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seywhat
09-27-2011, 12:11 AM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/100_3462.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/100_3460.jpg
07 shit, first one is my boy absol, the nig that got me in this shit n the second flick is sum wit my old name
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4423-1.jpg
my most recent, sorry so dark, really wish i woulda done sum highlights but fuck it that bitch is ridin the tracks..
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/img0002.jpg
n my nig soren wit the cherry bomb lol... crits if yall want, just throwin sum flicks down

phat- u def got the idea of wat u doin but my advice would be to sketch like 10x more than wat u do n start developin ur style some more, need to work on flow alot
props to wost n goms on the last page, stay up. that last mone piece is straight ballin too, u ever paint trains big homie??

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/100_4155.jpg
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/100_3490.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4131.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/imagejpeg_0.jpg

bumpin flicks to new page. n some more from earlier this year for the fuck of it..
i really gotta get a chill wall to piece on lmao!!

pitlord- work on letter structure, it looks like u gettin the idea wit cuts n shit for the fill so just keep workin on that as well, but your letters need to be the main focus

ribcage
09-27-2011, 12:35 AM
I like the throw and the hollow outline got that simp steez too it for the hollowness. On the Two most recent, thicken up those outlines, the transition from paper to paint would be complete if your outline was on point cause that style is dope, but the painted result looks bad. Is the yard mad dark? or wherever your at? Cause it kinda looks like you painted that yellow one w/ your eyes closed lol (no hate).

seywhat
09-27-2011, 12:54 AM
thats how it is sometimes man, moon is the only light lol n alotta times once its already fucked i just go along to try n make it somewhat decent looking lmao i been paintin as much as possible gettin lines down, but like i said i need a chill wall to piece on. shits hard to find round here, so i usually just stick to the freights. it'll all come together eventually though. practice,practice,practice lol

peace

Pitlord
09-27-2011, 02:10 AM
Thanks for the crit seywhat. I really need more practice handling the can and as you said, letter structure. Im gonna post some blackboock stuff soon. I need to hold myself back and stick with the simple stuff before getting into shadows and 3D :)

Cheers from Switzerland

Phat 2
09-27-2011, 09:08 AM
^ you familiar with Deter1 or any of the GVAHC boys?

Mr_MoeR
09-27-2011, 09:44 AM
started to post in the other thread but I think it actually needs to be in here.....

First painted peice in about 4 years .... not very good

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/2130/moerg.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/707/moerg.jpg/)

2nd a bit better I think ...

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/36/photo3pf.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/155/photo3pf.jpg/)
Close Up
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4940/photo4ul.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/26/photo4ul.jpg/)

My bad handy lol

http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/6261/photo2jx.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/801/photo2jx.jpg/)

Critz plz

toopski
09-27-2011, 09:51 AM
im getting hated my piece was buffed the next morning like 6-7 hours after i did it

so far like the last 20-30 pieces ive done thats happened guess i gotta get ppl to drive me more since my area buff shit right away

Phillip McDougall
09-27-2011, 01:06 PM
This is exactly the flick I was talking about, and I wasn't aboutta search the entire thread for that picture so I dropped the subject.
But since you've taken the trouble to find it, thanks for proving my words.

Even Ray Charles can see that your wall skills are bullshit compared to the crap you got in your books, and absolute filth for someone with a head and mouth as big as yours. Ray Charles sees it, and Stevie Wonders backs him up on it.

Just so that my post doesn't fall in the "empty shit talking" category, here's what I see in that flick.
a mix mangled mess of bars all over the place. unnecessary and whack extensions and links. uneven flow. a hilarious tag.
a B and R with inverted crosses that are as overplayed as my anarchy A, a pathetic heart at the bottom of the R, an A with a wayyy too high middle bar, a really weak, oversized and broken I that looks like a T, an N that's higher than the other letters , an oversized S with god knows what the fuck kind of extensions are these?!
some 3D mistakes and a some real unclean lines.

you're good on paper and at home... but when it comes to reality and where the real stuff matters. you suck balls dude. yes offense. it's really dissapointing to see someone who talks as much smack as you do, have these kinds of skills.
what's worse is that it's an ultimately chill and legal spot. no pressure, no excuse.

this isn't about me. it's about you.
I admit and reckon that I'm toy. the proof is that I very rarely post my stuff in the intermediate thread.
you on the other hand have THE worst attitude I've seen in a while and think you're king.

kthxbai

tl;dr

Lord Plankton is just a troll with no skill. And Phat, you're still a greasy middle eastern faggot. Paint battle?

Pitlord
09-27-2011, 06:33 PM
^ you familiar with Deter1 or any of the GVAHC boys?

Me? :O Dont even know what you are talking about xD

Phat 2
09-27-2011, 07:36 PM
he's a writer from switz, and GVAHC is his crew. geneva hardcore..
nevermind if you've never heard of them

Shit Outta Luck
09-27-2011, 09:51 PM
I'm really tryna see this Phil-Phat paint battle. Get yall asses in gear, get some fuckin rusto, and go paint! ITS ALL BOUT THAT E-FAME NOWADAYSSSSSSS.
But forreal I wanna see this battle, so yall can stop arguing.

Leopold Stotch
09-27-2011, 10:31 PM
Recent for talk.34692

rolling fresh kush
09-28-2011, 02:40 AM
bump that right there ^^

rolling fresh kush
09-28-2011, 02:41 AM
http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/002.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/001.jpg

old shit http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/Photo1650D.jpg http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/h.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/IMG_0308211.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/IMG_0309210.jpg http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/004-1.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/005.jpg

all stock caps...

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/002-2.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/004-2.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/001.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/fvbnm.jpg http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/u.jpg http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/fvbnm.jpg http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/005.jpg

Strange Journeys
09-28-2011, 09:37 AM
will you stop spamming dead threads man?

RES4
09-28-2011, 09:38 AM
stop avoiding the battle phat

killroywashere
09-28-2011, 05:11 PM
Recent for talk.34692

killed it my dude

Phat 2
09-28-2011, 07:59 PM
stop avoiding the battle phat

lol not gonna happen man...
sorry phil, but I'm gonna have to decline

souloner
09-28-2011, 08:17 PM
35036

heres one of my painted pieces, im not as good with paint but im starting to get can control, any tips to prevent over spray? i hate the fuzzy lines and i cant seem to get rid of them. ty, crits please

Mr_MoeR
09-29-2011, 03:58 AM
BUMP - Critz plz

First painted peice in about 4 years .... not very good

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/2130/moerg.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/707/moerg.jpg/)

2nd a bit better I think ...

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/36/photo3pf.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/155/photo3pf.jpg/)
Close Up
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4940/photo4ul.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/26/photo4ul.jpg/)

My bad handy lol

http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/6261/photo2jx.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/801/photo2jx.jpg/)

Critz plz

Phillip McDougall
09-29-2011, 01:49 PM
lol not gonna happen man...
sorry phil, but I'm gonna have to decline

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

aaesoo
09-30-2011, 07:14 PM
here's a piece i did i think back in late august. some throws too.
35374
35373
35375

eriekid
10-02-2011, 01:07 PM
yo tbh this shyts not that toy and bump fokes n that deor throwie! n aeso decent peice bro!

Pitlord
10-02-2011, 04:00 PM
A Flick from today. Cheers

BlackBook
http://i.imgur.com/CYjkm.jpg
Wall
http://i.imgur.com/GPpqp.jpg


Knowledge for next time:

- priming
- getting better at outlines
- getting better at cuts
- dont fucking mix up 2 different orange cans :D

ribcage
10-02-2011, 04:27 PM
yo thats way better than the other stuff you posted. I got 3 things for ya other than workin on letter structure:
1 add a shadow or 3d, it will help the piece pop off the wall.
2 more color with your fill, I like that you used a good amount of color as a whole, but the fill is boring, kinda takes away from that euro style lettering
3 do a second outline around all the letters and 3d(if it has 3d), It will make the letters pop out from the bg. If you decide to do, you gonna want to make it either a color that contrasts with your first outline(black) or a color that contrasts with the background(light blue). So for this piece I would have done an orange 2nd outline because it contrasts a little bit with both.

hope this is somewhat insightful... keep paintin

eriekid
10-02-2011, 05:56 PM
props to ados thats clean as fuck!!

porkyPig
10-02-2011, 08:31 PM
what do you write erie kid??

Strange Journeys
10-03-2011, 12:04 AM
35610
pitlord thats tight!
aeso you gotta take more time man, widen up your bars and clean up your lines yo. you'll learn better can control as you go though

TheDoctor
10-03-2011, 12:53 AM
35611
i woild love some crits on this, (first time painting) been sketching and tryin to work up my own style and all. any ways i should start lookin to improve this? (used the absolute shittiest paint i could get XD) just gotta say, ive always liked graff, been interested in it, after today and auctually painting I FUCKING LOVE IT and would do wahtever it takes to move out of being a damn toy.haha

Pitlord
10-03-2011, 01:50 AM
@rib: thanks for your time. Your crit is really helping me!



props to ados thats clean as fuck!!

Thanks, but its a d, not an a in the beginning :)

MN Nice
10-03-2011, 02:05 AM
Its dDos? da fuck?

Pitlord
10-03-2011, 04:10 AM
Its dDos? da fuck?

Problem?

dankbudz
10-03-2011, 04:17 AM
your avatar creeps me the fuck out.. lol

Pitlord
10-03-2011, 04:40 AM
your avatar creeps me the fuck out.. lol

It's supposed to give you the creeps :)

Phat 2
10-03-2011, 06:21 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/313644_283985474954775_202093693143954_1182445_637 401140_n.jpg

lord_plankton
10-03-2011, 06:26 PM
i feel like your always doing too much stuff around your piece...lots of tags n shit which takes away from the piece itself, like the colors though

. lewd
10-03-2011, 06:46 PM
Its dDos? da fuck?

Distributed Denial Of Service ???

eriekid
10-03-2011, 07:33 PM
ddos my bad bro its clean tho and so is tat phat2! ill post some pics hold up..

eriekid
10-03-2011, 07:36 PM
35697356983569935700
i write both of these math and revive revi or re for short aint tha greatest just a couple quickies ill post more later!

Phat 2
10-03-2011, 08:19 PM
thanks for the comment plank. can i get some more solid crits?
its all done with cheap dollar cans

TheMackey
10-03-2011, 09:03 PM
phat i know i usually hate but thats prolly the best thing ive seen from u. Its well structured. The extenisons arnt all retarded the only thing i dislike is the arrow but i know u put it there to balance out the 2. over all nice though.

Phat 2
10-04-2011, 05:50 AM
alright, here we go! thanks, I apreciate it coming from you. but still I need the negatives more than the positives. those are the useful ones. where's that fuck, phillip. come hate on my work please asshole.

RES4
10-04-2011, 11:41 AM
good things:
the fade as far as i can tell is good, pic isnt great though so dont know how it looks up close
highlights in the 3d are nice as well

bad things:
3d on the two isnt great
the top of the two is fat and the middle bar is real thin in the middle but the rest of the piece has pretty consistent bar widths. Same for the P
the left hand bar of the H looks shit the way it overlaps the P
white highlights are a mess, i understand your using shit paint but if thats the case dont do them at all. if they werent there the piece would look a lot cleaner
the arrow under the piece is gay, even gayer than a normal underline
exclamation marks, why are they different on both sides?
the second outline isnt even, for example left of the p and on the 2
and you dont need a third black outline, the whole point of the second outline is to make the piece pop, the third outline kills this
would look better without all the tags

at first it looks really clean but the more you look at it the more of a mess it looks. id like to see you do a black and white piece, no 3d, and work on making your bars even and cleaning up the outline

Phillip McDougall
10-04-2011, 11:44 AM
You look like you did a large version of your handstyle. Literally, it's right next to it and looks the exact same. You have much better structure on this piece than any of your others, but your flow is still off. That arrow is also facing the wrong direction, it's going in the opposite direction of your flow. Your 2 needs to work WITH your piece, not the other way around. The fade is pretty good for dollar cans. That A needs work, though. And the curve part of the P, the bottom especially, needs to be thicker. That's the only part of your piece with such a thin bar, and it's the wrong spot it would flair at. You're starting to get an understanding of structure, which is good, but you still need to work on flow and composition. Try making a piece that leans like this / / / \ \ \ \ with one of your addons at the bottom middle.

RES4
10-04-2011, 11:47 AM
You look like you did a large version of your handstyle.

hahaha just noticed that, do you just outline a tag?

Phat 2
10-04-2011, 06:31 PM
You look like you did a large version of your handstyle. Literally, it's right next to it and looks the exact same.
yeah I know. this is EXACTLY what I did. I thought it was clear that it's a large version of a handstyle. except with colors, 3D and an outline... I did it on purpose, that's the whole concept here. and this is how I'm starting to understand structure. by working with the regular tag and working my way up to doing the piece. for now, it's the same as the tag, next time, I'll probably play around with it..

and the fact that it's a chisel tip marker effect, and to keep the consistent stroke angle, it only makes sense that the middle part of the 2 be so thin, and the quotes on the right be different than the ones on the left. which should also answer your comments, phil, about the wrong flares. there actually are no flares in the piece.

I aabsolutely agree on the part you mentioned regarding where the left bar of the H and the P overlap. it's the first thing I hated the most.
though the purple border I used wasn't really popping out of the white background in real life, so I added the black second border. it looks better in this flick though hmm *shrug*

ok, I guess I got what I needed. thanks for the comments and crits. real helpful. I'll stop hogging the thread now :P heh

eriekid
10-04-2011, 07:49 PM
either wany handstyle peice and you made it look clean as fuck. i like it no i loved it but still ..try turning your tag in to a piece.. add extensions nwhat not later.. it turns something simple into something great..

PETER
10-05-2011, 09:52 AM
I haven't been on here very long, but that's the first time I've seen Phil give a ligit crit and not just talk shit. I also got a little bit of a sense of respect, but that could be due to the voice in my head reading it....

RES4
10-05-2011, 12:29 PM
yeah I know. this is EXACTLY what I did. I thought it was clear that it's a large version of a handstyle. except with colors, 3D and an outline... I did it on purpose, that's the whole concept here. and this is how I'm starting to understand structure. by working with the regular tag and working my way up to doing the piece. for now, it's the same as the tag, next time, I'll probably play around with it..

and the fact that it's a chisel tip marker effect, and to keep the consistent stroke angle, it only makes sense that the middle part of the 2 be so thin, and the quotes on the right be different than the ones on the left. which should also answer your comments, phil, about the wrong flares. there actually are no flares in the piece. and theres a chisel tip effect on some letters and not others, the

I aabsolutely agree on the part you mentioned regarding where the left bar of the H and the P overlap. it's the first thing I hated the most.
though the purple border I used wasn't really popping out of the white background in real life, so I added the black second border. it looks better in this flick though hmm *shrug*

ok, I guess I got what I needed. thanks for the comments and crits. real helpful. I'll stop hogging the thread now :P heh

i dont think youll really learn structure just by outlining a tag, and the fact that you had to explain to us that it was a chisel tip effect means it doesnt work. plus if your going for a chisel tip effect then surely the horizontal bars on the A, T, 2 and the arrow should be thin?

Phillip McDougall
10-05-2011, 01:19 PM
What this fool said.

geargff
10-07-2011, 09:06 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6035/6219073450_ea76f7d67a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6219073450/)
BAISE (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6219073450/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6154/6167476895_fd09283b8a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6167476895/)
BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6167476895/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr

vems
10-07-2011, 12:12 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/313644_283985474954775_202093693143954_1182445_637 401140_n.jpg

yo i really like it man, try thickening up the barz and this would be a solid peice,atm it just looks like a handstyle with 3d. but i like it man, good work. mabe also close up the inside of the 2 aswell, so there is about the same amount of negative space as the P and bottom of the A. just my .02

geargff
10-08-2011, 12:48 AM
36145361463614736148

Rites
10-09-2011, 12:55 AM
36194361953619636197

Graffguy
10-09-2011, 12:58 AM
damn toys..

Rites
10-09-2011, 01:03 AM
I don't see your contribution to critique, graffguy sucka.

MN Nice
10-09-2011, 01:05 AM
It all sucks. Theres your crits. Hit the books.

TheMackey
10-09-2011, 01:30 AM
his shit is actually good i duno what ur tripping on.

TastyMcNasty
10-09-2011, 01:45 AM
damn toys..
post some of yours mr.bigshot. until then cut the shit


his shit is actually good i duno what ur tripping on.
ya not bad, they're all nice and simple

MN Nice
10-09-2011, 01:48 AM
We must be seeing different pictures.

Stuck
10-09-2011, 02:23 AM
then u gota get ur eyes checked nigguh cus me n tasty know what reall *****s knoe. knawww mean?

Phat 2
10-09-2011, 06:57 AM
stuck pick which account you want to keep

Messi*TnR
10-09-2011, 11:53 AM
3620936210

a throwie...among the first painted!

SynOne
10-09-2011, 12:03 PM
Days, Definitely get rid of the 2nd hump over your A. and work on the structure of every letter. I would say go more simple. No need for all those bumps on the Y and A.

Your D is nice and the S is pretty decent. Just work on can control and your A and Y.

Messi*TnR
10-09-2011, 12:09 PM
Days, Definitely get rid of the 2nd hump over your A. and work on the structure of every letter. I would say go more simple. No need for all those bumps on the Y and A.

Your D is nice and the S is pretty decent. Just work on can control and your A and Y.

Thanks!

GuyGuyer of Guyland
10-09-2011, 12:10 PM
Keep people outta the flicks man. It's incriminating as fuck. Work on a new Y, that one is atrocious. Take the second hook off the top of your A and keep sketching and sketching and sketching. Not the worst throw i've seen for someone who hasn't painted... Don't get it twisted though, it still sucks. Keep working at it.

Pitlord
10-09-2011, 02:28 PM
Went painting today. Unfortunately, I didnt prime enough space, so I had to drop the S at the end...Whatever. I went there to practice, so Im not mad at all.

First time i tried a character with cans. It's supposed to be a racoon.

http://i.imgur.com/hvhfx.jpg (http://imgur.com/hvhfx)

killroywashere
10-09-2011, 02:52 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6093/6227448258_af06abe808.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227448258/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6045/6227462834_7a5a597d4e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227462834/)

been real sketchy lately
not happy with these at all

reks
10-09-2011, 03:36 PM
3623736238

Messi*TnR
10-10-2011, 02:09 PM
Keep people outta the flicks man. It's incriminating as fuck. Work on a new Y, that one is atrocious. Take the second hook off the top of your A and keep sketching and sketching and sketching. Not the worst throw i've seen for someone who hasn't painted... Don't get it twisted though, it still sucks. Keep working at it.
i appreciate the crits but how the fuck is it incriminating? its in his house? and the other one you cant see a face....by the way it aint my face its my buddys so explain

ribcage
10-10-2011, 02:54 PM
law enforcement looks on this sight. connects you to an area. looks at this pic. looks on social network, matches kid face to face in pic. Goes to kids house, sees paint says who the fuck did this? we seen the same shit out illegally, he snitches on you. he doesnt snitch on you the blame goes to him. If they have the opportunity to match any name to a face, theyre booking someone wether its him or not, or wether he snitches or not.

point is, dont put your homies face, your own face, your neighbors face, your boyfriends face, none of that. its incriminating. so stfu

killroywashere
10-10-2011, 04:39 PM
REKS - you got that fresh style man. keep at it. shit looks angry bro

ZETA
10-10-2011, 05:03 PM
Home made wall at my house. Painted the first one yesterday with BLOCK, qnd did the bottom one today. Good stuff. Real toy with shit paint, but still fun to do. Next time i plan on getting some ironlaks or montanas from bombing so its not complete poop on a wall.

ZETA and BLOCK (he wrote BERS cause he didnt wanna paint his real name) both these pieces had highlights, but mine came out so bad i lined myself and didnt find the pic for that anyway. Oh well
36343

ZETA (FASE, wrote it for friend in chrome, all the black is walmart paint so... dont even bring that up....)
36345

Pitlord
10-11-2011, 03:48 AM
Went painting today. Unfortunately, I didnt prime enough space, so I had to drop the S at the end...Whatever. I went there to practice, so Im not mad at all.

First time i tried a character with cans. It's supposed to be a racoon.

http://i.imgur.com/hvhfx.jpg (http://imgur.com/hvhfx)

bump

toopski
10-11-2011, 10:44 AM
an oldy didnt get a better flick of the ISER next as it was buffed quickly

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5681/imag0225qt.jpg

ZETA
10-11-2011, 12:03 PM
@pitlord, nice clean can control, what kind of paint do you have? in general i like the style too, and that tag at the bottom is pretty dope

SUPER TOY ALERT. did this in 20 minutes. red is walmart, the rest is valspar, i was on the phone while doing this so its pretty bad... the lines are sketchy as fuck and the fill is poor cause i was running out of paint (thats why its half blue half purple. and the red highlights were just to fill space cause there was no blue or purple left haha but other than that...
36671

Strange Journeys
10-11-2011, 06:54 PM
36692
freeway!
ayo zeta keep at it i guess, draw more though,

Flawless Victory
10-11-2011, 07:57 PM
Blaming a shitty fill on cheap paint is a garbage excuse.
It doesn't look bad because of the paint, it looks bad because you don't know what you are doing.

Phat 2
10-11-2011, 08:28 PM
no it's true, flawless victory, shit paint can result in shit fill, especially when it comes to coverage. ask me, I should know. But it's also true that if you practice enough to have experience in dealing with cheap cans, you can make it look good...
hmm, guess I'll just be sitting on this one's fence this time :)

knowtheledge
10-11-2011, 09:18 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6176/6236151406_80c012971f.jpg
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6158/6236155684_e016331a9c.jpg
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6180/6235627191_e6fcf7f214.jpg
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6151/6235628665_d7e8b0f3cb.jpg
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6031/6224744162_abcb8927fe.jpg
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6153/6236356106_3bfe392c46.jpg

skinaone
10-11-2011, 09:34 PM
@pitlord, nice clean can control, what kind of paint do you have? in general i like the style too, and that tag at the bottom is pretty dope

SUPER TOY ALERT. did this in 20 minutes. red is walmart, the rest is valspar, i was on the phone while doing this so its pretty bad... the lines are sketchy as fuck and the fill is poor cause i was running out of paint (thats why its half blue half purple. and the red highlights were just to fill space cause there was no blue or purple left haha but other than that...
36671
dont blame the paint i paint with shit paint too so it has nothing to do with the piece or w.e that is and ill give you a tip on how to strech a can out while filling in PM me

Pitlord
10-12-2011, 04:19 AM
@pitlord, nice clean can control, what kind of paint do you have? in general i like the style too, and that tag at the bottom is pretty dope


I use Montana Black and Molotow Premium cans.

And I wouldnt blame the paint either. If you are good at painting, you are able to paint good with crappy paint.

ZETA
10-12-2011, 06:17 AM
i know i need to practice more with paint, thats only my third real painted piece since... a year ago... i was using ironlaks before and they filled wonderfully, but i dunno. also, i mostly was saying that "the fill is poor cause i was running out of paint" but in my earlier posts i did blame the paint. i could see a major difference though because BLOCK was using montanas for some parts, and i filled a bit with his to see the difference, and it was easily noticable.

but it is true i need to get better anyway. thats what the toy sections for right..

aaesoo
10-12-2011, 12:51 PM
first time i tried bringing a blueprint to do a piece. barely looks like it and i still fucked it up lol
36737

ribcage
10-12-2011, 01:33 PM
but it is true i need to get better anyway. thats what the toy sections for right..

fuck no, the toy section is here for me to make fun of all da toys. NO GETTING BETTER ALLOWED! its the rules.

Phillip McDougall
10-12-2011, 01:53 PM
apparently

unless you're Sear.

IbuprofenTablets
10-12-2011, 09:22 PM
did this in 20 minutes. red is walmart, the rest is valspar, i was on the phone while doing this so its pretty bad...
36671

This *****' was also fighting off ninjas while breaking nuts with his asscheek muscles and doing backflips. Pardon the bad fill, ya'll.
Trust me, bro; I was there.

It would have been different if he wasn't doing all of this stuff while painting.

Flawless Victory
10-12-2011, 09:32 PM
... i could see a major difference though because BLOCK was using montanas for some parts, and i filled a bit with his to see the difference, and it was easily noticable.

but it is true i need to get better anyway. thats what the toy sections for right..

Just because his paint is better doesn't mean his fill looks better, it looks just as janky as yours does.
My ass has to battle those blue ninjas every time I hit a spot, dog!

MTK
10-12-2011, 09:40 PM
i like the aeso one... but if you were trying to hide the bottom of the S just paint blue over it... yeeeee digggg?

Goofy_Wan
10-13-2011, 05:22 AM
The two paint jobs I've ever done. Was told to keep it simple and straight letter to learn can control. The brick work certainly helped with the second one. Was great fun finally getting out and painting, I definitely understand the buzz and addictive aspect of it now more so than before.

v.0.1
36797

v.1
36798

Leopold Stotch
10-13-2011, 01:12 PM
finally painted one of my recent sketchs, startin' to think about heading in this direction, crits?36821

aaesoo
10-13-2011, 02:02 PM
i like the aeso one... but if you were trying to hide the bottom of the S just paint blue over it... yeeeee digggg?

yee lol don't kno why that didn't occur to me haha.

Phillip McDougall
10-13-2011, 02:03 PM
that crazy fill should be complimenting the flow of your letters. Not just a background, you know what I mean?

Norfsuthr
10-13-2011, 03:09 PM
an oldy didnt get a better flick of the ISER next as it was buffed quickly

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5681/imag0225qt.jpg

Idk if you've heard of them, but there's already a couple different DE crews waaaay better. Not telling you to change the name, just showing you so you can decide what to do bout it...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4010/5128895539_ab7a6212d8.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/eclecticdyslexic/5128895539/)
DE CREW!! (http://www.flickr.com/photos/eclecticdyslexic/5128895539/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4130/4947371586_7b7e4f2a72.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/eclecticdyslexic/4947371586/)
DE crew Ironlak (http://www.flickr.com/photos/eclecticdyslexic/4947371586/)
Then there's the bay area DE with plant trees, optimist, etc.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2736/4415090806_e9591ab0dc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/alloutbigtime/4415090806/)
PLANT TREES OPTIMIST (http://www.flickr.com/photos/alloutbigtime/4415090806/)
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3394/3213889369_8e0edb3ea0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/27287428@N07/3213889369/)
Optimist (http://www.flickr.com/photos/27287428@N07/3213889369/)

pitlord- simplify
zeta- same thing, might wanna stay in the bbook for a min just so you're not wasting paint.
Debut- coming along, props on the spot. You might wanna outline in black 2x so it's thicker and more visible. As far as letters go, they need some fixing up but you're progressing well so dont worry about it.
bruzer- Idk what the hell that first letter is, but it looks like buzr or something. Simplify and stay on paper till you got it down. on a positive note, your can control looks good.

Strange Journeys
10-13-2011, 06:08 PM
thanks norf, i was rushed and the car lights from the freeway were messin with me. the bay area DE with Japan and Plant trees is dope, see their frights sometimes

scank dont do those hearts on your A

toopski
10-14-2011, 12:34 AM
every crew u just showed is what US?

also just noting the looks of the pics uve shown are either legal or look like chill spots the places i do are 1-2 mins before u get chased

ribcage
10-14-2011, 01:19 AM
Yep their US. planttrees goes dumb, hes EVERYWHERE. Optimist stay wit the burners. They both bomb, quite the high risk areas, you come through to the bay area you wont go very long till you see either of them up, plantrees got some of the sickest bombs out there, he does not do no legal joints. I cant say I know if optimist does or not, but I would assume not based on the damage hes done to sf and oak

Alan Au
10-14-2011, 02:05 AM
My first piece with paint. Lmk what you guys think36951

Norfsuthr
10-14-2011, 02:10 AM
every crew u just showed is what US?

also just noting the looks of the pics uve shown are either legal or look like chill spots the places i do are 1-2 mins before u get chased

Hey you do your thing man...

What country/continent are you in?

toopski
10-14-2011, 02:41 AM
australia

Norfsuthr
10-14-2011, 02:48 AM
yeah you're fine I guess. crew acronyms are gonna be repeated more than names are, I just don't like seeing new writers starting crews with the same letters as established and well known ones you know.

oh and alan au it's awful. sorry, but you gottastart on paper and stay there for a while. do straight letters...........

Phillip McDougall
10-14-2011, 10:40 AM
DE Crew is a big crew. Trust me. But you'll probably stop doing graffiti by the end of this year, because that's what usually happens to kids on this site, so I doubt you'll do enough to get big enough to be noticed by the real DE Crew.

toopski
10-14-2011, 10:52 AM
Philip ive been doing this since 06 been writing with my mates in DE since 06 dont think ill be stopping this year mate

Phillip McDougall
10-14-2011, 03:35 PM
Homie. These fools are legit famous. You've never heard of Optimist DE? Known and recognized worldwide. He could do a drunken, illegible tag, and you'd STILL know who did it.

asf561
10-14-2011, 10:36 PM
37062 This is my third piece. Any suggestions much appreciated!

toopski
10-14-2011, 11:12 PM
Homie. These fools are legit famous. You've never heard of Optimist DE? Known and recognized worldwide. He could do a drunken, illegible tag, and you'd STILL know who did it.

u say known worldwide yet im sure over half the countries in the world never heard of him, i dont worry about people from other countries with the same letters for a crew obviously theres more then one DE in america alone

ribcage
10-15-2011, 01:38 AM
the fill is real bad, and so are the letters. The D looks like a bad K, and it lloks like there is a lower case L attached to your B. The 3d is off, and you got some wacky bar widths in some spots(top left of E, and in the two bend in the T). You should bring down the top right part of the U lower, so the cross on your T can fit
in there a little more snug. As for cleaniliness its dirty, the lines are all choppy, you need to cut your lines after you finish the outline.

Strange Journeys
10-15-2011, 01:56 AM
damn i suck

ribcage
10-15-2011, 02:05 AM
its deifnetly a step up though, just keep goin. you shouldnt trip off the fill for now, you shoulda just used black and the light grey with a red or the dark grey outline cause the red and dark grey next to eachother dont pop

toopski
10-15-2011, 02:06 AM
everyone starts somewhere

asf561
10-15-2011, 02:09 AM
By "EAZY" were you referring to my post? Or was there another in here called EAZY? Cause that is supposed to be an L

Strange Journeys
10-15-2011, 02:17 PM
oh, that straight up looks like an E, not an L, work on that

thanks for the crits guys

SneeZ
10-15-2011, 02:43 PM
Supposed to be KVN, turned out looking like RUN. shit man. ran out of paint, couldent finish the shadow. Fill is made with roller. Its bad and im struggling with can control. Human on the right side to see the size. Anything else?

ribcage
10-15-2011, 02:49 PM
shadow on you U is fucked

MyNipsAreHard
10-15-2011, 05:01 PM
37089

SneeZ- pretty big. props to that. but you need to work on letter structure
Crits on this one.. first timer right heree

ribcage
10-15-2011, 05:13 PM
why you take a picture of a throwie? anyways, paint it a hundred more times and itll look better

Phillip McDougall
10-15-2011, 07:36 PM
I hope that doesn't say Block

MyNipsAreHard
10-15-2011, 09:18 PM
I hope that doesn't say Block

...why

Phat 2
10-16-2011, 02:13 AM
coz he has a weird illness where he gets a diharrea whenever he reads the word "block"... i dunno why... he's weird

ribcage
10-16-2011, 02:19 AM
lmao, phat actually made a funny joke, the apocalypse is coming

MyNipsAreHard
10-16-2011, 04:46 PM
Derk- you should keep sketching those for a lil while longer. the R and K need some work.

Z3BRA
10-16-2011, 04:59 PM
mkay

DERK.ONE
10-16-2011, 05:27 PM
Derk- you should keep sketching those for a lil while longer. the R and K need some work.

yea theyre mad basic ive been tryin to get more style in my letters ill keep drawing n see what i can come up with tho Thanks for the critic most dudes on these forums just bash ppls shit n tell them to stop trying to write. thers no love on here lol

Z3BRA
10-16-2011, 05:29 PM
Derk, make the R flow to the right

skinaone
10-16-2011, 05:29 PM
locing the 3rd one
not o much the 1st one
and the Z aint that nice nor the last 2 letters the E B are nice except the iregular bottom bar of the B
aint this shit from europa?
ive seen thi befor but like MAD YEARS AGO

Z3BRA
10-16-2011, 05:32 PM
locing the 3rd one
not o much the 1st one
and the Z aint that nice nor the last 2 letters the E B are nice except the iregular bottom bar of the B
aint this shit from europa?
ive seen thi befor but like MAD YEARS AGO

01

Phat 2
10-16-2011, 07:31 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/297254_290395734313749_202093693143954_1207368_115 4546200_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/301465_290395857647070_202093693143954_1207369_192 064802_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/307146_290395917647064_202093693143954_1207370_129 0813965_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/313760_290394760980513_202093693143954_1207363_445 785116_n.jpg

some bullshit from today's crew trip

Stuck
10-16-2011, 07:33 PM
alot of bullshit my friend.... alot

ZETA
10-16-2011, 08:11 PM
37201

This piece cost me $2.50. No jokes.
Supposed to be really basic and simp by the way.
I did the outline, and HEX helped alot with the fill. Its kinda sloppy but were both still new with paint. Trying to get can control down... tough. Anyway, crits?

skinaone
10-16-2011, 09:13 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/297254_290395734313749_202093693143954_1207368_115 4546200_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/301465_290395857647070_202093693143954_1207369_192 064802_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/307146_290395917647064_202093693143954_1207370_129 0813965_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/313760_290394760980513_202093693143954_1207363_445 785116_n.jpg

some bullshit from today's crew trip
infracion

ZETA
10-17-2011, 11:51 AM
whys that an infraction?... and crits on mine?

Phillip McDougall
10-17-2011, 12:10 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/297254_290395734313749_202093693143954_1207368_115 4546200_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/301465_290395857647070_202093693143954_1207369_192 064802_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/307146_290395917647064_202093693143954_1207370_129 0813965_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/313760_290394760980513_202093693143954_1207363_445 785116_n.jpg

some bullshit from today's crew trip

Jesus and I thought you were getting better

Strange Journeys
10-17-2011, 01:13 PM
why would u tag a dude?

lord_plankton
10-17-2011, 03:22 PM
the question here is: why would that dude let phat tag up his back?

Phat 2
10-17-2011, 08:43 PM
definitely agree that it's bullshit. I haven't put any effort into it whatsoever this time. the whole point of painting that day was to give the new toss a test drive and see what it'd be like on wall...
I can safely say I'm not comfy with the way my hand flows with it. took way too much time to get it right. which is inacceptable for a throw.

the dude, well it's just simply a kid who saw us painting and was real psyched about it. he likes graff. and since we were in a different part of the country (more towards the mountains) they dont get to see any graff there. turns out he's a big graff fan who always hears about us in beirut and sees our stuff online and always wanted to meet us, so he asked us to tag him up. my two friends did his arms. it was funny. his father owns a small resto joint across the street from where we were painting and invited us for drinks. good people.

so yeah I'm cool mans, don't mind the pics, I know they suck big balls, they're just for sharing, because sharing is caring hehe.. but it was a fun day. beach, throws and mountain and barbeque and beer and shit

. lewd
10-19-2011, 05:59 PM
only someone that has never seen graffiti would let phat tag them lol

:cool:

RES4
10-20-2011, 10:16 AM
http://www.graffiti.org/endstation/magazine/mag31/mag31/mag31_zebra.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/endstation/magazine/mag31/mag31/mag31_zebra2.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/endstation/magazine/mag31/mag31/mag31_zebra3.jpg

this last one is dope

ZETA
10-20-2011, 12:04 PM
@Z3BRA

mind if i bite the Z in your last pic? jokes, but i like the last one most. sick letters

knowtheledge
10-20-2011, 12:46 PM
Those old zebra's are tight

Phat 2
10-20-2011, 07:55 PM
middle one's the best tho of course, then the first flick comes in second place, third one's the worst. you mans be trippin.
on a side note, I've seen that last pencil sketch you posted earlier, and I must say I'm doubting the fact that these train flicks are yours, u sure u aint a flickthief? there's a HUGE level difference between these and that last pencil thing you posted...
not hatin tho, just wondering (suspiciously)

Flawless Victory
10-20-2011, 08:28 PM
Everything is stolen on the internet

skinaone
10-20-2011, 09:54 PM
Everything is stolen on the internet
no shit

lord_plankton
10-21-2011, 11:07 AM
middle one's the best tho of course, then the first flick comes in second place, third one's the worst. you mans be trippin.
on a side note, I've seen that last pencil sketch you posted earlier, and I must say I'm doubting the fact that these train flicks are yours, u sure u aint a flickthief? there's a HUGE level difference between these and that last pencil thing you posted...
not hatin tho, just wondering (suspiciously)

they all got soul. especially the last one, i can feel em yo.

RES4
10-21-2011, 03:14 PM
middle one's the best tho of course, then the first flick comes in second place, third one's the worst. you mans be trippin.

nah you just dont get it, your not european. that R is on another level

skesrams
10-21-2011, 03:54 PM
keep up the good work.. everone starts off toy and youll eventually make it out of that and become good...

lord_plankton
10-21-2011, 04:06 PM
nah you just dont get it, your not european. that R is on another level

yall should check on zitro, hes a real beast..

MoganOne
10-21-2011, 05:34 PM
Those Zebra trains are not yours toy... nice try though

U cannot expect people to believe that shit u stole those pics from graffiti.org

Norfsuthr
10-21-2011, 05:40 PM
^I never felt like calling him out on it, but if you saw that green tag he posted it's pretty obvious he's not the one doing these panels. Very clever impersonating a euro head so none of us will recognize it. Hope you enjoyed your e-swag while people believed those were yours.

RES4
10-21-2011, 06:05 PM
yeah that pencil was shit i know i dont know what happened with that i should re do it
by the way those are old pics

by the way i stopped for like 6 or 7 years, and i just got back into it a few weeks ago
as you might notice im trying different styles for everything

what country you from?

pointman
10-22-2011, 04:27 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6172/6261415399_7f96a53f0f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/48257626@N04/6261415399/)
Goms (http://www.flickr.com/photos/48257626@N04/6261415399/) by kieran222 (http://www.flickr.com/people/48257626@N04/), on Flickr

what do you guys think??

lord_plankton
10-22-2011, 04:29 PM
s is the weakest, the overlapping sucks, rest is ok..all in all not bad

pointman
10-22-2011, 04:35 PM
yeah looks skinny as fuck on the top and its really fat....im just playing with caps wish i could post some more risky pics..you have flickr plank? might post em as friends only for certain reasons....and fuck you zebra i know for real they are not yours you just got called out!

lord_plankton
10-22-2011, 05:02 PM
no dude, i dont. and what does it have to do with "playing with caps", just watch proportions a bit. oh and the shadow is off at some spots.

snoketg
10-22-2011, 08:54 PM
38007

skinaone
10-22-2011, 10:14 PM
hit the books for a while
untill you have a solid throw down ( i mean practice your can control and shit but dont ry anything to complicated untill you know youre ready )

snoketg
10-22-2011, 10:18 PM
ok thanks mang, so should i just be doing hand steez or what for can controll? i cant get my lines straight :/

skinaone
10-22-2011, 10:23 PM
lines,tags,circles,squares,vaginas,penises, what ever you want

knowtheledge
10-23-2011, 12:10 AM
yo snoke decent throw, you have the right idea just work on continuity and proportion.. n throw a hole in that e

aiaw
10-23-2011, 10:39 PM
first throw ever.. whatcha think? im decently happy with it.38096

skinaone
10-23-2011, 11:06 PM
oiot

H1P30N3R
10-23-2011, 11:09 PM
I think keep sketchin dont waste paint

fatcapfader
10-27-2011, 12:23 PM
387043870538706387083871038711

RENEGADES
10-27-2011, 08:34 PM
38746 critss

MN Nice
10-27-2011, 10:18 PM
Cusko - not bad my man. Clean, simple letters and gettin some nice spots. Liman - take note to what Cusko is doing. Less extensions and bends and thicker bars too.

RENEGADES
10-28-2011, 02:39 PM
aight andd i also noticed it was to thin when i finished

Sinister151
10-28-2011, 05:56 PM
try sticking to 2 colors instead of so many

nice that top one is your best

H1P30N3R
10-28-2011, 09:18 PM
Liman-colors are the least of the problem focus on structure and lose the extensions and arrow shit for now

RENEGADES
10-29-2011, 06:37 PM
aallrrighttt thaankss ill work somethin out

RENEGADES
10-29-2011, 06:37 PM
and it says L-MAN and italy splits them up

Phat 2
10-30-2011, 07:01 AM
that's a bad italy... it actually looks like a women's boot

RENEGADES
10-30-2011, 09:09 AM
38961

couldnt see shiitttttt

knowtheledge
10-30-2011, 07:04 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6239/6296120941_081263295d.jpg

some obvious mistakes oh well first arketek throw

RENEGADES
10-30-2011, 07:19 PM
ii thinkk you shud take that thing off the bottom of the a and make it connected to r but thats just me

Aster.one
10-30-2011, 07:59 PM
38985
2 years old

fatcapfader
10-31-2011, 02:31 AM
MN .thanks homie. simple straight letters all day. best advice i ever took.

fatcapfader
10-31-2011, 02:34 AM
39034

Jeffrey Inpho Daniel
10-31-2011, 03:42 PM
my can control sucks dog ass,
39084

Norfsuthr
10-31-2011, 03:58 PM
N looks a lil like a K because the line doesnt come down far enough. Bottom of the i could be bigger, looking good though.

Jeffrey Inpho Daniel
10-31-2011, 04:01 PM
i just need to work on my can control, first couple of times i really fill in with a force field and drop shadow,

inthecity
11-01-2011, 10:30 AM
watch this if u need to learn to paint

http://vimeo.com/24298634

fruitfulanomie
11-02-2011, 08:55 PM
http://pic100.picturetrail.com/VOL587/2397355/23754133/399289828.jpg

http://pic100.picturetrail.com/VOL587/2397355/23754133/399289830.jpg


i like that arketek in silver alot, and the BOO is some clean stuff both are very conformed with their line work props

MyNipsAreHard
11-02-2011, 09:32 PM
knowtheledge- do you write muke or arketek. the E in the 3rd pic down is the best E youve done imo. but get rid of the line that comes down into the bottom part
fruit- keep it in the books for a lil while longer

aaesoo
11-02-2011, 09:39 PM
ok muke/arketek whatever. on your Rs and Ks you need to overlap the opposite leg that you are now. it completely throws off the flow of the throw. besides that i got no problem with any of it. and as the other dude said stick with that 3rd e

RENEGADES
11-02-2011, 09:47 PM
cusko thats ill

some bombs from the past few days..

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6212/6307070121_abf6894a5c.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6040/6307594480_072a7f3566.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6059/6307073003_d8c356a4e4.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6215/6307075739_903a5e77ec.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6214/6307590474_6e7690352f.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6034/6307066191_536d91586e.jpg

are you muke and arketek? ii like the k in the muke looks dope... u need to fix the k in arketek thoo nd take the swirl out of the top of e

sycoe
11-02-2011, 11:22 PM
@muke and arketek, dont use "X" in your letters when theres a hole, it looks bad.. either make like a straight line or something else

lord_plankton
11-03-2011, 10:55 AM
shut up, doesnt mean it looks bad in general.

greenapple67
11-03-2011, 10:58 AM
new for this one :)
39357
39358
39359
39360
39361
39362
39363
39364

fruitfulanomie
11-03-2011, 01:14 PM
not feeling the sour's too much except the first blue one.

and i aint gon keep in the books ima do both, cuz going out at night relieves me. its more than whether its good, its doing it for the sake of doing it n feeling stress off my chest ya feel me

Norfsuthr
11-03-2011, 01:37 PM
^cool just dont go over real writers.

RENEGADES
11-03-2011, 03:54 PM
that last blue s needs too be fixed ....and im feeeling thee top firtst blue one too

Strange Journeys
11-03-2011, 06:27 PM
that top first blue one is bad,, space the letters out and make them less bubbly,

Jeffrey Inpho Daniel
11-03-2011, 09:14 PM
less talk, more flicks,
39522

inthecity
11-03-2011, 10:33 PM
^^ YO that inpho is good i think the "P" loop a little more proportional and the space between the lower of the p and h, tighten it up a bit and i think thats solid my dude

SLAY_666
11-04-2011, 12:14 AM
39609

H1P30N3R
11-04-2011, 05:17 AM
muke I just think the leg on your k needs work and tweak your e while keepin your m same size you will have a real nice throw .... try mu as a 2 letter toss too maybe ... not trying to over critique just the changes I would make personally.

knowtheledge
11-04-2011, 11:16 AM
thanks yo appreciate the feedback

somberbomber
11-05-2011, 01:43 PM
yo man the bottom of your k and the top of your e would look much better if they werent so curvy or whatever it is you have go on there the mu looks good

bak
11-08-2011, 06:34 PM
agreed. decent m tho. good shit

Cartel
11-09-2011, 10:07 PM
403084030840308

ERAYS
11-10-2011, 10:34 PM
^the R looks like a lowercase e IMO and the E looks kinda off, like the bottom bar is way thinner then the others and it doesnt really flow well

i would try to keep it a bit simpler for now....but thats just me

ERAYS
11-10-2011, 10:40 PM
new for this one :)
39357


some one already writes sour...and he's way better (no offense lol) where u from?

BEASTOR
11-14-2011, 11:13 PM
First piece ever, i fucked the final on the S. Im happy with it tho...critz?

40707

40708

HipHopAdept
11-14-2011, 11:14 PM
ironlak reload

H1P30N3R
11-14-2011, 11:15 PM
nice simp

H1P30N3R
11-15-2011, 12:10 AM
no..... go way simpler loose all the shit inside your letters hit the books in short start over completely

kayr805
11-15-2011, 12:25 AM
40725
Practicing letters on train

kayr805
11-15-2011, 12:32 AM
40729
Horrible roller piece I did back in the day

Phat 2
11-15-2011, 09:03 AM
40725
Practicing letters on train
in the 60s ?

BEASTOR
11-15-2011, 11:27 AM
thanks H1P30N3R

MEMO_HK
11-15-2011, 11:50 AM
nice piece sedge. looks mad for a first.

SCAM*oNe
11-15-2011, 12:25 PM
Yo kayer yhat sucked.

SCAM*oNe
11-15-2011, 12:27 PM
cool thread gives a chance to show what they could really do.:cool:

Jiska Matos
11-15-2011, 11:07 PM
40850
just something fast, me and mi brother pa2

MeZK
11-16-2011, 02:23 PM
hers some shit

MeZK
11-16-2011, 02:28 PM
40897408984089940900heres a couple shits i painted when i first started mad sketchy, i know this.

H1P30N3R
11-16-2011, 05:21 PM
go simple hit the books and research basic graff structure first man it will help alot but using the can does help you learn can control so it helps also

porkyPig
11-18-2011, 02:31 AM
http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/1321601401.jpg http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/1321601402.jpg

Strange Journeys
11-18-2011, 09:31 AM
that poor car

Phat 2
11-20-2011, 05:13 PM
drunk halloween night:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/307199_308423949177594_202093693143954_1270948_460 924334_n.jpg

from a TV show called talk of the town:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/383946_308424172510905_202093693143954_1270949_111 4566609_n.jpg

3omo
11-21-2011, 10:04 AM
418454184641847

porkyPig
11-23-2011, 01:14 PM
this e is allll fucked up> http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/101_1829.jpg

HipHopAdept
11-25-2011, 01:12 PM
blackbook is SICK

HipHopAdept
11-25-2011, 01:14 PM
throwup is nice...:cool:

H1P30N3R
11-25-2011, 01:39 PM
not bad on the simp derk lose the crown on your throw and fix the k it looks more like a h but not to bad man keep at it

RENEGADES
11-27-2011, 07:36 PM
that car:(

"PHYSH"
11-29-2011, 03:51 PM
43002

spiltink
11-29-2011, 04:09 PM
so fat2 got his frend post too hu?

"PHYSH"
11-29-2011, 04:24 PM
REK Crew Beirut

EST2007
11-29-2011, 08:47 PM
gratis

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7174/6414715527_c25d4f37bd_z.jpg

spher
11-30-2011, 05:40 PM
nice work derk maybe id 3d the insides of the d and r .........

"PHYSH"
12-02-2011, 12:06 PM
43643

some arabic.....

Phat 2
12-02-2011, 02:23 PM
yes yes sir the letters rule, the cedar though not so much.
I'm probably the only who's gonna give you crits on this since it's arabic... unless Eps decides to drop in. but everything is ill except the A could've been a bit shorter and I also would've dropped a shadow or a 3D on that. Also the outlines on the background could've been cleaner

tra_kind_liar
12-02-2011, 02:52 PM
43674
my first wall.. on Masonite

Fuse2
12-04-2011, 04:39 PM
4380943810
I know it's not very good, i did them both at night and couldn't see much.
I have done a better piece but i haven't got a pic, please give constructive points and not just say "that's bullshit"

Beko
12-04-2011, 04:47 PM
fuse2- hit the books! you need ore consistant letters

"PHYSH"
12-04-2011, 05:52 PM
i agree with BEKO bro.... You need more consistant letters... practice makes perfect

43820
A little colorful throwie.....

4382143822

43880
REK Crew Throw-up with a Beirut in Arabic inside....

dest1
12-04-2011, 08:15 PM
43833

PETER
12-05-2011, 03:50 PM
Please see "New to Graffiti" thread. Read it... end to end. Practice everything discussed there. That is about all the info you need or will get at this point. Proceed.

RES4
12-05-2011, 05:09 PM
4382143822

does everyone in beirut ruin their pieces with a shit load of tags or is it just you and phat?

Mr. November
12-05-2011, 08:06 PM
does everyone in beirut ruin their pieces with a shit load of tags or is it just you and phat?

So true. All you have to do is leave your name in my opinion.

Phat 2
12-05-2011, 08:16 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/374239_317805084906147_202093693143954_1296912_136 0699171_n.jpg

as promised, here's the thing we put up on sunday on that wicked highway spot. it doesn't look like it, but it's fucking monstrous, def the largest piece I've done yet. it's 100 ft long and hand reaching height, which makes up to about 7 ft...
here's a full resolution flick for anyone interested in a closer look: http://www.bit.ly/vzzsTd

also, a tossback for the homie ani-33

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/376068_326110737415842_100000507545549_1251260_173 9766446_n.jpg

and about the tags. I agree, we do tend to tag a lot, but hey... who gives a flying fuck? it's all good practice and fun. I personally LOVE handstyles. it goes like all day, all night... what the fuck! xP

sadgeh
12-06-2011, 02:20 PM
Wtf looks nice. Only that some letters are to much overlapping.
And about the handstyles i love it too.

Mr. November
12-06-2011, 03:47 PM
Phat that long piece is mint dude. How many people did you have with you and how long did that take???

"PHYSH"
12-06-2011, 05:25 PM
it was only me and phat@ and it took us like an hour and a half, two..... sorry about the tags, but sometimes i just can't stop my hand, yeah i've cut down to just my name....

"PHYSH"
12-06-2011, 05:31 PM
44027
something simple.....

spher
12-06-2011, 05:53 PM
try too keep the letters the same size for a simp .. peace :D

Phat 2
12-06-2011, 06:29 PM
yeah it was just me and the fisherman, though I reckon it took more than 2 hours innit? I'd say about 3 maybe? I can't really remember, but definitely more than an hour and a half

Mr. November
12-06-2011, 07:30 PM
yeah it was just me and the fisherman, though I reckon it took more than 2 hours innit? I'd say about 3 maybe? I can't really remember, but definitely more than an hour and a half

Shiiittt. Mad props. You can stay at a highway spot for 3 hours and not be called on? That's pretty amazing.

"PHYSH"
12-06-2011, 07:52 PM
44038
a touch of mushrooms.....

Ruhig Der Sankt
12-06-2011, 09:20 PM
44041
Can i get some crits on making the mushroom look...well.. better?