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Robin Hood
01-28-2010, 08:28 AM
mi shit dont look like ne ones but my own i dotn bite
btu i will have a trowy battle on papper i dont know of ne spots in the 603
and i dotn got ne paint
wats the werd ? and ill have it bye tomoro

what fuckin 603 u in pal, plenty of spots if you aint a coward

Inlyn08
01-28-2010, 09:30 AM
LOL
Rage! Rage! Rage!!
But seriously, Weak's right about the bars man. If you look you can clearly see..
And the punch comment.. is just LOL.

Rage! Rage!

Inlyn08
01-28-2010, 09:31 AM
Oh double post.. because I forgot..

These dudes really made Kool-Aid man full of Grape Drank.
LMAO!!!

woonybomber
01-28-2010, 09:50 AM
manchester i juss havent seen ne safe spots iv seen plenty of shit that is risky and i will bomb that shit once i get better
there is alot of roof tops
oma crew be kilin them roof spots

prefer
01-28-2010, 11:18 AM
:)okay weak you know what i appreciate you answering my question but i really dont appreciate the disresopect dont get so cocky you think i dont feel like puching your bitch ass face in at times, i am taking notes punk i just PREFER to ask questions so fuck off whore ill ask as many questiobns as i like okay bitch thanks:)

Flawless Victory
01-28-2010, 11:20 AM
Oh double post.. because I forgot..

These dudes really made Kool-Aid man full of Grape Drank.
LMAO!!!
Styrofoam cup and everything, I LOL'd

SEEK NRA
01-28-2010, 11:22 AM
yo flawless can you see my post in the toy blackbook sec ??

Flash_One
01-28-2010, 05:53 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6558/0122001118.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/i/0122001118.jpg/)

freinds throw up... any advice?

BlacktodaFuture
01-28-2010, 05:56 PM
get better friends.

Flash_One
01-28-2010, 06:11 PM
get better friends.
fuck off .

TheToy
01-28-2010, 06:21 PM
Need to slow down and take more time on the fill. But speed up with the outlines so you don't get drips.

Looks like 3D at the bottom but drop shadow at the top of the letters. Fix that.

Flash_One
01-28-2010, 08:32 PM
Need to slow down and take more time on the fill. But speed up with the outlines so you don't get drips.

Looks like 3D at the bottom but drop shadow at the top of the letters. Fix that.

thanks

Inlyn08
01-28-2010, 08:36 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6558/0122001118.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/i/0122001118.jpg/)

freinds throw up... any advice?
The D ( That is a D right? No joke.. ) Looks kind of like an O with a tumor. The drips on the outline were the first thing I saw too, and the fill is kind of.. Eh. Not hating, just saying.. and if that's your friends thing. Post yours?

Or something.. something.
Keep it moving man..

TheToy
01-29-2010, 01:52 AM
Grimey fills are dope but you gotta' have clean lines. And it's gotta' be kinda' clean yet grimey. Long sidewards spray strokes.

LeaksOne
01-29-2010, 03:48 AM
get better friends.

i giggled like a school girl at this haha

Zookyook
01-29-2010, 10:49 AM
get better friends.

i laughed...

seriously though man that throw is painin like oprahs vajayjay.... make ur letters fatter so there isnt void space inside the throw, make it look like a big sticker... put a final outline on the red to distinguish where the 3d is... practice mo'... and not with this friend

kaz401
01-29-2010, 12:32 PM
scrapcans
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa1/seck401/coldkas.jpg

prefer
01-29-2010, 01:18 PM
The D ( That is a D right? No joke.. ) Looks kind of like an O with a tumor. The drips on the outline were the first thing I saw too, and the fill is kind of.. Eh. Not hating, just saying.. and if that's your friends thing. Post yours?

Or something.. something.
Keep it moving man..

okay time for some serious crits, flash, tell your freind he needs to leearn bars if he wants his stuff to look better, it would look okay except for the outline is pretty sloppy, once he learns bars he should be good

prefer
01-29-2010, 01:19 PM
hey kaz looks pretty good, except the extra extensions you could do without, it looks clean man for real, jsut watch some of those drips and your good

kew1
01-29-2010, 01:28 PM
yo kaz's drips r from the paint in the backround i would post my pic from that day but id rather not lol an bout time u start postin piks kaz

prefer
01-29-2010, 01:30 PM
me? yeah i will soon just got aloota work to do atm and okay yeah now i see those drips wernt from you

Inlyn08
01-29-2010, 04:00 PM
okay time for some serious crits, flash, tell your freind he needs to leearn bars if he wants his stuff to look better, it would look okay except for the outline is pretty sloppy, once he learns bars he should be good

I think this is one of the few times I have seen you post something worth while. Shocked me. Apocolypse.. is upon us.
LOL

prefer
01-29-2010, 04:40 PM
i just couldnt help but say somethin becuase his letters look like they have potentioal but there really drippy and out of place, some that some good ol bars could help bigtime, also he need to learn how to fill a little better becuase thats a little sloppy

Inlyn08
01-29-2010, 05:25 PM
Very true sir, very true.

prefer
01-29-2010, 05:31 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6558/0122001118.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/i/0122001118.jpg/)

freinds throw up... any advice?

with all seriousness man try this, the next time you see your freind and yall chill tell him this, say lets sketch our names and then use bars while doing it, then paint the sketches using the bars you came up with let me know what happens and post it

XXORtsald
01-29-2010, 07:29 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/IMG_1457.jpg

XXORtsald
01-29-2010, 07:32 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6558/0122001118.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/i/0122001118.jpg/)

freinds throw up... any advice?




get better friends.



hahahah lmao

Zookyook
01-29-2010, 08:55 PM
im feelin the fatcaps blast.... that vas next to u is hot shit too, u do that?

TheToy
01-29-2010, 09:47 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/IMG_1457.jpg

I like this.

prefer
01-29-2010, 11:10 PM
10 min shit crits yo?tryin a new name

TheToy
01-29-2010, 11:13 PM
Way better dude. Pretty good compared to your previous work.
Lose the 3D. Go with a drop shadow. Go with a simple outline to make it pop.
Simple. Simple.
That's what I wanna' see.

prefer
01-29-2010, 11:23 PM
will do man thanks

Zookyook
01-29-2010, 11:29 PM
i think u outlined it one too many times prefer... and dont outline the bubbles, those are there to cover whatever is under ur shit and to make the final outline pop more... u should have made black bubbles with that white final outline, and then just cut between ur letters and the bubbles with the white u feel what im sayin?

prefer
01-29-2010, 11:39 PM
yeah the outline was made togo over everything i guess but yeah i feel you on the bubbles look kinda akward theres to be exact two outlines

prefer
01-29-2010, 11:49 PM
thetoy thats very good news im glad its better, yeah for sure next time ill just do a drop shadow then leave it ill keep it evn more simple

XXORtsald
01-30-2010, 01:16 AM
im feelin the fatcaps blast.... that vas next to u is hot shit too, u do that?

yeah flairing is my specialty :D

provinT13
01-30-2010, 04:00 AM
^^ You ever seen Baer from TKO? He's got crazy flares too

southboundkiller
01-30-2010, 10:18 PM
I am a new wrighter i just started a week ago here is a pic of my piece now that the video od me tagging is all over the internet with the name mclovin all over it i had to change my tag name to feign and new pics on that soon 8079

TheToy
01-30-2010, 10:34 PM
Why'd you go over that nice piece?

You need to read up some common graffiti etiquette, homey.

woonybomber
01-30-2010, 10:37 PM
why would you tell him you should let him keep doing it so some one will smash on him when i catch him let him find out the hard way
lol im jk

sinkilla1
01-30-2010, 11:45 PM
did someone call sinkilla in here ?

woonybomber
01-30-2010, 11:49 PM
idk mayb i did i dont rember lmfao

sinkilla1
01-30-2010, 11:50 PM
nah i was kidding man

woonybomber
01-30-2010, 11:51 PM
i know i waz jokeing too lmfao

thepekins
01-31-2010, 12:28 PM
what kind of caps should i get for a good skinny line, skinnier than stock caps

Fury
01-31-2010, 01:12 PM
NY thins, grays, blacks, etc.

weakfingers
01-31-2010, 01:30 PM
just make a homemade stencil out of the can cap and thatill give you the best results....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWGUFlybc3U

Ifuel- change you name befor those cats catch up with you,

southboundkiller
01-31-2010, 01:51 PM
I am just starting out i have been writing for a week this is a pic of my first piece help me http://www.flickr.com/photos/47115375@N06/4316936069/

Patchy
01-31-2010, 02:22 PM
Just a quick throwie
Whatcha think?
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0563.jpg

Fury
01-31-2010, 02:39 PM
^ hit the books more, work on can control, drop shadows off, etc. Basically, just get a good throw down on paper, then work on it at a wall.

Also, lose the highlights.

Patchy
01-31-2010, 02:44 PM
Yeah im working on it man but i was just bored and decided to go out and throw something up really quick. Keep in mind this was done in about 5 mins.

Fury
01-31-2010, 02:46 PM
Five minutes? You should cut it down to one to three, especially with three letters.

After practicing it for a long time of course/

Patchy
01-31-2010, 02:53 PM
ive only been writing for about a month man haha.

One Evil
01-31-2010, 03:27 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/4320179660_fe0f9e51a8.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4044/4319446341_76116ec8a4_o.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4036/4319447419_8e93d0145d_o.jpg
some ish from last night.

Con-Artist
01-31-2010, 08:50 PM
one evil- first ones aight, second one... not real sure
patchy- no

MyManRoyGBiv!
01-31-2010, 09:03 PM
Yeah not feeling any of those at all.

meh
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0133.jpg
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0136.jpg

One Evil
02-01-2010, 01:28 AM
ya the 2nd was is wack but it does the damage in the spot its at.. plus fences eat paint but w.e

and thnx.. im lovin the 1st one too ;)
what about the roal throw any crits on what i should add or take off??


and dude above me.. ur throw is to dull and next time you post ur throw. post it when its a filler especially in that spot .. looks like you could drink beers and smoke the heroin all day and night long..
aswell ur A looks much like an N

One Evil
02-01-2010, 01:33 AM
also heres a hollow to go wit the chit chat :)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4320180710_482a2c1653_o.jpg

XXORtsald
02-01-2010, 03:59 AM
what kind of caps should i get for a good skinny line, skinnier than stock caps

German outlines, gold dots. Or stencil caps are very good tips. But then again it really all depends on what type of can your using, and the amount of pressure it holds, because you can get a very thin line with a stock tip ona rusto, simply hold the can upside down and release pressure for 20 seconds. When u use rusto, stock tips all day baby. But I'm more of a clash kinda guy. Clash with clash fats = <3. Don't listen to me though I'm percoseted out lol.

MyManRoyGBiv!
02-01-2010, 08:08 AM
also heres a hollow to go wit the chit chat :)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4320180710_482a2c1653_o.jpg

Yo Post this when you fill it in brah, and I can't see anything except the wall but im gonna go ahead and assume there was nobody around so.... what were you thinking?

One Evil
02-01-2010, 01:42 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4320180710_482a2c1653_o.jpg

Yo Post this when you fill it in brah, and I can't see anything except the wall but im gonna go ahead and assume there was nobody around so.... what were you thinking?

that is on the same walll as this.. http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4036/4319447419_8e93d0145d_o.jpg
and there both on a train station getting mad views so i aint to worried about the hollow but yours is in a fucking cubby hole in a sewer to me ahah


this is mad hidden which is why i said fill it especially if its in that kind of spot haha and u go crying about me posting my hollow on actual noticable spot.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0133.jpg

Fury
02-01-2010, 03:27 PM
^ I don't know if the picture is bad, but I can barely see your hollow, let alone read it.

PRANEONE
02-01-2010, 09:01 PM
evil your first throw up your r and a look retarded you should fix the top of the r

weakfingers
02-01-2010, 09:23 PM
You guys squash the beef, where spouse to be on here to help each other. This is over the dumbest hollows just move on and progress!

MyManRoyGBiv!
02-01-2010, 09:44 PM
Hahaha you would know all about crying on bs eh evil? Im 90% sure the purpose of this website is to troll on people on people who care too much about the writing on the wall, why else would these forums last so long? Peace out till I feel the need to be cool on the internet again.

Inlyn08
02-02-2010, 02:43 PM
Hahaha you would know all about crying on bs eh evil? Im 90% sure the purpose of this website is to troll on people on people who care too much about the writing on the wall, why else would these forums last so long? Peace out till I feel the need to be cool on the internet again.

Wait.. wait before you go!

I want to be cool.. give me protips before you bail!!
LOL..

On a serious note, shouldn't that be in with the Throws?

One Evil
02-02-2010, 04:39 PM
evil your first throw up your r and a look retarded you should fix the top of the r

this one?
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4036/4319447419_8e93d0145d_o.jpg
cause the A is definitely horrible but ill fix it for sure. thnx..

and to the dude bitchin at me for giving him crits and he cried about it.
why dont you just take the advice and move on with your day.. this was like like wat 3 days ago.. and its still being spoken about..

and zook what ya mean about the open part? i dont really like connecting my letters fully.. trying to be different not like everyone else and close there throwups ya kno ... but ill keep in mind

CrustOner
02-02-2010, 05:48 PM
I'm pretty sure he means open like where you can't do back and forth fill through all the letters.

One Evil
02-02-2010, 10:05 PM
i went left to right when i fill...:confused:

CrustOner
02-03-2010, 12:13 AM
I mean through all the letters at once, not individually.

One Evil
02-03-2010, 01:01 AM
why would i do the entire thing at once.. instead of doing each letter.. by doing each letter one by one makes it cleaner imo... am i not right.
ya i missed a few spots but at 4am dont we all.

Fube
02-03-2010, 01:23 AM
you fools talk to much. post flix and keep your mouths shut with beef.

One Evil
02-03-2010, 01:31 AM
im chatting with the fella writer .. not beefing.. :D

XXORtsald
02-03-2010, 08:59 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/IMG_0494.jpg
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/IMG_0490.jpg

chiefy
02-04-2010, 12:52 PM
lovely flaring may i say :)

KtRL.
02-04-2010, 10:26 PM
ROAL - do something about that R, its wack as fuck

Flawless Victory
02-04-2010, 11:28 PM
No it's not.

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:27 AM
lolol





http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/2009-10-24103108.jpg





doesnt stop me from bombing the highway. =]

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:30 AM
old highway flick for talking. haters toyed it before i could catch a flick. :/








http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/000760870680674turnpike.jpg

SEEK NRA
02-05-2010, 07:39 AM
that sucks, fuckin toys think that beefing and crossing out are amust in the game and that it gets you props. Then they get fucked up!

TheToy
02-05-2010, 10:48 AM
i wish i could paint near palm trees

It's an awesome experience. It's just a warm, happenin' kinda' vibe. I can only imagine the relaxation of piecing, surrounded by palms.
Ain't no palms in Boston.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2941

CrustOner
02-05-2010, 07:29 PM
im sorry man but u said ur tryin to be different... that throw has the exact same thing goin on as this one... did u do this too or just take the flick????http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/4320179660_fe0f9e51a8.jpg

Sorry, but not the same thing at all. The only similarities are the open first letter and the color scheme. -__-

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:34 PM
bomb painting around palms





http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/9770415d44f5__1238076763000.jpg

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:35 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/bla2.jpg

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:36 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/2009-10-01153036.jpg





R.I.P. OILER.

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:37 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/9e8015df291e__1238642361000.jpg

"CaN SmAsHeR"
02-05-2010, 07:38 PM
nice shit blast

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:45 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/Photo0505-1.jpg


this one actually has a very intresting story behind it, this walls ona main road, and across the street is a 7 11, i was halfway through the fill when these two fucking cops pull up to seven eleven i had to lay flat on my stomach for 20 mins, and they still didnt leave, so i did anything any normal graff writer would do, took out my sim card in my phone, called the cops and made a fake emergency call around that area so they would book it, lol, and it worked.

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:46 PM
for my babys mother.



http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/l_52ef2e4530664de99e11c0d585adebbc.jpg

kew1
02-05-2010, 07:47 PM
yo blast wat caps u use for them flairs? r they homeade?

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:48 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/l_24386022f2674a858e905427ddb6951e.jpg

-Empty-Can-
02-05-2010, 07:48 PM
Blast that fade is dope!

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:49 PM
these are all super old pictures btw.



http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/06-04-09_1125.jpg

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:51 PM
these caps.



clash fats
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/clashfat150.jpg




and astro fats
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/astrofatbig.jpg

LeaksOne
02-05-2010, 07:55 PM
hey blast one problem with that story to go with that bomb.....cops can track your phone. sim card or no sim card. and why dont you put all these pics in one post?

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:58 PM
i dunno it wasnt a seriou sstory anyway i just told them theres 2 dudes fighting at the near strip club, no biggie, and i dunno i was just skimming through photobucket posting random pics.

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 07:59 PM
painting ona highway. =]




http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=57554652&searchid=569cb548-a6e0-40c8-a3b7-6054a495e5ff

TheToy
02-05-2010, 10:38 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2987
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3002
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2994
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2988
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2995

I fucked up on the bottom of the 'E' on the Laker Yellow/Purple bomb. I don't even wanna' talk about it. :(

None of the 'Haters' are on on BS. So don't start. Stupid kids with scrap cans keep ruining good shit around here.

shem
02-05-2010, 10:44 PM
rewt stay up scratch that throw stick with that uppercase R you usually do.

weakfingers
02-05-2010, 10:46 PM
you got straight letters locked now just work on your throwie

XXORtsald
02-05-2010, 11:00 PM
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/fbf7ec228f34.jpg




http://the305.com/2009/02/20/suspected-miami-graffiti-artist-falls-to-his-death-on-the-palmetto-expressway/

"CaN SmAsHeR"
02-05-2010, 11:29 PM
yeo this video is fucing dope it is really long tho
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-7656439438696750030&ei=ev1sS7HgLo6wqQLWqqDZBg&q=bomb+the+system+full+movie&hl=en#

TheToy
02-05-2010, 11:39 PM
you got straight letters locked now just work on your throwie

Thanks man.
The throw looks good on paper but I'm fuckin' up the proportions bigtime - so none of the bubbly parts ever merge correctly. Back to the books.

prefer
02-06-2010, 12:53 AM
hey root, those straights are hot, i liked your old throw better, cleanup your throws lines a little, thats pretty much it though, yeah your straights are killin

RedEyes
02-06-2010, 09:43 AM
REWT to give you real crits, you need to work on your bars on all letters, ur R needs definition on that leg and there is to much empty space.

CrustOner
02-06-2010, 10:57 AM
TheToy, also, in addition to RedEye's crits, try not to do any waves with your bars, unless it's a base bar (ie, bottom bar of your E, or left bar of your R) because then it loses some of it's stability. Your toss could use some work, man.. haha R's not your thing?

-Empty-Can-
02-06-2010, 11:40 AM
Rewt-That R and T are really hurting. It seems you have the most problem with that leg on the R. Try to give it some curve instead of keeping it straight. Like this.
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/R4rewt001Small.jpg
^quick and shitty but you get the idea.
I think the W shouldn't overlap the T. It seems like your cutting off half the letter. Try to give them some space or have the T go over the W.

Honestly I think that new throw is crap. It kinda reminds me of the shit you were doing with Anion/Trew

^^I agree with crust too

sinkilla1
02-06-2010, 11:49 AM
empty can fur real you shoouldnt be telling rewt how to do an R cause even yours is shitty as fuck look just like his
rewt dont make your right leg so horizantal make it facing the ground

-Empty-Can-
02-06-2010, 11:53 AM
sinkilla- I was just saying to give the leg some curve

CrustOner
02-06-2010, 12:54 PM
The leg needs to be on the circle, not from the base bar on the left. It looks better.

Mr yarbles
02-06-2010, 01:06 PM
Did bombing science delete my post?
Fuck you
You bunch of faggots.

Fube
02-06-2010, 02:22 PM
i deleted your post because you and that other fuck were beefing over stupid shit. if its not crits or props then keep it out.

just like this dumb ass post. its not needed.

you dont like it? report me.

Vagrant
02-06-2010, 03:12 PM
Did bombing science delete my post?
Fuck you
You bunch of faggots.

get used to it
its gunna be happening a lot more around here

@TheToy - solid simple. highly legible so it would work good on freight. i think you have a decent base to work off of, now you just have to start styling the letters so they're not so keyboardish. keyboard letters are the ultimate starting point, but really its only to get someone thinking in the correct mindset on how to construct graffiti.

NullMind
02-06-2010, 03:32 PM
this is my first post on the site so I might a well start with me crappy pics (all of them are but these I had at hand)
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p306/michaelthefinn/9a4b4ca2.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p306/michaelthefinn/b830cb5f.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p306/michaelthefinn/c969251d.jpg

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p306/michaelthefinn/6c2910fe.jpg
boredom, alcohol and more alcohol made me do this one... technically its the first thing I ever did so I have attachment

Vagrant
02-06-2010, 04:00 PM
dont combine letters and drop the second L
look at more graffiti and sketch more
drop the characters until you know how to use spraypaint

NullMind
02-06-2010, 04:08 PM
aye thanks... I dont think Ill drop the second L I thought about that a lot before but Im too attached or maybe Im just stubborn, but you are right

Mr yarbles
02-06-2010, 04:13 PM
i deleted your post because you and that other fuck were beefing over stupid shit. if its not crits or props then keep it out.

just like this dumb ass post. its not needed.

you dont like it? report me.

It's cool fube
I'm not used to bombing science deleting much of anything
I used to just be able to run rampant and make fun of whoever I wanted :(

Fube
02-06-2010, 06:22 PM
yeah well, im actually lookin at this stuff now. all good.

"CaN SmAsHeR"
02-06-2010, 06:26 PM
yeah well can you ban woonybomber no one likes him plz he talks shit to every one i think we would all like to se him ban for ever

woonybomber
02-06-2010, 06:30 PM
i love it how the new toy wants to ban me i have soem thing to say to you you toy ass bitch
fuck you like m,y balls you fucking bitch ass nigguh i will find were you live and stick my dick so far up your ass you fucking bitch ass nlggER i will kill you your mom is a hooka with her floppy pussy i juss fucked her last night and ima fuck you lil sister too i sell you girlfriend crack and i will kil her nice and slow after i rape her to okay you fucking bitch ass nigguh i hate you i hate this site i dont care if he bans me i really dont you all can suck my dick expt prefer so fuck you alll your allll gay bitch ass nigguh e thugs and shit

"CaN SmAsHeR"
02-06-2010, 06:42 PM
see wat im saying man =/

(SoS)Viruz
02-06-2010, 06:53 PM
Yo whats up heads. Look at my sig. I am now hosting Sketch battles again. No delay anymore I had personal stuff in my life that...Kind of had me in the Hospital bed for a min. So Im back and battles well be posted at a timely fashion.

If you want to see what other battles are going on check the Toy Battle Call outV2 Thread in our battle thread in the toy section

WE are also going to add some new battles to the mix So get to it guys PEACE

-Viruz

TheToy
02-06-2010, 08:44 PM
haha R's not your thing?
Not one bit. But I'm fascinated by 'em. Or it.


The leg needs to be on the circle, not from the base bar on the left. It looks better.
That makes sense. Best crit yet. Thanks.


get used to it
@TheToy - solid simple. highly legible so it would work good on freight. i think you have a decent base to work off of, now you just have to start styling the letters so they're not so keyboardish. keyboard letters are the ultimate starting point, but really its only to get someone thinking in the correct mindset on how to construct graffiti.
Word. Word. You know I wanna' get back on them freights. :D

shem
02-07-2010, 05:04 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2799/4339162366_8d541017d8.jpg

of course someone had to scribble on this before i could get a flick..
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2739/4338411303_2e224357cb.jpg

lazy attempt at fixing it.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4004/4338411321_736470c09b.jpg

TheToy
02-07-2010, 08:01 PM
I'm diggin' both. You did a pretty good job of fixing that up. Fuck the haters.

I like that color scheme on the top flick. The sludgy euro drips are cool too.

I see green foliage in the background. You live somewhere warm? Lucky dog. Haha.

shem
02-07-2010, 10:33 PM
I see green foliage in the background. You live somewhere warm? Lucky dog. Haha.

chillin at a comfortable 75 degrees.

florida life.

TheToy
02-07-2010, 11:01 PM
Word. Love the Florida scene.

Fury
02-07-2010, 11:33 PM
75 degrees? Dude fuck you lol

Elno
02-08-2010, 12:48 AM
shem loved both keep it up and you fixed it up pretty well :) fuck the haters and keep it up.

75F :o

was 33°C today in south Aus, which is 91F :eek:

xaaronx
02-08-2010, 02:17 AM
old but i haven't posted anything in a long while
http://i47.tinypic.com/25yu0z6.jpg

%DR.SPRAI%N.E.K
02-08-2010, 04:45 AM
shem shits lookin alright ima have some flicks for the site in a couple days and i deffinetly need crits

prefer
02-08-2010, 03:58 PM
shem needs to work on straights more

shem
02-08-2010, 07:24 PM
^^ tru ive never painted one... probably be the next thing i paint.

prefer
02-09-2010, 12:45 PM
cant wait to see, i've had a new appreciation for straights latly

TheToy
02-09-2010, 01:32 PM
cant wait to see, i've had a new appreciation for straights latly

So go do one. I been tryna' get you to do a straight for 3 weeks...

Fury
02-09-2010, 01:37 PM
So go do one. I been tryna' get you to go straight for 3 weeks...

I read it like this haha

TheToy
02-09-2010, 01:55 PM
I read it like this haha

What, you gay son?

That's cooooool.

:p

prefer
02-09-2010, 02:15 PM
So go do one. I been tryna' get you to do a straight for 3 weeks...

i knoooow man, i have an appetite for one too though so gonna try an do one soon for sure:cool:

TheToy
02-10-2010, 02:44 AM
i knoooow man, i have an appetite for one too though so gonna try an do one soon for sure:cool:

Just go black and white. Extra simple. Maybe a contrasting color for the final outline. Just a single outline, no bubbles or fancy shit. ;)

prefer
02-10-2010, 11:25 AM
^ill try that thanks man:)

AteskOne
02-11-2010, 12:40 AM
i knoooow man, i have an appetite for one too though so gonna try an do one soon for sure:cool:
i'll believe it when i see it.

chiefy
02-11-2010, 12:22 PM
http://i45.tinypic.com/33b08j8.jpg

woonybomber
02-11-2010, 02:13 PM
moon hit the books a little bit more man

chiefy
02-11-2010, 02:55 PM
it was smaller than it should of been cause i didnt know how much paint i would use so i just squased it a bit.

Inlyn08
02-11-2010, 05:20 PM
Zoooooooooooooom............
Out..........

chiefy
02-12-2010, 05:10 AM
yeah sorry for the size next time ill resize.

SofatOner101
02-12-2010, 06:02 PM
Chiefy - you need to work on your can control ay, your lines are wobbly as hell. I dont mind the blend (not too bad for what looks to be shitty paint) but if you are worried about the amount of paint you have to use, then sketch the piece onto the wall first so you can at least make all your letters the same size. If you have to go smaller, go smaller overall ay.
Try throwing a basic 3D on it next time too.
Practise makes perfect.

kace91
02-12-2010, 06:39 PM
first time i try to hit a wall (exceptin tags):


http://s4.subirimagenes.com/privadas/868700snc00538.jpg

LeaksOne
02-12-2010, 07:06 PM
did you sketch at all before you did that??

kace91
02-12-2010, 07:17 PM
hahahahh im just showing it for the lulz, i know is bad as fuck.

I've been sketching for about 4 months, but between my lack of can control (1st time i used an spray) and the darkness, it turned out totally different to what i was trying... I swear it doesnt look so fucking lame in paper lol

Ages24
02-13-2010, 03:34 PM
prove it, post the sketch

kace91
02-13-2010, 04:06 PM
Prove that i have been 4 months sketching? I've uploaded some work other times:

http://s3.subirimagenes.com:81/otros/4013802snc00523reduced.jpg

It's not good, i know, but I think the difference is kinda obvious

Gyse
02-13-2010, 06:14 PM
Haven't painted in a while, what needs work besides can control?
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/5866/aaaaaaaaaaq.jpg (http://img190.imageshack.us/i/aaaaaaaaaaq.jpg/)

H3TT1NG3R
02-13-2010, 06:18 PM
take out the 3dot triangle before u get shot

Gyse
02-13-2010, 08:14 PM
take out the 3dot triangle before u get shot


Why the hell would I get shot for that? I usually just put a line or dot anyway though. Anything on my letter structure?

kace91
02-13-2010, 08:20 PM
Why the hell would I get shot for that? I usually just put a line or dot anyway though. Anything on my letter structure?


I think is a gang symbol, from the Sureņos

CrustOner
02-13-2010, 08:26 PM
Okay. Get shot. See what we care.

H3TT1NG3R
02-13-2010, 08:42 PM
3 dots means your in a gang.

but letterwise its pretty bad too, what does it say liek regr or something? looks like u went into ms paint and did the lines on the bottom for soem reason...

Ages24
02-14-2010, 04:43 AM
yeah its pretty garbage, still better than half the stuff in here tho.

Laimonel
02-14-2010, 05:25 AM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3333/phpq9ajbjam.jpg
same paint
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/7233/phpwxtkioam.jpg
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9007/phptib9gzam.jpg
Ooold stuff. But didnt get better though :/

BlacktodaFuture
02-14-2010, 01:44 PM
DL is a girl?

Laimonel
02-15-2010, 02:24 AM
Wtf? I am DL O.o (Im a boy just really tall and slim one : D).

Flawless Victory
02-15-2010, 03:30 AM
Haven't painted in a while, what needs work besides can control?
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/5866/aaaaaaaaaaq.jpg (http://img190.imageshack.us/i/aaaaaaaaaaq.jpg/)
Feeling this, minus the G

TheToy
02-15-2010, 06:16 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3018

Just some freestylin' boredomish junk...

Just been practicing going back to make cuts and get more familiar with NY thins. I fudged the drop shadow at the bottom of the 'W'. I didn't see it till I packed up my cans and took the picture. I know the shadow on the 'R' and in the 'R's hole is not proportionate. Love/Hate relationship with 'R's but I think it's progressing.

I was gonna' put in some highlights on the letters but wasn't sure. You think I'm ready or is it too much? I don't wanna' go overboard if it ain't gonna' look half way decent.

Ran outta' room but wanted to squeeze the 'T' in anyway. Fuck it, it's freestyle.

Crits always welcome.

Oh and I forgot a little drop on that 'R's extension... crap. Haha.

-Empty-Can-
02-15-2010, 07:23 PM
Rofl at the T floating away in the distance

The R looks alot better and thats a nice color combo

TheToy
02-15-2010, 07:32 PM
Haha. The 'T' is floating away. The base of the it is just garb too. I can't get paint to cover on that part of the canvas. Even with Molotow it takes like 4 fucking coats.

Thanks on the 'R'. I still gotta' work them kinks out. I'm a let this piece stand for a few days. Just to look at and take in what I can work on. After that I'm gonna' just do some 'R's. All by themselves. I gotta' king them 'R's. Haha.

I might fix the drop shadow on the 'W' tomorrow. Add the drop to the 'R's top extension and possible add the highlights. Just to see how it looks. I'll post the final.

Them colors just worked, eh? I love anything brown. I might have to try this combo on a train this summer. But, there's practice to be done before I get back in the yard. :(

TheToy
02-16-2010, 01:49 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3022

Fixed that drop on the 'W' added the drop I forgot on the 'R's extension. Added shitty highlights. Fucked around making cuts but I fudged some of the lines. All well.

Zookyook
02-16-2010, 02:03 PM
gettin better at cutting back... the top of the T looks real nice but when u cut back on that angle thats inside the W its kinda messy... the highlights arent bad, u can cut back on those too if u want... i still dont like the kick in the R though, it shouldnt lay flat on the bottom like that, it should be angled up a bit in my opinion, somethin like this
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4362642735_579f34875c.jpg

weakfingers
02-16-2010, 02:04 PM
Make your R leg like that^^^^^, Make it rest on a corner, But yeah, Its great to see someone actually trying to get better painting straight letters on a consistent basis. Your getting cleaner and cleaner. If i where you id try to add some effects and try more styles. You seem to have bars down.

TheToy
02-16-2010, 02:23 PM
Word, Zook. Thanks for the diagram. Makes it way easier to understand. You're right about cutting back on the highlights.

Thanks, Weak. Can you elaborate on some simple effects/styles that would be the next step? I just don't wanna' get in over my head.

I keep having a problem when I first start spraying, the line will be like real fat or thin. Then I get a feel for what the cap and can are doing together. It makes it looks sloppy.

weakfingers
02-16-2010, 02:45 PM
I had that problem, Sometimes its clogged caps and its just pressure on the cap also how fast your going comes into play, just keep the same speed and makeshure not to flair in anydirection and your lines should be smooth. I would start my styling out your straight letters, like I see you did shine then mork with funky fills cracks, The next step I would say to you is work on newer styles, you have a good base style and know what proper graffiti looks like so i would just start off with painting all the letters on a slight lean. The good with about fills is you can always try something new, try doing a two tone fade or drips from a top colour to the bottom. Your going in the right direction just start to get funky,

TheToy
02-17-2010, 01:03 AM
I had that problem, Sometimes its clogged caps and its just pressure on the cap also how fast your going comes into play, just keep the same speed and makeshure not to flair in anydirection and your lines should be smooth. I would start my styling out your straight letters, like I see you did shine then mork with funky fills cracks, The next step I would say to you is work on newer styles, you have a good base style and know what proper graffiti looks like so i would just start off with painting all the letters on a slight lean. The good with about fills is you can always try something new, try doing a two tone fade or drips from a top colour to the bottom. Your going in the right direction just start to get funky,

Word. Word. Sounds good.

I'm gonna' have to like take a few 'practice swings' before I start spraying with each can and get a feel for the cap and all that.

lord_plankton
02-17-2010, 09:34 AM
....or in other words, just add shadow where its supposed to be when letters overlap, at least thats what i could make out from the post...

markingz.
02-17-2010, 10:18 AM
damn rewt nice straight, i dont like the t at the end though it looks a bit awkward otherwise pretty nice, i think the next time you do a straight if you can find the colors, do one with a purple outline, black fill and white hightights with a green force, i think that would look dope

TheToy
02-17-2010, 12:16 PM
rewt id say the next step for u would be lowlights, the highlights work, but if u took a medium brown (not as dark as the outline) and put it on each part of the letter where it overlaps itll add a new depth to the piece, cut back over the lowlights with the outline color, and put it right up against the outline unlike the highlights where u set it back a little bit.... give it a try.... also dont forget to make the lowlights relative to the 3d, just like ur highlights are... dont put lowlights everywhere letters touch, just on the side where the shading would be, feel me?
Alright. I'll try it out. I heard gold dots skinny can be good for this. Like misting and shading. Then cut back over.

....or in other words, just add shadow where its supposed to be when letters overlap, at least thats what i could make out from the post...
Word. I wanna' try this on a throw, like just hold the can on the side and mist from the original line, but I dunno' how it'll look.


damn rewt nice straight, i dont like the t at the end though it looks a bit awkward otherwise pretty nice, i think the next time you do a straight if you can find the colors, do one with a purple outline, black fill and white hightights with a green force, i think that would look dope
I've used black with a light purple outline before and it was dope. The white and green, like a poison green, would be poppin'. I might try this when I have to go over silver. I hate painting over silver or gold.

TheToy
02-17-2010, 05:27 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3025
Before.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3026
After.

Sorry about the low light picture. Camera flash sucks. It wasn't officially dark, just dusk. Fucking Kodak.

-Empty-Can-
02-17-2010, 05:30 PM
Probably your best one so far. But that T looks like it's kinda floating away again.

TheToy
02-17-2010, 05:33 PM
Thanks man. I was just bored today. I wasn't gonna' paint cause all the trains were full of better stuff than I'm capable of. Until I got to the end of the line. Lol.

The REW always flow nice but the bar structure of T is like killin' it...I gotta' figure that out. But the 'R' is gettin' a lil better.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3027

Here's a picture from straight on before I took the tape off. I hate painting the bar side but I hear if you don't paint the bar, you're a bitch. Haha.
Still gotta' work on proportions too. But I feel like Im making progress using the bars.

-Empty-Can-
02-17-2010, 05:39 PM
Why did you take the reflectors off? haha they have to put them back on anyway.

I'm not really feelin' that double outline either.

Nice job going big. Door to ladder

edit: and it looks like you went back and painted over the numbers

TheToy
02-17-2010, 05:43 PM
I didn't take the reflectors off. That picture was before I peeled the tape off the reflectors and numbers. I taped over them because I'm assuming they're as important as the numbers. Safety first. :P

I went back over the red with the green cause I ran outta' red and I couldn't clean the edges up. I could barely reach for that second outline so it's kinda' choppy.

I got a sweet little wood ladder with four rungs for the summer. So I can get that extra couple feet.

CrustOner
02-17-2010, 06:01 PM
Try making the top bar of your T shorter! good simple though.

TheToy
02-17-2010, 06:18 PM
Shorter, like in length, right?

So it kinda' tightens that end up?

CrustOner
02-17-2010, 06:48 PM
Yes.

H3TT1NG3R
02-17-2010, 06:51 PM
do a lowercase t like kwest.

leant your t outwards and pull the top bar down a little.

thats how you get style, you gotta modify your letters, u got ur simps down, now u just gotta play aroudn with it

RedEyes
02-17-2010, 08:09 PM
RWET does your parents know you paint other than the tarp? Just a note if you paint over the numbers its ganna get buffed some what.

TheToy
02-17-2010, 08:28 PM
RedEyes, I didn't paint over the numbers. Look at the first set of pictures. You can see that I taped the numbers and reflectors. I only posted the picture without tape so Empty could get a better look at the 'T' from straight on, instead of the angle. I know freight etiquette...

I taped off to be respectful but to also lengthen the life of this piece of art.

Yes, they know. Check my album. I'm not restricted to painting under my deck.

Het - Thanks for the adive on the lowercase 'T'. I love 'T's like that. I'm gonna' try what you said to do, about leaning the 'T' down out, or maybe in and see how it looks.

Thanks for the crits guys. It's really been helping me improve.

H3TT1NG3R
02-17-2010, 08:39 PM
t
thats the t im talkin about, maybe extend the right side of the top horizontal bar out

TheToy
02-17-2010, 08:43 PM
Word. Like keep that 't' close to the 'W' so it keeps that tight uniform flow. Like the top horizontal bar of the 'T' was pushing it away from 'W' making it look funky.

I'ma smoke a bowl and hit the books now.

Thanks man.

mawks
02-17-2010, 08:53 PM
somethin like this
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4362642735_579f34875c.jpg

do your r like he said

TheToy
02-17-2010, 09:28 PM
That's so two days ago.:p

jprezz
02-18-2010, 02:28 AM
Hey Rewt I struggle with T's to, its always hard to figure out a good spacing. heres a quick hollow, i switched it up a little more now so ill throw up the new shit when THIS FUCKING WINTER CHILLS THE FUCK OUT . GODDAMN ICE AGE lol
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/1812/dec1409.jpg (http://img188.imageshack.us/i/dec1409.jpg/)
I write TRIBUTE

markingz.
02-18-2010, 10:24 AM
rewt your w needs allotta work man but you other letters look descent

markingz.
02-18-2010, 10:25 AM
check a picture of any w, the middle part extends upwars more your doin like a halfway

TheToy
02-18-2010, 03:37 PM
check a picture of any w, the middle part extends upwars more your doin like a halfway

That's cause the horizontal bar of my 'T' usually goes under the bar of the 'W' to take up negative space.

I was just fuckin' around.

And not all 'W's are like keyboard letters.

markingz.
02-18-2010, 03:59 PM
dont take this the wrong way man but im like 100 percent sure a diff w would make that look alot better cuase it looks uneven

TheToy
02-18-2010, 04:03 PM
Are you sure it's not the angle of the picture and the bar fucking with your eyes?

Things always look different on a train unless you look at it dead on. The door rail on the side, as well as each individual structure rail in the side of the freight can make things look chopped and screwed like a hit from UGK.

Some Kind of Joke
02-18-2010, 04:25 PM
boring ass keyboard letters like you wanted"

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0147.jpg

markingz.
02-18-2010, 04:37 PM
^thats on point, but the blue 3d killed it

markingz.
02-18-2010, 04:40 PM
and yeah rewt im not kidding your letters are uneven like a se saw, there progressivly slanting lor and lower towards the right, work on that, other than that like i said its descent

Some Kind of Joke
02-18-2010, 04:41 PM
ok, what next... everyitme i do anything people just say "do keyboards" well, i but the bullet and did them...

markingz.
02-18-2010, 04:44 PM
thats good no man that was good, now just use better colors like i would use black where you put blue, and like come up with cool color combos now

TheToy
02-18-2010, 05:08 PM
and yeah rewt im not kidding your letters are uneven like a se saw, there progressivly slanting lor and lower towards the right, work on that, other than that like i said its descent

I know some of the lines aren't super straight and clean but it's not 'un-even like a see-saw'...

markingz.
02-18-2010, 05:19 PM
your letters do move at a slant man i know your not 12, i mean the tops

CrustOner
02-18-2010, 05:41 PM
Some Kind of Joke, work on putting those letters closer, and making clean, straight lines.


your letters do move at a slant man i know your not 12, i mean the tops
I don't know what the fuck you're talking about.

TheToy
02-18-2010, 05:56 PM
The back bar on the 'E' slants...

The tops most certainly do not.

markingz.
02-18-2010, 06:03 PM
your alright with straights but your still not confident with straigt letters completly, once you learn to make good simple straight letters your good

TheToy
02-18-2010, 06:12 PM
your alright with straights but your still not confident with straigt letters completly, once you learn to make good simple straight letters your good

The Bombing Science Philosopher is in the hiizzzooouuse...

markingz.
02-18-2010, 06:14 PM
your tetters look like mush, thats fine bars take time;)hahah philosopher, i could get used to that lol

markingz.
02-18-2010, 06:25 PM
Some Kind of Joke, work on putting those letters closer, and making clean, straight lines.


I don't know what the fuck you're talking about.
crust, im gonna tell epoch as a freind to stay away from your advice, i dont get you

TheToy
02-18-2010, 06:41 PM
What's not to get?

He's saying for him to tighten up the spacing between letters and make cleaner straight lines?

How you gonna' tell Epoch to stay away from that advice?

Epoch, CrustOner gave you good advice. Check out some of Crust's work. He's pretty good. I'd trust his crits over Markingz. anyday. I've never even seen Markingz. contribute a doodle, sketch or painting to these threads...

CrustOner
02-18-2010, 06:42 PM
You best be trolling, ******.

TheToy
02-18-2010, 08:28 PM
If he ain't, he fuckin' dumb, yo.

XXORtsald
02-18-2010, 10:51 PM
Thanks man. I was just bored today. I wasn't gonna' paint cause all the trains were full of better stuff than I'm capable of. Until I got to the end of the line. Lol.

The REW always flow nice but the bar structure of T is like killin' it...I gotta' figure that out. But the 'R' is gettin' a lil better.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3027

Here's a picture from straight on before I took the tape off. I hate painting the bar side but I hear if you don't paint the bar, you're a bitch. Haha.
Still gotta' work on proportions too. But I feel like Im making progress using the bars.


not bad for a freight cuhh, shits arent as easy to paint as people think, i got over 10 freights rollin, i only got a flick of one and its madd crappy. im gonna try and get another flcik of one my boy has up tonight. but shits on point. freights are the shit cause you can paint one in miami and by next month itll be in california n shit.

TheToy
02-18-2010, 11:00 PM
I'm gonna' keep practicing and wait for an open slot on the side with out the bar. But I'll do it again if I have to.

I can't fit my hand with the can under there to like get a straight line so it pisses me off.

Gotta' go bigger next time too.

XXORtsald
02-18-2010, 11:02 PM
paint on top of it.

markingz.
02-19-2010, 01:10 AM
If he ain't, he fuckin' dumb, yo.
haha im a jokester sorry;)

TheToy
02-19-2010, 11:13 AM
haha im a jokester sorry;)

Nah, you're just a troll.

You're not funny.

markingz.
02-19-2010, 12:13 PM
Nah, you're just a troll.

You're not funny.
chill the fuck out man wow, see a perfect example of someone who cant take crits, just take the crits kid, sheesh, and yeah iim a troll by openly admitting i was just playin around haha wow

markingz.
02-19-2010, 12:15 PM
jeez your no where close to having such a big head about your graff yet, if you were sumewhat dope id have a different opinion, but no offense, your not, just sit back and take crits to get better. oh yeah and its not trolling its just calling it how it is sorry to hurt your ego

markingz.
02-19-2010, 01:08 PM
jeez your no where close to having such a big head about your graff yet, if you were sumewhat dope id have a different opinion, but no offense, your not, just sit back and take crits to get better. oh yeah and its not trolling its just calling it how it is sorry to hurt your ego
a good name for you the toy is king shit, on some clown shit forreal

TheToy
02-19-2010, 05:03 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3039
Saw this in a different lay-up walking through the city.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3040
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3041
Stopped and did this on my way to a friends. Fucked up the R and then used Rusto Semi Gloss over CP Flat for a cut and all hell broke loose. Lol. I abandoned all hope and just finished it. Fuck it.

I brought the middle of the 'W' up a little more, just for you markingz..\
And ya, I know the letters are fucked at the bottom, so don't gimme' no shit kid. :D

markingz.
02-19-2010, 05:23 PM
dude thats a huge ass improvement man:D, that's how a w's supposed to look and well executed too, now it looks like all you really need to do is up the control a tiny bit more an outlines whitch shudnt be to hard for you, and yeah man lookin good, its up to you but id loose the little curve thing on the left of the R, just my opinion though, and haha i didnt even notice anything wrong with the bottoms of the letters lol, didnt mean to sound like a jerk though really, sorry.

TheToy
02-19-2010, 05:37 PM
Nah, it's cool. People that give crits like a jerk make the best influences. Obviously...

I mean, when I got to the 'W', I was like, fuck it, I'll try it and flick it for this dude. Lol.

I shoulda' just went up that extra inch and made it level. Ya, I gotta' lose that curve on the dead straights. I was fuckin' around with like curvy bars. Next time.

H3TT1NG3R
02-19-2010, 05:42 PM
do this
http://i46.tinypic.com/35mk2ef.jpg

TheToy
02-19-2010, 05:47 PM
You think I should go like 'Rewt' with that 't', like undercase after the 'R'...or just try the 't' with the other letters? Or like 'REWt'?

I'll give it a whirl. Thanks for the crits.

H3TT1NG3R
02-19-2010, 05:51 PM
well u def need to chagne ur e, it has mad potential, e's have so many diff ways of being made, your w too.
i would do thsi for ur w
\|\∫
or something, idk but you should have the middle bar stiking vertical way up, maybe ill sketch it for u, i love w's

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 05:57 PM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/28252154@N06/

This is MEWT's Flickr. I talk to him online once in a while but he writes in Miami and im a big fan of his. anyways MEWT..REWT!?!?! pretty close eh. REWT, take a look.

markingz.
02-19-2010, 06:03 PM
well u def need to chagne ur e, it has mad potential, e's have so many diff ways of being made, your w too.
i would do thsi for ur w
\|\∫
or something, idk but you should have the middle bar stiking vertical way up, maybe ill sketch it for u, i love w's
to be completly honest i think your rushing him man, let him take his time he'll get there but dont rush it

TheToy
02-19-2010, 06:19 PM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/28252154@N06/

This is MEWT's Flickr. I talk to him online once in a while but he writes in Miami and im a big fan of his. anyways MEWT..REWT!?!?! pretty close eh. REWT, take a look.

What are you trying to say? I bite?

Cause all that work is 10x better than mine. But in no way similar...

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 06:24 PM
nah nah.no way. im saying take a look at his older strate letters. its a few pages back. i usually look at how others handle letters and play off that until its my own original product again. sorry bout that man.

TheToy
02-19-2010, 06:26 PM
No problem, man. I was just like...uh oh? There's a 'MEWT'? Fudge.
I was just wondering what you meant. His work is pretty sick. Dude knows how to work them letters. He can bomb and piece well.

Good link, though. Great idea's, I don't wanna' bite too hard. Lol.

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 06:30 PM
he does tho. but nah, id never suggest biting. nothing wrong with inspiration tho. when i started off id use his strate letters for a starting off point, even tho me and him only have our E in commen.

kew1
02-19-2010, 07:31 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-19_1801.jpg

flask1995
02-19-2010, 07:32 PM
actually man im kinda feeling the lowercase t (REWt)

its personally up to you im just saying.

but otherwise its pretty sick, keep up the great work man

--

ELS that's pretty sick man. looks like its in your room :p there's nothing i can say, just wait for other people to crit you. otherwise keep up the great work man

CrustOner
02-19-2010, 08:50 PM
There's a Mewt on this site that is wayyyy better than that guy.. In my honest opinion, of course.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2dj2t1f.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/112d8vk.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/2d1pg1d.jpg

woonybomber
02-19-2010, 08:52 PM
nawh crust is right the other mewt is really good

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 08:57 PM
maybe maybe. but in miami i can only name one. and he'd decent. plus he's kinda a friend of mine. but iv seen the mewt on here, hes talented.

HATER666
02-19-2010, 10:18 PM
did this last night
really want to do a roller now ahaha
http://i877.photobucket.com/albums/ab340/HATERSIXSIXSIX/20022010001.jpg

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 10:28 PM
that as a roller...nice!

XXORtsald
02-19-2010, 10:51 PM
nah the lower case t doesnt go with the other letters, gotta make ur letters flow together.

XXORtsald
02-19-2010, 10:55 PM
you could make the T capital like this.





http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/005.jpg



and add extensions to the r as well ans the w

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 11:02 PM
hey blast, i actually got a few photos of your throws from when i went to the TE festival. You fucked up that block, but they buffed it the morning of, i saw them buffing and got a little sad.

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 11:04 PM
http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/BLAST.jpg

XXORtsald
02-19-2010, 11:08 PM
ohh shit lol word man, you got any more?

XXORtsald
02-19-2010, 11:09 PM
i dont understand how i did not get arrested that night. i literally did like 10 throw ups on one block lol. straight destroyed shit.

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 11:13 PM
i know i know, i saw. me and boy cresr were like "what the fuck, does this kid live here."
but sorry thats the only photo i can find. for now. i take alot so im always backed up. i must have like 300 from TE alone.

XXORtsald
02-19-2010, 11:19 PM
lol word. well if you ever find them man id appreciate them, good lookin on that one alone, but nahh that area is wynwood, i dont live in wynwood, i just thought id fuck the block up the night before the jam. thats how i do all over miami. =] ups for days.

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 11:29 PM
nah i know its wynwood i love that place. im over at the overtown whenever im overthere.

kew1
02-19-2010, 11:38 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-19_1801.jpg
bump crits please

SHER_WON_WTS
02-19-2010, 11:48 PM
the curve under the E i dont like, and the S is good but doesn't go with the E and L.