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EST2007
01-20-2012, 06:32 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7164/6528369521_e83974395c.jpg

Shit Outta Luck
01-20-2012, 07:31 PM
Phat not tryna hate but that's got extensions in all the wrong places. Literally like none of them work. But I believe in you, you'll get the hang of em.

Phat 2
01-20-2012, 08:07 PM
it's not mine, a friend of mine was refusing to believe that he's got too much going on. I needed to make it clear that my opinion wasn't personal or subjective.
keep the honest comments coming boys. thanks :)

m aster of seduction
01-20-2012, 08:11 PM
why did you even let him paint that i wouldnt let my friend paint something like that

toopski
01-20-2012, 10:50 PM
its clean atleast but structure needs a lil work and extensions need alotta work

PETER
01-21-2012, 12:32 AM
phat : The arrow on the left should be something else. if it wasn't for some of the extensions some of the letters would be lacking. I believe it says relik. the I looks like a tiny y. the bit to the left has to go. he needs to work out an I that fills the dead space. The curved bit of the k doesn't fit the rest of the piece.

canteen green
01-21-2012, 01:03 AM
phat dont listen to them that shit looks hella tough keep it up

canteen green
01-21-2012, 01:18 AM
but i do agree that the fill coulda been less plain

gemer
01-21-2012, 01:40 AM
@est2007 im diggen that thumbs up

toopski
01-21-2012, 03:21 AM
i was taught to always rack everything, when i paint with someone who pays for paint, it usually gives me an uneasy feeling. If someone cant steal paint how am i suppose to trust them as a partner in crime? AND i wouldnt have half the ups i do if i had to pay for it...

move to where i live and try racking 90% of places have all the spray paint caged then what ya gonna do aye?

i always get to know the peeps i paint with before anything only one mate of mine i just met up with and went bombing

Phat 2
01-21-2012, 02:03 PM
phat dont listen to them that shit looks hella tough keep it up

dude, do us all a favor (including yourself) and keep your toy comments to yourself for now... you'll one day know what you're talking about. your crits will one day be valid. hope for the best

Mori
01-21-2012, 02:44 PM
Phat, I notice he sticks most his connections at the end of a leg to a letter, and in some cases he has extensions on either side of the same bar, this throws off the balance of the letters. Furthermore, although I can tell he tried to balance the piece with some unique letter placement with that I, but none of the letters interact, and with that many extensions I am sure he could have found a better use of that space with some clever connections between a few of those letters. In this way it appears stiff. And if your gonna finish off a piece with extensions like those arrows, you need to balance it on the other side

after
01-22-2012, 12:35 PM
crites5180951810

SONE.
01-23-2012, 12:09 AM
Yo.http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Heaven.jpg

Shit Outta Luck
01-23-2012, 10:41 AM
Thats a hella dope spot ^

H1P30N3R
01-23-2012, 06:00 PM
hell yea props on that man can u zoom in on the throws ?

Dossbog
01-23-2012, 08:34 PM
51963

This was the first time I ever used spraypaint......

SONE.
01-23-2012, 09:12 PM
Here's the close up. It was kinda an awkward spot to get done so excuse my wack handsteeze.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Heaven2.jpg

smokeitup
01-23-2012, 10:14 PM
howd u do that sone?

aaesoo
01-23-2012, 10:23 PM
yeah really lol that's an intense fucking spot.

hellbilly31
01-23-2012, 10:30 PM
5198151982

Big Africa
01-23-2012, 10:39 PM
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/cottoncandy.jpg

Critz Por favor

MiDo93
01-24-2012, 11:34 AM
Big Africa dont use a light color for the outline if you have light colors in the fill, it will make it look wack most of the time. Stay away from the x's and try not to fade your stuff yet, work on your font

tophaa
01-24-2012, 04:59 PM
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120124_132932.jpg

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120124_131636.jpg

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120124_140232.jpg

Critz please, I know that the first one's O is kinda whack.
Thanks.

Dossbog
01-24-2012, 05:03 PM
52057

rzst

tophaa
01-24-2012, 05:04 PM
Also, it was dark and my flash kinda fucked this picture up but here goes nothing....

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120119_211436.jpg

Big Africa
01-24-2012, 06:58 PM
Big Africa dont use a light color for the outline if you have light colors in the fill, it will make it look wack most of the time. Stay away from the x's and try not to fade your stuff yet, work on your font

Thanks for the advice and x's are the only thing i've thrown in there just cuz its the only thing i kinda feel comfy with but i'll work on some new ish to put in there

canteen green
01-24-2012, 10:00 PM
52133 feed back?

Mori
01-24-2012, 10:59 PM
^ is this in Denver?

canteen green
01-24-2012, 11:14 PM
no

Mori
01-24-2012, 11:15 PM
Lame.

canteen green
01-24-2012, 11:24 PM
u from denver?

Mori
01-24-2012, 11:29 PM
Nope, never heard of it

canteen green
01-25-2012, 12:35 AM
:cool: fersher man lol we on the same page

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
01-25-2012, 12:36 AM
you guys are stupid

canteen green
01-25-2012, 12:39 AM
@ know its time for some 3d your ready bro i believe in u!

tophaa
01-25-2012, 08:46 AM
@ know its time for some 3d your ready bro i believe in u!

I shall take it on sir! Thank you. I just dislike how sometimes my 3d outline drips and sometimes I paint over my base outline. Are there any ways around this? I know some people outline their throwies with a colour (say blue) and then will drop 3d from the blue outline, and afterwards, fill in the inner letters with a different colour and then a final outline. If that makes any sense...

canteen green
01-25-2012, 11:39 AM
i always do my 3d in the same color as my outline and i almost always make mistakes here an there but thats the beauty of paint u just got back over it tell it looks clean. so i always fill first then outline then 3d then i out line again the 3d ant the first outline in a diffrent color an add bubbles or clouds or random stuff to make it look more like a full piece. cuz wen u just do plain letters no 3d or extra boarder work it looks to plain

emace1
01-25-2012, 11:53 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7012/6580275197_c2cef771bb.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6580275197/)
IMG_0119 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6580275197/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr
shitty fill...stock caps

Big Africa
01-25-2012, 01:19 PM
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/purp.jpg

I know the o's are fucked up the x's are lame im just tryin to work on bubbles

Big Africa
01-25-2012, 01:21 PM
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/blocks.jpg
Came up with this on the fly let me know what cha think

bak
01-25-2012, 04:48 PM
dear god. quit now or drop this hobby. first off, damn bruh ironlak ? ? blahh i guess we all start somewhere . BARS . work on em.

no touch ups
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00242-20120117-1516.jpg

Lado
01-25-2012, 04:54 PM
Big Africa/Oreo: Dude, use dollar cans and maybe even rustos. Do not use Ironlaks yet. Way too soon. If I were you, I'd find myself a notebook or a bunch of paper and practice, practice practice. Get an idea of what you're doing and what you should be doing before you paint. There are a couple threads on the Toys Forum that'll do you good. Search around and ask questions, post pictures for criticism, all that good stuff. But stick to paper.

However, I do give you props for getting up. So keep on looking for advice, take it, learn from it, and put it in practice.

oversprae mds
01-25-2012, 06:15 PM
hell yea dollar cans are the way to go dont waste your cash just get good at can control

MN Nice
01-25-2012, 08:05 PM
http://youtu.be/hTOKJTRHMdw

The order goes Oreo, Know, Jrme, Baks, then Singer

tophaa
01-25-2012, 08:40 PM
http://youtu.be/hTOKJTRHMdw

The order goes Oreo, Know, Jrme, Baks, then Singer
52194

canteen green
01-26-2012, 04:59 PM
52262 took my time on this one it was under a real chill bridge

kwu
01-26-2012, 05:04 PM
whats that say? jmrte?

and mues ahahaha shoot!

canteen green
01-26-2012, 05:12 PM
no pmrie

Skadeem
01-26-2012, 05:33 PM
I can't distinguish a p at all. but the fade is nice, do something more exciting with the grays and the fill could be decent. but worry about letters right now shit's hurtin

diggin it erps

DankOner
01-27-2012, 03:26 AM
Throwie yeh i accidentally did my n backwards rookie mistake.
52291
First ever attempt at a piece all feedback accepted the k sucks a bit using $2 cans.
52292

tophaa
01-27-2012, 09:01 AM
For the throwie oultine, don't go over your lines so many times. From one toy to another, it's too soon to be working on pieces like that man. Work on your throwie letters, I'm not going to tell you not to use paint, because people on here that say that are dumbfucks, but do sketch your bubble letters out when you're not painting and work on can control. I assume you've been painting for like a month maybe? Just take it slow man, props on the attempted piece, I have seen worse but just take your time. A tag turns into a throwie, a throwie into a piece, and a piece into a burner. That will happen over a long period of time, don't fret it and keep at it.

tophaa
01-27-2012, 09:05 AM
Also, those may or may not be rusto cans, it looks cheaper but, just a tip; When you start to get better, order some 'cap adapters.' They will help out a lot. But only do so after you've been painting for a bit longer and get better.

PETER
01-27-2012, 09:12 AM
Dankoner: Please see the new to graffiti thread. Edit: Read it end to end. several times. Practice what is says until you are absolutly sick of it and keep doing it. Build your house from the foundation first not the roof.

DankOner
01-27-2012, 07:20 PM
Alright thank's for the feedback and yeh ive been writing for probably less then a month.
its not rusto its called Australian Export obviously i live in Australia
also i know my tag is horrible i find it hard to make a nice Dank Tag

malto
01-27-2012, 07:37 PM
exports are where its at lad im from aus, export chromies are the shit

MiDo93
01-27-2012, 08:19 PM
Dank
kinda disregard what tophaa said its never too soon to work on pieces. You should make sketches of them, dont paint them right away. And when people say hit the books on here, they are actually right; they arent being "dumbfucks". You need to practice practice practice practice. Trust me it helps alot. Now i am not saying dont practice with paint. Go to home depo or wallmart and get the dollar cans of paint. Im pretty sure everyone has used them to practice their can control and to test out new pieces and throwies. Dont waste money on rusto at this point unless you have something solid down. Your piece isnt that bad for a first try, you just need to make some of the letters more structured; The K doesnt look like a K at all. Mess around with that on paper still though it has potential. And for your throwie thats how my first throwies came out. Its also not bad for a first but clean it up a bit, u shouldnt have overlaps in the outline. Just because its not that bad, that doesnt mean dont work on it; always try to improve your shit with new styles

tophaa
01-28-2012, 02:06 AM
I agree with you Mido, That's basically what I was saying man. When i first starting posting on here a few months back, people told me to stop painting. I completely disregarded what they said, but I did take their crits and sketched everyday, and I have progressed drastically. I think it is kind of ridiculous that some people can draw an insanely complex wildstyle piece, but they have never painted. Props for those people knowing complexities, but drawing establishes a necessary foundation in which you should paint upon. I feel like you should draw and paint together, not just one or the other. Mido, I know that you can't say that you have never seen a perhaps more talented writer telling new writers to "quit" or to "not use paint." Dank, my first throwies looked about like that a few months back, realize that in 2-3 months, you will be laughing at your first pieces. When you notice the advancement, it is very rewarding and motivating.

smokeitup
01-28-2012, 05:57 AM
exports are where its at lad im from aus, export chromies are the shit

exports are shit, their no good. only the blacks and chromes because u can adjust the nozzle.

smokeitup
01-28-2012, 06:21 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/28THJANUARY2012006.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/28THJANUARY2012005.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/28THJANUARY2012003.jpg

smokeitup
01-28-2012, 06:22 AM
all exports ^^^

BennyBoii
01-28-2012, 06:40 AM
did you start to run out of colours on your throw

Phillip McDougall
01-28-2012, 12:23 PM
No he just sucks dick at painting

illegal_drugs
01-28-2012, 03:48 PM
Rasn
Any crits?

52434

AGEKTOHIO
01-28-2012, 03:57 PM
RASN- have your letters all same size, have that "a" not hide behind the "r" clean up a little and your ready for smashin. dope word too

illegal_drugs
01-28-2012, 04:13 PM
should look into not putting a behind r thing
thanks

Phat 2
01-28-2012, 04:57 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/418748_353725774647411_202093693143954_1415754_123 5842479_n.jpg

tribute to my friend's father, who recently passed away.
messed the "Saade" pretty bad.
was copying the old english font, so the whole thing was really hard to pull off, it's the first time I try such a style and I had to build the whole thing from scratch sketching (with all the lines and shit to see where every bar goes)
turned out MUCH wonkier and uneven than I thought. I know all about the difference in sizes and placement and everything, so I'm not really looking for the deepest crits.
just sharing some painted things

Skadeem
01-28-2012, 06:43 PM
There are some mistakes but I do dig it. As I scrolled I saw the words chrome and rusto. Which reminded to let anyone who didn't realize know that rusto and krylon chromes can be a bitch to fill with, for when you outline paint seems to react with it badly, my personal experience as I use A LOT of chrome(one of the few good krylon cans that you can still stick a pink dot on)

this.....is just........ugh. those god damn bars. but I learned a lot for something I did in a half hour with stock tips on shitty flourescent krylon. if anyone has something constructive to say go for it(black thing was retardation, never doing those colors again, fills aren't normally like that)
52440

smokeitup
01-28-2012, 09:26 PM
No he just sucks dick at painting

pfffffffffft


did you start to run out of colours on your throw

yeah all the tins i used were like nearly empty

XyleneRenegade
01-28-2012, 11:56 PM
52495524985248652485524875248852496524945249352497 5249252491524905248952500

malto
01-28-2012, 11:57 PM
exports are shit, their no good. only the blacks and chromes because u can adjust the nozzle.

i probably shouldve chosen my words better, only exports i ever use is chrome and black.
gunna have a little fun tonight
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/009.jpg

smokeitup
01-29-2012, 12:20 AM
how much u pay for them malto? or did u rack em

malto
01-29-2012, 12:27 AM
like $3 a can, sometimes they do 4 for $10.
i rarely rack paint anymore ever since i got a good paying job.

Norfsuthr
01-29-2012, 12:35 AM
@acer
Your letters are on the right track in the 4th pic, build off that and scrap all the rest. And chill with the multi color scribble decoration shit until youre much better cause right now it just detracts from your letters. Its unique, ill give you that, but hold off on it until you know what youre doing. And acer is a hella generic name, get creative mr artsy fartsy. I'm looking forward to seeing you up once you improve, you have potential and most dudes around here quit in 1-2 years or move somewhere with a better scene you know..

BennyBoii
01-29-2012, 04:05 AM
fuck me... exports are good but that shit can vary between different cans, like one time a whole can lasted me a night, and one can i got 4 tags and when i went to do a hollow that shit was empty

XyleneRenegade
01-29-2012, 01:48 PM
@acer
Your letters are on the right track in the 4th pic, build off that and scrap all the rest. And chill with the multi color scribble decoration shit until youre much better cause right now it just detracts from your letters. Its unique, ill give you that, but hold off on it until you know what youre doing. And acer is a hella generic name, get creative mr artsy fartsy. I'm looking forward to seeing you up once you improve, you have potential and most dudes around here quit in 1-2 years or move somewhere with a better scene you know..

Thank you for the words of encouragement. That str8letter is what I have been concentrating on lately and is the latest piece in the post. I have a bad habit of not stepping away from the wall when I should consider myself done and end up with all that unnecessary decoration crap and you definitely are right, it does detract from my letters. 52573
Im also feeling you about the name being generic, plus, there are (at least) 3 other Acers out there but I just love the letter combo! maybe Tracer or Pacer or something...

Phat 2
01-29-2012, 07:21 PM
i probably shouldve chosen my words better, only exports i ever use is chrome and black.
gunna have a little fun tonight
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/009.jpg

we got the same laptop :>

uknowigetup
01-29-2012, 11:51 PM
This is just me getting into the block buster, 3d style to progress, whatcha guys think? This was my second attempt at a 3d piece (throwies I can do 3d easily,) the first one was atrocious and my paint fucked up.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120127_165601.jpg

The other night my crew and I went out and hit this up. The mickey gave us hell and I really did not enjoy being on a ladder where cars could see me, so the mickey isn't too great. We improvised his hands and ended up killing the bottom half of the piece because we couldnn't get his hands down like we wanted. Either way, I think it was decent for out first big piece.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120129_015251.jpg
Give my boy Goner some critz,
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120129_015224.jpg
OR30,
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120129_015218.jpg
And myself,
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120129_015212.jpg
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120129_015145.jpg

It was cold as fuck and we were fucking about on that wall for like 5 hours. I know it doesn't look great, but critz anyway.

toopski
01-30-2012, 03:52 AM
lol i also have that laptop hahahahahaha

tho i have a pc aswell

AGEKTOHIO
01-30-2012, 09:02 PM
GONER crits... develop your own letters and dont use stuff from graffiti creator/dafont.com or wherever you got those letters, its okay to nibble off other people but dont eat the whole sandwhich naw mean?

AGEKTOHIO
01-30-2012, 09:05 PM
and ACER,,, good stuff but remember walk before you run. dont get to crazy before you have the skills to go crazy (fills, letters, etc.)

XyleneRenegade
01-31-2012, 05:01 PM
and ACER,,, good stuff but remember walk before you run. dont get to crazy before you have the skills to go crazy (fills, letters, etc.)

good lookin out and thanks for the encouragement. I dove right in and went straight beast mode nuts at first but I am settling into my groove now and taking the time to discipline myself to learn the basics of style and form. Mad ups are important, but originality and impeccable style are necessary elements for reaching that next level.

Skadeem
01-31-2012, 05:54 PM
Kinda not the best place in the world
5284552846

know why'd you get banned

AGEKTOHIO
01-31-2012, 08:44 PM
good lookin out and thanks for the encouragement. I dove right in and went straight beast mode nuts at first but I am settling into my groove now and taking the time to discipline myself to learn the basics of style and form. Mad ups are important, but originality and impeccable style are necessary elements for reaching that next level.

no prob cat. take it easy

Neoscience
01-31-2012, 10:04 PM
glad i found a toy thread. I'm green as fuck, so ill def be posting here in a few days.

@uknowigetup that first piece is dope son, i like the compliments u use- keeps everything in the cold shades, also dig your letter style in it: nice and simple but thats its strength.
my only criticism for the piece you and your crew did is that yellow u guys used; but thats more of a personal taste than anything. i feel for you in terms of the mickey being nerve racking, i think experience will help get one more comfortable with risky tags and knowing when to take that risk (because nobody wants to get caught) KEEP BOMBING! ALWAYS RUN FROM THE POLICE!

uknowigetup
01-31-2012, 10:59 PM
glad i found a toy thread. I'm green as fuck, so ill def be posting here in a few days.

@uknowigetup that first piece is dope son, i like the compliments u use- keeps everything in the cold shades, also dig your letter style in it: nice and simple but thats its strength.
my only criticism for the piece you and your crew did is that yellow u guys used; but thats more of a personal taste than anything. i feel for you in terms of the mickey being nerve racking, i think experience will help get one more comfortable with risky tags and knowing when to take that risk (because nobody wants to get caught) KEEP BOMBING! ALWAYS RUN FROM THE POLICE!


I appreciate it man. Thanks and that was pretty much our outlook. Even if we fucked it up, we made use of a good wall, got up bigger than anyone else around there and it gave us good experience. My whole piece on the mickey wall was high quality paint (and unfortunately we had to scrap two purple mtn hardcores on attempting to make our mickey mistake look like everything blended) but the yellow I used was 94, and OR3O's was mtn 94 as well I believe. Something that we realized about that wall, that is barely visible in the picture, is that the bottom half of the wall is fucked up cinder blocks that are super dirty, so light colours just faded right into that shit and didn't look clean at all. I look forward to seeing some of your ups, and if you are a super green bean, head over to the "new to graff thread," it sound's a bit silly, but trust me, everything in there is worth it.

canteen green
02-01-2012, 12:42 PM
5295552956 wat cha think?

AGEKTOHIO
02-01-2012, 02:32 PM
you got the right idea just work on them letters. Readable is unbeatable

XyleneRenegade
02-01-2012, 03:29 PM
5295552956 wat cha think?

Looks dope! Super clean, the colors work, style elements are on point, 3d is correct and the connections carry the flow. The only thing about it that looks wonky is that curvy wall...I'd like to see it on a flat box car panel or an autorack...it definitely has that freight feel to it.

canteen green
02-01-2012, 05:13 PM
thanx bro that wall gave me hell!

Ojuyn3
02-01-2012, 06:10 PM
LOL Good Times This was About 2 years ago
5297452975

AGEKTOHIO
02-02-2012, 01:52 PM
53013530145301553016530175301853019

some are old, some are new

canteen green
02-02-2012, 02:45 PM
53028 new joint its kinda un even i wish i did the arrows diffrent

Phat 2
02-02-2012, 05:16 PM
only good thing is the first flick with the throws... even that I'm doubting to be yours

canteen green
02-02-2012, 06:09 PM
who u talking to?

Phat 2
02-02-2012, 06:21 PM
agektohio.
though you're no better

canteen green
02-02-2012, 06:30 PM
thats rude did have a bad day today? but your right iv only been painting for 2 months an if i thought i was good id be posting in a diffrent section but i get up like a beast just did this one real quick with left over paint i ran out of black so i couldnt 3d the f lol53034 i know its ugly srry guys

canteen green
02-02-2012, 06:32 PM
there was so many spider weds here u cant tell but this wall is one big spider web it freaked me out i kept feeling like there was spiders crawling on me it was all bad

Colors
02-02-2012, 07:05 PM
only good thing is the first flick with the throws...

exactly what i thought when i saw them. the best is the first

malto
02-02-2012, 07:11 PM
never painting while cross faded ever again, cant focus on shit. hope this shit gets buffed soon
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/004-2.jpg

toopski
02-04-2012, 11:22 PM
http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/539/imag0323c.jpg

just something i did quickly had to rush the flick before boosting and its off a water damaged phone

zombie_hemp
02-05-2012, 06:13 AM
533035330453305533065330753308533095331053311http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7152/6805373557_d3870213e7_z.jpg

Skadeem
02-05-2012, 07:26 PM
the silver, pink and blue, blue and brown. yes!

MiDo93
02-06-2012, 12:24 PM
53628
Why are M's difficult. I have another flick after i fixed the "i", but my phone is being a piece of shit. Crits would be awesome

MASE P_2s
02-06-2012, 02:09 PM
53640

MiDo93
02-06-2012, 02:25 PM
MASE - the extra line in the "S" at the top looks kinda weird other than that its pretty dope

dankbudz
02-07-2012, 03:38 PM
can somebody crit the fuck outa this?

Colors
02-07-2012, 03:44 PM
^^ First painted thing ive seen from you! some small things i notice is the D is way thicker than the rest of your letters, like bar widths. your first E looks a little weird and gets skinny up top, and the S sorta moves from thick bar lengths to thinner ones, but mostly just small things. Good looks though that is a nice simple!

dankbudz
02-07-2012, 03:53 PM
yupyup, got some other stuff but i never messed with takin pictures
i plan on thickening up my bars next time to the thickness of the top of the R. this picture makes it look a lot cleaner then it actually was.
thanks for the good looks bro

canteen green
02-07-2012, 05:32 PM
5372053721

Skadeem
02-07-2012, 06:00 PM
You should bomb more and study up on letters.

These aren't too much better but they're really clean, which got me excited. Don't know why I filled the wholes like that.......blame it on the morning.

53722
Let's see....s it slightly too big, left side of the bottom bar on the p is fucked, a is fucked, top right leg on the k is fucked. red outlines a little off but i don't mind that as much. but come on....it's pretty damn clean. anything else to say is appreciated as long as it's not retarded.

53723
Same building, letters are once again a little off, especially not feeling the s. but once again pretty clean I like to think.

Walt
02-08-2012, 01:27 AM
all of you need to stop using colors. go get a shitload of black and white, and do like 50 straightletters.

also, learn to paint with fat caps(ny fat, or a ap cruiser if you have the new valve rusto). makes your life a whole lot easier.


edit: ^^^this guys got the right idea

SkateJunt
02-08-2012, 06:16 AM
haha thats where its atttt, black white and silver/chrome all day, onthy thing i bother to spend money on, or even rack really

Skadeem
02-08-2012, 07:41 AM
Gotta do a skinny color outline for kicks though, it really helps with learning control too

toopski
02-08-2012, 10:54 AM
all of you need to stop using colors. go get a shitload of black and white, and do like 50 straightletters.

also, learn to paint with fat caps(ny fat, or a ap cruiser if you have the new valve rusto). makes your life a whole lot easier.


edit: ^^^this guys got the right idea

lmao he has a lot to learn himself

tbh depends on who ur on about but some peoples stuff would look 100% worse without colour

lord_plankton
02-08-2012, 10:57 AM
aand thats why they should learn to make good graff without color..than do fancy stuff...

Skadeem
02-08-2012, 05:21 PM
Yeah yeah letters are more important. It's kinda sad we must be so explicit to these chilren. (take the hint canteen)

for talking, yes the bars are fucked but that's what happens when I get bigger. We all gotta start somewhere, etc with the generic excuses
53850
also, for those that may not know, for those that are actually racking paint and not wasting money on good shit, rusto metallics suck ass beyond silver.

Mori
02-08-2012, 08:40 PM
Try a drop shadow or 3d on those ska, if you got time/paint. Would help in the sense that you can use it to even out some of those bars. Props though

toopski
02-08-2012, 10:33 PM
hate black fill unless ur clean as fuck it looks ugly should just do white and black outline looks 80% better tbh

dankbudz
02-08-2012, 11:17 PM
Drop the extensions

smokeitup
02-09-2012, 02:02 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC03119.jpg

crtits???

Phat 2
02-09-2012, 11:22 AM
ah shit man.. stay taggin

Dossbog
02-09-2012, 07:07 PM
539265392753928
rzst

MN Nice
02-09-2012, 07:25 PM
take notes from Oface.

Skadeem
02-09-2012, 07:27 PM
the df throws aren't that bad but everything else is.
I'll try a dropdown next time, might try a white fill now that i have sekts, its not worthwhile without a good fatcap imo though.

this shit caught the attention of a couple dts......fuck my life. gonna post it anyway. sorry i bothered you in that weird ass mood mues, i just have an innate fear of officials. on to new horizons!
53930
each one seems to be better, letters get less and less sloppy

dankbudz
02-09-2012, 07:56 PM
drop the extensions on the E and A

Skadeem
02-09-2012, 08:07 PM
yeah something different's gwon be done next time. i never do that when I sketch, it just keeps happening in the moment

Dossbog
02-09-2012, 08:17 PM
Oface is my yoda dude, i always take notes from him

MN Nice
02-09-2012, 08:46 PM
Got any more flicks of his stuff? Post em up. His throws are steeze. But really take note to how he does his stuff. Your letters are very tall and slim, and have weak definition to them. Start making sharp cuts, not just round edges.

Trab
02-10-2012, 12:24 PM
/////////////

PETER
02-10-2012, 01:08 PM
yikes!

'Crook'
02-10-2012, 01:11 PM
Dude just keep practicing on papers like i do and do more simple stuff without adding any extension !!

Norfsuthr
02-10-2012, 01:31 PM
yikes!
Couldn't put it better myself...

Speak that's coming along nicely, a lot of improvements from the one you posted before. I'd say the bottom of the S got too thick, the loop on the P shouldn't fold in like that unless you compensate in the shape of the hole, the A is in need of some work for real, and the top of the K could be straighter. Good progress though, respectable.

dkode you gotta do some sketches man, I see you have your own style which is straight, but simplify a bit for now and focus on bars and getting some flow. The e is pretty weak.

Trab
02-10-2012, 02:00 PM
////////////////

Mori
02-10-2012, 02:47 PM
Quit wasting paint. Steal some phone books to draw in if you're looking for some sort of adrenaline rush. Cause that ish ain't working out at all

Trab
02-10-2012, 04:10 PM
/////////////////

Trab
02-10-2012, 04:11 PM
//////////////////

Mori
02-10-2012, 08:36 PM
Well a good way to destroy the city is by stealing phone books out if the phone booths to draw in. start there

One Evil
02-12-2012, 04:30 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC03119.jpg

crtits???

next time try and clean it up a little.. like re do ur black outline around all the yellow you digg?

^ trab is right, ive seen plenty of worse shit .. Trab.. keep drawing on paper practice ur tags till u get them the same everytime 2000 times, then bomb same process, then u work with simples.. then u go to pieces, murals and ART is not graffiti homes. also practice painting on a backyard fence or find plywood to paint on so u dont ruin ur parents perfect fence! one.

Phat 2
02-13-2012, 04:34 AM
we found this rusty thing parked on the side of the highway in a mountainous area yesterday.. figured why not?

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/426287_376955588998023_100000507545549_1391951_143 3152843_n.jpg

Zookyook
02-13-2012, 05:21 AM
thats a killer photo op phat... i bet if u go back in a year all the rust will start coming through the paint, itll make it look like its 20 years old hah

toopski
02-13-2012, 06:08 AM
nice phat

Phat 2
02-13-2012, 07:18 AM
I know man I love rusty chromes... we got old rusty ass SETUP KCW tosses on shutters and such in beirut from around '98 which I treasure so fucking much like they were valuable relics from a prehistoric era lol. He's half lebanese you know..
and nothing beats chrome on rust. nothing.
nothing at all.

Trab
02-13-2012, 08:16 AM
Thanks one evil!
That's something i can work with.
(sorry for my english)

sez.
02-14-2012, 08:56 PM
54514

uknowigetup
02-14-2012, 09:35 PM
Sez, that is dope man.

I ran out of black on this piece so the drop shadow isn't perfect, and it wasn't as clean as I wanted. Critz?
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120214_200532.jpg

sez.
02-15-2012, 12:21 AM
wow bro u got way better keep it up. i remember wen u were doing straight block letters

oversprae mds
02-15-2012, 11:23 AM
54522

SynOne
02-15-2012, 11:53 AM
Don't write SP, SPOne is a legend.
54527

criscros18
02-15-2012, 02:55 PM
54514 props bro, dope piece.

MN Nice
02-15-2012, 02:59 PM
Don't write SP, SPOne is a legend.

He writes Sprae, thats just his two letter throw

And sez, that piece would be nice if your you didn't have multiple shitty tags all around and bad arrows.

criscros18
02-15-2012, 03:07 PM
^^i know, what's up with the tags??

SynOne
02-15-2012, 03:44 PM
He writes Sprae, thats just his two letter throw

My bad, the throw is still nice though.

dankbudz
02-15-2012, 04:21 PM
oversprae, thats fresh

messed this up in many places and regret the blue 3d cause it just made it a bitch.
gotta go bigger next time too

Skadeem
02-15-2012, 04:37 PM
It's pretty good but the curves could be cleaner on the s and d. Try to get a good outline with one careful stroke of the hand

Walt
02-15-2012, 11:44 PM
@uknowigetup

stop using montana. buy a shitload of dollar cans, and learn to do perfect straight letters and fills.

sez.
02-16-2012, 12:29 AM
ya i need to work on my tag the only letter that looks halfway good is the s. i threw them on there cuz i thought it looked to plain. i have a pic without the arrows ill post it right now. i think it looks better without them but wen i draw it on paper it looked clean like that. i just fucked it up

sez.
02-16-2012, 12:44 AM
54618

dankbudz
02-16-2012, 01:25 AM
Walt- who you talking to?
sez, you don't gotta post it every page

sez.
02-16-2012, 11:31 AM
wasnt trying to post in every page just showing it without the arrows cuz somebody said to drop them

malto
02-16-2012, 04:25 PM
didnt get to finish this yesterday

http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/rask1.png

dankbudz
02-16-2012, 05:16 PM
lol didn't read that, my b, SEZ

sez.
02-16-2012, 06:50 PM
lol didn't read that, my b, SEZ its all good my dude good shit on that peice seems like u get up often. they fucking got me yesterday an im on probation so i dont no wats gna happep but atleast they didnt arrest me an its only a mis. but still im already on probation

Colors
02-16-2012, 06:51 PM
Seder i think you should try a piece with thicker bars, usually helps the piece. And i think you should also try to make an s where the bottom part touches the looped part of the top of the s...just things to experiment with. Looks nice though, just the bar widths all vary. And idk how i feel about the bottom of that d... lol nice though keep painting

dankbudz
02-16-2012, 07:43 PM
damn, probably get community service or some shit. how'd that happen?

colors, i feel ya man, I didn't notice the decrease in thickness till i peeped the photo. but that shit was tricky, had to stand on some tippy ass concrete rock to get to the tops. no excuses though..
bottom of the D IS wack but i don't really care, just something to learn from.

sez.
02-16-2012, 08:00 PM
i was at a spot way out in the cuts that everybody bombs its known to be hella chill u cant even see it from any roads or anything so i was takeing my sweet ass time bombing pretty much the same thing i always bomb but huge i mean 100$ of montana huge an i was almost done i just finished the 3d an was cleaning it up an adding detail wen 2 detectives walk up on me in normal cloths thats y i didint try to run cuz i seen them coming up but didnt think much of it but they were cops saying that some one bombed all over town the prvious night an they were looking for them. they were polite an gave me props on my work told me i was a artist an said they dont trip off people painting out there so i replied so i are u sighting me then an they said cuz wen people do good work out here lil punk as kids see it then try to immatate it all over town an then there sargent gets on there ass. bull shit

uknowigetup
02-16-2012, 09:39 PM
Critz please. I don't like the white or the purple I used for the drips, it the only low pressure can I had so I would have preferred a different outline color, shade color and drips, but I used mostly empty cans for this piece.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120216_205710.jpg

4menace2society0
02-16-2012, 09:45 PM
yo i know you get up dawg

uknowigetup
02-16-2012, 10:45 PM
FUUUUU, I forgot some drop shadow on the back side of the W.

...Toy problems :(

And Sez, I'm sorry about what happened man. I hope everything works out for the best, good luck.

Norfsuthr
02-16-2012, 11:01 PM
i was at a spot way out in the cuts...

So did you get charged or not? If not consider yourself lucky and learn to take a look around while you're painting from now on. You see people coming up then go hide in the woods for a minute and see what they do.

Also, you really have no reason at all to be using montana, much less $100 of it.

uknowigetup
02-16-2012, 11:27 PM
Let the man use what paint he wants to. He's a lot better than a lot of the kids on this thread, if he has the money and the will to buy and use good paint, then let him use good paint. Just because you can't afford it and may have been painting for longer than him, doesn't give you a reason to be all bitter and jelly bro.

4menace2society0
02-16-2012, 11:40 PM
we all know you got ups man, noone wants beef yoo

toopski
02-16-2012, 11:50 PM
Let the man use what paint he wants to. He's a lot better than a lot of the kids on this thread, if he has the money and the will to buy and use good paint, then let him use good paint. Just because you can't afford it and may have been painting for longer than him, doesn't give you a reason to be all bitter and jelly bro.

oh please

uknowigetup
02-16-2012, 11:59 PM
Not at all trying to start beef.

lostyoursense
02-17-2012, 12:04 AM
Let the man use what paint he wants to. He's a lot better than a lot of the kids on this thread, if he has the money and the will to buy and use good paint, then let him use good paint. Just because you can't afford it and may have been painting for longer than him, doesn't give you a reason to be all bitter and jelly bro.

Honestly I don't understand why people are so anal about what kind of paint other people use its there money not yours they wanna waste it they can go for it

smokeitup
02-17-2012, 12:30 AM
this was my old word, i changed it to dkode after i got beef with alot of people. this piece is from 2005...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000269.jpg

and this got capped..

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000070.jpg

my friend done this for me...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000058.jpg

and these 2 are pieces i never posted...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY27AUGUST2010006.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY13AUGUST2010004.jpg

sez.
02-17-2012, 12:49 AM
i love the way montana 94 smells its like cottin candy im addicted to it. dont think i could stop even if i tried. some people wake up an spark a bowl or a cig but naw i just bust a quick handy on a cardboard box thats in my pad then chill in its aroma

smokeitup
02-17-2012, 12:52 AM
yeah i know, every time i paint i smell it and it reminds me of all the pieces ive done in the past. different paint smells different they each have their unique smell

uknowigetup
02-17-2012, 07:23 AM
I agree with both of you. I painted last night, got some 94 and some gold on my hands, and then my steering wheel, my car smells sooo good this morning. I also keep my paint chilling in the open in my room so it keeps a nice aroma.

uknowigetup
02-17-2012, 07:25 AM
Critz please. I don't like the white or the purple I used for the drips, it the only low pressure can I had so I would have preferred a different outline color, shade color and drips, but I used mostly empty cans for this piece.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120216_205710.jpg

Bump.

toopski
02-17-2012, 08:04 AM
haha a mate of mine rekons belton smells like banana

tbh im used to the smell of most brands u can get in aus so its always smth diff

gemer
02-17-2012, 08:36 AM
^^^ hhaha at ur signature shit has me crackin upp idk if its cuz im stoned but im like laughin hard at that
@ know better than the peices i seen u do before i guess just keep practicing work on ur structure more. the bottom left of the k' is skinny compared to the top and the left peg thing on ur n' is a messed up as well...just work on structure a bit more

sez.
02-17-2012, 11:00 AM
know i would stick to the style u posted the other day i like it alot more this one doesnt do it for me but i liked the other one

uknowigetup
02-17-2012, 12:03 PM
Thanks guys. Yeah I fucked up my initial outline and lost the lines and I flow I was aiming for. My sketch was better, I wasn't too happy with it. only thing I enjoyed about this piece was realizing midway through that my can control was improving. Thanks sez, ill work with my other piece some more.

SkateJunt
02-17-2012, 04:51 PM
lil straight i did today, got baked so i didnt even realize i forgot the 3d til 3 hours later when i looked at the flick, still any crits on the letters?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7196/6893585505_23025c85b1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6893585505/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6893585505/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

killroywashere
02-17-2012, 05:06 PM
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6893658437/]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7204/6893658437_7c0d320513.jpg

sez.
02-17-2012, 05:14 PM
good shit killroy i dig that wat does it say i can make out arsn? or arspn?

sez.
02-17-2012, 05:15 PM
arsin?

killroywashere
02-17-2012, 05:56 PM
arson or arsin depending how you look at it
originally arson tho
kind of windy day
all stock caps tho

Mori
02-17-2012, 06:15 PM
we all know you got ups man, noone wants beef yoo hahahahaha

Skame Graffiti
02-17-2012, 09:18 PM
54948549495495054951 thats some of my stuff and thats the ironlak i use... i might try fresh paint soon from ****. any suggestions?

Coleo
02-17-2012, 09:23 PM
^ your using collecter cans!? wtf

smokeitup
02-17-2012, 10:38 PM
this was my old word, i changed it to dkode after i got beef with alot of people. this piece is from 2005...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000269.jpg

and this got capped..

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000070.jpg

my friend done this for me...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000058.jpg

and these 2 are pieces i never posted...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY27AUGUST2010006.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY13AUGUST2010004.jpg

last page bump. no1 commented.

dankbudz
02-17-2012, 10:41 PM
it doesn't deserve one

smokeitup
02-17-2012, 10:42 PM
why not?

uknowigetup
02-17-2012, 11:46 PM
Personally, I don't fancy the way your first D differs from the second. Letter repeat names can be tough to get symmetric. I would try some bubbles if I were you, No sharp edges like you have now, and try to push them all together so they look comfy. Basically, throw ups. Props on the hand style, getting up and I can tell you can some decent can control on a few of those pieces. Just draw up some new shit and then paint it.

4menace2society0
02-17-2012, 11:47 PM
if i come in here again and see you talking about how much you get up again your going on the shitlist

malto
02-18-2012, 01:01 AM
didnt get to finish this yesterday

http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/rask1.png

any crits on this one fellas? probably the cleanest piece ive painted so far but i dont like the S or the R

uknowigetup
02-18-2012, 01:31 AM
if i come in here again and see you talking about how much you get up again your going on the shitlist

:rolleyes: <3
You KNOW it! Ahhh... see what I did there... I cleverly placed my writing name, which just so happens to be a common verb into that sentence...cleverly.

gemer
02-18-2012, 01:42 AM
@ malto its alright man not really diggen the s' or the k' to much and ur letters start to go highte

emace1
02-18-2012, 02:03 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7065/6893967165_226533baee.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6893967165/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6893967165/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/),
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7040/6893968627_d941d01198.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6893968627/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6893968627/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr

logesoner
02-18-2012, 02:14 AM
54978 first piece all aussie export. Crits please?

Phat 2
02-18-2012, 05:14 AM
diggin those BE throws emace1.. good shit
I hope they are BE..

Skame Graffiti
02-18-2012, 09:55 AM
go to youtube and check out troskyy19 i got some good videos of this up there

Colors
02-18-2012, 10:07 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WlPDBUPel4&feature=related

There is no way you did this terrible throw and also the one you posted before... Something doesn't add up. And half the time your not writing skame...Hmmmm I wonder.

I really need to actually paint something.

emace1
02-18-2012, 11:28 AM
They actually say GE haha, that doesn't look like a G???

Colors
02-18-2012, 11:29 AM
Emace i thought it was an O haha

killroywashere
02-18-2012, 11:53 AM
crits are dope
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7204/6893658437_7c0d320513.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6893658437/)

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7045/6897458719_f63886afa0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6897458719/)
ice cold on the black and red one

logesoner - a better 3d would make it pop more

emace - those bombs are ill

malto - maybe tweak the k but i like the structure of the piece

emace1
02-18-2012, 11:54 AM
how can i make it more like a G? I thought it was pretty clear, apparently not though haha. now that I said its a G can you tell that it is or does it still look like something else?

Colors
02-18-2012, 11:59 AM
Emace i i still cant see the g...i only see an 0 and now that phat said it i can see it as a B too

Phat 2
02-18-2012, 01:07 PM
G's DoN'T HaVE HoLES In ThEM NyEGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAA

killroywashere
02-18-2012, 01:58 PM
i see the G homie
its more like a 6 style of a G

@phat - them lower case g's have holes
just to throw it out there

Big Africa
02-18-2012, 02:18 PM
A wall that me and my homies hit
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/multifill.jpg
i know my r is a lil too long and my letter consistancy is off but critz anyway.
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/multifill2.jpg

emace1
02-18-2012, 02:21 PM
yeah exactly i was going for that 6 look, which would have a hole in it. Like, if i took that hole out, wouldn't it just look like a C? Im just fucking confused now...haha thanks for all the help though i appreciate it

Krusty1
02-18-2012, 02:58 PM
oreo... you might want to start outlining the middle of your letters... the fade on the top one is a little whack too but whatever

MN Nice
02-18-2012, 05:59 PM
I hope you and Know get your asses whipped for going over that dudes roller.

killroywashere
02-18-2012, 08:05 PM
@Big africa - make your R more like your 3. and wait to paint. i dont think you and your boys are ready yet

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7049/6899799063_c24062411d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6899799063/)

crits?

gemer
02-18-2012, 08:20 PM
^ not diggen the extension on the a not diggen the r' i think the stuff on the top left of it makes it look weird also the peg coming from the r' is skinny and the stuff below that is to weird as well s' is weird o' is to small n is pretty cool i guess lol just keep painten man

smokeitup
02-18-2012, 09:22 PM
Personally, I don't fancy the way your first D differs from the second. Letter repeat names can be tough to get symmetric. I would try some bubbles if I were you, No sharp edges like you have now, and try to push them all together so they look comfy. Basically, throw ups. Props on the hand style, getting up and I can tell you can some decent can control on a few of those pieces. Just draw up some new shit and then paint it.

thanks for crits dude, heres a piece i done yesterday:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012002.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012001-1.jpg

uknowigetup
02-19-2012, 12:14 AM
Dkode, did you paint that piece beside that one?? I would shy away from the white space, work with bars and do what you can to work them out.

uknowigetup
02-19-2012, 12:32 AM
I hope you and Know get your asses whipped for going over that dudes roller.

Haha man I know what you intend and thank you for your concern, but that kid is a faggot. All he does is piss everywhere and bust rollers. Ill respect anyone who can paint better than me, but if you have no style and all your shit is whack, then fuck it bring the beef. That is literally ALL he does. I've seen a throw of his and it was comical. We have beeb writing for way less time than him and have more skill than he does. Just not the time to roll some whack blocks. But once again, I appreciate your concern and I feel you.

Walt
02-19-2012, 12:55 AM
http://i1220.photobucket.com/albums/dd448/SauceyFlossy/0218121717.jpg

killroywashere
02-19-2012, 08:01 AM
im digging that T

uknowigetup
02-19-2012, 10:42 AM
If that's an s, try to tuck in the top and bottom, it can be done cleanly. Throw some eyes on the top of that O, it's like perfect for them.

And try to fix the bottom of the E, it's inconsistent with that style, in my opinion.

Norfsuthr
02-19-2012, 10:57 AM
Walt your OT is ok, but the E has a dick in its mouth and the S is wack. Lose the split part on top of the E and S, thicken up the S, and try straight bars on the top and bottom of the E.

gemer
02-19-2012, 04:11 PM
nice diggen the name change up for the threads
@ dekode did you do both of those peices? also y did you go over that other dude do u have beef with him just curious?
@walt it all looks like different styles each letter haha and is that an e' cuz it looks like a g' in a wway and if its a g' it kinda looks like an e' haha but keep sprayin man

Mori
02-19-2012, 07:48 PM
@Big africa - make your R more like your 3. and wait to paint. i dont think you and your boys are ready yet

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7049/6899799063_c24062411d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6899799063/)

crits?
i dont think youll ever be ready, sport. i wouldnt be handin out critisicm in your situation. thats for shhhhuuuuuurrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee........

dankbudz
02-19-2012, 08:04 PM
dude this is a mad burner!!!!

Skadeem
02-19-2012, 08:07 PM
A wall that me and my homies hit
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/multifill.jpg
i know my r is a lil too long and my letter consistancy is off but critz anyway.
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/multifill2.jpg

don't cross womp again or you've made everyone's shitlist

You need to learn who's who

uknowigetup
02-19-2012, 08:10 PM
dude this is a mad burner!!!!

Dank, I'm digging the style. I would work on your R though, on the bottom right leg, try to make it like the bottom of the S, and knock out that extension the other way. I think that symmetry would be dope.

Man my throwie on that shit is sad. Fuck running out of paint.

smokeitup
02-19-2012, 08:22 PM
nice diggen the name change up for the threads
@ dekode did you do both of those peices? also y did you go over that other dude do u have beef with him just curious?


i used to, it was an old piece and there was no where else i could piece

uknowigetup
02-19-2012, 08:24 PM
i used to, it was an old piece and there was no where else i could piece

Damn dude that other one is better than your new stuff in my opinion.

malto
02-19-2012, 08:26 PM
dkode you needa stop painting and start sketching more work on your bars theyre all inconsistent, but that old white piece is better than the green and blue one.

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 08:27 AM
@mori - http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7204/6893658437_7c0d320513.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6893658437/)

chill out champ
your going to get at me for critting oreo?

oh yah heres how you do a bomb
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7050/6904134375_4d324e10bb.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6904134375/)
straight lines and whatnot
im fucking with a few names cut me a break homie

uknowigetup
02-20-2012, 08:48 AM
^^ Oreo isn't stepping out of his boundaries, which looks whack. Go back to barring it up like many of us man. Too early to be trying stylized pieces. just my opinion.

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 08:52 AM
i know what you mean
but style is funner than bars in my opinion
i like to go with the flow
rather than be worryed about random errors that dont really matter to me
i can see what you mean about working with bars tho
might give it a shot on my next one

Phillip McDougall
02-20-2012, 10:07 AM
thought i'd give ya'll a taste of some next level shit I've come across in my wide internet travels

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzntx0z5kQ1qa9jeqo1_500.jpg

Shit Outta Luck
02-20-2012, 10:15 AM
don't cross womp again or you've made everyone's shitlist

You need to learn who's who
Womp is everywhere dude...went to an abandoned mental institution...womp's been on the roof. Twice. Fucking crazy.
And Phil that's bangin indeed ^

master of seductions
02-20-2012, 10:28 AM
this is the walls thread!! not the van thread!! if it was still tot bombs and pieces/ paint only it would be fine!!

we need a thread for every possible surface now

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 11:27 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7199/6910702795_34d8982345.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6910702795/)

uknowigetup
02-20-2012, 12:22 PM
i know what you mean
but style is funner than bars in my opinion
i like to go with the flow
rather than be worryed about random errors that dont really matter to me
i can see what you mean about working with bars tho
might give it a shot on my next one

Yeah I feel you, you can still put style on bars. It doesn't have to be all blocky and shit. The point in the recognize the structure of the letter. You can flare out and add shit while doing bars. Just don't go to crazy.

Going through a name change right now and it is not fun.

uknowigetup
02-20-2012, 12:23 PM
^^ that one is better than the others. Work with that N a little bit. Tuck that bitch in all nice and symmetric like.

Mori
02-20-2012, 01:54 PM
Killroywashere@ im sorry man but that ish is trash. you need more foundation. id be crossing your shit out erryday if you lived in my city and was painting that kinda trash on my rocks(whats up with that in the first place? are there no walls where you live?) just work on straight letters man.

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 02:12 PM
i can see what you mean i guess
that would be why im in the toy forum
i just like to paint bro
racking, painting, finding spots, all that shit
haha i got spots but most are under bridges
it gets tough when its winter out and you gotta stand in freezing water

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 02:17 PM
oh yah heres a clean bomb off that my rock and shit
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7045/6911663563_09f5e80719.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6911663563/)

SkateJunt
02-20-2012, 04:53 PM
straight i painted today, the bars are really inconsistent, but i can definately tell my can control is getting better
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7050/6912254173_69dff5806d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6912254173/)
Picture 246 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6912254173/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

SynOne
02-20-2012, 05:47 PM
Had to dip so I didn't get a good flick sadly =[. So here's a flick from the road I took later. I couldn't reach the top to do clean lines lol. This thing never moves, hasn't moved in like 10+ years, so some guys come out there and practice on it.

55403

Skadeem
02-20-2012, 07:09 PM
why are there so many NC cats on forums I'm still morning the death of that roller no matter how wide the span of Womp is. HOLY FUCK why am I not at a yard

clean lines on top aren't always a huge issue if you've gone big. who cares if they're flared out as long as they're solid....now if they're just downright unclean well...

gemer
02-21-2012, 04:21 PM
what do you mean who is womp?

Norfsuthr
02-21-2012, 04:41 PM
thought i'd give ya'll a taste of some next level shit I've come across in my wide internet travels

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzntx0z5kQ1qa9jeqo1_500.jpg
bet Hype already dissed it...