Tot Black Books

[ICER]

Originally posted by Veηo@Sep 24 2006, 03:17 PM
just drew this up
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b68/Abrokenvow/Picture049.jpg
crits please
just go simple, start off with block letter and work you way up! cuz that wannabe wild style is awful! keep sketching!

[NOMX]

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/1386/200609240001dn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
still workin with my lettas

[Fosale!]

i wouldnt spend time on bubbles and neat fills (first one) until you have the letter structure down pat.

[NOMX]

still fun to play with the bubbles though ^_^

[ghozt]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9168/scan0018rn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


^^^ crits? i need ALOT of work....

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by Fosale!@Sep 24 2006, 03:50 PM
i wouldnt spend time on bubbles and neat fills (first one) until you have the letter structure down pat.
bubbles can be allright somtimes depends on how you draw them...

[ICER]

Originally posted by ICER@Sep 24 2006, 03:12 PM
saber by me
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/sabe.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civi.jpg



Any critz?

Evex- Yeah im not felling that X but everything else is dope!
bump for critz?

Savvy- i dont think thats a throwie, i think is more of a block letter bomb

[ghozt]

im kinda having trouble understand all the graffiti terms...

[myl]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 24 2006, 03:20 PM
just the beginning of a new sketch...i think im just doin the SE and not the whole SEFT cause F's are getting to be a pain in the ass

and no, im not changin my name

ill probably do this on a rooftop when its all finished, i know the perfect spot for it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0148-1.jpg

crits?
eh?

[Bartic]

looks good i would rotate the s slightly clockwise, just slightly

i've been in quite the drawing slump for a couple days can't seem to get anything down and sturcture has been lacking
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/8563/suki9ce3.png

[FEN the HEN]

block letter bomb?.......thats what a throwie is A BOMB....

[myl]

kids these days...

[ICER]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Sep 24 2006, 04:54 PM
block letter bomb?.......thats what a throwie is A BOMB....
damn my bad :rolleyes:

[Slaze]

Originally posted by -MaCKiE-@Sep 23 2006, 12:59 PM
add a drop shadow..


n slaze ya shit is just ugly, you wont progress tryna do wilds
coming from you that does not mean much. i was kinda hoping to get something constructive... not an insult from a toy who can only attempt at throw up's.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/2453/000throwexgraff002hl0.jpg

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/2453/000throwexgraff002hl0.jpg

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8324/00000000te00fadegraffhb4.jpg

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9350/000000000000000000fadegraff001cv2.jpg

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7199/0000...0000tracyp9.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7199/0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000t racyp9.jpg)
...-MaCKiE-'s shit^^^^

[myl]

finished for now, but i think i might work on the E a little more

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0150-1.jpg

[Blix]

myl I like it the letters but bubbles need some work

[Bartic]

repost for color + eye
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/852/suki9nl2.png
comments... crits?

[uhhh]

the eys nice. except for the actual seeing pert of it. it loks like someone who knows how to draw did most of it. then a 5 year old came bye and finished it...

[311 Kicks Ass]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Sep 24 2006, 10:20 AM
if ur askin kids on the ionternet hu u have never met most probabky bull shit if u shud quit graff

u fuckin should

if u havnt got ne commitment then quit theres no point
It was obviously a fucking joke.

[Bartic]

Originally posted by uhhh@Sep 24 2006, 05:57 PM
the eys nice. except for the actual seeing pert of it. it loks like someone who knows how to draw did most of it. then a 5 year old came bye and finished it...
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/9277/suki9it6.png
Better? bit hard to fix cuz it was so dark... any comments on the actuall peice

[jando]

The eyeball looks like the neversoft software eyeball in the trailer before it gets the pike jammed through it... Exactly... Maybe you've been playing too much thps? LOL :lol:

[YarHarHar]

Bartic- that eye is alright..except that the iris and pupil are way to mall for that size of an eye get your porportions right. as for those letters the could use some structure improvement what doe sit say? suk?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1925.jpg
mm deli cinq

[Fosale!]

dope as usual props.

[si0n]

Some of my sketches

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1549/img0248fn4.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0248fn4.jpg)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2947/img0247jf9.th.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0247jf9.jpg)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4812/img0246an6.th.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0246an6.jpg)

[-GEKS-]

not bad, not bad

[Bartic]

looking good sion
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4678/suki10ui2.png
working on structure any ideas>? i no letters get progressively smaller

[Bastardo]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7732/picture017jf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9029/picturedz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1914/picture014nu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
enik by bank17
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5439/picture009of5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bank17,prof,etor

[myl]

that E on the etor looks like cope2s

[si0n]

you definatley bit some styles there.

[Bastardo]

ok who have i bitten?and im bank btw. im pretty sure ive bitten noone.
and etors e pfft its one of the most generic es used. copes throws sucks anyway.

[myl]

even so, but biting a graff legend?

[Bastardo]

its not biting..its one of the most common es its the simplest form of e.

[entri]

Just something i did quikly and the same one but color changed

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6946/pizzicturedw2.th.jpg (http://img178.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pizzicturedw2.jpg)
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1303/sikpo7.th.jpg (http://img61.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sikpo7.jpg)

[myl]

no, trust me its not the most common.

[Fosale!]

yeah, it is.

[TheNinji]

First Post, Just a simple Sketch


http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/9665/dsc01405qv3.jpg

Crits?

[TricksForKids]

entri... your handstyle needs some serious work but im actually feelin the pices, theyre simple and effective, keep it up and tone down the colours for a bit

and ninji the n's are...well..ok, i dunnop everythings just really generic and bubbly, gotta try swtiching some things up, changing eltter sizes etc

Peace

[entri]

word

[FEN the HEN]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture096.jpg

sorry for the shit pic...feedback would be appreciated

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 24 2006, 08:07 PM
no, trust me its not the most common.
:lol: you bit!!!!

come on.... everyone bites, whether you like to admit it or not.

sure my styles different than pretty much any style ive seen, but its still linked to regular letters.

Everyone starts somewhere, and unless you're a graff god, or just very artistic, your going to bite.

I mean how are you going to draw graffiti, if youve never seen it righT?

yeah everyone started somewhere, but now everyone has a picture in their mind of the "perfect graff" i know i do.

So unless someone really bit somebody, like that kid who copied a kasm piece...then just shutup. please.


Peace

[entri]

fen..its pretty gud ..just i wud loose the 3D, and the nibs on it....pretty gud though...keep sketchin

[aces]

Just wondering tricks...how did your style develop. Can you possibly post pics going in time as your style progresses to what it is today?

[FEN the HEN]

entri your the first guy to ever say something positive about my sketches :lol:

[Blix]

Fen it seems like you're gettin ahead of yourself take a couple steps back

[aces]

Yea fen your throwies are the shit and your handys are sick too but for pieceing just go to simples.

[FEN the HEN]

always with the simples, damnit! :lol:

P.S hows this for simples you leeches :lol: ....i did it in about 20 seconds

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture097.jpg

[Blix]

Im stuck at the same place I feel like I got simples down but I dont know how to expand on em without lookin like shit any tips??

[fost]

a couple new ones:

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/5291/91106gz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

disregard the blobs i was bored

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/4796/91806vp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits welcome

[FEN the HEN]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Sep 24 2006, 08:40 PM
always with the simples, damnit! :lol:

P.S hows this for simples you leeches :lol: ....i did it in about 20 seconds

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture097.jpg
bump for feedback

[Blix]

go put it up??

[YarHarHar]

thats more of a throw than a simple

[Mach]

any crits im just startin

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/469/graffiti003bh6.jpg

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/6179/graffiti007dq7.jpg

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3472/graffiti012ii5.jpg

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d176/zrisyourfriend/Graffiti013.jpg

[myl]

mach go back to block letters

[fost]

mach chill on the arrows homie

your last one is the best keep it simple for a while and then start tweaking and adding extentions

and any crits on mine on the top of the page?

[TricksForKids]

Tricks Through The Ages

Speckz : when i was myabe...13 :

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1909/speckzzz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"ms.skillz" for a girl...13 still

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8726/msskillzvj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"statick" when i was maybe...14

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3354/statickag0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"regs era" when i was 15

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3354/statickag0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4827/regsblackandwhitexu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6407/regsagaingc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


and now...my Regs, Smirk...and now...what i write...WHAM era

im 16 years old in case anyone wanted to know too.

lol
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9662/smirkrq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3492/whamoyx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Keep It Simple Stupid!

Peace

[TricksForKids]

dont know why stuff posted twice...oh well..sorry

[ghozt]

i still think ur awesome i wish i had ur talent...........

[Maker A Laker]

damn that make me wanna stick with graff thanx

peace

[Mach]

yo anymo crits on my shit up mo
any suggestions?

[SeKz]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Sep 24 2006, 10:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD &#064; Sep 24 2006, 10:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 24 2006, 05:21 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Sep 24 2006, 01:08 AM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1880/savageroo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yo any1 got crits on this?
Man i say go a bit simpler, you really havent got the structure down yet. I would have thought you were better than that, i saw u dissing a kid on the toy bombs peices thread that wasnt much morse than this. No offence but dont throw stones in a glass house.
im not that good on paper, i tried to get the fundamentals down, then i went to walls

the structure isnt all that bad tho...the only thing i wish i had done with it is made the handstyle thicker

but thats my style, i like that stretched out futuristic wild shit [/b][/quote]
futuristic style? I dont think you have the fundamentals down at all. Stay off the walls for now and go back to simpler structures, cuz no offence but its wack.






Tricks ive only got one crit for you and that is to start experimenting, one style is sick and i think youve got it down hardout, but things are starting to get repetitive, like that 3D effect, i would really like to see you experimenting with different structures and styles because i think you are well capable at this point in your progression.

[YarHarHar]

Originally posted by YarHarHar@Sep 24 2006, 06:27 PM
Bartic- that eye is alright..except that the iris and pupil are way to mall for that size of an eye get your porportions right. as for those letters the could use some structure improvement what doe sit say? suk?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1925.jpg
mm deli cinq
crit eye sis em?

[C3ZR ONE]

tricks- That post was awesome. Very inspirational. Props as always yo.

That&#39;s hot too MF.... ;)

[TricksForKids]

aint feelin the M, everything else is hot, not really feelin the nwk either, or well, just the k, love the D C and S, E is ok, M needs some work in my eyes

Peace

[ghozt]

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/321/scan0022ux9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

first time tryin out the 3d stuff crits? and my letters i need to work on tht too lol

[FEN the HEN]

Originally posted by YarHarHar+Sep 24 2006, 09:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (YarHarHar @ Sep 24 2006, 09:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Sep 24 2006, 06:27 PM
Bartic- that eye is alright..except that the iris and pupil are way to mall for that size of an eye get your porportions right. as for those letters the could use some structure improvement what doe sit say? suk?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1925.jpg
mm deli cinq
crit eye sis em? [/b][/quote]
thats nice, that for a battle?

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 24 2006, 09:06 PM
Tricks Through The Ages

Speckz : when i was myabe...13 :

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1909/speckzzz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"ms.skillz" for a girl...13 still

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8726/msskillzvj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"statick" when i was maybe...14

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3354/statickag0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"regs era" when i was 15

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3354/statickag0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4827/regsblackandwhitexu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6407/regsagaingc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


and now...my Regs, Smirk...and now...what i write...WHAM era

im 16 years old in case anyone wanted to know too.

lol
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9662/smirkrq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3492/whamoyx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Keep It Simple Stupid&#33;

Peace
bump for aces

[roflfest]

Originally posted by myl+Sep 24 2006, 04:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (myl @ Sep 24 2006, 04:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Sep 24 2006, 03:20 PM
just the beginning of a new sketch...i think im just doin the SE and not the whole SEFT cause F&#39;s are getting to be a pain in the ass

and no, im not changin my name

ill probably do this on a rooftop when its all finished, i know the perfect spot for it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0148-1.jpg

crits?
eh? [/b][/quote]
SE alreayd exists and is ALL OVER long island

[myl]

wow...brilliant...its called a 2 letter buddy a lot of people do em

[nerdx]

he does have a point. i think the most used two letter is SE.
just my opinion. but it does look nice.

[myl]

thanks nerdx...and yeah i know thats one of the more popular ones...but if its just me doin it in my area then i dont see why not

[novella]

i have the fades working a lot better now, this is 3 different colors (2 sharpies and a prisma)

any comments / crits? If i had to redraw it, I would move the A to the left for sure

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslaredfade.jpg

[nerdx]

kind of a cool computer-straight letter style.
im diggin it.

[myl]

the first thing that catches my eye is that the T is rather close to the E as opposed to the closeness of all the other letters

other than that, it makes a cool straight letter

[novella]

thanks guys, i know what you mean about the T

now i just need to throw some 3D and a force on it, i started tracing out 3D, but got bored with it. ill finish up later i guess

[Ill.Eagle]

Just working on my simple letters. Feedback would help not post such weak stuff. Lol

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f395/BigSnoopDawg/scan0007.jpg

Novella- I like your style and the addons but that S aint my favorite. But its still nice looking. Nice :D

[Z FUSE]

Originally posted by ghozt@Sep 24 2006, 09:47 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/321/scan0022ux9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

first time tryin out the 3d stuff crits? and my letters i need to work on tht too lol
ghozt- i think the letters make a pretty clean simple maybe.. but the O gets a lil thin at one part...U did a pretty good job on ur 3d.. just clean it up a bit.

[aces]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 24 2006, 10:06 PM
Tricks Through The Ages

Speckz : when i was myabe...13 :

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1909/speckzzz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"ms.skillz" for a girl...13 still

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8726/msskillzvj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"statick" when i was maybe...14

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3354/statickag0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"regs era" when i was 15

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3354/statickag0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4827/regsblackandwhitexu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6407/regsagaingc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


and now...my Regs, Smirk...and now...what i write...WHAM era

im 16 years old in case anyone wanted to know too.

lol
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9662/smirkrq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3492/whamoyx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Keep It Simple Stupid&#33;

Peace
Wow good shit tricks. So you&#39;ve been writing for 3 years?

[NICCSACC]

dude id seriously consider not using WHAM as a name.
its just a really gay name.

[Ill.Eagle]

One thing about using a name like WHAM: you better be damn good when you start paintin stuff man. There&#39;s nothing worse than a bad writer with a gay name. Not that there&#39;s anything wrong with that.

PS, Wham isn&#39;t particularly gay it&#39;s just a little goofy sounding like a comic book sound effect.

[NICCSACC]

its just that WHAM was a homo group in the 80&#39;s.

[some guy from NCI...]

http://www.80mania.com/Fotografie/wham3.jpg
http://www.bbc.co.uk/totp2/ugotthelook/images/wham.jpg
http://www.80mania.com/Fotografie/wham2.jpg
http://files.myopera.com/drlaunch/albums/37656/Owl-buttsecks.jpg

[whoarethereal evil]

:lol: ahahahahaha

[Apoc]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/goodaone1.jpg

[nerdx]

kind of a gross word i think.

[myl]

theres already a dude that writes acne with lions and atak
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v686/PurpleNerple/53/AcneLionsTruck.jpg

[fume]

sketch i did at school
http://usera.imagecave.com/floris09/SSL20092-copy.jpg

crits?

[nerdx]

nice straight letters, just not really feeling the Y too much.

[fume]

yeah, i don&#39;t really know how i can draw a Y with style.. never drawed an Y before

[fost]

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9186/91106dk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

disregard the blobs i was bored

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/1998/91806if0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump

[aces]

Nicc, in my opinion the name has somewhat little to do with the writing itself because it&#39;s all about opinion. You could be a legend and be writing a name that you thought was cool but there will always be at least one person that thinks the name is gay. Most people don&#39;t think that a legends name is gay just because they do amazing things with it. I don&#39;t really know what I&#39;m talking about but whatever.

[snif]

some sketch in class. im still toy, i need some crit. this is prob gona be my throwie, or bomb not sure. but without the drips and bubbles and shit.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/sbskater954/snif-1.jpg

[NICCSACC]

i was just saying... wham looks gay.

[Sex707]

My first post up in this bitch and i guess ill speak some crits nam&#39;sayin

Snif no beef man but those letters are kinda whack define the S better cus right now it makes me think of a worm haha and the I try a captial I maybe but yeah thats all i gotta say to that o and the char makes me laugh but shit im hella high

[emokid]

fume, im liking the simpleness, the y&#39;s a bit weird looking though
snif, i agree with Sex, not to be nasty, but make your s more s like, but keep the thing on top of the i, whatever it is it looks pretty cool, like a guy with his mouth wide open
sorry to criticise other peoples work when i suck major balls, but its just my opinion.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5987/dscn5815sj0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what are yours on this?

[nerdx]

not my favorite style but its alright. the first letter/number needs work either a 8 or P or S.
then the R or B at the end also needs some work. but keep it up.

[fost]

any opinions of mine on the last page?

[shalf]

cud sum1 tell me how i cud improve this i no it suks terriblyhttp://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f109/ajaxa/jenohelp.jpg

thanks

BTW sum of the stuff on here is fukin sik

[snif]

fost. i think ur shit is raw.

and sex. yeah i know the S sucks. i changed my name cuz my old one was to close to my birth name. w.e im just sketching for now. cuz right down the street from me is all the frieght trucks and shit, and there begging to be marked up. oh yeah, hows my charac? i use him on my stickers mostly.

and nerd, thanks for the crit, i need it. well, back to the paper for me

peaceZzZz



ps. has snif been used before? , i dont wanna go out bombing and shit and find out im using somone elses name.

[snif]

woops double post.

[NICCSACC]

snif is pretty close to snuf.

[shalf]

niccsacc that throw in ur sik is pretty sik i reely like it

[Sex707]

Cope snuff does your body good if your a 50 year old redneck who likes to drive his truck from la to montana with no tail lights

[kaweJFK]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060924/13/1/5/c/15cebed37943108bd622e5077cf120f0200609240_full.jpg

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060919/12/0/3/0/030e91fe10f2a7cf5864c06c1ea89e6c200609190_full.jpg

Comments please

[SKA11289]

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9012/1000094na5.th.jpg (http://img73.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000094na5.jpg)

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/2171/1000096lz2.th.jpg (http://img236.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000096lz2.jpg)

some throwies i came up wit, I know there kinda plain but i like the simple look.......any ideas on how to make a piece still be simple yet badass at the same time

crits on thoose throwies

[beastie_1989]

this is my latest stuff

simple piece & tag
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/528/blackbook21re1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

throw up
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/7703/blackbook19gr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what do u think

[SMOG_514]

amen... lately ive seen a couple of your tags and really... i think you should work on it before tagging with a can the villa maria metro... i mean sketch before getting up man... ant that aint no piece its a burner, the letter structure is really good now add some stuff on it and mix em up a little bit aight? peace

[Blix]

On the first one the A and the M dont go with the E and the n the last 2 letters are smaller and kinda of just a diff style

[Blix]

what the diff between a piece and a burner I thought they was kinda the same thing??

[-GEKS-]

as far as i kno, burners are only a little complex, idk, maybe 6 or 7 colors. pieces are suuper colorful.pieces=more colorful and complex

[myl]

wow

a burner is a type of style (like wildstyle, blockbuster, straight letter, burner, etc)...a piece is just a piece in general (such things that it usually has are 3d, shadows, backgrounds, characs) , doesnt matter what style it is. unless of course its a throw then its a throw

[MainEvent]

BURNER- Originally a well-done wildstyle window-down whole car, a burner is a very good piece. Obviously, the reference to a window-down car is not applicable for pieces that are not on trains. A burner is any piece that has good bright colors, good style (often in wildstyle) and seems to "burn" off of the wall.

PIECE- A graffiti painting, short for masterpiece. It&#39;s generally agreed that a painting must have at least three colors to be considered a piece.

[nerdx]

the term burner, meaning it burns (beats) everything else on the wall.
so it would obviously be complex.


doin what i do. what do you think.
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5576/img2543vy9.jpg

[MainEvent]

Example of a Burner:
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/606/thot2sy9.jpg

Example of a Piece:
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7997/jurne3ph3.jpg

[nerdx]

wouldnt really call the bottom a peice, but i suppose it is.
more of a simple or straightletter in my book.

[jmammo]

I just started writing about 1 week ago here are some of the first things i did

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/nate_jack/117_1708.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/nate_jack/117_1706.jpg

Any crits comments?

Sorry for the size and shitty second pic

[aces]

Isn&#39;t this the blackbook thread???

[SKA11289]

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/1999/1000096uq1.th.jpg (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000096uq1.jpg)

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/8702/1000094go0.th.jpg (http://img70.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000094go0.jpg)

some throwies i came up wit, I know there kinda plain but i like the simple look.......

crits on thoose throwies

[myl]

arc do nice and easy straight letters

like this

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7875/simplerm4.jpg

sorry for usin this if it wasnt ok drest but its a good example

edit: and ska dont post shit up unless you crit the person above you, its like a buddy system. you help them they help you

[jmammo]

Ska not that my input matters but i aint really felling the second one but like i said i am a major toy

and thanks myl

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by fume@Sep 25 2006, 12:15 PM
sketch i did at school
http://usera.imagecave.com/floris09/SSL20092-copy.jpg

crits?
fuck u ive been writing easy for like 1 year change ur name, though i give u props
cuz i like ur letters :lol:

[NOMX]

i guarentee that more than 150 writers have been writing easy longer than you, soooooooooooooooooooooooo yea

[beastie_1989]

thanks for the input, i noticed that my e and n wer different and im gonna work on that and im gonna change my tag too cuz it isent all that great, id like to know what u think of my throw up???

[Blix]

Throw up needs work ....just keep perfectin it

[beastie_1989]

i know i have to change my e and n, but what do u think about my m, i rather like it :D.....but i could be very wrong. My a also needs work

[jmammo]

beastie i like your throw alot but i have one crit. I dont really like the bump at the end of the N.
could someone else tell me what they think about my toy ass shit

[beastie_1989]

i my self am not such a big fan its just i dont know what to do at then end....lol

[TricksForKids]

Just checkin in to say wuttup

and Sky 5, MF, Ase, and Anzio...if you guys are down id really like to see

our 5 pieces collabed with some good photo shopping

We should all do the same colour scheme too, i think that shit would look fresh

If you&#39;re down holla.

Peace

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by ghozt@Sep 24 2006, 09:47 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/321/scan0022ux9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

first time tryin out the 3d stuff crits? and my letters i need to work on tht too lol
if thats ur first time thats real cool, ur lettes are nice, im not saying they dont need work but so far so good so keep sketching and....ya

[d_g]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 26 2006, 09:24 AM
arc do nice and easy straight letters

like this

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7875/simplerm4.jpg

sorry for usin this if it wasnt ok drest but its a good example

edit: and ska dont post shit up unless you crit the person above you, its like a buddy system. you help them they help you
Haha all good brotha.

[Bastardo]

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6227/picture019xd9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

:wub:

[aces]

I like the top one better but still sick shit anyways.

[FEN the HEN]

those would look sick painted

[TricksForKids]

Haha i posted a throwup here...and i realized that i did exactly what i tell you guys not to do...take no time on my shit...so im deleting it and its back to the drawind board

[aces]

Yea you should paint that shit.

[FEN the HEN]

Tricks im ot feeling that :o :huh: :mellow: .....ive never said that.....

your 3d is off and it looks sloppy, clean up your letters, im sorry<3

P.S definatley has potential

[uhhh]

idea for the toy battle:http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-043S.jpg

random sketch:http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-044S.jpg

crits . . .please

[Bastardo]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 25 2006, 07:52 PM
yeah ahahah my first attempt at a throw...finally something you guys can make fun of me for, this shits awful, i DESPERATELY need some crits

my new names BAWK by the way

WHAMS gay band..i just couldnt have that. lol.

Peace
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2521/bawkzl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the W is nice the b spoils it.

keep that w just change the b..

[TricksForKids]

back to the drawing board

"bawk"

yeah i know the k&#39;s kinda fucked..

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6796/bwakbluethrowkh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by uhhh@Sep 25 2006, 07:57 PM
idea for the toy battle:http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-043S.jpg

random sketch:http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-044S.jpg

crits . . .please
bottom one...fucking dope.

[ShIfTeD]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4921/throwiejx0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just a new throw ive been workin on

[prank]

humm dude lol
i dunno lol im not rly diggin it and especially the k

[PoetDB]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/TranqBw.jpg
I know I messed up the shadow of the top of the "T", But anything yous can help me out with on this one? Or back to the drawing board?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/TranqHeron.jpg
The Piece itself is sweatin, Same goes for this one about the help, just lookin to help my pieces...

[uhhh]

shifted. that shit is siiick. i mean, when i look closer i notice some flaws. but just fiddle with it for a litle while. that style could be veryyyy nice

[OliveOil]

im still working on simples for my new name so bear with me, ill fuck around with styles later...

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/31.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/30.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/28.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/25.jpg
some reposts. careface.

[uhhh]

iwas gonna say thta looked like gerk throws...

[PoetDB]

Sick throwies, but I&#39;m not really diggin on the "E" in the last throwie. Could probably pull it off better lower case?

[Fosale!]

Olive, or Gerk w.e
the first piece, i love i would love to see it painted
and on the toss im totally diggin&#39; that E
keep it up.

[YarHarHar]

simples an throws

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1927.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1926.jpg

[SMOG_514]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Sep 25 2006, 07:17 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6227/picture019xd9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you are a clown biting scan&#39;s style and BANK&#39;S name and WASTER 12 &#39;S 12
stop biting i know yusa toy but dont bite like that

[bouncingsoul]

Damn, seems like everyone&#39;s changing their name nowadays huh?

Olive, that last one would definitely look better with a nice lowercase E, with the lowercase I.

Yar, Jar(s), MF, that handie needs some serious work, but I&#39;m diggin the throws except for that S inside the R. Nice simples too

[Fosale!]

KNOWN TO THE PEOPLE ON THE FORUMS AS FLCNARUTO218
RIP MY NUKKAH FUND aka JUNK aka FETUS. =[[[
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher275.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher017.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher015.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/junkkkk.jpg
You will be missed.

[YarHarHar]

its a 5 not an s and whats wrong wiht handi i suck at them but whats wrong wiht that one?

[Fosale!]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010017.jpg
more funddd...=[
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010013.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010265.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

Oh shit, my bad. I thought it was an S... I like people with good handstyles. There can be a dope piece but if there&#39;s a bad handstyle on the page, it ruins it for me

[ARMAwonR]

new blackbook ... and some fresh new markers

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid215/p6cc1801384794ed3f6157e46f9c1e965/eccd0002.jpg

[novella]

sketch i did in school today, crits? i took off the arrow and the bar in the s before i traced it into my blackbook and colored it. i tried something new for the fill and im not too stoked on how it turned out, so i wont bother posting the colored version as of right now

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslasketch4.jpg

[Fosale!]

T looks like a P

[myl]

yeah fix that T and itll look real nice

[novella]

it was fixed before i even posted this, i just took the flick beforehand

[sky 5]

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6632/1191951gs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[myl]

very impressive as always

[Que 8]

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7506/que8doneis8.jpg

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 25 2006, 10:23 PM
KNOWN TO THE PEOPLE ON THE FORUMS AS FLCNARUTO218
RIP MY NUKKAH FUND aka JUNK aka FETUS. =[[[
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher275.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher017.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher015.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/junkkkk.jpg
You will be missed.
bump for bombing science friend that died at 15.

[myl]

wow...sorry to hear that dude

rip

[NOMX]

sorry to hear about that, kid had a whole life ahead of him. rip

tesla i would lose the bumps on the bottom of ur e and l. it doesnt really match the other letters

[FEN the HEN]

fuck man, its such a shame when someone so young dies, a freind of mine died just recently, fuck i hate thinking about it

[flclnaruto1213]

im not dead?

[FEN the HEN]

long time no post^

[cHRoniC]

wow that was weird....

[novella]

ummmm

what?

[flclnaruto1213]

quit graff...thats what he meant.

[novella]

well that was confusing

hahaha

[AoAssis]

You dont quit graff, graff quits you.

[OliveOil]

Originally posted by OliveOil@Sep 25 2006, 08:46 PM
im still working on simples for my new name so bear with me, ill fuck around with styles later...

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/31.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/30.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/28.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/25.jpg
some reposts. careface.
fuck...

[shalf]

cud sum1 tell me how i cud improve this i no it suks terriblyhttp://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f109/ajaxa/jenohelp.jpg

thanks

BTW sum of the stuff on here is fukin sik
olive that last throw is pretty gud

[d_g]

I like your style Olive.

[aces]

Yea the top one is the best IMO.

[levans]

olive ur style looks a hell of alot like beefgerky`s like ur throws and stuff and even the way u c do ur fill....im likin it though

[TricksForKids]

lol...gee i wonder why his shit looks like beef gerky...i know hes A BITER&#33; KILL HIM&#33;

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 25 2006, 08:15 PM
back to the drawing board

"bawk"

yeah i know the k&#39;s kinda fucked..

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6796/bwakbluethrowkh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump for crits...my throws need help...so help me :(

[levans]

hahah tricks u think ur k is fucked u should c mine its like a little blob next to half decent letters...but ur throw flows decently i like the a but im not feeling the w too much...but still its better than i can do so in my book its good...you clearly have ur own way of doin ur letters and they flow with eachother so yeh thats my 2 cents

[levans]

if i could be bothered i would post up my throw and ask for crits cuz it needs alot of work....

[jmammo]

Originally posted by jmammo@Sep 25 2006, 04:19 PM
I just started writing about 1 week ago here are some of the first things i did

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/nate_jack/117_1708.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/nate_jack/117_1706.jpg

Any crits comments?

Sorry for the size and shitty second pic
bump for crits

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Sep 25 2006, 11:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Sep 25 2006, 11:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Sep 25 2006, 10:23 PM
KNOWN TO THE PEOPLE ON THE FORUMS AS FLCNARUTO218
RIP MY NUKKAH FUND aka JUNK aka FETUS. =[[[
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher275.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher017.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketcher015.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/junkkkk.jpg
You will be missed.
bump for bombing science friend that died at 15. [/b][/quote]
What the fuck is this? Flacnaruto isn&#39;t dead, and don&#39;t play dumb ass games like that on here. Death is serious. It&#39;s not a drama to make up. <_<
Fronting that shit takes respect away from all the real writers that have left us, Like Skate One, Nace, Ayer... Pay your respects to them. You&#39;ll get your turn eventually....

[S8nt]

havent posted in about 4 months caz i sucked butt now i think i suck only a sinlge cheek comments on my improvement?.....oh yea changed my name from saint to sain the T threw me off 2 much

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/saint-1.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/scaryface.jpg
^from a book not a trace tho

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/sain4.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/sain3.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/sain.jpg
^ my twist on a simliar piece

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/sain2.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b291/scarecrow2008/saint7.jpg
^just a reminder of how much i blew

[sky 5]

Originally posted by sky 5@Sep 25 2006, 11:28 PM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6632/1191951gs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeah im bumpin my own shit . . .internet ups yo&#33;

i was about to start an rip FUND piece after reading that cuz i remember seeing some of those sketches, luckily my boy came over and squated the whole night so i couldnt get around too it . . .

thinking about skipping work again . . .i really dont wanna go but its all about gettin that cash money . .

[Sex707]

Heres a few throws just cus nam&#39;sayin yeah they might suck but the funny part is i dont give a fuck

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l91/DelRock707/DSC00469.jpg

and another one i dont really like but o well ill post it
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l91/DelRock707/DSC00473.jpg

and a simple type throw i was thinking about but i got to high and it started slanting to the side
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l91/DelRock707/DSC00472.jpg
Crits welcome

[some guy from NCI...]

That name&#39;s a bit too similair to dr.sex dont ya think?

[Sex707]

A little bit but i dont give a fuck so what if its close it just meens im close to his name not takeing his name

[myl]

first off dont write sex, there already is a dude who writes sex and is pretty well established...

http://www.graffiti.org/boston/sex2_boston.jpg

and the 3d is off on all of em

dont say you dont care because we all know you do, otherwise you wouldnt have posted em up

[Sex707]

First cali and boston are so far apart i could careless now that we have gotten that over with i really dont care the 3d&#39;s off and well thanks for letting me know thats about it and as for changeing my name im good off thatbecause ever one in the world uses the same name as some one elese come on now if i were to pick a new one all that would meen is that im useing another persons name again

[myl]

not really...be creative

whats up with toys wanting to write sex or dope? i dont get that shit

[some guy from NCI...]

Originally posted by Sex707@Sep 26 2006, 10:58 AM
A little bit but i dont give a fuck so what if its close it just meens im close to his name not takeing his name
Oh that&#39;s ok then... Why dont I just go and write coper2 or bankzy? I mean it&#39;s not like I&#39;m taking his name, but to be true I don&#39;t give a fuck.

[dutch-sketch]

Originally posted by "C3ZR ONE
Fronting that shit takes respect away from all the real writers that have left us, Like Skate One, Nace, Ayer... Pay your respects to them. You&#39;ll get your turn eventually....
How come they died?

[Sex707]

Its really a funny story i want to write sex because well i think it would be funny to see sex all over my city simple as that ya know and ive had 3 other names but had to ditch those thanks to da 5.O but shit i guess i need to get the 3d right but thats it i dont need help on letter structure or shit cus i figure if ima right sexs may as well have it look good when that shits on walls

now let me ask you what do you write? cus im bet some one out there writes the same thing and its hard to be creative in an art from built off of being creative because sooner or later it just becomes a norm and nothing is creative anymore

Really now whats a name aslong as you dont bite style theres a cat in my town who writes El Barto o shit hes useing a simpson name its famous holyshit get real now names mean nothing its all about syle you could write poop for all i care and if your biteing a style then it aint gona be good but if its your style if its fresh and shit who cares namsayin

[myl]

seft one

checked google, checked 12oz, checked here, checked flick galleries, didnt find anyone with that name

[Sex707]

Well that sucks but theres a cat in my town who writes Seft aint that shitty luck for you ill go out and get pics today or tomarrow

[myl]

well that sucks

but hey at least i aint gettin my name from a well known dude

im off to class

later

[some guy from NCI...]

Originally posted by Sex707@Sep 26 2006, 11:11 AM
Its really a funny story i want to write sex because well i think it would be funny to see sex all over my city simple as that ya know and ive had 3 other names but had to ditch those thanks to da 5.O but shit i guess i need to get the 3d right but thats it i dont need help on letter structure or shit cus i figure if ima right sexs may as well have it look good when that shits on walls

now let me ask you what do you write? cus im bet some one out there writes the same thing and its hard to be creative in an art from built off of being creative because sooner or later it just becomes a norm and nothing is creative anymore

Really now whats a name aslong as you dont bite style theres a cat in my town who writes El Barto o shit hes useing a simpson name its famous holyshit get real now names mean nothing its all about syle you could write poop for all i care and if your biteing a style then it aint gona be good but if its your style if its fresh and shit who cares namsayin
I write echo91, of course there&#39;s other people who write echo... but the difference is, they arn&#39;t freakin legends. You do need help on letter structure and shit because that stuff&#39;s wack. And if you cant see that then you need help with other shit. The name is pretty important, that name&#39;s gonna represent you. You say that only the style matters, are you tellin me that it&#39;d be fine if people went around writing cantwo in some toy ass way?

[kaweJFK]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060926/10/9/3/a/93a0b7ce252f27364ef66e00c36771dd200609261_full.jpg

comments on my thowy please

[*~ANZIO~*]

that should have been your digital entry there champ.

[kaweJFK]

haha, yeah it is, cheers&#33;&#33; :lol:

[aces]

I don&#39;t know much about throwies kawe but to me that looks pretty sick.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4062/picture024zn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits on mine...Yeah I know its on a dollar...

[shalf]

yeh thats awesome man keep it up

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f109/ajaxa/jenohelp.jpg
crits on ma throwie please

[kaweJFK]

Yeah, aces i love that "s" i think the "a" is pritty tight as well

And shalf thats pritty cool, i reaken try to make the "j" and the "n" a bit rounder, i like the "&#33;" on it though&#33;

[Fluffy Bunnies]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/MIHO.jpg
Miho
This is me trying out a different style... I just made it up as i went.
it&#39;s just the outline.
Critz?

[shalf]

yeh i bin thinkin that thanks man

[Ume]

something fast i did in computer class based off a drawing i did in art 2 days ago...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/aloneinthedark.jpg
not so great...:(

[ESKI]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c336/strikerx4/Picture001-1.jpg


Government is boring...


Critz?

[Bartic]

Ume i like the idea behind it, the thumb is quite a bit out of proportion but its all good,

I&#39;ve been exparimenting with a few styles latley...
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/1171/suki11go8.png
U is a bit too small and a very large gap... how should i fill this gap in?
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/1816/suki12zb7.png
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/6202/suki13th9.png

[aces]

Originally posted by Ume@Sep 26 2006, 03:29 PM
something fast i did in computer class based off a drawing i did in art 2 days ago...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/aloneinthedark.jpg
not so great...:(
Still pretty sick though. The letters could be a little less hidden IMO they look like they could be a brighter color that shows up more with the background. By the way what program did you use? Paint? If so that&#39;s even more impressive.

[Learninitup]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 26 2006, 11:05 AM
not really...be creative

whats up with toys wanting to write sex or dope? i dont get that shit
yo i tried my creativeness came up with bzerk which is just too hard for me to write atm.
Unless dope lives in boston or a suburb of houston dont worry about it.

[minesweep]

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3071/dscn0261jw6.jpg

crits?

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Sep 26 2006, 08:26 AM

What the fuck is this? Flacnaruto isn&#39;t dead, and don&#39;t play dumb ass games like that on here. Death is serious. It&#39;s not a drama to make up. <_<
Fronting that shit takes respect away from all the real writers that have left us, Like Skate One, Nace, Ayer... Pay your respects to them. You&#39;ll get your turn eventually....
Someone told me he did...

[Learninitup]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/becominglucid/graf027.jpg

ignore that odd ass r and huge E. twas my buddy that i sit by


but any comments on the handstyle? i cant decide to end it with a capital E or lowercase one

[NICCSACC]

ey yo... change that name ese vato.
dope isnt just a plain jane name it also looks wretched when cats write it.
it has no flair and flair is what you need to be searching for, and i mean style.
dope is the gayest shit ive heard in ages hahahaha.
you should just throw 4 letters together and run with it. take a fuckin risk, hobgoblin lookin mufucka.

[tack]

Originally posted by Learninitup@Sep 26 2006, 03:40 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/becominglucid/graf027.jpg

ignore that odd ass r and huge E. twas my buddy that i sit by


but any comments on the handstyle? i cant decide to end it with a capital E or lowercase one
that certainly isnt dope :rolleyes:

[Learninitup]

:D was expecting a reply like that :)

and niccsacc aight. im trying to think of something original as i type. just drawin blanks

man i just want a cool name :(

*edit* im thinking about just chilling with dope for awhile. i think you&#39;ll be able to live with it. its not the wackest name ever so dont bitch about it too much. ill prolly get alot of shit on here for using it but ohwell

[Bartic]

Originally posted by Bartic@Sep 26 2006, 02:42 PM
Ume i like the idea behind it, the thumb is quite a bit out of proportion but its all good,

I&#39;ve been exparimenting with a few styles latley...
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/1171/suki11go8.png
U is a bit too small and a very large gap... how should i fill this gap in?
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/1816/suki12zb7.png
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/6202/suki13th9.png
got skipped over new page.. comments?>

[aces]

Originally posted by aces@Sep 26 2006, 02:27 PM
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4062/picture024zn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits on mine...Yeah I know its on a dollar...
Any crits or opinions?

[minesweep]

to bartic :your letter structure is weak

[tack]

Originally posted by Learninitup@Sep 26 2006, 03:53 PM
:D was expecting a reply like that :)
the colours are nice and vivid though just keep skecthing and
you&#39;ll get better

[Bartic]

Originally posted by minesweep@Sep 26 2006, 03:56 PM
to bartic :your letter structure is weak
any advice?

[Learninitup]

Originally posted by tack+Sep 26 2006, 03:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tack @ Sep 26 2006, 03:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Learninitup@Sep 26 2006, 03:53 PM
:D was expecting a reply like that :)
the colours are nice and vivid though just keep skecthing and
you&#39;ll get better [/b][/quote]
lol. i will tell my paint markers they look nice and vivid.

[minesweep]

Originally posted by Bartic+Sep 26 2006, 03:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bartic @ Sep 26 2006, 03:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-minesweep@Sep 26 2006, 03:56 PM
to bartic :your letter structure is weak
any advice? [/b][/quote]
tweak your letters so they are abit easier to read, i cant tell if it&#39;s suka or sukl

[eTAW!]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 26 2006, 10:59 AM
first off dont write sex, there already is a dude who writes sex and is pretty well established...

http://www.graffiti.org/boston/sex2_boston.jpg

and the 3d is off on all of em

dont say you dont care because we all know you do, otherwise you wouldnt have posted em up
yo shit for brains

it doesnt matter. if you dont live in the same city then fuck it.
its a toy forum, obviously the shits not up to your king standards.

[MrNice]

http://file018.bebo.com/9/large/2006/09/26/18/16336104a2113681942b403808920l.jpg

[emokid]

learnitup, the letters arent so good but they&#39;ll improve, really like the red on blue contrast
aces, i quite like it, its different and swirly
i like your pink 3D MrNice, although its a bit off at the end

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5200/dscn5817zd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

should i even bother putting colour in this at all?

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Sep 26 2006, 01:59 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/MIHO.jpg
Miho
This is me trying out a different style... I just made it up as i went.
it&#39;s just the outline.
Critz?
Bumpzorz

[nerdx]

you need structure not crap.
sorry but the main ingredient in a peice is letters.

[kaweJFK]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060926/10/9/3/a/93a0b7ce252f27364ef66e00c36771dd200609261_full.jpg

more comments please,

[minesweep]

what&#39;s it say hamp? whatever it looks hot

[nerdx]

close kawe

[why_did_i_get_banned?]

That JFK crew always rock dope throwies.

[minesweep]

oh i thought it was like a battle word or somethin, anyways the e looks a little bit like a p

[Hilo]

new name .... thore did it in class crits

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/8326/picture70lu2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[kaweJFK]

yeah i kinda thought that when i was finnished, haha, thanks for the comments peeps&#33;

[minesweep]

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2455/dscn0264di4.jpg
crits says delv

[kaweJFK]

looks neat, nice "d", (and "d&#39;s" are hard&#33;&#33;&#33;)

[MrNice]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b238/teespoon2k/opekblurr.jpg
fucking pens ran out.

[minesweep]

thanks kawe

and mrnice dont worry about coloring right now work on some simple letters for now

[nerdx]

minesweep, throw looks good. i would just maby change up the hole in the e, maby to a small dot or a smaller line.

[minesweep]

alright will do

[aces]

Originally posted by aces+Sep 26 2006, 04:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Sep 26 2006, 04:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 26 2006, 02:27 PM
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4062/picture024zn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits on mine...Yeah I know its on a dollar...
Any crits or opinions? [/b][/quote]
Still nothin?

[NICCSACC]

i woulda used the whole face of the bill. other than that, the white highlighting is pretty good.

[aces]

So it&#39;s not bad?

[MrNice]

Originally posted by MrNice@Sep 26 2006, 04:54 PM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b238/teespoon2k/opekblurr.jpg
fucking pens ran out.
bump

[minesweep]

to aces :whoa if you flip it upside down it almost says the same thing, but anyways keep working on it maybe do somethin with the a

[aces]

Yea I know I realized that a little while ago when I was coming up with the idea. I&#39;ll just keep makin it look better.