Blackbooks

[Sumoe]

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7199/dsc0509uk6.jpg
not one of my better ones but i figured i'd post it anyways, crits?

[Blix]

the U and the M suck

also lose the arrow on the o

[AnimaniakAttack!]

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/8686/0916061619yh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-MaCKiE-]

looks dope... at a gues id say it sez a _ _ m s... if the m is what i think it is then its sick as hell as is the s and a

[Maker A Laker]

it says "avez" im going by the bubble at the corner but its sick


edit ; i can kinda see it now that i take a good look

[-GEKS-]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Sep 16 2006, 12:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Sep 16 2006, 12:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by alive@Sep 16 2006, 11:31 AM

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 16 2006, 11:19 AM

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 03:04 PM

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 15 2006, 02:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-InvisableAzn@Sep 15 2006, 02:44 PM
lol.
u need to work on urs...
cuz im way better then u kraziee_ammo
no, ur really not. but neither am i. heres sum of my stuff.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gekscharacter.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/gorillaz.jpg
this was gonna be my entry in a toy battle, didnt get it in on time :(

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/burner.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crazyarrows.jpg
lol, arrows=fun

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/spraycan.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/crown.jpg

if u all dont crit on these i&#39;ll just keep bumping them. and if ur gonna tell me they suck, etc. tell me why. also, if u like em, tell me why.
okay invasable, ur right. i thought u were juust some random guy with an overactive ego. bump for crits
crits plz
listen - i can help u get good, but only if you absolutely listen to what i say and do it. dont fuck around.


put down all you colored pencils and markers.
pick up one pencil and one pen.
lose all arrows.
lose all curves.
dont you fucking dare draw a crown.
draw straight letters.
block letters.
try to fit every letter into a square shape.
dont put 3d.

aiight?
peace.
they all suck to the max

your wildsyle is wack

your characters are off

your letter structure is horrid



and go ahead and be a little baby and keep bumbing your crappy work, but you say that and wonder why everyone calls you a toy and tells you you suck [/b][/quote]
y do u hav to be suck an ass? the other guy actuallly tried to help me. and i&#39;m abouut to try and follow his advice. i would like advice, not insults. thanks to that other guy

[nemzone]

end this fuckin argument&#33; that kid is gonna bump his own SHIT every time you reply so he can quote ya&#33;&#33; finish it thru pm&#33;&#33;

critz, top ofthis page?? :rolleyes:

[AnimaniakAttack!]

avenu onez

[BLAKink]

Originally posted by AnimaniakAttack&#33;@Sep 16 2006, 03:29 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/8686/0916061619yh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yobro, ur tring sum shit that your not redy for, go simpler...like way simple, and dont be postin shit on the regular thred u just not redy...yet

[Z FUSE]

crits on this please
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/7669/sn8dm1.jpg

[BLAKink]

Originally posted by InvisableAzn@Sep 16 2006, 02:07 PM
sky u jus pissed cuz im probbly one of the only people that spanked ur ass in a battle
hey sky, did this guy really "spank" u in battle???????&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[AnimaniakAttack!]

Originally posted by BLAKink+Sep 16 2006, 03:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BLAKink @ Sep 16 2006, 03:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AnimaniakAttack&#33;@Sep 16 2006, 03:29 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/8686/0916061619yh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yobro, ur tring sum shit that your not redy for, go simpler...like way simple, and dont be postin shit on the regular thred u just not redy...yet [/b][/quote]
huh?

[Z FUSE]

simpler letters man

[AnimaniakAttack!]

simple
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/5659/0717060946ab0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/5667/0910061558akb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8096/0912062318adm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/5483/0912062317xs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[prank]

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/2706/image69zm6.jpg

feedback plz i know it sucks cuz i had to outline it with a marker

[Z FUSE]

get rid of the xtra unneccessary fold and shit in the letters. like Y looks like a stick tha&#39;t beena brokena few times too many. keep workin on it, just don&#39;t over do the letters and tr to kep a flow going between em.

[nemzone]

Originally posted by nemzone@Sep 16 2006, 08:05 PM
shifty, i like it, but only thing i can say i would change is take the bump of the top right of the S. and make the H a lil narrower, to be more like the other letters.

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9569/untitledkf5.png

whils am here can i get some comments on this, done it for a exchange on another forum...

and i know the throw aint very gd, but its not my usual style, and done wit fuckin bingo markers :lol:
bumpin this shit, cuz NO critz :( lol

[Z FUSE]

smal swirls on the A and B don&#39;t fit in, if you take the smal awirl off the A i think that would make a good simple style A. the 3d loks real good tho imo. also the letters have lots of jagged spots, like the B.

and bumpo this cuz i didn&#39;t get nothin either.
crits on this please
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/7669/sn8dm1.jpg

[some guy from NCI...]

yeh the swirls are shite
work on the letter width.... it kinda keeps changin (on the M especially)


The throwies quite sexy but the size of the M kills it.

[TricksForKids]

yank thats actually lookin pretty good man you&#39;re starting with good simples, i like the patience keep at it

ambz, in the piece i hate the b, no offense, it just looks like you didnt take time on thinking of an actual b so you dropped that, the throws pretty good though, keep it up, but dont use ms paint on your computer, it makes shit look ugly until you&#39;re really good at it

and z fuse im guesing that says sone? i really like it except the E, get a bit better E and go paint it,


and on another note:

The following is a quote from invizble azn or however you spell it:


l"ol u guys only agree wit sky cuz he one of the best on this toy fourms.
it has letters and it does say something.

well this site is wack."



sky5 happens to be my boy and hes much better than you, so i take offense to you offending him, secondly this forum, despite stupid kids like you messing it up for others, has helped me progress as a writer and you&#39;ve offended it, which offends me

stop running your mouth, or back your shit talking up by battling yours truly, me :D

on that note, i hope everyone has a good saturday night

[wrek10]

Originally posted by Z FUSE@Sep 16 2006, 03:58 PM
crits on this please
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/7669/sn8dm1.jpg
this ones dope...
just needs to be clean

[Z FUSE]

aite man, thanks tricks and wrek

[nemzone]

thanks, and believe it or not, the throw is done in bingo markers&#33; NOT ms paint lol. i deleted that wen i never used it now cant reinstall it without the disk. and ye ur right. i neva spent much time on the B but its only and exchange. lol

and i reli like that throw, would love 2 see it painted Z.

[obseen]

ye nems, the small s kinda ruins the throw a bit
nice 3-d and outline on the piece though

[some guy from NCI...]

lol you never deleted ms paint

[nemzone]

i actually did lol, along with windows msnger , and a few other shit things that come wit windows, tried to make ma comp run quicker lol

[some guy from NCI...]

:o hahahahahaha


Mspaint wastes some minute amount of memory&#33;.....

it wouldn&#39;t of been worth the trouble going through the folders trying to find it

[nemzone]

ach well, shit stinks lol

[minesweep]

Originally posted by minesweep@Sep 16 2006, 01:44 PM
looks okay shifty keep workin on it, definetly improving

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4672/dscn0252xt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump from 2 pages back

[negrodamus]

http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/4898/0000022hm5.jpg

i gotta move gesus&#39;s shit to the right place.

[Sumoe]

Blix- yea i know the U and M suck but do u have any tips to make them better? :huh:

[corruptedtom]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1386/photo0681hx0.jpg

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/7792/photo0678zk0.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/3974/photo0674ld8.jpg

Trying to keep it simple so when i start painting it won&#39;t be too hard.
Any crits please?

[wrek10]

Originally posted by negrodamus@Sep 16 2006, 05:35 PM
http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/4898/0000022hm5.jpg

i gotta move gesus&#39;s shit to the right place.
lol. ur ass is so blocked. B)

[-GEKS-]

first one- keep letters same style. theres no reason for the 2 e&#39;s to look different.
2nd one- fix your e&#39;s, and keep the letters same size.
3rd one- keep letters same size

[-GEKS-]

thanks a lot alive. not thanks a lot shifed, ur really no help. heres some simples i made today after been given excellent advice from alive.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/vanish3d.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/threedeething.jpg
didnt finish filling in the shadow of the top, i forgot 2. and this isnt as good as the others anyway.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/3d.jpg

critz plz

[InvisableAzn]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 16 2006, 05:02 PM




sky5 happens to be my boy and hes much better than you, so i take offense to you offending him,
told u tat u favor him u lil fucken fag.
ill whoop ur ass in a battle forsure.

buh like i told sky im done wit this site.

peace.

[Bastardo]

Originally posted by Bastardo+Sep 15 2006, 03:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bastardo @ Sep 15 2006, 03:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bastardo@Sep 15 2006, 03:23 PM
sorry to doubt you invisable, but you know that pece aint as good as the others&#33;
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3102/picturetq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
random throws
[/b][/quote]
:(

[shifty!]

Originally posted by nemzone@Sep 16 2006, 03:05 PM
shifty, i like it, but only thing i can say i would change is take the bump of the top right of the S. and make the H a lil narrower, to be more like the other letters.


what bump? do you mean how it rounds off? but if you could explain it to me that would help me a lot, thanks

[nemzone]

top left hand part of it, i cant show u cuz dnt av ms paint. but instead of a cure from the top. to the left side, theres a bump, in that corner. dont get me wrong, its not bad, but thats wat i would change

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/4549/dsc00958ex6.jpg
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/5532/dsc00962hf5.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7852/dsc00964ak4.jpg

now i want some crits this tym dammit&#33;

[Hot_Pocket]

^^Hella clean.

Well first time posting here, so here&#39;s a little sketch I just did. Nothin&#39; special, don&#39;t like the way the A and N came out though....

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Mena.jpg

Crits?

[Blix]

Nemz work on those one lines they&#39;re trash but the rest is hot i really like the second one on the first page

hot pocket work on some block letters

[Hot_Pocket]

K, thanks, I just had a new style in my head and I wanted to put it down. :)
Back to the basics

[ShIfTeD]

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/3911/jimywl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


wut you all thinK?

i dont like it but if you like it...thats cool

if not give me some crits

[Detoxication]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n204/dhertzz/IMG_0679.jpg

[d_g]

Nemz, I like that two letter throw.

I&#39;m not so keen on the second one, third one is quite nice, just needs a little tweaking here and there to get it better like the letter proportion.

Second picture looks good too, although the 3D is off in a few places. And the letters could do with a tiny bit of work to perfect them.

The bottom left one liner is pretty nawice.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by InvisableAzn+Sep 16 2006, 07:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (InvisableAzn @ Sep 16 2006, 07:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 16 2006, 05:02 PM




sky5 happens to be my boy and hes much better than you, so i take offense to you offending him,
told u tat u favor him u lil fucken fag.
ill whoop ur ass in a battle forsure.

buh like i told sky im done wit this site.

peace. [/b][/quote]
nah more like i called you out on a paint battle and you wrote back "i dont paint" . . .disregard that friendly PM i just sent you . . .fuck you your just another faker doing graffiti cuz its the cool thing to do, not cuz its in you .. . fuck this site? nah more like this site says fuck you you no skillz no heart fake . . . this might be the internet but its still graf oriented and this shit aint soft or friendly ..damn i hate kids like you who front, whats the point? what do you get out of being a label whore? . . .im glad i dont have to answer those questions . . . and tricks would fuck you so hard your moms would bust an O hoe . . .

[BoRe-719-]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Sep 16 2006, 09:43 PM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/3911/jimywl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


wut you all thinK?

i dont like it but if you like it...thats cool

if not give me some crits
ew put that away

this has no potential and the fill just makes it more confusing.


you make good stickers though

[bouncingsoul]

Notebook scrawlings... I think my style evolved for the better... My h is supposed to be a lowercase h but the little middle part that connects the two got cut off, if that makes any sense

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0242.jpg

I don&#39;t like the top left of my X though... But yeah. Critz?

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;+Sep 16 2006, 10:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BoRe-719- @ Sep 16 2006, 10:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Sep 16 2006, 09:43 PM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/3911/jimywl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


wut you all thinK?

i dont like it but if you like it...thats cool

if not give me some crits
ew put that away

this has no potential and the fill just makes it more confusing.


you make good stickers though [/b][/quote]
yeah i dont like it either

all of my blackbook drawings arent like this lol




idk i was trying somthing new and didnt work :D

[FEN the HEN]

whyd you post it if you didnt like it?

[ShIfTeD]

to get crits of other people

and why they didnt like it to see if its the same reason i didnt

[craz-e one]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/936/pv045pv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hey tell me what u think.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1088.jpg

[nerdx]

niccac the 3d on the bottom of the k and y is just killling it. the 3d just like goes bezerko righth there and you cant etell what thte thell is going on.
like when you think you know all your planets then some dude comes along and is like
yyeah you know that plantet the last one, pluto. well its not anymore and your like
wtf mate.s

[TAT NORF *834*]

My tags take like 5seconds and the pieces were like 15-20mins each

SHOK: http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m252/SHEK_834/morePhotos19206007.jpg

SHOK&#33;: http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m252/SHEK_834/morePhotos19206005.jpg

MY new name "SHEK": http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m252/SHEK_834/morePhotos19206006.jpg

Some TAGS: http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m252/SHEK_834/morePhotos19206008.jpg

Please comment&#33; :ph34r:

[-kosr-]

Do simples, like blockbusters.
Stay away from Mr Wiggles.
Get some perception with that can drawing, the cap on it is wayy to big.

[craz-e one]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/936/pv045pv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?cmon anything

[-kosr-]

Dont make your letters soo thin, Its pretty basic but your I is killing it.
Keep your letters on the same level and keep em the same size.

[TAT NORF *834*]

so should i start with some simpler lettering?

[Simimi]

Ok let me see... this stuff is just name stuff with markers in the book...
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04934.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04927.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04928.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04930.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04931.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04932.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04933.jpg
^This one is clearly not finished...

And THESE are some of the things I have hit with markers, because, well, I love markers so much... I have more, but these are the ones that I think came out the best...

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04918.jpg
^My first ever write, ever...well, my first ever anything ever not on paper...

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04921.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/Simimi/DSC04924.jpg
^This one was done about... 5 or so hours ago..


Yea, I know it is all really Toy, because I am so Toy I have not even been hitting real things (IE: Not paper) for about 3 days...but I am willing to learn.

Yours,
Mimi

[-kosr-]

Don&#39;t use sharpies or jiffies to tag, the nib is too small. Use a decent sized marker (usually atleast 10mm) And keep your tag simple, so you can do it in 2 - 5 seconds. And do blockbusters or bubble letters, or just mess around with any simples

TAT NORF *834*, yes you should do simpler stuff.

[Simimi]

Awww... I love sharpies though, snap&#33;

I have a bombing marker on the way, is that what you mean? Is the last one simple enough, I kind of like it.

[-kosr-]

To be honest, its quite ugly, post it in the toy tags threads for crits from others. Look at other tags on the street (good ones) and notice how they are usually fairly simple. And like I said, you should be able to do your tag in 2 - 5 seconds.

And yes a bombing marker is the type of marker you should be using, experiment with different markers and such to see what you like.

[C3ZR ONE]

Just go to Wall mart and get there 2 pack of 84 cent chisel tips Mimi. Chisel tips add alot of deffinition to a tag. And go simple for now, you need to know the natural flow of the letter to embelish it. Check the "New 2 Graff" thread here in TOy forum.
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2622/im000253kc1.jpg
Example of a chisel tip bombing marker....

[Simimi]

I did the last one with a chisel tip charpie magnum... and a shapie med. small, does that count?

[C3ZR ONE]

lol.. Apperantley not, but don&#39;t loose heart. You&#39;ll get there.
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/3155/im000247ex0.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4614/im000241rc5.jpg
That&#39;s how I do a chisel tip.

[Simimi]

And -THAT- is why I am but a lowely TOY and you are not, that is so tight it hurts. I love it.

I&#39;ll see what I can do...

[C3ZR ONE]

Just go simple for know. And I also, consider myself toy. I&#39;m nobody special. I get some props for my handys and my posters, but I&#39;m no big fish.

As far as the piece goes, try block letters for now to develope hand control, the learn bar methon as demonstrated by my boy sky5 in New 2 Graff. ;)

[SeKz]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/701/image004oy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6194/image003ps9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits

[OliveOil]

wow...mimi...i...


:X

[-kosr-]

sketch, I dont like it all, but Im board so Im gonna post it.

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/8664/kosr7ne1.png

[Anonymous1232]

hey yo this is my first few posts, been looking rhu this forum for couple figure dit was time to start posting.

aight this is my book sketch, one of the first ones i did and i wanted to know what you guys thot of it. crit very welcome.


i also aignt going to try to pull those lame ass excuses that i happend to see so much of in here. "It would look less like shit if i had a better digital cam, my marker was running low, my brother bumped my arm, havent been writing for a while, i have the same graffiti writing skill equivalent to the musical skill of blink182. etc"

sorry bout the rant n shit but been brewing for a while.

crits very welcome as long as you give me some tips, anything.





http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9620/p1010048dp7.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010048dp7.jpg)
-Writin&#39;-

[MEBone]

since youve been readin thru this for awhile, u hsuda started where every1 tells some1 to start. simples&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; these havent been stressed enough dawg. do some straight block leters all the time untill u can do em in ur sleep, then start tweaking. please dont do any wildtyles, or add any crowns, until ppl tell u ur ready. good luck

[C3ZR ONE]

Yeah, so,... without pullin any punches, it&#39;s awfull, but hey, I respect that you like the culture and you put in the effort. Check the "New 2 Graff" thread" for some pointers and START SIMPLE, for the same reasons posted a million other times. You need to get a grasp of the natural flow of the letter b4 you try and embelish on it. Peace and good luck. ;)

[some guy from NCI...]

Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 17 2006, 03:25 AM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/701/image004oy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6194/image003ps9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits
BBBUMPPPP&#33;&#33;&#33; for teh hotness

[d_g]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Sep 17 2006, 06:50 PM
Just go to Wall mart and get there 2 pack of 84 cent chisel tips Mimi. Chisel tips add alot of deffinition to a tag. And go simple for now, you need to know the natural flow of the letter to embelish it. Check the "New 2 Graff" thread here in TOy forum.
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2622/im000253kc1.jpg
Example of a chisel tip bombing marker....
If you don&#39;t mind me asking was that done with one of the markers that actually say &#39;Bombing&#39; on them, the first ones on the BS shop marker list?

Are they the same as the OTR markers? The casing looks similar.

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo+Sep 16 2006, 12:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krazzie_ammo @ Sep 16 2006, 12:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Sep 16 2006, 11:23 AM
yeah sorry for being an ass.
sky 5 - you are one humble ass mofo :P but yeah...thanks.
heres something i did 5 minz ago...
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9852/groooveyjp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry i forgot to put the hole in the A but crits anyone?
[/b][/quote]
bump for crits??

[d_g]

I&#39;m not really keen on that compared to your other stuff.

The letters need a bit of work, like the bottom piece of the &#39;a&#39; needs to be taller so it doesn&#39;t look like a backwards &#39;c&#39;.

Also the extension of the &#39;C&#39; makes the whole thing look a bit off balance.

Keep sketchin&#39; dude.

[lenard]

i agree

[krazzie_ammo]

thanks :D ima colour it now...
and sekz...your stuff is soo hottt :P have you painted any of them?

[BRAINE]

cezr used a zig 2way glue pen with tthe broad 15mm nib.

bombing markers are ripoffs of otr markers, and basically more likely to suck.
theyre made by german montana, the kings of european ripoffs

and kids DONT BUY THE NEW MOLOTOW MARKERS
they are stolen designs from otr, because molotow wanted a rediculous profit margin which was turned down by otr products, and molotow split off and stole designs.
that shit is scandalous as hell. do not buy them. keep buying otr products

[obseen]

hell, i&#39;ll buy whichever ones are the cheapest

[Ginsu]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/Atomic.jpg

atomic but my name is RANCID

[krazzie_ammo]

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/2023/21fx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
finished colouring it :D

[Dropping Bombs On Society]

Your a looks like a backwards c. But your getting there I like how the letters are proportional. I guess just make the letters a little less lumpy.

[DnK/eeK]

wheres the A

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul;4794060
Notebook scrawlings... I think my style evolved for the better... My h is supposed to be a lowercase h but the little middle part that connects the two got cut off, if that makes any sense

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0242.jpg

I don&#39;t like the top left of my X though... But yeah. Critz?

...Anyone?

[krazzie_ammo]

make your H look more like a H lol, but other than that it looks really good&#33;

[aces]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/772/picture018ib7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Just a quicky on the way to dinner last night.

[-MaCKiE-]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Sep 17 2006, 10:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Sep 17 2006, 10:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul;4794060
Notebook scrawlings... I think my style evolved for the better... My h is supposed to be a lowercase h but the little middle part that connects the two got cut off, if that makes any sense

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0242.jpg

I don&#39;t like the top left of my X though... But yeah. Critz?

...Anyone? [/b][/quote]
that E is dope as fuck, good piece structure.. feelin it

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by aces@Sep 17 2006, 11:42 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/772/picture018ib7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Just a quicky on the way to dinner last night.
I like this a lot. Good example of a nice simple... Just make the M a little closer to the Z and the S a little closer to the P

[Apoc]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/BB1.jpg

[Blix]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Sep 17 2006, 12:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Sep 17 2006, 12:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 17 2006, 11:42 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/772/picture018ib7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Just a quicky on the way to dinner last night.
I like this a lot. Good example of a nice simple... Just make the M a little closer to the Z and the S a little closer to the P [/b][/quote]
I dont really like how the p is going over the a but the 3d for the p is going under same with the a and the z but maybe thats how its supposed to be idk

[Apoc]

Originally posted by Blix+Sep 17 2006, 12:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Blix @ Sep 17 2006, 12:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Sep 17 2006, 12:04 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 17 2006, 11:42 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/772/picture018ib7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Just a quicky on the way to dinner last night.
I like this a lot. Good example of a nice simple... Just make the M a little closer to the Z and the S a little closer to the P
I dont really like how the p is going over the a but the 3d for the p is going under same with the a and the z but maybe thats how its supposed to be idk [/b][/quote]
I use that style of 3d alot on my throws.

[aces]

Yea the 3-D isn&#39;t supposed to go over the other letters blix. Thanks for the crits and I&#39;ll sketch up a good one where I take time to make sure the proportions and stuff like that are all good.

[some guy from NCI...]

lol you mean like... adding the third dimension?

[aces]

What are you talking about. Yea sure adding the third dimension but not the shit that Seti does and stuff but like the 3-D on my piece above.

[bouncingsoul]

I <3 IKEA catalogs

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0243.jpg

[Apoc]

Originally posted by aces@Sep 17 2006, 12:16 PM
Yea the 3-D isn&#39;t supposed to go over the other letters blix. Thanks for the crits and I&#39;ll sketch up a good one where I take time to make sure the proportions and stuff like that are all good.
I like it... its like the 3d is molding together seperately from the letters.

[obseen]

says bank
http://img116.imagshack.us/img116/6466/shot38so9.jpg

[nerdx]

style is nice just not feeling the a and k.

[bouncingsoul]

Haha, I like the A and the K but not the B and the N

[aces]

Haha I&#39;m the opposite. I like the A and the K but the B and the N are a little wierd. The N has too tall of a thing on the left I don&#39;t know what to call it but the B lose the bottom extension on the left and connect the little thing where it comes over on top of the rest of the B if that makes sense.

Well at least someone agrees with me. You obviously posted while I was still typing. :D

[Z FUSE]

same as bouncingsoul^, cept the sharp point on the B looks weird

[myl]

god damn i suck at doin throwies and that really bugs me that i cant come up with one

edit: this is all i can come up with

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/327/img0130jw8.jpg

yeah i know, garbage

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40587.jpg

strange sketch done today duno if i like it, post it anyway lol

[westsida]

thats dope&#33;

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/752/rylethrowssn9.jpg

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9265/rylepinkredthrowyc8.jpg

[nerdx]

myl it looks good, just copy the bump thats on the back of the S to the end of the E
hope that makes some sense. just to keep the same style.


trash im diggin it not really sure whasts up with the T though. but RASH is dope.

[aces]

Yea I agree that it&#39;s weird TRASH but I kinda like it. As with what nerdx said the T is lacking in comparison to the other letters but still its good.

[myl]

thanks nerdx, i got your pm btw...uh i guess just post up some of your best straight letters and ill help you from there

[MF Feed Letter]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1758.jpg

[MEBone]

thats fuckin ill dawg, keep that shit up

[trashhh]

Lovin the style on that, nice highlights an letter shapes but one thing i dont like the 3d effect looks kinda uneven

[Fosale!]

perfect.

[aces]

That&#39;s hot shit there MF. The only crits that I have is that the S seems to be lacking something at the bottom. I don&#39;t exactly know what but that&#39;s just my opinion.

[BoRe-719-]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Sep 17 2006, 03:20 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1758.jpg
thats hot feed, lovin the background and of course, the letters...work on the handie

[myl]

hey look, its MFs toe down there

[-GEKS-]

Originally posted by &#045;GEKS&#045;@Sep 16 2006, 06:20 PM
thanks a lot alive. not thanks a lot shifed, ur really no help. heres some simples i made today after been given excellent advice from alive.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/vanish3d.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/threedeething.jpg
didnt finish filling in the shadow of the top, i forgot 2. and this isnt as good as the others anyway.

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/3d.jpg

critz plz
bump for crits

[aces]

Alright just work on your pen control a lot because your lines are really shakey looking. I don&#39;t really know what to say other than that.

[-GEKS-]

cool

[westsida]

Originally posted by westsida@Sep 17 2006, 02:53 PM
thats dope&#33;

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/752/rylethrowssn9.jpg

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9265/rylepinkredthrowyc8.jpg
bumpage for crits

[scoot]

reminds me of cartoons shit... but really bad

[westsida]

Originally posted by scoot@Sep 17 2006, 04:22 PM
reminds me of cartoons shit... but really bad
lol
i dnt think it looks anythin like car2ns stuff but whateva
any real advice?

[aces]

I think he means toon he was here a little while ago but I haven&#39;t seen him for a while. I really can&#39;t give you crits considering I don&#39;t know a thing about throwies. Anyways...
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/2904/picture019dl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Here&#39;s a sketch that I actually took some time on. I think I&#39;m going to color it soon but crits?

[MiNdGeM]

Can anyone tell me what they think of this rough sketch, I did it in like 5-10 minutes
but I just wanna hear someones comments.

I wanna see if I need to improve or if its pretty good.

I&#39;ve only been tagging for like 2 weeks.

Thanks:P
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g287/MOB_Spork/Photo001.jpg
The camera is a little bad, its only a 20&#036; webcam

[TricksForKids]

aces baby you commin along, everyone of those letters has structure and flows faily nicely, thatd be awesome to paint as a big roller, go for the colouring man, try some lines in your 3D

Peace

[elcs]

people need to stop saying crits. myself included.

[TricksForKids]

and mindgem, you need to improve, those letters are skinnier than the spaghettin im eating, and lose the arrows for every single part, look at thwat aces just posted and start simple like that

Peace

[aces]

Thanks for the crits tricks. I&#39;ll get to coloring it then.

EDIT: Sweet I was used as an example

[Bastardo]

Originally posted by aces@Sep 17 2006, 04:36 PM
I think he means toon he was here a little while ago but I haven&#39;t seen him for a while. I really can&#39;t give you crits considering I don&#39;t know a thing about throwies. Anyways...
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/2904/picture019dl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Here&#39;s a sketch that I actually took some time on. I think I&#39;m going to color it soon but crits?
bump for simples.

and im toon by the way :)

[MiNdGeM]

thanks guys i was just trying to come up with a piece, its my first piece, i mostly do tags

i still havent run out of one sharpie magnum and ive done like 200 tags

[TricksForKids]

someone otta make me a mod

[Anonymous1232]

Aces that throw you drew is real nice, its real simple which is pretty refeshing. alot people on this forum who have the mindset that it has to be complicated to be good, but thats simple but good. I like it.
I&#39;ll post some stuff later but right now i can&#39;t find any batteries for my dig cam.

[aces]

Thanks for the crits everyone and tricks I think you would make a good mod.

And yea that isn&#39;t a throw. It&#39;s just really simple.

[Fosale!]

That dope Spazm by Aces isnt a throw buddy...

[Veηo]

Heres a rough sketch(theres has been a few more mods to it but thats the just of it)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Abrokenvow/Picture041.jpg

[nemzone]

ok bud im not tryin to be a tool, but why the fuk do ppl never listen to STAY SIMPLE. 3D&#39;s off, god only knows what the fuck it says??

try a simple piece n show me wat that looks like....

[nemzone]

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/1281/dsc00980vw8.jpg
^^thats my ever changing new style.

started life as....
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/paulman21/img111.jpg

movin in the right direction, or think i should stick to the old 1??


excuse the colouring of the top 1 tho started out as a pen sketch

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1089.jpg

[aces]

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2319/picture020zi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits

[Fosale!]

Nemz

i think you should stick with the old style
it just looks for solid and i think its hotter
but its all up to you

[ceroX24X]

aces- not too much to say about yours it looks good accept the bottom part of the "s" looks a little short but you could tweak it on your next sketch. maybe add a forcefield?

nemz-i like the style in the green and yellow one and it seems to be developing pretty well i say you stick with that style its nice and original.

nicc-your style is so freaking nice i love your letters. the only thing that turned me off a bit on your sketch was that your "p" looks like a 4 but i cant say too much since youre like one of the best in the toy section

[ceroX24X]

oh yeah by the way here are some new sketches i did. crits would be greatly appreciated.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6813.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6814.jpg

[nerdx]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 17 2006, 05:51 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1089.jpg
really hot. but the p kinda is just hidding in there

[myl]

those aperok pieces are nice

one of my friends writes aper :unsure:

[aces]

APE - I like them. Lovin the monkey so nothin to say about that. On the second one maybe have the 3-D go not quite as far back and it looks a little messed up near the K. Just wondering but what kinda marker do you use to outline?

[ceroX24X]

where are you from myl?

all the markers in those sketches are prisma accept for the silver. thats a sharpie

[myl]

im actually from buffalo but im goin to school in cleveland

[ceroX24X]

oh deng. no where near me.

[beone]

good shit aperok and niccsacc

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/254815.jpg

first attempt at this gunna do a few more

[uhhh]

Originally posted by nemzone@Sep 17 2006, 05:38 PM
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/1281/dsc00980vw8.jpg
^^thats my ever changing new style.

started life as....
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/paulman21/img111.jpg

movin in the right direction, or think i should stick to the old 1??


excuse the colouring of the top 1 tho started out as a pen sketch
somebody writes nemz.

[Hot_Pocket]

Originally posted by beone@Sep 17 2006, 07:59 PM
good shit aperok and niccsacc

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/254815.jpg

first attempt at this gunna do a few more
Your 3D looks a little off on the "E" and the "S". Doesn&#39;t match what you did on the "N" and "O". But what do I know, I&#39;m a lowly toy :)

[si0n]

nemzone - feelin the style man, keep it up.

beone - the big gaps in the N dont go with the other letters imo. the 3d/shadow is off, just keep practicin.

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8909/img0245an8.th.jpg (http://img129.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0245an8.jpg)

my throw up, work in progress but im pretty happy with it. sry bout my shitty camera.

[nemzone]

Originally posted by uhhh+Sep 18 2006, 01:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh @ Sep 18 2006, 01:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Sep 17 2006, 05:38 PM
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/1281/dsc00980vw8.jpg
^^thats my ever changing new style.

started life as....
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/paulman21/img111.jpg

movin in the right direction, or think i should stick to the old 1??


excuse the colouring of the top 1 tho started out as a pen sketch
somebody writes nemz. [/b][/quote]
first iv ever heard. and not in scotland they dont.

[-kosr-]

Somebody has written everything before unless you write asf8asfm325klash or soemthing similar, as long as its not a king, someone famous, or a person in the same city its fine

[Apoc]

Originally posted by Apoc@Sep 17 2006, 12:10 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/BB1.jpg
bump

[ARMAwonR]

so ... off topic ... may i ask what the hell your sig is?

[Apoc]

Originally posted by ARMAwonR@Sep 17 2006, 08:56 PM
so ... off topic ... may i ask what the hell your sig is?
its my penis... its a bit mis-shapen but girls dig it I guess.

[ARMAwonR]

sweet ... as long as they dig it

[Apoc]

A king in paris use to write aone. Hes dead...

[ARMAwonR]

Hmm ... that sucks ...

RIP Aone I suppose

[Apoc]

man I need to get my posting quota up to par yo. I&#39;ve been writing for a year and I have less than 300...

[Stonk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/2006_0322Image0013.jpg
sorry about the blurryness. also im not really sure if i like the arrow but i didn&#39;t really just want another bar going across there. crits please

[Apoc]

ur P and ur D are good.

[bboyz_dogg]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/Picture007.jpg

comments please?

[nerdx]

looks nice. likeing the fill and extensions. just not really the S.
but the throw is nice.
eh ask is kinda played out i would guess.

but nonetheless its lookin good.

[bboyz_dogg]

well so far i havent seen anyone in los angeles with that name. yea i too that pic like 4 months ago. ill post new shit laters.

[nerdx]

naw not saying you shouldnt use it. its deffinitly dope and you can forsure pull it.
basically waht im sayign.

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by aces@Sep 17 2006, 06:16 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2319/picture020zi9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits
W00T&#33; aces movin on up in the world, hot shit my friend, all you toys look at this simple...way to go man

Peace

[bboyz_dogg]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/1169604252_l.jpg

sketch done in class when i was bored. comments....

[Fosale!]

Your Ks need much work.

[-kosr-]

way too many pointless add ons, they dont look the best either. Go simpler

[kame2]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2714/bsbattle1oa6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what do you guys think? this was for the BS toy battle

[ceroX24X]

Originally posted by ceroX24X@Sep 17 2006, 06:41 PM
oh yeah by the way here are some new sketches i did. crits would be greatly appreciated.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6813.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6814.jpg
bump for just a few more crits

[MF Feed Letter]

dont liek 3d on the bootom one and dont really liek the monky or mabey it jus doesnt fit it with that little message of showing your heart

[Veηo]

Originally posted by Veηo@Sep 17 2006, 05:25 PM
Heres a rough sketch(theres has been a few more mods to it but thats the just of it)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Abrokenvow/Picture041.jpg
bump
any suggestions?

[kame2]

Originally posted by Veηo+Sep 18 2006, 12:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Veηo @ Sep 18 2006, 12:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Veηo@Sep 17 2006, 05:25 PM
Heres a rough sketch(theres has been a few more mods to it but thats the just of it)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Abrokenvow/Picture041.jpg


[/b][/quote]
keep it more simple. look at aperok, its simple, but it still looks good, keep w/ block letters.

[myl]

go back to simples. do blocks/straight letters till you understand how the letters flow

[novella]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

you guys probably wont like this, but im asking for crits anyways. i drew it in chem class

[novella]

Originally posted by ceroX24X+Sep 18 2006, 12:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ceroX24X @ Sep 18 2006, 12:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ceroX24X@Sep 17 2006, 06:41 PM
oh yeah by the way here are some new sketches i did. crits would be greatly appreciated.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6813.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6814.jpg
bump for just a few more crits [/b][/quote]
i love these letters, im not feeling the 3d though. its extended too far out for my liking

[novella]

Originally posted by novella@Sep 18 2006, 12:53 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

you guys probably wont like this, but im asking for crits anyways. i drew it in chem class
sorry guys, bumped to this page for crits, it was last post on the last page

[NOMX]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/897/teslasketchnx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

work on ur letter structure some more. keep sketching

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Stonk@Sep 17 2006, 09:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/2006_0322Image0013.jpg
sorry about the blurryness. also im not really sure if i like the arrow but i didn&#39;t really just want another bar going across there. crits please
the "O" lookin like a sphincter. add a little squirt and youre golden bear.

[novella]

Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 18 2006, 01:03 AM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/897/teslasketchnx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

work on ur letter structure some more. keep sketching
hahaha shit, i never even saw the nazi thing when i was drawing it

suppose i should change it up then


good crits though, thanks

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1090.jpg

[elcs]

I like your letters alot ^^^ All your stuff is real good. I never see your painted stuff though?

[kame2]

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7200/kame2du6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

whatcha guys think?

[Ginsu]

i think this is the most simple piece i have done so farhttp://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/Ritual.jpg
the bubbles in the black and on the ouside are spose ta be yellow but the scanner dident pick it up.

[nemzone]

Originally posted by Veηo+Sep 18 2006, 05:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Veηo @ Sep 18 2006, 05:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Veηo@Sep 17 2006, 05:25 PM
Heres a rough sketch(theres has been a few more mods to it but thats the just of it)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Abrokenvow/Picture041.jpg
bump
any suggestions? [/b][/quote]
already told ya....

ok bud im not tryin to be a tool, but why the fuk do ppl never listen to STAY SIMPLE. 3D&#39;s off, god only knows what the fuck it says??

try a simple piece n show me wat that looks like....

[nerdx]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Sep 18 2006, 01:14 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Sep 18 2006, 01:14 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Stonk@Sep 17 2006, 09:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/2006_0322Image0013.jpg
sorry about the blurryness. also im not really sure if i like the arrow but i didn&#39;t really just want another bar going across there. crits please
the "O" lookin like a sphincter. add a little squirt and youre golden bear. [/b][/quote]
bahha this is amazing.

[novella]

Originally posted by Ginsu@Sep 18 2006, 03:09 AM
i think this is the most simple piece i have done so farhttp://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/Ritual.jpg
the bubbles in the black and on the ouside are spose ta be yellow but the scanner dident pick it up.
the only letter i can even vaguely make out is the a. draw blockletters until you learn letter structure bud

my best guess is that is says punal

[obseen]

niccsacc that physk sketch is amazing&#33; love it

[_Pure]

Could finally make some pictures:
Blockbusterrr
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/8969/pure6bn3.jpg
Thinking of changing my name to kace
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/1188/pure7us6.jpg
Simple
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/876/pure8sy2.jpg
Another simple
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5499/pure9od3.jpg
And here I tried something more advanced :P
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2804/pure10bw3.jpg
Watcha think ?

[beantownboy]

that needs mor straight shit in it kid but the last ones fire
;)

[Dagon]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon1.jpg


i just got into graf a couple of weeks ago, i&#39;ve been writing in my black books ever since...its all i do now...most of these tags look that same, but i want to get started on some crazy wild style shit...

[Apoc]

that needs mor straight shit in it kid but the last ones fire

are you kidding me? that last one is horrible. The first and second one show potential.

Like everyone says EVERY DAY, keep simple for a while. And stay on paper...

[imported_Bes_one]

Comments,crits,or suggestions?

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2441/pict0638lw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[nerdx]

looks nuts. think the E could use some more definition.

[Apoc]

its pretty sick but you should finish it... and get rid of *some* of the arrows... not tryin to say its bad but some of the arrows just don&#39;t fit the flow, like the one on the left, and the one on the top left... and there are a few more that are stuck in there that dont look right

[imported_Bes_one]

Does it have too many arrows?

[some guy from NCI...]

Bes One, the letters are pretty wak

[Monster Island]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1630/img2067fo4.jpg

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/7994/img2069jw0.jpg

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/4708/img2070uw6.jpg

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/6450/img2071qg2.jpg

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2883/img2068aa6.jpg


before i do a piece, i usually mess around and do a small thumbnail of it, that might help some of you guys too...

[ARMAwonR]

the second and last ones are hot hot hot

[nerdx]

diggin the red and yellow one

[corruptedtom]

Wow those are some nice pieces&#33;

I really like the colour schemes you use, and the fills, especially the last one :)

[trashhh]

Where are you from aske? Thers an aske from glasgow sctoland whos a lot better than you and pretty famous

[umop 3pisdn]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y123/DonnieDelinko/IMAGE_059.jpg

[Maker A Laker]

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/104_0129.jpg

mehh
from math class
comments

[kame2]

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7200/kame2du6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments?

[Learninitup]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/becominglucid/Graf-2.jpg

i know its shit, was just practicing

[ARMAwonR]

thats a lot of completely pointless extenstions ... why?

[nerdx]

first try at addons and the likes. not sure if i ike it.
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/2193/img2525uu6.jpg
not really.

[Maker A Laker]

Originally posted by Maker A Laker@Sep 18 2006, 04:16 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/104_0129.jpg

mehh
from math class
comments
bumpo

[kame2]

Originally posted by Maker A Laker+Sep 18 2006, 03:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Maker A Laker &#064; Sep 18 2006, 03:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Maker A Laker@Sep 18 2006, 04:16 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/104_0129.jpg

mehh
from math class
comments
[/b][/quote]
okay please dont bump your picture in 2 minute periods, people will get to it when they get to it.

-keep it simple, the top one looks better than the middle one, why? cause its kept more simple, also get rid of the bubbles, the bubbles look good if people can do them right, but you cant so get rid of them, just work on the letters the bubbles and outlines will follow.

[sky 5]

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/4416/1191937bv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/3961/sciencemergedmh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some def proportion problems going on . . . . just aint feeling it lately, aint really lookin forward to sketchin up new ideas . . . .

[kame2]

Originally posted by sky 5@Sep 18 2006, 03:51 PM
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/4416/1191937bv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/3961/sciencemergedmh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some def proportion problems going on . . . . just aint feeling it lately, aint really lookin forward to sketchin up new ideas . . . .
sky5 those both look good, i like the bottom one more cause its colored,
and did you draw that sharpie? on the bottom one?

[aces]

I&#39;m pretty sure that it&#39;s prisma or something of the like cause sharpie doesn&#39;t make those colors I think he just outlines in sharpie. Sky correct me if I&#39;m wrong.

[kame2]

i dont mean what its colored w/ i meant the sharpie that cut in half, did he draw it or is it just cut?

[ARMAwonR]

i think kame was talking about the actual marker in the picture ... but to me it just looks like its faded like that due to two different pictures being taken ...

[Monster Island]

Originally posted by trashhh@Sep 18 2006, 02:11 PM
Where are you from aske? Thers an aske from glasgow sctoland whos a lot better than you and pretty famous
im from NY, ive never heard of another aske, but i never really researched the name.


in reality, there is probably two to three, or more, of almost every tag out there, so im not gonna change anything, unless of course i come across him in real life haha

[sky 5]

i got pissed and snapped that marker clean in half yo . . . nah i merged 2 photos and it just came out that way . . .

[novella]

Originally posted by Monster Island@Sep 18 2006, 01:17 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1630/img2067fo4.jpg

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/7994/img2069jw0.jpg

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/4708/img2070uw6.jpg

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/6450/img2071qg2.jpg

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2883/img2068aa6.jpg


before i do a piece, i usually mess around and do a small thumbnail of it, that might help some of you guys too...
i really like the 3rd one and the last one

sick color schemes too

[Veηo]

I need new ideas for v&#39;s i find that they are hard to get creative with if you know what i mean?
they so bland

[Fosale!]

ok, so try hard.

[novella]

look at others people stuff, get ideas from them.

im not saying bite their styles straight up, but if your mind is blank, looking at other graf will probably help

[TricksForKids]

Bye Bye Regs.

Hello Smirk.

Crits?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4056/smirkdu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

loving the new name,
like it alot better then regs
fucking illin
oh btw about that sketch
i write sec
or sev which ever you like more.

[Ginsu]

Originally posted by novella+Sep 18 2006, 09:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (novella @ Sep 18 2006, 09:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ginsu@Sep 18 2006, 03:09 AM
i think this is the most simple piece i have done so farhttp://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/Ritual.jpg
the bubbles in the black and on the ouside are spose ta be yellow but the scanner dident pick it up.
the only letter i can even vaguely make out is the a. draw blockletters until you learn letter structure bud

my best guess is that is says punal [/b][/quote]
lol it sais ritual but im learning this is one of my earlyier pieces but im getting better&#33;

[novella]

ginsu: start by trying to draw all of your letters with the same thickness. Do this by drawing the letters in rectangular segments:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/simples.jpg
(i know this isnt the most top notch example, but i just wanted something to show how to construct very simple letters. I only spent about 2 minutes on it)

when i first started sketching i never used this way of forming letters, in fact i hated the idea of it. but after i tried it, and my stuff improved 10000 times over, there was no turning back

[TricksForKids]

haahha no offense novellla but thats the funniest thing ive ever seen

obviously you draw two sicks and a cross in the middle...lol, way to try and help though, i repsect that

[NOMX]

ive never met 1 person in my life who draws like that, must take you fucken forever to draw a letter

[novella]

haha, just trying to help, his letters are beyond whack.

its not the only way to draw, and it might take a little longer, but i like the outcomes better

[TricksForKids]

dont make me bump my own sketch, someone give me some crits on that thang up thurrr&#33;&#33;&#33;^^^^^

[kame2]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 18 2006, 06:54 PM
Bye Bye Regs.

Hello Smirk.

Crits?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4056/smirkdu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like it, it looks sweet, very good color scheme, and its
draws you into looking at it, like Waaabam look at me
im smirk.

okay toys read this, once you follow what everyone says
about Stay simple, you&#39;ll be very capable to do something
like this

and than you can be a graffiti ninja, and bust a peice like this
w/ practice :ph34r:

[novella]

tricks, i love that style, you should put that stuff up in paint

the one thing i dont like about this sketch is the R though, im just not feeling it

[nerdx]

tricks, its lookin nice as always. the S and the R is awesome.



wonderin what everyone thinks bout htis one?
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/2193/img2525uu6.jpg

[novella]

dont &#39;mold&#39; your letters, and i would switch up the extension on the bottom left of the M, otherwise the letters are fairly solid

[nerdx]

what do you mean by mold?

[Chop Logic]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/gamechop.jpg

I never really do my O&#39;s or H&#39;s like that, I just felt like trying it. Dont know what I&#39;m doing with the screen star or ball yet. Crits/comments welcome.

[sum419]

http://img150.imageshack.us/my.php?image=358570877lka6.jpg

hey this is my shit i write sine check it

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 18 2006, 06:54 PM
Bye Bye Regs.

Hello Smirk.

Crits?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4056/smirkdu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump for feedback, and sum419, that stuffs actually pretty interesting man, the eltters need some seirous work but you can tell you have artistic potential, leave colours out of it for now, keep working my friend

Peace

[d_g]

It&#39;s hot Tricks.

Not really feeling the brown bubbles though, but that&#39;s just a personal thing for me I think.

I think the &#39;R&#39; needs something, not quite sure what though.

[bouncingsoul]

Not really feeling your handie much but whatever... The piece is pretty good, but I just don&#39;t like the R as stated before. It&#39;s that thing in the middle is just kinda iffy. Also the extension that goes under the K I don&#39;t like at all... And personally, I&#39;m not a fan of centered 3d&#39;s unless the style is more "curvy". Can&#39;t really explain it, but try a 3d going straight to the left or down. Those are my favorite and I think that&#39;d look great with the style... I don&#39;t really know but it&#39;s worth a shot...

[beke]

Originally posted by sum419@Sep 18 2006, 08:46 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/my.php?image=358570877lka6.jpg

hey this is my shit i write sine check it
thats a mighty fresh piece for a shitty handstyle :) but i do feel the piece

[tompenny]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/IMG_0405.jpg

[kame2]

Originally posted by tompenny@Sep 18 2006, 09:42 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/IMG_0405.jpg
omg :angry:
ive said it like 10 times today,


KEEP IT SIMPLE&#33; THE REST WILL FOLLOW&#33;

[kame2]

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/2803/7deadlysinszm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
This is just the rough sketch
this is my entry for the 7 deadly sins battle, i decided to do GREED.
in the ribbons it says


TOP: Greed will even corrupt the purest
thats the reason why i put the heart changing from good to evil

Bottom: Greed will eat you alive,
which is why i put the skeleton arm.

also the dark swirls, indicate greed.

[Monster Island]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7813/img2072lw1.jpg


http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6560/img2074kp9.jpg

[Dagon]

Originally posted by Dagon@Sep 18 2006, 12:49 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon1.jpg


bump just wanted some crits, i just started.
bummop

[novella]

Originally posted by nerdx@Sep 18 2006, 08:10 PM
what do you mean by mold?
like around the edges of the letters, where you extend them back over the letter, if that makes sense. theres a thread in this forum thats titled &#39;what not to do&#39;, check it out, it has a pic of &#39;molded&#39; letters.