Tot Black Books

[Monster Island]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7813/img2072lw1.jpg


http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6560/img2074kp9.jpg

[Dagon]

Originally posted by Dagon@Sep 18 2006, 12:49 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/dagon1.jpg


bump just wanted some crits, i just started.
bummop

[novella]

Originally posted by nerdx@Sep 18 2006, 08:10 PM
what do you mean by mold?
like around the edges of the letters, where you extend them back over the letter, if that makes sense. theres a thread in this forum thats titled 'what not to do', check it out, it has a pic of 'molded' letters.

[ceroX24X]

tricks i actually like the way smirk looks more than regs the only thing that turns me off is the brown bubbles just doesnt seem to go with the scheme and i dunno why everyone else isnt digging that "R" i like it a lot keep it up dude.

[kaiser]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 18 2006, 08:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 18 2006, 08:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 18 2006, 06:54 PM
Bye Bye Regs.

Hello Smirk.

Crits?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4056/smirkdu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump for feedback, and sum419, that stuffs actually pretty interesting man, the eltters need some seirous work but you can tell you have artistic potential, leave colours out of it for now, keep working my friend

Peace [/b][/quote]
i like the bubbles but in my opinion bubbles look good green or purple&#33;

[SeKz]

Originally posted by kame2@Sep 18 2006, 09:49 PM
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/2803/7deadlysinszm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
This is just the rough sketch
this is my entry for the 7 deadly sins battle, i decided to do GREED.
in the ribbons it says


TOP: Greed will even corrupt the purest
thats the reason why i put the heart changing from good to evil

Bottom: Greed will eat you alive,
which is why i put the skeleton arm.

also the dark swirls, indicate greed.
okay, well something graff related would have looked nice. Umm u probably shouldnt explain the parts and what there meanings are, you shouldnt have to explain it if you draw it well enough, lots of meaning which is cool i guess... shame theres no burner in the background or nuthin <_<

[DECO ONE]

i DID THIS ABOUT A YEAR AGO WHEN I WAS WRITING MOUSE...I MESSED UP THE 3D
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/Picture.jpg
AND i DID THIS ONE FOR MY SISTER THE DAY AFTER I DID THE MOUSE ONE....IT SAYS DUKKIE :)
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/Dukkie.jpg

HORRIBLE, i KNOW, LOL......JUST THOUGHT I WOULD PUT UP SOME OLD BLACK BOOK SHIT :)

[aces]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 18 2006, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 18 2006, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 18 2006, 06:54 PM
Bye Bye Regs.

Hello Smirk.

Crits?

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4056/smirkdu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump for feedback, and sum419, that stuffs actually pretty interesting man, the eltters need some seirous work but you can tell you have artistic potential, leave colours out of it for now, keep working my friend

Peace [/b][/quote]
Lovin it tricks the only thing is the spiral in the R appears only there but whatever. Still sick.

[bouncingsoul]

Yo tricks, what kinda pens do you use? You should try some thick outlines. I&#39;m messing around with them and I like em a lot. I think they&#39;d look great with your style

[sum419]

fuck your shit ***** check mine it will blow that shit off the map

[myl]

lets see it then

[sum419]

fuck that dude i prolly got more reason to be here than you dont fuck with the big boys

[myl]

right on

[nerdx]

oh shit man. i better delete my account because the big boys are here i the toy forum&#33;
damn man, you must have super mad upz yo

[sum419]

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1476/358570877lms4.jpg
here check it

[sum419]

yea mos def lol

[nerdx]

are you fucking kidding me. that shit is horrible.
the dumbass guy with the sterotype jacket and a backpack with a spraypaint GERNADE&#33;?
your shit is wack as fuck and you should probably get the &#39;big boys&#39; and leave now.

[sum419]

lets see your shit then

[sum419]

and fuck it dude i know my writing is better who gives a fuck bout the background you prick if you ever show up in japan halla at me

[nerdx]

idk man your shit is a burner compared to me.
but i guess if you really want to see it, ill post it up.

oh wait, do you want to see bombs and shit that are actually with paint, not a gernade?
or shit that is on paper that just shows if i have any drawing skills?

[myl]

sum419 your shit is WACK

so basically, dont come on here talkin shit on people you dont even know and sayin youre better than all of us when truthfully youll get WRECKED

[sum419]

watever dude its your call its prolly sick thoe
i just come from a different scene than you
we dont give a fuck wat people say

[myl]

well we care what people say, and id say the majority of the people on this forum would probably hate you

now that thats outta the way, someone post some flix
i would but i havent sketched in a week or 2

[SiLeNt-BoB]

Originally posted by Monster Island+Sep 18 2006, 04:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Monster Island @ Sep 18 2006, 04:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Sep 18 2006, 02:11 PM
Where are you from aske? Thers an aske from glasgow sctoland whos a lot better than you and pretty famous
im from NY, ive never heard of another aske, but i never really researched the name.


in reality, there is probably two to three, or more, of almost every tag out there, so im not gonna change anything, unless of course i come across him in real life haha [/b][/quote]
http://askeur.yafro.com/photos/2006/8/0

aske from glasgow ^^

[nerdx]

i dont give a fuck what one person says either, but when a whole mess of people are telling me that my shit is fucking wack then usually they are right.

so heres 2 more people added to your list that are telling you its ugly.


just some shit so you will shut up
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9254/img2499ue7.jpg
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/9004/img2494rs1.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9792/img2496lz5.jpg
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2020/img2514rx5.jpg

[nerdx]

myl check your pm&#39;s i sent you a new one

[myl]

alright cool

nice throwies dude, im really likin em

edit: i probably cant respond to it right now tho cause i gotta write a paper and i have class in a half hour

[pace1]

heres some school sketch:
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/gin.../paceschool.jpg (http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/paceschool.jpg)
Heres a Newer full color:
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/niceyu.jpg
Heres a new name im gonna change(just a throw) crits on any aprreciated:
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/PAVI.jpg

[myl]

paut?

[pace1]

no PAVii never done I&#39;s so i suc at them

[whoarethereal evil]

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/445/img0241as6.th.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0241as6.jpg)
wht dya think

[aces]

Originally posted by sum419@Sep 19 2006, 11:50 AM
watever dude its your call its prolly sick thoe
i just come from a different scene than you
we dont give a fuck wat people say
If you&#39;re one of the "big boys" then leave the toy forum and ask for crits by someone more at your ability level. The blackbook thread would welcome someone of your talent with open arms.

[imported_Bes_one]

Originally posted by Bes_one@Sep 18 2006, 12:55 PM
Comments,crits,or suggestions?

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2441/pict0638lw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump

[krazzie_ammo]

yo bes, thats fucking ill&#33;&#33;&#33; but some of the arrows look a bit outta place...like the top left and right ones...also theres a big gap in the middle of the E. try colouring it in :D

[aces]

Yea there&#39;s way too many arrows in that thing. Tone it down just a bit.

[Slushi]

Originally posted by sum419@Sep 19 2006, 10:47 AM
and fuck it dude i know my writing is better who gives a fuck bout the background you prick if you ever show up in japan halla at me
Real japan graff. (http://graffiti.org/japan/japan_1.html)

[dont tag trees]

Originally posted by Bes_one+Sep 19 2006, 01:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bes_one @ Sep 19 2006, 01:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bes_one@Sep 18 2006, 12:55 PM
Comments,crits,or suggestions?

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2441/pict0638lw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump [/b][/quote]
colour&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[myl]

Originally posted by Bes_one+Sep 19 2006, 01:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bes_one &#064; Sep 19 2006, 01:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bes_one@Sep 18 2006, 12:55 PM
Comments,crits,or suggestions?

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2441/pict0638lw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump [/b][/quote]


this piece needs more work before you color it...obviously less arrows. there also seems to be a lot going on around the S and at first glance its a bit confusing

other than that i guess its not that bad

edit:

heres what confused me at first

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/7475/pict0638lw5copyiu8.jpg

[Monster Island]

gatorade

[Fosale!]

is yummy.

[doomsayer]

critsplease???

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/SEP19SKETCH.jpg

[RemoZ]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/5450/dscn0106lo4.jpg



Fixed it up and colored it plan on panting it this weekend

[tea dee sea]

...

[Sluts_r_us]

eh...w.e.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskfreestyle-1.jpg

[Bartic]

Tea Don&#39;t really know much bout throwies but its looking good,
RemoZ thats hot, not sure about the shine on the H, might be a bit off
Pesk, u got that letter structure down i wish i could my S is looking extremely hack too wide
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/3599/suki8qn4.png
Crits?

[Hilo]

like that shit pesk keepin it simple for sure man

[Bastardo]

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/3293/picture009dv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bank,Prof,Etor
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/8947/pictureeo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bank..(Again)

[Hilo]

agendda sketches 2006 niguuz (not the best quality included)

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3562/picture61wr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[bouncingsoul]

Damn sluts, I remember you when I was just starting out. Just fix up the shadow a little. It&#39;s lookin nice

[Hilo]

lovin that shit bank and everyone on the page,.

[Fosale!]

new toon&#33; crushing it.

[bouncingsoul]

Workin hard in Biology

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0244.jpg

[Bastardo]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 19 2006, 07:37 PM
new toon&#33; crushing it.
i am toon :lol:

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Sep 19 2006, 07:38 PM
Workin hard in Biology

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0244.jpg
bump for new page

[Hilo]

working on a new style did this like 2 hours ago im not ready to couler just getting my new name ready. well crits? like it no?

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4717/picture62fl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[beke]

yea man im feelin your new style

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Bastardo+Sep 19 2006, 07:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bastardo @ Sep 19 2006, 07:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Sep 19 2006, 07:37 PM
new toon&#33; crushing it.
i am toon :lol: [/b][/quote]
i know you are...
thats why i said new toon&#33;
like new style toon&#33;
and your crushing it.
whata pro.

[nemzone]

http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/936/dsc01015my6.jpg
wasnt worthy of bb thread lol

so wat do ppl think?

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Sep 19 2006, 07:11 PM
eh...w.e.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskfreestyle-1.jpg
Bump for that sexy S

likin it sluts baby, just aint feelin the E, doesnt really flow.

Keep it up you hunk

[TricksForKids]

a little alphabet action:

the thing beside the Z on the right says Cayum..my new name.

yeah i know i just changed it to smrik but you can shutup. lol.

Peace

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/8360/alphabetjk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[nerdx]

im stealing thoes. lol.

[beke]

consider that alphabet bitten. :D

[nerdx]

i was kidding.

[bouncingsoul]

Some of the letters are really screwy. Like I don&#39;t know what that little thing in the D is. Looks like a right angle marker or something... The e is just... an average, normal E... You shoulda added some style. E&#39;s are one of the most versatile letters and you have a great handie style. I&#39;d like it better if you flipped the I upside down, and the T looks like a horrible P... But, I love your Q, M, N and your X... I&#39;m prolly gettin&#39; an entry in that battle too

[Stonk]

i really like that pesk but i agree with tricks are for kids about the e.

switched up the e and o a little bit
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/3302/poedej1.jpg

[NOMX]

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1446/200609190002wf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
spladow&#33;
agoe kickin ya parents teeth in&#33;

[Bastardo]

ill charcters..but the thing is can you paint them?
and also your tags are hurrendous they look like gang graffiti..work on that

[NOMX]

haha, wanna handstyle battle?

[Bastardo]

fucking hell your uptight as fook..but hey i aint declining.

p.s bring a throw into it.

[NOMX]

i aint uptight, its just u said they were hideous which made me cry and do u think if i could paint them i would be in the toy section??????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????

[bouncingsoul]

Damn, I&#39;m lovin that one on the right. Flick that whole thing please?

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 19 2006, 06:04 PM
critsplease???

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/SEP19SKETCH.jpg
bump yo

[NOMX]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2825/200609190003qi4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Venom.]

That is some hot shit man. Post that flick in the big boy character thread.

[Gin]

this is me just messin around when i had nuttin to do let me kno what ya think
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/ginpiece.jpg

[myl]

2 things

LOSE THE CROWN - youre still a toy and i doubt you have mad ups

second, go back to simples/blocks

[Gin]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 19 2006, 11:31 PM
2 things

LOSE THE CROWN - youre still a toy and i doubt you have mad ups

second, go back to simples/blocks
ok the crown-yeah i can understand but don&#39;t tell me i dont got mad ups...cuz i got ups.
and blocks are for ppl who just started ok who are you to tell me to go back to blocks????

[NOMX]

well from what u show us he is a whole lot better than u, btw i think u meant to say DONT tell me

[Gin]

it says just messin around right there i&#39;ll show yall what i do when i think and take time
don&#39;t tell me that i should go back to blocks
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/HPIM0320.jpg

[myl]

Originally posted by Gin+Sep 19 2006, 11:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Gin &#064; Sep 19 2006, 11:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Sep 19 2006, 11:31 PM
2 things

LOSE THE CROWN - youre still a toy and i doubt you have mad ups

second, go back to simples/blocks
ok the crown-yeah i can understand but don&#39;t tell me i dont got mad ups...cuz i got ups.
and blocks are for ppl who just started ok who are you to tell me to go back to blocks???? [/b][/quote]
ok well the fact that that shit is wack you shouldnt have mad ups

and i what i was saying is that you probably dont have mad enough ups to call yourself king

and who am i to tell you to go back to blocks?

i can just look at your "piece" right there and i KNOW you HAVE to go back to blocks...its not a suggestion its NEEDED

you have no structure, the widths are fucked up and you have random arrows comin outta nowhere

back to blocks kiddo

edit: and if you really did do that kasm piece i bet you painted these too?

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/max1234/IMG_1113.jpg

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/max1234/IMG_1111.jpg

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/max1234/IMG_1113.jpg

[Gin]

not to call myself king but i do got ups. and the crown was a last add in i don&#39;t go around callin myself king i kno i&#39;m still a toy.

[FEN the HEN]

oooo you got one fill in your up like mad

[myl]

how can you go draw somethin like this
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/HPIM0319.jpg

and then draw somethin like this 2 months later

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/ginpiece.jpg


bullshit kid, get the fuck out

[Gin]

ok my can control sux no lie thats why i&#39;m not drawnin shit like that cuz i can&#39;t do it on a wall. plus i just wanted to see if i could draw that kasm i&#39;ve had gin for like 2-3 months don&#39;t come at me sayin it&#39;s bullshit and then tell me to get outta here.

[novella]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

any crits or comments for this?

[SeKz]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 20 2006, 12:14 AM
how can you go draw somethin like this
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/HPIM0319.jpg

and then draw somethin like this 2 months later

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/ginpiece.jpg


bullshit kid, get the fuck out
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/7743/kasmto0kjljkl01xi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Because its a dead set bite, you should be ashamed of urself, to think we wont notice&#33;

[SeKz]

Originally posted by Gin@Sep 20 2006, 12:28 AM
ok my can control sux no lie thats why i&#39;m not drawnin shit like that cuz i can&#39;t do it on a wall. plus i had that name for a while so i got used to it i&#39;ve had gin for like 2-3 months don&#39;t come at me sayin it&#39;s bullshit and then tell me to get outta here.
People like this dont belong here. GTFO :angry: biter

[NOMX]

Originally posted by novella@Sep 20 2006, 12:59 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

any crits or comments for this?
didnt i give u crits on this already?
why dont u make a new one with my suggestions? :huh:

[novella]

straight up owned


unless this is one of the peices you painted with your &#39;shitty can control&#39;
hahaha

[novella]

Originally posted by NOMX+Sep 20 2006, 01:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NOMX @ Sep 20 2006, 01:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-novella@Sep 20 2006, 12:59 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

any crits or comments for this?
didnt i give u crits on this already?
why dont u make a new one with my suggestions? :huh: [/b][/quote]
i was just looking for any other opinions, yours was the only one i got first time around

i like the picture though, haha. although a couple things you changed would have made the letter structure go way down hill

[SeKz]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4373/image005uu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

KASE

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6506/image008qb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SEKZ

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1791/image001im1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

YIKES

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/3120/image004ja0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SEKZ

These are my recent sketches

Im also thinking of a name shange to kase, are there any famous writers by that name?

[NOMX]

Originally posted by novella+Sep 20 2006, 01:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (novella @ Sep 20 2006, 01:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 20 2006, 01:05 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-novella@Sep 20 2006, 12:59 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

any crits or comments for this?
didnt i give u crits on this already?
why dont u make a new one with my suggestions? :huh:
i was just looking for any other opinions, yours was the only one i got first time around

i like the picture though, haha. although a couple things you changed would have made the letter structure go way down hill [/b][/quote]
well there aint a whole lot of letter structure to begin with, considering how i did crits on it, it was about 2 days ago, you could of drawn another piece instead of bumpin the same one

[Gin]

yeah in the movie style wars there&#39;s this part on kase/case he spells it both ways
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/city_of_heroes.jpg
and this is him
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/Kase.jpg

[NOMX]

^wtf r u talking about?

[Gin]

^skez asked if there was a famous writer named kase so i was lettin him kno there was.

[extirpate]

quickie for toy battle, not sure what i think of it crits?
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1401/kumant7.jpg

aside for the m i kinda like it

[TricksForKids]

gin you make me furious..i cant even speak. Kasm is a writer in my city...youve offended my city...me...and everyone else on this forum who puts in time to come up with their own work. So here&#39;s a big

FUCK YOU

from all of us.

[WolfBurrns]

Originally posted by Gin@Sep 20 2006, 01:42 AM
yeah in the movie style wars there&#39;s this part on kase/case he spells it both ways
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/city_of_heroes.jpg
and this is him
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l160/Ginkop/Kase.jpg
Haha, yeah. The guy with the one arm, right? That was great.

[myl]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 20 2006, 06:27 AM
gin you make me furious..i cant even speak. Kasm is a writer in my city...youve offended my city...me...and everyone else on this forum who puts in time to come up with their own work. So here&#39;s a big

FUCK YOU

from all of us.
bump to next page

yeah, we hate you gin

[SeKz]

amen, i posted his bite on like every forum. lulz :lol:

[bouncingsoul]

I&#39;m surprised you haven&#39;t heard of Kase2...

[sum419]

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/9559/258810497lxx1.jpg
bored heres another haha

[Gin]

Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 20 2006, 08:24 AM
amen, i posted his bite on like every forum. lulz :lol:
w/e but like i said i wasn&#39;t bombin it i just said i could draw it thats all i wanted to see if i could do. i never claimed it was mine i just said i drew it....which i did cuz the pic you put up of that kasm piece wasn&#39;t the one i looked at to see if i could draw.

[some guy from NCI...]

Gin, I got a right mind to fuckin ban you. Don&#39;t come on these forums postin you whack copies, if you wanna copy pictures then fuck off elsewhere, but dont waste space and time postin your shit on here. And don&#39;t come back with some cock an bull story about how you wanted to see if you could draw it. We don&#39;t need people like you here.

[trac]

Originally posted by Gin@Sep 20 2006, 12:28 AM
ok my can control sux no lie thats why i&#39;m not drawnin shit like that cuz i can&#39;t do it on a wall. plus i just wanted to see if i could draw that kasm i&#39;ve had gin for like 2-3 months don&#39;t come at me sayin it&#39;s bullshit and then tell me to get outta here.
bull shit get outta here

[trac]

gin u talk a load of shit

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Sep 19 2006, 06:55 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/6397/damean055cg6.jpg
nothing big, simple throwie...crits???
Bump for excessive freshness. ;)

[littlerocky]

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1958/imgp0514wk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits and comments please...
sry bout quality of pic

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Sep 20 2006, 02:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Sep 20 2006, 02:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tea dee sea@Sep 19 2006, 06:55 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/6397/damean055cg6.jpg
nothing big, simple throwie...crits???
Bump for excessive freshness. ;) [/b][/quote]
oh snap, yoooo&#33; hahaha shits nice as hell.

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 19 2006, 09:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 19 2006, 09:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Sep 19 2006, 07:11 PM
eh...w.e.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskfreestyle-1.jpg
Bump for that sexy S

likin it sluts baby, just aint feelin the E, doesnt really flow.

Keep it up you hunk [/b][/quote]
bump jus 2 see if you *****s like it...

[klipa]

yeh id like to see it drawn neet in colour

quik n simple 4 a battle im def going to lose

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/301/dsc01915di5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[krazzie_ammo]

yo klipa that looks so hottt&#33;&#33;&#33; im definately gonna vote for you&#33; :D how long did it take you?

i havent been on this site for time so i thought i would do some wuick pen freestyles...
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1599/newstyleeewi0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
can i get some crits?

[klipa]

cheers a good half hour atleast

im not feeling the r on that otherwise its all good

[krazzie_ammo]

dammnnn......half an hour&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; o how i loathe you you :P

[klipa]

any way bump for crits or no one will, sorry

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/301/dsc01915di5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02238.jpg
critz?

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Sep 20 2006, 04:23 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1599/newstyleeewi0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

omg klipa how can we crit that? its perfect, lol. bump for crits because it was the last one on the page B)

[novella]

Originally posted by klipa@Sep 20 2006, 05:04 PM
any way bump for crits or no one will, sorry

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/301/dsc01915di5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the fills are sick man, i really like them. i cant make out the middle letter though...

sebne? that doesnt sound right

[aces]

One thing to say is that the dark orange thing on the second E looks like it should be pushed back more towards the left of the whole piece. That is freakin sick though klipa.

[novella]

Originally posted by NOMX+Sep 20 2006, 01:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NOMX @ Sep 20 2006, 01:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by novella@Sep 20 2006, 01:09 AM

Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 20 2006, 01:05 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-novella@Sep 20 2006, 12:59 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch.jpg

any crits or comments for this?
didnt i give u crits on this already?
why dont u make a new one with my suggestions? :huh:
i was just looking for any other opinions, yours was the only one i got first time around

i like the picture though, haha. although a couple things you changed would have made the letter structure go way down hill
well there aint a whole lot of letter structure to begin with, considering how i did crits on it, it was about 2 days ago, you could of drawn another piece instead of bumpin the same one [/b][/quote]
how is there not a lot of letter structure? the S is kind of shitty, but the other letters all hold up just fine. and again, i was looking for any other crits. seeing if anyone likes this style. then i can decide to either work with it some more, or trash it and move on

[TricksForKids]

http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=15217 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=15217)

ALL OF YOU PEEP THAT NOW&#33;


and props to klipa, dope handstyle too, really nice colouring and 3D, my fave letter is the S by far, work on that O and the E&#39;s

Peace

[NICCSACC]

im pretty sure it says: "SEONE" either way that stuff is fire.

[wordzcantexpress]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1518/blackbook016yo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what I entered for the new battle, the pencil should through the paint and that is what those bright/ white lines are. Crits?

[littlerocky]

Originally posted by littlerocky@Sep 20 2006, 02:57 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1958/imgp0514wk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits and comments please...
sry bout quality of pic
bump cuz i got nothin last time

[Bartic]

rocky, looking ok, the severed end of the m and the bulbus top of the s sets it off. try not going off the page so you can form your letters completely


Bask, slow down, the holes in your B are ridiclious stay parellel with your curves, don&#39;t have 1 side smooth and the other all angled etc. The line going through the the letters and into the K is over the top, stop it. You got your 3d down. Start off with those, good job stayin simple tho

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1094.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6974/poseyeayeaoq8.png
ne crits?

[d_g]

Niccsacc, your shit is hot, I love your style.

Pose, dunno about all the extenctions but I like the structure of your letters, maybe bring the bottom bit of the &#39;e&#39; around to the right further so it&#39;s a bit more definable, that is if it is an &#39;e&#39;.

[novella]

niccsacc, thats dope man, props. Pose, im agreeing with d__g, fix that e up a bit, otherwise looks pretty sick

any other crits on the sketch i posted last page? ive asked so many times :P

[_ghost_]

hopefully a future throwie with the crits i get to improve it. http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9914/lastscantm4.jpg I cant get the picture to work so please use the link

[novella]

yo ghost, the only letter i can really make out is the T at the end, the drop shadow is good though, except for in the cutout its off

[_ghost_]

I may have gotten a lil carried away ill try drawing another one more simple. but keep the crits comin please

[sky 5]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 20 2006, 06:55 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1094.jpg
fuck yeah man . . .ive been waitin for you drop somethin other than your simples . . . im all smiles right now that right there is dope . . .i dont know if youve noticed but ive started/tried to bunch/squish my letters together more like you do while still bending them all crazy like . . .

[Fosale!]

edit

[Stonk]

Originally posted by Stonk@Sep 19 2006, 10:14 PM
i really like that pesk but i agree with tricks are for kids about the e.

switched up the e and o a little bit
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/3302/poedej1.jpg
bump

[Fosale!]

My friend Reach
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010189.jpg

[sky 5]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Sep 20 2006, 06:56 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6974/poseyeayeaoq8.png
ne crits?
this was also an eye pleaser . . . . i like the small shootoffs w/ tabs . . .i actually did a sketch in that almost exact style the other night . . but you pulled it off, i ran into a troublesome M and quit . . . alot of times being half blazed is better feelin than being fully dysfunctionally baked . .

[novella]

thats super hard to see fosale, you need to go over those lines in marker at least. not just force it

[Fosale!]

The piece isnt mine, its my friends
Reach.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010193.jpg

[Fosale!]

closer
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010188.jpg
2 parts closer up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010190.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010191.jpg

[_ghost_]

more crits please http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9914/lastscantm4.jpg

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Seek139@Sep 20 2006, 05:11 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02238.jpg
critz?
bump

[Blix]

Fosale ur friend needs some practice

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Sep 20 2006, 03:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Sep 20 2006, 03:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 19 2006, 09:46 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Sep 19 2006, 07:11 PM
eh...w.e.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskfreestyle-1.jpg
Bump for that sexy S

likin it sluts baby, just aint feelin the E, doesnt really flow.

Keep it up you hunk
bump jus 2 see if you *****s like it... [/b][/quote]
bumppppizzles&#33;

[uhhh]

damn. niccasaccthat piece is niiice. very good to see you droping something other than simples. pose, i like that. just clean some stuff up. make some stuff a litlle wider or skinnier and itd be real sick.

edit-sluts, you have no idea the level of affection i have for that s

[NOMX]

why u postin shit that aint urs?

[Sluts_r_us]

maybe because his friend doesnt have a copmputer or camera? why do you care?

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/evilkermit1.jpg
i have a tendency to squash my letters together.

[d_g]

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9650/scanux4.jpg

Trying to do some shit with my simples.

I don&#39;t like the &#39;T&#39;.

And ignore the bubbles, they&#39;re from the next page.

[wordzcantexpress]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 20 2006, 07:42 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/evilkermit1.jpg
i have a tendency to squash my letters together.
That&#39;s tight shit there. Kermit looks fuckin strung out, like he needs a fix, lol

[NOMX]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Sep 20 2006, 07:42 PM
maybe because his friend doesnt have a copmputer or camera? why do you care?
why do u look at other guys asses in school?



OHHHHHHHHHH&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Blix]

Originally posted by NOMX+Sep 20 2006, 07:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NOMX @ Sep 20 2006, 07:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Sep 20 2006, 07:42 PM
maybe because his friend doesnt have a copmputer or camera? why do you care?
why do u look at other guys asses in school?



OHHHHHHHHHH&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
to see if they&#39;ve been workin out ofcourse

[Sluts_r_us]

wow bro you must be like 12 years old..trying to insult me when i answer your questions..stop tryin to be a dick and go sketch, because it seems like your trying to start shit wit people when you cant back shit up with your work. i used to have a little bit of respect for you but thats all down the drain...

[_ghost_]

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9914/lastscantm4.jpg CRITS PLEASE

[NOMX]

i sketch as much as i want to, if u had respect 4 me be4 then u still think my stuff is good sooooooooooo :P

and no i aint tryin to spark beef

[Sluts_r_us]

i said i had respect for you, that doesnt mean i still do or ever did like any of your work.

[NOMX]

so what? u had respect for my hardcore typin abilities or some shit????

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1095.jpg
bored.

[Sluts_r_us]

there is no point in responding to this because i know your going to try to pull a 12 year old comback on me, and i dont have the patience(sp) to deal with that right now.

[bouncingsoul]

Damn Nicc is one of my favorite writers on this site... I haven&#39;t seen a Venom sketch from you in soo long though

:edit: Nevermind, I just got owned... And I fucking love that, except the M is hiding and not really feelin the O for some reason

[cord]

should bring the M out more

[Sluts_r_us]

niccsacc...nice jo, once again. keep it up im loving your sketches. anything you can say bout mine?

[NOMX]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Sep 20 2006, 08:19 PM
there is no point in responding to this because i know your going to try to pull a 12 year old comback on me, and i dont have the patience(sp) to deal with that right now.
or becuase u knew u liked my work and couldnt think of a comeback????

sick shit nicc

[Sluts_r_us]

what person in their right mind would actually consider liking your work? and why would i need a comback? do i need to give comebacks to people over the internet? no.

[aces]

Just shut up with this and post sketches bring it to the beef thread.

[bouncingsoul]

I smell a battle

[DaseONE]

Originally posted by NOMX+Sep 20 2006, 08:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NOMX @ Sep 20 2006, 08:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Sep 20 2006, 08:19 PM
there is no point in responding to this because i know your going to try to pull a 12 year old comback on me, and i dont have the patience(sp) to deal with that right now.
or becuase u knew u liked my work and couldnt think of a comeback????

sick shit nicc [/b][/quote]
Kid your wack give it the fuck up jesus..Some people just dont take a fucking hint.

[doomsayer]

yo mang take it to the beef thread

[NOMX]

good point aces
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/7885/200609200002ca8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
done like a week ago, sum freestyle bizneez
top one was my first time doin something like it

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1096.jpg

[Fosale!]

That M...soo dope.
love it.

[Sluts_r_us]

i like beigng ignored by nicc

[bouncingsoul]

Your M is hiding again haha... But yeah, that&#39;s sick.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Sep 20 2006, 08:21 PM
niccsacc...nice jo, once again. keep it up im loving your sketches. anything you can say bout mine?
lemmie chek em

[shifty!]

wow niccsacc that is sooo dope...
can i get some advice and feedback on mine, thanks

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/1075/sh046jn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3483/sh047rj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[doomsayer]

damn i am lovin that M nicc

can i get sum crits on this plz

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep21sketchg.jpg

i dont have a pencil or a rubber, so thats why its so messy i have to sketch it out in pen, and i only have a running out sharpie and some rly cheap blue texta and biro pens

[ShIfTeD]

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2526/alphabetxw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us) for the handstyle battle...any crits?

[shifty!]

yeh i hate it when you have no rubber...

[NOMX]

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/1714/200609200009ev2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
have to redeem myself after that fiasco, i apalogize to the people who werent involved

[YarHarHar]

thats a crazy throw nicc

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1769.jpg

simple came out fucked up

[bouncingsoul]

MF feed? What happened to Yaser and your other username? I can tell by the style and the foot haha

[YarHarHar]

who the fuck is MF feed?&#33;...

.....um....and i dono they ran away.. and all i did was basicly take the e out of my name....

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Seek139+Sep 20 2006, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Seek139 @ Sep 20 2006, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Seek139@Sep 20 2006, 05:11 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02238.jpg
critz?
bump [/b][/quote]
bump2....crit this shit man

[nerdx]

guessing it says zin, but not sure. which isnt good

[Necro-]

i dont like this one that much. Drakedog:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009-1.jpg
and this is for a girl:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-2.jpg
the thing that i notice about that one is that it seems a bit unbalanced. like too much is going on with the right side but not the left.

I like my other style better <_<

[nerdx]

i agree with the proporitons.
and if you dont mind, what is drakedog? kind of an odd word.

[Necro-]

he&#39;s a guy from korea i met online. he is the one who drew my avatar. i like the name (its obvously not his real name, tho)

[nerdx]

haha, its just odd

[Necro-]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Sep 20 2006, 10:56 PM
i dont like this one that much. Drakedog:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009-1.jpg
and this is for a girl:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-2.jpg
the thing that i notice about that one is that it seems a bit unbalanced. like too much is going on with the right side but not the left.

I like my other style better <_<
bump before i sleep

[novella]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Sep 20 2006, 11:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Sep 20 2006, 11:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Necro&#045;@Sep 20 2006, 10:56 PM
i dont like this one that much. Drakedog:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009-1.jpg
and this is for a girl:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-2.jpg
the thing that i notice about that one is that it seems a bit unbalanced. like too much is going on with the right side but not the left.

I like my other style better <_<
bump before i sleep [/b][/quote]
that first one is ill, im not feeling the second one though. misproportioned like you said, and the letters are too skinny for me

just finished up this one, any have crits pls?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch2.jpg

[ToXiK]

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/De2rthrowie1.jpg
Crits please. Need improvement&#33;

[NOMX]

why the fuck do u guys quote a whole bunch of pictures that would be right above ur post?
fix ur z and write it a shit load of times till it looks good

[YarHarHar]

Originally posted by YarHarHar@Sep 20 2006, 09:31 PM


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1769.jpg

simple came out fucked up
Seek139- work on that letter structure more i dont liek the random edges that come off everywhere. and if thats an N then it is to hidden

Necro- the first one i dont liek...i dono why...mabey just give er a fill and see what it looks liek

second one like the fill but the random parts shooting everywhere dont really go with it..letters are decent they could be thicker in my opinion handstyle needs work an by god im sorry but thats a really ugly outline

Toxik- you need to smooth out your lines and put more flow into that throw also 3d or a drop shadow would make it look better





bummping for crits

[novella]

yarharhar, i love the bottom one, those greens are sick, do you use prismas?

i dont like the top one as much, but its still nice

[Seek139]

yeah harhar i was just messing around in school... i can get hot simple&#39;s i&#39;m trying to add something more i guess it aint working...but i&#39;m back to the drawing board i&#39;ll post up l8r

[YarHarHar]

missed novella


really digging that e..but the begining and end need work your t is kind of lacking and i dont liek the extensions coming off of the a and t...they could look good if you fixed them though...overdone on the extensions lose some of those (especail the l to a connection)


i better get some fuckin crits now

[YarHarHar]

i use letraset...there like primas..but three tips instead of 2..(i dono if prisma makes a 3 tip)

[novella]

thanks, those are some good crits

the y in your bottom one is super sick btw, the only thing i dont like about the bottom peice is the fill on the 5, just seems kind of plain i guess

[ToXiK]

Aye NOMX, that isn&#39;t a Z its a 2 sorry if it looks bad. Thanks for crits Yar and NOMX though. I&#39;ll be working on it.

[Bartic]

Tesla/Novella: thats looking a whole bunch better
Yar: lovin the bottom one, need to get myself markers and stop using random highlighters

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3300/suktin5.png

comments?

[novella]

bartic: i love that S, it looks killer. id try and space out the letter a bit more though

oh, and theres some 3D missing on the K, no biggie though


edit**

i changed up that sketch a bit, heres the newer version :

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch3.jpg

better?

[Venom.]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6443/drainpiece1xr3.jpg

Drew in art... Yeah yeah I know, lose the heart.

I want some constructive crits, I&#39;m trying to get better.

[novella]

venom: youre on the right track for sure, just keep sketching lots and lots, you have a good idea of how to build letters so far. I know its only a pencil sketch, but try to work on keeping your lines straighter / cleaner.

The D and the R are good, try to work on that N thoughh

[Veηo]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Abrokenvow/Picture.jpg
just a quicky

[ToXiK]

Originally posted by ToXiK@Sep 20 2006, 08:33 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/De2rthrowie1.jpg
Crits please. Need improvement&#33;
Bumping for more crits. Dope S Bartic

[novella]

veno: im liking that throwie

toxik: try to make them... less &#39;bumpy&#39; i guess

look at the last page, the sketch venom posted. try to draw stuff like that for now

[novella]

Originally posted by novella@Sep 21 2006, 12:07 AM
bartic: i love that S, it looks killer. id try and space out the letter a bit more though

oh, and theres some 3D missing on the K, no biggie though


edit**

i changed up that sketch a bit, heres the newer version :

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch3.jpg

better?
bump cause i never got any crits on this, improved from the one i first posted

[Veηo]

thanks novella im just messin around i got a bunch of other shit draw up, i might take a few flix
anymore crits

[d_g]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7875/simplerm4.jpg

A quick simple sketch.

What should I do next?

Come on, someone spoon-feed me :P

[doomsayer]

i wud highly suggest u dont copy this, because it sucks, but u get the egeneral idea, start to tweak it out like this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/dretsedit.jpg

u can do alot IMO with that T and the S. i can tweak T&#39;s and S&#39;s alright but the other letters i suck at, i was just trying to give u a general idea of how u shud start to tweak it.

[d_g]

Cheers dude, MSPaint for the win :D

[SeKz]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4373/image005uu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

KASE

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6506/image008qb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SEKZ

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1791/image001im1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

YIKES

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/3120/image004ja0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SEKZ

These are my recent sketches

bump for crits

[SeKz]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9929/image015nd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5769/image013on1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my new name, SKARE

crits please

[d_g]

It&#39;s good, your &#39;S&#39; and &#39;E&#39; could do with a bit of fattening up I think.

Any tips/crits for my simple a little further up the page?

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by d_g@Sep 21 2006, 02:14 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7875/simplerm4.jpg

A quick simple sketch.

What should I do next?

Come on, someone spoon-feed me :P
id add some fat 3-d.

[Venom.]

Originally posted by Venom.@Sep 21 2006, 12:15 AM
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6443/drainpiece1xr3.jpg

Drew in art... Yeah yeah I know, lose the heart.

I want some constructive crits, I&#39;m trying to get better.
bump :]

[nemzone]

lose the heart, the lines comin out of the D and get some blank paper and ink it.

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7116/dsc01003pm8.jpg
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3072/dsc01018nu9.jpg
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/936/dsc01015my6.jpg
hardly got anythin on the bottom one last tym.....

[sky 5]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/8629/1191939aj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ive slipped into a shitty style this week . . . i hope that shit goes away cuz graf aint fun right now . . .

[nemzone]

i like it&#33; i love ur stlye man, how long u been writin for? u guna finish the page with color??

[sky 5]

almost 4 years now . . . but the last 9 months or so ive been going at it pretty hard . . .like today im skippin work to put in mad hours in the lab to try and figure out why im gettin lazy and just addin tabs everywhere instead of workin to get the letters to interact more . . nemz you got a good hold on your style man, i likie ...nah i aint gonna color it, my prismas are running dry so i wont color anything unless i like it . . .

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1099.jpg

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1100.jpg

[aces]

Sick shit Nicc and Sky. Lovin that throwie in your sig nicc.

[sky 5]

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/1026/1191941rt1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

paintin this piece of cardboard today . . just gonna freestyle and cover the thing with letters, figure i can fit 3 more pieces . . . tried to place some of the 3d over the letters and got a lil confused and the effect didnt come out how i imagined it . . . . thanks for the BERSk nicc, i like the top right part of the K . . . you flexed on that DRAIS, that faucet on the far left is a nice surprise . . . i like how your 3d is always thin, it helps with the style you got where the letters are bunched and interwined nicely together so theres little negative space to work a 3d inside of the piece/letters . . .

[tea dee sea]

thats nice sky

[_Pure]

Sky5 that&#39;s niiiice
NICCSACC i like it but you need a little more space in between some letters,
like the E its all covered up by the B

[Learninitup]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/becominglucid/sickpiece.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/becominglucid/sickpieceautocorrected.jpg
2nd one is with the color "auto corrected" in some ms program...
know i shouldnt be fucking with wildstyle yet but after 5 straight days of blocks and bubbles you gotta have some fun :D

it looks way way better in person :(

meant to say bzerk but after that i ran outta room on the page...

any crits?

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1101.jpg

[tea dee sea]

Learninitup your fucking 3d sucks ass same with the peice

[NICCSACC]

id stay with black and white for now learninitup and make your letters waay fatter if your gonna do wildstyle or whatever. guess if your name is "learninitup" i cant really blame you for that atrocity.(sic?) keep drawing guy.

[Learninitup]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Sep 21 2006, 03:22 PM
Learninitup your fucking 3d sucks ass same with the peice
not very constructive now is it?


but yeah i know its not too hot, i shouldnt even be doing this as ive only been into this shit for 5 or 6 days but meh. need a break every now and then

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Sep 21 2006, 03:22 PM
Learninitup your fucking 3d sucks ass same with the peice
Word... Cord, give a constructive crit or shut the fuck up kid. I&#39;m tired of seeing shit like this. This is toy forum, and you&#39;re posting here too, so don&#39;t talk like that to other people. <_<


Learnitup- Go to simples homie. ;)

[kaweJFK]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060919/12/0/3/0/030e91fe10f2a7cf5864c06c1ea89e6c200609190_full.jpg

heres a sketch....

[kaweJFK]

NICCSACC and sky5 thoese sketches are tight.

[d_g]

Originally posted by d_g@Sep 21 2006, 07:14 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7875/simplerm4.jpg

A quick simple sketch.

What should I do next?

Come on, someone spoon-feed me :P
Bizzump.

[SeKz]

Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 21 2006, 05:52 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9929/image015nd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5769/image013on1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my new name, SKARE

crits please
DREST, I would overlap those letters, add some sick 3d and a fill colour. I reckon itd be a nice block buster then.

Bump for comments.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by d_g+Sep 21 2006, 04:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Sep 21 2006, 04:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Sep 21 2006, 07:14 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7875/simplerm4.jpg

A quick simple sketch.

What should I do next?

Come on, someone spoon-feed me :P
Bizzump. [/b][/quote]
try it just like that but do each letter backwards. not the word, the letters...in the same order. just backwards.

[novella]

Originally posted by novella@Sep 21 2006, 12:07 AM
i changed up that sketch a bit, heres the newer version :

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch3.jpg

better?
bumppp



drest: good looking block buster, try to put those letters a little closer to eachother, add some 3D and color it all up

[SeKz]

Is there an echo in here? :blink:

[littlerocky]

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/8234/imgp0515xz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
first attempt using the top style any crits/comments

[novella]

mugs: i like the bottom one more. the lines on the top one just seem to be too sharp and harsh. not to say you should stop sketching peices like this. its just something to keep in mind for next time

that bottom one is pretty sick though, except for the top right of the S is kind of lumpy


people need to give more crits though, if everyone just posts this thread will just turn into lots of pictures and people bitching

[novella]

sekz: that stuff looks good, i like them both

[magashna]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/Untitled.jpg

been workin on this, just a rough copy, says GYKE

critz

[wrek10]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Sep 21 2006, 03:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Sep 21 2006, 03:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tea dee sea@Sep 21 2006, 03:22 PM
Learninitup your fucking 3d sucks ass same with the peice
Word... Cord, give a constructive crit or shut the fuck up kid. I&#39;m tired of seeing shit like this. This is toy forum, and you&#39;re posting here too, so don&#39;t talk like that to other people. <_<


Learnitup- Go to simples homie. ;) [/b][/quote]
shut up&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
u suck. fucka dunkey GORRAWWWWWWWWW
u suck suck sucky 10 dolla. me make holla 5 dolla&#33;
toys. DA NA DA NA NA DA NA NAW&#33; toys. we all got toys&#33; <<<me singing son.
Gone Chruch on u Shit heads
word to motha

[SeKz]

looks ok. E and G need a lot more structure.

[Hilo]

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4637/picture63ps9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits.

[Toy Story]

Originally posted by Hilo@Sep 21 2006, 05:45 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4637/picture63ps9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits.
That shit be dope.

Love in the E.


OTK NICCUH

[littlerocky]

idk smore? not feelin it keep it simpler, liek the idea of the style but it looks like u tried the style full out without keepin it simple first..keep sketchin though

[magashna]

Originally posted by magashna@Sep 21 2006, 05:42 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/Untitled.jpg

been workin on this, just a rough copy, says GYKE

critz
just want some more crits

[Learninitup]

Originally posted by wrek10@Sep 21 2006, 05:43 PM

shut up&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
u suck. fucka dunkey GORRAWWWWWWWWW
u suck suck sucky 10 dolla. me make holla 5 dolla&#33;
toys. DA NA DA NA NA DA NA NAW&#33; toys. we all got toys&#33; <<<me singing son.
Gone Chruch on u Shit heads
word to motha
hah. if anyones gonna rag on my shit do it like this. atleast i get a laugh out of it.