Walls

[Shroomsh]

an old piece, not me in the photo aha >.<

[Phillip McDougall]

can u point out what exactly is wrong with the letter structure, i think all the bars are where they're supposed to be.
my 3d aint off sucka... where do u see it's off? do point it out ô_o and i do fill side to side, also if u can, point out to me where do you see the problem

Really? fuck I have to fucking spell it out for you?
http://i56.tinypic.com/14tbmmt.png
Red is letter structure. The Green is fill. The White is 3D. Just go simpler and get your structure correct. Then learn to flare bars EVENLY. If they're not flared evenly, the piece will look like shit. Look:
http://i402.photobucket.com/albums/pp106/makineasykills/P1030117copy.jpg
Look how Mek flares bars. He makes them get bigger in places where it'll compliment the piece and have structure, and still look good. The extensions are even and comfortable, and compliment the piece. and his letters have character, and not "I'm a flaccid penis" character, like your P.

[MoganOne]

Listen to him Phat2... There is still hope lol

[skinaone]

23235
need crits?

[PermanentMarkers]

Skina, the only suggestion i'm gonna make is keep the horizontal bars on your S, K and N the same size. Right now the S and K are alot skinnier than the N

[Skope2]

First ever bomb! Decided to take some time away from the sketch pad. I realise this is pretty piss poor but I just wanted to know if this is looking alright for a beginner you know? Bear in mind I dont have anyone else to paint with so I cant get tips as I paint.
The M is shit. Infact I think the K is the only average letter there.

[SK2]

http://s42.radikal.ru/i098/1105/17/065349ece6f7.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)



http://s43.radikal.ru/i101/1105/07/d4dbab284ac6.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[FlatScank]

could have done better on this one....I'll redeem myself of thursday for this one.

[Fury]

Your L is insanely hard to read. Take out that extension in the middle and the top.

[lostyoursense]

could have done better on this one....I'll redeem myself of thursday for this one.

work you letters before adding arrows and extensions

[Phat 2]

SK2 holy fuck respect to that huuuuge heavy masssive shit mann :D

[RES4]

could have done better on this one....I'll redeem myself of thursday for this one.

would be nicer with a solid fill and i thought the l was an e

[SK2]

SK2 holy fuck respect to that huuuuge heavy masssive shit mann :D

thanx:) in the russian provinces lot of clean walls and free paint)

http://s58.radikal.ru/i160/1105/a1/d749ef3717ac.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://i032.radikal.ru/1105/21/7abe45102f20.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://s004.radikal.ru/i208/1105/0e/3c4d9a61f2c1.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[Nemo2]

if you mans dont mind, I'd like to bump this for some crits. thanks, much appreciated

The green throwie is sick, personally i dont like the peice too much, it looks a little like you've had to try too hard to squeeze all the letters together, and tried to make them fit together a bit too much. The fill and colours are sick though :)

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

alright cool, no worries mans :) we'll keep the painted throws here, but just the nice ones

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/222935_216639401696310_100000507545549_807071_3877 936_n.jpg

do what you do man. dont listen to heads tellin you to flare your bars like mek. youre not mek. dont do what he does. in terms of your pieces. try to make the letters flow together in a uniform pattern. all to the left. all to the right. itll be easier to understand flow when its all the same direction, rather than having some go left, some go straight. some lean to the right.

follow through with your linework. your P for example. the top of the bar is forced inwards too soon if your gonna try and bring it down the the level you did. if you were to look at your letter as a person, it would have little balance because the bottom extension is too heavy. too much weight on it. same with the extension on the right side of your Z. it gets in the way of the letter and is blocky, clunky and overweight. make it slimmer.

jenny craig for extensions. your HAT are all pointing upwards, but the bars are not going in the same direction. the bars of your H spread out at the top like im peelin a girls legs open. it can work if you do it properly. but your not. the angle is too forced. no flow. the bits and chunks in the bars arnt fly. theyre poorly done. chips are a good idea, but forced equilateral triangles dont look naturally if it were a rock with chips outta it. which is what you should be going for.

remember to keep everything natural, forcing shit makes it ugly. make the top bar of your T bigger. its the defining bar in a T. put it right at the top too. maybe a funky curve and have it swoop behind your Z. who knows, all up to you. youve got two styles going on with your Z. a blocky teched out stiffed bar Z with a loop that gives the idea that it belongs in a smoother curved letter. the two dont go well together id say.

dont make the curve in your bars so drastic. that causes the forced look. make your lines more consistent by keeping the angle smooth when curving. im not saying straighten your bars. but when curving a line. make it consistent by following through. like a circle. the curve is consistent becauses there are no deviations or "bumps" in the line. its smooth. make sure youre lines are smooth when curving them. dont "bump" them. thats what makes it look rough and gritty.

hopefully thats some helpful insight. iunno if it all makes sense. im just typing and hoping theres little typos.

[skinaone]

them russians be on fire

[Phat 2]

now that's what I call crits!
thanks a whole lot guy. very helpful :)

although just a couple things: that's a 2, not a Z
and there arent any chips or anything in the fill... it's the purple fill in the back, then over it is dark blue slime sticking to the inner walls of the bars, and then over that is a light blue splotch in the middle of the A with drips spreading across the piece, over the purple and dark blue

anyhow, thanks a bunch for the help, I'll take it all into consideration :)

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

the chips on the inside right bar of the H. above the middle bar.

[SK2]

http://i061.radikal.ru/1105/8c/eebc0116143e.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://s58.radikal.ru/i159/1105/0c/24ae4b02e780.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[FlatScank]

Cracked Candy

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

damn that orange and black has some clean cuts
flat those hearts are wack

[my.favorite.addiction]

Bump mother Russia/
Is FOS a name,or a crew?
Either way,keep handling biz!

[Phat 2]

is it FOS or 705? either way, I'm pretty sure it's his crew.

[skinaone]

705 i think

[SK2]

yes, its my crew 705 (reading as sem'sot p'yat), and my nick is АБС (reading as abs)


http://s47.radikal.ru/i118/1105/f8/9863a5efc38b.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://s43.radikal.ru/i099/1105/fd/228fdc2ff36c.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://i012.radikal.ru/1105/64/503305d1a229.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[Shade.1]

Бля цыфры 705 ты лутше льеш намного чем абц))) Или это не только твои работы?

[SK2]

это старые просто скинул) завтра новых выложу))

[SicK-]

Cracked Candy

hey man how much do you spend on paint. cause i know around here that high quality paint is expensive as FUCK, and impossible to rack.

[Phat 2]

shade and sk2, please keep it in english, or head to each other's inboxes

[mekosbc]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0466.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0464.jpg

[Lukys7en]

23513
Any ideas?

[FlatScank]

hey man how much do you spend on paint. cause i know around here that high quality paint is expensive as FUCK, and impossible to rack.

21 euros for 6 cans of Mont Black, since the HQ is located in the city I live by.

[SK2]

http://s46.radikal.ru/i111/1105/e7/2a25e005cdf2.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[H1P30N3R]

props meko really diggin the blue 1 man

[skinaone]

nice meko

[SK2]

http://s54.radikal.ru/i143/1105/62/410836f3b012.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[Phat 2]

Killer !

[HeklrToo]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0466.jpg

Shit, Meko.... that's dope. Mad progression.

[mekosbc]

word thanks for the props from every body...

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0110.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0111.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0108.jpg

[Fury]

Does that say PUSOE?

[ChadWarden]

ill be damned if it doesnt say pesoe.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0101.jpg

[ribcage]

giggidy giggidy giggidy giggidy lets have sex

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sr-0-El9cqs

[skinaone]

giggidy giggidy giggidy giggidy lets have sex

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sr-0-el9cqs

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

[dankbudz]

lol.. quagmire

did this a bit ago, was gunna fix up the S and the 3d on it, but never got around to it.
disregard the shit ass tag
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0509111404.jpg

[FlatScank]

That Quagmire character is sick
@ Sed, looks cool, but painting and sketching are two different things, if you paint more often, even that solid straight could be alot cleaner, oh and cuts are important for making things cleaner.

Done with scrap cans layin' around in my room.

[skinaone]

nice take the arrow off the F and the top extension on the F
L pretty steazy but the arrow makes it look like an E
heart on the A doesn't flow at all and its leaning to much IMO
T looks like a G you can do a better T then that
overall nice clean lines the best fill you have is the L looks much better then all the busyness go in onn in there

[ierkpeople]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/graff/September-05_1011.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/graff/August-01_1352.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/graff/168345_10150178664089622_609114621_8766360_6492031 _n.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/graff/162643_10150149862514622_609114621_8291394_3511351 _n.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/graff/40856_476608254621_609114621_6696697_6053424_n.jpg

[Fury]

FLAT - Your L and T look mad similar. A is kinda far of the L.

[FlatScank]

ERK, those are some rockin' fills, nice clean cuts.

[skinaone]

IMO i dont think fills should be that busy
but those are some clean lines

[FlatScank]

single tone fills are alright, but I find that it doesn't make the piece vibrent, which is why I'm not a huge fan of Chrome, it makes the letters pop, but doesn't make the letters look interesting.

[HeklrToo]

single tone fills are alright, but I find that it doesn't make the piece vibrent, which is why I'm not a huge fan of Chrome, it makes the letters pop, but doesn't make the letters look interesting.

If you're relying on color to make your letters interesting then you better hit the books harder...
Your letters should be interesting due to their structure and composition.
White fills. Black outlines.
Keep it grimey.

Some toys seem to go for wild fills to distract the viewer from their lack of letter structure.
This 'auto-distraction' seems to happen subconsciously in most cases.
Been there. Done that.
Don't tell me that's not what you toys are up to.

[Phat 2]

amen to that... amen to that
ERk, that's some cool shit u got going on there my man. props on the blue piece. like :)

[Fury]

I love the pieces that are like desert or space related though. The ones that make you feel like you're actually looking through the letters, you know what I mean? Like, ones with just funky shapes in it are all well and good, but they're too busy and basically meaningless. One-two toned pieces are radical. If you can rock a solid white fill with some amazing letter structure, it looks simple yet complex as fuck, which usually leads to awesome.

[SK2]

http://i056.radikal.ru/1105/f7/7167b5c0d069.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[ierkpeople]

thanks for the good crits bros an flat ur shits cripsy too except for that one extension on ur L it just really (erks) me

[skinaone]

work on your letter structure ma ***** ( de silver one)
th first one is OK

[slik.as.sike]

so what needs work bro,

[skinaone]

24194
try letters likt that first
i know your a girl and erthing but hit the books a bit more :)
work on simples ALLL DAY
then develop your style cause the letter structure aint good but youll get there dont worrie "bro?"

[FlatScank]

so what needs work bro,

everything, stay in the books until you can come up with something more solid.

[BRER]

^ no hate, but i find it ironic that you say that. (you have mad can control. waaaaaaaaaaaay better than me... you should put it to better use than what you currently are doing.)

@Sike you should do what skina said. the S in the one with the cat is decent, but the rest of the letters dont work with it at all. try to figure out letter structure in a blackbook before you go and use paint. also work on your tag.

[mont]

trying the simpler mode

[skinaone]

ok goood but make them the same size and the same style A is the best letter you ahve

[ian]

http://cl.ly/3n0x0816461X3U13151C/Screen_shot_2011-05-25_at_9.35.44_PM.png

been practicing painting, gettin to the point where shits real bad but not too bad to post. Also idk if any of you have Ollie's Outlet around you but they got a ton of paint there and everything is 99 cents. It's usually odd colors but its not terrible, found a bunch of old krylon and a couple valspar cans. they have a lot of those ground marking cans too meant for painting lines on the ground for like construction and shit which im assuming are pointless, i didnt get any of that, but imma keep goin at it and practicing. Also ISHO check the new to graff thread, that piece is not only terrible, its in the wrong thread

[skinaone]

once again take the extra bump on the N the O is good
i use shit paint and it dont matter i think thats a load of shit when people say ( this throw came out like shit cause of the crappy paint)
it aint the paint just the person that uses it

[FlatScank]

@ Ian, you shouldn't be rocking two letters unless your pretty up in whatever city your in, so maybe do full throws?

[HeklrToo]

@ Ian, you shouldn't be rocking two letters unless your pretty up in whatever city your in, so maybe do full throws?

Umm... ok?
What graffiti rulebook are reading?

Why not?

They're quick... easy... get the name up.... great for toys.
Especially when you're short on paint.
I'm sure people in his city are gonna' know who did it. The 'N' he uses is pretty different, people would figure it out.

I could say: You probably shouldn't be piecing until you get your letter structure down pat...but who am I to talk?

There are no rules in this game.

[ian]

yahh dawg I always end up makin shit too big and then i dont have room for the whole thing so i just stop at the 2 letters, plus i didnt have that much paint at the time. And skina as far as paint goes theres definitely a difference in quality between some paints, I mean i haven't used any of the good stuff before but even the difference between rusto and dollar cans is noticeable (IMO). If you're good, youll be able to rock cheap paint just fine but for me just starting i get less coverage and more drips and stuff using dollar cans than rusto, I just need practice though. Im workin full time now so that should put some money in the bank and I should be able to get more paint and be able to practice more. I'm pretty much broke right now though. I'll be postin up more shit as i do it....stay tuned

[mont]

there definitely is a difference in paint. when you buy a 99cent can and waste the whole thing because it wont cover and just drips everywhere, its quite hard to get a good piece. as soon as i got some ironlak lines were clean and spent a lot less time trying to clean up the edges

[mekosbc]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0014.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0016.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0002.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0011.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0021.jpg

[FlatScank]

damn Meko, that yellow/white piece is fresh as fuck.

[mekosbc]

word thanks

[Phat 2]

they have a lot of those ground marking cans too meant for painting lines on the ground for like construction and shit which im assuming are pointless
actually those are some of the best paints, they're super opaque, cover really good, and dry fast.
you should've done the math on spot and taken some of that shit if its cheap. it's the paint they use for heavy duty stuff, like drawing lines on the road. that shit gets rolled on by cars all day all year and they barely fade, not to mention how much heat it withstands from the sun hitting the asphalt under it thoe whole day. and tons of rain etc...
bad mistake :P

[skinaone]

MEKO freshhhhhhhhh shit but the throw needs work IMO i dont like it M looks weird E looks hella ugly and the K is covering it up to much Ks ok O could be better

[ian]

actually those are some of the best paints, they're super opaque, cover really good, and dry fast.
you should've done the math on spot and taken some of that shit if its cheap. it's the paint they use for heavy duty stuff, like drawing lines on the road. that shit gets rolled on by cars all day all year and they barely fade, not to mention how much heat it withstands from the sun hitting the asphalt under it thoe whole day. and tons of rain etc...
bad mistake :P

i can just head back and pick up a few its not a big deal, but how can you paint with those caps? or do they come off and you can put other caps on

[ribcage]

^they come off, and depending on the brand you can put your own on. Rusto ones are prime for fills, nice pressure

[mekosbc]

That's not mine.... some kid from my area is writting melo and is tryin to bite my stuff and is failing... so when I see his stuff I cover his L with a K....

[H1P30N3R]

shit is fire meko the highlights fill everything ...

[Fury]

Meko, shit is hot.

And I do pieces with dollar cans all the time. Not about to spend $5-6 for paint when I'm not even getting extensions yet.

[weakfingers]

Flat, you suck at graffiti. Seriously. Learn some letter structure, flow, and learn where to put your god damned extensions. fuck.


THIS!

Phat, I feel your at the next point at graff when your moving from toy to intermediate, you got bars down but, anything you do past a simple just looks like garbage, dont get caught in the toy loop. its all way to common in this game, step up to the next level and focus on your style, its gonna take a long time and alot of hard work but the work you put in will come out!

and Hecklr, there aint a book of rules but there's definatly things that will tarnish your name and will make you look like an idiot.... but you wouldent know about that wouldent you.(that was a joke)

[HeklrToo]

Hecklr, there aint a book of rules .... but you wouldent know about that wouldent you.(that was a joke)

For someone with such a sense of humor, I don't know how the 'graffiti rulebook' joke went over your head...

[serk757]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEK.jpg

can control.. not so much. ran out of paint in the k to.

[skinaone]

reek?
R looks like a T fist E dont look like an E second E is tight K is to fat at eh bottom and th bar on top cpould be closer to de main bar of the K


That's not mine.... some kid from my area is writting melo and is tryin to bite my stuff and is failing... so when I see his stuff I cover his L with a K....
oh ok ok nice then :D ahahah

[serk757]

raek.

lower case a. i can see how u would think thats a T. never looked at it from that perspective. no ones ever brought it to my attention either

and yea i been writing the k more evenly. its just trial and error man.


old heads sayin its got potential tho

[aaesoo]

the R looks like a P to me, , although now i know it's an R i can see it, definitely needs work though. I'm feeling the a though and the E K aren't bad either, although like skinna said the bottoms kinda fat.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

single tone fills are alright, but I find that it doesn't make the piece vibrent, which is why I'm not a huge fan of Chrome, it makes the letters pop, but doesn't make the letters look interesting.

a 20 colored fill dosent mean you have style. if your letters suck, so will your piece. people who dont write get distracted by colors.. heads that do write, and write well, wont.

do a chrome or a white fill. you'll see what you need to work on.

[serk757]

i really appreciate the critacizm. its funny bc i have so much pride in that R but everybodys like "that shits dirty, spread the legs, slant that shit more, PAEK?" haha. im post some more tomarrow tho. just got a hold of some caps so well see whats good

[Dirtone1:]

for beggining :)
done in the dark

http://www.shrani.si/t/16/L4/2oU8BcD3/1/2011mb2.jpg (http://www.shrani.si/?16/L4/2oU8BcD3/1/2011mb2.jpg)

[serk757]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEK1-1.jpg

once again. ran out of paint in the outline haha.




btw FOUR LOKO IS THE 5TH ELEMENT OF HIP HOP

[serk757]

for beggining :)
done in the dark

http://www.shrani.si/t/16/L4/2oU8BcD3/1/2011mb2.jpg (http://www.shrani.si/?16/L4/2oU8BcD3/1/2011mb2.jpg)


AIR?
i would watch out for that funky extention on the R.

other than that your style will progress with time

[Phat 2]

@ Raek, im diggin that.
but you need to be cleaner with your can control
R definitely needs more definition in the leg area
the intersection in the A is messin with it's shape. go ahead and bite CAP's A, it's fine.
the E is good, but it's bottom blob needs to be fatter to the right so that it aligns with the top bar
and the K just needs a few tweaks here and there. can't get my finger on what it EXACTLY needs, but I can say that it's def in it's hind leg

[serk757]

yea i no im lacking can control, once again with the trial and error thing. not sure if ur sayin i bit caps A or if i should. either way i didnt and i wont. i can see the simalarities tho.

but the k and the r are a tough flow for me, with my style. ur right tho it is in the hind leg. thanks b

[FlatScank]

latest piece, outline could have been cleaner.

[Fury]

Flat, try and make all of your spines on your letters like your F, not at different angles. Your L is too far back, and it and the T look like Z's

[Phat 2]

not sure if ur sayin i bit caps A or if i should
I'm sayin you should use it. it's a great throw A, and it definitely goes nice with your shit man. I know you might not like using other people's letters, but I think you should at least give it a shot on paper, who knows you might like it. besides biting one letter is fine imo, it's no big deal, especially if you play around with it until you make something fo your own out it.
you know? use it as a base. it's a very good one.

Meko and co. enough with that shit plz. thx

[lord_plankton]

the angles is not the problem, they r fine. actually the l a t are kinda good except their stupid extensions. f is just a fag letter in general. but man work your fills!! they are horrible as always!

[H1P30N3R]

^^ quit hatin on dude yeah his shit needs work all of our shit needs work give legit crits and explanations. Rather than trying to be a funny guy toys hatin on other toys just make you a super toy. I just dont think anyone that belongs in the toy forum should be critting other writers unless it is constructive. Thats why you have 2 ears and 1 mouth talk less and listen more.

[ierkpeople]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110523-00099.jpg

[ian]

http://cl.ly/2q2r2A0I3P0H292B2j1T/Screen_shot_2011-05-30_at_7.31.45_PM.png
http://cl.ly/1A15123x2F0b2V2A0q2f/Screen_shot_2011-05-30_at_7.31.21_PM.png
http://cl.ly/2Z071K350K0C2Z0Q4505/Screen_shot_2011-05-30_at_7.32.09_PM.png

just fuckin around, tryin to work on my can control


ERK that looks kinda like EAK, careful with that R. Also the top right bar of the K should be fatter

Flat i've given up givin you crits. You're painting itself is quite good, your letters need a lot of work, end of story

[MoganOne]

wtf that USA looks retarded man you have not have posted that

[FlatScank]

@Ian: This is why it's worth more painting than sketching, even though my letters are wack, I can do something that clean and looks half decent, painting is different from sketching, the more you actually paint, the cleaner/better your work will come out, the only good flick you posted was your throw.

[pointman]

drunken antics even though its sloppy i like it haha

[ian]

haha thanks for keepin it real my dudes, I'm not happy with anything i've done so far but its all about practice, and flat i know what youre sayin but clean painting and bright colors are not what graffiti is about, i'd much rather see a black and white piece with good letters than something with terrible extensions and form with a loud colorful fill

[borone]

first bomb in a long time i mean a long time that why i'm posting here. please let me know what yall think. more flicks soon.24551

[Task977]

Bor - The B and the O are good but the R's legs are indented a bit at the bottom, make them more flat.
I have garbage can control and I cant get the proportions right. On top of that I never use my left index finger so its hard to keep the cap all the way down. What can I do to fix this? Im running out of black so all I can paint is hollows
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9666/dsc00009qb.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/823/dsc00009qb.jpg/)

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[Phat 2]

dirrrty

[borone]

sorry new to this..

here we go.....246062460724608

[CESP.one]

haha i recognize those mountains. I-10 right?

[serk757]

dope E. i like that strait letter to. just remember to keep ur letters concistant. like the e dips down alot lower than the s. etc..

bor its just generic man. just need to develop ur style more

[pokerking]

http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/93/img2427r.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/824/img2427r.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

started some weeks ago

[Fury]

Pokering, you have fucking Belton?
Get some dollar cans and save the good shit for later. Check the new to graff thread.

[pokerking]

Pokering, you have fucking Belton?
Get some dollar cans and save the good shit for later. Check the new to graff thread.

My problem is that we didn´t have dollar cans in germany

cheapest cans are ironlak

[pointman]

t side

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

dont let the letters angle uupwards and you look like a fucking queer posing

[EndingTotalSocial]

Crits on my friends stuff
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5179/5455263695_e6fafc63e6.jpg

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5300/5455876574_f7b69850a5.jpg
good stuff :p

[aaesoo]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3343/5803628871_7bbcec73c8_b.jpg

this is about my 4th or 5th thing i've done with paint that hasn't been a throwie or tag. i think i should've tried to do a fade rather than the shitty drip-fill-thing, and maybe switched around the blues so the lighter one was on top? the shadows fucked up too. idk tell me what you guys think.

[2mor]

latest piece, outline could have been cleaner.

flat you can control seems decent and the piece is clean as....colours are nice, but your t fucking sucks mate, you need to sort them out they always look like g's or c's n shit never like a t, fix that n youll be sweet

[FlatScank]

Quicky Burner.

[ironcrack]

thats no burner. but its ok

[2mor]

FLAT!!! you really need to stop posting or take some fucking crits, your paintings fine, but your letters suck, mainly cos of the shitty fuckin extensions on the a and t, you just keep posting the same fuckin piece in different colours, when everyone tells you your letters suck! either do something about it or stop postin mann.....

[mekosbc]

FLATS-lookin funky fresh like always

and i know my letters go big to small but there was a concept to it.. like i was suppose to go big to small and then LIME was suppose to go small to big kinda have it look like \__/ but he forgot to do it haha oh well fuck it.. its up...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0036.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0035.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0031.jpg

[dankbudz]

practice on some cardboard
yes... lots of drips

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/downsized_0607111340a.jpg
I just did the lettering... that is not me in the pic

[dankbudz]

that looks sick but im not really feelin the one part of thinness on the N
looks to rigid for how swoopy your other letters are

[toopski]

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2918/imag0138i.jpg

first piece ive done in 3 years, note aftermath of rain + ironlak dont mix, U looks better front on but what the hell

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2254/imag0140k.jpg

wasting scraps

http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/84/imag0142y.jpg

first time my mates eva done anything with a can

[Phat 2]

ended up ditching the @ symbol and went with the upper case A...
i think it turned out pretty decent. I don't mind it if I do say so myself :)

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/253994_226991033994480_100000507545549_886671_2416 142_n.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

^^ sick

[Ace.K]

I'll probably get flamed for painting but oh well.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00084-20110607-1610.jpg?t=1307572531

[Phat 2]

ended up ditching the @ symbol and went with the upper case A...
i think it turned out pretty decent. I don't mind it if I do say so myself :)

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/253994_226991033994480_100000507545549_886671_2416 142_n.jpg

borrom page bump

[dankbudz]

Ace- not gunna say dont paint. so. if you want crits on letters, those are all real boxy and plain. look at other people stuff, and look at yours, dont bite, but notice the differences. and do some simpes, practice your throws and see what you come up with. for painting, idk just connect those lines haha.
Phat- thats mad sick. but i think it would look better with a white P not inside the H. the 2 in the T looks dope though

[haezr]

@phat that's fucking doooooope.

[rolling fresh kush]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/IMG_0308211.jpg

[rolling fresh kush]

stock caps and wind. whatcha think tho?

[mekosbc]

Phat2- thats the shit i love to see! Big in your motha fuckin face! and where my shout lol

fokes- looks good for your conditions... i know how it is to paint in wind with stock caps... thats an every day accurence in my area lol

[Fury]

Forkes - The top of the S is kinda funky, change that and you're good.

[AUK]

phat2 that looks sick, glad you dropped the @ symbol.

[Phat 2]

Phat2- thats the shit i love to see! Big in your motha fuckin face! and where my shout lol
shit son, I tell you what. you hit me up with a tag when you go out painting next time, and I'll make sure you get your name tagged in beirut my man, how does that sound?
hit up a painted tag exchange

this goes out to everyone else too btw, whoever puts my name up, gets his done

[nah!]

does it count if i do it in my garden? :cool:

















j/k

[toopski]

hahaha ill put it up next time for some lolz then

[Fury]

Phat, I'll hold you to it. I don't post painted shit on here, but I'll PM it to you then.
If I do a throw for you, do I get a throw in Beirut?

[Phat 2]

definitely man, as long as everything's in the streets, everyone gets his fix yo! you guys can take me up to my word ;D

[proNYNJA]

ace- dont stop painting but i suggest you work on your letters a little before you go paint again.
phat2- that shits dope
fokes- your E and S could use some work but other then that its pretty dope.

25364
25365
25366

crits?

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ think you need a shorter name, either that or learn to write it really fuckin' fast lmao! :)

[nah!]

that R looks similar to CRAVER... and i dont really like his R's

the hollow is ugly and so is the second piece

[FlatScank]

Flat vs Lux

[ribcage]

lol@dudes character, white bitches dont have black people hair.....unless thats a jew fro...

[Phat 2]

Lux wins

[mekosbc]

ehhh...lux's is kinda boring..... flats has more pizzzaaaazzzz lol but flats character wins that white bitch with the fro is weak...... lux style is a good concept but it seems to me if he would perfect it, it would be dope as fuck

[MoganOne]

Lux's Fill is Tits http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=25374&stc=1&d=1307818685

[skinaone]

25419
i havent gotten any helpful crits anyone:?

[Ace.K]

Its pretty original man. Not my cup of tea but if you like it thats all that matters. Seems like you got clean lines and good color schemes. Good work. Hell I'd even make a little cartoon from the S. Like a worm or a snake or something.

[dankbudz]

if you were to do a character for the S, a snake would work well, plus kinda goes with the name i think. i would save anything like that till you got the throw down pat.
but the letters progressively get larger starting at the I, the top of the A is pretty big.

[mekosbc]

25419
i havent gotten any helpful crits anyone:?
my opinion fuck the crits do you and youll progess your way not every other writers way.... feel me? lol im sure some one will have a smart ass coment bout me sayin it but its true homie... looks good to me, that spot is cool

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

i agree with meko. ive been going out and painnting hard for the last 3 or 4 months without posting on this site, i got my straight and throw down, and im about to drop my first piece this week. of course, if you have homies you paint with, that helps.

[dankbudz]

MEko- yeah Skinas throw looks good, but he did ask for crits, so thats what he got. I feel crits can be helpful to point out flaws you dont see, but after a point you just gotta do your own thing like you said.

[skinaone]

thanks guys i asked for crits cause im stuck thith that same throw
25437
i was doing this one but i thinkj i like the old one way more

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

i like the A on the new one better

[skinaone]

thats about the onlything

[FlatScank]

I don't see a difference, but I know what you mean about being stuck on the same style, my advice is keep painting your throw, and eventually some newer things will come to mind, you can't force yourself to come up with new stlyes.

P.S Me and Lux today.

[MoganOne]

Lux is dope

[geargff]

So this is kinda ehh obviously... keep in mind I ran out of black, got some more, went back to fix the B and A and forgot to take flicks again. Crits n Shit please.

[ChadWarden]

well ,you probably have one of the doper styles in TKO. besides that, i gotta say, pretty wack.



define your b and a more.

[rolling fresh kush]

shit son, I tell you what. you hit me up with a tag when you go out painting next time, and I'll make sure you get your name tagged in beirut my man, how does that sound?
hit up a painted tag exchange

this goes out to everyone else too btw, whoever puts my name up, gets his done

how bout for me bro. real talk lol hit me with a pm if so.

[geargff]

well ,you probably have one of the doper styles in TKO. besides that, i gotta say, pretty wack.



define your b and a more.

I didn't put the TKO lol... and I fixed the A and B after, I said that but I didn't get flicks lol.... But thanks, how is the rest? anything specific?

[ChadWarden]

nothing is wrong with your s other than the sloppy execution. dont over lap the lines on your e and thats all for now. the jagged edge of your i isnt really grooving with the other letters, fix that however you see fit.

[Phat 2]

fuck yeah rolling fresh kush. tell me what you write in pm. whoever wants in on this shit pm me as well

[aaesoo]

@Baise, take the tag out of your B, it's way too crowded in there, and try to make your letters the same size


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2557/5834180961_d71e3352a9_b.jpg
throwie, i think it's one of my better ones for sure, but obviously still tons of room for improvement

[HeklrToo]

The last four pages made me realize just how easy it is for a king to ruin a toys day with a simple hand over a piece...

zzZzzZzzZzz...

[00-made-00]

http://i966.photobucket.com/albums/ae142/jamesflanagan18/fishhie.jpg

[skinaone]

they shines are not that great
nor the S or H
bars are not even

[skinaone]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110523-00099.jpg

BUMP this is the best one in here so far im tired of shiti stuff thats been painted
all I see is flat and he not that great

[CliffJackson]

most recent.

[skinaone]

ok
dont paint anymore till you have a desent throw
you can practice but just dont go out to paint ya digg?
pracite O / ___ ---- Us * < > Ps
do all does with a can practice your lines circles ect
get a good throw then go crush shit

[CliffJackson]

wasnt trying to be a dick about it. so should i draw my shit out or actually buy cans and get a practice board? any other suggestions?

[Phat 2]

that aeso is el excellente !!! huge props man. love to see that up everywhere !
and 00-made-00 we already have a FISH here in Lebanon, part of ACK, REK and TG crews, dude's been writing since like '93
you can just carry on if you don't care though... just letting you know

[FlatScank]

@ Fish, don't listen to any Skinaone, you def got some euro-trash style, which is dope, people need to learn that anything can look good on a wall, as long as you know what your doing, and have some clean lines. heres an example (I take no claim for this piece)

[nah!]

that piece doesn't look very good to me

[00-made-00]

Skinone - the only way to get better at painting is painting, don't tell someone not to paint, like your the fucking king of it, hes hardly painting spots where people are going to give a fuck.

Cliff- Practice on paper and practice with paint aswell, its the only way to get better, half the people on this forum think they know what there talking about but haven't got the first clue.

You cant please everyone.

[lord_plankton]

that piece doesn't look very good to me

yeah cuz youve no idea..bums has serious styles but that has nothing to do with flats point, which is to me invalid. not everything looks good cuz of clean execution. bums has style thats why it looks good.

[toopski]

yeah cuz youve no idea..bums has serious styles but that has nothing to do with flats point, which is to me invalid. not everything looks good cuz of clean execution. bums has style thats why it looks good.

true not everything but it makes a shit piece look better

also true no1 should tell anyone not to paint, hell i know i aint the best painter where im from as there's hundreds around better then me, i just paint spots atm where it doesnt matter to get better and practice more 3 years of no painting isnt a good thing

[nah!]

yeah cuz youve no idea..bums has serious styles but that has nothing to do with flats point, which is to me invalid. not everything looks good cuz of clean execution. bums has style thats why it looks good.

its just that structure is more important than clean lines.

[00-made-00]

It has structure, every letter there is readable.

[CliffJackson]

thanks made. that guy never even replied so ya. i think im gonna write hams. sounds dumb but fun to write.

[haezr]

Haha, had to laugh as I walked home today...
I must've been really fucking drunk because I do NOT remember doing this at all...
Terrible throw...
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-16180459.jpg

[skinaone]

what? yall use to tell em not to paint GTF till i had a good throw and FLAT oyu shouldnt even be saying anything
made dont matter were your painting all he is doing is wasting paint
just practice on boards in your back yard dude -.- then youll regret painting crappy things SMH

[SHUT]

I know it's shitty. First attempt at a new throw.
25677

[00-made-00]

Shut up skinone your a dick.

eros - please dont painting when your drunk, not because the throws a bit shit, but you will end up getting nicked, i got nicked when i was painting drunk, and it could of totally been avoid, just be careful is all im saying, and the throws not to bad, i know what the throw should be looking like.

Shut - Id try and give the S abit more definition, and do the same with the E.

[Ace.K]

Thoughts/crits?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00127-20110616-1935.jpg?t=1308291525

[toopski]

what? yall use to tell em not to paint GTF till i had a good throw and FLAT oyu shouldnt even be saying anything
made dont matter were your painting all he is doing is wasting paint
just practice on boards in your back yard dude -.- then youll regret painting crappy things SMH

haha man you wont regret shit as ppl will see some crap stuff then see ur now better stuff and be like hes got talent now nice

hell tbh i havent painted smth good for years only difference is when i used to paint i had 1-2 hours these days u get 20 mins max before ur running from cops

[skinaone]

i sure did i regreted ever painting before i started getting beter tehn i started painting again
isee my old shit in the streat form 2 years ago and im like danm it i could of saved a bit more money and saved more effort then doing that
ive been on bombingscience for now 3 years (not on this acount)
and they use to say dont paint yet jsut practice in your back yard

[FlatScank]

Practice makes perfect.

enough talk though, heres some flicks.

[toopski]

if this is illegal spots omg how the fuck can it but chill long enough for this seems insane to me

if its legal spots thats dope

[FlatScank]

this spot is legal, though I've seen some cats pull off harder/fresher pieces than this on trains that run through where I live, I don't know how the fuck they do it.

[toopski]

haha true saw someone do a whole top to bottom 40ft tunnel not long ago when i went on holiday during the day with roller was like bullshit, after when i saw it on the news he got done as he finished n got 5 years jail but still

[.Cuore]

props @flat, loving the centrepiece.

[ribcage]

@flat yo you still got some wack ass extensions, that 1 on the L where you connect the vertical bar and the horizontal bar especially is bad/has to go, but your letters are starting to become more legible, like I can actually tell that A is an A even tho its not a great A

oh and yall niukkas so go vote on me and jiskas battle in beef battle thread... danke she

[Phat 2]

fuck your beef battle bro. you care too much lol...
and about flat's piece, there are 2 more toppled over A's before his regular A, so that's AAAT with two lackin characs.
I would've made my name with the sega font and the sega colors if I were you, or at least with the sega colors like gradient blue lines getting heavier to the bottom or somethign

[FlatScank]

Iunno why he's saying what "he" would do, since thats his opinion, I do my pieces the way I wanna do them, and some douche from a shit-hole country isn't gonna change my mind about it, and as for the characters, they were the 3rd and 4th ones I've ever dropped, in my personal opinion the Sonic is lacking more than the Tails.

Sure my letters might lack in structure, but atleast my piece is clean, and it pops out.

[ribcage]

This one isnt as clean as your others when it comes to line cleanliness, no doubt cleanliness shows skill but cleanliness doesnt make a piece, the letters do, clealiness is just a bonus.

The tails is better than the sonic, and hes tellin ya what hed do because it can spark ideas for you in the future, im sure if one of the dudes you paint with dropped that idea on you youd prolly take it in a little different...

[BRER]

Flat. We all know you can do clean pieces. That has been established. So now the only way for you to improve is to work on your letter structure. I would be so much more amazed if you threw up a huge chrome piece that popped from the wall because the letters were super solid and had great flow to them and the 3d and/or shadow was so precise that it looked like it was flying at you than seeing some really crappy letters that were colored well. 3 year olds can color things in, but they cannot draw the outlines that they are filling in. One last thing, the root of graffiti is to have people read your name and know who you are without knowing who you are. Don't you want someone to be able to read what you are writing?

[Phat 2]

Iunno why he's saying what "he" would do, since thats his opinion, I do my pieces the way I wanna do them, and some douche from a shit-hole country isn't gonna change my mind about it, and as for the characters, they were the 3rd and 4th ones I've ever dropped, in my personal opinion the Sonic is lacking more than the Tails.

Sure my letters might lack in structure, but atleast my piece is clean, and it pops out.

I was only giving you my opinion, you don't have to do what I say, but you don't have to get butthurt either. Can you not handle a simple discussion?

[recamE]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5077/5850766668_2b74a52784.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/5850766668/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/5850766668/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/60576921@N02/), on Flickr

i know the M is messed up first time ive painted it

[MoganOne]

that is legit

[recamE]

thanks man

[SK2]

http://i005.radikal.ru/1106/1f/6568f814e755.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[HeklrToo]

Practice makes perfect.

enough talk though, heres some flicks.

Flat, good to see something a little different. You use a lot of hard lines, I like them curves. Good can control as always.

Those characters are pretty dope.

[jesussaves]

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsinaction.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/106_0260.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/109_0258.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsbarcelonapiece.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jscanvaspieceingermany.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsprflagpiece.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jssilverfillin-pr.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsoutline-pr.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/js1stprflag-pr.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsgrayishpiece-pr.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsneonpiece-pr.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsyelowishgreenpiece-pr.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/100_0467.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/100_0680.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsbushwickpiece3.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsbushwickpiece2.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsbushwickpiece1.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsbluishpiece-spain.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsgrayishpiece-spain.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsmataropiece1-spain.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsmataropiece2-spain.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsvalenciapiece2.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsvalenciapiece3.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/100_3157.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/jsvalenciapiece1.jpg

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff203/jesussaves-1/100_3392.jpg

[Phat 2]

props on being the most successful toy

[Fury]

Jesus gets me off.

[lord_plankton]

props on being the most successful toy

props on successfully backing down...

[ierkpeople]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG00196-20110621-1153.jpg

[FlatScank]

I believe in a flying spaghetti monster.

[nah!]

I believe in a flying spaghetti monster.

I believe in letter structure

[Ace.K]

Ouch^

[avore]

258922589325894

[SHUT]

old and ugly, but whatever, gonna post it anyways. 25901

[ian]

starting to get the whole can control thing down some, still needs work tho obviously


http://cl.ly/2u1I333s1p210D0V0c1y/Screen_shot_2011-06-22_at_6.58.51_PM.png
http://cl.ly/0X0v3W293o3Y1v2Q0M0V/Screen_shot_2011-06-22_at_6.59.30_PM.png
http://cl.ly/1D290u1n191V2V1w3k1O/Screen_shot_2011-06-22_at_8.02.11_PM.png

[SHUT]

Noise- Really feelin' that middle one. Make the "I" a little wider. Other than that just cleaner lines. I like it though.

[H1P30N3R]

noise the o's are lookin like horseshoes or a u but keep puttin in work .... bump that erk crispy clean bro props

[ian]

thanks for the tips, I'm havin a hard time gettin that style of O down. Gonna keep at t though, my can control has definitely improved, just need more practice

[Ace.K]

Just keep the O simple. Don't try to flare it.

[ian]

yeah i know, but a plain circle gets boring as hell and when i see someone else pull it off so well like this one:

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/IMAG0014.jpg

it makes me wanna try it lol but yeah, i'll work on it

[Ace.K]

Well he can pull it off better because its at the end where there's space to use it.

["FrY"]

Wow i dont even wanna post my shit anymore...

[HeklrToo]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=26054&d=1308892207
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=26053&d=1308892203

These made me laugh out loud.

[mekosbc]

they tried lol but i can honestly say i respect that more then i respect some dope sketch that is never gonna make it to the streets.. atleast he in out in the streets and develpopin the skills it take to be a bomber unlike half these dudes in here that just sketch for years at a time and when they go to actuallly paint they suck ass and there can control looks like a 3 yr old paintin with water color... i dunno give it a year and this dude most likely be a down ass bomber... i dunno i beleive you should paint more then sketch... thats what i was taught by older heads in my area cuz i was a broke ass dude and couldnt afford a computer with internet to learn "the right way" to graff and i progressed faster then most in these threads... if you and sketch up a dope piece in a book congrats your an artist.. whoopdie fuckin due any body and do that.. now if you can get 3 cans and rock fills in your city that is a true bomber and writer... if you sit in your crib with your thumb up your ass hidden from the streets behind the computer and gettin pissed every time some one gives you get bad crits on a forum.. your a clown hands down.. thats why i would talk shit on that post above me just becuz they are actually paintin

[HeklrToo]

they tried lol but i can honestly say i respect that more then i respect some dope sketch that is never gonna make it to the streets.. atleast he in out in the streets and develpopin the skills it take to be a bomber unlike half these dudes in here that just sketch for years at a time and when they go to actuallly paint they suck ass and there can control looks like a 3 yr old paintin with water color... i dunno give it a year and this dude most likely be a down ass bomber... i dunno i beleive you should paint more then sketch... thats what i was taught by older heads in my area cuz i was a broke ass dude and couldnt afford a computer with internet to learn "the right way" to graff and i progressed faster then most in these threads... if you and sketch up a dope piece in a book congrats your an artist.. whoopdie fuckin due any body and do that.. now if you can get 3 cans and rock fills in your city that is a true bomber and writer... if you sit in your crib with your thumb up your ass hidden from the streets behind the computer and gettin pissed every time some one gives you get bad crits on a forum.. your a clown hands down.. thats why i would talk shit on that post above me just becuz they are actually paintin


Meko, I got respect for you but don't even start with that "atleast he's painting" shit...

[skinaone]

Wow i dont even wanna post my shit anymore...
thats why were here post your shit we crit it soon you"ll soon be like meko

[SHUT]

I don't know what you find so funny Heklr. For one thing, this IS the TOY thread. If you aren't going to be doing anything productive then you should probably just leave. Secondly, I haven't seen any of your stuff. Sorry about the size of the picture. :P

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[4menace2society0]

Meko, I got respect for you but don't even start with that "atleast he's painting" shit...

LOL ya kids should deff hit the books for a couple years until they develop a decent style, then go out and work on painting it

[FlatScank]

first piece of the weekend.26172

[FlatScank]

@ Nah, you only sketch straight letters, which blow.
@ Ian, go back one page, and look at the garbage you posted, then come back to this piece.

[REDjacket]

I mean sure we are not the best painters in the world by far, but I will keep sketching and painting until I do get better. I also don't just paint to make it look amazing it's a time for me to go and chill with my friends and have a good time.

["FrY"]

@FlatScank, how many cans did that take? it looks sick

[Phillip McDougall]

first piece of the weekend.26172

Hey, this piece is not a good piece. You need to get flow, bar width, and extension structure down.

[Fury]

SHUT - I can't really see that, man. Heklr used to post shit before he got b&
ian - That is actually exactly what I was going to say hahaha.

[pokerking]

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done yesterday with a friend

[Ace.K]

Back to the blackbook for you man.

[nah!]

*nasty shit*

done yesterday with a friend

ok tell me one thing.

why did you turn every letter into a arrow?

[Fury]

Holy shit Phil, I was literally typing the same shit when I read your post.
GUMB - Don't paint, just use a blackbook. Also, new to graff thread.

[FlatScank]

me rob and fuse screwing around.26264

[avore]

Flat-->thats lovely!
Pokerking-->Yeah hit the blackbook!..& the new to graffiti thread

Trupe:

262652626626267

[Phat 2]

haven't posted any painted shit in a while

I think I posted this one before, but I got a daylight shot of it today, so here it is again

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/270052_235711899782133_202093693143954_981725_4343 976_n.jpg

A 10-minute team effort by my crewmates and I

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/267587_235711979782125_202093693143954_981727_6454 988_n.jpg

not too happy with this last one... was just kinda freestyling in the dark, blowing some steam off - and came to the conclusion that graffiti is no good for my anger

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/263852_235712173115439_202093693143954_981729_5946 001_n.jpg

[skinaone]

@flat NO! it a bit better then the other shit u do but letter stucture is bad extencions are not good

[HeklrToo]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/263852_235712173115439_202093693143954_981729_5946 001_n.jpg

The letters themselves are supposed to be like saifs or scimitars, right?

That'd be dope as fuck if you could get down that metal steel looking fill with some desert sun set colors in the middle of the blades. You know, so they're like mirror like how a steel blade is.
This is hard for me to explain.
I'm looking for a flick on the net right now.
Worst comes to worst, I can take a picture of a picture and get it up if you're curious or it doesn't make sense.

[mekosbc]

i dont see any thing wrong with flat's style, jus cuz it doesnt look like F L A T .... still looks fresh as always.. PHAT- looks phat as always also... TRUPE- thowie is dope but seems kinda shakey

[Graff2k11]

http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/IMG_1015.jpg

[Phat 2]

haven't posted any painted shit in a while

I think I posted this one before, but I got a daylight shot of it today, so here it is again

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/270052_235711899782133_202093693143954_981725_4343 976_n.jpg

A 10-minute team effort by my crewmates and I

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/267587_235711979782125_202093693143954_981727_6454 988_n.jpg

not too happy with this last one... was just kinda freestyling in the dark, blowing some steam off - and came to the conclusion that graffiti is no good for my anger

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/263852_235712173115439_202093693143954_981729_5946 001_n.jpg

bottom page bump for some more crits

hekir, I know exactly what you mean, and yes I tries to make the bars shaped like those swords a bit, but wasn't completely aiming at perfecting it.. I was just messing around and the idea of wrapping the bars with cloths came into my mind.
Thanks meko