Toy Bombs / pieces (Paint Only.)

[minesweep]

Originally posted by eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
you need to work on that alot more and move the can faster

[Jrow17]

some shit i posted a long time ago but never got an crits.. maybe i wil this time?
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1216/firstgraffups022pn3.jpg

xanax- first of all cool name.. theres somethin i like about that style, i dunno what it is.. I dunno if those lines are supposed to the 3d, but its not lookin so hot.. Just move the can a bit faster i suppose.. Some more complex shit would be cool

sore-not bad but im not feelin the stars, looks like a pretty heated spot so props on that..

sbe-nice colors and can control but i think your e could use some work like someone else already said.. pretty nice though

[trashhh]

Sore i really like them but the e on the first ones kinda messed

[Jrow17]

Originally posted by Jrow17@Jan 4 2007, 05:16 AM
some shit i posted a long time ago but never got an crits.. maybe i wil this time?
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1216/firstgraffups022pn3.jpg

xanax- first of all cool name.. theres somethin i like about that style, i dunno what it is.. I dunno if those lines are supposed to the 3d, but its not lookin so hot.. Just move the can a bit faster i suppose.. Some more complex shit would be cool

sore-not bad but im not feelin the stars, looks like a pretty heated spot so props on that..

sbe-nice colors and can control but i think your e could use some work like someone else already said.. pretty nice though
bump.. bottom of the page

[Skeam]

u missed the outline on the bottom parts

[Jrow17]

yeah, the bottom sucked cause if you look, there is a reflection cause i was standin in like a foot of water..

[Bombers Ambition]

Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Jan 3 2007, 08:46 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti720.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti719.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti721.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Graffiti716.jpg
bbbuuummmppp

[Dtox]

did this pretty fast a couple of days ago. critz?

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q278/mt10201/KIF_0286.jpg

[SeKz]

Originally posted by Dtox@Jan 4 2007, 05:54 PM
did this pretty fast a couple of days ago. critz?

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q278/mt10201/KIF_0286.jpg
if ur painting wood like that u need to roll it with a white basecoat first, so that the wood doesnt soak up the paint, it also protects against the peice fading in the weather. dont overlap your letters in the handstyle, and the e is like cut in half or something, looks wack. Other than that it looks ok, keep practicing

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
first of all drop the attempt at 3-d.second don't over lap your letters third make your letters the same size fourth make the letters look similar but besides the trowie ur handstyle is allright keep working on it yo

[eromatic]

it was more of a vanashing point.
and if i did the whole bomb you'd see why letters arent the same size.
ill get a pic soon
but thanks for the crits

[FEN the HEN]

im actually feeling that.......tag is weak tho

[Truth.]

attempting to improve my dirt can skills

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/111111111111111.jpg

[Deso7]

its not that clean it needs quite a bit of work im not sure what you were trying to do with the red in it. and it looks like you layed out the truth before the bubbles so yeah what i would do is lay out the bubbles then the truth then do the out line and then detaild work. hope it helped a bit.
keep at it

[RemoZ]

Originally posted by Dtox@Jan 4 2007, 05:54 PM
did this pretty fast a couple of days ago. critz?

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q278/mt10201/KIF_0286.jpg
Well since you're a rollerblader I will give you Critz.


You didn't drip which is good but your shit lacks any structure whatsoever. Clean them up sketch, make the Letters a lil fatter and such. Also lose the squigle shit. At least your trying to practice before getting up.

[taine]

Ok, tell me. did you throw up on the wall, or is that spray paint.....jokin homie its not that bad, well good can control at least. work on your letter structure and on the e, connect the bottom to the top, but any ways your off to a good start

[Blix]

the only reason thers no drips cause its on wood come one it absorbs so much paint drips nearly impossible

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bombers Ambition]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti733.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti734.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti736.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti732.jpg

[---CRoR---]

nice way to get OE up homie!


OTC 4life!

[statar]

Originally posted by statar@Dec 30 2006, 05:31 AM
this is my 2nd kasp piece crits please ;)

[img=http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/8793/241205046kj9.th.jpg] (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=241205046kj9.jpg)

PICS ABOVE ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
anymore crits on this i gotta get some fresh ideas n shit im all out

[uhhh]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Jan 4 2007, 09:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Jan 4 2007, 09:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
first of all drop the attempt at 3-d.second don&#39;t over lap your letters third make your letters the same size fourth make the letters look similar but besides the trowie ur handstyle is allright keep working on it yo [/b][/quote]
i actually like it, if you clean it up itd look pretty nice.
i like how the letters arent the same size, but thats obviously done on purpose.
hes trying for a throwie style thats a little different then generic buble throws, dont bash him just for that.

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/SPA50040.jpg

Such a bad flick ill get better ones soon

[ICER]

2 peices i did

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/ghd.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/ghf.jpg

any critz?

[sank one]

^^^ the first peice is real sloppy, but the second is fairly clean. your handstyle neeed some serious work... but id say that you stick to the blackbook for a while...

[CoKKeYONe]

Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 6 2007, 04:25 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/SPA50040.jpg

Such a bad flick ill get better ones soon
looks great&#33;&#33;&#33; keep that 3d on&#33;&#33;&#33;

[alive]

Originally posted by RemoZ+Jan 5 2007, 12:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RemoZ &#064; Jan 5 2007, 12:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Dtox@Jan 4 2007, 05:54 PM
did this pretty fast a couple of days ago. critz?

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q278/mt10201/KIF_0286.jpg
Well since you&#39;re a rollerblader I will give you Critz.


You didn&#39;t drip which is good but your shit lacks any structure whatsoever. Clean them up sketch, make the Letters a lil fatter and such. Also lose the squigle shit. At least your trying to practice before getting up. [/b][/quote]
dont ever ttell us how fast you did something, how shitty your paint was, how cold ur hands were, how drunk you were, how high you were, how heat the place was, how tired you were.

we dont give a shit.

otherwise, your can control is fine, but RUN to the bbook thread cuz ur letters are wack.

you dont think that every single writer, does all his shit quickly?
u think JA pulls up a chair and a nice cold beer for every throw?

we alll have all the same problems. deal with it.




trash it is sooo ill. amazing hand control.
icer, it looks good, nice can control, but come with me to the bbook thread.

[ras]

Trash .. looks like Trush

Icer...blackbook maaayynneee

Ermatic..i dont like that...its plain and dull..but...ifits you throw style..kepp workibg onit.. ;)

[alive]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Jan 4 2007, 09:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Jan 4 2007, 09:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
first of all drop the attempt at 3-d.second don&#39;t over lap your letters third make your letters the same size fourth make the letters look similar but besides the trowie ur handstyle is allright keep working on it yo [/b][/quote]
sry for double post, needed 2 quotes and its a bitch to do it manually.

i doubt that that could be a 3d attempt. its so bad it has to be good. u know? lol. i think hes trying for an abstract style, and i think it looks ill.

HOWEVER. you have to know the rules to break them. unless he can also churn out "normal" throws, i dont think he should move on to abstract.



keep going,
peace.

[wyred]

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00803.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00809.jpg

crits yoo. :ph34r:

[riddleboxxmcl]

that pink "YE" definitly has potential the drip looks messed up though.
inless it was because u didnt have enough paint never do a throw of just ur abriviated (fuck spelling) name for atleast a year of solid bombing other wise no one will reconize it.

the gold one is nice im not really feeling the "t" and i like how u did the "e" better in the first one
keep fucking around with it and tweak it
try to make your letters match with each other for example the "a" has a little wave thing on the top but none of the other letters have that so id suggest eather making all the letters have the wavy thing or take it off

but it is good





my 2 cents take it or leave it

[alive]

ur 3d on the gold is beyond messed up. wtf happened.
keep working on the pink, do ur whole name, it looks nice.
when you blow up, take over the entire space. have balls. throw ur name up 100 times. not 1 2 letter throw.
control all the space. thats what its about.

[whahappen?]

haha alive i was lookin for the earliest painted thing you posted.....wow you have come ALONG WAY :P
yeast dont do the w/e the hell you did on the gold one....im likin the letters though and on the ye throw try making the top of the e not rounded...like make it like the bottom pat of the e and itll look very nice

[Soze One.]

i like taht pink ye woadie.

[alive]

haha o shit. u found that? did u see my old shit on paper too? o man. i thought that had thankfully been fully put to rest. some ppl remember me even from back then though, like proper, so its a cool feeling to know that your progression is being recognized, even though its a bit shameful. graffiti- everything u got is layed out and on the line. completely open. nothing matters but the shit u lay down. its beautiful.

[Soze One.]

but that all depends on the way you take your criticism, it either motivates or ruins you.

[whahappen?]

soze your sig is the true definition of the phrase BOOM HEAD SHOT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
yea i completely agree with you like i look back at like all the earlier notebooks i filled and was like shit....i was gonna paint that??those weren&#39;t ritalin pills were they.....
and you think at the time its such a great idea and its revolutionary and amazing when in the back of your mind your like i&#39;m gonna hate myself for doing that in a few months....

and just so mods dont dlete my pointless nastalgia shit
sore just dont make the e at the end sooo big which u have a habit of doing

[Forthefuckofit]

oops

[tjoy221]

i like it.if you&#39;re a bomber,the short name is the way to go.i write jose and on my throwies i shorten it to "JO".jose is sort of a memorial to my dead bro,joseph.

[trashhh]

Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 6 2007, 04:25 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/SPA50040.jpg

Such a bad flick ill get better ones soon
bumpppp

[<~ReSiN~>]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/uinun006-3.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/newnewshit019.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/graff028.jpg

[<~ReSiN~>]

not all my stuff is drippy like that

[trashhh]

really dont like the outine but the other 2 are niceee

[<~ReSiN~>]

that outline was just a quick throwie. jsut somethin for me to do

[uhhh]

if you made that outline into a piece, itd be really nice.

[<~ReSiN~>]

shit i have before but i never know what colors to use on it.

[<~ReSiN~>]

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/2376/1000691mv5.jpg

sumpin else, i dont know of anything else cool to do wiht the 3d. i tried doin some stuff but it looks like shit so i went over it with black

[trashhh]

yehh that ones nice, try doin some fading on the 3d

[SCOPE2]

Originally posted by <~ReSiN~>@Jan 7 2007, 10:36 AM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/uinun006-3.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/newnewshit019.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/graff028.jpg
what do u use to get these clean lines?

[riddleboxxmcl]

they arent that clean....

[ras]

thats what i was thinkin.. <_<

[Bombers Ambition]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti755.jpg

[Flash_One]

Originally posted by SCOPE2+Jan 7 2007, 04:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SCOPE2 @ Jan 7 2007, 04:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-<~ReSiN~>@Jan 7 2007, 10:36 AM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/uinun006-3.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/newnewshit019.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/graff028.jpg
what do u use to get these clean lines? [/b][/quote]
those arnet that clean but you would use a modified cap and most of all can- control.

[DLove]

lil something. no caps, used the ones of the cans, and rustolean. ill get a bettter pick.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/wall2.jpg

[meetermaid]

well first off, don&#39;t bother writing king on your shit. get rid of that arrow extension off the o too. fading is pretty nice, but your 3d&#39;s sort of all over the place. look thru like the 1st page of the toy tutorial thread (it&#39;s a stickey) for a tutorial on shadow/3d. the d and o are really nice with the exception of the arrow thing, but the c and e are weak. keep working at it.

[DLove]

king is just a nickname for my friend. but its not a c, its a v. gotta work on that i guess. my sketch was fine with the 3d its just when i try to paint it its hard.

[Sluts_r_us]

http://a266.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/22/l_334581408ba33c80b72a92b235daa179.jpg
http://a132.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/28/l_c095e78d499f00124caf7a2c4996ca4b.jpg

[Stonk]

im loving the e and s and the p is decent it just seems like it should be a bit more pointy to go with the e and s but the k doesn&#39;t seem to fit at all.

[Skeam]

did this today, im loving it... fuck yas if ya hate it :P

as always, suggestions of how i can make it better are welcome but if you dont like it i couldnt care.

http://img303.imageshack.us/img303/3237/nescyx6.jpg

[NiL]

Make the brick things all brick not circle lawlz and it would look good but that does look good nice work.

[Skeam]

they aint sposed to be bricks man... just some attempt of a background. i cant stand painted bricks lol...

[statar]

hey just wanna get some crits on my piece but i cant fuckn find it lol but if you can a lil crit would be good

[MainEvent]

Skeam- i like that piece alot. good fading on the fill and 3d is good. not feeling the triangles and the squares around the outside though.

DLove- shits pretty good man. the fill is well done and makes the piece pop out. the letters could use some work and it wouldn&#39;t hurt to outline the 3d to make it look cleaner. stay up

[Truth.]

Resin, I like the first peice, it looks nice and clean, letters could do with some work, not feeling the other two though.

Dlove, That&#39;s so damn clean, lovin it, again, your letters still need work IMO.

SlutsRus, I love your throw, the first pic right hand side, it&#39;s so hot, I think the drop shadows of slightly.

Skeam, I&#39;ve always loved your stuff, I dunno if i&#39;m feeling those letters to well. The peice is way clean and the fade is fantastic. Nice sutff.

My first roller. Ever. Crits please&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DSCN0500.jpg

Oh yeah, and if anyone can make out the throw with all the scribble on top, some crits on that would be nice too.

Ooh yeah, and can someone tell me what sort of caps are the best to use for outlines and highlights?

[Sluts_r_us]

german outline 1s...2s dont work on rusto..

[beefgerky]

fuck anything german, NY&#39;s, orangez and pinks is where its at.

[Zealot]

Originally posted by Truth.@Jan 8 2007, 06:07 PM

Ooh yeah, and can someone tell me what sort of caps are the best to use for outlines and highlights?
I would use NY thins and fats exclusively. They are by far the easiest caps to use and constantly produce the best lines. For your outline use ny thins. Don&#39;t hold them too close and you&#39;ll find the sweet spot of the cap where you get a nice crisp line not too fat or skinny. For highlights use a NY fat or even a thin. Start your highlight by holding the can farther away from the wall to get a little fatter spray (although make sure the line is still crisp) and the move closer to the wall throughout the highlight ending it by releasing the cap when it hits the wall.

example. Make sure your hand moves in a smooth motion. Once you master it looks dope. Thanks to Dehs CME for the inspiration.
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c236/Zealotfeta/waysdehsceastgreycnhopper.jpg

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Jan 8 2007, 03:09 PM
fuck anything german, NY&#39;s, orangez and pinks is where its at.
i used to think like that.. now i only use german and montana (the spanish one) caps for outlines and NY thins for fills..

yes. ny thins for fills

[wookiE]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Jan 9 2007, 04:49 PM

yes. ny thins for fills
doesnt it take you a long time to get stuff filled in? i would think that you would wanna use a fatter cap for the fills. unless your doing some thin wildstyle peice all the time

[mr pane]

Originally posted by eromatic@Jan 3 2007, 02:34 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v688/lestandsforlame/09769198ca.jpg
nothin wrong with the throwie cept the drips only problem is its a complete dax bite. r u from sydney?

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 8 2007, 06:43 AM
did this today, im loving it... fuck yas if ya hate it :P

as always, suggestions of how i can make it better are welcome but if you dont like it i couldnt care.

http://img303.imageshack.us/img303/3237/nescyx6.jpg
bumpity chump.

them freights looks pretty ill ay.

[shamee1991]

fayeds look preety sick

[DocterX]

Dammmn Nesc that shits pretty hot. Im Diggin that shit should have something to post later tonight.

[trashhh]

Originally posted by Truth.@Jan 8 2007, 05:07 PM
Ooh yeah, and can someone tell me what sort of caps are the best to use for outlines and highlights?
Depends what brand of can&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Youll leanr i used to know nothing about caps but now i know enough like what fits what..

oh and i like that throwie, rollers alryt just a bit drippy.. ive never done a roller and ive been paining about a year

[DLove]

another lil thing. still no caps. throwup i guess. its a v and a e

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/Wall3.jpg

[Fube]

sweet D&#33; i like it. maybe no outline?

skeam: man thats clean to me, i love the fade.

just tried to paint something different then a throw, kinda a first try. not to happy with it on account of the sloppyness and kinda screwed the letters in general. crits welcome


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/01-09-07_1731.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Paint/01-09-07_1732.jpg

[Skeam]

Dlove - could probably be cleaned up a bit and i reacon itd look fucken dope if the right side of the E matched the right side of the V, like the top bar of the E match the little pointy bit, the middle bar match the little round bit and the bottom bar like the half love heart thing. maybe try and sketch that out and work on that? and probably best u get some caps to help clean it up a bit.

Fube - the 3D in the first pic looks a bit "how ya goin" and im not to keen on the whole squigly thing but besides that im likin it and props for tryin something different man

[illin]

DLOVE: that throw is pretty tight.


FUBE: that P is realllly wack. the s looks aight and the e&#39;s would be better if you smoothed out the top and bottom sections like the middle part. no squiggles unless you have a definite idea of how you want the letter to bubble out in certain places.

[HEIST]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/SA400674.jpg
Ive been tryin to make enough money for my books and shit for college so ive been painting for fraternintys and shit.....havent been charging that much i know its nothat good but for my skill lvl how much do you think i should charge for this shit. I had the frat DELTS pay me 100 and reimbursement for the cans

[HEIST]

lol after i took the pic i realized i missed some lines on the green outline................
alright now time for the criticizing

[Red3]

anyway to go back there and finish it?

[sank one]

no offense man but i woulndt pay jack shit for that.

[HEIST]

Originally posted by Red3@Jan 10 2007, 07:07 AM
anyway to go back there and finish it?
what do you mean? No offense taken sank i know im not that good but im tryin

[QuestionMark?]

Originally posted by sank one@Jan 10 2007, 11:28 AM
no offense man but i woulndt pay jack shit for that.
:lol: hate to say it but its true... soo very true. Although the idea is fuckin brilliant props to ya for that heist.

[MainEvent]

yo Heist, i&#39;d say like realistically &#036;10. more power to you if you can get &#036;100, hustle that shit if you can. the fill fade is a little lackluster and the letters could use work. just keep sketching and sell it for as much as they offer.

[QuestionMark?]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 8 2007, 06:43 AM
did this today, im loving it... fuck yas if ya hate it :P

as always, suggestions of how i can make it better are welcome but if you dont like it i couldnt care.

http://img303.imageshack.us/img303/3237/nescyx6.jpg
im lovin it as well, one thing is the shape of the &#39;n&#39; could be fixed up a bit to look more like the rest of the piece by putting a few kinks in the &#39;n&#39;, and the other thing is with your background thingy i know they&#39;re not bricks lol but you should try using a piece of cardboard next time for the rectangles and squares - just makes it look cleaner. Other than that pure dopeness, keep it up bro.

[Red3]

Originally posted by HEIST+Jan 10 2007, 12:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HEIST @ Jan 10 2007, 12:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Red3@Jan 10 2007, 07:07 AM
anyway to go back there and finish it?
what do you mean? No offense taken sank i know im not that good but im tryin [/b][/quote]
finish the outline in the middle, i meant.

[revolt92]

It would be cool to earn money by doing graffiti, that would probably be the best job ever.

[ras]

Yeah..nooo shit...The TAT&#39;S CRU get paid to paint.. :( ...there work is the shit tho..BIO and NICER..whoa...2 of the best artistes in the world in MY opinion

[Blix]

heist I think it wouldve looked way better with out that weak fade

[RemoZ]

www.myspace.com/woahtwo

[SKriBL*666]

Yo truth, im diggin the one over all the scribbles. dope.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k202/AerosolSkam916/noname-5.jpg
Sorry for the wack ass phone pic. CRITZ?
Oh ya, i sorta ran outta pink :ph34r:

[Fube]

dont worry about the pink, what happed to the fill? might look a lot better with a decent fill.

[RemoZ]

http://a806.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/7/l_a1b052c175a7c2cb945815f1d3884f25.jpg



I know thw O is wack but I have a good one now :)

[RemoZ]

http://a468.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/28/l_387a0735ff715f250ec143d946f53233.jpg



**** GYRO

[RemoZ]

Whole wall


http://a925.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/41/l_627f9a5eb9624273005306175765fefc.jpg

[meetermaid]

what&#39;s the fill colour? hottest looking colour combo i&#39;ve seen in a while..

[Kaze]

its called a really pale ass brown/tany color
ahahah go to Rona they got the hookk up&#33;

[meetermaid]

haha sick thanks, the nearest one&#39;s like a million miles away from me tho :(

[SKriBL*666]

Originally posted by Fube@Jan 10 2007, 11:07 PM
dont worry about the pink, what happed to the fill? might look a lot better with a decent fill.
The teal-ish color was almost done so it was a quick sketchy fill.
but any more critz?

[RemoZ]

Gloss leather brown and Watermelon pink in KRYLON Mine was Water Melon and Simplyy pink

[meetermaid]

how&#39;d the krylon treat you? i&#39;ve heard so many different opinions on it..

[RemoZ]

Krylon rules for bombing as its more high pressure which means faster fills but never peice with it

[entri]

Originally posted by RemoZ@Jan 10 2007, 11:10 PM
http://a806.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/7/l_a1b052c175a7c2cb945815f1d3884f25.jpg



I know thw O is wack but I have a good one now :)
ok..what is up wit dat fill? :blink:

[trashhh]

^^ WHers the outline? bad colours too hard to read

[BAPKEB]

ahh remoz i like it the pink outline makes it pop

[BAPKEB]

sorry for posting one after another but i made a change to my throw up tell me if you like it or if you think its whack this is after the change http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9125/1000289ly3.jpgwhackhttp://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9125/1000289ly3.jpg

[RemoZ]

Yea, the outline is really fucked. It was hard to see that color on that wall at night. So I couldnt tell if I got a even coat. It just kinda blended together. Next time Im using Brown, Yellow, and Pink. Or White and Green

[Zealot]

Originally posted by epod+Jun 23 2005, 12:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (epod @ Jun 23 2005, 12:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Kayone707@Jun 23 2005, 02:55 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-deathorglory@Jun 22 2005, 11:17 PM
KAMO

First off, no offense but dont paint. You should be out TAGGING. Stick to the sketching for right now. Its not really that bad... your contro lis pretty sloppy, but with tagging you can work on that in a less, self destructive way. Dont connect your letters, try to make them seperate and well defined. From what you have there, it looks like your letters are pretty good, but the combinations just sort of ruin them... and those black lines are kinda just sort of there.

But keep sketching man, keep it up.
why do people say "dont paint now. stick to sketching"

thats dumb... start painting as soon as you get Some basics down... cuz when u get a style you wana be able to have SOME can control
i think its a waste of paint. ive bought probably &#036;30 worth of paint so far. everything ive painted, i regret it. i wish i couldve saved the money. now, im broke, wishing for money to buy cans, and everything i painted is in gay spots , or is ugly. if you save your money, you can buy lots when youre better, and you wont have to say shit, i wish i didnt do that, its ugly, or, fuck, no ones gonna see that. [/b][/quote]
At some point your going to have to start painting so you may as well start getting some can control. You will be frustrated later when you got some skills on paper but you can&#39;t get close to replicating it on a wall.

[Stonk]

bap you need to squeeze your letters in a little bit, and also add a drop shadow..then it might start to look ok

[BAPKEB]

thanks for the help i thought about doing that

[boredom44]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d62/artofdestruction/010607_1557.jpg

idnt come out to good...i fucked up the m and the left hand side looks fucked up cause the camera ;phone sucked...but eh...i tried....feedback?

[flclnaruto1213]

To boredom, that is sick. I love it and your can control is amazing, keep up the good work.

[sir.one]

closer together,

[TricksForKids]

keep the beef out of this thread...and give feedback to everyone on the page....i dont wanna clean up your mess all day

[boredom44]

my bad....that bap throw is kinda sick...my only advice is put the letters a little closer together, and the a is sort of a different style then the rest

[SPI-3]

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9292/img0130wj4.jpg
the stone sucked up my paint like my ex sucked the cock. ~cae~

[kicklip9634]

it looks like a jellybean

[SPI-3]

Originally posted by kicklip9634@Jan 11 2007, 06:28 PM
it looks like a jellybean
is that a good or bad thing? its supposed to be a C

[beefgerky]

drop the can.

[boredom44]

and comments/ suggestions on my thing?

[melodiclogic]

..

[illin]

yo that looks pretty bangin. just the 3D is a teeny tiny bit inconsistent.

[SKriBL*666]

The extension on the E looks kinda wack. But other than that, i like it

[bouncingsoul]

I fail at painting... Halfassed rushed 3d and everything...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0572.jpg

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[cirus905]

[COLOR=red]
Yeah KNEWS that bomb is ill... and BOREDOM that piece you did was pretty chillen man once you get your letters down.. nice fill anyways..

[imported_big_boss]

You can just redo some of the lines to fix the sloppiness in it. Otherwise it looks good. Just gotta practice yo. Don&#39;t be so hard on yourself.

[dibz]

knews- thats perty ill, outline would definatly sharpen it up, keep it up, word

[dibz]

p.s. is that your first bomb?

[imported_big_boss]

Use the edit button.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

You shoulda used a fat cap... preferably a rusto fat, they are awesome for those kinda like side to side fill ins

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by SPI&#045;3@Jan 11 2007, 06:22 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9292/img0130wj4.jpg
the stone sucked up my paint like my ex sucked the cock. ~cae~
http://youjean.wordpress.com/files/2006/08/poop.jpg

[Stonk]

knews with a yellow or orange outline it would be perfect, but yeha it looks pretty sick.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new037.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new038.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new036.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new039.jpg
and yeha i know i effed up the p on the ornage one

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Whoa, lookin&#39; good, just get rid of that line in the middle of the e... it will still look good. Shape up the D better, I think that&#39;s a D?

8/10 for looking simple and almost flawless


adn you need a new tag&#33;

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by Stonk@Jan 12 2007, 12:54 PM
knews with a yellow or orange outline it would be perfect, but yeha it looks pretty sick.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new037.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new038.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new036.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new039.jpg
and yeha i know i effed up the p on the ornage one
ur progressing a lot good job the only thing i dont like is the x&#39;s in the letters and ur p and maybe u can do something with the d keep working

[Skeam]

dodgey ass fucken outline/keyline. i like my fill though.

meh

http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/8359/hpim2877vm3.jpg

[stemONE]

edit

[Dripps5]

heres something by two of my friends, pretty much on the tracks , it was pretty sketchy since there was a light right over the wall , people could see you from anywhere but they still managed to use paint rollers for the background.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b354/anthonystuvecke/DSCF4673.jpg

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 12 2007, 11:57 PM
dodgey ass fucken outline/keyline. i like my fill though.

meh

http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/8359/hpim2877vm3.jpg
looks like your starting to get the hang of it
some things to think about next time
1)your lines look choppy and un-stable. Try to get your line done in one smooth motion instead of short choppy ones. it&#39;ll make your lines look more clean
other then that, work on your letters and keep painting&#33;

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jan 12 2007, 10:38 AM
Whoa, lookin&#39; good, just get rid of that line in the middle of the e... it will still look good. Shape up the D better, I think that&#39;s a D?

8/10 for looking simple and almost flawless


adn you need a new tag&#33;
your trippin&#33; the E is the Best letter..

Dont touch the E. re do the other letters to match the E.. specially the last letter.. looks like a blob.
keep it goin.

[Kayone707]

just thought id post my first time Ever using a can of paint.
i bummed cans off of Sadis and Wepen. hah good times
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7019/crewpiecesbylilcocolh5.jpg

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Jan 13 2007, 08:53 AM
looks like your starting to get the hang of it
some things to think about next time
1)your lines look choppy and un-stable. Try to get your line done in one smooth motion instead of short choppy ones. it&#39;ll make your lines look more clean
other then that, work on your letters and keep painting&#33;
thanx heaps for that, i know its a shit excuse but i had zero thin caps but im not gunna use that as an excuse, its was good practise with minimum supplys hense the "runnin low on supplys" handy thingo whateva u wanna call it.

really appreciate the crits

[Boodabang923]

just a quick little think i did recently more stuff coming once i get this fucking image host thing working

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/5698/1000663pi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

good start.
a solid fill without the bubbles would have made it look better though
the P is the weakest letter though.
i like the S but i would curve the bottom tail of it more to the left.

[sky 5]

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/77/1212175aw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i love my dollar paint&#33;

[zale]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010202.jpg

practice piece, thoughts?> im gonna prime that board before paintin on it next time because paint sticks to the surface terribly, and looks transparent. i used orange rusto for the main fill, then spanish montana for the rest

[Boodabang923]

heres another. gotta go back to fix the 3d
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1755/1000686yr8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img305.imageshack.us/img305/8022/writing018as8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8465/picture001ra5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/1154/1000700fn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
On the blue throw the fills shit cause the new fucking american accents. didn&#39;t feel like spending 20 minutes on a fill
and heres the last one...
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/1154/1000700fn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any crits?

[Boodabang923]

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/3831/writing002hd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Kayone707]

aint there already a hella big PESTO in cnd?

[ThickGravy]

Yea...

I would change your name but whatever, its up to you and where your trying to go in graff.

[Albert Fish]

Originally posted by Stonk@Jan 12 2007, 12:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new037.jpg
hot, glad you finally got a nice throw down. keep painting that im feelin it.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Jan 13 2007, 08:59 AM
just thought id post my first time Ever using a can of paint.
i bummed cans off of Sadis and Wepen. hah good times
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7019/crewpiecesbylilcocolh5.jpg
im guessin thats you in the middle with white and black, real nice and clean . . . your first time is supposed to be quick and sloppy and when you see her the next morning you cringe in disgust and shame . . real nice kay but you just made the light at the end of my tunnel seem dimmer and farther away than it already was . . :P

[AteskOne]

i think i just shit my pants
hepo&#39;s...crushing toys hopes and dreams night and day lol.
seriously tho that is the most incredible first bomb i have ever seen. not to mention it actually has style to it.

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 13 2007, 02:57 AM
dodgey ass fucken outline/keyline. i like my fill though.

meh

http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/8359/hpim2877vm3.jpg
bummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmp :P

[Boodabang923]

Originally posted by ThickGravy@Jan 13 2007, 04:28 PM
Yea...

I would change your name but whatever, its up to you and where your trying to go in graff.
whatabout pest or pesty or something like that. maybe rest also

[MainEvent]

shits dope nesc, very clean. stay up

[zale]

Originally posted by zale@Jan 13 2007, 03:18 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010202.jpg

practice piece, thoughts?> im gonna prime that board before paintin on it next time because paint sticks to the surface terribly, and looks transparent. i used orange rusto for the main fill, then spanish montana for the rest
???

[Skeam]

i wouldnt waste money on such good paint when your at that stage. and it really looks like you need to do some solid sketching for a while

[yesrejwen]

why would you waste your money on montana to do little pieces in your bedroom?

[Fube]

because u have to look at it every day im guessing. if i was to do a piece in my house i would use the best shit. but, seriously man sketch more. dont go straight for piecing, if your going to paint try an easy bomb first.

[avore]

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3239/hpim0736so1.jpghttp://img443.imageshack.us/img443/1412/hpim0737hu3.jpg
MY 2nd bomb I LEFT THE PAINT OUT IN THA COLD LAST NIGHT IS THAT WHY THOSE LETTERS ARE SHINING THROUGH MINE???

[Red3]

well... don&#39;t drop the top of the A that much, the hole is too big there, v isnt straight, I&#39;d dot my O&#39;s, and holes are too big all over, give it a shade, and just make it generally better, practice it.

[Stonk]

hmm stop painting, sketch wayy more, and make your letters somewhat similar in structure

[wookiE]

the A and the V look out of place in the whole scheme of things. and you should work on you outlines cause its pretty bumpy.

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/bomb31.jpg
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/throws%20and%20dubs/bomb32.jpg

Usin up some leftovers

[zale]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 13 2007, 07:46 PM
i wouldnt waste money on such good paint when your at that stage. and it really looks like you need to do some solid sketching for a while
i have been sketching for 6 months, a bombing for a couple, but i have a court date in a week or two so i have had to paint legals until then, and even after im gonna have to lay low for a while. i used expensive paint because i would rather not have my paint drip all over the place like krylon does. i also have the good colors in montana. When i can write illegals i will have much less limited surface space, this board is only about 4/3 feet and you cant do simples in that much space.

[Boodabang923]

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/5601/1000724yp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i went back and fixed the 3d. I know pest is big in canada so i guess ill have to change my name. I was thinking tase. what do yall think?

anyway any crits on the actual throw?

[trashhh]

could u not get a closer flick? Good colours tho looks like a nice fill and good piece

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/throws%20and%20dubs/bomb32.jpg
Bump any crits on this

[Boodabang923]

closer flick
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2074/1000716yl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[aha]

.

[DocterX]

Pest- that shit is pretty Dope. I like it alot.

Trash- I like that style its fresh.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/nonamedoodoopaint.jpg

Just a quick think i did. I dont like it much at all. But um Critz? Advice? might be going to do some practice so could use some advice. (Oh and i didnt go over something. I know who did the piece behind it and some kid who had beef with him and our crew went and painted all over it soo just clearing that up.)

[Truth.]

Umm, make sure all the letters are the same width, good your sticking it to simples and try to make them all straight.

Pest, I really like it, cept the P is a bit small, maybe thicken it up a bit, but it looks real sick.

I have another cap question, i&#39;m just about to order a bunch. I got NY thins and German outlines for outlines and NY Fats for fills. I just wonder what cap is good for fades?

[Boodabang923]

ny thins work but id get rusto fats insteaD OF NY&#39;S RUSTOS ARE ALOT BETTER FOR COVERAGE

[entri]

for big fades get german fats/orange dots...oru can use caligraphy tips.. there sik for fading as well..

[Bombers Ambition]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti759.jpg

[Stinky]

That is mint. I love it. It has very well constructed letters and style that makes it very easy to remember seeing. Great work, keep it up.

[wookiE]

Originally posted by Boodabang923@Jan 15 2007, 04:11 AM
closer flick
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2074/1000716yl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
maybe not the cleanest throwie but i like it man. good job. nice fill blend

[FEN the HEN]

bombers man starting to look fly.....and your getting up which alot of kids on here dont do alot....(some of the better ones)

[BAPKEB]

Trash i love how your H fades off at the tail end props

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Jan 14 2007, 08:59 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti759.jpg
Four One Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiix

[beefgerky]

thats pretty dope, only thing id say is see the 3d on your S is thin, but fat n the O, you should slim it out on the O. and maybe work on your hands a bit. other than that shits chillan.

[Mono013]

http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/526/dsc00260jj0.th.jpg (http://img489.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00260jj0.jpg)

hey there, first post.

[Mse]

mono it looks... okay :(

crew bombin without moi, fucking bitches, of course without moi it looks like crap :)
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n90/vankbg/DSC00962.jpg
its like, 2 m tall and 3 m long

[Stinky]

Mono I like that a lot. It reminds me of a mix between Mommy dearest and Natasha from Rocky and Bullwinkle. How long did that take you, cause it looks rather large. Keep goin at it.

[T45K]

Can I get a little critizism, this is the first time I painted, besides like throwing up handstyles.... Or mop work....
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture054.jpg

[revolt92]

Task- Nice but the not sure about the t mabey a bit to small and the bottom right of the k might be to thick.

Mse- The thickness of the letters aren&#39;t the same through the whole piece.

[noam12]

task- why the floor, you want people steppin all over it?

[T45K]

no one walks there I dopn&#39;t guess It&#39;s like a big ditch thing on a incline...

[zale]

Originally posted by T45K@Jan 15 2007, 12:41 PM
Can I get a little critizism, this is the first time I painted, besides like throwing up handstyles.... Or mop work....
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture054.jpg
pretty sketchy on the 3d, thats something you should focus on with sketching.

[ERAZ]

Originally posted by zale+Jan 15 2007, 05:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (zale @ Jan 15 2007, 05:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-T45K@Jan 15 2007, 12:41 PM
Can I get a little critizism, this is the first time I painted, besides like throwing up handstyles.... Or mop work....
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture054.jpg
pretty sketchy on the 3d, thats something you should focus on with sketching. [/b][/quote]
still i&#39;ll give you credit for your first painting man. I wish my first painting looked as clean as that <_< . still same thing K&#39;s is too thick and wide, bigger T and i&#39;d cut that extension on the bottom of your s shorter or off completly, on your 3-d look how much thinker it is on your K than T, try to keep that even........decent for your first peice tho

[G-Fat]

bigger T,skinny K but all around, good work.

[weldo]

for fst time you did preety good just move a bit quicker n it wont drip thats all.
heres mine
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8759/l2c93453c945daff6e220ecod9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[wookiE]

task- looks pretty good for your first time. just move the can a little faster like weldo said. the fill looks good though
weldo- looks good. your letter structure is a little wierd to me but its just your style. im not liking the random blue lines in the fill but otherwise its nice and clean&#33;

[Truth.]

very nice, very clean

[Sluts_r_us]

http://a132.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/28/l_c095e78d499f00124caf7a2c4996ca4b.jpg
http://a699.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_e9448191034ec12540622beb1362e49a.jpg
http://a266.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/22/l_334581408ba33c80b72a92b235daa179.jpg

[trashhh]

nice, dont like the colours on the top one but good throwie
havent u posted that bottom one loads of times? The P&#39;s a bit dodgy on it, the final goes way off it

[Sluts_r_us]

i probly have but i never take my cam out bombing so i jus use all the newer flix got...
i like the colors in the first one in real life..
i had 2 do the fill real quick cuz i barely had paint n a stock so it came out kinda shitty...n the shadow...im just not good at painting shadows...

[sky 5]

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2928/1212177bg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fucked up here and there like i always do but if you do it enough it starts to look like its just a part of your style . . :D . . .green 3d would have been much better

[eTAW!]

the tail of it needs work, looks weird being squared like that. nice though

[miro]

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/acustom026Small.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/acustom012Small.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/acustom015Small.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/acustom008Small.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/acustom024Small.jpg
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/acustom023Small.jpg

[wookiE]

miro- some of them are better then others. and you might wanna get a roller and go over the board before you use it again. uh my favorite is the 4th one down with just the M its a good looking letter.

[miro]

thanks man

i&#39;ll start rolling over when I do new pieces

[sky 5]

rolling your practice board everytime might be an unnecessary pain in the ass . . . i just switch the fill color so it stands out . . if i have a dark fill color already on ther ill do a white fill this time . .

[asmatic91]

wtf it dont work

[Bazer]

Originally posted by asmatic91@Jan 17 2007, 04:21 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3397/neeasmashytwf6.jpg
why do u keep posting this garbage everywhere? loose the crown and read the subject lines.

[Kayone707]

hate to seem like im spamming the forums with this lil video. but
http://www.sendmefile.com/00496017
Sky5 ,miro, Specially Sky5. (you have some tight sketches. id like to seem them painted good as well)
Download the video and try some of the tips

[Bazer]

damn man. ive seen that in a couple of threads and tried to see what it is but it just sends me to a page tat doesn&#39;t work... :(

[Kayone707]

really? i just clicked it and it sends me to the page to where i can download it..

i wonder whats wrong..
*if you have MSN chat. message me and i&#39;ll send you the video
look me up under
kaloe@sbcglobal.net

[clockwork]

Just bombed this like 20 minutes ago. Kind of a last minute thing.

Its a cramped up little spot I went to like months ago.

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/kottonmouthclockwork/DSCF0171.jpg


Crits.

[Blix]

honestly its horrible I mean look at the fill...........when did we get a spell check ??

[clockwork]

Originally posted by Blix@Jan 17 2007, 06:51 PM
honestly its horrible I mean look at the fill...........when did we get a spell check ??
Did you not look at the spot first of all? The waters gonna rise and fade the fill anyways? And when did fill start to matter with throws? Can you see what kinda paint I was using? The only thing I used other than the can is a NY fat fill cap.

So give me a break.

[elcs]

its not the fact of shitty paint or shitty caps. stop making excuses. its the fact that your letters are terrible. stock caps work fine for pretty much everything. a really skilled writer can use stock caps and dollar paint and paint shit that looks fine. thats no excuse. your letter structure is terrible, end of story, no excuses.

[clockwork]

I get what your saying. But its the angle too of the camera. It wouldnt un zoom any further so the O looks funny.

What kinda paint should I use then to do fills? If the dollar shit is gonna look like this?

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by clockwork+Jan 17 2007, 06:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (clockwork @ Jan 17 2007, 06:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Blix@Jan 17 2007, 06:51 PM
honestly its horrible I mean look at the fill...........when did we get a spell check ??
Did you not look at the spot first of all? The waters gonna rise and fade the fill anyways? And when did fill start to matter with throws? Can you see what kinda paint I was using? The only thing I used other than the can is a NY fat fill cap.

So give me a break. [/b][/quote]
are you serious...when has a fill not mattered. you did the fill in all little sections....a good fill is done with large, even strokes that go from one end of the letter to the other. also stop blaming shit like "the angel of the camera, the paint, the caps, the spot"...a good artist can pull anything off. and especially dont blame your caps because i have seen many many many throwies pulled off with nothing but a ny fat cap. you would be better off saying you used stock caps. the lines are all messy with overspray and uneven widths. anyways all i&#39;m saying is that you shouldnt make all these excuses and get all offended...the bomb just all around sucks.

[clockwork]

I respect what your all saying cause its crits I asked for.

No one wants to hear about what I used or anything. But what can I do to improve it&#33; No one answered that question?

What kind of paint do I need to use for bombs and what do I need for the widths?

[Kayone707]

someone try this out
http://stage6.divx.com/content/show/1087787?user_id=409198

[clockwork]

Thanks for posting that.

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Jan 17 2007, 09:41 PM
someone try this out
http://stage6.divx.com/content/show/1087787?user_id=409198
dude....i cant even do anything with it...i installed some crap and i still could see it...im gonna cry.....and go on myspace....and leave you a comment....and your gonna be like. whoa, "he was on my friends list?"
ok?

[Sluts_r_us]

ok heres some crits for you...
1) when doing your fill, do even strokes from one side of the letter to the other...one letter at a time so it doesn&#39;t look all choppy..your fill looks like that because you did seperate small sections in each letter.

2)when doing your outline, you need to keep it consistent(sp?). keep the can the same distance from the wall throughout the whole outline..

3) why would you do a forcefield in the same color as the outline? dont do that. i say this because it looks like you went uneven on the outline.

4)dont blame caps and shitty paint. ny fats should have worked fine but you just dont know how to fill properly... i have used worse cans with stock caps then what you have in that picture and the throw came out fine.all you need to do is practice filling shit in better..

5) keep sketching man. right now, what you painted has no style what so ever. i would suggest that you dont paint anything for a while untill you get more style and flow into your letters, and this will take a while..but please, lay off the cans and keep your focus on the pencil and paper.

i doubt you will read this rant, but its for your own good to follow this. w.e.

edit: you use any paint you can get your hands on for now..you dont need higher quality paint yet..dont waste your money on montana or belton...stick to the cheapest thing you can get. use stock caps for outlinnmes if you cant get your hands on ny thins or german outlines(my favorites for outlines) but you can always use your nyu fats for outlines too, if you have the can at the right distance it will still look nice. pce im out.

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze+Jan 17 2007, 07:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (1nOnly Baze @ Jan 17 2007, 07:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kayone707@Jan 17 2007, 09:41 PM
someone try this out
http://stage6.divx.com/content/show/1087787?user_id=409198
dude....i cant even do anything with it...i installed some crap and i still could see it...im gonna cry.....and go on myspace....and leave you a comment....and your gonna be like. whoa, "he was on my friends list?"
ok? [/b][/quote]
you have to install the Divix player

[clockwork]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 17 2007, 10:34 PM
ok heres some crits for you...
1) when doing your fill, do even strokes from one side of the letter to the other...one letter at a time so it doesn&#39;t look all choppy..your fill looks like that because you did seperate small sections in each letter.

2)when doing your outline, you need to keep it consistent(sp?). keep the can the same distance from the wall throughout the whole outline..

3) why would you do a forcefield in the same color as the outline? dont do that. i say this because it looks like you went uneven on the outline.

4)dont blame caps and shitty paint. ny fats should have worked fine but you just dont know how to fill properly... i have used worse cans with stock caps then what you have in that picture and the throw came out fine.all you need to do is practice filling shit in better..

5) keep sketching man. right now, what you painted has no style what so ever. i would suggest that you dont paint anything for a while untill you get more style and flow into your letters, and this will take a while..but please, lay off the cans and keep your focus on the pencil and paper.

i doubt you will read this rant, but its for your own good to follow this. w.e.

edit: you use any paint you can get your hands on for now..you dont need higher quality paint yet..dont waste your money on montana or belton...stick to the cheapest thing you can get. use stock caps for outlinnmes if you cant get your hands on ny thins or german outlines(my favorites for outlines) but you can always use your nyu fats for outlines too, if you have the can at the right distance it will still look nice. pce im out.
Thank you.

I appreciate the help. I hate it when people are just criticizing and not helping any.

I read all of it and it makes sense. Do longer strokes to keep the letter from looking uneven.

Proving again why mods are mods.

And proving why they help so much in the toy thread.

[Sluts_r_us]

ehh im not a mod...i just like to help people in need...do long strokes from one side of the letter to the other, so you dont have dark spots in random places in the fill..you were ydoing the fill in little sections of the letters, so imagine you doing one letter as a section..idk i doubt that makes sense but what ever...glad you took the time to read it.

[clockwork]

I gotcha from original fill edge to fill edge.Big strokes.
Someone told me kilz spray covers great with one coat too.



But FUCCCCCK that. Too much monies.

Does that make sense?

[Fube]

Originally posted by asmatic91@Jan 17 2007, 10:43 PM
yo sluts r us u think tht shyt any good
if its not paint it dont belong here. cut that shit out. ;)

[miro]

thanks dood

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Kayone707+Jan 17 2007, 10:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Kayone707 @ Jan 17 2007, 10:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Jan 17 2007, 07:16 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Kayone707@Jan 17 2007, 09:41 PM
someone try this out
http://stage6.divx.com/content/show/1087787?user_id=409198
dude....i cant even do anything with it...i installed some crap and i still could see it...im gonna cry.....and go on myspace....and leave you a comment....and your gonna be like. whoa, "he was on my friends list?"
ok?
you have to install the Divix player [/b][/quote]
i did...but that was last night. i got it now. ;)

[jelis]

this place needs some fliks... i&#39;m here to the rescue... haha jk


http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/8357/img1978ni9.jpg

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/461/img1979ws9.jpg


crits?? be gentle&#33;

[Sluts_r_us]

drop the can, piuck up the pencil...advance your style more before you paint...please

[jelis]

ok, well as soon as i get my can control up to par with some of the shit i&#39;ve been sketcking, then yes i can have some style....


i&#39;m chill.

[jelis]

sorry my computer is hating on me

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by jelis@Jan 18 2007, 07:15 PM
ok, well as soon as i get my can control up to par with some of the shit i&#39;ve been sketcking, then yes i can have some style....
just telling someone to go back to sketching sorta seems like a cop out for crits. why is there a toy bombs/pieces thread if thats all anyone is going to say?

ok i&#39;m going to shut up because i&#39;m in a bitchy mood and i don&#39;t want to start beef. tell me my shit is ugly, just dont say dont paint.
i dunno.... sorry...peace
ok dude calm down he was just letting you know that sketching is better before painting there is no harm in doing that and i know its a toy thread but come on if i was to pick up a can of touch and tone and spray some bull shit on the wall i would want people to say hit the books to me fact is your letters sucked and the letters werent even really the same size nothing so dude not trying to start beef but hit the books... anyone can pick up a can but its what you do and what you put into it that makes you the shit...

[sock-with-a-hole108]

Originally posted by jelis@Jan 18 2007, 07:15 PM
ok, well as soon as i get my can control up to par with some of the shit i&#39;ve been sketcking, then yes i can have some style....
just telling someone to go back to sketching sorta seems like a cop out for crits. why is there a toy bombs/pieces thread if thats all anyone is going to say?

ok i&#39;m going to shut up because i&#39;m in a bitchy mood and i don&#39;t want to start beef. tell me my shit is ugly, just dont say dont paint.
i dunno.... sorry...peace
are you joking about me not giving real crits? take a look at the last fucking page..i pretty much wrote this kid a fucking book to help him out. now drop the fucking can and pick up the damn pencil.

[jelis]

lol how come i don&#39;t get a book then?
no its cool, i&#39;m chill, i understand... i&#39;m not trying to beef...... i dunno, i knew i shoulda kept my big mouth shut

[NiL]

If you wanna paint do it on a practice board or something in at your house and get a good style before you do that you don&#39;t get style just painting shit like that you get from sketching.

[fost]

haha wow that jelis throw isnt even THAT bad... sure it&#39;s nothing ground breaking but shit there has been tons and tons of far worse stuff on here

[Stonk]

ehh its pretty bad though.. your a girl correct jelis? id say you really need to lose the hearts, even though the one in the s is a cool idea it just isn&#39;t working

[-Sinn-]

This was my first time usin spraypaint to do a throw up

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/tags014.jpg

This is second

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/tags.jpg

Any criticizm will be much appreciated

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by jelis@Jan 18 2007, 05:21 PM
this place needs some fliks... i&#39;m here to the rescue... haha jk


http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/8357/img1978ni9.jpg

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/461/img1979ws9.jpg


crits?? be gentle&#33;
is that an orange blurr around your shit or...what.

[clockwork]

Originally posted by &#045;Sinn&#045;@Jan 18 2007, 11:11 PM
This was my first time usin spraypaint to do a throw up

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/tags014.jpg

This is second

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/tags.jpg

Any criticizm will be much appreciated
Before someone tells you to keep stetchin, painting will get easier if you PLAN your bomb before to Throw it.

Just plan out your pieces first before you do them.

It looks like a first bomb to me. Stick to the wood and then when your happy with it go bomb.

Try simple letters all the same size and shape. Thats what they told me.

[-Sinn-]

thnx man lol im a way better sketcher then painter lmao

[nemzone]

just back from an intense bombing mission, fell thru ice up to my thighs :( after the like 4th throw, i was dun, then decided just 1 more, and so on lol. one 8 throws. but the weather is pish, and the surfaces are hella oist, so hence the dripz. bah at least i look further into wing than doing sketches.

possible piece coming tomoz morning.

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3023/imag0008zt1.jpg
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/462/imag0010sm6.jpg


and this is my first ever throw, redone, with the dregs of a bombersbest, ran out :twisted:
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9917/imag0011zd5.jpg

yeh they pretty rank, but w/e i wont bother with excuses

[Untracked21]

thats pretty cool i like it the letter N is pretty hard to do.. nice mabye little less pionty

[Fube]

nemz, last one is the best.

[clockwork]

Nemz that bottom one is hot.

I like them both but the second is the shit.
Im so jealous of your style.

Wanna help me lol.

[SeKz]

Originally posted by &#045;Sinn&#045;@Jan 18 2007, 11:11 PM
This was my first time usin spraypaint to do a throw up

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/tags014.jpg

This is second

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/tags.jpg

Any criticizm will be much appreciated
Yooo what the fuck where u using? hold the can closer to the surface&#33; dont pull it back&#33; work on that 3D too, ur letters are what need the most attention.. and is that an ironlak can i see in the background? lakkies are the shit

[jelis]

sin or whoever you are... i dunno where your from but i know theres some guy around the westcoast of canada that writes sin or sins or whatev and hes good i hear too.... in case you wanted to know...
but yeah for crits, work on your can control for sure, and props to the board in the backyard to practice... haha, wish i had that luxery (sp?)

[trashhh]

Sin work on your 3d a lot. and the inlines dont help on the second one.
try to go faster with the can so u dont get as many drips

[aces]

Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 19 2007, 01:11 AM
just back from an intense bombing mission, fell thru ice up to my thighs :( after the like 4th throw, i was dun, then decided just 1 more, and so on lol. one 8 throws. but the weather is pish, and the surfaces are hella oist, so hence the dripz. bah at least i look further into wing than doing sketches.

possible piece coming tomoz morning.

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3023/imag0008zt1.jpg
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/462/imag0010sm6.jpg


and this is my first ever throw, redone, with the dregs of a bombersbest, ran out :twisted:
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9917/imag0011zd5.jpg

yeh they pretty rank, but w/e i wont bother with excuses
The first one is not too shabby aside from the drips. The second won&#39;t show up on my computer :P . The third one is hot. Good control of the can and nice and simple...

[-Sinn-]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture034.jpg

newest thing on my shed its to fuckin cold out here