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Originally posted by whahappen?@Dec 18 2006, 07:47 PM
^dude that just made me completely understand painting throwies THANK YOU
tutorial section?
Oh come on it doesn't take a genious to work out how to paint a throw, even I worked it out before I seen anyone do it. You wouldn't paint the outline in black first than fill it white and do the shadow first would you? With a bit of sence you can do things.
Like idiots that are 17-20 that paint shitty pieces/bombs and pose in the pic thinking they are hard, c'mon I'm 14 and I got more sence than you stupid pricks.
leave it to a 14 year old to post up some beef with absolutely no relevance. No one cares if you don't pose in your flix.
Originally posted by NiL+Dec 19 2006, 11:27 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Dec 19 2006, 11:27 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 18 2006, 07:47 PM
^dude that just made me completely understand painting throwies THANK YOU
tutorial section?
Oh come on it doesn't take a genious to work out how to paint a throw, even I worked it out before I seen anyone do it. You wouldn't paint the outline in black first than fill it white and do the shadow first would you? With a bit of sence you can do things.
Like idiots that are 17-20 that paint shitty pieces/bombs and pose in the pic thinking they are hard, c'mon I'm 14 and I got more sence than you stupid pricks. [/b][/quote]
Nil..Have you ever got up..im 14..and i WOULD pose in my pics if i had a camera...( i wouldnt really pose , i sed it to piss you off ) ... and tbh...you wouldnt call a 17 - 20 year old a " stupid prick " to their face in real life..so stop running you e-mouth..and you rekon youve got more sense than those " stupid pricks "...man you really havent..calling some one over the net... <_< ... so go to bed ... its 6 o'clock.. :lol:
Rastamar
12-19-2006, 09:22 AM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4158/pc120036hk7.jpg (http://www.rastamar.tk)
Originally posted by Fate@Dec 19 2006, 03:14 AM
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/9463/p10308741zt0.jpg
throw is ok
but what camera did you use to take this picture? Is nice...
gone- no beef, but it seems like you havn't really progressed much at all. That "N" is fire, but it doesn't fit. Do you blackbook at all?
mar- its bad, get a blackbook and start drawing.
that n is the worst part.
how it jets out, if you toned it down itd be decent.
gone-ive seen better stuff out of you..
personnally...i hate that throw...also the colours..shit the 3d looks like a photo film strip thing on smack..
Originally posted by nuf1@Dec 17 2006, 04:56 PM
here some any comments
http://i17.tinypic.com/472ho3c.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2hn54s1.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/47cy2k3.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2u4o9d2.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2psg8xw.jpg
comments
shamee1991
12-19-2006, 03:38 PM
i think the letters flow fine...like it all...it could b worst
enigmatic
12-19-2006, 04:27 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/848/1218061206ue4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and that looks dope. Idk bout the onestrokness...
whahappen?
12-19-2006, 04:42 PM
Originally posted by NiL+Dec 19 2006, 06:27 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Dec 19 2006, 06:27 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 18 2006, 07:47 PM
^dude that just made me completely understand painting throwies THANK YOU
tutorial section?
Oh come on it doesn't take a genious to work out how to paint a throw, even I worked it out before I seen anyone do it. You wouldn't paint the outline in black first than fill it white and do the shadow first would you? With a bit of sence you can do things.
Like idiots that are 17-20 that paint shitty pieces/bombs and pose in the pic thinking they are hard, c'mon I'm 14 and I got more sence than you stupid pricks. [/b][/quote]
what the fuck i knew how to do it like the order but that helped even more and made me sure about how i wanted to do mine...and im not 17-20 not even close
Originally posted by Fube+Dec 19 2006, 07:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Dec 19 2006, 07:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Dec 19 2006, 05:27 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/848/1218061206ue4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and that looks dope. Idk bout the onestrokness...
[/b][/quote]
whats with the aim deal at the bottom? i hope thats a joke. also nice random color choice for a fade, personally i dont like it. i do not think its dope. but looks like your puting it on the right wall, nothing on there looks decent. props to that. keep at it i guess. not very good at crit, then again if thats so then y am i posting? lol
also whahappen?, dont worry about what nil said, sounded to me like un needed hostility. i dont know if u feel like a big man now but it just made u seem stupid nil. sometimes a picture is worth a thousand words.
Originally posted by Fube@Dec 18 2006, 06:08 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/fubegif.gif
sorry to bump my own shit, but i need an opnion on this, is it too generic? need more progression before i put it out?
that F is SICK...not liking the B tho...i think itsthe squggles...evrything else is okay...i would say dont tilt the U so much...but that F is FIYAAAAHHHH !!
whahappen?
12-19-2006, 06:31 PM
i dont really like the squigglies but its something difernt...and leave the squiglies either only squiglly lines or straight in the b
thanks yes im kinda stuck on the b, its the only letter i cant really do anything with. but ill keep workin on it.
Truth.
12-19-2006, 07:22 PM
fube i dont really like it, defo lose the squiggles im not feelin the letters to much weither. man i had to sit for for like 10 mins to finally see the final pic, at least post a pic along with the gif of the final.
MindBoggle
12-19-2006, 08:12 PM
yo just make a new bomb but really simple then go from there when u start to go wild off the bat in a bomb it looks kinda wack + no more swiggles. you got the basics down on how to bomb though so thats all the advise i have... go simple... simple is never played out.
enigmatic
12-19-2006, 08:12 PM
Originally posted by Fube+Dec 19 2006, 07:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Dec 19 2006, 07:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fube@Dec 19 2006, 07:09 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Dec 19 2006, 05:27 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/848/1218061206ue4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and that looks dope. Idk bout the onestrokness...
whats with the aim deal at the bottom? i hope thats a joke. also nice random color choice for a fade, personally i dont like it. i do not think its dope. but looks like your puting it on the right wall, nothing on there looks decent. props to that. keep at it i guess. not very good at crit, then again if thats so then y am i posting? lol
also whahappen?, dont worry about what nil said, sounded to me like un needed hostility. i dont know if u feel like a big man now but it just made u seem stupid nil. sometimes a picture is worth a thousand words. [/b][/quote]
I didnt do the AIM thing...
MindBoggle
12-19-2006, 08:13 PM
oh yea and add 3d and a forcefield and use a thicker tip itl look more street like
keeblaa
12-19-2006, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 19 2006, 09:12 PM
[QUOTE=Fube,Dec 19 2006, 07:13 PM] [QUOTE=Fube,Dec 19 2006, 07:09 PM] [QUOTE=enigmatic,Dec 19 2006, 05:27 PM]http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/848/1218061206ue4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
personally i dont like it, i cant see the a at all...its wack but keep it up and work on getting cleaner lines
Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 19 2006, 08:22 PM
fube i dont really like it, defo lose the squiggles im not feelin the letters to much weither. man i had to sit for for like 10 mins to finally see the final pic, at least post a pic along with the gif of the final.
dial up? sorry bout that.
heres some of my other throws with and without squiggles. same letter style basicly. let me know what direction i should move twards if its not to much trouble.
btw the crit i have gotten so far is very much appreated, even the nigitive crit. thank u to all that have helped my out so far, and also to thoughs that are about to.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/throw2006blacksilver.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/throw2006whitered.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/FubeSheonecolab1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/Fubepaintedthrow3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/thFubepaintedthrow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/Fubepaintedthrow-1.jpg
ive only been painting for about 3 mo. deff much harder then i thought. infact i cant piece for shit, this is y all u see is throws here.
this last one is the very frist attempt at it. i feel i am improveing but i am no where near where i want to be. and its kinda imbarassing to say the least.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/firstthrow.jpg
Delude
12-20-2006, 12:42 AM
Thage and Inko
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6821/p1010054er0.jpg
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/5408/p1010055lg6.jpg
older
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3687/p1030832ci8.jpg
Originally posted by ras+Dec 19 2006, 09:56 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Dec 19 2006, 09:56 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NiL@Dec 19 2006, 11:27 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 18 2006, 07:47 PM
^dude that just made me completely understand painting throwies THANK YOU
tutorial section?
Oh come on it doesn't take a genious to work out how to paint a throw, even I worked it out before I seen anyone do it. You wouldn't paint the outline in black first than fill it white and do the shadow first would you? With a bit of sence you can do things.
Like idiots that are 17-20 that paint shitty pieces/bombs and pose in the pic thinking they are hard, c'mon I'm 14 and I got more sence than you stupid pricks.
Nil..Have you ever got up..im 14..and i WOULD pose in my pics if i had a camera...( i wouldnt really pose , i sed it to piss you off ) ... and tbh...you wouldnt call a 17 - 20 year old a " stupid prick " to their face in real life..so stop running you e-mouth..and you rekon youve got more sense than those " stupid pricks "...man you really havent..calling some one over the net... <_< ... so go to bed ... its 6 o'clock.. :lol: [/b][/quote]
Take that back about the 17-20 year old thing. Went out today said it walking threw the city and someone bumped into me so I looked at them and they mouthed off and I said stfu dickhead. Oh and when school is back I am probly have a fight with two 17 year olds because of their slut whore bitch girls and he said shit to me on the phone for no reason so I asked why and yeah. I already had a fight with one. But I aint running my mouth or braggin about and acting tuff with how many fights I've been in. I'll tell you know most fights have been with people 3-4 years older than man, never anyone younger cept one time he hit me little retard kid like I was in grade 4 or some shit.
Skeam
12-20-2006, 05:42 AM
fuck mate id be pretty stoked if i were you... hell tuff and shit. swearin at older chaps and whatnot... your a hero in the making
Skesh
12-20-2006, 07:41 AM
Originally posted by Rastamar@Dec 19 2006, 10:22 AM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4158/pc120036hk7.jpg (http://www.rastamar.tk)
The letters aren't that bad, but you paint/caps suck and your can control is bad...
Fube I personally think you need to work on your B
al the pieces/throws/bombs/things above this post look good (on the previous page)
Originally posted by NiL+Dec 20 2006, 03:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Dec 20 2006, 03:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ras@Dec 19 2006, 09:56 AM
Originally posted by NiL@Dec 19 2006, 11:27 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 18 2006, 07:47 PM
^dude that just made me completely understand painting throwies THANK YOU
tutorial section?
Oh come on it doesn't take a genious to work out how to paint a throw, even I worked it out before I seen anyone do it. You wouldn't paint the outline in black first than fill it white and do the shadow first would you? With a bit of sence you can do things.
Like idiots that are 17-20 that paint shitty pieces/bombs and pose in the pic thinking they are hard, c'mon I'm 14 and I got more sence than you stupid pricks.
Nil..Have you ever got up..im 14..and i WOULD pose in my pics if i had a camera...( i wouldnt really pose , i sed it to piss you off ) ... and tbh...you wouldnt call a 17 - 20 year old a " stupid prick " to their face in real life..so stop running you e-mouth..and you rekon youve got more sense than those " stupid pricks "...man you really havent..calling some one over the net... <_< ... so go to bed ... its 6 o'clock.. :lol:
Take that back about the 17-20 year old thing. Went out today said it walking threw the city and someone bumped into me so I looked at them and they mouthed off and I said stfu dickhead. Oh and when school is back I am probly have a fight with two 17 year olds because of their slut whore bitch girls and he said shit to me on the phone for no reason so I asked why and yeah. I already had a fight with one. But I aint running my mouth or braggin about and acting tuff with how many fights I've been in. I'll tell you know most fights have been with people 3-4 years older than man, never anyone younger cept one time he hit me little retard kid like I was in grade 4 or some shit. [/b][/quote]
you sound like white trash. :lol:
avore
12-20-2006, 10:35 AM
first bobm ever tips and help pleasehttp://img335.imageshack.us/img335/3264/hpim0612zg2.jpg
maaaaad drips...you need mor can movement ... and you only need ONE outline...like ther u go two..black and white when you only needed white...
Rastamar
12-20-2006, 11:12 AM
Originally posted by Skesh+Dec 20 2006, 08:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skesh @ Dec 20 2006, 08:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Rastamar@Dec 19 2006, 10:22 AM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4158/pc120036hk7.jpg (http://www.rastamar.tk)
The letters aren't that bad, but you paint/caps suck and your can control is bad...
Fube I personally think you need to work on your B
al the pieces/throws/bombs/things above this post look good (on the previous page) [/b][/quote]
thanks!
The caps are the defaults of the krylon.
Mar...there aint no need to bump it ...
Bruce_1nR
12-20-2006, 11:15 AM
Originally posted by Fube+Dec 19 2006, 07:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Dec 19 2006, 07:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fube@Dec 18 2006, 06:08 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/fubegif.gif
sorry to bump my own shit, but i need an opnion on this, is it too generic? need more progression before i put it out? [/b][/quote]
FUBE...it looks ok..I dont like the squiggles on the 'B' maybe do these * * instead of some lines....the 'E' is ok...I like it...keep going...
Getting a late start FUBE? How old are you...
Rastamar
12-20-2006, 11:19 AM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 20 2006, 12:13 PM
Mar...there aint no need to bump it ...
I dont bump nothing, in the bomb that I bump it was bordered
trashhh
12-20-2006, 11:30 AM
FUBE thers no need to do the lines in the B and E in chrome when doing the rough outline u dont need to, its not bad tho and it would look much better with drop shadow
Originally posted by elcs@Dec 20 2006, 12:19 PM
Getting a late start FUBE? How old are you...
haha, do i look that fuckin old from the back side? but yes, i have always liked graff as an art but just never did it myself.
im 25. :o :blink:
[QUOTE]But I aint running my mouth or braggin about and acting tuff with how many fights I've been in[QUOTE]
ok what the hell was that whole post about ??? Nil gay
Originally posted by Fube+Dec 20 2006, 01:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Dec 20 2006, 01:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-elcs@Dec 20 2006, 12:19 PM
Getting a late start FUBE? How old are you...
haha, do i look that fuckin old from the back side? but yes, i have always liked graff as an art but just never did it myself.
im 25. :o :blink: [/b][/quote]
I think that the only reason he said that is cause this site is filled with 14-17 year olds and it is weird to him that someone could start writing so late.
fube ur threowie is one of a kind thats all i gotta say
Bruce_1nR
12-20-2006, 02:34 PM
25 years old isnt bad...I know a guy who is 30 and still trys to run shit.....Fubes throw up is decent, leave it at that....someone post another picture for me to crit....
Skesh
12-20-2006, 02:36 PM
Originally posted by Fube+Dec 20 2006, 12:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Dec 20 2006, 12:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-elcs@Dec 20 2006, 12:19 PM
Getting a late start FUBE? How old are you...
haha, do i look that fuckin old from the back side? but yes, i have always liked graff as an art but just never did it myself.
im 25. :o :blink: [/b][/quote]
Are you serious? You look like 53... :blink:
Just kiddin B) :P
I dont like your B, it lacks style
Originally posted by 5yn@Dec 20 2006, 03:31 PM
fube ur threowie is one of a kind thats all i gotta say
one of a kind is ok, im trying to be different, just not "gay" different if u know what i mean. also, im taking your comment as "gay" different. im still workin on it, i have an idea, just waiting on the rain to quit.
Bowser
12-20-2006, 04:28 PM
fube is an old man like myself.....nice
alive
12-20-2006, 06:02 PM
Originally posted by NiL@Dec 20 2006, 03:47 AM
Went out today said it walking threw the city and someone bumped into me so I looked at them and they mouthed off and I said stfu dickhead.
you are so very hardcore.
well, with something like graff age should not matter. for some reason it does to some of u guys. but i have something to say about all u 14,15, anyone not in there 20s. when u get up to 25,30, whatever, can u see yourself not writeing? just stoping because of your age? i think your crazy if u think age is a factor. well, as long as u can still go out. im not talkin "grandpa in the walker bombing" but i think u get my point.
also nil, i dont play that "im hardcore" shit. keep running your mouth like that in the real world, (if u are infact telling the truth) then someone is sooner or later gunna fuck u up. its not a question of if, its a question of when. if u want to learn the hard way thats your busness.
alive
12-20-2006, 06:13 PM
if you got ups nothin else matters.
shamee1991
12-20-2006, 07:30 PM
people graff until the get out of it....
Bowser
12-20-2006, 11:15 PM
14/15 year olds dont ever stop writing or at least drawing, cause i took a 10 year break. I look at it like this if I wouldnt have quit I might be pretty good by now so yeah, stay up young ones...
Once!
12-21-2006, 05:09 AM
Originally posted by Fube+Dec 19 2006, 10:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Dec 19 2006, 10:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Truth.@Dec 19 2006, 08:22 PM
fube i dont really like it, defo lose the squiggles im not feelin the letters to much weither. man i had to sit for for like 10 mins to finally see the final pic, at least post a pic along with the gif of the final.
dial up? sorry bout that.
heres some of my other throws with and without squiggles. same letter style basicly. let me know what direction i should move twards if its not to much trouble.
btw the crit i have gotten so far is very much appreated, even the nigitive crit. thank u to all that have helped my out so far, and also to thoughs that are about to.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/throw2006blacksilver.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/throw2006whitered.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/FubeSheonecolab1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/Fubepaintedthrow3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/thFubepaintedthrow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/Fubepaintedthrow-1.jpg
ive only been painting for about 3 mo. deff much harder then i thought. infact i cant piece for shit, this is y all u see is throws here.
this last one is the very frist attempt at it. i feel i am improveing but i am no where near where i want to be. and its kinda imbarassing to say the least.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/firstthrow.jpg [/b][/quote]
If your gonna use squiggles do it like the second pic there. I do think you should lose them though, no offense. My favorite one is actually the one with black fill, just proportion the letters more?
I got a late start to man, Im 21 and I suck hardcore, I just suck at art in general and its hard to learn that shit when your older I think, but you seem to be doing fine.
alive
12-21-2006, 05:50 AM
1st black is not bad at all. the rest are wack. sorry.
shamee1991
12-21-2006, 11:06 AM
yh what is up wid the wavey lines??...
just experimenting guys, im not putting shit out on the streets yet. just wanting opnions. thats all.
trashhh
12-21-2006, 12:47 PM
the second last one is class i think
CoKKeYONe
12-21-2006, 02:09 PM
@Once!
that black/silver throwie looks good
others look fine but i don't like letters (no hate!!!)
Stinky
12-21-2006, 02:10 PM
Fube they all really show originality. I like em alot. If you have only been paintin for 3 months damn your off to a great start. Your can control is superb and structure is great keep it up. You should start putting those up.
-Stinky-
''HAZE'' *88*
12-21-2006, 02:16 PM
yea first fill in throw here umm besides the obvious fuck ups..lol.. how is it?
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC01966.jpg
trashhh
12-21-2006, 02:58 PM
em 3d is pretty damn wrong, dont have such a big gap in your a or hav the small bit jutting out at the bottom of your a but i spose its clean enough
''HAZE'' *88*
12-21-2006, 03:03 PM
yea the 3-D is wack ass bitch shity and the A was an experement
next time i will make shit a bit tighter ..and yea no drips, drips are for bitchs haha
alive
12-21-2006, 04:36 PM
its clean enough for a throw really, but the letters are terrible. come to the blackbooks.
Nosypainter
12-21-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by DLove@Dec 18 2006, 07:55 PM
this something i did.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/wall1.jpg
i love your stuff d-love its so crisp ^^
FEN the HEN
12-22-2006, 12:08 AM
to bad the letters blow
whahappen?
12-22-2006, 12:10 AM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :rolleyes:
shamee1991
12-22-2006, 09:08 AM
like the use of pink and black looks so fuckin amazin...
fube that throw is gonna be sick...
the top one is real nice. the squiggle on the e looks decent...
the B needs sorting a lot though. i think a lower vase b might fit better...
keep workin at it...
Stevie
12-22-2006, 07:45 PM
taken with a cell phone so the quality sucks
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/963/free1ab3.jpg
not me in the photo
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1861/free2ci6.jpg
poopis
12-23-2006, 12:09 AM
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/9152/m75e4f05cfe4012bc3daf8fsr6.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/472/mf4ec52d22843c4e5295a70ss1.jpg
the 2nd throw is rushed to the max Um critz
Stevie the 2 E's are ok but your F needs a little more F'age its almost looks like a P and I don't know what to say about your R's and in the 2nd pic try to keep both of your E's the same width
Skeam
12-23-2006, 12:25 AM
Stevie - as far as the thro goes it doesnt look to bad although im not really likin the sharp bits on the R and the 2 E's the 2nd one looks pretty clean too. i dont really like the name free too, sounds a bit played out to me. and tell that faggot not to pose in your pics cause it just looks plain gay.
Poopie - there pretty small pics so yer cant really tell much about them, i dont really like the squigly line on the top one's E but the second one is lookin pretty good mate!
heres somethin i painted bout a week ago, 4th or 5th time ive ever painted so yer seem to be pickin it up alrite just need a grey/black dot for the outline. im still sorta just workin on simples for now. changed my name a while ago too cause i watched stylewars a few times and i just realised how dumb my old name was. crit it if you want im not really fussed.
cheers
http://img314.imageshack.us/img314/6681/nesc1ql8.jpg
sank one
12-23-2006, 12:34 AM
its fairly clean, but i think the letters suck. hit the blackbook
Originally posted by Stevie@Dec 22 2006, 08:45 PM
taken with a cell phone so the quality sucks
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/963/free1ab3.jpg
not me in the photo
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1861/free2ci6.jpg
i like these. i would leave the holes for the e and the r empty when i did my fill. thats just me, but i like them man.
revolt92
12-23-2006, 03:26 PM
Skeam- its nice and clean but that m is demented, definatley change that next time.
Skeam
12-23-2006, 06:12 PM
yer its not a M lol, its a N with a poo face'd add on.
i writed NESC, ive been meaning to add that to my sig lol.
cheers for the crits sank and revolt.
Sluts_r_us
12-23-2006, 08:01 PM
dont got any painted pix...dont take my cam bombing but yeah..heres a throw on paper...i might go get some flix soon...did a huge silver throw the other day n hit the side of a train wit a tag but yeah...w.e. p came out a lil small but shit happens
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/122306_2056.jpg
whahappen?
12-23-2006, 08:03 PM
FUCKING NICE^
freakshow
12-23-2006, 08:09 PM
that e is fucking beautiful
FEN the HEN
12-23-2006, 08:39 PM
PESK thats fucked, im feeling it
Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-23-2006, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by poopis@Dec 23 2006, 01:09 AM
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/9152/m75e4f05cfe4012bc3daf8fsr6.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/472/mf4ec52d22843c4e5295a70ss1.jpg
the 2nd throw is rushed to the max Um critz
Stevie the 2 E's are ok but your F needs a little more F'age its almost looks like a P and I don't know what to say about your R's and in the 2nd pic try to keep both of your E's the same width
clean up the fill and these will look nice, maybe put a forcefield
pesk get some painted flicks cuz your throw is so grimy lookin i love it
"free" work on your r, really not feelin the whole style but i'm not gonna tell you to stop doin what you're doin, just make the r look more like an r cuz that top part with the swirley wave isnt lookin to good, idk if you know what i mean.
taine
12-23-2006, 10:44 PM
skeam that n looks like an m, but it is pretty clean i guess
prank
12-23-2006, 10:50 PM
OMG you ppl should friggen sketch like mad before even thinking aobout painting
ur letters arent consistent at all and show no style
to ever1 in the last 3 pages!!!
Skeam
12-23-2006, 11:23 PM
yer did this today i was lovin it till i did the outline, still gotta work on my can control with my outliens cause i reacon it lets the peice down alot. the picture of the whole peice doesnt look to bad but on the close up shots you can see where its sketchy. i also only had 2 grey dots and they were the only thin caps i had and they both clogged up haha but im not gunna use that as an excuse
crits or yeh wateva
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3383/hpim2488ft2.jpg
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6285/nescclosejj2.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4995/nescclose2dr2.jpg
Cheers
Sluts_r_us
12-23-2006, 11:30 PM
aight prank post up some of your shit if your feelin like you can say shit to everyone in this thread.
Prank- you're dumb as hell its a god damn TOY thread
Nesc- slow down im not likin a single letter from that just try some simpler shit I know its frustrating to hear that but for real
FEN the HEN
12-24-2006, 12:44 AM
Originally posted by prank@Dec 16 2006, 05:13 PM
http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/6477/pict1103vo7.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6221/pict1105as0.jpg
PRANK quit acting like your tough shit because you got some compliments about this, its not fantastic and its hidden away where no one but you will see it.
Sluts_r_us
12-24-2006, 08:56 AM
the second throw is disgusting...the y makes me wana throw up and the n in the first one is fucked up...also dont talk shit like ur a king if your still painting things like this...
poopis
12-24-2006, 09:08 AM
Originally posted by prank@Dec 23 2006, 11:50 PM
OMG you ppl should friggen sketch like mad before even thinking aobout painting
ur letters arent consistent at all and show no style
to ever1 in the last 3 pages!!!
hmmm? Ive been sketching my throws everytime I open my black book which is alot per week I do each of my throws to atleast all of them fill 3 pages front and back(Not bragging saying I sketch more that anyone). Also I believe "ever1" in the last three pages shows consistent lettering and some show style, I don't see the exact same style when everyone post I'm not trying to diss you but your throws and simple look the same atleast everytime you post some painted shit.And as blix said its a toy thread so expect that.
noam12
12-24-2006, 09:27 AM
lol ive seeen yank around my town, eh i have no pics of my bombs =[
Nosypainter
12-24-2006, 10:22 AM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Dec 24 2006, 01:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN @ Dec 24 2006, 01:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-prank@Dec 16 2006, 05:13 PM
http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/6477/pict1103vo7.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6221/pict1105as0.jpg
PRANK quit acting like your tough shit because you got some compliments about this, its not fantastic and its hidden away where no one but you will see it. [/b][/quote]
yank looks real good for throw up...
beone
12-24-2006, 10:33 AM
yank is painting where he should but make the letters harder and not so bubly give the n space and kill your throwup
C3ZR ONE
12-25-2006, 12:45 AM
Yanks first flick is good, but nothing incredible. The second flick, not so hot. Nothing that warrants such dissrespect to everyone else on the last 3 pages....But whatever. If this is gonna get that much attention, that means one thing. Nobodys doing much painting right now. :lol:
Truth.
12-25-2006, 04:08 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/PAINTTRHO25DEC.jpg
man i havent painted for about 3 months. geex first time painting since then, finally schools over. gah any crits?
Skeam
12-25-2006, 04:26 AM
just workon cleaning it up a bit and you should be rite. also it looks like its getting bigger from the start to the end and im not to keen on the R but yeh your on the right track
Truth.
12-25-2006, 05:28 AM
thanks man, i got all this paint for chrissy, so painted a quick thro even tho, i should be sketching lol
Skeam
12-25-2006, 05:40 AM
lucky cunt lol... i asked mum for paint for chirssy and shes like fuck off im not buying you any paint, but i got new oakly goggles and grips and some other mad shit :D
G - Wahl
12-25-2006, 10:13 AM
Truth, you needa work on your can controll, it looks like you tried to go as fast as possible with that fill, take your time..Even though its a bomb, I would rather take my bomb to take another 10-15 seconds to look nice then to have a shitty lookin bomb.
Just my 2 cents, the letters look nice though, just need to work on the height thing also.
Im goin out bombin soon, ill post soon.
Nosypainter
12-25-2006, 02:05 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 01:45 AM
Yanks first flick is good, but nothing incredible. The second flick, not so hot. Nothing that warrants such dissrespect to everyone else on the last 3 pages....But whatever. If this is gonna get that much attention, that means one thing. Nobodys doing much painting right now. :lol:
yeah i agree my entire city is so hott right now its so bad that you can barly get a stick out.... but of course i can thank all the toys for that so im waiting till they bust some drug lord then its all good
HazeAmaze
12-25-2006, 02:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/Skull2.jpg
crits?
It's very unproportional. Fix that and it should be a'ight.
Truth-What happened man? you were getting decent, your throws got nice and your can control was good. Well, regardles, good to see you back.
HazeAmaze
12-25-2006, 03:03 PM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 03:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/Skull2.jpg
crits?
bottom of page bump, sorry guys :P
G - Wahl
12-25-2006, 04:51 PM
The idea of the charactor is cool, but you need to sketch it more to make it more symetrical like. Or are you going for that small-big charactor kinda thing?
Regardless, your fading and shadows is nice on that.
that girl in your sig always makes me turn my head, whats wit that? and why cant you make it not sideways?
Nosypainter
12-25-2006, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 25 2006, 05:08 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/PAINTTRHO25DEC.jpg
man i havent painted for about 3 months. geex first time painting since then, finally schools over. gah any crits?
i really hate that letter style no offence but it looks like shit
Bruce_1nR
12-26-2006, 12:34 AM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Dec 24 2006, 01:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN @ Dec 24 2006, 01:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-prank@Dec 16 2006, 05:13 PM
http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/6477/pict1103vo7.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6221/pict1105as0.jpg
PRANK quit acting like your tough shit because you got some compliments about this, its not fantastic and its hidden away where no one but you will see it. [/b][/quote]
FOR CHRIST SAKES DONT FUCKING BITE OFF OF YANK (from vandal squad...but he does really paint)
TRUTH- FIX YOUR FUCKING 'R'!
HazeAmaze
12-26-2006, 12:39 AM
Originally posted by Apoc@Dec 25 2006, 11:31 PM
that girl in your sig always makes me turn my head, whats wit that? and why cant you make it not sideways?
because it has aesthetic appeal like it is
i think so atleast :blink:
Nosypainter
12-26-2006, 02:56 AM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze+Dec 26 2006, 01:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HazeAmaze @ Dec 26 2006, 01:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Apoc@Dec 25 2006, 11:31 PM
that girl in your sig always makes me turn my head, whats wit that? and why cant you make it not sideways?
because it has aesthetic appeal like it is
i think so atleast :blink: [/b][/quote]
i dont think theres anything wrong with your sig not like shes choking on a cucumber or anything har har
Quigbert
12-26-2006, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze+Dec 25 2006, 04:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HazeAmaze @ Dec 25 2006, 04:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 03:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/Skull2.jpg
crits?
bottom of page bump, sorry guys :P [/b][/quote]
shit, youve got long fingers
Stonk
12-26-2006, 10:21 PM
haze amaze, do something different with the eye sockets, maybe some shading or something the all black doesn't look right. at least to me
eromatic
12-27-2006, 02:15 AM
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/0b2b5a50d6.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)
xanax
No offence dude but that's terrible.
If the first letter is supposed to be an 'X' it looks nothing like one, more like a cross between a 'T' and an 'I'.
You've missed the outline on the top of the 'A'.
It's drippy as fuck, move the can further away from the wall.
eromatic
12-27-2006, 03:20 AM
its a z
Still looks nothing like a 'Z'.
I saw your tags in the tag thread and they're good but that throw needs a lot of work/
eromatic
12-27-2006, 03:41 AM
thanks.
yeah my throw is balls
Skeam
12-27-2006, 05:11 AM
whyd u paint it then?
Truth.
12-27-2006, 06:05 AM
Keeping his paint skills up with his drawing skills. I made that mistake, now I can't paint for shit but can draw about 50x better than I can paint.
Really... The style REALLY isn't that bad.... It's just dirty as fuck and messy as hell. If that was mint clean, I guarentee you wouldnt be bitching about the letter structure and style...
if you didn;'t extend the back of the z out, then it'd look like a z, other then that, spray farther away.
PushOner
12-27-2006, 11:37 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0021.jpg
i dont draw people, but i tryed this one. its an older one i did about a year ago. all drew B.I.G. in pen, shading n all....then went over it with darker shit.
PushOner
12-27-2006, 11:37 AM
fuck, its blurry as shit. i have a cheap ass camera. =P
i like your style of letters....but you posted this in the wrong thred...try putting it in the Toy characters thread.. :)
CoKKeYONe
12-27-2006, 03:44 PM
Originally posted by eromatic@Dec 27 2006, 03:15 AM
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/0b2b5a50d6.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)
xanax
ahhhhh to many drips <_<
meetermaid
12-27-2006, 03:48 PM
eromatic- that's a hottt style! make the a more round and work on your can control, and don't paint the sides of the a black at the top where it touches the z and n, it's confusing.
sorry guys, i like the squiggles! cant help it.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/12-27-06_1604.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/12-27-06_1601.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/Heat.jpg
and eromatic: i like that throw, i even like the overlaping black, just cut the drips out man.
kustem
12-27-2006, 04:57 PM
Nice throw fube, unlike others, im a fan of the squiggles..
maybe you could experiment with other lines or shapes in it tho?
just an idea, it looks great tho imo. and the tag in the 2nd pic is hot to.
T_R_O_N
12-27-2006, 08:03 PM
>.< kill the squiggles man it will look a lot better, also ero dude that throw is fugly, no offence. Try doing bubble letters .
EDIT: actually fube keep the squiggles, but try and characterize them, like in the f you could make that into a face with hair.
jerm_mtl
12-27-2006, 08:47 PM
Originally posted by prank@Dec 23 2006, 11:50 PM
OMG you ppl should friggen sketch like mad before even thinking aobout painting
ur letters arent consistent at all and show no style
to ever1 in the last 3 pages!!!
no beef but i really dont like ur throw so reconsider that post
addicted
12-27-2006, 09:01 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl+Dec 27 2006, 09:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl @ Dec 27 2006, 09:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-prank@Dec 23 2006, 11:50 PM
OMG you ppl should friggen sketch like mad before even thinking aobout painting
ur letters arent consistent at all and show no style
to ever1 in the last 3 pages!!!
no beef but i really dont like ur throw so reconsider that post [/b][/quote]
Prank - stop talking shit man i didnt like your throw much so stop dissing everyone elses, they are probably trying to get good can control or something. They probably do sketch before they paint ...
Truth.
12-27-2006, 09:21 PM
fube the squiggles look nice in trhat one, nice thro
Bombers Ambition
12-27-2006, 09:47 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti659.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti666.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti668.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti670.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti672.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti673.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti674.jpg
Z FUSE
12-27-2006, 09:54 PM
I like the RE on the white wall with thin stripe at the top, nice, good ups
Nosypainter
12-27-2006, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by eromatic@Dec 27 2006, 03:15 AM
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/0b2b5a50d6.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)
xanax
god damn thats dripy as hell try holding the can further from the wall...
addicted
12-27-2006, 10:15 PM
bombers ambition - the first one is hot but i dont like how you use the question marks as the hole. the second one is nice, but you need to get a better fill, other than that its cool. the third one is nice and simple, love it. the fourth one is dope, but i dont like the s and e. the fifth one is very hot, just work on the r and take away the question marks. the sixth one ... its ... pretty crap .. no offence. you should fill it and work on the S. the seventh one is AWESOME just change the S and fill it.
~addicted
Truth.
12-27-2006, 10:18 PM
SORe that 5th one is siiiiick keep it up
crits apreesh
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/dec28paitnthro.jpg
addicted
12-27-2006, 10:58 PM
Truth ... That is one of the best things I've seen from you. I love it. Very nice. The forcefield is kinda sloppy though ... Anyways its nice. Keep it up.
crakbaby
12-27-2006, 11:28 PM
truth- i like it next time be a little more carefull woth the over all outline, other than that its good keep it up
-SiC->
12-27-2006, 11:45 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m236/FTW_Juggalo_FTW/SC.jpg
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m236/FTW_Juggalo_FTW/sic.jpg
they suck badly sorry
Stonk
12-27-2006, 11:55 PM
wait a little to paint sic... sketch more
-SiC->
12-27-2006, 11:58 PM
o i sketch alot i just need more can control
sank one
12-28-2006, 12:14 AM
no you need letter structure...
-SiC->
12-28-2006, 12:15 AM
i have better shit its just i cant paint it
sic :get some ply wood and practice there. whats the deal with the fat s and fat c but the skinny as hell i? try to make em the same thickness and block it up. the first s on the first flick is ok but the rest of it is not too good. hes saying u need to sketch because the letter structure your tryin to paint is not good. start from the bottom, work up to the top.
Skeam
12-28-2006, 01:22 AM
sic theres no use posting in here for crits if your gunna disagree with what everyone says... you may sketch alot that doesnt mean your sketches are ready to be painted though.
shamee1991
12-28-2006, 08:04 AM
-SiC-> Posted on Dec 28 2006, 01:15 AM
i have better shit its just i cant paint it
post some steches then. den we can find out if ur shit or just cant paint?...or what eva ur excuse is...
-SiC->
12-28-2006, 10:43 AM
o i know people will disagree with every thing you say because im use to my local graffiti site
Bombers Ambition
12-28-2006, 01:20 PM
so go there and stay there if u cant handle it here
shamee1991
12-28-2006, 01:47 PM
i want to see ya sketches
WELKR
12-28-2006, 01:53 PM
I don't wanna sound gay or something but how long does it actually take to fill a throw-up with a fatcap?
trashhh
12-28-2006, 01:57 PM
depends... on the coverage, paint, size and technique
jerm_mtl
12-28-2006, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert+Dec 26 2006, 10:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Quigbert @ Dec 26 2006, 10:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 04:03 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 03:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/Skull2.jpg
crits?
bottom of page bump, sorry guys :P
shit, youve got long fingers [/b][/quote]
im sure the ladies like that if you know what i mean
no jerm.
i have absolutely no idea what you mean...
<_<
jerm_mtl
12-28-2006, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 28 2006, 07:09 PM
no jerm.
i have absolutely no idea what you mean...
<_<
hahahaha the if you know what i mean wasnt a real like question .. it was just to add to the sexual content .. but now u killed it so wtv
This up was dumped to the Toy Factory and I DONT GIVE A FUCK!!!!
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5407/hpim0632sx2.jpg
Originally posted by Fube@Dec 27 2006, 06:20 PM
sorry guys, i like the squiggles! cant help it.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/12-27-06_1604.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/12-27-06_1601.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/Heat.jpg
and eromatic: i like that throw, i even like the overlaping black, just cut the drips out man.
I have to admit aside from the squiggles these are pretty damn good and you got mad can control so if and when you paint illegally it won't look like shit like a lot of peoples including myself.
Nosypainter
12-28-2006, 08:38 PM
Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Dec 27 2006, 10:47 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti659.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti666.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti668.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti670.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti672.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti673.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti674.jpg
no offence but hit the books before you hit the wall..... no beef intended
thanks aces, might be a dumb question but how much of a difference to caps really make? ive been useing what they give me. is there a huge difference or do they just make it a touch easyer?
G - Wahl
12-29-2006, 05:37 AM
Originally posted by Fube@Dec 28 2006, 11:10 PM
thanks aces, might be a dumb question but how much of a difference to caps really make? ive been useing what they give me. is there a huge difference or do they just make it a touch easyer?
Fat caps help for bombing, just fills faster, nice thicker lines
HazeAmaze
12-29-2006, 08:30 AM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl+Dec 28 2006, 07:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl @ Dec 28 2006, 07:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Quigbert@Dec 26 2006, 10:25 PM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 04:03 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 03:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/Skull2.jpg
crits?
bottom of page bump, sorry guys :P
shit, youve got long fingers
im sure the ladies like that if you know what i mean [/b][/quote]
i know what you mean
regardless
how bout critique my character instead of my awesomely long fingers :P
trashhh
12-29-2006, 10:09 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40732.jpg
I like my ASH... my T and R are WACK AS HELL!! soo annoyin.. only had a pink dot up until the A i tried to fix it but ah well
shamee1991
12-29-2006, 10:12 AM
yh not one of ya best..but still good at least u kno what's wrong wid it...
try joining the bottom of your a or something, right now it looks kinda like a z, good 3-d though.
trash, it looks decent but your outline is wack, it would look cooler if it was like, boxy, and not curved at all. There are alot of things wrong with the letter structure but at least your shits original, and way better than most stuff that comes along here
ThickGravy
12-29-2006, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze+Dec 29 2006, 09:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HazeAmaze @ Dec 29 2006, 09:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Dec 28 2006, 07:07 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert@Dec 26 2006, 10:25 PM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 04:03 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-HazeAmaze@Dec 25 2006, 03:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/Skull2.jpg
crits?
bottom of page bump, sorry guys :P
shit, youve got long fingers
im sure the ladies like that if you know what i mean
i know what you mean
regardless
how bout critique my character instead of my awesomely long fingers :P [/b][/quote]
Looks pretty nice. With the effects and all, makes it seem more real.
Just you gotta even the bones, the one closes to you is longer then all of them.
Just some fix ups and there ya go.
trashhh
12-29-2006, 11:46 AM
Apoc ive just realised ur signature is Looptroop.. legend
weldo
12-29-2006, 04:33 PM
sorry i cant post any throwies or shit i dont know how to do them aha wak cunt i am.
trashhh i cant really see much lettering in yours all i can suggest is make it a shit load simple and you will be able to see the words better im not being a wanker just saying and get rid of that line going around the blue.
hers my piece the x is fuked.
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9118/imgp0031gv8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
shamee1991
12-29-2006, 04:47 PM
looks g...just got sum bumps on ya lines. and it aint the brick wall...
shamee1991
12-29-2006, 04:54 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40732.jpg
i saw this and it good and all but aint cha best. what happened?...
Originally posted by Apoc@Dec 29 2006, 12:18 PM
trash, it looks decent but your outline is wack, it would look cooler if it was like, boxy, and not curved at all. There are alot of things wrong with the letter structure
Wtf. Are you serious?
I swear some of you PRETEND to know what the fuck you are on about just so you look good.
And for the guy who asked 'what happened'. SHUT UP.
You can call me a shit talker all you like and say i cause beef, but some of you are fuckin psuedo-skilled and dont know fuckin shit about anythin. <_<
whoarethereal evil
12-29-2006, 08:32 PM
i agree tbh
not sure about tht specific post i cnt really remember wht it said now but agreed in general
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/IMG_0395.jpg
delt boyos
minesweep
12-29-2006, 08:43 PM
wrong thread^^
whoarethereal evil
12-29-2006, 08:59 PM
i just realised that
thanks
any comments
http://i14.tinypic.com/2chnwg5.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2lm2elh.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/2n8dd2a.jpg
BAPKEB
12-29-2006, 11:56 PM
im a toy i know but krits or hook me up with some new letters?http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8605/1000157wx3.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5071/1000161pg1.jpg
Originally posted by nuf1@Dec 30 2006, 12:53 AM
any comments
http://i14.tinypic.com/2chnwg5.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2lm2elh.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/2n8dd2a.jpg
got last page no comments
bap: where are u painting these things? i see a board in your sig. stick to the board or super chill spots untill u get better letters man. trust me, im not trying to be mean cus im new to painting myself but if u can tell something is bad u dont need someone saying it again. what do u mean "hook me up with some new letters."? im confused, do u want someone to do it for u so u can bite it? or are u lookin for a new name?
anyway, heres something i painted on a "practice" board. i sugest u do the same and not put that out anymore because it might look ok to u now but later on u will be hateing it and wishing u never did. last thing i want to do is hit the streets before i have most basics down. just want it to look good thats all. crits are welcome. btw if your gunna hate on the squiggles o well. :P
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/heep2.jpg
nuf1: i like the throw but clean up the letters i guess, i cant tell what the middle letter is. as for the piece i cant tell much from the picture eather. sorry man. bet someone can crit u better on that.
statar
12-30-2006, 04:31 AM
this is my 2nd kasp piece crits please ;)
[img=http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/8793/241205046kj9.th.jpg] (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=241205046kj9.jpg)
PICS ABOVE ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Klone
12-30-2006, 04:56 AM
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4605/freighttrains005mx4.jpg
Skeam
12-30-2006, 04:57 AM
statar - deffinetly not bad for your second atemp bro. you can tell that u sketched a fuckload before you painted because your letters arent all that bad, it looks like the 3ds a bit off in places but yeh just keep at it mate your on the rite track
trashhh
12-30-2006, 05:46 AM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Dec 29 2006, 05:54 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40732.jpg
i saw this and it good and all but aint cha best. what happened?...
Ill tell u what happened... the only cap i has was a pink dot i found lying on the ground up until about the S, when i got a skinny... tried to fix it up but ya knoww... rough outline n all done with a pink dot
shamee1991
12-30-2006, 09:27 AM
ohh..well happy deys!...
FEN the HEN
12-30-2006, 02:05 PM
Originally posted by BAPKEB@Dec 30 2006, 12:56 AM
im a toy i know but krits or hook me up with some new letters?http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8605/1000157wx3.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5071/1000161pg1.jpg
well atleast no one will see those
Nosypainter
12-30-2006, 02:44 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Dec 28 2006, 11:10 PM
thanks aces, might be a dumb question but how much of a difference to caps really make? ive been useing what they give me. is there a huge difference or do they just make it a touch easyer?
caps make a huge diffrence from how much time your at one spot to your fill come on now...
ouch, i just asked because ive been useing the regs and they are workin just fine for me. as for hot spots i dont get up yet so maybe that would matter later in time. come on now. i do know they make some difference, if u look at the question, i was wondering if its a big enough difference to get some. thats all. but, thanks for the feed back none the less.
Originally posted by nuf1+Dec 30 2006, 01:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nuf1 @ Dec 30 2006, 01:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nuf1@Dec 30 2006, 12:53 AM
any comments
http://i14.tinypic.com/2chnwg5.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/2lm2elh.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/2n8dd2a.jpg
got last page no comments [/b][/quote]
2nd bump no comments
trashhh
12-30-2006, 03:59 PM
I kinda like the first outline but the R kinda looks like an A, in the second one i really dont like the R but the rest is ok.. The piece looks like it says SORM just work on the letters a bit
kemzone
12-30-2006, 06:01 PM
some stuff from today
me (seao)
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/6743/nycgraffiti334ko4.jpg
my friend geor
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/8027/nycgraffiti335aa2.jpg
critsssssss
MainEvent
12-30-2006, 09:58 PM
Bapker- stick with paper.
Nuf- throwies are ok. i like the red one more than the white one, keep working with those. the last piece looks pretty good, stay up.
kemz- like Blix said, kinda hard to make em out. filled in would be better.
CaRrIe_v0n_B3rR1
12-31-2006, 12:58 AM
meh
wrong forum, should go in the black books, the only thing i would change is the Q it looks like a O with a arrow instead of the Q, but since it aint urs i dunno if u care to change or not...
enigmatic
12-31-2006, 01:51 AM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8867/mail4pb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
me and my freind. i know the shadow/3d or whatever is hella fucked up on mine. i just sort of gave up and made it more of a background to differentiate it between the rest of the stuff on the wall.
yeah the O is messed up to. whatever.
trashhh
12-31-2006, 06:34 AM
Originally posted by trashhh+Dec 30 2006, 06:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Dec 30 2006, 06:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shamee1991@Dec 29 2006, 05:54 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40732.jpg
i saw this and it good and all but aint cha best. what happened?...
Ill tell u what happened... the only cap i has was a pink dot i found lying on the ground up until about the S, when i got a skinny... tried to fix it up but ya knoww... rough outline n all done with a pink dot [/b][/quote]
bump
And caso DONT do that follow through from the C to A thing its awful
stemONE
12-31-2006, 07:08 AM
FUCK!!! you guys own me, i did my first piece just the other day,i was pretty stoked with it considering it was my firdt ever piece done EVER but im not kean to chuck it up here but fuck it im drunk ATM so it doesnt even matter hahah,well it prolly will when im sober
Critz good or bad,it dnt bother me,there both good lol
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/315/stempiecels8.jpg
PEACE.
Stem-one: Not that bad for your first piece, pretty good can control. Just remember to keep all the letters the same size and width. But either way good job for first piece
G - Wahl
12-31-2006, 08:25 AM
Stem, it looks like you went over somone alot better then you...
BohemianBastard
12-31-2006, 09:14 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n90/vankbg/Image189.jpg
mehhhhhhh
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n90/vankbg/Image187.jpg
le crew, not mine
CoKKeYONe
12-31-2006, 10:49 AM
Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 31 2006, 02:51 AM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8867/mail4pb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
me and my freind. i know the shadow/3d or whatever is hella fucked up on mine. i just sort of gave up and made it more of a background to differentiate it between the rest of the stuff on the wall.
yeah the O is messed up to. whatever.
fine throwie but bad can control <_<
practice and it will be better
Jrow17
12-31-2006, 01:51 PM
stem-honestly not bad at all for a first pieces, simple with a nice can control.. much better then some peoples first piece. They need to learn to keep it simple like you did...
bohemianbastard- those are pretty nice but they arent yours?? Why post somone elses stuff?
caso- yeah, gotta lose the extention from the c to the s... that doesnt flow at all.. work on your letters a bit more.. but overall you had decent can control (dont listen to cockyone or whatever) and a good solid fill
BohemianBastard
12-31-2006, 01:54 PM
the first one is mine
the second one is a homies
aim is teh crew
i is teh extatic enser
happy new year peopleee
Jrow17
12-31-2006, 02:02 PM
ah...
in that case nice work.. i like your letters and you have good can control, only thing is maybe the leg of the r extends out a little too far, doesnt look bad though
DLove
12-31-2006, 02:46 PM
I guess this stuff would belong here.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0706.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0705.jpg
kind of messy
newbornsek
12-31-2006, 03:39 PM
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/thcroller.jpg
1st roller?
wut yall think?
anarchy
12-31-2006, 04:23 PM
cool
bottom part of the c should be same as top i think though
newbornsek
12-31-2006, 04:25 PM
cool thanks
ANY COMMENTS ON THESE
http://i18.tinypic.com/314fona.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/2rhqt5h.jpg
http://i16.tinypic.com/4gqq5br.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/4beyzac.jpg
newbornsek
12-31-2006, 04:58 PM
pretty dope,
feeling the first one liner
just keep sketching and working on ur letters a little more, your m just stands out a little in my view as needing a little work
but overall not bad bro
ARMAwonR
12-31-2006, 05:13 PM
Originally posted by DLove@Dec 31 2006, 03:46 PM
I guess this stuff would belong here.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0706.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0705.jpg
kind of messy
no offense ... but im not keen to you letter structure at all on the first one
looks to jagged ...
nice kicks tho lol
ZiareONE
12-31-2006, 06:28 PM
my first time doin this
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/Wall1.jpg
ZiareONE
12-31-2006, 06:30 PM
my can was near empty when i started the tag
Jrow17
12-31-2006, 07:56 PM
Originally posted by ZiareONE@Dec 31 2006, 07:28 PM
my first time doin this
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/Wall1.jpg
first of all congrats on your first time... next time have enough paint to do what you need... drop the x's as holes and if the letter after the z is supposed to be an "I" (like in your tag) and not an e.. then you need to work on it some..
scape-one
12-31-2006, 09:43 PM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture068.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture026.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture022.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture023.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture335.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture334.jpg
some of those were from my old name
Stinky
12-31-2006, 09:48 PM
Scape the one with the blue fill looks very tasty,smooth like rock.Maybe you could just tighten up the outline a wee bit. Other than that I Like It .
-Stinky-
Skeam
01-01-2007, 01:27 AM
scape there lookin fairly clean ay im lovin the pink one and te blue one the most deffinetly keep paintin mate.
heres a peice i did the day after christmas im pretty sure... i got a ladder and did it hell high up the wall haha the only thing i dont like is my outlines there a bit sketchy
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/272/hpim2859lx4.jpg
and i did this peice today, i deffinetly think its my best. first EVER try at doing a fade and personally i think i did a fucken good job of the fade. its Dulux sky blue fading to Ironlak Frezzeta. still need to get the outlines a touch better though.
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1897/hpim2852hr3.jpg
you cant really see the fade to well so heres a closer pic of it
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/3965/hpim2858mq5.jpg
and heres a throwup i did really quickly and sketchily over my old skeam throwup with the remaining paint i had
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/6479/hpim2855ly5.jpg
it you like it or have suggestions on how i can make em any better please say so... but if you dont like em them dont bother posting cause im not bothered.
trashhh
01-01-2007, 05:22 AM
Nesc i really like the pieces, 2nd one especially but i dont really like the throwup
Skeam
01-01-2007, 06:30 AM
thanx for that trash, i apreciate any comments i can get!
G - Wahl
01-01-2007, 08:52 AM
Skeam - Looking pretty good, good can controll..2nd one just need to straighten it out a bit. Only thing that is borthering me is how the bottom of the S fits into the middle of the S.
T_R_O_N
01-01-2007, 09:17 AM
Originally posted by scape-one@Dec 31 2006, 10:43 PM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture068.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture026.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture022.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture023.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture335.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m243/rushfamearmy/SUS/Picture334.jpg
some of those were from my old name
i didnt know you were on BS , i like the new name though.
Originally posted by nuf1@Dec 31 2006, 05:27 PM
ANY COMMENTS ON THESE
http://i18.tinypic.com/314fona.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/2rhqt5h.jpg
http://i16.tinypic.com/4gqq5br.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/4beyzac.jpg
any comments didnt get enought
Chop Logic
01-01-2007, 04:27 PM
Quick sketch from today, had to do something for the theme mechanical:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymohand1.jpg
I'll get a better pic when its done. Crits comments welcome.
post it in the toy blackbook thread..other than that .. the hand is dope..but the only letter im liking is the Y
Chop Logic
01-01-2007, 04:35 PM
oh shit, i didnt even realize this was the wrong thread.
carry on.
Sluts_r_us
01-01-2007, 06:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/lyrcspeskwall.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/chromepeskfill.jpg
sank one
01-01-2007, 07:35 PM
only thing i dont like is the k :(
trashhh
01-02-2007, 05:48 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/throws%20and%20dubs/STA40715.jpg
I know i only usually post pieces, bombs arent my strong point but heres one.. crits?
alive
01-02-2007, 09:34 AM
awwww fuck you and your montana. its cool, has a vry rounded feeling. but fading the fill defeats the purpose of a throw in my opinion.
Fluffy Bunnies
01-02-2007, 12:04 PM
Here's some stuff on friday I did...
I used German montana for the fill in and a flat black krylon on the outline.
as you can see, it was cold and the krylon dripped like piss.
I was running out of black and it was sputtering when I was doing the word stuff on the side.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2911.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2913.jpg
haha and this is what my friend did...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2915.jpg
a cuple of drips here and there...but its aight...i would just reccoemend making the left leg of the A more visible ;)
trashhh
01-02-2007, 12:14 PM
montana is spanish
Fluffy Bunnies
01-02-2007, 12:34 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 2 2007, 01:14 PM
montana is spanish
oh man, don't even get me started!
http://www.mtncolors.com/s.nl/it.I/id.1/.f
Trash better be scared :P :lol:
trashhh
01-02-2007, 02:06 PM
Oh i see. i think ive only been on the spanish site... lol
why didnt you just say montana black or gold or whatever rather than german?
kid preso
01-02-2007, 03:00 PM
This was my first piece, did it on Friday. The character's by my man Kasso.
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o236/tua24010/339103211_6f3f47a5db.jpg
sank one
01-02-2007, 03:05 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o236/tua24010/339103211_6f3f47a5db.jpg
there you go my man.
both of those are fire and clean as hell i might add :P
kid preso
01-02-2007, 03:10 PM
Yeah I fucked up the 3D on the N a little bit, and I don't like the E that much. It's ok. I wish I had a pic of the whole wall.
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/1433/p001lh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments on this one? the b is small cuz i didnt have much room.
cheers
Sluts_r_us
01-02-2007, 09:49 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 1 2007, 07:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/lyrcspeskwall.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/chromepeskfill.jpg
bbump
pesk I agree wit the other guy change the K
eromatic
01-03-2007, 01:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
trashhh
01-03-2007, 04:44 AM
Originally posted by SeKz@Jan 2 2007, 07:54 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/1433/p001lh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments on this one? the b is small cuz i didnt have much room.
cheers
looks pretty clean, the colours are nice. dont really like the shape of the E but the s is nice
Bowser
01-03-2007, 06:21 AM
Originally posted by eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
what ever that is, Im feelin it.....keep it up.
..SmOeK 1..
01-03-2007, 01:33 PM
Originally posted by Bowser+Jan 3 2007, 07:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bowser @ Jan 3 2007, 07:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
what ever that is, Im feelin it.....keep it up. [/b][/quote]
Vouche. Dunno what exactly that is lol but it looks fuckin awsome.
eromatic
01-03-2007, 02:15 PM
just an 'x' and 'a' for a toss and thanks
Deso7
01-03-2007, 03:33 PM
that SBE.
looks really good very clean nice colours except the bubly background needs some work and a different colour like black.
other than than nice work
Bombers Ambition
01-03-2007, 07:46 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti720.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti719.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti721.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Graffiti716.jpg
Nosypainter
01-03-2007, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Dec 30 2006, 03:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN @ Dec 30 2006, 03:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BAPKEB@Dec 30 2006, 12:56 AM
im a toy i know but krits or hook me up with some new letters?http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8605/1000157wx3.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5071/1000161pg1.jpg
well atleast no one will see those [/b][/quote]
try some 3d it works wondrs
minesweep
01-03-2007, 10:30 PM
Originally posted by eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
you need to work on that alot more and move the can faster
Jrow17
01-04-2007, 04:16 AM
some shit i posted a long time ago but never got an crits.. maybe i wil this time?
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1216/firstgraffups022pn3.jpg
xanax- first of all cool name.. theres somethin i like about that style, i dunno what it is.. I dunno if those lines are supposed to the 3d, but its not lookin so hot.. Just move the can a bit faster i suppose.. Some more complex shit would be cool
sore-not bad but im not feelin the stars, looks like a pretty heated spot so props on that..
sbe-nice colors and can control but i think your e could use some work like someone else already said.. pretty nice though
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