Toy Bombs / pieces (Paint Only.)

[fuckthatgame]

Tasty, the orange and green 1 is fucked! Dont like it at all but thats cuz of the color choice u cant even see the bomb

[karmatikal]

Originally posted by illin@Dec 5 2006, 02:44 PM
what coast are you on? someone in philly writes karma. whatever its not a big deal. the lil throw is ok but it has no flow. the letters in a throw need to be tied together with a similar style or shape on each one. try making a 'karma' throw where the letters are rounded at the bottom and pointed or flat on top or something. i dunno. plus, wouldn't a better abbreviation be like... KRM or somethin?
I'm in the Toronto area, I've heard of other karma's before but never really seen much work by them.

Thanks for the advice,I do have another karma throw like you described I'll post it up once I get some more flicks
and ya KRM does sound better, I'm guna start sketching that


and alive, not too sure what u mean by this

"KARMA not bad can work but u gotta stop at the blackbooks"

sketch more?

[FEN the HEN]

Originally posted by nemzone+Dec 5 2006, 05:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nemzone @ Dec 5 2006, 05:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Dec 5 2006, 12:49 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Dec 4 2006, 09:26 AM
fuck plywood. find sum chill spots. if u do plywood, u wont get the same results on it than u do on illegals cuz u wont be paranoin whilst doin it.
try goin more simple m8, cant say much myself tho lol

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4139/imag0003vi2.jpg

painted this in daylight like an hour ago.. sum old couple tried to stop me but were on the ova side of the fence so i just fired on lol
nothin gr8, got caught in the fuckin rain on the way to an abandoned mill, so thot fuck it ima paint anyway. cuz im ghetto like that ;). not exactly small tho lolÂ* also, i no the bottom of drop shadows fucked but shit happens
took a page outta NAME&#39;s book i see
howd u mean??? i dno wat ur talkin bout m8 :blink: [/b][/quote]
how you curled your N into your S, NAME does the same thing no big deal just sayin

[nemzone]

its aiight, i dno just tied diff ways of encorporating both letters together.. never see nhim do this fo. but not to worry i got a few more ways up my sleeve ;)

[CoKKeYONe]

Originally posted by tasty@Dec 5 2006, 11:27 PM
me and my friend...

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/S4020027.jpg

me

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/S4020250.jpg

crits
you could do that outline on 2nd throwie better :rolleyes:

[trashhh]

^^ 2d on that is wackk, work on ur control alot. and if u hav enough time to sit n take a stupid photo of u infront of it then u hav enough time for a more solid fill

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/throws%20and%20dubs/barns004.jpg

one of my first ever things hahahahahhahahahhahaha thought i&#39;d post it for the rake. before this id only done 3 crappy bombs. I thought it was class at the time hahahahahahahah

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Haha yeah that&#39;s how I felt at first... I don&#39;t even wanna take a pic... it&#39;s that bad.

I just practice in like a shed in this old barn beside my house and most of it sucks, but I will post something next week&#33;

[SameName]

Stuff from last night we did.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Painted/DSC02872.jpg

First time doing metal :) I loved it&#33;

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Painted/DSC02875.jpg

This was just a spot to climb too. Good practice for getting to harder spots I guess.

Crits I guess. I know it sucks compared to half this stuff but we were pretty happy with it.

[G - Wahl]

I hope you guys didnt cross out that bomb and put Toy next to it..
I meen, im no vet..But neither are you guys. No beef or anything

[SameName]

lol that was my old name. Like first thing I ever painted. NO beef recieved :) I knew someone was going to ask about it haha. I was bored waiting for my friend to finish up.

[prank]

Originally posted by tasty@Dec 5 2006, 11:27 PM
me and my friend...

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/S4020027.jpg

me

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/S4020250.jpg

crits
sooo toy........ sketch for about a year before u even dare painting

that is good advice

[prank]

Originally posted by SameName@Dec 6 2006, 08:54 PM
Stuff from last night we did.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Painted/DSC02872.jpg

First time doing metal :) I loved it&#33;

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Painted/DSC02875.jpg

This was just a spot to climb too. Good practice for getting to harder spots I guess.

Crits I guess. I know it sucks compared to half this stuff but we were pretty happy with it.
i like the soul one but same sucks

[**HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**]

edit .....

[Blix]

the throws in the ninth one look like they floating in the sky ..........until you look above the wall

[G - Wahl]

Damn you have a girl that writes?
Thats awesome..I bet you guys never argue on what you want to do at night.

[fost]

ok no beef intended, and call me out if im just seeing things on this:

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1638/photo09qe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/899/untitledkd9.png (http://imageshack.us)

[FEN the HEN]

they flow the same but the letters are different

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Apoc+Dec 6 2006, 08:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apoc @ Dec 6 2006, 08:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Dec 5 2006, 08:15 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-amuin&#045;gcs@Dec 5 2006, 01:50 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/gcblue.jpg
bump its chillin
nice [/b][/quote]
werd... I gave that mutha a whole grip of paint... Holla at ya boy.... ;)

[NiL]

I&#39;d hate to have a girl that wrote man I can&#39;t think of it.

[**HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**]

Originally posted by fost@Dec 7 2006, 12:21 AM
ok no beef intended, and call me out if im just seeing things on this:

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1638/photo09qe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/899/untitledkd9.png (http://imageshack.us)
they are bombs yes but the letters are tottaly differnt i think you could find a million differnt bombs with the same style but it doesnt mean she bit anything she doesnt even know about biting and she def didnt copy yvk or cok

[Kim Jong Il]

word

[DJC-248]

These are my first throw ups...along with my friend TesFortis.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/djchugetag3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/djchugetag2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/djchugetag.jpg


and ts4ts:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/nickhugetag2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/nickhugetag.jpg

[**HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**]

i would suggest not havin your/your friends face in the pic for security reasons

[sketch3]

Originally posted by DJC&#045;248@Dec 7 2006, 02:38 AM
These are my first throw ups...along with my friend TesFortis.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/djchugetag3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/djchugetag2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/djchugetag.jpg


and ts4ts:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/nickhugetag2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v63/sixflug/graffitti/nickhugetag.jpg
well u just coopyied graffiti creator,only badly,stop painting on walls,start over and sketch for about a year befor u even think of dissgeaceing anymore bricks with ur shiity bites

[wortel]

alrightcheckthisout (http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4006/img0044ar5.jpg)
comments

[ras]

okay i supose...work on yah D..

and that stuff DJC posted up ...was fucking lame...id go over that shit straihgt away

[beastfromtheeast]

just looking for some thoughts on a new bomb i&#39;m working on
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v202/racin_jason/2.jpg

[scoot]

Originally posted by wortel@Dec 7 2006, 11:21 AM
alrightcheckthisout (http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4006/img0044ar5.jpg)
comments
a.) learn how to shrink pics.. its not that hard
b.) learn how to post them up and not just a link


now its not the worst one ive seen it just need something... i cant put my finger on it but your in the right path

[jelis]

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5729/img1806gu6.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4656/img1807qn6.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1051/img1851rv5.jpg





http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/5941/img1830co7.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9662/img1813wu4.jpg


http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2499/08585xz6.jpg


any comments??? :wub: these are like the first things i ever done....

[uhhh]

well for one, those look like thyre in somewhat open spots, stop painting those, hit the books for a few months and then start painting again, but only secluded places (chill spots).
books=sketching.

also, are you a girll? :huh:

EDIT-NiL do you mean a girlfriend that wrote, or just woman in general? either way i dont see the problem..

[DJLotus]

your lines are so scratchy looking... get your flow down. Your spray lines look like a little kid with a crayon going to town

going out to DJC

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by jelis@Dec 7 2006, 09:49 PM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5729/img1806gu6.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4656/img1807qn6.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1051/img1851rv5.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1025/img1829jp1.jpg


http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/5941/img1830co7.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9662/img1813wu4.jpg


http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2499/08585xz6.jpg


any comments??? :wub: these are like the first things i ever done....
im kinda sorta feelin that gold one...thats about it tho...id say sketch before you take it to the wall

my girlfriend writes, im tryin to get her on bs but she thinks her shit sucks, and believe me it doesnt <_<

[Kaze]

props Jelis.. Im liking ur stickers and shitt im toy myself ill get sum stuff up soon but props girl

[Hilo]

Well then..lets go pain the cntower today kk?

[Apoc]

it looks like jelis is from canada or some shit, you got snow. CT doesnt even have snow yet, in fact it was like 60 out yesterday

[Kim Jong Il]

i think my girl would appreciate it if you stoped talking about her and started giving her some unbiased opinions about her painting adn i think aoassis is right the fact that she is a girl has nothing to do with why she posted her pics she wants feedback not some bullshit chit chat on a picture forum so critic and post pics or shut the fuck up :angry:

[Kim Jong Il]

and yah apoc we are from canada west coast for life

[jelis]

yeah, i&#39;d like to thank the people that ACTUALLY looked at my shit and said something about it instead of just talking about the fact that theres a girl online oooOOooh big deal. I didn&#39;t come here to chit chat, i came here for the same reason everyone else does, which is to learn and get better. So it would be nice to be taken seriously, thats why i never said anything about being a chick... i didn&#39;t even realize i was in that pic.


and shifted... if you want your girl to be on her, do what my man did, and post it without telling her haha



and i&#39;m nice until i&#39;m pissed off. so dont piss me off

thats my rant, thanks for reading :(

[uhhh]

if someone asks a question like that, in the first place it should be in a pm and if its not pm them about it, theres about two or three pages of just talk, alll about how jelis is a girl and so and so thinks she has a nice ass and someone else thinks its a guy. so just try just post flicks here.

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by **HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**+Dec 7 2006, 01:24 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (**HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW** &#064; Dec 7 2006, 01:24 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fost@Dec 7 2006, 12:21 AM
ok no beef intended, and call me out if im just seeing things on this:

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1638/photo09qe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/899/untitledkd9.png (http://imageshack.us)
they are bombs yes but the letters are tottaly differnt i think you could find a million differnt bombs with the same style but it doesnt mean she bit anything she doesnt even know about biting and she def didnt copy yvk or cok [/b][/quote]
im a guy ????

wats going on here

whats yvk or cok thats luk and i write yuk

[T_R_O_N]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Dec 8 2006, 06:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Dec 8 2006, 06:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by **HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**@Dec 7 2006, 01:24 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-fost@Dec 7 2006, 12:21 AM
ok no beef intended, and call me out if im just seeing things on this:

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1638/photo09qe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/899/untitledkd9.png (http://imageshack.us)
they are bombs yes but the letters are tottaly differnt i think you could find a million differnt bombs with the same style but it doesnt mean she bit anything she doesnt even know about biting and she def didnt copy yvk or cok
im a guy ????

wats going on here

whats yvk or cok thats luk and i write yuk [/b][/quote]
jesus christ, im getting tiered of these people trying to call someone out on biting...those letters are like the fucking standard bombing letters, every writer that bombs knows that, some letters over time have just become the norm for many bombing styles...

[prank]

Originally posted by jelis@Dec 7 2006, 09:49 PM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5729/img1806gu6.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4656/img1807qn6.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1051/img1851rv5.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1025/img1829jp1.jpg


http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/5941/img1830co7.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9662/img1813wu4.jpg


http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2499/08585xz6.jpg


any comments??? :wub: these are like the first things i ever done....
definatly work on ur letter structure

i dont rly like it no offense

[uhhh]

dear god, yes. a girl rights. nooo reason to make all these comments about how its "hot" thats shes into it. i&#39;m sure everyone wishes their girlfriend was into bombing. but shes just here for actual crits to get better on stuff.

annnd by the way, jelis. i think i said this before, but i think you should stop painting for now, and JUSt sketch for a few months and pick up a can again then. your can control isnt too bad, so when you DO get good letters, you shouldnt have much trouble putting them on a wall. ;)

[T_R_O_N]

i disagree on the not painting for a while, im guessing it depends on the person,but i fell like going out in the field is better than sketching, i also have a short attention span so boming calms me down xD.

[Blix]

that "b" dont look right wit the "a" and "p"

[uhhh]

Originally posted by T_R_O_N@Dec 8 2006, 10:32 PM
i disagree on the not painting for a while, im guessing it depends on the person,but i fell like going out in the field is better than sketching, i also have a short attention span so boming calms me down xD.
the reason for not going out and bombing is because for a very long time, you will suck. and when your good you wont want to see it, and everyone whos already good, doesnt want to see it either. so just paint every so often just to keep up can control, and then when you get good, and MANY people who are BETTER then you say your good, then go and paint as much as your little heart desires.

EDIT-all of you, STOP fighting, its pointless e-beef, theres been not enough flicks on the last 4 or 5 pages.

[alive]

Originally posted by prank+Dec 8 2006, 08:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (prank &#064; Dec 8 2006, 08:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-jelis@Dec 7 2006, 09:49 PM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5729/img1806gu6.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4656/img1807qn6.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1051/img1851rv5.jpg


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1025/img1829jp1.jpg


http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/5941/img1830co7.jpg


http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9662/img1813wu4.jpg


http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2499/08585xz6.jpg


any comments???Â* :wub:Â* these are like the first things i ever done.... [/b][/quote]
well, uve alrdy gotten enough attention, but since no one else has posted pics in the last few pages, heres some crits.
by the way, fuck all these idiots, i will treat you no differently from anyone else, cuz quite frankly, i dont give a shit if ur a boy or a girl. ur on a graffiti forum, not a dating site. and im not being overharsh, im better then you, so if you want to improve, listen.

dont try to piece. ur not nearly good enough yet. stick to throws if u insist on painting.
get all ur letters the same size + width
dont use 3d on throws, use drop shadow.
ur stickers are the worst. stop doing them. you dont need them. if u want ur name up, tag it. otherwise, sketch on paper. speaking of that, i advice that u dont paint anymore untill youve worked in the blackbook thread and gotten "approved" but thats ur choice, it might be good to get up some can control.

dont ever use more then 3 colors on a throw. after that, it defeats the point, as well as looks like shit at ur lvl.

ur color choices suck. stick to black and white for now, maybe one extra color for the forcefield to pop, itl make things easier, let u focus on the letters.


come to the blackbook thread and post blockbuster letters. dont know what they are? look it the fuck up. u gotta know your terms + ur history.

no colors, no 3d, no effects, no style. basic. then u slowly build on it. but u gotta master the basics.

sad truth is, chances are youll drop out, not b/c ur a girl, b/c the turnover rate in the toy forum is tremendous. if you want, you can pm me for extra help, if you listen to my advice. this goes for all of you who would like some extra help.


uhhhhhh ive lost track of what ive said alrdy, so that means its time to stop

peace.

[uhhh]

that, that right there, along with some good sketches, is why alive is in BSC. ;)

[Stonk]

tried out my new throw

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new013.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new015.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new012.jpg
not a throw but whatever
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new014.jpg

[alive]

mad nice. but the D isnt quiet defined enough in any of that. in the throws it looks like another O. and in the tag it looks like a 2.
but ill, and certainly some of the best in this thread.

only the blue ones though, that black throw is shit. ha. sry.


peace.

[Stonk]

haha yeah the black one is a coulple months old. thanks for the crits though

[T_R_O_N]

Originally posted by uhhh+Dec 8 2006, 10:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh @ Dec 8 2006, 10:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-T_R_O_N@Dec 8 2006, 10:32 PM
i disagree on the not painting for a while, im guessing it depends on the person,but i fell like going out in the field is better than sketching, i also have a short attention span so boming calms me down xD.
the reason for not going out and bombing is because for a very long time, you will suck. and when your good you wont want to see it, and everyone whos already good, doesnt want to see it either. so just paint every so often just to keep up can control, and then when you get good, and MANY people who are BETTER then you say your good, then go and paint as much as your little heart desires.

EDIT-all of you, STOP fighting, its pointless e-beef, theres been not enough flicks on the last 4 or 5 pages. [/b][/quote]
once again it goes differently for people, i learn more things by going out instead of sketching, you can only sketch so much till you fucking loose yer marbles ya dig? Im not saying dont sketch, but i am saying find what works for that individual.

[uhhh]

what im saying, your can control develops ALOT faster then your letters, so for a little while just sketch then after like 3 months, paint OCASIONALLY so you ewill have good can control when you have good letters. so im not saying dont paint. and once you get better you will understand what im saying and WHY im saying it.

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by illin+Nov 27 2006, 10:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (illin @ Nov 27 2006, 10:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-5yn@Nov 27 2006, 04:36 PM
just sum flicks
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2073.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2087.jpghttp://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2090.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2095.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2096.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2097.jpghttp://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2093.jpg
you tagged a fucking storefront? thats kinda shitty, man. and your letter structure definitely needs work. [/b][/quote]
thats a prety shitty thing to do to that store, you should be ashamed, now cut me a switch from that tree and come hear so i can beat your ass

[NiL]

It&#39;s all pretty shitty looks like all the wack shit I see on schools I pass on the way to school.

[Twitch1]

32

[NiL]

Man I aint feeling that bomb whatever it says too cluterd.

[T_R_O_N]

Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 9 2006, 12:47 AM
what im saying, your can control develops ALOT faster then your letters, so for a little while just sketch then after like 3 months, paint OCASIONALLY so you ewill have good can control when you have good letters. so im not saying dont paint. and once you get better you will understand what im saying and WHY im saying it.
:lol: my hard headness makes me blind once again, im begining to understand where your coming from. Im looking at my black book and my sketching can use A LOT more work...that shit looked cool like a month ago, but now the shit looks mad sketchy,ya dig?

[Stonk]

Originally posted by Stonk@Dec 8 2006, 11:47 PM
tried out my new throw

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new013.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new015.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new012.jpg
not a throw but whatever
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new014.jpg
bump

[poopis]

Badap badaap baa I&#39;m lovin it...seriously good shit man, Your blue throws look WAAAAY better than that black one...man i wish i had me some fat caps too... :*(

[koper]

it&#39;s not bad Stonk, but thats only because you bit 3 of the letters straight up from Cope2.

Be more original man. Also, it reads POEO

[poopis]

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/09242006004057Image002.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new013.jpg

no...not really his O may seem like one but if you think about it...thats a pretty basic O thousands of peole use em so not really a bit cope wasnt the first to make an O like that, ALSO his E&#39;s look nothing like copes neither does his P&#39;s...No I&#39;m not taking sides I&#39;m just trying to stop this before the Ethuggieness comes out.

[Stonk]

yea hi def. wasn&#39;t trying to bite copes. what do you suggest to hlep out the d?

[alive]

try working somethign like a |``||```|
| | |
| |
| |
| |
------------

shape with a hole in the middle. if that makes ANY sense. so you see that there a straight line there u know? FUCK it didnt work. i cant get it to show the spacing. o well. define the straight stroke by seperating it with a short line. hope that helps.


and btw, koper, if u werent koper, ppl would be bitching + bitching to you right now. but they think cuz ur koper, they wont. well i dont give a shit. with all due respect, those are very basic letters. and if you wanna get really into it, he doesnt have a C, so there goes that. The O, fine maybe. but come on, how fucking basic can you get. the E he doesnt pull up like cope. the P he doesnt pull up, and cope doesnt have the point. so. ur wrong.


peace.

[uhhh]

Originally posted by T_R_O_N+Dec 9 2006, 08:50 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (T_R_O_N @ Dec 9 2006, 08:50 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 9 2006, 12:47 AM
what im saying, your can control develops ALOT faster then your letters, so for a little while just sketch then after like 3 months, paint OCASIONALLY so you ewill have good can control when you have good letters. so im not saying dont paint. and once you get better you will understand what im saying and WHY im saying it.
:lol: my hard headness makes me blind once again, im begining to understand where your coming from. Im looking at my black book and my sketching can use A LOT more work...that shit looked cool like a month ago, but now the shit looks mad sketchy,ya dig? [/b][/quote]
exactly&#33;
once youve been writing a litttle while, you start to realize that if you were to go paint something, in a few weeks or a months, youd realize how absurdly wack it was. so THATS why you SHOULD hold up on painting, NOONE does but you should, because theres really no reason to go paint everywhere when you suck.

[whoarethereal evil]

poed ur handy is cool

throwies are nothing new tho

[djsupreeme]

oh yeah because cope&#39;s throw is so non-generic.

shutup

[enigmatic]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8927/1001406eh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4645/1001412st8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3936/1001409od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[koper]

Originally posted by alive@Dec 9 2006, 11:44 AM

and btw, koper, if u werent koper, ppl would be bitching + bitching to you right now. but they think cuz ur koper, they wont. well i dont give a shit. with all due respect, those are very basic letters. and if you wanna get really into it, he doesnt have a C, so there goes that. The O, fine maybe. but come on, how fucking basic can you get. the E he doesnt pull up like cope. the P he doesnt pull up, and cope doesnt have the point. so. ur wrong.
LOL, you guys is crazy. That is a straight up bite, obvious as fuck. Doesnt matter if the E is not the exact same, that is still the same E cope uses, sure that one photo isnt the exact same but... nonetheless.

My point is, sure Cope has an extremely generic throwup, but that doesnt mean you can just take the letters from it. Take one alrght, but to take 3 without changing anything, no originality at all there.

All im saying is be original. Sure, use those letters as a starting point, but do not straight up copy them like that.

[enuf.]

Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 8 2006, 09:38 PM


by the way, jelis. i said this before, but i think you should stop painting for now, and JUSt sketch for a few months and pick up a can again then. your can control isnt too bad, so when you DO get good letters, you shouldnt have much trouble putting them on a wall. ;)



i think you should start painting. that&#39;s just my opinion. i understand all this stuff but if you don&#39;t paint you lose. graffiti to some is about being out bombin shit and getting up. to others it&#39;s about mad skills. idk what it is to you. dam, im clogging up this thread with my senseless talk. don&#39;t worry ill post a pic sometime.

[beke]

yo im looking for someone who lives on the west island to paint with bc everyone i know wont go with me??? anyone west island montreal here?

[capo93]

Originally posted by beke@Dec 9 2006, 09:22 PM
yo im looking for someone who lives on the west island to paint with bc everyone i know wont go with me??? anyone west island montreal here?
sry my brother didnt sign out of his account that was me

[enigmatic]

Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 08:12 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8927/1001406eh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4645/1001412st8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3936/1001409od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits...

[5yn]

Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 9 2006, 01:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 9 2006, 01:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by illin@Nov 27 2006, 10:09 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-5yn@Nov 27 2006, 04:36 PM
just sum flicks
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2073.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2087.jpghttp://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2090.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2095.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2096.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2097.jpghttp://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2093.jpg
you tagged a fucking storefront? thats kinda shitty, man. and your letter structure definitely needs work.
thats a prety shitty thing to do to that store, you should be ashamed, now cut me a switch from that tree and come hear so i can beat your ass [/b][/quote]
OH SHIT I PAINTED A SCHOOL UNIFORM STORE now i am a bad guy all of a sudden? haha like i give a fuck

[koper]

The real tome -> TOME (http://kideight.deviantart.com/)

[5yn]

so? theres like a million people that write and u dont think over time there gunna be people picking the same name as others? cause theres only so many names out there

[DJLotus]

well until you level up to his shit homie then stay to the paper, because honestly your shit looks rushed, and its ugly as fuck. your lines look like you were drunk, you don&#39;t even fill your shit in, and your 3d is wack and messed up in so many places. Why don&#39;t you stick to the books and stop causing people&#39;s eyes to bleed at your shit.

EDIT: Don&#39;t be so cocky, your a toy like all of us and he was just trying to help you out. And so am I.

[koper]

And there may be a million people writing but there are more than a million ways to combine letters to come up with a completely unique name.

And yes, that shit is ugly as fuck, keep it to the blackbook until you hit puberty atleast

[5yn]

fuck black books i&#39;m not here to draw sumthing pretty i&#39;m just here to get my name up boys

[Necro-]

shut. the. fuck. up. you. mark. ecko&#39;s. getting. up. fag.


you may be getting you name up but noone&#39;s going to know you for anything but a fucking toy and a lousy artist.

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

thats the worst attitude to have toward graff, why have a name up when your stuff is ugly? so everyone can be like "oh thats that kid tome, he goes around town making things look hideous just so we recognize his made up name"

looked through the past couple pages and theres not much i can say, poed your tag is pretty nice, your throw is boring. make the hole in the d more d shaped rather than o shaped, and try to add a little style to those letters, the points arent really doing you any justice.

jelis, tome, sketch. your stuff is retardedly basic bubble letters that forth graders draw on their school folders. no disrespect but theres no point in getting up if you just look like an 11 year old hooligan got a can and had the balls to write on stuff.

[5yn]

mark ecko hahahaha ok buddday

atleast i dont comb my moms hair at night

[Hot_Pocket]

Why did that get bumped back up here?

Anywho, yeah, my eyes bled a little, and Tome, I wouldn&#39;t have such an attitude toward people that have like 40000 times more ups than you and their shit looks "Pretty".

Anywho, I might go out, find a chill spot and work on my can control, if I ever get off my ass to do that, I&#39;ll post some pics :)

[Unded]

Originally posted by 5yn@Dec 10 2006, 02:34 AM
fuck black books i&#39;m not here to draw sumthing pretty i&#39;m just here to get my name up boys
No. You&#39;re a fucking vandal. You&#39;re just a fucking punk ass kid with a can of paint.
Go to your local police station, hand your cans over and tell them you&#39;re toy as fuck, that you didn&#39;t listen to those who knew more than you do, and that Koper says you should be locked up so you can&#39;t fuck up the world&#39;s image of graffiti any farther.

Kthxbye.

[hardkore toy]

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3536/imga0028mu3.jpg

[Rastamar]

you must to have more security when you paint

[Detoxication]

kids like 5yn need to get there ass beat... little punk bitch

[karmatikal]

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_0823Image0016.jpg

[Hilo]

dope karma.

[G - Wahl]

Lookiin nice Karma.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

A cheap Karak I did...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2854.jpg
All I had was left over paint, so I was runing out of blue towards the rihgt

[FEN the HEN]

Originally posted by Detoxication@Dec 10 2006, 11:24 AM
kids like 5yn need to get there ass beat... little punk bitch
he isnt no punk buddy, you have no idea who he is so stop acting tough on the internet

[T_R_O_N]

Originally posted by 5yn@Dec 10 2006, 02:34 AM
fuck black books i&#39;m not here to draw sumthing pretty i&#39;m just here to get my name up boys
i&#39;d usually applaud this type of attitude, but that shit holds no style at all, i mean hell even cap MPC had somewhat added style to his bomb as ugly as anyone calls it, he destroyed...but with style.

[Unded]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Dec 10 2006, 01:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN @ Dec 10 2006, 01:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Detoxication@Dec 10 2006, 11:24 AM
kids like 5yn need to get there ass beat... little punk bitch
he isnt no punk buddy, you have no idea who he is so stop acting tough on the internet [/b][/quote]
Sorry man, but anyone who blatantly just wants to spray on shit, and make shitty tags everywhere is a fucking punk ass bitch any way you cut it.

[5yn]

fuck all u guys got nothing better to do then talk about me fuck? i bet non of u bomb for real u just sit here hoping one day u can make a pice that people on this fourm will like, your a buncha hopless geeks think i care what u guys say? it takes u a whilre to write it but its only takes me a moment to say fuck you :)

[Necro-]

Originally posted by karmatikal@Dec 10 2006, 01:12 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_0823Image0016.jpg
add highlights to the whole letter on the right side, not just the top parts. i think it&#39;d look better if you used a thin cap for the highlights, and then mist a very small amount of red over the highlight, too.

and just work on your control a little bit, the lines are shaky in some parts. and for where the letters split (like on the K and M at the tops), make those corners slightly rounded. and the A looks too much like an R.

nice tho.

[Billburg]

2nd attempet at a htrowie....CRITZ....

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep037.jpg

[prank]

ok dude u neeeeeeeeeeeed to drawwwwwwwwwwwwww

btw tome ur so ugly u could be a modern art masterpiece

[near]

no idea why i dont plan these out before i do them...both freestyle...both kinda shady lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010595.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010591.jpg

[Unded]

Originally posted by near@Dec 10 2006, 06:10 PM
no idea why i dont plan these out before i do them...both freestyle...both kinda shady lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010595.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010591.jpg
Nice.
The only thing that bothers me is your R is kinda sinking on the first flick

BTW, where is that? (State)

[near]

toronto, ontario, canada

[enigmatic]

Originally posted by enigmatic+Dec 9 2006, 09:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enigmatic @ Dec 9 2006, 09:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 08:12 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8927/1001406eh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4645/1001412st8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3936/1001409od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits... [/b][/quote]
Tome your shit is disgusting. And can i please get some crits on the KWC and the throws i did...

[RemoZ]

KWC is wack as shit, throws are okk.

[anarchy]

Originally posted by 5yn@Dec 10 2006, 03:05 AM
mark ecko hahahaha ok buddday

atleast i dont comb my moms hair at night
what a queer.

[Blix]

near the first is kinda ugly but im feelin the second one

[Unded]

Originally posted by enigmatic+Dec 10 2006, 07:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enigmatic @ Dec 10 2006, 07:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 09:43 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 08:12 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8927/1001406eh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4645/1001412st8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3936/1001409od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits...
Tome your shit is disgusting. And can i please get some crits on the KWC and the throws i did... [/b][/quote]
I&#39;m not feeling that whole "Crayola Lightning Bolt" thing going on there, just seems outta place. Different, I&#39;ll give you that.
I can&#39;t even see how the throwies say KWC, maybe my eyes are broken =P

[enigmatic]

Originally posted by Unded+Dec 10 2006, 10:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Unded @ Dec 10 2006, 10:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 10 2006, 07:05 PM

Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 09:43 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 08:12 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8927/1001406eh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4645/1001412st8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3936/1001409od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits...
Tome your shit is disgusting. And can i please get some crits on the KWC and the throws i did...
I&#39;m not feeling that whole "Crayola Lightning Bolt" thing going on there, just seems outta place. Different, I&#39;ll give you that.
I can&#39;t even see how the throwies say KWC, maybe my eyes are broken =P [/b][/quote]
It says ENI-short for ENI ONE.

[Unded]

Originally posted by enigmatic+Dec 11 2006, 12:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enigmatic @ Dec 11 2006, 12:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Unded@Dec 10 2006, 10:08 PM

Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 10 2006, 07:05 PM

Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 09:43 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Dec 9 2006, 08:12 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8927/1001406eh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4645/1001412st8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3936/1001409od0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits...
Tome your shit is disgusting. And can i please get some crits on the KWC and the throws i did...
I&#39;m not feeling that whole "Crayola Lightning Bolt" thing going on there, just seems outta place. Different, I&#39;ll give you that.
I can&#39;t even see how the throwies say KWC, maybe my eyes are broken =P
It says ENI-short for ENI ONE. [/b][/quote]
Mmmm, okay. Might want to make your letters a tad bit more... recognizable though. =]

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

stop bumping, jesus. near those look hot, glad to see something decent in this thread.

[Apoc]

the first red near, all the structure is bad except the R

and the second one is ok

[Bombers Ambition]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti625.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti624.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti627.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti628.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti633.jpg
FUCK COLOUR VISION
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti637.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti638.jpg

[illin]

Originally posted by beke@Dec 9 2006, 09:22 PM
yo im looking for someone who lives on the west island to paint with bc everyone i know wont go with me??? anyone west island montreal here?
*sniff* *sniff*.... i think i smell... the distinct aroma... of bacon. delicious.

[illin]

^^sore^^, control the drips on the piece and it could be acceptable.

[enigmatic]

Sore the first one isnt good. The rest are.

Looks like you were drunk when you painted it, tons of drips, just sloppy over all, but its a really good idea so try painting it in a less heat spot.

[capo93]

sore no offence but your s in your throw looks like its sorta bitten frome sake&#39;s

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Dec 10 2006, 01:50 PM
A cheap Karak I did...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2854.jpg
All I had was left over paint, so I was runing out of blue towards the rihgt
bumpabump&#33;
no one said anything yet, and I curious what anyone has to say... even though it kinda sucks.

[dynamicartists]

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p141/dynamicartists/1541118729_l.jpg

yo its my first try at my new name kinda shit tho

[Unded]

Originally posted by dynamicartists@Dec 11 2006, 11:59 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p141/dynamicartists/1541118729_l.jpg

yo its my first try at my new name kinda shit tho
I&#39;m a toy myself, but bro, you should really spend some more time in your blackbook before you go painting.

[PaintTheWorld]

Cess,

you got potential and real feeling and style in your pieces. The third one down, one on pink paper, get it up. The one with the face, get it up. The sketch book is for 24 hour bombing, never stop. But you need to start up in the yard and work that paint. I hope I see you on a frieght in my yard soon. Keep on keepin on. Don&#39;t let the vets get you down, you&#39;re the future, and that is a lot of fucking responsibilty. Weighs on me like the fuckin weight of the world everday, but it&#39;s what keeps us comin up with new sic shit and refining our technique always. Good luck.

[PaintTheWorld]

Unded,

1: The name is whack, RIP that shit an get a new one

2: It&#39;s simple and classic bubble, nothing wrong with that on a first piece. Get your sizing straight though

3: Nice colours

Keep in the BBook.

[u4ia one]

[QUOTE]you should paint more, more painting=more can control

true but if u have good hand control at graff and understand the dynamics of the can and the tip then u will be allright if no style..then thats just piss poor and u should stay home and practice practice practice

[revolt92]

errrrrrrrrr paint the world, unded didnt post a pic i think you mean dynamicartist.

btw dynamicartist dont write super it sounds stupid.

[wyred]

crits please.
keep in mind this was my first time. ;)

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/wyred.jpg


http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/wyred5.jpg

[revolt92]

nice, do you love candy and jd and are you sure thats your first time cos thats not bad for a first timer.

[myl]

no one in this toy forum can read quotes properly...

Painttheworld...unded didnt paint that, he just bumped it. learn to read.

and also unded, even though the name "super" is played out, its a pretty nice simple piece if you look at it. good can control, maybe the proportions are off a bit but overall for a first time painting, its not bad at all.


and that wyred stuff...its horrible. stick to the books man. proportions are horrible, those little squiggles look dumb as hell and serve no purpose. and work on your handstyle, its shit at the moment.

[aces]

Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Dec 11 2006, 10:15 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti638.jpg
You must suck at painting to get that much paint on your hands...really how do you hold your cans? The stuff is pretty nice though i have to admit. Just try to get rid of those drips and it&#39;ll look real nice.

[Bombers Ambition]

Originally posted by capo93@Dec 11 2006, 10:17 AM
sore no offence but your s in your throw looks like its sorta bitten frome sake&#39;s
which throw looks like i bit sake because none of those S&#39;s look like sakes s.... and aces its never happen were u put a fat cap on colour vision and paitn just start spillin out the top ya that was happen every time i use it it always happens

[**HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**]

thats not true aces ive had alot of paint on my hands its just from his inexpierience at can techniques for instance if it was cold and he jammed the capp on it would have broken the seal and resulted in the or if he tried to use a orange dot for instance on a colour place can it would have also resulted in this but it has nothing to do with how good at apintng he is and seeing how cezr said post a pic i will



http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/8190/sept19002ho3.jpg

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/6725/sept19001cf7.jpg

[RemoZ]

Get latex gloves, I wish these people would fucking leave there work so I can go paint. I have a chill across the street :)

[Skesh]

Lol my first bomb

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/P1010191-1.jpg

the first S is a little too big and its not very clean, but i&#39;m pretty happy with it, but i&#39;ll work on it

[wyred]

you should try to make the letters "flow" more together.

[AteskOne]

his letters flow fine..they all share the same basic shape. what he needs to work on is keeping his letters consistant. they are all different heights and lenths and the spaces in between the letters are different...you definitely needa work on your can control cause that is looking hella sloppy. i do however understand this is your firts bomb and perfection can only come with practice so my advice is to keep at it. i would fined some place not to public so you dont get immediately crossed out. peace.

[TricksForKids]

hostyle that say Psy? i think it does, but regardless, hot shit, it aint toy man and skesh, just keep painting man, you only get better with time, try working on a alrger scale, liek bigger letters

Peace

[wyred]

can i get some more crits please? thanks, yo.

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by terower@Nov 28 2006, 09:32 AM
Taken a break from painting for a bittt... Made my return during my Thanksgiving break. Did the first on tuesday and the second on thursday. I didn&#39;t get to add all the details I wanted on the second one cause a couple cars pulled up, but I thought it came out cool enough to flick and bounce.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/DSCF3689.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/DSCF3697.jpg

Feedback?
i like that alot...... its not to much that i see characs keep it up

[alive]

colors + cleaness of the second is illl.
1st set of characts are the best in terms of styleeeee n such.

dope shiit.

[sheist]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/waterwingsend/12-09-06_2345.jpg

mooz

the other night, one of my few actual bombs ive done

[4U2C Suicide Bomber]

[/QUOTE][QUOTE][QUOTE] (beke @ Dec 9 2006, 09:22 PM)
yo im looking for someone who lives on the west island to paint with bc everyone i know wont go with me??? anyone west island montreal here?

What do u write ?? post up some flix of ur shit...


n not to b a waste of a post ill comment on something ......


terower those charaters are fukin good nice n clean keep it up.

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 11 2006, 08:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 11 2006, 08:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-terower@Nov 28 2006, 09:32 AM
Taken a break from painting for a bittt... Made my return during my Thanksgiving break. Did the first on tuesday and the second on thursday. I didn&#39;t get to add all the details I wanted on the second one cause a couple cars pulled up, but I thought it came out cool enough to flick and bounce.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/DSCF3689.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/DSCF3697.jpg

Feedback?
i like that alot...... its not to much that i see characs keep it up [/b][/quote]
haha those are doooope man. i remeber when you first started them just on paper and everyone was bitchin bout em...well they definitely look alot better on a wall and i doubt any of those people will bitch anymore.

[Blix]

hot characters...gotta admit they looked like crap on paper but I guess you can&#39;t tell until you see them up on a wall. Keep it up&#33;

oh yeah id work on your handstyle tho. it would only enhance everyhting else

[wyred]

Originally posted by wyred@Dec 11 2006, 01:51 PM
crits please.
keep in mind this was my first time. ;)

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/wyred.jpg


http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/wyred5.jpg
bumppp
:ph34r:

[EliosAVS]

http://static.flickr.com/121/315483069_9577f0963e.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f212/Time_Stops/DSC_0017-1.jpg

[TricksForKids]

dope^, work on the cleaness of the throwm and try adding more bubbles and maing them rounder and maybe even two shades of bubbles in the first flik to make it really pop, nonetheless, ghood can control, clean letters,need a bit of work on the highlights but still, keep it up goes

[Apoc]

Originally posted by EliosAVS@Dec 12 2006, 06:45 AM
http://static.flickr.com/121/315483069_9577f0963e.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f212/Time_Stops/DSC_0017-1.jpg
nah man those bubbles are wack, but the letters are good

[FunkSoul]

Those bubbles are really horrible, they destroy the whole thing.
I made a quick animation for you how to do bubbles (just a quick concept but you&#39;ll get the idea).

http://austria.yumyum.at/freesty/ballin.gif

this is how we roll...

[karmatikal]

thanks for the advice on the last one necro, i&#39;ll keep it in mind next time

I really fucked up the M on this one, plus its mad sloppy

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1211Image0002.jpg

sore your shit is starting to look decent, I like the third pic the best, just fix the S
but I wouldn&#39;t piece a truck until you can atleast paint cleaner,

[PAS]

i think its not a bad bombing. and what is wrong with haveing color?? even if it a bombing doesnt mean that it should be one color&#33;&#33; if u have time to be killin with colors then i say go for it&#33;&#33;

[Bastardo]

your A and R are exactly the same..

[Bruce_1nR]

yeah, its wack...but the drop shadow is gud

[trashhh]

Originally posted by karmatikal@Dec 12 2006, 10:24 AM
thanks for the advice on the last one necro, i&#39;ll keep it in mind next time

I really fucked up the M on this one, plus its mad sloppy

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1211Image0002.jpg

sore your shit is starting to look decent, I like the third pic the best, just fix the S
but I wouldn&#39;t piece a truck until you can atleast paint cleaner,
seriously work on those letters, the little bump in the middle of everything just looks stupid.

[EliosAVS]

They arent really suppose to be bubbles like that but thanks for the input.

[ThickGravy]

Originally posted by Bombers Ambition+Dec 11 2006, 04:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bombers Ambition @ Dec 11 2006, 04:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-capo93@Dec 11 2006, 10:17 AM
sore no offence but your s in your throw looks like its sorta bitten frome sake&#39;s
which throw looks like i bit sake because none of those S&#39;s look like sakes s.... and aces its never happen were u put a fat cap on colour vision and paitn just start spillin out the top ya that was happen every time i use it it always happens [/b][/quote]
I had that in -7 degree weather and it just froze on my glove thankfully. Frozen for about 10 minutes and couldnt even make a fist.

[karmatikal]

Originally posted by trashhh+Dec 12 2006, 03:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh &#064; Dec 12 2006, 03:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-karmatikal@Dec 12 2006, 10:24 AM
thanks for the advice on the last one necro, i&#39;ll keep it in mind next time

I really fucked up the M on this one, plus its mad sloppy

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1211Image0002.jpg

sore your shit is starting to look decent, I like the third pic the best, just fix the S
but I wouldn&#39;t piece a truck until you can atleast paint cleaner,
seriously work on those letters, the little bump in the middle of everything just looks stupid.[/b][/quote]
its weird because some people like the throw and some hate it, I guess it needs more work, theres a better picture on page 707

[TricksForKids]

dear god pleaaase fix your handstyle before painting that, thats all

[TricksForKids]

well, thats not all, i mean, the bomb needs work too, but your actual paitning skills are pretty dence,t and yeah the A and R are identical, and the little tiny bump isnt working for me, back to the drawing board

[FEN the HEN]

people like that?&#33;?.....

[karmatikal]

these any better? or just as bad?



http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1213Image0001.jpg

[karmatikal]

also I modified the other throw, took out those stupid bumps and fixed the A and R so they don&#39;t look identical... any better or still trash?


http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1213Image0001a.jpg

[slEEt]

Not bad man, just fix the K. Also post this in the right section.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

[QUOTE=EliosAVS,Dec 12 2006, 06:45 AM] http://static.flickr.com/121/315483069_9577f0963e.jpg
nah man those bubbles are wack, but the letters are good
Werd... Looks very euro... minus the bubbles or cartoon seaweed... or whatever O_o

[karmatikal]

Originally posted by slEEt@Dec 13 2006, 10:47 AM
Not bad man, just fix the K. Also post this in the right section.
I don&#39;t see a toy throwie sketch section.... where should i post?

[sketch3]

the black bookthread,this is for painted vpeices

[trashhh]

the top one is better but the r looks nothing like an r. the bottom one is.... worse

[DirtyThirty1]

karma its missing something, like it looks to squareish try funking up the sides of the letters or change the bottoms up.but yeah post sketches in the blackbook thread.

[keeblaa]

Originally posted by Kraze3@Aug 26 2005, 04:23 PM
is it just me that thinks writing g-unit is a waste of paint cuz they suck?
these toys at my skool bombed the whole place with UbER G-uNIT SOLJAAHS with an anarchy sign for the a in soljaahs :lol: that was my highlight for the year&#33;

[keeblaa]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Dec 13 2006, 11:01 AM
[QUOTE=Apoc,Dec 12 2006, 07:59 AM] [QUOTE=EliosAVS,Dec 12 2006, 06:45 AM] http://static.flickr.com/121/315483069_9577f0963e.jpg

i like the letters, it looks pretty clean too. keep up the good work

[umop 3pisdn]

THIS IS THE REAL KARMA&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n94/steggythegreat/P9180009.jpg

[Fluffy Bunnies]

^^
ew :(

Your other one was better than that&#33;
just sketch some more til someone says it&#39;s paintable

[karmatikal]

Originally posted by umop 3pisdn@Dec 14 2006, 10:37 AM
THIS IS THE REAL KARMA&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n94/steggythegreat/P9180009.jpg
that shit is just as toy if not worse so fuck off

[RemoZ]

Originally posted by karmatikal+Dec 14 2006, 11:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (karmatikal @ Dec 14 2006, 11:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-umop 3pisdn@Dec 14 2006, 10:37 AM
THIS IS THE REAL KARMA&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n94/steggythegreat/P9180009.jpg
that shit is just as toy if not worse so fuck off [/b][/quote]
Shit is Wack, get to sketching before you paint.

[ras]

^ i agree...and you sig is dope...julian bah...amazing

[karmatikal]

I didn&#39;t paint that if thats what you think... the "real&#39; karma did :blink:

[RemoZ]

you will always be the *real* Karma to me <3

[The Stig]

Karma where you from??
Theres a new carma in t dot thats gettin up.

[-testify-]

ok for painting for throwups do i do each individual letters fill it in outline it then do the next....or just try a bunch of ways out and see what i like

[G - Wahl]

Just paint a hollow, then fill it in with the same color, so it looks like there is no outline at all and just 100% solid 1 color letters.
Then take another color and go over the outline again. Try it with sharpies or somthing first..

[-testify-]

ooh i get it now
oh shit i meant for this to be in toy story...sorry peoples

[koper]

Originally posted by EliosAVS@Dec 12 2006, 06:45 AM
http://static.flickr.com/121/315483069_9577f0963e.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f212/Time_Stops/DSC_0017-1.jpg
dope letters,

the shine/glare needs some perfecting, and the bubbles/bg needs work, other than that i like this.

[umop 3pisdn]

ok to clear something up...i didnt paint that. Someone from orlando did. He doesnt write anymore (thank gawd)

[elcs]

Havn&#39;t posted anything in a while...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/oitrey/mirror.jpg


along the road...I only got a few tags and this bomb off before it started raining. You can see the water startin&#39; to get on the wall. I had the night all planned out too...bummer.



I like the S but I fucked the A up pretty bad. Oh well, there will be more days. I&#39;m goin this weekend for sure, so I&#39;ll post up more pics later probably.

[G - Wahl]

Elcs, I agree, that S is nice..But untill i read your post saying that was an A, I thought it was a R ;)

[minor crimes]

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/01bireskeismeshays.jpg

what do u think??? comments and crits please. ohh ive got a new style now

[Skeam]

i already told u im liking this man but ill tell ya again.......... i like it. your can controls gotten way better since the throwie u first sent me.

I painted today and probably painting tomoro so ill try get flicks... oh and i changed names after i watched style wars a few times mwahaha :D

[keeblaa]

heres a couple of throwies im thinking of trying, if you think theyre ok ill try em out on some walls maybe tomorrow.
http://img431.imageshack.us/img431/489/dec1518xi2.th.jpg (http://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dec1518xi2.jpg)

[DJLotus]

ALL TOYS READ THROUGH TEH PAGES AND LEARN. DONT COME AND EXPECT UR ASS TO BE WIPED BY US. READ AND LEARN&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; AND STOP ASKIN QUESTIONS THAT ARE ANSWERED 10PAGES BACK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

why is this in your sig if you still post in the toy section.....

[Skesh]

Yo minor crimes, its pretty clean, but i really dont like the letters&#33;

[karmatikal]

Originally posted by The Stig@Dec 14 2006, 03:06 PM
Karma where you from??
Theres a new carma in t dot thats gettin up.


ya I know, I&#39;ve talked to him and we both agree that carma and karma are different names, plus he is toy too

minor crimes - I don&#39;t like it at all, work on those letters but the painting is decent

elcs - not bad, I like the S

[teef]

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7624/noripickelmonster2uu4.jpg

done this morning.

Man, my can control is absolute shit. I guess it doesn&#39;t help that I have really shitty RSI carpal tunnel. Not using that as an excuse though, I know I need practice.

[trashhh]

its not bad just try n do the whole left side there in one line it looks all choppy like youve done it in bits. it also looks like youve faded it by doing dots try n hold the can far back with a fat and fade with a continuos spray

[SweetRevenge]

wait um teef what exactly did u do there not quite sure what.

[SweetRevenge]

Originally posted by minor crimes@Dec 15 2006, 06:53 AM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/01bireskeismeshays.jpg

what do u think??? comments and crits please. ohh ive got a new style now
nice can control
but work on your letters over all
might look alot better when darker colors fade down and light colors up

overall nice work

[teef]

Originally posted by SweetRevenge@Dec 15 2006, 05:48 PM
wait um teef what exactly did u do there not quite sure what.
Whoops.

I did the pickel monster.

I figured most people would know, if you&#39;ve seen my characters before.

[ThickGravy]

Originally posted by keeblaa@Dec 15 2006, 07:25 AM
heres a couple of throwies im thinking of trying, if you think theyre ok ill try em out on some walls maybe tomorrow.
http://img431.imageshack.us/img431/489/dec1518xi2.th.jpg (http://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dec1518xi2.jpg)
Thats for blackbooks, not bombs/pieces.

[-/SOLO\-]

Thoughts on this quick throw??? :ph34r:

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/ykyuhug.jpg

[teef]

Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 15 2006, 12:13 PM
its not bad just try n do the whole left side there in one line it looks all choppy like youve done it in bits. it also looks like youve faded it by doing dots try n hold the can far back with a fat and fade with a continuos spray
actually, the dots were kind of to show the texture that he&#39;s a pickle monster. ha. but i know what you mean, and the fade could be a lot better.

[myl]

Originally posted by &#045;/SOLO&#092;&#045;@Dec 15 2006, 09:21 PM
Thoughts on this quick throw??? :ph34r:

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/ykyuhug.jpg
dont write solo

[aeon]

the pickle monster is rude. n the messy feel kinda works...

[Skeam]

solo, that name seems like a pretty toy/played out name IMO but if you wanna write it then do it... although i dont have a clue if its some sort of king anywhere else so yeh.

anyways only thing with that throwup is that the S is completely different style to the olo, they all sorta look the ame and the S just doesnt fit at all.

[CoKKeYONe]

Originally posted by SweetRevenge+Dec 15 2006, 05:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SweetRevenge @ Dec 15 2006, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-minor crimes@Dec 15 2006, 06:53 AM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/01bireskeismeshays.jpg

what do u think??? comments and crits please. ohh ive got a new style now
nice can control
but work on your letters over all
might look alot better when darker colors fade down and light colors up

overall nice work [/b][/quote]
you must work on those letters man
but overall very nice work as SweetRevenge says ;)

[teef]

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/872/picklemon2rn8.jpg

went back and cleaned it up this morning. I didnt realize how messy it was the first time i did it. I guess I should sleep more before painting. Hehe.

and i did this tonight too. big ole cute robot.

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1401/robot1ra1.jpg

My can control still has a lot to be desired... I&#39;m learning, though.

[Stinky]

I like that alot. I love it when people know how to make characters simple but have alot of uniqueness to it.(Im not sure if thats a word). Overall I think it came out good.

-Stinky-

[Truth.]

I reckon there way cool man I love them. The speech bubble on the green thing is the omnly thing I can see that needs more work. Can I ask what you used to to the light blck fade sort of thing to shade?

[teef]

Yeah, i know. My letters really really really suck.

I know it make me lose my "street cred" (whateverthfuck that means...) but I really don&#39;t have as much interest in letters as I do characters (which explains my sucking. i just dont practice)

"Can I ask what you used to to the light blck fade sort of thing to shade?"

sorry, I&#39;m not sure what you mean.

[prank]

http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/6477/pict1103vo7.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6221/pict1105as0.jpg

[Stinky]

That looks very promising, I can see mucho potential. May just need to clean it up and work on the 3d. Now it maybe my impaired vision but your letter structure looks very good.

-Stinky-

[Bastardo]

Thats hot.

[G - Wahl]

Yank throw is looking nice.
Just fix the bottom of the A + N, the N kinda looks like a V
Im loving the Y on the top throw.

[Skeam]

Teef that robot looks pretty sweet mate now just try eprfecting that can control, i dont knowwhat it is about it but i really love the way you did the mouth on that "pickel monster"

Yank those throws are lookin mad i guess all you can really work on is cleaning it up.

good shit overall

[CoKKeYONe]

it looks good
fine work&#33; &#33; &#33;

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40700.jpg

SHIT piece done today.... soo ragin.....

[ras]

The fill is killing it but you do the same letters and peice OVER and OVER but just with a different fill and its kinda boring becuase you have the ability to up your shit sooo much more &#33; just sketch untll u bust out sum more hot letters..as for the Hollys...if i didnt see the " happy christmas " tag...i would of fort those was cocanuts..

and..

Do u rack your paint..or Buy ?... ;)

[trashhh]

haha i didnt do the holly.... and i buy it

And seriously, u couldnt be more wrong with me doing the same piece.. really every one is completely different i duno why u said that like lol

[ras]

you buy it..damn...you must spend alot..how much you pay ? ..

[trashhh]

£3.50 a tin.. and yea fuck i spend loadss, but thers no way i can rack cans in the paint shops about here.. i get a lot from my cans tho i always use leftovers for parts of other fills or 3d effetcs etc

[ras]

£ 3.50 a tin...fuck me.. guessing your in the UK...do u get it from Wilkisons...they have PlastiKote which is pretty good..but its easy to rack from Halfords..and the paint cans are fairly large

[trashhh]

nah man i get the real shit lol... montana, belton premium etc.

[ras]

wer from :unsure: ? ..

[trashhh]

proper &#39;graffiti&#39; shops.. thers 2 kinda near i can get the bus or train to

whole wall flick:
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40709.jpg

[whahappen?]

only thing i hate is the extension on the t which ive always hated toher than that nice

[ras]

yeah your right ^^ ... the extension on the T iv sed over and over and over and over makes it look like a H..lol

[trashhh]

yea ive done that on 2 pieces before but those pieces wer completely different&#33; but yea i fucked this up i thot it was gonna be so much better

[Fosale!]

i think the only good letters are the A,S,and H

the S is the best though, by far.

[ras]

Man...you havent fucked it up...its great...ace fill...clean...lose the extension on the T and work on yur 3d..ittl dope

[nuf1]

here some any comments
http://i17.tinypic.com/472ho3c.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2hn54s1.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/47cy2k3.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2u4o9d2.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2psg8xw.jpg

[Bombers Ambition]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti647.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti650.jpg
shouts for the homie
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti649.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti648.jpg

[koper]

^ nice throws, generic, but good.


Trashhh - your piece looks dope man, good work.

[Truth.]

sore the middle two are nice, keep it up

[NiL]

Lose the * in the O and E looks shitty but the rest of it&#39;s good.

[DESAK]

^^^^^^^
i would have to agree with you on this one. i like the 7th pic. i like it alot fopr some reason. keep ep comin.

PEACE &#33;&#33;

[Bowser]

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n169/WoodenFoot/100_1259.jpg

[stales]

wut the fuck??????? wutever i like it

[nuf1]

Originally posted by nuf1@Dec 17 2006, 04:56 PM
here some any comments
http://i17.tinypic.com/472ho3c.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2hn54s1.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/47cy2k3.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2u4o9d2.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2psg8xw.jpg
critz

[ARMAwonR]

... atleast wait until the next page to bump yourself ...

*EDIT*
i figured this would happen ... <_<

[---CRoR---]

Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Dec 17 2006, 07:23 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti647.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti650.jpg
shouts for the homie
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti649.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti648.jpg
AHAH wurd homie, diggin that CROR. thanks for the ups homie&#33;&#33;&#33;



CRORSORE

[nemzone]

get some fills mate&#33;&#33;

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/5001/imag0002ig5.jpg

bout an hour old. no paint left :( ordering more on thurs fo :)

with the shaky ass fucked up outline lol
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/4597/imag0003hr1.jpg

[aces]

Looked better with out the outline but it&#39;s still sick.

[trashhh]

sore nice work&#33;

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by nemzone@Dec 18 2006, 10:39 AM
get some fills mate&#33;&#33;

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/5001/imag0002ig5.jpg

bout an hour old. no paint left :( ordering more on thurs fo :)

with the shaky ass fucked up outline lol
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/4597/imag0003hr1.jpg
name bite.....
haha just kidding :P
nice i like those alot....looks liek a nice throw to do fast

[G - Wahl]

Nemz I really like that throw

Oh and BTW, is that Montana paint?
If it is what are those colors called? I really like them ;)

[nemzone]

thnx, and its honestly not a bite, not intentional anyway :( dont worry im workin on changin it up.
and its humbrol just spray shit i racked. white, and royal blue

[Fube]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/fubegif.gif

yeah for gifs&#33;

[whahappen?]

^dude that just made me completely understand painting throwies THANK YOU
tutorial section?

[DLove]

this something i did.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/wall1.jpg

[Skeam]

that "arse" is fucken nice as man

[myl]

diggin that charac ^

heres my third time painting...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0147-2.jpg

cant get on the tracks during the day with out the pigs showin up

[bouncingsoul]

Myl I like it a lot except your T is just... Dead man. It ruins it. Fucking clean though

[sank one]

ya man its real clean, but the t ruins it :(

[Fate]

http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/9463/p10308741zt0.jpg

[levans]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^
it looks a hell of alot nicer than some stuff i see on here...nice