Intermediate Thread. {BlackBook,Throwies,Exchanges, and Painted work) Flicks>Talk

[HAIRCUT]

eskimo - top of the m above the a throws me off
sike - the k seems outta place still
haircut - not sure exactly what it is?
rank - like the shadow on the piece. sick throwie.



its a 2 letter throw. KE. i write KEANU.

[NoCanControl]

Keanu and keane beef.

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14.jpg
crits?

[HAIRCUT]

no no. respect to KEANE. that nukka will burn me.
im all about peace and love baby.
and smokin dust.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2449/3964073423_9dcd4d1d21.jpg

[UpstateHate585]

first sketch in a few days. sorry for shitty pic

http://i34.tinypic.com/jkyv0x.jpg

[NoCanControl]

haircut, i like where you are going.

[NoCanControl]

KEANU exchange? i write kans

[jersOneTIC]

trestoner...exchange?

[Epoc]

upstate- slime confuses it. lets see one wihout it.


http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/1595/dsc01358.jpg
letters acceptable finally?

[RedEyes]

What the hell is happening in this ^?

[Queezy]

I really really really hope your joking epoc.

[BigBlueViolence]

What would he be joking about?
The fill is retarded but the letters are alright.

[Alts13]

I dunno the letters are OK, but there is so much negative space, I owuld try filling it out or bringing the letters closer, but that is just my opinion

[MiggityMAK]

http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/drez829/P1040425.jpg


-_-

havnt been on in a while...

[garbage down tha way]

Epoc that shits straight gangster son! nice letters !

Edit: mak too on that bob digital futuristic space tip!

[-Wings-]

Anyways havent been sketching lately but I dropped these two the other day out of boedom. Not that good but I got good ideas for the next sketch I do (wont be the same hopefully)

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF07102009_00000.jpg
I didnt like this one but I figured I might as well post it up :/
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF07102009_00001.jpg


bump to new page :)
oh yea epoc that fill ruined it :/. The colors on the s look messy and bad.

[EST2007]

ur basic letter structure is always the same, just slight variations. try switching it up completely and see what happens

[sike_21]

mak shit is fireeee

[TaskOne]

Haven't been on here in a while..some recent stuff.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/task3.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/DSC_0499.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/DSC_0498.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/DSC_0472.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/DSC_0471.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

I dig the throw,
but I don't understand why the top of your T has camtoe.

[Scream Out]

I dig the throw,
but I don't understand why the top of your T has camtoe.

obviously for letter consistency, all the other letters got it too, i do the same shit with my throws as do a lot of writers
i dig it task

[sank.]

that t is super fresh. only thing i'd say is try and make the size of the letters consistent, unless of course you want them to get progressively bigger.

[BigBlueViolence]

obviously for letter consistency, all the other letters got it too, i do the same shit with my throws as do a lot of writers
i dig it task
I just think it looks goofy,
I didn't even notice it in the other letters,
it unnecessary in all the letters except the K.
It's clean though, don't get me wrong.

[Scream Out]

another bunk ass sketch, i reallllyyy fucked this one up on the first E
i should really start drawing with pencil first instead of marker...
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo447.jpg

[Alts13]

Task I like the throw and the top piece, although I think the A is hidden a bit too much. the other pieces are cool but the throw and top piece stand out

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2455/3994143198_75129c2f61.jpg
and a lil toy burner im gunna finish
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2422/3994143226_dbbcdd22bd.jpg

[UpstateHate585]

not sure how i feel about this one
http://i38.tinypic.com/349cf2c.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

the I N and M are nice, but I'm not really feeling the S, and the eye doesn't really go with the style of the piece, in my opinion

and coke, you should really smooth all that shit out.
The letters aren't bad, but they're really jagged.

[UpstateHate585]

the I N and M are nice, but I'm not really feeling the S, and the eye doesn't really go with the style of the piece, in my opinion


yeah i dont like the eye either

[cocacola]

alright thanks bro

[boodah]

scream out- overkill with the crosses.

[Scream Out]

allways my man, wouldnt be another bunk sketch without em

heres another
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo456.jpg
the "ver" part killed it

[Epoc]

[/IMG]
and a lil toy burner im gunna finish


^^thats an oxymoron

^^ fuck yeh. marry me scream. we can have canadian babies.

[ESKiMO2]

eski youve definitely stepped up your game since the last time i saw your shit.which has been quite a while.the only letter im not feeling and imo needs work is the E.it just looks unnatural.the top bar of the e makes it look less like an E.the way it flares out in the back is weird i guess.but other than that the sketch in itself is pretty dope.lookin good man.props.

lol i didn't even do anything. I just went like 2 months just smoking weed and not drawing graffiti and here i am. I feel like i've improved. Thanks. And I could tell who it is by the number of periods and lack of space between the next letter and the period lol

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

here a lil somthing...im new in this thread so be gentile hahahttp://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/Photo57.jpg

[Queezy]

You don't get better by people being gentle... Those colors or style don't fit the name at all, and the v looks more like a u. I'm not great at critiquing .

["Bi2aR"]

bleh, not feeling this one very much
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3506/3992596468_ce5a323b1a.jpg

[NoCanControl]

begar would be such a tight name.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

name dont have to match the style dude.
not felling the zigzag thing in your fill be2ar

[PROJECT LINK]

scream-yo i cant tell what it is bro lol but its kool to look at.
bi2-yo dope colors dude, i like the letters to man.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=2549
it sais L<3VE..any critts

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2560.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2562.jpg

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2560.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2562.jpg
to dark couldnt finish :( kinda sucks

[Epoc]

^^ ahah sick zoner, heavy on the the add ons, but comes out great. its weird seeing the harbor city in here. what type of paint there?

[NoCanControl]

I dig the throw,
but I don't understand why the top of your T has camtoe.

Don't pull out the toe, if u ain't ready to go

[unsuccsessfull]

2 doller and american accents yo

[NoCanControl]

your style is accually pretty good man, but you should work on evening out the piece's balance. its off a bit.

[LOPe_GCI]

^^that zoner piece is aiight. i would say get rid of some of the addons that just make it look sloppy an u wuldnt have to do so many cutbacks.

some doodoo from my 3 hour long class this morning..
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/throw.jpg

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/destil.jpg
watchyall think?
i need to sketch more tha last e is basura

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02180.jpg
Riot exchange
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02177.jpg
Vedo

[.od.]

scream out- that last piece is ill
old pic for talking
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture118-1.jpg

[Queezy]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2656/3995617765_ce42300ff0.jpg
I'm gonna re outline 3-d with black in a week, and yes I know the y is fucked haha

[SkorE1]

Any1 wanna do an exchange? Im down with watever words. Just tryin 2 progress in style.

[TaskOne]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c323/snipakip/DSC_0464.jpg
art class chillin, not done the fill yet...im feelin everything on this page

[Queezy]

U in cali right task? seen a similiar style here

[Alts13]

I like that Task

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02182.jpg
Freak

and went overboard on the fill on this, was just fucking around with dying markers
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02181.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

unsuccessfull- Its nice to see some painted peices that are actually intermediate, i like the way you layed down the paint, maybe chill with some of the extentions/balance it out a bit
*edit:*

That second pic u posted could be a dope 800x600 wallpaper im acutally gonan fuck around with it in photoshop if you dont mind me using it, graff wallpapers are always dope.

lope- the bottem throw looks good the top one n ot so much, i like your handstyle bro kind of remends me of mine plus i used to do tons of black pen freestyles in class. the peice is really good to man look like your solid intermediate hand/throw/peicing. keep it up bro and keep postin yuor work.

.od.- I rember when u posted this before, it looks good i liek the style just work with the way you run ur letters into eachother like it looks like yuors flows but i think it could look better

queezy- Nice spot bro good roller.

task- Post it up when ur done coloring man looks like its going to turn out nicely, i find you can do some fresh fills with pencil crayon.

alts- Still postin steady thats what i like too see ahaha. Hows that canvas you were workin on coming along? I like the second sketch bro those fills are really inspiring. keep up the good work man ...dope shit.

[fromthegrave]

well this page is kick ass. i gota start posting.

[mawks]

don't know if I should post here or the normal toy thread.. let me know
zoner, the e and the r are dope, z is okay, the o and n could be improved
alts, shit's dope for sure
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0065dfea.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc006614a7.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0065cb62.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc006614a7.jpg
exchange with grose hd (not tripsix)
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0066049d.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc0067435e-1-1.jpg
sum for my cus
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc00c334b8.jpg

[UpstateHate585]

That second pic u posted could be a dope 800x600 wallpaper im acutally gonan fuck around with it in photoshop if you dont mind me using it, graff wallpapers are always dope.



heres one i use. took it recently (resized for here)

http://i37.tinypic.com/2igetys.jpg

[mawks]

anyone wanna do an exchange??? bored as fuck

[STFUPPERCUT]

don't know if I should post here or the normal toy thread.. let me know
zoner, the e and the r are dope, z is okay, the o and n could be improved


I really liked the way the Z and O flow together. the whole peice is nice acutally just needs to be balanced


heres one i use. took it recently (resized for here)

http://i37.tinypic.com/2igetys.jpg

thats pretty dope man i got a deec coolection of soem graff walls if u ever want some plus im pickin up a new camera so im gonna be posting HQ flicks of my book and of the train yard son. :D You should send me that wallpaper just Hi-Res if u have it?

Im gonna roll a doob and work on a peice.

[Trestoner707]

can i get some crits. every now and then i pull something outta my sleeve

[Watfe]

http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs248.snc1/9526_302945795716_738150716_9273988_6647923_n.jpg

[Alts13]

Wafte - looks good, the head maybe a bit big, might just be me tho lol

started fucking around with a different name, Gutrot

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02183.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02184.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02185.jpg

["Bi2aR"]

collab with soyel
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/5554/soyeandbizcollab.jpg

[Scream Out]

that gutrot shit is fresh

[UpstateHate585]

gutrot. i like it haha

except the last one.

[STFUPPERCUT]

watfe- yeah man i like that type of shti right there figuritive drawin is some really fun shit to get into. The only thing id say is exactly what alts pointed out the head does look a bit big in proportion with the arms. A good thing to rememberand practice is how many head heights it is to a arm/hand/leg. Anyways good shit man id like to see more.

alts- i kno what u mean bro its nice to fuck around with different names every once in a while to not get bored with the same letter combos. That 2nd piece is FIRE. the throw is pretty whack tho man i would keep all the letters separate first then start working on getting them to flow together.

bi2ar- I saw this peice when u posted it before, i acutally really like it the fill could use a lil more umph but its good man nice work.


was workin on this today jsut finished up after thanks giving dinner.
I dont know if i like it yet but i deffinatly have better ideas for the next sketch.

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/2-1.jpg

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/1-2.jpg

Really shitty quality which i do apologize for but what do you guys think any crits..? im gonna ink it eventually.

im getting a new camera soon so ill be posting some actual good flicks lol.

[-Wings-]

Not really new, just a sketch I did out of boredom. Idunno if im gonna finish it right away. Needs a black outline marker, any sugjestions?
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF11102009_00000.jpg
Dont care if its the same at all, It was just a random sketch. lol

[(SoS)Viruz]

Diggin the E Seyo

Yo Exchnage? I owe like 5 fuckers on the site one and im in a sketchin mood anyway so i'll be postin

[-Wings-]

Yeah im done what you write?

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yeah im done what you write?

"Resn"
I've been doing it for a supper long time but haven't told anyone untill I beefed up by letters FEEL ME :cool:

[-Wings-]

I tried remember what your wrote but I honestly had no idea. Haha I dont pay attention much. Also rezn is going to be fun to do, Ill hook ya up with a proper sketch.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yeah I been thinkin about the Z instead of the S but Idk yet depends Ight man I'll start workin on yours

[thedudeman]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/prodo.jpg


http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/P101009084154.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/P101009082026.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/P101009082036.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/P101009082214.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/P101009082226.jpg[/

[STFUPPERCUT]

Looks good wings i like how u tweaked the e.

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/seyyy.png

Im high as fuck bro just zoning right in on this MS paint shit lol

I tweaked it a bit nothing to much i dont even kno if the Y looks improoved or not, i G'd out your char too lol..

[-Wings-]

Hahaha, thats burnt. I had no idea if that character was even good or not. I like what you did with the E, but the funny thing is I was going to do something like that already.But as for the Y, I personally like the why it is but looks nice the way you did it there to. Ill keep that structure in mind. And man its saturday night who is stoned? hahah

[STFUPPERCUT]

Hahaha, thats burnt. I had no idea if that character was even good or not. I like what you did with the E, but the funny thing is I was going to do something like that already.But as for the Y, I personally like the why it is but looks nice the way you did it there to. Ill keep that structure in mind. And man its saturday night who is stoned? hahah

Ya i agree with the Y i have a good idea for it but it requires you to flip the bottom part of it around, i donno hard to explain good sketch tho man im definitely a fan of your style. You should leave that character lookin all gangsta

[Scream Out]

Anybody wanna HS exchange

[STFUPPERCUT]

Anybody wanna HS exchange

Why not im bored as fuck bro, i rite luse/luser/lewz/lewzer ... doesnt really matter how you spell it ill post yours up pretty much right away. what do you write?

[Scream Out]

Why not im bored as fuck bro, i rite luse/luser/lewz/lewzer ... doesnt really matter how you spell it ill post yours up pretty much right away. what do you write?
Aever

Lewser
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo455.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture034aever.jpg

Sick bro thats a nasty handy of yuors thanks for the exchange

[Scream Out]

word, yours isnt too bad either.

for anybody who needs to work on a hand style: work on alphabets over n over, write out favorite quotes and song/album titles or band names and just keep working on making it flow, a handstyle done right can be as beautiful as a piece (imo)
and personally I prefer seeing a nice tag I think

[UpstateHate585]

i have always been bad at hands. i think i have the impression that they have to be done super fast. is that true?

[Scream Out]

faster the better but start slow till you have a feel for the letters

[UpstateHate585]

yeah. my shit always looks the same haha. i need to practice more.

want to do an exchange for shits and gigs?

[UpstateHate585]

well regardless, i suck lol.

http://i34.tinypic.com/akafk2.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/nyuu4i.jpg

yes im aware i stole the upside down cross

[STFUPPERCUT]

for anybody who needs to work on a hand style: work on alphabets over n over, write out favorite quotes and song/album titles or band names and just keep working on making it flow, a handstyle done right can be as beautiful as a piece (imo)
and personally I prefer seeing a nice tag I think

Ya man its true with every thing really the more you do something and practice the more you improve and develope. The first couple years i started really getting into tagging n bombing i remeber i was filling out note books whole pages in pencil then after id go thro and do it in pen and then finallly in marker.

But Im going to do a couple tags here and you can try tagging the words too if you want guy.

"Demons" " "Luser" "AEVER" " "ORELSE"" "OSCAR"

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/asdfsdfsdfsdf5.jpg

[sike_21]

nice hands
um over did my fill what else is new l0l any ways here
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_7533.jpg

[Watfe]

youre regressing...

[cocacola]

^^^ewwww
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3500/3998476776_94ff274410.jpg

[COBALT]

eschange anyone???

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02197.jpg
gutrot

[STFUPPERCUT]

lol alts i laughed out loud when i saw that char in pencil haha... whats the tag on the left say?? Aever?

[Alts13]

haha yea that char looked wack should have erased it lol, the tag says Gutrot but badly lol just using this name to fuck around with different looser styles

[Sanguine]

Shit pic.
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn200/Sanguine7/ZZZZZZZ14.jpg

[Watfe]

http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs248.snc1/9526_303956505716_738150716_9292743_964061_n.jpg

alts is improving!

[BlacktodaFuture]

handstyle exchanges?

[Epoc]

handstyle exchanges?

yup

"sizer" for me

wat you want?

[BlacktodaFuture]

Safe/Safer

i'll do it in a min, im working on fixing my comp right now, im on my friends.

[UpstateHate585]

who wants to do a quick handy exchange?

i write insomniac, inso, inser whatever

[Watfe]

http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs248.snc1/9526_303956505716_738150716_9292743_964061_n.jpg

alts is improving!
.
take it to pms
make room for real art

[NoCanControl]

who wants to do a quick handy exchange?

i write insomniac, inso, inser whatever

let do this... kanser

[NoCanControl]

http://i34.tinypic.com/34ybksi.png

[Scream Out]

kwote exchange
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo457.jpg

[ESKiMO2]

how the fuck did your style get so dope
ive been sleeping

[Scream Out]

lol, i duno, maybe it just looks nice because of all the pretty colours?

i was feeling inspired so i just whipped up this pen freestyle for gutrot, i know you didnt ask for it but i really dig the name
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo450.jpg

[Epoc]

here you go future.

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/4518/dsc01364r.jpg

and some real art.

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1427/dsc01359.jpg

^^water colour.

[BlacktodaFuture]

thanks epoc


and my friend is starting a clothing company called, contra theory clothing

can you guys do handstyles for it? bc ive done a couple and cant make it flow


p.s. comp still not fixed

[UpstateHate585]

epoc just shoved real art up anions ass haha. i love that alien bro

[Scream Out]

+colour
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo451.jpg

[UpstateHate585]

damnnn i blow haha shitty pics sorry

http://i34.tinypic.com/14uv86.jpg

http://i36.tinypic.com/nlzats.jpg

[99%Shit]

thanks epoc


and my friend is starting a clothing company called, contra theory clothing

can you guys do handstyles for it? bc ive done a couple and cant make it flow




I started fooling around with it, getting pretty comfy with the words. I'll probably post up in the next day or two. I've just been working it sober style right now, I'll be able to do it ups well when I'm bleeeee'd.

[STFUPPERCUT]

Scream out that Gut rot peice is fire!!,
Epoc nice painting man have u ever done any canvas's?

Iv been trying to step my peices up a bit i think my fills are below average, and be honest if u think its whack.

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture039nnnnnnnnnnn.jpg
(sorry for shitty quality :/)

[99%Shit]

The broad's pree ill so far, bigger pic needed to crit other tings. And dude, in your sig, that your area code? If so, where in 519?

[STFUPPERCUT]

The broad's pree ill so far, bigger pic needed to crit other tings. And dude, in your sig, that your area code? If so, where in 519?
word eh???

ingersoll lol...

[UpstateHate585]

still workin on my handys. "i"s are bitches lol. if anyone cares to help it would be greatly appreciated.

http://i38.tinypic.com/qqtsgg.jpg

edit- forgot to put a line through the s lol whoops

[Rank-oner!]

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/rankbbookbnch.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/lipiece.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

rank looks liek you got a nice camera and a nice girl at that... lol, i like the fill you did on the 3d on her.... classy.

[Messer]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2605/4005236758_59dee485f0.jpg

[Watfe]

lulz dont end a bar with a point.

[milk boxx]

resp - not feelin the fatty R or the spikes really
aever- dope as usual brooooooo

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0781.jpg

crits on this ish?

[Alts13]

Scream out thanks for the Gutrot, looks dope man!! saved into my exchanges folder on the PC lol

[La Coka Nostra]

still workin on my handys. "i"s are bitches lol. if anyone cares to help it would be greatly appreciated.

http://i38.tinypic.com/qqtsgg.jpg

edit- forgot to put a line through the s lol whoops



you don't rly belong here.

[UpstateHate585]

as i've stated, my hands are horrible. i have been on a little kick with them tho.

[Epoc]

piece exchange ne1?

[sike_21]

milk box dope shit
eh here some bull not the greatest but w.e.
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_7533.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX0007.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX0010.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

yo sike what tip did u use for the outline on that throw

[garbage down tha way]

SIKE SEID AEVER

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1057.jpg

[sike_21]

yo sike what tip did u use for the outline on that throw
rusto fats

HOER BURNS..

[(SoS)Viruz]

Hoer- thats a nice burner

Resp- You been rockin that steez for a min...Think its time for change? IMO
Sike-Nice ups but as far as the sketch Im not diggin all the extra stuff going on in thier.
Seid-Keep at its its clean good job

(post pics in a min)

[eng]

sike and seid hench shit love both of your stuff
does this deserve intermediate status? if not ill go back to the toy thread with it:

http://i33.tinypic.com/syxqvb.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

its not BAD, but work with your proportions more.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Someone ask what Im workin with today so here. Nothin good :( just bitting, cause I can do shit

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/BS%20Battles/scan0003.jpg
^^^^Simp for Seyo


http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/BS%20Battles/scan0001.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/BS%20Battles/scan0005.jpg
^^^Some stuff in the book

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

SIKE SEID AEVER

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1057.jpg

i like it but theres to much stuff going on in the fill

[ChadWarden]

nah, the fill is sick in my opinion. only thing is you have waaay too many arrows. to the point were it looks retarded.

but different people have different tastes, so do what you're feeling.

[Epoc]

hoer - sick. like the fill.
viruz - some good letters, some not as good. keep er up.
eng - bars more consistent pls. and id say toy forum for now.

pencil lines were possible extensions.
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2013/dsc01368l.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture039nnnnnnnnnnn.jpg
(sorry for shitty quality :/)

Bummmmp! for crits!



sike- your throws are pretty decent man i lie kthe color combo on the 2nd

hoer- looks good jsut seems lie kthe ends went a lil over board with arrows.

Zome- your definatly improoving bud but this thread still aint fro you.

viruz- i dont really like the seyo perice but the othere 3 pages are tastey

epoc- tjhat other shit i see in penic should be added, tweak the I, and i think it will look pretty good do post when u finish it

[sketch3]

its not BAD, but work with your proportions more.
lier

[.nolove.]

hoer - sick. like the fill.
viruz - some good letters, some not as good. keep er up.
eng - bars more consistent pls. and id say toy forum for now.

pencil lines were possible extensions.
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2013/dsc01368l.jpg

i like the over all form of the letters.i just think it needs something to take up that negative space you got their.but the add ons your going with just aint working imo.

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2648/4006458699_579201dcdb.jpg
the lil burner i wuz wurkin on

[garbage down tha way]

nah, the fill is sick in my opinion. only thing is you have waaay too many arrows. to the point were it looks retarded.

but different people have different tastes, so do what you're feeling.

Yo son you aint hurd? aint a burner unless that biatch do be havin over like 10 arrowz ! ! real talk.



SIZE keep doing exactly what youre doing that thangs nice.

SATRA? - as a whole its alright but the letters need to be tweaked.

[-Wings-]

stfuppercut > I cant read the thing above the chick, to blurry better pic maybe?
epoc > good idea of not outlining those extentions yet, dont outline them because they dont look good.
Other wise I like the letters.
cocacola > its clean im just not feelin the letters.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2827.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

I how you guys skip me...I WANT CRITS MO FOS

[-Wings-]

Just seen that exchange you did for me, I like it but the middle of the o confuses me. ;D
Also some of your widths are way to small compared to the thick parts. Fatten up them small bars a tiny bit.
Oh yea i usually only crit the page I post on, to lazy to check the other pages.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Just seen that exchange you did for me, I like it but the middle of the o confuses me. ;D
Also some of your widths are way to small compared to the thick parts. Fatten up them small bars a tiny bit.

I confuse myself sometimes :D lol I didnt know what to do for a O and its like my 1st time back to the paper in a while lol Ill work on it

[garbage down tha way]

oh ya SOS im liking the letters, they look kinda like my dude GENRE.

[LOPe_GCI]

seyor- dam holmes the S an the R in that bottom piece are real real nice. def keep goin wit that style i could see that turnin into somethin real fresh. thats def the best shit i seen from u by a mile

[Epoc]

seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=1207762#post1207762)

coco - wat hoer said.

tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3051/dsc01369r.jpg

[Queezy]

Hand exchange anyone?

[STFUPPERCUT]

m+s- lay off the amphetamines ;]

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_16.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_15.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_14.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_13.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_17.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_9.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_8.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_2.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_3.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_4.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_12.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_11.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_10.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_1.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011.jpg

[eng]

seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=1207762#post1207762)

coco - wat hoer said.

tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3051/dsc01369r.jpg

i think your shit would look 10x better if you used a thinner outlining pen

[.od.]

exchange with scream out
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture004-5.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture005-6.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

od-simples.now.
seyor-looking proper.
sone-throwups are looking proper.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2455/4009075370_74282b3e5c.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2651/4009075288_a2dbd5e3f1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2635/3863651331_d39f812872.jpg

[KRE1]

smooth i love ur steez keep it comin. im diggin the simp handy

[.nolove.]

seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=1207762#post1207762)

coco - wat hoer said.

tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3051/dsc01369r.jpg

looks much better.

[smooth_nuts]

od-simples.now.
seyor-looking proper.
sone-throwups are looking proper.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2455/4009075370_74282b3e5c.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2651/4009075288_a2dbd5e3f1.jpg
hefty kings!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2635/3863651331_d39f812872.jpg
bump for the new page.
i honestly dont do stickers any more m+s,plus i alreayd owe like 78327647682347862423 packs from like a year ago lol :/
and i shouted it out cause i have a mad cid head friend who always does and thats in his book so....

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

damn smooth forgot all bout you *****....
seyo very dope

[-Wings-]

Smooth > Looks good just not feelin the k all to much. Still good tho
Done today during school.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF13102009_00000.jpg

Edit:
Just found this one in my binder thought I would share it. Not the best but whatever, only a doodle.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF13102009_00001.jpg

[mawks]

okae is a sexy beast
seyor it's dope as hell, I would just separate the s and the e more
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc00e19c0f.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc006614a7.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

wings/seyo lookin good nice to see you switchin up the style

[garbage down tha way]

lets exchange SEYOR! and OKAE too!

[-Wings-]

What do ya write? Ill get at yea when I get virus's done. Ill have that up tomorrow.

[UpstateHate585]

so i posted the sketch for this in the other art thread, but nobody looks at it haha.

what do people think?

http://i34.tinypic.com/wu1ooj.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

What do ya write? Ill get at yea when I get virus's done. Ill have that up tomorrow.


HOERS silly.

[smooth_nuts]

im down hoer's,i'll have it up tonight or tmro.

[black midget]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_16.jpg
there is a south florida sone already meng
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/3976644400_0edb68e376_o.jpg

[Watfe]

it would seem hes pretty shit also.

[KRE1]

yo who cares tho. sone keep doin ur thing ur throws are ridiculous.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Dope pape bumb sey, and Ok

[garbage down tha way]

prodo exchango
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1064.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

damn holmes,no 3d though?lol,i'll get cracking on yours shortly man,until then
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2497/4010031493_7230fd5866.jpg
...quick outline from the begining of summer that i never finished for talking.

[Scream Out]

freestyle sketch from at work today
same shit different pile
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo459.jpg

[NoCanControl]

seyo is looking good
and nutz' k is dope.


illl a butt load of post whenever i upload em. but i can think of anything. what should i draw?

[Waxaddict]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/3976644400_0edb68e376_o.jpg

that is soo sick.

[Alts13]

yea I like that one too, has a nice balance to it

Gutrot quickie
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02206.jpg

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20091011_16.jpg
there is a south florida sone already meng
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/3976644400_0edb68e376_o.jpg

oh shit south florida.. so clsoe to me. i hope noone gets us confused. there are many "sone"s in the world sadly.

[-Wings-]

prodo exchango
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1064.jpg

THAT IS FUCKING DOPE!
Virus and garbage ill do yours guys up tonight. Lots of free time, rainy day :D!

[(SoS)Viruz]

This is good the thread is comming back up to speed.......

Upin- Hoer,Seyo, Kan,Okae, Miget, and Screem

Dope shit fellas........

Hoer & Smooth- i dont understand how you do O's cause I hate them....

[cocacola]

heres an exchange and anew 2 pager
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2508/4012448692_e80347ff06.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2503/4011681387_968f249fba.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2590/4011681427_57d78efe44.jpg

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02211.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02212.jpg

canvas i'm working on
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02210.jpg

[cocacola]

dope stuff bro n i like tat canvase

[STFUPPERCUT]

canvas looks good alts.

[boodah]

yo who cares tho. sone keep doin ur thing ur throws are ridiculous.

stop telling people to not come up with original names and promoting lazy ass writers.

I like that canvas alts.

[smooth_nuts]

This is good the thread is comming back up to speed.......

Upin- Hoer,Seyo, Kan,Okae, Miget, and Screem

Dope shit fellas........

Hoer & Smooth- i dont understand how you do O's cause I hate them....
heres a hint















....it's a circle
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2497/4010031493_7230fd5866.jpg
and bump

[cocacola]

lol

[(SoS)Viruz]

heres a hint














....it's a circle
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2497/4010031493_7230fd5866.jpg
and bump
Listen here..............I just hate Os

[-Wings-]

O's my hardest letter to be complex with, I like it. Its just hard to come up with new ideas. Anyways heres rezn and hoers exchange.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102009_00000.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

dopesauce!

[(SoS)Viruz]

DOPE....I'll do another one.......For good sake with less BITTEN letters lmao so Hoer wont size me up for the rest of my life :cool:

Thats dope tho thanks man

[garbage down tha way]

haha wait whatttt!?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1071.jpg

[-Wings-]

Hoer that shit is fresh as fuck.
And virus im confused agian, what are ya talkin about doin another because biting?
What...?:confused:

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yeah Im talking about my self....I even stated in my post that is was a bite cause I was bored...... Hoer spotted it, I haven't been on my grind lately until I got some encouraging words for Cile :D

Yo Hoer check yo pms

[garbage down tha way]

oh yes the genre thing. i just thought it was a coincidence haha.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Naw dude I've been blocked.....My friend show'ed me this Genre sketch and I was like BALLIN....So I was like why not.....But I've been rockin simps cause I have no creative juice in the tank right now.....

[garbage down tha way]

ha yeah i hear ya. genres dope tho!
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1071-1.jpg
prodo with him. such a little flick ahah.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Dope Shit

Why is Ekzam's K all up in the cut tho lol.

[ESKiMO2]

It has been a month or two but I finally did a piece.

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs50/f/2009/287/a/0/Mazer_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

[IlikePie]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/IMG_0117.jpg

[cocacola]

yo eskimo wanna exchange?

[STFUPPERCUT]

Anyone down for a piece exchange? no rush on the deadline.

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

It has been a month or two but I finally did a piece.

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs50/f/2009/287/a/0/Mazer_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

i like it but the K idk i cant even find it i love the M
want to give me those dvds tomorrow?
oh yea that e sucks to man i love you

[UpstateHate585]

having major writers block. been doing non-graff type drawings sat down to do a setch and only came up with one letter haha crits anyways?

http://i38.tinypic.com/14w4rwy.jpg

[sank.]

upstate - go back to basics man, it's obvious you don't have a good understanding of how to bend letters to your will. try starting with simples and then slowly working your way up to more complex shit. if you skip getting a good foundation of how certain letters work then your gimping yourself for later on. shitty letters + cool addons/effects still = shitty graff.

eskimo - everyone of your sketches looks exactly the same, not saying i don't feel some of em, but it seems like you just stay in your own little box. try messing around with new ish.

mista pie - never really felt any of your stuff man, no beef just my opinion. same concept as eskimo I've seen the same shit from you for a long time. try stepping out of your comfort zone and see what comes to ya

props to hoer for actually gettin of his ass and painting. i wish i had your motivation :(

[Trestoner707]

crits?

[ESKiMO2]

i like it but the K idk i cant even find it i love the M
want to give me those dvds tomorrow?
oh yea that e sucks to man i love you

I accidentally wrote Maker. I did that last and I was really tired...
anyway, about the DVDs, they take a while. Give me some time.

[UpstateHate585]

dang was mine really that bad?

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02211.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02212.jpg

canvas i'm working on
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02210.jpg

bump for crits as am playing with the name Gutrot so would be nice to hear how could be improved, do you think the canvas needs more to it? I was thinking some finer line work and maybe some whites in the blue and green, but I am leaving all the negative space at the top of the canvas

upstate - when I haev writers block I go back to the simplest of styles and do exchanges etc just play with different letters

[unsuccsessfull]

exchange anybody?? bored as fuck

[boodah]

Gutrot- That G needs some work, I couldn't tell at a first glance if it was a T and a little A or a G. Ease up on the extending parts on top and bottom. Open up the inside part of the left most bar of the R, so the letter is whole. Too much of the T is behind the U and R.

[-Wings-]

Battle between this toy on a forum I goto. Azek.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102009_00001.jpg

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2503/4012140135_34980928b6.jpg

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2619/4015142716_9ca88a9670.jpg

[NoCanControl]

MY NEW SHIT


thats suppose to be a R

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0004-1.jpg


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0002-2.jpg


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0001-2.jpg


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0009-1.jpg

[NoCanControl]

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0010-1.jpg


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0009.jpg


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0007-2.jpg


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG_0008-1.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2503/4012140135_34980928b6.jpg
Straight up i see way too much salty influence.

[NoCanControl]

he has too much salt on his steak.

[-Wings-]

Battle between this toy on a forum I goto. Azek.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF15102009_00001.jpg

Bump to new page. So many people posted in a matter of a couple minutes. :P

no can control > your stuff is always dope as fuck, keep it up man. Exchange ??

[Sanguine]

This is just awful:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2673/4014928269_bbc49de1c0.jpg

And Seyor: I like it but I find that some parts are a little cluttered and some parts have a bit too much negative space.

[cocacola]

actually i like salty's work but i didnt copy off him i used a picture i fount off google and drew it down
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2578/4015754526_9153c7e6d1.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2503/4012140135_34980928b6.jpg
and heres the real drawin of it
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2531/4012460772_f11026d090.jpg

[-Wings-]

Well idunno about you but thats sorta biting :/...Even if its not graff.

[cocacola]

yeah i just thought that shit was a gud idea
even tho im not actually claimin it as my own

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

lol wow

[smooth_nuts]

that azek is fucking killer!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2736/4015097253_c8ab26d3cd.jpg
excuse where my shaddows off on the p and i,for a local homeboy,pita.
hoer,im working on yours bro,h is killing me.

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0007.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan0008-1.jpg
^^^^^Str8 Simp Pen and Marker Freestyles with some sketches...See no bites :D thats what I've been doing for a min

[IlikePie]

The kick on your R should be coming off of the loop, not the verticle bar.

[NoCanControl]

Bump to new page. So many people posted in a matter of a couple minutes. :P

no can control > your stuff is always dope as fuck, keep it up man. Exchange ??

fo sho seyo, lets do this. what do you want it to look like?

[Bombing With Insurance]

that E is kinda wack
Go uppercase

[seywhat]

viruz- i know youve heard this plenty of times, but bars nigha bars. keep your shit straight until you get them down, then start bending

[-Wings-]

fo sho seyo, lets do this. what do you want it to look like?

Your grimey type style is what im digging.
Oh yea you write kans dont ya??

[Varg the Viking]

some digital bullllllllshit, ms paint ftw
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/untitled.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

some digital bullllllllshit, ms paint ftw
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/untitled.jpg

pretty good for mspaint dude.

[EST2007]

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6616/dscn1444y.jpg

im likin that azek sketch wings, i just wish the e had some negative space

that shit is BALLIN. some of the best ive seen from you dude

[Flawless Victory]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0226.jpg?t=1255728874

Done for the exchange with Rifle

[cocacola]

arabic?

[Flawless Victory]

What?

[cocacola]

idk it looks arabic lol i can see the r and i but not the otherz

[JustChillin]

bored.

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/7779/1016091453a.jpg
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6856/1016091452a.jpg

[99%Shit]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0226.jpg?t=1255728874

Done for the exchange with Rifle

Try crossing the F with the I, and the E with the L. I know you're not too down with such things, but it should work with that handy. I keep forgetting to bring my sketch book to work, so I gotta keep delaying the finished earn simp.

[Flawless Victory]

bored.

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Not for here, man.

[JustChillin]

i dont get it. but yours is ok to be in here? not trying to diss im just a little frustrated because it looks like anyone could have done what you did and because ive been trying for almost a year and people still dont consider my tags atleast intermediate. can anyone tell me what im doing wrong

[(SoS)Viruz]

viruz- i know youve heard this plenty of times, but bars nigha bars. keep your shit straight until you get them down, then start bending

Wordski....Yeah just some quick simps in Spanish class the other day.

[99%Shit]

i dont get it. but yours is ok to be in here? not trying to diss im just a little frustrated because it looks like anyone could have done what you did and because ive been trying for almost a year and people still dont consider my tags atleast intermediate. can anyone tell me what im doing wrong

Keep trying. I've been off and on with my ish for years, cycled through many names, and hadn't really produced anything half decent until earlier this year. You're not got get dece instantly, you won't catch fame with what you did. FV's Rifle hand isn't the most polished thing, but it shows quite a bit more promise than yours. He could refine what he did into a nice simple hand, whereas yours needs a full overhaul, dig? There are lots of hands that 'look like they can be done by anybody', but in actuality, that's far from the truth. Stay posi though.

[cocacola]

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earthwormjim battle (not finished) characters looked like they were traced but they wernt...trust me

[99%Shit]

Rework that E for sure.

[cocacola]

awww theres sumtin wrong with the e? thought it looked alright

[mekosbc]

cocacola- FREEEESSSSSHHHHHHHHH

[cocacola]

thanks bro

[mekosbc]

yo we should do an exchange.... pm me with ur info if your down

[99%Shit]

awww theres sumtin wrong with the e? thought it looked alright

Not really feeling it, doesn't fit too well. Add a top bar to the left side of your H, and I'd think you have a nicer E to tweak.