Walls

[Inlyn08]

Don't sweat it bro. That bomber is tight and in a dope spot. None of these faggots on your dick even paint. Weak's the only one.

No one paints on BS. No one at all.

[TheToy]

No one paints on BS. No one at all.

No one in the Toy Forums, anywho. ;)

We just talk graffiti.

[LeaksOne]

http://i765.photobucket.com/albums/xx291/noya304/034.jpg


http://i765.photobucket.com/albums/xx291/noya304/033.jpg
http://i765.photobucket.com/albums/xx291/noya304/030.jpg

you need LOADS of practice. i see one letter and a shape that looks like it could be either a N or K. and the last green one isnt anything......just a movement of the can. like you were stretching and kept the cap pressed down.

[TheToy]

I think it's a 'K' cause maybe that hand says, 'Krya'? And those faces all look pretty sad...sooo ya, I think it's a 'K'

No pun intended.

[LeaksOne]

either way its fucking terrible

[mista_dza]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00173.jpg
this one drips were intentional...but didnt look as cool as i thought ha

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00175.jpg
stars were after thoguht after seeing a piece in some book my friend showed me
btw both of these are in my back yard and crist would be nice

[SHER_WON_WTS]

if the drips were more controlled they would look better
you should take the fill color and clean the outline more when painting.
OVERALL, i like the letters

[mista_dza]

well thats why i practice and im not puttin it out on walls really right now, i used some high pressure black with that and i dont like it since ive been gettin ironlak, low pressure is much easier to work with for me.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

that is true.
but to save money just get some soft caps.

[mista_dza]

truthfully, im saving money buying ironlak its like 3.95 and it lasts since i sketch alot and i have alot of other paint, but yes i should totally invest in soft caps. thank fo the advice.

[weakfingers]

iron lak comes with three caps per can, one third of witch is a soft cap

[DieHippie]

either way its fucking terrible

point blank .

[AMAZ tbscrew]

so whos still around from 2006? havent been on this bitch in a min.

[Fury]

Lol you joined in 2005, and have 2005 posts.

[mista_dza]

iron lak comes with three caps per can, one third of witch is a soft cap

yessir i knew that but i would like to have more/different kinds like some blue dots or somethin

[Naysayer]

dza: you got some dripps. Try using a different cap if you have to.
I am kind of embarrassed to post this. I had no sketch of what I was going to do and the alignment on my S is terrible. but anyway:
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/2010-03-13095546.jpg
and its a crappy iPhone pic.

[syne7]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2coivef.jpg
Might as well get some feed back on my first "bomb" its just a throwup by the train tracks. I was using colorplace as the paint, so the sloppyness is somewhat not my fault. Anything constructive would be great :D

[markingz.]

No one paints on BS. No one at all.
too bad weak and toy suck, i paint too

[RedEyes]

Just because people dont post their painted shit doesnt me nothing. the internet is the best way for cops to make a case on you. so if your smart you wouldnt post your painted stuff on the internet.

[shem]

I was using colorplace as the paint, so the sloppyness is somewhat not my fault.


constructive critiscism.. dont use this excuse.

[Inlyn08]

I use that shit. Those $1 paints aren't bad man. You just need to work on can control.
Oh, and to whoever commented on my remark about No one painting..
I hope even though there were responses.. you can recognize sarcasm. Because if not..
that makes me sad. No homo..

And in unrelated news...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQp5l4-sfFA

[TheToy]

and its a crappy iPhone pic.
I rob dumb *****'s that bring their iPhone to the spot.

[mawks]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/l_01ceea97af6e4a4d9d880bfc40fe297e.jpg?t=126870693 8
thetoy^ watcho back

[woonybomber]

yeo i waz pissed when i whent on 12oz and that ugly shit took up like 3 pages that douch bag juss kept posting and posting and posting that ugly ass shit

[Sesh-it-up]

hahaha yea he clogs that shit up for sure.

[TheToy]

Hahahaha, mawks. I'm scurrred. I can't paint any bridges for a week. :x

[the cannabis evangelist]

I rob dumb *****'s that bring their iPhone to the spot.
arnt you all kinds of gangster

[Sesh-it-up]

little legal peace i did. i think it turned out ok http://pxt.virginmobile.ca/mmps/RECIPIENT/000_0134c057300506d9_1/2.jpg?partExt=.jpg&limitsize=320,320&outquality=56&rand=7899723216394755961&ext=.jpg&border=2,0,0,0&inviteToken=jELr4RJXPh7FTkea7kq8&clampsize=320

sorry for the cell pic

whats she say? i cant read the second half of the piece

[Sesh-it-up]

ahh yes now i see it. i like that style u got any other pics of it?

[massacreman]

pretty dope, check my stuff in the toy throwies thread :D

[shem]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2778/4438724351_504515982d.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4030/4438724357_d2fac7ecea.jpg

[Hepatitis]

skem that is super nice looking i like the skinny letters and overall flow

[woonybomber]

Hahahaha, mawks. I'm scurrred. I can't paint any bridges for a week. :x

y nigguhs makeng shit hot in **

[FlippingChickens]

that green seid is nice but squint im not fealing ur bomb's the one on the left could have been good if you didnt fuck up the u..

ra - go simple,nobody can teach you over the internet how to paint it just gets better the more you practice it..

shem - i hate your h...everything else looks solid

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe22.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe23.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe24.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe25.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe26.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe27.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe28.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe29.jpg

[Chowdah]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=430&pictureid=3118

first tyme. i thot it wuz ok.

[sinkilla1]

i dont wanna ruin your self esteem so il let one of the other douchebags on the site take this one

[syne7]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=430&pictureid=3118

first tyme. i thot it wuz ok.looks like some poptarts, i can't even read it. try simple letters next time

Oh and tofe, I like both of them except the white outline/shadow whatever in the first one is a bit disproportionate in some areas like under the O and in between the bars of the E. the throw is nice though

[sinkilla1]

and syne takes wait he was actually nice

[Inlyn08]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=430&pictureid=3118

first tyme. i thot it wuz ok.
I feel like I am being trolled right now...
What exactly.. is that supposed to say?

[suparjafar]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=430&pictureid=3118

first tyme. i thot it wuz ok.

lol
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0320.jpg

like 2 months old...ew

[smokeitup]

^shitttttt.

work on your throws on paper first, once u find a style that is half decent then do it in paint. stick to the black books!!!

[Fury]

You might also want to consider getting some caps, but I'm biased against stocks D:

[Rosie716]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2778/4438724351_504515982d.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4030/4438724357_d2fac7ecea.jpg


I like it, you get inspiration from ATAK? looks similar, he just doesnt have all the connections usually. just same type of bars i guess. but yeah dude, looks nice, a little smoother as far as can controll and i think it wuld look much better. but tight.

[Rosie716]

i take back the smoother part tho.. maybe a better fill, and your H kinda looks like a K and i dont like how the V part of the M is slimmer than the rest.

[RedEyes]

ATAK? are you serious thats nothing like ATAK. Shem dont get me wrong its dope but just dont see any atak influence.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/bb-1.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/uiu.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/66666-1.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

roes make that shit BIG!! It took me a while to even find out what you posted.

[TheToy]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3127
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3126
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3122
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3123
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3124
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3119

[-Empty-Can-]

black blue white combo is do0o0oppee!!!!

your so up your benching your own shit, eh? :p lol

[Fury]

^ Yeah that combo looks dope, but you need to change that throw man.

[TheToy]

black blue white combo is do0o0oppee!!!!

your so up your benching your own shit, eh? :p lol

It's Royal Blue holmes. But thanks. Haha. I'll try it with black next time I'm out.

I usually see my train pieces the next day being moved around before they leave the yards.

[mawks]

the throw is hurt man.. but the straights are lookin good

[Rosie716]

ATAK? are you serious thats nothing like ATAK. Shem dont get me wrong its dope but just dont see any atak influence.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/bb-1.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/uiu.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/66666-1.jpg

these are some of the most wack ATAK pieces. the top one has to be one of the worst ones i witnessed. the middle one is old as fuck. and the bottom one isnt his normal style.. its deffinetly got some ATAK look goin on man.

[Rosie716]

REWT- I dont really like your bomb. the straight letters are okay.. need work, and i would hate to see those everywhere around me. try some different stufff. you got it.

[RedEyes]

Rose you fucking wak kid all these are different years to show that there is no comparison. so until you can do a straight letter dont be bashing on Atak or any writter for that matter.

[Rosie716]

dude im not bashing ATAK, hes one of my favorite writers.. Im from Buffalo. I see ATAK pieces every fucking day... you show me some shitty ass ATAK from like 04' when he sarted writing... who the fuck said i cant do a straight letter hahaha.

[BlacktodaFuture]

rewt: your simples are fine but your throw is god awful

[RemoZ]

rewt: your simples are fine but your throw is god awful
Truth

[shem]

ive never even heard of atak... so sry no influence. thanks for the crits tho.

[markingz.]

I like it, you get inspiration from ATAK? looks similar, he just doesnt have all the connections usually. just same type of bars i guess. but yeah dude, looks nice, a little smoother as far as can controll and i think it wuld look much better. but tight.
hahaaaa you mean big atak af, tao, te word the fuck up lol, but it dont matter shem in floridaatak on hawaii it all good lol funny tho

[Rosie716]

no i mean ATAK from BF, NSF crews. Buffalo Writer. also some in NYC among other domains. painted with HERT and LIONS a lot.

[markingz.]

oh never heard of him

[RedEyes]

Chill out rosie im in the 716 myself and never seen your shit.

[suparjafar]

^shitttttt.

work on your throws on paper first, once u find a style that is half decent then do it in paint. stick to the black books!!!

this is old dude, like a month or two. my throwie has improved to this

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0307.jpg

[shem]

hahaaaa you mean big atak af, tao, te word the fuck up lol, but it dont matter shem in floridaatak on hawaii it all good lol funny tho

how do you know where im from?

[SNAP!]

stop talking for once... no one cares!

http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/sconewhiteblue.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/sconereefer.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/Mobile%20Uploads/img0523.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/Mobile%20Uploads/img018.jpg

[syne7]

its SCORE right?
and i like the first one over the others, its much cleaner and has a nice color scheme.

[SNAP!]

scone or Sc One. Thanks man, too

[syne7]

scone or Sc One. Thanks man, tooScone, my bad I have a friend that uses your N as a R.

[RedEyes]

Scone-stay off freights for now, you got potential but your letters need work.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03470.jpg?t=1269118069

i dont want to talk about it :/ ewww

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03471.jpg?t=1269118128

forgot this one, sorry for 2 posts.

[Fury]

I don't like the color scheme. You need to work on can control too. If it's your first, then it's a pretty good start.

On the throw, I don't like the R. Looks pretty good though.

[BlacktodaFuture]

its my fourth painted peice. and my hand was shaky due to tennis all day and coldness. but the color scheme is horrible bc of horrible selection of paint left lol

[CrustOner]

Were you drunk, Safe?

[syne7]

I like your throw over your straightletter safe, just get rid of that last part and the extra part at the bottom of the F to make it more distinguishable.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-20_1223.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-20_1231.jpg

[Inlyn08]

I don't like the color scheme. You need to work on can control too.
Agreed.

[markingz.]

its my fourth painted peice. and my hand was shaky due to tennis all day and coldness. but the color scheme is horrible bc of horrible selection of paint left lol
Backtodadrawingboard lol

[Inlyn08]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03471.jpg?t=1269118128

forgot this one, sorry for 2 posts.

Just try using black and white for now. Got to choose your colors wisely. Simple and clean is better then bright and obnoxious.. and a mess.
Keep sketching too.

[BlacktodaFuture]

the problem is im in the intermediate thread for sketching but i suck at painting :P

practice i guess.

[markingz.]

you dont suck but your structure is generic

[weakfingers]

I already posted this but oh well Im bored.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2674/4444722980_5aeb0efa8f_b.jpg

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-20_1223.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-20_1231.jpg
bottom page bump

[weakfingers]

Its clean but you have horrible structure

[Inlyn08]

the problem is im in the intermediate thread for sketching but i suck at painting :P

practice i guess.
Looks like you got some work to do man. I know these people on here say sketch, sketch, sketch. Which I agree with, but.. this is a prime example. You have to try to do both equally. Because making dope sketches is great, but if you can't throw that shit up.. you're fucking yourself.

Get at it man.

[suparjafar]

kew id sketch more...

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg
roes throw from yesterday

[-Empty-Can-]

not feelin' that r. Those dots in your letters look mad boring. Try to put an astrick or something.

[zennegen]

ah hell, why not.

http://i40.tinypic.com/2lktwd0.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

"Cause my peice sucks" lol

Piece is misspelled, sir.

'N you missed some 3d on the A.

[zennegen]

i was really thinking about that spelling as i was writing it. i hate the word piece. and i ran out of black which is why my 3d is so shittily filled.

[Flawless Victory]

"Cause my peice sucks" lol

Piece is misspelled, sir.

'N you missed some 3d on the A.
Post your painted shit and let's compare the two?
Oh, wait.......

http://yellowidesign.files.wordpress.com/2008/07/frown-ff-797673.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

I didn't say it sucked. I quoted the quote on the right.

I have painted man.

The only reason I don't paint now is because I can't get a hold of paint. If I had some I would be using it.

[Flawless Victory]

It's just fun to me to be an asshole to you, so I do it.

[TheToy]

Post your painted shit and let's compare the two?

It's just fun to me to be an asshole to you, so I do it.

Let's see your painted piece, Picasso...

[Fury]

Crits?
http://echostains.files.wordpress.com/2009/10/picasso-weeping-woman-1937.jpg

[zennegen]

FV doesn't post flicks on BS so nobody knows what he writes. and empty can, how do you not have paint? you live in the suburbs, you have money. take a bus to a dollar hookup spot. oh wait...

[-Empty-Can-]

i could also just go to a wallmart down the road ya know? but im not 18 so yeah...

[Flawless Victory]

You don't have to be 18 in MI.
Just go to a Michaels or some shit.

[Fury]

^ Oh Michaels, I love them. I don't even need to buy caps online anymore haha.
Downside: They're hiring, and I'm going to apply :|

[-Empty-Can-]

You don't have to be 18 in MI.
Just go to a Michaels or some shit.

not true. wallmart Id'd a friend when he got me paint before. never tried michaels

[Fury]

Try Lowes, I never get carded, even when I was underage.

[Flawless Victory]

not true. wallmart Id'd a friend when he got me paint before. never tried michaels
How the fuck is it not true?
MI is not JUST Wal Mart.

[-Empty-Can-]

dunno if meijer does. dont think so.
i would think most "restricted items" need ID

[CrustOner]

^ Oh Michaels, I love them. I don't even need to buy caps online anymore haha.
Downside: They're hiring, and I'm going to apply :|

That's not a downside, you're able to get into the paint markers now.

[Fury]

BUT I can't get caps. Oh well, I have enough anyway. And tonight I learned this: Krylon + Spray Adhesive cap = Flairyland.

[TheToy]

FV doesn't post flicks on BS so nobody knows what he writes.

The monkey's outta' the bottle man. We know.

[CrustOner]

Maybe he's changed it again, TheToy ;)

[Iele]

just some freestyle bombs

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9843/mar2.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/5741/mar3w.jpg
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4503/mar6m.jpg
http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/9512/mared.jpg

[zennegen]

empty can, you are truly a joke. me and FV went to a dollar spot on saturday and bought paint, no questions asked. if you can't buy it, rack it. if you're too pussy to rack it, find a fucking dollar store or local hardware store, it's not that hard. stop trying to justify your not painting because you "can't get paint". that's bullshit.

[TheToy]

Zen, you just started actually getting up with paint like a month ago...
Stop acting like you're an all city legend.

Shoulda' spent the extra dollar on black. Your 3D is fuckin' wack.

[-Empty-Can-]

Stores in the city are probably more lenient than the burbs. One of you are almost 18 anyway.

[Zest3]

empty can, you are truly a joke. me and FV went to a dollar spot on saturday and bought paint, no questions asked. if you can't buy it, rack it. if you're too pussy to rack it, find a fucking dollar store or local hardware store, it's not that hard. stop trying to justify your not painting because you "can't get paint". that's bullshit.
Oh, that's where the money for shipping went xD

[zaco]

i love the top pic iele

[zennegen]

Oh, that's where the money for shipping went xD

haha, sorry man. i got that money now though.

and thetoy, i've been tagging for a year now. now that it's warm i'm about to be painting like mad.

by the way, we had this idea of a scrap can piece, and it turns out that one full can and 2 close to dead cans weren't enough.

[-Sinn-]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture016.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture082-2.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture081-3.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture013.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture072-2.jpg

[drOping]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/566/1003168e.jpg

[viseversa101]

stock caps but tried my best >: (
top pick i know the outline in the s is far to big n the breaks look ackward in sum points, oh n forgot to color the face but...meh always tommarow
bottom pic isnt finished but all that exists, the stars with green r now proportioned and filled green...overall not too bad i dont think
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10787.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/memorycard012.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

Don't get ahead of yourself buddy. Dunno if that's you in the bottom pic but blur the doods face out.

[Flawless Victory]

***** you look too old to be doing shit that looks like that.

[Inlyn08]

Looks like some gay shit going on..
No homo. LOL

[TheToy]

***** you look too old to be doing shit that looks like that.

Who cares about an artists age and skill level. Dudes' is havin' fun and they down for the cause. 40yr olds got more ups than you, dog. Don't hate.

[markingz.]

empty can, you are truly a joke. me and FV went to a dollar spot on saturday and bought paint, no questions asked. if you can't buy it, rack it. if you're too pussy to rack it, find a fucking dollar store or local hardware store, it's not that hard. stop trying to justify your not painting because you "can't get paint". that's bullshit.
zenfuk ahahaaa

[SNAP!]

Scone-stay off freights for now, you got potential but your letters need work.

I'll stick to freights, You stick to the internet.

i freestyled that peice the thursday before that weekend, and developed it as we jammed.

ahhh, bombing science. where kids don't bench anywhere else!!

[massacreman]

if you think we all suck that much, why are you on here? why you post pieces when you cant take the crits from other members? just sayin.

[DADAR18]

just a shitty piece

[Inlyn08]

just a shitty piece

That middle shit between that D and A.. lose it.

[zennegen]

ah, this website is such a fucking joke. even the online store is wack as fuck.

[Jarret]

ah, this website is such a fucking joke. even the online store is wack as fuck.

lol...

[jigsawnovich]

My art review reprimanding toy graffiti writer, "DORKS."
http://jigsawnovich.blogspot.com/2010/03/american-anti-government-graffiti-and.html

[CrustOner]

Really? Trying too hard.

[Inlyn08]

My art review reprimanding toy graffiti writer, "DORKS."
http://jigsawnovich.blogspot.com/2010/03/american-anti-government-graffiti-and.html
This article did not make me laugh. However, the fact that "DORK" also means whale dick.. did make me laugh. So, I give "DORKS" a thumbs up.

[Sesh-it-up]

SI!!!
make them throws bigger sonn and youll be laughin

[smokeitup]

cant really see this, had to cut through a fence to do it...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MARCH2010085.jpg

[viseversa101]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_23454472bb1547129bae4ea817e34f18.jpg

[smokeitup]

^u only need to post your pieces once you know....

[viseversa101]

have i posted that b4? sry just wanted to partake in this thread atm, heres 1....
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/3-1.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

i like that fill vise

[viseversa101]

i like that fill vise

haha i still got that stencil too
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/4.jpg

[smokeitup]

cant really see this, had to cut through a fence to do it...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MARCH2010085.jpg

tried to get a better pic today:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC02192.jpg

[lord_plankton]

^u only need to post your pieces once you know....

says the one who quotes his own ugly stuff from last page just to show a better pic of it, id rather see the other dude post his shit 1000times...just sayin...

i like that stencil...

[Daz801]

vise lookin good but try keepin the letters the same size
dhode not too bad




crits on these?
quik throwie i did
http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P190310_1700.jpg

somthing i did to use up ends of cans
http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P190310_1742.jpg

[Fury]

Toys over toys, basically.
Work on bars, lose the highlights, do bookwork. <-------- to everyone on this page!

[MASE P_2s]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/Photo0077.jpg (http://s27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/?action=view&current=Photo0077.jpg)
yea i no the m's fucked up my brother was rushing me

[viseversa101]

not finished but overall u get the idea, it got dark so we left....any crits appreciated goin back tommarow afternoon to finish
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10847.jpg

[MASE P_2s]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/addd.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/m_7bd1a3205ca44968844dd6351e392ac9.jpg
sum of my crews fliks

[Nox IRL]

I know im a toy. I have only statred to try graffiti 2 months ago and this is the best i got so far. Cpnstructive criticism only plz. Oh and i know its Wigz style but im not that creative with my lettering yet.

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/1410/picture0006op.jpg

[CrustOner]

Wack. Go simpler. Use bars and learn them. keep the same consistency and thickness. Your structure is terrible, those extensions are wack, and do nothing for the piece. everything about that piece is wack. it also looks like you went over something with that bullshit, when there's plenty of room on the right.

EDIT: wow, that was meant for vice, but it works for everyone above me. -__-

[MASE P_2s]

bro if u just started writing work ur way up to peicing work on ur handstyle thn throwy thn peice its alot better n easier that way

[otter]

^this,the concept is so-so,if you straightened all the bars it would looked less bad



i'l make an ms paint edit for you tomorrow.



g'night

[Nox IRL]

Thanks Mase, Will do.

[MASE P_2s]

np nox

[Jwhite]

I know im a toy. I have only statred to try graffiti 2 months ago and this is the best i got so far. Cpnstructive criticism only plz. Oh and i know its Wigz style but im not that creative with my lettering yet.

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/1410/picture0006op.jpg

start with simples, dont bite wigz.

[massacreman]

NEVER EVER BITE GRAFFCREATOR .NET
i know someone who did and he mastered it, but then he tried to do some other style and he fucked up hard he has to start over again now.

[XXORtsald]

Who cares about an artists age and skill level. Dudes' is havin' fun and they down for the cause. 40yr olds got more ups than you, dog. Don't hate.

my nigggaaa

[XXORtsald]

http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/2009-10-31164334.jpg





http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/2009-09-30012231.jpg






fuck the system



http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/2009-10-24103108.jpg




http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/2009-10-04191959.jpg





pretty old shit right here, almost got popped hiting this shit up on US1

http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/blastvascruwstreetbondon260.jpg





old flicks




http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/blastedcuhz.jpg





http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/004penit.jpg





old tag from 06 first flair.



http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/l_988fda39285e65f48bb0cee292cd78f2.jpg





some bitch wanted graffiti on her car, she got pulled over plenty of times by gang unit after this one lololol.




http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/celestecar.jpg





tried o pain the monster logo but ran out of paint so i couldn't clean it up.



http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss4/blastroxx/Laiz025.jpg

[SiNe-VrL-516]

not finished but overall u get the idea, it got dark so we left....any crits appreciated goin back tommarow afternoon to finish
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10847.jpg

i think it looks sick so0 far

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/skewa.jpg

this is from when i was back at school, about 5 or 6 years ago. i couldnt write my usual tag because people knew me.

i had to jump this massive fence with spikes on it and get in there without being seen, i also dropped tags all around the school. when i went in the next day i didnt tell anyone but my close friends, people knew it was me but couldnt proove that i done it.

[CrustOner]

i think it looks sick so0 far

and that's why you're wack.

[Fury]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/skewa.jpg

this is from when i was back at school, about 5 or 6 years ago. i couldnt write my usual tag because people knew me.

i had to jump this massive fence with spikes on it and get in there without being seen, i also dropped tags all around the school. when i went in the next day i didnt tell anyone but my close friends, people knew it was me but couldnt proove that i done it.

You're stupid.

[massacreman]

i think smoke it up did that like 1 week ago and he dint have to jump a fence and hes still on elementary school

[viseversa101]

taggin a school still active is just retarded, ur closest friends if asked would rat on u for sure if pressured dont trust nebody. That is toy. The most i ever did to a school was run into the football field full of snow n write my name across it in snow with 420 below it.
Awesum thing was it was extra credit for history n i didnt have to take that exam either, i put 4:20 below it to but my high school was prodominately black so the kids thought it was hitlers b day instead of nation session day >P

[RES4]

taggin a school still active is just retarded, ur closest friends if asked would rat on u for sure if pressured dont trust nebody. That is toy. The most i ever did to a school was run into the football field full of snow n write my name across it in snow with 420 below it.
Awesum thing was it was extra credit for history n i didnt have to take that exam either, i put 4:20 below it to but my high school was prodominately black so the kids thought it was hitlers b day instead of nation session day >P

arent you the guy that did this?


that? haha
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/COPCARBOMB.jpg

[viseversa101]

what r u talkin about?

[RES4]

u called him toy for writin on his school

[viseversa101]

this is what im talkin about, yea i called him toy for writing on a school.
arent you the guy that did this?

[RES4]

arnt you toy for writin in a cop car. if youl get caught for writin on your school and puttin it on the internet you would definately get caught for writin on a cop car

[viseversa101]

Im not sayin hes toy and subject to getting caught5, yea i pointed out his friends would rat on him if pressured cuz thats how grade school kids r im pointing out the fact its on a school building, u dont write on school building/churches things like that. theres nothing in it its just wrong. The whole cop car incodent ur reffering to i dont understand what ur talking about.


arnt you toy for writin in a cop car. if youl get caught for writin on your school and puttin it on the internet you would definately get caught for writin on a cop car

[Fury]

You posted a picture of yourself writing on a cop car and he's calling you a stupid hypocrite for it.

[LeaksOne]

i think hes trying to act like that wasnt him hahaha

[gumOnShoe]

@ The Jackass who wrote on a cop car to look cool.
LMAO, now that pic of you is NEVER leaving the internet, good job. ;)

[weakfingers]

the last few pictures have been really funny. Tagging a cop car is the dumbest thing you can do. Have fun in the v&.

[RedEyes]

Bombing churches is where its at! and my senior prank was me and a few kids hit up the schools with seniors and our class year.

[gumOnShoe]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/skewa.jpg

this is from when i was back at school, about 5 or 6 years ago. i couldnt write my usual tag because people knew me.

i had to jump this massive fence with spikes on it and get in there without being seen, i also dropped tags all around the school. when i went in the next day i didnt tell anyone but my close friends, people knew it was me but couldnt proove that i done it.

i lol'd at this.

[CrustOner]

Bombing churches is where its at! and my senior prank was me and a few kids hit up the schools with seniors and our class year.

Captain Originality!

[Inlyn08]

Tag a police station.
You'll be immortalized.

[TheToy]

What are you bitches babblin' about?

If someone hits up a cop car, don't hate. If they feel like they're doin' their part for the movement, who cares? Ya'll whine and bitch and moan about graffiti. Go out and get your names up and partake in graffiti. You're not at risk so fuck it. Shit's funny.

It happens all the time. Youtube it. I see Dunkin Donut slaps on cop cars. I see cruisers with handstyles every now and then. People shoot at the police stations where I'm from. God forbid scribble on a car. Ya'll suprised someone got the balls to fuck with the law?

[Sesh-it-up]

lol dumb fuck! why do u still come on bs havnt u learned the graff game aint ment for you?? some just cant handle it so i think its time to go home now sonn. (cop car kid and the fuckin toy under me)

[gumOnShoe]

GET AT ME *****S
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1068/1107977743_67c3f25f83.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

i take paint from toys like you.

[CrustOner]

The whole last page was fucking hilarity. Jesus Christ.
I'll start this page off with a mediocre simp from a homie.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/11/l_a331d9da957a49b4a8ba76bebe1e153a.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

poor paint.. the cement ate that shit right up

[CrustOner]

Not to mention it was Color Place.. haha.

[TheToy]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3124
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3123
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3184

I think I might be getting somewhere with that 'R'.
I'm dissapointed with GO2's lately. They never used to clog on me. I used one with some Molotow for that pink outline and it was horrible. I've had problems with Piglet Pink before. I know there's a lot of extra pigment in that color. I've had straws clog with silicone and then be fine a few days later... I dunno. Anyone get that problem with certain colors? And I shook it for a good 5 minutes to avoid this problem. I put a GO4 on to finish and it was wayyyyyy cleaner.

[CrustOner]

The only good R I see is the first one. Remember to keep the leg of the R over the next letter, not under.

[TheToy]

I think the 'R' in the bottom picture is the cleanest because I've had problems with the placement of the right leg that comes out at the forty-five degree angle.

I knew something was off with that last one. When I got home and uploaded the picture I figured it out. It fudges the whole flow of that overlap. I've gotta' slow down and think about what I'm doing.

[CrustOner]

I think you should try slightly bending all of your base bars (the part that the rest comes out of) a little bit to the right. and thicken them up too. That'll give you some flow.
The T on that last piece is the only bend, and it looks a little goofy.

[TheToy]

Word. That's a good idea. Thanks, man.

You're right about the 'T'. It looks like a fish hook. Haha.

I'm gonna' sketch that bend right now. I'm gonna' post in Toy BB cause it's not painted and I complain about that. :p

[Fury]

Not to mention it was Color Place.. haha.

Fuck Color Place in the ass. Never had anything good happen with it.
As for OWNR - It looks alright, could use work.

Rewt - Don't overlap the R! Looks clean though

[soath]

my shitty straight letter:
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/P2160027.jpg
my friend drew this for me: i fucked up the S inside the O and the A is missing a line, and the paint job sucks... rushin and no CC.
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/P3080022.jpg

[Bets369R]

rewt, also i would bring the loop part of the R down.

kinda like this
http://i40.tinypic.com/bhduds.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

^^^ yess

[Fury]

Holy shit that's amazing. Like for real, it fits perfectly.

[MASE P_2s]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/0327101247-00.jpg
p2s kids

[RES4]

shitty picture. characters nice tho

[MASE P_2s]

yea i no imma try n make it better pb n repost n thnks

[XXORtsald]

wtf... testing testing 1 2 3.

[TheToy]

wtf... testing testing 1 2 3.

I'm assuming it won't let you post pictures, either?

Fury, you're right. I get stuck in my old ways. Lol.

Bets, that does fit perfectly. Thanks, man.

[Sesh-it-up]

you guys are on crackk

[TheToy]

you guys are on crackk

You're a troll.

Contribute through crits, artwork, or graffiti discussion. If not, please do not spam.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3124
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3123
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3184

Still seeking crits on 'R' progression.

[-Empty-Can-]

^you should be doing the same =D

so should I.

[Sesh-it-up]

you R's on crack in the third pic.

[-Empty-Can-]

Is that your barney charac in the third pic under that roll call?

[TheToy]

Is that your barney charac in the third pic under that roll call?

Mhmm. Someone found a scrap can and scribbled over his face. Then someone tried to do a two piece over it and ran out of paint. Lol.

[Sesh-it-up]

i woulda capped it too. hows that for the last word.

[weakfingers]

The toy, You have to bring out your R from the E and keep it on the corner and also work on you T by keeping it straight, Start with a new style youve been posting the exact same style for months now take it to the next level with some addons or small extentions.

[TheToy]

The toy, You have to bring out your R from the E and keep it on the corner and also work on you T by keeping it straight, Start with a new style youve been posting the exact same style for months now take it to the next level with some addons or small extentions.

Yeah man. You're right. You give me harsh crits but you got me thinkin' about trying some new things. Crust also took part in that. I just wanted to make sure I really knew my four letters basic form.

I've been sketching single letters with small extensions and then using a drop shadow or 3D for practice.

My biggest fault in the past was getting in over my head. Now I'm timid...

Thanks for the crit.

[weakfingers]

Id just say for the next step work on making your bars thicker, finding new ways to draw the letter,lean the letters in one way, repitition of simmiler letter structure, things liek that. I find searching graffiti picture sites helps you find alot of base structures to work new letter forms with existing oves.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

dont be timid. be aggressive. you dont get anywhere in graff with timidness. go balls deep. i dont think your 100% ready to start fucking around with extensions yet. fuck around with your letters first. dont go apeshit but play with bar thickness, going thin to thick, slanting your letters and other things like that. then start adding cracks and bits and shit after you've worked on your letters some. just my thoughts.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/0323001048-1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/0323001045-1.jpg

EDIT lol you got to it before me :P

[weakfingers]

geah!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2778/4465278131_663d304794.jpg

[Sp!ff]

geah!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2778/4465278131_663d304794.jpg

dude, that's sick... i love the expression!

[Inlyn08]

geah!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2778/4465278131_663d304794.jpg

I lol'd at the shovel thing

[Nox IRL]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8295/picture0009g.jpgIts horrible :D. Any tips on how to improve this ?

[RES4]

^ forget everything. just do straight letters to start.

theres a thread somewhere that explains bars and stuff but i cant find it, sumone help me out

edit: here (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185&highlight=graffiti)

[Nox IRL]

K thanks res. I have been looking but there is so many threads 2 look through :confused:

[shem]

quick 20 min messiness...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2728/4471081138_4da256bc1e.jpg


standing in three inches of water...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4016/4471081142_66b2a4a8b8.jpg
proportions look off in this pic but its just the angle i couldnt get far enough back its in a tunnel.

[Sesh-it-up]

i like that top one shem looks like a heaty spot

[zennegen]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8295/picture0009g.jpgIts horrible :D. Any tips on how to improve this ?

hmm. try adding more arrows. i like what you got so far, keep it up.

[Sesh-it-up]

lawl^

[viseversa101]

sum extentions look like heads of diks imo

[zennegen]

y'all *****s some haters.

[Inlyn08]

sum extentions look like heads of diks imo

*Facepalm*

[suparjafar]

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

[Werse]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8295/picture0009g.jpgits horrible :d. Any tips on how to improve this ?

this is bome i can tell by the b

[RedEyes]

lol i paint with a dude who wrights BUTCH and this is just horrible!

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

shoulda gone bigger with the two letter, i like tho keep it up.

[Fury]

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

I hate your E in your tag. It just makes me feel like it loses all flow right there. Also, try spraying closer to the wall, unless your paint sucks dick.

I'm not really fond of the small holes in your throws, but hey, if you like that style, go for it.

[Sesh-it-up]

dude the E is mint. matches ery thang but yea lose the dots and i like the far away slopy look.

[suparjafar]

I hate your E in your tag. It just makes me feel like it loses all flow right there. Also, try spraying closer to the wall, unless your paint sucks dick.

I'm not really fond of the small holes in your throws, but hey, if you like that style, go for it.

yeah dude my paint sucked dick that day.

and the tag i really fucked up bad. its supposed to look like this

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0312.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0334.jpg

[LeaksOne]

why do you tag so small?

and you should work on the R in your throw.

[Fury]

That was a marker? I thought it was really bad spray paint lol

[suparjafar]

it was bad paint...and im working on the r...i have mental block. anyone wanna help me out? no r's seem to flow/balance with the rest of my throw.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0343.jpg

[smokeitup]

you've already posted these same pics like 20 times already, what do u want????

[suparjafar]

i posted two previously posted pictures to show example of a tag and bumped my post. i want help with my r.

[TheToy]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2901
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3121
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2814
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2835
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2838
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2808
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2993
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2998
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2999
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3126
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2784
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2789
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2790
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2942
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2943
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2796
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=2941

[Werse]

That R needs work.

[TheToy]

That R needs work.

I like it.

[smokeitup]

yeah i was gonna say, i dont like that R. try a different R.

[Xfish]

idk i like the uppercase one dont know bout the lowercase one

[TheToy]

yeah i was gonna say, i dont like that R. try a different R.
He just said this. Why bother gettin' yours in?


idk i like the uppercase one dont know bout the lowercase one

Word. The lowercase needs practice but it's gettin' there.

[smokeitup]

coz i felt like it?

[BlacktodaFuture]

rewt: honestly i dont like your lower case throw at all and your upper case isnt much better. to much going on.

[TheToy]

rewt: honestly i dont like your lower case throw at all and your upper case isnt much better. to much going on.

Thanks for your opinion.

How about some real crits for once?

I've got enough of the 'That R needs work' and 'I don't like your throw' crits...

If you dog it, tell me why. And how I can improve it.

Otherwise, ya'll just hatin'.

[CrustOner]

Scrap it homie. The R is weak and has bad posture, the E is fat looking with too many tumors, the W is alright, and the T is too simple.

[TheToy]

Scrap it homie. The R is weak and has bad posture, the E is fat looking with too many tumors, the W is alright, and the T is too simple.

Thank you. This is what I'm looking for. I just wrote that down in my blackbook.

[CrustOner]

For sure man.

[Hepatitis]

I don't know why everyone rags on your throw. got to say i look up to your work and really admire it having tried painting a few times haha. i do think the one E does look whack but the RE 2 letter is fresh as fuck.

[Flawless Victory]

......Did you just say you tried biting his shit?
Why would you want to bite ANYONE on the toy forum, let alone admit to it?

[Jwhite]

I don't know why everyone rags on your throw. got to say i look up to your work and really admire it having tried painting a few times haha. i do think the one E does look whack but the RE 2 letter is fresh as fuck.

http://i43.tinypic.com/6ghcnl.jpg

[Fury]

......Did you just say you tried biting his shit?
Why would you want to bite ANYONE on the toy forum, let alone admit to it?

I think he means he's only painted a few times, of his own name. I thought that same way also, but if you reread it a few time and add in some imaginary grammar, you'll see what I mean.

[markingz.]

Thank you. This is what I'm looking for. I just wrote that down in my blackbook.
hey toy aka king shit, your throw is trash, your straight letters are descent