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Stevie
02-22-2007, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by Jroc1993@Feb 22 2007, 11:36 PM
thats pretty good does it say CAT or EAT?
eat, short for eater

Nasty_One
02-23-2007, 12:57 AM
Originally posted by Stevie@Feb 22 2007, 11:30 PM
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1336/throw1nc9.jpg
this is sketchy cause my caps were fucking up and shit..

basically this is my last piece of graffiti until summer, no throws, no tags.. nothing...pretty much because i hate the cold, i hate painting in the cold, i hate caps that fuck up in the cold, i hate paint that's pretty much transparent, i hate mean streaks that crumble because of the cold..and also most importantly, i think i need to sketch more and develop shit more.
that's got potential man, i think the "e" needs something to make it a little bit more noticable as an "e"

i hear you on painting in the cold and caps fucking up, i had one the other night that made the can pretty much explode paint on my hand, i was wearing a latex glove but that shit was freezing cold i finished the piece and about the same time had to hide from a cop, i was standing there i thought i was going to get frost bite... the only thing i could do was put my hand on my balls to warm it up.

dirtesanchez
02-23-2007, 05:16 AM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/2476/img0004ab9.jpg

I just started and this is my first bomb. this is also my first post on here. im in it for the critiquing and to hear what i need to work on i know theres alot!

d_g
02-23-2007, 05:30 AM
Dude, just to let you know on this forum it's ettiquite to crit others before asking for crits yourself or bumping your pics.

No offence but the throw is pretty terrible.

The first thing that jumps out at me is the big extention on the top right of the 'S'. Seriously there's quite a lot wrong with it. All I can say for now is to take things back a notch and practice simplier letters. That goes for your handy too. I wouldn't paint for now either, keep to your book. You probably shouldn't have gne over the person as well.

D Snif
02-23-2007, 11:11 AM
Yeah no offense but that guy you painted over was most likely 5x better than you. Go buy an art book without lines, NOT a BLACKBOOK, that's a waste of money for you right now. Don't go wasting your money on expensive outdoor tagging markers, buy a pack of sharpies with about 24 different colors and practice with those in your art book. Don't go out and bomb/tag until people start to tell you that your handstyle/bomb/piece is good.

And post some of your shit that you draw in the Toy Blackbook thread.

dirtesanchez
02-23-2007, 12:23 PM
Thanks guys! could u be a little more specific on what i need to work on? i knew it was terrible im new to this shit and u say just stick to drawing do i just draw aimlessly and try to develop something or is there somethin i should work on drawing?

D Snif
02-23-2007, 12:31 PM
Ask here for advice:
Toy Story (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=2038)

Be sure to post up pictures of what you draw in the Toy Blackbook thread so people will give you constructive criticism, but be sure to give crits before you ask for them.

DJLotus
02-23-2007, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by dirtesanchez@Feb 23 2007, 06:16 AM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/2476/img0004ab9.jpg

I just started and this is my first bomb. this is also my first post on here. im in it for the critiquing and to hear what i need to work on i know theres alot!
What these guys forgot to mention is your can control is bad. (no offense)

You have pretty sketchy drips on the bottom, and it looks like you were going through a seizure when you were painting your lines on the i. Your 3d is also off on the tip of the I and on the side on the n. You have a horrible add-on in the right side of the n that you might want to just completely take off until you get a better concept of add-ons. Also, the fill in looks really thick in areas and really light in others, but thats just my constructive crits. Like they said above me you might want to just stick to poppin' sketches for a while, or atleast practicing in a chill spot.

dirtesanchez
02-23-2007, 01:00 PM
thanks dude yea i know the drips are horrible. i started with a few of my homies and im by far the best outta them so they are all saying how good it is but i knew it sucked and im wanting to get better so im glad im get the crits from all u nigs so i keep workin on my shit

Snou
02-23-2007, 01:06 PM
I think you guys said all. Except. I think that better link is Graffiti Basics (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=17479). It has very constructive posts etc, compared to Toy Story ;>




On my way to home ( I'm leaving tomorrow morning ).
Went to some yard blah blah, with some home crew.
Left my marks in Paris ( again ).
The only thing is that, after 2-3 years of writing. I am still afraid to start putting doodats. Don't know if I'm good enough. Etc etc. Don't wanna go ego trippin' and start pretending im some wild-styler. Thou, I dared to do this sketch for which i got inspiration 30 mins before the actual writing/drawing.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y285/Wiz27/23022007283.jpgGraffiti Basics (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=17479)

huh?

dj ultraviolet radiation ina can
02-23-2007, 01:09 PM
Yeah but whatever.. it's all basically the same, he should be lookin at it all instead of just one section to begin with.

-eror-
02-23-2007, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Feb 22 2007, 07:09 PM
eror:

yes, and his crit on your work was that it was sloppy and drippy as hell at the bottom. the only one giveing excuses here is u. "comprendes". when i first saw the flick i thought u ment for the drips to be there. but u cant tell me u didnt notice drips like that when u were doing it. sorry to sound like im snapping back at u but u get what u give. if u post something here with errors on it and ask for crit people are gunna point that shit out. expect it.


also, wanted to bump this just for kicks. bottom of page and no crits really.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/02-21-07_1809.jpg
actually, I called it sloppy, not him. The drips were intentional as I stated in my last post explaining how it could have dripped yet I still did it fairly quickly.

I know I'm the one making excuses. That was stated from the start. I was saying for him to actually crit the work, and not my excuses.

Bombers Ambition
02-23-2007, 05:48 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7026/picture8870gy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sank one
02-23-2007, 06:17 PM
the only thing that i dont like, is that the bottom part of the e is alot bigger than any other letters. apart from that it looks sick, and nice spot btw.. looks real heated

sabe2
02-23-2007, 08:32 PM
sope it seemes exactly like cope i would prob do some mad thinking about changing ya name..

nase7
02-23-2007, 08:57 PM
sabe will you stop your rambling, your breath smells like shit.

.Smoke.
02-23-2007, 11:34 PM
Hey all I'm a toy but here's some pieces. Hope you enjoy and if I'm fuckin up by postin this on here like this then sorry.

http://a377.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/44/l_bd8e925053d89025f56846c855161968.jpg
http://a2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/22/l_edbb88a6aa0d85ecc959bcc230b4a231.jpg
http://a478.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/46/l_fc37fb38c1f2b3795f9542b3d76d8ad5.jpg
http://a892.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/62/l_5ae0a6453943201bac2ac6146ccff38b.jpg
http://a980.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/46/l_3f5b251300a12779d0e5442311e0f8d3.jpg

Feedback, info, help, comments **flame suit on**

Bombers Ambition
02-23-2007, 11:51 PM
Originally posted by sabe2@Feb 23 2007, 09:32 PM
sope it seemes exactly like cope i would prob do some mad thinking about changing ya name..
it says sore and looks nothin like cops thorw so open ur eyes and think about shutting the fuck up

Skeam
02-24-2007, 12:59 AM
smoke, (i think its smoke) from those pics, the bottom is the best, 2nd bottom is 2nd best and so forth, the 5th from the bottom (the top one) is the worst. i would of just outlines the bottom S a bit more so u can make out that its an S.

Xsjadox
02-24-2007, 04:24 AM
Smoke,some of those are rad.

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/146/400552880_af4ff75e38_m.jpg
Practice shit in my room (can't be healthy) the A looks fucked up cause it's a merged photo..I haven't used paint a lot at all,as evident

Says Wap4 btw.since everyone hates my f's

Skeam
02-24-2007, 05:36 AM
looks alot better then what some people who "dont use paint alot" can produce mate.

2KoS
02-24-2007, 05:42 AM
Originally posted by sabe2@Feb 23 2007, 09:32 PM
sope it seemes exactly like cope i would prob do some mad thinking about changing ya name..
It says Sore. Not Sope.

And lol @ your suggestion. :lol:

Rust.905
02-24-2007, 11:46 AM
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alive
02-24-2007, 12:14 PM
ur all retarded. that looks nothing like cope.

wap- what can i say. its wack. better then most here, but that doesnt mean shit. thats y were in the toy forum. keep practicing with the paint until u can identically reproduce whats on a page on a wall.

~MeRcI-oNe~
02-24-2007, 01:08 PM
Yo smoke those look tight as hell. I'm really digging the last one. I like those colors.

As for Wap....I disagree, I think it came out pretty good.

escobar
02-24-2007, 01:18 PM
sabe - so what if his name rhymes with a famous artists name.. theres probably a hundred writers out there whose names rhyme with cope.. its not like hes biting his stlye or nothing.. then id understand u having a problem with it.. and like he said its an R not a P... so u aint got nothing on him... keep it up sore im liking ur shit

iwritebasic
02-24-2007, 01:21 PM
smoke that shit is tight, nice lines, nice colors. that one M is kinda retarded in one of the first ones but heres mine:

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a149/stjames91/baserthrow.jpg

3 am, R is kinda hurt

dajam410
02-24-2007, 02:01 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/c.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/a.jpg

New throw, basically just a new D. It says DJM by the way.

.Smoke.
02-24-2007, 02:08 PM
Skeam
Thanks for the critique. I agree with you cuz the bottom two pieces were the latest ones done. The first pic was the second piece I've ever done and so on and so on. And I'll def. work on the bottom outline of the S.

Xsjadox
Yo man your shit still looks better than most people. At least you got style and color fading. The best part about your piece to me is the background. I like how you did the blue cuz the bubbles ain't too much and it doesn't overwhelm your piece. Good lookin out on the props though.

~MeRcI-oNe~
Appreciate the comment pimpin.

iwritebasic
Yeah the M on the first one is hella retarded lookin and I need to work on that I had limited space on the wall and couldn't anticipate that shit. I definitely need to work on proportions. Otherwise thanks for the respect. And yours is dope too, this is how I would write it. If you bite off anything I don't care. Art's meant to be shared not restricted. http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture009.jpg

FEN the HEN
02-24-2007, 02:36 PM
Originally posted by sabe2@Feb 23 2007, 09:32 PM
sope it seemes exactly like cope i would prob do some mad thinking about changing ya name..
hahahaha wow...you should do some "mad" thinking about not posting anymore

alive
02-24-2007, 02:46 PM
SMOKE. i just saw im in ur sig! that makes me so proud. really. u have no idea. haha.

for that, some crits. all ur throws are missing 3d. add some shadow and a 3rd and it will look more complete.
otherwise, ur painting itself looks clean and real nice, u just gotta keep putting lots of work in on the blackbook thread.

Snou
02-24-2007, 02:51 PM
godamn. What Do i have to do to get some comments ;<
I give comments but don&#39;t recieve.
U fuckers ;>>>

hehe

.Smoke.
02-24-2007, 03:32 PM
Originally posted by alive@Feb 24 2007, 03:46 PM
SMOKE. i just saw im in ur sig&#33; that makes me so proud. really. u have no idea. haha.

for that, some crits. all ur throws are missing 3d. add some shadow and a 3rd and it will look more complete.
otherwise, ur painting itself looks clean and real nice, u just gotta keep putting lots of work in on the blackbook thread.
Oh yeah no problem pimpin, I hella dig that shit though real talk cuz people be stressin wayyyy too much. People on here talk about, practice practice practice, but how the hell can you get good at something without practicing WITH it. You know? You don&#39;t HAVE to start with a pencil to get good with a can or vice versa. digg the metaphor? Anyway, yeah though I&#39;ve done 3d on paper but not on a wall, no legal walls I can find for practice. Anyway, thanks for the input and thanks for giving me something for my sig.

KEAZE
02-24-2007, 11:01 PM
wont let me post images so follow the links
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...stewiepiece.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/stewiepiece.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX038.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX038.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...e/chembridg.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/chembridg.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX013.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX013.jpg)

KEAZE
02-24-2007, 11:04 PM
acouple more
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX037.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX037.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX035.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX035.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX033.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX033.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX031.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX031.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX020.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX020.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX022.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX022.jpg)
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX018.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX018.jpg)

40ozproffit
02-24-2007, 11:25 PM
http://media.pixpond.com/1453kyo.jpg

sabe2
02-24-2007, 11:29 PM
smoke im diggin youre shit its so clean no drips no smudge nothin looks really nice i have no bad crits for it its all purposiond its smooth no drips al the same style

Snou
02-25-2007, 04:20 AM
KEAZE.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX037.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX037.jpg)

You shouldn&#39;t do this stuff. It will be a long period &#39;til u get your complexity in your letters. Basic, basic, basic. Basic is pretty and from mastering basics you will get ur name up, and the complexity and your own development will come.
Ur own style. U can see that it lacks technique and better can control

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jef...dle/GRFX037.jpg (http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i152/jeferdoodle/GRFX037.jpg)

Me personally, I don&#39;t like U and T. But that&#39;s subjective. Objectively, your shadow was too fat up and down. should be just a simple line if ur putting ur shadow to the left.

I see the examples that I took are probably more older than the first four pictures you posted because they lack technique somewhere. Just keep it simple. And yeah, I don&#39;t know if it&#39;s just me and my kru, but I don&#39;t like at all those 3-in-1 letters. Better write pretty way, MT or ME, or something, than gimping ur T so it can be U and E. But maybe it&#39;s just me.

pyse&#33;

Skeam
02-25-2007, 06:54 AM
did this today, rekn its me best one yet so yeh petty happy with it. i really like the pinkish highlight thingys at the top in some of the corners, i sorta tried to cutback the edges so they were shard and u can hardly see it in the pic bahahha owell.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6203/neskmoodoretz8.jpg

Snou
02-25-2007, 07:19 AM
I like the colors. Nice used.
But. The letters. Unnecessary doodats imho.
Keep it simple&#33; It&#39;s still early to add stuff. Writers can see it.
But nice work ny wayz

RemoZ
02-25-2007, 11:28 AM
http://a410.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/63/l_6c67dd0cf63480b9f6ec44b76ec87db9.jpg

xXSARSXx
02-25-2007, 12:26 PM
skeam: im liking it alot very clean but lose the little lines going through the lower half of the letters



RumoZ: work on making ur letters the same size and it will flow alot better

On.3
02-25-2007, 12:27 PM
Heres a piece me and 1 of my crew did, killer spot on top of a swimming pool&#33;

http://www.freewebs.com/abcisaseasyas123/cume%20002.jpg

MAiNKo
02-25-2007, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by dajam410@Feb 24 2007, 03:01 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/c.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/a.jpg

New throw, basically just a new D. It says DJM by the way.
bump, i think they&#39;re nice, unique, bumps cause it was at the end of the page too

ZiareONE
02-25-2007, 06:00 PM
first heaven spot
wasn&#39;t really that high but hey
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/ASF_0159003_0001.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/IMG_0157.jpg

noam12
02-25-2007, 07:58 PM
TAKE THE PIC OF UR FACE OUT, if it gets out ur fucked, pretty good letters i guess, lol the whatevr it is with the face reminds me of groucho marxs..

RemoZ
02-25-2007, 08:52 PM
http://a300.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/46/l_39581c9407626fb6b50dbbb509e0ff0b.jpg

Skeam
02-25-2007, 09:06 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Feb 25 2007, 07:54 AM
did this today, rekn its me best one yet so yeh petty happy with it. i really like the pinkish highlight thingys at the top in some of the corners, i sorta tried to cutback the edges so they were shard and u can hardly see it in the pic bahahha owell.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6203/neskmoodoretz8.jpg
bumpidge o the next pageidge

dim
02-25-2007, 09:08 PM
where di the red go on the right side of the "k" ?

Skeam
02-25-2007, 09:42 PM
ran outta paint :P

asmatic91
02-25-2007, 09:53 PM
yo skeam ur shyts prtty nice needs a little work how long u been writin for?

Fube
02-25-2007, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by ZiareONE@Feb 25 2007, 07:00 PM
first heaven spot
wasn&#39;t really that high but hey
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/ASF_0159003_0001.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/IMG_0157.jpg
hahahahaha. dude u bust so meny rules here. hollow bombs on heaven spots are pointless. just dont do it, also thats a nice mug shot u got going go ahead and take a flick of the address of the place 2 while your at it. i bet u spent more time poseing for the pic then u did on the actual bomb. u probably just dont know so im sorry for bustin on u.

dont show your FACE. if i were u i would kill that pic right now. i mean u got the dude takeing a flick of u actuall doing it. arrrggghhh.

Skeam
02-25-2007, 09:57 PM
Originally posted by asmatic91@Feb 25 2007, 10:53 PM
yo skeam ur shyts prtty nice needs a little work how long u been writin for?
been sketchi nfor ages paintin about 3 months

dj ultraviolet radiation ina can
02-25-2007, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by Fube+Feb 25 2007, 10:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Feb 25 2007, 10:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ZiareONE@Feb 25 2007, 07:00 PM
first heaven spot
wasn&#39;t really that high but hey
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/ASF_0159003_0001.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/IMG_0157.jpg
hahahahaha. dude u bust so meny rules here. hollow bombs on heaven spots are pointless. just dont do it, also thats a nice mug shot u got going go ahead and take a flick of the address of the place 2 while your at it. i bet u spent more time poseing for the pic then u did on the actual bomb. u probably just dont know so im sorry for bustin on u.

dont show your FACE. if i were u i would kill that pic right now. i mean u got the dude takeing a flick of u actuall doing it. arrrggghhh. [/b][/quote]
i like how you hate on the fact he&#39;s doing a "Heaven" (its not really a heaven though, sorry to say) and its a hollow.. but you don&#39;t mention the shit proportion, drips, and completely off drop shadowing. lol. no offense... just things that stuck out (you wanted crits anyways, right?)

Snou
02-26-2007, 03:49 AM
What shadow ;> there is not shadow on that hollow.
Okey, maybe a bit. But would rather say that he just did double lines.
Than actually tried to do shadow.
U definitely need to get some can control up. Need to check up toy tutorials
for the shadow/3d. Ur dripping all over the place. And the letters.
It&#39;s also in the toy tutorial. And that circle-thingy in "Z" on the beginning.
Get rid of it&#33; ;>
And yes, never never, never, the face&#33;

D Snif
02-26-2007, 08:54 AM
Originally posted by ZiareONE@Feb 25 2007, 07:00 PM

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/IMG_0157.jpg
I never thought that 50 Cent would do graffiti, considering he&#39;s a snitch and all.

Albert Fish
02-26-2007, 09:18 AM
Originally posted by Bombers Ambition+Feb 24 2007, 12:51 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bombers Ambition @ Feb 24 2007, 12:51 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sabe2@Feb 23 2007, 09:32 PM
sope it seemes exactly like cope i would prob do some mad thinking about changing ya name..
it says sore and looks nothin like cops thorw so open ur eyes and think about shutting the ---- up [/b][/quote]
hahah even if it said "sope", who cares

that kid writes "sabe" and he&#39;s telling YOU to think about changing your name

Torrent
02-26-2007, 09:24 AM
Originally posted by ZiareONE@Feb 25 2007, 07:00 PM
first heaven spot
wasn&#39;t really that high but hey
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/ASF_0159003_0001.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/IMG_0157.jpg
Don&#39;t worry about showing your face. Pigs have your IP address which is even better evidence for them. Zewler used to have his face as his sig and if you don&#39;t know who Zewler is...

thisisart_color
02-26-2007, 11:07 AM
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1968/ndfdnf1.jpg
Yeah I did this for a chick I like. I think it&#39;s pretty cool. It took me a little while.

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by D Snif+Feb 26 2007, 09:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (D Snif @ Feb 26 2007, 09:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ZiareONE@Feb 25 2007, 07:00 PM

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Graff/IMG_0157.jpg
I never thought that 50 Cent would do graffiti, considering he&#39;s a snitch and all. [/b][/quote]
hahahahahahahaha...50 Cent. :lol: :lol:, why you showin&#39; your face anyways, kinda retarded.

glass
02-26-2007, 02:37 PM
you can see his face in that?

DnK/eeK
02-26-2007, 04:00 PM
yeah..... i can see his face

noam12
02-26-2007, 04:08 PM
yo wtf is happening in ur avatar dnk hahaha nothing to crit again...

shifty!
02-26-2007, 04:52 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8316/ak014gc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you know the deal...

yeh it sucks but thats why it is in here. also like -10

FEN the HEN
02-26-2007, 06:15 PM
thats it?

wyred
02-26-2007, 07:39 PM
first time painting in a couple months.
good to be back.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00889.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00895.jpg


crits?

.Smoke.
02-26-2007, 07:43 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Feb 26 2007, 05:52 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8316/ak014gc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you know the deal...

yeh it sucks but thats why it is in here. also like -10
My opinion. Kill the bunny ears.

dj ultraviolet radiation ina can
02-26-2007, 08:14 PM
Originally posted by .Smoke.+Feb 26 2007, 08:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (.Smoke. @ Feb 26 2007, 08:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shifty&#33;@Feb 26 2007, 05:52 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8316/ak014gc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you know the deal...

yeh it sucks but thats why it is in here. also like -10
My opinion. Kill the bunny ears. [/b][/quote]
decent hollow.. go back over it with a throwwie thats actually got a fucking fill... it would look hott and then flick it and lemme see =)

dirtesanchez
02-26-2007, 09:13 PM
that shit is dope. just like he said fill it and lets see

wyred
02-27-2007, 12:11 AM
Originally posted by wyred@Feb 26 2007, 08:39 PM
first time painting in a couple months.
good to be back.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00889.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00895.jpg


crits?
bump.

tesk
02-27-2007, 12:36 AM
Originally posted by wyred+Feb 27 2007, 01:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wyred @ Feb 27 2007, 01:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-wyred@Feb 26 2007, 08:39 PM
first time painting in a couple months.
good to be back.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00889.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00895.jpg


crits?
bump. [/b][/quote]
how long you been writing?

wyred
02-27-2007, 12:38 AM
couple months.

shifty!
02-27-2007, 01:05 AM
edit

~MeRcI-oNe~
02-27-2007, 09:56 AM
Originally posted by wyred@Feb 26 2007, 08:39 PM
first time painting in a couple months.
good to be back.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00889.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00895.jpg


crits?
I like that arrow you have pointing to the tag

AimoOne
02-27-2007, 10:19 AM
first heaven spot

you my freind..have played too much Mark Ecko Getting Up..
Heaven spots...geez..

HIGH SPOT&#39;S &#33;

But then again..call them whut u want..i just think " heaven spots " is kinda played out..sounds sad ( in an actual sad way )

Chalk
02-27-2007, 01:55 PM
a few days ago
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_y.jpg
today
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_p.jpg

crits?

trashhh
02-27-2007, 02:06 PM
yea second ones a lot better chalk, the colours (especialy the 3d) and the letters are better, but work on your K&#39;s&#33;

.Smoke.
02-27-2007, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Feb 27 2007, 11:19 AM

first heaven spot

you my freind..have played too much Mark Ecko Getting Up..
Heaven spots...geez..

HIGH SPOT&#39;S &#33;

But then again..call them whut u want..i just think " heaven spots " is kinda played out..sounds sad ( in an actual sad way )
Bleh. I say know your roots and stick to &#39;em. Who cares what the new "cool" words are, they&#39;re just going to be "played" out sooner or later.

And Mark Ecko Getting Up...I&#39;m glad they made a game that recognizes art. **thumbsup**

ARMAwonR
02-27-2007, 03:09 PM
Mark Ecko didnt recognize it as much for the art aspect as the marketing aspect ...
the fact is ... Graff is popular these days
its going to sell ... to the young graff generation ... and possibly to the old school heads who miss their glory days ...

think back about say ... 5-8 years ago ...
skateboarding was starting to make a come back

tony hawk decides to develop a video game ...
the rest pretty much explains itself ...

btw
[i just call them roof spots ...]

AimoOne
02-27-2007, 03:22 PM
smoke. - " know my root&#39;s " .. i definatly know my roots...if you ask how..try reading..

subway art
spray can art

and i watched

style war&#39;s
beat street

and look through my post&#39;s of my peices from ages ago...nerly every peice i did was based on old skool style&#39;s ..

so dont tell me to know my roots boy <_< :lol:

and imo ..i fort Marc Ecko was fucking stupid..at the time of playing i didnt think it..but now learing about graff and looking at it to this day..it really is stupid..

-ShAmEE-
02-27-2007, 04:05 PM
ur are old skool...it is ur life style ras.

chalk first piece make the A the same size nice fills thou.

.Smoke.
02-27-2007, 04:58 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Feb 27 2007, 04:22 PM
smoke. - " know my root&#39;s " .. i definatly know my roots...if you ask how..try reading..

subway art
spray can art

and i watched

style war&#39;s
beat street

and look through my post&#39;s of my peices from ages ago...nerly every peice i did was based on old skool style&#39;s ..

so dont tell me to know my roots boy <_< :lol:

and imo ..i fort Marc Ecko was fucking stupid..at the time of playing i didnt think it..but now learing about graff and looking at it to this day..it really is stupid..
Whoa whoa whoa...

When I said know your roots and stick to &#39;em I meant slang. I wasn&#39;t saying that YOU (Aimo0ne) didn&#39;t know your roots. As I was talking about the whole slang words thing and "played." Definitely not here to start any type of beef between writers.

Simply put, all I&#39;m saying with "knowin your roots and stickin to em" is knowing the "original" words that people use because they&#39;re more universal and everyone understands them. Know what I mean? I guess I say this more and more now because I live in sac and I&#39;m out of high school. With the overflow of Frisco people there&#39;s an array of new terminology and honestly I just don&#39;t get it and I like stickin to saying what I&#39;m accustomed to. Not saying anyone has to feel the same way I do, but just stating that I stay with what I know (mostly so I don&#39;t end up lookin like an idiot).

Secondly I&#39;m not a boy, I&#39;m actually a man. LoL, if I can be given the death sentence I&#39;d prefer not being called a "boy". ;)

And Mark Ecko, he&#39;s got some genius to him for being able to come up as an artist in clothing, (though he sold his line to levi i believe, correct me if I&#39;m wrong), and helping create an "original" game (unless there are other graffiti games out there I haven&#39;t heard of).

Hope that explains what I meant.

AimoOne
02-27-2007, 05:00 PM
oh shit..sorry.. smoke :unsure: :unsure: :(

.Smoke.
02-27-2007, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Feb 27 2007, 06:00 PM
oh shit..sorry.. smoke :unsure: :unsure: :(
no prob

wyred
02-27-2007, 05:16 PM
Originally posted by wyred+Feb 27 2007, 01:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wyred @ Feb 27 2007, 01:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-wyred@Feb 26 2007, 08:39 PM
first time painting in a couple months.
good to be back.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00889.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00895.jpg


crits?
bump. [/b][/quote]
crits, yooo.

sank one
02-27-2007, 06:06 PM
stick to paper

no1good
02-27-2007, 08:43 PM
Originally posted by wyred+Feb 27 2007, 06:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wyred &#064; Feb 27 2007, 06:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by wyred@Feb 27 2007, 01:11 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-wyred@Feb 26 2007, 08:39 PM
first time painting in a couple months.
good to be back.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00889.jpg

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/omfgitsryan/GRAFF/DSC00895.jpg


crits?
bump.
crits, yooo. [/b][/quote]
fuk id b pissed it that was my door :lol:

escobar
02-27-2007, 09:25 PM
wyred stop bumping ur shit... and i dont get it.. u said it was ur first time writing in a couple months and it was good to be back... yet u told tesk that uve only been writing for a couple months?... also ur letters arent bad but id work on that O.. work on ur can control too.. keep practicin

whahappen?
02-27-2007, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Feb 27 2007, 11:19 AM

first heaven spot

you my freind..have played too much Mark Ecko Getting Up..
Heaven spots...geez..

HIGH SPOT&#39;S &#33;

But then again..call them whut u want..i just think " heaven spots " is kinda played out..sounds sad ( in an actual sad way )
heaven spots were around before playstation was.......

turnturnturn
02-27-2007, 10:37 PM
smoke. - " know my root&#39;s " .. i definatly know my roots...if you ask how..try reading..

subway art
spray can art

and i watched

style war&#39;s
beat street

and look through my post&#39;s of my peices from ages ago...nerly every peice i did was based on old skool style&#39;s ..

so dont tell me to know my roots boy dry.gif laugh.gif

and imo ..i fort Marc Ecko was fucking stupid..at the time of playing i didnt think it..but now learing about graff and looking at it to this day..it really is stupid..

wow, i cant even begin to explain how incredibly fucking retarded you people are, you read two books and watch some dumbass movies and say you know your roots in graffiti, you don&#39;t know anything about graffiti

put down the can, straight up

Rank!
02-27-2007, 11:21 PM
How about people post pics like the thread says and stop internet beef...
PFC throwie i came up with first time painting it....http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/PFC.jpg
Pepsi Free Youth
haha straight up representin the dirty south coca cola
oh the throwie above it is my SFY hard to see cause of the flash
SHOWER FREE YOUTH

FEN the HEN
02-28-2007, 01:04 AM
Originally posted by .Smoke.+Feb 27 2007, 04:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (.Smoke. @ Feb 27 2007, 04:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Feb 27 2007, 11:19 AM

first heaven spot

you my freind..have played too much Mark Ecko Getting Up..
Heaven spots...geez..

HIGH SPOT&#39;S &#33;

But then again..call them whut u want..i just think " heaven spots " is kinda played out..sounds sad ( in an actual sad way )
Bleh. I say know your roots and stick to &#39;em. Who cares what the new "cool" words are, they&#39;re just going to be "played" out sooner or later.

And Mark Ecko Getting Up...I&#39;m glad they made a game that recognizes art. **thumbsup** [/b][/quote]
give it a rest....why does everyone care about what terms people use.....worry about your own shit....

Skeam
02-28-2007, 01:12 AM
did my first trackside today, pretty much the first actualy real ILLEGAL peice that ive done where quite a few people will see it. just did a real simple chromey though.

pretty spewin when i finnished i took a flick and then went back and did white lines through the 3d and fixed the outline a bit and went over all the tags in white and it looked so much more dope, owell just an excuse to go back again and do another one lol.

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4589/hpim2973sn3.jpg

wyred
02-28-2007, 01:27 AM
Originally posted by Skeam@Feb 28 2007, 02:12 AM
did my first trackside today, pretty much the first actualy real ILLEGAL peice that ive done where quite a few people will see it. just did a real simple chromey though.

pretty spewin when i finnished i took a flick and then went back and did white lines through the 3d and fixed the outline a bit and went over all the tags in white and it looked so much more dope, owell just an excuse to go back again and do another one lol.

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4589/hpim2973sn3.jpg
thats dope, dude.
i&#39;m diggin the orange forcefield.

HAILSAEZAR(2)
02-28-2007, 01:57 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/100_6706.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/100_6705.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/100_6727.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/wertwrtert.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/image72343.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/image7.jpg

pez ss
02-28-2007, 03:10 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Feb 28 2007, 02:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN @ Feb 28 2007, 02:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by .Smoke.@Feb 27 2007, 04:00 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Feb 27 2007, 11:19 AM

first heaven spot

you my freind..have played too much Mark Ecko Getting Up..
Heaven spots...geez..

HIGH SPOT&#39;S &#33;

But then again..call them whut u want..i just think " heaven spots " is kinda played out..sounds sad ( in an actual sad way )
Bleh. I say know your roots and stick to &#39;em. Who cares what the new "cool" words are, they&#39;re just going to be "played" out sooner or later.

And Mark Ecko Getting Up...I&#39;m glad they made a game that recognizes art. **thumbsup**
give it a rest....why does everyone care about what terms people use.....worry about your own shit.... [/b][/quote]
amen

Cheat
02-28-2007, 05:03 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Feb 28 2007, 02:12 AM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4589/hpim2973sn3.jpg
Damn man. Nice, Very nice. Just my opinion though, I would lose the "bling marks" or put them in key locations... like the 4 "corners" of the piece... But then again thats just me.

Love the forcefield though, Really makes the whole thing "POP" lol

I am in the process of switching names. I couldnt write anything for Cheat. But I have a nice tag for "Gekz", its all around my town already from bombing today. lol Even hit a Fed Ex truck while he was delivering a package. lol Post fliks later.

Cheat
02-28-2007, 05:05 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Feb 28 2007, 02:12 AM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4589/hpim2973sn3.jpg
Damn man. Nice, Very nice. Just my opinion though, I would lose the "bling marks" or put them in key locations... like the 4 "corners" of the piece... But then again thats just me.

Love the forcefield though, Really makes the whole thing "POP" lol

I am in the process of switching names. I couldnt write anything for Cheat. But I have a nice tag for "Gekz", its all around my town already from bombing today. lol Even hit a Fed Ex truck while he was delivering a package. lol ill Post fliks later.

Rank!
02-28-2007, 06:19 PM
Ok so i totally got over looked with that sweet nesk peice
It looks really good man
but i still would like a little crit on these throws http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/PFC.jpg
PFC- Pepsi free crew
top one is hard to see cause of the flash
SFY- Shower Free Youth






Oh and caezar2 the top two pics are looking sloppy
you need to go simpler

Simplicity
02-28-2007, 06:53 PM
Riet

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i80/Richie288/balllllllin.jpg
one of my first bombs
tell me what you think

beastie_1989
02-28-2007, 08:32 PM
its real nice, good leters good can controle the only problem is the R. besides that great job

Simplicity
02-28-2007, 08:40 PM
its a lower case r by the way.
i gues it could look like an uppercase r if thats what you thought

but thanks for the feedback. i appriciate it

shtfit138
02-28-2007, 11:48 PM
good shit Riet, looks really clean and i like the letters. keep it up.

escobar
03-01-2007, 12:01 AM
riet i like its damn good for ur first time.. but i agree with the last comment work on ur R.. its sorta halfway between upper and lower case.. howd u get up so high anyway r u just really tall haha?

new throwie im workin on lemme know what u think
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3280/graf161vb6.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2882/graf187ge7.jpg

escobar
03-01-2007, 12:30 AM
Crits-

Rank..im realling likin that PFC but its a little sloppy on the P with the 3d and forcefield though.. hollow up tha hole in the P and throw some 3d in there too.. if u know what i mean. and do it bigger. big is good
i cant really say much about that other one.. it doesnt look that good but the picture is shitty

Nesk i like that alot just make the K bigger

saezar - do somethin a little more simple.. that black white and red one would look dope as a throw if u got rid of all those wack arrows and bubbles

BAPKEB
03-01-2007, 12:55 AM
Originally posted by escobar@Mar 1 2007, 01:01 AM
riet i like its damn good for ur first time.. but i agree with the last comment work on ur R.. its sorta halfway between upper and lower case.. howd u get up so high anyway r u just really tall haha?

new throwie im workin on lemme know what u think
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3280/graf161vb6.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2882/graf187ge7.jpg
i like those. Do you have beef with the bomb under those you did?

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-01-2007, 12:58 AM
lose the x in the a just make it a vertical line

escobar
03-01-2007, 12:59 AM
haha not at all he was there when i did it.. its his old shit anyway

eromatic
03-01-2007, 01:11 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k156/caitlyn2889/graffiti/littleshop008.jpg

love to hear some feedback. and by hear i mean read

Skeam
03-01-2007, 02:52 AM
does it say worn? if so make the R look a little more like an R, and maybe brnig the bottom right bit of the N down a bit coz at first i thought it looked like a V, i know its hard to give N&#39;s some style ay bro i know from experiance haha, that arrow going over the O isa bit "how ya goin" it sorta just stands out to much and doesnt flo with it ya know. but besides that im fucken liking it alot, i like the style your doin and the peice clean as and i like the choice of colour, just gotta work on them letters a tiny bit. good shit tho mate.

Copieright
03-01-2007, 04:23 AM
Originally posted by eromatic@Mar 1 2007, 02:11 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k156/caitlyn2889/graffiti/littleshop008.jpg

love to hear some feedback. and by hear i mean read
which one is yours?

whoarethereal evil
03-01-2007, 08:20 AM
if its worn its pretty nice i like it


1st thing ive painted thats not a throw up

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00018.jpg

Copieright
03-01-2007, 09:36 AM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Mar 1 2007, 09:20 AM
if its worn its pretty nice i like it


1st thing ive painted thats not a throw up

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00018.jpg
what is it if it`s nog a throw-up? And who`s work you crossed?

Skesh
03-01-2007, 09:36 AM
Originally posted by escobar@Mar 1 2007, 07:01 AM
riet i like its damn good for ur first time.. but i agree with the last comment work on ur R.. its sorta halfway between upper and lower case.. howd u get up so high anyway r u just really tall haha?

new throwie im workin on lemme know what u think
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3280/graf161vb6.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2882/graf187ge7.jpg
Your old trowie was waaay better, in my opinion

Kayone707
03-01-2007, 10:01 AM
i like thoes ^

Fluffy Bunnies
03-01-2007, 10:32 AM
AWesome throws man... but that style of throws are too overused... well at least to me.

goodjob&#33;

HAILSAEZAR(2)
03-01-2007, 01:44 PM
Originally posted by Rank&#33;@Feb 28 2007, 07:19 PM
Ok so i totally got over looked with that sweet nesk peice
It looks really good man
but i still would like a little crit on these throws http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/PFC.jpg
PFC- Pepsi free crew
top one is hard to see cause of the flash
SFY- Shower Free Youth






Oh and caezar2 the top two pics are looking sloppy
you need to go simpler
ur.. kidding me right?


i know that shits slop job but damnn getting told by shower free youuth..hoookay. <_<

riet thats fucking ill, respect.

*thanks for the real feedback esco

eromatic
03-01-2007, 03:04 PM
Originally posted by Copieright+Mar 1 2007, 05:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Copieright @ Mar 1 2007, 05:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-eromatic@Mar 1 2007, 02:11 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k156/caitlyn2889/graffiti/littleshop008.jpg

love to hear some feedback. and by hear i mean read
which one is yours? [/b][/quote]
i&#39;m the XA short for xanax.
my friend did the WORN

Albert Fish
03-01-2007, 04:28 PM
ask, looks pretty good ill give better crits later i have to go to work now

fourth time ever painting so bare with me.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blue1.jpg

hit me with some constructive criticism?

eromatic
03-01-2007, 05:21 PM
work on making shadown the same size.
and work on the highlights

thisisart_color
03-01-2007, 08:10 PM
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5095/image100xz0.jpg What do you guys think about this?

ESKE one
03-01-2007, 08:52 PM
Originally posted by Skesh+Mar 1 2007, 10:36 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skesh @ Mar 1 2007, 10:36 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-escobar@Mar 1 2007, 07:01 AM
riet i like its damn good for ur first time.. but i agree with the last comment work on ur R.. its sorta halfway between upper and lower case.. howd u get up so high anyway r u just really tall haha?

new throwie im workin on lemme know what u think
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3280/graf161vb6.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2882/graf187ge7.jpg
Your old trowie was waaay better, in my opinion [/b][/quote]
yo escobar can we do any exchange your style is nice as shyt i write eske

this is art color- sry man but stick to the paper for now and get a good throwie down and then practice it wit a can until u get no drips but dont practice on the street not until you get can control

G - Wahl
03-01-2007, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by eromatic@Mar 1 2007, 02:11 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k156/caitlyn2889/graffiti/littleshop008.jpg

love to hear some feedback. and by hear i mean read
i really like that xa, very original.

Albert Fish
03-01-2007, 09:46 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Mar 1 2007, 05:28 PM
ask, looks pretty good ill give better crits later i have to go to work now

fourth time ever painting so bare with me.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blue1.jpg

hit me with some constructive criticism?
bump i got bottom of the page

ESKE one
03-01-2007, 09:49 PM
^^^ nice shyt i think your style wicked but it look like you fucked up on those glares alittle

eromatic
03-01-2007, 10:05 PM
thanks g-wahl i appreciate it

dibz
03-02-2007, 01:19 AM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Mar 1 2007, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one &#064; Mar 1 2007, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Skesh@Mar 1 2007, 10:36 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-escobar@Mar 1 2007, 07:01 AM
riet i like its damn good for ur first time.. but i agree with the last comment work on ur R.. its sorta halfway between upper and lower case.. howd u get up so high anyway r u just really tall haha?

new throwie im workin on lemme know what u think
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3280/graf161vb6.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2882/graf187ge7.jpg
Your old trowie was waaay better, in my opinion
yo escobar can we do any exchange your style is nice as shyt i write eske

this is art color- sry man but stick to the paper for now and get a good throwie down and then practice it wit a can until u get no drips but dont practice on the street not until you get can control[/b][/quote]
ASK-that throw, is sooo ill.. lovin it

Fluffy Bunnies
03-02-2007, 11:11 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish+Mar 1 2007, 10:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Albert Fish @ Mar 1 2007, 10:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Albert Fish@Mar 1 2007, 05:28 PM
ask, looks pretty good ill give better crits later i have to go to work now

fourth time ever painting so bare with me.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blue1.jpg

hit me with some constructive criticism?
bump i got bottom of the page [/b][/quote]
You finally painted&#33; first painting I seen from you.

Get some can control. practice just by doing straight lines and do another color right beside it... when you can get it evenly strait with almost no overlap, then you succeded&#33;

pez ss
03-02-2007, 12:11 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Mar 1 2007, 05:28 PM
ask, looks pretty good ill give better crits later i have to go to work now

fourth time ever painting so bare with me.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blue1.jpg

hit me with some constructive criticism?
hit the books

pez ss
03-02-2007, 12:16 PM
Originally posted by thisisart_color@Mar 1 2007, 09:10 PM
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5095/image100xz0.jpg What do you guys think about this?
wow way to many drips i gota not hold ur can in one place for so long also dont bother with caracters for now i do like the fill colors though

Albert Fish
03-02-2007, 12:23 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Mar 2 2007, 01:11 PM
hit the books
is that some kind of joke? i usually dont beef in here but ive been "hitting the books" for like a year and a half and judging from your sig my sketches will burn you and im willing to battle for that statement. so come see me baby

pez ss
03-02-2007, 12:40 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish+Mar 2 2007, 01:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Albert Fish @ Mar 2 2007, 01:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-pez ss@Mar 2 2007, 01:11 PM
hit the books
is that some kind of joke? i usually dont beef in here but ive been "hitting the books" for like a year and a half and judging from your sig my sketches will burn you and im willing to battle for that statement. so come see me baby [/b][/quote]
dude u clearly dont know how shit that really is, the letters suck witch mean u didnt plan them out or ur scetches just suck still ur lines r just plan choppy cause they arnt flowing and really sloppy.like all im saying is that u have no letter structure whats so ever i mean look at that fucking h its horible wasnt trying to start beef with u i just said hit the books so stop pmsing on any that tells u u need to sketch more or gives u crits on ur shit u winny puss bag.

Fluffy Bunnies
03-02-2007, 12:55 PM
Obviously Pez, you haven&#39;t been around long enough to actually judge Ablert Fish... and that style is far beyond anything you can do. it&#39;s people likk you who have no respect for graff.

pez ss
03-02-2007, 01:12 PM
my ass that style is far beyond me is this a joke. thats not even style thats just a bunch of crappy letteing. u cant seruisly say that has any kinda style and dont evn tell me i have no respect for graff. its people like albert fish that dont have any respect for it. its when people paint shitty stuff like that, thats when the people hate graff and want to get rid of it. but when people take the time to do some worth looking at on a wall poeple stop and say "hey that looks preatty fucking good" and respect it thats why they have events like style in progrees so people can see the pure creativity and talent that goes into a good peice of graffiti and not the shit that gets put up like albert fishes stuff. and im not &#39;&#39;judgeing him&#39;&#39;, i just said that it looked bad and that he should work on his lettering some more just stop the beef cause people r proble getting mighty sick off it.

YarHarHar
03-02-2007, 01:17 PM
mabn that styles fine he just needs to clean u the lines
an who the fuck cares whatn people say when they walk by your "piece"
which i dout you could do since your in the toy forum...anyways the point is you dont do graffiti for other people...

pez ss
03-02-2007, 01:34 PM
first, i never said i could do a peice or that im amazing. and yes u dont do it for other people but u do do it for ur self and to get ur name up and known right??? and if ur doing it for ur self then why put up somthing if ur not truly happy with it and i wouldnt want people to know my name and then think of the shittyest writer they ever saw. because thats whats going to happen if u put stuff up that bad. look i was just trieng to make a point and i was triey to held albert fish and by tellim him to sketch something good and something hes happy with then paint it. in stead he started bitching liike a little girl about how hes been sketching for a year. ive been sketchin for like 2 and a half. if ur going t have that attiutide about sketching than just quit and dont bother at doing it in the first place.

pez ss
03-02-2007, 02:05 PM
i gess that i won and im write becase u graff is shit

pez ss
03-02-2007, 02:06 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Mar 2 2007, 03:05 PM
i gess that i won and im write becase u graff is shit
that was my dumb ass friend

sank one
03-02-2007, 02:49 PM
take it to the beef thread. and you have no room to be talking.

as for a crit. i like that astlye alot, just needs to be cleaner. keep practicing

shtfit138
03-02-2007, 04:46 PM
ask..
love the letters. good style and they flow pretty well. keep it up.

Apple pie
03-02-2007, 05:58 PM
Hey pez stop hatin man everyone has there own style. just let him do his thing and i really like escobars letters by the way :ph34r:

pez ss
03-02-2007, 06:13 PM
lmao. yo pie u want a go bombing this week? well do the liks wall or go downtown or some shit

FEN the HEN
03-02-2007, 06:17 PM
change your name homo.....there&#39;s already and AVE and he destroys you

P.S this isnt MSN fags take it to the P.M&#39;s

Apple pie
03-02-2007, 06:17 PM
ye im down for the licks wall, test will probably join in too

pez ss
03-02-2007, 06:25 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Mar 2 2007, 07:17 PM
change your name homo.....there&#39;s already and AVE and he destroys you

P.S this isnt MSN fags take it to the P.M&#39;s
theres proble like 50 ave out there and proble 50 of what ever u write out there and i bet at lest half of them destroy u. whats ur point

FEN the HEN
03-02-2007, 06:32 PM
umm....your terrible thats my point..... ;)

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture132.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture119.jpg
...

xXSARSXx
03-02-2007, 06:34 PM
thers probly many of each name but who gives a fuck does it make painting any less funner?

noam12
03-02-2007, 06:44 PM
in some cases yea, if u have the same name as someone, there gunna bitch about it until u change or sumthing, fen the throwup next to what u did, it has nothing to do with u but im making a statement lol, the e looks retarddeed its like a o with a line threw it

FEN the HEN
03-02-2007, 06:50 PM
ya i know, i dont use that anymore

Apple pie
03-02-2007, 08:17 PM
theres no other Pie or Pye is there??

Bombers Ambition
03-03-2007, 12:31 AM
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/2678/graffiti845kf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
shouts 4 the homie
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/1088/graffiti846up6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

trashhh
03-03-2007, 04:35 AM
The sore is well nice.. tell your mate not to write dope unless his stuff really is dope&#33;

Skeam
03-03-2007, 06:21 AM
Sore - i love your throwy its fucken good ay, dno bout the dope or the cror though, stay up bro.


the left bar on my N is just straight up fuct and the E, i dont even know whats goin on there but its fuct to, i like my S and K and the idea i had for the fill and shit but i think it could be a bit less sloppy. just pretty much critted myself but i wanna know what use think.

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3236/dscn0351oc9.jpg

Cheat
03-03-2007, 10:24 AM
lol Nesk, Seriously man. You dont need to post in the Toy Forums anymore... lol. :)

Stonk
03-03-2007, 10:55 AM
Cheat.. yes he does, skeam your can control is fantastic and so are your letters but there is still a lot of stuff you can improve on before you move up. but still nice stuff. i dont really like how the flaps at the end of the letters "overlap" or whatever there doing.

trashhh
03-03-2007, 11:59 AM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....

MiNZ
03-03-2007, 12:28 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 3 2007, 12:59 PM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....
get the fuck outta here go to the big boys

Copieright
03-03-2007, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 3 2007, 12:59 PM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....
Oh i`m diggin that S for sure. the R is pretty nice to nice can control just not digging the other letters. something`s missing :huh:

FEN the HEN
03-03-2007, 01:04 PM
the only thing i like in your work is your cleanness you never have a sloppy piece

CaMa
03-03-2007, 03:24 PM
These are my first 2 throwies ever&#33; They are whack toy but all I can do is practice and that&#39;s what I&#39;m doing. Constructive Criticism please.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2729/throwie1ii0.jpg

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2702/throwie2dz1.jpg

near
03-03-2007, 04:15 PM
likin the trash

ya heres something i did the leg of the R is on an angled wall thats why it looks like that...i def cramped it but w/e

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010707.jpg

CaMa
03-03-2007, 04:40 PM
Originally posted by Bombers Ambition@Mar 3 2007, 01:31 AM
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/1088/graffiti846up6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I&#39;m feeling your flow there bruz. Good style design and flow. Fresh.

Skesh
03-03-2007, 06:13 PM
Trash, FUCKING awesome.
This is definitely your best piece

damn

neck45
03-03-2007, 08:43 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9947/untitledsdfa1.png
1013

whahappen?
03-03-2007, 10:47 PM
Originally posted by CaMa@Mar 3 2007, 04:24 PM
These are my first 2 throwies ever&#33; They are whack toy but all I can do is practice and that&#39;s what I&#39;m doing. Constructive Criticism please.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2729/throwie1ii0.jpg

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2702/throwie2dz1.jpg
:o :blink: :lol: :lol: :lol:
stick
to
fucking
paper
pleeeeeeease

...BASTard TNG...
03-03-2007, 10:58 PM
http://myspace-167.vo.llnwd.net/01338/76/14/1338074167_l.gif



http://www.freewebs.com/phillyzboy1426/0626061712.jpg



shitty camara phone pic...

http://www.freewebs.com/phillyzboy1426/me23.jpg


crits?

Ratikoner
03-03-2007, 11:00 PM
word...bast is cute :rolleyes:

CaMa
03-03-2007, 11:28 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Mar 3 2007, 11:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Mar 3 2007, 11:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-CaMa@Mar 3 2007, 04:24 PM
These are my first 2 throwies ever&#33; They are whack toy but all I can do is practice and that&#39;s what I&#39;m doing. Constructive Criticism please.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2729/throwie1ii0.jpg

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2702/throwie2dz1.jpg
:o :blink: :lol: :lol: :lol:
stick
to
fucking
paper
pleeeeeeease [/b][/quote]
Yes Sir.... <_< :( :ph34r: :unsure:

Lol, they were my first 2 ever&#33; Well they looked good on paper.... :P

Skeam
03-03-2007, 11:32 PM
i bet ya they didnt... if ya gunna do shit like that do it where people dont hav to look at it

CaMa
03-03-2007, 11:38 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Mar 4 2007, 12:32 AM
i bet ya they didnt... if ya gunna do shit like that do it where people dont hav to look at it
Advice taken.

Any constructive critiscm apart from give up or stick to the paper? :lol: ;)

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:49 PM
dont give up mannnn find ur style and rock it , even if ur bombing pies everywhere like me

Sluts_r_us
03-04-2007, 12:19 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/greenfill.jpg

nesk - im feelin the fill and the shines look nice too but the letters are just weak in my opinion and i think the outline is kind of sloppy but keep at it

C3ZR ONE
03-04-2007, 12:24 AM
Rusto Green apple?

Skeam
03-04-2007, 12:25 AM
cheers fo the crits trashhh and slut and whoeva else critted me

Slut i love your throwy mate it looks dope this ones a tad sloppy on the outlinesand shit but its still dope.

did this today so pissed off about the white shine attempt in the letters, fuct it up so bad but i dont mind the sines on some of the corners of the letters. ahwell.

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5527/dscn0372ma4.jpg


this is me mates peice, did a linkup with 4 other people and yeh me and his are probably the 2 best.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5788/dscn0369fh3.jpg

DUF
03-04-2007, 12:28 AM
Some of my latest stuff, like 2 months old. still working with this new name.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/nogaresize.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/Picture116.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/Picture123.jpg
missed a couple little spots on the purple one.

Albert Fish
03-04-2007, 01:31 AM
Originally posted by pez ss@Mar 2 2007, 02:12 PM
my ass that style is far beyond me is this a joke.... etc etc
how are you gonna tell me i have no letter structure? those are simple letters that have been fattened and elongated in different parts, honestly i dont really care about your opinion but dont tell me to "hit the books" just because you dont like my style. i know i have letter structure. you cant deny letter structure my stuff is legible and i like it, the lines are sketchy because that was the third time ive ever painted. and i dont "get up" at all. whatever kid you really just dont know what youre talking about to be honest. you gave props to that "color" throw a couple pages back.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/fisher.jpg
tell me i dont have letter structure, tell me i have to "hit the books" lemme see your bookwork, post up or shut up faggot.

im sorry this is neither the time or the place.

nesk stuff is looking good, i just dont like the highlights in a couple pieces or the fact that you connect your letters. really not bad though, keep it up and go bigger

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blue1.jpg
bump can some kids that know what theyre doing gimme some crits?

Gekz
03-04-2007, 09:20 AM
Trash how do you find time to do such elaborate pieces? Do you get paid for it? Or is that like "Legal Walls"?

Because it looks like it would take you hours to complete any of yours...

trashhh
03-04-2007, 09:25 AM
2 hours round abouts... get paid for it? I wishh&#33;&#33;&#33; Abandoned places my man, derelict houses etc

Stonk
03-04-2007, 10:04 AM
albert fish i really like it, just not so much the white highlights, if you could do it in the color in your blackbook that would be amazingly hot..

Sluts_r_us
03-04-2007, 10:28 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Mar 4 2007, 01:24 AM
Rusto Green apple?
green apple american accents :D:D

pez ss
03-04-2007, 11:03 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish+Mar 4 2007, 02:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Albert Fish @ Mar 4 2007, 02:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-pez ss@Mar 2 2007, 02:12 PM
my ass that style is far beyond me is this a joke.... etc etc
how are you gonna tell me i have no letter structure? those are simple letters that have been fattened and elongated in different parts, honestly i dont really care about your opinion but dont tell me to "hit the books" just because you dont like my style. i know i have letter structure. you cant deny letter structure my stuff is legible and i like it, the lines are sketchy because that was the third time ive ever painted. and i dont "get up" at all. whatever kid you really just dont know what youre talking about to be honest. you gave props to that "color" throw a couple pages back.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/fisher.jpg
tell me i dont have letter structure, tell me i have to "hit the books" lemme see your bookwork, post up or shut up faggot.

im sorry this is neither the time or the place.

nesk stuff is looking good, i just dont like the highlights in a couple pieces or the fact that you connect your letters. really not bad though, keep it up and go bigger

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blue1.jpg
bump can some kids that know what theyre doing gimme some crits? [/b][/quote]
fine man what ever if u want to battle fine im preatty much done with u, like i dont fell like continueing this for the next 10 pages . and i said to the guy befor i like the color in the fill preatty much it. man i hate people like u who cant take critisim and just bitch and bitch cause they think there the shit

pez ss
03-04-2007, 11:10 AM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 3 2007, 12:59 PM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....
wow trash that is niceeee one of the best things ive seen in the thread keep it up

Apple pie
03-04-2007, 11:43 AM
trash why u posting in the toy section

T45K
03-04-2007, 11:51 AM
I see letter structure up there..... The books look nice homie...
And TRASH..... Jesus, I think once before I said on here, I wish had your hands...... that shit&#39;s off FUCKING OFF THE HOOK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
Any crits on this throw????
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture369.jpg

Apple pie
03-04-2007, 12:15 PM
i like it task nice and simple:)

pez ss
03-04-2007, 12:22 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1691/bombpurplehazedu3.th.jpg (http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombpurplehazedu3.jpg)
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1843/bombgraygx6.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombgraygx6.jpg)
i really like this bomb i did. i like the first one is better any hoe what needs to be added removed crits....

pez ss
03-04-2007, 12:25 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Mar 4 2007, 01:22 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1691/bombpurplehazedu3.th.jpg (http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombpurplehazedu3.jpg)
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1843/bombgraygx6.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombgraygx6.jpg)
i really like this bomb i did. i like the first one is better any hoe what needs to be added removed crits....
whops wrong thread

Nosypainter
03-04-2007, 12:28 PM
Originally posted by MiNZ+Mar 3 2007, 01:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MiNZ @ Mar 3 2007, 01:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Mar 3 2007, 12:59 PM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....
get the fuck outta here go to the big boys [/b][/quote]
i agree...... <_< :P

escobar
03-04-2007, 01:02 PM
Trash - love it, thats probably the best peice ivee seen you do.. im not a fan of the colours but u make it work.. the only thing i dont like is the right side of the A.. it goes up too high or its too strait.. something just isnt right about it..

Task- looks good bro, i really like that fill, keep it up

Nosypainter
03-04-2007, 02:11 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Mar 4 2007, 11:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Mar 4 2007, 11:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Mar 4 2007, 01:24 AM
Rusto Green apple?
green apple american accents :D:D [/b][/quote]
that color is orgasmic

Gekz
03-04-2007, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 4 2007, 10:25 AM
2 hours round abouts... get paid for it? I wishh&#33;&#33;&#33; Abandoned places my man, derelict houses etc
And thats all Montana you use right? Darn, Where do you work to get that kind of money? lol

AteskOne
03-04-2007, 04:07 PM
or where do you steal from to get that kinda paint??...wow i really cant believe that kid just asked that.

BOFD
03-04-2007, 06:46 PM
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/489/bk2dg6.jpg
if it looks shaky, its cause i got spotted, cops got called, i had to jump and book it outta there

T45K
03-04-2007, 07:48 PM
I didnt paint...... But I caught a mop tag in burger kings drivethru on the red stripe that runs around the building theres a still running yellow mop tag hahahah.......

Billburg
03-04-2007, 08:13 PM
haha burger king, but you should get a closer picture of it so we can actually see it

FEN the HEN
03-04-2007, 08:16 PM
it looks like one of those throwups better appreciated from a distance

slEEt
03-04-2007, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Mar 4 2007, 09:16 PM
it looks like one of those throwups better appreciated from a distance
or better appreciated if it didnt exist.

Billburg
03-04-2007, 08:31 PM
haha Harsh :lol:

RemoZ
03-04-2007, 09:08 PM
http://a401.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/51/l_31dc69f523abca68f7520f678ae2cb88.jpg

capitol
03-04-2007, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by pez ss+Mar 4 2007, 12:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pez ss @ Mar 4 2007, 12:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Mar 3 2007, 12:59 PM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....
wow trash that is niceeee one of the best things ive seen in the thread keep it up [/b][/quote]
It looks pretty kick ass, although it looks photoshopped..i guess its just the fact that its such a clean wall.

capo93
03-04-2007, 10:47 PM
flicks of some ora throws tomorrow

Cut Throat Savage
03-04-2007, 11:16 PM
Trash, it&#39;s very typical, but it&#39;s not bad. Stick with this style and simples and over time it&#39;ll change on it own.

Skeam
03-05-2007, 03:20 AM
Originally posted by Skeam@Mar 4 2007, 01:25 AM
cheers fo the crits trashhh and slut and whoeva else critted me

Slut i love your throwy mate it looks dope this ones a tad sloppy on the outlinesand shit but its still dope.

did this today so pissed off about the white shine attempt in the letters, fuct it up so bad but i dont mind the sines on some of the corners of the letters. ahwell.

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5527/dscn0372ma4.jpg


this is me mates peice, did a linkup with 4 other people and yeh me and his are probably the 2 best.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5788/dscn0369fh3.jpg
bump coz i fucken can :D :D :D

dim
03-05-2007, 06:57 AM
the first one is sick i like it but if i were you i would use a skinnier cap for the highlights along the side of the letters much like the cap that you used on the second peice ut other than that shit looks clean good job

BAPKEB
03-05-2007, 12:12 PM
i like the LOWER one better but i think it would look cool if you gave the splashes around the piece a 3d effect too

RemoZ
03-05-2007, 12:52 PM
That lower is pretty nice, I really like the little sea creature charecter also.



I just found this shit. Its lthe first time I ever painted. HaHa shit is a good two years old.


http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/462/emo1reces8yhjd5.jpg

On.3
03-05-2007, 12:58 PM
Originally posted by On.3@Feb 25 2007, 01:27 PM
Heres a piece me and 1 of my crew did, killer spot on top of a swimming pool&#33;

http://www.freewebs.com/abcisaseasyas123/cume%20002.jpg
Any Crits on this please?

tactix
03-05-2007, 01:39 PM
Originally posted by slEEt@Mar 4 2007, 08:38 PM
LOL you idiot i cant believe you bombed burger king.
haha on the other hand he gets props for corporate destruction.

percoset fun
03-05-2007, 02:03 PM
fucked up my p real bad


percs

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percslyrcs.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percsc.jpg

tactix
03-05-2007, 02:19 PM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/tactix435/th_DSC03110.jpg (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/tactix435/DSC03110.jpg)

i put this up at the entrance to a tunnel where it was kinda hidden. i know it&#39;s sloppy. <_<
wal-mart paint + clogged tops = shitty art.

alera
03-05-2007, 05:40 PM
crappy paint is no excuse...
;)

whahappen?
03-05-2007, 05:45 PM
Originally posted by tactix@Mar 5 2007, 03:19 PM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/tactix435/th_DSC03110.jpg (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/tactix435/DSC03110.jpg)

i put this up at the entrance to a tunnel where it was kinda hidden. i know it&#39;s sloppy. <_<
wal-mart paint + clogged tops = shitty art.
shut
the
fuck
up
you suck the paint doesnt
the caps dont suck either
people stop making excuses it makes you seem even more toy than you are
unless the walls wet, has anti graffiti coating on it, or your caps split theres no excuse for being sloppy besides bad can control

ESKE one
03-05-2007, 05:45 PM
yea i agree wit alera is not the paint is the painter
stick to paper man or you&#39;ll have beef quick

C-money fresh!
03-05-2007, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by percoset fun@Mar 5 2007, 03:03 PM
fucked up my p real bad


percs

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percslyrcs.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percsc.jpg
change that p to make it flow a little bit more and that shit will look sexy as hell

To.The.Beat
03-06-2007, 12:47 AM
Originally posted by Skeam+Mar 5 2007, 04:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skeam @ Mar 5 2007, 04:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Mar 4 2007, 01:25 AM
cheers fo the crits trashhh and slut and whoeva else critted me

Slut i love your throwy mate it looks dope this ones a tad sloppy on the outlinesand shit but its still dope.

did this today so pissed off about the white shine attempt in the letters, fuct it up so bad but i dont mind the sines on some of the corners of the letters. ahwell.

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5527/dscn0372ma4.jpg


this is me mates peice, did a linkup with 4 other people and yeh me and his are probably the 2 best.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5788/dscn0369fh3.jpg
bump coz i fucken can :D :D :D [/b][/quote]
hey bro hahahaha

To.The.Beat
03-06-2007, 12:59 AM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m280/PanicBat/IMG_2362.jpg
whatever haha

CaMa
03-06-2007, 01:09 AM
Another one of my whack toy throws... (This is my 3rd throw)

I could do with some constructive crits, so fire away.

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/8571/0603070746pd1.jpg

http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/9293/0603071611uk2.jpg

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8850/0603071612sp1.jpg

NiL
03-06-2007, 01:26 AM
Stick to paper.

--TrAcE-->
03-06-2007, 01:27 AM
dude it would be a HELL of alot better if you didnt space your letters out and maybe use something other than a stock tip other than that it aint thatttt bad for third try.

CaMa
03-06-2007, 01:32 AM
Yeah I know what your saying man. I only spaced out my letters because it seems when I put them together, I make the other letters smaller and smaller....

Looks like I will stay to the paper ;)

Ume
03-06-2007, 01:33 AM
you still made them get smaller and smaller?

CaMa
03-06-2007, 01:36 AM
Originally posted by Ume@Mar 6 2007, 02:33 AM
you still made them get smaller and smaller?
Yeah.... Only when I spray but. When I do it on paper it&#39;s fine. Letters come perfect. I spray and it goes fucked. So I don&#39;t understand how people can say "stick to paper" when the only way I will improve my can handling and control is spraying up. Kind of Ironic but Im very open to suggestions.

Loz emlintio
03-06-2007, 01:37 AM
Yo, some dudes tell me dis...
If ur a toy, and u [U]have to write simple cus that&#39;s what everyone ses yer?

Does that mean we can tag shitty block letters aswell?
cus if so, i already dun dat, so fuck yall

Ume
03-06-2007, 01:58 AM
Originally posted by CaMa+Mar 6 2007, 03:36 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (CaMa @ Mar 6 2007, 03:36 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ume@Mar 6 2007, 02:33 AM
you still made them get smaller and smaller?
Yeah.... Only when I spray but. When I do it on paper it&#39;s fine. Letters come perfect. I spray and it goes fucked. So I don&#39;t understand how people can say "stick to paper" when the only way I will improve my can handling and control is spraying up. Kind of Ironic but Im very open to suggestions. [/b][/quote]
yeah but when you do paint, don&#39;t be doing this really crazy spots (yours somewhat looks like a spot like that) find a quiet place where not many people go, like under bridgess to practice painting, just so you can take your time and paint during the day.


Yo, some dudes tell me dis...
If ur a toy, and u [U]have to write simple cus that&#39;s what everyone ses yer?

Does that mean we can tag shitty block letters aswell?
cus if so, i already dun dat, so fuck yall
if i understood what you said, i&#39;d say something a lot more then this.

EsKoNeR!!
03-06-2007, 02:03 AM
Originally posted by capitol+Mar 4 2007, 10:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (capitol @ Mar 4 2007, 10:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by pez ss@Mar 4 2007, 12:10 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Mar 3 2007, 12:59 PM
Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA40921.jpg

a we piece i popped out today....
wow trash that is niceeee one of the best things ive seen in the thread keep it up
It looks pretty kick ass, although it looks photoshopped..i guess its just the fact that its such a clean wall. [/b][/quote]
some one said to this why is he in here. the reason is because even though the can control might be nice, the colors may pop, his structure is very off. the way the curve is uneven distracts the eyes from the piece itsself. The letters have to many random juts n such. and the overall structure is just not up to par quite yet. Once you get your structure donw though, you will be killer

CaMa
03-06-2007, 02:10 AM
Originally posted by Ume+Mar 6 2007, 02:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ume @ Mar 6 2007, 02:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by CaMa@Mar 6 2007, 03:36 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Ume@Mar 6 2007, 02:33 AM
you still made them get smaller and smaller?
Yeah.... Only when I spray but. When I do it on paper it&#39;s fine. Letters come perfect. I spray and it goes fucked. So I don&#39;t understand how people can say "stick to paper" when the only way I will improve my can handling and control is spraying up. Kind of Ironic but Im very open to suggestions.
yeah but when you do paint, don&#39;t be doing this really crazy spots (yours somewhat looks like a spot like that) find a quiet place where not many people go, like under bridgess to practice painting, just so you can take your time and paint during the day. [/b][/quote]
I know what your saying bruz. But this wall is a school wall in a pretty quiet area. The occasional throwie and tag goes up, but give it a week and it&#39;s buffed. So I threw mine up there. You know what I&#39;m saying? So I guess it is a real quiet spot in my area.

nero122
03-06-2007, 07:10 AM
uhhh less talk more pieces:@:@:@:@:@:@

trashhh
03-06-2007, 12:13 PM
Fuck my piece are always bumped like 3425435453 times

And thanks esk your the only person who hasnt said something like &#39;Thats fuckin dope&#39; or &#39;sick man&#39; or &#39;ill&#33;&#39; thanks for the proper advice, ill work on that

NICCSACC
03-06-2007, 12:28 PM
i was gonna say that shit looked dope.

N:Craze
03-06-2007, 01:22 PM
trash i thnk that the weakest parts of the structure are the A and the H

IMO if you connected the top of the a it would look more like an an and less like a fucked u as far as the h the only thing there that bugs me is then little part that goes under the horizontal part of the h.

tactix
03-06-2007, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Mar 5 2007, 06:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Mar 5 2007, 06:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tactix@Mar 5 2007, 03:19 PM
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/tactix435/th_DSC03110.jpg (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s67/tactix435/DSC03110.jpg)

i put this up at the entrance to a tunnel where it was kinda hidden. i know it&#39;s sloppy. <_<
wal-mart paint + clogged tops = shitty art.
shut
the
fuck
up
you suck the paint doesnt
the caps dont suck either
people stop making excuses it makes you seem even more toy than you are
unless the walls wet, has anti graffiti coating on it, or your caps split theres no excuse for being sloppy besides bad can control [/b][/quote]
yes, i lack can control and no the medium isn&#39;t the problem.
i&#39;m not looking for smart ass commentary, just helpful suggestions.

ESKE one
03-06-2007, 06:50 PM
simples dude stick to simple and the paper thats all just lay of the paint for alittle

D Snif
03-06-2007, 06:56 PM
Don&#39;t fire back when you&#39;re not right tactix, your can control is awful, the letter&#39;s are even good, i dont know why your wasting money on paint, go hit the books.

mattFOO
03-06-2007, 07:00 PM
what i like to do is lay down the shapes i want my letters to take in my base coat color.. then i fill it in ... add the outline/3d or any other affect... i found this way i can customize the shape and flow of my art... and it come out lookin hella clean.

pez ss
03-06-2007, 07:32 PM
thats funny i told someone to &#39;&#39;hit the books&#39;&#39; and they wouldnt stop bitching about it. i wonder if this person will do the same

tactix
03-07-2007, 12:16 AM
Originally posted by D Snif@Mar 6 2007, 07:56 PM
Don&#39;t fire back when you&#39;re not right tactix, your can control is awful, the letter&#39;s are even good, i dont know why your wasting money on paint, go hit the books.
when i&#39;m "not right" about what? i admitted that it was sloppy as fuck. it&#39;s also one of the first things i&#39;ve done. i just think it&#39;s petty to be rude instead of giving helpful advice.

Skeam
03-07-2007, 03:17 AM
you admited it was sloppy as fuck and u blamed it on the shit paint and the clogged caps... that aint no excuse fir it to be sloppy buddy.

Skesh
03-07-2007, 09:20 AM
Originally posted by slEEt@Mar 5 2007, 02:38 AM
LOL you idiot i cant believe you bombed burger king.
Wtf is wrong about that?

noam12
03-07-2007, 10:17 AM
burger king is a safe haven for hobos, there gunna get pissed and throw water bottles at you know. greeat job <_< :lol:

trash ur letters seem off for some reason, i dunno i think it might just be me

molotow_15
03-07-2007, 11:48 AM
this crew im joining in mha area

http://file027a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624918479b540939878l.jpg
http://file027a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624918026b666430541l.jpg
http://file027a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624917600b81512986l.jpg
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http://file025a.bebo.com/7/large/2007/02/07/11/357848719a3523293501b350190609l.jpg
http://file028a.bebo.com/14/large/2007/02/01/10/357848719a3439942592b235938919l.jpg

molotow_15
03-07-2007, 11:49 AM
http://file017a.bebo.com/10/large/2006/12/13/00/357848719a2829715591b359792943l.jpg
http://file017a.bebo.com/11/large/2006/09/03/14/357848719a1935625816b778061435l.jpg
london road tunnel
http://file016a.bebo.com/12/large/2006/09/03/14/357848719a1935620556b379043704l.jpg
http://file016a.bebo.com/12/large/2006/09/03/14/357848719a1935620793b72478196l.jpg
http://file030a.bebo.com/4/large/2007/03/03/18/357848719a3757768441b928468175l.jpg
http://file027a.bebo.com/1/large/2007/03/03/17/357848719a3757752126b919993942l.jpg
http://file023a.bebo.com/7/large/2007/02/17/21/19933587a3647397951b633134634l.jpg
http://file022a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/17/21/19933587a3647491417b626261440l.jpg
http://file022a.bebo.com/14/large/2007/02/17/19/357848719a3646414339b325186635l.jpg
http://file022a.bebo.com/14/large/2007/02/17/19/357848719a3646413758b918059572l.jpg
http://file022a.bebo.com/14/large/2007/02/17/19/357848719a3646412410b327982110l.jpg
http://file023a.bebo.com/15/large/2007/02/17/18/357848719a3646214643b730136021l.jpg

2KoS
03-07-2007, 11:57 AM
Dont join them, theyre too good for you.

molotow_15
03-07-2007, 12:10 PM
heh some of my stuff is allready in there when i went with them
last weeks outing
new fliks on saturday

~MeRcI-oNe~
03-07-2007, 02:51 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@Mar 7 2007, 12:48 PM
this crew im joining in mha area

http://file027a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624918479b540939878l.jpg
http://file027a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624918026b666430541l.jpg
http://file027a.bebo.com/3/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624917600b81512986l.jpg
http://file029a.bebo.com/15/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624891223b826808396l.jpg
http://file029a.bebo.com/15/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624890790b383150464l.jpg
http://file029a.bebo.com/15/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624890286b954976597l.jpg
http://file029a.bebo.com/15/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624889772b880170079l.jpg
http://file029a.bebo.com/15/large/2007/02/14/23/357848719a3624889309b565519108l.jpg
http://file029a.bebo.com/9/large/2007/02/11/21/357848719a3582841762b345960204l.jpg
http://file025a.bebo.com/7/large/2007/02/07/11/357848719a3523293501b350190609l.jpg
http://file028a.bebo.com/14/large/2007/02/01/10/357848719a3439942592b235938919l.jpg
Damn thats some tight work. I like the character you did there....where was this at? a skate park?

molotow_15
03-07-2007, 04:19 PM
yeah at a skatepark

escobar
03-07-2007, 06:28 PM
tell whoever did that not to write SAKE

Save
03-07-2007, 07:03 PM
Jesus, ppl can write what ever the fuck they want... every names been used... if it was a king then who cares cuz its gonna be obvious when some toy is throwing that shit up, plus geographical locations make all the difference... AREA CODES...

capo93
03-07-2007, 08:41 PM
dosent matter if your writing sake well hes still tearing shit up everywhere you should have som respect for the fucking name area codes dont fcking matter

d_g
03-07-2007, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by capo93@Mar 8 2007, 02:41 PM
dosent matter if your writing sake well hes still tearing shit up everywhere you should have som respect for the fucking name area codes dont fcking matter
Yeah.

It&#39;s all about respect.

elcs
03-08-2007, 12:19 AM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 6 2007, 01:13 PM
Fuck my piece are always bumped like 3425435453 times

And thanks esk your the only person who hasnt said something like &#39;Thats fuckin dope&#39; or &#39;sick man&#39; or &#39;ill&#33;&#39; thanks for the proper advice, ill work on that
trash, your stuff is real nice. you can piece way better than i can. your can control is sick. but your throws are down right terrible, and your letter structure on your pieces is pretty much non existant. you have way too many unnecessary points and lines and everything like that. work on that, a lot.