Walls

[Matyr]

comments/ crits please on the piece i posted above^^

[Nasty_One]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n3/dubya06/dub.jpg
second painted piece, wound up changing my name cause apparently there is already a dub in philly.. im in ny but whatever. should have went with a lowercase b, but started doing an uppercase and just had to go with the flow.. i think the fill came out very well, letters could have been a bit more solid, but the only excuse i have was that it was extremely dark and i could barely see what i was doing.

[krysnum1]

EVE: Your shits straight... Hit the streets bro.

DUB: Learn how to do a 3d, the 3d is pointing every way and shit. Its suppose to be pointing at one particular place.... 6th grade art class.

[near]

went out again

lil like thing up to the side of a highway (in plain view from the highway)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/wda.jpg
cars passing by as i did this lol (came back to flick after)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/fsefes.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/sfsd.jpg
the a doesnt actually look closed off at the bottom its just mad dark w/e first time i painted the full bomb...

kinda same old same old but w/e

[NOMX]

ur straight my brotha!!^^^
love the throw, i would like to see some pieces as well

eve, work on ur stuff a bit more, i dont think ur ready for the streets yet.

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/8498/internet2urbanregenpieceih6.jpg

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060810/14/7/a/4/7a4160bdb625a096292c809d4d2e61c5200608100_full.jpg

stuff this makes me sad, no offense but u wasted a lot of high quality paint and money on that. stick to regular cans for awhile

the 3-d is messed up. the letters arent developed enough (mostly the b and the g). the letters are all over the place. work with the piece some more.

[KRON1*NVK]

Comments-posotive or negative, I dont care, I just wanna know what
people think of our shit...........Denver Graff*303 bishhhhhh.haha



http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/3434/nvkrollertk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[xAWOKE.925]

shits in the middle of nowhere it looks like, but hey, looks like you're puttin in work.

[NOMX]

is there a bulge in the side of the N? if there is i would probably lose it, i wouldnt put the white in the middle under the V and between the other letters. great roller though

[elcs]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Aug 11 2006, 02:44 PM
shits in the middle of nowhere it looks like, but hey, looks like you're puttin in work.
how the fuck can you tell that this is in the middle of nowhere...all it shows is the back of a building for god sakes. You can even see another building in the background...

[clockworkfuse]

whoa dude take it easy

[shifty!]

yeh i would lose the bump in the N and the white under the V and try making the legs on the K straight. but other then that i like it...yeh elcs chill...

[Skeam]

NEAR - there some clean throwies man i really like the style of the actual throwie too lookin real good man keep painting ay.

[elcs]

man...i was in a fucking terrible mood when i posted that. nvm, sorry didnt mean to be a dick.



but still...you cant tell

[clockworkfuse]

he said it looks like it is

[elcs]

i know...i mean that you cant tell that it is in the middle of nowhere...

nvm, this discussion is pointless. im gonna go jack off

[NOMX]

word

[KRON1*NVK]

Originally posted by elcs@Aug 11 2006, 11:41 PM
i know...i mean that you cant tell that it is in the middle of nowhere...

nvm, this discussion is pointless. im gonna go jack off
Whats with the nvm, its nvk. and what u mean its pointless, I really do
wanna hear what people say about our stuff n no it aint in the middle of
nowhere, its right off of one of colorados main highways, I25 if u aint know but
rite on for the comments though, people overhere in Denver will most likely
hate on our shit cuz we aint tko or ae or any other big crew, we came up
off our own so every one just hates but i´ll keep postin them pics on here,
I like this forum, freshsites is lame......

[clockworkfuse]

are you an idiot.. nvm means never mind

[shifty!]

is there even anyone in your "crew"

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by elcs+Aug 11 2006, 05:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (elcs &#064; Aug 11 2006, 05:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-xAWOKE.925@Aug 11 2006, 02:44 PM
shits in the middle of nowhere it looks like, but hey, looks like you&#39;re puttin in work.
how the fuck can you tell that this is in the middle of nowhere...all it shows is the back of a building for god sakes. You can even see another building in the background...[/b][/quote]
exactly.

[KRON1*NVK]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Aug 12 2006, 11:37 AM
is there even anyone in your "crew"
No, I paint by myself, im a lonely ass kid just tryinda get up..

NVK
KRON1
REAZN
ABUSE
BLOKE
TASK
NDZ
NINE
AKOR
NOYZ
UNCK
LO
FAZER
TNT-The Nations Top
TAKE
EHK

[rats]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Aug 12 2006, 11:37 AM
is there even anyone in your "crew"
Shut up.


Jesus christ, I swear y&#39;all are really reaching to beef with eachother.


Who gives a fuck who is in his crew, since when did it really matter who you rolled with?

(especially when the kid just wanted crits on his piece...)


This is a waste of space.

[near]

haha i just noticed something....im addicted oi oi oi...lol 1 person at least should know what im talking about lol o_O

[KRON1*NVK]

Originally posted by clockworkfuse@Aug 12 2006, 11:03 AM
are you an idiot.. nvm means never mind
Well my bad I aint a forum freak that knows text slang bitch&#33; n no
I aint an idiot, im ur daddy boy. :o

[shifty!]

Originally posted by KRON1*NVK+Aug 12 2006, 02:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KRON1*NVK @ Aug 12 2006, 02:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-clockworkfuse@Aug 12 2006, 11:03 AM
are you an idiot.. nvm means never mind
Well my bad I aint a forum freak that knows text slang bitch&#33; n no
I aint an idiot, im ur daddy boy. :o [/b][/quote]
how old are you? 10?

[KRON1*NVK]

No....18, why? Ive been writin since I wuz born.... :lol:

[shifty!]

"im your daddy boy" no, its not funny, and if you have been writing since you were bor why are you in the toy forum? you think if you have been writing tht long you would be better...

[KRON1*NVK]

What u aint ever heard of sarcasm, naah ive been
writin since....lets see, I did my first tag on my old
highschool roof when I wuz like 14-almost 15.......

[nerdx]

Originally posted by KRON1*NVK@Aug 11 2006, 11:13 AM
Comments-posotive or negative, I dont care, I just wanna know what
people think of our shit...........Denver Graff*303 bishhhhhh.haha



http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/3434/nvkrollertk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
mad props for hittin it big. but as for the 3d, i dont like it.
letters could be a bit nicer. but like i said ups is what your going for.

[rats]

Shifty/Kron: Take your shit to the beef thread. Battle or shut the fuck up.


::edit:: (being constructive) As far as the piece goes, the 3-d needs some work. Those detail lines make it look unrealistic because they&#39;re all a measured distance from eachother.

[leaks]

i posted in the main thread but im stil a toy at heart so im stayin here
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1958/picture014mo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[NOMX]

clean except for the ends, i know the side of the j is a little messed up becuase the pole was in the way. looks like u messed up on the swirl on the z but i think u are already aware of that. other than that its really clean, i like the scheme and the outline is very very clean. and the letter structure is dope aswell

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

Originally posted by leaks@Aug 12 2006, 05:17 PM
i posted in the main thread but im stil a toy at heart so im stayin here
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1958/picture014mo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
niiiiice...i like the colors too.

[leaks]

Originally posted by NOMX@Aug 12 2006, 05:24 PM
clean except for the ends, i know the side of the j is a little messed up becuase the pole was in the way. looks like u messed up on the swirl on the z but i think u are already aware of that. other than that its really clean, i like the scheme and the outline is very very clean. and the letter structure is dope aswell
thanks but yo its called a fade did it on the j and did it on the e

[nerdx]

yo jaze i seen some of your other stuff in the photo section shits hot.

[Zire]

Originally posted by leaks@Aug 12 2006, 08:39 PM

thanks but yo its called a fade did it on the j and did it on the e
Yeh, i see what ur goin for but tht fade takes away its cleaness, it wud look much better without it, also, u cant see the fade becuase of the fill colour u used.

[fume]

my throwup:
http://usera.imagecave.com/floris09/Afb010-copy.jpg

and my crew, SA:
http://usera.imagecave.com/floris09/Afb011-copy.jpg

[gnarlatron3030]

there&#39;s already a case

and the name&#39;s played out.
http://i7.tinypic.com/24grotd.jpg

it&#39;s not as clean as I&#39;d like it to be, but our skinny caps weren&#39;t working very well on the paint I used.

[beone]

who cares if its played out

and that argon bomb/peice whatever the fuck it is its awfull

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

that case aint bad...it&#39;s clean for the most part...i just dont like the style, but hey...thats you...

and that argon...why would you take a picture next to that?

[leaks]

case i do like that you practice practice and that will be a clean throw i would work on the sa alittle and problly wouldnt use the same style but i am fellin the case

and argon being extremely toy is played out &#092;

[lost_for_evex]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/stunt-gone-bad.jpg

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

Originally posted by leaks@Aug 13 2006, 01:05 PM

and argon being extremely toy is played out &#092;
:lol: whoooooo

hahaha

[elcs]

HAHAHAHA, omg...is the O in that argon pic an eggplant karak?&#33; HAHAHAHA

[KRON1*NVK]

REAZN highway piece:
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7546/reaznhighwaysw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits.

[beone]

i like it from what i can see clean it up alot make the e thicker the z is the best part but the tag is terrible

[cheif3d]

Originally posted by crazy*****drizzleisgelo@Jun 28 2005, 08:57 AM
kid ur gay but i do like the letters just not that name g unit come on kid dont b lame but i like ur style stay up bruh
I din&#39;t like g-unit So choke on caps lol

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

are you really replying to something that was posted last year?

[xAWOKE.925]

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4849/paintyrn2.jpg


flikd with my phone sorry bout the shitty image quality

[lost_for_evex]

i love you mang.

i remeber when u sucked dick..awoke lol

[xAWOKE.925]

haha thanks, shit i need your sn again PM me

[nerdx]

awoke throw is hot

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Aug 13 2006, 05:13 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4849/paintyrn2.jpg


flikd with my phone sorry bout the shitty image quality
i love this shit megaprops gee.

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

that throw is FIYYYAAHHH :D

[NOMX]

Originally posted by leaks+Aug 12 2006, 08:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (leaks &#064; Aug 12 2006, 08:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NOMX@Aug 12 2006, 05:24 PM
clean except for the ends, i know the side of the j is a little messed up becuase the pole was in the way. looks like u messed up on the swirl on the z but i think u are already aware of that. other than that its really clean, i like the scheme and the outline is very very clean. and the letter structure is dope aswell
thanks but yo its called a fade did it on the j and did it on the e [/b][/quote]
i can belive that u faded on the e but i bet that pole was just in the way of the j :)

[elcs]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Aug 13 2006, 05:13 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4849/paintyrn2.jpg


flikd with my phone sorry bout the shitty image quality
I like this alot. God job man. Id like to see this with a fill. Wait...nvm...i see the fill. All be it a shitty fill, but a fill none the less. Do a good fill and a solid outline with a good shadow and this will be real good duder.


On a sidenote...do you guys ever see those birdnests like the ones in this pic and think "how the fuck can they make those things?" Animal instinct is mind blowing.

[xAWOKE.925]

they make it with some mud shit. and yeah, it is. i just did a crack fil its hard to tell in this flik but w/e. Thanks for the critz, when i get a flik of a cleanly done throwie i&#39;ll makes ure and pos tit

[NOMX]

i love ur throw, but i think im alone on this but i cant really tell that the W is a W.... maybe define it some more? but then again ur throw is dope as hell the way it is

[war terror]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m113/facelessfame/january06-july06005.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m113/facelessfame/january06-july06004.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m113/facelessfame/january06-july06003.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m113/facelessfame/january06-july06002.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m113/facelessfame/january06-july06001.jpg

new shit

[minesweep]

work on it more before you start getting up

i cant make out the letters

[Zire]

Resize for fuck sake&#33;

[acek]

old stuff with cheap paint....


http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/4599/pic035ec9.jpg


http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/230/pic040rx4.jpg


http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9955/pic042mb9.jpg


new stuff coming soon....

[near]

ill throw acek

[leaks]

my girls first time ever painting and using car paint with the chiesl caps, paint sucked but she rocked it without my help
http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/9452/picture668fj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

wow cheisl caps suck shouldnt tryed to have cracks but sorry pace for goin over u no space i got ur pics of it nice character
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2779/picture672hl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[leaks]

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6518/picture662kf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/628/picture663lc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Sluts_r_us]

damn jaze your my hero. mad clean but where you from anyway?

[pace1]

no problem that was wack and i used shit paint. but yeah that karak was my first well both were the devil and the space guy.

nice ups to booth shes better than brown.

but give me a call i just talked to KA and hes down for anytime.

[nerdx]

yo jaze, im llvin the mad simples. keep it up yo.

[_ESKER_]

here is a couple of my shity shit
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/ad68becb.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/85434671.jpg

[beone]

i like it everything has potential except the c

[_ESKER_]

yeah i couldnt work out the c so i just left it like that.. i need to try to make it look nice...any suggestions

[Skeam]

this doesnt have anything to do with the C but i think the whole throwie would look heaps better it the top right of the A was kinda pointy like the rest of the top right parts on your letters and also have the top left part of the M/H (i couldnt tell what it was) rounded instead of pointy so all of your pointy bits go the same way

[doomsayer]

im feelin the top one...

[RKT47]

Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 15 2006, 03:36 AM
this doesnt have anything to do with the C but i think the whole throwie would look heaps better it the top right of the A was kinda pointy like the rest of the top right parts on your letters and also have the top left part of the M/H (i couldnt tell what it was) rounded instead of pointy so all of your pointy bits go the same way
its like that that in the top one but yea the c needs work but i think the "m" is nice

[Krash]

Originally posted by leaks@Aug 14 2006, 02:47 PM
my girls first time ever painting and using car paint with the chiesl caps, paint sucked but she rocked it without my help
http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/9452/picture668fj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

wow cheisl caps suck shouldnt tryed to have cracks but sorry pace for goin over u no space i got ur pics of it nice character
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2779/picture672hl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
lookin pretty fresh actually.the proportions look off a smidge in the middle of the z.

[acek]

Originally posted by acek@Aug 14 2006, 11:57 AM
old stuff with cheap paint....


http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/4599/pic035ec9.jpg


http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/230/pic040rx4.jpg


http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9955/pic042mb9.jpg


new stuff coming soon....
bump for crits

[bouncingsoul]

Why do people post "old shit" all the time? I mean, if it&#39;s old then you&#39;ve probably progressed more than that right? Then why would you need critz for it? Anway, the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice. Except in the 3rd one, what&#39;d the last letters upposed to be? It looks like DSZ but I don&#39;t know why you&#39;d bomb DSZ if your name is Dask... Still nice though

And krash, I think that&#39;s just the angle/glare of the shot

I&#39;ll get some flicks up here of practice throwies at this bank I know but in like a week or 2

[Krash]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 15 2006, 09:55 AM
Why do people post "old shit" all the time? I mean, if it&#39;s old then you&#39;ve probably progressed more than that right? Then why would you need critz for it? Anway, the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice. Except in the 3rd one, what&#39;d the last letters upposed to be? It looks like DSZ but I don&#39;t know why you&#39;d bomb DSZ if your name is Dask... Still nice though

And krash, I think that&#39;s just the angle/glare of the shot

I&#39;ll get some flicks up here of practice throwies at this bank I know but in like a week or 2
word to that

[unkownWPB]

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n154/unkownwpb/Pic001.jpg

[Krash]

work on spacing an proportion ^^^^
the v and the o are spaced,while the i and the d are tight together.and if you&#39;re going to use all capitals,you can take that dot off the i.hope it helps :)

[unkownWPB]

the i was fucked, but im gona post some more thanks.

[Krash]

welcome

[unkownWPB]

whats a good website to have a photo album in besides photobucket?

[Krash]

imageshack.us

[elcs]

Originally posted by acek+Aug 15 2006, 09:50 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (acek @ Aug 15 2006, 09:50 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-acek@Aug 14 2006, 11:57 AM
old stuff with cheap paint....


http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/4599/pic035ec9.jpg


http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/230/pic040rx4.jpg


http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9955/pic042mb9.jpg


new stuff coming soon....
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
I like these alot. The first pic is real good. Real good structure and everything, but its a shitty outline. its all wavy and shit and not very clean. Id say just practice that throw a little more and clean it up and it will look pretty damn good. that said, i like it...just work on that outline. the throws in the second and third picture are awsome. they look great, keep it up.

[acek]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 15 2006, 10:55 AM
Why do people post "old shit" all the time? I mean, if it&#39;s old then you&#39;ve probably progressed more than that right? Then why would you need critz for it? Anway, the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice. Except in the 3rd one, what&#39;d the last letters upposed to be? It looks like DSZ but I don&#39;t know why you&#39;d bomb DSZ if your name is Dask... Still nice though

And krash, I think that&#39;s just the angle/glare of the shot

I&#39;ll get some flicks up here of practice throwies at this bank I know but in like a week or 2
i write dask2.... so its a 2 not a z

[bouncingsoul]

O shit, my bad... I haven&#39;t seen many throwie&#39;s with numbers in them

[T R E O]

dask go back over your lines.they look sketchy and look like you were a lil bit shakey.same thing applies to your highlight.and to me,your s looks a bit off.so does your a.but clean fill in.keep at it

[leaks]

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1294/picture676eg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[T R E O]

its clean.but the first two letters look familiar to me.not feeling the third letter.all the lil lines in the letters distract me a lot

[pace1]

I like that but same here the lines are a little distracting

[leaks]

its supposed to have that effect but i dont always do them

[Sluts_r_us]

yeah leaks nice job...im feelin the z the most idk why but keep it up...

[pace1]

yeah i think its sick dont get me wrong and i like the effect. but on the other i think they take from the a and e

[nerdx]

i think it looks nice.
did you go over yourself?

[_ESKER_]

Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 15 2006, 03:36 AM
this doesnt have anything to do with the C but i think the whole throwie would look heaps better it the top right of the A was kinda pointy like the rest of the top right parts on your letters and also have the top left part of the M/H (i couldnt tell what it was) rounded instead of pointy so all of your pointy bits go the same way
yeah i usualy do the point at the top right of the a i was a lil drunk so i messed it up.

[nerdx]

Originally posted by _ESKER_+Aug 16 2006, 12:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (_ESKER_ @ Aug 16 2006, 12:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Aug 15 2006, 03:36 AM
this doesnt have anything to do with the C but i think the whole throwie would look heaps better it the top right of the A was kinda pointy like the rest of the top right parts on your letters and also have the top left part of the M/H (i couldnt tell what it was) rounded instead of pointy so all of your pointy bits go the same way
yeah i usualy do the point at the top right of the a i was a lil drunk so i messed it up. [/b][/quote]
yo i so know how that is.
ever do a bomb or something and think is the shit
come back the next day its horrible.

[d_g]

^Replace &#39;woman&#39; with bomb.

Sentence stays true.

[leaks]

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2322/picture680yc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
im done with this shit this site suckss pace pm me ur number

[red november]

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/6052/mimg1334hz5.jpg
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2115/mimg1338uf2.jpg
me and feedletter painted. give me some feed back i did the red one

[acek]

1st piece ...

i know its not clean...

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/3756/graff006ht1.jpg

comments/crits please

peace

[Sluts_r_us]

damn jaze im likin that throw alot....im feelin yasers but not the other guys that much...and acek you need to clean up your outlines...they are wobbly and vary(sp) in thickness in somplaces...

[rats]

It isn&#39;t horrible, although I&#39;m usually not a fan of two-tone fills and this colour combo doesn&#39;t do it for me.

However, the letters are clean (for the most part- I don&#39;t like the lines in the &#39;d&#39; cutting it in half) but the arrows are total bollocks- inconsistent width and look forced.


Do you write Dask or Dash? The last letter could easily be either.


Nice final outline.

keep up.

[Brek]

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/1332/brekhoffn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[doomsayer]

thats awesome man lovin the colours

[acek]

Originally posted by acek@Aug 16 2006, 06:26 PM
1st piece ...

i know its not clean...

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/3756/graff006ht1.jpg

comments/crits please

peace
thanks for the crits rats

others crits or comments please?

[grimace]

so far this is my fourth piece tell em what yal think
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/cheahduke.jpg

[Z FUSE]

go simpler

[tare]

Originally posted by acek+Aug 17 2006, 11:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (acek @ Aug 17 2006, 11:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-acek@Aug 16 2006, 06:26 PM
1st piece ...

i know its not clean...

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/3756/graff006ht1.jpg

comments/crits please

peace
thanks for the crits rats

others crits or comments please? [/b][/quote]
beside the facts its a total fucking bite&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; get off the next mans dick&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :angry: <_<

[contraband]

Originally posted by Z FUSE@Aug 17 2006, 01:20 PM
go simpler
way simpler, too much going on, wack extensions and no consistency.

maybe try sketching throw ups or just simples and block letters, hope that helps.

[RepUrSet]

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/321/picture42ci4.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture42ci4.jpg)
a re-furbished throwie...crits on it so i can get it up

[acek]

Originally posted by tare+Aug 17 2006, 05:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tare @ Aug 17 2006, 05:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by acek@Aug 17 2006, 11:53 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-acek@Aug 16 2006, 06:26 PM
1st piece ...

i know its not clean...

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/3756/graff006ht1.jpg

comments/crits please

peace
thanks for the crits rats

others crits or comments please?
beside the facts its a total fucking bite&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; get off the next mans dick&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :angry: <_< [/b][/quote]
What are you talking about?? i didnt bite anyone so shut up ...

[contraband]

Originally posted by RepUrSet@Aug 17 2006, 05:05 PM
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/321/picture42ci4.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture42ci4.jpg)
a re-furbished throwie...crits on it so i can get it up
looks pretty clean, kinda hard to see you should use a pen or felt and make the pic bigger.

[clockworkfuse]

its a thumbnail... it looks pretty good, wrong thread though

[tare]

http://2.forumer.com/uploads/riwriters/post-2-1102996115.jpg

[Krash]

Originally posted by contraband+Aug 17 2006, 06:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (contraband @ Aug 17 2006, 06:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-RepUrSet@Aug 17 2006, 05:05 PM
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/321/picture42ci4.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture42ci4.jpg)
a re-furbished throwie...crits on it so i can get it up
looks pretty clean, kinda hard to see you should use a pen or felt and make the pic bigger. [/b][/quote]
...don&#39;t write sane.... <_<

[shifty!]

Originally posted by contraband+Aug 17 2006, 06:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (contraband @ Aug 17 2006, 06:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-RepUrSet@Aug 17 2006, 05:05 PM
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/321/picture42ci4.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture42ci4.jpg)
a re-furbished throwie...crits on it so i can get it up
looks pretty clean, kinda hard to see you should use a pen or felt and make the pic bigger. [/b][/quote]
yeh it is a thumbnail and if you dont know what that is, click the picture to make it bigger...

[[]RENT[]]

If that does infact say sane, then show some respect and change your name.

[Nyc Sno]

i already said that to that idiot in another thread

[BRAINE]

if you dont know why you shouldnt write sane, maybe you dont need to write at all.

smoke pot, its a less risky way to be cool.

[C3S]

sum1 please tell me how to get my pics onto the site?

[Stear(Stare)]

read the pinned "how to post pictures" thread in the pictures section.
its got a walkthrough with pics and everything.

[doomsayer]

this is the first time ive painted the name TRUTH, any crits?

Edit: aomg pictures down frther im so dumb

[ion-i]

wow. I seriously couldnt make out any of the letters. try to define them more. and your R doesn&#39;t look at all like an R. Same with your H. I would of guess an E for the R. Not to mention your U is exactly the same as your H...

edit: other then that, the painting is clean. just work on them letters.

[doomsayer]

ARRGGH I forgot to add the two bottom things when i was painting, damn im so stupid, its supposed to look like this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/firstpaintoftruth-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/firstpaintoftruth2-1.jpg

Still what letters need the most work?

[NOMX]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/768/firstpaintoftruth2xp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this is what i think, work with the U more than i did

[doomsayer]

thanks dude&#33; thatll help a heap more, ill sketch it till its good then repaint it&#33;

[ion-i]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v158/PlayBoarder/truthedit.gif
heres my version, tried to keep it simple still but whatev haha

[doomsayer]

nice I like it do you care if i add those things into it when i re skletch/paint it?

[ion-i]

haha thats why i editted it up for you.
just tryin to help, go ahead.
after you paint it a couple times you start to get to feel the letetrs more and you&#39;ll be able to put style upon it. just takes time and a lot of practice and work with it.

[doomsayer]

thanks a heap man, so your sayin i should just keep paintin it and itll get better? will skecthing do the same thing?

[ion-i]

well.. yeah.

sketchsketchsketch

[contraband]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 18 2006, 07:30 PM
thanks a heap man, so your sayin i should just keep paintin it and itll get better? will skecthing do the same thing?
painting is good practice for can control and getting used to a can vs. a pen. plus its alot more fun.

but its not really worth it to waste paint on stuff that you can work on by sketching, like letter styles and structure.

[grimace]

the first one was a face that sombody painted and didnt finish so i did it for em.
let me know what yal think
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/cheahgreen-1.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/cheahcover.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/cheahredman.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/chechyellowwhite.jpg

[weldo]

they are all preety good but i like the last one the best clean and good style
any help will help
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/8589/1065317821lij4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[doomsayer]

^^^ that pink one looks nice&#33;

[Zire]

Grimace, tht lasts ones letters are wack but its a clean peice,i think u need to sketch more.

[N:Craze]

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6916.581.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6916.581.jpg)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6918.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6918.jpg)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6917.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6917.jpg)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6919.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6919.jpg)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6920.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6920.jpg)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6921.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6921.jpg)



some throws and some wack shit that i freestyled

crits on the throws plz

[nerdx]

i would stick to the paper for a while.

[N:Craze]

thats why its on the practice board

[nerdx]

still its paint which costs more than paper.
just what i do, its whatever.

3rd one down probably looks the best.
but it deffinitly needs more work.

[Krash]

ey,if ya got the paint to burn,practice on that board night an day.but yah,maybe put in a little more sketch time.

[Exon]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v673/chubbchubb/IMG_1266.jpg
new shizz
i need more colours to do details like shading
yeesh

[nerdx]

i dont think you need to be worrying about shading and details.
keep it simple and loose the character untill you get better with it.

[Hilo]

you have good colers and shit just make ur out lines cleaner and your good.

[Nyc Sno]

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6917.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6917.jpg)
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e86/Xcel3/dsfdsfdsfdsfs.jpg
stole my m

[nerdx]

you ddont really think that was a bite do you?

[Exon]

yea i agree i gotta work on my lines
mmm lovin the fresh colours haha
they sweeet

[Nyc Sno]

no im just saying its similiar

[grandmarnier]

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l86/TWOMORE/PICT0104.jpg




HOLLOW THROW ANYTHING IS GOOOD

[Nyc Sno]

ewwyy if the first letter is a m fix it bite someone do anythin

[SsNnEeAaKkYy]

what up boyz

NeW to this thread, if my dads comp is up
to it imma start posting...if not imma have
my boy Rane post em for me. been writin like
a year n a half, whats yalls story

[lost_for_evex]

....your gay and we dont like you....thats yalls story for you.

[SsNnEeAaKkYy]

hey fuck you bitch fist i bet i can burn your ass

watch your fuckin mouth you dont know me.
your a fuckin loser, dont ever comment to
anything i say ever again...ever&#33;

[Krash]

someones a little moody :huh:
in any case,take it tew da beef thread

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by SsNnEeAaKkYy@Aug 19 2006, 09:39 PM
hey fuck you bitch fist i bet i can burn your ass

watch your fuckin mouth you dont know me.
your a fuckin loser, dont ever comment to
anything i say ever again...ever&#33;
lmao shut the fuck up you bitch..and take a joke..what are you 12? come see me when ur balls drop..and im not a loser...ud be suprised.

[SsNnEeAaKkYy]

battle me???

We&#39;ll see whose 12

[nerdx]

Originally posted by SsNnEeAaKkYy@Aug 19 2006, 09:51 PM
battle me???

We&#39;ll see whose 12
should be good.

[lost_for_evex]

lmao aight paint battle...due monday...word penis...and a chara.

[Slushi]

Originally posted by Krash@Aug 19 2006, 08:26 PM
ey,if ya got the paint to burn,practice on that board night an day.but yah,maybe put in a little more sketch time.
Yo that wall in your sig..
.. Is that KIES on the far right?

[grandmarnier]

NYC SNO ITS NOT AN M ITS A T WANNA BE FREINDS NOW

[Torrent]

http://myspace-566.vo.llnwd.net/01012/66/58/1012778566_l.jpg

Critique? The 3D is messed up.

[Fosale!]

stick to sketching

[Krash]

Originally posted by Slushi+Aug 19 2006, 10:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Slushi @ Aug 19 2006, 10:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Krash@Aug 19 2006, 08:26 PM
ey,if ya got the paint to burn,practice on that board night an day.but yah,maybe put in a little more sketch time.
Yo that wall in your sig..
.. Is that KIES on the far right? [/b][/quote]
naw man,its scien reso and klor....it kinda says that in the pic :)

[Fosale!]

speaking of sigs...that venom gif is so dope.

[Krash]

yeah i know B) .....lol

[Fosale!]

word venom is soo much more pro than spiderman.

[Krash]

totally,he beats out that punk bitch carnage too,but lets not stray off topic here guys

[lost_for_evex]

paint thread go chat somewhere else u bitchs...fosale go sketch.

[NOMX]

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/165/200608190001ny3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any crits besides that fact its very sloppy. i wasnt really hapy with my square version of my throw so i changed it. my first time busting it

[fitzy5814]

the shadowing is wack

[NOMX]

thanx, that really helps

[fitzy5814]

anytime =P, try not having a huge shadow it doesnt have to be ginourmous

[Blix]

Originally posted by SsNnEeAaKkYy@Aug 19 2006, 09:24 PM
what up boyz

NeW to this thread, if my dads comp is up
to it imma start posting...if not imma have
my boy Rane post em for me. been writin like
a year n a half, whats yalls story
this isnt the place for introductions fag

[N:Craze]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno@Aug 19 2006, 09:16 PM
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6917.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6917.jpg)
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e86/Xcel3/dsfdsfdsfdsfs.jpg
stole my m
well considering iv never seen your stuff before its not a bite off you but its not your m because its a pretty common m and w

[myl]

Originally posted by Blix+Aug 19 2006, 11:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Blix @ Aug 19 2006, 11:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SsNnEeAaKkYy@Aug 19 2006, 09:24 PM
what up boyz

NeW to this thread, if my dads comp is up
to it imma start posting...if not imma have
my boy Rane post em for me. been writin like
a year n a half, whats yalls story
this isnt the place for introductions fag [/b][/quote]
hahaha 100% pwnage

[Fosale!]

it would have been a bgger pwn if he wrote it iin LEET SPEAK.

7|-|&#33;5 &#33;5/&#092;/&#39;7 7|-|3 p14[3 f0r &#33;/&#092;/7r0|)_|[7&#33;0/&#092;/5, f46.

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by N:Craze+Aug 20 2006, 12:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (N:Craze @ Aug 20 2006, 12:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nyc Sno@Aug 19 2006, 09:16 PM
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6917.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6917.jpg)
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e86/Xcel3/dsfdsfdsfdsfs.jpg
stole my m
well considering iv never seen your stuff before its not a bite off you but its not your m because its a pretty common m and w [/b][/quote]
ya i know but mine m looks good u made it look like shit ;)

[nerdx]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 10:15 AM
it would have been a bgger pwn if he wrote it iin LEET SPEAK.

7|-|&#33;5 &#33;5/&#092;/&#39;7 7|-|3 p14[3 f0r &#33;/&#092;/7r0|)_|[7&#33;0/&#092;/5, f46.
teh nooob&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;1111

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by nerdx+Aug 20 2006, 11:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Aug 20 2006, 11:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 10:15 AM
it would have been a bgger pwn if he wrote it iin LEET SPEAK.

7|-|&#33;5 &#33;5/&#092;/&#39;7 7|-|3 p14[3 f0r &#33;/&#092;/7r0|)_|[7&#33;0/&#092;/5, f46.
teh nooob&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;1111 [/b][/quote]
typing like that is extra gay.

[lost_for_evex]

agreed...leave the crew.

[Sluts_r_us]

hahahahahhahahahha

[Fosale!]

your just mad because you don&#39;t got teh mad 1337 haxzor skillz like i does.
xp

[nerdx]

out&#33; lol.

[N:Craze]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Aug 20 2006, 10:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Aug 20 2006, 10:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by N:Craze@Aug 20 2006, 12:33 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Nyc Sno@Aug 19 2006, 09:16 PM
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_6917.th.jpg (http://server6.theimagehosting.com/image.php?img=IMG_6917.jpg)
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e86/Xcel3/dsfdsfdsfdsfs.jpg
stole my m
well considering iv never seen your stuff before its not a bite off you but its not your m because its a pretty common m and w
ya i know but mine m looks good u made it look like shit ;) [/b][/quote]
WOW your a bitch why dont you start some beef?

[cord]

hahah WHOAH calm down children.....

&#39;&#39;beef&#39;&#39; HAHA

[case1]

What are toys?

Oh and all you *****s bombin these fucked up lookin styles need to go back and do some serious taging and work on your hand styles before you start bombin&#33;

[lost_for_evex]

...lmao stfu child.

[nerdx]

Originally posted by case1@Aug 20 2006, 02:00 PM
What are toys?

Oh and all you *****s bombin these fucked up lookin styles need to go back and do some serious taging and work on your hand styles before you start bombin&#33;
toy.

[Blix]

Originally posted by case1@Aug 20 2006, 02:00 PM
What are toys?

Oh and all you *****s bombin these fucked up lookin styles need to go back and do some serious taging and work on your hand styles before you start bombin&#33;
damn homie u dumb as hell talkin bout whats a toy then talkin shit u lame get outa here

[Flash_One]

Originally posted by case1@Aug 20 2006, 02:00 PM
What are toys?

Oh and all you *****s bombin these fucked up lookin styles need to go back and do some serious taging and work on your hand styles before you start bombin&#33;
<_< idiot.

[beone]

wow...

[uhhh]

as dumb as it is to talk shit on your first post. i thought someone could at least tell him what a toy is.

a toy is someone enw to graffiti. someone with llimited skills. basically a noob. hopefully you DO know what that means

[slEEt]

fgt.

[FEST!]

Ur all fucked up. When thought about, everyone suks fuckin ass when first graffing. Lend a fucking hand every once n a while.

[si0n]

lmao... i love it how toys talk shit to tother toys

[FEST!]

Sion, how bout u put up a fuckin burner u got? u think ur fuckin dope? put up a fuckin pic and i will stfu

[si0n]

Sion, how bout u put up a fuckin burner u got? u think ur fuckin dope? put up a fuckin pic and i will stfu

chill out man how many times can you say fuck lol. no where in my post did i say i was fucken dope. also no where in my post did i say for you to stfu.

[FEST!]

I was kinda screwin around.
Just cuz we&#39;re in a Toy forum doesnt mean that we r all toys. U feel what i mean? It&#39;s all good though

[myl]

is this supposed to be beef or what?

[FEST!]

No beef, we&#39;re all good

[grandmarnier]

nyc snow yer mace shit looks like shit dont ever critique my shit if yer stuff is worse than mine

[Fosale!]

both of ur stuff is shit, stop complaining.

[anarchy]

Originally posted by nerdx+Aug 20 2006, 05:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Aug 20 2006, 05:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-case1@Aug 20 2006, 02:00 PM
What are toys?

Oh and all you *****s bombin these fucked up lookin styles need to go back and do some serious taging and work on your hand styles before you start bombin&#33;
toy. [/b][/quote]
hahahaaha

[thehiatus]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v180/spazo/throwie.jpg

First throwie. Hopefully I can just keep improving and post some stuff in the real forum.

Ps the reason there is no fill is cause the fence must of had some anti graff stuff on it so my cheap fill paint didnt work but my montana can did

[Z FUSE]

give ur montana a long vacation while u hit the books. wat does that say coot?coor?

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by thehiatus@Aug 21 2006, 01:37 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v180/spazo/throwie.jpg

First throwie. Hopefully I can just keep improving and post some stuff in the real forum.

Ps the reason there is no fill is cause the fence must of had some anti graff stuff on it so my cheap fill paint didnt work but my montana can did
u fucking dumb cunt its cause u were using gloss on wood WEEETAWDDDD

[doomsayer]

yo whys there so much hate in here, sorry not everyones been paintin for as long as you, thats why dis the toyts forum

[thehiatus]

I&#39;ll just say im a beginner the term toy should stay reserved for people like yuk.

Im just out for a good time. Its meant to say loot in my sketch i had the chin emphasise the L but i mucked it up on the fence.

Thanks for any constructive crit.

Cheeey....

[slEEt]

Originally posted by thehiatus@Aug 21 2006, 01:37 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v180/spazo/throwie.jpg

First throwie. Hopefully I can just keep improving and post some stuff in the real forum.

Ps the reason there is no fill is cause the fence must of had some anti graff stuff on it so my cheap fill paint didnt work but my montana can did
anti graffiti? LOL

[fener]

yo, i just found this forum man, n bein a toy myself i was chekin this section...nottoo bad shit goin down bro&#39;s...here is some a my shit, you aint go like this shit cuz my styls are changin and fuckin up n shit but jus chek bro&#39;s&#33;&#33; ;) :lol: :D :rolleyes: :)

rooftop

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/P1001774.jpg

trackside

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/fenthrowie.jpg

dub in an alley somewhere near my town

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/Fener-S.jpg

piece under a bridge

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/Fener-U.jpg

latest fuck up

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/P1001780.jpg

random shit

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/P1001765.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n6/aimhighkrew/P1001756.jpg

[beefgerky]

start racking pencils insteadda paint bruvah.

[Cazo1]

lol ur first 2 throwies have potential... the thing in the N is kinda werid tho, doesnt look like it belongs in the rest of the throw. ur can control looks pretty on the ball... other than that with the pieces, the propotions look pretty off and try and make both the E&#39;s the same.. just my 2 cents... stay up

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by FEST&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 11:30 PM
Just cuz we&#39;re in a Toy forum doesnt mean that we r all toys.
well...you are, i saw you shit in the toy blackbook thread..its toy

im jsut waiting for someone to say shit to me bout this :D i love it

[some_one]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/08/8/d/4/8d43cd61c5429dcc39176f2f6bb324f2200608210_full.jpg

[What Happened to the Letters?]

ive seen that exact r before, its a common thign so its not a big deal but i really commented to ask what the second letter was

[toxus]

looks like a G to me, im guessing cos of the handstyle above it. But some one, it looks like one of them walls with moss all over it and when you paint it dissapears?

[si0n]

well...you are, i saw you shit in the toy blackbook thread..its toy

im jsut waiting for someone to say shit to me bout this i love it

lol

[beone]

fen keep painting but sketch way way more

[Quake]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/09/7/f/6/7f60c10408c5e9e9731f930d596216f5200608210_full.jpg

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/09/0/c/3/0c379461689bb375032e69df8b6d605a200608210_full.jpg

comments and tips how to improve it on my bomb, i hate it

fooked the second "K" its says "kwake"

[xAWOKE.925]

as far as the can control part goes you should fill your letters in one direction. the outline is pretty good but the letters in general need a lot of help. You have somethin goin but keep developing

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by grandmarnier@Aug 21 2006, 12:25 AM
nyc snow yer mace shit looks like shit dont ever critique my shit if yer stuff is worse than mine
are u kidding me id wreck ur shit
wtf is this crap
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l86/TWOMORE/PICT0104.jpg

[taggin101]

what you guys think of this? what can i improve what can i add or take off any help would be appreciated thanks (i know the outline looks shaky but i used a sharpie cuz it was all i had at the moment)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y7/thisdamnbeaner/IMG_3094.jpg

[Nyc Sno]

ehhh

u should of shadowed with the same color u outlined

are u using a unionball? those would give u shaky lines

try making ur lettets the same size

and make them look similiar to the other letters in your name

[NEEN!]

yo its NEEN juss tryn to post some shit n get tips

[N:Craze]

this is the painted shit forum might i add.....

[elcs]

Originally posted by taggin101@Aug 21 2006, 03:01 PM
what you guys think of this? what can i improve what can i add or take off any help would be appreciated thanks (i know the outline looks shaky but i used a sharpie cuz it was all i had at the moment)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y7/thisdamnbeaner/IMG_3094.jpg
are you writing king? If so thats kind of arrogant...

I&#39;d take those lines out of the dot on the I. Also the little bottom part of the N...you should turn that around so its like the bottom part of the K. That would look better I think. You need to move that G closer to the N so you dont have to fill that space in with the black. Maybe make the G smaller so its the same size as the other letters. Also maybe try the G with out the karak. Try just a line instead of the face. Or a hole or whatever. Ultimatly this is your throw and you can do it however you want to. Just tryin to think of things that might improve it. With all this said...I like it. Just work on it a little more. Its got potential. Good luck duder.

[jerm_mtl]

no

[leaks]

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/474/picture685tz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
grrrr waterv im bored

[Blix]

goin bombing tonight ill get some pics up here round 1:30-2

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by leaks@Aug 21 2006, 08:36 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/474/picture685tz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
grrrr waterv im bored
try to make that a lil cleaner man, other than that i like it

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Aug 21 2006, 02:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno &#064; Aug 21 2006, 02:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-grandmarnier@Aug 21 2006, 12:25 AM
nyc snow yer mace shit looks like shit dont ever critique my shit if yer stuff is worse than mine
are u kidding me id wreck ur shit
wtf is this crap
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l86/TWOMORE/PICT0104.jpg [/b][/quote]
honestly you both make me want to break my own knees..

jaze once again i love it like always...

[...AG...]

YO COULD SOME ONE HELP ME OUT WITH THIS PEACE




http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg





Im on the bottom ASEN

[shifty!]

crits on the first one, i know i fucked up on the exlamation point, i didnt have it connected at first then i thought it would look better with it connected then i just made it worse...and have i improved?

new http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1659/sh024mt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/473/sh002ym9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[shifty!]

wrong thread AG try the black book thread...

[tea dee sea]

shifty uve gotten a lot better but u could still inprove just practise and add shadding it will look better but dont put a huge shadding on it like the old one but keep it up......and asen u know

[nerdx]

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8277/dsc01257co6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sketchy msr bomb. ran out of black so couldnt do the shadow.

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/9783/dsc01260pw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
same place up higher.

[XstainoneX]

;) pretty decent stuff man where is that

[beone]

you a dick for writing on a construction place and if it is construction for homes which it looks like it is for some subburb home that sucks more
your throws are no good at all keep sketching

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Quake@Aug 21 2006, 01:18 PM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/09/7/f/6/7f60c10408c5e9e9731f930d596216f5200608210_full.jpg

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/09/0/c/3/0c379461689bb375032e69df8b6d605a200608210_full.jpg

comments and tips how to improve it on my bomb, i hate it

fooked the second "K" its says "kwake"
ummm. change ur throw style, make the letters fatter i would say

[nerdx]

Originally posted by beone@Aug 22 2006, 01:29 AM
you a dick for writing on a construction place and if it is construction for homes which it looks like it is for some subburb home that sucks more
your throws are no good at all keep sketching
what are you talking about. all of that is giong to be painted over so why would that make me a dick?
sorry if you dont like my bomb. but thats your opinion.

[obseen]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 21 2006, 08:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 21 2006, 08:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-leaks@Aug 21 2006, 08:36 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/474/picture685tz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
grrrr waterv im bored
try to make that a lil cleaner man, other than that i like it [/b][/quote]
this is very nice man i like it alot^^
nerdx, keep workin on that, good to see your painting and stuff thuogh

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Aug 21 2006, 09:33 PM
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1659/sh024mt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


bump for crits...

[Cazo1]

nerx.. lookin good.. the s looks a little wierd tho
beone.. no one wants to live in bare concrete it&#39;ll definatley be painted over... my guess its like an outdoor mall or something.
shifty... good can control, just play around with it, i noe how hard it is to make u H&#39;s not look like K&#39;s. but yeah the exclamation mark is screwed up aswell....

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 21 2006, 08:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 21 2006, 08:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-leaks@Aug 21 2006, 08:36 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/474/picture685tz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
grrrr waterv im bored
try to make that a lil cleaner man, other than that i like it [/b][/quote]
explain to me how thats sloppy....

[ados]

quicky, daytime bombin

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp050.jpg

[furious]

^^^ hot stuff alot of people use that style d though but it still looks good

ugly throw, bad can control ugly f, besides that, crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/fubomb.jpg

[Fosale!]

sketch more bfre you hit umm trains...idk what that thing is small bridge w.e...sketch

[taggin101]

Originally posted by taggin101@Aug 21 2006, 01:01 PM
what you guys think of this? what can i improve what can i add or take off any help would be appreciated thanks (i know the outline looks shaky but i used a sharpie cuz it was all i had at the moment)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y7/thisdamnbeaner/IMG_3094.jpg
someone help me out please i need some more help

[Skeam]

dude what the fuck... dont post that shit here this is BOMBS and PEICES.... PAINT do you know what paint is?? that liquidy colour shit that comes out of cans... that isnt dont in paint. POST IT IN THE BLACK BOOK SECTION.

221 posts and you still dont know the difference between a blackbook and paint. wholy fuck