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bloot
09-09-2008, 07:55 AM
Yarbles-Stick to simples until you can pull out a decent throwup.
Andy-I'm loving it
Furious-Once again.. Stick to simples, I'm not feeling the letter structure.
LEGENDARYBEATLERS
09-09-2008, 11:51 AM
FLYT CELR SAVER HENRY SSD, LONG ISLAND, NEW YORK.
-------------------------------------------------------
FLYT SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/FLYTISLAND.jpg?t=1220975187
FLYT SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/FLYTCELR.jpg?t=1220975224
CELR SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/CELR.jpg?t=1220975288
HENRY SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/HENRYSSD.jpg?t=1220975315
SAVER SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/saverbluegreen.jpg?t=1220975349
SAVER HENRY SSD
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/SAVEDEVIHENRYBINSCORNER.jpg?
elmers
09-09-2008, 06:20 PM
*please critique*
anoys thowups are always fresh
elmers
09-09-2008, 07:26 PM
confused on what name suits me better.. irak or mesy, both i think suck
FLYT CELR SAVER HENRY - keep sketching and the depth
HUAE - work with getting straight letters down then progress from there. you have the right idea
ANOY - more wild style kid, get those arrows flowin
cant handle the truth can ya
i already explained myself... seriously kid get over it...
Bazer
09-09-2008, 09:32 PM
stop ebeefing you dumb cunts.
i have to clean all this shit up.
Furious-StyleZ
09-09-2008, 09:33 PM
lol ye i get wat yall r sayin..it came out better wen i sketched it but my can control still sux...thx for d crits tho...std isnt really much of a crew for me..its just me n my friend and just sumtin we like to say..std "shit that dope" lol ye i know corny but who cares.
Furious-StyleZ
09-09-2008, 09:42 PM
dat nigguh baze say he got d POWER!!! dis ***** like zordon or sumtin
MUSEone
09-09-2008, 09:48 PM
stop ebeefing you dumb cunts.
i have to clean all this shit up.
ahh quit ya bitchin. ur the one who applied for mod
=P
j.k Baze.
i<3 u =]
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/8030/sinecwx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
first piece
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/8052/sinec2lt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some og motherfuckin real ISH SON
----peep that ill handstyle about the gold joint!
LEGENDARYBEATLERS
09-09-2008, 11:03 PM
cant handle the truth can ya
i already explained myself... seriously kid get over it...
who is this directed at?
Mr yarbles
09-09-2008, 11:16 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/x2l5c5.jpg
I know my k's fucked up haha
http://i36.tinypic.com/x6a92f.jpg
I feel like my controls been getting better
sinec those are dope
Try to pick a better color cus the silver over the white makes it kinda hard to see
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6273.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6277.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6280.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6282.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6283.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6285.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6287.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6291.jpg
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/4977/rasek45lk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
JETPACK!!
09-09-2008, 11:24 PM
lol@ that white rasek hollow.
LEGENDARYBEATLERS
09-09-2008, 11:27 PM
you said your name is AEKS but you write AESK
whats the deal?
Mr yarbles
09-09-2008, 11:34 PM
Aesk I changed around letter cus it flows better that way
At least for me
blunttokes
09-10-2008, 02:56 AM
something i tried on graffiti studio
kinda slop but w.e
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2571/secpiece1fz1.png (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-10-2008, 09:01 AM
nice shit teze.
on the first one, the top bar of the T is un even.
also, what happened on the fill on the last e?
run out of paint? or did you do that on purpose?
diggin the 3rd hollow.
can't really see the last one good enough.
ran outta paint...:rolleyes:
elmers
09-10-2008, 05:04 PM
crits please
elmers
09-10-2008, 06:05 PM
yeah its legal
mosezone
09-10-2008, 07:16 PM
aesk-not feeling the K, but your shits getting better, just keep at it.
the sec's aiight, but i'd like to see it painted.
and that anoy is prett dope
new name, the A is all fucked up and thin, but crits anyways?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02036.jpg
Mr yarbles
09-10-2008, 07:28 PM
Thanks man
Make the bars in the a thicker they look too skinny
Looks good though
sec make your e bigger so it hits the bottom like the other letters and work on your e
SiC_one
09-10-2008, 07:49 PM
http://a388.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/100/l_a5b5b47fd6566817c22e24211e0c22e3.jpg
You can tell that they had buffed this area of the wall. So we had to hit it up again.
Also this is another section of the wall. This guy is from Florida some where, but he hit up one of our spots in Chatt Town. Had to leave it mad sik. Left some Respect.
http://a478.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/125/l_f99a008a786afbce271eb9f4aa565e9d.jpg
Dying to live
09-10-2008, 07:56 PM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3353.jpg
nice can controll and clean paint but some of the addons dont fit like on the a
fonone
09-11-2008, 01:41 AM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6273.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6277.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6280.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6282.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6283.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6285.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6287.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh57/gero613/IMG_6291.jpg
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/4977/rasek45lk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
until i saw that last rasek i thought some toy was copying your word haha... found some writers to go bombing with then?
flick for talking
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/5710/rooftopbsvm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/rooftopbsvm6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img375/rooftopbsvm6.jpg/1/)
ps. rasek you should keep me updated on your flicks through Pm's, i seriously miss seeing your shit.
SiC_one
09-11-2008, 08:35 PM
does nobody come on this thread?
+Hoodwigga
09-11-2008, 08:37 PM
i do
but i dont post flick because i dont take flicks
Bazer
09-12-2008, 01:25 AM
irek. your ir are really different from your ek. yours ir are round/bubbly and your ek is more sharp.................................... fix it.
SiC_one
09-12-2008, 01:59 AM
http://a388.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/100/l_a5b5b47fd6566817c22e24211e0c22e3.jpg
You can tell that they had buffed this area of the wall. So we had to hit it up again.
Also this is another section of the wall. This guy is from Florida some where, but he hit up one of our spots in Chatt Town. Had to leave it mad sik. Left some Respect.
http://a478.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/125/l_f99a008a786afbce271eb9f4aa565e9d.jpg
New page bump since I didnt get any feedback
Vagrant
09-12-2008, 02:20 AM
don't get why you can see the bare brick hollows through the buff?
Day painting at my favorite roof spot:
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/Vagrant1-2.jpg
flick of a 2 week old piece at same spot:
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/vagrantone0/VagrantPieceRoof.jpg
SiC_one
09-12-2008, 02:34 AM
vagrant the v in the first pic looks like a U not a V. Looks good other than that.
Rooftop Resident
09-12-2008, 02:46 AM
New page bump since I didnt get any feedback
Um, where is the "s"? where is the "i"? Is that a half filled fill-in? I know 2 kids in my small ass home town that write sic...
maybe you're void and maybe I'm a drunk asshole. but specify what's yours...
SiC_one
09-12-2008, 02:56 AM
I write void and that is the corner of a friends bomb where he ran out of paint, and yes his was half filled in.
Rooftop Resident
09-12-2008, 03:08 PM
I write void and that is the corner of a friends bomb where he ran out of paint, and yes his was half filled in.
Oh, in that case, lookin pretty good, work on handstyles I'd say. Not feeling that D or the unnecessary lines at the bottom... Also with the size of your drop shadow the holes in the o and d should be completely black. But I must say, better than most shit up in hurrr.
+Hoodwigga
09-12-2008, 03:35 PM
vagrant you should make the t a lil higher up on the seocnd but im lking it all the same
Vagrant
09-12-2008, 03:58 PM
thanks, i'll keep it in mind.
+Hoodwigga
09-12-2008, 04:00 PM
yeah i think your simple looks dope and if you keep working at it it would only get better
ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-12-2008, 06:30 PM
haven't posted in a while.. not the greatest but :P
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/NEwmansspot.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/justfuckingaroundraveenaction.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/BigBlackOene.jpg
btw Vagrant that shit is so clean :D
+Hoodwigga
09-12-2008, 07:34 PM
ok so one: everything about that is fucked. the o isnt even round and you might want to try an upper case n
second: why the fuck did you go over that peice? it looked like it was a hell of a lot better than your shit
ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-12-2008, 07:38 PM
thnx... the reason was it took while too get to that spot and i wasnt leaving with out putting something up.. even if it is"fucked." I dont usually go over people this was the first time...
Mr yarbles
09-12-2008, 07:38 PM
Oene go back to the books
bend you knees when you paint too
I remember jetpack talling me that and I thought it was bull shit till I did it it makes your lines soo much cleaner
and work on your control
Alot
You're also missing shadow on the bottom of your letters
+Hoodwigga
09-12-2008, 07:40 PM
yeah ord. you gotta flow with the can ya know bend your knees
I GOT CLOUT
09-12-2008, 09:37 PM
So a detective showed up at my door wed. morning...
Somebody Narc'ed me out. Sooo, no more flicks from me.
Ya know, in case yous guys missed me.
And Oene...fix that N.
+Hoodwigga
09-12-2008, 09:43 PM
and thats why i dont post flicks of my stuff
I GOT CLOUT
09-12-2008, 09:49 PM
I got caught in the act...not from posting flicks on this shit.
+Hoodwigga
09-12-2008, 10:47 PM
haha shit that sucks
mmmburgers
09-13-2008, 04:09 AM
lol
blunttokes
09-13-2008, 01:46 PM
change ur word n paint again
dont be a bitch n fall off since u got caught once
4times is the charm n i still bombing
JETPACK!!
09-13-2008, 05:43 PM
So a detective showed up at my door wed. morning...
Somebody Narc'ed me out.
welcome to the club.
pearson
09-13-2008, 08:03 PM
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa101/bomberjay/DSCN2773.jpg
Not very satisfied, but I still like it.
I had shitty paint to do my outline.
why the fuck did you crossed that ill piece that was behind it...
pearson
09-13-2008, 08:08 PM
why the fuck did you crossed that ill piece that was behind it...
No, man if you look closer there was a shitty throwup over that piece so I decided to paint over it. I never cross nice pieces. Never.
Mr yarbles
09-13-2008, 08:37 PM
I would have rather seen the throw than that.
wafflecakee
09-13-2008, 08:45 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i53/wafflecakee/SSPX9831-1.jpg
JETPACK!!
09-13-2008, 08:47 PM
why the fuck do you have a "want list" in your sig
who the fucks gonna buy or even steal you shit, no one cares what you want. write on paper an give it to your mommy.
H3TT1NG3R
09-13-2008, 08:48 PM
^its for trades foo
+Hoodwigga
09-13-2008, 08:49 PM
hmm it says noose right not lose?
loose the little swirl on the n (if thats what it is)
and i like the way th n curves in and overlaps the outline but it looks gay when only the n has that kind of style to it
Dying to live
09-13-2008, 09:29 PM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akelpiece.gif
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akelthrowie.gif
MUSEone
09-13-2008, 09:38 PM
Locin that throw and hand.
Keep that shit up.
waffle i think you should add another O onto it soits noose instead of nose and loose the swirl on the N
pearson
09-14-2008, 12:09 AM
I would have rather seen the throw than that.
You're awesome.
Thanks for the constructive criticism.
EDIT: Oh, and no you wouldn't have.
Mr yarbles
09-14-2008, 12:28 AM
Yeah, I probably would have I can't event ell what your's says, it's absolutely terrible
Sketch don't piant use bars do simples
There there's your crits.
turkey train
09-14-2008, 01:07 AM
Trackside bomb from the other day, quick bomb so it's pretty messy.
http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u220/chrislogemann/Pic_0823_021.jpg
braxtons a g
09-14-2008, 02:24 AM
turkey- letters same size
dyingtolive-tighttt :]
nose-lose the silly swirl on the N
pearson- whoever crossed the purple n pink/red peice.. needs shot
SikeMyGraff
09-14-2008, 05:14 AM
needs a lil work
pearson
09-14-2008, 01:40 PM
Yeah, I probably would have I can't event ell what your's says, it's absolutely terrible
Sketch don't piant use bars do simples
There there's your crits.
Yeah, I know I'm a bad piecer (I'm a pretty good bomber though), and I was experimenting a new lettering style. But I didn't want it to be too readable 'cuz I wrote my real word and not a ghost name, so I don't want it to get noticed too fast on the internet since I started to write it 3 days ago. ;)
And I don't even know why I decided to paint that one 'cuz I made sketches that were way more nice... Not to mention that the sketch I made doesn't even look like the piece I painted.
Thanks anyways :(
La Coka Nostra
09-14-2008, 02:36 PM
^ haha
Rooftop Resident
09-14-2008, 04:47 PM
There needs to be a toy forum, an intermediate forum, and advanced forum. Cause some of this shit is just silly as fuck.
7nationarmy
09-14-2008, 07:00 PM
oldest to newest..the control looks like shit on some..or track spots or dark spot..blah
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/05-03-08_1344.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_34fd230045ab1b00b8fb5f242ca510bc.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/l_128097772535dd805430590a6f7887b2.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_6dc6605f32e116ad0729a571c3d8e9ac.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_9e9d0f878c11bee5fd52a5b8b994e9c6.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0859-1.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0882.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0954-1.jpg
and ma throw and shit
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_ce0430fbee5b46ddf97e3168c22f37f0.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_66ed82ccd0749e6cd74006906164679d.jpg
here's another bomb :P
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/HPIM1612-1.jpg
http://a886.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/85/l_ecd77bade39dc7bb97304406122ddc0d.jpg
http://a232.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/54/l_03aa0a42c1fff53a9d19ff7c78c90acf.jpg
HëRbN
09-15-2008, 12:26 AM
That P needs much assistance, the top curve part needs to be hella thicker. The rest is ok, just make all your letters the same thickness and it would look alot tighter
edit~ on the first one
osnapizzel
09-15-2008, 12:35 AM
supo i like that
ate i dont think your ready to paint
supo i like that
ate i dont think your ready to paint
Thats your opinion and i respect it...but you know...the best shit most people do you dont get a pic of...
ColdBlooded
09-15-2008, 11:22 AM
No matter what you post your going to have critics, so deal with it or leave..i'm going painting ill post a couple pictures when i get back...
No matter what you post your going to have critics, so deal with it or leave..i'm going painting ill post a couple pictures when i get back...
oh i know man, i was just saying thanks anyway :D even if he does think that...:rolleyes: but like i said...i wish i could show you guys my best stuff...
whosthisguy
09-15-2008, 02:35 PM
get a new name
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/12102006131809IM000350.JPG
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/1115200618495724920637410bdda7ff1.jpg
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/072720060110428dab0fe4.jpg
sorry but not really, ATE, have respect and pick a new name
whosthisguy
09-15-2008, 03:28 PM
i'm not ATE, he's a city writer.name sucks whoever has it....
7nationarmy
09-15-2008, 04:33 PM
oldest to newest..the control looks like shit on some..or track spots or dark spot..blah
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/05-03-08_1344.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_34fd230045ab1b00b8fb5f242ca510bc.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/l_128097772535dd805430590a6f7887b2.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_6dc6605f32e116ad0729a571c3d8e9ac.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_9e9d0f878c11bee5fd52a5b8b994e9c6.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0859-1.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0882.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0954-1.jpg
and ma throw and shit
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_ce0430fbee5b46ddf97e3168c22f37f0.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_66ed82ccd0749e6cd74006906164679d.jpg
bump for some crits?
ColdBlooded
09-15-2008, 04:48 PM
Production with zones and fenek
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/kersooo.jpg
Roller With Rope
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/ropekerso.jpg
It's Kerso now....crits?
There needs to be a toy forum, an intermediate forum, and advanced forum. Cause some of this shit is just silly as fuck.
I already mentioned that to fube. But they tried it before, it was called the stepping up thread but toys who thought they were better than they are used to post in there. So yeah....
Rooftop Resident
09-15-2008, 05:16 PM
I already mentioned that to fube. But they tried it before, it was called the stepping up thread but toys who thought they were better than they are used to post in there. So yeah....
god damnit. mods got tired of regulating or what?
Mass Appeal
09-15-2008, 05:31 PM
i'm not ATE, he's a city writer.name sucks whoever has it....
Hes from Ny
He writes it coshes big and fat.
Seriously.
god damnit. mods got tired of regulating or what?
Dunno mate. But you Think... This is a big forum, i guess they can't clean up posts all the time. I think if there was to be an intermediate thread, a"toy" must get some sort of approveal before he can start posting in there.
ColdBlooded
09-15-2008, 07:30 PM
Im not used to doing little things with rollers
mosezone
09-15-2008, 07:56 PM
i'm actually really feeling that ROPE, just not so much the KERSO
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02036.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02043.jpg
2 recent ones. on the first, i know the A is shitty and thin. other than that, any crits?
elmers
09-15-2008, 08:25 PM
ok peice still needs work and needs more thought for interesting backround but over all working with montana is the way to go.
CRITS.
lawlcat
09-15-2008, 08:56 PM
^^ feeling that.
digging the rope too, different.
i really like your stuff maoe. nice and simple.
second picture looks like am amazing chill spot.
Mr yarbles
09-15-2008, 11:18 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/k0o8pg.jpg
Was using the last of a krylon on this one so the shadow was sketchy
http://i38.tinypic.com/xggvbd.jpg
IS that rasek old?
cold that first one is fireee
maoe looks good
yarbles.. youve been gettin better with the can control.. just keep it up.. its clean in your handy.. just move the can that fast with the throw and you'll have it..
Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 08:49 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/politicalxlove/UPHIGH2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/politicalxlove/smallteze.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/politicalxlove/sozeteze1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/politicalxlove/UNFINISHED.jpg
me and da homie.
Bazer
09-16-2008, 10:57 AM
tezer, go bigger.
viseversa101
09-16-2008, 12:11 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_857f2370df6ef04831d01d67e6f677-1.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_88ec8b77751c798b40e100e31b87a9e6.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_bde1b2bc405f676b0f98c1459db02f3e.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_be66fb631d50ac9249db34c3706ab84e.jpg
-sense-
09-16-2008, 01:02 PM
mose the new name minds me of mayonaise
just fatten up the dark blue outline
you can kinda see where you went over with with the light blue outoutline
edward that second one is pretty ugly, the t looks like an i and thee whole thing is kinda choppy.
vice the third one is the best, the first one i couldnt even make a letter out of the first v
Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-16-2008, 01:12 PM
tezer, go bigger.
i know i know.:(
what the fuck...my posts got deleted....
Shoook
09-16-2008, 06:26 PM
rasek feelin it as usual man
tezer seems alittle small paint bigger , go big or go home man
visaversa i like the 3 flick keep with that style and mine first piece in a long time really sloopy bad can control shitty at force fields
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/fenekthebee.jpg
and first time ever painting a character soo flyater with the crits
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/bzzzzzzz.jpg
Shoook
09-16-2008, 06:31 PM
lol i cant post it man i dotn want to lol
ps no affence zone haha jsut color place for w wild style no thanks
but yeha most likly i only got a few cans but i might pick up a couple more
Shoook
09-16-2008, 06:43 PM
well do i ahave to supple paint for all of us cause if that no
RezOner..
09-16-2008, 07:01 PM
You both suck at english.
blunttokes
09-16-2008, 08:29 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/k0o8pg.jpg
Work on this one a bit more... go as fast as u can in 1 motion for each letter as like someone said abit ago above...your tags are good and try to go as fast as u would for that but made clean
http://i38.tinypic.com/xggvbd.jpg
fix the A a bit maybe make the line in the A at the top a bit smaller or even deleting that.
keep that shit up dude.
ZOLAS
09-16-2008, 10:21 PM
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/oddones/100_1255.jpg
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/oddones/100_1253.jpg
I write zolas...heres a throwie, more to come. some crits would be appreciated.
ColdBlooded
09-16-2008, 11:30 PM
meto needs work with cutting, where to cut and how far into his lines he should cut, and work with secong outline..In some places it looks like he did his forcefield then outline again, one shot next time
apek needs to work on his letter structer and figuring out where to drop the shadow, also blow the drips and make it clean.
zolas- really only dont like the L and A, and the middle dot of the O should be raised, thats nice though keep it up...Legal wall??
beefisforburgers
09-16-2008, 11:48 PM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0994.jpg
BigBlueViolence
09-16-2008, 11:53 PM
Dope stuff oak
WhiskeyRichard
09-17-2008, 01:07 AM
For just starting out, its actually not horrible. Trust me, Ive seen worse.
The fills look pretty solid, but if I was you, Id consider widening the crosses in the J and T
JETPACK!!
09-17-2008, 08:12 AM
hey guys, some constructive criticisim is much appreciated,
yes i know im toy,
yes i know most other posts above me kill me,
but i gotta start somewere,
thanks in advance!
sorry about the thumbnail i cant figure out how to expand it
uhhhhh, you should make a new account, one that dosent have your e-mail as your screen name.
.KrisMacgregor
09-17-2008, 12:20 PM
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/253/dsc00443dp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/253/dsc00443dp1.d12079890a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=520&i=dsc00443dp1.jpg)
Help Me Dont Know What One To Use As My Tag ?
ZOLAS
09-17-2008, 01:28 PM
meto needs work with cutting, where to cut and how far into his lines he should cut, and work with secong outline..In some places it looks like he did his forcefield then outline again, one shot next time
apek needs to work on his letter structer and figuring out where to drop the shadow, also blow the drips and make it clean.
zolas- really only dont like the L and A, and the middle dot of the O should be raised, thats nice though keep it up...Legal wall??
ya thats a legal wall..
+Hoodwigga
09-17-2008, 03:25 PM
way ahead of you, thanks though.
ok but you still fucked up cause we still now its you and we know your email along with any on lse reading ths forum, so yeah
cans905
09-17-2008, 03:33 PM
reck- work on your tag a lot more... lose the quotation marks, the arrows, the stars
lose it all and just use the letters for now and make them tighter
zolas- i dunno why but i really like it, just change your l and take more time and put more detail if its on a legal
jisr- for your first its really really really good
keep it up
here are my first ones... they are sooooooooooo embarassing lol
but dont worry i got better :)
simple zen
09-17-2008, 05:46 PM
zolas your shit is clean.
ZOLAS
09-17-2008, 06:53 PM
zolas your shit is clean.
Thanks simple zen.
cerex89
09-17-2008, 07:39 PM
cant wait to get some paint and some rusto fats
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0917081542.jpg
JETPACK!!
09-17-2008, 07:46 PM
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/635/rasek50yx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bunk S and the kick on the R is too thin, the A could be better. K as well. i like the E a lot though :)
Mr yarbles
09-17-2008, 07:50 PM
You win your court case or something?
ANyways extend the middle bar of your e out more and try not to hide your s so much
But godamn rasek that shit is cleaaaaaaaaaan
Baron
09-17-2008, 08:21 PM
Rasek is back! :) sick fill by the way
cool looking fill. dont like the letters besides your k
Nagger
09-17-2008, 08:55 PM
Zolas nice and clean.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3035/2865855259_77519a2cbc.jpg?v=0
I think my last post of this died, or the link failed, I dunno. Anyways it was my first ever and on wet wood... I didn't know the wood was wet till after the paint wasn't sticking.
Crap paint from Home Depot with stock caps...
Rooftop Resident
09-17-2008, 11:33 PM
whoa no.
acereborn
09-17-2008, 11:33 PM
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/635/rasek50yx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bunk S and the kick on the R is too thin, the A could be better. K as well. i like the E a lot though :)
lookin nice, but the S puts it off for me. and the left bar on the R looks wayyyy bigger than the right bar, kinda puts that off too.
anyways, did they not have enough on you to win in court? fill us in ;)
gig, sketch first, then once you have some dece sketches, get some caps and nice paint.
lawlcat
09-17-2008, 11:41 PM
the wood has nothing to do with your letter structure. which is what the main problem is here, among other things.
the letters themselves need work. just stick with simple, non-graffiti type letters. then go from there. adding extensions and flow and all that jazz.
basically the new to graff thread in a nutshell.
7nationarmy
09-18-2008, 07:16 AM
not to bad..but this dude lives in my city son..lmfao
http://i33.tinypic.com/bg4fat.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/73l01u.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/zn3ipy.jpg
7nationarmy
09-18-2008, 07:17 AM
sorry for the little pics
springbreak95
09-18-2008, 08:22 AM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00233.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00232.jpg
rasek that fill is crazy dope i dig the colors
crits?
7nationarmy
09-18-2008, 08:25 AM
ur s is uuhhh...and dont do that to the o...just do a regular spray it dont say it throw
springbreak95
09-18-2008, 09:57 AM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00232-1.jpg
that what you meant?
what do you mean dont say it throw? sorry dont understand
JETPACK!!
09-18-2008, 11:28 AM
not to bad..but this dude lives in my city son..lmfao
http://i33.tinypic.com/bg4fat.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/73l01u.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/zn3ipy.jpg
im well aware, your not the first to tell me. and neither do i care to be honest. he can do his thing, i can do mine. but this name is comin with me to the grave.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3071/2867807357_e832099931.jpg?v=0
I know these suck so I don't need crits saying such. I'm just playing with the paint, seeing how it works, what it does, and the like. Basically so far I've learn painting on a wet surface is not good and that stock caps suck ass.
Soon I'll have a better feel for the paint, the can, and an overall idea of what I'm doing.
garbage down tha way
09-18-2008, 03:00 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-6.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-5.jpg
+Hoodwigga
09-18-2008, 03:14 PM
[QUOTE=GIG;1207895]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3071/2867807357_e832099931.jpg?v=0
QUOTE]
holy fuck!
MEGA TOY!!!!
ok but first of dont paint unless its a spot no one goes there but you.
and why the fuck are your i and other g not bubbled like the first g.
fix that and keep trying mayne
Thread-Locks
09-18-2008, 03:31 PM
haha that's so funny it's awful, and so awful it's funny
Mass Appeal
09-18-2008, 03:35 PM
People have to start somewhere.
Leave him the fuck alone you load of pricks.
Heh, it's cool Mass, thanks for getting my back though. I knew what I was getting into when I posted it. I didn't write they, stand back, look at it, and think 'oh hell yeah I'm the MAN!' I looked at it and thought, 'oh... my... God... I have a LONG way to go.'
Unlike a lot of the kids here I'm out of high school and college, I'm 24, I have a job, I'm not a kid that can draw all day. I sketch when I can and I think, I hope, I'm getting better. I went out to see what it'd be like to actually paint something.
Would I get a rush from it? Would it even be fun? Would I be scared? What would the paint feel like? What would the paint do?
Well I did get a rush, it was fun, I was a lil worried but not scared, the paint felt... weak and barely came out (stock cap I assume,) and the paint didn't do much.
The next morning my wrist hurt and I couldn't figure out why until it finally dawned on me, pressing that cap down wasn't something my hand is used to doing.
This is all stuff you guys probably take for granted, I dunno, but for me this isn't about 'getting up,' or getting known. I don't give a fuck if I end up painting 500 times and still no one has heard of GIG, that's fine by me. I'm not doing this for fame. I'm not trying to make the next OBEY or be as well known as... REVOK, EYE, SAVIOR, or CHIP7, I'm doing this for me.
I'm just posting here because I feel like sharing my experience, I know I suck, I know I'm a toy, but I'm having fun. I'm not a gangster, I'm not a G, or an OG, and I'll never try to be one. I'm a dorky white guy that just wants to have a little hobby =]
And with that said imagine my surprise when I saw THIS the day after I put mine up.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/2867914045_0766a968f4.jpg?v=0
((No, I didn't do this. I have no idea who did.))
Batman_Onest
09-18-2008, 04:18 PM
At least you have the right attitude. If you're doing it to impress those rebels at the skate park, or to be part of the latest trend, then it's only as relevant as your reasons for it. As for your wrist, your fingers will get used to it. try using your thumb for fills
But yeah, stick to paper for a while
Juicee
09-18-2008, 04:24 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00233.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00232.jpg
rasek that fill is crazy dope i dig the colors
crits?
what do you write
Masta T
09-18-2008, 04:57 PM
Jetpack ur shit is hot man lol.
+Hoodwigga
09-18-2008, 07:14 PM
word GIG you have a fan following. after i had bombed a few times and i went to piss in walmart i saw my name written in the stalls and that gave me a good laugh
and listen to the dark noght stay on paper. ofcourse you like the rush of pianting but thatll just be more drive to get better quick ya know
kroc_oner
09-18-2008, 07:57 PM
Heh, it's cool Mass, thanks for getting my back though. I knew what I was getting into when I posted it. I didn't write they, stand back, look at it, and think 'oh hell yeah I'm the MAN!' I looked at it and thought, 'oh... my... God... I have a LONG way to go.'
Unlike a lot of the kids here I'm out of high school and college, I'm 24, I have a job, I'm not a kid that can draw all day. I sketch when I can and I think, I hope, I'm getting better. I went out to see what it'd be like to actually paint something.
Would I get a rush from it? Would it even be fun? Would I be scared? What would the paint feel like? What would the paint do?
Well I did get a rush, it was fun, I was a lil worried but not scared, the paint felt... weak and barely came out (stock cap I assume,) and the paint didn't do much.
The next morning my wrist hurt and I couldn't figure out why until it finally dawned on me, pressing that cap down wasn't something my hand is used to doing.
This is all stuff you guys probably take for granted, I dunno, but for me this isn't about 'getting up,' or getting known. I don't give a fuck if I end up painting 500 times and still no one has heard of GIG, that's fine by me. I'm not doing this for fame. I'm not trying to make the next OBEY or be as well known as... REVOK, EYE, SAVIOR, or CHIP7, I'm doing this for me.
I'm just posting here because I feel like sharing my experience, I know I suck, I know I'm a toy, but I'm having fun. I'm not a gangster, I'm not a G, or an OG, and I'll never try to be one. I'm a dorky white guy that just wants to have a little hobby =]
And with that said imagine my surprise when I saw THIS the day after I put mine up.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/2867914045_0766a968f4.jpg?v=0
((No, I didn't do this. I have no idea who did.))
dont bother startin to write at your age
GaZm13
09-18-2008, 08:09 PM
dont bother startin to write at your age
That is total BULLSHIT!!!!! So you are saying only little teenagers that don't know shit should write?
kroc_oner
09-18-2008, 08:22 PM
no im just sayin theres not much of a point he can if he wants but he should stick to paper for a while shoulda made it more clear wht i ment
like a 5 sec bomb
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0045-2.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0042-2.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0041-1.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0036-1.jpg
GaZm13
09-18-2008, 08:32 PM
He should definitely stick to paper for sure. No disagreement there.
kroc_oner
09-18-2008, 08:36 PM
ya reminds me of this shit i saw the other day these toys with wack buble letter tht were to skinny fucked sum guys house srta made me mad
Oh fuck houses. I'll NEVER bomb a house, school, or church, just like in the bombing for starters. I have no beef with anyone.
I'm not really sure how paper will help me paint better... They are two VERY different things. Maybe I could get good in paper but it won't really help my painting. It's like... I dunno, camping in your backyard and camping in a real forest.
Yeah sure, if you 'camp' in your backyard you'll know how to start a fire, cook burgers on your lil grill, and put up a tent. But until you really go camping you have no clue what your doing.
...I guess that kind of proves your point though huh? I should stay home till I have the basics down.
GaZm13
09-18-2008, 08:49 PM
Houses, churches, schools and peoples personal property such as cars and such are totally off limits. No exceptions.
7nationarmy
09-18-2008, 09:26 PM
what i ment was...dont do the top thing...and do ur o circular
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-3aspx.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-2aspx-1.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-1aspx-1.jpg\
and rasek..keep doin ur shit...just hope no influence comes out...wanna see a new stile wit that name..lets hope its u
EDIT: unnecessary circle on the last one..on top of the i :(
mosezone
09-18-2008, 09:30 PM
asen, that was kinda a dick move bombing a preschool bus
icoe, that shit's pretty nice. only thing i don't like is the E on the first, but that last simple is so hottt
just some shit from today, scouted out a new chill spot :) first 2 letter throws were just with a basically empty can, as you can see. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/48D2FDD7000B025400005E1722007589420.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/48D2FC5C0001F29D00003E1F22007589420.jpg
garbage down tha way
09-18-2008, 09:52 PM
yo maoe keep it up that throws on point.
cerex89
09-18-2008, 10:02 PM
no im just sayin theres not much of a point he can if he wants but he should stick to paper for a while shoulda made it more clear wht i ment
like a 5 sec bomb
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0045-2.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0042-2.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0041-1.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0036-1.jpg
your shits weak
and GIG if your trying to get painting down just start with basic lettering and fill it in
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0918081859.jpg
and i dont care if it looks good im just showin him what i mean
Mr yarbles
09-18-2008, 10:14 PM
Word gig you got the love just keep working man
Also you should probably choose a diff name
Gig is hard to write and the letters are really unbalenced
Just throwng it out there.
7nationarmy
09-18-2008, 10:17 PM
[QUOTE]icoe, that shit's pretty nice. only thing i don't like is the E on the first, but that last simple is so hottt
good looks on the crits and yeah dont like the i eather...kinda domed it is all...and ur throws is comin out preety dope aswell...keep it sexy ladies :D
kroc_oner
09-18-2008, 10:17 PM
wow tht stuff from like 3 months ago so im better anyway then tht
ZOLAS
09-18-2008, 11:16 PM
http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/oddones/100_1278.jpg
purp zolas..
Word gig you got the love just keep working man
Also you should probably choose a diff name
Gig is hard to write and the letters are really unbalenced
Just throwng it out there.
Dude... you're right. I like the 'G's' but the 'I' just throws everything off. G is one of the biggest letters and 'I' is by far the smallest and so it just goes BIG tiny BIG and thus flows really REALLY bad.
I'll try to think up something else, in the meantime I'll just practice all letters.
springbreak95
09-19-2008, 05:16 AM
what do you write
stakone or stak
Dude... you're right. I like the 'G's' but the 'I' just throws everything off. G is one of the biggest letters and 'I' is by far the smallest and so it just goes BIG tiny BIG and thus flows really REALLY bad.
I'll try to think up something else, in the meantime I'll just practice all letters.
If you like the double g, what about summin like gage. Dunno if its taken or whatever. Keep writing. Oh and paper will help you with your letter structure and how things look, to get can control it comes with practice.
some bombs /simple fast silver black last one i did to represent the crew it came out best i think i gotta buy some colours and do a legal fullcolour
cuzz i only did silver black bombs
http://i34.tinypic.com/28060eu.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2js68i.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/261kmqb.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/34oeu1h.jpg
-sense-
09-19-2008, 11:56 AM
mose you got that style on lock
zolas thats pretty clean but the white fade could be crisper
zase i personaly prefer the second stylee
this is like over a year old and my first attempt at something
started with vision then was going for trevision then went for tele
i was reaching over a mud puddle too. i know its kinda ugg
http://i35.tinypic.com/hug974.jpg
ugg
http://i37.tinypic.com/o05g3.jpg
simp
http://i33.tinypic.com/spkc2g.jpg
chara
i just like this pic
http://i36.tinypic.com/2iszd5s.jpg
.A.K.4.7.
09-19-2008, 12:18 PM
your shits weak
and GIG if your trying to get painting down just start with basic lettering and fill it in
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0918081859.jpg
and i dont care if it looks good im just showin him what i mean
lul, a shit cunt telling another shit cunt how to write and not even being able to rock a straight letter on paper
shit cunts
Panda Jerk
09-19-2008, 12:21 PM
some bombs /simple fast silver black last one i did to represent the crew it came out best i think i gotta buy some colours and do a legal fullcolour
cuzz i only did silver black bombs
http://i34.tinypic.com/28060eu.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2js68i.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/261kmqb.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/34oeu1h.jpg
good to see u on BS.. thats sick that ur peicing with your steez u do on paper. im tired of seeing like decent simples and no peices. the only way youll tearn is do somthin new :)
I decided to stay with GIG. Might not be the best name but it's the one I'm going with.
.A.K.4.7.
09-19-2008, 12:32 PM
gig is an awful name that your not going to be able to do anything good with... really, pretty fucking hard name to work with.
Name the Fresh
09-19-2008, 12:50 PM
mose you got that style on lock
zolas thats pretty clean but the white fade could be crisper
zase i personaly prefer the second stylee
this is like over a year old and my first attempt at something
started with vision then was going for trevision then went for tele
i was reaching over a mud puddle too. i know its kinda ugg
http://i35.tinypic.com/hug974.jpg
ugg
http://i37.tinypic.com/o05g3.jpg
simp
http://i33.tinypic.com/spkc2g.jpg
chara
i just like this pic
http://i36.tinypic.com/2iszd5s.jpg
I certainly not able to draw, but your pieces dislike me quite
gig is an awful name that your not going to be able to do anything good with... really, pretty fucking hard name to work with.
What did I ever do to you? Stop being such a tool.
kroc_oner
09-19-2008, 01:54 PM
gig he was just speakin the truth
Bazer
09-19-2008, 02:02 PM
i think he's just saying that the letter combination is just hard to do anything good waith. for example BAZER. all the letters are balanced and make for a solid full piece.
WoeInfinite
09-19-2008, 02:04 PM
yeah gig, trust me, i write woe, and its hard.
pick a longer name.
cerex89
09-19-2008, 02:11 PM
lul, a shit cunt telling another shit cunt how to write and not even being able to rock a straight letter on paper
shit cunts
fuck you i said i didnt care how it looked like i did it to better explain myself
rsakens
09-19-2008, 03:32 PM
jo whats up zase fresh bombs =]
KEANE
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/1-1.jpg?t=1221681223http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/2-1.jpg?t=1221681264http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/3-1.jpg?t=1221681304http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/4.jpg?t=1221681338http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/5.jpg?t=1221681371
FREESTYLE =]
rsakens
09-19-2008, 03:33 PM
some spliffssssss
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0003-1.jpg?t=1221681516
mr faty =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0021.jpg?t=1221681560
KEANE THIS WALL WAS A BITCH TO PAINT BUT I MANAGE =]
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0011a.jpg?t=1221681611
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0008a.jpg?t=1221681663
rest paint so never mynd that choice off colors
its called the mist blue =)
seywhat
09-19-2008, 04:11 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-6.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-5.jpg
MY NIGGGGGGAAAAAHHHHHHHH HOER!! thats shits ill as fuck, your style has developed alot. props for the illest peice in this thread lately
keane- also lookin fresh for sure
nero112
09-19-2008, 04:29 PM
What did I ever do to you? Stop being such a tool.
its just some friendly advice on the name you jackass cock suckin fag..
Names I could possibly change to.
Charm
Java
Korp (like Corps)
Skam
Skamp
Zetta (as in a Zettabyte)
Slushi
09-19-2008, 05:07 PM
Your name doesnt really matter this early on, you're not gonna stick with it throughout your career.
I would reccomend something with solid letters, so you'll learn bettar. skam has strong letters, but thats taken
ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-19-2008, 05:55 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/2.jpg
+Hoodwigga
09-19-2008, 05:59 PM
well your o is still a little rough and the bottom line of you n could come up more towrds the middle. just keep fucking with it
cerex89
09-19-2008, 05:59 PM
make your o look like an o
ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-19-2008, 06:00 PM
what does it look like now an x? O.o
but thnx hood
+Hoodwigga
09-19-2008, 06:01 PM
it looks like shit thats what
ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-19-2008, 06:02 PM
change in mood?
the first comment was to the guy below u..
+Hoodwigga
09-19-2008, 06:05 PM
im just saying fx the o and everything else well your at it. just keep at it
ThatguywhodrinksTea
09-19-2008, 06:06 PM
gotcha :D
Rooftop Resident
09-19-2008, 06:42 PM
it looks like shit thats what
haha, he asked for that. I dunno about Oene, it's like you wanted to write "One" but you know that's stupid so you threw another e in it. could be an ill name though I guess, anything could if you made it look good.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3239/2871621026_eed1265798.jpg?v=0
Fucking around on my door
mekosbc
09-19-2008, 08:29 PM
gig not tryin to be a dick but you gotta work with pencil n paper a lil more befor you usepaint.. n ur can control is hella shakey..... bu work on ur letterz alot..
n oene your progressing very slowly
S4d3n
09-19-2008, 08:33 PM
Second Stug piece, tried something new:
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2899/stugpiecesd8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/stugpiecesd8.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img146/stugpiecesd8.jpg/1/)
Turned out alright, too much orange and the highlight came out like crap, and I hadn't drawn this piece out much beforehand, just a quick sketch and went along with it.
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/7037/stugthreeeeenj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/7037/stugthreeeeenj3.4c7eb3c94d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=354&i=stugthreeeeenj3.jpg)
No expensive paint was used in the making of this piece!
This is the previous one, quick bump.
Crits?
Also, 'GIG' don't paint on your door like that, it looks horrible.
+Hoodwigga
09-19-2008, 08:36 PM
no it didnt turn out "alright". its flat out shit.
go basic make it simple use bars. not whatever the fuck that is
ColdBlooded
09-19-2008, 09:34 PM
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00040.jpg
Mr yarbles
09-19-2008, 09:44 PM
no it didnt turn out "alright". its flat out shit.
go basic make it simple use bars. not whatever the fuck that is
Seriously dude, not trying to start nothing but top fucking with every single toy that comes in here Give them some fucking crits at least dude
Seriously what the fuck is happening to bs can't we all just respect each other at least.
Kersh your bars are a little thin
Stug bars and simples man
Gig the structure isn't terrile but use bars to make your eltters
Stop doing your door too
and stop filling stuff in when you don't have an outline color
ColdBlooded
09-19-2008, 09:45 PM
I thought that o was too small, its Kersoh...oh well
+Hoodwigga
09-19-2008, 10:12 PM
Seriously dude, not trying to start nothing but top fucking with every single toy that comes in here Give them some fucking crits at least dude
Seriously what the fuck is happening to bs can't we all just respect each other at least.
i gave him crits. he needs to start over and do shit right. i dont think anyone here got better doing pieces like the ones hes putting up ok?
Mr yarbles
09-19-2008, 11:04 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/vo4aqp.jpg
I know, I need to work on my k and a
dude stick to the books...
that is NOWHERE near good, you're just going to end up regretting painting those throws Anywhere when you get some sense and realize how bad they are... books bro..
Mr yarbles
09-19-2008, 11:16 PM
I have stuck to the books bro I'm working on control and ish right now
I can draw them I just can't paint them very well.
http://i36.tinypic.com/33vc9eh.jpg
S4d3n
09-20-2008, 12:17 AM
i gave him crits. he needs to start over and do shit right. i dont think anyone here got better doing pieces like the ones hes putting up ok?
Can control m8
Hood, howabout you post some of your own shit, I don't think I've seen any of that, just you talkin' shit this whole time.
ColdBlooded
09-20-2008, 12:22 AM
I'm with you on that, if your going to give crits thats fine..If your going to talk people down post something.
Slushi
09-20-2008, 12:24 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3239/2871621026_eed1265798.jpg?v=0
Fucking around on my door
facepalm.jpg
Don't shit where you sleep. As for letters, I'd say the I looks alright
Juicee
09-20-2008, 12:33 AM
facepalm.jpg
Don't shit where you sleep. As for letters, I'd say the I looks alright
no the whole thing looks like shit. gig you need to lay off the paint for a while and work on everything. stick to paper bro.
and Mr Yarbles, i thought your can control would be better O_o
i saw your tags in the big boy forum and those were pretty good
this will sound gay, but me, i practice can control by pretending i have a spray can in my hand and go through the motions of my throwie, piece, tag, or whatever. i dont know if it will help you, but its helped me pretty good. just practice going through the motions. you need that motion seared into your brain.
Mr yarbles
09-20-2008, 12:39 AM
Yeah haha I picked up on the control for tags pretty fast I still do better with marker tags though
The big problem I have is going from little paper throw to big wall throw with paint
Idk
But yeah I'll deff. try that thanks :)
ha dope keane
i feel ya when it comes to shit backgrounds
thursdaynight i did a big fuckin bomb on a container
with sight out the train
imma try to make film it out the train to work agan
but the surface was smooth but the fucking dawn on it made some nasty drips
anyone got experience with dawn? what should i do wear a fuckin towel and dry it first hahaha? i had to crawl under a fence to bomb it and had to walk a fuckin long way
but thats my luv for the bomb:D
Rooftop Resident
09-20-2008, 01:10 AM
hahahah this shit is so funny drunk.
garbage down tha way
09-20-2008, 01:41 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-6.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-5.jpg
bump, nobody said anything!
Sadistic.Child
09-20-2008, 01:42 AM
cause its too ill for them!
busr22
09-20-2008, 01:43 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-6.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h-5.jpg
this is me and HOER* i just changed my name and started simples.
lawlcat
09-20-2008, 01:43 AM
^^ something about the E throws me off. solid piece though. nicely done.
busr22
09-20-2008, 01:43 AM
HOER you online? i didnt know that. im on aim'ers
busr22
09-20-2008, 01:50 AM
this is there too. just a trial.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b97/ryandkc22/Picture004-1-1.jpg
milfhunter
09-20-2008, 01:51 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/2kzet.jpg
Hoer your biggest problem are your letters, there fat and thin bits all over. Soort it outt maaaaaaaate!
mtown
09-20-2008, 11:37 AM
hoer means in dutch whore seriously:D
garbage down tha way
09-20-2008, 12:08 PM
My letters are supposed to be fat and skinny. Theres a pattern to it.
Hoer also sounds out WHORE in *english. imagine that.
S4d3n
09-20-2008, 12:10 PM
My letters are supposed to be fat and skinny. Theres a pattern to it.
Hoer also sounds out WHORE in american. imagine that.
In American? So you speak a different language than english?
garbage down tha way
09-20-2008, 12:15 PM
paint fumes and alcohol turn you into a retard.
Czar One
09-20-2008, 12:15 PM
Yes, English is for brits.
We speaks american cracka.
Sadistic.Child
09-20-2008, 12:17 PM
so you speak retard? i always wondered what they were trying to say
JETPACK!!
09-20-2008, 12:22 PM
dont bother startin to write at your age
this is bullshit, but gig, honestly bro, stick to paper until you've got simples down, hit up a piece of plywood or under a bridge to practice.
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Foto-0021.jpg?t=1221681560
very nice roll
it's dark, but i like the picture
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1420/rasek51al1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
kroc_oner
09-20-2008, 12:27 PM
ya jetpack u shoulda read whati wrote after tht i cleared up wht i meant
JETPACK!!
09-20-2008, 12:29 PM
its cool, i wouldnt have said anything. but i multi-qouted it like.. 4 days ago an never said anything. qouted now an it was still there, so i guess i'd give some some words of encouragment haha.
JETPACK!!
09-20-2008, 12:30 PM
this is bullshit, but gig, honestly bro, stick to paper until you've got simples down, hit up a piece of plywood or under a bridge to practice.
very nice roll
it's dark, but i like the picture
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1420/rasek51al1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
doublepostbump!
Baron
09-20-2008, 12:37 PM
Is that black white and red? Amazing.
00-made-00
09-20-2008, 12:59 PM
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k226/00-made-00/aimr20-9-08.jpg
M killed the flow oh wells.
Rasek- Looking good im glad you like to rock simples aswell man.
Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-20-2008, 02:41 PM
bump rasek aimr hoer
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/politicalxlove/freighy.jpg
Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-20-2008, 05:10 PM
better pic
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3041/2872691895_94cc306e17.jpg?v=0
Mass Appeal
09-20-2008, 07:42 PM
Oh shit man those things in your sig .. they just gave me a mega think back to when i was young .. that program scared the shit outta me ... seriously ... wow ... mega think back.
BigBlueViolence
09-20-2008, 07:59 PM
oblena ikus and crum, that's what's up
mekosbc
09-20-2008, 08:42 PM
yo rasek hot shit... didntn you say ur done wit illegal graff? awhile back??
Slushi
09-20-2008, 08:55 PM
I don't think rasek would say anything that gay
JETPACK!!
09-20-2008, 08:57 PM
thats like a basehead givin up the pipe. i said i was done with posting illegials. but even then, the periodic one just to show the masses im still alive. iunno why everyone thinks i got pinched.
i didnt, there building a case against me an they have half, thats it.
much love, peace
hahahaha sluse
-Wings-
09-20-2008, 10:19 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/100_0176.jpg
I went painting tonight, I know this is really bad but man. I just love the feel of writing something :), If you know what I mean. Also not enough paint, Ill keep that in mind to buy more for the fill next time :P.
And I decent little handstyle on my highschool.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/100_0179.jpg
PS I been taggin 2 months now, take it easy.
kroc_oner
09-20-2008, 10:22 PM
pretty good for 2 months expecially handstyle
Inkr.One
09-20-2008, 10:56 PM
man, don't tag you school. if you want to know why, you will learn when and if you get caught.
i didnt know why people always said it was bad to tag schools until i got caught recently tagging my school.
the school WILL press charges and WILL try everything in their power to expel you even if it is your first offense.
-Wings-
09-21-2008, 01:22 AM
man, don't tag you school. if you want to know why, you will learn when and if you get caught.
i didnt know why people always said it was bad to tag schools until i got caught recently tagging my school.
the school WILL press charges and WILL try everything in their power to expel you even if it is your first offense.
Its not my highschool :P. Its another school in the neighborhood. So I have no worries.
Its not my highschool :P. Its another school in the neighborhood. So I have no worries.
Go read the 'New to Graffiti?' thread. It says NEVER write on schools... might want to keep that in mind.
-Wings-
09-21-2008, 01:45 AM
Go read the 'New to Graffiti?' thread. It says NEVER write on schools... might want to keep that in mind.
Go learn to read, because I just said. Its not my school.
ColdBlooded
09-21-2008, 02:17 AM
You should learn how to type, you said it was your school...now it isn't.....even if it's not schools arent to be painted on period, yours or not..
And I decent little handstyle on my highschool.
PS I been taggin 2 months now, take it easy.
What?
-Wings-
09-21-2008, 10:34 AM
Mis spell. My school is ____, and thats _____. Its just in the area so its my school to somewhat. Even though I wont be going there.
JETPACK!!
09-21-2008, 10:42 AM
what the fuck, dont tell us your school. do you want to get arrested? gotta be smarter if you wanna play the game. now edit your post before someone you dont want to, sees it.
-Wings-
09-21-2008, 11:37 AM
Happy :/?
JETPACK!!
09-21-2008, 12:05 PM
i could care less, but i bet you'll be happier in the long run.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3197/2875165087_bd9f5c0878.jpg?v=0
JETPACK!!
09-21-2008, 12:22 PM
everybody wants to get up gig, but you gotta get your letters down more. before you hit the streets.
thicken the bars, sketch them 100 times and see where your at then. add a 3D or drop shadow. fill the entire thing, grab a second color and do an outline. forcefield too.
get at me with a PM if you ever need a hand or whatever. i like what i see
kroc_oner
09-21-2008, 12:30 PM
i envy him he did aa billboard before me
Edward"Sezer"Hands
09-21-2008, 01:29 PM
seriously teez go bigger
it's pretty big i couldn't reach any higher.:rolleyes:
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