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Rhyseitup
06-13-2008, 04:12 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/rhise.jpg

drop one.
06-13-2008, 04:34 PM
idky but looks tight

JETPACK!!
06-13-2008, 07:13 PM
rhyse im not feelin your I bro, its too big.

some after work shit to loosen me up for the weekend. not feelin this one much.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9510/rasek10jf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sketch3
06-13-2008, 07:14 PM
sexy, but experement with your e,
its mad generic

Mass Appeal
06-13-2008, 07:16 PM
Your spot huh ?...old TAMK tags
My next peice ill be rocking the cream background...

ERAZ
06-13-2008, 07:17 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/NottawaBridge001.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/NottawaBridge005.jpg

dope... i like it, outlines a little sloppy in places tho

garbage down tha way
06-13-2008, 10:02 PM
hoer, your pieces are gettin ill guy. big ups, im gonna come to cleveland and we'll go bombing. you have no say in it:)





thanks homey, dude you really should come up for real!! ! !!! thatd be so dope.

Dying to live
06-13-2008, 10:08 PM
jetpack digging it improving alot just work on the s and the k then it will be tight

Rhyseitup
06-13-2008, 11:21 PM
[QUOTE=JETPACK!!;1125283]rhyse im not feelin your I bro, its too big.

some after work shit to loosen me up for the weekend. not feelin this one much.

QUOTE]

lol its the first time i did it with an "i" coz i dunno just something new, thanks tho. :)

.fetus.
06-13-2008, 11:26 PM
First time ever using paint, always blackbooked. Sorry for the shitty cellphone pics. Crits? mainly looking for tips.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8355/dsc00045ik1gq6.th.jpg (http://img177.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00045ik1gq6.jpg)http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2120/dsc00048ph5.th.jpg (http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00048ph5.jpg)http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/1011/dsc00061kt3.th.jpg (http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00061kt3.jpg)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/2522/dsc00058yr4.th.jpg (http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00058yr4.jpg)http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4207/dsc00064jq1.th.jpg (http://img258.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00064jq1.jpg)http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/1927/dsc00059gv5.th.jpg (http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00059gv5.jpg)

JETPACK!!
06-13-2008, 11:31 PM
rhyse im not feelin your I bro, its too big.

some after work shit to loosen me up for the weekend. not feelin this one much.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9510/rasek10jf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dosent deserve a bump, but one bump each..

rhyse, blackbook it first. ive made that mistake a bunch of times. ruins my pieces.

task, keep working at it. your shits pretty decent. and get larger pictures

fetus, stick to the blackbooks a lil while longer

fonone
06-14-2008, 02:54 AM
love that R jetpack...

some shit on the freeway

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3176/sany0061st4.jpg

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1899/sany0070dq6.jpg

fucked the K on my throw

letsgobombin
06-14-2008, 05:15 AM
irekn- your throws look a lot better on paper, you should try doing each letter in one continuous motion (it looks like you dont), because i think thats what makes it look worse
rasek- its clean, just keep experimenting with fills. also, i think you should tilt your k like you did to your r, or maybe tilt all the letters
asek- hit the books

seb
06-14-2008, 06:56 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/rhyse.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/rhyse3.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/rhyse5.jpg

i like your style, once ure can control improves thatll look alot better, i realy like it though

.fetus.
06-14-2008, 09:22 AM
Thanks for the comments guys, I'll take the advice

emel
06-14-2008, 09:30 AM
rhyse stay in the book for now
same with you IREKN

jetpack- doesnt look like you do all your lines in one stroke, you should do that, slowly, eventually you will get better at painting and dont worry about drips you an ALWAYS cut back unles your doing a burner which your not so no worries just keep it up and try to perfect your simple caz the right leg on the R looks kinda funky and hte S doesnt seem to fit but its almost thjere
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3930/kasr9qe9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Rhyseitup
06-14-2008, 09:44 AM
thanks for the advice guys! :)

AZTEKA
06-14-2008, 09:49 AM
yo rasek that shit looks dope, and rhyse work on yours a little, that shit would look dope if that style was perfected and irekn that looks alright and kasr that shit looks dope as well, but not the s, but mybe its just me, but otherwise it looks nice.
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8663/06010ll0.jpg
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5766/05205rc6.jpg

garbage down tha way
06-14-2008, 11:01 AM
kasp the second ones pretty ill son, cept for the gangbanger "O" but i can look past it. the first one, eh no offence but dont use that one ever again.

emel- fuckin dope.

I GOT CLOUT
06-14-2008, 11:15 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hors.jpg
whyd this get deleted?

Bumpin this cause your E and R are fucking steezy.

JETPACK!!
06-14-2008, 11:15 AM
rhyse stay in the book for now
same with you IREKN

jetpack- doesnt look like you do all your lines in one stroke, you should do that, slowly, eventually you will get better at painting and dont worry about drips you an ALWAYS cut back unles your doing a burner which your not so no worries just keep it up and try to perfect your simple caz the right leg on the R looks kinda funky and hte S doesnt seem to fit but its almost thjere
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3930/kasr9qe9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

best advice ive had for my paintin game in a while. thanks bro. i'll either do it in one stroke or cut back over my mistakes. but i ran outta white paint so i couldnt cut back.

im really feelin the fill, nice and clean. plus ive always loved the highlights you throw into your 3D. you do it well. im not feelin the letters much. but to each their own. keep it up.

keep working on your rollers irekn, your one of the few whose actually doing them. your bomb is nice too, you should fill that shit

Rhyseitup
06-14-2008, 12:23 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/n514425767_532579_9099.jpg

Bah Humbug
06-14-2008, 02:30 PM
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/CopyofDCP02144.jpg
a for aten

I GOT CLOUT
06-14-2008, 02:54 PM
Rhyse distinguish your R more. It looks like an H. That looks good though.

Humbug - I dunno...keep working at it.

Kruxos
06-14-2008, 03:01 PM
humbug......nooo.

do keyboard font simples in your book for a while, dont go paint anything. you really need to work from the basics.

Bah Humbug
06-14-2008, 03:10 PM
i arredy did a bunch of simples in my book

Kruxos
06-14-2008, 05:29 PM
well im sorry but you need to do more. and only paint in your backyard and stuff. work on your control. paint and draw simples for awhile, learn your history, look through books, watch movies

Shiva.
06-14-2008, 05:49 PM
do KEYBOARD simples so it should look more like "A"
and move your can closer to the canvas/board whatever it is.

maso1
06-14-2008, 08:51 PM
Yeah i agree with Shiva and Kruxos stick to the books and work on simps

umop.ap!sdn
06-14-2008, 08:53 PM
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/CopyofDCP02144.jpg
a for aten

waste of paint

garbage down tha way
06-14-2008, 09:07 PM
marcs closeout paint, brown was ok, blue was whacked.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hbombin.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hbomb.jpg

fonone
06-14-2008, 09:24 PM
love that R jetpack...

some shit on the freeway

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3176/sany0061st4.jpg

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1899/sany0070dq6.jpg

fucked the K on my throw


irekn- your throws look a lot better on paper, you should try doing each letter in one continuous motion (it looks like you dont), because i think thats what makes it look worse
rasek- its clean, just keep experimenting with fills. also, i think you should tilt your k like you did to your r, or maybe tilt all the letters
asek- hit the books

yeah the reason i didnt do it in one motion was because i had to keep jumping to the ground when cars went past.... thanks for the crits anyways.

and only having a fat cap doesnt help

HRbN
06-14-2008, 11:27 PM
Little somethin somethin from the other day

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7269/516118og6.jpg

That green thing on the ground on the left is a cap to a can, like the actual cap not the spray one.. hah for size comparison

I GOT CLOUT
06-15-2008, 12:57 AM
^^^YOU KNOW!!!

Eh, wasnt enough wall for the whole name. 1 of 2 from tonight, Ill have the other one up tomorrow when I can get a flick.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16130.jpg

letsgobombin
06-15-2008, 03:47 AM
ease- if you want crits then give crits
phazer- same to you
irekn- how big was that throw? because i almost always use a fatcap for my throws unless they're really small. keep up with the rollers as well, i love 'em but not may people do them alot
hoer-you get crits because i like your sig, i dont like that style half as much as your other one(s), but i do like the e and on your tag have you tried making the top of the r more square to match the rest

fonone
06-15-2008, 04:31 AM
yeah that was another problem, everything i brought with me clogged and only had pinkdots and fat caps left, lols.

garbage down tha way
06-15-2008, 07:51 AM
i think the further i move away from cali style, the less people like my shit haha.

thanks for the crits letsgobombin, and yea ive tried that with the R, but it doesn't have as much personality.

I GOT CLOUT
06-15-2008, 07:52 AM
Considering I gave crits a page back, and Hoer and iRekn are better than me, and I was there when Phazer painted that peice, I dont think I need to do anything.

Plus...I know it sucks, haha.

JETPACK!!
06-15-2008, 07:57 AM
cloutskies, you should lower your S. the steeze of it would flow better. i didn't hit a billboard for the battle. ended up passing out at 1:30 again. gonna get that shit done today.

hoer, do your own thing. the only reason these cats may not "like" your style is because its not generic as fuck. big ups kid.

Bah Humbug
06-15-2008, 11:12 AM
waste of paint
ur a retard
im practicing

GIzUrD
06-15-2008, 11:20 AM
personally i dont care about wasting paint... since its free

JETPACK!!
06-15-2008, 11:22 AM
you gotta waste paint to get better at using it. ive wasted a lot, still do.

HRbN
06-15-2008, 12:33 PM
Theres nothing wrong with wasting paint. Like said above you gotta use it to practice. Ease my man, jets right. That ES would flow alot better if you dropped the s down, maybe alittle below the E. Fonone i like that throwie, nice style.

Somebody crit ma shit. I give far more crits than pictures posted.

JETPACK!!
06-15-2008, 12:36 PM
you shouldnt line off the clouds at the bottom like that. that shit only suits if its touching the ground. you should make it bubble out a bit and come back. did you use a stencil for the stars? i like the fading done in the fill though

guy, enter that shit in the battle

HRbN
06-15-2008, 12:41 PM
Yeah i really wanted to make it all bubbling down but at night it didnt look like the cement was taking that green very well and the can had a non removable tip so i got kinda lazy.

What do you mean by bubble out and come back? Like down and back in?

Yeah the stars are a stencil, i cheated lol. :)

I hope to go out tonight and do another decent sized one. So either the one i do tonight or that purple and pink one, or maybe one other ive done recently will be entered in the battle.

Bah Humbug
06-15-2008, 02:33 PM
yo has this ever happened to you guys?
my can turned into a volcano yesterday
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/CopyofDCP02149.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-15-2008, 02:58 PM
you need to shake the can for at least an entire minute before you paint. dont hold the nozzle down as hard as you can, you flooded that shit.

phazer, sorry bro. but im gonna enter that one in. i gotta run and i wanna get this shit posted before i go out. its good competition though

NoCanControl
06-15-2008, 03:04 PM
yo has this ever happened to you guys?
my can turned into a volcano yesterday
http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn252/ATENZR/CopyofDCP02149.jpg

omg.. fail.


waste of good paint... i don't understand why you wouldn't stop pressing the cap, after you see it flooding for a while..... wow..... but i never get montana so tahts why i'm so tripped out.

probably a bad cap... it happens.

lolumad?
06-15-2008, 03:23 PM
why the fuck are you using montana in the first place? i know you didn't rack that so you are just wasting money.

HRbN
06-15-2008, 04:00 PM
Oh alright man, its all good. i Didnt know when the deadline was. Go for it. Theres always next week to!

I GOT CLOUT
06-15-2008, 06:29 PM
Yeah, the S being above the E was definately unintentional. I dont care though, its a shit throw at a possible new practice spot.

Anyway, like I said last night, heres number 2. Which is also shit.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16131.jpg

CT08
06-15-2008, 06:40 PM
that easer is nice

lolumad?
06-16-2008, 03:23 PM
i like your tag

I GOT CLOUT
06-16-2008, 03:37 PM
:)

Shoook
06-16-2008, 08:24 PM
theres already an easer in vancouver
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/erieone/DSC00109.jpg

Divine89
06-16-2008, 08:42 PM
as soon as i get a camera i'll post some of my shitty bombs. :( my first one was so bad i almost cried when i saw it the next day.:o :eek:

KEYWORD: almost

but i didn't

HRbN
06-16-2008, 10:12 PM
theres already an easer in vancouver
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk230/erieone/DSC00109.jpg

And im diggin his steez lol

Volume_one_
06-16-2008, 11:04 PM
Yeah, the S being above the E was definately unintentional. I dont care though, its a shit throw at a possible new practice spot.

Anyway, like I said last night, heres number 2. Which is also shit.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16131.jpg
the right side of that A could use some work but all nit picking aside i think its pretty tight
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_4329.jpg
I hit this up last summer under a train track I spent way to much time on it and i was using those 99cent cans from wally world

garbage down tha way
06-17-2008, 05:54 AM
how in the world is it horrible!??!?!

I GOT CLOUT
06-17-2008, 06:53 AM
This failed in the battle, so maybe yall can let me know why. Besides the fact that it doesnt stand up against Raseks shit.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16127.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
06-17-2008, 07:09 AM
i dont see too much wrong with..maybe jsut a bad decision on those colors

I GOT CLOUT
06-17-2008, 09:12 AM
I love those colors though :(

Kruxos
06-17-2008, 10:37 AM
i think he is talking about how u have 1 black letter and the rest white.

i also would change up the E a bit, just the bottom, i dont like the curve. other than that its a good simple.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
06-17-2008, 10:47 AM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x123/dumbfux/HPIM1859.jpg

Chump
06-17-2008, 11:30 AM
rots where have you been>?

Teez-EmM!!!
06-17-2008, 01:02 PM
gore that is RUDE man
my piece from last weekend
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/peter447.jpg

dim
06-17-2008, 05:31 PM
Cleanest Shit U Have Ever Done Tezm Mob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JETPACK!!
06-17-2008, 05:40 PM
word, i actually like that a lot. your M is ill, you always spaced it out too much prior to this piece. just thicken then middle bars on your M and your good.

fonone
06-17-2008, 09:33 PM
god i want to piece more... but im too poor to pay 14 dollars for a can of montana and all the cheapest cans to buy are 3 dollars... which is fine but im underage and theyre locked up. Life sucks.

AcosOne
06-18-2008, 12:16 AM
tezm, thats pretty sweet man, love the color scheme and the mad cleanness... just fix up the middle part of your M... it annoys me :p

busr22
06-18-2008, 07:32 AM
WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we buffed our own wall so we could paint!!!!!!!!
HOER*BUSR PRODUCTION.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today164.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today172.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today173.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today174.jpg

this is actually my first piece. what you think

I GOT CLOUT
06-18-2008, 07:36 AM
I want a spot like that.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
06-18-2008, 04:40 PM
You should have made the 3D solid, hoers. Other that that I digit.

TaskOne
06-18-2008, 04:53 PM
Went painting this afternoon with a my homie Mozer NWP. Crits?
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn004.jpg
MO (Not Me)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn006.jpg
MOZER (Not Me)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn009.jpg

BUSR / HOER - Keep painting you will improve!
TEZM - Thats fresh and clean man keep it up, loving the colours too. What paint?
GORE - Clean, work on those letters though. I like it!
EASE - Nice man but work on the E and A, I like the S.

HRbN
06-18-2008, 05:21 PM
Rots, that shit is ill man nice work!
Ease- i give you no crits. ; )
Task- im diggin that last one.

Backalley Abortion Doctor
06-18-2008, 08:36 PM
My letters? :confused:

jupsick
06-18-2008, 10:07 PM
task im diggin that last one....
but get those dots out...

busr22
06-18-2008, 11:11 PM
task. i agree with jupsick.
no dots....
i also think the T could be a little bit longer. and not digging the little right top of the A
i think it would better without the little noch.

La Coka Nostra
06-18-2008, 11:48 PM
WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we buffed our own wall so we could paint!!!!!!!!
HOER*BUSR PRODUCTION.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today174.jpg

this is actually my first piece. what you think



hoer is cool with you biting his R?

esoteric
06-19-2008, 02:39 AM
been messin around in the blackbook for a while heres my first try with a can in my hand

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f293/xmoneymike55/tag-1.jpg

crits?

and yeah i know its only 3 letters i ran out of room like an idiot, ill drop another one tomorrow and save space

my.favorite.addiction
06-19-2008, 08:30 AM
Task I think you should keep both the notch an the dots,keep it original.

xKEEPITPOSIx
06-19-2008, 05:01 PM
I'm new to the forum but have been watching the action going on in here for a while. I've been working on my stuff for the past three months probably, here's some of the haggard shit I've done. Before people jump on me, I live in the middle of no-where and know that my stuff is whack. I'd love some crits and feedback to make sure I've progressed.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/CDU/IMG_0983.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/CDU/IMG_0980.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/CDU/IMG_0984.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/CDU/IMG_0977.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/CDU/IMG_0987.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/CDU/IMG_0990.jpg

adyo87
06-19-2008, 05:58 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v93/adyo123/P6160116.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v93/adyo123/P6160113.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v93/adyo123/P6190124.jpg


MUZE - u got some sick fills dude, keep em comin

any comments?

Speedy
06-19-2008, 06:50 PM
I like your last one the best Jerm. The can control is a lot better than the previous 2. You can tell there aren't any spots on it where you stalled or anything. Nice work. As for the first 2 it looks like you did the outline first.

Muse, I like #5 the best. Your U looks like an N on the last one.

emel
06-19-2008, 06:56 PM
hoer is cool with you biting his R?


cmon now...

thats a common form of the letter R....

Speedy
06-19-2008, 06:57 PM
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3986/piecejaskdg4.jpg
?

HRbN
06-19-2008, 07:02 PM
Muze- your letter structure needs some work but there is progression between the photos. Honestly though i wouldnt worry about any crazy fills yet.

Jerm- That last pic is by far the best, the main thing i would change though is extend the bar that seals the top part of the E down.

Speedy- its not bad but im not likin the blue, it shoulda been brown like camo... atleast thats what i woulda done

klic
06-19-2008, 07:02 PM
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3986/piecejaskdg4.jpg
?

sick man im just not liking the drips tho

I GOT CLOUT
06-19-2008, 07:11 PM
Rots - That shit looks mad clean man. I just think the R could flow a little better with the rest.
Task - Its decent. Just fix that S.
Muze - Im just not diggin the letters at all man. Nor the "sick fills". Just keep working at it dude.
Jerm - You're almost there. I don't like your throw at all though. Your last piece is decent. Just work on your E and M.
Jask - Just work on your letters a bit more. I dont like the drips though. Just doesnt fit with that piece in particular. Your control is decent though.

Edit* I dont think I said decent enough.

La Coka Nostra
06-19-2008, 11:21 PM
cmon now...

thats a common form of the letter R....

seriously? that's hoer's exact r.
up to the 3 dots for the hole in it.


i wasn't trying to be a dick calling out a bite.
i was just saying.

I GOT CLOUT
06-20-2008, 12:37 AM
Dollar can fun from like 30 minutes ago.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16136.jpg

And I agree with Nostra. For whatever that's worth.

HRbN
06-20-2008, 12:41 AM
it aint worth shit! just playin i like that new peice. You'll have to tell me where its at later. I did a daytime quick throwie peice today. Flicks on the way

I GOT CLOUT
06-20-2008, 12:44 AM
Dollar can fun from like 30 minutes ago.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16136.jpg

And I agree with Nostra. For whatever that's worth.

GAH, bottom bump.

Phantazm
06-20-2008, 04:38 AM
Aiite heres a flick from a place in Miami that me and my boy painted a bit, I threw up the one that reads "Rest" and the one on the wood surface was by my friend but he just got into graff like 3 weeks ago so I've been trying to help him out but I'm no expert or anything like that check it:

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5826/grafffmn5.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=grafffmn5.jpg)

raveone
06-20-2008, 12:04 PM
Went painting this afternoon with a my homie Mozer NWP. Crits?
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn004.jpg
MO (Not Me)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn006.jpg
MOZER (Not Me)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn009.jpg

BUSR / HOER - Keep painting you will improve!
TEZM - Thats fresh and clean man keep it up, loving the colours too. What paint?
GORE - Clean, work on those letters though. I like it!
EASE - Nice man but work on the E and A, I like the S.

task ur peice u did is cool and all.
but why so many points on the end of your letters?
keep that simple

COLOR192
06-20-2008, 02:21 PM
Ease: on the left bar of the A shoulda been a bit thiner at the top. and the 2nd E seems shorter than the first one

here's the lil throw up:
http://a162.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/94/l_3bf6038fd56ead2d57407226c8301a31.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-20-2008, 02:38 PM
Nah, all of my letters are exactly the same size. Its just the angle of the flick.

MUSEone
06-20-2008, 03:39 PM
task ur peice u did is cool and all.
but why so many points on the end of your letters?
keep that simple

maybe hes rather have more block type letters than rounded?

thats a simple imo.

H3TT1NG3R
06-20-2008, 06:23 PM
zero-its alright, i kinda dont liek all teh different little bits comuing off the edges of teh letters, liek the end of the o,. and middle of the e. but other than that it seems u have pretty decent can control, unliek me lmao.
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/8059/lasekgoldpiecerq0.jpg
um ya i couldnt get a full pic yet, but crit it as is, i fucked up bigtime, teh sek is bigger than the l and a. owell. ALSO teh fuckign gold burned through the black outline and shadow

seywhat
06-20-2008, 06:35 PM
u really need to work on ur structure, and just go over the gold again with the black and it should show up. did u wait until the gold was dry to do the outline?

H3TT1NG3R
06-20-2008, 06:39 PM
^naw i didnt wait, i was kinda in a rush, but ya ill do that next time i use a metallic color. and ya i still need more practice that onyl my third time going otu with paint

COLOR192
06-20-2008, 07:04 PM
yeah, metalic paint sucks! either u leave a space in blanc where u wanna do the outlines and other stuff, or u have to w8 for it to dry :\

me.against.society
06-20-2008, 07:59 PM
task ur peice u did is cool and all.
but why so many points on the end of your letters?
keep that simple

i think if u just left out the dot on the a and keep the other two dots it would look better

trashtalk
06-21-2008, 12:33 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo005.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo001.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_2192.jpg

garbage down tha way
06-21-2008, 12:53 PM
the middle ones ok. i dont like the teeth on the other ones. i wouldnt seperate your bars like that, how each bar is like its own tear drop thing. just keep it solid.




EDIT: also, you might want to consider a name change. derrogatory gang terms aren't always the best things to write.

Keke
06-21-2008, 03:11 PM
crab i a gang term now?crab i think those are hot specialy the middle one

DEAR
06-21-2008, 03:46 PM
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6594/dscf0718ag3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/7660/dscf0715ra7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

garbage down tha way
06-21-2008, 03:55 PM
crab i a gang term now?crab i think those are hot specialy the middle one

crab is a disrespectful way to say crip. not that i respect gangbangers in the first place, but i wouldnt want beef with them considering the ones in cleveland will not think twice to murder you.

MarOne...
06-21-2008, 04:01 PM
Garbage just saved your life. :)

RUDE_Bwoy
06-21-2008, 04:08 PM
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6594/dscf0718ag3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/7660/dscf0715ra7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nice but theres already a sauce in atl that would fuckin burn that

JETPACK!!
06-21-2008, 04:11 PM
crab, your A looks exactly like that pokemon... kabuto or something

quick piece, ran outta white, so i couldnt do a drop shadow. sorry about the shitty flick
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/8344/rasek13zc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ease, careful with that embankment thing your painting on, dont wanna heat it out b. thats like the third, fourth piece on it. piggys might get suspicious if they see it.

bowchicabowow
06-21-2008, 06:49 PM
Nice rasek, I like the shading on that, great job.

Well I did my first piece yesterday, turned out shitty because I was really stressed about time. Taking time is important when your a toy lol. My letters are decent in the sketch but I didn't transfer the letters from sketch to wall well at all. Especially the E and A.

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/psilolovesfluffy/0620082030.jpg

Its not clean at all. I need to practice can control. It's a really chill wall so I can practice there whenever.

(SoS)Viruz
06-21-2008, 07:18 PM
Its nice for a start. Mabey when you startting for paintin start off with simples for paintin....

JETPACK!!
06-21-2008, 07:20 PM
crab, your A looks exactly like that pokemon... kabuto or something

quick piece, ran outta white, so i couldnt do a drop shadow. sorry about the shitty flick
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/8344/rasek13zc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ease, careful with that embankment thing your painting on, dont wanna heat it out b. thats like the third, fourth piece on it. piggys might get suspicious if they see it.

quick on the bumps. near, just keep workin on it. prolly a lot better than my first piece was.

HRbN
06-21-2008, 07:23 PM
Id get rid of all that red pazzaz in the letters fo sho. Other than that congrats on doin your first piece! Rock simps

Rasek- i really dig that fill. Your K looks like it could be taller though... maybe just the pic.
And i think you could rock a really cool curved peice not like the letter's bars being curved but like if you were to turn this --> ( to the right 90 degrees and then make your letters follow that, if that makes any sense at all haha like fan em out.... idk im gunna quit talking hah

Dying to live
06-21-2008, 07:27 PM
quick on the bumps. near, just keep workin on it. prolly a lot better than my first piece was.

i think you should do somthing with the k its looking bit boring
umm and the s seems outta wack but beside that, hot

Dying to live
06-21-2008, 07:34 PM
Went painting this afternoon with a my homie Mozer NWP. Crits?
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn004.jpg
MO (Not Me)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn006.jpg
MOZER (Not Me)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn007.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/Chillinn009.jpg

BUSR / HOER - Keep painting you will improve!
TEZM - Thats fresh and clean man keep it up, loving the colours too. What paint?
GORE - Clean, work on those letters though. I like it!
EASE - Nice man but work on the E and A, I like the S.
task looking good but just with the S i reakon you should go a little more like thishttp://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Chillinn009.gif
;)

I GOT CLOUT
06-21-2008, 08:23 PM
Daytime Flick.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16138.jpg

HRbN
06-21-2008, 08:55 PM
that red actually covered decent. lookin good!

And Rasek thats like more like 8 or 9 on that one spot. Its break time lol Cause thats where my 2 18 footers are as well.

I GOT CLOUT
06-21-2008, 08:57 PM
Haha, GO DOLLAR CANS!!!

HRbN
06-21-2008, 09:11 PM
The only thing i woulda done different is make that little bit of black to the right of the S red or maybe a background color. It wouldnt be technically correct with your 3d but it just seems like it might look better or maybe not its hard to say.

I GOT CLOUT
06-21-2008, 09:26 PM
Nah I know what you mean. I just didnt have a forcefield color. :/

bowchicabowow
06-21-2008, 09:43 PM
Thanks for the crits everyone, I will try simpler.

Teez-EmM!!!
06-21-2008, 11:13 PM
^^^^^
dont write near the is a near in toronto that is much better than u.

Crab its sick how ur letters are like crab claws but im not really fealling them maybe the the end of the b could get skinnyer like the rest of the letters and for the r make the leg kick out if u no what i mean. im mad jelous of that skate park spot tho

mob_city716
06-21-2008, 11:16 PM
KAMO your shit is ok just keep workin on ur throwies and what not i need to start workin on some throwies too so i guess we both got alot of paintin to do.

bowchicabowow
06-21-2008, 11:19 PM
Thanks for the input, but im in twin cities and multiple writers write near i know. But my full name is usually a play on nearly. My slaps especially, such as nearly dead.

I GOT CLOUT
06-22-2008, 03:27 AM
that red actually covered decent. lookin good!

And Rasek thats like more like 8 or 9 on that one spot. Its break time lol Cause thats where my 2 18 footers are as well.

What? That piece wasnt done where those were my friend.

LiMe..S.B.C
06-22-2008, 10:11 AM
quick simple 4 my girl..
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0556.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 10:17 AM
haze..? forreal? that shit's gonna get dissed mad quick. tell your girl to paint her own shit.

LiMe..S.B.C
06-22-2008, 10:26 AM
well let it get dissed.. i know their is like mad beef about her writing haze but i know what the old skool haze did, and IMO their are so many other writers that write the same name,,

JETPACK!!
06-22-2008, 10:33 AM
thats cool, fix your bars. work on your straight lines. your A is mad wack, keep the bars straight an all that shit, i wouldnt connect the bottom either. it's clean, but your keyline is a bit messy.

NoCanControl
06-22-2008, 10:53 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo005.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo001.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/IMG_2192.jpg

whatever ytou do. odn't listen to these guys, your style is dope. super dope. cuz its not recycled. Keep on doing what your doing. just find out tricks of the trade, when it comes to using spray paint.

iGraffix
06-22-2008, 02:28 PM
i just started painting 1 week ago and this is my first quick bomb. I had no previous can xp so take it ez:o

Phantazm
06-22-2008, 04:01 PM
Heres another spot that I bombed yesterday ...says "Les!" crits??

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9049/picturez045hz0.th.jpg

Heres a throwup...whats with the underline? anyways...

(http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picturez045hz0.jpg)http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9065/picturez053bz9.th.jpg (http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picturez053bz9.jpg)

emel
06-22-2008, 04:16 PM
"You could put your whole army
against my team and,
i guarantee you it'l be your last time breathing."

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1348/lightup7su4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2958/viceha4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/3173/kasr11am2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



CAN WE GET LESS COPS ON THIS SITE PLEASE THANK YOU....



fuck you pigs get out here before i cut some bacon off yo back

seywhat
06-22-2008, 05:15 PM
emel- MAAAD CLEEAAAN!!! props, i'll get that exchange up soon. i gotta finish my collab peice still

Phantazm
06-22-2008, 05:23 PM
Dope style emel!! clean outlines and tight fills with 3-D keep it up!! =P

HRbN
06-22-2008, 05:24 PM
Igraffix- thats really not bad for your first work. Atleast you have the right idea which is more than i can say for most beginers

Emel-that shit is clean!!! very nice

klic
06-22-2008, 05:52 PM
the colors go good on the top one emel

TaskOne
06-22-2008, 06:12 PM
task looking good but just with the S i reakon you should go a little more like this[
;)

Thanks ill try it next time I paint :)

Hater-AiD~>
06-22-2008, 07:14 PM
-nice shit ease
-emel that shit is fresh
-igraffix..i like your approach to this..youre just jumping straight out there..i would work on a style for yourself though..take some time and fill up a blackbook with some shit
..anybody wanna let me borrow some caps until monday..cause these stocks are killing me..plus im trying to work with this new throwie...i did kind of a freestyle on this one in which the J got really fucked up..but eh
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00113.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00111.jpg
tasty V
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/Flicks%20of%20other%20Shit/IMG00112.jpg

drop one.
06-22-2008, 07:49 PM
[quote=emel;1132729]"You could put your whole army
against my team and,
i guarantee you it'l be your last time breathing."

[/URL]
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2958/viceha4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
[URL="http://imageshack.us"]


so fresh

Tonberry
06-22-2008, 09:21 PM
Joga, I'd try to make the bomb less fat and more tall. Lose the money sign in the O, and fit in the open hole that should be in the A. Try to make the J and the G look more alike, and lose the testicle on the bottom right-hand corner of the A. Just some quick thoughts, and yes, some better caps would help the throws greatly.

Hater-AiD~>
06-22-2008, 10:50 PM
'preciate it

Speedy
06-22-2008, 10:55 PM
Emel, get out of the toy forum. lol That shit is so clean. I love it.

Just did this a few hours ago. If the forcefield seems messy it's because I had to finish it in the dark.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4305/piecejask2kz0.png

fonone
06-22-2008, 10:59 PM
J and K are dope, not so much the A and S though. Try making your S curved more like on the keyboard, but yeah real clean. keep it up.

esco93
06-22-2008, 11:39 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/0605081455-1.jpg

work on the s

Phantazm
06-22-2008, 11:59 PM
Emel, get out of the toy forum. lol That shit is so clean. I love it.

Just did this a few hours ago. If the forcefield seems messy it's because I had to finish it in the dark.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4305/piecejask2kz0.png

Yeah I agree...Emel get out of the Toy forum your painting abilities are so much better than every piece on this page combined =P can i get some crits on mine? I post 'em up but no one seems to care anyways...

Check it keep your letters consistent if you're going all caps keep 'em caps especially on pieces unless if you're not a toy and can manipulate the letters otherwise because it just sticks out like a sore thumb homie. Also props on the J and K it looks tight for real I see a lot of potential the S looks like a 5 to be honest and yeah it sucks balls to paint at night so no hate on the forcefield...you'll paint better next time trust me I started my piece above like at 4am and didn't finish until like 5 and my friend lighted me with some crappy ass flashlight but yeah i'm going to stop talking now...:cool:

Trestoner707
06-23-2008, 01:56 AM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/1.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/062108_203200.jpg

ZE-Jay
06-23-2008, 03:35 AM
you know, i wish i could add some of my shit, but i don't have a scanner or digital camera or anything. i guess i'm out of luck then, yeah? anyother way to get my stuff on here? ye get a cell phone which can take flicks cus i use my phone easy to carry saves u getting caught during the day aslo some come with cables so u can transfere files and shit and put songs on em to go bombbon

ZE-Jay
06-23-2008, 03:37 AM
ye i get my paint bout every 2-3weeks on a sat so ye i dont write lot but been doign it for a couple months i am shit at sketching and any of u guys can burn me at anythin but i duno how to get flicks up...

unreal180
06-23-2008, 04:54 AM
i swear theres a task one down my way lol

*Spectone*
06-23-2008, 10:15 AM
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2208/0622081440qh6.jpg

QUICK BOMB CRITS PLEASE

busr22
06-23-2008, 10:47 AM
i like it.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today190.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today196.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today203.jpg

im posting these for HOER*. top one it was way to dark and he couldnt see what he was doing. middle one is a new 0 he was trying. last one is the fresh piece. very nice. what you think?


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/rcthingamabob.jpg

H3TT1NG3R
06-23-2008, 10:49 AM
hoer- um i really dont liek teh letter structure, its all over teh place, its justr not solid

garbage down tha way
06-23-2008, 11:40 AM
i dont want to agree with you but i have to. i just realized this. time to go sketch for a week. Oh yeah, i hate all three of those pieces also.

H3TT1NG3R
06-23-2008, 11:59 AM
ya, i mean u got good can controll ect. but just work on ur letters

garbage down tha way
06-23-2008, 01:56 PM
i have my letters down trust me. its been like 2 and a half years. i just tried to switch it up lately and its not working out for me at all.

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 02:23 PM
iunno what this cats on, but hoer, your shit is ill. i've seen better. but you got your letters down man.

id try to come up with a new H though, its your weakest letter imo.

Fluffy Bunnies
06-23-2008, 02:42 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/4-5.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-23-2008, 02:59 PM
<3

Teez-EmM!!!
06-23-2008, 04:15 PM
burnning the country side of caledon
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/peter459.jpg
scrap can piece
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh302/petercl/peter456.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 04:22 PM
lol, caledon. i bet your house is worth more than what i'll make in a lifetime.

Teez-EmM!!!
06-23-2008, 04:32 PM
lmao i dont live in caledon trust me its a mission from were i live, i just have some friends that live there.

seywhat
06-23-2008, 07:09 PM
dont forget your pot holders, tezm and hoer bringin that hot shit. im diggin the first peices from both of yalls posts the most

trashtalk
06-23-2008, 07:49 PM
not diggin that hoer stuff why to sloppy take your time
really diggin that first one teez looks super good

some pace and others
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo015.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo013.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo010.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo008.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo007.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/poo003.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/blackrock0118.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/blackrock0111.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/ConnorsPictures279.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a180/teamblack123/ConnorsPictures191.jpg

CT08
06-23-2008, 07:52 PM
Pace that lightning one is sick

Thrice
06-23-2008, 07:52 PM
GET THE FUCK OUT PACE!!! Wrong thread, this is for toys! That shit is sooooo fresh, god damn. If you used krylons or some shit brand you have convinced me to drop the montana paint. Kudos to you.

JETPACK!!
06-23-2008, 07:57 PM
pace, dont listen to thrice.. your A needs work. the tails on either end of them don't look good. you need to make your bars more consistant too. your 3D could use some work too. good can control nonetheless

Thrice
06-23-2008, 08:01 PM
Hypocrite much????

fonone
06-23-2008, 08:04 PM
jtpacks right pace your A needs alot of work. IM feeling the last one most but fix up the A, and take off the extension on the left of the P, it looks mad ugly.

smooth_nuts
06-23-2008, 08:05 PM
edit*

unsuccsessfull
06-23-2008, 08:22 PM
http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/cc231/osoa231/b4.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010009.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010018.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010019.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010011.jpg

unsuccsessfull
06-23-2008, 08:25 PM
I'd much rather see the real buser from back in the day, so wack..Thanks for posting in the toy forum though:)

unsuccsessfull
06-23-2008, 08:38 PM
to avoid confusion, there is more than one person that uses this account,

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1021.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1012.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1017.jpg

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1026-1.jpg

busr22
06-23-2008, 10:35 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today206.jpg

this is for HOER*
happy i fucking posted it you dick licker. ha


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/rcthingamabob.jpg

garbage down tha way
06-23-2008, 11:30 PM
hahaha thanks.

me.against.society
06-24-2008, 01:07 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010011.jpg

I like the letters on this

shadel0rd
06-24-2008, 01:31 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9835/nonameis0.jpg
I know it sucks but I'm trying.

MZUNGU
06-24-2008, 03:52 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00330.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00324.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00286-1.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00334.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00333.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00351.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00353.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00355.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/Graff029.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00098.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00273.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00091.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/IMG00059.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/Sike017.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r262/playa365/Sike002.jpg

emel
06-24-2008, 05:50 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9540/kasr12fd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


sike stay in the books bro you need to work on those letters

hoer lose the arrows and thicken up your letters a bit too much negative space bro

MZUNGU
06-24-2008, 06:35 PM
ok first off, i cant believe you say stay in the books after my first picture, and second, i hope you dont think it goes from least recent to most recent because it goes most recent to least recent... my shit is way more advanced then yours anyways...

seywhat
06-24-2008, 06:52 PM
sike- im kinda diggin ur first pic, you really need to work on ur i though, also idk why u think ur shit is more developed than kasr's, urs just bends more thats it
kasr- fresh and clean, the purples fucked in a few places though
hoer- nice, drop the arrows, but other than that shits pretty dope

drop one.
06-24-2008, 07:15 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9835/nonameis0.jpg
I know it sucks but I'm trying.



please dont use graffiti creator. thank you

MZUNGU
06-24-2008, 07:50 PM
kinda put my foot in my mouth, i meant to say that my shit i more original then kasr's his is just generic

shadel0rd
06-24-2008, 07:54 PM
please dont use graffiti creator. thank you
Sorry, just got started I needed somewhere to look for inspiration.

emel
06-24-2008, 08:43 PM
kinda put my foot in my mouth, i meant to say that my shit i more original then kasr's his is just generic

just because you try to do things with more bullshit on it doesnt mean your shit is more original, its wack, and you need to learn the basics before you even try to get "original"

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/8443/kasr9fd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7796/kasr11aw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/1434/kasr10rb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/1723/kasr5ja8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/433/kasr2dkoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you dont know what your talking about kid, so just shut up and if someone who has more experience/is better than you just take what they say and dont complain

Dying to live
06-24-2008, 09:27 PM
http://a174.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/103/l_90469ec278c85ba14740d026211f91dd.gif
cant remember if i posted this kinda old but i havent posted in a while camera needs a fixin ;)

Maste
06-24-2008, 09:53 PM
@ ga... haha if i ever saw one of your throwies i wouldnt be able to not right a "y" at the end

unsuccsessfull
06-24-2008, 10:25 PM
haha, good one, hey...You should post some pics?

jersOneTIC
06-25-2008, 01:17 AM
bump emel

I GOT CLOUT
06-25-2008, 01:27 PM
AKELS - That shit is fuckin ill. I love those letters so much.

HRbN
06-25-2008, 02:19 PM
yeah dude shit looks fresh. i love that fill too

garbage down tha way
06-25-2008, 03:39 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/sexy4.jpg

bump akel and kasr.

Riss
06-25-2008, 03:56 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9540/kasr12fd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


sike stay in the books bro you need to work on those letters

hoer lose the arrows and thicken up your letters a bit too much negative space bro


just because you try to do things with more bullshit on it doesnt mean your shit is more original, its wack, and you need to learn the basics before you even try to get "original"

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/8443/kasr9fd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7796/kasr11aw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/1434/kasr10rb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/1723/kasr5ja8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/433/kasr2dkoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you dont know what your talking about kid, so just shut up and if someone who has more experience/is better than you just take what they say and dont complain

what the hell are you doing here?
Get your ass over at the big boys section.. nice shit

HRbN
06-25-2008, 07:52 PM
Kasr's shits good fo sho hes got a cool style, but honestly im not feeling those characters....

fonone
06-26-2008, 07:14 AM
you guys might finally be seeing a fonone piece, hahaha. some guy did a piece over my freeway roller so im going to get my spot back tomorrow night... pumpedddddd.

4ktsa
06-27-2008, 12:31 AM
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z122/mary-katesouliotis/P6260096.jpg

DEAR
06-27-2008, 04:50 PM
kasr that straight is real tight
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/9700/dscf0723gq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Trestoner707
06-28-2008, 03:07 AM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/1.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/062108_203200.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/rogerdoger.jpg

DECO ONE
06-28-2008, 04:22 AM
Shitty caps and rain make for unfinished outlines and 3d.....LOL

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG_0632.jpg

RE.

RESIN ONE

STlTCHES
06-28-2008, 04:45 PM
Done in my friends room for fun. crits?
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e117/dpetreley/th_l_7f9b8a2dc258759cff2520248d948b5f.jpg (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e117/dpetreley/l_7f9b8a2dc258759cff2520248d948b5f.jpg)

cans905
06-28-2008, 07:27 PM
kaser- herbn and riss r right... get out of the toy section cuz u aint toy
dear- im not feeling flor between r and the rest of the letters, even tho the r is my favourite part

ive only been at it for less than month so i luv crits

HRbN
06-28-2008, 08:09 PM
ZEN? i dont like the z or the n, Make the N a capital, and just play with the Z

FunkyEr
06-29-2008, 09:19 AM
im feelin the funk, thats under the hurtin unshaded "hokes"


http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/cc231/osoa231/b4.jpg






http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/4720/filledfunkbombbyfunkyerfk6.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-29-2008, 11:25 AM
that funk is nice, im feelin it.

10 minutes at the side of some store at 1pm, hah.
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/1402/rasek14sn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Keke
06-29-2008, 02:07 PM
the funk bomb is what he quoted went over i think

lolumad?
06-29-2008, 02:10 PM
thats really good for 10 minutes rasek, the only thing i would change is the "A" there is just something about it.

ilikekicks
06-29-2008, 02:34 PM
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_1802.jpg?t=1214782319

brainlord
06-29-2008, 04:37 PM
i dont know why your in here that looks dope to me

emel
06-29-2008, 07:01 PM
EKSO?

looks good just dont use that 3d fill style for that kind of lettering, i really like the E and the S but you should define the K more and make hte O a little more straight

ilikekicks
06-29-2008, 07:15 PM
its an "a" not an E, just to clear that up. Would a regular 3d fill be better?

(SoS)Viruz
06-29-2008, 07:39 PM
Garbe down the way- maybe a different color scheme and loose the arrows.
FUcky- Lovin those letters.
Jetpack- Same lovin the letters, but in 10 mins. Nice bro.
Kicks, Like it but the letter at the end really dosent flow to me.

JETPACK!!
06-29-2008, 07:49 PM
that funk is nice, im feelin it.

10 minutes at the side of some store at 1pm, hah.
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/1402/rasek14sn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thanks b.

kicks, make your first letter more A-ish. it's disguised. and yeah, your O dosent flow.

Cyto Aka Son1c
06-29-2008, 08:19 PM
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/9374/dscn0505aq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/9374/dscn0505aq8.4fdb12399e.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=235&i=dscn0505aq8.jpg)

first time painting in like 6 months, just a quickie, I need to practice a shitton.

maso1
06-29-2008, 09:38 PM
Cytro looks good mate except probably need to work on the r and e a bit. Looks clean though, keep up the good work.

maso1
06-29-2008, 09:40 PM
Quicke with paint from the $2 store:D
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0079.jpg

unsuccsessfull
06-29-2008, 10:33 PM
Hey funk you should figure your shit out and realise the people I can get to beat you up that arent writers...Plus what kind of a thing to wright is "find me bitches" lol good one, i already know your full name school age, how big you are...(pinner crack head) and your adress, found you:) and i can bet you anything you couldnt piece as good as me today!!
let alone the fact im have you age, and people in bca and dht ranges further and has more people then adk has ever..and what the fuck is the doose shit, you guys suck honestly why do you cross us out lol s hurtin dude
Almost Done Killing

fonone
06-29-2008, 11:14 PM
i was drunk for this, thought id take a few shots to take the edge off before i left, and then when i got there i thought i had sobered up completely so i had another shot from this little bottle i took. then i got the can in my hand and couldnt control it for shit haha. after i did the piece we went further down the highway to do some throws and i lost like half my caps and my otr, hella gay :(. went and did a rooftop after this but it was buffed within a day...


http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9160/dscf1009qr7.jpg

http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/9013/dscf1010sa6.jpg

anyway doing another piece this weeked, wont drink before this one haha.

JETPACK!!
06-30-2008, 03:45 AM
Hey funk you should figure your shit out and realise the people I can get to beat you up that arent writers...Plus what kind of a thing to wright is "find me bitches" lol good one, i already know your full name school age, how big you are...(pinner crack head) and your adress, found you:) and i can bet you anything you couldnt piece as good as me today!!
let alone the fact im have you age, and people in bca and dht ranges further and has more people then adk has ever..and what the fuck is the doose shit, you guys suck honestly why do you cross us out lol s hurtin dude
Almost Done Killing

that funk piece burns that what ass hoke piece thats over it. shut up. i fucking hate kids like you.

irek, you drop the N from your name? not feelin the hook back on the kick by your loop. the spines are to thick too. keep paintin though, only way to get better:)

i fuckin love the K in your bomb though.

fonone
06-30-2008, 03:50 AM
yeah, im starting to use irek more. but yeah the spines are meant to have like things flicking back at the top, it just looks like theyre too fat, its meant to be something like this -| but with the - at the top you know? hard to explain haha. anyway thats what it was meant to be. the sketch was a helluva lot better than that, but yeah hopefully my next piece will be better. cheers for the crits :)

garbage down tha way
06-30-2008, 06:29 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/today034.jpg


dis b mah nu leterrs.

MEH2
06-30-2008, 06:33 AM
dang i really like ur accents ^

seywhat
06-30-2008, 06:34 AM
lookin good man, that e is fire

garbage down tha way
06-30-2008, 06:42 AM
thanks fellaz. yeah i hate my R though. as soon as i finished i went home and sketched til i had a better R.

FunkyEr
06-30-2008, 07:10 AM
unsuccsessful you make me laugh..
stop looking too much into my personal life, and work on the art..

FunkyEr
06-30-2008, 07:22 AM
* those meh's are ill.

MEH2
06-30-2008, 07:23 AM
* those meh's are ill.

thanks dude.

garbage down tha way
06-30-2008, 08:34 AM
meh, not hating or anything, but isn't it awkward telling people what you write? like how do you pronounce that?

smooth_nuts
06-30-2008, 08:37 AM
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z191/poppy_097/Picture770.jpg
some pratice wall bullshit,i dont think it came out to bad for dollar cans....i have to admit though i bit the swirl fill with no outline thing off kaber haha but theys my letters so i dont think that really matters....
edit*
hoer thats freshtastic im loving the little sparklethings i've never been able to get those right :-/

JETPACK!!
06-30-2008, 10:31 AM
hoer, nice color choices. i lurve your E fellow. your shit is gettin mad good b.
doap, you shoulda put holes in that shit. and a shadow or 3D. outlines are clean though. good shit

did these two earlier. the top one is mostly left handed painted, hence why its sloppy like hooker vag.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8724/rasek15cb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I GOT CLOUT
06-30-2008, 10:43 AM
iREK - I just think you should use a Capital R for your bomb. I think it would fit better for that style.

HOER - For some reason every piece I see of yours...the paint looks dull. Like mad overspray...maybe im seeing something different than whats actually happening. Either way, you know I love your letters.

RASEK - The fill on the bottom one is illlll son. Although, I think you could fix the top diagonal bar of the K to look a lil better. But im a nitpicky sonofabitch. oh, and for 10 minutes fool? Niceee.

H3TT1NG3R
06-30-2008, 10:44 AM
^on ur s, id just make to bump thin on top go all the way to teh edge, not jkust pop out randomly. i think it might look better

JETPACK!!
06-30-2008, 10:46 AM
hoer, nice color choices. i lurve your E fellow. your shit is gettin mad good b.
doap, you shoulda put holes in that shit. and a shadow or 3D. outlines are clean though. good shit

did these two earlier. the top one is mostly left handed painted, hence why its sloppy like hooker vag.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8724/rasek15cb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump, thanks for the crits folks

noxi
06-30-2008, 10:46 AM
Wow, that pink one is dope.

smooth_nuts
06-30-2008, 11:52 AM
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z191/poppy_097/Picture770.jpg
some pratice wall bullshit,i dont think it came out to bad for dollar cans....i have to admit though i bit the swirl fill with no outline thing off kaber haha but theys my letters so i dont think that really matters....
edit*
hoer thats freshtastic im loving the little sparklethings i've never been able to get those right :-/

bottom page bumper cars.....jetpack im not feelign the k make it more like the crome one...

emel
06-30-2008, 11:55 AM
yeah i think it would look much better because i see what your trying to do with the 3d but that fill style is hard to do when you have curved round letters like yours

HRbN
06-30-2008, 12:36 PM
rasek- that bottom fill is dope. Very nice fade bro

maso1
06-30-2008, 03:57 PM
Simp i did on a seedy old shipping container, because it was so old it started chipping and bits of the fill fell off haha and also the forcefield is faded but oh wellhttp://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/I.jpg

JETPACK!!
06-30-2008, 04:01 PM
find a shitty wall, grab a can of paint. and paint 150 straight lines. it'll help a lot with the bars. shoulda spent another 10 seconds on it and covered the chipped areas. your keyline looks like you didnt shake the can long enough.

griz
06-30-2008, 04:31 PM
http://rallytherobots.com/grizthrow.png

it's a bit sloppy but you get the idea.

JETPACK!!
06-30-2008, 04:47 PM
if its not painted. it shouldnt be in this thread. toy blackbooks. you too kwestion

griz
06-30-2008, 04:51 PM
ah true, my bad.

DEAR
07-01-2008, 02:38 AM
Jetpack... time to get LOOSE! youve got those simple things down pat just get high on drugs and paint somthnig crazy

unreal180
07-01-2008, 02:49 AM
griz that flick made me sad
rasek im loving your fill

Leadpoisining
07-01-2008, 07:28 AM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/P1000119-1.jpg

seywhat
07-01-2008, 07:46 AM
no offense, but i would say keep sketchin for a little while, or paint on some boards. keep it outta the streets for a bit man. it looks like u got pretty decent can control, but u need to work on ur peices. it looks like it reads rellz.

Leadpoisining
07-01-2008, 07:57 AM
yea thta was beggingin of this year..only recent pic i have of my shit

SPRAY yoface407
07-01-2008, 10:56 AM
krum

(SoS)Viruz
07-01-2008, 11:32 AM
Spary- The Middle is dope,
Rasek- Not Feelin the Top one but the Pink Fill is Dope on the Bottom. How long did this take you like 20 min 10 for each one. Lol. But still Nice.
Lead- Not feelin the R