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JETPACK!!
12-02-2008, 09:05 PM
i don't have any good excuse... but I'll try :rolleyes: it's cold?

my bad.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/mybad.jpg

*started by tagging with an inverted marking can... those suck in ways I never knew. what a waste of money.

i dont like the swirls, it could look good if it was done better, but until you get the fluent consistant lines and curves i would keep it simpler like the rest of your letters.

and dont 'my bad' yourself over an iffy piece. it happens to everyone. suck it up and go paint another.


My first "piece." I'm going back to fix the R and E and to put a shadow cuz I didn't have my color. but seriously, no shit-talking unless you're going to point out actual things to fix.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3187/3068478573_6e8a5f392c.jpg

dont make your letters so jagged, it really takes away from the letter structure. dont connect them at the bottom, at least so poorly. clean though, very clean for a first piece. get the structure down and good things may come out of it.


reor make those letters way straighter..you'll learn how to bend them later..also dont woryry about your fill to much right now.

soath make you letters the same size..and lose the little swoop thing.

didn't really get to many critz on the last shit i posted but whatever....heres more

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01572.jpg?t=1228032108
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01590.jpg?t=1228032141 tried some weird shit..not quite sure how im feeling about it

nice spot, i like the concept of hte bubbles. but it could be done better. id work on your bubbles and drips then re-try it and it'll prolly look fresh


The black seems to drip for an unknown reason... it seems latex paint doesnt play well with others...

dont use latex spraypaint. its horrible and it can be washed with soap and water. always use oil based.

ShitzEasy
12-02-2008, 10:04 PM
kroc oner man they are pretty good but some a your lines are a little bent where they arent supposed to be so work on that

Snew
12-03-2008, 12:55 AM
ray, is that that john deere green color that rusto is makin now? that shit is fire..

aleph8890
12-03-2008, 04:24 PM
Prone and Rune, both very dope... the flow is simple but it looks really clean. Rune I dig the glares but I think theres too many IMO... Prone very fresh


http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9532/img0269lb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/img0269lb7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img267/img0269lb7.jpg/1/)

One of two new pieces... Dripped a bunch cuz I have bad can control and cant judge how long to stay in the same place too well yet...
Crits Please?

H3TT1NG3R
12-03-2008, 04:42 PM
^3d that shit, good sarting otu simpel tho, try cap letters it mught look beter

librelikespie
12-03-2008, 10:50 PM
-_-

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02902.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02903.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02905.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02906.jpg

La Coka Nostra
12-04-2008, 07:11 AM
so dope.

Anyone
12-04-2008, 11:50 AM
yeah, I kinda went crazy wit them shits...I'ma prolly do somethin up tomm an see what happens..thanks for tha crits

Dying to live
12-04-2008, 02:48 PM
should i post here
yea i went over myself!
had to freestyle them both
i hate freestylin
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020772.jpg
pitch blk out
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020773.jpg
didnt get to finish >:(

should i post these here or in the big boys forum?
i really don't know how people can have 2k posts on a graffiti forum and still not not if their toy or not.keep posting here.

ColdBlooded
12-04-2008, 07:17 PM
shits dead now.....
meh, blame it on the snow I guess.
bomer, quit posting my boy deone in here
no pictures but I got some videos...

http://www.youtube.com/user/kerso1er

Dying to live
12-06-2008, 12:20 AM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/dfgggdf.png

BigBlueViolence
12-06-2008, 01:01 AM
That shit's dope, Akel,
your A looks sort of smushed, though

matdr
12-06-2008, 04:27 AM
hey critiques welcome been at it for about 3 months

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a186/onejollycat/S5000139.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a186/onejollycat/S5000140.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a186/onejollycat/S5000135.jpg

Dying to live
12-06-2008, 04:58 AM
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Image2606.jpg
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Image2607.jpg
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Image2608.jpg
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/dfgggdf.png
missed a bit in the photo chain but ah well lol

numberonestunna
12-06-2008, 09:55 AM
Heres a project me and my crew did for halloween. Scooby!!
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledgfd.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledtre.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_0eac8ccee30994ceacbc16ecf56f4189.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_22272f4976137870df0df678a366e329.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitled.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_52c144aeb3533ed97a3400f719f4a4b1.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_b3602ede1ed91c44275468175d68b2bb.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledhd.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_430381699f94807f1ad7484e1349b884.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledgdf.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_8b5b6469eee2151cc19e2e03fe4094a9.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_5d581057e419e9d179ef9e4902b03697.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledrtew.jpg

aleph8890
12-06-2008, 05:15 PM
My last bomb as AWOL

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/9439/awolfi5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/awolfi5.jpg/1/w453.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img399/awolfi5.jpg/1/)

SafeWay
12-07-2008, 12:02 AM
crits?:)

Speak905
12-07-2008, 12:27 AM
thats fresh

jester.onest
12-07-2008, 12:46 AM
Heres a project me and my crew did for halloween. Scooby!!
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledgfd.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledtre.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_0eac8ccee30994ceacbc16ecf56f4189.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_22272f4976137870df0df678a366e329.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitled.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_52c144aeb3533ed97a3400f719f4a4b1.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_b3602ede1ed91c44275468175d68b2bb.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledhd.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_430381699f94807f1ad7484e1349b884.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledgdf.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_8b5b6469eee2151cc19e2e03fe4094a9.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_5d581057e419e9d179ef9e4902b03697.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/untitledrtew.jpg


YEAAA BOOIIIY.

Thats some nice stuff there.


Sick skatepark too.

klic
12-07-2008, 10:37 AM
shits dead now.....
meh, blame it on the snow I guess.
bomer, quit posting my boy deone in here
no pictures but I got some videos...

http://www.youtube.com/user/kerso1er

you know the lca crew!? above inspired me to start writing

"Riot"
12-07-2008, 09:22 PM
no homo.

exitus
12-07-2008, 10:27 PM
crits?:)

best first post eveh lol
thats dope if its actualy yours lol

seywhat
12-08-2008, 01:00 AM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/DSC00860.jpg
first painted piece in like 6 months, i know my can control needs mad work

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/l_b29344ba9e4b4990979f1a162e5a8d47.jpg
my boy erks
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/l_80c9bdb98c234232801800d3e830cb3b.jpg
my boy absol

thanks to Prime 8up for the wall

SafeWay
12-08-2008, 01:32 AM
best first post eveh lol
thats dope if its actualy yours lol
heh yeah im new, uhm extremely new haha
and you think so?
yeah its mine, i know i still need a lot of work
but thanks man

Worms
12-08-2008, 01:38 AM
dont get to happy your cantrol is alright but your colouring covors up the lack of letter structure

jester.onest
12-08-2008, 01:54 AM
Seywhat your one is probably the best. You own your mates. Good work at sticking to simples. Your E could be worked on a bit though.

aspen1
12-08-2008, 12:38 PM
http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-space/album.php?do=editpictures&albumid=21&pictureids[]=143

go there and look at the piece i did.

amuin-gcs
12-08-2008, 06:21 PM
http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-space/album.php?do=editpictures&albumid=21&pictureids[]=143

go there and look at the piece i did.


what the fuck dude. i havent heard from ur ass in a long time an i come on here to see if any shit talkin is goin on an i come across you. ha. fuckin bitch. hit me up with ur number... aw yeah who dropped you in FUE. u still pushin gcsgayers? i heard that rawk dropped lane in to that shit. hahaha.
NFK.

MUSEone
12-08-2008, 06:34 PM
None of us give a shit about you having beef with that kid so do it in a pm instead of the largest font on here...
























Seriously.

Fluffy Bunnies
12-08-2008, 07:22 PM
lawl beef

in the park
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/IMG00073.jpg

BigBlueViolence
12-08-2008, 10:04 PM
What is that?
An I?

ColdBlooded
12-08-2008, 10:27 PM
what the fuck dude. i havent heard from ur ass in a long time an i come on here to see if any shit talkin is goin on an i come across you. ha. fuckin bitch. hit me up with ur number... aw yeah who dropped you in FUE. u still pushin gcsgayers? i heard that rawk dropped lane in to that shit. hahaha.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=7]NFK.

Seriously, get this shit out of here...
You aren't impressing anyone.

SafeWay
12-08-2008, 11:15 PM
dont get to happy your cantrol is alright but your colouring covors up the lack of letter structure

yeah my fill in is definitely what i need to work on the most, actually i just need to work on everything right? haha w.e its chill

Infoe
12-08-2008, 11:42 PM
keep it here rays
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0064-2.jpg
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/DSCF0037-2.jpg
i suckzorz at painting

Throwup is cool dude, but fix up the 'I'. I thought you were writing KET!
Once your can control gets better I can see your pieces going somewhere

jersOneTIC
12-09-2008, 12:42 AM
a freestyle...didn't have enough room.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5984/dsc02139vu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 12:58 AM
Seriously, get this shit out of here...
You aren't impressing anyone.

haha. fuuuuuuck you hoe. I DONT GIVE A FUCK. impress a bunch of fuckin kids on the computer, fuck you all! ur all killing what graf use to be. BITCH!
No1 Fuckin Kares.
fuck your life.

MUSEone
12-09-2008, 07:22 AM
Ive looked at your shit and your shits noting to look up to either.

Not saying im better, just throwing it out to you that there are many people better with half the ego you have.

aspen1
12-09-2008, 01:19 PM
hahaha alright with the beef..... can i just get some crits?

Bink1
12-09-2008, 02:15 PM
a freestyle...didn't have enough room.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5984/dsc02139vu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


dope

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 04:56 PM
Ive looked at your shit and your shits noting to look up to either.

Not saying im better, just throwing it out to you that there are many people better with half the ego you have.

ego.....
your a fag dude, theres more to be a toy then just having wack letters. and thats why ur all toys. u dudes dont know shit. ask aspen. cezr. & any one else from my citythats on this site. i dont have an ego. im just here piss fags off like you an this punk name lane from faggot ass yfs crew.

MUSEone
12-09-2008, 05:00 PM
O yes, im gay cause im still toy. Srry. -_-

Only toys like your bitch ass, beef over the fucking net with other crews.

About 98% of your posts are straight beef. Get the fuck over yourself kid. Seriously.

And yea, you have an ego, all your posts are like "O YEA YOUR A FUCKING TOY ASS BITCH BLAH DE FUCKING BLAH! IM THE SHIT! FUCK YFS! FUCK EVERYONE! "

Olick
12-09-2008, 05:05 PM
and he talks in big ass red font....





i open the page n thats all i see:D

Baron
12-09-2008, 05:06 PM
Amuin, you do realize you're posting in a toy thread right?

P.S. Learn some new verbs

remos
12-09-2008, 05:11 PM
amuin is one cool kid, he talks with big letters thinking hes tougher.
he's probly a 30 year old burger king cashier living in his moms basement watching star trek bloopers

faggot

Olick
12-09-2008, 05:11 PM
just because you use words like fuck, and shit, and toy ass, and gay.

doesnt mean ur cool

i imagine him to be 5feet short and where tripple XXMedium shirts with dickie shorts and socks rolled up to the top with a shaved head named choco holmes. age 14


and yeah hahaha its funny hes beefing in a toy thread.

Zase
12-09-2008, 09:27 PM
leftover piece

and yes i steal dumpsters thats the hype where im from
http://i38.tinypic.com/j5w9kp.jpg

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 09:27 PM
O yes, im gay cause im still toy. Srry. -_-

Only toys like your bitch ass, beef over the fucking net with other crews.

About 98% of your posts are straight beef. Get the fuck over yourself kid. Seriously.

And yea, you have an ego, all your posts are like "O YEA YOUR A FUCKING TOY ASS BITCH BLAH DE FUCKING BLAH! IM THE SHIT! FUCK YFS! FUCK EVERYONE! "

hahahaha funny. lol its the net bro!. but for real i bet ur another toy riding on cezr's nuts. ask him foo. an the beef i have with yfs isnt on the computer. we're from the same city bitch. but yeah right FUCK EVERY ONE! haha

Zase
12-09-2008, 09:31 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/zo9v0x.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/29475ue.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2i0yzjt.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2yxnl01.jpg
sloppy crap

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 09:33 PM
Fuck you! Fuck your mom!
You aint shit you suburban wanna be graffiti writer,
your brother aint shit,
the people you know aint shit,
your emo cloths aint shit,
your shit talkin aint shit,
your letters aint shit,
your parents money aint shit,
your "give me some crits" asking ass aint shit.

Fuck what you think. Lol
im just havin fun :)

faggots!

MUSEone
12-09-2008, 10:03 PM
hahahaha funny. lol its the net bro!. but for real i bet ur another toy riding on cezr's nuts. ask him foo. an the beef i have with yfs isnt on the computer. we're from the same city bitch. but yeah right FUCK EVERY ONE! haha

I dont even know who Cezr is. Good try though.

And yea, its on the computer to, ive seen your posts, plus, its in your own signature there wise ass.

You remind me of this kid that used to talk shit a friend of mine all throughout high school, all this "watd you say bitch?" "your a fucking pussy" "suck my dick faggot" and the "im the fucking shit" attitude. all that kind of shit would come outta his mouth to him on the daily till my friend sick of it, the kid said half a sentence and got knocked on his fucking ass, blacked the fuck out for 10 min.

I bet your one of those kids in real life, you'll dish it but ya get pissed when people say shit back.

And if the above post is about me, your wrong in many places...

1.dont live in the suburbs
2.dont have a brother
3.probably the farthest thing from emo

and my favorite line "your shit talkin aint shit"

Practice what you preach. Hypocrite much? I do believe so..



Anyways, Zase, the first and second flix on the second post are my favs. although i do like how in the first post, the Z looks a 2.

Good shit. Keep it up mane.

Olick
12-09-2008, 10:19 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/zo9v0x.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/29475ue.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2i0yzjt.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/2yxnl01.jpg
sloppy crap

i like the bottum one. i think it would have look better with a smaller cap though. u kno..more detail lol

Olick
12-09-2008, 10:21 PM
Fuck you! Fuck your mom!
You aint shit you suburban wanna be graffiti writer,
your brother aint shit,
the people you know aint shit,
your emo cloths aint shit,
your shit talkin aint shit,
your letters aint shit,
your parents money aint shit,
your "give me some crits" asking ass aint shit.

Fuck what you think. Lol
im just havin fun :)

faggots!


omg im hurt. a guy on the internet is talking shit using word enhancers.

actually. man to man.

why are you posting in the toy forum?

u knol...ur so great n all.

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 10:23 PM
I dont even know who Cezr is. Good try though.

And yea, its on the computer to, ive seen your posts, plus, its in your own signature there wise ass.

You remind me of this kid that used to talk shit a friend of mine all throughout high school, all this "watd you say bitch?" "your a fucking pussy" "suck my dick faggot" and the "im the fucking shit" attitude. all that kind of shit would come outta his mouth to him on the daily till my friend sick of it, the kid said half a sentence and got knocked on his fucking ass, blacked the fuck out for 10 min.

I bet your one of those kids in real life, you'll dish it but ya get pissed when people say shit back.

And if the above post is about me, your wrong in many places...

1.dont live in the suburbs
2.dont have a brother
3.probably the farthest thing from emo

and my favorite line "your shit talkin aint shit"

Practice what you preach. Hypocrite much? I do believe so..



Anyways, Zase, the first and second flix on the second post are my favs. although i do like how in the first post, the Z looks a 2.

Good shit. Keep it up mane.

oooooooooooh. you got me ALL FIGURED OUT. good job. BUT i never been knocked. i dont have any TUDE about me being a bad ass writer, i know how good i am an not. i know i suck ass. but im better then you :P and im poor, i dont preach, ur still a bitch. haha. i bet ur getting all worked up over the computer sitting there thinkin ur the shit all pissed off like a lil cow girl. but u cant do shit. i can say whatever the fuck i want.
wont care if i get banned. OOOOH NO THEY BANNED MY COOL GRAFFITI ACCOUNT :( haha what ever. how often do u get on here? i bet u get on EVERY DAY an check it every half hour for "CRITS" haha.
ur shit talkin still aint shit.

my big red letters r cool arent they :)

Olick
12-09-2008, 10:34 PM
nah just annoying.

if ur so godly like you claim. and say were nothing but online graff wannabes.

then wtf are you doing on this forum? shouldnt u be out "gettin up" like train\

oh and man. if u could read. youll realize no one here really talked shit to you. its only you up in ur high n mighty chair.

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 10:49 PM
nah just annoying.

if ur so godly like you claim. and say were nothing but online graff wannabes.

then wtf are you doing on this forum? shouldnt u be out "gettin up" like train\

oh and man. if u could read. youll realize no one here really talked shit to you. its only you up in ur high n mighty chair.

but Mr. Yourright, my chair is broke....an im on this forum havin some fun. i gotta do something while im stuck at this house. aw yeah tahnks for calling godly :P haha. ur stupid. ignit stignit stupid bitch. oh yeah IM SORY mR. BOSS SIR, ILL GO CLEAN OUT YOR TOY BOX RIGHT AWAY MR. SIR

Olick
12-09-2008, 10:54 PM
yay im beefing online!

well in todays society. we call your kind shittalker.

ahhh. a rare breed. usually fearfull when in safety but extremly shy around real human contact. i wonder why ur not out tagging when ur stuck at home. its obvious u just beat ur mother whenever u want.

btw is that you in the pic?

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 11:01 PM
yay im beefing online!

well in todays society. we call your kind shittalker.

ahhh. a rare breed. usually fearfull when in safety but extremly shy around real human contact. i wonder why ur not out tagging when ur stuck at home. its obvious u just beat ur mother whenever u want.

btw is that you in the pic?


im not at my house. but thanks for hurting my feelings, im not shy at all. wonder how u figured i am? i dont beat my mom. her boyfriend does that. yeah it is me. thats my gangsta gangster hardcore dont fuck with me picture. haha
this is the part where u diss me holding a gun an call it fake, or how i look like a mexican. lol lets see what u got..

Olick
12-09-2008, 11:04 PM
nah i was gonna say pull the trigger, but nice try though thanks for playing.

wait. so ur not at ur house.
but ur talking shit online.

then wtf are you doin? i figure if u have the time post on a forum while ur not at home then dam u need something better to do.

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 11:13 PM
nah i was gonna say pull the trigger, but nice try though thanks for playing.

wait. so ur not at ur house.
but ur talking shit online.

then wtf are you doin? i figure if u have the time post on a forum while ur not at home then dam u need something better to do.


but if i pull the trigger i cant piss ppl off..... :p
there is nothing better to do. but thanks for letting me share my pain with you. i really think alot of it. so like what the fuck do you do on this site. i dont see any posts of ur flciks. just a bunch of bull shit talk from you. FUCK GRAFFITI. keep it as small as possible.
oh if ur as down an hardcore as ur making ur self look ur more then welcome to shoot me in the head. i live in rapid city south dakota. ill be waiting...

Olick
12-09-2008, 11:20 PM
aww shit we got a comedian.

1. ur not pissing anyone off. theres a difference between annoying and anger. were more amused by you.

2. ur so hardcore why dont you should urself ull get so popular with ur "homies"

3. i dont post pictures in the toy forum. actually i dont post pictures at all. look in the tools n tips thread and youll my posts.

4. i have the same question for you " i dont see any posts of ur flciks. just a bunch of bull shit talk from you." hey look, u just contradicted ur self.

5. how am i making myself hardcore? please. explain. im not gonna defend it. im straight up asking when have i said i was hardcore?

6. pussys use weapons. u should kno that. guns just mean u cant fight for a man and need a chunk of metal to defend you.

7. do you really think going "hey bitch heres my adress come and get me if you want" do you think people would actually do it? u kno. maybe u wanna be hardcore. shit i can do that to. fuck, u wanna talk shit say it to my face in sandiego california.

there. i said it. am i hardcore?

amuin-gcs
12-09-2008, 11:31 PM
aww shit we got a comedian.

1. ur not pissing anyone off. theres a difference between annoying and anger. were more amused by you.

2. ur so hardcore why dont you should urself ull get so popular with ur "homies"

3. i dont post pictures in the toy forum. actually i dont post pictures at all. look in the tools n tips thread and youll my posts.

4. i have the same question for you " i dont see any posts of ur flciks. just a bunch of bull shit talk from you." hey look, u just contradicted ur self.

5. how am i making myself hardcore? please. explain. im not gonna defend it. im straight up asking when have i said i was hardcore?

6. pussys use weapons. u should kno that. guns just mean u cant fight for a man and need a chunk of metal to defend you.

7. do you really think going "hey bitch heres my adress come and get me if you want" do you think people would actually do it? u kno. maybe u wanna be hardcore. shit i can do that to. fuck, u wanna talk shit say it to my face in sandiego california.

there. i said it. am i hardcore?


ur lame. fuck yeah ur hard core. i dont wanna fuck with u no more man. scared the shit outta me!! for REAL! no i dont NEED a gun, but they sure r fun. its a world gone mad.
but ur a scumbag... ill be back tmrow to talk more shit.

Olick
12-09-2008, 11:33 PM
aw man. im sorry u thought im hardcore. i cant handle myself u kno?

and what happend to the red font? u dont sound like ur pmsing.

Zase
12-10-2008, 06:41 AM
hahah word i only had a molotow 600 and the rough 500 black they where not ment for small stuff

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 04:26 PM
aye yo! FUCK MUSE!
FUCK OLICK!
AND FUCK ZAVE! he's dope..
im back bitchs!! what the fuck you chumps gonna do. get off the nuts of the writer your biting an get ur own shit down! swagger jackin mother fuckers!

Olick
12-10-2008, 04:30 PM
ur the one whos talking shit. remember? u go outside and use paint for once. why dont u put us in ur sig? u seem like you want the whole internet to kno GCS YFS are better then you.

i mean...u are posting in the toy forum. what the matter? ur shit aint god enough.


pink now?

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 04:41 PM
ur the one whos talking shit. remember? u go outside and use paint for once. why dont u put us in ur sig? u seem like you want the whole internet to kno GCS YFS are better then you.

i mean...u are posting in the toy forum. what the matter? ur shit aint god enough.


pink now?

hahahaha! yfs better then me? hahaha thats fuckin awsome. theres only like 4 heads in gc better then me, out of the 50 heads they have. i go outside an use paint once? lol I THINK U MEAN U TO LEARN TO HOW TO SPEAK LEARN TO TALK, hahaha. oh shiiiit son! you are a dumb fuck. stupido el taco-o bitcho.. ur god damn right pink! itll be green tmrow. :P

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 04:46 PM
i bet your gonna go tell a big bad monitor huh. lmao. hahaha. AMUINS PICKIN ON MEEEEE! BAN HIM PLEASE!

Olick
12-10-2008, 04:47 PM
lol shit someone has jokes. ur pretty much rambling the same bullshit over n over agian.

can you post flicks of ur work?

I THINK U MEAN U TO LEARN TO HOW TO SPEAK LEARN TO TALK

can u translate.

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 04:56 PM
lol shit someone has jokes. ur pretty much rambling the same bullshit over n over agian.

can you post flicks of ur work?

I THINK U MEAN U TO LEARN TO HOW TO SPEAK LEARN TO TALK

can u translate.


my bad. i dont speak "stupid shit" but i tried, i thought if i spoke ur lingo u would get it but whatever. look for me on myspace u fag. AmuinOne.Dem-Wits.. ILL BE WAITING. HAHA where the fuck r UR flicks at? or do u just get on here do a fuck ton of talkin an bite everyone? haha that soounds like this fag LANE..... bitchs.

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 04:57 PM
shit. i forgot to change my font.

Olick
12-10-2008, 05:03 PM
my bad. i dont speak "stupid shit" but i tried, i thought if i spoke ur lingo u would get it but whatever. look for me on myspace u fag. AmuinOne.Dem-Wits.. ILL BE WAITING. HAHA where the fuck r UR flicks at? or do u just get on here do a fuck ton of talkin an bite everyone? haha that soounds like this fag LANE..... bitchs.

hahaha omg man u are such a clown. i kno this doesnt get into ur little empty head but dam man. u need to learn about shit talking haha. theres nothing anyone can say thatll make u realize what a dumb fuck pussy you are. shit, anybody could use ur words, all ur doing is throwing lame ass insults at people.

U ONLY post in the toy forum. what does that tell me? well ur fuckin toy. u dont post pictures. and you just turn my phrase around by saying "where are you pictures" and then you acuse me of biting? shit ur a fuckin retard. i feel sorry for anyone who knows you in person. ur mother must have commited suicide.

Infoe
12-10-2008, 05:06 PM
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewProfile&friendID=19431145

Do you say it like am-you-in, ie. Are you in..
Or, immune with an A?

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 05:11 PM
hahaha omg man u are such a clown. i kno this doesnt get into ur little empty head but dam man. u need to learn about shit talking haha. theres nothing anyone can say thatll make u realize what a dumb fuck pussy you are. shit, anybody could use ur words, all ur doing is throwing lame ass insults at people.

U ONLY post in the toy forum. what does that tell me? well ur fuckin toy. u dont post pictures. and you just turn my phrase around by saying "where are you pictures" and then you acuse me of biting? shit ur a fuckin retard. i feel sorry for anyone who knows you in person. ur mother must have commited suicide.


lmao. ur hurting my feelings now/... for real man come on dude. lol but hey do u know how to see all my post?? u should give it a try. i post in the "BIG BOY fORUM" ya fag. lmao. i fuckin love you man! no one can use my words. NO ONE! these r my words ur reading. i made them fuckers up. ur what 15? 16? did ur parents buy u car yet? i bet u ur dad still wipes ur ass. and YOU LOVE IT when he's finger slides in yer ass hole dont ya.

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 05:14 PM
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewProfile&friendID=19431145

Do you say it like am-you-in, ie. Are you in..
Or, immune with an A?

immune

Infoe
12-10-2008, 05:16 PM
Dope, I've completely ignored all the talk but I like your stuff, haha.
Some good style. I like the one of the album cover.

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 05:18 PM
Dope, I've completely ignored all the talk but I like your stuff, haha.
Some good style. I like the one of the album cover.


hahaha. right on man.

Olick
12-10-2008, 05:20 PM
lmao. ur hurting my feelings now/... for real man come on dude. lol but hey do u know how to see all my post?? u should give it a try. i post in the "BIG BOY fORUM" ya fag. lmao. i fuckin love you man! no one can use my words. NO ONE! these r my words ur reading. i made them fuckers up. ur what 15? 16? did ur parents buy u car yet? i bet u ur dad still wipes ur ass. and YOU LOVE IT when he's finger slides in yer ass hole dont ya.

"i fuckin love you man!"
hahahahaha nice words after you call me a fag homo.

parents are divorced. i work for my own shit. dad lives in texas. mom works 12 hours. u think u got me all figured out dont cha? well fuck you you fuckin faggot. your little bitch ass shit talkin pussy. pull that trigger. show how hardcore you are. i bet u fuck ur mother to show ur skillz. u fingerbang her all day everyday huh? or is that my job. i dunno. w/e it is back the fuck off me. i dont want ur love. i aint some bitch ass faggot.

sound familiar? its u. we call ur kind a waste of air. wtf do you do. lemme guess. ur 18. u moved out of ur parents house to live on the streets like a "thug" cuz u think thats cool. u dropped outa highschool. didnt plan to go to collage. u dotn have a job. instead u deal drugs or suck dick for coke. u live in a run down apartment with your gay boyfirend or pregnant girl that you beat daily for not using protection.

yup. anyone can be just like you. why dont you step up a stair and be a fuckin man. ur the one whos talking shit and you kno it. i dunno if you want to piss of kids on the internet but ur not. its rather amusing seeing the pitiful scum of the world trying to fit in. and knowing you so far. i bet ur gonna completely ignore this. ur just gonna talk more shit and say "u think u got me figured out" or just call me a bitch or what not. use ur brain for once. all ur doing is talking shit on the internet. not like ur really doing anything

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 05:26 PM
"i fuckin love you man!"
hahahahaha nice words after you call me a fag homo.

Parents are divorced. I work for my own shit. Dad lives in texas. Mom works 12 hours. U think u got me all figured out dont cha? Well fuck you you fuckin faggot. Your little bitch ass shit talkin pussy. Pull that trigger. Show how hardcore you are. I bet u fuck ur mother to show ur skillz. U fingerbang her all day everyday huh? Or is that my job. I dunno. W/e it is back the fuck off me. I dont want ur love. I aint some bitch ass faggot.

Sound familiar? Its u. We call ur kind a waste of air. Wtf do you do. Lemme guess. Ur 18. U moved out of ur parents house to live on the streets like a "thug" cuz u think thats cool. U dropped outa highschool. Didnt plan to go to collage. U dotn have a job. Instead u deal drugs or suck dick for coke. U live in a run down apartment with your gay boyfirend or pregnant girl that you beat daily for not using protection.

Yup. Anyone can be just like you. Why dont you step up a stair and be a fuckin man. Ur the one whos talking shit and you kno it. I dunno if you want to piss of kids on the internet but ur not. Its rather amusing seeing the pitiful scum of the world trying to fit in. And knowing you so far. I bet ur gonna completely ignore this. Ur just gonna talk more shit and say "u think u got me figured out" or just call me a bitch or what not. Use ur brain for once. All ur doing is talking shit on the internet. Not like ur really doing anything


your dad lives in texas... Hahahahaha

Olick
12-10-2008, 05:28 PM
thanks for proving my point.

they were born in mexico stupid ass. its called moving.

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 06:48 PM
thanks for proving my point.

they were born in mexico stupid ass. its called moving.


mexico!! EVEN WORSE hahahahahha. fuck its gotta suck to be u. ur a mexiCANT write graffiti. lol

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 06:52 PM
where the fuck is that bitch muse at?? im Ebeefing hard son! pop off bitchs, bitchmade toys. muse aint shit! olick cock aint shit! zase is coool tho

LeaksOne
12-10-2008, 07:06 PM
amuin i jus looked at your stuff an the shits hot but i noticed you werent always beefin in the toys threads. what sparked the e-hulk in you to come out?

Zase
12-10-2008, 07:33 PM
hahauwhuawh e-hulk nice
but u know the deal beef keeps the graff alive ......
i hate happy happy joy joy shit
not that im a antisocial fucking razorblade selfcuttemo shit thing
its just the scene

taking over 603
12-10-2008, 07:44 PM
Why dont you quit wasting everybodys time and stop making yourself look like a bitch cuz you talk shit on the internet. If you want to be tuff guy then shut off the computer and take it to the street. I dont know you but your making yourself look like a hater so if you think your so much better than all of us then lets see it! Talk is cheap....

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 08:16 PM
Why dont you quit wasting everybodys time and stop making yourself look like a bitch cuz you talk shit on the internet. If you want to be tuff guy then shut off the computer and take it to the street. I dont know you but your making yourself look like a hater so if you think your so much better than all of us then lets see it! Talk is cheap....

haha leaks. ur cool. props man. just havin fun dude...
zase YOU KNOW WHATS UP! ur down as fuck.
fuck this taking over bitch. OOOOOOOOOOH NO IM WASTING UR SWEET TIME ON THE COMPUTER!! haha. but no I DONT THINK im better then ALL OF U. i know i still suck. LETS SEE IT!!! YEAHH! E-YELL AT ME!!! FUCK AMUIN!!! talk isnt cheap u dumb ass, it dont cost a thing :D
I AM THE E-HULK MOTHER FUCKERS!!

Olick
12-10-2008, 08:26 PM
I AM THE COCK LOVER MOTHER FUCKERS!!

dude gross...

seywhat
12-10-2008, 08:29 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/DSC00860.jpg
first painted piece in like 6 months, i know my can control needs mad work

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/l_b29344ba9e4b4990979f1a162e5a8d47.jpg
my boy erks
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/l_80c9bdb98c234232801800d3e830cb3b.jpg
my boy absol

thanks to Prime 8up for the wall
bumpin my shit



http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/dfgggdf.png




http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/l_8b5b6469eee2151cc19e2e03fe4094a9.jpg


-_-

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02902.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02903.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02905.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02906.jpg
and some dope shit over all this wack ass talk

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 08:31 PM
dude gross...

hahaha we have us here a computer nerd. he can change my post... lol lame ass. funny but still

Olick
12-10-2008, 08:33 PM
computer nerd? lol ur the one actually getting out of ur way to talk in big pink font. i only speak the truth cock lover :)

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 08:36 PM
computer nerd? lol ur the one actually getting out of ur way to talk in big pink font. i only speak the truth cock lover :)


u speak the cock lover truth huh.. its not out of my way. if i was goin out of my way i wouldnt even be talking. but i have nothing to do so fuck it. wadada mean?!?!
my letters were red yesterday..

wider
12-10-2008, 08:45 PM
this is getting ridiculous. you won't ever meet, just stop.

LeaksOne
12-10-2008, 08:46 PM
amuin your welcome for the nick name an keep sketchin an paintin your work is impressive. honestly i thought you were some weak ass kid startin shit but then i saw your shit an now i kno your a impressive writer startin shit or finishin it. i missed the beginning of the whole ordeal. an zase i kno what you mean but me personally i wouldnt sart nothin. im a finisher.

B.S. POLICE
12-10-2008, 10:10 PM
should i post here
yea i went over myself!
had to freestyle them both
i hate freestylin
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020772.jpg
pitch blk out
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/blackmatch456/P1020773.jpg
didnt get to finish >:(

should i post these here or in the big boys forum?

so this is the kid thats been fallowing me and talking shit in every thread i post in? wooooowwww your wack son, sit down and pay attention to what i post, you might just fucking learn something

taking over 603
12-10-2008, 10:19 PM
a freestyle...didn't have enough room.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5984/dsc02139vu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Bumb This! This is the shit im tryin to see up in here! Keep it movin bro, shits pretty clean.... To bad its 3 pages back.

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 10:35 PM
Bumb This! This is the shit im tryin to see up in here! Keep it movin bro, shits pretty clean.... To bad its 3 pages back.

fuck you faggot!

Olick
12-10-2008, 10:38 PM
loose ur tampons?

amuin-gcs
12-10-2008, 10:41 PM
loose ur tampons?

there ya r ya cocklick. yes i did. i think my mom took my last one. but whatever. ill use ur emo ass sisters. why dont u get a life dude? u cant be like me. NO LIFE REPERSENT!! NO FUTURE!! dont have some homewrok to do?

Infoe
12-10-2008, 10:53 PM
^^^ Funniest cunt hahah

Olick
12-10-2008, 10:56 PM
lol and when did i tell you i have a sister? quit stalkin me man i kno u wanna be like me but u aint gonna get my life.

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 12:18 AM
lol and when did i tell you i have a sister? quit stalkin me man i kno u wanna be like me but u aint gonna get my life.


i like stalkin u tho.. i like the way ur mom wipes ur ass. an yor sister when she finger fucks the shit outta yor girlfriend. i dont wanna be like cuz im like me an if being me has no life then whatever im still me. ya fag.

Olick
12-11-2008, 12:19 AM
shit u got all preachy now

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 12:25 AM
shit u got all preachy now

oh. PRAISE THE LAWD! LET HIM TAKE U IN HIS LIL BOY MOLESTING ARMS & HE WILL SAVE UR DAMNED SOUL! HE TAKE UR SIN AWAY OF BEING BORN! CAN I GET A AMEN!!

C3ZR ONE
12-11-2008, 12:51 AM
Holy fuck....... Amuin, please shut the fuck up.. What's wrong with you dude? You fuckin talk comepletely incoherant now.. It's not even funny anymore. You have talent man and we go way back. Chill the fuck out and act like a grown ass man. You're just making me sad with this shit...

JETPACK!!
12-11-2008, 12:55 AM
hahahaha

C3ZR ONE
12-11-2008, 01:00 AM
hahahaha
....."and this aint funny so don't ya dare laugh....":(

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 01:12 AM
....."and this aint funny so don't ya dare laugh....":(

hahaha. its great man. lol

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 01:46 AM
idk man. i think i lost my mind. like im that dog chasing after the car, idk what i would do if i ever caught it i just do it, idk why. but these walls r stating to make the sounds of ppl's mouths an if they could talk they wouldnt shut the fuck up....

Dont Give A Fuck!
No Feelings!
Dem Wits!
iAMUIN.
aeks
wors
serg
spick
mock
gonzo
rage
lil ha
DJ micah
just
perish
blak

MUSEone
12-11-2008, 07:31 AM
Holy fuck....... Amuin, please shut the fuck up.. What's wrong with you dude? You fuckin talk comepletely incoherant now.. It's not even funny anymore. You have talent man and we go way back. Chill the fuck out and act like a grown ass man. You're just making me sad with this shit...

Listen to your boy...

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 03:04 PM
Listen to your boy...

but if i listen to him ill be listening to you. bcuz u told me to listen to him....
FUCK YOU!
YO! marry christmas ya'll!

Baron
12-11-2008, 03:06 PM
But its opposite day!

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 03:27 PM
But its opposite day!

hahahaha nice. lol
in that case. ill just go sit in the shower with the off naked not singing SOOOME WHERE OVER THE RAINBOW!! WHERE BLUE BIRDS FLYYYY.

what4joke...
12-11-2008, 03:43 PM
tru dat. i'm fucking sick of getting dissed on walls tho... some punks who don't even write keep throwing up shit on my stuff..

b*ez
12-11-2008, 03:53 PM
tru dat. i'm fucking sick of getting dissed on walls tho... some punks who don't even write keep throwing up shit on my stuff..

cap them. lol

thebaconator
12-11-2008, 04:02 PM
true dat brah

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 06:01 PM
four sho

amuin-gcs
12-11-2008, 06:01 PM
fo sho

SafeWay
12-11-2008, 07:52 PM
hey, this piece was kinda inspired by retna, could i get some crits?:)

Olick
12-11-2008, 09:03 PM
oh. PRAISE THE LAWD! LET HIM TAKE U IN HIS LIL BOY MOLESTING ARMS & HE WILL SAVE UR DAMNED SOUL! HE TAKE UR SIN AWAY OF BEING BORN! CAN I GET A AMEN!!

do you have a future?

or do you plan to spend ur life away trying to impress little boys online with ur smack talkin?

remos
12-11-2008, 10:46 PM
lets make a cheeseburger out of this beef

Fluffy Bunnies
12-11-2008, 10:55 PM
Dibs... add spicy sauce!!!!!

Baszma
12-11-2008, 11:17 PM
Pic is a lil bad, click to enlarge, comments and criticisms welcome. This is one of my first sketches, I just finished it a couple of days ago. It's way too complicated to throw up on a wall, but I like it. :)


dub deuces, Baszma

jester.onest
12-12-2008, 12:23 AM
That looks sick SafeWay. What did you use for the gold?

freshsesh
12-12-2008, 06:21 AM
the one on the bottom
http://i36.tinypic.com/bjbs6d.jpg

Dying to live
12-12-2008, 07:32 AM
wrong thread

Juicy JSC
12-12-2008, 10:41 AM
Amuin, all i gots to say is........Shut up.
lol keep your shit you talk in other forums, i came to this thread to see dopeish picks, not to look at endless pages of your bull shit. take it to the discussion forums man, and do us all a favor.
Monster, i really like your new shit(that depends are you the monster who had mad ups kinda in the south core?) but as for that piece on that wall, it needs a little cleaning up other than that, stay ups gurl. and keep rocking some of that fresh new shit.

ColdBlooded
12-12-2008, 10:49 AM
haha. fuuuuuuck you hoe. I DONT GIVE A FUCK. impress a bunch of fuckin kids on the computer, fuck you all! ur all killing what graf use to be. BITCH!
No1 Fuckin Kares.
[Sfuck your life.[ZE]

You haven't seen anything i write and your talking shit on this site...
lets battle big guy

H3TT1NG3R
12-12-2008, 04:41 PM
copy this

Each
12-13-2008, 01:42 AM
hey safeway, very dope shit. i really like it. i only thuink it would be almost better if you didnt have the background of like the mountains. i think it would look insanely dope just being the gold.

sesh- i waould make all the letters the same size. they kinda shrink towards the end. but nice going

Live4TheWall
12-13-2008, 05:58 AM
I dunno what amuin is on but I want some.

ice age
12-13-2008, 10:33 AM
so ive been supper bussy working on my babys room tell me what you think

my wife loves penguins so im sure our little girl will to
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled2-5.jpg

her name is mia
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled-10.jpg
yeah i hate the bubbles too

ShIfTeD
12-13-2008, 10:53 AM
uhhh...didnt know where to put this so yeah lol


http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/2046/dscn0253xm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)



http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1130/dscn0254kl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)








http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/595/dscn0255qa3.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

ice age
12-13-2008, 11:14 AM
dude your drop shadow is way off on most of that peace

Bink1
12-13-2008, 11:22 AM
i like the cracks in the leters , looks nice

ice age
12-13-2008, 11:26 AM
so ive been supper bussy working on my babys room tell me what you think

my wife loves penguins so im sure our little girl will to
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled2-5.jpg

her name is mia
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/deadxmansxhand/untitled-10.jpg
yeah i hate the bubbles too

bump no crits

Baron
12-13-2008, 12:59 PM
You need to give crits to get crits

Olick
12-13-2008, 01:04 PM
i like the penguins. looks childish in the good way lol. id say work on the black fading.

*LoST*
12-13-2008, 04:43 PM
sesh- good work. just keep letters the same size throughout. and if you plan on using those colors again, try using a darker outline, it'll make it stand out more.



crits for these please-
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/DSC01257.jpg

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/DSC00629.jpg

AllYourWallsAreBelongToMe
12-13-2008, 04:57 PM
sesh- good work. just keep letters the same size throughout. and if you plan on using those colors again, try using a darker outline, it'll make it stand out more.



crits for these please-
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/DSC01257.jpg

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e240/pmartinez13/graff/DSC00629.jpg
Good spot but you definitely need to work on your letters. Stick to straight simples for now. The handstyle needs work as well.

tWiX
12-13-2008, 05:33 PM
iv been tryin a one liner latly too.. i cant get it down tho

Speaking of a One Liner, can someone help me with one lining my new name?
cops are everywhere where i live so i gotta be quick, and one long line is faster then doin individual letters

plz pm me...i really need some help

Mr yarbles
12-13-2008, 05:43 PM
Oh my god
Cops are fucking everywhere you should be able to do your tag fast even if isnt a one liner
Why don't you go do what everyone else did and practice
Fuck toys these days want eveything done fro them

bleh.bleh.bleh
12-13-2008, 05:46 PM
Does anyone wanna get my name up for me so i can get king status cus i can't be bothered

¬¬

Baszma
12-13-2008, 06:13 PM
*LoST* I like the second one better than the first, but the S.T.R. looks a little crowded into your actual tag. Nice placement. Keep at it.

dub deuces, Baszma

PeeInTheShower
12-13-2008, 06:29 PM
crits...

puttin up for a buddy ;-)

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g291/busysignal06/saeo002.jpg

Baszma
12-13-2008, 09:20 PM
Can I get some crits please? My piece is back on page 1033 towards the bottom...

*PeeInTheShower*: I like it, is it Sheng or Skeng? I would make that a little more clear, but I like the colors and the letter form. Just make it a little cleaner and clearer and you should be good.


dub deuces, Baszma

Baron
12-13-2008, 09:57 PM
Pee in shower, don't listen to baszma, sorry to burst your bubble, but it looks like abosolute shit. No bars, no structure, no flow, too small, bad can control, bad color combonations. Tell your "friend" to hit the blackbooks.

Ice age, I really like your 3D, wish you could have pulled off the auroa a little better and the M looks a little odd, kinda like part of the V structure's 3D isn't flowing right with the other half, unless its twisted, but your A is sick.

Lost, no bars, weird flow, shakey letters, odd structure and a bad handstlye, back to basics.

And to everyone else, please take into account if someone says "That shit is awesome!" ant they precieve to be toy, they may not have a full understanding of what makes something good or not.

C3ZR ONE
12-14-2008, 03:05 AM
Ice Age- The baby's room looks great! Lucky girl.

Lost- Those Kin bombs are fucking TERRIBLE.. I'm sorry. I rarely say that to someone, but you shouldn't be trying to get noticable spots if you can't paint yet. Practice under a bridge or some shit. The handstyles are filthy too. (filthy bad...not filthy good...) sorry. Not trying to be mean. Trying to be honest so you don't get clowned. Have I seen worse? Yes... Was it on a rooftop? NOOOOOOOOO!

Bink1
12-14-2008, 04:33 AM
u ruined heaven spots kin , better get up somewhere where ppl dont go , thats where i train so ppl dont see my toy shit.

tWiX
12-14-2008, 09:14 AM
Oh my god
Cops are fucking everywhere you should be able to do your tag fast even if isnt a one liner
Why don't you go do what everyone else did and practice
Fuck toys these days want eveything done fro them


i wasnt askin it to be done for me....i was simply asking for help.....dick

Olick
12-14-2008, 12:34 PM
u ruined heaven spots kin , better get up somewhere where ppl dont go , thats where i train so ppl dont see my toy shit.

wow wow wow. yeah his shit doesnt look the best ever. but dont dis him cuz of the spot he did. atleast he knows where to find good spots. toy or not, getting up everywhere will atleast get you noticed. and in the future hell get better and hell remember how to easily get back up those spots anyway.

id rather have a toy hitting up heaven spots so it gets me motivated to do better. id be thinking "wow...how the fuck is he doing that and not me?"

Bink1
12-14-2008, 03:48 PM
wow wow wow. yeah his shit doesnt look the best ever. but dont dis him cuz of the spot he did. atleast he knows where to find good spots. toy or not, getting up everywhere will atleast get you noticed. and in the future hell get better and hell remember how to easily get back up those spots anyway.

id rather have a toy hitting up heaven spots so it gets me motivated to do better. id be thinking "wow...how the fuck is he doing that and not me?"

nah i hate when loads of spots are ruined by toyz(im toy too ) well toys should practice till get up , thats what i think , u cant change the way i think so... :eek:

ColdBlooded
12-14-2008, 04:37 PM
will you guys stop talking about spots?
or stop talking period.
this is toy BOMB/PIECES.
not olick and bink1's philosophy 101

JETPACK!!
12-14-2008, 05:03 PM
u ruined heaven spots kin , better get up somewhere where ppl dont go , thats where i train so ppl dont see my toy shit.

thats not a heaven spot.. thats a rooftop. a plain old rooftop.

kin, work on your line work. keep all your lines nice an straight and it'll look that much better. do it bigger too. drop your knees rather than move your arm down.

peeintheshower, tell your buddy to cut back his outline. that gold overspray looks horrible. his lines are inconsistant as well. it looks small as hell, tell him to paint bigger.

the babys room looks sick. the penguins are well done. personally, i'd re-do the piece. the bubbles are poorly done and the colors arn't chosen well. when she's older and afraid of the boogeyman, the piece is prolly gonna bug her out. perhaps lighter, 'happier' colors would be a better idea. but thats my two cents.

H3TT1NG3R
12-14-2008, 05:09 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2nqf8th.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2wovx52.jpg

JETPACK!!
12-14-2008, 05:13 PM
L's much too tall.

try making your letters the same size, for one piece. see how it turns out.

H3TT1NG3R
12-14-2008, 05:14 PM
alrighty.

unsuccsessfull
12-14-2008, 05:14 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/GetAttachment.jpg
snow is dope

kill_fred
12-14-2008, 05:21 PM
Speaking of a One Liner, can someone help me with one lining my new name?
cops are everywhere where i live so i gotta be quick, and one long line is faster then doin individual letters

plz pm me...i really need some help

lol comeon now. part of writing is figuring these kinda things out on your own.it feels good when you get it by yourself.do it yourself man,no ones gonna hold your hand






...

what4joke...
12-14-2008, 06:32 PM
his L is pretty much the same size? its a balance on off scale. lol

jersOneTIC
12-14-2008, 06:34 PM
snow is dope...
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9085/resty2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fucked up on the 3d

numberonestunna
12-14-2008, 06:52 PM
its still a tight piece jers. just the top left of the S looks a little too fat. good colors!

Baron
12-14-2008, 08:32 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2nqf8th.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/2wovx52.jpg

Look who changed their K

H3TT1NG3R
12-14-2008, 08:32 PM
haha

kill_fred
12-14-2008, 10:24 PM
where the fuck is that bitch muse at?? im Ebeefing hard son! pop off bitchs, bitchmade toys. muse aint shit! olick cock aint shit! zase is coool tho
just curious but do you always type with big ass letters? not beefin just you know wondering...looks fun





OMG IT IS!!! =D

ColdBlooded
12-15-2008, 12:09 AM
die slowly amuin-gcs
please...for me?

librelikespie
12-15-2008, 06:21 AM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/l_46c326a02da746ae9f5037fdf9bd630d1.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP2014.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP2032.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/Untitled-1mm.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02920-1.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02924.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02926.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02930.jpg
such a waste of paint :(

TastySesamcrew
12-15-2008, 07:06 AM
Dude thats great!! I need to go painting again and you inspire me to go!

C3ZR ONE
12-15-2008, 07:27 AM
will you guys stop talking about spots?
or stop talking period.
this is toy BOMB/PIECES.
not olick and bink1's philosophy 101

shut up. How is placement of a bomb or piece not a valid area of critique? If you just want to see flicks the go to the real painted pieces thread. Toys need crits. Placement is an aspect of that.

Olick
12-15-2008, 11:36 AM
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/l_46c326a02da746ae9f5037fdf9bd630d1.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP2014.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/IMGP2032.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/Untitled-1mm.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02920-1.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02924.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02926.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC02930.jpg
such a waste of paint :(

STFU. it isnt a waste of paint :D i like it. doesnt look like ive seen it before. which means u prolly spent time and created ur own unique style.

keep it up. looks good. only thing i can say for crits is use black blue instead of silver blue. but just ignore that, looks good all around.

Bink1
12-15-2008, 12:09 PM
shut up. How is placement of a bomb or piece not a valid area of critique? If you just want to see flicks the go to the real painted pieces thread. Toys need crits. Placement is an aspect of that.

my dude :D

JETPACK!!
12-15-2008, 04:32 PM
monster, mad dope. that last one looks rushed/sloppy, still ill. dont rock a baby blue 3D on a chrome fill. bad contrasting colors. my homies keep tellin me im 'color blind' cuz i used to do that too.

ColdBlooded
12-15-2008, 04:44 PM
that comment was not to crits..
it was to the one with the giant rainbow font..

Each
12-15-2008, 07:10 PM
jers- hot

Lasek- Hot

Monster- Hot

zone- it looks like you wefre cold as shit painting that cause its all shakey :P and snow is only the shit when the high where you live is above a fuckin -12.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-15-2008, 07:51 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/008.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/010.jpg

Each
12-15-2008, 08:40 PM
holy shit oene, that shits Really hot. maybe make the o bigger, makin the throw the same size

Facedorateur
12-15-2008, 09:26 PM
Love it, maybe make your last ''e'' a little less fat

garbage down tha way
12-16-2008, 03:11 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer-2.jpg

what4joke...
12-16-2008, 03:56 PM
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=slspwo&s=5

crit.

H3TT1NG3R
12-16-2008, 04:24 PM
^http://i39.tinypic.com/slspwo.jpg

what4joke...
12-16-2008, 04:28 PM
haha thanks.

Olick
12-16-2008, 04:39 PM
quit using the rollers for backrounds and do some rollups!!! =D

H3TT1NG3R
12-16-2008, 04:41 PM
i actually did take advantage of the rollers while i was there. That's Joke's first piece so i figured he outta start simple
heres my roller
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ns4al1.jpg

Olick
12-16-2008, 04:49 PM
where do you guys get em.

i mean like. buy or steal.

H3TT1NG3R
12-16-2008, 04:51 PM
rollers and bucket paint? just use teh leftover bucket house paint, or you could buy it, but i thin kits expensive. you can rack the pre-made colors though. Then i just foudn soem extra rolelrs around teh house

what4joke...
12-16-2008, 05:19 PM
we re-painted the bridge, lol. thats why we used rollers for backgrounds

Each
12-16-2008, 05:51 PM
hoer- thats really nice. i think the colours could have been better. i dont really think baby blue, piss green and blood red work that well together. but its very nice. your breakin away from your straight letters. i like it

joke- i would try to make the letters all even and give them straight bottoms. like put them all on one line like on a lined piece of paper

emel
12-16-2008, 06:47 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/GetAttachment.jpg
snow is dope

this is kool, the shadow effect over the letters is kinda sloppy but i think it looks kool overall, unlike


hoer- you can paint now, which is good, i know you can make that shit really clean but you should paint bigger, and just keep workin on them letters but nice piece brah

cesspool
12-16-2008, 07:22 PM
that zone piece is fly..

what4joke...
12-16-2008, 08:24 PM
thanks. and yea, since i did that i've been sketching more. i think its coming along

taking over 603
12-16-2008, 09:05 PM
Joke- You got the right idea bro, keep it simple for now and just work on your letter structure, Thickness of letters, straight lines, and shit like that. Your hand needs some work to kid...

taking over 603
12-16-2008, 09:08 PM
rollers and bucket paint? just use teh leftover bucket house paint, or you could buy it, but i thin kits expensive. you can rack the pre-made colors though. Then i just foudn soem extra rolelrs around teh house

Home depot sells buckets of paint that people bring back. Go to the paint section and ask for oops cans, the are only 5 bucks.

kill_fred
12-16-2008, 10:04 PM
oops paint? lol im gonna try that.i wana get down with some rollers.

Baszma
12-16-2008, 10:08 PM
You mean people bring back bcuz they got the wrong color? I'm gonna get me somma that, that's tight.

garbage down tha way
12-16-2008, 10:35 PM
hoer- you can paint now, which is good, i know you can make that shit really clean but you should paint bigger, and just keep workin on them letters but nice piece brah

thanks dude. yeah its actually pretty big in real life tho, i had to stand on a bucket to reach the top and im not exactly short.

garbage down tha way
12-16-2008, 10:49 PM
my beezy not tryina be on the double post tip or any shit but here goes nothin.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer-3.jpg

smooth_nuts
12-16-2008, 10:57 PM
hoer simples ftw!
edit*
allthough your h and o seem a tad to small compared to the e and r :/

taking over 603
12-16-2008, 10:58 PM
You mean people bring back bcuz they got the wrong color? I'm gonna get me somma that, that's tight.

Yeah, the color was to dark or they mixed the color wrong or some shit. So they reprice most of the cans down to 5 bucks cuz its been opened.

Dying to live
12-17-2008, 01:48 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer-2.jpg
damnnnnnnn

librelikespie
12-17-2008, 06:30 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3219/3114956851_abd408eb46_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3204/3115483750_03e143c5bd.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3203/3115453790_2f9ec9a2a2.jpg


excuse the uncleanliness of first piece, had to rush plus freestyled

gomaESB757
12-17-2008, 01:04 PM
yo bump monster.. that shit is tight...and there's some kid fuckin took my name... but he's got UDC at the end

CandyRain88
12-17-2008, 07:22 PM
monster why are you so much better at walls than paper?

im not doubting you im just wondering


but on the reals i got this fat cap from a glue thing and it fit perfectly and everything but when i went to hit up my piece wit the first white coat it was spraying fine the only thing was id be spraying and then it was like a huge puddle would just fall off my can and it just wasted hella paint....does anyone know whats up

ps.ill edit in the piece when i feel like logging into photobucket

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-17-2008, 07:30 PM
shit.. nice hoer
monster that character is jokes, and good shit

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenerfuckwinter.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenefuckwinter.jpg
winter day, very cold ran out of paint

JETPACK!!
12-17-2008, 08:27 PM
some crits before i finish it? i was kinna drunk when i did it. so its sloppy. but ima cut that shit back

kilz white is nearly as bright as freshh snow

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2661/rasek75qo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mr yarbles
12-17-2008, 08:38 PM
There's something I'm not feeling about the a
and the letters start off going downwards but then the e and k go back up it kinda throws it off
It's pretty sick though

acereborn
12-17-2008, 08:40 PM
plus the bottom of the S isnt thick enough. did you run outta green paint or something?

JETPACK!!
12-17-2008, 08:40 PM
its supposed to do that with the flow of the letters. i should brought the K up more. woulda made itlook better. and i think its the S.. not the A. but it could be the A is leaning too much to the left. either way. its apparent. thanks

ColdBlooded
12-18-2008, 12:06 AM
make the A go over top of the R

SafeWay
12-18-2008, 01:01 AM
That looks sick SafeWay. What did you use for the gold?


hey safeway, very dope shit. i really like it. i only thuink it would be almost better if you didnt have the background of like the mountains. i think it would look insanely dope just being the gold.

hey thanks guys i havnt been on ina while but i have a montana goldline marker
and thats what i used, and yeah Each, i really had no idea where i was going with the piece butta i think it came out cool heh, thanks again, happy holidays

fonone
12-18-2008, 09:03 AM
actually not really feeling them spiky pointy add on bits rasek, but im sure with time if you stick to it it could looke decent... I dont really like the kick on the left leg of the R either, and the right leg seems too long to me, well in comparison to the K anyway.. but all up it's pretty tight, keep us updated

monster - your shit is starting to look real nice, i dont really like them boxy things that come off letters, like the R on the pink/yellow one though..

kinda had a break from this, but some recent stuff.. more to flick aswell which will be up within the next few days

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4527/2010081545kz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/2010081545kz6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img73/2010081545kz6.jpg/1/)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1070/sdc10038ko9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/5181/sdc10024pc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/sdc10024pc1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img73/sdc10024pc1.jpg/1/)
will hopefully get a clean flick of this one soon...
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/221/2010081549er3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2010081549er3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/2010081549er3.jpg/1/)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7199/2810081628pf0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2810081628pf0.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/2810081628pf0.jpg/1/)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2011/sdc10033gu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/sdc10033gu5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/sdc10033gu5.jpg/1/)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9397/sdc10034uc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/sdc10034uc2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/sdc10034uc2.jpg/1/)

what4joke...
12-18-2008, 03:07 PM
is that in your house??

Baron
12-18-2008, 03:08 PM
Looks abandoned.

muddyluv
12-18-2008, 03:42 PM
new member.muddy is the name gxc is the crew lemme know whatcha think.

what4joke...
12-18-2008, 04:06 PM
looks good. sick colors

ColorOptional
12-18-2008, 04:41 PM
new member.muddy is the name gxc is the crew lemme know whatcha think.

This needs alot of work bro. Letter structure isnt there, your 3d is way off the only thing i can say I like is the colors. Sorry, just my opinion....

H3TT1NG3R
12-18-2008, 05:06 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/jjvg8y.jpg
-wall was mad rough

what4joke...
12-18-2008, 05:36 PM
haha, i love how your E is the E i have been working with for my pieces... i didn't think i was bitting lol saw it on the back of this chick in my classes sweater. fuck.

H3TT1NG3R
12-18-2008, 05:39 PM
haha its straightletters. no such thing as biting if its as simple as the keyboard. btw thats the abondoned place i was talkign about

Baron
12-18-2008, 05:47 PM
haha, i love how your E is the E i have been working with for my pieces... i didn't think i was bitting lol saw it on the back of this chick in my classes sweater. fuck.

You can't bite straight letters....

Infoe
12-18-2008, 06:37 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3219/3114956851_abd408eb46_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3204/3115483750_03e143c5bd.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3203/3115453790_2f9ec9a2a2.jpg


excuse the uncleanliness of first piece, had to rush plus freestyled

ESHAYS ADLAY!!
Nigguh monster keeping it ealray!!

Each
12-18-2008, 07:14 PM
lasek- f**kin nice roller man. if i had any advice for that it would be dont overlap the l and the a. thats about it. very nice

librelikespie
12-18-2008, 10:52 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3009/3118251314_924236bf42.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3102/3118249868_781a09379e.jpg

esh adlayssss sum ackway itshayz

fonone
12-19-2008, 12:39 AM
actually not really feeling them spiky pointy add on bits rasek, but im sure with time if you stick to it it could looke decent... I dont really like the kick on the left leg of the R either, and the right leg seems too long to me, well in comparison to the K anyway.. but all up it's pretty tight, keep us updated

monster - your shit is starting to look real nice, i dont really like them boxy things that come off letters, like the R on the pink/yellow one though..

kinda had a break from this, but some recent stuff.. more to flick aswell which will be up within the next few days

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4527/2010081545kz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/2010081545kz6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img73/2010081545kz6.jpg/1/)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1070/sdc10038ko9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/5181/sdc10024pc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/sdc10024pc1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img73/sdc10024pc1.jpg/1/)
]

pmub

shadow on the bottom of that S needs to come round further munster guy

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/7558/sdc10064sq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/sdc10064sq7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img378/sdc10064sq7.jpg/1/)

librelikespie
12-19-2008, 01:58 AM
irekn - dope shit, how can you stand filling your shit in solid :P haha im such a lazy kunt. and now that you pointed out the S drop shadow error its buggin me badly and im gonna go fix it

I GOT CLOUT
12-20-2008, 02:45 PM
I like the K in that last one irek.

what4joke...
12-20-2008, 05:17 PM
yo, H3TT1NG3R, sig is dope.

H3TT1NG3R
12-20-2008, 05:20 PM
haha thanks, once you get more ups ill make one for you

what4joke...
12-20-2008, 05:29 PM
i got the mini A.4.W going on now lol

PeeInTheShower
12-20-2008, 06:03 PM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/8/l_b52beab57caf4a51a71b784d29abbd4c.jpg

crits?

what4joke...
12-20-2008, 07:23 PM
not bad, i kinda like it. S 3-d is fucked tho

jersOneTIC
12-21-2008, 12:25 AM
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8061/thrab6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

jester.onest
12-21-2008, 12:42 AM
Nice one jers. You have almost the same letters as me, except i have a T. Wanna do a handstyle exchange?

drumnbass
12-21-2008, 12:53 AM
constructive crits are more than welcome.

thanks in advance...

ThatguywhodrinksTea
12-21-2008, 12:55 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/xmasoener.jpg
merry xmas?

VaNdAL xBA!x
12-21-2008, 02:03 AM
some crits before i finish it? i was kinna drunk when i did it. so its sloppy. but ima cut that shit back

kilz white is nearly as bright as freshh snow

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2661/rasek75qo0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

damn ras long time no see shits pretty damn dope
bump bump bump it up!

PeeInTheShower
12-21-2008, 02:23 PM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/8/l_b52beab57caf4a51a71b784d29abbd4c.jpg

crits?

bump for crits

Each
12-21-2008, 03:35 PM
oener and saeo- clean that shit up. oener. i"d do every other leter in anothre colour instead of just the last one in green. saeo. space the letters more and moke the o fit the style of the letters

VaNdAL xBA!x
12-21-2008, 04:02 PM
Saeo that isnt bad keep it up do that shit bigger and a little more spaced and it will look dope.maybe just try to draw an o out the same style as all your other letters might look better then the face

RhodeIsland
12-22-2008, 01:33 PM
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/33behqh.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/S5032379.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/S5032377.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo161/bekonerr/S5032527.jpg

Just a few..

ColorOptional
12-22-2008, 01:37 PM
That second one is dope.

Each
12-22-2008, 01:38 PM
BEk- likin it man. what i would do is straighten the letters so they arent tilted. but nice shit

klic
12-22-2008, 01:44 PM
only my third throwie

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0682.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0683.jpg

oener - everything looks to forced, your handstyle is a lot better than your throws lol... for now id just stick to putting up tags and practice your throwies on paper

rasek - top one looks nice but extend the bottom of your top right bar on your K so it doesnt look like theres a chip in it, and the bottom one looks fresh but im not really feeling how you attached your A to your S

sae - nice letters, clean it up though

bek - not really feeling your b's, id stick with the second one from the bottom

and start giving crits guys

Each
12-22-2008, 01:49 PM
shpel- i'm not really feeloin the p, e. sorry. the p seems kinda...awkward, might just be the hole. te bottom of the e is to big. just my thoguths

La Coka Nostra
12-22-2008, 01:56 PM
take more time on your fill.
if you have to rush it THAT bad, then just do a hollow...

ColorOptional
12-22-2008, 01:59 PM
Hey klic where are you writing at bro that shit looks like its in a cave? You need to work on the pel, the H is dope though.

klic
12-22-2008, 02:04 PM
nah its not in a cave lol its under a bridge

i wouldnt have rushed my fill so much but there were workers at this dam thats right beside the bridge and i wanted to get out of there half fast

and yah my letters do look awkward but thats because it was one of my first times using paint and my can controls pretty bad

urmomsayshi
12-22-2008, 07:19 PM
bek- work on ur fades... well at least it looks to me like u were trying to fade
rasek- ur stuffs always good lol
hey rasek, btw, can u post or send me a link to this one peice u posted a while ago
the fill looked like it was stuff in space
hopefully that descriptions is good enough lol
shpel- possibly worst fill ive ever seen, take the extra 30 sec and get a solid fill
havent painted in a while and was pretty rushed

Name12345
12-22-2008, 08:14 PM
^ Shit's looking sick. Only thing that bugs me is the top of the W, the space seems a little empty. Otherwise nice work.

mekosbc
12-22-2008, 11:01 PM
rasek get the fuck out the toy section lol you know damn well your not toy...good shit rasek always loved ur style...fresh....BEK hot shit...

mekosbc
12-22-2008, 11:07 PM
my bad about the double post... forgot to add this to my last post..thesse flikz kinda suck gotta get day flikz.....the arrow looks a little fucked up but its really not there is a dip in the wall that doesnt really get along with the arrow..i know some ppl are goona say blah lose the arrow, extentions ae wack.... i dunno i like arrows n extentions(not startin beef so all you hot heads slow the roll)...critz are very respected..

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1888.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1886.jpg

my throw character...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1887.jpg

Bink1
12-23-2008, 05:00 AM
it would look so much better if u would do all letters same size...
and char is fine.

fonone
12-23-2008, 08:00 AM
wow, i didnt expect you to be able to do something so fresh mecko... props. but seriously drop the arrow for now, i can see that it has potential but it would look alot better without it. got a flick of lime's?