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SLEDGEHAMMER
06-20-2007, 05:07 PM
When you paint you should build up the letters using bars then round them off. Also lose the extensions. Good effort and the outline is quite clean. Also a tip: when you fade hold the can to the side and spray upwards with the bottom colour NOT pushing the cap in to hard, then spray the top colour downwards into the bottom colour using the same technique. Just practice and you'll pick it up , I see alot of potential , next time finish your 3d though and cut your lines search for a video mad by the mighty hepos.

jersOneTIC
06-20-2007, 05:40 PM
what up, here's my most recent stuff, any crits or tips on improvement?

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/118/mehj3.jpg
uh...add a 3d to the piece?

JukeToy
06-20-2007, 07:12 PM
I know its a bit awful but erhm...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q210/zebba224/101_0106.jpg

what_one
06-21-2007, 12:49 AM
toys and paint just dont mix

lets.go.paint
06-21-2007, 01:15 AM
With that O or D looking thing, the idea of your fill is ok... you went from side to side but on the other letters you were all over the shop..
Take those letters to book, keep workin on em.

[phenom5]
06-21-2007, 01:25 AM
Didnt have enough white to finish the 3d :(

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/3932/moshpiecebridge2tc6.jpg

capitol
06-21-2007, 01:44 AM
Phenom 5 what does it say?
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2090/graf297uf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3285/graf298ip5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[breakout]-azer
06-21-2007, 04:45 AM
phenon- what is say but its pritty good. pritty clean but a few drips there.


capitol- dont liek the pillars at all. basicly i was say go back to skecting and get a good design then practice it with somespare paint in your gardon on wood or carboard or sumin or unda a bridge were peoplewont c your peices that u practice

lets.go.paint
06-21-2007, 05:45 AM
Phenom the 3d looks sick how it turned out, lucky you ran out of paint :P
ENVR? The poles dont look very good but the other blocky does, keep at it

Sli
06-21-2007, 06:42 AM
one day... they will create a cyborg. The ultimate toy-killing machine. I'll be first to go :D

lets.go.paint
06-21-2007, 07:53 AM
hahahah ive seen some bad ones including myself...have you put flicks up?

[phenom5]
06-21-2007, 10:18 AM
Says Mosh, ty peoples

dim
06-21-2007, 11:21 AM
capitol stick to paper

HuntingLOLs
06-21-2007, 11:57 AM
Phenom 5 what does it say?
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2090/graf297uf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that looks like a nice place.. really peaceful :p

Dez-One
06-21-2007, 02:30 PM
Yeah, he probably could've taken all night, and nobody would've even known he was there...

ClOH
06-21-2007, 02:33 PM
just Simple bubbles

Jroc1993
06-21-2007, 03:21 PM
if yur new yur goin in the right direction, u write HIVE rite?

amk
06-21-2007, 03:26 PM
ok im pretty toy but i think im getting there im mates with some of the bigger head in graff round my area and they say im getting better and getting up a bit more what do you think ill post in order of me hitting shit

also they are all on the tracks

this is the very first time i went and did the tracks


one of my first



now in order of when i did them
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5930/p6020268oj2.jpghttp://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3984/p6080278th4.jpg





oh yeah


all tips are greatly appreciated

and i want feed back pllzzzz how can i make it better and what can i do to get better so on....

the letters are whaaack...but damn props for hitting the tracksides

work in your book for awhile man..then hit spots like that

nontheless good hit man

EVERYONE IN HERE KEEP PAINTING..KEEP HITTING SHIT ... KEEP DOING SHIT..KEEP PRACTACING...KEEP IT UP YALL !!!

I just got new that my local graff dealer is gettin MTN Gold in so i gotta boner on..carnt wait

Huuuge shout to my man Near !!

keep hitting shit yall

capitol
06-21-2007, 03:53 PM
that looks like a nice place.. really peaceful :p
Yea its "My practice area"
The pillars i must amdit were wack..msotly because of the fucking wind..and it was raining and iw as tryin to rush because those pillars are in plain view of another bridge which alot of pedestrians cross.
and the block one im jsut tryin to get the shadowing right.

capitol
06-21-2007, 03:56 PM
-azer;797287']

capitol- dont liek the pillars at all. basicly i was say go back to skecting and get a good design then practice it with somespare paint in your gardon on wood or carboard or sumin or unda a bridge were peoplewont c your peices that u practice
Oh yea and that stuff is under a bridge..were about 10 people see a year.

Equinox
06-21-2007, 05:15 PM
Doesnt Soke or Soke' or something like that mean grandmaster in japanesse?

Fube
06-21-2007, 05:54 PM
first one.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t64/seeoner/2093130314210024668.jpg

HuntingLOLs
06-21-2007, 05:57 PM
nice one fube, looks strange and still nice... missing some shading tho? in the last e?

Fube
06-21-2007, 06:00 PM
yeah it was freestyle. i think ive got a little bit better since then. i hate the thing but i guess its just motovation to keep going.

SLEDGEHAMMER
06-21-2007, 06:16 PM
Your a natural painter if thats your first piece, born to paint. Can control is good.

dim
06-21-2007, 06:18 PM
fube its clean but im not crazy about the letters

Fube
06-21-2007, 06:31 PM
yeah, im workin on my letters but i had nothing to look at(bbook) like i said it was on the fly. thanks for the words fellas.

Bazer
06-21-2007, 06:38 PM
i take picture of my stuff on my phone. letters by letter that way i can get into detail...

Silly Selfish
06-21-2007, 06:38 PM
my first peice...
http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5011/ummm008cg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/6245/ummm009gy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


sorry bout the lighting it sucks but cant control the sun...

Bazer
06-21-2007, 06:41 PM
ooooo i like that for some reason! did you use a light shade of black or did you just lay down the black lightly? this really brings my attention... is it one shade of black or two??

Chalk
06-21-2007, 06:48 PM
i been to that wall. soaks up the paint, so my guess is purple and a dark blue ...

Silly Selfish
06-21-2007, 06:50 PM
Thanks! well the wall sucked the paint up so the dark purple kinda took on a new color


http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/382/ummm006bc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

chalks throw on the wall...

ClOH
06-21-2007, 08:24 PM
Jroc1993 yeah it says Hive still pretty new 6 months finnally found a name that sticks got a hole bunch of differnt lettering styles that i still havnt thrownup yet but yea to anyone start simple.. and dont constantly change names

Lamure
06-21-2007, 11:15 PM
I like that throw.

Jroc1993
06-22-2007, 01:30 AM
yeah im lovin that throw chalk, nothin but heat from u tonite!

trashhh
06-22-2007, 06:03 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/throws%20and%20dubs/bomb40.jpg

first time painting this new throw up....

Skesh
06-22-2007, 06:38 AM
the arrow inside the A is wack
not feeling the R either
but overall its pretty good and i like the other letters

2KoS
06-22-2007, 08:08 AM
The A isn't wack. The R is creative.

Are you dumb seriously. If you notice, you like the other letters coz theyre TRADITIONAL. We see them a lot. everyone fucking attacks new ideas and not so used styles these days coz their not used to it. he made them up, simple.

christ

Skesh
06-22-2007, 09:44 AM
fanboi

amk
06-22-2007, 09:50 AM
Skesh...youv become a dick..you used to be aight...dont crit people who are better than you so harshly...remeber your position

tesfortis
06-22-2007, 12:06 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/nickwells/Evolthrow.jpg

crit please.

fateee
06-22-2007, 01:48 PM
the v looks kind of crammed compared to the rest. but since the O is smaller it matches. and the big E and L also help it. maybe try and make it a little bit bigger.

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/hang039.jpg

first "piece". it's simple. first shading fill. any crits would be nice.

iwritebasic
06-22-2007, 02:42 PM
Thanks! well the wall sucked the paint up so the dark purple kinda took on a new color


http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/382/ummm006bc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

chalks throw on the wall...

this is soooooooooo sick

sketch3
06-22-2007, 02:45 PM
its also not his soo cool it with the dickridin

glass
06-22-2007, 03:16 PM
chalk: idk why dude but i love that throw, so clean

Clowney-Cakes
06-22-2007, 05:39 PM
its also not his soo cool it with the dickridin

what the hell are you talking bout...that is too CHALKS throw.....


heres some more from chalk...
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9011/ummm004mq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 1969-12-31

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/9011/ummm007sj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Make•
06-22-2007, 09:46 PM
my first peice...
http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5011/ummm008cg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/6245/ummm009gy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


sorry bout the lighting it sucks but cant control the sun...

bump
this would look a lot better with a brighter fill, but good job nonetheless!

and trash: that has so much flow looks really great

mask_cib
06-23-2007, 12:21 AM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/t_baby666/hang044.jpg

crits?

Secks
06-23-2007, 07:42 AM
ok so hows this one?

ohh by the way i forgot my sketch hahaha


http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/8076/p6220305yb9.jpg

i write soke and believe me my sketch was allot nicer

oh yeah feeeeeeeeeeed back on improvement and tips PLEASE!!! :D

amk
06-23-2007, 07:57 AM
Secks...i gave you sum pretty good feedback a few pages back man...go check it out :)

Lamure
06-23-2007, 08:37 AM
Mask- I like it... but what's up with the second letter?

Clowney-Cakes
06-23-2007, 11:20 AM
mask- i like evrything except the a but i theink the k is dope

setz- i like the peice stright up. nice fill nice evrything!

soke- well i think k is what need most work but on it somemore.

trashhh
06-23-2007, 01:00 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/throws%20and%20dubs/bomb40.jpg

first time painting this new throw up....



Bump.

Soke dont do the orange around it, just a thick final wouldve looked better. nice colours tho.

mask keep workin on it, lookin nice. M and K are the best letters

Chalk
06-23-2007, 03:01 PM
trash- throw a forcefield around it and it will be nice.

i'm guilty to that throw. and yeah tag is toooooo big.

daisyface
06-23-2007, 09:28 PM
chalk-im a big fan of your work, very nice throw
make-i like the colors, shame the wall was crappy. clean lines
mask- i like it just maybe work on your 'a' a tad?
secks-pretty good for a freestyle haha cept i dont like the k
trash-looks real good just maybe make it bigger next time (yeah not much of a crit, sorry)

ok, im still definitely a toy but im slowly getting better, crits please? and not just "that sucks" please and thanks guys

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/mural007.jpg

Synaesthesia
06-23-2007, 09:54 PM
daisyface- Nice and clean, but work on you letter structure a little more. And maybe next time, dont put such a thick forcefield around it.

Fube
06-23-2007, 10:14 PM
practice board late night solo drunkin mission! drinkin a paintin is fun. i recommend it. well, if can at least.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1164.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1172.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1132.jpg

jersOneTIC
06-23-2007, 11:22 PM
did this last week
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8599/003046vw5.jpg

Fube
06-24-2007, 12:01 AM
lovein it. wish it was a bit cleaner. black is a bit choppy pink force field would have made it pop

2KoS
06-24-2007, 07:01 AM
yeh jers u got bare potential, i see your throw up too, s'gettin on well, butt i see in the other pic as well your handy is a little average. dunno why but good throw-ups/pieces with not so great handys kinda bug me. i think its mainly ur RS in the. but other than that, yeh, s'alllllll good.

C3ZR ONE
06-24-2007, 09:16 PM
Alot of pretty good shit on this page. Fube- I've always been a fan of your style.

I hate stock caps... I woulda cleaned it up more but we had a fuckin thunderstorm. I'm going back tommorow to redo the aqua outline with a black outline so it pops better and clean it up a bit...
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5152/im000725ah5.jpg

Fube
06-24-2007, 09:30 PM
thanks that means a lot comin from u brotha.

your shit is poppin hard without another black outline. lovein it.

MiNZ
06-25-2007, 02:24 PM
that stuff is fresh as hell cezr
havent been on for months...

karak at a chill wall he saying 20!
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/3328/toyskarakgl1.png
crits?

jastawriter
06-25-2007, 07:24 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00123.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00115.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00113.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics043.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics050.jpgany advice, crits, anything... try not to be to mean i know im still a big toy... ive only been writeing for about a year so i still have alot of learning to do! Thanx

daisyface
06-25-2007, 07:53 PM
jast i like all of those, cept the 's' but good work yo

tonentink
06-25-2007, 08:36 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/8729/biggerupzs8.jpg

aefx-one
06-25-2007, 08:39 PM
http://i9.tinypic.com/4kaxhs4.jpg

Fube
06-25-2007, 08:51 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00123.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00115.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00113.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics043.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics050.jpgany advice, crits, anything... try not to be to mean i know im still a big toy... ive only been writeing for about a year so i still have alot of learning to do! Thanx

me just about the same. thats a sick chill spot. keep progressing in the book and try to paint as clean as u can.

enigmatic
06-25-2007, 09:03 PM
looks snazzy jax

heeerree we go.

http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m7/enigmaticdawg/-2.jpg

both by moi.

ToPHAT
06-25-2007, 11:18 PM
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/6892/duelnemotermkv6.jpg

Resize the pic please - dg

d_g
06-25-2007, 11:50 PM
Pictures and useful crits only guys.

JackJill
06-26-2007, 01:09 AM
jast, that's awesome for only writing for a year. Keep it up, looks like a nice chill little spot to practise. You seem to have good can control, just keep improving on your letters.
my stuff from the last couple days
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6597/img0072dg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with Canon PowerShot A410 (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=Canon+PowerShot+A410&make=Canon) at 2007-06-25
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5858/img0030ij0.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7631/copy1ofimg0012rj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

*Wing*
06-26-2007, 03:23 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1182843564_f.jpg

And I know about the highlights... :D

jackJill, i like both of your pieces... Is the character yours too?

[breakout]-azer
06-26-2007, 07:28 AM
wing- i like most of your stuff but i for some reason i just dont liek this one. i think it could have done without the red things in the fill.

*Wing*
06-26-2007, 08:35 AM
Well, I kinda tought that the piece is too empty spaced, so I put that cause it was the only colour I had...

ToPHAT
06-26-2007, 12:39 PM
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1261/termabcld7.jpg

Hester
06-26-2007, 12:39 PM
wing - i dont like this one
jackjill - thats a sick ass character props for this one
aefx - Practice simples



http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0751.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/102_0752.jpg

Cin123
06-26-2007, 02:58 PM
hester touch my kester mester that bomb is sik and i love that character jackjill. heres one of my bombs any critshttp://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4097/cinbombuo1.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cinbombuo1.jpg)

Fube
06-26-2007, 05:45 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9011/ummm004mq0.jpghttp://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8599/003046vw5.jpghttp://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5152/im000725ah5.jpghttp://img252.imageshack.us/img252/3328/toyskarakgl1.png
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00113.jpg

Bumpzilla ^^^^^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/DSCF1172.jpg
^^^^^^^^^^^
want more crits if u guys are so kind. should i take this to a real wall surface?

MaNtS
06-27-2007, 07:15 AM
Hey, i write MaNtS, im from Australia and ive been writing for around a year,

joined up a while ago, but i had been peeping the forums for a while before that.

anyway here is some of my stuff, crits are welcome,peace.

Start off wiith some stuff i did a while ago right up to one i did last weekend.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/jaskmantstraky1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/jaskmants1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/jaskmants.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantkolim1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/12345.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/campbacpack1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantkromer.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mants1234.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantpurple1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/ztnam123.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantisesh1.jpg
I got arrested a couple months back,parents flipped,so i constructed a 2 by 6 metre wall in my backyard to paint and improve,then hit the scene again in a couple months with a new tag,when shits setted down.
Anyway i painted one on saturday, and i came out to get flicks on sunday and it had poured saturday night and cracked the paint etc, here is the end result :(
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantskrakedbords.jpg

And an inventory flick to finish things off.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/tinzors11.jpg
Peace, stay up.

daisyface
06-27-2007, 09:06 AM
wow mantz, good job. i especially like the 5th from the bottom , very clean

Hester
06-27-2007, 09:10 AM
1st thing, you come here and want crits , and you didnt even give crits 1st
2nd thing, the inventory is in the wrong thread.
give crits before asking for some

amk
06-27-2007, 11:38 AM
Mants....good good good trachside hits....keep up teh cleaness aswell....also...MAYBE work a tad on your lettering...anyways

and Chalk.....Sabotaz is extremely high pressure and is extremely toxic ... apprentley...sum bloke did the legal wall...all with sabotaz....and he couldnt stand near thewall to flick it was that bad of smell...aha..so if your gonna use it..i suggest use a resp...iv seen it in action...and it is very high pressure

Dusk07
06-27-2007, 04:53 PM
my throw i painted for the first time..
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/19966/2004072491183116689_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004072491183116689)

crits..

G-Fat
06-27-2007, 04:59 PM
work on the outlines, fills and try and keep your letter somewhat less droopy. Other than that great first attempt.

kelio
06-27-2007, 05:46 PM
my throw i painted for the first time..
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/19966/2004072491183116689_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004072491183116689)

crits..


overall i think its okay. its not amazing but its not horrible. you did pretty good on that outline. maybe use something besides green next time not really feeling the color of the forcefield. work on your u i think it could be mistaken for a v but maybe its just me. your s is just kinda well blah. i dont really like the s kinda ruins the flow you got going so far. the k i really like just clean it up a bit. just keep up and practice.

and next time you want critz. give some other people some first. thanks.

jastawriter
06-27-2007, 06:13 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00114.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics049.jpg

just a few quickies i had a couple half cans to get rid of ... THANX FOR ALL THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK GUYS makes me feel like not such a big waste....Jast

mattFOO
06-27-2007, 06:30 PM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7162/picture128sf3.jpg

Dusk07
06-27-2007, 06:40 PM
Say shiz? i like it alot though. nice and clean. shadow seems a lil off but im one to talk. nice flow, nice throw.=]

Fube
06-27-2007, 07:26 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00114.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics049.jpg

just a few quickies i had a couple half cans to get rid of ... THANX FOR ALL THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK GUYS makes me feel like not such a big waste....Jast

not a waste at all. but, i would watch out with that "ja". might not be worth puttin that out man. i hope u know what i mean.

Volume_one_
06-27-2007, 07:52 PM
not a waste at all. but, i would watch out with that "ja". might not be worth puttin that out man. i hope u know what i mean.

keep beef in the beef thread
- love ed.



http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_4329.jpg

My first painted piece Crits please

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_4334.jpg

Differnt angle

MaNtS
06-28-2007, 01:42 AM
1st thing, you come here and want crits , and you didnt even give crits 1st
2nd thing, the inventory is in the wrong thread.
give crits before asking for some

1st i could run around saying such things as "work on letter structure,try cut backs, fix your 3D" but i refrain, as to minimise the spam, if someone else has already said it then i dont see a reason for me to repeat it just to up my post count.

2nd, i can edit the inventory flick out if you wish.

3rdly, thanks for the feedback.

Volume, after u fixed the 3D up on the right hand leg of the m, go over the aura again with the white so that there isnt overspray in your aura, you get me?
i find pieces from the ground up are harder, try to keep all the letters the same size and proportional,dont worry so much about crazy adons and little tweaks as of yet, simple outlines with dope fills are just as effective and look good.

name_one
06-28-2007, 06:39 AM
Hey, i write MaNtS, im from Australia and ive been writing for around a year,

joined up a while ago, but i had been peeping the forums for a while before that.

anyway here is some of my stuff, crits are welcome,peace.

Start off wiith some stuff i did a while ago right up to one i did last weekend.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/jaskmantstraky1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/jaskmants1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/jaskmants.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantkolim1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/12345.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/campbacpack1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantkromer.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mants1234.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantpurple1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/ztnam123.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantisesh1.jpg
I got arrested a couple months back,parents flipped,so i constructed a 2 by 6 metre wall in my backyard to paint and improve,then hit the scene again in a couple months with a new tag,when shits setted down.
Anyway i painted one on saturday, and i came out to get flicks on sunday and it had poured saturday night and cracked the paint etc, here is the end result :(
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/mantskrakedbords.jpg

And an inventory flick to finish things off.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/tinzors11.jpg
Peace, stay up.

bump for the homie mants. nice work man keep going


1st thing, you come here and want crits , and you didnt even give crits 1st

whaha what did you expected? this is like his 3th post. you dont have to critisize the whole forum first before you may post some shit up

Sou - Mvd
06-28-2007, 08:33 AM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1934/loltentaclebombqi0.jpg

amk
06-28-2007, 09:22 AM
soumyd...that looks alot like Bore's painted ish he does on freights....but you do have simalar styles....anwyas...it looks nice....but dont be sooo quick with the fill....scratch fills on those things dont loook right....uugh...i dont know..keep up i guess..i love your handy tho..if it is yours....peepin in..get a better flick...it looks niiiceee

hungr
06-28-2007, 02:19 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00536.jpg

Volume_one_
06-28-2007, 02:23 PM
1st i could run around saying such things as "work on letter structure,try cut backs, fix your 3D" but i refrain, as to minimise the spam, if someone else has already said it then i dont see a reason for me to repeat it just to up my post count.

2nd, i can edit the inventory flick out if you wish.

3rdly, thanks for the feedback.

Volume, after u fixed the 3D up on the right hand leg of the m, go over the aura again with the white so that there isnt overspray in your aura, you get me?
i find pieces from the ground up are harder, try to keep all the letters the same size and proportional,dont worry so much about crazy adons and little tweaks as of yet, simple outlines with dope fills are just as effective and look good.

Thx for the crits
I thought I keep it pretty simple and I thought my lines where pretty clean
and I do agree my M needs work
And as for my letters size I made them that size like lower case and capital letters no what i mean

And I've been trying to make some type of cool fill but i dont want to do some weak two tone and i dont want to put bubbles or x's.

I guess it all takes work i mean this is my first painting (outside)

heav
06-28-2007, 03:32 PM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/IMG00114.jpghttp://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r167/socergrl326/newpics049.jpg

just a few quickies i had a couple half cans to get rid of ... THANX FOR ALL THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK GUYS makes me feel like not such a big waste....Jast

seriously dont go around painting JA its too famous man...

on the jast throwie try and make the letters the same size and in a straight line

hungr
06-28-2007, 07:13 PM
robert deNearo

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/editface.jpg

Stinky
06-28-2007, 09:29 PM
Wow, nicely done. All things considered you did very well with the space provided. Although you had at least it looks like you did have an area constraint, your piece does not look cluttered in the least bit. The fill is simplistic but it was done with class. Anyways keep it up.

-Stinky-

G-Fat
06-28-2007, 11:00 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00536.jpg

hungr man...i love your style that throw is too ill man.... in my opinion you don't need crits you got it down pattt... keep up the good work.

amk
06-29-2007, 10:16 AM
Near..i love how the peice goes round the wall..the R so to speak..and i love how you and Hungr ACTUALLY get up..!!!!...

for the first time i can actually say it to someone who does..

STAYUP !

ryse
06-29-2007, 02:09 PM
just wanted to know what others think of my rysek throwie... please criticise so i can improve...
(done with spanish montana very quickly)
and no its not on a road lol...
PEACE
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8902/cimg0263rp2.jpg

kelio
06-29-2007, 02:34 PM
ryse: hit the books homie, throws are very hard to make look good. ive been working on mine for weeks and its still trash. just keep working on your letters you can control looks ight ive seen alot worse. your letters are shit though, everyone on here is going to tell you the exact same thing. if your going to paint it though least it looks like you have a good place to practice in a drainage ditch or something. just keep your painting there until you improve, hit the tot black book thread with some drawn throws. the people on here will help you out alot, some are dicks but most really help. but remember if you want critz, tell some other people what you think they could improve on.

-kelio

Sumoe
06-29-2007, 02:41 PM
not a waste at all. but, i would watch out with that "ja". might not be worth puttin that out man. i hope u know what i mean.

agreed...get rid of that "Ja" looks almost identical to the real Ja's

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b360/Tagsareknown/17/JA_Graffiti.jpg

Stoked
06-29-2007, 03:47 PM
I started writeing just a few weeks ago anyways heres some of my stuff. (ignore the doodles of the sides of pages youll be able to tell what i want you to look at) And for the colors i used decicolor paint markers. Oh and please give me some feed back. Thanks

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/158/dscf0159rw4.jpg

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9444/dscf0161zj0.jpg

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/9699/dscf0162gf2.jpg

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2699/dscf0163yp0.jpg

kelio
06-29-2007, 03:54 PM
I started writeing just a few weeks ago anyways heres some of my stuff. (ignore the doodles of the sides of pages youll be able to tell what i want you to look at) And for the colors i used decicolor paint markers. Oh and please give me some feed back. Thanks

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/158/dscf0159rw4.jpg

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9444/dscf0161zj0.jpg

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/9699/dscf0162gf2.jpg

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2699/dscf0163yp0.jpg

start simple and go to the tot black book thread whn you are drawing. and check out the new to graff thread. your shits to cluttered.

*Wing*
06-29-2007, 06:12 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1182843564_f.jpg

And I know about the highlights... :D

jackJill, i like both of your pieces... Is the character yours too?

Bump for critics!

Eack
06-29-2007, 08:03 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1898/2706071301bk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/420/2806071940lr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not very clean, im not really confident illegal wise, im kinda still nervous
coment more the tag, and the lettering of the flop than the cleaness

ClOH
06-29-2007, 08:32 PM
could of did a little bit better

hhhhhhh
06-29-2007, 11:18 PM
some throws i did

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/DSC02277.jpg


2nd fill was rushed
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/DSC02284.jpg

crits

Dusk07
06-30-2007, 01:31 AM
nice throw. and flow and fill. just work on your force field yo.

MaNtS
06-30-2007, 03:45 AM
Ok make, see your throw, the 3D is way off
for the 3D this is what you have atm http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/make3d3.jpg
See how on the left it goes to the left on the bottom right hand red circle ur 3D is going down and slightly to the right, whereas in the red circle on the far right, your 3D is going to the right.you need to fix and choose a direction in wich you want it to go, either something like this

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/make3d2.jpg
going downwards,

or maybe going sideways.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/make3d1.jpg

or you can try drop shadow etc, anyways just trying to help ya out, peace.

amk
06-30-2007, 05:02 AM
MAKE...that M looks bitten...i crntremeber from who...but i think it is..the K is pretty fresh...work on the other a bit tho..

and MANTS...keep up these crits.. !!

hhhhhhh
06-30-2007, 10:14 AM
thxs mants & sk yeah im still working on the shadowing and it was a little to short to get the top of the force feild to look nice

i didnt bite the m tho

BORG
06-30-2007, 10:15 AM
figured id post my friends work to make this thread a bit sexyhttp://img513.imageshack.us/img513/93/celm1go9.jpg
celm
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1420/celm3jt1.jpg
celm and me- say latch, but its too shitty to post
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/2601/kolunlj4.jpg
kolun
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9539/kolun1wf1.jpg
kolun
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9435/shoyu2gy2.jpg
shoyu
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/1724/sicrrz4.jpg
sicr

and my fav friend of all........WOEM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/9444/1woem4px5.jpg
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1277/woeme2ekb1.jpg
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/1810/woem5mc4.jpg


welcome to raleighs only graff scene, missin a few *****s but theyre not on my comp

BORG
06-30-2007, 10:30 AM
hell yeah, i like his shit the most, he keeps it clean in the middle and then distorts the extensions the further they are from the middle

amk
06-30-2007, 10:32 AM
the Celm simples are the nicest..and the WOEMS simple...post this lot in the Freight Heads and Rail Junkees thread...so so so so good

ClOH
06-30-2007, 12:40 PM
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive1.jpg

any tips ?

2KoS
06-30-2007, 01:02 PM
i cant actually believe people are telling Jasta not to right his name just because he has 'ja' at the begginning of it... lmao

repsSDN
06-30-2007, 01:20 PM
Borg those are some sick peices.

Trying some euro style, bate tunnel in carpark.
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/904/euro2hm7.jpg
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/1924/euro1kq1.jpg
and my mates
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3917/dsc00647xe0.jpg
Just trying to imprve my can control.
Crits please.

minor crimes
06-30-2007, 09:32 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/goodbiar.jpg'
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/R0011150.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/bireeggplant.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/byerboneyard.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/DSC00563.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/DSC00424.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/birechrome.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/funky.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/biar3dpiece.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/01bireskeismeshays.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j230/a2b_01/R0011332.jpg
the last one is my newest piece.
the rest are all old like 3 months ago
was raining when i did the last one.
just some old pieces.

MainEvent
06-30-2007, 10:16 PM
bire, you got some hot shit up there. just work on the letters a bit

http://a564.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_650dcad641bcb34ad6ae5665e6c577d3.jpg

http://a342.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/74/l_f427a1a74e565e500b5922ea7dc336bd.jpg

ClOH
06-30-2007, 11:15 PM
Bire how long have you been writing some sick shit keep it up

MaNtS
07-01-2007, 12:29 AM
yo bire, on the last piece try to do some cutbacks after u do the white,
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/bine1.jpg
on the left see in the brown/black bit, where ive circled the white bit go over that again with the black to make it look smoother and more square, same as with the other bits ive circled, gpo back over the outline after uve done the in-aura and aura.

dope work on the other stuff, that 3D piece is banging, definately has potential.

P:S your from aus, nice laks, pm me your msn :)

weldo
07-01-2007, 03:04 AM
byas its all good aye all i can say is buff ur canvas before you repaint it makes it look alot cleaner.
heres mine . (l) ironlaks
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/6880/imgp0027me0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with PENTAX OptioE20 (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=PENTAX+OptioE20&make=PENTAX+Corporation) at 2007-07-01

Silly Selfish
07-01-2007, 11:16 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PcL-KbmcEWw



yo everyone watch this....i dont think chalks a toy, but hes on this thred a lot.....hope you guys enjy the movie!

Drakula
07-01-2007, 02:24 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0001-1.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0001-1.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0013.jpg

Roolete
07-01-2007, 04:17 PM
add some shadow or 3d.

and that chalk video is FRESH

glass
07-01-2007, 11:34 PM
indeed it is, i love chalks stuff

weldo: sick, sick can control dude, and i actually kind of like those letters a bit. develop your structure some more and you'll be ill

Ben Jay
07-02-2007, 02:06 AM
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x32/sekta1/DSCF0853.jpg

minor crimes
07-02-2007, 03:38 AM
yo bire, on the last piece try to do some cutbacks after u do the white,
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/tomdelongeisgun182/bine1.jpg
on the left see in the brown/black bit, where ive circled the white bit go over that again with the black to make it look smoother and more square, same as with the other bits ive circled, gpo back over the outline after uve done the in-aura and aura.

dope work on the other stuff, that 3D piece is banging, definately has potential.

P:S your from aus, nice laks, pm me your msn :)


with this piece there on big wooden boards and its at this youth centre that most of the local writers from my area go to and paint FOR FREE WITH IRONLAK,BELTON ANYTHING. and i was one of the last people to get up there and the people get pissed off with you if you do a whole background n shit. somethin to do with wasting paint n shit. it was raining and i had to get home to go back out. so yeah i didnt bother doing cut backs it wasnt on a wall so it just gets done over a week later anyway. no point puttin full effort in.

the blackish/brown is an ironlak limited edition colour called black red. its sirums colour.

molotow_15
07-02-2007, 04:32 PM
http://file025a.bebo.com/13/large/2007/03/24/20/357848719a3921208538b816055882l.jpgwaffles

Drakula
07-02-2007, 05:01 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0016.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0001-1.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0013.jpg

EsKoNeR!!
07-02-2007, 07:55 PM
still got alot to do, but a little bit of a wall me and konk are working on
NOT DONe
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/100_5018.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/100_5022.jpg

hungr
07-03-2007, 01:28 AM
we got drunk.. and someone stole the top of our bombs!
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00551.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00550.jpg

Blackeyed_Pea
07-03-2007, 01:38 PM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/4250/urgerp5.jpg
New bomb, would like some feedback :) says "URGE"

Mello
07-03-2007, 02:56 PM
blackeyed pea - Might just be my inexperienced eye, but the G seems a bit hard to read.

Edit _
Wrong Thread.

MainEvent
07-03-2007, 03:32 PM
mellow- post pieces on paper in the Blackbook thread. shits a good start, the bottom one is the best imo. build on that one and keep drawing.

urge- nice shit. like that E alot, just fix the R.

hungr- looks good

esk- damn thats dope. good shit man, keep it up.

drak- cool character. keep working on the letters

hungr
07-03-2007, 05:31 PM
URGE make the line in the U come down more and the other line make it straight not on a slant..new R... new G.. yer E is good, it kinda looks like a dope G if u take that little part where it goes in to make the middle bar on the E out.. somne random shit

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00558.jpg
idk if u like near, i sure as hell dont. hes a fuckin prick
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00553.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/trains.jpg

sketch3
07-04-2007, 09:02 PM
fucking nice hunger
PLESE DONT CRIT THE LETTERS, I JUST DID THE FILL, THIS IS MAD OLD WEN I WAS A SUPER TOY, IT SAYS HAMPSTEAD, IT WAS A MURAL FOR MY SKOOL,
A UK WRITER NAMED PURE WAS TEACHING ME CAN CONTROLE SO CRIT THAT PLESE-oops had cap locks on, http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/7096/hampsteadbi0.jpg

hungr
07-04-2007, 09:43 PM
the fill is simple but it looks nice, the lighting is crisp cause it gives the letters some body.. the letters arent even that bad, i like the MPSTE .. the tags arent so hot though, same with the faces.. but the sunset is cool

Tri1
07-05-2007, 09:12 AM
this is the first thing i've painted. Any crits comments welcome.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Arkthrowie3.jpg

Blackeyed_Pea
07-05-2007, 11:12 AM
Tri1 stick to the sketchbook for awhile, come up with something your happy with then try and paint it. Your letters are all disproportioned and not very unique and it doesnt flow together well.

clockwork
07-05-2007, 11:40 AM
Look around at these other bombs.
Right now your a little fish in a big pond.

You can look at these other ones and go DAYUM!

When sketching think like pea, Proportionate, and size wise.
Damn I gotta get a job lol....
-------------------------------------
Quoting Minor:
its at this youth centre that most of the local writers from my area go to and paint FOR FREE WITH IRONLAK,BELTON ANYTHING.

You fuckers. Why cant graffiti be such a "Problem" here that I can just go down to my local youth center and TRY OUT Belton and Montana.
I love my boys from AU.
Dont take that the wrong way.
*Hugs the aussies*

-GEKS-
07-05-2007, 12:52 PM
havent painted in a while...then i got some dolla cans and did some throwies, characs, and a piece

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1299.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1298.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1296.jpg
forgot that i didnt take flics yet so i started doin a charac over it
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1295.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1300.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1297.jpg

clockwork
07-05-2007, 02:31 PM
havent painted in a while...then i got some dolla cans and did some throwies, characs, and a piece



http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h278/lizardman154/DSCF1296.jpg


This one is by far the best.
All of these are yours?
Cause this ones like a world of difference to compare?

-GEKS-
07-05-2007, 02:50 PM
yeah, thats mine, and so aree the rest
thats my main throwie, all the other things i've never really tried painting before
thanks

amk
07-05-2007, 04:09 PM
fucking nice hunger
PLESE DONT CRIT THE LETTERS, I JUST DID THE FILL, THIS IS MAD OLD WEN I WAS A SUPER TOY, IT SAYS HAMPSTEAD, IT WAS A MURAL FOR MY SKOOL,
A UK WRITER NAMED PURE WAS TEACHING ME CAN CONTROLE SO CRIT THAT PLESE-oops had cap locks on, http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/7096/hampsteadbi0.jpg

Extremely nice..did you do the cuttin back etc.
-geks- ... not feeling any of em...work on the letters in your book also..
Clockwork...have you painted yourself..?..

hhhhhhh
07-05-2007, 05:08 PM
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/Picture1005-1.jpg

first piece in this style crits

Derogatory9o5
07-05-2007, 05:09 PM
Not feeling the E or the M and can control would use some work but not bad for your first try at the style.

Guillermo Joćo Rodriguez
07-05-2007, 06:47 PM
in regards too you're piece, kinda sketchy, but I gotta admit, regardless of what I think of you're throw, you do get up alot.

ClOH
07-05-2007, 09:34 PM
Anyone here from cleveland ? ? ?

http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive2.jpg http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive.jpg http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive1.jpg

raveone
07-05-2007, 09:57 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0003-14.jpg

rave and nerve

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0002-19.jpg

rave and nerve

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-23.jpg

rave

owned
07-05-2007, 11:18 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1235/527287821_d898018887_m.jpg (http://flickr.com/photos/8720680@N08/527287821/)
quik filler any crit?
-Forte4

Bombers Ambition
07-06-2007, 01:07 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/new1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/media1.jpg

MEATBALL
07-06-2007, 01:15 AM
first time using this name...the O is a little messed up...but oh well...its honestly not that great...i know yall will prolly agree.http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z16/Frylock_769/Picture032.jpg

7thIncision
07-06-2007, 01:37 AM
EBOM: Not bad for a first paint, colours are pretty good, Obviously the letters need a bit of work, but thats nothing some quality time with your blackbook can't fix. Maybe lose the white until you get your can control down more.

near
07-06-2007, 10:29 AM
near....neam...sore...HOT SHIT!

TAZM
07-06-2007, 12:16 PM
ok this is the first time i ever did any thing that wasnt a tag. i know its not great. but i was so tweaked out cus it was 11 AM and i kept hearing cars and people coming pretty close by. but noone saw me.

http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x100/L_Peezy/GraffitiTazm029.jpg

Derogatory9o5
07-06-2007, 01:30 PM
i kinda like that tazm simple to the point :P

undergroundanimal
07-06-2007, 03:34 PM
my first piece from months ago when i wrote d`sire..

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemian008.jpg

crits....?

MAiNKo
07-06-2007, 11:23 PM
my throw i painted for the first time..
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/19966/2004072491183116689_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004072491183116689)

crits..


DUck is a pretty big writer from Baltimore, jsut ot let you know...


http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y67/fr8unit/itsonbitch061.jpg

LionPenis
07-07-2007, 01:13 AM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-23.jpg

rave

your the biggest mark ever, how the fuck you gonna put up your myspace next to fucking vandalism? you deserve to get caught dip shit

MEATBALL
07-07-2007, 01:21 AM
thanks 7th incision...

Roolete
07-07-2007, 01:24 AM
meatball your missin some highlights on the top of the M and on the B. and personally i always like some drop shadow or 3D.

whered you do that? a house?

weldo
07-07-2007, 04:37 AM
aha myspace....man i wouldent be doing that aha.
heres mine
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5863/image016yh7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with 5300 (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=5300&make=Nokia) at 2007-07-07

clockwork
07-07-2007, 11:55 AM
Weldo that piece is sick I love the color scheme.
Its better than anything I have ever done.

And I saw that pic with the myspace thing on it yesterday, I was like
Oh now thats not good.

lol I thought about doing that too then I was like fuck that.
And people worry about cops on bombingscience.

Dur

SER.. :O
07-07-2007, 04:31 PM
SIIICK piece Weldo
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/S4300230.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/S4300232.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/S4300227.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/S4300228.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/S4300226.jpg

My very first throw ups, yay!!!
And blah at my can control... lol

hungr
07-07-2007, 04:52 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00565.jpg
(closer picture)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00566.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00570.jpg
mad bait bomb
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00577.jpg

cormac
07-08-2007, 02:01 AM
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb47/cormacb/Picture055.jpg

excuse the mess it was so fucking windy and twas freestyled

posting this here also because of how messy it is and nice stuff weldo should post it in the big boyz

l0ZE
07-08-2007, 03:14 AM
http://a585.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/21/l_82734c3035bf6f84e346303858025130.jpg

*Wing*
07-08-2007, 04:00 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1183641746_f.jpg

Newest piece... I don't like the way it turned out...

minor crimes
07-08-2007, 05:29 AM
nice style wing. fix the G up and the W up abit and it would look fresh. nice even piece as well.

revolt92
07-08-2007, 08:51 AM
http://a585.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/21/l_82734c3035bf6f84e346303858025130.jpg

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha...wtf is that?...sketch more...please for the love of god sketch more...hahahaha...are you proud enough to call that your own by being in the picture?

bloodlandmoney
07-08-2007, 11:30 AM
^^^ damn thats bad and i dont even know how to respond with crits to a pik like that

glass
07-08-2007, 12:00 PM
hahahahaha and look at all the cans around it too, it looks like he tried to pose like he's seen in a bunch of better pictures

anyhoo, dude sketch more but also dont stop painting because practice is good. just dont paint on ANYWHERE that people will see it untill you are somewhat decent.

Wing: def. looking better dude, your G's are def. improving and i like the W

Cor: dude i love the drips in the pink outline, idk if you meant that to happen but it looks good. structure could use some work though, keep it up.

Drakula
07-08-2007, 12:06 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0024.jpg

Another skatepark piece.

glass
07-08-2007, 12:19 PM
very nice control

could use some tweaks with cutting it back a little more to be cleaner but thats still pretty good

amk
07-08-2007, 12:51 PM
hahaha LOL ^ Loze is funny..

Wing....waaay better than your orther shit.....Cantrol is very good

Sewn
07-08-2007, 12:52 PM
Guys, I'm new to graff too, only done tags, but please tell me why would you fucking go out and paint when your stuff looks like this:



http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y162/Rile1/S4300226.jpg


or this:


http://a585.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/21/l_82734c3035bf6f84e346303858025130.jpg

Do you guys not realize how stupid spraying shit like that is?

Roolete
07-08-2007, 12:56 PM
the first one is better. loze is toy to the extreme. catch the "fuck the police" on the top lol?

amk
07-08-2007, 12:58 PM
Guys, I'm new to graff too, only done tags, but please tell me why would you fucking go out and paint when your stuff looks like this

Then you obivously have no fucken room to talk...
use your brain.

Loze will get better..
aleast hes painting..
same with Ser..
atleast hes putting in work..
unlike most of this toy forum.

anroe
07-08-2007, 02:17 PM
sum shit..

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-4.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-3.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/noname-2.jpg

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/life91/PICT1005.jpg


ill post more later

glass
07-08-2007, 03:01 PM
use a respirator too, and not the paper ones unless you want lung cancer when you're 40. it really helps i use one when i paint in my garage even though i put the car doors up.

anroe: im def. liking that first throw up pic.

Drakula
07-08-2007, 04:33 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/DSCN0024.jpg

Another skatepark piece.

Bumping this.Crits?

Derogatory9o5
07-08-2007, 04:34 PM
Nice Drak , good control but dont like that K Other letters are pretty nice. ooo and the D is different then your sketches.

anarchy
07-08-2007, 05:20 PM
Yo anroe im feeling the top throw but it seems like the A needs something.

emel
07-08-2007, 05:42 PM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7030/picture058wk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with C3040Z (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=C3040Z&make=OLYMPUS+OPTICAL+CO.%2CLTD) at 2007-07-08

did this today, crits please and uh yeah im in a rush so i will crit others when iget back on the site sorry

SKriBL*666
07-08-2007, 06:22 PM
your the biggest mark ever, how the fuck you gonna put up your myspace next to fucking vandalism? you deserve to get caught dip shit
Ya i know, cuz no one has graff myspaces:rolleyes:


drak, its like u started out hella dope, then it just didnt come out.
emel, im feelin it


sparetime
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k202/AerosolSkam916/Picture287.jpg

Nem
07-08-2007, 06:52 PM
i dont think the drips along the top look very good.

love that color combo though. good choice. maybe some white highlights.

you might wanna try closing up your O. like with a line instead of a circle as a hole. with the top of the E too. give it a try and see how you like it.

SKriBL*666
07-08-2007, 06:56 PM
ya im not feelin the drips either.
but i usually dont open my E and O.
i do a line

Clowney-Cakes
07-08-2007, 10:29 PM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7030/picture058wk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with C3040Z (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=C3040Z&make=OLYMPUS+OPTICAL+CO.%2CLTD) at 2007-07-08

did this today, crits please and uh yeah im in a rush so i will crit others when iget back on the site sorry

wow im felling this painted simple...maby make the e a lil bit more seen

Leser
07-09-2007, 02:45 AM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/3844/picture002ox8.jpg

amk
07-09-2007, 09:05 AM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7030/picture058wk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot with C3040Z (http://profile.imageshack.us/camerabuy.php?model=C3040Z&make=OLYMPUS+OPTICAL+CO.%2CLTD) at 2007-07-08

did this today, crits please and uh yeah im in a rush so i will crit others when iget back on the site sorry

the flow on that E is dope

Blackeyed_Pea
07-09-2007, 10:49 AM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/3844/picture002ox8.jpg

Decent, good can control just make the L a little bigger, id like to see that style and flow on your full name i think itd look sick

NEROISAHERO
07-09-2007, 10:57 AM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6048/1000581jr2.jpg
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/493/1000636qf2.jpg
The only thing i see really wrong is my can control
Please help me out if you see anything wrong.
The other thing is the R in the NERO peice, I don't Like it it.

EASE_RDK_JDC
07-09-2007, 11:01 AM
Anyone here from cleveland ? ? ?

http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive2.jpg http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive.jpg http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive1.jpg

Im from Columbus. Ever heard of omnimix.com? Its ohios graffiti forum. Great to learn about your local crews and shit and lookin at pictures of the stuff. Check it out.

amk
07-09-2007, 11:03 AM
Nero...hate to burst yah bubble..but everythin is wrong..drop your paint and work on your letters in the books.

Vice
07-09-2007, 11:18 AM
im going to have to agree with amk... it looks like you were really trying, its just no good. go back to the blackbook, make a few sketches, and post em up and well crit them for ya.

MainEvent
07-09-2007, 01:10 PM
good start, keep practicing. bottom right is the best. just keep shit round and fuck around with em.

http://a515.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_63200109f2c0c50c2582b1e7b1b8c5f2.jpg

http://a252.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/115/l_a0d102ff36beb247f8c849a3a7ab0053.jpg

http://a215.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/94/l_d6a35aa0d74d5f3dced04e5755bcf39e.jpg

http://a564.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_650dcad641bcb34ad6ae5665e6c577d3.jpg

Vice
07-09-2007, 02:26 PM
main i think that you should put a dot or oval or whatever you what in the center of the bottom round part of the a. on the top three pics i would have to say that the a could be mistaken for a messed up o. the a is only obvious in the last pic. other than that though i think its good. just mess around a bit with the a.

pez ss
07-09-2007, 07:19 PM
weldo sik nice ass fill ser there nice spots but save emtell u get better sketch more and then practice under bridges anro has a sik bomb and i nice fade emal lovin that simple i like the drips on skribls bomb they look good with the colors. http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/5637/averwhitefillblueforcefec0.th.jpg (http://img125.imageshack.us/my.php?image=averwhitefillblueforcefec0.jpg)http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7474/avewingedbombwhitelx7.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=avewingedbombwhitelx7.jpg)http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/4825/dripydripytagrc3.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dripydripytagrc3.jpg)http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2734/fillheatspotyk6.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fillheatspotyk6.jpg) critz?

-SkeTcH-
07-09-2007, 08:38 PM
ALRITE HERE COMES THE MOST TOY QUESTION. WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A PIECE, A THROWIE, AND BOMBING? i mean i kind of understand but please i need yur help i dont wanna be a toy forever and hey u can laugh at me if u want but we all start somewhere..

emel
07-09-2007, 10:00 PM
look in the threads with those words in them... it will pretty much explain itself

KASE2
07-10-2007, 12:00 AM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6048/1000581jr2.jpg
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/493/1000636qf2.jpg
The only thing i see really wrong is my can control
Please help me out if you see anything wrong.
The other thing is the R in the NERO peice, I don't Like it it.

i'm not tryin 2 b mean... but these look horrible. I thot the NERO piece sed Hero. u need mor work on ur letters. try writing them out just as they are b4 adding a whole lotta the other stuff.
nd yea u do need better can control. just practice homie

KASE2
07-10-2007, 12:07 AM
anroe - good can control homie

*Wing*
07-10-2007, 02:16 AM
ALRITE HERE COMES THE MOST TOY QUESTION. WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A PIECE, A THROWIE, AND BOMBING? i mean i kind of understand but please i need yur help i dont wanna be a toy forever and hey u can laugh at me if u want but we all start somewhere..

Throwie is usually bubble styled, simple, and two coloured graff... Bombing is kinda the same... And piece is more complex graff with more colours in it... It also has highlights, drop shadows, 3ds and such...

d_g
07-10-2007, 03:26 AM
ALRITE HERE COMES THE MOST TOY QUESTION. WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A PIECE, A THROWIE, AND BOMBING? i mean i kind of understand but please i need yur help i dont wanna be a toy forever and hey u can laugh at me if u want but we all start somewhere..

Throw up is simply that, thrown up. Usually uses as few lines as possible, 3 or less colours, made up of a fill, outline and simple drop shadow and sometimes a final outline. Eg:

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6121/throwwallso5.jpg

A piece, originally short for masterpiece, usually highly detailed, usually take a lot of time to complete. Eg:
http://www.stick-up-kids.de/images/bildermember/atom/bilder/atomherz%201.jpg

A bomb kinda depends where you are, generally it's kinda anything less complex than a piece, usually similar to a throw.

Can questions like this be asked in toy story.

Thanks.

aka_dope
07-10-2007, 03:37 AM
any tips...


http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t249/bangs69/after.jpg

Roolete
07-10-2007, 03:42 AM
...bite. i call a bite. Mr. Wiggles font

aka_dope
07-10-2007, 03:45 AM
actually its bubbles haha..yea i kno i kinda jacked it from his site but..im a noob so wut ya expect...

uhhh
07-10-2007, 11:05 AM
ugh.
no.
nonono.
dont bite, jsut because your a toy doesnt make it okay.
just about everyone does it when they first start but thats because they know nothing.
and your can controls prety shitty.
stick to paper for a long time.
BUT,
that aka stencil looks decent.

ChRoMa 11820
07-10-2007, 11:41 AM
yeah dont bite wigs cause everyone will kno and its okay now but try to progress and dont hit the streets until u have ur own style

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/9026/dsc1641dy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10

Sick!
07-10-2007, 12:48 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/8000000010e189a/1/100/Qw9nyaTd7z9V4CPFs5cO6vB2_5k43leo.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/7H3NXukH0j9zhjcvEtogDs8hEp1iBi81?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/8000000010e1aa0/1/34/rtKF7YD25T9eyZlUosOdSg6HVoxOdHjF.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/FJRmeysx0D9F2iFHm1lsDgDHal_5_K7E?referrer=hlnk)


first time bombing we had other tags and throws but we werent able to get flixs....

TESTER
07-10-2007, 01:44 PM
sick not bad for you first time,
chroma tone it down way mucho get some seet peices with solid colors before you have you have a spaz'm inside of your peice. i like you structure but try solid colors maybe 2. but dont do 2 solid colors plus fading those colors in the backgroud. and u did that weird green shit below your peice. mucho bado. its a bad color and its not filled in well and its not realy a force field. just tone it down and i think it would be bomb digity.

amk
07-10-2007, 01:46 PM
Chroma...you pushin yourself far far too much man

CHSS
07-10-2007, 04:25 PM
this is my first try
crits would be helpful

pez ss
07-10-2007, 04:51 PM
weldo sik nice ass fill ser there nice spots but save emtell u get better sketch more and then practice under bridges anro has a sik bomb and i nice fade emal lovin that simple i like the drips on skribls bomb they look good with the colors. http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/5637/averwhitefillblueforcefec0.th.jpg (http://img125.imageshack.us/my.php?image=averwhitefillblueforcefec0.jpg)http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7474/avewingedbombwhitelx7.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=avewingedbombwhitelx7.jpg)http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/4825/dripydripytagrc3.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dripydripytagrc3.jpg)http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2734/fillheatspotyk6.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fillheatspotyk6.jpg) critz?
bumpin for crits

SLEDGEHAMMER
07-10-2007, 06:37 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/40000000b63447a/1/24/8ACni4Z86z9tT8BgE0KAiv2ZK3ZMdG2M.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/WqkgP6Gs1D_TC5xmVosKPPLcUyYt8jpa?referrer=hlnk)

Big up my boys amk and 00-made-00.

sketch3
07-10-2007, 06:50 PM
u fucked it up with blue fade

SLEDGEHAMMER
07-10-2007, 06:57 PM
The fades not to bad in life, the PURPLE just werent working to well with the pink was realy thick and the pink was getting eaten by it.

hungr
07-10-2007, 08:16 PM
yerbuddy robert d'nearoe

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010114.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010124-1.jpg

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=137187&id=504661662

aka_dope
07-10-2007, 08:42 PM
dam yo tht tag on the side of tht chik is both...dope as hell and hot as fuk..

ChRoMa 11820
07-10-2007, 09:46 PM
Chroma...you pushin yourself far far too much man


how so
i can do wilds
that was my first piece
prolly 5th time paintin at all
and all i think i messed up was the bottom i just shoulda stopped
and i went off the top off the head on the wall
if u have any real critiques i'd be happy but sayin im pushin myself to hard is an impossibility

Sumoe
07-10-2007, 10:26 PM
He's talkin' about your arrows and shit I believe. I think he's just sayin' you should be goin' a little bit simpler.

aka_dope
07-11-2007, 12:48 AM
fuk tht..i still say it looked pretty dope chroma

Fluffy Bunnies
07-11-2007, 12:52 AM
yerbuddy robert d'nearoe



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010124-1.jpg

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=137187&id=504661662




wonder how guys get to write on girls?!?
ahaha what kinda pens you reccomend? cuz I wanna try it!

Jroc1993
07-11-2007, 01:29 AM
i dont know about the pens but id say ask yur gf or a good friend

near
07-11-2007, 09:52 AM
umm i filled that with acryllic paint and used paint markers for the outlines, highlights and 3d...i thought i had a black but realized i didnt when i went to outline lol...yeh also plan out how the piece is gonna be positioned cuz as you can see the way i did it you cant flick the whole piece in one frame (starts on her stomach finishes past her spine)...didnt think about it till the end, umm also plan on doin it with a girl you can "get friendly" with lol cuz its hard to sit there with a half naked girl then send her home after...also makes breaks a whooole lot better :P

amk
07-11-2007, 10:22 AM
how so
i can do wilds
that was my first piece
prolly 5th time paintin at all
and all i think i messed up was the bottom i just shoulda stopped
and i went off the top off the head on the wall
if u have any real critiques i'd be happy but sayin im pushin myself to hard is an impossibility

you obviously are because the letters in that peice are fuckign whack...hit the books...work on the letters....simple blocks..then in 3 motnhs..start painting again..then you might have some knowledge of wehre bouts to put extensions.


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/40000000b63447a/1/24/8ACni4Z86z9tT8BgE0KAiv2ZK3ZMdG2M.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/WqkgP6Gs1D_TC5xmVosKPPLcUyYt8jpa?referrer=hlnk)

Big up my boys amk and 00-made-00.

yess..
my man Asen doing his shit..
where gona be big one day Asen..
Next generation mateeeee..

and Chroma..the only decent letter there after looking at it proberly is the A...but do whatever

near
07-11-2007, 11:23 AM
your letters arent necessarily that bad but those arrows are WACK and ruin what decency the piece did have, i suggest you take all of them out and draw that piece again with just the letters and see how it looks then try to work them in there logically not just at any point they will fit, the one on the bottom of the o and the one to the top left of the c arent quite as random as the others

GrimeyScraper
07-11-2007, 12:35 PM
here is something i painted last weekend, no sketch just freehanded it. critz pleez...

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b3/beedoublejay/img138.jpg

Live4TheWall
07-11-2007, 02:04 PM
I got bored and havnt painted in a while so I went out yesterday, wasnt sure what to paint so I just used the drawing from the Round Robin Battle.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/hpim1194.jpg
Thats the drawing... this is the painting.... its probably like 7' tall, and maybe 10' long. Before you fuckers point it out, I know the K is royally fucked up.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/hpim1399.jpg

Kayone707
07-11-2007, 04:44 PM
u must not have seen any of my work
but ive seen yours and do u even use extensions or anything?
like i said first time i painted a piece
i can do it on paper
but that was my first time bringin it to the wall
im always hittin the books too
u need to stop preachin to everyone about this stuff and take ur own advice
on that piece u did the one sides 3d is goin in the total opposite direction then the other side
mine was just practice too with stock caps and rusto
i like to see u rock a wildstyle
if u wanna battle im down
im not feelin ur style at all

listen toy, shut up and stop bragging that you "could do wildstyle".
Dont get all defensive on people who are trying to help you out
and Dont use excuses on why your piece came out the way it did.
It is what it is, so dont try and make shit up to make you look better
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/9026/dsc1641dy1.jpg
Your C looks good, but then again that Exact same style C has been used since the 80's
Your R looks too stubby, and has that useless extension on the top.
the pointless arrow coming out of the O makes it look like a Y, or a lollipop.
the M is way too small and it dont match the other letters (for the fact that it dont have any "uber ke3l arrows")

Get Rid of all the shitty arrows and extensions. and make ALL your letters have the same flow as your generic C and H. i would actually like it Tons more if it would a been a simple and had the same flow.

oh yea
*Hold your can closer to the wall to get crisp lines, your lines look fuzzy. and Try to get the highlights all in one shot,unlike the bottom left extender on the C, you tried to do it twice and didnt even come close to matching up your lines.

decides that, keep on painting and get rid of that toy ego.

Clowney-Cakes
07-11-2007, 05:10 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00565.jpg
(closer picture)
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00566.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00570.jpg
mad bait bomb
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00577.jpg

BUMP. felling all of thees

hungr
07-11-2007, 10:08 PM
some newer shit
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00598.jpg
kinda fucked up on the forcefield and the G
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/102_6116.jpg

aka_dope
07-11-2007, 10:16 PM
nice throw...how long it took ya?

the n kind looks lik an r tho...

hungr
07-11-2007, 10:20 PM
which N?? uhh the throw up took like 3 mins and the straight letter like 15

aka_dope
07-11-2007, 10:29 PM
which N?? uhh the throw up took like 3 mins and the straight letter like 15

the one in the str8 letter..
shulda braught the rght side of it a lil more down kno wu i mean?

GrimeyScraper
07-11-2007, 11:45 PM
another freehand peice

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b3/beedoublejay/BJsSkull1copy-2.jpg

TESTER
07-12-2007, 12:39 AM
dope shit... love using colors in shading adds so much to it.

RemoZ
07-12-2007, 12:40 AM
Skulls are played but it's good.

aka_dope
07-12-2007, 12:50 AM
grimey..seriously dude wtf...ur not a toy haha
so wut r u doin postin in these forums....not sayin its a bad thing but i think ur a lil more advanced then most of the people in here

killtheugly
07-12-2007, 02:18 AM
nice g's hungry

"FANT.:PDA:
07-12-2007, 01:08 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/scando_commando/P6150002.jpg
turned out not exactly how i imagined, any crits?

aka_dope
07-12-2007, 02:41 PM
eh.....its iight....needa work on the 3D effect tho..

Jroc1993
07-12-2007, 02:41 PM
those lines in the background need to be straighter and cleaner imo

"FANT.:PDA:
07-12-2007, 11:13 PM
definitely i agree with both of you guys, lines are sketch, and the whole 3d is bullshit, ive never fucked with a 3d like that so some of the small details look asymetrical, im probably gonna drop that 3d and try somethin else out

ChRoMa 11820
07-13-2007, 03:54 PM
fant try usin a ddiff color for the outline instead of orange because u have orange in the fill already. Use a color that compliments the fill colors like lime green or baby blue.