Toy Bombs / pieces (Paint Only.)

[grime]

This was my very first time going to the wall. the letters didn all come out the way i wanted them too...but, i deff need crits...and any tips on can control.

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b326/ludacrisman7/p_00001.jpg

[STES]

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/5035/steswh8.jpg STES

[revid!]

stes work on that simple style
looks okaayy

[tocsscott]

grime for your first piece i think its pretty good.

[RUDE_Bwoy]

This was my very first time going to the wall. the letters didn all come out the way i wanted them too...but, i deff need crits...and any tips on can control.

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b326/ludacrisman7/p_00001.jpg

work on your letters and where you put your bubbles and extra shit

[STES]

grime nice work for you 1st time i love in mate but try sketch new letters and dont put that much bubles ok

[rel]

crazy-can control looks decent but the letters are iffy. it also looks like you just put the highlights in random places. look up a tutorial on highlighting or something.

also use bars.

[STES]

rel what you think bout me bomb STES

[AR.aerosol.tk]

Stes- i like it but the E needs some work
Grime- real nice for first piece

[STES]

ar.aerosol thanx ye i have work on the e that is me new bomb style and i still working on it mate

[Skesh]

Lol my first bomb

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/P1010191-1.jpg

the first S is a little too big and its not very clean, but i'm pretty happy with it, but i'll work on it
Lol bump for this
more then one year ago. still not crossed out

not bumping it for crits ;) just for laughs

[JETPACK!!]

lol skesh, i bet it hurts to look at it a year later

something i put up earlier. sorry for the angle, it was wet and i didnt want to get the flash to reflect off of it. it was -20 celcius... i wasnt gonna wait for it to dry lol

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/8288/belsthrowieaj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Cin123]

http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/graff2019.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/graff2018.jpg
adore is mad good in tdot hes everywere/big ups to adore

[sacwacko]

looks good.
hard to read tho.
work on structure.

[mIoK?!]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/gobigg.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/jknl.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Photo651.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Picture029.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/AHHHHHHHHH.jpg

[Cin123]

miok not feelin the shin

[mIoK?!]

yea i no

i learned from that shit

ima throw something else up and the shins gonna look better

thanks for the advice brah

[Derogatory9o5]

http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/graff2019.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/graff2018.jpg
ador

BuMpage.

[Cin123]

miok- yo ur bombs r ight but
yo the difference between ur
tagz and bombs r far apart
cause u got some bumpin tagz
proz to dat

[JETPACK!!]

why is talking like an illiterate mexican the new fad?

miok, bring your letters a bit closer so they overlap a bit. you've got a lot of dead space in between them. work on your shines, and dont outline them or your drips in your last flick. also work on your drop shadow a bit.

[Cin123]

lol cause i cant spell for shit

[Rank-oner!]

Cin: who did you take those pics for?

[5Funerals]

why is talking like an illiterate mexican the new fad?



I really got no beef with you but that is just not cool

[AR.aerosol.tk]

crits?
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb110/racialtiger/blakesick.jpg[/QUOTE]

[5Funerals]

AR - I dont know whether its because of the picture or not but its pretty illegible.
Miok - stick to the books because can control is worthless without letter structure.
Jetpack - Your highlights, shadow, and forcefield need work but the fill and letters are good

[Cin123]

ranker---adore hes sick hes so up in my hood

[RUDE_Bwoy]

crits?
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb110/racialtiger/blakesick.jpg[/QUOTE]

nice but i hate those kinda walls

[AR.aerosol.tk]

well i think it may be the pic
i dunno
but when u pass it on the highway its pretty clear
and FYI its AER not just AR ar is my bomb

[capitol]

why is their adore here?

[djsupreeme]

adores from winnipeg but moved to tdot.. kid is dope.

[Fazed]

crits?
http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb110/racialtiger/blakesick.jpg[/QUOTE]

I'm feelin the green and black

[BlackBookCook420]

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2595/cheezepj1.th.jpg (http://img293.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cheezepj1.jpg)


The Best way to be seen,


Is to hide in the shadows....

[Thrice]

not sure how you managed fazed

[Pesky_Human]

Clowney, Overdue, and Yusef - thanks all for the props. I really appreciate. ©

[Stolen]

crits?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/MANHUNT_/kool2.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

damn that spot looks heated.

[jawsy]

lol^^^^^

[undergroundanimal]

blackbookcook:i like your s not really feelin the other letters.., keep sketching and try to keep your letters the same size...

crak:i`m feelin your c but not feelin the other letters.. work on their structure and get rid of the stars or make them a bit smaller...

ar.aero:im feelin the colours and 3d looks nice to.., can`t read it thou..

bubbles:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0144.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0143.jpg

[NiL]

lol skesh, i bet it hurts to look at it a year later

something i put up earlier. sorry for the angle, it was wet and i didnt want to get the flash to reflect off of it. it was -20 celcius... i wasnt gonna wait for it to dry lol

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/8288/belsthrowieaj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Stick to paper for a bit. It's good for first time or however many times lol
But stick to paper for a bit til you get good on there and get some better letters and shawdoing down and shit.

Fair enough you were practicing I'd agree to that to get your can control a bit better.

Nice work though keep it up.

[argone]

blackbookcook:i like your s not really feelin the other letters.., keep sketching and try to keep your letters the same size...

crak:i`m feelin your c but not feelin the other letters.. work on their structure and get rid of the stars or make them a bit smaller...

ar.aero:im feelin the colours and 3d looks nice to.., can`t read it thou..

bubbles:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0144.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0143.jpg

im really feeling the colours on that, its unique considering most of the shit i've seen up

[emkmontreal]

A few things

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u289/thinkeroo/IMG_0890.jpg

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u289/thinkeroo/IMG_0923.jpg

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u289/thinkeroo/IMG_0419.jpg

[Crewd]

os this is my first throw up and it shows. my letters are disproportioned and the coloring is off as well as the style but in zero visability and a cop circling above and below you what are you gonna do lol.

[Infoe]

I like the last one. I like the style, I see it a lot in old school New York photo's and stuff.
Dope for the fact that it's a nice spot, and it's above a sign saying, 'Art Rebel'. Notice that?
Hahaha. Stay up.

[BlackBookCook420]

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8407/serlv6.th.jpg (http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=serlv6.jpg)

[blunttokes]

A few things





http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u289/thinkeroo/IMG_0419.jpg

shuld have filled this shit yo ... make that rooftop shine

kinda reminds me of my style i got goin on wit my throw

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7962/hpim0138ux5qc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1787/1003299lw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^not the best throw ive done but the tip got jammed n i wasnt even pushin the cap down it was sprayin on its own lmao so this deff is just crap but thot id post it neways in this thread!

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3995/hpim0142ti6ba2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/8330/hpim0146iq5ta1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crappy gsa oneliner i did
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3540/hpim0147gb4cw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8928/hpim0153fb1pb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the shell is fucked but the highways r sketchy


http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9703/hpim0158er7pm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shit i did on the weekend that just passed in hamilton 905

[emkmontreal]

i would have filled it in at the time but it was so cold i thought my hands were gonna fall off, plus to get up there you have to climb up a metal pipe that wasnt too hot either:p
i might fill it in sometime...

[blunttokes]

climbin poles lol... jus like in quality of life the one part wen vain does that outline n then gets almost busted then goes nuts n shoots himself lol


yea its cold as fuck out here too in ontario..... every bomb i did in my last post it was -20 or higher its so harsh on the lungs to...

[Rhyseitup]

rhyse it up and naqs
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/HEHE-1.jpg

[Rhyseitup]

OLD
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/P9270056.jpg

[NOVA213]

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/scan0027.jpg
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/scan0030.jpg
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/scan0034.jpg
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/scan0001.jpg
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/scan0006.jpg
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/058.jpg

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

you fucking people need to read the thread title before posting. jesus christ.


some simple bombs with my boy fans
you know how we do!

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/100_1600.jpg

[RUDE_Bwoy]

i like that seize simple

[5Funerals]

Fans And Seize Are Dope

[zeekoner]

make simple letter to start with no1 can read that! lol just make simple bubble letters or block letters to start once u get that down go into the more technical stuff

[Enormous]

seize, looks super clean as usual, dont really like your s though
ryse, keep tryin
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/l_09058d20869214e0e5a1c8836675590d.jpg

[daisyface]

lookin good nice color choice as well

[Cin123]

enor- nice coulor speak

[revid!]

seize, looks super clean as usual, dont really like your s though
ryse, keep tryin
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m304/hendrix228/l_09058d20869214e0e5a1c8836675590d.jpg

this is fressshhh!
great job!
keep it up~~

[undergroundanimal]

seize: looks dope as usual
enor: the whole thing looks fresh man.. good job

[Rank-oner!]

Seize has the sexiest simples! :D
Enor: good shit man letters are lookin real good and nice colors. you could have cut back a little on the right side of the O but thats nothing big at all :)

[undergroundanimal]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0193.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0219.jpg

[undergroundanimal]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0187.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0188.jpg

[undergroundanimal]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0205.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0206.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0210.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0216.jpg

[maso1]

All your shits dope animal

[Riss]

not bad desire ^

I can't figure out what that spot looks like though wtf? It looks like it is on a wall right next to the road, and it's really small.. And then you got other pics of it where it is big and right next to a curb.. :confused:

[Inkjecting Heron]

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t153/demik_2007/192c208f5e0a.jpg
not really toy

[C3ZR ONE]

Too late. He's gone and it wouldn't be worth your time.

Demik- Don't play fuckin retarded.. Don't you realize that every picture you post has an address from where it was hosted... They all say DEMIK... You're the same little cocksucker I battled half a year ago. You got like 15 votes from people who don't like me. I got 230 votes. Nuff said. Go learn to be a man.

[SNAP!]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2164/2223195967_4a46c0ba68_d.jpg

i crammed my p in though...

[Rank-oner!]

first day on my practice board. not making excuses here but i was paiting that new style ive sketched and was doing it in black in white (black letters white outline/ 3d) and i just bought color place paint and white will not cover the black for shit. i had such a good start and ended up not even being worth a pic. :( so do those crappy simps which i ran out of gold to do the last extension and any other cut work with the n and k.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/paintes001.jpg
sorry for the contrast it was night time and that was the only way you could see it
and my shitty throw
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/paintes003.jpg

[idleon3]

damn that 2nd throw is sick... props@ rank

[Rhyseitup]

RHYSE FIRST SIMPLE EVER.. it was -20 and snowing.. its soo wack..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/graff074.jpg
but vowels turned out good..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/graff076.jpg

[Street Smart]

snap - A seems smaller, but its nice
rank - R starts off an awful angle and the K is very simple compared to the rest, but it looks great besides that.
rhyse - its good, work on your h and y and your letters get thicker as they go along.

[undergroundanimal]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0193.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0219.jpg

bump

[undergroundanimal]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0187.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0188.jpg

bump

[undergroundanimal]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0205.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0206.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0210.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0216.jpg

bump (for crits)

[JEDI-MASTER]

demik.....theres a demik n de.....

[Street Smart]

is the DE next to the blue background gold piece the start of another one of yours? all that is hot desire, just think you should connect your D a lil more so it looks less like a j

[undergroundanimal]

no thats a piece of (dehaagseschrijvers)... thanx for the crit, i didn`t noticed it before but i see what u meen my d really looks like a j..:p will change that next time...

[EyeZee]

dang desire cant wait to see ur straight letters n a few years
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8909/piecesnbombs004ro1.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7517/hpim5374zu0.jpg

[RUDE_Bwoy]

first day on my practice board. not making excuses here but i was paiting that new style ive sketched and was doing it in black in white (black letters white outline/ 3d) and i just bought color place paint and white will not cover the black for shit. i had such a good start and ended up not even being worth a pic. :( so do those crappy simps which i ran out of gold to do the last extension and any other cut work with the n and k.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/paintes001.jpg
sorry for the contrast it was night time and that was the only way you could see it
and my shitty throw
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/paintes003.jpg

damn man nice.cant wait to see you in action man

[mmmburgers]

hmm... keep playing with it man
it takes a while to get a good throwie flowin
lose the swirly thingy on the m
lose the extension on the D
maybe make the D fatter

[HuntingLOLs]

but... this is for painted shizzle, no? sketches go in ze blackbook
and
heron, so cute <3 calm down and accept that you're a toy else you probably wont progress much

[jakew]

my tag and my first attempt and my throwie.http://a818.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/35/l_e9ec93f5a4f049b79a79f3d4bf1b1bc1.jpg

[revid!]

your prolly going to want to change your name man, atom is a really used word plus there is some one who is mad good that writes that...

[HuntingLOLs]

you wouldnt possibly mean this atom? :P

http://www.stick-up-kids.de/images/bildermember/atom/bilder/03_ATOM02_web.jpg

[Street Smart]

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh96/akesakesakes/Picture3.jpg
first time painting solo, should have taken more time plan it out with the first colour..

[crystalmeth and abortions]

http://a357.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/90/l_08607768964799015e65926c8e470ccc.jpg

toy ass piece. but good day

[crystalmeth and abortions]

http://a692.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/30/l_b31bf96dbd9d10da2aa6f0eeddb8724b.jpg
dark out

[luster]

wow sorry i didnt know they were gunna be that big

[Teez-EmM!!!]

every one that is posting sketches an such needs to stop cause this is for toy painted pieces and throwups

[Teez-EmM!!!]

evry thing that could go wring with this did lol i droped my fat cap and lost it then my other cap cloged then my paint started coming out like fucking silly string. oh and u used this capand it didnt fit writ so the paint would come out of the can even it i wasnt holding the cap down
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0237.jpg

[Fube]

people need to stop posting bullshit in this thread, if i see anymore paper in here and u know better im gunna issue a warning. also, cut the dumb ass beef. u know where your posting so dont act like your shit dont stink.

[Cr1cd]

Nice structure teezum but You should get a little more solid with the fills then Outline I suggest going side to side then going vertically helps cover more ground might want to solidify that outline a bit and make it thicker. It also like you started to the right of it then gave up, If so Keep at it don't waste space plus anything can be fixed if you throw some backround on there.~

As for my stuff what you guys think of this?
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/Cric.jpg

[shock]

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg208/dyingbreed_2008/sero.jpg

[intaout]

Post some of you best shit guys! like wait till you get a flick of something your proud of...
shock- not bad, try taking the arm of the "R" up so that it is level with the s and e. I say, add another extension on your "S" so its more distinguishable. Just keep practicing.
cric- draw more before you go out painting, new to graff thread helps with figuring out letter structure
teez em- pretty good structure just post once you have it fullly painted. just take your time and finish it

[EP1C]

First Post
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/5419/dscn0858cw4.th.jpg (http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0858cw4.jpg)
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4197/dscn0859jd2.th.jpg (http://img181.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0859jd2.jpg)

This is one I did in an open air parking garage. Im not sure if I should do the drips or not. I for sure do not like the drips on the dot of the i.

shock-i like it except for the bottom of the R.
cric- it kind of looks like you did the fill last over the white outline. Try to avoid that.

[cerex89]

get inspired
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0969.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0967.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0966.jpg

[FABLE IR CRU]

Anybody down for a toy throwup battle? u choose word

[Rank-oner!]

Teez lookin good
cerex 89 is that your shit?

two letter throw with leftover paint..you can tell it was cutting out on me (dotty lines :( )
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint002.jpg

first attempt at a flair
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint004.jpg

and finally i painted my new style haha but didnt have enough room for the k :( also i'll know next time not to use flat black against another dark color done with krylon and stock caps haha
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint006.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint007.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint010.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint011.jpg
progression

[Rhyseitup]

VOWELS EVIL AND RHYSE.. simples.. 2nd simple for me.. mine is soo wack..fucked up everything but vowels turned out good..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/CAC16VCT.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/CAC1UJCH.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/CA4L2BWH.jpg

[Skesh]

hahahahahahh that second one, EVIL

[cerex89]

Teez lookin good
cerex 89 is that your shit?

two letter throw with leftover paint..you can tell it was cutting out on me (dotty lines :( )
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint002.jpg

first attempt at a flair
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint004.jpg

and finally i painted my new style haha but didnt have enough room for the k :( also i'll know next time not to use flat black against another dark color done with krylon and stock caps haha
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint006.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint007.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint010.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint011.jpg
progression
nope it was at a frieght yard and i had a camera and i said why not

[5Funerals]

mber is a freight king. One of the best.

[Cr1cd]

Well I'm hoping to make this one a progression only due to the fact that I ran out of paint I should really check my stock before I go crazy again, I figured out I didn't have black so I did my best with the colors I have, Hopefully by the end of the week I can fix the K Cut and smoothen out the letters and ad some extensions. Not mention add some Contrast and Outline.
Other then that what do you guys think, I was working with simpler letters this time Except for the E because a regular E was just kind of boring for me =]
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i261/SoffroKuraiittou/PICT0104.jpg
I'm Lucky enough to have about 12 abandoned/ burned down houses around me to practice, so I'm not going around practicing Control on actual buildings, Beats canvas cause when I run out can just go over my old stuff. =P

[RUDE_Bwoy]

Teez lookin good
cerex 89 is that your shit?

two letter throw with leftover paint..you can tell it was cutting out on me (dotty lines :( )
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint002.jpg

first attempt at a flair
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint004.jpg

and finally i painted my new style haha but didnt have enough room for the k :( also i'll know next time not to use flat black against another dark color done with krylon and stock caps haha
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint006.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint007.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint010.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint011.jpg
progression

looking dope man.didnt know you was down with a crew.
and mber is a fucking god.i get a lot of inspiration from his work

[KASE2]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/ks.jpg

fucked up on tha "k" but wat kan i say, i waz rushed

[Rank-oner!]

hahaha i made my own crew up a long time ago. Pepsi Free Crew haha
this is atlanta its straight coca-cola haha

[Rank-oner!]

.

[Laces Out]

Sucks really bad but yeah....
Crist?
=]
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/7282/82658091no5.th.png (http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?image=82658091no5.png)

[DRIPS!]

rank that shit is lookin dope man progressing pretty fast
some shit from a day/night at -18c
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/128/hpim4346oo0.jpg
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7528/hpim4349ux1.jpg
kinda fucked up 3d on this
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8403/hpim4350tm1.jpg
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/3627/hpim4353zq4.jpg
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/3706/hpim4355ax5.jpg

[Fazed]

Sucks really bad but yeah....
Crist?
=]
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/7282/82658091no5.th.png (http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?image=82658091no5.png)

you need crist
hahahah
go talk to gesus

[Laces Out]

you need crist
hahahah
go talk to gesus

I dont need crist.
I need you.
Haha
=]

[Teez-EmM!!!]

rank that preatty sik but it looked better with just the dots on the bottem of the piece
new piece i painted today its fucking cold out.....
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0300.jpg

[thesilentvandal]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9716/img0309kx8.jpg

and they say i was gonna be a dancin fairy!

[Bastardo]

Back to daws? :|

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

some whack freestyle with drippy paint. blah blah blah...

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2156.jpg

[revid!]

yea whta bout wersto

[a maze]

seize- Looking hot man, love that fill. you gonna post some extension pieces soon?

[revid!]

seize shits hot fireeee

[Cin123]

yo tezz did u get 2 skate or was it all ice
thats nice tho
any thing new there??

[revid!]

amaze chek your pm's

[Teez-EmM!!!]

daws none of that stuff is toy.. props sieze thats mad clean the fill is sik too i would go back and make ur out line thiker though or do that for ur next piece...
ya cin i skated at that spot a little but there were cunsruction workers above were i was so i didnt want to make to much noise and there was alot of snow naw theres nothing new.

[KASE2]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/ks.jpg

fucked up on tha "k" but wat kan i say, i waz rushed
bump

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/100_0943.jpg

purdy dang sloppy

[TAKS]

Yo this a throwie me ma home boy did befor skoo we were walkin and i said wana have a speed battle he said aight so we hit this spot up with throwies

can i get some feed back on it (it was a 1min.38sec throwie) ill post some good ones though so plz good fed back

[overdue]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj031.jpg

[Laces Out]

;991662']some whack freestyle with drippy paint. blah blah blah...

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2156.jpg

Get the fuck out of here.
You're not a toy.
Lmao

[dim]

seize your shit is clean but you can do much better man i want to see you drop peices i allways only see straight from you youve been doing them for to long and its starting to get played out man nothing bad can happen from changing it up a lil. im not disrespecting you in any way cause your stuff is clean and you got skill but i wanna see more from you.

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

i like, dont sketch anymore and when i do go to a spot i never bring my book so i end up freestyling everything. i havent worked from a sketch in so long. im gonna cook up some shit pretty soon to put on a wall.

[cerex89]

seize your shit is clean but you can do much better man i want to see you drop peices i allways only see straight from you youve been doing them for to long and its starting to get played out man nothing bad can happen from changing it up a lil. im not disrespecting you in any way cause your stuff is clean and you got skill but i wanna see more from you.
i second this and also u sould work on ur Z because its to plaine when u do a pice like that and also dont ever take ur black book if u go paint because if u get caught the cops will use that against u

[InfamouSN]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9716/img0309kx8.jpg

and they say i was gonna be a dancin fairy!

That castro shit is dope.

[Cin123]

castro-now thats some upzz

[Darkeist]

Daws - your shit isnt toy, get out of this thread.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/ughhhl001.jpg

[Darkeist]

To get crits you must give crits. Too many arrows anyway

[Cy-anide]

not for crits just posting , i like the arrows ,there is no wrong or right in graff , some will like it some wont =)

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

both of you need to get to the right thread. post in the tot black book thread. this thread is for (painted) bombs and pieces.

[Cy-anide]

;993694']both of you need to get to the right thread. post in the tot black book thread. this thread is for (painted) bombs and pieces.

haha iknew i wasnt going crazy my bad there is 2 threads i read it too fast

[remos]

seize and unsuccessfull those are dope'seize- colour scheme is pretty sick im liking unsuccessful- even unfinished it looks sick
keep it up

[mickymcfinnigan]

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/bowlingfactory01.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/dumbarton01.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/rentonchrome01.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/dumbartoneast02.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/dumbartoncastle001.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/bowlingtrackside03.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/F.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/A.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/G.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/shore03.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/bourley01.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/seminary02.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/rentonchrome02.jpg

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aj031.jpg
blurry pic.
me on the right.
crits

[j-f]

afer those are pretty sick my only suggestion would be take lil more time on the 3d its a little messy in some spots other than that theyre all pretty sick

[Rank-oner!]

Afer: those are ill man. how long you been writing?

[mickymcfinnigan]

cheers for advice...been paintin for about seven months

[AEK]

afer- im liking the 1st one the most. all seem pritty clean n as j-f said just take a lil longer on the 3d but part from that all pritty sick.

sacwacko- can u get a beter pic? cant really see it

[Cr1cd]

Well This is just some crap I have around ALl done with quick color wish I could get some real shit to work with , My broke ass can't afford montana at the moment =[

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/573/pict0132sc8.jpg

[remos]

afer those are sick

["Riot"]

Well This is just some crap I have around ALl done with quick color wish I could get some real shit to work with , My broke ass can't afford montana at the moment =[

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/573/pict0132sc8.jpg

you shouldnt even be painting.
hit the books.

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/JAKE020.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/JAKE017.jpg

[FABLE IR CRU]

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb276/Fable_06/battle170.jpg
trying to find a good style before i start painting it, let me know what u think

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

dont post paper shit in here

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2176.jpg

[knucks]

Props seize, nice and clean.

Work on the extensions on those Es though mate.

[revid!]

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4251/cimg0119oj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
word.
good lookin seize nice ups

[a maze]

logo, my duude, looks good.

Same to you, seize. Work on those extensions though.

[jvillebboy]

lol@ revid. lol. seize, you lookin pretty fresh. i like the color scheme. reminds me of a watermelon for some odd reason. =p

and logo, i like the style. fresh work. yea, the l's shadows a lil off but eff it. you straight. lol

[MERkfX^]

man nice work revid and seize, dope ; )
how much paint do you use up for filling in your letters ( white one revid )
a whole can?
half?

[Rank-oner!]

seize that looks soooo clean shit man. only thing i would take the green all the way to the top like the other letters but damn man thats sweet

[RUDE_Bwoy]

;995724']dont post paper shit in here

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2176.jpg

sick

[mmmburgers]

;995724']dont post paper shit in here

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/IMGP2176.jpg

seize, you never fail to impress
lookin better every time i see your pieces

[Clowney-Cakes]

seize you know i love you right?
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/3766/vttonhyl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/3175/vttonh2ai2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8765/vttonh3ya7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1614/graffiti025id0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3028/uuuu186yp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2113/wordssssssss004yr3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/4633/wordssssssss006av5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[j-f]

clowney those are sick
im not really feeling the last one tho

[SEIZE [reppin yo hood]]

http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8765/vttonh3ya7.jpg

yo, i stared at this elka peice for like, 20 minutes when i was on shrooms. i remember it being the coolest thing i had ever seen for some reason. props to both of you guys.



stolen flicks for talking

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/2243328056_d517abfbd1_o.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/2245047833_cb341b6877_o.jpg

[blunttokes]

props seize u got a lot better once the new year hit...keep it up bro!

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7826/1003467ce4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?

[Drakula]

ELK get rid of the loops and add something to replace them and it'll look good.

[EyeZee]

yo seize those extensions are dope, you could of made the s better, or more of a bend on the last e, it just doesnt look right, ill scheme to man, yo work on that style man be lookin like some old school new york cats doggie

[EyeZee]

lmao about 8-9 months ago
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/512/dscn1625hw1.jpg
Most recent....CRITS or opinions please and gracias
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2577/piecesnbombs004yt7.jpg
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/7647/hpim5374pk6.jpg

[Prime]

Its tight nice and clean

[KASE2]

;997247']http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/8765/vttonh3ya7.jpg

yo, i stared at this elka peice for like, 20 minutes when i was on shrooms. i remember it being the coolest thing i had ever seen for some reason. props to both of you guys.



stolen flicks for talking

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/2243328056_d517abfbd1_o.jpg
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/2245047833_cb341b6877_o.jpg

clean shit bruh, u liv in tha bay tho? kuz on tha bottom pic theres a DAK tag (on overpass) theres a DAK out here...

[Stonk]

damn seize..killin shit. im really feeling that black fill straight letter

Eyezee you can paint but your letters still suck..work on those not your colors and shit right yet.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00248.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00250.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00251.jpg

[*OsBaGoSh@]

Stonk thats sweet. How much paint did that take?
Click to see my pics
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6361/ashwed037kn7.th.jpg (http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ashwed037kn7.jpg)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1986/ashwed035om6.th.jpg (http://img123.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ashwed035om6.jpg)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7875/ashwed036bb0.th.jpg (http://img123.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ashwed036bb0.jpg)
I know i need to work on my hand control. Ive done better but its like 5 degree out. Either way help

[NiL]

Stonk thats sweet. How much paint did that take?
Click to see my pics
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6361/ashwed037kn7.th.jpg (http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ashwed037kn7.jpg)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/1986/ashwed035om6.th.jpg (http://img123.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ashwed035om6.jpg)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7875/ashwed036bb0.th.jpg (http://img123.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ashwed036bb0.jpg)
I know i need to work on my hand control. Ive done better but its like 5 degree out. Either way help

It's aite man just stick to paper get a better flow with the letters and shit just look around see how it is and all get an idea just don't bite it y0.. But it's good stick to it man.

[Rank-oner!]

Elka : those pieces are dope
tried to paint something new
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint004-1.jpg

[Dying to live]

bump rank and seize

[Albert Fish]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00248.jpg

dope straight dude. dont throw up mpc though, i guess you havent heard it was a huge crew that revolutionized graffiti from new york back in the day.

[pencilpusha]

http://a493.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/107/l_f462595195a2dae500ed87398c26fffc.jpg
http://a460.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/97/l_adc4c151053def8dc1a3920a353b5113.jpg
http://a368.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_c766da492f5a31822becf98f27d2244f.jpg
http://a771.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/124/l_3a344e16fd057d2d86ad9962ca718cca.jpg
http://a239.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_696384875dddc13f4a3ae77faf1cb78e.jpg
http://a825.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/12/l_5fe878e55577020d0752cfb64bc6a938.jpg

[Dying to live]

thats faces is fucking insane

[MUSEone]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC00248.jpg


Where exactly is this at? We have a "MOMS" around here to...

[EyeZee]

[QUOTE=Stonk;998051]damn seize..killin shit. im really feeling that black fill straight letter

Eyezee you can paint but your letters still suck..work on those not your colors and shit right yet.

haha damn eh nones ever said that to me before, I dont sketch as much as i did before, i just wanna paint but yaa y wussup wit them

[rsakens]

i know it sucks & i dint had color for the fill
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00056.jpg?t=1202397156

[mickymcfinnigan]

stonk: cool bt dont like the s on the moms would look cooler if the legs didn't bend back into the letter an just went horizontally
rank: nice style though the bit where the n an k join at the bottom should have a space between them
bek: the pieces and characters are nice bt ur throw up could do with sum work in my opinion th letters shouldnt be so fat an the throws usually look so much better with a more grimy fill

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s289/ofter_onker/DSC00003.jpg
todays freestyle bit rushed as its visible from the motorway, highlights are fucked as well but any futher tips would be cool.

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s289/ofter_onker/DSC00006.jpg
dub stlye a was thinkn of workin on

[pencilpusha]

yea my thros aren't my strongest i'm more of a character guy...
I like that second afer but the first not feelin it maybe pull the f out the e somehow make that werk better...
rsakens...looks pretty good for a outline thro not as bad as you think in my opinion...

[acereborn]

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg232/viper-dyc/piccy1.jpg

I know, not a great pic... But my camera didn't have batteries when I did it, and it was a bitch to get up there...

AND SOMEBODY WENT OVER IT.... GRR...

[nova-902]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/throwies/Novathrow08.jpg

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/throwies/Novathrow02.jpg

My second piece ever:
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/pieces/Novapiece02.jpg

My third piece:
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m97/nova-3dc/pieces/Novapiece09.jpg

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00080-2.jpg?t=1202443211
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00029-3.jpg?t=1202443295

[Laces Out]

stonk: cool bt dont like the s on the moms would look cooler if the legs didn't bend back into the letter an just went horizontally
rank: nice style though the bit where the n an k join at the bottom should have a space between them
bek: the pieces and characters are nice bt ur throw up could do with sum work in my opinion th letters shouldnt be so fat an the throws usually look so much better with a more grimy fill

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s289/ofter_onker/DSC00003.jpg
todays freestyle bit rushed as its visible from the motorway, highlights are fucked as well but any futher tips would be cool.

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s289/ofter_onker/DSC00006.jpg
dub stlye a was thinkn of workin on


Damn, the first one's beast as hell.

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akelpieceeeee.jpg
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/throwiiieladd.jpg

[deanoh]

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/1842/dsc00340vb7.jpg

Done that yesterday, its not the best. Any ideas to improve it? Apart from starting scratch ;) Ive only been writing 2-3 weeks now.

edit: The one that says SICK. Oh yeah, the only paint i could use was some shitty plastik-kote (waste of time). Buuttt.. free paint is free paint.

[mickymcfinnigan]

deanoh: you need to put a second outline round the whole piece for starts, and seriously need to fix the 3d inside the c as it doesnt fill that much space if you no what i mean also for both of them, its easier to do a 3d which points downwards.
akel: all the letters in the piece look cool apart from the e in my opinion a think you should use straighter lines for it so it flows with the rest of the peice.

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/Castl.jpg
todays freestyle...crits welcome

[RUDE_Bwoy]

Elka : those pieces are dope
tried to paint something new
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint001.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/newpaint004-1.jpg

nice work

[JEDI-MASTER]

thats a real nice piece there rank i like that

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012182.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012180.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012179.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012178.jpg freight day

[revid!]

hoooollooowww fills are the shit!
dope dope dope shit daws

[dim]

OMFG Daws is a mutha fuckin killllllllllaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh dope shit man

[Dying to live]

http://a316.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_93dce0595b06599ccce1f8c623be0b0b.jpg

[SK2]

http://i016.radikal.ru/0802/06/ec9cbef3e4b1.jpg
http://i014.radikal.ru/0802/e6/42e075c6d9c5.jpg

[undergroundanimal]

nova: the black throwup looks pretty dope
akel:feelin your new throwups to, handstyles lookin good also
afer:looks fresh..
daws:nice simples
sk2:not really feelin those throwups but i kinda like the piece, the background is ruining it tho..


http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/aaaaah012.jpg

[undergroundanimal]

(old piece)
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/aaaaah001.jpg

[SEZ]

http://a316.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/l_93dce0595b06599ccce1f8c623be0b0b.jpg

yeeha akel thats dope...got a job in Australia...must hook up and go paint

[RUDE_Bwoy]

nova: the black throwup looks pretty dope
akel:feelin your new throwups to, handstyles lookin good also
afer:looks fresh..
daws:nice simples
sk2:not really feelin those throwups but i kinda like the piece, the background is ruining it tho..


http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/aaaaah012.jpg

sick

[silentchaos14]

nova: the black throwup looks pretty dope
akel:feelin your new throwups to, handstyles lookin good also
afer:looks fresh..
daws:nice simples
sk2:not really feelin those throwups but i kinda like the piece, the background is ruining it tho..


http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/aaaaah012.jpg
your S would flow with the letters better if you made the top flat like the rest. maybe make the middle a little thicker too.

[thesilentvandal]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012183.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012190.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012185.jpg

[rsakens]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00080-2.jpg?t=1202443211
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00029-3.jpg?t=1202443295

2pages gon and no comment !
any feedback or crit.........

[j-f]

rsakens try to keep it straight rather than making it curve down
like keep top and bottom at same levels
i like ur letters
try to make the 3d cleaner
hope u can use my crits

[rave905]

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj292/raveoh/HPIM0211.jpg
how about sum constructive crits on my new throwie

[Dying to live]

dont go so blocky and lose the X's

[Fube]

cut the bullshit beef/chat shit. flicks happen here. if i could make a rule where u cant say shit about someones shit untill u have a picture your going to post i would. but i dont make the rules, i just enforce them. cut your shit. post up and shut up.

[blunttokes]

rave clean that shit up homie.... probly using STOK eh in that cold weather wit the mad wind flowing around lol...

keep it up bra

n fix the damn A looks like it is a B n lean away from perko style ..... just my 2cents bro!

stayup!

[garbage down tha way]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/llllolllll.jpg

my r is whhhhacckkkkk.

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/sdgerg.jpg
my A's first legs is too thin =[

[trashtalk]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/Picture294-1.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/Picture245.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/ConnorsPictures150.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/ConnorsPictures156.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/Picture265.jpg

[Dying to live]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/Picture265.jpg
bhump

[mickymcfinnigan]

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/DSC00003-1.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/S4010003.jpg

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii113/wheresthecheetos/DSC00004-1.jpg

[wasted1]

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/1841/nicerdicerrq1.jpg
todays pic ran out of black when i started to make outline it wud be pretty effective.in estonia :P

[pedlowskater5]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o81/pedlowskater5/l_aa8e16f7818c22e7ddc8230d6e376ce5.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o81/pedlowskater5/l_245902936dbc8489ea63385957a7a1c2.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o81/pedlowskater5/l_037796940a1ae918667d71a50588e1ae.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o81/pedlowskater5/l_490b9ee23634e25bf670364d0caab0fe.jpg
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o81/pedlowskater5/DSC00026.jpg
more coming up

[Cause816]

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/642/causeen1.jpg
any crits?

[RUDE_Bwoy]

work on the structure and size.especially the u and e

[revid!]

dont write cause.
japer shits lookin ill man keep at it

[Takeout]

This is one of my first real throw ups and characters. Any crits?

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/NOIR.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/Noirworms.jpg

I know i'm not good so don't bother bashing. Anyone got any tips?

[MUSEone]

I could see where tha throw could have potential.

keep practicin.

[Cause816]

Thanks RUDE Bwoy. I'll work on it. I got some caps coming in so after that i'll go out and actually take my time on one.

[rave905]

@cause get into shading b4 u try details n try n have sum sort of style 2 it

@noir yeah i can the throwie has potential but what is that charcter supposed 2 b i cant decide if its wack as shit or just plain wierd lol

@japer dope


@mickey im likin that 2 letter n i think i might even bite that y? oh! thing in the ss 2letter lol

[Takeout]

lol, thanks Rave. I'm not sure what the characters are supposed to be either. I just really like the WTF factor when people see it.

[rave905]

lol idk u should try n make it look like a clown or sumthin

[undergroundanimal]

akel,over,mcfinnigan,japer and trashtalk look dope..

rave: im not really feelin your`s its to blocky and looks very simple, your cancontrol looks allright tho.., i would stick to paper for a while..

noir: your throwup looks pretty good for a 1st one but i would change the hole inside your o and change the top of your i a bit so it flows better with the rest.. sorry but i dont really like the characters


cause: work onn your letterstructure and try to make your letters the same size and hight, some shadow would look better to...

new throwups ive been practicing:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0261.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0265.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0268.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0271.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0256.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0242.jpg

crits..?

[rave905]

nice desire i cant really tell u nething lol
the only thing i can think would b 2 work on sum nice shading

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj292/raveoh/HPIM0112.jpg
what u guyz think of that
n i already know the dots r gay
n i forgot the shadow

[SEZ]

afer- i love the AF's
desire looking dope as always

["Riot"]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k148/RideBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT002.jpg
never forget.

[Teez-EmM!!!]

wasted u got the can control down but do simpler shit
cause dont write that some one does with mad respect
john skeatch more that j looks wak
rave when u do a force field keep the hand moving loose the dots and fill it in a bit more
jesice looking ill man make a throw up
mimicymcfinigan looking dopeeeeee
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0341.jpg
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/HPIM0340.jpg
the wall ate the paint like a box of chocolate.....
CRITESS

[con]

dude random but halo 3 alot of ppl suks

[Takeout]

-Desire your throw ups are lookin damn good.
-Rave i'd say fill in your letters a bit more and widen the left side of your A so its a bit closer to the R.
-TESM lighten up your hand a bit to stop drips and definitely work on the outline for the force field.
-Cause i'd say try and work on your letters so they have a better flow. Also, once your caps come in work on some solid shadowing before working details.

[rave905]

k i had a kid claim that i bit that frum gettin up
which i didnt
but does ne1 else think it looks like those letters
i think those letters r way 2 simple 2 b stolen frum newhere lol

[Takeout]

The letters seem pretty simple. Honestly tell that kid to get off his high horse and quit eating shit.

[rave905]

already done lol its so funny

heres the whole convo
first he posted in the 905 thread
that a hollow i did what that same style was biten from gettin up n then i pm'd him

rave905-not even ur fuct
n keep that kinda shit 2 pm's man


nightwriter905-ur the one to talk u fuckin fruit wanna fight?

rave905-yo im always down 4 a fight if its 1on1
y dont u tell me who u r

nightwriter905-apparently ur 18 and madd small
im younger then u...

rave905-yo wtf is this who r u hearing this shit from
n who r u


nightwriter905-i aint saying shit all man
all i was saying was that u got ur hallow letters from getting up bro

rave905-wtf u mean ur not sayin shit all u fuckin called me a fruit n asked if i wanted 2 fight fuck u
n thier not frum that game man lol show me the pic frum gettin up then
u started beefin me bro so y dont u stop hiding behind a user name n tell who u fuckin r
pussy

nightwriter905-chill out man ill find u a flick of it and ill send it to u
and i just said wanna fight to say i aint no pussy
i was in the nav crew but that was like 2 yrs ago now thats all ima say bout myself
and bro i aint beefin just tellin yuh that u gotta switch up ur style cuz ppl were tellin me that u got ur throwy from gettin up so i was the one to break it to yuh and hold up ima find a flick of that throwy

rave905-lol y wont u tell me who u r
scared or sumthin
i dun hide behind a username


nightwriter905-i aint scared im just sayin

rave905-nah thats the point is ur not sayin

n then he never pm'd me ak

[Takeout]

lol this is some funny shit.

[rave905]

haha i got another guy pm'in 2 being a pussy ass hater n he wont tell me what he writes either
ppl in my town r so fuct up man
hastres reno is his username

[blunttokes]

watch wat u say about certain ppl they can and will smash ur skelitor right outta urself son..

all i can say is he knows wats up n has all rights to say wats goin down...


not hatin rave ur chill for the 30mins we bombed together but keep it in mind...

[rave905]

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj292/raveoh/6bb0d0e8.jpg
what u guyz think of that 1?? its my first attempt at a super simple straight letter sorta piece type thing

cant c the a too well but its blue fill

[ThickGravy]

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012182.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012180.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012179.jpg http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1012178.jpg freight day

Ugh i just nutted mad hard

[HEY.LOOK.AT.ME]

rave dats aight the letters r maybe a lil 2 simple tho lol

daws it looks like u used a skinny 4 the fill lol
the last 1 is nice tho

[Teez-EmM!!!]

i love you daws

[pedlowskater5]

that fill on daws is fuckin illin

[Street Smart]

Rave - i don't really like the angle the letters are on, straighten it up and should look reall nice.

[MiNZ]

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/neuf2.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0133-1.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k49/starmac/NEWlineflics025.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k49/starmac/PC140327.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k49/starmac/PC160347.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o163/MISTERFLICKSTER/wileysidess.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r189/RAHREY_2006/DSC00198.jpg
greetings from chicago
all crew all day

[HEY.LOOK.AT.ME]

the first one is the only one thats nice
u shoulkdnt b killin trians like that so soon bro especially wit that purp hollow

[Mass Appeal]

hey...hes on a train..are you...i aint moaning..keep up the work !

[MiNZ]

when i get more than 15 seconds to do me
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q271/GEADONE/roof.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1232/1266292899_7cc9bc17ae_b.jpg
sorry....cant run it...cant stand seeing clean trains
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o163/MISTERFLICKSTER/wileyoutline.jpg

[saywhat!!]

some shit give crits preez da silver one is bout 7 ft so thats why its kinda cust

[FailOne]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2233/2269952313_b1d45f3c2f.jpg?v=1203223976

first peice in a couple years, FNE short for fone

[Scream Out]

that shit looks clean, where is that?

[FailOne]

winnipeg manitoba, it was for a battle against

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2063/2269961187_43fcb8b0d3.jpg?v=1203224206

[Scream Out]

dako has a prety dope handstyle and characters but his pieces are prety bunk, i dont think ive seen one that i like