Toy Bombs / pieces (Paint Only.)

[beone]

hilo u think my peice says rezs when i have a g on the guys hat
now u think that the throw that is pretty easy to read say ag or ae or hg or idk u needa get glasses or some shit

[Hilo]

i thot that g stood for gangster

[beone]

lol hell no man i am not like that

[uhhh]

you seem like you'd be gangsta from your sig and avatar but whatever

i'm not either. most gangster thing about me is wearing my pants low and that doesn;t even mean your gangster anymore

[HoodRichSucka]

Originally posted by pound@Jul 1 2006, 05:13 PM
http://img15.imgspot.com/u/06/181/18/kyd1151791756.jpg

another kyd.

sorry bout the quality .
joe, thats acually really good man, dude, whats the deal with nic moving??? he owes me money! get back at me, later

-ad

[uhhh]

wow thats real smart use peoples real names on a public forum

[-AbSrD]

Originally posted by Ume@May 24 2006, 11:04 PM
orrrrr...it's a joke....

:rolleyes:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/dhs051.jpg

the shirt i'm wearing in this one, is one i woke up in...i passed out(from what i remember) in a black shirt...i woke up in a dress shirt..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/dhs073.jpg
OPUS DEI nigguhs!
i saw a cesu roll by on a freight the other day. pretty impressive

[toon!..]

cant be assed to recrop.

[lost_for_evex]

about time i see u get up ... havent seen any of ur painted shit in ever.

[HoodRichSucka]

Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 2 2006, 06:06 PM
wow thats real smart use peoples real names on a public forum
yea, hes prolly the only joe in the world too

[uhhh]

it's still not smart

i'm sorry but your stupid if you don't think about hat stuff. the little shit is shit that'll get cha caught

[Apoc]

the kyd is dope

I dont know if those cesu pieces are new but

the top one has a nice fade and bubble fill and good 3d, but the letter structure needs work

but i'm just critical as fuck, especially about my own work, so dont take it personally.

and cesu man it looks like u paint alot, i see new flix here like every other day. Try taking a break and clearing your mind for a few weeks, get new letters, your E is alright but the rest look sloppy. It seems like your more interested on whats inside and around your letters other than the letters itself.

but anyways there's been some dope shit on this thread lately. Whats up with that shit?

[nephsike]

Originally posted by toon!..@Jul 2 2006, 07:40 PM
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/337/picture0146ji.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^Bridge over motorway

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3957/picture0212pv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^close up

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/9153/picture0234up.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^shutterizm
your about as lame as they come

[beone]

ur e is a sloppy attempt at ze's style and the fills are gross
why did u stay close to the edghe on that bridge that surface is big as hell hold onto the top and climb out dont be a bitch get the good spot

[beefgerky]

what do u write now toon? and yea id recrop those fuckers quick to take u out of em, not a very good dea to pose with your shit haha.

[MF Feed Letter]

ugh that shits sloppy

[Rhom]

Ha yeah thats pretty bad. But this is the toy thread.

[Etcha]

thought i might as well post some of my throwies

http://p5.piczo.com/img/i89791785_44733_5.jpg

http://p5.piczo.com/img/i88690183_4448_5.jpg

http://p5.piczo.com/img/i76927288_41665_5.jpg

[beone]

i dont really like the throw but im glad ur painting just hope those outlines u went over wernt good

[HoodRichSucka]

Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 2 2006, 09:44 PM
it's still not smart

i'm sorry but your stupid if you don't think about hat stuff. the little shit is shit that'll get cha caught
good point good point.

[Sife]

Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 2 2006, 06:06 PM
wow thats real smart use peoples real names on a public forum
ohh no the all horrible first name use...cops can reallly use that against you...anyone with the first name charles watch out, you may be arrested for charles mansons crimes...

[beone]

haha thats my first name!

[pound]

Originally posted by HoodRichSucka+Jul 3 2006, 10:52 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HoodRichSucka @ Jul 3 2006, 10:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Jul 2 2006, 09:44 PM
it&#39;s still not smart

i&#39;m sorry but your stupid if you don&#39;t think about hat stuff. the little shit is shit that&#39;ll get cha caught
good point good point. [/b][/quote]
your lucky ... only legal walls...

[razkO]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f230/Thorles/IMG_0159.jpg

first time with paint. i dont really like it at all, but critz?

[cord]

Originally posted by Rane *DF* *HM*+Jul 2 2006, 05:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Rane *DF* *HM* @ Jul 2 2006, 05:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-cord@Jul 2 2006, 10:36 AM

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j294/aerosoldreams/IMG_0327.jpg





looks like an ill spot [/b][/quote]
its our local chill spot, an abandoned abatoire/ slaughterhouse.

pretty creepy.......

any tips on the letters??

[extirpate]

sketch more, and your drop shadow goes on all your letters/add ons. I.E. your tear drops

[Bem]

Originally posted by razkO@Jul 3 2006, 04:19 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f230/Thorles/IMG_0159.jpg

first time with paint. i dont really like it at all, but critz?
ow man ...Try getting some structure..that will boost it up like 23544352 times ,Also do an outline first with the white ,Fill it in with the white ,and then put the second outline in with black then your ok, It also looks like you colored that with a marker. But you&#39;ll get the hand of it...ALSO is that last letter an N cause I can&#39;t make what it says.


And to cord make the first letter alittle bigger, But It looks decent just keep it up I guess.

[Eskimo33]

Hey cord that kinda looks like the throwie i did for you :D

[lost_for_evex]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/91049758_288866548_0.jpg

chill spot...havent painted senc feb.

fuckin so much wood and stuff on the ground no balance at all wut so ever

pesk left me..and took my black can that bitch...

and i left the sketch on the ground and it was on my homework so it had my name hopefully the rain or suttin took it down the tracks lol


oh and i fucked up the x soooooo bad

[z4k420]

that looks pretty good evex. only letter i dont like is the &#39;V&#39;. the &#39;X&#39; came out a lil to big but it still looks ok.

[lost_for_evex]

yea bro i hate that spot..theres so much shit and u cant balance ur self

fucked up all the leters...ima go down there sumtime this week and buff myself with a trowie. lol

[scoot]

lmao


fuck went to get flicks of some shit i did last thrusday and its all buffed, fucking pissed me off... oh well ill just go and do it again

[DeathRow]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4889/p07041631348rv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8950/p07041631412ys.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Yo, just did this last night, was hard cause was soooo dark lol&#33; But yeah, can i please get some feedback on it.. Thanx

Peace

[Skeam]

i quite like that, not so much the letter structure but the colours and the can control looks pretty good to me, only thing that looks a tad dodgey is the fill

good work

[pound]

Originally posted by DeathRow@Jul 4 2006, 06:21 AM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4889/p07041631348rv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8950/p07041631412ys.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Yo, just did this last night, was hard cause was soooo dark lol&#33; But yeah, can i please get some feedback on it.. Thanx

Peace
i really like that. different letter structure but it looks clean. the e kinda thrrows it off a little but still... lookin good.

[beone]

its ok but the fill is shit and i dont reqally like the letters but ive seen much worse..colors are only ok

[scoot]

i got pics of some shit i did... but to lazy to post them

[FEN the HEN]

good for you

[pace1]

heres one for JAze
Old steez:
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG2492.jpg

[FEN the HEN]

i love that...so simple but so hot

[DeathRow]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Jul 4 2006, 06:56 PM
i love that...so simple but so hot
Word

[pace1]

true i love that shit its so simple yet so fresh for a throw the fill is so clean
Jaze probs bro

[Etcha]

Originally posted by Etcha@Jul 3 2006, 06:14 AM
thought i might as well post some of my throwies

http://p5.piczo.com/img/i89791785_44733_5.jpg

http://p5.piczo.com/img/i88690183_4448_5.jpg

http://p5.piczo.com/img/i76927288_41665_5.jpg
Bump^^^

and

i dont really like the throw but im glad ur painting just hope those outlines u went over wernt good

Well thanks for the feedback...every1 got their own style and i judt get away with mine so :P
cheers
Yeah the outlines where my m8...so they said i could go over.

[leaks]

ive never really liked shit ive done but that was the first one i really liked dane was wat i wrote first back in 05, never got a pic cause it always came out shiny. Not to make exuse but the pic doesnt justify the colors that come out like the brown and the way the silver looks in the tunnel, thats one thing i hope will last but knowing that tunnel some kid will prob be like john was here 2006

thanks for the post pace peace out

[uhhh]

haha. i hate tunnels like that. and just any place like that.

[pace1]

leaks Posted on Jul 5 2006, 12:09 PM will prob be like john was here 2006

John? common name. haha

yeah it already got busted on by that brown faggot

[Sluts_r_us]

from my day with evex...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskbluemarkertag.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesktagoverbomb.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/whitepeskshittyfill.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/blackpesktag.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/blackpeskthrow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/anotherwhitepeskthrow.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jul 5 2006, 05:42 PM
from my day with evex...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskbluemarkertag.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesktagoverbomb.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/whitepeskshittyfill.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/blackpesktag.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/blackpeskthrow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/anotherwhitepeskthrow.jpg
:wub: :wub: :wub:

[wrek10]

pesk is dope

[Sluts_r_us]

thank you.

[lost_for_evex]

who the fuck did u buff? lol

[AoAssis]

just some loser named rime.

[spuck]

edit : oh fuck me

[AoAssis]

Damn your fuckin glasses broken you cunt or are you just retarded? This topic isnt just for painted throwies but it is for only painted pieces/throwies/bombs what ever just no sketches so get that shit out of here.


edit i just read your edit. but my comment still stands.

[spuck]

yeah, i got to this thread from a link i think....
my bad...

[MILink]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i286/chavis_51/IMGP1611.jpg
not really the greatest but just trying to get my throwie down and the little guy on the right was just for fun hahaha(sorry kinda blurry)

[rats]

Originally posted by MILink@Jul 5 2006, 11:09 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i286/chavis_51/IMGP1611.jpg
not really the greatest but just trying to get my throwie down and the little guy on the right was just for fun hahaha(sorry kinda blurry)
Give your throwie some flow. flowie.

No seriously. Consider letter spacing/size.


And the colour scheme isn&#39;t horrible, you may just want to improve that tiger thing a bit. Thicken the stripes?

[OveRDoSeD]

THIS THREAD AINT SHIT BUT SHIT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; FUCK ALL OF YOU WANNA BE ASS WRITERS, YALL *****S ARE TAGGERS, REAL MOTHERFUCKERS ARE WRITERS, DONT CALL YOURSELF A WRITER UNLESS YOUR SHITS UP TO PAR YOU BITCH ASS *****S&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[[]RENT[]]

Originally posted by OveRDoSeD@Jul 6 2006, 04:03 AM
THIS THREAD AINT SHIT BUT SHIT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; FUCK ALL OF YOU WANNA BE ASS WRITERS, YALL *****S ARE TAGGERS, REAL MOTHERFUCKERS ARE WRITERS, DONT CALL YOURSELF A WRITER UNLESS YOUR SHITS UP TO PAR YOU BITCH ASS *****S&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
if they paint throwies, they arent taggers, taggers just tag, and usually will tag with anything from montana xxl&#39;s to pebbles from the street.

You dont have to be a good writer to be a writer, a writer tags, but does peices, bombs, n throwies too. And this is toy bombs /pieces, so I woulnt be expecting good stuff..

[OveRDoSeD]

shut up bitch.

[Socrates]

overdosed get outta here, stop trying to stir shit up

[OveRDoSeD]

im not trying to stir anything up. who the fuck are you telling me to get out, why dont you get out, mister 1 month anniversery today. suck a dick faggot.

[Socrates]

hahaha
who gives a shit how long ive been a member, the point is your bored and youve decided to annoy other people, i suggest suicide

[OveRDoSeD]

I suggest shuting your dumb ass mouth. with your statue of ryan dunn off the bam margera show signature. bitch.

[Feliks]

another pain in the ass eh soscrasteez?
He won&#39;t last long

[OveRDoSeD]

yeah no kidding I barely started gettin hated the past month, and i&#39;ve been on here for OMG I JUST NOTICED YESTERDAY WAS MY YEAR ANNIVERSERY LIKE OMG&#33;&#33;&#33; jk it was tho... wow I didnt even know.


btw the penis is mad large.

[Socrates]

goddamn they piss me off, they dont annoy you dolly?

overdosed if you dont know who that is in my sig you truly need to go kill yourself

[OveRDoSeD]

I know who it is you fucking moron. I just stated that it looked similiar to the gay ass retard on the bam margera show.

[Tode]

ahhh who pissed on whos muffins hmm bam margret or who ever the fook it is yes i can see it :lol:

[OveRDoSeD]

SOMEONE PISSED MY MUFFINS OFF?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;? OMG WHO&#33;?&#33;??&#33;















































































shut up.

[Socrates]

thats it im done, your just too retarded
have fun living your extremely fufilling life.

[OveRDoSeD]

Ok, I will

[Tode]

is muffins ur cat? i eat cats i bite their faces off puke it up then slurp it up with a straw

[OveRDoSeD]

No, muffins is not my cat.

[Feliks]

i kill people who eat my cats.

[OveRDoSeD]

Agreed
Atleast we can agree on one thing.

[Feliks]

BOMBS AND PIECES AWAY

[nephsike]

Originally posted by &#091;
THIS THREAD AINT SHIT BUT SHIT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; FUCK ALL OF YOU WANNA BE ASS WRITERS, YALL *****S ARE TAGGERS, REAL MOTHERFUCKERS ARE WRITERS, DONT CALL YOURSELF A WRITER UNLESS YOUR SHITS UP TO PAR YOU BITCH ASS *****S&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
if they paint throwies, they arent taggers, taggers just tag, and usually will tag with anything from montana xxl&#39;s to pebbles from the street.

You dont have to be a good writer to be a writer, a writer tags, but does peices, bombs, n throwies too. And this is toy bombs /pieces, so I woulnt be expecting good stuff.. [/b][/quote]
:lol: :lol: :lol:
you dont know what your talking about...just stop

[SEROKID]

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/8826/serrrrrrrrrroe0054ic.jpggodam people post flix

[nephsike]

the letters arent too bad....but im not really sure hat you were going for with the color scheme...maybe paint a little bit bigger....your shit seems mad small

[leaks]

def the letters r nice but the lue is a little weird if u had the whhite on the letters not the blue it woud have popped it off

[Feliks]

word, those are highlight hopefully, in which case you did the wrong part of the letters my friend. :lol:
and it&#39;s not that small...

[cord]

fuck, this forum is even worse than i remembered

[EZ3iL]

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_2027.jpg

[scoot]

didnt u post that already?

[lost_for_evex]

uv posted that and we gave crits

[rats]

I can deal with arrows, but I&#39;m really sick of that droplets of whatever coming out of people&#39;s throwies.

[slEEt]

wrong forum

[minesweep]

Originally posted by EZ3iL@Jul 6 2006, 10:06 PM
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_2027.jpg
STOP POSTING THAT&#33; thats like the third time already

[Fate]

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/8234/p10202624pp.jpg

[OveRDoSeD]

What is your major moufunction?

[beefgerky]

he capped himself.

[Fate]

some kids fucked it up

[Fate]

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/161/p10202836go.jpg

[CrowdKiller]

^^^

the last letter is confusing, the n doesnt flow witht the rest of the letters, i must say that its pretty clean.

letters still need work

[acek]

for how long did you writting Fate??

[C3ZR ONE]

Fate- Are you getting up with somebody else now? I see a matching color combo next to yours, or is that yours too?

[elcs]

Originally posted by Fate@Jul 7 2006, 02:51 PM
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/161/p10202836go.jpg
I like this...pretty basic, but super clean. I agree though that the last letter is kinda confusing. Is it an E? I dont think the N is bad, just doesnt really go along with the other letters. Stay up duder.

[elcs]

ooooooooooh, I see...that thing on the end of the E is the dot on the exclimation point. Id try moving that dot away from the E a little and maybe make the bottom extention of the E go out further. Anyways, I like it.

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture028-1.jpg

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture038-1.jpg

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture025-1.jpg

eh...i just started painting...can control sucks...the one on the truck...i rushed cause of a cop, and the one on the train, i used stock caps, and it was really dark out...so the outline sucks ass...not trying to give excuses...and not trying to get ridiculed either...just looking for some real criticisim. Thanks.

[lost_for_evex]

uh how about u find a chill spot.

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

yeah...all these spots were basically stumbled upon...but w/e...everyone starts somewhere.

[beefgerky]

gone, like ive said before, connected shadow ruined the appearance of throws, drop shadow would look better.

[ICER]

i finally took a pick of my painted stuff

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civs.jpg

[lost_for_evex]

piece looks hot trowie looks....eh

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Rane *DF* *HM*@Jul 7 2006, 06:02 PM
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture028-1.jpg

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture038-1.jpg

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture025-1.jpg

eh...i just started painting...can control sucks...the one on the truck...i rushed cause of a cop, and the one on the train, i used stock caps, and it was really dark out...so the outline sucks ass...not trying to give excuses...and not trying to get ridiculed either...just looking for some real criticisim. Thanks.
In all fairness, if you don&#39;t want to be ridiculed, you need to do what Evex says and find a chill spot, not a freight or a truck. Everyone starts somewhere, sure, but you shouldn&#39;t start in public. You embarass yourself and give graff a worse rep that way. I&#39;m not hating on you, cuzz I made the same mistake. I started on freights. That&#39;ll get you clowned. Start at home or a place where the general public wont see it.

Crits- Painting to learn can control right away is good (in private) but focus on hitting that blackbook real hard yo. You got the basic beginners feel for it, but there&#39;s a long ways to go yet. ;)

ICER- I like the throwie. I&#39;m not feelin the colors on the piece so much.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by ICER@Jul 7 2006, 07:48 PM
i finally took a pick of my painted stuff

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civs.jpg
For toy bombs, it does deserve a bump. ;)

[wrek10]

wtf does BUMP mean i see it all the time :huh:

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

^ uhh...like bump it up a page...so when people click on the thread they see it.

I think...

[doomsayer]

it means to bump it so when theres a new page no ones gunna go back to the last page so no one will see your post, so if u bump your post u bring it back to the new page so people can see it.

[wreckone.]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/wpgs%20style/DSC04035.jpg

[Fate]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jul 7 2006, 05:18 PM
Fate- Are you getting up with somebody else now? I see a matching color combo next to yours, or is that yours too?
i never paint alone. :ph34r:
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9622/p10202736ht.jpg
takin back the bridge

[Skeam]

went painting for the second time today was pretty fun, sucks painting by yourself though. i shat i too cause it was under a motorway and a fucken ambo flew past with its siren on and i didnt no if it was a cop or somethin so i was like fark hahaha. i was using caps from a deoderant can and i thought it was gunna work like ass but it didnt work to bad for an outline cap, just sucked to do fills in. im pretty happy with the outcome though... for me second attempt. crits would be greatly appreciated.

cheers
matt

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2413/hpim19752kv.jpg

[Fate]

i dunno if i posted this...
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2347/p10107237rb.jpg

..and gerk ill werk on yer suggestion.

[KaL1]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/unfamous/792588506_l.jpg

i took ur advice and did it in a random wash noone ever sees.this is my first one ive ever painted.Crits always welcome.

[zeekone]

nice...

[minesweep]

eh...i just started painting...can control sucks...the one on the truck...i rushed cause of a cop, and the one on the train, i used stock caps, and it was really dark out...so the outline sucks ass...not trying to give excuses...and not trying to get ridiculed either...just looking for some real criticisim. Thanks.

stock caps are no excuse for bad painting, stock caps help you learn can control fast

[Skeam]

i dont like stock caps at all, my first attempt was with stock caps and it turned out no where near as alrite as my second attempt... with deoderant caps :D

[KaL1]

haha that one i did right there was with some rusto fats i got off of elmers spray glue at michaels.skeam thats a nice one u did up there.

[ICER]

thanks C3ZR :)

[DeathRow]

Yo people, just did this... The drain i did it in was really small and i had too crouch an fumes got to me lol so i started trippin.. but yeah.. im tryin.. Crits wanted..


http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1003/ampee21yx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7179/ampee4wj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Peace

[RASHA]

i like the 3d on it and the color sheme is sick

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 8 2006, 12:51 AM
went painting for the second time today was pretty fun, sucks painting by yourself though. i shat i too cause it was under a motorway and a fucken ambo flew past with its siren on and i didnt no if it was a cop or somethin so i was like fark hahaha. i was using caps from a deoderant can and i thought it was gunna work like ass but it didnt work to bad for an outline cap, just sucked to do fills in. im pretty happy with the outcome though... for me second attempt. crits would be greatly appreciated.

cheers
matt

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2413/hpim19752kv.jpg
bump for critz,

the M was quite that wide, i had to take 2 pictures because i couldnt get the whole throw in 1 picture because the drain was to small and had to make the picture fit from 2 pics. lol

[some guy from NCI...]

why the heck is everyone puttin up in these drains?&#33;

[Skeam]

cause every one is shit and doesnt wanna paint where everyone can see it and be like ooh they eat ass....

well thats why i painted the drain :P

[DeathRow]

Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Jul 8 2006, 05:51 AM
why the heck is everyone puttin up in these drains?&#33;
I did it for practise ay.. Some drains are good though around were I live there is a couple of drains that heaps of famous writers paint in..

[BRAINE]

skeam- its not that bad, if anything it lacks flow but its OK.

deathrow- you have a really good color scheme and it looks like you have good can control, but your letter structure is kinda weak. you might wanna just do one color fills and try to make better letter structure. the E would look good if the extension wasnt so wide and the rest had even width going. the rest of the letters need to go back to the drawing board though.

find a better bridge to paint under. like an actual bridge if you have one that isnt over a freeway.

or go to chill spots or paint behind dumpsters in alleys

[zeekone]

yo...dus any one want me to draw there name and trey draw mine..?im not that bad,i have graffed for like 4 years now..

[a!Ds]

Originally posted by zeekone@Jul 8 2006, 01:43 PM
yo...dus any one want me to draw there name and trey draw mine..?im not that bad,i have graffed for like 4 years now..
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...c=12095&st=1440 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=12095&st=1440)

[elcs]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/oitrey/Bridgebymicasa005.jpg

ICKSA throwie

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/oitrey/Bridgebymicasa009.jpg

I had used up all the white on the first throwie...so i did a few bombs. This one is along the intersate. ICK

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/oitrey/Bridgebymicasa010.jpg

I&#39;m still not really sure if I like these...they could use more work...

[KaL1]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/unfamous/792588506_l.jpg

sooo uhh any crits on my first one?

[DeathRow]

Originally posted by BRAINE@Jul 8 2006, 08:34 AM


deathrow- you have a really good color scheme and it looks like you have good can control, but your letter structure is kinda weak. you might wanna just do one color fills and try to make better letter structure. the E would look good if the extension wasnt so wide and the rest had even width going. the rest of the letters need to go back to the drawing board though.

find a better bridge to paint under. like an actual bridge if you have one that isnt over a freeway.

or go to chill spots or paint behind dumpsters in alleys
Ay thanx for the crits brah,

Just wantin to ask though why don&#39;t the letters go together? It was meant to look like this..
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9628/p07091133448hv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I was trying something a lil more complex then simples cause i can add style into my simples so yeah.. I aint saying your criticism was bad just want to know why you think it needs to go back to the drawin boards...

Thanxx

[spuck]

Originally posted by KaL1@Jul 8 2006, 03:38 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/unfamous/792588506_l.jpg

sooo uhh any crits on my first one?
not bad, and although its pretty obvious i think, it would look infinitely better with the 3d parts completely blacked in

[KaL1]

alright,ill paint another at my practise spot and fill in the shadow.then ill post up here.

[fastt]

here&#39;s some throwies i&#39;ve done in the past month

first time usin this krylon purple. drippy as a mutha fuka
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/prupleoutlinethrow.jpg
i like this one. the shadowing on the I didnt show up cause of the black paint behind it
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/2bluethrow.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/noirwithto.jpg
i know...i need to stop using this baby blue.
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01490.jpg
this one got crossed out =[
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01639.jpg

tell me what i need to work on

[SiLeNt-BoB]

make your letter the same size..and add a force field..and its all good&#33;

[Skeam]

work on your fills mate. looks pretty good besides that

[SiLeNt-BoB]

there nuthin up with his fills....ghetto fill...not every bomb has to be perfect..

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam+Jul 8 2006, 04:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skeam @ Jul 8 2006, 04:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Jul 8 2006, 12:51 AM
went painting for the second time today was pretty fun, sucks painting by yourself though. i shat i too cause it was under a motorway and a fucken ambo flew past with its siren on and i didnt no if it was a cop or somethin so i was like fark hahaha. i was using caps from a deoderant can and i thought it was gunna work like ass but it didnt work to bad for an outline cap, just sucked to do fills in. im pretty happy with the outcome though... for me second attempt. crits would be greatly appreciated.

cheers
matt

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2413/hpim19752kv.jpg
bump for critz,

the M was quite that wide, i had to take 2 pictures because i couldnt get the whole throw in 1 picture because the drain was to small and had to make the picture fit from 2 pics. lol [/b][/quote]
BUMPIDY BUMP BUMP... critza-majiggas

[alive]

get ur letters the same size and closer together, itl look hot, but i like it already. o but a big thing, your missing maddddd shine. its not just the upper right remember, its bottom left of ANY LINE. so for example there should be shine on the top of the second downward stroke of the S, if the makes any sense. the line ur accidntly did twice, which by the way, next time cover up with some extra paint.

keep going

[alive]

Originally posted by fastt@Jul 9 2006, 05:27 AM
here&#39;s some throwies i&#39;ve done in the past month

first time usin this krylon purple. drippy as a mutha fuka
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/prupleoutlinethrow.jpg
i like this one. the shadowing on the I didnt show up cause of the black paint behind it
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/2bluethrow.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/noirwithto.jpg
i know...i need to stop using this baby blue.
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01490.jpg
this one got crossed out =[
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01639.jpg

tell me what i need to work on



ICKSA throwie



I had used up all the white on the first throwie...so i did a few bombs. This one is along the intersate. ICK



I&#39;m still not really sure if I like these...they could use more work...


dunno y it didnt copy pictures for the second quote, buttttt

fasttt, make ur lettters all the same height, itl look much better, they dont look thattt bad, but sketch


ICK- ur letters look like other letters, sry, get the the sketch thread, but looking past that, i like them a lot. lol

[Skeam]

thanx heaps alive, its real inspirational when someone says it looks good or it has potential and to keep going.

appreciate it mate.

matt

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by fastt@Jul 9 2006, 05:27 AM
here&#39;s some throwies i&#39;ve done in the past month

first time usin this krylon purple. drippy as a mutha fuka
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/prupleoutlinethrow.jpg
i like this one. the shadowing on the I didnt show up cause of the black paint behind it
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/2bluethrow.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/noirwithto.jpg
i know...i need to stop using this baby blue.
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01490.jpg
this one got crossed out =[
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01639.jpg

tell me what i need to work on
....whys it remind me of ioni? :huh:

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jul 3 2006, 10:24 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/91049758_288866548_0.jpg

chill spot...havent painted senc feb.

fuckin so much wood and stuff on the ground no balance at all wut so ever

pesk left me..and took my black can that bitch...

and i left the sketch on the ground and it was on my homework so it had my name hopefully the rain or suttin took it down the tracks lol


oh and i fucked up the x soooooo bad
quadruple bump... Put the haters to rest Evex.. ;)

[shifty!]

i wouldnt post your real name skeam...

[fastt]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex+Jul 9 2006, 01:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (lost_for_evex &#064; Jul 9 2006, 01:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fastt@Jul 9 2006, 05:27 AM
here&#39;s some throwies i&#39;ve done in the past month

first time usin this krylon purple. drippy as a mutha fuka
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/prupleoutlinethrow.jpg
i like this one. the shadowing on the I didnt show up cause of the black paint behind it
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/2bluethrow.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/noirwithto.jpg
i know...i need to stop using this baby blue.
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01490.jpg
this one got crossed out =[
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/Graffiti/DSC01639.jpg

tell me what i need to work on
....whys it remind me of ioni? :huh:

[/b][/quote]
whos ioni???

[ion-i]

me.

it doesnt really look like mine, i mean look at my letters, and my I is different.
i guess you can say our bubbley throw style is kinda similar, but not like its a bad thng.
i like your throw man, keep it up. although I dont really feel the two circles in the R and the O, its still really clean.

[shifty!]

i think it reminds you of ioni because he posted a throw with the same color i think, could be worng...

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 9 2006, 02:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 9 2006, 02:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lost_for_evex@Jul 3 2006, 10:24 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/91049758_288866548_0.jpg

chill spot...havent painted senc feb.

fuckin so much wood and stuff on the ground no balance at all wut so ever

pesk left me..and took my black can that bitch...

and i left the sketch on the ground and it was on my homework so it had my name hopefully the rain or suttin took it down the tracks lol


oh and i fucked up the x soooooo bad
quadruple bump... Put the haters to rest Evex.. ;) [/b][/quote]
.. :) well thank you...

ima go down there 2marow and do a trowie or suttin...idk w.e

[fastt]

Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Jul 9 2006, 04:02 PM
me.

it doesnt really look like mine, i mean look at my letters, and my I is different.
i guess you can say our bubbley throw style is kinda similar, but not like its a bad thng.
i like your throw man, keep it up. although I dont really feel the two circles in the R and the O, its still really clean.
yea...i need to get rid of those circly thingys. my homies arent really feelin those too. thanks for the crits. can you post up some of ur throws, i wanna see the relation.

[scoot]

your "r" looks like a "n" with eyes

[fastt]

Originally posted by scoot@Jul 9 2006, 04:31 PM
your "r" looks like a "n" with eyes
if i bring the top of the R down it can pass off as a "N" haha i gonna sketch it out and see

i just realized...do my R&#39;s look like H&#39;s???

[ion-i]

Originally posted by fastt+Jul 9 2006, 02:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fastt @ Jul 9 2006, 02:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ion&#045;i@Jul 9 2006, 04:02 PM
me.

it doesnt really look like mine, i mean look at my letters, and my I is different.
i guess you can say our bubbley throw style is kinda similar, but not like its a bad thng.
i like your throw man, keep it up. although I dont really feel the two circles in the R and the O, its still really clean.
yea...i need to get rid of those circly thingys. my homies arent really feelin those too. thanks for the crits. can you post up some of ur throws, i wanna see the relation. [/b][/quote]
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap134.jpg

whatev yo haha

[fastt]

i saw ur deviant art...it&#39;s look gangster

[ion-i]

i lot of the paintings i do have on my DA suuuck. but thanks anyways, i gotta go piece one of my sketches sometime to make up for the old crap shit i have haha.

[Skeam]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Jul 9 2006, 03:16 PM
i wouldnt post your real name skeam...
im not fussed man.... theres like 20 matts just at my school literally... probably about 40 000 matts in australia... probably 4 000 000 matts i nthe world... probably more. and that dot have any evidence that matt is my real name... my real name could be fredrick chasm banana McMuffin, they got no evidence except for the fact i wrote matt down the bottom of my post...

meh

cheers
matt

[AoAssis]

Well i Guess your right.

Cheers
- Tupac Shakur

P.S. yes im still alive.*****&#33;

[Sluts_r_us]

yeah i guess he is right...

cheers
- god

[Skeam]

lmao thats some funny it... STILL ALIVE *****S

[-task-]

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/bombing006.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/bombing008.jpg

[doomsayer]

my second attempt with spraypainting

crits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/6c1646cd.jpg

I find drawing the C is hard with the R sitting there infront of it, thats why the C is so far out&#33; any tips on how i can fix this, cause when i draw it in closer it just ruins it cause the R is in the way :huh:

[Bombers Ambition]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti017.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti112.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti114.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti120.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti125.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti123.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti126.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti130.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti132.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti141.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti164.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti166.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti167.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti169.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti346.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti347.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti349.jpg

Critz Comments?

[zeekone]

nice hero...but u need a lil work but nice..atleast u gettin up&#33;

[explosivo_420]

damnnn hero. you need a little more shaping, but your up with heart.

[Skeam]

getting up really good mate, but i agree maybe a bit more time concerntrating on the lettering. but still great work buddy.

matt

[fastt]

Originally posted by &#045;task&#045;@Jul 9 2006, 08:35 PM
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/bombing006.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/bombing008.jpg
i think you should throw in some shadows.

[-task-]

thanks, im workin on gettin those down...

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Jul 9 2006, 11:48 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti017.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti112.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti114.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti120.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti125.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti123.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti126.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti130.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti132.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti141.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti164.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti166.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti167.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti169.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti346.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti347.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/Toronto/Graffiti349.jpg

Critz Comments?
fuckin bump. :ph34r: love it.

[AoAssis]

Correct me if im wrong but it looks like your hiting a fuckin school in some of those pics.

[Stonk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senhollowbomb2.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senhollowbomb3.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senhollowbomb1.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senbluebomb.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cultureandsen-1.gif

The first picture is messed up, for some reason about halfway down the frame it shifted over a little bit. Anyway critz please.

[shifty!]

i dont really like the squilly thing on the S, so maybe just make that line staright...

[shifty!]

if it is a school he probably doesnt go to that school or is out of school...

[nephsike]

its good to see poeple bombing....but alot of should hit the books more, cause that shit definatley aint worht goin to jail for

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Jul 10 2006, 03:59 PM
if it is a school he probably doesnt go to that school or is out of school...
Thats besides the point, i dont care if the school is out for the summer or if he doesnt go there, its fucking gay to tag any school.

[sice1]

Originally posted by beone@Jul 3 2006, 12:47 PM
haha thats my first name&#33;
:lol: me 2

[fastt]

Originally posted by &#045;task&#045;@Jul 10 2006, 07:27 AM
thanks, im workin on gettin those down...
i think shadows are easy to learn. just pretend the light source is shinging in one area. lets say it&#39;s the top right hand corner, everything on the left side and bottom side of the letters should have shadowing under it

[cookies!]

went to venice but wasnt planning on paintin but meh lol
and yes thats a snake, (not me btw)
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7997/efectcookiesvenice8il.jpg

[MF Feed Letter]

i woud be embarassed to be seen painting that

[a!Ds]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jul 10 2006, 10:53 PM
i woud be embarassed to be seen painting that
wow you stole the words right out my mouth.
id throw an egg or somethin and you and your bomb, noo offense, but yea ur structure sucks, ur 3d is really bad, you need better control, and do the fill in of a letter 1st then outline it.

[cookies!]

if its any better, im on the bottom lol

[djsupreeme]

Originally posted by cookies&#33;@Jul 10 2006, 11:06 PM
if its any better, im on the bottom lol
no

[-task-]

Originally posted by cookies&#33;@Jul 10 2006, 10:11 PM
went to venice but wasnt planning on paintin but meh lol
and yes thats a snake, (not me btw)
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7997/efectcookiesvenice8il.jpg
that shit is doo doo

[Palm Beach Police]

^^^ poor wall :(

[xAWOKE.925]

^i laughed. ^_^

[uhhh]

mann. it&#39;s not even like he had good structure and bad latters it&#39;s juts like... he got up and was like... you know what... i think i&#39;ma start writing graffiti and then went and bought paint and...that... happened

[cookies!]

yeah thats exactly what happened.. :rolleyes:

[doomsayer]

k can sumone plz crits this, i like it i think i just need better can control but can u guys tell me what u think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/135bab4a.jpg

[magic nyc]

Venice legal walls, I would be embarrassed with all the people watching.

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jul 10 2006, 11:53 PM
i woud be embarassed to be seen painting that
;) Beat me to it
atleast hes painting though, its a step

[beefgerky]

he should be sketching.

[tint1]

nah he should be painting/getting up...but in venice? come on...

[cookies!]

wow you guys act like thats gonna be there forever...i practiced at venice..so what? no ones gonna start off like a pro. and if you&#39;ve ever been to venice, you&#39;d know that shit gets painted over quuuuuuuuuuuick.

[shifty!]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Jul 11 2006, 05:25 PM
k can sumone plz crits this, i like it i think i just need better can control but can u guys tell me what u think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/135bab4a.jpg
doom work on your N im pretty sure that first letter is an N according to your tag, but yeh your N looks liek an X...nice crib

[Prints]

first attempt at doing decals
i know it&#39;s sloppy but i ran outta paint quick so i couldn&#39;t clean up the lines
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g54/disciplesofart/IMG_6474.jpg

[lost_for_evex]

why would u do that 2 urself?

[Stonk]

Originally posted by Stonk@Jul 10 2006, 02:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senhollowbomb2.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senhollowbomb3.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senhollowbomb1.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senbluebomb.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cultureandsen-1.gif

The first picture is messed up, for some reason about halfway down the frame it shifted over a little bit. Anyway critz please.
sorry to bump, but anyone else?

[magic nyc]

Whats happening these days? Save you paint in a cool dark place for 6 months and sketch your ass off. Theirs a reason I dont paint much.

[?..DeMo..?]

yo it snot that bad its ok ok fill good shafow justk keep sketching and umm work a lil more on ur letters like the squigly shit in the s part ya know??

[gustoleum]

try to keep the shape and formation throught the whole bomb

[SHAKE.]

all i can say is sketch. most cats on here just want to go out and bomb, but theres no point in doin so if it looks like shit.

[[]RENT[]]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jul 11 2006, 09:43 PM
Whats happening these days? Save you paint in a cool dark place for 6 months and sketch your ass off. Theirs a reason I dont paint much.
yea, ive been sketching for 7 or 8 months, and i barely ever paint, ill do a bomb once in a while if its ok&#39;ed to be paintable by a non toy

[doomsayer]

i havent even done any painting where people will actually see, sumtimes i just practice in my bakcyard when im bored with like 2 dollard paint but thats about it

[[]RENT[]]

I only do legals at skateparks, in my backyard, or under bridges with nothing good under them.

[sice1]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4935/06212006062246dsc004365am.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[RAIN_TRB88]

im not into this just keep sketching malarky like, just go out and bomb people get better over time its just how it works ill see if i can post one of my throw ups http://spb.fotologs.net/photo/59/60/24/rainboe/1150996464_f.jpg

this is a roadside england.

[beefgerky]

nice but your I looks like a T.

[Sluts_r_us]

yeha im really feelin your r alot....keep it up and im still waitin for another WAW bombing spree...

[shifty!]

waw should make a video hahaa, what does waw stand for anyways?

[toon!..]

Originally posted by sice1@Jul 12 2006, 04:06 AM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4935/06212006062246dsc004365am.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump..i like it alot

[nephsike]

Originally posted by RAIN_TRB88@Jul 12 2006, 05:30 AM
im not into this just keep sketching malarky like, just go out and bomb people get better over time its just how it works ill see if i can post one of my throw ups http://spb.fotologs.net/photo/59/60/24/rainboe/1150996464_f.jpg

this is a roadside england.
rain kyt burns you
and another reason you should be sketching not painting is because even if you ever get good, all the heads in your city will still remember when your toy ass was wasting wall space back in the day..you&#39;ll just get dissed and will never get respect
at leats thats how it is in my area

[?..DeMo..?]

nice shit rain but yea ur i looks like a t

[start today]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v212/forgottenbmx/path.jpg

really shitty wall, but it&#39;s a chill spot. i&#39;m just startin out so i just been workin on some shit in the middle of the woods on an old wall. and i know the letters are pretty boring but whatever...any other critisism?

[toon!..]

lol thats actually not all that bad..just work more on a style and youl be a killer

[Blak-T]

looks like you need to sketch a lil more....you control is good , but structure is weak...try makin all the letters all caps...

[uhhh]

controls pretty good. the letters need soome work but not bad. ;)

[start today]

thanks a lot...feels good to get some possitive feedback hahah but yea i been sketchin a lot lately and i got plenty of chill spots to practice so i&#39;ll work on letter structure

[uhhh]

yeah just go out there with some bucket paint and a roller and then you have a whooooole new wall :)

[?..DeMo..?]

nice path

[Jatez]

This was my first painted piece. I know it&#39;s real crappy, but can someone still gimme some tips and crit it please? Thanks.

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/1986/p10100656ii.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[BLOC]

in stead of brown in for the bubble effect i guess u would call it try white or yello

[uhhh]

instead of painting i would gtry blackbooing and getting letters

[SHAKE.]

the thing that i notice the most is that the letters arent very claer and you did a bad fill.
i just think that its real sloppy and you should hit your blackbook.

[Crucible]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v24/Raccoon171/Crux.jpg
I know the R is sloppy, but what do you think?

[lost_for_evex]

:lol: i was having such a crappy day until i got here hahaha

[Fate]

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/526/p10203336us.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/992/p10203655ai.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3276/p10203628vr.jpg
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/6378/p10203744wk.jpg

[ion-i]

2nd one, ill man props.

oh yea and to bring things up to date, dont worry about that dino karak anymore, i just kinda stopped with it, ive got new karaks. ;)

[Fate]

Originally posted by Fate@Jul 12 2006, 08:22 PM
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/526/p10203336us.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/992/p10203655ai.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3276/p10203628vr.jpg
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/6378/p10203744wk.jpg
bump

[SHAKE.]

ya man im really feelin the second one,

[Fate]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1691/p10203328dp.jpg

[elcs]

those look pretty clean...im not really feeling those handstyles tho

[Z FUSE]

gone that black hollow ^ is sooo clean, i love it&#33;

[SHAKE.]

fate thats good can control, but im not feelin the colors at all :(

[fastt]

Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Jul 12 2006, 08:46 PM
2nd one, ill man props.

oh yea and to bring things up to date, dont worry about that dino karak anymore, i just kinda stopped with it, ive got new karaks. ;)
i love all of them . i love the last one the most, nice colors , clean also

[DR FORCE]

Originally posted by Fate@Jul 12 2006, 10:17 PM
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1691/p10203328dp.jpg
I dont feel it
the colors dont fit or somthing

[DR FORCE]

Originally posted by Crucible@Jul 12 2006, 07:43 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v24/Raccoon171/Crux.jpg
I know the R is sloppy, but what do you think?
try another style

[uhhh]

or try NOT painting. until you have some sort of letter structure ;)

[Palm Beach Police]

^ Tehe

[elcs]

Originally posted by DR FORCE+Jul 13 2006, 06:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DR FORCE @ Jul 13 2006, 06:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fate@Jul 12 2006, 10:17 PM
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/1691/p10203328dp.jpg
I dont feel it
the colors dont fit or somthing [/b][/quote]
yea, the colors dont look right. I dunno if you want crits on this or not...but im not really feelin those arrows through the G and the O, or the N and the E. Im not really sure what they are there for. meh...or the lines on the bottom of the letters that arnt really there for anything either. your black hollow bomb that you did was the best as far as structure goes. Id stick with that. just sayin&#39;

[djsupreeme]

the arrows are to represent the holes in the letters

[some guy from NCI...]

hahaha when I saw that NWA I lol&#39;ed.

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3276/p10203628vr.jpg
Uber Bump for that hollow in the left <3

[magic nyc]

Theirs a better Gone in queens.

[Apoc]

i dont mean to be an asshole but, gone, you should do different stuff. Change your name or something. It just seems like your stuck in the "I&#39;m new" stage, experiment more. I mean, you&#39;ve been writing longer than me and I havn&#39;t seen any growth in your style since i&#39;ve been on these boards.

[ShIfTeD]

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti8.jpg

yeah minez

[ShIfTeD]

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti6.jpg

[ShIfTeD]

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti7.jpg

[ShIfTeD]

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti9.jpg

[ShIfTeD]

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti5.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti4.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti3.jpg
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
damn i hate gang graffiti&#33; writin over my shit&#33;
http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h314/AMWKING/graffiti2.jpg
better view of the 1st i posted

[beefgerky]

yeesh..

magic that bitch in your sig is fucking scary... :o

[Fate]

Originally posted by Apoc@Jul 14 2006, 01:00 AM
i dont mean to be an asshole but, gone, you should do different stuff. Change your name or something. It just seems like your stuck in the "I&#39;m new" stage, experiment more. I mean, you&#39;ve been writing longer than me and I havn&#39;t seen any growth in your style since i&#39;ve been on these boards.
theres been "growth", i dont feel like postin a bunch of pics to prove this though.
as for "experimenting" i do, i just dont post alot of my werk here, but im a big fan of clean and simple. and that bomb woth the pink bubbles was experimental, and didnt werk out so well.
anyhow on and on....

ok i lied, progression
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/8637/fate56vy.jpg
from this to this in less than year.
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/992/p10203655ai.jpg

[obseen]

that cartoon in your sig goes on for ages