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Casa45
11-06-2007, 06:24 PM
OUT my letters?

hookedonhiphop
11-06-2007, 06:32 PM
Hooked i like the lettering on the second on, but the color scheme is pretty fucked up.

i was just finishing up some leftover cans

Swoe.45
11-06-2007, 06:36 PM
Its your letters. Hooked. everything else is fine.

HEIST
11-06-2007, 08:00 PM
Gratz on the getaway homie....and i dont write heist anymore im kinda cut off from the whole graffiti scene so i didnt know there was a HEIST...but i quit now....still lookin for critz on how i can change shit


Had to out run 4 cops and a helicopter in a gated community to get this up. fucking rich people. so forgive me for not finishing. my freedom was more important at the time. AND had no tips. :(
And Heist there already was a Heist. He passed away and is well known. and he was alot better. so find a different name.

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8199/rushxj2.jpg

5Funerals
11-06-2007, 09:45 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/DSCF0010.jpg

Practice so it wouldnt come out shitty on the streets. Im doing it with yellow fill and black outline soon so look out for flicks.

Huh
11-07-2007, 04:12 AM
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive.jpg

not sure if that was the effect you wanted on that fill or not buh it looks unfinished

ClOH
11-07-2007, 05:46 AM
no thats what i wanted. im gonna start adding some light outlines on i think if i add a hard dark outline it will look like garbage

RUDE_Bwoy
11-07-2007, 03:45 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/DSCF0010.jpg

Practice so it wouldnt come out shitty on the streets. Im doing it with yellow fill and black outline soon so look out for flicks.

work on your letters,especially the a

5Funerals
11-07-2007, 05:00 PM
thanks for the crits Rude BWOY, I will get sketching. Im going painting some time this weekend regardless though cause I have a feeling it might work itself out if im actually out getting up if you know what I mean? Plus how can I get can control if I never paint.

Clowney-Cakes
11-07-2007, 06:22 PM
anom, elka roof2....
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/4608/rooftopnumber2043sw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1135/rooftopnumber2041ii9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hast302
11-07-2007, 11:21 PM
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x55/mikedoordan/DSCN0227.jpg
advice?

trashtalk
11-08-2007, 12:19 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_4338.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/random243.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/picsoffats064.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/random217.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/picsoffats307.jpg
some crack heads wrote all in the white with sharpie before i could go back and get a flick
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_4343.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/gtr031.jpg

*Wing*
11-08-2007, 07:27 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1193593791_f.jpg

Newww! Done in total dark on a pretty shitty wall...

hookedonhiphop
11-08-2007, 11:35 AM
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/1.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/2.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/3.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/4.JPG

Fluffy Bunnies
11-08-2007, 01:58 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1193593791_f.jpg

Newww! Done in total dark on a pretty shitty wall...

and a shitty piece
SKETCH MORE

whahappen?
11-08-2007, 02:00 PM
and a shitty piece
SKETCH MORE
youre fucking dumb the g is the only bad thing

Fluffy Bunnies
11-08-2007, 02:04 PM
oh well... my bad... i mean to say "it's very pretty":rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes: :rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

Swoe.45
11-08-2007, 04:00 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8378/img0042wy3.jpg

just a quicky with shitty paint.

regos
11-08-2007, 04:56 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_4338.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/random243.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/picsoffats064.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/random217.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/picsoffats307.jpg
some crack heads wrote all in the white with sharpie before i could go back and get a flick
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_4343.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/gtr031.jpg

haha i love the punk dead emo next note. your shit's dope!

glass
11-08-2007, 05:52 PM
hmmm... no offense man but that is not by any means dope. from my view you def. need to sketch more, those pieces that you're trying to make look like claws need a lot of work. the only decent ones i would say were the second one from the top and the second from the bottom. but keep trying dude, just sketch more

thesilentvandal
11-08-2007, 06:13 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/graffs023.jpghttp://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/graffs020.jpghttp://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/graffs018.jpg
from last weekend

Swoe.45
11-08-2007, 06:15 PM
Pretty dope. except the green and red one.

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9642/img0043go5.jpg

Hidden Teknique
11-08-2007, 07:35 PM
that sig is amazing...where ever did you find it

Teez-EmM!!!
11-08-2007, 07:55 PM
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hive.jpg u shouldnt have used a white backround if it was an other colour that would make it look more finished. or done summthing with the backround to make it look complete.

Roolete
11-08-2007, 09:16 PM
resc i like your re on your throwie but the sc sucks. possibly resin expired, bud?

and the pieces suck

Stonk
11-08-2007, 09:41 PM
swoe - damn your sketches are pretty fire but that throw..ehh needs work. its just basic bubble letters

daws i love that straight..its a little sketchy but thats the shit i love.. also those throws are real good too.

Pharoah
11-08-2007, 10:11 PM
agreed ^^

daws the red/white one is so nice
swoe i think u should try a lower case E but thats just me
resc when u put $$ in the top of ur c it looks like an e but still really nice throwies

ps daws what city u in thers a guy that writes seka in my city

dcite
11-08-2007, 11:11 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/graffs020.jpg


this is not toy daws! just work out the D - the curve of the top of it doesnt flow 100%

love it tho.

SKriBL*666
11-08-2007, 11:21 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1193593791_f.jpg

Newww! Done in total dark on a pretty shitty wall...

Since people cant give positive criticism, its not bad.
Needs a bit more structure but its not bad.
Only thing i didnt like was the i, and a bit of work on the G.

Pharoah
11-08-2007, 11:42 PM
hey..

hungr
11-09-2007, 10:09 AM
the only real good letter in the wing is the N
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00002-4.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00003-3.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/hungr-light.jpg
all around shitty peice... done in the dark
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00002-5.jpg

dinedgc
11-09-2007, 10:37 AM
i like it man, but lose the little green shits around the red one

Skesh
11-09-2007, 11:33 AM
why don't you ever try another style
don't get me wrong i love this piece but i'd get tired of doing the same letters 40 times

trashtalk
11-09-2007, 11:41 AM
thoughs looks super clean nice work dude

now for my garbage
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/gtr012.jpg

Bets369R
11-09-2007, 05:26 PM
the only real good letter in the wing is the N
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00002-4.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00003-3.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/hungr-light.jpg
all around shitty peice... done in the dark
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00002-5.jpg

for the love of god get out of the toy forum and stop making us all look like kindergarten scribblers.

hungr
11-09-2007, 06:09 PM
i can see when im not wanted :(

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
11-09-2007, 06:57 PM
its ok hungr, i love you.
always have, always will.
<3

Clowney-Cakes
11-09-2007, 08:23 PM
yo hunger is our fam. he is NOT toy, but he should keep his fam up-dated right?
yo hunger, nice shit, keep it comming!
ELKA

*Wing*
11-10-2007, 04:32 AM
Thanks for the positive crits, Hungr, nice freight...

Swoe.45
11-10-2007, 04:01 PM
swoe - damn your sketches are pretty fire but that throw..ehh needs work. its just basic bubble letters

daws i love that straight..its a little sketchy but thats the shit i love.. also those throws are real good too.

I Dont do throws. just pieces. hate throws. but just starting.

MainEvent
11-10-2007, 06:47 PM
damn hungr, that shits fresh man. are you from the UK?

hungr
11-10-2007, 06:58 PM
naw man..from toronto, canada

MainEvent
11-10-2007, 07:01 PM
oh word good shit man. feelin it, stay up

Teez-EmM!!!
11-10-2007, 07:08 PM
hunger the end of the e on the frieght is a little fat but its def any way. the red one is perfect just loose the blue squgls (cant spell) and with the last one at the bottom of the u make it one bar not to it looks better. oh and did u go out with dim when u did those?

hungr
11-10-2007, 07:18 PM
naw.. i was with next peeps

Teez-EmM!!!
11-10-2007, 07:22 PM
oh he said u guys were going today just wondering.

Fluffy Bunnies
11-10-2007, 11:03 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-8.jpg

ClOH
11-10-2007, 11:11 PM
yea hungr shit is fresh homie love them autoracks
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n41/PosinSeaUrchin/hives-6.jpg

djsupreeme
11-11-2007, 12:14 AM
what is that :\ ^^^^^^^

capitol
11-11-2007, 12:36 AM
looks like a giant fucked up tagg mang
HUNGR:Much props i always thought you were from Chicago:ONow im jsut retarded..or im thinkin of bigel or something...But yea the red one is pretty swell for a night timehit..the fills at night at the hardest part..

mmmburgers
11-11-2007, 02:19 AM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-8.jpg
I am feelin that Euro steez mang

RUDE_Bwoy
11-11-2007, 10:15 AM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-8.jpg

needs alot more work

deviant1
11-11-2007, 02:16 PM
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x60/waspone420/SSPX0312.jpg

5yn
11-11-2007, 04:03 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/daughter.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/stinkybritches1.jpg

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/daughter2.jpg

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/nester026.jpg

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster018.jpg

*Wing*
11-11-2007, 05:05 PM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1194813206_f.jpg
Here ya go...
Fluffy bunnies, that style is cool but needs more work...

thesilentvandal
11-11-2007, 05:05 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012036.jpghttp://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012033.jpg

ugly shit, the tag is crosed by some guy

MainEvent
11-11-2007, 06:28 PM
deviant- nice from what i can see. if you could get a better angle on it, shit'd help. letters and can control look solid

must- feelin it

sba- that A is dope. B is nice, and the s is solid. good shit, nice simp

daws- cool

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_2032.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_2034.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1997.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1994.jpg

did the first one in the dark, couldn't really see alot of what i was doing, so i kinda fucked it up

5yn
11-11-2007, 11:35 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster005-1.jpg
mais - maby work on a less crazy fill till u get your cancontrol down a bit

*Wing*
11-12-2007, 03:11 AM
Daws, nice simple on that freight!
Main, the last piece is pretty good, it has that old school look which I like!

Stonk
11-12-2007, 10:17 AM
Daws - was that tag with a glue bottle? if so i fucking love those, well actually either way i really like that tag. good shit. Also on that train piece i think a slanted 3d would work better than the drop shadow.

Main - that first piece is terrible..the second is a little better but what happened..for a while you had pretty decent stuff but i think your trying to make shit too complicated.

Ves i like those throws. you should add a shadow.

haven't posted much stuff in a while..new name first 2 times painting it. the first wall is something me and my friend did. he writes feiz, and im sure he wouldn't mind a few crits.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1649.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1650.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1651.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1729.jpg

Clowney-Cakes
11-12-2007, 10:26 AM
that shit up there is real good^

MainEvent
11-12-2007, 11:07 AM
Main - that first piece is terrible..the second is a little better but what happened..for a while you had pretty decent stuff but i think your trying to make shit too complicated.
word? alright man appreciate that. imma reevulate some shit

RUDE_Bwoy
11-12-2007, 05:03 PM
Daws - was that tag with a glue bottle? if so i fucking love those, well actually either way i really like that tag. good shit. Also on that train piece i think a slanted 3d would work better than the drop shadow.

Main - that first piece is terrible..the second is a little better but what happened..for a while you had pretty decent stuff but i think your trying to make shit too complicated.

Ves i like those throws. you should add a shadow.

haven't posted much stuff in a while..new name first 2 times painting it. the first wall is something me and my friend did. he writes feiz, and im sure he wouldn't mind a few crits.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1649.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1650.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1651.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSCF1729.jpg

fresh especially the last one

mmmburgers
11-12-2007, 05:54 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster005-1.jpg
mais - maby work on a less crazy fill till u get your cancontrol down a bit

Man thats a dope throw you got there man
lookin good

glass
11-12-2007, 06:17 PM
that NES throw is pretty sick except for that "s," i'm thinking that and drop the vertical line in the "n" a little more down into the middle connection of the "n" if you get what i mean

BIGel
11-12-2007, 09:08 PM
painted with esk this weekend while i was in nevada, pretty shitty.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/redone.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0307.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0308.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0306.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0303.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0301.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0300.jpg

mmmburgers
11-12-2007, 10:31 PM
BIGel, that spot looks like its in the middle of no where man haha
but other than that, good, i like it =]
painted this wack peice under a bridge, a while ago
oh btw, some toy tagged over it >=[
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/tsaame.jpg
crits?

Swoe.45
11-13-2007, 12:21 AM
THEY DOPE EL, too bad noone can see them within a 100mile radius.

Game905
11-13-2007, 04:32 PM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2184/graffiti124us0.jpg

acres1
11-13-2007, 06:15 PM
acres cams and grape

Merga
11-13-2007, 06:19 PM
Daws - love the peice, but i agree that it should have 3d instead
Main- like the leters in the first 2, but theres to much going on
Nes - nice throw, though i think the e could use a little work
Tride - like the leters
DIGel -- dope.
just my 2 cents.

any crits?
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/7953/mrholllow3df6.jpghttp://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3999/mrthrowiejz3.jpghttp://img161.imageshack.us/img161/7075/mergahollow2hm7.jpg

acres1
11-13-2007, 06:24 PM
Daws - love the peice, but i agree that it should have 3d instead
Main- like the leters in the first 2, but theres to much going on
Nes - nice throw, though i think the e could use a little work
Tride - like the leters
DIGel -- dope.
just my 2 cents.

any crits?
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/7953/mrholllow3df6.jpghttp://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3999/mrthrowiejz3.jpghttp://img161.imageshack.us/img161/7075/mergahollow2hm7.jpg

ok do this.... stop painting.... start drawing...

Pharoah
11-13-2007, 06:25 PM
try to make your letters in as few clean strokes as possible, it looks like its overlapping way too much

hamwallet
11-13-2007, 06:27 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i183/hamwallet225/P1010181-1.jpg

BIGel
11-13-2007, 08:28 PM
THEY DOPE EL, too bad noone can see them within a 100mile radius.

you never been to american flats then, there are dope writers from all over the west coast up there almost every day, its a famous spot.

5yn
11-13-2007, 08:30 PM
both guys owned and mera or w/e could use a lil more time in the books or mabey a practice board and work on your lettering a bit befor u starting hitting panels

that aker shit is flossed tho i'm feeling that chrome

sum new shit out with muster again

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/BREASTFEDTONY1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster008-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster010-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster012-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/blockbuster013-1.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/BREASTFEDTONY.jpg

but yeah any 604 writers?

951951951
11-13-2007, 11:21 PM
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/peterpark529/1103071627a.jpg

painters touch caps suck =|

LikeOner
11-14-2007, 12:19 AM
merga and hamwallet

oh my lord. sorry bros, those are no good. go to new to graff thread. stay simple. use bars. don't hit the streets yet.

951 - the coloring seems a bit off

evade
11-14-2007, 12:36 AM
merga and hamwallet - stick to the notebooks man u guys are killing me with that o and pleaaase stay off the streets your guys's stuff aren't worth keeping up stick to books and practice boards till you get better

5yn- cool i guess but why so many pics of the same thing just different locations its like ur trying to show off no beef or nuthing but we can give u crits off just one

951- u got the 3d down as far as i can see could use a little work on it but u get the idea but lose the bubbles in the fill and personally im not diggin the bubbly letters but not bad

951951951
11-14-2007, 02:01 AM
the bubbles were jsut wasting paint, ill try gettin a pic of it i took when they were there lol, and yeaa my can control aint that great yet, or at least for straight lines

SEAZ___s.a.t
11-14-2007, 02:59 AM
umm iz ok peice try hit it wid sum more style man
u can keep it readable if yu wnat but j hit it wid sum more style i like the colorz though

*Wing*
11-14-2007, 05:05 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1194813206_f.jpg
Here ya go...
Fluffy bunnies, that style is cool but needs more work...
Bump!

Game905, cool throwie!
Bigel, props for the pics, cool spot!

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-14-2007, 11:56 AM
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8840/1002471hb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

$EmEkOner
11-14-2007, 12:09 PM
ok do this.... stop painting.... start drawing...

less painting more sketching:eek:

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-14-2007, 12:17 PM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2184/graffiti124us0.jpg

haha peep that SEC lmao


work on that R and it will be good!

Teez-EmM!!!
11-14-2007, 03:57 PM
painted with esk this weekend while i was in nevada, pretty shitty.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/redone.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0307.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0308.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0306.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0303.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0301.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h58/Eskoner/today/IMG_0300.jpg
these are not toy lovin the faces bigel and that white and blue piece that esk did is DEFF

glass
11-14-2007, 04:28 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i183/hamwallet225/P1010181-1.jpg

LOL holy damn that just made my day

haha sorry man but you can't honestly think that's good. what you need to do is check out the "new 2 graff" thread in this toys forum, if it's still around, and see what it has to say. Start out simple with block letters and slowly progress to more technical stuff, but be warned this isn't something that just all of a sudden happens dude. letter development takes a lot of time, you're going to be at it for a while just like everybody else who starts. take you're time and practice a ton.

Bombers Ambition
11-14-2007, 05:37 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1296.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1300.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1304.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1302.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1287.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1295.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1294.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1208.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1279.jpg

Bastardo
11-14-2007, 05:42 PM
Man your handys let you down :/

hookedonhiphop
11-14-2007, 05:56 PM
i just started to write about 3 weeks ago..i just practice in my friend's basement right now until i get better. Need crit please.

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/11132007_1.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/11132007_2.JPG

Bombers Ambition
11-14-2007, 06:17 PM
hit the books

anie 1
11-14-2007, 10:33 PM
i just started to write about 3 weeks ago..i just practice in my friend's basement right now until i get better. Need crit please.

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/11132007_1.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/11132007_2.JPG

stick to pencils 4 now

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-14-2007, 10:35 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1296.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1300.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1304.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1302.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1287.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1295.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1294.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1208.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1279.jpg



bbbbb uuuuu mmmmm ppppp
haha

OE SDM TCK! holla!

trashtalk
11-15-2007, 01:59 AM
the c is fucked up
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_8408.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_8407.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_8406.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_8409.jpg
old
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/gtr013.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_8402.jpg

*Wing*
11-15-2007, 02:53 AM
http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1194813206_f.jpg

Bump for critz!

SkuzSCT
11-15-2007, 02:58 AM
Lose the pointy shit comin outta that red shit and make it like a cloud or just fade it out or something... Maybe put a shadow on the shit too and it'd be aight.

Teez-EmM!!!
11-15-2007, 09:37 AM
hooked work in your book.
sore all def i dont think ur toy that hungr is nice to

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-15-2007, 01:12 PM
sore is no toy...

5yn
11-15-2007, 01:30 PM
sore that shits fucking ill i cant even tell u how to improve u got a dope throw
n resk your r is dope but your last letter there needs sum working on

amen1
11-15-2007, 04:12 PM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c20/iamjohnnydamon18/Photo-0130-1.jpg

*Wing*
11-15-2007, 04:52 PM
Lose the pointy shit comin outta that red shit and make it like a cloud or just fade it out or something... Maybe put a shadow on the shit too and it'd be aight.

You're really not into euro, am I right? :)

Clowney-Cakes
11-15-2007, 06:43 PM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2184/graffiti124us0.jpg

bumbaruski

GUS
11-16-2007, 02:46 AM
i run out of paint alot cause its hard to get supplies where i live.
but what else am i missing to make my shit look bad ass???
help!

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m218/somisracer3/GS.jpg

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m218/somisracer3/somissss.jpg

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m218/somisracer3/gus.jpg

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m218/somisracer3/gusss-1.jpg

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m218/somisracer3/somisss.jpg

Kayone707
11-16-2007, 02:50 AM
i run out of paint alot cause its hard to get supplies where i live.
but what else am i missing to make my shit look bad ass???


whats missing?
about 5+ years of experience.

its gonna take years to get your stuff looking "bad ass"

in the mean while. practice...

and you might wanna get rid of the "true kings" sig

5Funerals
11-16-2007, 06:14 AM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/1965113739_8cf255a1c5.jpg

The shadow is fucked up but im still pretty satisfied since it was the first time I've ever gone bombing.

hookedonhiphop
11-16-2007, 11:45 AM
i'm still sketching... still practicing...i know i need work but i think i'm coming along pretty well. I started to use paint only a few weeks ago...any crit?

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/pic_1.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/pic_2.JPG

RUDE_Bwoy
11-16-2007, 03:53 PM
dont try burners just yet.you need a lot more practice

hookedonhiphop
11-16-2007, 05:03 PM
dont try burners just yet.you need a lot more practice

what is a "burner"? sorry for my ignorange, still wicked new to graffiti.

hookedonhiphop
11-16-2007, 05:10 PM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/1965113739_8cf255a1c5.jpg

The shadow is fucked up but im still pretty satisfied since it was the first time I've ever gone bombing.

i'm new too but your fills appear to be a bit patchy. I say it's good for a first try. my first time using paint was pretty bad

hookedonhiphop
11-16-2007, 05:14 PM
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c20/iamjohnnydamon18/Photo-0130-1.jpg

got a better photo? hard to crit at the angle ur at

AyteYourCookies
11-17-2007, 01:44 PM
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture368.jpg

Olick
11-17-2007, 01:48 PM
Dunno if this is toy or not. You decide


sa.oner tips
933

finish it.

looks interesting so far.

Fluffy Bunnies
11-17-2007, 02:55 PM
FUCK ALL YA'LL

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/kilsO.jpg

mmmburgers
11-17-2007, 02:59 PM
^^
Lookin good there mister fluffy

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Cause1.jpg

bojangles
11-17-2007, 04:18 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC01883.jpg

bojangles
11-17-2007, 04:41 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC01809.jpg

another one, shit colour choice, dunno why i tryed to put yellow bubbles inside the fill

mmmburgers
11-17-2007, 07:34 PM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/untitledsss.jpg
yeah "CA" short for like, cause, you know?
crits?

djsupreeme
11-17-2007, 10:32 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC01809.jpg

another one, shit colour choice, dunno why i tryed to put yellow bubbles inside the fill
dope fill on that top one..

MainEvent
11-18-2007, 12:59 AM
fluffy bunnies- shits nice man.

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flicksism011.jpg
little simp, the N is real hurt. been hitting the books on it since i got home

HadeP
11-18-2007, 02:07 AM
its funny how you can paint better then you can sketch.

HadeP
11-18-2007, 02:13 AM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/pphadee/Picture034.jpg
Riot And Lojic

MainEvent
11-18-2007, 10:27 AM
haha yeah. i take my time painting whereas i just do shit on sketching and then add on other shit, like in the toy bbook shit, the star outlines and the force with 3d and clouds and go overboard with shit. the throwies are nice though, feelin that R alot

HadeP
11-18-2007, 11:56 AM
yeah man,
yo take your time on your sketches eh?
it'll help you improve faster

Bombers Ambition
11-18-2007, 05:42 PM
I did yesterday but i use enuffffffffffffff krylon still

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1308.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1307.jpg

undergroundanimal
11-18-2007, 05:54 PM
:eek: wow... i like that new piece you`ve made sore, nice fillin, clean lines and like the bubbles too.. good job..
i made these this afternoon.. Crits..?
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldinggoes006.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldinggoes008.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldinggoes001.jpg

Fube
11-19-2007, 01:05 PM
seen some paper stuff in here. u fucks need to pay some attention. im just going to delete your shit, im not going to bother moving it.


-fubazor the post nazi-

Enormous
11-20-2007, 12:33 AM
underground animal:some sick bombs and nice spots
heres a few of mine
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0082.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/110307043.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/100_2601.jpg
<a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0095.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>

Bombers Ambition
11-20-2007, 08:44 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1317.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1319.jpg
got some day times of this
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1313.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1315.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Graffiti1314.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1311.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Picture296.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Graffiti1312.jpg

sokerone
11-20-2007, 06:19 PM
http://pic2.piczo.com/wqkrew/?g=29230749&cr=2
http://pic2.piczo.com/wqkrew/?g=29230749&cr=2
http://pic2.piczo.com/wqkrew/?g=29230749&cr=2
http://pic2.piczo.com/wqkrew/?g=29230749&cr=2
http://pic2.piczo.com/wqkrew/?g=29230749&cr=2

MainEvent
11-20-2007, 07:05 PM
dunno if you posted sumthin, cant see anything^

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickrock017.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickrock023.jpg

dim
11-20-2007, 09:14 PM
main thats crisp man rele clean and simple but the large 3d im not a fan of but yor force feild is crisp

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-20-2007, 10:12 PM
dunno if you posted sumthin, cant see anything^

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickrock017.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickrock023.jpg
good clean lines the best i seen from you except dont cover up the left leg of the a with the m so much.
stop the vanishing point 3d do a drop shadow to the the left and than out line that in the white, it would be a nice straight letter piece.

Enormous
11-20-2007, 10:17 PM
lookin tight main
heres some more of mine
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0119.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0094.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0074.jpg

MainEvent
11-20-2007, 10:49 PM
appreciate the crits from everyone. the big ass 3D/ force, whatever you wanna call it, was just a concept i wanted to try out. sezer, imma rock that drop shadow next time, appreciated.

enor- first piece is dope, fills crazy. the characters fuckin dope man. just work on cleaning up the letters a bit, but thats some nice ass shit dude

"Riot"
11-21-2007, 12:27 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/Mypictures160.jpg

Can see this from the highway.
on a 150 foot dam.

5Funerals
11-21-2007, 12:46 PM
lookin tight main
heres some more of mine
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0119.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0094.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0074.jpg

This is really nice but why did you go over that piece?

ForOhWun
11-21-2007, 02:17 PM
couple Quick Suggestionshttp://xs221.xs.to/xs221/07473/Eww.JPGBe Back SUNDAYYYYYYYY

hookedonhiphop
11-21-2007, 02:22 PM
experimenting with different lettering and whatnot. the D came out a bit weird but of well.

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/tag_1.JPG
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/tag_2.JPG

PG_Miscreant
11-21-2007, 05:50 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/5338/thor1xd9.th.jpg (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=thor1xd9.jpg)
just a shitty lil throw (one of my lessers) but what do you guys think?

jersOneTIC
11-21-2007, 08:39 PM
new shit today.
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/8346/pieceod1.jpg

silentchaos14
11-21-2007, 08:46 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/Mypictures160.jpg

Can see this from the highway.
on a 150 foot dam.
the shadow is supposed to be the same colour as the outline if im not mistaken.

Beautiful_Crime
11-21-2007, 08:52 PM
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0317.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0313.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0303.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0298.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0294.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0291.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0288.jpg
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0281.jpg

MainEvent
11-21-2007, 10:31 PM
blackbook!

Teez-EmM!!!
11-22-2007, 08:06 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1317.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1319.jpg
got some day times of this
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1313.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1315.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Graffiti1314.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/Graffiti1311.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Picture296.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/toronto/Graffiti1312.jpg big ups sore and the rest of sdm..

MainEvent
11-22-2007, 10:36 AM
dude has some cool ideas for letters, just poor execution cause of lack of experience. beautiful crime, just use bars and dead letters until you build up you're can control and wall experience and keep blackbooking as much as possible.

Beautiful_Crime
11-22-2007, 07:15 PM
dude has some cool ideas for letters, just poor execution cause of lack of experience. beautiful crime, just use bars and dead letters until you build up you're can control and wall experience and keep blackbooking as much as possible.
bars n dead letters?

kosher
11-23-2007, 01:30 AM
main, nice clean and simple. way to go.
enormous, cool nice fill. kinda like the throws. third pic is garbage.
hooked, it's kinda cool but my personal taste is it should be a bit simpler.
miscreant, not that great but at least you're not trying to go all wild and shit like others.
jers, gorgious except for the r
beautiful crime, ugliest shit i've ever seen. consider this an intervention. unless you're willing to start over from scratch and LEARN THE FUCKING BASICS, you might as well quit now and save everybody's eyes some pain.
teez it's all good, nice going

mmmburgers
11-23-2007, 03:45 AM
new shit today.
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/8346/pieceod1.jpg

yo man, that looks nice and clean, know i mean?
dope shit meng

Beautiful_Crime
11-23-2007, 01:55 PM
main, nice clean and simple. way to go.
enormous, cool nice fill. kinda like the throws. third pic is garbage.
hooked, it's kinda cool but my personal taste is it should be a bit simpler.
miscreant, not that great but at least you're not trying to go all wild and shit like others.
jers, gorgious except for the r
beautiful crime, ugliest shit i've ever seen. consider this an intervention. unless you're willing to start over from scratch and LEARN THE FUCKING BASICS, you might as well quit now and save everybody's eyes some pain.
teez it's all good, nice going
all this criticism may i ask CAN I SEE UR SHIT?

dwd
11-23-2007, 04:19 PM
Painted with a few friends on the weekend, I hadn't painted since summer so I was a bit rusty.

I also got squeezed out a bit (we didnt have much room on the wall and the guy beside me started his piece too close to mine), so i had to shorten my letters up, I tried to compensate by making them taller but it didn't turn out looking to great, oh well though, I shouldn't be makin excuses.

Pace

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y201/HalfMast/Picture292.jpg

Eile (Me)

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y201/HalfMast/Picture293.jpg

Resc

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y201/HalfMast/Picture294-1.jpg

Rufio

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y201/HalfMast/Picture297.jpg

evade
11-23-2007, 07:06 PM
beautiful crime: ur shit aiint beautiful man... its pretty ugly... and lose the attitude, u need to practice, get over it

dwd: would change up the l it looks like a g

synps
11-23-2007, 08:47 PM
dwd- Not bad stuff. For your piece though, I think your shouldn't extend the l that way because it looks like a G.

These are my first two throwies ever.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/lw001.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff263/synapsestickerups/lw002.jpg
Crits would be nice!

dwd
11-23-2007, 08:56 PM
beautiful crime: ur shit aiint beautiful man... its pretty ugly... and lose the attitude, u need to practice, get over it

dwd: would change up the l it looks like a g

Yea usually it is alot longer and looks like an L, but I got squished in between two pieces (you can see the Pace piece going over my last E) so I had to shorten up my letters and it made them look messed up. And Leski the Resc piece isn't old it was painted at the same time as the others, the wall was just really haggard in that spot and didn't take the paint well.

-Leski
11-24-2007, 12:08 AM
@dwd. Ah, I get ya.
Btw, I noticed you have tim hortons and wendys up there.

@synps. Just needs cleaning up, will improve with practice. stock caps, amirite?

kosher
11-24-2007, 02:43 AM
dwd, i like the pace one. tell whoever did it that they did a good job

Beautiful_Crime
11-24-2007, 01:50 PM
Crits would be nice! fill ur shit in then do a simple outline lil bit of shade n ur cool just get a extra can for outlines get a dollar one whatevers

Bastardo
11-24-2007, 02:01 PM
Beautiful crime, good god dont crit other people if your shit is that bad, lose the attitude aswell, get a clue about graffiti before spreading shit around like that.

Beautiful_Crime
11-24-2007, 02:27 PM
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee114/Beautiful_Crime/IMGA0342.jpg
This one nikkuh

kosher
11-24-2007, 02:53 PM
^ hideous, are you not going to take my advice? it was actually for your own good

MainEvent
11-24-2007, 06:23 PM
damn febes, coming with piff dude. feelin the handstyles you had in the tags thread too.

shits sloppy but ya know, all good. if i could get some crits that'd be great

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski049.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski046.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski026.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski071.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski066.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski064.jpg

Enormous
11-24-2007, 10:48 PM
main, sloppy but i like them other tthan the n
febes, not sure about that one
underground animal and snyps, keep sketching


underground animal:some sick bombs and nice spots
heres a few of mine
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0082.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/110307043.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/100_2601.jpg
<a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/graff0095.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>
bump for critz

MainEvent
11-24-2007, 10:51 PM
word man, so switch up the N? i'll work on that, appreciate the crits

im feelin that second piece alot, the rooftop throwie looks straight. the last shit is a degression from the rest, but that second one is hot

Dial.on
11-25-2007, 10:56 AM
enor- can handling is good.. but u need t work on ur letters a bit more..

did this last nite

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Graffiti1332.jpg

sex without condoms
11-25-2007, 11:02 AM
damn febes, coming with piff dude. feelin the handstyles you had in the tags thread too.

shits sloppy but ya know, all good. if i could get some crits that'd be great

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski049.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski046.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski026.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski071.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski066.jpg

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickski064.jpg

main these tosses are dope.
trying throwing on a forcefield and drop shadow next time meng

koer1
11-25-2007, 12:32 PM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=EKNTPWiuUno i dont take pics of my ups.. but i will soon

Clowney-Cakes
11-25-2007, 01:47 PM
^^^ nice shit mannn, check your pm box!
yo main, thos 2 letters are fire man, keep that work up. just work on a new pointy N, the rest are hot!

me.against.society
11-25-2007, 09:43 PM
put this up a few days ago i ran out of green paint and the s driped but ne other crits would be great

kosher
11-25-2007, 09:44 PM
i like the a

Torrent
11-25-2007, 10:07 PM
sex without condoms: Nice M. Try to throw some 3D and fills in there.

Too cold and wet walls. Any comments on the letter structure? I know it's painted terribly.

http://a469.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/124/l_677e34ab2a8ed3c5a69b6637c3dde3fc.jpg

kosher
11-25-2007, 10:10 PM
your letters are too thin

Fube
11-25-2007, 10:43 PM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=EKNTPWiuUno i dont take pics of my ups.. but i will soon

u dont take flix of your ups but u film it? hello dumb ass, nice way to film the guys plates too. hope he cant use youtube. if i was u i would delete that shit soon. and just dont film yourself actually doing it. if i catch u by my car ill fuck u up. is that some random van u did that on? pethetic dude. i hope that was some beef hit.

Kool-Aid Man
11-25-2007, 10:47 PM
haha yeah you dont just go and tag a randoms van.

sema
11-25-2007, 10:58 PM
havent went out in some tim heres alittle strait, didnt sleep the night before also haaaaaaaahttp://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/gyjty.jpg

st_nahpele_egnaro
11-25-2007, 11:11 PM
thats decent for sure.....

go bigger next time yo!


enor- can handling is good.. but u need t work on ur letters a bit more..

did this last nite

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Graffiti1332.jpg

thats sick bro!

yo saga im diggin this throwy for sure

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture434324547.jpg

get that shit up on ur streets homie!

:edit: use the edit icon buddy, please. love Fube.

undergroundanimal
11-26-2007, 12:03 PM
Main:like your outlines with the flat top..
Enormou"s:like the blue piece best,i like the red in your shadow and outlines lookin good to but i would loose the arrow, some of the extensions and work on the top of your E and R..
Saga:l`m feelin that throw up and like the fillin on your piece to..keep workin on your letters tho..
Torrent:not lookin bad at all but i think your letters are a bit to thin too, and i`m not feelin the colourway but thats just my opinion...
ńcer:love that piece, nice colours,letters and really nice handstyle..good job;)

some flix from last weekend:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus043.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus044.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus046.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus040.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus028-2.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus034-1.jpg

undergroundanimal
11-26-2007, 12:09 PM
and some more flixx
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus026-2.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus038.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus030-1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus025-2.jpg
not mine>
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus023-1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus031-1.jpg

kosher
11-26-2007, 06:25 PM
undergroundanimal your stuff is pretty good but i love that one liner that your buddy did. so stylish

evade
11-26-2007, 10:09 PM
that tag underground is fucking sex man i love that shit

Dark_1
11-26-2007, 11:27 PM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w1/Arturo_sotelo/Dark1.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w1/Arturo_sotelo/dark2.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w1/Arturo_sotelo/dark3.jpg
I did these yea im new but ma boy helped me on the third one.

anemptyswishersweet
11-27-2007, 12:29 AM
havent went out in some tim heres alittle strait, didnt sleep the night before also haaaaaaaahttp://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/gyjty.jpg

acer's real big in atlanta...

Swoe.45
11-27-2007, 12:35 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/Afbeeldingendemus023-1.jpg:)

Bizzaro
11-27-2007, 12:43 AM
acer's real big in atlanta...
yeah and your tags to the right look like big bites from ENEM in philly im asuming you saw the video infamy

Bizzaro
11-27-2007, 12:44 AM
havent went out in some tim heres alittle strait, didnt sleep the night before also haaaaaaaahttp://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/gyjty.jpg
these tags to the right look like their bitten from ENEM. you can watch his tags in the movie infamy posted on youtube

blunttokes
11-27-2007, 01:02 AM
if u listened to what he called each handstyle in philly that wuld mean he did the styles enem might have done in that movie so ya some have a similar steez to it... hes got a nice burner piece

rumpleforeskin
11-27-2007, 01:52 AM
Underground, that shit is fucking sick!!!

sema
11-27-2007, 07:34 AM
yeah and your tags to the right look like big bites from ENEM in philly im asuming you saw the video infamy
a. i write acer cause i used to write hacer(to do in spanish if ya didnt know) dropped the h cause h's a bit tough
b. whenever anyone sees philly style they think its this guy from some stupid video they seen when really there is a basic structure to the style
c. i live in trenton nj which is about 15 20 minutes from philly (which youve prolly havent ever been to, n to fill you in philly style is more of a mid east coast style now-a-days till you get alittle north like brunswic where u see philly but theres more elegant script like that of nyc
d. got beef we can battle

sema
11-27-2007, 07:41 AM
thanks tokes it aints nothin, what i look like caring bout what some kid thinks, just made his pissant acount like this month. im sure hes mad hardbody in the streets

ForOhWun
11-27-2007, 09:04 AM
Sema its lookin really good the only thang u can improve on is the left edge of the A its a little sloppy, but it comes with time, can control. Keep it up and go bigger next time.Atmos lookin fresh, i see ur puttin in work, maybe try and sub the squiggles in the as and os with straight lines, or dots even see how it looks, just a suggestionGood shit ppl. PS. Dark. Practice More on paper first

sema
11-27-2007, 10:33 AM
yeah i havent painted since the begining of summer mad too busy wit work n goin out to nyc for raves n shit i used to be cleaner..(old) http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/rtusrthsrth.jpg
coulda also used some grey dots my german outlines were spittin like crazy on the rusto
saga- the yellow n red is dope id like to see more like that one
underground i see where ur goin wit that style its simular to my boys once you work out the flow itll be dope also work on the 2d in places some lokk strait others look rushed

ali_new
11-27-2007, 01:28 PM
undergroundanimal that is one nice throw style u got dere and sema like how they A and R are balanced not to keen on the colours doe. keep it up

ForOhWun
11-27-2007, 01:35 PM
Like your 1st one better Acre. maybe the lack of contrast on the fill-outline. nice fill though

capitol
11-27-2007, 02:59 PM
ACER:Decent letters make them a bit bigger and give a more detailed fill eh?
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/7215/picture129ls9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
-20 weather with shit fill cap..fuck

RUDE_Bwoy
11-27-2007, 04:09 PM
to the cat who writes NOPE are you in atl,causes theres already a NOPE down here

trashtalk
11-27-2007, 07:55 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/Picture245.jpg

PG_Miscreant
11-27-2007, 08:04 PM
^thats cool as shit
and i think the envar is pretty good too
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2179/img0021eh6.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0021eh6.jpg)
^i know this sux but it was my first attempted mini piece n it was dark
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5203/img0022sb4.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0022sb4.jpg)
^a shitty throw, i made the T too small

constructive criticism would be nice

DistrixInkCo.
11-27-2007, 08:18 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/Picture245.jpg

nice man good work

La Coka Nostra
11-27-2007, 08:34 PM
have heart?
family and friends forever?


HAAARRRRDCOOOORRRREEE KIIIIIIIDDDDD!!!!

i kid, i kid.
but seriously.

5Funerals
11-27-2007, 08:45 PM
haha fuck yeah MA STRAIGHT EDGE!!!

trashtalk
11-28-2007, 01:17 AM
thanks dudes and yea im into hardcore and im straight edge you guys read me like a book haha

*Wing*
11-28-2007, 03:06 AM
Good piece my straight edge friend!

ForOhWun
11-28-2007, 08:04 AM
The Fuck is a Straightedge Fool?

Fube
11-28-2007, 08:43 AM
no toxins in the body, dont do drugs, dont drink, some dont even eat anything thats not organic. i have mixed feelings on u straight edge fools. what u do with your body is your own fuckin business. if i want to eat a greasy cheese burger, the go out side and smoke a cigarette, on my way to the liquor store to get a bottle and a sack thats my business. some of u guys feel so strongly about your straight edge shit that roam in packs and just beat kids ass thats not following your "code".

anyway we are getting off the beaten path here.

o and i should add a flick, this chick wanted me to put something on her wall and she had some krylon red and black and some color place silver. this is what happends when chicks sneak into your sketches.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/S6300581.jpg

crits are welcome, but im not feeling it. she digs it tho so its all good. i was also drunk as all hell.

huffer
11-28-2007, 09:42 AM
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w1/Arturo_sotelo/Dark1.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w1/Arturo_sotelo/dark2.jpg
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w1/Arturo_sotelo/dark3.jpg
I did these yea im new but ma boy helped me on the third one.

my advice is to get a good tag first, your not ready to do thow ups yet, and part two is get a new name, if i saw in any spot, i would instintly go over it. from the name to the fill, to the structure its all wrong. the third one is decent, but strusture is jus off.

koer1
11-28-2007, 03:19 PM
to add.. ur giving the REAL dark 1 legend adt a bad name tooo.. :/

RUDE_Bwoy
11-28-2007, 04:58 PM
nice to a subway

5Funerals
11-28-2007, 06:13 PM
Yo Fube you are thinking of Hardliners and FSU. Different thing entirely.

also just felt like putting this out there. Some kid in my town went over a JUMBO Jm throwup that was on a freight with a swastika. Im against violence but if I catch him im kicking his fucking ass.

mmmburgers
11-28-2007, 06:24 PM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/CANword.jpg
eh, somethin i did last week
crits?

5Funerals
11-28-2007, 06:30 PM
I like it I guess just clean it up

PG_Miscreant
11-28-2007, 07:34 PM
no toxins in the body, dont do drugs, dont drink, some dont even eat anything thats not organic. i have mixed feelings on u straight edge fools. what u do with your body is your own fuckin business. if i want to eat a greasy cheese burger, the go out side and smoke a cigarette, on my way to the liquor store to get a bottle and a sack thats my business. some of u guys feel so strongly about your straight edge shit that roam in packs and just beat kids ass thats not following your "code".

anyway we are getting off the beaten path here.

o and i should add a flick, this chick wanted me to put something on her wall and she had some krylon red and black and some color place silver. this is what happends when chicks sneak into your sketches.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/S6300581.jpg

crits are welcome, but im not feeling it. she digs it tho so its all good. i was also drunk as all hell.

the piece isnt horrible but not good either, its obvious u were drunk...but my complete honest opinion is that u need a haircut

Fube
11-28-2007, 08:23 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/S6300581.jpg

.

thats not me brotha. do u think im that dumb? who do u think is takin the flick? anyway, im no head, but im pretty sure my drunk shit kills your sober shit. at least what ive seen.


thanks anyway for the crit, because your so nice, ill give u some.


http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2179/img0021eh6.th.jpg[/IMG] (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0021eh6.jpg)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5203/img0022sb4.th.jpg (http://img527.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0022sb4.jpg)


the piece isnt horrible, but not good either, its obvious u were sober....but my complete honest opinion is u need some can control before your crit is taken seriously.

PG_Miscreant
11-28-2007, 09:10 PM
i never said i was sober (i was :() but hey thats y were in the toy forum

Robbie P
11-29-2007, 01:21 AM
That's a female? Nice piece though dude, I always digged your style.

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
11-29-2007, 05:25 AM
sloppy simple bomb

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP1779.jpg

Dying to live
11-29-2007, 05:29 AM
decent but the 3d is a bit messed up.. =]

SEIZE [reppin yo hood]
11-29-2007, 05:36 AM
yeah, the whole thing is pretty messed up. haha

harry
11-29-2007, 06:02 AM
wtf that isnt a chick is it fube????? lol

Fube
11-29-2007, 07:22 AM
no, not a chick. thats a homie. if u meet him he looks like that drug dealer off pulp fiction.

KAKE_ST
11-29-2007, 11:36 AM
me and my boy im puttin it as a piece cause its all done at the same time im on the left http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r179/IWRITESOLO/l_828aee4c3fc93b71b445900d2eaa52a3.jpg

huffer
11-29-2007, 04:54 PM
^^that shit in the middle is nice i woulda stuck to all one coler if i ws you the blue with tha pink outline looks nice but i dont like the blend

MainEvent
11-29-2007, 09:53 PM
kake- ok
seize- nice
fube- decent

La Coka Nostra
11-29-2007, 10:02 PM
the fube is easily better than the seize.

denaaa
11-29-2007, 10:45 PM
i a piece i did isnt that good but whatever it only took like 15 20 min

denaaa
11-29-2007, 10:46 PM
sorry forgot to put the pic in lol
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/l_f79672a06aa6d0bdb62f8b26bb6826f3.jpg

huffer
11-29-2007, 10:55 PM
^^pretty good id say work on letture structure though that seems to be my main critique

but you see how skinny the letter are in the first word accept for the S which is kinda in between?? but then up is all fat??? see what i mean?? just compare the P's

Edward"Sezer"Hands
11-29-2007, 10:59 PM
sorry forgot to put the pic in lol
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/l_f79672a06aa6d0bdb62f8b26bb6826f3.jpg
dont ever put cbs up.

Olick
11-29-2007, 11:13 PM
me and my boy im puttin it as a piece cause its all done at the same time im on the left http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r179/IWRITESOLO/l_828aee4c3fc93b71b445900d2eaa52a3.jpg

doesnt that remind you of skuf....

????????????????????

huffer
11-30-2007, 12:06 AM
doesnt that remind you of skuf....

????????????????????



haha yes thank you for pointing thath out its because he stole his s. its not as good but thats where he got it from/

Rank-oner!
11-30-2007, 12:50 AM
so all these are form forever ago when i was on here as just Rank!
never got a chance to put them up cause i got busted and chilled for a while everyone has gotten so much better (people i knew on here before) I'll get back to writing and hopefully improve a lot.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/143.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/139.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/140.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/108.jpg
last one i ran out of room but it doesn't matter cause it turned out shitty anyway. That was my first time painting those letters, but i think my can control was getting better. esp. the blue outline around the N.
All the throws were done with walmart paint.

huffer
11-30-2007, 12:52 AM
third one is hella nice.

Teez-EmM!!!
12-01-2007, 11:49 AM
sorry forgot to put the pic in lol
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/l_f79672a06aa6d0bdb62f8b26bb6826f3.jpg
both need to work in ur black books for a bit and stay the fuck away from good spots just go to like a bridge a practice there

Clowney-Cakes
12-01-2007, 12:14 PM
ok, so this first throw is trash...i know, but i do like that spot...
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/862/kindadope001ek9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this one cops came, and we just had to lay down and wait for themn to leave...
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/9215/kindadope014xf0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
lil shoutout for my boy seize...
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7026/kindadope015ei0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
haha, look at that L...
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/2724/kindadope020do1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
anom...
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2076/kindadope002qw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and a main shout to finsh it off...
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1813/kindadope018jj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Kriede
12-02-2007, 02:19 PM
i actually did this about a month ago. just took a picture today. hah.

it's a really funky wall hence why all the lines look wobbly.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2318/2081803034_2ec18483ca_o.jpg

ScNk
12-02-2007, 02:44 PM
thats a pretty buzzy spot kriede..

heres my first bomb/roller done this morning


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/Disco033.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/Disco034.jpg

silentchaos14
12-02-2007, 02:46 PM
the monk is nice, good way to start. the heptik is too small and the taxo is ugly.

ScNk
12-02-2007, 03:10 PM
silent - yea im still too toy to do anything more complex, even that i fucked up - it was never meant to be inverted but it turned out ok. its a bit uneven.. yea that taxd/o is fucken ugly dunno either of them.

bizz - nah man i've been writing monk for a while now tho haven't seen the bc monk's work yet got a link?

Clowney-Cakes
12-02-2007, 03:39 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6937/yeahyeah009qc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7185/yeahyeah013tp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hidden Teknique
12-02-2007, 05:15 PM
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/7828/jaerothrow3rr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2820/yeahyeah015sj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

La Coka Nostra
12-02-2007, 06:01 PM
yeah yeah, i can see where it COULD look like that.....doubt he did it intentionaly. ill let him know...what about mine tho? any good?


it's definitely improving.
i like the k.
not the e so much.
i wish i had a camera, i'd do an exchange with you.

smile_
12-02-2007, 09:52 PM
dd

tempest
12-03-2007, 03:51 AM
smile: ur looks l like an i. could be smiie or smlle

hhhhhhh
12-03-2007, 09:44 AM
crits says make
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/Picture038.jpg

mas$
12-03-2007, 12:39 PM
thats a pretty buzzy spot kriede..

heres my first bomb/roller done this morning


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/Disco033.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v426/10minutecar/Disco034.jpg
that heptik guy next to monk seriously bit copes "e"
nice tho monk, the orange is a bit watery what brand is it?

doomdoks
12-03-2007, 05:18 PM
monk i think you should work on your shadows and you should do an absolutely huge roller wit that, im talking like 25 feet crazy, in my opinion, small simple stuff like that is a waste of paint, if your gonna do something that size at least put some effort into your lettering or do that simple on a billlboard or sumthin

cyzo
12-03-2007, 05:38 PM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n95/billope/cyzad0-1.jpg

doomdoks
12-03-2007, 06:29 PM
cyz , the z is a little hard to read and i think the red needs black outline alone with the shadows and as for the c and y; readable but not feeling it

dibz
12-03-2007, 06:38 PM
cyzo- work on makin those letters not so wide and in some areas and not so skinny unless your going for a certain vibe with your letters ya know. cuz the bottom of you c is alot larger than any other letter. an those bubbles on the side could use some fixing as well.



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_2162.jpg
my n looks kinda like a h on this piece .


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/piece2.jpg
the t looks a little far away to me now that i look at it.

Hoes
12-04-2007, 05:15 AM
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x58/hoes05/hoes1.jpg

ScNk
12-04-2007, 06:19 AM
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x58/hoes05/hoes1.jpg

i reckon u shud shorten that h a bit

cyz work on structure of colours its a good simple but an outline would've made it stand out way more

rant really diggin the styles u've come up with and colour cords
work on structure and maybe close the letters a bit they look too seperated esp 2nd one, the R is too far away aswell as the T like u said. i reckon R in first one is also too far away but the rest of the letters are joined nicely try keep that T in the first one with visible corners, i see the left part of the t is hidden under which makes it look like a c

smile_
12-04-2007, 03:28 PM
crits says make
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e225/turkeymeat/Picture038.jpg

looks dope, just try to make the A more defined, got any crits on mine? :cool:

hhhhhhh
12-04-2007, 05:45 PM
smile; i dont mind the S but i would get rid of the little joint that starts it, the I and L are to alike fix one of them make the E have a bigger pop out and personaly id get rid of the smily face at the top

cyzo, looks like , you are getting ahead of your self but the Y is alright

dibz, i like the second flick id fix the bottom of the N becuse it cuts off right into a corner

hoes , i like it but would make the O a bitbigger so it touches the bottem and cut the H down a bit



now some of you give me crits