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99%Shit
08-12-2009, 10:06 PM
If that's a P, make it not like and E. Dig the H and size progression(the O should be a tad smaller), that's perhaps it.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
08-13-2009, 12:00 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/skatch.jpg
i havent been in this thread in mad long

ZENKER
08-13-2009, 01:49 AM
alright then what about my throwiehttp://i683.photobucket.com/albums/vv199/inpho_211/scan0003.jpg

like that other guy said, make the O a bit smaller and that could be a real clean throwie painted. do one and post a pic, id like to see the real thing.

smesta
08-13-2009, 03:07 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/skatch.jpg
i havent been in this thread in mad long

I'm liking the 'M' but not feeling the last 2 letters. RZ.

garbage down tha way
08-13-2009, 10:15 AM
i think all the letters are nice, especially the r and z.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
08-13-2009, 12:55 PM
thnx

skeetz
08-13-2009, 03:39 PM
i think the bottom of that R should be smaller so that it doesnt jut out as much, kinda disrupts the flow in my opinion.

felt exhausted yesterday so instead of sketching something new i took and ancient collab i did with my boy SHRIB (now HAIL), from back when I wrote UNDE, and finished it. I think the only reason im even postin this is cuz im in love with the hell monkey/lava king kong idea... w/e
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1743_IMG.jpg

-sense-
08-13-2009, 05:02 PM
really like the fill on the blue one, the grey lines make it look crazy

the area that says bang kinda throws off the compasishion tho

skeetz
08-13-2009, 05:33 PM
yeah i kno, the biggest problem is that he sketched half and i sketched the other half, so there are two styles in the background, but since the only thing he did in marker is his piece you cant tell that half of it is his. cuz most of it is markered in my style.

seywhat
08-13-2009, 05:36 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01967.jpg



[QUOTE=garbage down tha way;1448334]dont like this but i was starting to feel out of the loop :(.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0860.jpg

QUOTE]
bump alts and hoer

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage35.jpg
first time ive made it past sey for a while, gonna color soon. crits???

mers is the only cat i see on this page that should be here.

EST2007
08-13-2009, 05:38 PM
[QUOTE=garbage down tha way;1448334]dont like this but i was starting to feel out of the loop :(.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0860.jpg

QUOTE]
bump alts and hoer

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage35.jpg
first time ive made it past sey for a while, gonna color soon. crits???

mers is the only cat i see on this page that should be here.

make that top left bar of the Y come up more, throw on some 3D and lets see how it looks. oh and the R is disproportional

skeetz
08-13-2009, 05:48 PM
the R should be much smaller and the AR looks rly forced, cuz of the shaky lines and just the size of the R is insane, i mean its almost as wide as the whole SEY part if you count the top part.

fromthegrave
08-13-2009, 08:35 PM
garbage- that r is sick. the whole thing looks nice.
that hoer looks good too, just the r is slackin.

http://i28.tinypic.com/2ilo3u1.jpg
something i did today.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
08-13-2009, 09:48 PM
[QUOTE=garbage down tha way;1448334]dont like this but i was starting to feel out of the loop :(.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0860.jpg

QUOTE]
bump alts and hoer

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage35.jpg
first time ive made it past sey for a while, gonna color soon. crits???

mers is the only cat i see on this page that should be here.

(:

ESKiMO2
08-13-2009, 09:50 PM
I sketched this when I was maad high. coloring suggestions?

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/7679/dsc02689i.jpg

RANES

ESKiMO2
08-13-2009, 10:03 PM
I like it... Mainly because it's different than my regular stuff.

BlacktodaFuture
08-13-2009, 10:04 PM
Not finished

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook002.jpg?t=1250215080

Beast

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook003.jpg?t=1250215128

Beast again
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook004.jpg?t=1250215185

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook005.jpg?t=1250215269

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook006.jpg?t=1250215298

very sloppy and i kinda didnt follow rules of letter structure haha

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbook001.jpg?t=1250215332

NEW YORK STATE OF MIND
08-13-2009, 10:34 PM
the only cats i like on this thread are
saywhat
eskimo
mers
skeetz
and from the grave
the rest. work on ur shit

baktothefuture. tht dick is to detailed. and disturbing. and work on ur shit more

ESKiMO2
08-13-2009, 10:42 PM
yeah man it looks like you put a little too much work into that dick

NEW YORK STATE OF MIND
08-13-2009, 10:43 PM
^^^ word. but im liking ur stuff eskimo. keep it up

BlacktodaFuture
08-13-2009, 10:54 PM
yeah man it looks like you put a little too much work into that dick

not me, its a local writer named Beast.

-sense-
08-13-2009, 11:25 PM
.uhhuh
that second pic is greasy, the skintones look good
and cold pizza is almost better than hot pizza..almost

skeetz
08-13-2009, 11:27 PM
its still too detailed. unless beast is a woman thats not right.

eskimo you wanna exchange, i need some motivation to keep doin something.

BlacktodaFuture
08-13-2009, 11:30 PM
its still too detailed. unless beast is a woman thats not right.

eskimo you wanna exchange, i need some motivation to keep doin something.

haha whatever im fine w. it.

fromthegrave
08-14-2009, 09:16 AM
its still too detailed. unless beast is a woman thats not right.
lmao. He's really good at drawing them, but he's a very good all around artist too.

fromthegrave
08-14-2009, 09:20 AM
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/7679/dsc02689i.jpg

http://i28.tinypic.com/2ilo3u1.jpg

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage35.jpg

bump these from the last page for crits n stuff.

ESKiMO2
08-14-2009, 10:00 AM
Noser- Lose the arrow on the N is all I can really say. Other than that, you have a pretty solid foundation.

Seyar- As far as letters go, good work. Although, the composition is pretty bad because my eyes get stuck on the bottoms of the letters.

(SoS)Viruz
08-14-2009, 11:16 AM
Sey-Your R need to be same size as you other letters. Due to the fact that you added the lil end to the left exstending the Top bar, it might be a lil difficult...

massacreman
08-14-2009, 11:27 AM
fromthegrave nice work man! especially the 2nd pic

EST2007
08-14-2009, 11:31 AM
its still too detailed. unless beast is a woman thats not right.

reminds me of superbad

Alts13
08-14-2009, 12:15 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01969.jpg
yet another exchange

i would say a nice 4 or 5 colour fade on that one above me with some darker details

fromthegrave
08-14-2009, 01:17 PM
Noser- Lose the arrow on the N is all I can really say. Other than that, you have a pretty solid foundation
thnx. idk what i was thinking with the arrow. over did an extention i think. ill touch it up.

Morbidity
08-14-2009, 06:34 PM
someone exchange with me?

skeetz
08-14-2009, 06:44 PM
someone exchange with me?

show me that your not some wackass toy thatll rip me off and im down. I'm still waiting on neets exchange, but all the others ive done have been massive failures, 2 times i didnt even get anything in return, so im not agreeing to anything without seeing work first.

Morbidity
08-14-2009, 06:55 PM
myh sketches are way better than my peices but heres spomthing i did a few months ago
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3630/3636983541_4238f5eb13.jpg

NoCanControl
08-14-2009, 08:41 PM
anyone wanna exchange with the kansr?? pm me if sooooooooooooo!

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2009, 08:45 PM
Did we ever do an exchange, dawg?

RhodeIsland
08-14-2009, 09:52 PM
Havn't been on in awhile..
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte111.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte112.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-14-2009, 10:02 PM
^the top one is dank the bottom one not so much
......i love you roadie

ESKiMO2
08-14-2009, 11:58 PM
HYTE you've improved so much since you last posted... whats good?
Yeah, top one is straight fire but how about those colors? I'd like to see a colored piece from you some day.

RhodeIsland
08-15-2009, 12:21 AM
haha It's a blue pen, that's color. Nah but I will color a piece sooner or later..

garbage down tha way
08-15-2009, 12:35 AM
caked and bakhed lol what does that mean? COCAINE!? nmice sketchezzzzzzz.

skeetz
08-15-2009, 01:17 AM
myh sketches are way better than my peices but heres spomthing i did a few months ago
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3630/3636983541_4238f5eb13.jpg

alright your on. i write TEMP or TEMPEST one pick one. you write REKone?

Morbidity
08-15-2009, 04:37 AM
rekone or morbid

COLOR192
08-15-2009, 11:29 AM
yer, somethin i done...
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/7682/img1875z.th.jpg (http://img27.imageshack.us/i/img1875z.jpg/)

I'm writting RUSH, now...

garbage down tha way
08-15-2009, 03:12 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0890.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_0892.jpg

killamanilla
08-15-2009, 03:16 PM
http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq278/floridagraff/GlassShards.jpg

luvsac
08-15-2009, 03:20 PM
havent posted in a while...
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/ljhweljb.jpg
crappy A..

garbage down tha way
08-15-2009, 03:24 PM
i like the viel and gravy, but not on the same plate. gravy you should put some bars exploding out of those cuts in the letters instead of leaving them blank.

luvsac
08-15-2009, 03:44 PM
haha viel and gravy... :P
thanks hoer, i'll consider that for sure in the next sketch i do.

that freight and throw are sick.the only part im not crazy about is the bottom part of the E on the throw

DuskSAN
08-15-2009, 04:07 PM
Havn't been on in awhile..
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte111.jpg



this ones dope man! we should exchange. i like this style.

(SoS)Viruz
08-15-2009, 05:08 PM
Nice page, Hoer I saw some hide stuff the other day...Might have been old.

I'll be postin Hoers,Alts,and Greeds exchange later today if I can get my camera working....Or when ever I get back to the crib

fromthegrave
08-15-2009, 07:31 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/34eq0av.jpg
re-did/ touched it up
This whole page is legit.

OctoVenom
08-15-2009, 08:03 PM
sick

TheMurderousMisterMero_
08-15-2009, 08:55 PM
you all SUCK and should kill yourself asap.
jk

skeetz
08-16-2009, 01:12 AM
^lawlz

exchange with rekone. wanted to do a simple but rly hated it so i made a different one, ill post both for shits and giggles.

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1745_IMG.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1744_IMG.jpg
sry about the second one not being clean, but i was experimenting with one of those steel tips you have to dip into ink everytime you make a line, and the ink bled on the thin paper.

Eon 1
08-16-2009, 01:42 AM
^lawlz

exchange with rekone. wanted to do a simple but rly hated it so i made a different one, ill post both for shits and giggles.

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1745_IMG.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1744_IMG.jpg
sry about the second one not being clean, but i was experimenting with one of those steel tips you have to dip into ink everytime you make a line, and the ink bled on the thin paper.They both look sik. I like the bottom one more. And I really like the Black shit around it.

jersOneTIC
08-16-2009, 02:22 AM
freestyle...
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/7834/orangen.jpg (http://img81.imageshack.us/i/orangen.jpg/)
and a scrap can piece
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/985/blablue.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/i/blablue.jpg/)

Scratch
08-16-2009, 02:46 AM
^Jers, those pieces are sick

Rek- the second ones style is dope, progress it.
Noesr- not feeling the R at all, the other letters flow nicely though
Gravy- you too, not liking that R, but for a simple its fairly original.
hoer- nice shit as always, wouldve liked to see a drop shadow and forcefield on that throw up but heyyy maybe thats me being cliche as fuck.

Im not going to lie, im pretty shitty at painting straightletters and pieces and whatnot. im fine with throwups and shit, but i can never get my sketches up on the wall right.

heres a new outline..

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/0808090117.jpg?t=1250404497

and heres a pretty bad straight letter..

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/0814091138.jpg?t=1250405192

any help?

seywhat
08-16-2009, 03:05 AM
jers with the motherfuckin heat!

Eon 1
08-16-2009, 03:07 AM
you should of re done ur outline. and get rid of the pointy thing on the Y. And ur E on the end shouldn't be hiding.

Stuck
08-16-2009, 05:15 AM
THIS IS FOR ADVANCED TOYS.....
and jers wtf uve been on here for a while and ur shit hasnt progressed at all.... what the fucks up with that ******
and the rest of u guys need to get the fuck outa this shit....with a few exceptions

RhodeIsland
08-16-2009, 11:28 AM
this ones dope man! we should exchange. i like this style.

What do you write?

DuskSAN
08-16-2009, 12:34 PM
Dusk

Scratch
08-16-2009, 01:27 PM
stuck, if youre talking to me, ive been talking and putting shit up in this thread since it was made and no ones complained about me. my sketches arent toy but my painting needs work.

luvsac
08-16-2009, 01:28 PM
those pieces look sick but on the 2nd one, all the blue letters are nice, im just not diggin the R.

scratch- drop the useless addons in the sketch, they take away from the whole thing. it would be a really solid piece without them

RhodeIsland
08-16-2009, 02:06 PM
Dusk

Okay I'll post it later today hopefully.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
08-16-2009, 04:41 PM
^lawlz

exchange with rekone. wanted to do a simple but rly hated it so i made a different one, ill post both for shits and giggles.

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1745_IMG.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1744_IMG.jpg
sry about the second one not being clean, but i was experimenting with one of those steel tips you have to dip into ink everytime you make a line, and the ink bled on the thin paper.

why is this in here....

Alts13
08-16-2009, 05:22 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2586/3827913322_91677fecb4.jpg

skeetz
08-16-2009, 05:40 PM
why is this in here....

where should it be?

thx scratch i got the idea for that shit from these freestyles i did no real letters in them but you can try and read it anyways if you want.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1748_IMG.jpg
this ones not done
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1749_IMG.jpg
and some actual graff, kinda unclean cuz i freestyled it.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1747_IMG.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 07:19 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck002.jpg?t=1250464637

local king, Zeus!

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck003.jpg?t=1250464682

ESKiMO2
08-16-2009, 07:51 PM
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5565/brittanykun.jpg

fromthegrave
08-16-2009, 08:02 PM
backtodafuture- sry but you shouldnt post here.. skeetz u shouldnt ether. and there are no "kings" in vermont. A lot more work needs to be put in for that title.

KnoxIn
08-16-2009, 08:03 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1787/p8163880.jpg
HIP-HOP
its been a couple months sense i have done anything but i dont think i lost nothing but i dind't gain anything either i gotta clean it up an finish it but how it look so far??

eskimo- im diggin the new style, it gets a little confusing in places but still looks good
skeetz- i like the black shit you do around em but try and make your letters a little more complicated ya know?

B.S. POLICE
08-16-2009, 08:06 PM
get the toys out of here. shit

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 08:10 PM
backtodafuture- sry but you shouldnt post here.. skeetz u shouldnt ether. and there are no "kings" in vermont. A lot more work needs to be put in for that title.

i dont think we are big enough to have kings anyway. haha.

NoCanControl
08-16-2009, 08:19 PM
eskimo the background of that contrast too much with the piece. the vibrant color takes attention away from the acual letters. imo you should use a mute-r color a color with more of a gray factor works best for me because it doesn't make it seem too contrasting nor not contrasting enough. not neccisarly saying that the letters should be the only thing to look at. throw a sceen in the back ground with some charactors. makes graffiti alot funner to work with. have the letters play with the charater and like wise. and then just make the back ground the theme. win? yes. buy some new markers kid. all your piece are boreing because they have same colors. you color like you live in alaska because all your colors are cold, SPICE UP yo life ***** and use hot colors, then, see how you can make them both work out for you when you put hot and cold colors together. sorry i got carried away.

ESKiMO2
08-16-2009, 08:59 PM
My last piece had hot colors...

** OLD **

http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs47/f/2009/180/f/d/Calor_Orange_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

KnoxIn
08-16-2009, 09:04 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1787/p8163880.jpg
HIP-HOP
its been a couple months sense i have done anything but i dont think i lost nothing but i dind't gain anything either i gotta clean it up an finish it but how it look so far??

eskimo- im diggin the new style, it gets a little confusing in places but still looks good
skeetz- i like the black shit you do around em but try and make your letters a little more complicated ya know?
bottom page bump

ESKiMO2
08-16-2009, 09:10 PM
you are trying to jump into a style that requires a basic understanding of letters and their structure. Go back to doing simple foundations before trying to do all the 3D fancy stuff.

fromthegrave
08-16-2009, 10:31 PM
eskimo- do a simple, like a straight letter. I want to see you do one!

oh yea with what he's saying, u can color really good but use certain colors that make each other stand out & POP! use ur skillz. Know the color wheel

NoCanControl
08-16-2009, 10:36 PM
My last piece had hot colors...

** OLD **

http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs47/f/2009/180/f/d/Calor_Orange_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

That deffinatly wasn't the point. But still it seems as tho u don't know how to use your colors. Just take what I say. And use it to help you out

EST2007
08-16-2009, 10:45 PM
My last piece had hot colors...

** OLD **

http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs47/f/2009/180/f/d/Calor_Orange_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

i dont understand how the arrow is w/o 3d and is the same color as the 3d

jersOneTIC
08-16-2009, 10:56 PM
THIS IS FOR ADVANCED TOYS.....
and jers wtf uve been on here for a while and ur shit hasnt progressed at all.... what the fucks up with that ******
and the rest of u guys need to get the fuck outa this shit....with a few exceptions
:owhatever you say dude:o

sheltr
08-16-2009, 11:54 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2427/3829099012_3976c0aa1d.jpg
lemme know what you think

RhodeIsland
08-17-2009, 12:10 AM
DUSK Exchange
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte113.jpg

-Wings-
08-17-2009, 12:34 AM
new shit
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF17082009_00000.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF10082009_00001.jpg
some throwies
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2765.jpg
escape throwie exchange
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF13082009_00000.jpg
(not to proud of the pieces, but meh. I still needa draw)
rhodeisland > looks pretty good :)
sheltr > hmm not liking this, i think you should stick to the toy thread for a bit.
eskimo > all your letters look like there squat together try spreading them out more. also that arrow looks to random.

skeetz
08-17-2009, 12:38 AM
backtodafuture- sry but you shouldnt post here.. skeetz u shouldnt ether. and there are no "kings" in vermont. A lot more work needs to be put in for that title.

would've loved it if it was more descriptive than just leave, but w/e i'll go chill in the toy section for a month or two and ill be back. cya all latr.

RhodeIsland
08-17-2009, 12:43 AM
Random Letters
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/YOS.jpg
You suck dick son
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Yousuck.jpg

DuskSAN
08-17-2009, 01:00 AM
Dope homes. Thanks

Scratch
08-17-2009, 01:15 AM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF10082009_00001.jpg
some throwies



bbbump. best shit ive seen from you seyo yet. loving that Y.

ZENKER
08-17-2009, 03:48 AM
new shit
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF17082009_00000.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF10082009_00001.jpg
some throwies
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2765.jpg
escape throwie exchange
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF13082009_00000.jpg
(not to proud of the pieces, but meh. I still needa draw)
rhodeisland > looks pretty good :)
sheltr > hmm not liking this, i think you should stick to the toy thread for a bit.
eskimo > all your letters look like there squat together try spreading them out more. also that arrow looks to random.

no offense to you, but your pieces look very stiff to me, like, no flow at all whatsoever. its like you're trying too hard. your throws arent bad at all though. try not trying so hard and just do up some up new letter styles, fuck with some new shit, you know what i mean?

Queezy
08-17-2009, 04:09 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/PUDGEaugust09.jpg
Fucked up the outline on the middle left part of the Pudge E, whatever.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2597/3829149553_764a177fdd.jpg

KnoxIn
08-17-2009, 04:37 AM
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9326/p8163886.jpg
HIP-HOP
letters are finished i hate the whole HOP but oh well crits?? and any ideas for a background?

queezy- im diggin it especially the fill

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
08-17-2009, 07:02 AM
no offense to you, but your pieces look very stiff to me, like, no flow at all whatsoever. its like you're trying too hard. your throws arent bad at all though. try not trying so hard and just do up some up new letter styles, fuck with some new shit, you know what i mean?

im sorry but you made yourself sound retarded...im pretty sure his peices flow pretty well considering in most of his sketches his letters connect n it never looks outta place....
RI-nice dusk sketch likin the S alot
knoxin-think its time to give up on that because youve been trying it for a couple of months n you have not shown any great progression....

garbage down tha way
08-17-2009, 08:54 AM
ya seyo that top piece is so dope.

DonaldFour
08-17-2009, 09:22 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture157.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture156.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
08-17-2009, 11:39 AM
gtfo with that toy shit foo.

-Wings-
08-17-2009, 01:58 PM
no offense to you, but your pieces look very stiff to me, like, no flow at all whatsoever. its like you're trying too hard. your throws arent bad at all though. try not trying so hard and just do up some up new letter styles, fuck with some new shit, you know what i mean?

I sort of get what your saying, I sorta been on the writers block and its hard to come up with new ideas. Its hard to make something you really like when youve used up your best ideas. :) But thanks, I work on my throws alot, and paint alot with them. (Trying to get good at hands, throws and pieces ;p)

ZENKER
08-17-2009, 02:34 PM
I sort of get what your saying, I sorta been on the writers block and its hard to come up with new ideas. Its hard to make something you really like when youve used up your best ideas. :) But thanks, I work on my throws alot, and paint alot with them. (Trying to get good at hands, throws and pieces ;p)

Yeah its hard for me to explain what i meant with words idk, if this was in person it would be easier i could just draw examples haha.

but like i said your throws are nice, post some shit of them painted!

Queezy
08-17-2009, 02:45 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/PUDGEaugust09.jpg
Fucked up the outline on the middle left part of the E, whatever.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2597/3829149553_764a177fdd.jpg
Bottom Page Bump.
Seyo - I think your shit flows, same style letters not disproportional and they don't look shitty. If I saw that painted with a little color I'd be feeling it.
Rhode - Always coming with solid shit, maybe for a small adjustment make the o and c have some kind of small part that doesn't fully connect to the letter or extension like the rest of the letters.
Donald - Kinda feelin the y on the second, hit toy blackbooks and keep working.

EST2007
08-17-2009, 03:10 PM
BS POLICE clear out ur friggin PMs kid, i dont have my cell

heyheyhey
08-17-2009, 03:47 PM
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/0908030931000.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/0908171207001.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/0908171232000.jpg
http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm159/igraffix122/0908171232001.jpg

B.S. POLICE
08-17-2009, 05:09 PM
BS POLICE clear out ur friggin PMs kid, i dont have my cell

ditto

-Wings-
08-17-2009, 05:34 PM
Yeah its hard for me to explain what i meant with words idk, if this was in person it would be easier i could just draw examples haha.

but like i said your throws are nice, post some shit of them painted!

Hahah id like to but no pics, dont usually take my camera out seein how its not mine. But I think next time I walk around or go painting ill take it out to show ya whats up in newfoundland ;)!

Also sews you got some dope throws, but you gotta work on your pieces.

heyheyhey
08-17-2009, 05:58 PM
thanks man
i know the z needs work cuz the centre point of the z is too high

BigBlueViolence
08-17-2009, 06:12 PM
I think the biggest issue is your W, Sews.
It's stumpy looking.

http://i32.tinypic.com/2lbj343.jpg

B.S. POLICE
08-17-2009, 06:12 PM
i like donalds shit i think he belongs here

Alts13
08-17-2009, 07:04 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01973.jpg

got an A3 blackbook this is first page i'm working on

Donald knows his stuff he deserves to be in here in my opinion

KnoxIn
08-17-2009, 07:18 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3529/p8173890.jpg
its all done well i might throw in some other shit i dunno crits??

alts- i dunno i think its alright i just dont like your letters...
hey- just watch your proportions

fromthegrave
08-17-2009, 07:36 PM
i dont like your letters.
Alts ur stuff is fresh. Different from other styles

(SoS)Viruz
08-17-2009, 08:48 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3529/p8173890.jpg
its all done well i might throw in some other shit i dunno crits??

alts- i dunno i think its alright i just dont like your letters...
hey- just watch your proportions

Dude look everyone is going to say the same thing about your graff or whatever 3D. Look I'll give you a DIRECT Crit if you do a Simple. and Simple I mean........Letters from your Keyboard. Cause when i crit your Simple letters it well apply to your 3D a little bit....

EST2007
08-17-2009, 08:54 PM
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/Photo_081709_001low.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
08-17-2009, 08:56 PM
take it to the toy forum not worth the intermediate

Stussy
08-17-2009, 10:48 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5301/photo937.jpg

BigBlueViolence
08-17-2009, 11:21 PM
That R and Y are both fuckin' BOSS

LeaksOne
08-17-2009, 11:24 PM
i agree. one of the sexiest R's ive seen.

Chocolate Icing
08-18-2009, 01:00 AM
Renee

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z78/aristolochioide/renneee.jpg
Comments/crits on this?
Feel free to go hard on this shit.

DonaldFour
08-18-2009, 01:22 AM
Renee

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z78/aristolochioide/renneee.jpg
Comments/crits on this?
Feel free to go hard on this shit.

only thing i dont like about it is the last e.

DonaldFour
08-18-2009, 02:46 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y146/magicwaffle/Picture158.jpg

any thoughts/crits?

smesta
08-18-2009, 03:39 AM
To be honest man your last 2 letters don't look like they belong at all. Keep practicing. draw your shit upright worry about the slant later.

DonaldFour
08-18-2009, 03:50 AM
i see what you mean. thanks dude

Scratch
08-18-2009, 04:14 AM
good crit. i agree. im also not to fond of the name "Yamies" itself. reminds me of pajamas.

top one: fix the m. especially the right leg.
bottom one: rework the Y, I, and E. Your A looks good.

Scratch
08-18-2009, 04:15 AM
btw whys it say FOXFANNEWS in the corner? haha

DonaldFour
08-18-2009, 10:07 AM
btw whys it say FOXFANNEWS in the corner? haha

oh it's a notebook i got at comic con this summer haha. it was free so im just making use of it by sketching in it haha

HAIRCUT
08-18-2009, 12:23 PM
KERNS

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2606/3833375539_0f179955e5.jpg

Stussy
08-18-2009, 01:22 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5301/photo937.jpg

pussy bump

-Wings-
08-18-2009, 02:00 PM
Ive never been huge on these type styles but its okay ^^.
Also renee or whatever ya name is thats a sick sketch!

Colored it.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2769.jpg

BigBlueViolence
08-18-2009, 02:41 PM
KERNS

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2606/3833375539_0f179955e5.jpg

The N is way off to me, man.

http://i30.tinypic.com/jqmd5e.jpg

zennegen
08-18-2009, 02:46 PM
bigblue knows whats up.

sike_21
08-18-2009, 04:21 PM
its getting good in this forum i need to catch up
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4224.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4226.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4228.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4225.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4227.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4231.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4235.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4236.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4229.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4233.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4234.jpg

l0l mad self promo

-Wings-
08-18-2009, 04:49 PM
The way you make the bottom of your S's and E's go out far looks kinda stupid imo... :/ But the rest of the stuff looks pretty nice. (That s by it self looks very good)

Just did this.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2772.jpg

B.S. POLICE
08-18-2009, 06:54 PM
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5263/screencapture20.png

Stuck
08-18-2009, 07:06 PM
honestly how the hell do u do ur fills??? just scribble all over and hope for the best? cus the turn out wilding everytime

B.S. POLICE
08-18-2009, 07:09 PM
start with lites flick with wide end, progress gradually into darks, keep everything balanced and layer for blending

HëRbN
08-18-2009, 07:41 PM
Thats a sick effect BS popo. props dude, think you can do that in paint though? lol itd be tricky

B.S. POLICE
08-18-2009, 07:43 PM
yeah i could do that with paint pretty easy, the only prob would be getting all the colors

BigBlueViolence
08-18-2009, 07:50 PM
Yeah, you can't really blend colors with paint,
unless you used the very unsatisfying method involving a pen tube.

B.S. POLICE
08-18-2009, 08:32 PM
yeah but you can mist and layer

Queezy
08-18-2009, 08:47 PM
It kinda of reminds me of the newish rime fills
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3569/3767434124_38d2e89190.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2534/3751951511_f07ca870c6.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3595/3615216930_63a473f6db.jpg

B.S. POLICE
08-18-2009, 08:56 PM
exactly what i was going for. cept the technuiqe it self was done way back in the 80s by SCAPE

BlacktodaFuture
08-18-2009, 09:17 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_4234.jpg


i like your s!

-Wings-
08-18-2009, 09:33 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2769.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2772.jpg

Bump For No crits yet.. :/ Snap loving that effect and the openess of the letters.

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2009, 09:46 PM
Every time you sketch is getting cleaner........As for fill we already know so Im not going to be hard on you.......

But as far as letters......I WANT TO SEE PROGRESSION in other netters besides the S man......Not extensions to elude progression, cause adding arrow doesn't make it a progressed letter it just means you have a letter with arrows on it feel me.

And your Bottom style is WAY better than the top imo. Except for the O. if you were to make the O the same as the top one as the bottom you'd be solid.....But your Pieces are nice no doubt.

(Thats to Seyo btw all of that)

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2009, 09:57 PM
*** CHARACTER BATTLE***
THEME: Your Choice
DEADLINE: Aug 24,2009 (In case other ppl want in)
RULES: Any color,Sketch,Photoshop is allowed.
PM entries to: BORG, or (SoS)Viruz

I thought some of you guys would be interested. COMMON LETS DO IT.......And BTW Greve battle has been post just not accepted yet for some reason.

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2009, 10:10 PM
This will be the Illest section of the Toy Forum. Where the Intermediate writers will post pics, and give Crits/props, etc. This is strictly for writers who are above Toy but aren't Big Boy yet.

Rules:
1)This is Strictly Intermediate.Which means No noobies allowed.
2)Keep the shit talkin to a min. We are here to check out others work not beef them. (Thats to all you hott heads)
3)If you post a pic, be prepared to get crited. So dont whine when someone give a negative about you pic ight.
4)keep the Random Chit Chat to a low.(Since we are steppin up theirs no need to flood this with random-ness, keep it in the Toy BB,or Toy Chat thread.)
5)Keep the FLICKS COMMIN

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Just Bumping this..Cause some of you forget..... :cool:

-Wings-
08-18-2009, 11:17 PM
Finished this.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2775.jpg
Pretty basic but im not good at detail with no markers.. :P

BlacktodaFuture
08-18-2009, 11:24 PM
the graff is better then the backround, no offence but the backround looks like a childrens drawing.

-Wings-
08-18-2009, 11:30 PM
None taken, It was done very quickly >x).

garbage down tha way
08-18-2009, 11:52 PM
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5263/screencapture20.png

you should paint something like that!

EDIT: fuck, this whole page is already about that...

smesta
08-18-2009, 11:53 PM
Wings- I think when you do a background you need to ask yourself what the relevance is. Tie it to the piece, either as a theme or a style. How does a a country scene relate to your piece?

(SoS)Viruz
08-18-2009, 11:54 PM
Hoer postin yo stuff in a min. Hookin up the scanner.

-Wings-
08-19-2009, 12:04 AM
Wings- I think when you do a background you need to ask yourself what the relevance is. Tie it to the piece, either as a theme or a style. How does a a country scene relate to your piece?

Look at the colors of the background then take a look at the piece.
The whole point was for a volcano with rocks flying towards the piece. This was my goal, the woods were just add ons. But it would to bare with just a couple trees so I made a tiny forest And a lake.

smesta
08-19-2009, 08:20 AM
Obviously I can see you used the same colours in the piece as in the background but the piece is just floating there. It has no relevance to the background (even though you used the same markers) they could be two different pictures nothing would be gained or lost splitting the two. The piece is not enhanced by the back ground nor is the back ground enhanced by the piece. If you wanted to tie the two together maybe shatter a letter with one of the flying pieces?? That way the two tie in together. Maybe I am just critical because I liked your piece more before you did the background :) Don't mean to offend.

e97
08-19-2009, 12:24 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC02247.jpg

Epoc
08-19-2009, 01:58 PM
meh meh meh... toy thread.
i can see you like the structure of that V and try to recreate it for everything else, which eventually is not the way to go. simples <3

Kaiser71
08-19-2009, 02:03 PM
Seyo...Virus' crit prettty much summed it up...I'd just leave some of yours as just outlines in black or single color fills until you can get your hands on some markers maybe?
BS Po....dope...love how the highlights define the letters in a couple places...
E97...whats the deal with the random letters everywhere?

Finished the fill on this one....
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0801091528.jpg
Painted this last night...
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0819091350.jpg

B.S. POLICE
08-19-2009, 02:05 PM
e97 take taht back to the toy thread

NEZ89
08-19-2009, 04:47 PM
flyin out to there in a week, lookin to paint a few legals(at least until i get used to the city)
can someone help me out wit some legal/chill spots?

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-19-2009, 07:08 PM
yo bs wana do a throw exchange?

EGO31
08-19-2009, 07:47 PM
I think I love you kaiser. I may even have to bite some of those letter forms fo later..

HAIRCUT
08-19-2009, 08:49 PM
mmmmm, still not sure if we post paint in here....

quick 2 letter fill....

any crits?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3614/3837063131_0e698b84e5.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
08-19-2009, 09:00 PM
mmmmm, still not sure if we post paint in here..

any crits?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3614/3837063131_0e698b84e5.jpg

the K looks like it is slapping a big ghetto booty.

HAIRCUT
08-19-2009, 09:04 PM
you know it baby.

skeetz
08-19-2009, 09:05 PM
^if the E is capital then you need to make the top bar bigger so that its easier to see that, and if its lower case i feel that there should be at least a dot for the hole in the top part, or a line or something.

not rly getting any good crits in the toy thread so ima try it here again.
xchange with KANSR/KANSER. im thinking about adding a guy on scaffolding on the left painting the middle piece but that might cover too much of the letters. crits?

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1751_IMG.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
08-19-2009, 09:26 PM
kansr

like cancer?

-Wings-
08-19-2009, 09:53 PM
New piece.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2785.jpg

Keanu > Looks okay, Im liking the drips on the k tho.
Kansr > Meh im not huge on them pieces.

BlacktodaFuture
08-19-2009, 10:02 PM
^ not feeling it, not saying that its bad, or talking shit, just dont like it.

1 Love
08-19-2009, 10:06 PM
http://i884.photobucket.com/albums/ac48/thatonetagga/Picture062.jpgwhat you guys think?

(SoS)Viruz
08-19-2009, 10:16 PM
Sey- YES YOU FINALY TRIED SOMETHIN NEW :D

The best letters, are the S and the R.

What happend to the top you your letters you use to do a stem. I say Incorporate that into that style and see what you did right in the last one and do it on this one

-Wings-
08-19-2009, 10:23 PM
Hahah I just like to be different, I usually do use stems on my s's. Just this piece I decided to change it up a tiny bit. Glad you like it :). I was liking it myself actually.

RhodeIsland
08-19-2009, 10:26 PM
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte114.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte115.jpg

Just fuckin around

skeetz
08-19-2009, 10:29 PM
kansr

like cancer?

idk its not my name, i think he just liked the letters and it ended up being that, but you'd have to ask him yourself.

BlacktodaFuture
08-19-2009, 10:58 PM
Just an S.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/Startofabigpeice001.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-19-2009, 11:40 PM
idk but i hate that s i just dont like anything abut it (no ofence) just dontlike it

(SoS)Viruz
08-19-2009, 11:45 PM
For the Karat battle bettewn me and Cile....I need to understand the body for this one......I got a idea, its a matter of putting it on paper....Not done...I stopped on the face to do some Block in on some other peice of paper. As you can see I marked Ligamints and joints and shit....
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0008.jpg


SCANNER SUCK DICK...I hope I can get a cam......

RhodeIsland
08-20-2009, 12:11 AM
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte114.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss105/Hyteone/Hyte115.jpg

Just fuckin around

End of page bump

BlacktodaFuture
08-20-2009, 12:24 AM
idk but i hate that s i just dont like anything abut it (no ofence) just dontlike it

well, the structure is fine? and etc? and thats just your opinion.... =[

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-20-2009, 12:38 AM
idk man its just idk out there yea everything is where it should be but its like one of those autistic kids of your sketches like every big writer dose a wack ass peice on accident like an autistic or down syndrum kid

BlacktodaFuture
08-20-2009, 12:42 AM
idk man its just idk out there yea everything is where it should be but its like one of those autistic kids of your sketches like every big writer dose a wack ass peice on accident like an autistic or down syndrum kid

...are you calling me a autistic child?

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-20-2009, 12:43 AM
no your sketch is you autistic child

BlacktodaFuture
08-20-2009, 12:47 AM
no your sketch is you autistic child

how do i make it, you know, not mentally retarded.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-20-2009, 12:48 AM
abortion

BlacktodaFuture
08-20-2009, 12:53 AM
abortion

ill get the coat hanger.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-20-2009, 01:10 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2j0jc46.jpg
here you go and i added instructions on how to ue the coat hanger

-Wings-
08-20-2009, 01:22 AM
New piece.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2785.jpg

Keanu > Looks okay, Im liking the drips on the k tho.
Kansr > Meh im not huge on them pieces.

Bump

rhodeisland > looks good but why are you writing you suck?...
slipy > im not huge on them handstyles.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-20-2009, 01:36 AM
neither am i

Chocolate Icing
08-20-2009, 01:49 AM
Those You Sucks are great RhodeIsland!

BS Police that Vile is pretty cool but I think you could use colors that go better together. Like complimentaries and warm and cool colors etc. It seems your colors ended up mixing and making some brown quite a bit. I think they are all kind of clashy when put together, it makes me not want to look at it honestly, not trying to be a dick. Please excuse my crit if you find it to harsh, just trying to help by giving an honest crit

I would assume you know who Barry Mcgee is maybe? Look at how nice his colors look together.
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z78/aristolochioide/barry_mcgee11-795811.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
08-20-2009, 01:52 AM
slipy: ohh you want more lucidy in it? like, pizazz and shit.

Morbidity
08-20-2009, 02:20 AM
^lawlz

exchange with rekone. wanted to do a simple but rly hated it so i made a different one, ill post both for shits and giggles.

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1745_IMG.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1744_IMG.jpg
sry about the second one not being clean, but i was experimenting with one of those steel tips you have to dip into ink everytime you make a line, and the ink bled on the thin paper.
sick ive been mangled the last few days but ill post my exchange tommorow

Geraldo
08-20-2009, 11:56 AM
Seyo...Virus' crit prettty much summed it up...I'd just leave some of yours as just outlines in black or single color fills until you can get your hands on some markers maybe?
BS Po....dope...love how the highlights define the letters in a couple places...
E97...whats the deal with the random letters everywhere?

Finished the fill on this one....
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0801091528.jpg
Painted this last night...
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0819091350.jpg

awesome fill

much less than awesome letters. in fact, they kinna suck. work on that

kinna suck as in they get worse the more i look at them.

Geraldo
08-20-2009, 11:59 AM
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5263/screencapture20.png

this is fuckin awesome!! right down to the letters! the I and E are fresh to death! C kinna represents a G

DuskSAN
08-20-2009, 12:02 PM
C?

BigBlueViolence
08-20-2009, 12:02 PM
It's a V

Geraldo
08-20-2009, 12:04 PM
the third letter you illiterate cunt

BigBlueViolence
08-20-2009, 12:07 PM
That's an L, you illiterate cunt.

Incite
08-20-2009, 01:00 PM
That's an L, you illiterate cunt.

i second this post

EST2007
08-20-2009, 01:05 PM
i thought the 3rd letter was a L, spelling VILE...

lol you guys beat me to it

Bombing With Insurance
08-20-2009, 02:16 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=7775
Its settled

zennegen
08-20-2009, 02:20 PM
That's an L, you illiterate cunt.

fucking LOL'D.

STFUPPERCUT
08-20-2009, 02:51 PM
??? post some fuckin pictarzzzzzzzzz


http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture002-1.jpg

its not that great ...almsot dont the fill, crits are welcome

skeetz
08-20-2009, 02:51 PM
sick ive been mangled the last few days but ill post my exchange tommorow

im glad you like it, was something new i tried and a lot of people on here ripped me up for that sketch, so its good to know that at least you thought it was good. im looking forward to seeing what youve come up with.

edit: stfuppercut- i can barely make out anything in that picture try getting a better picture.

STFUPPERCUT
08-20-2009, 03:32 PM
im glad you like it, was something new i tried and a lot of people on here ripped me up for that sketch, so its good to know that at least you thought it was good. im looking forward to seeing what youve come up with.

edit: stfuppercut- i can barely make out anything in that picture try getting a better picture.

word man sorry, im trying to get a scanner fucking webcam from almost 10 years ago is shit :/

skeetz
08-20-2009, 04:51 PM
its cool, i know what its like, getting good pics is always a problem.

i noticed a lot of people talking about hot and cool colors and learning your color wheel etc, well i did some searching and found a great site.
www.colorschemedesigner.com
its great to get ideas when your stuck, and find out what colors would look good with what youve done, thought it might help some of the cats on here.

W_G_O_N_E
08-20-2009, 05:03 PM
that site is rreally nice skeetz thx 4 postin that shit i always seem to get stuck somewhere on the colors that might help in some situatuiions

skeetz
08-20-2009, 09:41 PM
yeah i always get stuck as well, and for all of us who havent been to artschool, i feel its nice to have a site that does all the work on finding colors for you.

experimented with some fills on the kansr exchange i inked the outlines for yesterday. still need to finish the white at the top, making it either a cracked concrete wall or a brick wall.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1752_IMG.jpg

ESKiMO2
08-20-2009, 09:47 PM
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5565/brittanykun.jpg

Bump. I'm on vacation so no new pics but I did a heroin sketch that came out pretty hot.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-20-2009, 09:57 PM
yooo that shit is sexy boyy status.... slapme when you get home for saying tha but it is

Watfe
08-20-2009, 11:24 PM
has anyone taken the time to actually look at the vile piece and see the one real flaw? ok fancy fill and ok letters, better than a majority in this thread, but seriously is everyone missing the main letter flaw?

NoCanControl
08-20-2009, 11:39 PM
the K looks like it is slapping a big ghetto booty.

HAHAHAHA. FUCKING ROFL^^^^


fucking exxxchange

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0006.jpg



and first page of the black bookie.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0007-1.jpg

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0008.jpg




ill post more later. i started smoking, its a power booster to your art skills.

garbage down tha way
08-21-2009, 12:16 AM
has anyone taken the time to actually look at the vile piece and see the one real flaw? ok fancy fill and ok letters, better than a majority in this thread, but seriously is everyone missing the main letter flaw?

its flawless you dildo!

RhodeIsland
08-21-2009, 12:20 AM
has anyone taken the time to actually look at the vile piece and see the one real flaw? ok fancy fill and ok letters, better than a majority in this thread, but seriously is everyone missing the main letter flaw?


Stop hatin'

aciddemos
08-21-2009, 01:03 AM
nocancontrol - that shit is mad tight im digging it
eskimo2 - i like the colors dude and your structure is mad ill
skeetz - i like it dude looks hot

ok first thing i really spent time on in mad long crits?

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/5746/photo95r.jpg

RhodeIsland
08-21-2009, 01:16 AM
Those colors look awful together

aciddemos
08-21-2009, 01:23 AM
im color blind give me a break

downunder
08-21-2009, 03:37 AM
You're letter blind too, I take it?

garbage down tha way
08-21-2009, 10:09 AM
Buuuurrrrnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!! !!!

Kaiser71
08-21-2009, 10:18 AM
nocancontrol - that shit is mad tight im digging it
eskimo2 - i like the colors dude and your structure is mad ill
skeetz - i like it dude looks hot

ok first thing i really spent time on in mad long crits?

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/5746/photo95r.jpg

Not saying it's your only problem, but since the colors and letters were already pointed out...that 3D looks kind of fucked to me. For what you're going for every little yellow bar should be parallel...just saying...

fromthegrave
08-21-2009, 10:20 AM
has anyone taken the time to actually look at the vile piece and see the one real flaw? ok fancy fill and ok letters, better than a majority in this thread, but seriously is everyone missing the main letter flaw?

the shadow and highlight are on the sameside.. idk if that matters but i never do it.

aciddemos- it doesnt look good all together. do simples.

RhodeIsland
08-21-2009, 12:05 PM
im color blind give me a break

then don't color. -__-

fromthegrave
08-21-2009, 12:23 PM
yea im color blind too. Doesnt effect my coloring..

B.S. POLICE
08-21-2009, 12:49 PM
has anyone taken the time to actually look at the vile piece and see the one real flaw? ok fancy fill and ok letters, better than a majority in this thread, but seriously is everyone missing the main letter flaw?

please do go on.

sorry i havent been on in a bit i was busy getting my dick wet

RhodeIsland
08-21-2009, 01:03 PM
He's just mad cus no one had anything bad to say about your piece, but when we posts something no one has anything good to say.

(SoS)Viruz
08-21-2009, 01:07 PM
BS- Thats a Lah-Git statement.
Hyte-He's gay sooooooooo no one cares about him and nice "You suck" Sketch btw
Acid-TOY BB

skeetz
08-21-2009, 01:50 PM
fucking exxxchange
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0006.jpg


sweet, i love the effects you added on the e and the p, good stuff. I finally completely finished yours, absolutely love your name its got great flow. seriously if you werent already writing it i'd take it as a new name.

heres the final product
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/117-1753_IMG.jpg

NoCanControl
08-21-2009, 02:46 PM
Fuck ya food thanks! I can tell u spent slot of time on mine. You have something I lack, focus. Lol

FlippingChickens
08-21-2009, 03:59 PM
the other letters are still not finished,ill upload them tonight
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2410.jpg

fromthegrave
08-21-2009, 04:05 PM
thats not intermediate.

FlippingChickens
08-21-2009, 04:19 PM
suck my dick

zennegen
08-21-2009, 04:33 PM
thats not intermediate.

lol, i agree.

BlacktodaFuture
08-21-2009, 04:50 PM
thats not intermediate.

haha very true.

Alts13
08-21-2009, 05:19 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC01994.jpg
outline for Rayz

BigBlueViolence
08-21-2009, 05:25 PM
That's fucking dope, man.

Did you get a change to see the Alts I did a while back?

Alts13
08-21-2009, 05:30 PM
nah man sorry i will scroll back a few and look

Alts13
08-21-2009, 05:32 PM
the green one yea kinda throwlike? i'm so wack at throws so good to see my name in that style

skeetz
08-21-2009, 05:33 PM
i agree with fromthegrave, flippinchickin you need to spend more time on your letters and less time on your fills.

thx nocancontrol, i try... occasionally. lol.

anybody else down for an exchange. probs wont do another as worked out as the one for nocancontrol cuz im running out of colors, and wanna get better with my basics and restock markers before i do crazy fills and backgrounds again.

black midget
08-21-2009, 05:39 PM
.

zennegen
08-21-2009, 05:43 PM
i think yours is better, except for your S. and the R.

black midget
08-21-2009, 05:50 PM
i think yours is better, except for your S. and the R.

lol thanks:p
yea man i agree i wasnt to happy with the s or the r either

Alts13
08-21-2009, 05:54 PM
when i see both those alphabet canvases it just makes me think that they have both seen the alphabet canvas that milfhunter did recently

this one
http://i28.tinypic.com/2m622kp.jpg

ESKiMO2
08-21-2009, 05:55 PM
Yo I noticed this on 12oz but I have to say it again, I feel like Alts works really hard and it shows because his styles are always top notch

BigBlueViolence
08-21-2009, 05:56 PM
the green one yea kinda throwlike? i'm so wack at throws so good to see my name in that style
All I can do are throws man, haha.

Alts13
08-21-2009, 05:57 PM
skeetz im down for an outline exchange - my markers are dying too

what do you write

black midget
08-21-2009, 05:59 PM
when i see both those alphabet canvases it just makes me think that they have both seen the alphabet canvas that milfhunter did recently

this one
http://i28.tinypic.com/2m622kp.jpg
that's fresh! and na my shit aint even on canvas just regular paper, i dont think any of my fills look like milf's, his is better

Alts13
08-21-2009, 06:02 PM
dont worry i was claiming any biting was going on it is just what i automatically thought of

fromthegrave
08-21-2009, 08:01 PM
suck my dick

Word? half my bombingscience career is talking shit, and your toy ass says some shit like that? Drop the pencil and jump off a building faggot. You suck at graffiti.
and im pretty sure black midget is the same person. u suck too.

http://i27.tinypic.com/a0i32x.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/2urxzde.jpg
simples n stuff.
sry for the size.. n cursing.

black midget
08-21-2009, 09:29 PM
.

RhodeIsland
08-21-2009, 09:32 PM
Shut up toy.

RhodeIsland
08-21-2009, 09:33 PM
And I'll battle you, you fucking toy

(SoS)Viruz
08-21-2009, 09:33 PM
Vapor battle Due. Aug 31.....

Greve battle has been posted but no one accepted it