Blackbooks

[prank]

Originally posted by eMJayBee@Oct 4 2006, 11:10 PM
Bigger picture. Critz?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture119-1.jpg
u should go to the big boys for crits they would tell u how to make it look better

[prank]

Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 5 2006, 01:30 AM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1675/img127rx5.jpg
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/4026/img127mob7.jpg

in the cracks on the 1st 1 are shit but i never do em so ....
go fr8 hunting

[tare]

Originally posted by YarHarHar+Oct 4 2006, 08:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (YarHarHar @ Oct 4 2006, 08:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Oct 4 2006, 12:22 AM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_1947.jpg

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_1948.jpg

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_1949.jpg
dont look at character ..rundown versoin of old one i used to draw.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_1950.jpg
... [/b][/quote]
best shit this threads seen in a while

[aces]

Best throwies by far except maybe bank. You painted that shit yet MF?

[phish]

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/phisharrow.jpg

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/phi.jpg

crits?

[757]

WHAT MARKERS DO YOU USE?

[aces]

There should be part of the H in the hole of the P on the second but good. On the first make the arrows bigger.

Looks like sharpie for the markers to me but I could be wrong.

[prank]

Originally posted by prank@Oct 5 2006, 04:19 PM
heres just a sticker but i was wondering if it be coool if id paint that??
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6039/image82gv1.jpg
bump for critz

[alive]

id still work on it for a little while. u need to work on the consistancy, like the top of A and the top left of the N are smaller or bigger then the rest of the letters. i wouldnt worry so much abt coloring right now either, u need to focus on the letters, not the fancy shit. but then again, if u got a chill spot, its good to practice, just not where everyone is gonna have to see it it. u know?


so anyway, here some pen freestyles, madddd quick, with marker outlines. first two say CEAR, looked better b4 i added 3d and outline, too messy now. and the other says RICHARD, did it for a friend who asked fast.

(yellow bled through from other sketch)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02749.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02748.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02747.jpg


peace
PS. ADVANCED MEMBER FUCK YEAH&#33;

[nerdx]

they look pretty good. but iwould say use pencil so you can erase thoes sketchy lines.

[ToPHAT]

Originally posted by ToPHAT+Oct 3 2006, 05:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ToPHAT @ Oct 3 2006, 05:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ToPHAT@Oct 3 2006, 05:48 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/6640/cimg0414bh1.jpg
new bomb gimie some feedbak kthx
bump bitches [/b][/quote]
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/5944/img0576yh4.th.jpg (http://img242.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0576yh4.jpg)
painted it w stox

[Fosale!]

painting with stock caps makes no difference.
its all in the skill.

[phish]

alive, i like i, however i think you sould invest in a pencil

tophat, don&#39;t paint, you need to get better on paper, as for the sketch, don&#39;t connect your letters

[aces]

Fosale caps make a lot of difference. I tried painting with stocks and it came out like shit but using a pink cap and a german outline it works so well. The type of paint makes a difference too because Rusto and Krylon cover much better and quicker than cheap 99 cent cans. It&#39;s more opaque and it covers faster with good caps. They also tend to drip less.

[Z FUSE]

toPHAt y&#39;d you paint that??doesn&#39;t look good, in the sketch either

[317773]

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs12/i/2006/278/a/f/_new_name___DET_Pen_Sketch_by_RunitOne.jpg

sorry about the pic sumthins up wit my camera

[Fosale!]

ppl. can rock hot pieces and throwies with stocks...
it just takes talent.
but different caps make certain aspects easier.

[Monster Island]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2079/img2121sp3.jpg

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7538/img2122bz5.jpg

http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/3746/img2123af7.jpg

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/5563/img2124yf6.jpg

any tips?

[nerdx]

im diggin your style doode.

[NICCSACC]

some stuff i had on my harddrive new and old eh whatever.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1160.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1043.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1113.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/venom2.jpg

[nerdx]

diggin that first one ven.

[phish]

the one that says team smoke is awesome

[aces]

I like them all but the second one. The last one the V seems to overlap the E too much but other than that its some good shit.

[alive]

haha miler high life was the first 40 i drank. its alll dopeeeeeee. [edit - thinking of wrong person, got a team now neway]

maybe u can give me some crits on my shit on the last page? thanks peace.

[phish]

i like it, although it would look a hell over a lot better if you didn&#39;t sketch in pen

do you paint?

[Monster Island]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2867/img2125ka3.jpg
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/7432/img2126ac1.jpg
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4113/img2127sh2.jpg

as much as i find it bullshit when people post pics and say "uhh these are old, im alot better now", these are actually older pics....except for the yellow and blue one. i think some of my old shit is better then what i do now, anyone ever feel that way about their own work?

"whatever you do, take care of your shoes"

[NICCSACC]

yeah i know my old shit is a ton better than it is now im just getting back into this really. i stopped for a few years actually when i had my kids etc etc... you know the deal.

[aces]

Just wondering about a color scheme...Yellow with red accents in the fill and a light green 3-D?

Nicc do you have anything from before you stopped?

[NICCSACC]

yeah i have a gang of my old stuff from high school somewhere around here. a portfolios worth... as soon as i find that stuff ill post it up here. well im going to go burn some triz and watch UFC. holla

[aces]

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/821/picture029cw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
My JA entry hopefully. Should I use this one or make up a new one?

[TricksForKids]

thats some of the best work ive seen from you aces, the pink backgrounds a little shaky but whatever

and this aint fair&#33;

MF wriests JAR

all hes gotta do is lost the R

grrrrr&#33;

[aces]

Haha you get my message tricks?

[flclnaruto1213]

best work youve seen from him?
yikes. with more posts than me thats a little dull

[TricksForKids]

hey fetus...shutup...you&#39;re not much better than him...get off your high horse claiming that your a toy veteran and suddenly returning to the tot black book like your some king.

fall back buddy.

[novella]

aces, i know that 3D is just your style, but it still throws me off, without edge lines it sort of looks like a really wacko dropshadow to me

[flclnaruto1213]

not much better than him?
ch. yeah sure, like your one to talk down to me.

[aces]

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6729/kioskredyellow2uhrq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Check it out tricks&#33; Remember that?

[capo93]

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/4683/picture4pi3.th.jpg (http://img177.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4pi3.jpg)

kk i kno its rused and teh o makes it look crooked but i want some crits on it plz

[flclnaruto1213]

and for the record i stopped writing fetus months ago, its fune short for funeral now.

[aces]

I&#39;m just wondering what your most recent stuff looks like?

[Soar]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6209/eat1sc1.jpg
crits?

[prank]

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/9051/image83yc6.jpg
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4723/image84yh6.jpg


crits

[AT AT]

i need a new prisma http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1800/img0784br9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[capo93]

Originally posted by Soar@Oct 5 2006, 08:47 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6209/eat1sc1.jpg
crits?
your letters are all over teh place in size and it dosent have much of a flow and on a personal note i dont like teh letters too much

[AT AT]

aw dood you write yank
i totally look up to you

[aces]

Why may I ask do you look up to him?

[Hot_Pocket]

Soar, work on simples(that&#39;s coming from a toy :D)

AT AT, Work on your letters too. Don&#39;t put the spray can in the middle it looks bad and it played out(like mushrooms).

Yank, I&#39;m not feelin&#39; the fill on the second one, and the "Y" looks like a 4. But I like the first one.


I&#39;ll post up my terrible work soon :)
Take my crits or throw them out, &#39;cuz I&#39;m just a lowly toy.

[prank]

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/7328/image85wz0.jpg

[.KroMatiKz.]

i just did sum stuff in my black book, tell me what u think.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/street_sk8_4life/IMG_5241.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/street_sk8_4life/IMG_5234.jpg

[NOMX]

back to the basics for u ^

[alive]

Originally posted by phish@Oct 5 2006, 07:11 PM
i like it, although it would look a hell over a lot better if you didn&#39;t sketch in pen

do you paint?
glad u lyk it&#33; :D i do paint, but i paint poorly. im working on it. nowhere to practice, all paint is illegal paint on the street. get better every time. only done fills hollows an tags tho, wtf is the point of trying to piece when ur still in the tot books? hmmmmm?








id still work on it for a little while. u need to work on the consistancy, like the top of A and the top left of the N are smaller or bigger then the rest of the letters. i wouldnt worry so much abt coloring right now either, u need to focus on the letters, not the fancy shit. but then again, if u got a chill spot, its good to practice, just not where everyone is gonna have to see it it. u know?


so anyway, here some pen freestyles, madddd quick, with marker outlines. first two say CEAR, looked better b4 i added 3d and outline, too messy now. and the other says RICHARD, did it for a friend who asked fast.

(yellow bled through from other sketch)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02749.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02748.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02747.jpg


peace
PS. ADVANCED MEMBER FUCK YEAH&#33;


bumppppp
peaceeeeeeee

[YarHarHar]

Originally posted by aces@Oct 5 2006, 04:45 PM
Best throwies by far except maybe bank. You painted that shit yet MF?
ya i get painting done...dont briong my camera bombing with me its to bulky + i dont wnaa smash it but i think i might be able to get some legal stuff i did at my buddys half pipe...we&#39;ll see my son..

[flclnaruto1213]

aces, if you wana see my recent stuff go back 10-40 pages
youll find it. it will say either fetus, fund, fune, funeral, or triana.

[Stonk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool007.jpg just wanting crits on the structure

[flclnaruto1213]

bottom left of the O looks a little crooked, rest of the letters look fresh

[slEEt]

Originally posted by Stonk@Oct 5 2006, 09:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool007.jpg just wanting crits on the structure
I say make the P a little bigger.

[prank]

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/3272/image86lh4.jpg

tried to add style

i like my y and my a but i hate my n and dislike my k

crits???

[slEEt]

I&#39;d remove the "style" you added and just try adding some curves instead of making them block style letters.

[TricksForKids]

whoa whoa.... funeral, or fune, or triana, or whatever it is you write..

i remember helping YOU back in the day, and kids bitched at you and i didnt...

and now you&#39;re saying i cant tell you to be quiet when your dissin aces for no reason?

im giving someone positive feedback, and youstart talking shit...

come on now.

respect those above you.

i.e me

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6520/pherswx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/266/phsyket8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9662/smirkrq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3492/whamoyx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[bouncingsoul]

Crazy shit from English class

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0257.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

dissin aces for no reason? yeah, i must have really hurt him hard with that post. I mean id really be up for a battle but i know that youd get the majority vote out of respect, personally i never loved your style, but i know people will just think "this is tricks, hes good, i cant vote against him" or "flcl that bitch? this guy sucks hands down"

so i gues thats just the way it is here on bs.

[Necro-]

some of you guys sound like girls in junior high. shut the fuck up.

[NICCSACC]

amateur hour

[TricksForKids]

fune....you think i just randomly get respect? you get respect by showing other people respect and by being GOOD

if you wanan battle by all means lets battle

but dont say ill get votes becuse people look and say "oh tricks imma vote for him"

its more like "oh tricks&#39; sketch ismiles ahead of funes, imma vote for him":

shit kid im not saying your bad, but you aint at a bunch of peoples level in this thread, me, niccsacc, ase, mf, sky...aces might even trump you

so shutup.

[TricksForKids]

and sorry for elttin the beef carry over, bouncgin souls i dunno what the hell that is but it looks cool

whats underneath it? looks worthy of a pic no?

[krazzie_ammo]

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5293/28ia1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please :D

[Slushi]

Tellin you man, you gotta paint it or it wont even matter.

[phish]

i like it craze, but i think that the other one looked better

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/phish1.jpg

crits?

[krazzie_ammo]

i like it phish :D but, the bottom of the S (where it overlaps the I) doesnt look right. im kinda confused, is it overlapping or not? also, i think the top of the S should br curved.
a simple fill would look so nice on it :D
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/240/29hc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
here is it coloured in :D crits?

[nemzone]

krazzie_ammo, i dont think the S is overlapping...
and i love ur simples style, would make a gr8 roller

[FunkSoul]

im feeling the s krazzie

[nemzone]

lol, thats a Z
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/3659/klkb5.jpg
thats ment to be opaque orange but hte scanner fucked it up...
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1447/img130ro9.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2546/img129jk5.jpg
the middle piece was just a fuck around and the bottom was just tryin to get cracks down, tho it looked better b4 colouring

[phish]

your handstyle is dope

[bouncingsoul]

Haha, beef sucks. Tricks, that thing I fucked up on, but I&#39;ll redo it and post it on here... I think I finally found a new name to stick with. Whaste. Ima check if it&#39;s not taken

:edit: Whaste is clean and I haven&#39;t heard anything close on bs (other than waster), but it&#39;s still not the same. I guess I&#39;m writin whaste then. I&#39;ll get handies and throwies up here later today.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1163.jpg

[Torrent]

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9529/s5030082smalllm5.jpg

I entered it in the toy battle. Any critique?

[aha]

,

[jonowev]

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blueshadow.jpg
crits? im trying to improve that Y - it looks better than in previous ones

[Torrent]

aha: You mean I should go simpilar?

[jonowev]

torrent - i like the, A but the J isnt as good. The bit that pokes up at the bottom obscures it a bit. maybe do a slightly simpler J, but the A is fine :)

[terower]

Jonowev, that actually looks pretty decent. I&#39;d make the bottom of the J longer, if I were you, though.

[terower]

Throw-up.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo60.jpg
Feedback/crits?

[aha]

no, that was to phish

[jonowev]

thanks terower. do you like the bottom of the Y? i wasnt sure wether it would look any good when i tried it. i will extend the J on my next one
as for your throwie, i would use one colour for the fill, and another for the edge. itll be more intresting than just one colour and the black outline

[nemzone]

Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 6 2006, 01:04 PM
lol, thats a Z
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/3659/klkb5.jpg
thats ment to be opaque orange but hte scanner fucked it up...
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1447/img130ro9.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2546/img129jk5.jpg
the middle piece was just a fuck around and the bottom was just tryin to get cracks down, tho it looked better b4 colouring
bumping this from bottom of last page...

terower, thats kl, id make the T a lil smaller and the squirts a bit closer tho.

[jonowev]

aha, post the pic in the actual message, dont post a link. its just easier for everyone

[aha]

ok

[jonowev]

nemz, your handy is awesome&#33;
as for the throws, i like the bottom two
i dont like the little bits on the second one that go across the letters

[terower]

Jonowev: Yeah, the bottom of the Y is pretty good. I like how it remains proportional throughout the waviness. And, uh, black is a color ;) .

Aha: Too pointy, three-dee is way messed up.

Nemz: Thanks dude&#33; I really like your marker handling abilities, especially on the red and blue one. Nice cross hatchings&#33; I think the Z would look better if it were fattened up on that one. Overall, nice job.

[aha]

..

[phish]

Originally posted by aha@Oct 6 2006, 10:58 AM
no, that was to phish
what was to me?

[SKRIBLE]

http://img434.imageshack.us/img434/1107/skribleil0.jpg

tell me wot u think?

[aha]

normal simple leterz... ;)

this :D

[SKRIBLE]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3960/skribzvsleonja9.jpg

sorry about the quality, my scanner&#39;s fuked&#33;

[Hilo]

simple u dick

[obseen]

wow
were you on drugs when you drew that lool, so colourful
nice to see coloured and effortful stuff though
keep workin on the letters though&#33;&#33;
im sure someone else with give you adive about going simple and stuff
edit
i see hilo did but i didnt know he was gonna put it so harshly&#33;

[Torrent]

Originally posted by Torrent@Oct 6 2006, 09:54 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9529/s5030082smalllm5.jpg

I entered it in the toy battle. Any critique?
Any more critique? Also I&#39;m wondering jonowev, what do you mean about the J?

[trashhh]

Originally posted by SKRIBLE@Oct 6 2006, 11:25 AM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3960/skribzvsleonja9.jpg

sorry about the quality, my scanner&#39;s fuked&#33;
How can u have scanned your table with a sketch on it at an angle. and yea go simpler

[myl]

ha wow good point

[terower]

That&#39;s obvoiusly a picture from a digital camera. He&#39;s saying he can&#39;t scan it so he has to flick it with a camera.

And SKRIBBLE, I like your character in the first one and your colors over all. Your letters can stand to be improved and the charecters in the second one are WAAAAAY generic, and thus not so cool.

[jonowev]

torrent, i mean the very bottom of the J. it would look better if it just curved round, insted of having a big bump

[Hilo]

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/8425/picture85do4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits would be nice this time.


the only reason i said that to SKRIBL cosue i bet he&#39; been writing for like 2 months and hes laready trying to do wild style ive been wirting since last septenmber and im still doing basics like i started like SKRIBL and i was like hmm im not getting anywere with it so i hear from a freaind do streight letters so i did em for about 2 months and im actully progressing more and thats what i suggest u do on yers SCRIBL and don take it hard cosue its the fucking truth ya herd me ahahahhaa

[sky 5]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Oct 6 2006, 09:42 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1163.jpg
VENOM crushin all competition . . . (CAC would be a cool crew name)

NEMZ - i really like lookin at your stuff . . clean, solid colors, style

tricks - man please dont put me and aces in the same sentence . .

[jonowev]

Hilo, whats with the bit sticking outta the bottom of the O?

crits please?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blackandamber.jpg

[terower]

Damn, Hilo, those are some dope letters. That style (does it have a name) is one of my favorite types. Props&#33;

[sky 5]

HILO - simple you dick . .





hahaha just playin man, i like how the letters lay next to each other, overlap and all the north to south lines/bars take the same angle but your soft color choice and medium (easter color pencils?) do not pop out your letters or give you a definitive outline so maybe choose better color next time that will contrast and pop . . . also keep tryin little things to tweak and style up the letters . . you got like a throw/straight letter going . . . look at NEMZ color choices and how it attracts the eye or reinforces/defines the shape of his letters ....

[sky 5]

JAY - its so simple it will be hard for people to crit b/c most people can say what you should take out/shouldnt do but its hard to tell someone what to do . .i would try bending the bottom vertical leg of the Y up alittle bit into the bottom of the "U" part of the Y ..pretty much just shot it at a lil higher angle so it overlaps the U part of the Y alil . . .then maybe try that same move/angle on the top vertical line of the A and maybe the left vertical line of the J . .

[Hilo]

sick man finnaly some positive crits you guys put a smile on my face like mcdonalds pa ra pa rara

[Hilo]

hielo see i cant spell crits.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/821/picture86va8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[trashhh]

Whats with the tiny L?

[phish]

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/phish3.jpg

crits?

[obseen]

its good that your going simple but it seems like every page i go on
i see that same sketch&#33; just done a bit differently

[Hilo]

couse i like doing diffrent shit and phish those are illler stright letters. just the P tho make the top Flat

[nemzone]

yeh lol at least ur getting it down. if the top of the P was level it would be cool.

also the I has potential.
if it was my piece i would experiment. like id try and make it one of them figures you see on toilet signs, and make the other letters ted then maybe a cirle that goes round the back of ur piece, with the I being black and circle also being red.

[SKRIBLE]

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/654/freedomed4.jpg

tell me wot u think?, and plz respect ppls work sum ppl spend time gettin better, and to the guy who says i aint touched a can in my life ur fukin wrong dikhed&#33;

[TricksForKids]

hahah my bad sky...i was just all worked up with fetus or fune or whatever sayin hes better than me, but enough of that

sky you wanna get down on that halloween battle?

and hilo, you can tell you rwite in toronto, the top right of the h i dont like, the I&#39;s ok, the L needs work, and the O is pretty chill

nice handstlye by the way, its gettin there




http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5184/funeym9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1909/bawkthrowiecj1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Hilo]

my bad scribl that peice is sick u must be on something and it looks like its good shit. crits.http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6478/picture87nq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SKRIBLE]

thanx hilo my shit is ok, at least sum fuker respects ppls work around here&#33;

[Hilo]

yea man and that shit isnt all that toy either. not att all budy jut sometimes try doing some strgith shit eh with all that crazy 3d you do

[jonowev]

tricks and hilo, that shit is fukking awesome :D
will post something new soon

peace

[SKRIBLE]

Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 6 2006, 01:08 PM
tricks and hilo, that shit is fukking awesome :D
will post something new soon

peace
yeah ok man my shit will blow ur shit out the sky bitch

[tycoonin]

Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 6 2006, 11:54 AM
Hilo, whats with the bit sticking outta the bottom of the O?

crits please?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blackandamber.jpg
theres a writer in france who writes jay too and hes prety dope

[jonowev]

cool - will have to check em out :P

my second attempt at a 3D
the fill is a bit messy
crits?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blue3D.jpg

[aces]

Can someone give me some words to sketch. I&#39;m not feeling doing my name and I want something else to challenge myself with. Preferably with no O&#39;s. O&#39;s are the one letter that I really hate.

[tycoonin]

sape

[jonowev]

how about SPUTNIK

[slEEt]

Originally posted by aces@Oct 6 2006, 01:50 PM
Can someone give me some words to sketch. I&#39;m not feeling doing my name and I want something else to challenge myself with. Preferably with no O&#39;s. O&#39;s are the one letter that I really hate.
They are the easiest one to write. Try writing RACE.

[krazzie_ammo]

how about CRAZE, lol.

[primus1001]

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l244/takeahykemike/Picture055.jpg look

[obseen]

hehe first post
we have another one to train and lecture about graffiti and simples

[primus1001]

no you cant

[nerdx]

go back to much more simple letters.
and above all you have to have letters in your peice.

dont worry about connecting them and all just have a nice
style and simple clean letters.

[jonowev]

primus it looks like you&#39;re way outta ya depth. listen to nerdx for advice - hes a legend
crits?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blue3D.jpg

[tycoonin]

id say make the a a little thinner

[phish]

Originally posted by aces@Oct 6 2006, 01:50 PM
Can someone give me some words to sketch. I&#39;m not feeling doing my name and I want something else to challenge myself with. Preferably with no O&#39;s. O&#39;s are the one letter that I really hate.
try antidisestblishmentarianism, do that and i will be impressed.

[krazzie_ammo]

someone should make that a battle...tag that&#33; or even piece it :P

[krazzie_ammo]

easy...this is the start of something special :P i stopped because i dunno how to do the A. lol.
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/1175/30wp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[aces]

No. Noone would do it. Look at how little amount of people did ALEXISONFIRE because it was long.

krazzie ammo...I like it a little. The R is a little weird but try to overlap your letters. It looks better most of the time.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by phish+Oct 6 2006, 02:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (phish @ Oct 6 2006, 02:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Oct 6 2006, 01:50 PM
Can someone give me some words to sketch. I&#39;m not feeling doing my name and I want something else to challenge myself with. Preferably with no O&#39;s. O&#39;s are the one letter that I really hate.
try antidisestblishmentarianism, do that and i will be impressed. [/b][/quote]
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1164.jpg

[tycoonin]

there was an alexisonfire battle?

[krazzie_ammo]

errrmmm aces what were you saying?? lol....i cant hear you over niccsacc&#39;s drawing lol....
thanks for the crits :D im working on the A right now...

[obseen]

fuck me niccsacc thats nice&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[phish]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Oct 6 2006, 03:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Oct 6 2006, 03:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by phish@Oct 6 2006, 02:37 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-aces@Oct 6 2006, 01:50 PM
Can someone give me some words to sketch. I&#39;m not feeling doing my name and I want something else to challenge myself with. Preferably with no O&#39;s. O&#39;s are the one letter that I really hate.
try antidisestblishmentarianism, do that and i will be impressed.
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1164.jpg [/b][/quote]
mad props to you nicc

[aces]

Did you seriously just do that? That&#39;s nice too. Would be nice style to hit freights with. Has anyone else kinda noticed a cetain style that goes on freights? I&#39;m not talking about full on pieces but like simple quick bombs on freights seem to have a cetain style. Maybe I&#39;m just retarted.

[jonowev]

fuck me you rule nicc

[obseen]

you spelt retarded wrong looool&#33;
but ye i havent noticed it, the onyl certain style is that most pieces start from the bottom, because people arent tall enough

[aces]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Oct 6 2006, 04:03 PM
errrmmm aces what were you saying?? lol....i cant hear you over niccsacc&#39;s drawing lol....
thanks for the crits :D im working on the A right now...
First push the R closer to the C
Then Make the right part of the R not so angled because it looks wrong
Lastly erase those pencil marks

[krazzie_ammo]

thank you :D

[SKRIBLE]

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/5194/freedomew5.jpg

hilo this is my 3d piece done on my scanner tell me wot u think?

[obseen]

i think the grey and blue 3-d looks cool

[aces]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Oct 6 2006, 04:10 PM
thank you :D
Also...Resize the image.

[b0mbingmybitches]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v462/shorty_bang_bang/graffiti/EZthrowie.jpg
just a quick little peice....its supposed to be pink but my phone changed the color on it

[-testify-]

take off all that shit thats in the letters and some of those extensions are bad like the bottom of the z thats an arrow make it bigger not so thin

[b0mbingmybitches]

Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Oct 6 2006, 03:28 PM
take off all that shit thats in the letters and some of those extensions are bad like the bottom of the z thats an arrow make it bigger not so thin
thanks....i have alot of work to do on my style

[jonowev]

yeah basically take off all the pointless additions and get the letter shapes nailed before you jazz it up so much

[b0mbingmybitches]

Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 6 2006, 03:37 PM
yeah basically take off all the pointless additions and get the letter shapes nailed before you jazz it up so much
thanks

[DUF]

i like the one at the top the 3d is bad ass. stuff is good bro.

[jonowev]

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blue3D.jpg
crits? i posted earlier, but only got one
thanks :)

[Freedumb]

My first attempt at bubble graffiti: [LINK] (http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/433/bubblegraffitihq3.jpg) :D

[Slushi]

^^ Not toooo bad keep practicing,

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4074/picture25qm1.jpg
For the JA battle

[-testify-]

i like the curve in the bottom of your y jay just make some part of the a curve and it might flow more and make the top of your y lower so its the same size

[some guy from NCI...]

Keep the same letter width when doing simples (the A is very fat, the J is very thin)


EDIT THIS WAS TO JAY

[Slushi]

Originally posted by b0mbingmybitches@Oct 6 2006, 03:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v462/shorty_bang_bang/graffiti/EZthrowie.jpg
just a quick little peice....its supposed to be pink but my phone changed the color on it
Where do you live?

[jonowev]

:) sorted. thnx for crits, people

[fost]

slushi i like that style keep working on it

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4370/100406je5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8616/100506yv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Punny]

Some of my recent pics.
I would appreciate some crits, but please dont say to colour them because i will once my cousin decides to give me my sharpies.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/joek2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Joek3.jpg

[AteskOne]

^^^i like ur shit. that charac on the o shows alotta potential. also good work wiht keeping it simple. keep on workin on it cause all you can do is improve.

ps. my only crits would b mayb to work on your outline because those little flares dont look good.

[aces]

The charac is a smiley face??? How does it show a lot of potential?

[AteskOne]

cause all the otha characs i&#39;v seen on here look like this...
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3352/untitledvr7.png (http://imageshack.us)
im glad to see someone put a little bit of detail and creativity into their work.

[aces]

Look at the characs thread and you will see some that aren&#39;t like that one that you posted.

[obseen]

edit

[AteskOne]

ok i have looked at the freakin character thread and iv seen the work that the toys put out. the work thats good in the character thread isnt from toys. and all im fuckin sayin is for a toy he has potential now stop trying to contradict me on my advice.

[Punny]

Well, I didnt actually mean for it to be a character. I just kinda added it in because i needed something to fill the "o" lol. I actually am pretty good at drawing characters. I just havent been able to implement it in anything graffiti oriented and make it look decent.

[bouncingsoul]

More schooltime sketchin

Advisory (free period)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0258.jpg

Biology (fucking boring period)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0260.jpg
Spanish (sub yay)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0259.jpg
(btw, the A is supposed to be lowercase like "a". That kinda a

All of them say Whaste or whast (couldn&#39;t fit the E in)...

[SkRIBBlE]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5441/freedomfy3.jpg
check it, ive changed acount name to how it is spelt &#39;SKRIBBLE&#39;

[Necro-]

Originally posted by SKRIBLE@Oct 6 2006, 03:13 PM
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/5194/freedomew5.jpg

hilo this is my 3d piece done on my scanner tell me wot u think?
looks a lot like pryme

http://www.duncancumming.co.uk/photos.cfm?photo=3264

[Punny]

Thats Dope, Although i think it would be alot better if the colours of the letters were more bold, or had a thicker outline.

[TricksForKids]

bouncing, your S looks like one of the freshest E&#39;s ive ever seen, use it as an E and change your name lol

( in the last sketch )

[WolfBurrns]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture22.jpg

My new name since I got pinched.. CRITS? Fuck, it seems like im starting all over.

[aces]

Yea I saw that too and had to look twice to see that it was an S.

Talking about bouncingsoul&#39;s pics...

[bouncingsoul]

Yeah, I saw that after I uploaded it. I got an E in my name already so I&#39;ll use it there.

[aces]

I got a crapload of school sketches from the beginning that I&#39;m gunna finish up this weekend and post up here.

[ghozt]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8993/scan0014pm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^^ dissregard the tm lol it was something our teacher was teachin and she used my drawing as an example of what can be patent
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2429/scan0013yo2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits??? i was bored in class...

[obseen]

i think you have potential with that first one
keep workin on it, your 3-d&#39;s a bit messed up, but with practicre and shit it could look pretty good

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 6 2006, 05:29 PM
More schooltime sketchin

Advisory (free period)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0258.jpg

Biology (fucking boring period)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0260.jpg
Spanish (sub yay)
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0259.jpg
(btw, the A is supposed to be lowercase like "a". That kinda a

All of them say Whaste or whast (couldn&#39;t fit the E in)...
bumpy

[ghozt]

was tht in biology ?? lol i like them but dont really lik ur x and tht last ones dope

[aces]

Were they freestyled? If so good job if not then the bottom line on the S in the last one should be a little thicker. I love that W for a throwie on the first pic. Do you have the rest of the throwie all put together yet?

[bouncingsoul]

Not yet, I like two letter throwies better than whole name throws but I&#39;ll make one eventually. Honestly, I have no idea what freestyling is... Is it just doing sketches without looking at anything or copying and stuff? If so, all my shit is freestyled. But yeah...? Enlighten me please

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1165.jpg

[ghozt]

dope =]

[-testify-]

you like megadeth?

[ghozt]

ur talkin to me or nicc?

[-testify-]

nicc cause that peace sells thing is the name of a megadeth ,song or cd?, but yea just wondering

[NICCSACC]

very rushed stuff
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1166.jpg

[TricksForKids]

stop sketching you fiend, making me look bad

[-testify-]

do you have any pics of painted stuff youve done

[aces]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 6 2006, 07:20 PM
Not yet, I like two letter throwies better than whole name throws but I&#39;ll make one eventually. Honestly, I have no idea what freestyling is... Is it just doing sketches without looking at anything or copying and stuff? If so, all my shit is freestyled. But yeah...? Enlighten me please
freestyling is not having lines other than the outline of the letters like in this:
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2803/tgc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
It has two seperate parts that make up the letter The horizontal bar and the vertical bar. Freestyling is usually with pens caus you can&#39;t erase so you have to just do the outline first and not do those things. Hope that made sense.

[doomsayer]

ahhh so freestyline means you only get to draw the line once, fair enough, i always thought it meant u just picked a random word which u have never had any experience with beofre and then painted it

this is my latest sketch ive drawn it out like 10 times now, its not getting any better now, any crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct7peice.jpg

[-testify-]

i like the ts but not the little add on thing on the top corner of the u

[alera]

man venom im like in thoes
here&#39;s some thin i just did, messed up the fill and my getto fake sharpies are runing out of juce
latly ive been doing all my stuff in a note book and havent tutched my b book, dont know why
:(

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/760/1006062024qi0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i was going for a downwerd curve but messed up the E, oh well Critz? Tips on Fills?

[ghozt]

the e is HUGE but other than tht im likin it

[doomsayer]

i rekon itd look way better in a straight line with all the letters the same size

[sky 5]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Oct 6 2006, 06:27 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1165.jpg
ohhh niccsacc . . . . :wub: :wub: ..im still workin on that sticker pack for you but i just cant do anything good enough thatd i feel ok sendin it to you . .

[°«SKITZO»°]

^^ i like the cheracter&#33;

heres somethin i sketched in class and finished at home, not that it matters.
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k135/5k1720/IMG_1709.jpg


edit: sorry i posted the wrong image :)

[magashna]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01594.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Punny@Oct 6 2006, 04:56 PM
Some of my recent pics.
I would appreciate some crits, but please dont say to colour them because i will once my cousin decides to give me my sharpies.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/joek2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Joek3.jpg
please dont write joek theres joek in mtl

[d_g]

Originally posted by magashna@Oct 7 2006, 01:48 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01594.jpg
Dunno what that second letter is but with a bit of fixing it could be fucking hot.

[doomsayer]

B? i think if u got all those letters into perspective, itd look real nice, make the last S the same as the rest, make the roght part of the V stay straigh not go down all weird and the S and B? are good, just define the second letter mopre.

[d_g]

Looks like &#39;SbVE&#39; to me, but I&#39;m guess that the second letter is supposed to be an &#39;O&#39;.

[magashna]

i don&#39;t like the o very much either, i usually do a character

[ARMAwonR]

Crits ...

http://shutter14.pictures.aol.com/data/pictures/01/007/77/17/07/5C/LhZJutBSbTEOdIN2q-WnNzOJuhkWUAwC0258.jpg

[Hilo]

calimiller production

[ARMAwonR]

was your post regarding to me?

and if so ... what do you mean by it?

:huh:

[Hilo]

dont know but the sketch is hawt

[ghozt]

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5786/scan0015uw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

working on my e&#39;s any crits on which ones the best?

[ARMAwonR]

gah ... dont you kno ... you&#39;re supposed to crit the flick before you before you ask for crits on yours <_<

anyways ... your e&#39;s ... I would say the northeast one has the most flavor

[ghozt]

i cant really crit lol just cuz i have nothing i would change about it

[ARMAwonR]

ohh cool well thanks bro lol

[d_g]

Arma, I would work on the width of your letters, they get wider as they go along, and I&#39;d make them a little more rounded aswell.

ghozt, the two on the right are the better ones.


http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/8421/simple2op9.jpg

Argh, I&#39;m getting bored with simples, trying to spice things up a little.

Oh, and ignore the 3D lines just realised I forgot to rub them out.

Any advice?

[ARMAwonR]

ahh jeah man ... it was kind of a perspective experiment I guess ...


but jeah ... you should work on that S ... keeping it the same thickness

other than that your letters a solid man

[-testify-]

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3249/neweh0.png

new name its says pask crits

[doomsayer]

its ok, bring down the lin of the P more so its in more perspective, and make the K more readable

[-testify-]

alright thanks

[Stonk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool009.jpg
playin around witha different style

[red november]

not bad if your just starting

[ARMAwonR]

Originally posted by ARMAwonR@Oct 6 2006, 09:41 PM
Crits ...

http://shutter14.pictures.aol.com/data/pictures/01/007/77/17/07/5C/LhZJutBSbTEOdIN2q-WnNzOJuhkWUAwC0258.jpg
Bumped For Crits

[doomsayer]

I dont like the first A its too squashed

[~raging babies~]

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/9477/paskthinglq8.png

it says pask i fixed some letters but i know the ks bad anything else?

[-testify-]

shit sorry^thats mine forgot to log off my friends username

[ARMAwonR]

jeah that P looks like a lowercase E

[-testify-]

should i make the the line on the p go farther in

[DUF]

arma i think that shit is fresh.

[d_g]

Originally posted by d_g@Oct 7 2006, 03:15 PM
Arma, I would work on the width of your letters, they get wider as they go along, and I&#39;d make them a little more rounded aswell.

ghozt, the two on the right are the better ones.


http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/8421/simple2op9.jpg

Argh, I&#39;m getting bored with simples, trying to spice things up a little.

Oh, and ignore the 3D lines just realised I forgot to rub them out.

Any advice?
Bump to a new page.

[ARMAwonR]

Pask ... jeah bring that line in ... to under the hole ... that should make it atleast a little better


ohh and thanks duf&#33;

[extirpate]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2136/tuff004ve9.jpg
crits? :huh:

[sky 5]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8900/1191960jk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

well im out for the night to get drunk as a skunk . . rushed this sticker so i dont go out empty handed, the K is FUCKED . . . hope everyone has a nice friday night and you east coast kids should already be sneakin out your mom dukes crib&#33; . .

extirpate - decent letters, love a splash job fill too but try and keep it a lil cleaner or more designed . . .

[sky 5]

ARMA - yeah man that is pretty fresh . . id look to add some curves in there, alot of times i get stuck just doing angled joints but it always looks better (atleast with my stuff) when theres some curve bars in there to change up and give contrast to the angled joints . . .

[jonowev]

Originally posted by d_g+Oct 7 2006, 06:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Oct 7 2006, 06:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Oct 7 2006, 03:15 PM
Arma, I would work on the width of your letters, they get wider as they go along, and I&#39;d make them a little more rounded aswell.

ghozt, the two on the right are the better ones.


http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/8421/simple2op9.jpg

Argh, I&#39;m getting bored with simples, trying to spice things up a little.

Oh, and ignore the 3D lines just realised I forgot to rub them out.

Any advice?
Bump to a new page. [/b][/quote]
if you want to go forward, do a drop shadow or go 3D. maybe play around with different colour fills. those tilted letters arent pretty

[phish]

Originally posted by d_g+Oct 7 2006, 01:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Oct 7 2006, 01:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Oct 7 2006, 03:15 PM
Arma, I would work on the width of your letters, they get wider as they go along, and I&#39;d make them a little more rounded aswell.

ghozt, the two on the right are the better ones.


http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/8421/simple2op9.jpg

Argh, I&#39;m getting bored with simples, trying to spice things up a little.

Oh, and ignore the 3D lines just realised I forgot to rub them out.

Any advice?
Bump to a new page. [/b][/quote]
i like those tilted letters, they look funky

[jonowev]

its not bad, just not great. ok d g, take that sketch and put a drop shadow on it (with a different colour) then post it again :)

[doomsayer]

S needs some work, it dusnt fit in to well.

[jonowev]

agreed - the S is too rounded

[d_g]

Meh, I did the drop shadow.

The sketch looks pretty shit, I&#39;m not gonna bother posting it up.

[jonowev]

okies, just keep working on it :)
can you post your tag on the tags thread please d g?

[d_g]

Yeah, it&#39;s there now bro.

[Skesh]

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/1akrim.jpg
after some blockbusters
tried a camo fill :)

The pic is crap, but I&#39;m not on my computer now, this computer has only a webcam (it&#39;s for a couple of days)

some other blockers


http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/1bkrim.jpg

[linf]

can someone give me some advice on what colours to use on this

http://server3.uploadit.org/files/linford-semibub.JPG

[jonowev]

do a red 3D edge, light blue bubbles, dark blue fill
crits on this? first attempt at splodges
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/yellowsplodge.jpg

[aces]

Alright now start doing something different with your letters you seem to post the same thing over and over again with nothing but the slightest changes and a different color.

[jonowev]

okies, im just taking it slowly.
what you think i should try next?
i could have a go at some simple extensions