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TASR
10-29-2008, 08:28 PM
lol, baron, i've never seen anything of yours on Bs, whats up with that?
or is it all in the battle forum?

Baron
10-29-2008, 08:36 PM
Lack of camera is one thing. I post pictures but they are few and far between. The only things I take pics of are sketches of battles on other forums and it takes me a while to get a camera for those.

emblems
10-29-2008, 09:49 PM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/4933/272694277419a4f10111ua3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/272694277419a4f10111ua3.jpg/1/w500.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img129/272694277419a4f10111ua3.jpg/1/)

hyloner a toy still

blunttokes
10-29-2008, 11:01 PM
capitalize the L like curl it a bit ya kno..?:S

ColdBlooded
10-29-2008, 11:04 PM
halloween friday!!!
time for pipe bombs
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/P1010014-1.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/gdfghdfgdf.jpg

wackattack
10-30-2008, 03:14 AM
ahahha you little bastard

ColdBlooded
10-30-2008, 09:41 AM
is this who i think it is

osnapizzel
10-30-2008, 10:29 AM
pipe bombs

nice..

emblems
10-30-2008, 10:41 AM
wtf do u want fagit

u wanna battle me or somthin pik the word lets go and paint

opte one
10-30-2008, 12:52 PM
whta are you talkin about emblems ?noone said anything bad about you :S

wackattack
10-30-2008, 01:59 PM
is this who i think it is


if your kerso and im fenzer, then yes, i believe so

ColdBlooded
10-30-2008, 05:26 PM
when are we painting mook boy...

mtown
10-30-2008, 05:34 PM
i smell beef:D

ColdBlooded
10-30-2008, 07:32 PM
emblems shut up your trippin...
sorry for interrupting the mass amount of pictures rolling in btw.

La Coka Nostra
10-31-2008, 10:39 AM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/4933/272694277419a4f10111ua3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/272694277419a4f10111ua3.jpg/1/w500.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img129/272694277419a4f10111ua3.jpg/1/)

hyloner a toy still



H kinda looks like a U, but that throw has serious potential.
pretty good can control too.

work on that handstyle though.

DEAR
10-31-2008, 05:17 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/769/wildstylewallotwum8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/wildstylewallotwum8.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img152/wildstylewallotwum8.jpg/1/)
ughhh i have terrible can control. it was SUPPOSED to look liek this
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3858/lasekwildstylewallmt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/lasekwildstylewallmt2.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img216/lasekwildstylewallmt2.jpg/1/)

really windy out, but i still suck haha. maybe my 6th piece

your can control does blow, your sketch isnt great either.
but i mean ive done my fair share of wacker shit and for ur sixth thing its not that bad
id say go way simpler use bars and go from there
what kind of paint?

Haz-E
10-31-2008, 07:39 PM
hilo dope :D

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3026/2989592283_b504185bf5.jpg?v=0

H3TT1NG3R
10-31-2008, 08:26 PM
your can control does blow, your sketch isnt great either.
but i mean ive done my fair share of wacker shit and for ur sixth thing its not that bad
id say go way simpler use bars and go from there
what kind of paint?

i used rustofor teh piece, and acrylic wif rollers for background, and yeah ik i need alot of practice.

unreal180
10-31-2008, 09:52 PM
lasek
try simplifing your letters ur trying 2 run b4 u can walk by the looks of fings
and insted of painting in the most aukward spots in the pitch black, use a legal or a chill wall wer u can take ur time and make it less crap
keep sketching and shit an u will get there

H3TT1NG3R
10-31-2008, 09:55 PM
i wish we had a legal wall :[. but idk i feel so wierd doing simple bars, cuz liek i started getting good at drawign pieces, then i started paitning, u kno? like im developign a certain style on paper, so its wierd to go back to simples with paint even though it makes sense. but alright i think ill try that.

Baron
10-31-2008, 11:04 PM
Dont ya fucking hate inclines? Your outlines always look wack, the paint doesnt stick like it does on cement bricks and lining/sizeing is always off-skew.

H3TT1NG3R
10-31-2008, 11:09 PM
word. but i really need to focus on my outlines in general, i just do um real quick haha

Baron
10-31-2008, 11:11 PM
Its also because they're so god-damn thin.

H3TT1NG3R
10-31-2008, 11:15 PM
yea i guess so. but i dont wanna use a friggen fat cap.

Baron
10-31-2008, 11:20 PM
Well use something else, looks like you're using a thin.

white
11-01-2008, 11:37 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/769/wildstylewallotwum8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/wildstylewallotwum8.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img152/wildstylewallotwum8.jpg/1/)
ughhh i have terrible can control. it was SUPPOSED to look liek this
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3858/lasekwildstylewallmt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/lasekwildstylewallmt2.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img216/lasekwildstylewallmt2.jpg/1/)

really windy out, but i still suck haha. maybe my 6th piece

nice blackbook of it, peice is nice but the outline is really shaky. better than i can do though props for keepin up.

Baron
11-01-2008, 11:48 AM
I still vote for changing that K

H3TT1NG3R
11-01-2008, 01:06 PM
no I am nor changing my k LOL

Worms
11-01-2008, 09:20 PM
its a chills wall that u painted u should cut back over ur lines u woulda made it so much nicer and no offence but ur forcefeilds shit

H3TT1NG3R
11-01-2008, 09:27 PM
yea ik my forcefields shit. i guess my main thing is to take my time eh? i kinda just try to get it done quick but next time ima go alot simpler and try to take my tiem and go over shit if i need to

Baron
11-01-2008, 09:43 PM
yea ik my forcefields shit. i guess my main thing is to take my time eh? i kinda just try to get it done quick but next time ima go alot simpler, change my K, thicken my force field and try to take my tiem and go over shit if i need to

Fixed.

Speedy
11-01-2008, 09:45 PM
Lasek great structure. Just work on the can control. I REALLY have to give you props though. Besides shitty can control, that piece is pretty identical to the sketch of it. No lie. You even went as far as the striped background. You're dedicated as hell. Just stick with it. Once you get the control you'll be putting out dope pieces.
I painted my friend's bedroom wall today. The corner intimidated the hell out of me but I pulled it off...
http://i38.tinypic.com/2n0qx04.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2liklqd.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/167ms82.jpg
Discontinued Kilz<3

JETPACK!!
11-02-2008, 01:04 PM
http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq123/LewisFarikon/Graffiti/IMG00290.jpg


havent been on this piece in a quick minute.....
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/6623/sspx0021nn9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/sspx0021nn9.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img408/sspx0021nn9.jpg/1/)
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4917/p00136vg0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/p00136vg0.jpg/1/w240.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img66/p00136vg0.jpg/1/)
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9128/p00181jq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/p00181jq3.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img90/p00181jq3.jpg/1/)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/751/sspx0022pe7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/sspx0022pe7.jpg/1/w480.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img529/sspx0022pe7.jpg/1/)


something from serbia....
Can Bones Crew (Came-me and loose)

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6189/camelqm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/camelqm6.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/camelqm6.jpg/1/)

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/3377/camenovowq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/camenovowq8.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img125/camenovowq8.jpg/1/)

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/7457/camedc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/camedc7.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img381/camedc7.jpg/1/)

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5193/photo805dy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/photo805dy5.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/photo805dy5.jpg/1/)

coments???


done in the rain and quickly... none the less its shit
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/027-1.jpg


http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/1017081735.jpg


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3271/2960699390_c5f585845e.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3179/2959858863_599df1628c.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3162/2960698926_3af3897123.jpg?v=0




http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6907/1021081806mp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6105/1021081807apc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dope throwies, much more solid than your pieces, imo.


http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3426/dsc01618vk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


this is so dope, i've always been a fan of your work jers. always a sight for sore eyes in this thread.


http://i464.photobucket.com/albums/rr3/oddones/ZOLAS1.jpg

Illegal Zolas.

nice, id bring the top of the Z out a bit more, define it. although stating that it's illegal makes me dislike you a bit.

and kerso, i didnt bump your shit. but it's all hot baby. keep at it, mad potential. sharp cuts.

ok, so im working from the bottom up. and theres too many pictures to crit them all, cuz i dont know what im criting. but if i bumped it, it has mad potential and/or is mad dope.

peace and keep the work up

ColdBlooded
11-02-2008, 07:24 PM
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00162.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00134.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00074.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00149.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00157.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00160.jpg

H1TBYNUMB3RS
11-02-2008, 08:54 PM
thats pretty fdope cold blood, kinda cool style keep sketchin new stuff
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3029/2997290723_f1e4d8d65f.jpg?v=0

klic
11-02-2008, 09:04 PM
those look pretty good cold blooded, except the colors are too light on the first dht bomb

Haz-E
11-02-2008, 10:20 PM
bump


hilo dope :D

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3026/2989592283_b504185bf5.jpg?v=0

timeless progress
11-03-2008, 03:50 AM
^^not really a fan of the style but atleast there arent a bunch of drips n shit, add a 3d next time
heres my halloween shit, only been actually painting for 6mts, tell me what you think
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1225573398.jpg
the next one is for a website Im on
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1225573131.jpg

ColdBlooded
11-03-2008, 07:13 PM
The second one is better...
lines are to choppy.
next time do it in one straight shot
cut some lines, like the yellow ones in the 3D

Infoe
11-03-2008, 10:16 PM
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/infoe.jpg
Done this today in about 5 minutes, haha..
It looks light but painting it was a bitch because it was almost pitch black in the tunnel..
Hate $2 paint.. Lol

La Coka Nostra
11-03-2008, 10:48 PM
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/DSC00149.jpg




this is dope, but the 3d on the K looks weird to me.
maybe it's just me.

freshsesh
11-04-2008, 12:00 AM
traincar that are in bumfuck nowhere so it reall dark
http://i36.tinypic.com/mrp9nq.jpg
infoe- gotta give you props for bein so clean in pitch black i know how that goes
kerso-liking the yellow blob intruding but not feelin that k

7nationarmy
11-04-2008, 01:29 AM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-3aspx-2.jpg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCtP3V0gacs

-sense-
11-04-2008, 01:43 AM
I havent really had time to creep around here in a while.
These are some flicks from about a month ago.
http://i34.tinypic.com/2d7hmit.jpg
could be better, the sig is pretty ugg but has since progressed from then.

Sizzuurp
11-04-2008, 03:50 PM
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-3aspx-2.jpg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCtP3V0gacs


i never get tired of fresh black and white tots
gg keep it up

Speedy
11-04-2008, 05:25 PM
Lasek great structure. Just work on the can control. I REALLY have to give you props though. Besides shitty can control, that piece is pretty identical to the sketch of it. No lie. You even went as far as the striped background. You're dedicated as hell. Just stick with it. Once you get the control you'll be putting out dope pieces.
I painted my friend's bedroom wall today. The corner intimidated the hell out of me but I pulled it off...
http://i38.tinypic.com/2n0qx04.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2liklqd.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/167ms82.jpg
Discontinued Kilz<3

a crit or 2 would be nice...

mekosbc
11-04-2008, 10:05 PM
infoe your shit is clean....
zack wall-lookz good....desent can control
7nation-lovin the gate rocker

freshsesh
11-05-2008, 03:33 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/10dxyet.jpg
new throwie neet to change up the h tho

La Coka Nostra
11-05-2008, 12:42 PM
i think you need to change up all the letters.
:\

Spark391
11-05-2008, 12:48 PM
Zack - it is decent, but I would never realy want something like that in my room. (no offense)
Sense - nice and simple, just make more of those and you'll better can control.
Sesh - those swirls in the S look wierd, also i suggest makeing the top of the E like the top on the S and that H dosent quite fit in there.. Some of the blue drop shadows are also missing inside the letters (just do the second outline just around that stuff, it looks ugly if the second outline is placed between the letters where should be a shadow, and you'll waste time with it while bombing)

ErrorOner...
11-05-2008, 03:18 PM
I havent really had time to creep around here in a while.
These are some flicks from about a month ago.
http://i34.tinypic.com/2d7hmit.jpg
could be better, the sig is pretty ugg but has since progressed from then.

haha thats right where maoe goes to paint. see the red in the left side?
I knew i seen this spot before!

easer
11-05-2008, 03:47 PM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti083.jpg

Speedy
11-05-2008, 07:20 PM
Zack - it is decent, but I would never realy want something like that in my room. (no offense)
Sense - nice and simple, just make more of those and you'll better can control.
Sesh - those swirls in the S look wierd, also i suggest makeing the top of the E like the top on the S and that H dosent quite fit in there.. Some of the blue drop shadows are also missing inside the letters (just do the second outline just around that stuff, it looks ugly if the second outline is placed between the letters where should be a shadow, and you'll waste time with it while bombing)

None taken. Specify though. Like what's the reason?

orchardhillicetea
11-06-2008, 01:15 AM
that infoe straight letter is fuckin hype,

jester.onest
11-06-2008, 01:22 AM
haha thats right where maoe goes to paint. see the red in the left side?
I knew i seen this spot before!


Lol small world!

La Coka Nostra
11-06-2008, 10:03 PM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti083.jpg



you draw a million times better than you paint.

Stonk
11-07-2008, 03:01 PM
kerso i dont know if someone has already said it or not but there is a kerse and has put in a ton of work so yeah..

the roll down door throw is cool..

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3289/2989777126_e7408e8ab9_o.jpg

Infoe
11-07-2008, 03:10 PM
What did you cap? It looks fresh...

Baron
11-07-2008, 03:11 PM
tride? As in west carolina tride? I love your stuff!

Stonk
11-07-2008, 03:13 PM
What did you cap? It looks fresh...

another tride piece

ColdBlooded
11-07-2008, 08:30 PM
kerso i dont know if someone has already said it or not but there is a kerse and has put in a ton of work so yeah..

the roll down door throw is cool..

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3289/2989777126_e7408e8ab9_o.jpg

yea, and there is a "kerso" in GBAK...
doesn't bother me, i'm well aware.
Just didn't want to look up kerso in the graffiti dictionary to make sure it was free;)

mekosbc
11-08-2008, 05:52 PM
you done f***ed up that wall...........................=[

S4d3n
11-08-2008, 09:44 PM
Character I was tryin' out:
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9726/stcharhp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/stcharhp6.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img45/stcharhp6.jpg/1/)


Big Silver Bomb ~ Rushed it 'cause there were mad people walking by, even in the evening :s
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1561/stsilvlx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/stsilvlx7.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img201/stsilvlx7.jpg/1/)

Quick yellow bomb/piece thing
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/4162/styellowhr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/styellowhr2.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img201/styellowhr2.jpg/1/)



Tride - I think simples should be simple, each letter had a different style in that one.
Easer - What's up with the background? Looks like a farm or something

garbage down tha way
11-09-2008, 12:16 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h.jpg

Mare*
11-09-2008, 08:15 AM
that shit is dope garbage. loving the last one.

Soupkta
11-09-2008, 08:15 AM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r225/JACOBGARDHOUSE/Image43.jpg
this was a quick lil bitch piece i did up in class wat needs work?

Speedy
11-09-2008, 09:10 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h.jpg

I think I saw a piece of yours in jackass 2...? :confused:

garbage down tha way
11-09-2008, 10:17 AM
hahaha whaaaattt@!!!

Speedy
11-09-2008, 10:50 AM
I swear I did. It was either you or the other dude that uses that R. I'm about 70% sure it was you though...

urmomsayshi
11-09-2008, 01:33 PM
soupkta- first of all, this is not the blackbook thread...
also, do u write in 905? cuz there is already a KTA crew here thats made up of amazing writers

Kaiser71
11-09-2008, 04:22 PM
This is my first ever attempt at a bomb....testing out some Montanas.....took two nights since the five-oh chased me and my friend away the first night. I realize the yellow is mad fucked up, I was running out, and didn't have time to fix or outline it.

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/1104081219b.jpg

acereborn
11-09-2008, 04:27 PM
I swear I did. It was either you or the other dude that uses that R. I'm about 70% sure it was you though...


"that R"?

its just a normal R. if somebody used the arial font on a big sign, and you had some friend who wrote in an arial font, would you think that he did the sign? this makes no sense :rolleyes:

TastySesamcrew
11-09-2008, 04:47 PM
Thats dope HOER, haha. Hoer means prostitute in dutch

Speedy
11-09-2008, 07:08 PM
"that R"?

its just a normal R. if somebody used the arial font on a big sign, and you had some friend who wrote in an arial font, would you think that he did the sign? this makes no sense :rolleyes:

No. But I remember there being a big dispute on this forum about one of the 2 biting because their R's are almost identical. It was either Hoer or the other dude I'm talking about that has a piece on the background somewhere in Jackass 2. I say that because I distinctly remember seeing that exact R. But by now I've forgotten what the whole thing said.

garbage down tha way
11-09-2008, 08:53 PM
My R's are fuckin COOL.

whahappen?
11-09-2008, 09:40 PM
Big Silver Bomb ~ Rushed it 'cause there were mad people walking by, even in the evening :s
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1561/stsilvlx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/stsilvlx7.jpg/1/w800.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img201/stsilvlx7.jpg/1/)



oh yea, cause people walk around tunnels and shit all the time

ShIfTeD
11-09-2008, 10:26 PM
hella people walking by huh?

im sure of it, around me...heavily populated areas get buffed VERY quickly :/

HOEr, thats some dope as shit, im really feeling your style bro

this thread makes me sick :p

jester.onest
11-10-2008, 01:19 AM
actually whahappen, there is light on the piece so that indicates that he was near the end of the tunnel. and if it was your only way to get under a tram/train line then i expect lots of people would go down there. xD but, the piece does look pretty rushed and it may be just an excuse... :D

seywhat
11-10-2008, 02:22 PM
[QUOTE=garbage down tha way;1249378]
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhh.jpg
QUOTE]

this shit is wild. you got one of my favorite styles here on BS, for sure

"Riot"
11-10-2008, 04:27 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/paint.jpg

Wick_
11-10-2008, 04:51 PM
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/5002.jpg

aserone1
11-10-2008, 09:21 PM
check ittt

garbage down tha way
11-10-2008, 09:49 PM
this shit is wild. you got one of my favorite styles here on BS, for sure

word up good lookin!

S4d3n
11-10-2008, 10:13 PM
oh yea, cause people walk around tunnels and shit all the time

It's a walking tunnel, there's a busy bridge overhead, and on either side there are residential areas, so instead of making people walk over the bridge, they've created paths that go under it, to the left of the path there is a small stream, I can show you a flick of the underside if you really like.

blaje
11-11-2008, 11:41 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v87/blake5000/l_791b440432b303885dde152044004c-1.jpg
some old shit i got pictures of....
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v87/blake5000/l_e369992e25fd68f18e1efc632b01262e.jpg

DEAR
11-11-2008, 03:37 PM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/885/dscf0829nq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/6528/dscf0832km2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/4936/dscf0833sg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
little bit of shit

scoot
11-11-2008, 05:24 PM
ur style kinda reminds me of a mixture of Near's and Gone's

blaje
11-11-2008, 05:33 PM
Im digging the colors dear

bowchicabowow
11-12-2008, 08:41 PM
ur style kinda reminds me of a mixture of Near's and Gone's
Hey I write NEAR to!

k'n1ve
11-13-2008, 02:25 AM
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSCF0164.jpg

my holloween throw...
any tips advice is kool

"Riot"
11-13-2008, 09:52 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/paint.jpg

bump./

klic
11-13-2008, 10:24 AM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/885/dscf0829nq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/6528/dscf0832km2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/4936/dscf0833sg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
little bit of shit

wait, space5, ekos

are you from halifax?

Black Flag
11-13-2008, 07:57 PM
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSCF0164.jpg

my holloween throw...
any tips advice is kool

I am sure you already know this and are just talking about letter structure, but I will say it anyway. Like just have a cleaner fill and maybe add some 3d or drop shadow on it and your good to go.

garbage down tha way
11-13-2008, 09:53 PM
nahhhhhhhh dont listen to him, scrap the whole thing. No offence, but trust me. Look at some other throwies and shit to get the feel of em. Try and stay with the more roundish bubble shit rather than points. stay basic as possible for now.

k'n1ve
11-14-2008, 03:27 AM
koo... yeah i usually add some 3-d... i had like half a can of black so i just dusted the whole thing for a little effect instead of just leaving it empty.

SitOne
11-14-2008, 03:38 AM
Wtf where is this shit.

DEAR
11-14-2008, 06:20 AM
wait, space5, ekos

are you from halifax?

yes

JETPACK!!
11-14-2008, 10:15 AM
shoulda sent him a PM. now, i know where you live.

old, for talkin
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2149/rasek22sr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

calculating infinity
11-14-2008, 11:52 AM
k-nive that letter structure is way off and your fill is terrible, you should probably just sketch a lot more and paint a lot less for the next three or four months till you have something decent on lock

trash your letter bars are really varying in their thickness and it takes away from it a lot

dear your E-A seems forced

rasek that is the crescent fresh

i found a bucket of black at the wall
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3202/3029395753_b1c2d2f6fe.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/3030211758_10d1d735e5.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3279/3029377161_6a5063170b.jpg?v=0

crats grits

ColdBlooded
11-14-2008, 07:15 PM
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/P1010009-1.jpg
http://i316.photobucket.com/albums/mm333/examzone/meT.jpg

DEAR
11-15-2008, 05:24 PM
shoulda sent him a PM. now, i know where you live.

old, for talkin
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2149/rasek22sr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cool come chill

calculating infinity
11-15-2008, 07:10 PM
k-nive that letter structure is way off and your fill is terrible, you should probably just sketch a lot more and paint a lot less for the next three or four months till you have something decent on lock

trash your letter bars are really varying in their thickness and it takes away from it a lot

dear your E-A seems forced

rasek that is the crescent fresh

i found a bucket of black at the wall
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3202/3029395753_b1c2d2f6fe.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/3030211758_10d1d735e5.jpg?v=0

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3279/3029377161_6a5063170b.jpg?v=0

crats grits
bottom bump

"Riot"
11-16-2008, 11:23 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/train.jpg

sorry if its sloppy but it was a get in get out kinda shit.

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/paint.jpg

kerso. fix the s.
jares.fresh.

"Riot"
11-16-2008, 11:57 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/what.jpg
one more.

Eack
11-16-2008, 02:04 PM
working on my simps
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2005/img0036su4.jpg

mmmburgers
11-16-2008, 04:13 PM
Eack, your simps are okay, but just try to keep all your bars the same size. Then it should look good

I painted this piece with Ironlak paint and i gotta say... ironlak is pretty dope
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/Maloer.jpg

yeah, this piece kinda... turned out whack, my L O E R didnt really turn out the way i wanted them to, but oh well... it was my first time painting in almost 2 months

unsuccsessfull
11-16-2008, 07:22 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2001.jpg

VoyR
11-16-2008, 10:49 PM
Long time no see everyone!

I'm digging that eack. Except for bottom part of the k. seems out of place.

Was going to do more critz but i cant really think of anything to say for anyone else.

Idk if anybody has seen endoptimusKrime on the forum but thats on his wall with Zolas (the peace to the side and under mine). Couldn't fit a voyer in that space so i picked bye. I've been playing around with random letters and liked that B so i tried it on that,not writing it. Just wanted to paint something to work on some control. Still sketching voyers among other stuff.

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/Bye.jpg

I fucked up the 3d hard and that pink to purple fade on the fill didn't come out as nicely as the blue and purple one did but live and learn.

-sense-
11-17-2008, 12:42 AM
those colors really pop.^

ive tried a few diff names comming up
just bumpin some stuff from a whiles back
http://i37.tinypic.com/rtnoyh.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/8xldaa.jpg
a few stylees at a chillspot
http://i37.tinypic.com/hug6fp.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/2jeqwax.jpg
i need to get out more

Lsd
11-17-2008, 02:02 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2001.jpg
Man the colors are soo dope and that booger looking "O" looks gnarl dude, the only thing wrong is that the rest of your letters should have went down to the grass.

H3TT1NG3R
11-17-2008, 04:37 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/28uqkjn.jpg

VoyR
11-17-2008, 05:24 PM
those colors really pop.^

The more i look at that purple to dark blue/purple looking color the more i wonder if i should have just cut it back and refaded. The line seems kind of abrupt.

Sense that first flic is sick!

digging that shit h3tt1ng3r

unsuccsessfull I'd have put a hole in that R. idk why but it doesn't seem to match...(i don't think so anyway)

-sense-
11-17-2008, 10:10 PM
yeah it would of been better off with a smoother transison between the colors, like a grainet effect

JETPACK!!
11-18-2008, 02:41 PM
lasek, fix the K.. its horrendous.

eark, fix the bottom bar on your K. make it the same width as the others. it throws the piece off.

Baron
11-18-2008, 02:45 PM
lasek, fix the K.. its horrendous.

eark, fix the bottom bar on your K. make it the same width as the others. it throws the piece off.

I TOLD YOU!

(to lasek)

Haha, nice to see an even outline, let more of the A show, and keep it up.

Scino & Spank
11-18-2008, 02:46 PM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0128.jpgruff

H3TT1NG3R
11-18-2008, 03:59 PM
ahha thanks for the crits, and yeah ive modded my k sicne

TASR
11-18-2008, 04:20 PM
lord mother that's a nice piece

esco93
11-18-2008, 06:50 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/012.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/l_a111226c524a4f70ba0613268ba573fb.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/0726081748.jpg

Amore
11-19-2008, 01:13 AM
esco them shits be lookin cleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan

soath
11-19-2008, 07:47 AM
some of these guys are considered toy?? how the fuck does that work? some great shit in here until now... sorry.

basically runs from newest to oldest...
http://s409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/?albumview=slideshow

7nationarmy
11-19-2008, 08:21 AM
that shit is preety toy soath :\
this shit im posting is toy..ahaha
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/101_2435.jpg

fonone
11-19-2008, 08:27 AM
ireknnnnnnnnnnnfgngfngdfnfngf

soath
11-19-2008, 08:29 AM
that shit is preety toy soath :\
this shit im posting is toy..ahaha
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/101_2435.jpg

*much better than me. The letter T is hard to write... the "O" is sick. love it, good control as well. i'm gonna keep trying.

I can't believe you guys consider yourself toy, i must really really... :(

i cannot see how these older/better cats can even stomach me... must be my charms ;)

7nationarmy
11-19-2008, 08:36 AM
im sure thats an i and yeh must b ur puppy dogg eyes..ahaha

soath
11-19-2008, 08:41 AM
im sure thats an i and yeh must b ur puppy dogg eyes..ahaha

icko? my bad. T's are still tough for me. like they are so symmetrical and shit. hard to write well. i feel i've been slowly progressing. see anything you like?

i think i'm gonna keep the lowercase A for my throwie... keep switching it up in my tags... write fatter T's and try to incorporate a character into the flair on my H.

7nationarmy
11-19-2008, 08:48 AM
graff is all about time..the longer u write and stay dedicated or interested thee better u will get..

soath
11-19-2008, 08:51 AM
graff is all about time..the longer u write and stay dedicated or interested thee better u will get..

i wanted to write for over 10 yrs... now I'm finally over the 5 or 6 month hump.

thanks yo.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/blocksouter.jpg

rollerfilly... i guess the A and the shitty outer make me retarded. the a is missing a bar of 3d.

militia
11-19-2008, 08:41 PM
my buddys first time painting,


http://i383.photobucket.com/albums/oo275/militia-smak/sone.jpg

mekosbc
11-19-2008, 09:20 PM
tell your buddy to stick to throwies for a while, befor he tries to do simples or burnerz...

hAveK x
11-19-2008, 09:54 PM
Need an opinion on my first time usin spray..
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6610/gomezwall2wz6.png

mekosbc
11-19-2008, 10:16 PM
go a tad bit simpler..3d is off..sum high lights are shakey..shines lookgood...the force feild is toooo thick...keep practicing with paint... and dont say "spray" makes you sound like a giant idiotic crouch fezent toy...lol i hate when ppl say spray sound dumb..

hAveK x
11-19-2008, 10:19 PM
hahah... well thanks for the tips.. and i know some highlights are off and shit but it was my first time usin "paint" haha. just wanted to get some opinions..

Dying to live
11-19-2008, 11:05 PM
gah your first time painting and you paint your room...

H3TT1NG3R
11-20-2008, 03:31 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/icv0gj.jpg
and dotn think i dissed the piece under me, because taht was also me, but i thought it looked liek shit, so i painted over it instantly

BigBlueViolence
11-20-2008, 03:47 PM
I think it'd look a lot better if you bring the line of the A up.

TASR
11-20-2008, 03:48 PM
yeah man, love it. fix the tag tho >.>

H3TT1NG3R
11-20-2008, 03:49 PM
u mena the little line in between the bottom? like so its more like /\ than ∆?

Dose.onek
11-20-2008, 11:41 PM
well i am going painting with some local writers (first time painting with others) on saterday.. we are gonna hit some legal walls at the youth center.. I'm buying some cans tommro with crappy tire $$ haha (i got like $40 im not gonna use on any thing else..) and i racked 6 cans on tuesday and 4 tremclad, 1 krylon short cut today (there awesome for handies! :D )

Stonk
11-20-2008, 11:50 PM
well i am going painting with some local writers (first time painting with others) on saterday.. we are gonna hit some legal walls at the youth center.. I'm buying some cans tommro with crappy tire $$ haha (i got like $40 im not gonna use on any thing else..) and i racked 6 cans on tuesday and 4 tremclad, 1 krylon short cut today (there awesome for handies! :D )

thats really fucking cool dude!!! i actually got some rusto paint today...isn't that cool? o yeah so you write dose? yeah i write revok we should get up sometime.

o and make sure to hold those guys hands too when your painting...and dont forget to tell them all about your paint

Stonk
11-21-2008, 12:15 AM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0128.jpgruff

hmm a little suspect...at least to me

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2137/2399725624_51105aa450.jpg?v=0

Dose.onek
11-21-2008, 01:13 AM
thats really fucking cool dude!!! i actually got some rusto paint today...isn't that cool? o yeah so you write dose? yeah i write revok we should get up sometime.

o and make sure to hold those guys hands too when your painting...and dont forget to tell them all about your paint

=/ maybe you should write D-BAG... your just a little boy sitting at home not painting.. because his mommy doles out the money.. "here billy you can have $4.00.. not even enough for a full-meal-deal"

Stonk
11-21-2008, 11:15 AM
your absolutely right..i've never ever painted..especially anything illegal..but hey i just some new cans!!!!!111!!!

you down for a battle? alright good

MARTYRaz
11-21-2008, 11:32 AM
lmao!!!! at these dudes^^^^

BigBlueViolence
11-21-2008, 12:03 PM
u mena the little line in between the bottom? like so its more like /\ than ∆?
That's exactly what I mean.

La Coka Nostra
11-21-2008, 11:29 PM
hmm a little suspect...at least to me

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2137/2399725624_51105aa450.jpg?v=0


seriously?

Slushi
11-22-2008, 12:18 AM
What a joke.

Mods, come delete this faggot tree

Oh wait its the toy forum. LOL who cares

jester.onest
11-22-2008, 04:53 PM
hmm a little suspect...at least to me

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2137/2399725624_51105aa450.jpg?v=0


Lol he didnt post it as his own work. "hmm a little suspect...at least to me"

Bazer
11-22-2008, 05:01 PM
What a joke.

Mods, come delete this faggot tree

Oh wait its the toy forum. LOL who cares

hahaha... i still read everything dude.. i just.... i dont know man.... this place should like....... i dont ev n know what im trying to say man..... its the toy forum... you come in here and your like... omg -_-

mtown
11-23-2008, 09:02 AM
-_-:p

wider
11-23-2008, 11:09 AM
some of these guys are considered toy?? how the fuck does that work? some great shit in here until now... sorry.

basically runs from newest to oldest...
http://s409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/?albumview=slideshow

looks like you're regressing, it looked "better" at the beginning...

"Riot"
11-23-2008, 04:06 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/poo.jpg
poop.

EST2007
11-24-2008, 08:56 AM
hahaha... i still read everything dude.. i just.... i dont know man.... this place should like....... i dont ev n know what im trying to say man..... its the toy forum... you come in here and your like... omg -_-

rofl mad funny

EST2007
11-24-2008, 09:00 AM
This is my first ever attempt at a bomb....testing out some Montanas.....took two nights since the five-oh chased me and my friend away the first night. I realize the yellow is mad fucked up, I was running out, and didn't have time to fix or outline it.

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/1104081219b.jpg

if ur just starting off, why waste montana? go rack some rusto

ur proportions need work. go simple cuz you need to walk b4 you can run, man. start off black n white before you start using color, it'll help in the long run. it's all about the letters, not the fills and extras.

EST2007
11-24-2008, 09:07 AM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/david_voyer123/Bye.jpg

I fucked up the 3d hard and that pink to purple fade on the fill didn't come out as nicely as the blue and purple one did but live and learn.

ill fades, but the B doesn't look right. what's the that bar on the left?

EST2007
11-24-2008, 09:10 AM
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u15/ease_02/grafiti083.jpg

you need to slow down and simplify ur shit. you don't have the can control for all those extras. work with straight bars for now, can control will come with practice.

EST2007
11-24-2008, 09:12 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/paint.jpg

decent simples, but make ur bars proportional.

EST2007
11-24-2008, 09:15 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hhh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hh.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/h.jpg

ill shit man. imo i think you should fatten up ur bars, but different strokes for different folks

emaf816
11-24-2008, 09:34 AM
looks like you're regressing, it looked "better" at the beginning...



...


"basically runs from newest to oldest...
"


of course it looks better at the beginning.. his newer shit is at the beginning

soath
11-24-2008, 09:53 AM
...


"basically runs from newest to oldest...
"


of course it looks better at the beginning.. his newer shit is at the beginning

maybe that was a small joke... then again some cats don't read too good. :D

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:09 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/5756/002zz2.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:10 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/4245/011gn6.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:18 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/4245/011gn6.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:19 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/3858/009kt2.jpg

dont=play=ketchup
11-24-2008, 10:27 AM
EnLiS
^
UsV
^
NeK

soath
11-24-2008, 01:15 PM
:rolleyes:

i'm not sure... like I'm pretty new around here but your sketches are neither bombs nor pieces. maybe you should post those in the tots blackbooks thread.

*i like some of the letters for sure, way to much going on tho, simplify. try to write one name... no extras, tags, crews, or characters... just for now, just for practice.

Baron
11-24-2008, 02:15 PM
Why do they have graff creators? They are all terrible, every single one of the graff creators are probably the worst thing to base a piece off of. I just don't get it.

soath
11-24-2008, 02:17 PM
Why do they have graff creators? They are all terrible, every single one of the graff creators are probably the worst thing to base a piece off of. I just don't get it.

dolla dolla bill yo. ca$h get the money. commerce.

dan the don
11-24-2008, 03:48 PM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/3858/009kt2.jpg

I get a head ache just lookin at that!!!

*SIZE*
11-24-2008, 08:21 PM
Crits please..

bowchicabowow
11-24-2008, 08:29 PM
SIZE- this thread is for painted stuff only, but I'll ignore that. It looks pretty cool actually, if you could paint that nice and clean I wouldn't mind seeing that on a wall. Fix the top tab thing on the S, as in ditch the overlap part. And the middle tooth on the E is fucked up, make it straight. Nice work.

*SIZE*
11-24-2008, 08:39 PM
Thanks man i agree with everything you said i appreciate the crits..i will make the S more flat on the top and get rid of the overlap on the I ..

timeless progress
11-25-2008, 02:18 AM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/poo.jpg
poop.

work on your straight letters and do basic simple stuff, remember if your doing a word and not a character the main focus should be on the word and its structure so if it looks gross on paper just as an outline then on a wall with color and add ons it will just look worse. not meant as a diss but I figured you would want a lil more than the typical SIMPLES most people would say.

heres one piece I did on the weekend, final outline is total shit cause my skinny got clogged and my hands were so frozen It took me 20 min to warm them up enough to move them
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1227511104.jpg
heres the BB version
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1227340035.jpg

GrimeTime
11-25-2008, 05:04 PM
helpful critz appreciated.
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3504.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3517.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3510.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3512.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3536.jpg
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3528.jpg

urmomsayshi
11-25-2008, 07:06 PM
grimetime- looks good mehn
only thing i could say is that the white highlights on the crab peice look funny to me cuz they a solid line then a faded line over top
juss looks kinda funny
quick q
i know normal paint doesnt go over chrome paint cuz of the different chemicals or some shyt like that
but when u use silver montana, can u use juss regualr montana black overtop, or do u need a special kind?

BigBlueViolence
11-25-2008, 07:58 PM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3528.jpg

Fuckkkk man,
way too dope.

La Coka Nostra
11-25-2008, 08:45 PM
the crab piece is pretty cool.
i cant even read that other one.

BigBlueViolence
11-25-2008, 08:59 PM
I'm pretty sure it says Sezar.
Not really feeling it, though =\

jester.onest
11-26-2008, 12:47 AM
Grimetime=HECTIC.

I love the chaos of it all. I will never run out of things to look at on those sheets of paper.

timeless progress
11-26-2008, 05:06 AM
work on your straight letters and do basic simple stuff, remember if your doing a word and not a character the main focus should be on the word and its structure so if it looks gross on paper just as an outline then on a wall with color and add ons it will just look worse. not meant as a diss but I figured you would want a lil more than the typical SIMPLES most people would say.

heres one piece I did on the weekend, final outline is total shit cause my skinny got clogged and my hands were so frozen It took me 20 min to warm them up enough to move them
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1227511104.jpg
heres the BB version
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m395/geyaboi/1227340035.jpg
bump for crits if possible

soath
11-26-2008, 09:38 AM
bump for crits if possible

i dunno. the U and K are sorta unclear. K looks like an X. the 3D looks better on the drawing... straighter. the lighting is bad but I think the shading turned out. i dunno it's a good, try another one. maybe scrap the U and write jnkr or something... no offense.

Scino & Spank
11-26-2008, 09:53 AM
hmm a little suspect...at least to me

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2137/2399725624_51105aa450.jpg?v=0

What are you talking about?

GrimeTime
11-26-2008, 03:14 PM
I'm pretty sure it says Sezar.
Not really feeling it, though =\

okaaayy..? care to elaborate on that at all?

esco93
11-26-2008, 03:17 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/shdyfifty510/1125081127.jpg

BigBlueViolence
11-26-2008, 04:25 PM
okaaayy..? care to elaborate on that at all?
The letters just seem like vague shapes to me,
and some of the connections come out of nowhere.

I just think you should define your letters a bit more,
and find a place to connect some of the extentions,
instead of just tucking them behind a letter.

Your control is killer though, man.

Stonk
11-26-2008, 05:03 PM
What are you talking about?

what i meant was they looked really similar..not the a so much.

dont=play=ketchup really digging that throw up

junk= first lose the sun background..and second straighten your letters until they look right when you bend them.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01515.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01517.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01543.jpg
just fucking around with addons and what not.. i know its pretty fucked..but my boy burst wanted his piece posted
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01547.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01551.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01546.jpg

GrimeTime
11-26-2008, 11:43 PM
The letters just seem like vague shapes to me,
and some of the connections come out of nowhere.

I just think you should define your letters a bit more,
and find a place to connect some of the extentions,
instead of just tucking them behind a letter.

Your control is killer though, man.

word, its nice to get critz that help me figure out what to work on. thanks dude

<J-one>
11-27-2008, 12:04 AM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/GRAFF/IMG_3528.jpg
propspropspropspropsprops

La Coka Nostra
11-27-2008, 01:56 PM
why dont you post in the right fucking thread?

blunttokes
11-27-2008, 06:15 PM
fucking shit i know was in a busy part of town.
was done at 4pm hammered outta my face crits are god but no need to rag i kno its wack.

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/6324/dscf0964fj2.jpg
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4449/dscf0957zp6.jpg
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/5577/dscf0959tc6.jpg

JETPACK!!
11-27-2008, 06:23 PM
i could be blind.. and still paint better than that. stick to the books

blunttokes
11-27-2008, 06:27 PM
i stick 2 the books more then i paint actually... and imdrunk as shuit righ tnow but haha id love to see u paint blind folded... doutbs ud be able to by urself ...

bustinoffshotties
11-27-2008, 06:31 PM
damn jetpack, you that good. you can paint blind folded?

lets see you on video doing it blind folded.

JETPACK!!
11-27-2008, 06:32 PM
actually, im gonna try that sometime. see if i can or not. work on your flow, and consistency, dont try to one line it. and it looks like your letters are backwards?

blunttokes
11-27-2008, 06:40 PM
thats exactly how its suppose to be.. onelined backwards SE throw... for SEC or SE4

but the 2nd se hollow is the worst ive ever done

Worms
11-27-2008, 07:48 PM
im gona bust a blindfolded burner.. the force is with me

coh508
11-28-2008, 09:51 PM
i was already told i suck but i was also told to come here so here is my first throw up or bomb or blockbuster whatever you want to call ithttp://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?

coh508
11-28-2008, 09:54 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=155&pictureid=1191

joker954
11-28-2008, 10:08 PM
well coh i like the drips
ur styles preety basic though, but its preety hot

coh508
11-29-2008, 12:22 AM
thanks joker what can i do to make it better so its not so basic

Stonk
11-29-2008, 01:36 AM
thanks joker what can i do to make it better so its not so basic

umm first i would say dont listen to that joker guy..you'll here it a thousand times..sketch first..and for a long time before you even begin painting..second you'll here another thousand times is when you sketch just copy the letters off your keyboard.

whosthisguy
11-29-2008, 02:09 AM
coh. sketch more. and SE4 dont do the letters backwards. do them the right way first. i mean there is no right way. but start off simple and legible.

whosthisguy
11-29-2008, 02:10 AM
and TRIDE, your straights are nice. work on your throwie a little bit.take that thing out of the bottom of the d

coh508
11-29-2008, 10:07 AM
thanks everybody

Baron
11-29-2008, 10:12 AM
No problem, Doctor Nick

soath
11-29-2008, 12:52 PM
i don't have any good excuse... but I'll try :rolleyes: it's cold?

my bad.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/mybad.jpg

*started by tagging with an inverted marking can... those suck in ways I never knew. what a waste of money.

unsuccsessfull
11-29-2008, 01:19 PM
rainy days
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2028.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2029.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2033.jpg
didnt finish the 3d on the t cause i didnt want to go over the uy next to me

Subconcious
11-29-2008, 03:56 PM
My first "piece." I'm going back to fix the R and E and to put a shadow cuz I didn't have my color. but seriously, no shit-talking unless you're going to point out actual things to fix.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3187/3068478573_6e8a5f392c.jpg

Each
11-29-2008, 04:08 PM
reor- nice first piece. i dont really think you should do the reflected look unless the whole name is reflected. but samn nice first one. and if i were you i wouldnt have the huge curl off or both the r's
unsuccesful- nice throw. nice letters for the grey piece
Soath- i wouldnt have the h curl go behind itself. good letters. looks kinda like a quick piece, but a good quick one. and yeah, the cold is sometimes an issue.

Subconcious
11-29-2008, 04:15 PM
Thanx bro

soath
11-29-2008, 04:25 PM
...the cold is sometimes an issue.

yeah the cold and the inverted marking can. whoops. I tried to get that up in an hour... sucks, just kept trying different things, and fixing them again and again. sorta a waste of good fill with that shitty outline. wanted the H to match the S and my handstyle but the H is to far away and not thick enough. it's on a foot wide ledge as well so it's weird to paint with your arm extended to your side insted of infront of you... whatever. thanks for the critz. i was expecting much, much, worse. not very straight lines either. is the 3D off?

Each
11-29-2008, 04:28 PM
the 3d isnt really off, but it doesnt look like 3d. it just looks like the outline on the left side got thicker. looks more like a shadow

Subconcious
11-29-2008, 04:29 PM
^True

soath
11-29-2008, 04:30 PM
the 3d isnt really off, but it doesnt look like 3d. it just looks like the outline on the left side got thicker. looks more like a shadow


yeah, you're right.

Each
11-29-2008, 04:34 PM
soath. your piece doesnt look like its in a very heated spot, so just take your time. those spots are essentially for practice, cause there are no pigs there watchin. so next time you hit that spot take some time and maybe plan out a better piece cause you got all day. and yeah. those inverted cans are really only for roads and shit. not pieces

soath
11-29-2008, 06:23 PM
soath. your piece doesnt look like its in a very heated spot, so just take your time. those spots are essentially for practice, cause there are no pigs there watchin. so next time you hit that spot take some time and maybe plan out a better piece cause you got all day. and yeah. those inverted cans are really only for roads and shit. not pieces

yeah I had just got off a 12hr night shift, scrounged up some bottles for money, bought that stupid can... what a bitch. i thought i do a wicked handsteez and build off of it... fuck was i wrong. thanks for the feedback, you're right about the spot and everything.

Baron
11-29-2008, 09:10 PM
Soath, thicken those bars, make the bar sizes proportionate, your 3D is way off, sketch it out for a while next time, take your time all your stuff looks kind of rushed

Unsuccessfull, you fill seems to remain constant but that may just be the wall change in the background, move your H bars a little closer, don't highlight your outlines, just doesn't look right, especially when you already outlined the fill and they are in opposite areas

Subconscious, I'm sorry but your letter structure is terrible, I don't see any bars and all of your letters are interconnected, your extensions seem meaningless, they seem to produce out of nothing, I had the same problem when I first started out and it is difficult to explain but to keep it short, don't use extension until you have the bare-bone basics down. Color choice is weak too. Sorry I know it sounds like candyland but you have to go back to 'start'. Believe me I thought the same thing, my old stuff looked just like that and I thought it was the shit but because I never went back the the basic bars I practically wasted 6-7 months.

Stonk
11-30-2008, 02:03 AM
reor make those letters way straighter..you'll learn how to bend them later..also dont woryry about your fill to much right now.

soath make you letters the same size..and lose the little swoop thing.

didn't really get to many critz on the last shit i posted but whatever....heres more

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01572.jpg?t=1228032108
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01590.jpg?t=1228032141 tried some weird shit..not quite sure how im feeling about it

fonone
11-30-2008, 10:06 AM
dope^, maybe bring that T in closer.

reor... your can control is better than mine haha, pretty decent for a first piece.. the letters however need alot of work maybe sketch up a few straight letters

soath
11-30-2008, 10:53 AM
dope^...

yeah i love that flick too. it has great composition.

Each
11-30-2008, 12:57 PM
i really like that piece tride, but i dunno about the bubbley stuff. i almost think it would have looked cooler with just straight lines. very nice piece though. and nice throw on the bridge too

unsuccsessfull
11-30-2008, 06:31 PM
whack, and about 3-4 weeks old haha.
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2039.jpg
eww

Each
11-30-2008, 06:40 PM
i think its pretty damn fresh. the bottom of the e doesnt fit the top of it though

Baron
11-30-2008, 06:59 PM
E and N are very straight while the Z and R are fluid

emaf816
11-30-2008, 07:01 PM
tride you got some relic e's

Baron
11-30-2008, 07:45 PM
Lots of people use E's like that, its a simple E, even I use E's similar to that.

La Coka Nostra
11-30-2008, 09:35 PM
diggin it.

Name the Fresh
12-01-2008, 11:35 AM
http://cs531.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/57235319/x_a3acd8d2.jpg
just ..

Name the Fresh
12-01-2008, 11:40 AM
http://cs531.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/57235319/x_4f0bd708.jpg

Anyone
12-01-2008, 11:53 AM
http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr77/RUNE_GRAF/NC%20Graf/915pt3RUNE.jpg
http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr77/RUNE_GRAF/NC%20Graf/cbot-tester2-1.jpglookin for some crits

soath
12-01-2008, 05:25 PM
http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr77/RUNE_GRAF/NC%20Graf/915pt3RUNE.jpg
http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr77/RUNE_GRAF/NC%20Graf/cbot-tester2-1.jpglookin for some crits

i like. but have to point out that the E looks like your looking up at a mans gooch. anyone else see that?


I dislike the CBOT but love the RUNE.

Koine
12-01-2008, 06:11 PM
i like. but have to point out that the E looks like your looking up at a mans gooch. anyone else see that?


I dislike the CBOT but love the RUNE.

hahaha yah i see it

Duped
12-01-2008, 11:34 PM
i like. but have to point out that the E looks like your looking up at a mans gooch. anyone else see that?


I dislike the CBOT but love the RUNE.

lol i didnt see it, then i read this... then i saw it

Duped
12-01-2008, 11:36 PM
http://cs531.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/57235319/x_4f0bd708.jpg
the bars of the T and S are reaaal wack... is it cause u have bad can control, or cause you need to sketch more? probably both..

SOAR into outer SPACE
12-02-2008, 12:21 AM
tride, i'm really liking that shit, can control is good, 3d is on point, reminds me of some augor shit.
zoner, get rid of that negative space between the E and the R. also i think the O is a little silly looking, and the letters are all a different style maybe try and use a similiar style throughout the whole piece.
anyone, i think your can control is pretty good but you need to work a bit more on letters. keep sketching.

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/2971/droneboulderwallcopyfu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/droneboulderwallcopyfu9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img46/droneboulderwallcopyfu9.jpg/1/)

this is my 5th or 6th painted piece, looking for directions on where to head from here.

jester.onest
12-02-2008, 12:34 AM
prone thats nice. the bars are good.
make the bottom stork of the P longer though.

(:

Anyone
12-02-2008, 09:30 AM
HAHA...I totally see that shit now...WHat about the CBOT idn't doin it??

SoBmoB
12-02-2008, 10:03 AM
http://photos-h.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_5003655_8238.jpg
http://photos-g.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_5003654_7888.jpg
http://photos-f.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_5003653_7556.jpg
http://photos-e.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_5003652_7204.jpg
http://photos-d.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_5003651_6844.jpg
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_4926661_9160.jpg
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_4967709_5082.jpg
http://photos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v466/42/4/740320503/n740320503_4975195_4404.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r168/Dont_Front1/100_0737.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r168/Dont_Front1/100_0734.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r168/Dont_Front1/100_0731.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r168/Dont_Front1/100_0730.jpg
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w228/Hofmeyr/IMG_2797.jpg
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w228/Hofmeyr/IMG_2800.jpg

the_dude_cares_man
12-02-2008, 10:53 AM
ummm why the fuck did you steal those from the victoria forum...

SoBmoB
12-02-2008, 11:33 AM
ZOMG STOLEN FLICKS!

/WRISTS

Because they need to be posted here, not in the vic thread.

GETRAD
12-02-2008, 02:28 PM
coh- its a nice start, but id never paint that
blunttokes- idk man i woulndt even say thats a good sketch, keep to the books and practice

i suck at trying new styles but i need to:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo67.jpg

howmuch
12-02-2008, 04:59 PM
HAHAHAHAHA sobmob <3 fucking priceless

StickyEnvelopes
12-02-2008, 06:57 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo314/Spermone/100_2510.jpg

The black seems to drip for an unknown reason... it seems latex paint doesnt play well with others...

urmomsayshi
12-02-2008, 07:08 PM
stickyenvelopes- yea the latex is pretty chyt, but it looks like u didnt wait for the fill to dry cuz the paint looks like it mixed in some spots

did this in my friends pool
does anyone know if the cold weather makes paint come out more watery? btw, i used some montanas

MontanaPainter
12-02-2008, 07:12 PM
should i post here
yea i went over myself!
had to freestyle them both
i hate freestylin
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020772.jpg
pitch blk out
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020773.jpg
didnt get to finish >:(

should i post these here or in the big boys forum?

StickyEnvelopes
12-02-2008, 07:13 PM
stickyenvelopes- yea the latex is pretty chyt, but it looks like u didnt wait for the fill to dry cuz the paint looks like it mixed in some spots

did this in my friends pool
does anyone know if the cold weather makes paint come out more watery? btw, i used some montanas

The paint looks mixed cus the outline is off cus the side of the thing was dark as fuck n the moon was blocked so the only light i had was my cellphone :( and i did wait.. i took a piss then outlined :P

kroc_oner
12-02-2008, 07:48 PM
keep it here rays
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0064-2.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0037-2.jpg
i suckzorz at painting

JETPACK!!
12-02-2008, 07:51 PM
rays, leave your comfort zone man. try stupid wild shit. keep it personal if you really dislike it at first. but thats the only way your shits gonna get any flava

JETPACK!!
12-02-2008, 08:05 PM
i don't have any good excuse... but I'll try :rolleyes: it's cold?

my bad.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/mybad.jpg

*started by tagging with an inverted marking can... those suck in ways I never knew. what a waste of money.

i dont like the swirls, it could look good if it was done better, but until you get the fluent consistant lines and curves i would keep it simpler like the rest of your letters.

and dont 'my bad' yourself over an iffy piece. it happens to everyone. suck it up and go paint another.


My first "piece." I'm going back to fix the R and E and to put a shadow cuz I didn't have my color. but seriously, no shit-talking unless you're going to point out actual things to fix.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3187/3068478573_6e8a5f392c.jpg

dont make your letters so jagged, it really takes away from the letter structure. dont connect them at the bottom, at least so poorly. clean though, very clean for a first piece. get the structure down and good things may come out of it.


reor make those letters way straighter..you'll learn how to bend them later..also dont woryry about your fill to much right now.

soath make you letters the same size..and lose the little swoop thing.

didn't really get to many critz on the last shit i posted but whatever....heres more

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01572.jpg?t=1228032108
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01590.jpg?t=1228032141 tried some weird shit..not quite sure how im feeling about it

nice spot, i like the concept of hte bubbles. but it could be done better. id work on your bubbles and drips then re-try it and it'll prolly look fresh


The black seems to drip for an unknown reason... it seems latex paint doesnt play well with others...

dont use latex spraypaint. its horrible and it can be washed with soap and water. always use oil based.

ShitzEasy
12-02-2008, 09:04 PM
kroc oner man they are pretty good but some a your lines are a little bent where they arent supposed to be so work on that