006, 09:57 PM
i like the top one better, just because its drawn more proportionally

work on the bottom one and it will be the better of the two i think

shifty!
09-13-2006, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Sep 13 2006, 09:55 PM
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5838/sh042lb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
pretend the lil line on the bottom of the &#39;g&#39; isnt there...
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/15/sh041ad6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

which one do you guys like better?
bump for some feedback...

nerdx
09-13-2006, 10:02 PM
top minus the squirts and that nasty ass shit stain on the paper

nerdx
09-13-2006, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Sep 13 2006, 09:51 PM
naw its nume but yeah the e is the worst letter for me lol

edit: i might just keep it num
if its nume then loose the extention on the top of the n, making it look like a h

DnK/eeK
09-13-2006, 10:15 PM
just did thnx im just keeping it num


http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00008.jpg


quik 3-d................. i also gotta work on my 3-d :(

nerdx
09-13-2006, 11:00 PM
uhh. loose the 3d try a very small shadow.
it looked so much better before the 3d.

Venom.
09-14-2006, 12:54 AM
DNK: your lines look very shaky.. move your hand faster maybe

ceroX24X
09-14-2006, 01:44 AM
ok so i was bored today and did this drawing just something simple. and there is also a cleaner copy of what i entered in the toy battle

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6801.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6800.jpg

ToXiK
09-14-2006, 02:02 AM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/scan0002.jpg

yeah i know. I&#39;m not a good writer but I tried. Crits good and bad would be nice so i can fix some things and get ideas.

ToXiK
09-14-2006, 02:03 AM
I didn&#39;t do a fill cause i didn&#39;t want to mess anything up

MEBone
09-14-2006, 02:24 AM
dude does that say mayo? hahahahahaha

SeKz
09-14-2006, 04:06 AM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/7273/image027ru3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Just did this. Crits please ;)

doomsayer
09-14-2006, 04:55 AM
yeah man, looks fresh, nice fill ;)

playing with perspective and stuff:

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6733/perspectivesep14li0.th.jpg (http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=perspectivesep14li0.jpg)

aces
09-14-2006, 05:39 AM
I don&#39;t know I like all the letters but the R.

levans
09-14-2006, 05:39 AM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7786/picturesfromseptember198fa3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7786/picturesfromseptember198fa3.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

il post up more tomorrow but heres a couple sketches crits?

levans
09-14-2006, 05:40 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8875/picturesfromseptember197hq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
09-14-2006, 05:41 AM
Originally posted by nerdx+Sep 13 2006, 10:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Sep 13 2006, 10:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 13 2006, 08:18 PM
Yea the M looks like a P and an I.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4679/picture011rz8.jpg
Outline for the battle. Crits???
this is money.
make all the letters have the same height.

perfect. [/b][/quote]
Any other crits other than this

d_g
09-14-2006, 05:50 AM
Levans, bad color choice on the first one.

DnK/eeK
09-14-2006, 12:11 PM
Originally posted by levans@Sep 14 2006, 05:40 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8875/picturesfromseptember197hq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
try having different sized bubbles on the third

ceroX24X
09-14-2006, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by ceroX24X@Sep 14 2006, 01:44 AM
ok so i was bored today and did this drawing just something simple. and there is also a cleaner copy of what i entered in the toy battle

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6801.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6800.jpg
BUMP

obseen
09-14-2006, 12:54 PM
the letters saying " remember the name" look well good&#33;
your handstyle looks decent aswell, im not feeling the pieces that much
although the bottom one is a million times better than the first

aces
09-14-2006, 01:15 PM
Originally posted by aces+Sep 14 2006, 06:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Sep 14 2006, 06:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by nerdx@Sep 13 2006, 10:07 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 13 2006, 08:18 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4679/picture011rz8.jpg
Outline for the battle. Crits???
this is money.
make all the letters have the same height.

perfect.
Any other crits other than this [/b][/quote]
Still no crits? And cero I&#39;m lovin that PHSYK sketch.

sky 5
09-14-2006, 01:37 PM
aces -you got the proportion down ...you def improving sketch by skecth ... i would fix the S up by having the middle slant bar extended farther out to the right and then have the bottom bar of the S come up a lil shorter than the middle bar . . .if that makes sense . . in other words instead of having the bottom bar be the fartherest east make it the middle bar . . . move the P up a lil and slightly more into the H so it lays even with the rest of the letters and takes up some open space above the H . .

steelogic
09-14-2006, 01:50 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/P1010065.jpg



http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/P1010062-1.jpg

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/P1010061-1.jpg

feedback would be appriciated

aces
09-14-2006, 02:18 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Sep 14 2006, 02:37 PM
aces -you got the proportion down ...you def improving sketch by skecth ... i would fix the S up by having the middle slant bar extended farther out to the right and then have the bottom bar of the S come up a lil shorter than the middle bar . . .if that makes sense . . in other words instead of having the bottom bar be the fartherest east make it the middle bar . . . move the P up a lil and slightly more into the H so it lays even with the rest of the letters and takes up some open space above the H . .
Hey thanks sky 5 I really enjoy getting advice from someone that is so much better than me and being told by them that I&#39;m on the right track.

Steel logic - go simpler. No add-ons and stuff like that. Also don&#39;t have the 3-D overlap the other letters like the bottom of the N is sitting ontop of the N. Don&#39;t do that it makes the piece look bad. You&#39;re off to a pretty good start though with the second and third one but the first just doesn&#39;t look good.

Slushi
09-14-2006, 02:50 PM
Lose the arrows on your N, And that karak has no eyes.
Other than that just keep practicing.

dont tag trees
09-14-2006, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by Slushi@Sep 14 2006, 02:50 PM
Lose the arrows on your N, And that karak has no eyes.
Other than that just keep practicing.
"lose the arrows" "Lose those arrows" "You should take those arrows off"
fuck that, I say keep the arrows if you want them. arrows are not bad things
yes you are a toy but using arrows does not make you a toy.
example: http://www.skam.net/
every single piece skam has ever done has had an arrow in it
the letters, characters, and symbols that you use will not determin the quality
of you work. the only way that you will get better is by practising. just keep at it.
if you think that your good after one summer of practise, just wait and see what
you&#39;ll be like after 4 summers and all the time in between.

peace :ph34r:

aces
09-14-2006, 03:46 PM
Ok just to clear up one thing. Those aren&#39;t all the pieces that he has done in his graffiti life. He probably started simple like all the other good people.

nemzone
09-14-2006, 04:23 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFUDI8S0k9M

did that tonite

dri
09-14-2006, 04:27 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/CSProductions/101_3823.jpg

aces
09-14-2006, 04:27 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/72/picture014ss2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/2998/picture015yz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MA throwie concept. What do you think. I don&#39;t know what I think about it so I need your advice. Also if anyone could just give me an idea for a C that would be great but if not then I&#39;ll just keep workin at it. Everything that I think of looks bad with this style but I like the M and the A.


Nemz I like your style but why make a video and post it on youtube? That just seems gay to me.

levans
09-14-2006, 04:35 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6176/picturesfromseptember189ri5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what do u guys think of this i did it a couple of months ago

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9602/picturesfromseptember192my8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

levans
09-14-2006, 04:52 PM
sorry about double post but here is more....crits?
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4541/picturesfromseptember190vy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4541/picturesfromseptember190vy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/8117/picturesfromseptember196ki5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

levans
09-14-2006, 04:57 PM
crap that second picture was ment to be this 1

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/2342/picturesfromseptember194xd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bartic
09-14-2006, 05:09 PM
Levans: It looks like you have general knowledge of typical graf style and additions and such, but your structure is lacking. For example the first A of the yellow filled peice which you posted twice. No structure what so ever, the stuf you posted a while back was lots better. Fix up that structure and with your knowledge it&#39;d be sweet. i like the peice with black background but without all the squiggle extentions

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6254/suki6uk2.png

Comments? Anything at all

DnK/eeK
09-14-2006, 05:11 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00009.jpg

here a new name and style just outline for soon to be peice.........i hope

MEBone
09-14-2006, 05:11 PM
levans-dude no. simples, simples, simples. go do some blockbusters and dont worry bout wastin ur markers

aces
09-14-2006, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 14 2006, 05:27 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/72/picture014ss2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/2998/picture015yz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MA throwie concept. What do you think. I don&#39;t know what I think about it so I need your advice. Also if anyone could just give me an idea for a C that would be great but if not then I&#39;ll just keep workin at it. Everything that I think of looks bad with this style but I like the M and the A.
Once again my shit gets skipped.

Nyc Sno
09-14-2006, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by aces+Sep 14 2006, 05:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Sep 14 2006, 05:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 14 2006, 05:27 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/72/picture014ss2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/2998/picture015yz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MA throwie concept. What do you think. I don&#39;t know what I think about it so I need your advice. Also if anyone could just give me an idea for a C that would be great but if not then I&#39;ll just keep workin at it. Everything that I think of looks bad with this style but I like the M and the A.
Once again my shit gets skipped. [/b][/quote]
it says ma it looks like va? :blink:

Bartic
09-14-2006, 05:17 PM
Srry man don&#39;t really know lots about throwies, don&#39;t do them myself, tho i should.
M is lacking in my opinion a U maybe but its not workin as an m for me. From what i&#39;ve seen throwies have all letters the same general style, the M and A just don&#39;t flow together with having the tops different. Larger rounder maybe?

aces
09-14-2006, 05:21 PM
Alright I&#39;ll keep workin on it.

Blix
09-14-2006, 05:53 PM
throw im workin on crits?? http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/84/yelthrowim8.th.jpg (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yelthrowim8.jpg)

grimace
09-14-2006, 06:04 PM
piece i finished for the phsyk battle let me know what yal think
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/phsyk2.jpg

BoRe-719-
09-14-2006, 06:07 PM
looks like it says thestk, work on your letters.

good flow, good coloring.


i guess its about time for me to post something

DnK/eeK
09-14-2006, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Sep 14 2006, 05:11 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00009.jpg

here a new name and style just outline for soon to be peice.........i hope
anyone??

Bartic
09-14-2006, 06:10 PM
dNK: I&#39;m diggin the style, i don&#39;t quite know why tho, i think 1 of those extensions on the M may be too much, 3d up and right would be tight


Originally posted by Bartic@Sep 14 2006, 05:09 PM


http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6254/suki6uk2.png

Comments? Anything at all

sky 5
09-14-2006, 06:17 PM
Originally posted by grimace@Sep 14 2006, 06:04 PM
piece i finished for the phsyk battle let me know what yal think
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/phsyk2.jpg
bizzumpp . . .

Blix
09-14-2006, 06:19 PM
Originally posted by Blix@Sep 14 2006, 05:53 PM
throw im workin on crits?? http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/84/yelthrowim8.th.jpg (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yelthrowim8.jpg)
bump you think these are ready to be painted?

Bartic
09-14-2006, 06:22 PM
blix, i&#39;m likin the top 1 without the encircled handstyle letters tho, bottom one not soo much, decent cracks would be hard to do that fast

aces
09-14-2006, 06:43 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/77/picture016ho5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sky I took your advice and this is what it came out as. Is that what you meant with the S?

BoRe-719-
09-14-2006, 07:23 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan0011-1.jpg

new frieght sketches

aces
09-14-2006, 07:28 PM
I don&#39;t really like the E&#39;s but please try not to post your shit w/o giving crits to the person behind you. I just hate that I give out crits a lot and then I post stuff and its like 5 pages back without a single line of advice on it. But anyways I say the bottom one is best and I really like the P on it. I don&#39;t know why it just appeals to me.

NICCSACC
09-14-2006, 07:28 PM
something i did about 10 minutes ago. had to post something...
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1085.jpg
prolly wont use it for the battle tho.

sky 5
09-14-2006, 07:30 PM
aces - nah man that aint what i meant, it looks like you didnt change the S . . . . when i get home i do a quick sketch showing what i tried to say . .

bore - nice freight killers, i lik eth elean on em . . . the E on the bottom is alil undeveloped and hidden thoo . .

aces
09-14-2006, 07:30 PM
You spelt it wrong it&#39;s PHSYK. Other than that it&#39;s sick dude. The H is a little plain and the coloring is a little sketchy but the idea of the fill is sweet. Can I get some crits on mine though please.

NICCSACC
09-14-2006, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 14 2006, 06:43 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/77/picture016ho5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sky I took your advice and this is what it came out as. Is that what you meant with the S?
nice structure clean as hell besides the 3d is a little wacky in the s and stuff. thats about the jist of it.

fuck... thats a weird word to spell aint it? PHSYK... it dosent meld in my mind too well. oh well.

craz-e one
09-14-2006, 07:35 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1025/pv044nv8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this is goin in the battle. feedback plz

BoRe-719-
09-14-2006, 07:37 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 14 2006, 07:28 PM
I don&#39;t really like the E&#39;s but please try not to post your shit w/o giving crits to the person behind you. I just hate that I give out crits a lot and then I post stuff and its like 5 pages back without a single line of advice on it. But anyways I say the bottom one is best and I really like the P on it. I don&#39;t know why it just appeals to me.
whats the point, noone really pays attention to crits anyways...half the time it seem s like kids just post to show off, probably the main reason i almost never show my work in this thread, i already critiqued a piece before me, not the one immediately before my post, but about 15 minutes before i posted that pic, i critiqued someones work.

aces
09-14-2006, 07:37 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Sep 14 2006, 08:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Sep 14 2006, 08:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 14 2006, 06:43 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/77/picture016ho5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sky I took your advice and this is what it came out as. Is that what you meant with the S?
nice structure clean as hell besides the 3d is a little wacky in the s and stuff. thats about the jist of it.

fuck... thats a weird word to spell aint it? PHSYK... it dosent meld in my mind too well. oh well. [/b][/quote]
Yea a lot of people have been screwing that up. Naturally you think it should be PHYSIC but spelt wrong but whatever.

NICCSACC
09-14-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by craz&#045;e one@Sep 14 2006, 07:35 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1025/pv044nv8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this is goin in the battle. feedback plz
id redo it and go alot bigger. just my 2 cents.

aces
09-14-2006, 07:40 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;+Sep 14 2006, 08:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BoRe&#045;719&#045; &#064; Sep 14 2006, 08:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 14 2006, 07:28 PM
I don&#39;t really like the E&#39;s but please try not to post your shit w/o giving crits to the person behind you. I just hate that I give out crits a lot and then I post stuff and its like 5 pages back without a single line of advice on it. But anyways I say the bottom one is best and I really like the P on it. I don&#39;t know why it just appeals to me.
whats the point, noone really pays attention to crits anyways...half the time it seem s like kids just post to show off, probably the main reason i almost never show my work in this thread, i already critiqued a piece before me, not the one immediately before my post, but about 15 minutes before i posted that pic, i critiqued someones work. [/b][/quote]
Sorry I didn&#39;t mean to flip out at you and I understand that you do give crits. I was just mad because my stuff rarely gets crits. Also I try to listen to the crits that I get unless they are from someone that has no clue what they are talking about and are just repeating what they have read already somewhere else.

grimace
09-14-2006, 07:42 PM
Originally posted by aces+Sep 14 2006, 07:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Sep 14 2006, 07:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 14 2006, 08:33 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 14 2006, 06:43 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/77/picture016ho5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sky I took your advice and this is what it came out as. Is that what you meant with the S?
nice structure clean as hell besides the 3d is a little wacky in the s and stuff. thats about the jist of it.

fuck... thats a weird word to spell aint it? PHSYK... it dosent meld in my mind too well. oh well.
Yea a lot of people have been screwing that up. Naturally you think it should be PHYSIC but spelt wrong but whatever. [/b][/quote]
that looks dope other than the H it looks too much liek an A, maybe if u flip it make it come to a pont at the bottome instead of the top so it still balances out. i like it tho

craz-e one
09-14-2006, 07:42 PM
hey bartic thats insanely ill i like the style keep it up. one thing what does it say?

BoRe-719-
09-14-2006, 07:46 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 14 2006, 07:40 PM
Also I try to listen to the crits that I get unless they are from someone that has no clue what they are talking about and are just repeating what they have read already somewhere else.
thats just it, you cant really get any good suggestions or crits because half the people in this thread dont know what theyre doing, its rare that you get someone like nicc or sky to comment your shit, might as well just learn what works and looks best to you.

i type way better when im high

aces
09-14-2006, 07:47 PM
What are you talking about craz-e and yea bore I understand what you&#39;re saying.

Bartic
09-14-2006, 07:51 PM
Originally posted by craz&#045;e one@Sep 14 2006, 07:42 PM
hey bartic thats insanely ill i like the style keep it up. one thing what does it say?
Thx man, says suki
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6254/suki6uk2.png

FEN the HEN
09-14-2006, 08:23 PM
fuck i hate that word ........crits..... <_<

Bastardo
09-14-2006, 08:31 PM
suki- ent that some chinese birds name? fuck dat mate.

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/884/picture075rs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alright people im new and i write Bank and im from the UK&#33;

aces
09-14-2006, 08:31 PM
Crits on what fen?

nerdx
09-14-2006, 08:34 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Sep 14 2006, 08:31 PM
suki- ent that some chinese birds name? fuck dat mate.

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/884/picture075rs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alright people im new and i write Bank and im from the UK&#33;
you trying to make it look like a one liner?

Bastardo
09-14-2006, 08:35 PM
ha fuck me if i could do that in a one liner.
nah its just a style, not really the style in london but you know bring a lil variety.

nerdx
09-14-2006, 08:38 PM
im diggin it a lot, i just think you sould loose all the extras making it look like a one liner.

Fosale!
09-14-2006, 08:43 PM
Bank, that work is effin&#39; dope.
mad props. i like it as is.

Bastardo
09-14-2006, 08:52 PM
cheers fosale.
riiight so nerdx just done something you would like.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/884/picture075rs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^ my fave style

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5993/picture076qw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alera
09-14-2006, 08:56 PM
bank if thats a on liner its good but if its not idk if im fellin the line things but thats just me

some thing i did with different letters. NARU messed up the 3d on the u becouse i was russin
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2347/0914062146bs3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

NICCSACC
09-14-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Sep 14 2006, 08:31 PM
suki- ent that some chinese birds name? fuck dat mate.

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/884/picture075rs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alright people im new and i write Bank and im from the UK&#33;
i really like this. aesthetically its pleasing to my opticals.

Bastardo
09-14-2006, 09:49 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Sep 14 2006, 08:52 PM
cheers fosale.
riiight so nerdx just done something you would like.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/884/picture075rs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^ my fave style

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5993/picture076qw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumped fot the eyes of nerdx

oh and naru? take away all the bumps in the N, just take it back to a simple 1 with maybe a bump on the top like the U.

Banker.

WolfBurrns
09-14-2006, 09:50 PM
Isnt Banksy in the uk? Bank is obviously differant than Banksy, but its pretty close. Would that be a problem? J/w.

Bastardo
09-14-2006, 09:51 PM
banksy aint really one for throws and shit though is he?
hes just another one of those art fags.

bouncingsoul
09-14-2006, 09:54 PM
I dig banksy&#39;s stuff, but I think you&#39;ll be fine writing bank, just throw on a 2 at the end

AnimaniakAttack!
09-14-2006, 10:03 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/6204/0914062235ts9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4071/0914062247uy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
09-14-2006, 10:05 PM
I dig that stuff. It&#39;d look awesome if you just made it a little cleaner (or maybe it&#39;s just the camera) and made stickers of those

BLAKink
09-14-2006, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo+Sep 14 2006, 09:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bastardo @ Sep 14 2006, 09:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bastardo@Sep 14 2006, 08:52 PM
cheers fosale.
riiight so nerdx just done something you would like.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/884/picture075rs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^ my fave style

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5993/picture076qw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
[/b][/quote]
good shit bro good shit keep it up...

nerdx
09-14-2006, 10:35 PM
yeah, bank botoom one is fire


trying something way diffrent what yall think
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4273/img2501cv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Z FUSE
09-14-2006, 10:38 PM
agree^ that&#39;s a tight throw up there.
anything for my shity throw..?
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5581/so3if8.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4469/so2xk5.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/8162/sokw7.jpg

ARMAwonR
09-14-2006, 10:42 PM
nerdx ... that shit reminds me of transformers ... :lol:

Necro-
09-14-2006, 10:44 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Sep 14 2006, 09:51 PM
hes just another one of those art fags.
...

wtf?

show some fucking respect. banksy does some crazy shit you could never dream of pulling off.

and art fag? what the fuck do you think graffiti is.




PS very nice throws, though. like the one that looks like a 1 liner at first glance.

d_g
09-14-2006, 10:49 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Sep 15 2006, 03:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Sep 15 2006, 03:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bastardo@Sep 14 2006, 09:51 PM
hes just another one of those art fags.
...

wtf?

show some fucking respect. banksy does some crazy shit you could never dream of pulling off.

and art fag? what the fuck do you think graffiti is. [/b][/quote]
Yeah I agree. What he does is still classed as graffiti even though it&#39;s a completely different style.

nerdx
09-14-2006, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by ARMAwonR@Sep 14 2006, 10:42 PM
nerdx ... that shit reminds me of transformers ... :lol:
lol transformers.

bump for color.
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7696/img2503fr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bartic
09-14-2006, 11:06 PM
Nice, so many people are comming up with new awesome styles. Looks good, i&#39;m never able to rock new styles that good.

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2701/suki7nd0.png

i need to work on my lines, exit sign is horrid

novella
09-14-2006, 11:30 PM
that blue color is dope, i like it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/sticker.jpg

i posted the rough sketch for this awhile back, what do you guys think of it now?

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 12:46 AM
i dont like it too much, its really clean, i dont like the checked lines and the letters need some more work, there kinda whack

sky 5
09-15-2006, 12:57 AM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7670/1191919sx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

def not the greatest but the latest . . .thinkin of channging my name the BERSK . . .

tesla - good coloring and effort but you might wanna try tightening up your letters a whole bunch . . .try drawing a 2 inch by 8 - 12 inch rectangle and keeping the letters inside the box . . . . you gotta find the style that fits you so its just a suggestion . . .

d_g
09-15-2006, 01:16 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Sep 15 2006, 05:57 PM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7670/1191919sx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

def not the greatest but the latest . . .thinkin of channging my name the BERSK . . .

Nawice.

There&#39;s a guy in New Zealand who writes BERST. Not that it matters haha. Just thought I&#39;d mention.

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 01:57 AM
quick sketch i did in school, any crits, should i try painting now?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep15thro.jpg

levans
09-15-2006, 02:06 AM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/7053/picturesfromseptember408zx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


just some a`s for my throwie (avoka) which 1 do u guys think looks best. the top left 1 is my current a

d_g
09-15-2006, 02:30 AM
Number 2 looks best IMO.

NICCSACC
09-15-2006, 03:28 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1087.jpg

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:29 AM
alrite i havent been on this site for a while.. buh tell me wah u guys think..

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/000_0765.jpg

OliveOil
09-15-2006, 04:40 AM
last 2 posts are very nice.

aces
09-15-2006, 05:23 AM
Nicc the M kinda looks like an N or a U with an A at the end but its still sick.

nerdx
09-15-2006, 08:08 AM
Originally posted by nerdx+Sep 14 2006, 10:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Sep 14 2006, 10:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ARMAwonR@Sep 14 2006, 10:42 PM
nerdx ... that shit reminds me of transformers ... :lol:
lol transformers.

bump for color.
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7696/img2503fr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us) [/b][/quote]
bump to get a bit of feedback

OliveOil
09-15-2006, 09:43 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/25-1.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/25.jpg

drag you out that Bentley coupe and take it to the chop shop...

FEN the HEN
09-15-2006, 09:54 AM
those are sick, i especially like the one liner

OliveOil
09-15-2006, 10:00 AM
not a oneliner, haha, just a fast hollow design....or something gay like that.

nemzone
09-15-2006, 12:27 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFUDI8S0k9M
thot id bump it since no1 sed anythin cept 1 guy. and i did it cuz fot it wud look cool to see the process in a few mins, and its on youtube so i can link to it online.

olive im lovin ur bottom throw&#33;

nemzone
09-15-2006, 12:36 PM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5082/dsc00950lz7.jpg
did these drunk at a m8s last week
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9292/dsc00953rz8.jpg
they just experimentals

EDIT sorry bout the size

trashhh
09-15-2006, 01:04 PM
some really nice styles ther nems

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 01:41 PM
alrite.
tell me wah u guys think about this one

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/000_0721.jpg

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 02:24 PM
yo InvisableAzn i can&#39;t read it... :blink: try going a bit simpler and keep all the letters the same style/size/shape.

i love being back at school :D, get to draw all lesson&#33;
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/2563/11fy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
during a graphics lesson.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4074/12xo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
french and a bit of history...
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3985/13at8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Graphics again.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4958/14id6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
during phyisics&#33;

crits please :D

C3ZR ONE
09-15-2006, 02:43 PM
Krazie Ammo- The first and 2nd drawings are pretty cool. Good roller material. The first would be tough tho.

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo

aces
09-15-2006, 02:46 PM
Not really. You just think you&#39;re good because you have arrows in your piece.

Bastardo
09-15-2006, 02:47 PM
Originally posted by InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
fucking hell.
just shut the hell up&#33; he was giving a perfectly valid opinion trying to improve you.
By the looks of it hes better than you.

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 02:47 PM
lol u guys havent seem all my work.............

buh if u guys think i suck then i guess..
jus cuz that one looks crapy

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 02:48 PM
hey InvisableAzn, you asked for some crits and i gave you some :blink: dont ask for crits if you cant handle them.

Bastardo
09-15-2006, 02:49 PM
i dont beleive you, show your other work and then we can see how "good" you are

tht was to InvisableAzn

-GEKS-
09-15-2006, 02:49 PM
Originally posted by InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why.

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 02:49 PM
lol.
like u kno wah ur talkin about

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 02:54 PM
Originally posted by InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:47 PM
jus cuz that one looks crapy
why post it up if it looks crappy?
post up some of your other stuff then...and i never said i was better than you i was just giving crits. your the one trying to start some beef. if you think your so good then why don&#39;t you post it up in the lookie lookie blackbook thread, lets see what they say :D

yo geks- the gorillaz one looks really good
lol, arrows are fun :D but try and make them the same size and width.

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 02:57 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/kimtagg-1.jpg


the brooklyn battle i won.

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/brooklyn.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/casytagg.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/000_0338.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/bgirlrayray.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/d8ballers.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/Gabbytagghehe.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/maddevasiontagg.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/kayotic2.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/name1copy.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/tag8.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/tag4.jpg


http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/tag1.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/tagg1copy-1.jpg

+HyBriD+
09-15-2006, 02:58 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Sep 15 2006, 12:36 PM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5082/dsc00950lz7.jpg
did these drunk at a m8s last week
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9292/dsc00953rz8.jpg
they just experimentals

EDIT sorry bout the size
i like your stuff nemz

aces
09-15-2006, 02:59 PM
EDIT

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:00 PM
i kno how to spell invisible...
i jus spell it invisable becuz itz different..

and the greek root of ible and able have the same meaning so it really doesnt matter

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 03:01 PM
Originally posted by +HyBriD++Sep 15 2006, 02:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (+HyBriD+ @ Sep 15 2006, 02:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Sep 15 2006, 12:36 PM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5082/dsc00950lz7.jpg
did these drunk at a m8s last week
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9292/dsc00953rz8.jpg
they just experimentals

EDIT sorry bout the size
i like your stuff nemz [/b][/quote]
yeah man, im really feelin the style&#33;

-GEKS-
09-15-2006, 03:04 PM
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;+Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-GEKS- @ Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why. [/b][/quote]
okay invasable, ur right. i thought u were juust some random guy with an overactive ego. bump for crits

sky 5
09-15-2006, 03:05 PM
i remember i lost in that &#39;brooklyn&#39; battle, what was it 6 months ago?. . .my first battle on BS and invisibleazn handled me . . . . :( . . . but i never understand what you all are thinkin when you vote . . .. bleep bleep

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 03:09 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Sep 15 2006, 02:24 PM
yo InvisableAzn i can&#39;t read it... :blink: try going a bit simpler and keep all the letters the same style/size/shape.

i love being back at school :D, get to draw all lesson&#33;
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/2563/11fy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
during a graphics lesson.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4074/12xo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
french and a bit of history...
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3985/13at8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Graphics again.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4958/14id6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
during phyisics&#33;

crits please :D
crits? :D

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:09 PM
yeah ive gotten rusty over the summer.
that brooklyn battle was the last peice ive done til a week ago.

itz alrite sky5. thanks for the battle tho.

Bastardo
09-15-2006, 03:23 PM
sorry to doubt you invisable, but you know that pece aint as good as the others&#33;
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3102/picturetq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
random throws

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:24 PM
lol.
i like ur stuff cuz i cant do that style..
buh yeah ive been rusty and it wasnt all tat.

-GEKS-
09-15-2006, 03:25 PM
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;+Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-GEKS- @ Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why.
okay invasable, ur right. i thought u were juust some random guy with an overactive ego. bump for crits [/b][/quote]
crits now.

sky 5
09-15-2006, 03:27 PM
"thanks for the battle tho"?? . . . .wtf you smokin on son tryin to sound dismissive and shit . . . i take it your trying to murk me but you should take your wack style to the drawing board and start over from scratch .. . . and thats whats up

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:29 PM
u wanna battle again?

aces
09-15-2006, 03:30 PM
Hey sky what did you mean with that whole S think with my piece for the battle if you are at a place where you can explain/show it better.

And Invisable he would completely wreck you so I&#39;d say don&#39;t even battle him but if you want to try I would love to see the outcome.

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 03:35 PM
hey, can you crits my stuff please...anyone...

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:35 PM
i whooped his ass once and ill do it again

+HyBriD+
09-15-2006, 03:36 PM
lol whens the battle..

C3ZR ONE
09-15-2006, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 03:35 PM
i whooped his ass once and ill do it again
Total fluke. Take it to the battle thread and organize it. I&#39;ll poll it.

sky5 is the cream of the crop in toy forum period. But try and keep it friendly you guys. ;)

+HyBriD+
09-15-2006, 03:39 PM
yea enough shit talking, do it in a battle

Bastardo
09-15-2006, 03:39 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Sep 15 2006, 03:23 PM
sorry to doubt you invisable, but you know that pece aint as good as the others&#33;
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3102/picturetq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
random throws
:( Bumpizzle
BTW some of you may remember me..i used to be toon&#33;

InvisableAzn
09-15-2006, 03:40 PM
lol

sane666
09-15-2006, 03:43 PM
[COLOR=red][SIZE=14]hey im kinda new here so heres what i got lemme know what u think

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/speak.jpg



http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/sanenspraycan.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/sane-1.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/know.jpg

sorry about the blur i have a shitty cam for now, and i did the know in like a minute so the 3-d is a bit off. thanx in advance

TricksForKids
09-15-2006, 03:59 PM
bastardo, that shits on point, but who writes bank? theres already a DOPE bank in montreal...unless thats you which i dont think it is...and to top it off theres banksy...i mean come on, and sane, you look like every other kid that graffs, keep sketching, go simpler, and take your time

and im officialy kicking sky 5 the hell out of this forum, hes passed the toy stage and everyone knows it, but please, stop by to say hi because i am slightly in love with you.

Me and Mf and Anzio should duke it out for toy supremecy

Peace you hah lah mah lay layers

+HyBriD+
09-15-2006, 04:00 PM
yea tricks is right sky 5 is badass & should be upgraded out of here

aces
09-15-2006, 04:03 PM
He should post his stuff in the big boy forums but he should still stop by and give crits because he is one of the few people that gives good crits.

C3ZR ONE
09-15-2006, 04:05 PM
Oh hell no&#33; sky5 is staying here&#33; We need a couple rediculously good writers like sky5 and tricks to crit the small fries and give them inspiration. He occasionally posts in big boy thread anyway and gets positive responses. He knows he can go, but he stays to help us out and cuzz he&#39;s mad humble.

He stays Tricks... You&#39;ll just have to share the limelight. :lol: ;)

blastbeatsattack
09-15-2006, 04:08 PM
Originally posted by sane666@Sep 15 2006, 03:43 PM
[COLOR=red][SIZE=14]hey im kinda new here so heres what i got lemme know what u think

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/speak.jpg



http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/sanenspraycan.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/sane-1.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/ylive4death2come/Ricks%20art/know.jpg

sorry about the blur i have a shitty cam for now, and i did the know in like a minute so the 3-d is a bit off. thanx in advance
1st piece:
is lacking dimention and needs more effects with your color shading and try adding some 3-d effects with some shadowing and a background. also the first two letters seem to be different fonts than the rest of the piece.
2nd piece:
add some color if you got it. and the S and A seem a lttile sketchy. i like the bubbles they are are a nice touch however the spray can seems a little sketchy as well, you should lighten up the the shading around the bottle little bit
3rd piece:
this one is your best that you have posted. i really like it. All you need is some color in the flames. maybe add a colored outline but definatly add a shadow.
4th piece:
keep your size of the letters and the font in mind at all times. it doesnt seem like your pieces flow evenly together with your sizes/lettering however this is a great start.

you have alot of potential once you start taking your time with lettering and color your shit will definatly pop.

- L&#33;MBO

krazzie_ammo
09-15-2006, 04:09 PM
yeah, but its nice to have sky 5&#39;s stuff bumping around in here. and please please please someone crit my shit&#33; please :rolleyes: i think its on the page before...i dont wanna bump it because its too large.

NICCSACC
09-15-2006, 04:19 PM
invisble asn would get ate up by sky 5 is that who were talking bout?
a coupl eof azn&#39;s prices are nice especially this certain one but overall they arent too good besides mabye the fill but even then its...ehh.
sky 5, draw more and post it man i need some inspiration for seriously.

sane666
09-15-2006, 04:23 PM
thats what i was lookin for thanks for taking the time to help. i have very little money and the money i do get goes to helping out my family. i cant get many colors and stuff like that but i do sketch almost all the time. ive been reading these forums for a while and i could REALLY use some help on improving. but keep in mind i have pretty much no money.

Necro-
09-15-2006, 05:02 PM
the past couple weeks ive been so busy with school, homework, and restitution ive barely had any time to do anything. but yesterday and today i got a chance to do some sketching. just got some prismacolor pencils in, workin on using them nicely. theyre a lot more sensitive than the old ones i used.

squirrel char from invader zim:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture002-1.jpg
dont like the yellow in this one:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture003-1.jpg
pen freestyle:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture004-1.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture005.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture006-1.jpg

blastbeatsattack
09-15-2006, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by sane666@Sep 15 2006, 04:23 PM
thats what i was lookin for thanks for taking the time to help. i have very little money and the money i do get goes to helping out my family. i cant get many colors and stuff like that but i do sketch almost all the time. ive been reading these forums for a while and i could REALLY use some help on improving. but keep in mind i have pretty much no money.
well any of you kids can hit me up on aim if you ever need to.
blastbeatsattack. i can do what i can to help you guys out.

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 06:11 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 15 2006, 01:57 AM
quick sketch i did in school, any crits, should i try painting now?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep15thro.jpg
bump

sky 5
09-15-2006, 06:18 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6822/1101018yk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BoRe-719-
09-15-2006, 06:24 PM
sky your letters are fuckin sick, i especially like the r and the k.

that one section though, i think its double o&#39;s, it sort of ruins the flow.

the rest is fire though

aces
09-15-2006, 07:25 PM
Sky that&#39;s sick as usual.

FEN the HEN
09-15-2006, 07:39 PM
NECRO those are so sweet, fuck i love that texture look

SeKz
09-15-2006, 07:45 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer+Sep 15 2006, 06:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (doomsayer @ Sep 15 2006, 06:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-doomsayer@Sep 15 2006, 01:57 AM
quick sketch i did in school, any crits, should i try painting now?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep15thro.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
Yeah truth i would probably paint that now, its lookin pretty much spot on ;)

Have you painted before?

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 07:56 PM
yeah i have, i understand u gotta fill first then outline, the only problem ive had when painting is not getting the outline round properly and drips.

nemzone
09-15-2006, 08:27 PM
sky get that coloured&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/8119/binodm0.png

first ever one liners . wat yas think?

Blix
09-15-2006, 08:45 PM
to be honest I hate the top one

-GEKS-
09-15-2006, 08:46 PM
me 2 the rest is good though

jerm_mtl
09-15-2006, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by Blix@Sep 15 2006, 08:45 PM
to be honest I hate the top one
good call

nemzone
09-15-2006, 09:15 PM
well, it was ma first one EVER&#33;&#33; lol i dont expect it to be good, but thers more 2 come.

nerdx
09-15-2006, 09:25 PM
hey can i get some feedback about this style and colors
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7696/img2503fr9.jpg

aces
09-15-2006, 09:38 PM
Nerdx I&#39;m not really one for that style with the really skinny pieces and the really think pieces so I&#39;m not one to give crits. Also I don&#39;t know about the color scheme but then again I sometimes think I got something good and then I am informed that it sucks.


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8701/picture017kf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?

BoRe-719-
09-15-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by aces@Sep 15 2006, 09:38 PM
Nerdx I&#39;m not really one for that style with the really skinny pieces and the really think pieces so I&#39;m not one to give crits. Also I don&#39;t know about the color scheme but then again I sometimes think I got something good and then I am informed that it sucks.


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8701/picture017kf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?
i agree the style is a little wack, in my opinion nerds colro scheme is better than yours, but i can tell you thought about it, a lot of people dont even consider orange and yellow

nerdx
09-15-2006, 09:49 PM
thnks for the replies.
aces i think the peice is good but the 3d needs more, maby some highlights in it or something.
also next time try adding something more to the fill besides just one flat color.

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 11:18 PM
yeah nerdx im not feelin that style as much as b4

aces i think if u added some white lines around the letters and some black lines in the 3d itd look nice, the letters are lookin good tho cept the S looks kinda long compared to the others

shifty!
09-15-2006, 11:24 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8338/sh044ef7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
could i get some feedback and advice on this...i know the proportion is a lil off...

doomsayer
09-15-2006, 11:36 PM
does it say smif?

keep all the corners in the middle of the letters in the same line, keep all the leters the same size, ur ur S is biiger than ur M and the M is bigger than the I, keep em the same size all the letters slant dowanwards, fiz that up it might look aight

shifty!
09-15-2006, 11:42 PM
yeh it says shif...thanks man

OliveOil
09-16-2006, 02:07 AM
Originally posted by OliveOil@Sep 15 2006, 09:43 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/25-1.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/25.jpg


first time ive bumped my own shit in a while...

krazzie_ammo
09-16-2006, 04:51 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo+Sep 15 2006, 03:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krazzie_ammo @ Sep 15 2006, 03:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Sep 15 2006, 02:24 PM
yo InvisableAzn i can&#39;t read it... :blink: try going a bit simpler and keep all the letters the same style/size/shape.

i love being back at school :D, get to draw all lesson&#33;
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/2563/11fy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
during a graphics lesson.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4074/12xo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
french and a bit of history...
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3985/13at8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Graphics again.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4958/14id6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
during phyisics&#33;

crits please :D
[/b][/quote]
bump for crits??

Necro-
09-16-2006, 09:41 AM
youve improved, but youve posted that bottom piece many times asking for crits and every time someone tells you to make the R and A look more like an R and an A.

TricksForKids
09-16-2006, 09:42 AM
holy FUCK, that craze shit has been on the last 23908726542143 pages, want crits>? here:

stop bumbping your own shits for hours, once you get one or two crits, leave it at that&#33; but i like almost everything, go fucking paint it, now start working on peices

Olive - ive always been a fan of your throws, really likin the E in the last one, just not a fan of the middle simple "olive" looks very rushed, and i know rushed is your style but show yourself a bit more respect than that no?, anyways keep doing your thing you&#39;re gettin there baybee, fuckin hot throws

Peace

aces
09-16-2006, 09:42 AM
Yea I think you&#39;ve gotten all the crits you&#39;ll get.

Any other crits on my piece?

sky 5
09-16-2006, 10:21 AM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 06:24 PM
sky your letters are fuckin sick, i especially like the r and the k.

that one section though, i think its double o&#39;s, it sort of ruins the flow.

the rest is fire though
bore - thats the exact same "brooklyn" sketch i used for the battle 6 -8 months ago where you posted and i quote cuz i never forget but i do forgive .."i dont know, i think i&#39;ve seen those letters before" . . . . its all good man we settled our differences in that battle we had and your a cool mellow person . . . why dont you re-post that machine looking piece thing you did awhile ago (6 months), that was true dopeness right there ..

sky 5
09-16-2006, 10:26 AM
crazzie - alot of times people cant or wont crit stuff b/c it is not there style . . atleast with me i wont crit someones stuff if its not within the same general style that i do . . .i wouldnt know what to tell them and i wouldnt want to interfere or steer them away from the style there gravitating to . . .i dont crit throws b/c i dont do throws type deal . . the style thats good for me may not be good for you type deal . .

clockworkfuse
09-16-2006, 10:59 AM
I fiannly got marker, shit i did during math.. sorry about the size
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/clockworkfuse123/Picture002.jpg
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/clockworkfuse123/Picture001.jpg
crits?

Blix
09-16-2006, 11:03 AM
make all your letters the same size

-GEKS-
09-16-2006, 11:19 AM
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;+Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-GEKS- @ Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why.
okay invasable, ur right. i thought u were juust some random guy with an overactive ego. bump for crits [/b][/quote]
crits plz

myl
09-16-2006, 11:22 AM
go back to blocks

and lose that damn crown

i dont get why all the toys put crowns on theyre pieces when in most cases theyve never even touched a can of paint yet

krazzie_ammo
09-16-2006, 11:23 AM
yeah sorry for being an ass.
sky 5 - you are one humble ass mofo :P but yeah...thanks.
heres something i did 5 minz ago...
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9852/groooveyjp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry i forgot to put the hole in the A but crits anyone?

alive
09-16-2006, 11:31 AM
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;+Sep 16 2006, 11:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-GEKS- @ Sep 16 2006, 11:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why.
okay invasable, ur right. i thought u were juust some random guy with an overactive ego. bump for crits
crits plz [/b][/quote]
listen - i can help u get good, but only if you absolutely listen to what i say and do it. dont fuck around.


put down all you colored pencils and markers.
pick up one pencil and one pen.
lose all arrows.
lose all curves.
dont you fucking dare draw a crown.
draw straight letters.
block letters.
try to fit every letter into a square shape.
dont put 3d.

aiight?
peace.

clockworkfuse
09-16-2006, 11:33 AM
another one i jsut did, that i did pretty quick so the lines are shetchy

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/clockworkfuse123/Picture003-1.jpg

krazzie_ammo
09-16-2006, 12:06 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Sep 16 2006, 11:23 AM
yeah sorry for being an ass.
sky 5 - you are one humble ass mofo :P but yeah...thanks.
heres something i did 5 minz ago...
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9852/groooveyjp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry i forgot to put the hole in the A but crits anyone?
hey clockworkfuse, try and make all the letters the same width.

crits?

minesweep
09-16-2006, 12:22 PM
Originally posted by clockworkfuse@Sep 16 2006, 10:59 AM
I fiannly got marker, shit i did during math.. sorry about the size
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e109/clockworkfuse123/Picture002.jpg

crits?
where you from? i saw an f just like that today when i was riding around

clockworkfuse
09-16-2006, 12:36 PM
no where near you. i;&#39;ve never seen an f like that

minesweep
09-16-2006, 12:40 PM
alright nm then

ShIfTeD
09-16-2006, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by alive+Sep 16 2006, 11:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Sep 16 2006, 11:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 16 2006, 11:19 AM

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why.
okay invasable, ur right. i thought u were juust some random guy with an overactive ego. bump for crits
crits plz
listen - i can help u get good, but only if you absolutely listen to what i say and do it. dont fuck around.


put down all you colored pencils and markers.
pick up one pencil and one pen.
lose all arrows.
lose all curves.
dont you fucking dare draw a crown.
draw straight letters.
block letters.
try to fit every letter into a square shape.
dont put 3d.

aiight?
peace. [/b][/quote]
they all suck to the max

your wildsyle is wack

your characters are off

your letter structure is horrid



and go ahead and be a little baby and keep bumbing your crappy work, but you say that and wonder why everyone calls you a toy and tells you you suck

shifty!
09-16-2006, 01:01 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Sep 15 2006, 11:24 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8338/sh044ef7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
could i get some feedback and advice on this...i know the proportion is a lil off...
bizzumppppppp

TricksForKids
09-16-2006, 01:01 PM
hey ive got an idea, lets all tell each other we suck and see how far we got? sky 5 you suck i hate you, wheres cezr he sucks to...

smh...come on, be nice to each other you dicks.

aces
09-16-2006, 01:08 PM
Yay that&#39;s a great idea tricks. Fuck you. But yea I think people are getting mad because people aren&#39;t taking any advice that they are given.

InvisableAzn
09-16-2006, 01:30 PM
i havent finish the peice buh wat u guys think.

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/000_0766.jpg

shifty!
09-16-2006, 01:36 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;+Sep 16 2006, 01:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (shifty&#33; @ Sep 16 2006, 01:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shifty&#33;@Sep 15 2006, 11:24 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8338/sh044ef7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
could i get some feedback and advice on this...i know the proportion is a lil off...
bizzumppppppp [/b][/quote]
bottom of page...could i get some help on this thanks...

minesweep
09-16-2006, 01:44 PM
looks okay shifty keep workin on it, definetly improving

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4672/dscn0252xt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

graff*is*king
09-16-2006, 01:51 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k104/graffisking/Graffiti.jpg

minesweep
09-16-2006, 01:53 PM
go simple

sky 5
09-16-2006, 02:06 PM
Originally posted by InvisableAzn@Sep 16 2006, 01:30 PM
i havent finish the peice buh wat u guys think.

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/graffitinerd/000_0766.jpg
i think it looks like a toy ass bitch tryin to do somethin way over her head . . .overall it looks like it might be good but after 2 seconds you realize its just a piece of shit with lines trying to interact . . . graf is letters not a bunch of random lines/bars trying to look like letters . . theres a difference

InvisableAzn
09-16-2006, 02:07 PM
it does have letters
TUYET

sky u jus pissed cuz im probbly one of the only people that spanked ur ass in a battle

Blix
09-16-2006, 02:23 PM
I agree with sky

InvisableAzn
09-16-2006, 02:25 PM
lol u guys only agree wit sky cuz he one of the best on this toy fourms.
it has letters and it does say something.

well this site is wack.

Blix
09-16-2006, 02:28 PM
No the "letters" are wack. there runnin into eachother all weird fuckin up the 3d just go simpler DAMN

Slushi
09-16-2006, 02:39 PM
I can see the letters just fine.

Blix
09-16-2006, 02:45 PM
yeah so can I

clockworkfuse
09-16-2006, 02:58 PM
i can, but its poopy

minesweep
09-16-2006, 02:59 PM
i can see the letters but they arent worth seeing

Blix
09-16-2006, 03:03 PM
Originally posted by minesweep@Sep 16 2006, 02:59 PM
i can see the letters but they arent worth seeing
pretty much what i was trying to say

nemzone
09-16-2006, 03:05 PM
shifty, i like it, but only thing i can say i would change is take the bump of the top right of the S. and make the H a lil narrower, to be more like the other letters.

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9569/untitledkf5.png

whils am here can i get some comments on this, done it for a exchange on another forum...

and i know the throw aint very gd, but its not my usual style, and done wit fuckin bingo markers :lol:

Sumoe
09-16-2006, 03:10 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7199/dsc0509uk6.jpg
not one of my better ones but i figured i&#39;d post it anyways, crits?

Blix
09-16-2006, 03:24 PM
the U and the M suck

also lose the arrow on the o