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CT08
07-01-2008, 01:12 PM
Krum... Diggin that middle one alot

unsuccsessfull
07-01-2008, 01:48 PM
messy and what not but mosquitoes were eating me alive

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/P1010007.jpg

Dying to live
07-01-2008, 01:52 PM
^^ the "s" is pretty dope

JETPACK!!
07-01-2008, 02:07 PM
do simples. and post in the blackbook section. this is for paint.

6head slug
07-02-2008, 04:14 AM
meko, im digging the last one. the colours seem to throw the first off a little.
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/764/dsc00463pd6.jpg
super toy i know. second or third painted piece. fuck the new formula of ironlak is shittt
crits?

unreal180
07-02-2008, 08:41 AM
krum use photobuckt and get a bigger pic
it looks aight from ere tho

6 head them colors is dope tes i love that name XD

lolumad?
07-02-2008, 09:31 AM
i dont think ironlak has anything to do with the outcome of that.

garbage down tha way
07-02-2008, 09:40 AM
lolz, i secund u.

for real though, if youre gonna use expensive ass paint and you know youre toy, just do straightletters. nobody will ever guess your toy if you can actually pull them off.

emel
07-02-2008, 12:21 PM
buy dollar paint

do simples

problem solved
you will get better with can control

unreal180
07-02-2008, 03:44 PM
emel thats true innit
i spent about 3 months useing racked halfords cans....there shit and it makes you so much better when you come 2 use montana molotov and so on

esnet1r
07-02-2008, 05:11 PM
dusty ms paint fills what
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/7266/tenserfiend2pv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/7266/tenserfiend2pv3.c1873882b9.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=353&i=tenserfiend2pv3.jpg)

dark2
07-02-2008, 08:48 PM
2628

Shiva.
07-02-2008, 08:51 PM
give crits to get crits.
and i you don't whant to get crits, why are you posting here?
and if it is for an exchange, do it in the exchange thread.

smooth_nuts
07-02-2008, 08:51 PM
dont write dark...theres already a well know freght writer that goes by dark
http://graffiti.org/dark/index.html
him on art crimes...

dark2
07-03-2008, 01:44 AM
i know need 2 give crits 2 get crits was just in a rush 2 get off the comp will next time

garbage down tha way
07-03-2008, 01:49 AM
tenser even tho it isnt painted, that shit is dope son, keep it up with that funk.

blastblast
07-03-2008, 01:52 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g96/kegpistol/graff/IMG00004.jpg
first tag toy status haha

blastblast
07-03-2008, 01:53 AM
meko, im digging the last one. the colours seem to throw the first off a little.
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/764/dsc00463pd6.jpg
super toy i know. second or third painted piece. fuck the new formula of ironlak is shittt
crits?

god damn shits tight

Bombers Ambition
07-03-2008, 04:06 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/034.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/035.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/019.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/im058.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/022.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/018.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/016.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/023.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/024.jpg

yellow12
07-03-2008, 08:29 AM
What do you think? Please click on the link as I can't link photos any other way. Cheers. clicky here (http://www.flickr.com/photos/25712043@N06/2634032454/in/photostream/)

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 12:15 PM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/12bb00f6.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
07-03-2008, 02:11 PM
SORE - Nice ups man. Lookin good.
AHER - Props on the first painted piece i've seen from you. It's fuckin clean.

Mass Appeal
07-03-2008, 03:09 PM
people....believe it or not i DO paint...i simply dont have the funds for a CAMERA...im going to make the most of the time ill be having with this beast of a camera...and trying to get as many flicks as possible of peices.

Peace

JETPACK!!
07-03-2008, 07:09 PM
ran outta purple for the keyline. took me 15 minutes. right beside the guy that inspired me from the start. noticed this morning i went in his hollow with my handy:(

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8208/rooftopwf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

(SoS)Viruz
07-03-2008, 08:07 PM
Bombers- Nice Shit on that one Throwie you should have filled in but bro that stuff is dope. The 7th one could have been better.

Aher-Nice Colors looks just like the one on paper.

Slug- Nice Colors, and fill in.

Blast-Not feelin that S, or that T. Try to keep it the same size.

Rasek-DUde once a again. 15min. Dude In 15min. I still be on what the 3rd letter lol. but not feelin "K" that much tho.

HRbN
07-03-2008, 10:02 PM
Rasek thats a dope spot!

Heres one from alittle while back. Not really lookin for crits just throwin it out there both of them are about 18 ft wide and 3 to 4 feet high
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/6784/bluesqz0.jpg
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1921/doublemg3.jpg

iVIBE
07-03-2008, 10:59 PM
Rasek: That is great for 15 minutes i hope to be like that one day, and i love how your A and E are smaller then the R, S, and K. very stylish in my opinion even if you didnt mean for them to be smaller or what ever. :]

Phazer: I am def feelin the blue one, i just dont like your camera angles lol

emel
07-03-2008, 11:43 PM
ran outta purple for the keyline. took me 15 minutes. right beside the guy that inspired me from the start. noticed this morning i went in his hollow with my handy:(

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8208/rooftopwf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yo man its nice to hit up them simples but just letting you know


going next to a writer who is mad up or is just plain dope and better than you


its called SIDEBUSTING and some people get pissed off at it, he might even get pissed but it all depends on your city's graff scene... just lettin ya know

jersOneTIC
07-03-2008, 11:46 PM
dope shit rasek...
http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/527/dackerstu6.jpg
from today.:)

JETPACK!!
07-03-2008, 11:51 PM
re-read your post. yeah, it was just that one rooftop i wanted to get cuz of the spot. been scoutin it for a while an the time was right. i felt it was better than going over his shit. its not like im gonna pass up an ill spot just to avoid the first time ive sidebusted.. thanks for your concern though b.

jers, i love your shit, the only thing i dont really like is how the loop of your R dosent really connect to the spine, try sketching it without the line to seperate it.

phazer, your ZER dosent really match with your PHA imo, i dont like the curve back in between the legs of the R. keep workin at it

Thrice
07-03-2008, 11:56 PM
Better hope it wasn't a crew member of his.

smooth_nuts
07-04-2008, 12:01 AM
sidebusting is when your shit runs into the dude next to you,your thinking of spot jocking.....

jers-thats fresh there are some spot where you should of cut back though...but im feeling it

unsuccsessfull
07-04-2008, 12:35 AM
^lawl

ColdBlooded
07-04-2008, 12:39 AM
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/P1010008.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/Impinner.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/burner2.jpg

AND A WACK ROLLER...

http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/greenmint.jpg

MarOne...
07-04-2008, 12:39 AM
LMAO shut the fuck up, kid.

JETPACK!!
07-04-2008, 12:41 AM
thats the worlds most generic S... basically your saying im biting the alphabet. the R isnt anything fancy either.

your first post an your callin me out? hah. :rolleyes:

P.S. you should sketch a lot more, your letters are pretty weak. dont be callin me out when your shit looks like that. your bars arn't consistant. your M's are hella wack an wavy. ive seen less fucked up shit on acid..

Mr yarbles
07-04-2008, 12:49 AM
Nice "R" Rasek...Looks pretty familiar, but thats just me?
the S is pretty bit to!!!
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/07030813551.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/rasek15cb41.jpg

Rezist why would bite rasek's r and s and then post it !?
D:

Rasek would destroy you kid
Go away.

unsuccsessfull
07-04-2008, 12:49 AM
Rasek thats a dope spot!

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1921/doublemg3.jpg

the colors on the right one are way dope

Mr yarbles
07-04-2008, 01:01 AM
It also sucks dick

unsuccsessfull
07-04-2008, 01:02 AM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8208/rooftopwf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what does the hallow say? nesk?

JETPACK!!
07-04-2008, 01:04 AM
hahahha, im not even gonna get into this.. your shit's "original" cuz its fucking wack an no one else would want to disgrace their name with that wack bullshit. learn some letter structure.

your X is fucking ugly. your M looks like its having a siezure. your A looks like my work's logo... hahaha get off my tip. worry about yourself kid

yeah, it says nesk.


http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8208/rooftopwf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ColdBlooded
07-04-2008, 01:05 AM
haha, is it really worth threatening if thats what you plan? have fun with that

JETPACK!!
07-04-2008, 02:43 AM
some shouts on tonights piece. gonna get day flicks tomorrow.

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8793/callout1qa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

garbage down tha way
07-04-2008, 03:03 AM
im crying right now rasek!


other than that, nice hit with the purple piece.

HRbN
07-04-2008, 04:20 AM
I dont think the first and last half of the blur one match either i kinda fucked it up. And i didnt take the pics so the camera angle i cant help lol. I am suprized they got them both in the same pic though. thats a very long strech

FunkyEr
07-04-2008, 04:59 AM
that exam is sick..

Dying to live
07-04-2008, 05:47 AM
http://a757.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/42/l_6a5c072becc4c56ea1b67dd3b28e00d4.gif

quick bomb

Mass Appeal
07-04-2008, 08:16 AM
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/12bb00f6.jpg

Bump for crits
Akel..dope dude..always fresh clean styles from you
Rasek can fuck off i hate you Rasek...you better get cho asss on MSN you got some explaining to do !! :( ;) :D
HERBN..nice LA river peice ahah..nah man but seriously you need em...use bars , draw simples , save paint.

JETPACK!!
07-04-2008, 10:32 AM
i guess ill go back and post some more names on the shout. i was just trying to think of names to put hah

i guess i lied:(, hoer, you get two shouts when i go out tonight. it'll be downtown too;)

this ones for the aher, cais, rasek battle. haha yes, im prolly gonna lose
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9505/rasek16uz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mass Appeal
07-04-2008, 11:54 AM
Poll it as soon as possible.

hammer_time
07-04-2008, 12:02 PM
rasek could get on all fours and give me head..haha and atleast my shits original, biter!!

id be kinda interested to know what word youve come up with, that one of the thousands of people who spend their lives looking for the perfect word, were unable to....
and everyone who writes graff is a biter of some sort...

I GOT CLOUT
07-04-2008, 12:36 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8793/callout1qa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)[/QUOTE]

I think thats my first shout. <3
And nice ups on the roof.

Coldblooded - Just do you homie. And fix that X.

Akels - I lurve itttt. Always fresh shit.

MUSEone
07-04-2008, 01:10 PM
http://a757.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/42/l_6a5c072becc4c56ea1b67dd3b28e00d4.gif

quick bomb

Lovin this style right here mane.

Good shit everyone. keep it up.

Leadpoisining
07-04-2008, 01:12 PM
Rezist why would bite rasek's r and s and then post it !?
D:

Rasek would destroy you kid
Go away.

rasek wuld not destroy rezist rezist is dope as hell here in DC u aint seen his shit *****

Leadpoisining
07-04-2008, 01:26 PM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/DSC02655.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/04172007185238MC685315192gal.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/0515071631-00.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/P1010210.jpg
THATS REZIST and yea that is the most basic R so stfu and dont talk shit bout rezist u dont even know the boy... DC writer all day killing it

MUSEone
07-04-2008, 01:27 PM
Just stop talking, honestly.

No one but yourself gives a shit so ur proving nothing.

ColdBlooded
07-04-2008, 03:19 PM
No roller thread??
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/P1010054.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/HOCAroller.jpg

letsgobombin
07-04-2008, 03:27 PM
yup their is in pic section

ColdBlooded
07-04-2008, 03:31 PM
Sorry about that:(

WoeInfinite
07-04-2008, 04:25 PM
rasek..i want a shoutout tooooooo:(

Dying to live
07-04-2008, 06:34 PM
mate of mines piece
http://a732.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/64/l_0d14ecfa3ba2c6c610595ee6f2540113.gif
mine
http://a173.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_9de26a8204540a2d134bd18e567f3204.gif

La Coka Nostra
07-04-2008, 06:39 PM
double force field is nice.

Dying to live
07-04-2008, 06:46 PM
yer ill get a better pic later that ones a bit bright ^_^

JETPACK!!
07-04-2008, 09:40 PM
you got an ill steeze akel. im really feelin that one

Spraycan Stories
07-04-2008, 09:40 PM
Really feeling that akel

acereborn
07-04-2008, 09:49 PM
mine
http://a173.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_9de26a8204540a2d134bd18e567f3204.gif

bottom bar of the L is fucked, but its a good piece

maso1
07-05-2008, 04:09 AM
Yeah Akel color choice looks dope

unknown...
07-05-2008, 10:54 AM
some recent legal shit and a random bomb in there. Baka is the homeboy from the east coast.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn37/superlativestreetwear/P1060469.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn37/superlativestreetwear/P1060480.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn37/superlativestreetwear/P1060467.jpg

FLIP FLOP
07-05-2008, 12:19 PM
those are good but the 3D is a little sloppy.

BobSagetOner
07-05-2008, 04:13 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3191/2640212236_07b21067e2.jpg

ColdBlooded
07-05-2008, 05:13 PM
Weird "haunted" house and roof-top with order
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/Exam.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/Rooftop.jpg

It was a good night, lastnight

unknown...
07-06-2008, 07:30 AM
akels, liking both your piece and that bink piece.

Exam-With that piece that you did on that abandoned house, IMO you should try running large 3d to make up for the letters being spaced out so much. Run the 3d down or to the bottom center of the piece. Nice bomb man.

Ayte-Clean as fuck. Looks real nice man. the colors you chose arent my cup of tea but nice nonetheless

00-made-00
07-06-2008, 06:43 PM
ayte- i like that piece man its fresh
Nem- the M looks a bit like a M i think make the left leg of it a bit bigger.
some shit
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr-2.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimraction1.jpg
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimaaction2.jpg

lolumad?
07-06-2008, 07:06 PM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/DSC02655.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/04172007185238MC685315192gal.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/0515071631-00.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/P1010210.jpg
THATS REZIST and yea that is the most basic R so stfu and dont talk shit bout rezist u dont even know the boy... DC writer all day killing it
it's prob not the same one..

letsgobombin
07-07-2008, 11:30 AM
alien- simple, it looks like your using bars, not great bars but still bars, dont curve your letters yet, dont paint yet and dont put penises on the ends of your letters
aimr- take the extension off the bottom of the m and make the right leg of the r come out of the spine like this (R). the letters seem ok but they seem very rigid, dont be afraid to let them spread out
exam- your throwie isnt that good and its hard to make out unless you now what it says and you should work on your letters or do simples before you paint again
nem/sem- your m looks good on the first one but the first letter is hard to make out and their are too many extensions, strip it down. the baka is nice though, i would say to take of all the arrows though or at least the one on the k
akels- nice, i think you need to make the bottom of the l longer though and i think on bink's it should start thinner at the spine, it seems to thick, otherwise some nice stuff

seywhat
07-07-2008, 01:15 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/PHTO0027.jpg
pretty wack, just tryin to work on can control. first painted peice in a long time, i need to paint alot more

alien- def drop the dicks man, sketch some more before you paint
aimr- nice and clean, solid letters
exam- not feelin the throw at all, the peice aint too bad. id say sketch some more to get your letters down though
ayte- dope
nem- pretty fresh, just not feelin the extensions so much
akels- illin

Thebigchalupa88
07-07-2008, 05:15 PM
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y220/seta0ne814/DSCI0050.jpg
feelin that SEY for sure but 3D needs to be cleaned up a lil

AdamC
07-07-2008, 05:37 PM
If you want to check out a dope new archive. La Famiglia Magazine just launched a new site. Everyone should check it out!

http://www.lafamigliazine.com

rsakens
07-08-2008, 03:38 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00365.jpg?t=1215542830
a freestyle pieces
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00368.jpg?t=1215542862

Fluffy Bunnies
07-08-2008, 04:26 PM
had to crawl under a fence on a busy highway... it was scarry so i just said "fuck it" and did it
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/kilso-1.jpg

AllYourWallsAreBelongToMe
07-08-2008, 04:47 PM
had to crawl under a fence on a busy highway... it was scarry so i just said "fuck it" and did it
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/kilso-1.jpg
I like but work on the K and that little end of the S.

Flash_One
07-09-2008, 05:19 AM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4941/peacexh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4941/peacexh6.f6c8f577e1.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=88&i=peacexh6.jpg)
advice?

00-made-00
07-09-2008, 06:54 AM
Try the blackbook thread.

rsakens
07-09-2008, 12:49 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00365.jpg?t=1215542830
a freestyle pieces
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00368.jpg?t=1215542862

bump any crits ?

and a new one
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC003799999.jpg?t=1215622194

Bombers Ambition
07-09-2008, 04:40 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sore/im059.jpg

BobSagetOner
07-09-2008, 05:42 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3168/2647636623_b5f82ee062.jpg

dope sore

Flash_One
07-09-2008, 06:02 PM
Try the blackbook thread.
oh fuck sorry man!

DEAR
07-09-2008, 07:00 PM
keane make all your letters the same width like the second one is real wack cuz of that A and the K sucks, the last one has a sexy fill tho, just keep at it!
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/4919/dscf0741vy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Shiva.
07-09-2008, 09:03 PM
it would look good without the arrow.

I GOT CLOUT
07-09-2008, 09:20 PM
KILS - The K needs to be more pronounced in my opinion. But overall a good throw.
KEANE - Nice to see you painting. Nice control too. Good shit homie.
SORE, AYTE - Tight
DEAR - I would say try an uppercase E next time.

BadlilDuck
07-09-2008, 09:59 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC003799999.jpg?t=1215622194
the n looks out of place but good shit aye

HRbN
07-09-2008, 11:01 PM
yeah keane i would bring the top bar on the N up just a lil, other than that i dunno. I Dig your steez cat

Shiva.
07-10-2008, 10:54 AM
keane, i love your fills man

Melting Young Minds
07-10-2008, 04:11 PM
my first 2 painted peices.

this one i made drip purposly.
http://www.uploadgeek.com/uploads456/0/new shit 006.JPG (http://www.uploadgeek.com)

this one i like, but i fucked up hard on the highlights, and had to bounce before i could finish.
http://www.uploadgeek.com/uploads456/2/new shit 005.JPG (http://www.uploadgeek.com)

Bets369R
07-10-2008, 04:41 PM
keane dope shit but your handstyle is terrrrrrrrrrrrrible lol

I GOT CLOUT
07-10-2008, 04:48 PM
MELT - I kinda dont believe those are your two very first attempts at painting, but if it is, you're goin in the right direction man. Keep it up.

And Keane, bets is right, your handies just look so forced. That shit should just flow out of your hand with little to no thought.

JETPACK!!
07-10-2008, 05:04 PM
some shit from last night/dawn. 1am till sunrise:)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/6707/rasek20st0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9601/rasek19wp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^^^ had to give a brick wall a reach around hah.
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7715/rasek18ou8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2408/rasek17ie4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

couple handies
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1673/rasekhandyle8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9791/rasekhandy1dj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I GOT CLOUT
07-10-2008, 05:11 PM
RASEK - That black and white one, and the roofer are fucking illin homie. Nice ups.

MUSEone
07-10-2008, 06:04 PM
Yea bro, that black and white one is probably your best so far imo. maybe just make the leg a lil fatter, shits gettin clean man. keep it up.

GaZm13
07-10-2008, 06:27 PM
RASEK be killing it lately. You've come a long way bro. Rocking the simples with pretty decent fills. Keep it up yo.

Melting Young Minds
07-10-2008, 08:56 PM
nah yo theyre my first illegal painted peices. ive only done like 3 other painted peices but they were on boards.

rsakens
07-11-2008, 08:14 AM
shit i am loving this simple clean as fuck and the letters are all dope :D
same goes for the withe / black bomb
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7715/rasek18ou8.jpg

that was allot of good and usefully crit for me on the past page thanks guys


keane dope shit but your handstyle is terrrrrrrrrrrrrible lol

=/ i know was never good at them
what you think about this one changed my rsa a bit around
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00390.jpg?t=1215708236

dit this sketch when i was drunk liked the idea so i painted it next morning should have redone the k & first e =/
but i like the outcome of the rest from the ane
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00393.jpg?t=1215708152
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00391.jpg?t=1215708167

FLSteele16
07-11-2008, 09:52 AM
rsakens im not really feeling the handstyle i like the s but not the r and a. the keane is dope i really like the fill.

rsakens
07-11-2008, 10:08 AM
nice thankx for the critik man i work on my handies some more

NEFone
07-11-2008, 10:15 AM
yea werd rasek work on ur handstyle a little. but a big mistake a lot of ppl do is try to make it super complicating..i LOVE that straight letter u got stick to it and try to make a nice simple handstyle to go with it
stay up

JETPACK!!
07-11-2008, 11:28 AM
some shit from last night/dawn. 1am till sunrise:)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/6707/rasek20st0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9601/rasek19wp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^^^ had to give a brick wall a reach around hah.
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7715/rasek18ou8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2408/rasek17ie4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

couple handies
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1673/rasekhandyle8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9791/rasekhandy1dj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump.

keane, that fill is tight. the colors are nice. ive never really liked the flow of your letters, but it grows on you. keep it up

garbage down tha way
07-11-2008, 12:58 PM
DAMN rasek that roof spot is ill. you get up way more than me haha.

id just sat work on tha handsteezy. if anything just dont make it so tall, and make the letters closer together.

DEAR
07-11-2008, 05:17 PM
ya rasek that roof top is key. but you dont have to post them in both toy and other one just one is fine.

JETPACK!!
07-11-2008, 06:03 PM
this one is for potential critiques. i posted in the other cuz im breakin outta my shell an gettin more comfortable with my work. soon enough i wont be posting in here anymore:(

seywhat
07-11-2008, 08:01 PM
your shits gettin good for sure jetpack, but i think you should keep postin in here for a while cuz imo the big boy thread is for cats that have been writin for years and have there shit down completely, not sayin your shit aint good just sayin postin in here is the best way to advance because of crits and whatnot lol. your gettin simps down for sure though, props on progressing so quick

Airsol
07-12-2008, 12:17 AM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn72/airsol/air.jpg
just a simple air with my new prismacolor markers

HRbN
07-12-2008, 03:48 AM
except this is the bombs and peices thread.... hit the black book with it

Lemz24
07-12-2008, 05:20 AM
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa122/HannebauerNHK/08-07-08_0052.jpg

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa122/HannebauerNHK/11-07-08_0121.jpg

What do you guys think of my one liner and handstyle?

Animal
07-12-2008, 05:29 AM
Damn, rasek. you've hit everywhere with that shits. its illin tho.

letsgobombin
07-12-2008, 05:30 AM
big letters dont make people crit you anyway, give crits to get crits and post in toy throwies for the one-liner and toy tags for your tag
keane- if you would've mafe you first e like you last and did something with your k that would be nice, love your fills as well. you should've made the k like the spine of the a or n
rasek- nice but the bottom of the s on the last one looks weird to me, you need to work on your tag a bit aswell, your simps are a lot better than your tag but keep working with that tall style

Lemz24
07-12-2008, 05:32 AM
Alright I will.

rsakens
07-12-2008, 06:40 AM
big letters dont make people crit you anyway, give crits to get crits and post in toy throwies for the one-liner and toy tags for your tag
keane- if you would've mafe you first e like you last and did something with your k that would be nice, love your fills as well. you should've made the k like the spine of the a or n
rasek- nice but the bottom of the s on the last one looks weird to me, you need to work on your tag a bit aswell, your simps are a lot better than your tag but keep working with that tall style

nice finally some good crit
thankx for that i was planing do redo
the sketch and drop a similar piece
i will keep you tip in mind for that

maso1
07-12-2008, 07:06 PM
Throw from yesterday
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Throw32.jpg

RUP'E
07-12-2008, 10:02 PM
http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u220/chrislogemann/NEST.jpg
rasek your simple is dope.
maso is cock.
crits for me?

blunttokes
07-12-2008, 10:51 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2843/1004077mp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
drunk slop but w.e its fucking huge in a nice spot!

MrDobalina
07-12-2008, 11:09 PM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4246/14om5.jpg

"Louis XIV"
07-12-2008, 11:58 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3085/2662355969_9bbe3d888d_m.jpg

quick throwy with stock caps

Diggin the fill peak^

mekosbc
07-13-2008, 12:00 AM
quick on da run throwie... missed the 3d on the top fuck...
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0614.jpg

i fucked it up my hand was being mad shacky that day....oh well itz an up
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0620.jpg

billboard bombin with lime
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0617.jpg

garbage down tha way
07-13-2008, 12:07 AM
ayo meko (lime too) them throws dont look too bad (limes could use work) but the shoutouts on the left billboard are hideous. when you just scribble across the billboard like that it makes it look tacky and people get frustrated by it quicker. just do your shoutouts neatly so peeps can read em and if possible keep em out of the actual advertisements. see on the bottom left of that left billboard you got a nice open white space you coulda done a neat roll call going down ya feel me?

keep it up tho, nice spot.

MrDobalina
07-13-2008, 12:08 AM
dope keep workin on ur letters meko and keep bombin shit thats hwat i like to see..

and its pear not peak

"Louis XIV"
07-13-2008, 12:17 AM
oh my bad dude, i thought it was an r but i didnt think of pear

mekosbc
07-13-2008, 12:18 AM
ight i got you.. when i was puttin the shout outz it was mad quick cuz a cop rolled down the hill and i seen it so i just throw them up mad quick... it was a quick bomb so itz all good... ill post an other one up with yallz advice...

Dying to live
07-13-2008, 12:50 AM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4246/14om5.jpg
CRISP man looking great

JETPACK!!
07-13-2008, 01:03 AM
freshh.. the highlights on the shadow could look better. but very nice

blunttokes
07-13-2008, 01:33 AM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2843/1004077mp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
drunk slop but w.e its fucking huge in a nice spot!


bump for crits...? even though its slopped

shi
07-13-2008, 02:41 AM
just on canvas in my BYard

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/new2castle/WhateverLife%20Portfolio/img_3684.jpg
4
NY-esk style

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/new2castle/WhateverLife%20Portfolio/img_3695.jpg
1
Bais inspired style
which style's better?

MedTwo
07-13-2008, 07:29 AM
The first one.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/5085/picture7rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
New ironlaks reacted badly with beltons, so I couldn't clean up the piece, because when I tried the whole thing bled everywhere, so I had to redo it. I'm really upset with the outcome, haha.
I'll paint another tomorrow..

Dying to live
07-13-2008, 08:17 AM
yep the new stuff is rhodium its gonna bleed though

Dying to live
07-13-2008, 08:18 AM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2843/1004077mp4.jpgbump for crits...? even though its slopped
should have just done a hollow would have looked cleaner

MedTwo
07-13-2008, 09:57 AM
Yeah it bled through so badly, and the white was vicious colours, so not the best anyway, but it fucked the caps so i had to use a reg cap, which came out fat..
I gave up. Ah well, another paint tomorrow

JETPACK!!
07-13-2008, 11:29 AM
role, take your time with the fill. itll take a couple minutes longer but whatever, you'll get quicker painting as you paint more. keep workin on your straight lines too. but it looks like a good 7 1/2 footer?

Ekes
07-13-2008, 12:07 PM
pear , everything about that piece is ill . stay up
shi , the second one.

shi
07-13-2008, 04:25 PM
just on canvas in my BYard

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/new2castle/WhateverLife%20Portfolio/img_3684.jpg


http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/new2castle/WhateverLife%20Portfolio/img_3695.jpg

which style's better?
opinions?

now it's a 1 on 1 tie

shi
07-13-2008, 04:27 PM
The first one.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/5085/picture7rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
New ironlaks reacted badly with beltons, so I couldn't clean up the piece, because when I tried the whole thing bled everywhere, so I had to redo it. I'm really upset with the outcome, haha.
I'll paint another tomorrow..

it's lookin execelent man.
better than anything i can do right now.
could you still buy the old ironlaks?

FLSteele16
07-13-2008, 07:29 PM
Shi the first one

HRbN
07-13-2008, 08:10 PM
Shi the first one

+1

eMJayBee
07-13-2008, 08:56 PM
huh??
anyway here is somthing I did, it was funny though I was painting and all of a sudden a little rabbit comes down the tunnel past me haha I thought it was a little cat...
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Leekas068.jpg

MedTwo
07-13-2008, 08:56 PM
it's lookin execelent man.
better than anything i can do right now.
could you still buy the old ironlaks?

Nah old ironlaks aren't being sold now. I just have to wait till they get the colours I need back in. I'm gunna rock a yellow/orange fill today, brown background again, but some changed letters.

HRbN
07-13-2008, 09:08 PM
emjaybee that shit is clean, nice work!

seywhat
07-13-2008, 09:09 PM
emjaybee- nice and clean, looks like a chill ass spot too

shi
07-13-2008, 09:10 PM
just on canvas in my BYard

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/new2castle/WhateverLife%20Portfolio/img_3684.jpg
4
NY-esk style

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff190/new2castle/WhateverLife%20Portfolio/img_3695.jpg
1
Bais inspired style
which style's better?


i always hit edit when i mean to hit quote

GaZm13
07-13-2008, 09:21 PM
eMJayBee that is looking dope man. Nice work bro. That's nice and clean.

eMJayBee
07-13-2008, 09:28 PM
used to be chill :( but now there are a lot of ppl walking around there. before I got to painting I saw two juggalos haha (dont know if thats how its spelled) walking around carrying pieces of metal trying to be thugssss hahaha and an old man walked up on me when I was leaving

shi
07-14-2008, 12:00 AM
huh??
anyway here is somthing I did, it was funny though I was painting and all of a sudden a little rabbit comes down the tunnel past me haha I thought it was a little cat...
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Leekas068.jpg

it looks fresh man
and i like the bird Char

MedTwo
07-14-2008, 02:44 AM
Todays scraps, fuckkkk..
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7905/p1010591zk3.jpg
Wow, I really did fuck that T..

iVIBE
07-14-2008, 03:22 AM
mjb- sick piece, you have good can control

Tonberry
07-14-2008, 09:55 AM
Med, that looks alright, but I'm not sure if the first letter is an R or a B,but otherwise good. The only negative thing I have to say is watch the drips on the forcefield.

MedTwo
07-14-2008, 10:10 AM
Yeah it's an R, bit wonky.
And the aura, I was using a skinny cap but it was flooding and coming out like a fat cap =[

rsakens
07-14-2008, 11:02 AM
some parts are a bit dirty thought was my first negative color theme and first time that i choose a second color for the 3d + the fill was to complicated for me =/ i would say i try too much at once :)
will post better pics tomorrow when there is more light
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3626.jpg?t=1215985686
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3633.jpg?t=1215985569

AllYourWallsAreBelongToMe
07-14-2008, 12:18 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3085/2662355969_9bbe3d888d_m.jpg

quick throwy with stock caps

Diggin the fill peak^

I like the style you're going for but the letters look a little awkward.

MarOne...
07-14-2008, 12:21 PM
Todays scraps, fuckkkk..
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7905/p1010591zk3.jpg
Wow, I really did fuck that T..

Change your name.

enT75
07-14-2008, 01:56 PM
see a few familiar faces here....here is few things I have done as of recently...I used to paint a few years ago on the east coast now I am on the west and getting back into it...

E"
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/E_2.jpg
Ent75"
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/051008171509-1.jpg
MROD/ATACK (Done with friend)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/052408131045.jpg
MROD/ATAK (Done with friend)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/052408155527.jpg

enT75
07-14-2008, 02:01 PM
cont...

MROD(Singles)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/052408155436.jpg

ATAK(Singles)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/052408161810.jpg

Ent"
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/CIMG0052.jpg

Ent"
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/eNT-1-1.jpg

enT75
07-14-2008, 02:09 PM
cont...

Ent"
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/0630081756-1.jpg

Ent"
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/Picture001-1.jpg

Full Wall 4th of july shit.......same one as above...Havik & Ent(R)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j144/MichaeLMyerS_photos/Picture006-1.jpg

to be continued.... Peace

knightsafe
07-14-2008, 03:46 PM
sketch crits welcome
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs31/i/2008/196/c/b/piece_by_fastnloud.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 04:31 PM
Take it to the blackbook thread..

blunttokes
07-14-2008, 06:14 PM
role, take your time with the fill. itll take a couple minutes longer but whatever, you'll get quicker painting as you paint more. keep workin on your straight lines too. but it looks like a good 7 1/2 footer?


yeah i was drunk as fuck but it was atleast 6 1/2 atleast, i never really paint that big

but heres sumthin i did wit a buddie SOAP he burned the fuck outta me

SOAPDS ROALOE
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4992/1004099ga4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

blunttokes
07-14-2008, 06:23 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3379/1004094jt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
a quick oneliner backwards..

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 06:26 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16161.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16168.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16167.jpg

Eh my O looks way too much like a D...although I dont know if I hate Drah as a name either. I dunno. And I know shits sloppy, just tryin to pick my speed up.

FLSteele16
07-14-2008, 07:37 PM
Clout its looking good i think drah is bettere then orah

MedTwo
07-14-2008, 08:27 PM
Todays scraps, fuckkkk..
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7905/p1010591zk3.jpg
Wow, I really did fuck that T..


The first one.
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/5085/picture7rb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
New ironlaks reacted badly with beltons, so I couldn't clean up the piece, because when I tried the whole thing bled everywhere, so I had to redo it. I'm really upset with the outcome, haha.
I'll paint another tomorrow..

Bump them :(

Tell Rasek to change his name, tell note to change his, tell meko to change his. Half this forum has the words of writers I know here. I live across the other side of the world, and had the name before I'd ever come to these forums.

blunttokes
07-14-2008, 08:35 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16161.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16168.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16167.jpg

Eh my O looks way too much like a D...although I dont know if I hate Drah as a name either. I dunno. And I know shits sloppy, just tryin to pick my speed up.


not bad...

MedTwo
07-14-2008, 08:37 PM
Dead set.. Who the fuck cares if you write the same thing as someone else on the other side of the world.
Nobody will ever know, nobody here is gunna be the next cope2. And nobody Is gunna sit here biting the other person, then post it back here!
I have people to help with with style and shit, fuck. Let him write urah ffs

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 09:12 PM
Blunttokes - I think you need to work some more on those letters. At least the R for sure. And your buddies has too many extentions that throw it off, plus his A and P shouldnt run together like that.

ROTEN - That second one is definately the best of the two. Colors are good, and pretty clean.

MedTwo
07-14-2008, 09:27 PM
Cheers bro, they both would've been clean if my caps didn't fuck up!
Make your D, look more like a D, at the moment I can kinda see an O, but apart from that it's looking good.

hammer_time
07-14-2008, 09:35 PM
Bump them :(

Tell Rasek to change his name, tell note to change his, tell meko to change his. Half this forum has the words of writers I know here. I live across the other side of the world, and had the name before I'd ever come to these forums.

well since you live halfway around the world and those people's work arent going to ever be confused, does it really matter? and i would bet any amount of money, someone else, somewhere else wrote those words before your boy

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 09:38 PM
Well its supposed to be an O but I didnt do the little cut back on the bottom left spine that I initially intended to. So therefore, you get pretty much a D. Didnt really notice till I went to take the flicks.

MedTwo
07-14-2008, 09:41 PM
Ohhh I see =]
I like drah as a name.
Oi hammer_time..
I was saying that as sarcasm, because someone told me to change my name because someone in the states writes it.. And I live in Sydney, Australia..

JETPACK!!
07-14-2008, 10:34 PM
clout, when'd you change your name up b?

I GOT CLOUT
07-14-2008, 11:05 PM
Eh, I had no decent hand or throw steez with Ease. I still like the name...I dunno, I felt I needed to fuck with more letters. Variety. I felt I was getting stale with Ease.

JETPACK!!
07-14-2008, 11:20 PM
fuck with other letters and when you get better try ease again. do some alphabets:)

rsakens
07-15-2008, 05:37 AM
here is a better pic
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3639.jpg?t=1216115369
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3640.jpg?t=1216115393

numberonestunna
07-15-2008, 02:35 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/kropp005-1.jpg

aintnoway
07-15-2008, 03:24 PM
Aces
Slak
Bank

ColdBlooded
07-15-2008, 07:16 PM
Cool names!! "Bank" "Aces" straight ballin yo.

aintnoway
07-15-2008, 10:17 PM
thanks man

-GEKS-
07-15-2008, 10:27 PM
hes kidding, the names are wack, and do simples with bars and stop painting for now, unless its chill spots

ColdBlooded
07-16-2008, 03:09 AM
I wasn't kidding, they are dope..Hit me up I write G-unit....Just kidding, yes they are hurtin names guys, But I could see you guys changin em up and not jumpin the gun with the "pieces"

JETPACK!!
07-16-2008, 11:07 AM
hahahahhaha^^ i write g-unit.

some shit from last night

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/6003/rasek21hw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/5439/rasek22rt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/3015/billboard4hf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
roof hoppin for this nig^^

and the blurry ground picture
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/7150/blurrybillboardul1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cans905
07-16-2008, 11:15 AM
aces- ur letters seem choppy to me... work on ur form and make them all the same size
bank- use straight simples
rasek- fresh as always!... loving the billboard

JETPACK!!
07-16-2008, 11:17 AM
keep workin on your bars man. those arn't bad at all. pretty decent can control. keep it up man, youve got paint skills.. you just need something better to paint:)

aintnoway
07-16-2008, 11:18 AM
what do you guys write?

iVIBE
07-16-2008, 11:21 AM
Rasek- fresh as always, the vertical piece is ill same w/ the billboard

JETPACK!!
07-16-2008, 11:23 AM
school essays and letters. what about you?

WoeInfinite
07-16-2008, 11:24 AM
damn rasek, thats lookin great.
feelin all your stuff man.

cans905
07-16-2008, 12:07 PM
thnx man
i did this one just b4 a dj tiesto concert, so my hand was shaky cuz of all the excitment

by the way, the bomb is straight, but the bridge curves making itlook not straight lol

I GOT CLOUT
07-16-2008, 01:37 PM
RASEK - That orange and white one got me fiendin for some orange sherbert, mmmmmm. nah but for real, you know I love it. Shits getting fuckin on point man. Theres nothing major that I would change with any of them. And in them heat spots damn son.

klic
07-16-2008, 03:07 PM
thnx man
i did this one just b4 a dj tiesto concert, so my hand was shaky cuz of all the excitment

by the way, the bomb is straight, but the bridge curves making itlook not straight lol

rite on my friend just got me into dj tiesto 2 days ago haha

HRbN
07-16-2008, 03:08 PM
Damn rasek you gettin up. Nice work as always that ladder work is ill

GaZm13
07-16-2008, 05:04 PM
RASEK has come a long way in a short time. Mad Props to you man. Keep up the great work and be careful out there. You are hitting up some dope spots.

TaskOne
07-16-2008, 06:12 PM
yee Rasek always a fan of your simples nice spots. some shit from yesterday.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/DSC_0077.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/DSC_0076.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/DSC_0071.jpg
First filled peice didn't turn out as good as i hoped.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/BlazeyBoy/DSC_0066.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-16-2008, 06:15 PM
nice task :) loving the last one

(SoS)Viruz
07-16-2008, 06:29 PM
Rasek- You be every damn where. Where havent you been yet. They look dope tho.

I just ordered some cap and paint and stuff. So I'll be practicing. So far I only been usin the dollar store paint to practice on the piece of wood in my Back yard.

seywhat
07-16-2008, 07:24 PM
rasek you need to start paintin freights if you havent already, thats where its at

Airsol
07-16-2008, 08:17 PM
rasek after all the bombs i've seen that are yours the places change but the graffiti doesn't really... try some new stuff all your peices look the same

unknown...
07-16-2008, 08:52 PM
airsol killed it. haha rasek, go for some progression bro. your simples are nice though

"Riot"
07-17-2008, 12:58 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT013.jpg
OFB one.
crits?

my ***** ash.
been paintin about a month.ish.
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT004.jpg

Spraycan Stories
07-17-2008, 01:46 AM
That ofb is fresh

LiMe..S.B.C
07-17-2008, 01:47 AM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0695.jpg

something i did tonight...

dark2
07-17-2008, 02:16 AM
lime -looking good
rasek - dope looking good as usual lol

a few of my craptastic attempts lol
2757

2758

~~>ANTIK<~~
07-17-2008, 02:58 AM
[QUOTE="Riot";1154356]http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT013.jpg
OFB one.
crits?

lol i spot a penis^^^^

seywhat
07-17-2008, 03:20 AM
there all over lol. anways OFB, since you went so big you should just done a simp
lime- the extension off the top of the l is too long, looks like a z. also make sure you keep the bars, you kind of went off of them if you know what i mean

DH_Freak
07-17-2008, 06:30 AM
hey guys.
i havent been in it for long probably about 3 months now. heres something i did today let us know wat u think, if you got some tips let us know!

DH_Freak
07-17-2008, 06:32 AM
sorry for the double post.

ColdBlooded
07-17-2008, 07:51 AM
Rasek, I like your stuff and all but aren't schools a no no?? I was told to not paint schools or churches and stuff, but nice billboard!!! I think the handstyle needs some work.

cans905
07-17-2008, 09:46 AM
ofb- dont use all those symbols or swirlys i place of a circle, either use an x, line or circle
lime- the extension of ur l makes it look like a z, lose the extension completely and put it somewhere else
dawp- nice... simpple clean fill

o and skools are free game, and since they belong to government, it makes it that much better

crits please!!! ive only painted a few times so i need em

Dying to live
07-17-2008, 10:17 AM
http://a842.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/36/l_14696f07f7b5c794fee825d43e2fa681.gif
sketchy as A,K but ill live.

JETPACK!!
07-17-2008, 11:11 AM
Rasek, I like your stuff and all but aren't schools a no no?? I was told to not paint schools or churches and stuff, but nice billboard!!! I think the handstyle needs some work.

its a driving school. and its on a strip mall, they just had all the store names an shit on the wall so people know whats inside.

akel, just work on the A an K a bit, you already know what to fix

CT08
07-17-2008, 11:23 AM
e and s are fire

Hater-AiD~>
07-17-2008, 11:27 AM
zen you are improving
akel..that shit is clean..i think the l is a little small though
me and my boy...i fudged mine up..first time painting new style so shit gets complicated
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01494.jpg

cans905
07-17-2008, 11:54 AM
joga- im not feeling the point coming out from the a, or any of them at all... just round everything off
dunno thats just wut im thinking

bowchicabowow
07-17-2008, 12:21 PM
Whoever it was that writes dark, I don't know if you care or not but there is a really good Dark here in Minneapolis.

Sarto
07-17-2008, 04:49 PM
First pieces , Ekes and I ,
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/008-1.jpg
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/009-1.jpg
a bit sketchy , but its all goood
Lime- those colours are tight, sick piece
Akels- Sick shit man,

Hater-AiD~>
07-17-2008, 05:02 PM
why is your forcefield going into your 3d on the first one..it makes it look nasty

bowchicabowow
07-17-2008, 05:06 PM
Lime, that is fuckin sick but the L looks like a Z.

This is my second piece i've done. Today, made up as I went.

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/psilolovesfluffy/0717081448.jpg

Live4TheWall
07-17-2008, 05:41 PM
alright alright... heres the more recent stuff....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/Proud%20Of%20This%20Stuff/hpim1933.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/Proud%20Of%20This%20Stuff/hpim1920.jpg

both done freestyle, kept forgetting my blackbook. Second one is just a big E for my friend.

Then this was a production with Sect and C-Hop and Myself.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/Proud%20Of%20This%20Stuff/hpim1834.jpg
closeup of mine...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Nicks_Notes/graffiti/Proud%20Of%20This%20Stuff/hpim1830.jpg

Thats it for now, I'll post up some shit later. I know I gotta clean up my lines on the first one, but the top I couldnt do to much about.

DH_Freak
07-17-2008, 06:54 PM
heres something i did about a week or so ago.
let us know wat you think?

Sarto
07-17-2008, 07:22 PM
why is your forcefield going into your 3d on the first one..it makes it look nasty

my friend told "ekes" to do that not knowing , i wasent paying attention , so yeah , i think he went back to fix it though.

cans905
07-17-2008, 08:30 PM
near- work on better structure with ur n and e cuz they kinda wack but the rest is alright
also go with simple clean fills for now

jesa- dope stuff especially the last one, it musta taken 4eva!!!
tell sect his s and e are alright but to get the penisy looking things outta there and work on c and t
c-hop- nice characters but they usually look better when done with a piece not just a tag

JETPACK!!
07-17-2008, 11:26 PM
dont connect your letters, work on your straight lines and curves, add a forcefield. you write ms? dont you find that kinna short?

"Riot"
07-18-2008, 01:50 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/new005.jpg
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/new004.jpg
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/new003.jpg
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/new002.jpg
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/new001.jpg
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT013.jpg


crits?

blunttokes
07-18-2008, 02:05 AM
stay off fr8s till your a tad better...^

JETPACK!!
07-18-2008, 02:08 AM
word, i saw that and thought the same thing. practice straight bars before you hit freights

Hater-AiD~>
07-18-2008, 09:14 AM
riot..you need caps my nig

Tonberry
07-18-2008, 09:25 AM
I think EKES needs to stick to the blackbook (no offense, just don't waste paint until you're not completely toy).

SARTO, that is better then you're buddy, but still needs work. For now, Most of the letters are fine, I would only just fix the R, The begining of it should probably connect to the whole letter, instead of having a line go through it. And shorten the tail on the T, maybe even remove it. Tails on Ts aren't cool.

And bitches love the arrows.

Hater-AiD~>
07-18-2008, 09:28 AM
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01514.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01513.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01506.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01505.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
07-18-2008, 02:17 PM
Joga - I like to see youre trying to progress and try new things, but seriously man...If I saw that where im staying...I would burn it so quick. The letters, handy, control, all need a bit of tuning up. I would do at least 100 of those on paper before I started bombin it everywhere again. Just trying to help homie.

Hater-AiD~>
07-18-2008, 03:10 PM
you dont understand...ive been writing for almost 3 years...it doesnt make any sense..i put my shit on paper and post it up places and people are all like..yeah..yeah that shit looks good..but when I actually paint it..its a different thing..my purpose in going out at night is to work on my can control..ive been in the books for too long..drawing is not goign to help my can control..honestly i do about 100 of those daily while im at work because im bored out of my ass

I GOT CLOUT
07-18-2008, 03:16 PM
Ok, well then find a bridge, or any nice chill spot and practice. I luckily started out being able to paint my boys garage so I started with can control and shitty letters. All im sayin is, I would get my control down before I started bombin it everywhere, just so when people start seeing your work, they wont wish they hadnt.

hammer_time
07-18-2008, 03:59 PM
Lime, that is fuckin sick but the L looks like a Z.

This is my second piece i've done. Today, made up as I went.

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/psilolovesfluffy/0717081448.jpg

please change your name, near is a chi-town town writer who is really fuckin good, that looks pretty good too, especially for only being your second piece, but seriously turn the r to a p, or the n to an m....

@hateraid, i was just tellin c3zr a story about a kid i met, who i thought would be able to fuckin school me, based on his AMAZING blackbook, so i asked him to go writing with me, and he was just horrible, i mean bad, and it was because he spent all day writing with markers, so he got really good at markers, if you spend all day writing with paint, youll get dope with paint..

@riot, dont get around freights anymore until you can at least repesct the rules, you just straight fuckin capped some important numbers, and if theres not enough room for you on a car dont go over the last 3-4 letters of someone elses painting, there is still plenty room on the trains

631
07-18-2008, 04:09 PM
rasek- im likeing your simples

Hater-AiD~>
07-18-2008, 04:14 PM
@hateraid, i was just tellin c3zr a story about a kid i met, who i thought would be able to fuckin school me, based on his AMAZING blackbook, so i asked him to go writing with me, and he was just horrible, i mean bad, and it was because he spent all day writing with markers, so he got really good at markers, if you spend all day writing with paint, youll get dope with paint..


there in lies the problem...i have people tellin me to go paint..and then i turn around and go paint..and then people who want me to go back to books

i understand that chill spots are cool..but im in another city every week because i work out of town..im not too familiar with this area so me and my boy just go out wherever we can

I GOT CLOUT
07-18-2008, 04:19 PM
Well there ya go, I can only give you advice based on my situation. After all, it all comes down to you homie. I honestly just dont like throws too much. You can only get better by continuing to paint and draw. Each piece is only as good as the next one.

hammer_time
07-18-2008, 04:26 PM
well then paint where you can, and just keep it to real low key spots, take your time, one thing i learned about graffiti through my job (painting cars) is that the speed at which you get things done will increase naturaly, but in the begining you should take your time, but you should really be practicing with a can too. get a big piece of wood or dry wall, and a thin cap, make straight lines over and over again, then get a second color and make equally straight lines, make the lines next to each other but touching, without going over the first lines....

bowchicabowow
07-18-2008, 09:07 PM
hey hammer time, that sucks to hear about the other near. Is it acceptable that my entire name is nearly dead? I searched on all the big graff sites before using near and the only person i saw alot of wasnt a traditional graff writer, he did portraits. So if i sign my pieces nearly dead would i be cool? Im attached to the name lol. Mear is a decent name though.

Narotik
07-18-2008, 10:27 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/5points-1.jpg

5 ptz NY . I didn't know shit about letter structure at the time so I just did this.

critz well appreciated.

HRbN
07-18-2008, 10:32 PM
that looks pretty cool but i have no idea what it is

HRbN
07-18-2008, 10:36 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/6298/gedc0054jt5.jpg
bump from 2 pages back. i managed to go critless so let me know.

live4-the fierst ones interesting, im not a fan of the dollar signs, or the unneeded extensions, the big e is nice

near- i think it would look better if you took the letters off that slant and made them the same size

Over all structure is good and i like your approach i just think you need to keep practicing your can control really cause you can see the un-steadyness in your curves and extentions. Other than that i like it, not many people rock 2 letters so i say keep rockin it!

Narotik
07-18-2008, 10:38 PM
Shit...sorry, bigger pic.


http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k439/narotik/5points.jpg

If you can't see it from that I just straight out fucking suck haha.

again, 5ptz NY
Critz

JETPACK!!
07-18-2008, 10:58 PM
is it a tree?

Dying to live
07-18-2008, 11:03 PM
i think so :3

Narotik
07-18-2008, 11:08 PM
haha, yeah, shit, fuck it, I'm not even gonna blame it on the pic. Yeah its a tree, it was the start of a BG I was gonna do but there wasn't enough paint to really get into it.

-GEKS-
07-18-2008, 11:27 PM
it looks really cool its just abstract ha

Narotik
07-18-2008, 11:32 PM
yeah, I don't know. When I was coming up I saw shit from Dali and Escher and it just took me. I'm the kind of toy that don't care if you can read it and thick headed enough to stick by it, as long as it flows and looks good. Any crits tho? I mean, i think my can controls alright but rip it apart. Only way to get better right?

bowchicabowow
07-18-2008, 11:44 PM
what I get from looking at that is, you are a great artist, that just needs to better familiarize himself with spray paint and possibly different caps. Still looks nice. But it could use some cutbacks for crispness. It appears that you just painted it in layers without cutting back.