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Mace
04-06-2007, 03:50 PM
mask:
lovin it cept for the second M looks kinda sketch

critz

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u308/Blockart/01-04-07_1544.jpg

pez ss
04-06-2007, 04:49 PM
acke to make ur letters look more like the letter ur trying to do do this and allso with the e make it more rounded like this http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7872/0104071544cc4.th.jpg (http://img122.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0104071544cc4.jpg) hers one of mine i did on my canvas a couple days back http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4233/simpleawj4.th.jpg (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=simpleawj4.jpg) kind fucked up on the right side there. critzz

molotow_15
04-06-2007, 04:51 PM
put your own crits into your own work

sheist
04-06-2007, 05:25 PM
Elcs definitely put holes in the A and R because its making your C look like an E when you dont

http://i14.tinypic.com/2med6bn.jpg

sloppy work from 30 minutes ago in a neighborhood with kids staring at me on their bikes

14nick
04-06-2007, 05:27 PM
^^ resize the image..

fuckthatgame
04-06-2007, 05:28 PM
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4659/p1010058ft4.jpg
we built a wall! haha 16 foot wide, 8 foot tall

Mace
04-06-2007, 05:48 PM
i jus primered my wall so ill post my "corrections" soon

virtuallynameless
04-06-2007, 06:21 PM
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1175897241_f.jpg

messy one from today

0000
04-06-2007, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by sheist@Apr 6 2007, 04:25 PM
Elcs definitely put holes in the A and R because its making your C look like an E when you dont

http://i14.tinypic.com/2med6bn.jpg

sloppy work from 30 minutes ago in a neighborhood with kids staring at me on their bikes
thats pretty fresh

pez ss
04-06-2007, 08:14 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@Apr 6 2007, 03:51 PM
put your own crits into your own work
will do

slEEt
04-06-2007, 10:42 PM
Someone did it.

Kyrlon + Thick brick = Terrible.

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4464/img2337dm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/8951/img2339hj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6996/img2338fi0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7309/img2346na6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mace
04-06-2007, 10:47 PM
looks pretty gud cept for the bottom two gud stuff man

umop 3pisdn
04-06-2007, 11:42 PM
Damn that looks like a chill ass spot

elcs
04-07-2007, 12:42 AM
its not the krylon or the wall. its you. sketch more before you continue painting. you dont even understand drop shadow or 3d. you can learn that on paper. painting is a waste at the stage you are at right now.

enigmatic
04-07-2007, 01:06 AM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Apr 6 2007, 09:09 AM
dude, you c looks like a g.....u ever get into that throwie i gave a long long time ago?
i dont remember you ever sendin me a throw.

hungr
04-07-2007, 01:10 AM
dont know where i should post this..i figured this would be a good place
i was dubbed "the sign guy" at work..so i make the sign and decided to make it look crisp.. i just hope people can read it >_<
one side
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00149.jpg
other side
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00148.jpg

sheist
04-07-2007, 01:24 AM
Originally posted by sheist@Apr 6 2007, 04:25 PM
Elcs definitely put holes in the A and R because its making your C look like an E when you dont

http://i14.tinypic.com/2med6bn.jpg

sloppy work from 30 minutes ago in a neighborhood with kids staring at me on their bikes
bump for more crits

sank one
04-07-2007, 01:24 AM
thats real sick man. i bet no one can read it :lol:

darthbaker
04-07-2007, 01:46 AM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8840/zealwallmj2.jpg

quick shit

trashhh
04-07-2007, 07:04 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/musgrave.jpg

new piece


And rend yer a we dick lmao thot this forum was ballss :P
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1175897241_f.jpg
so ill &#39;bump&#39; your piece to the next page

N:Craze
04-07-2007, 09:16 AM
ill.

elcs
04-07-2007, 10:53 AM
Originally posted by slEEt+Apr 7 2007, 01:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (slEEt @ Apr 7 2007, 01:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-elcs@Apr 6 2007, 11:42 PM
its not the krylon or the wall. its you. sketch more before you continue painting. you dont even understand drop shadow or 3d. you can learn that on paper. painting is a waste at the stage you are at right now.
Um, i&#39;m pretty sure when I spray the wall and I can watch the paint just absorb and cover nothing, the paint is terrible.

Painting isn&#39;t a waste, it gives me even more motive to improve. [/b][/quote]
no. wrong. that does not make the paint terrible. maybe you used gloss instead of flat, or maybe the wall just sucked the paint in, but people talk shit on Krylon like its a 96 cent can. stop with the excuses. your graff needs work, dont blame it on something else. work on a drop shadow, move the can faster on your outlines to clean it up, and dont make your letters so pointy. that said...you can develop most of that stuff on paper. thats why i said its a waste to paint when you dont even understand the concept of a drop shadow. if you rack your paint, then i guess its ok...but if you buy your paint like most beginners, then if i were you i&#39;d lay off the painting until i got better.





and trash, thats the best piece ive seen from you for sure. the letter structure has improved a ton, and you removed most of the unnecessary add-on&#39;s. keep it up. that said...i remember a few throws you posted a while back that were terrible. your piecing is great for somebody at your stage, but if you arnt well rounded as a writer, then you&#39;re not a good writer. you need to work like mad on your throws. do some simples or straight letters or something. if you arnt good or at least have a good grasp at all the elements of graff, then you are still toy. keep it up and work like mad on throwies.

hungr
04-07-2007, 11:53 AM
try a different wall..u can use shitty paint but u need the proper wall..usually red brick eats paint, and some concrete walls.. ghetto paint is bad and will fade more than montanas/beltons due to the large difference in pigment ..but shitty paint still works good if u have teh right wall

elcs
04-07-2007, 12:02 PM
Originally posted by slEEt+Apr 7 2007, 10:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (slEEt &#064; Apr 7 2007, 10:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-elcs@Apr 7 2007, 09:53 AM
no. wrong. that does not make the paint terrible. maybe you used gloss instead of flat, or maybe the wall just sucked the paint in, but people talk shit on Krylon like its a 96 cent can. stop with the excuses. your graff needs work, dont blame it on something else. work on a drop shadow, move the can faster on your outlines to clean it up, and dont make your letters so pointy. that said...you can develop most of that stuff on paper. thats why i said its a waste to paint when you dont even understand the concept of a drop shadow. if you rack your paint, then i guess its ok...but if you buy your paint like most beginners, then if i were you i&#39;d lay off the painting until i got better.





and trash, thats the best piece ive seen from you for sure. the letter structure has improved a ton, and you removed most of the unnecessary add-on&#39;s. keep it up. that said...i remember a few throws you posted a while back that were terrible. your piecing is great for somebody at your stage, but if you arnt well rounded as a writer, then you&#39;re not a good writer. you need to work like mad on your throws. do some simples or straight letters or something. if you arnt good or at least have a good grasp at all the elements of graff, then you are still toy. keep it up and work like mad on throwies.
How does that not make the paint terrible? I spray Kyrlon and I can watch it fade away. I spray rusto and it stays. I wasn&#39;t using that as an excuse for my graffiti, yes I know it needs work. I was just saying...I think Kyrlon fucking sucks.

I&#39;ve never bought a can of paint, i&#39;d never waste the money so fuck being like "most beginners."

And why do you keep saying I don&#39;t understand the concept of a drop shadow? [/b][/quote]
it was the wall dude. yes, rusto is better than krylon so it might not have absorbed like the krylon did. but thats beside the point. the point is it wasnt the paints fault. it was a shitty wall. ive painted with krylon where it acts like total shit, and sometimes on a different type of wall it looks as good as rusto. ive painted shitty walls with rusto and it sucked it in, but also painted some good walls. it wasnt the paint. you need to learn that.

and i keep saying that you dont understand the concept of a drop shadow because you have your S filled in around, but dont have a shadow on anything else. it makes it look off, like its not done or just done poorly. also, drop shadows pretty much make any throw you do look better. it makes it look more full and pop more. if you understood how it worked i figured you would have either not filled in around your S and left it with just the fill and outline...or if you did fill in around the S, put a shadow on the rest of the throw. With just the S filled in around, it looks terrible. thats why i said you didnt understand it. because you didnt execute it correctly.

anarchy
04-07-2007, 12:29 PM
Trash that top piece is lookin doope.

elcs
04-07-2007, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by slEEt@Apr 7 2007, 11:25 AM
Are you serious? I said it was the wall in my first post and you said, it&#39;s not the paint, it&#39;s not the wall, it&#39;s you. So you need to get your mind straight before you talking. You need to learn that.

Just because I didn&#39;t use a drop shadow doesn&#39;t mean I don&#39;t understand the concept. I never used one and I don&#39;t know which S your talking about.
well...it is you...but if you had to explain the paint being absorbed it would be the wall, and not the paint. maybe you misunderstood my point.

you said you never have used a drop shadow, id suggest doing that because it just makes it look better. the first three throws you posted have the S i was referring to. and cool you jets kid.

sky 5
04-07-2007, 02:36 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Apr 7 2007, 06:04 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/musgrave.jpg

new piece



daaammmn&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; i wanna be like trash :D :D

_ESKER_
04-07-2007, 04:32 PM
heres some of my shit before it go too damn cold

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/Picture123.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/eskerresize.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/Picture134-1.jpg

YarHarHar
04-07-2007, 07:23 PM
some oldies

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0833.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0858.jpg

RemoZ
04-07-2007, 08:32 PM
Both dope, First looks straight old school and the bomb is simple and nice. I&#39;d stick it, the bomb

Fluffy Bunnies
04-08-2007, 01:04 AM
Bombing&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me004.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me008.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me006.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me012.jpg

inspired by cezr cuz gangs are starting to be a problem
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me011.jpg

Aven
04-08-2007, 03:08 AM
Originally posted by _ESKER_@Apr 7 2007, 03:32 PM
heres some of my shit before it go too damn cold


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/eskerresize.jpg
i really like that.....alot

mask_cib
04-08-2007, 01:46 PM
esker im really likin that black and white one shit loooks good keep it up

Geo
04-08-2007, 02:09 PM
Way to get your message out fluffy, keep it up&#33;

moltov
04-08-2007, 06:19 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00605.jpg

iwritebasic
04-08-2007, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by _ESKER_@Apr 7 2007, 03:32 PM
heres some of my shit before it go too damn cold

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/Picture123.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/eskerresize.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/Picture134-1.jpg
i really really like all of this


hahaah that one dude writes niga

FEN the HEN
04-08-2007, 07:21 PM
its noga

Jroc1993
04-08-2007, 07:28 PM
ya its noga i thought it was niga too but i see it now

Sluts_r_us
04-08-2007, 08:19 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/whitenorangethrow.jpg

flclnaruto1213
04-08-2007, 08:21 PM
cleaner, more solid/opaque fill and itd be sick as hell

Sluts_r_us
04-08-2007, 08:22 PM
only had 1 can of white between 2 people...n it wasnt a full can...so i did a quick fill so i could save some for the other person

flclnaruto1213
04-08-2007, 08:43 PM
in that case its fire

Jroc1993
04-08-2007, 08:54 PM
did u use caramel montana?

Sluts_r_us
04-08-2007, 11:39 PM
no, but it was another shade of orange montana..ill find out later

Jroc1993
04-08-2007, 11:50 PM
heres a throw i did in caramel
http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/7523/morneone3uf2.th.jpg (http://img464.imageshack.us/my.php?image=morneone3uf2.jpg)
sorry for the bad pic
i fucked the lines, it was raining at 230 in the moring and i was high (first time)

Fixion
04-09-2007, 02:13 AM
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/4571/0331071805mt2.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6580/0331071817dj9.jpg
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/4200/0407071630qn6.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2064/0407071703up9.jpg
painted stuff in the backyard.

NICCSACC
04-09-2007, 02:14 AM
Originally posted by Fixion@Apr 9 2007, 01:13 AM
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/4571/0331071805mt2.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6580/0331071817dj9.jpg
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/4200/0407071630qn6.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2064/0407071703up9.jpg
painted stuff in the backyard.
your can control is bad. hope you racked those cans.

Fixion
04-09-2007, 02:19 AM
any advice on can control would be nice. thanks in advanced.

DJLotus
04-09-2007, 02:19 AM
your fill ins look like you went to town with a fucking crayon. try to keep all your fill lines going in one direction so it doesnt look like a 5 year old did it.

Fixion
04-09-2007, 02:22 AM
Originally posted by DJLotus@Apr 9 2007, 01:19 AM
your fill ins look like you went to town with a fucking crayon. try to keep all your fill lines going in one direction so it doesnt look like a 5 year old did it.
i do keep my fill ins in one direction. It&#39;s just the previous painted stuff shows up. They&#39;re just dusty. I guess that&#39;s the word.

virtuallynameless
04-09-2007, 05:46 AM
Originally posted by virtuallynameless@Apr 6 2007, 05:21 PM
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1175897241_f.jpg

messy one from today
ne crits?

Torrent
04-09-2007, 10:20 AM
virtuallynameless: As for letter structure, work on the flow of the piece. It seems to get jammed up after the E. Work on your final halo so it has no drips. Also fill in your 3D completely. Don&#39;t use montana paint at this point. If you drip and can&#39;t fill in properly with montana, you need to practice with shit brands until you got can control down.

REMOoneSF
04-09-2007, 03:49 PM
uhhh two letter throwie runnin low on paint so just did a hollow

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/4526/432089648a439499ddbat4.jpg

fuckthatgame
04-09-2007, 03:49 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/6905/p1010061ae0.jpg
for a local business

REMOoneSF
04-09-2007, 04:24 PM
i like it, nice, simple and clean

Skesh
04-09-2007, 04:42 PM
Originally posted by iwritebasic+Apr 8 2007, 11:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (iwritebasic &#064; Apr 8 2007, 11:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_ESKER_@Apr 7 2007, 03:32 PM
heres some of my shit before it go too damn cold

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/sr20strawberry/graff/Picture123.jpg



hahaah that one dude writes niga [/b][/quote]
he&#39;s called DUF on this forum, thats what he used to write

Jugga
04-09-2007, 05:49 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Apr 9 2007, 01:13 AM
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/4571/0331071805mt2.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6580/0331071817dj9.jpg
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/4200/0407071630qn6.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2064/0407071703up9.jpg
painted stuff in the backyard.
seems like you&#39;re filling like a mad man...
fill in one direction for cleanliness and a fuller fill...
like, if you start filling by moving the can left to right, there&#39;s no reason to go up and down and in circles and shit...





here&#39;s some shit me and my dogs did the other day...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/andrewburnsjuggah.jpg
andrew, burns, jugga

Fixion
04-09-2007, 06:11 PM
The fills are just dusty. Previous stuff shows up. Anymore advice?

Jugga. I love that wall.

fuckthatgame. I like that. Good luck on doin that for the business.

virtuallynameless. Practice with less expensive paint for now.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-09-2007, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 8 2007, 12:04 AM
Bombing&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me004.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me008.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me006.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me012.jpg

inspired by cezr cuz gangs are starting to be a problem
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me011.jpg
Bizumped... just wanna see more critz cuz I only got one :(

Fixion
04-09-2007, 07:06 PM
Fluffy Bunnies. That&#39;s nice. On the last one, the drop shadow is off on the "NOT".

Jugga
04-09-2007, 07:23 PM
Originally posted by Jugga@Apr 9 2007, 04:49 PM
[QUOTE=Apr 9 2007, 01:13 AM]
here&#39;s some shit me and my dogs did the other day...

[img]http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/andrewburnsjuggah.jpg
andrew, burns, jugga
Bump to new page...





fluffy bunnies:
the throwy is pretty nice,
the fill on the thrid picture is nice and clean...

if it&#39;s a chill spot you should worry more about cleaning shit up,
like the drips on the second picture...
and the T in "not" has extra shadow on the right..
other than that, keep wrecking...
I like it...

elcs
04-09-2007, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies+Apr 9 2007, 05:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fluffy Bunnies @ Apr 9 2007, 05:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 8 2007, 12:04 AM
Bombing&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me004.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me008.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me006.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me012.jpg

inspired by cezr cuz gangs are starting to be a problem
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/me011.jpg
Bizumped... just wanna see more critz cuz I only got one :( [/b][/quote]
its not bombing if you painting under a chill bridge spot during the day...

work on sketching more before you keep painting. you can control is decent enough for now. get better stuff before you keep going out.


Jugga, those karaks on that wall are pretty good but the graff is terrible.

Jugga
04-09-2007, 08:06 PM
naw, yeah...
that&#39;s my dog&#39;s second time painting...
I&#39;m actually suprised the fill he did on it came out so clean,
but the letters are pretty shit...

REMOoneSF
04-09-2007, 08:32 PM
i was nervous and it turned out shitty

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/703/4179630507941a64e36sf1.jpg

Jugga
04-09-2007, 08:47 PM
the letters are pretty dope, though...
I like it...

only thing is that you missed the shadow in the middle of the R...

dizzle_d
04-09-2007, 08:49 PM
everything on this page is fresshhhhhh

NICCSACC
04-09-2007, 08:54 PM
Originally posted by REMOoneSF@Apr 9 2007, 07:32 PM
i was nervous and it turned out shitty

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/703/4179630507941a64e36sf1.jpg
those letters are sub par at best. fill first then outlibne thwen forcefeild.

REMOoneSF
04-09-2007, 09:00 PM
thats why we&#39;re in the toy forums. thanks i&#39;ll give it a try but that throw was way back like 5 months ago or something so yeah

Creepface
04-09-2007, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Apr 9 2007, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Apr 9 2007, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-REMOoneSF@Apr 9 2007, 07:32 PM
i was nervous and it turned out shitty

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/703/4179630507941a64e36sf1.jpg
those letters are sub par at best. fill first then outlibne thwen forcefeild. [/b][/quote]
he didnt even use a fill....
but yeah, letters are a bit off.

KAL
04-09-2007, 10:22 PM
^u dont always have to use a fill. because in a heated spot like that u may not have time for one
practice
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/573/practiceue5.jpg

REMOoneSF
04-09-2007, 10:23 PM
yup and we have names for those&#33; we call them hollows

sank one
04-09-2007, 10:31 PM
remo - your throw looks good, just gotta clean it up.

also stop posting so fuckin much. you joined today and you already have 30 posts....

tasty
04-09-2007, 11:07 PM
remo - that thow is pretty sick but it looks like you were drunkor something hahaha, try and clean it up.

kal- fix your L it looks kinda like a 2 or Z

heres some bombs i did this weekend...
crits?

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0321.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0331.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0351.jpg

and my new sketch for the throw.. haha
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0381-1.jpg

Diostah
04-09-2007, 11:13 PM
Originally posted by Diostah@Apr 5 2007, 07:32 PM
Heres some of my stuff
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/acdc123metal/0405071341d.jpg
(Scraps ^^^^)
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/acdc123metal/0405071340b.jpg[IMG]
[img]http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/acdc123metal/0401071214b-1.jpg
Ran out of paint^^^

What do u think?
No crits on this either? :o

tasty
04-09-2007, 11:30 PM
wheres your crits?

KAL
04-09-2007, 11:35 PM
i dont know if u have, but give crits to others first.
work on ur shadow a bit more because in the first one u didnt put it in the inside of the D (picture in your head light coming from a specific direction causing the positioning of the shadow). lose the extension on the s

tasty
04-10-2007, 12:16 AM
shit

tasty
04-10-2007, 12:16 AM
Originally posted by tasty@Apr 9 2007, 10:07 PM
remo - that thow is pretty sick but it looks like you were drunkor something hahaha, try and clean it up.

kal- fix your L it looks kinda like a 2 or Z

heres some bombs i did this weekend...
crits?

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0321.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0331.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0351.jpg

and my new sketch for the throw.. haha
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Image0381-1.jpg
bompppppppppppppppppppbump

beefgerky
04-10-2007, 12:19 AM
why the fuck would you bump that?
its about 2 posts up, and its wack.

tasty
04-10-2007, 12:21 AM
cause the tard posted his shit below me didntcri then got crits.. and my shit is gona not be crited once again.

FEN the HEN
04-10-2007, 12:39 AM
quit saying "crits"

NiL
04-10-2007, 01:19 AM
Heres some crits both stick to paper and get decnt on there before you go painting and if you need to paint so bad destroy your own brick building or fence..

Volume_one_
04-10-2007, 01:26 AM
Originally posted by Diostah+Apr 9 2007, 10:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Diostah @ Apr 9 2007, 10:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Diostah@Apr 5 2007, 07:32 PM
Heres some of my stuff
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/acdc123metal/0405071341d.jpg
(Scraps ^^^^)
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/acdc123metal/0405071340b.jpg[IMG]
[IMG]http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/acdc123metal/0401071214b-1.jpg
Ran out of paint^^^

What do u think?
No crits on this either? :o [/b][/quote]
alright man i give some crites on that secound throw i say ditch that droping in word 3d effect cus its wack I mean Its origina and but the only reson you dont see anyone using it is because its kinda hard to do and it always looks(my opinion) and your other one isnt very good but its better than the other just keep sketchin and painting

AbYSS~>
04-10-2007, 01:39 AM
My first "bombs " or not throw ups..ill get my throw ups once i figure out how to send pics off my phone. These were done in my youth room(church room for highschool) They asked me to do the room with one side grace the other truth..im totally new at this but they bought me all the paint so i did my best and yeah i used tape for grace but i drew them out with chalk first lmk what u think. Obvioulsy not done. I used krylon.
Grace...far from being done.
http://aycu08.webshots.com/image/14167/2002209952654110615_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002209952654110615)

Truth..still not complete.
http://aycu35.webshots.com/image/13434/2002246069817353225_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2002246069817353225)

Fixion
04-10-2007, 02:22 AM
practice on paper first. You have horrible letter structure. Go to the New to Graff topic.

Kayone707
04-10-2007, 03:19 AM
ya man. hit the books for a lil while

Albert Fish
04-10-2007, 03:55 AM
some throws from today:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cehollows.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cebeef.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cheuhollow.jpg

and i know im a toy calling another toy a toy in that one flick, but i wanted to sound angry haha. don&#39;t take it seriously.

Ume
04-10-2007, 04:48 AM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6261/hpim1089cf9.jpg
Happy Easter, Bitches.

d_g
04-10-2007, 07:43 AM
Hahah does that say &#39;Cope&#39; above your piece?

karmatikal
04-10-2007, 09:25 AM
ume - those letters kinda suck but the fill is nice, would have looked better with just straight letters

tasty - hit the books for awhile, the throw is ugly

cheu - not bad but i don&#39;t really like those tongue things coming out of your letters


recent sloppy hollow
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2007_0405Image0003.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
04-10-2007, 10:58 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Apr 10 2007, 02:55 AM
some throws from today:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cehollows.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cebeef.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cheuhollow.jpg

and i know im a toy calling another toy a toy in that one flick, but i wanted to sound angry haha. don&#39;t take it seriously.
ur BBok shit was killin it, but not so much these... work on some can control and practice ur speed.... like do it as fast as you can... like a crackhead in the olympics.

JackJill
04-10-2007, 11:47 AM
d_g- Nope, Core

karmatikal- I was trying a new letter structure since the old one really ain&#39;t workin out for me. but thanks for the compliment


*NOTE: I&#39;m not UME&#33;&#33; Bastard forgot to sign out. This is JackJill.

leaks
04-10-2007, 12:23 PM
hey yall long time no see which one of my buddies has been stomping lately?

Albert Fish
04-10-2007, 01:16 PM
yeah well i need to work on painting my throw, and my speed is fine. you werent there when i painted hah idk what speed has to do with anything.
heres a simple i also painted that day, painting while sitting down sucks, whatever the c is too big.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cheu4.jpg

Skesh
04-10-2007, 01:16 PM
Originally posted by karmatikal@Apr 10 2007, 02:25 PM
ume - those letters kinda suck but the fill is nice, would have looked better with just straight letters

tasty - hit the books for awhile, the throw is ugly

cheu - not bad but i don&#39;t really like those tongue things coming out of your letters


recent sloppy hollow
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2007_0405Image0003.jpg
Ey what caps and cans did you use for the black outline?

karmatikal
04-10-2007, 01:23 PM
krylon flat black, krylon bahama blue and german thins

sky 5
04-10-2007, 01:58 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/4189/1242436fj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some quik random backyard bulshitz . .

iwritebasic
04-10-2007, 02:12 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Apr 10 2007, 12:16 PM
yeah well i need to work on painting my throw, and my speed is fine. you werent there when i painted hah idk what speed has to do with anything.
heres a simple i also painted that day, painting while sitting down sucks, whatever the c is too big.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cheu4.jpg
take out the blue lines and ur good to go

Albert Fish
04-10-2007, 02:14 PM
i wouldnt exactly consider it good to go after that, my c came out mad ugly, but thanks for the input.

HuntingLOLs
04-10-2007, 02:24 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Apr 10 2007, 01:14 PM
i wouldnt exactly consider it good to go after that, my c came out mad ugly, but thanks for the input.
not a clean throw, but do a more solid aura, that light yellow thing there isnt covered well on that wall so you can see how you went back and forth on the aura (in the c) which makes it look really poor. details like that do ALOT to throw/pieces

Zealot
04-10-2007, 02:42 PM
Originally posted by iwritebasic+Apr 10 2007, 02:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (iwritebasic &#064; Apr 10 2007, 02:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-Albert Fish@Apr 10 2007, 12:16 PM
yeah well i need to work on painting my throw, and my speed is fine. you werent there when i painted hah idk what speed has to do with anything.
heres a simple i also painted that day, painting while sitting down sucks, whatever the c is too big.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/flicks/cheu4.jpg
take out the blue lines and ur good to go[/b][/quote]
No no no.. highlights are a good thing. You just need to learn to do em properly.

Heres a little tutorial.. they key is to get them looking crisp.. preferably without having to cut them.
For highlights use a NY fat or even a thin. Start your highlight by holding the can farther away from the wall to get a little fatter spray (although make sure the line is still crisp) and the move closer to the wall throughout the highlight ending it by releasing the cap when it hits the wall.

example. Make sure your hand moves in a smooth motion. Once you master it looks dope. Thanks to Dehs CME for the inspiration.
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c236/Zealotfeta/waysdehsceastgreycnhopper.jpg

Fate
04-10-2007, 03:12 PM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9114/p1050289ji3.jpg

KAL
04-10-2007, 04:20 PM
it looks like you didnt finish the fill on the E.

its good

hungr
04-10-2007, 04:40 PM
not really feeling the N, maybe make it a bit fatter
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00159.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00160.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00162.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00163.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00165.jpg
nearone
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00170.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00171.jpg
^this tag points down to this
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00173.jpg
now some random pictures....
a pipe burst and froze the water....looked ill or something
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00161.jpg
buddy ripped his pants jumping over the fence when we left
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00175.jpg

dim
04-10-2007, 04:43 PM
hunger where is that??

sacwacko
04-10-2007, 06:11 PM
ok....i need advice....
there is a CHURCH with a BEAUTIFUL rooftop&#33;&#33;&#33;
let me remind u its a church....
i wanna do a black hollow throwie on the top....
should i do it????

Albert Fish
04-10-2007, 06:13 PM
judging by your signature, you dont need to be doing black hollow throws on anything for awhile, especially not a church. hit the books and write some leggible letters

Aska.
04-10-2007, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 10 2007, 05:11 PM
ok....i need advice....
there is a CHURCH with a BEAUTIFUL rooftop&#33;&#33;&#33;
let me remind u its a church....
i wanna do a black hollow throwie on the top....
should i do it????
nope, find another spot for your throwie

sacwacko
04-10-2007, 06:29 PM
why^^^^
its a jewish church??....{nothin against them}

Aska.
04-10-2007, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 10 2007, 05:29 PM
why^^^^
its a jewish church??....{nothin against them}
nothing against you, but i hope you read alberts post. He is right. It&#39;s still pure disrespect and im not even jewish. What makes this spot so good anyways? im sure theres another prime spot on the same block.

sacwacko
04-10-2007, 06:51 PM
not really....its *perfect*....
on a main street....
just wanna get my name out....

nase7
04-10-2007, 06:57 PM
Sackwaco, fuck off you bastard bombing a church is as disrespectful as slapping your mother, writers will hate you (excluding 666 and emos). You have just lost all respect from me

Sumoe
04-10-2007, 07:09 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 10 2007, 05:51 PM
not really....its *perfect*....
on a main street....
just wanna get my name out....
Hitler.

sacwacko
04-10-2007, 07:11 PM
didnt say id do it....
sayd i liked the spot....
or thats wut i ment...

tasty
04-10-2007, 07:17 PM
fuck religion... bomb the dam thing son&#33; and post flickkkkksssss

Aska.
04-10-2007, 07:36 PM
delete this

2KoS
04-10-2007, 07:57 PM
the only reason i personally dont bomb churches because its been a rule for a while now. Despite graff is a key source to &#39;freedom&#39; and &#39;rebellion&#39;, there will always be aspects of morals in any type of unlawful activity. if graff were &#39;no holds bars&#39; then i&#39;d fuck up churches hardcore coz i couldnt give a flying fuck about religion, but as its part of a writers quarms and ettiquets, i stick to it coz i dont want a bad rep.

which you will get if u bomb it.

just my £2.

KEAZE
04-10-2007, 08:33 PM
mute throwiez
cant post fliks cuz of dynamic pages&#33;
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3...trnbrdgsetr.jpg (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3trd0n386/trnbrdgsetr.jpg)
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3...nbrdg101001.jpg (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3trd0n386/trnbrdg101001.jpg)
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3.../onenonlyMT.jpg (http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t261/g3trd0n386/onenonlyMT.jpg)

Bastardo
04-10-2007, 09:31 PM
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1051/picture083eh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Only ever painte dthrows before.
Btw all the drips wernt mine..i went over some proper drippy poo fingy

It was meant to look like this?
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5361/picture092cr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fube
04-10-2007, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by 2KoS@Apr 10 2007, 06:57 PM
the only reason i personally dont bomb churches because its been a rule for a while now. Despite graff is a key source to &#39;freedom&#39; and &#39;rebellion&#39;, there will always be aspects of morals in any type of unlawful activity. if graff were &#39;no holds bars&#39; then i&#39;d fuck up churches hardcore coz i couldnt give a flying fuck about religion, but as its part of a writers quarms and ettiquets, i stick to it coz i dont want a bad rep.

which you will get if u bomb it.

just my £2.
listen to him, hes right, it will do more harm then good. also, i question what u mean by "perfect" besides being a church y waste a roof spot on a dumb ass hollow bomb? probably take u more time to get up there then it does to actually do the bomb. to me, it would be one of the mistakes u wish u never did. church people stick together, thats some bad karma not to mention bad ups to begin with. moral here is its just a bad idea all together. cut that shit out.

:edit:
bastardo i have always loved your shit, and if thats your first "piece" then props to that. u will only get cleaner.

dim
04-10-2007, 09:55 PM
bastardo love that fill
and about that church issue YOU DONT BOMB PLACES OF WORSHIP NO MATTER WAT RELIGEON WETHER YOU BELIEVE IN IT OR NOT

Skesh
04-11-2007, 10:46 AM
Some legal wall shit from today
my first piece thing, and one of my first throws....
the only shit i&#39;ve done before are some fucked up throws, because of paranoia

LSD stands for Last Schoolday. Its a tradiditional day on our school, we always fuck our whole school up. I want to do some graffiti, but it wanted to practive first on a legal wall...
I made the L fatter after I took this flick... The 3d on the star is off, cause i fixed the star after i did the 3d....
its not clean, but its my first piece and i&#39;m pretty happy with it
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/HOF5.jpg

This is my 2letter throw. I wanted to do SH, but accidentally wrote SK lol. SH looks better. I ran out of black
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/HOF10.jpg

lets.go.paint
04-11-2007, 11:25 AM
Looks alright man, just work on your fill and your second outline

REMOoneSF
04-11-2007, 03:16 PM
Originally posted by sank one@Apr 9 2007, 09:31 PM
remo - your throw looks good, just gotta clean it up.

also stop posting so fuckin much. you joined today and you already have 30 posts....
i&#39;m on house arrest for a month. hah

Zyklon
04-11-2007, 03:52 PM
http://xs414.xs.to/xs414/07153/DSC00722.JPG.xs.jpg (http://xs.to/xs.php?h=xs414&d=07153&f=DSC00722.JPG)
clickable.

This is like my 2nd piece.
Shadow @ E is f*cked, i forgot the vertical shadow.

It&#39;s really rough and rude. Didn&#39;t had the paint and caps to do it nice.
And dont forget that this is like my 2nd piece and im only into graff for like 3 days :P

btw, i hate stock caps

Zyklon
04-11-2007, 03:54 PM
http://xs414.xs.to/xs414/07153/DSC00719.JPG.xs.jpg (http://xs.to/xs.php?h=xs414&d=07153&f=DSC00719.JPG)

I made this today when i was at some wall with Skesh.
He&#39;s the one that led me into graff. I still thank him for that :P

It&#39;s just small, nice (imo) and clean.

Skesh told me to keep it simple.

edit: not yesterday but today.
I really am stupid :blink:

sacwacko
04-11-2007, 04:10 PM
well if u have been in for only 3 days....
u catch on hella quick....

Zyklon
04-11-2007, 04:14 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 11 2007, 03:10 PM
well if u have been in for only 3 days....
u catch on hella quick....
ill take that as a positive thing :D&#33;

Skesh
04-11-2007, 04:23 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Apr 11 2007, 09:10 PM
well if u have been in for only 3 days....
u catch on hella quick....
Yeah i was with him that day
his can control is good, even more when you think he&#39;s only into graff for a couple days

Fate
04-11-2007, 05:28 PM
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/5596/p1050304fu5.jpg

nase7
04-11-2007, 05:33 PM
Very very nice. (props for cleanlines)

AimoOne
04-11-2007, 05:35 PM
smart as fuck ^

nase7
04-11-2007, 05:36 PM
Edit- is that to me.

AimoOne
04-11-2007, 05:37 PM
what the fuck you talking about...i was complimenting the piece.. :huh:

nase7
04-11-2007, 05:38 PM
Sorry i thought you were being sarcastic to me. And im in a cranky mood :D.

near
04-11-2007, 05:38 PM
ill piece up a bit it starts with a B i forget what it says but its the ill one...lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010002.jpg

sketch13
04-11-2007, 05:42 PM
yo skesh where you live..... that aint the LSD crew from toronto is it...... if not then my bad just asking

AimoOne
04-11-2007, 05:43 PM
okay Nase :( ;)

i love that R near...very very very very very nice..i like the fill too..kinda hollow..but looks clean..

and sketch..skesh lives in Holland..

near
04-11-2007, 07:20 PM
Originally posted by sketch13@Apr 11 2007, 04:42 PM
yo skesh where you live..... that aint the LSD crew from toronto is it...... if not then my bad just asking
exactly what i was gonna ask, it looks JUST like the lsd over by Kipling station on some metal shed thing i always see it...

sank one
04-11-2007, 07:40 PM
near that 2 letter is shveet. would love to see a full throw.

Diostah
04-11-2007, 09:03 PM
Originally posted by near@Apr 11 2007, 04:38 PM
ill piece up a bit it starts with a B i forget what it says but its the ill one...lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010002.jpg
i like this one
what kind of tip did u use cuz it looks big but not 2 big

hungr
04-11-2007, 09:20 PM
rusto ...

i will soon just live in this building
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00187.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00188.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00193.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00196.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00195.jpg

they busted in on me and found my porn stash&#33;&#33;
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00191.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00189.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00190.jpg

near
04-11-2007, 09:25 PM
illl cum join the orgy throw...fills r rusto and the black was a banana skinny (thats what it said on the bag...black cap with a yellow spray thingy)

Fate
04-11-2007, 10:14 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9035/45c8469c9718b8f6mft5.jpg

BohemianBastard
04-12-2007, 05:39 AM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2dboxv4.jpg

crozzy
04-12-2007, 05:44 AM
Originally posted by near@Apr 11 2007, 08:25 PM
illl cum join the orgy throw...fills r rusto and the black was a banana skinny (thats what it said on the bag...black cap with a yellow spray thingy)
heard em called skinny negros, but spray exactly like a skinny banana to me, fucking best cap for tags and outlines

Skesh
04-12-2007, 09:48 AM
Originally posted by Fate@Apr 12 2007, 03:14 AM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9035/45c8469c9718b8f6mft5.jpg
Lol nice one

dirtbiXe
04-12-2007, 12:27 PM
Originally posted by hungr@Apr 11 2007, 08:20 PM
rusto ...

i will soon just live in this building
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00187.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00188.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00193.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00196.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00195.jpg

they busted in on me and found my porn stash&#33;&#33;
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00191.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00189.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00190.jpg
FREE PORN&#33; :lol:

2KoS
04-12-2007, 01:56 PM
Hungr, goin on sick man keep up the goodwork...

btw who crossed out that grape guy??

sketch13
04-12-2007, 06:33 PM
Originally posted by near+Apr 11 2007, 06:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ Apr 11 2007, 06:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sketch13@Apr 11 2007, 04:42 PM
yo skesh where you live..... that aint the LSD crew from toronto is it...... if not then my bad just asking
exactly what i was gonna ask, it looks JUST like the lsd over by Kipling station on some metal shed thing i always see it... [/b][/quote]
i never seen that one but i just seen this guy posted up LSD soo wanted to know if it was the same crew from T.O

eMJayBee
04-12-2007, 09:05 PM
Some nice throws on this page

Any critz on this?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picture004.jpg

dim
04-12-2007, 09:29 PM
you got some good can control but i dont rele like the connection between the "e" and the "i"

KAL
04-12-2007, 09:36 PM
Hungr...good shit
elite- i would say make your l a little bigger.

just practice....went over my own shit from b4

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5792/pracyicepeicenv0.jpg

KAL
04-12-2007, 10:08 PM
ayo&#33; keep that in the blackbook thread and listen to what everybody is tellin you there....go to the new to graff thread and read everything and dont post that shit in here&#33; and if you want crits so fuckin bad give some first&#33;

Bombers Ambition
04-12-2007, 10:50 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/derek075.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/derek077.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/derek082.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/derek084.jpg

dim
04-12-2007, 10:53 PM
thats some good stuff sore

hungr
04-13-2007, 12:09 AM
i dont like yer S

levans
04-13-2007, 03:30 AM
sore try a larger case e because the lower case e looks awkward because its bigger than the other letters

crozzy
04-13-2007, 07:35 AM
elite, diggin that first E but just not the rest of the letters. the fill looks alright too, tweak up the transition between colours a bit and itll look good.

trashhh
04-13-2007, 09:31 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/pieces/STA41025.jpg

a small VN.. duno... im bored

Copieright
04-13-2007, 10:45 AM
my first time painting beside tags...

I ran out of red so couldn`t correct my black outline going over the red :S

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9961/1386966428906947zd5.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3031/1386966330339861jx7.jpg


I didn`t make the "tags" a friend of mine did who doesn`t paint

RemoZ
04-13-2007, 12:04 PM
Keep you 3d even

Bastardo
04-13-2007, 02:15 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_QaxG_hmiyU

Brain Dead

BIGel
04-13-2007, 04:27 PM
i dont know what this trash qualifies as
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/245546132.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/245546479.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/245546745.jpg

kersrone
04-13-2007, 04:30 PM
the B looks like the L too much.

maybe dont bring those doubled lines in the E and L down so far - only about half of what you have now.

dim
04-13-2007, 04:35 PM
why would you qoute that when its right above you

kersrone
04-13-2007, 04:36 PM
sorry, are you happy now? :rolleyes:

hungr
04-13-2007, 08:00 PM
feed us a fetus
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00197.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00202.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00203.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00207.jpg

...random 1 line tag..mad hearts :)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00201.jpg

REMOoneSF
04-13-2007, 11:48 PM
i like your throwie hungr, are those all chill spots?

elcs
04-14-2007, 12:15 AM
http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l195/elcs/peoria018dos.jpg




http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l195/elcs/peoria017.jpg


new hollow throw...meh...

RemoZ
04-14-2007, 04:02 AM
http://a887.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/3/l_dbcb55d5ecf3b61e8bb3a079e1018d26.jpg
http://a679.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/25/l_14b1465754fbbc8fed99ad22f9f1b9c6.jpg
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2631/1000767ir2.jpg

minesweep
04-14-2007, 11:31 AM
learn to take pictures

Jfy
04-14-2007, 03:20 PM
been writing for about a month 1/2 or so.

meh, colorplace blue... my j isnt proportional and can someone give me a suggestion on my y? i cant come up with anything that flows with the rest.

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j149/kodaisbeastly/100_0331.jpg

ESKE one
04-14-2007, 03:24 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 13 2007, 01:15 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_QaxG_hmiyU

Brain Dead
y did you remove it?
shyt was probably fire

karmatikal
04-14-2007, 05:42 PM
sloppyness

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2007_0414Image0002.jpg

Albert Fish
04-14-2007, 05:46 PM
bigel hot throw but im with karma on the b.
i like that ohno stuff, idc if people were hating on it like a month ago
and hungr, PLEASE use that second h more often. so much hotter than the first one.

youneak
04-14-2007, 11:56 PM
these are my first 3 bombs

CRITS PLZ&#33;&#33;&#33;


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/street_sk8_4life/IMG_5967.jpg
unik



http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/street_sk8_4life/IMG_5968.jpg
youneak

my attempt at an abstract piece, looks like theres no forcefield, cuz i did it in gold, andi though it would stand out, but u cant even see it. if i did it in pink or sometihng bright it woulda looekd better. PS i ran outa bucket paint to roller with, and flat black painters touch is soooo watery took 5 coats to get the 3d filled.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/street_sk8_4life/IMG_5962.jpg

supost to be a candle. that bank is like 89 degrees steep so i had to slide down 10 times to paint the flame so it looks like crap.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/street_sk8_4life/IMG_5964.jpg
a bomb by sane2

dim
04-15-2007, 12:06 AM
tell sane2 to change his name

memo
04-15-2007, 12:13 AM
^^ agreed.

youneak
04-15-2007, 12:23 AM
mmk,


got any advise for us besides that?

Aven
04-15-2007, 12:25 AM
SANE2....





WACKEST SHIT EVER

dim
04-15-2007, 12:46 AM
youneak i rel like that first one its prety sick the blending and all

levans
04-15-2007, 03:46 AM
youneak the fill looks pretty solid....do you do tones of coats or use good paint or something?.....welll i spose it would look clean cuz u rollered the background i usually just go straight on brick and it looks faded cuz the brick eats the paint

miro
04-15-2007, 04:09 AM
can control sucks

style is lacking

i suck.

but criticism would be appreciated.

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/ope005Medium.jpg

the B does not go with it

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/ope004Medium.jpg

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/ope002Medium.jpg

the R sucks

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/rog022Medium.jpg

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/mirolives/ope001Medium.jpg

2KoS
04-15-2007, 09:43 AM
Miro I&#39;d jus laugh at ur bombs/throws if i saw them round my ends with that pokeball shit wtf man. :lol: :lol:

btw &#39;have mercy&#39;?

dim
04-15-2007, 12:27 PM
miro maybe you should stick to paper for a bit

Aven
04-15-2007, 12:34 PM
nice color place D BAG

crozzy
04-15-2007, 01:14 PM
yeah mate lose the pokeball

virtuallynameless
04-15-2007, 01:39 PM
some recent stuff...crits appreciated

http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176579835_f.jpg
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176283797_f.jpg
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176210881_f.jpg

TESTER
04-15-2007, 01:48 PM
i like the colors on the first one, its the only one i can see, but i think you know this already but it would look so much bettter if your letters were all the same siz, and i think make it really big too that would be sick

Nosypainter
04-15-2007, 01:50 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 10 2007, 08:31 PM
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1051/picture083eh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Only ever painte dthrows before.
Btw all the drips wernt mine..i went over some proper drippy poo fingy

It was meant to look like this?
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5361/picture092cr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like the color

virtuallynameless
04-15-2007, 01:57 PM
yeh my mate pointed that out...cheers for the feedback

virtuallynameless
04-15-2007, 01:58 PM
Originally posted by TESTER@Apr 15 2007, 12:48 PM
i like the colors on the first one, its the only one i can see, but i think you know this already but it would look so much bettter if your letters were all the same siz, and i think make it really big too that would be sick
what do you mean its the only one you can see?lol

virtuallynameless
04-15-2007, 02:11 PM
Originally posted by virtuallynameless@Apr 15 2007, 12:39 PM
some recent stuff...crits appreciated

http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176579835_f.jpg
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176283797_f.jpg
http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176210881_f.jpg
bump for crits..i know the r is too big on the first one

dim
04-15-2007, 04:59 PM
rend you got some good can control once you develope your letters more your going to be dope keep it up

miro
04-15-2007, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by dim@Apr 15 2007, 11:27 AM
miro maybe you should stick to paper for a bit
alright, but what do you have any tips on developing style on paper?

i&#39;ve been trying for a while now...

:(

dim
04-15-2007, 05:36 PM
post your sketches in toy black books and yooll get tipps there

La Coka Nostra
04-15-2007, 05:37 PM
Bigel...your throw has potential I think.


Unique....not bad. Colorful anyways lol.

And let that fool keep writing Sane...don&#39;t tell him to change his name. He&#39;s not gonna make it anyways.

elcs
04-15-2007, 05:54 PM
Originally posted by elcs@Apr 13 2007, 11:15 PM
http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l195/elcs/peoria018dos.jpg




http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l195/elcs/peoria017.jpg


new hollow throw...meh...
can i get some feed back on these? pretty new.

La Coka Nostra
04-15-2007, 06:02 PM
the throw is stylish...get a better picture.

Apple pie
04-15-2007, 07:46 PM
agreed. virtuallynameless is pretty clean to man... ugly letters tho

.rekon.
04-16-2007, 01:35 AM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h248/Ekco_Star/IMG_5963.jpg Crit?

crozzy
04-16-2007, 07:03 AM
lower case R&#39;s, especially that one arent recognisable enough for me, looks too much like a P. work on can control for the shadow fills and the outline goes soft in a few spots. colour combination is pretty nice though, dig that blue.

hungr
04-16-2007, 11:44 AM
purolator has beef .. for no reason :(
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00121.jpg

Dream Creation
04-16-2007, 11:54 AM
clever and thinking graffiti&#33; in them ways i struggle :P

La Coka Nostra
04-16-2007, 12:20 PM
That&#39;s dope hungr. The best part is...nobody would even know it was graff by just looking at it.


And rekon...uhh...keep sketching?

neza
04-16-2007, 01:10 PM
busy weekend....heres sundays shizzle

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/135/img5443dw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and an &#39;e&#39; i did on sat coz i had a hour to kill

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/728/img5376gl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

La Coka Nostra
04-16-2007, 01:56 PM
^ pretty ill. Not feeling the fill colors so much though, too similar for me, the fill on the E is pretty ill though. And handstyle is.... <_<

HuntingLOLs
04-16-2007, 02:25 PM
neza, im a sucker for the light blue (himalaya blue from mtn <333) dont like how the e&#39;s middle bar is sharp like that. would have look better if it was cut off before it ended and then made the top part abit longer.

d_g
04-16-2007, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by hungr@Apr 17 2007, 03:44 AM
purolator has beef .. for no reason :(
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00121.jpg
Haha nice.

Reminds me of something kinda similar.

There was a sign on the grass that said &#39;SALE&#39; but it was made up of each individual letters. When I drove past two had been knocked down and it was rearranged to &#39;AS&#39; which I&#39;m assuming was done by the local AS Crew.

cyber one
04-16-2007, 06:19 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/q5.jpg
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/q3.jpg
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f31/emericanidol777/q4.jpg
messed up R bigtime on the last one <_<

crits?...

La Coka Nostra
04-16-2007, 06:26 PM
It&#39;s not bad, C is pretty generic.
I like the whole backwards Y thing.
E is stylish.
R is pretty generic...looks like an R i used to do.

megaj2
04-16-2007, 08:28 PM
yea cyber, not bad
i like the e and the r

i just did this throwie a few hours ago
my first one ever..
sry bout the small pic but all i had was a friends camera phone
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/5541/megaaadg7.jpg
crits?

MYND1
04-16-2007, 09:27 PM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3937/0414071624qk0.jpg

sank one
04-16-2007, 09:28 PM
cyer that second one is fiyah

dizzle_d
04-16-2007, 09:31 PM
cyber I love that second throww

Zep0
04-16-2007, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by d_g+Apr 16 2007, 04:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Apr 16 2007, 04:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-hungr@Apr 17 2007, 03:44 AM
purolator has beef .. for no reason :(
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00121.jpg
Haha nice.

Reminds me of something kinda similar.

There was a sign on the grass that said &#39;SALE&#39; but it was made up of each individual letters. When I drove past two had been knocked down and it was rearranged to &#39;AS&#39; which I&#39;m assuming was done by the local AS Crew. [/b][/quote]
HAHAHAHA&#33;&#33;&#33; This shit got me crackin up, thats so epic. Dear god, keep it up.

.rekon.
04-16-2007, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by La Coka Nostra@Apr 16 2007, 08:20 AM
That&#39;s dope hungr. The best part is...nobody would even know it was graff by just looking at it.


And rekon...uhh...keep sketching?
Aite. Any suggestions on how to improve it through sketching?

megaj2
04-16-2007, 10:15 PM
rekon - i think ur letters overlap too much

neza - shit, urs is good i like the fill

crits on mine?

La Coka Nostra
04-17-2007, 01:37 AM
mega...the m looks like an h,

don&#39;t put faces on your letters

g kinda looks like a c...or maybe even an r

and the a looks like an o...or something...





And MYND1

quit graffiti.

DYC
04-17-2007, 10:53 AM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t67/bergtron/040907_17381.jpg

i did this the other day its toy but i like it

virtuallynameless
04-17-2007, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by virtuallynameless@Apr 15 2007, 01:11 PM

http://sp5.fotologs.net/photo/21/7/41/rend06/1176283797_f.jpg

any crits on this?

Dinan 3er
04-17-2007, 06:21 PM
the shading is sick on the 3d. the D seems a little wierd to me somehow.

Dinan 3er
04-17-2007, 06:24 PM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP3575.jpg
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP3576.jpg

I didnt want to actually do it somewhere where someone would see it and laugh at how bad it is. I know that its toy, and my can control sucks. any thoughts on how I can improve?

megaj2
04-17-2007, 08:06 PM
Originally posted by La Coka Nostra@Apr 16 2007, 10:37 PM
mega...the m looks like an h,

don&#39;t put faces on your letters

g kinda looks like a c...or maybe even an r

and the a looks like an o...or something...





And MYND1

quit graffiti.
thx for the crits


got hella to work on rite now then..

minor crimes
04-17-2007, 09:01 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/DSC00424.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/birechrome.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/funky.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/biar3dpiece.jpg

first attempt of a 3d piece

MainEvent
04-17-2007, 09:16 PM
klip- stay in blackbook.

biar- 3ds alright, pretty good for your first one. the silver and black simple is pretty nice too, the B&#39;s just a little hurt. the first and third pieces are rough though. post some more shit, stay up

minor crimes
04-17-2007, 09:28 PM
i like the 3rd one. i want to paint it on a train one day.

the first one is in a tunnel thats not that bright and my mobile phone doesnt have a flash on it so i had to hold my mates phones so i could take da pic.

2nd one is one of my better ones. ill find my others

MainEvent
04-17-2007, 09:31 PM
the 3d on the 3rd one is cool, but the A and R is shitty.

capitol
04-17-2007, 11:16 PM
minorcrimes:Second one is my fav, the 3d is got alot of problems but its still minorly good, 3rd one the r looks like a k, but you probably already know that.
Dinae 3er?:Dont put halos over your shit, and i know its difficult makin good shit on small things wit paint.

FEN the HEN
04-18-2007, 12:51 AM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/q31.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/COPE-BB2011.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/q1.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/COPE-1101.jpg

*cough*

La Coka Nostra
04-18-2007, 01:10 AM
The cope bite was obvious on the C...but whatever...


Let him do it.


Biar...the 2nd one is dope.

RemoZ
04-18-2007, 06:14 PM
http://www.wvrapscene.com/forum/files/100_0788_198.jpg

A friend O&#39; mine.

[phenom5]
04-18-2007, 08:01 PM
Bire that second piece is sick.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7083/0002743ee1.jpg

minor crimes
04-18-2007, 09:04 PM
thanks guys. i realised i should of done the fill letter by letter on the 3d piece i did the light blue first. so yeah. first attempt. im painting again this arvo so ill get a flick of wat i do. nothing too flassh might try one of my old styles again and just add on some stuff to it. ill see and post it up guys. thanks for the crits n comments

FEN the HEN
04-18-2007, 10:27 PM
STAY OFF THE STEEL PHENOM

minesweep
04-18-2007, 10:32 PM
stop callin cope bites those letters are generic so chill, and the handy pick...c&#39;mon now

FEN the HEN
04-18-2007, 10:37 PM
There is also a fine line between generic and a sraight bite, people use the term genereic to loosely especially when its a cope2 bite, this is obvisous, I mean c&#39;mon

Concentration
04-18-2007, 10:53 PM
Originally posted by Dinan 3er@Apr 17 2007, 05:24 PM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP3575.jpg
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP3576.jpg

I didnt want to actually do it somewhere where someone would see it and laugh at how bad it is. I know that its toy, and my can control sucks. any thoughts on how I can improve?
Basic&#39;s Firstt..

Do A Straight Letter...
No pointy Stuff.. And Work On Ur Handstyle

hungr
04-19-2007, 01:18 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00229.jpg

lets.go.paint
04-19-2007, 05:17 AM
Spot started to get heated so i just threw on a quick outline and go out of there... had no time for effects n shit. Also my first ever piece.
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2663/1204071710kc3.jpg

2KoS
04-19-2007, 08:47 AM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Apr 18 2007, 09:37 PM
There is also a fine line between generic and a sraight bite, people use the term genereic to loosely especially when its a cope2 bite, this is obvisous, I mean c&#39;mon
No. <_<

FEN the HEN
04-19-2007, 10:51 AM
hows that any different from biting anyone else then? if he bit a another writers letters everyone would be on his causse but because Cope2&#39;s C i a little generic nobody cares? It&#39;s not that generic, writing a really simple bubble letter C is generic Cope&#39;s is not

jmilky
04-19-2007, 11:10 AM
im 17 and i jus started and this is my first &#33; its a lil slopy but its my 1st... let me kno wat u think...
http://www.picturepuppy.com/images/jmilky/untitled.jpg

karmatikal
04-19-2007, 12:40 PM
umm maybe post in the blackbook thread? other than that its horrid, go simple no extensions, no curves just do block letters for a while

capo93
04-19-2007, 12:53 PM
Originally posted by hungr@Apr 19 2007, 12:18 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00229.jpg
this is sick who did the ar throw tho?

hungr
04-19-2007, 02:32 PM
arson .. his seemed to come out best of all us drunks

Dinan 3er
04-19-2007, 03:49 PM
Allright, I was trying to do this off a sketch and I noticed after the first letter I wasnt going to have enough room, so I just did the first two letters. And I skrewed up on the L a little bit. and half way through I went from like a drop shadow to 3d. so don&#39;t point that out again. Any other crits?

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/1-1.jpg

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP3577.jpg

whahappen?
04-19-2007, 04:26 PM
Originally posted by jmilky@Apr 19 2007, 10:10 AM
im 17 and i jus started and this is my first &#33; its a lil slopy but its my 1st... let me kno wat u think...
http://www.picturepuppy.com/images/jmilky/untitled.jpg
cawp

neza
04-19-2007, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by Dinan 3er@Apr 19 2007, 02:49 PM
Allright, I was trying to do this off a sketch and I noticed after the first letter I wasnt going to have enough room, so I just did the first two letters. And I skrewed up on the L a little bit. and half way through I went from like a drop shadow to 3d. so don&#39;t point that out again. Any other crits?

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/1-1.jpg

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/IMGP3577.jpg
put the paint down for a while buddy and work on your letters you wont regret it simple block letters for you im affraid