Intermediate Thread. {BlackBook,Throwies,Exchanges, and Painted work) Flicks>Talk

[garbage down tha way]

MORE- all around good shit. cept the ms kinda weird.

ZONER- its nice, you should try a straighter fatter style to see how well you can branch out. then incorporate new elements you might teach yourself into your regular style blah blah everyone says shit like that.

SRIME- make the transition from skinny to fat more blatant in your letters (as in one consistant fat width and one consistant skinny) and fill more negative space. its nice.

SEAD- very nice simple. the bottom loop of the s needs some zest though.

heres a shitty collage i made of my recent work because im a narcissist.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/pbj-1.jpg

[-Sinn-]

Milk boxx - looks pretty tight but might wanna smooth out the bottom right curve on your A might bring the piece together a bit more and help with the flow

I GOT CLOUT - not too bad for simps might want to try not puttin the line in the top of the O next time and leave it other then that looks pretty dec

Unsuccessful - Try makin ur N a bit bigger and make it kinda flow with the bottom curve of the "e" if ur doin it lower case other then that looks dope props for gettin up

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture251-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture249-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture247.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/bomb.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/boon.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/pill.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/si.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/endo.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/untitled.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture178-3.jpg
and im aware my handies blow but anybody got any crits on anything OTHER then changin my name or workin on my handies?

[Puberty]

older-
you all seem to have progressed since the last time i was here. good to see.
havent been able to draw or paint much at all in the last month.
post for "stayin familiar" har.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3571/3644378741_5e3f222508.jpg

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/hv001.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/hv002.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/hv004.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/hv005.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/hv006.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/hv003.jpg
AS throwies initials for akos

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/ikkm005.jpg
exchange for roma

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/ikkm006.jpg

[401Son]

http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00608.jpg

http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00609.jpg

http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/401Graff/IMG00611.jpg



bump for the last shit on that page do to the beef

[401Son]

keep it up skie u'll get there

[-Wings-]

Snoe > Looks okay, its not good but its not horrible. That bottom sketch looks kinda ugly though :(..
akos > Your letters seem to blocky and thick, and dont do arrows yet.. they just make your letters look ugly.
keanu > looks okay, nothing to special.
sinn > you got good coloring skills and your stuff is clean but your letters need a bit of work in some sketchs.
hoer > i love your painted stuff :)
more > looks on point, keep that shit up.
zoner > your style reminds me alot of mine (in a good way). Dope throwie, simples, paintings and handstyles bro!
srime > everything ive seen from you has the same structure from your previous sketchs, something new perhaps??
mawks > looks a bit toy bb..
sead > looks okay i guess.:P


Anyways heres something to hold ya guys till I post up some proper sketchs, and paintings ;)!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08122009_00000.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08122009_00001.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01122009_00000.jpg

[.od.]

bored
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture002-11.jpg
zoner heres urs
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture003-10.jpg
doodles doodles doodles
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture004-9.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture006-9.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture005-9.jpg
ideas
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture007-6.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture008-6.jpg

[401Son]

Snoe > Looks okay, its not good but its not horrible. That bottom sketch looks kinda ugly though :(..
akos > Your letters seem to blocky and thick, and dont do arrows yet.. they just make your letters look ugly.
keanu > looks okay, nothing to special.
sinn > you got good coloring skills and your stuff is clean but your letters need a bit of work in some sketchs.
hoer > i love your painted stuff :)
more > looks on point, keep that shit up.
zoner > your style reminds me alot of mine (in a good way). Dope throwie, simples, paintings and handstyles bro!
srime > everything ive seen from you has the same structure from your previous sketchs, something new perhaps??
mawks > looks a bit toy bb..
sead > looks okay i guess.:P


Anyways heres something to hold ya guys till I post up some proper sketchs, and paintings ;)!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08122009_00000.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08122009_00001.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01122009_00000.jpg

i kinda see where ur going wit this style but ur letters kind of go to differnt styles, keep 1 style all way threw, i like ur s

[-Wings-]

Its not that my style is different in my sketchs, I just do different things every time so its not repeatetive. For the most part my stuff has one basic style with a bit of twist and turns here and there :).

[JoseBuerto]

http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/9836/ooooo001.jpg

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4486/ooooo002.jpg

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/2788/ooooo003.jpg

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9343/ooooo004.jpg

http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/7144/ooooo005.jpg

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3450/ooooo007.jpg

[SAID]

daaamn hoer
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1206091832.jpg

bumpp

[-Wings-]

Thought that this looked pretty cool, Its an idea for a new piece. 'S'
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF09122009_00000.jpg

Ignore the other shit, I like to doodle lots of random shit. Totally different twist on my style.

[.od.]

bored
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture002-11.jpg
zoner heres urs
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture003-10.jpg
doodles doodles doodles
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture004-9.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture006-9.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture005-9.jpg
ideas
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture007-6.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture008-6.jpg
bump

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/9836/ooooo001.jpg

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4486/ooooo002.jpg

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/2788/ooooo003.jpg

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9343/ooooo004.jpg

http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/7144/ooooo005.jpg

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3450/ooooo007.jpg

where you from?

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i48.tinypic.com/2qns11y.jpg
not done yet

[JoseBuerto]

Xchange anyone?

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/sentencegraffitistudio.jpg

changed finally.

[NoCanControl]

sin, you're kinda good, but way tacky. no of fence.

[Queezy]

Done about a month ago with scraps and without paint to cut, not feelin it at all but whatever...
http://i1014.photobucket.com/albums/af263/Zealous1/QueasyPiece09.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

Thought that this looked pretty cool, Its an idea for a new piece. 'S'
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF09122009_00000.jpg

Ignore the other shit, I like to doodle lots of random shit. Totally different twist on my style.

OH MY FUCK thats is fuckinggggg sexy seyo. i wanna see a full peice like that guy!!!

Hoer - could you hook it up with a high resolution collage? like 1680x1050?? if you do ill hook it up with the same type of collage.

JoseBuerto- toy as fuck

slotr- that shits prett sicck, the throwie is strrrr8

[Puberty]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2647/4168369791_6c04f0d31f_o.jpg

[Stussy]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4913/photo991.jpg
something new im working on, have a hard time coming up with a Z
wings- tha S is pretty hot. Keep at it
Blunt- Your R and A dont go with your SK, need to work with proportions, having a small A is cool but they way you have placed it is very awkward.
JOSE- i like the bottom one, keep working on that one.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

ya i know what your saying but im mostly lookin for crits bout my letter structure...that was my first sketch in bout 2 months

[kew1]

puberty cool shit mayn

[sank.]

JoseBuerto- toy as fuck

sorry but i had to call you out on this. ya his shit ain't too sharp, but it's not the worst i've seen in here. need i remind that this is the toy forum, so everyone posts in here for a reason. also if i remember correctly your ish isn't amazing either, not saying you suck, just think your ego's a little too inflated. it just pisses me off when toys call someone else's work "toy as fuck".

[suparjafar]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2647/4168369791_6c04f0d31f_o.jpg

does that say ke?

looks dope. same to stussy

[Thrice]

Ray- that's clean man and smooth, from there I would start making variations in the edges of your bar, unless you want to keep it a Simple. Some constructive crit is not to overlap the R over the A so much.

http://i47.tinypic.com/2aficsl.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Stuss- try making the top of the Z like the top of the R, like rounded at the top.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-09_1306-1.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-08_1547.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-01_1406.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-01_0713.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-29_2032.jpg

[cocacola]

kew i think you should go simpler cus it looks alright but when you look closer its all messed up
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2785/4173474206_ff20aabe10.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

You got a dope style going on there man keep with it.I kinda dont liek the bits i think it'd flow alot nicer if all your bars were consistint.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2742/4173691332_7c0e39fc50_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2795/4077598591_0808833e7d_o.jpg

[garbage down tha way]

stfuppercut- i might get around to it one day if i smoke alot of ganja but i dont normally mess with the computer like that brotha.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1271.jpg
bump okae and crus

[smooth_nuts]

Stock caps homie?hell yeah,looking dope.

[garbage down tha way]

word stocks and two one dollar cans did the job for me ha.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Okae, Hoer...dope.

Just another pen free.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/001.jpg

[seywhat]

Stoop kid!

[xSonnyTx]

Stoop kid!

I know that kid!
He'll never leave his stoop :(

[smooth_nuts]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2691/4173896666_911315066d_o.jpg
really stoned,realy bored,really feeling these,any thoughts?
more-your simples are lookimg good keep it up,work on your handstyle though man that shits busty.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Hah, I wouldnt call that my handie. Thats the second time ive done that word. Simply fucksin around.

The one in the top right looks pretty dope too man. I like where youre going with all of it.

[408Bomber]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4913/photo991.jpg
something new im working on, have a hard time coming up with a Z
wings- tha S is pretty hot. Keep at it
Blunt- Your R and A dont go with your SK, need to work with proportions, having a small A is cool but they way you have placed it is very awkward.
JOSE- i like the bottom one, keep working on that one.
Dope, I like you'r styles cause thier simple and remind me of throwies.

[ravine]

shout out to stoop kid!

[Puberty]

does that say ke?

looks dope. same to stussy

yes, KE. 2 letters for KEANU. ive switched the throw up since then. optical illusion ninja style.

[SAID]

HOER, holy fuckkk thats hot.
I would of only made the middle of your R at the top rounded instead of straight, but still sick none the less.

[SAID]

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF09122009_00000.jpg



bump this too, drop a sick 3d on that motherfucker, weeeeeeee

[Puberty]

not new either. just stole this flick.
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3699/keanu.png

[smooth_nuts]

wings and ray are looking dope,keep it up.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2769/4174152291_e8763b4d60_o.jpg
uhhh,idk some demon thing.i kinda like it.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2496/4174909246_7476bf0865_o.jpg
my homie's name who rescently got locked up,my letters are really lacking lately :/

[lord_plankton]

its not only your letters, no offence, but i dont see your carries belong here either, just sayin.

[Vinnie Paz]

http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/SSPX7468-1.jpg
i liked this sketch but the second time it came out kinda gay
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/SSPX7469-1.jpg

[CrustOner]

That sketch definitely had potential..

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

ya your Z looks way to close to wings S

[Vinnie Paz]

who?

[CrustOner]

Doesn't matter, this kid likes calling out people for no reason.

[Vinnie Paz]

o well thanks crust ima just try an paint my first sketch hopefully it will transfer well

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

THAT IS FUCKING FIRE!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF07112009_00000.jpg

not gunna waste my time to go back n find all these sketchs but this is just an example i just think they look alike
crust you can lick one..you were never spoken to so dont talk

[CrustOner]

It's a common letter, dumbass. Plus this is an open forum, I'm allowed to say whatever the fuck I want. Go get some more glitter graphics.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

good one.
you down for a battle then big guy

[CrustOner]

-___- sure. what's the word.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

umm.. how bout MARZ

[skull-e]

lol

you seem like a newfag who needs to learn his place

don't come around the intermediate forum talking shit like you're so big


http://www.fastglitter.com/

..................nuff said

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

oh ya..considerin ive been a member longer then you my old accoun is vandal i got banned on it so dont talk son unless you wanna hop in on this battle

[skull-e]

I don't know who vandal is, nor do i care.

you just need to chill the fuck down and take a seat over there------>

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

ok so you gunna b down for the battle or you gunna sit behind your computer everyday and chat on here even tho you can draw a straigh peice for the life of it..maybe you should stick to the herbal thread pal

[CrustOner]

hahaha Vandal xBA!x who could forget. Skull-E's been around for that. You just need to chill the fuck out. and Fuck Marz, that shit has a Z in it.

how about Fail. Or we trade names.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

too late bro already started it you can do w.e you want even do your own tag i could careless

[CrustOner]

Wait, what kind of battle is this? and already started.. haaaaaaa.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

the battle is to see who has better flow,style,structure...etc
doesnt matter what the word is to me

[CrustOner]

Alright. I'll have it posted tomorrow.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i48.tinypic.com/mkj0hi.jpg
heres my 30 min sketch for you

[TrikAssHoe!]

^make sure you erase your bars. seriously.
and you could have added more.


just sayin..

[RedEyes]

^^less bong rips next time, and a fill would have been nice for 30 minutes of sketching...

[CrustOner]

inb4 not worth the effort.

[mawks]

everyone needs to calm the fuck down, every thread in the toy section is filled with gay ass beef

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

no beef...just provin that more than half the kids on here cant even DRAW a straight peice not gunna even mention paint....and the reason i didnt earase the lines is cuz im confident that my 30 minutes of work are good enough to 8 hours of his hah

[ironcrack]

using bars... just draw the letter.

[garbage down tha way]

if you got your own style down youll know because it wont take you 30 minutes to do. just keep doing it until you can do your letters without bars and thats when you know its yours.

[EST2007]

http://i48.tinypic.com/mkj0hi.jpg
heres my 30 min sketch for you

gah i hate when pple use a small letter cuz they ran out of space. tape some paper on that bitch and finish proper


edit: the M is kinda small, and the R is kinda wide

[AteskOne]

^agreed. but i wont hate like everyone else seems to be doing. its a well rocked steez. no fill required when you can rock clean ass letters like those.

[smooth_nuts]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2737/4176928180_c5bf2cefc7_o.jpg
old one from this summer.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

Alright well I was never sayin my shits dope all I'm gettin at is there's to many queers on here who can't put up a straight piece and all they do is sit around and talk bullshit...hoer no beef with you..your one of the 5 people in this thread who actually puts in work

[garbage down tha way]

im just sayin. i used bars before i had my letters down. i still do when im piecing. your letters arent bad i like them.

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

atesk-thanks bro nice to hear somethin positive lol..i wanna see that sketch you posted in the other bb thread with the characters.shits will look dope if you color em nice
est-ya i kno they werent even but honestly i didnt take much time to fix it up nor did i really care i just wanted to prove my point that i could burn that lil douche crust without takin my time :D
hoer-ya i feel you...nice to kno you feel the letters atleast i just started sketchin so i gotta get back on my grind...but would you be down for an exchange sometime soon?

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

and i just finished this today...went a lil over board with the blue outline but fuck it..i think it looks nice from a distance
http://i48.tinypic.com/2uix91h.jpg

[TrikAssHoe!]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2737/4176928180_c5bf2cefc7_o.jpg
old one from this summer.

no beef but that shit is the opposite of clean mang.

[mawks]

quit hatin on everything and post some flix ^

[garbage down tha way]

yo that okae is ill. looks straight old school. cleanliness is not a factor in this equation son.

[TrikAssHoe!]

if thats what you guys call "ILL" you need a check up.

[Flawless Victory]

Get mad about it, dude.

[TrikAssHoe!]

fucking beef...

[Bets369R]

http://i50.tinypic.com/dp8cxi.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

it's ment to look grimey,if you really want to argue about it,battle me,simple as that.

edit*that bp up there is looking nice,random arrow kinda ruins it for me thugh.

[Bets369R]

its BE. my initials haha, but yeah, i threw the arrow in last minute to cover a sloppy handy.

[Flawless Victory]

I don't see an E at all man.

[FlippingChickens]

the 3d is off..just crit the peice overall,i was really just focusing on colors because i was high out of my mind while i did this..lmao the alphabet is really wack i know
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2753.jpg

[Bets369R]

yeah, it does look like a P, oh well haha

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x52/ChrisPhotos_02/002-4.jpg

[seywhat]

bets be that nigggha! that oneliner is on fuckin point

[garbage down tha way]

if thats what you guys call "ILL" you need a check up.

check my resume BITCH! i know enough to know enough to know about some good old fucking graffiti. son.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-11_1519.jpg

[RedEyes]

Kew- the only thing you got going is that that E, scrap all those whack extensions and clean up your letters, your getting way to far ahead of yourself.

[NoCanControl]

stop giving him false hope.

[RedEyes]

lol mybad its the only think that had a solid bar...

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-11_1519.jpg
Looks like your tryin to hard to bite off other peoples shit with all the extensions maybe try some straigfht letters before you go all crazy with the shitty extensions

[-Wings-]

Not sure if this is worth posting, but I had a sick idea for a sketch.
I was making it half big, but its been kind of a pain in the ass to transfer to paper (oh yea I still have two letters to go, probably wont post till its finished)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2841.jpg
(I sketch really light so It might be a bit hard to see all the little parts)

Kew > stop posting here, your shits really wack... :/

[stekone]

ya'll dudes are a bit mean....lol........kew is trying a bit hard, but no reason to be twats about your crits....

[b SQUARED 08]

ya'll dudes are a bit mean....lol........kew is trying a bit hard, but no reason to be twats about your crits....

Actually there is good reason: there's a toy thread for beginners. He doesn't belong here yet.

and neither do I lol.

[stekone]

i post in here not sure i am "allowed" dont really give a shit either,.,,,,,this is still the toy thread......but whatever man,,,was just making an observation.

[CrAzOnEr!]

yoooo nice sketch..

[unsuccsessfull]

lookin good wings
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2594.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2598.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2595.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2596.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2600.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2601.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

zoner hands looking good
bet's sorry bro i really dont see an e in there,your backward bobm and oneliner are pretty fresh though so it's clear you know what your doing.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2490/4179993341_289c0c4c24_o.jpg
fucking around earlier when i was stoned,excuse the smears i ashed on the page lol

[BlacktodaFuture]

getting kinda sick of all the toy forum kids in the intermediate forum

[AteskOne]

^better than them in the big boy forums.
couple pen freestyles just to gimme a break from my endless amounts of hw. fuck finals.
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/3892/1212090007.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/i/1212090007.jpg/)
some w's
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9134/1212090120.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/1212090120.jpg/)
and an e
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/8664/1212091200.jpg (http://img46.imageshack.us/i/1212091200.jpg/)

[ChadWarden]

http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9134/1212090120.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/1212090120.jpg/)
[/URL]

the only one i like. looking solid to me.

[smooth_nuts]

zoner hands looking good
bet's sorry bro i really dont see an e in there,your backward bobm and oneliner are pretty fresh though so it's clear you know what your doing.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2490/4179993341_289c0c4c24_o.jpg
fucking around earlier when i was stoned,excuse the smears i ashed on the page lol

bump

[unsuccsessfull]

i like the k^^
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1212092142.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

thanks man,the pen freezy you just posted is burning man keep it up most deff!

[STFUPPERCUT]

2010 already zoner? lol

[JoseBuerto]

sorry but i had to call you out on this. ya his shit ain't too sharp, but it's not the worst i've seen in here. need i remind that this is the toy forum, so everyone posts in here for a reason. also if i remember correctly your ish isn't amazing either, not saying you suck, just think your ego's a little too inflated. it just pisses me off when toys call someone else's work "toy as fuck".

(from a few pages ago)

Thanks for the back up, I rush through alot of my stuff because im not crazy serious about it, i just do this for fun.

P.s - stfuppercut, you are indeed a butt-fucking burnout, smoke another blunt so you can prove to everyone how hardcore and real you are yo! G-G-G-G-G-G UNIT!

[La Coka Nostra]

word up.
i have the exact same mindframe.

[Atomik]

zoner thats looking dope.
quicky nothing to crazy
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/bluesrime.jpg

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

zoner-that shits pretty nice like the E alot
atomik-the fill on that is ill
and finally crust where you at with that sketch bro its been 2 days.........

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02412.jpg

trying to kick out writers block

[CrustOner]

I think the L could be formed better, and I don't like the heart things in your A and S. I think another shape would fit better. Other than that, fucking sick.

[-Wings-]

Zoner > I dont really like that Z, loving the rest of it though, and nice paint flicks.
okae > your bads are really skinny. The letters themselves are nice though.
srime > A better picture maybe? And again the same exact structure...
Also the fill is okay, but it would of been better with a different color instead of white.
alts > I dont really like this one tbh, no specific reason why. Oh yea sorry bout not having your exchange done yet. Ive been slack on the doing the outline :P...I havent been sketching alot lately.



and an e
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/8664/1212091200.jpg (http://img46.imageshack.us/i/1212091200.jpg/)

looks a bit like aevers e. :P
The w's aint bad though.

[Th3t4]

Alts13- liking to green gunk stuff. explore that a bit. maybe make some letters like that.
agreed with CrustOner, the hearts don't quite fit.
the extensions are pretty nice. keep up the good owrk

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02413.jpg
coloured this
and this is a canvas I did for a friend's birthday (he is an Apple Mac fan!!)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2551/4182345978_92a82b0c64_b.jpg

[AteskOne]

looks a bit like aevers e. :P
The w's aint bad though.
dont know who aever is.

alts- piece is dope. L could use a little work but its not bad. good fade on the canvas. i feel the arms are positioned strangely tho. should be more centered and you souldnt be able to see the shoulder on his left arm from that profile.

[CrustOner]

Dude, I just woke up. hahaha. Sorry, I drew it in my ASL class in about 10 minutes and totally forgot about it. I'll use this post as a placeholder, I'll have it posted when I get my lazy ass out of bed.

EDIT: My entry. Yeah, I'm not too proud of it, but hey, it was 10 minutes for the first three letters, then like 5 on the Z. Notice all the erasures.. haha. I hate Z's..
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo8-2.jpg

I ALSO JUST REALIZED: I made the bars on the Z wayyy too thick. and the R doesn't fit much.

Just to show it as a new post.

[sanrtizer]

everyones lookin pretty dope
itd b appreciated if i could get some crits on this i didnt giv any but im a douchebag
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/8017/173027.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/i/173027.jpg/)

[CrustOner]

Crits for being honest:
Marn? I'm diggin' the character, but I don't know what's going on with what's coming out of his mouth (The orange/yellow thing), and I don't like how big his bottom lip is.
I don't like the grimy shit on the left. the letters are decent, except I don't like the mid part of your M, the way it leans bothers me.and I don't like how the left-most bar on the N is on top of the other leg. Plus, your drop shadow doesn't exist, except for in the negative space in your letters. Nice oneliner tag, though I'd bring the kick on the R lower to make it look better.

[unsuccsessfull]

okae, exchange???
sum handys
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSCF0689.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091305.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091308.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091309.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091304.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091543.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091544.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091555.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091622.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091607.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091604.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091623.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091618.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091542a.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091309a.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091623a.jpg

[-Wings-]

Zoner youve been a bombing spree lately havent ya? Diggin all the handstyles, but lets see some more throwies of your whole name or at least zone (like the one up there).

[I GOT CLOUT]

Zoner, everythings tight, but I gotta say, not diggin your two letter throws. It might just be the Z. Just doesnt seem to fit your style.

I hate the R.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/001-1.jpg

[NoCanControl]

zoner has some cool tags

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213092105.jpg

[unsuccsessfull]

yeee rock fills :p
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSCF0690.jpg

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14-1.jpg
work in progress..crits?

[suparjafar]

too much dead space between your k and o. work on that but its clean

[RedEyes]

i still need to shadow and shell, i was just asking about the letters.

[TheToy]

It's pretty mint. The letters are pretty much near perfect.

A 3D or drop shadow would eat up the empty space between the letters and bring it all together.

Edit- I hate rock fills. Nature doesn't have it's own money to buff itself. Kinda' lame. :(

[Zookyook]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213092105.jpg shit is hot... love the R... the O could be a bit smaller but it looks fresh

[(SoS)Viruz]

Ight what with all the MEGA toys posting here....I know this is the toy fourm but when you cant even do a str8 letter with some decency on paper you shouldn't even post here....The quality of this thread has went down....Props to all the heads tryin to keep it up but enough is enough....... If you can messure up in skill then dont post here............


POST WELL not get deleted.

[Zookyook]

yea i know what u mean... i came here to learn more and i end up teaching people

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

how can you say red eyes letters are almost perfect not even close bro you need much work on that O nd K the S nd i r the only things that youve got goin right now

[Zookyook]

well then i guess hes halfway there hah... i wanna see how he puts a nice small 3d on it... it could look good... maybe extend some of the lines on the inside parts of the letters too so it looks more chunky, and dot the I by cutting it in the right spot... good outline though i think

[RedEyes]

lol sorry i just never get a decent crit, (Toy) no offense but im here to better my style n need constructive crits. thanks guys ill try to step it up next time.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02413.jpg
coloured this
and this is a canvas I did for a friend's birthday (he is an Apple Mac fan!!)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2551/4182345978_92a82b0c64_b.jpg

bumpanna

[I GOT CLOUT]

Ateskone - Lookin good. Those w's would make nasty M's.
Alts - The drawin is dope but if anything, for me the A gets lost in it.

[AteskOne]

lol sorry i just never get a decent crit, (Toy) no offense but im here to better my style n need constructive crits. thanks guys ill try to step it up next time.
i agree. these forums have went to shit. and it isnt just the fact that the toys are posting in threads like this (as SOS stated)...its the fact that they're the only ones giving out crits. all they can tell you is 'go simple!' because that's all they know how to do. im not saying that an outsiders eye doesnt help regaurdless of their skill level...but they lack an understanding of certain styles. i miss the good old days when heads like sumoe were puttin out burners on the daily in these threads but still took the time to give advice. now it seems like the more advanced writers in here are just posting work to get props from people that cant do any better (not directed towards anyone in particular).

[BlacktodaFuture]

seriously we need to fucking clean out this thread, when i started out i wasnt allowed in this thread and i was better then some of the kids in here! next thing you know kids that just started will be posting in the amazing pieces forum...

[Flawless Victory]

They get told not to post in here by all the regulars, but they just get mad and say
"I'm still going to post in here. I know I'm dope, fuck y'all haters!"

[CrustOner]

I don't post in here. I'm relatively better than a lot of kids in this thread. I only posted that battle sketch with Blunted because it started in here. If you can't beat me in a battle, don't post in this thread. I don't really like this thread either, because I don't like being restricted from posting where I like, but hey, I'll still respect that people don't think I'm good enough, and that's a motivator to get better.

tl;dr, I don't post in here. If you can't beat me, don't post in this thread. Have respect when we tell you to GTFO.

[MeanMug]

Mods need to start regulating! I got my shit moved once and got the message. If fools want to post toy shit in intermediate it should get moved. Period.

I haven't posted in a while because its hard to take fools seriously in here. Its either going to turn into a bitch fest or your going to get some lame ass crits.

[AteskOne]

EDIT* ^^^i second that

i dont get why you dont like being restricted from this thread? its not like there isnt a black book thread for toys that you, or anyone else, could post work in. with that mindset you're basically saying you have the urge to go post in the big boys forum because they dont want you there. im not tryna call you out or nothing so dont take this the wrong way. but there are plenty of other places to post your work. is there really that much of an attraction to being intermediate? everyone was toy at one point there's no shame in that.

[CrustOner]

I understand that. I might be able to post in here. But I still choose not to. haha. I want to be able to look at my shit and KNOW it's intermediate, instead of just wondering and hoping. So I am sticking in the Toy BB. But fuck man... Have you seen the entire last page? I mean, goddamn. Intermediate has deteriorated, simply because Toys are getting worse and worse. Graffiti is so trendy that everyone picks up a pencil and thinks they write. It's the way it is.
Pics for talking. Work in progress.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo9-1.jpg

[Zookyook]

R's fresh, S's match... looks good, put some color in that shit

[408Bomber]

I understand that. I might be able to post in here. But I still choose not to. haha. I want to be able to look at my shit and KNOW it's intermediate, instead of just wondering and hoping. So I am sticking in the Toy BB. But fuck man... Have you seen the entire last page? I mean, goddamn. Intermediate has deteriorated, simply because Toys are getting worse and worse. Graffiti is so trendy that everyone picks up a pencil and thinks they write. It's the way it is.
Pics for talking. Work in progress.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/Photo9-1.jpgFresh. Color that bitch in!

[AteskOne]

Intermediate has deteriorated, simply because Toys are getting worse and worse. Graffiti is so trendy that everyone picks up a pencil and thinks they write. It's the way it is.

you can thank mark ecko's "gettin up" for that. the wave of toys on these forums after that game dropped was overwhelming.

piece looks mad clean tho. definitely the best i've seen from you. only crits are to give a little space between the top bar of the S and the curve, like you have on the E, and to loose that v cut in the top of the T. other than that color that shit and let us see it when it's finished bro.

[CrustOner]

I didn't even notice I didn't give it enough space on the S's, thanks for that. Too bad it's inked. and yeah, I know what you mean about that V cut, but it looked wayyy too blocky without something like that. haha.

[ESKiMO2]

what can I say, it's the age of the geek graff writer. (even know i never played mark eckos getting up- if you really want to know my opinion I never thought graff was that glamorous and action packed, it's just not what drew me to the art) I mean, check out this fallout 3 sketch I just rocked out.

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/8594/dsc02797u.jpg

WASTELAND MOTHAFUCKAS.

[BlacktodaFuture]

we need mods in here to delete their posts. arrogent fuckers. go to the toy thread you know who you are!

[BlacktodaFuture]

p.s. eskimo that shit is fresh,

people need to go to the 1st page where it says "if you cant produce things close to this dont both posting in here!"

[Zookyook]

i like the fallout character, pretty dead on... and i like the v cut in crust's piece... as for mark eckos getting up, it did for graff what 'the fast and the furious' did for illegal racing... turned all the youngsters on to it by glamorizing it

[TheToy]

what can I say, it's the age of the geek graff writer. (even know i never played mark eckos getting up- if you really want to know my opinion I never thought graff was that glamorous and action packed, it's just not what drew me to the art) I mean, check out this fallout 3 sketch I just rocked out.

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/8594/dsc02797u.jpg

WASTELAND MOTHAFUCKAS.

I love this. And I love Fallout.

[CrustOner]

Question: Simple fill, or complicated?

[Zookyook]

id wanna keep the top simple but the bottom u could go nuts, lots of open space

[STFUPPERCUT]

Seyo- i wanan see t hat crazy grimey style sketch finished yo
zoner- nice ups doggy
crust - sik peice thatd be a nice one to see in paint
eskimo- lookin good man post it up when ur completly finished.

JoseBuerto- your right im a burn out, and im a toy. what more do u want from me???

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/IMG_1187.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/IMG_1167.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/IMG_1169copy.jpg

[unsuccsessfull]

fuckin freeezin out side god damn
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSCF0697.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSCF0696.jpg
some old
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1214091538.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1213091542.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/GetAttachment.jpg

[DukeOne]

ugg zoner uve been killin it man props

il try to have ur exchange done up soon jers, and maybe some other shit

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss330/fanofapplepie/IMG_4492.jpg
http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss330/fanofapplepie/IMG_4103-1.jpg
http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss330/fanofapplepie/IMG_4057.png

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2259.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00203.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1214092144.jpg

[JoseBuerto]

Eskimo-thats tight, should be cool to see the conclusion.
Zoner-i like the green one, all i have to say is the N in your bottom orange one needs a little sprucing up because its kind of plain. Im sure you could think of something to do that will draw attention to it.

Good looks -n-dirty crooks, its a love/hate thing. ya ya ya graffiti is played out and its trendy and everyone wants a piece. If you talk about it, Be about it. Lets just remember that bombing science was created to destroy any dignity that could-be writers have (or had).

[Bets369R]

my entry for the handstyle battle

http://i48.tinypic.com/2m2th8m.jpg

crit me!

[ESKiMO2]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1214092144.jpg

Awesome

[Zookyook]

new one http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/4187068890_f384474fec.jpg

[.od.]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture001-12.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture011-4.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture010-5.jpg

[Zookyook]

heres my handy entry too... http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2765/4182435883_1ac962baba.jpg bets cheated cuz he cant write "three" lol... just kiddin man, dont rip me apart now...

[Zookyook]

what does that say .od.??? i see SLOTZR... ?

[.od.]

slot.3r 3 being a backwards E

[Zookyook]

ok i see now... crazy letter structure, i think more connections would have made that look better, crazy fill though

[.od.]

the fill could have been better if i didnt use sharpies but thats all i got
old pic for talking
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture100-1.jpg
and the canvas to the pic
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture104-1.jpg

[Zookyook]

bottom pops out real nice with that thick outline... not feelin the striped 3d though.... if it were all black with brown highlights it woulda looked better in my opinion

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1215091013.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1215091033.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSCF0700.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1215090952.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/1215090959.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSCF0699.jpg

[hazetheone]

od do you paint?

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

the fill could have been better if i didnt use sharpies but thats all i got
old pic for talking
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture100-1.jpg
and the canvas to the pic
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture104-1.jpg

that canvas is real solid.if you got to perfect that style you got goin on that would be some ill shit to paint

[.od.]

od do you paint?
haze-ya only 5 times tho i do hollow throws n tag majority of the time drunk
blunted-ya ill probably go back and redo that style with my new name
zoner-heres your exchange if you didnt see it
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture003-10.jpg
for oldest to most recent
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/firstpaint.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/100_0700.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010293.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture016-1.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture003-9.jpg

[ravine]

its really isnt funny how cold it is nowadays. my index finger is fucking frozen, like, you dont know how long this is taking to type. yes i know i dont type correctly

[sinkilla1]

quick sketch i did
http://i47.tinypic.com/ou7biq.jpg

[CrustOner]

Zooky and Sinkilla, out.
Od.: Those sketches are sick, I'm not digging the pentacles in your canvas piece.. Not drawn well enough in my opinion. And I think you need to work on how you paint.. haha.
Zoner: You need to work on your throws, but your simples are nice, and I'm diggin the piece that Eskimo bumped. Keep working at that! I see good things in your future.

[sinkilla1]

lolcoming from the kid who never posted a peice just a bunch of shitty throws and faces ^^

[mawks]

why do people wanna post here so bad?
it's still the toy forum

[caesar1]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/45600740@N03/4189106670/

crits?

[Trestoner707]

dude. its like u have 3 differnt throwie styles colliding in one lol u gonna do bubbles do bubbles u gonna to spades do all spades.

[sinkilla1]

mawks i dont really care its just crust oner is a douche and sucks reall bad and has a terrible throw and everything

[Trestoner707]

haze-ya only 5 times tho i do hollow throws n tag majority of the time drunk
blunted-ya ill probably go back and redo that style with my new name
zoner-heres your exchange if you didnt see it
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture003-10.jpg
for oldest to most recent
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/firstpaint.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/100_0700.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/P1010293.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture016-1.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Picture003-9.jpg

well ur stuff is gettting more readable. id say keep heading in that direction

[NoCanControl]

yikes. i thought i had no can control. keep it in the back yard yo.

[Trestoner707]

mawks i dont really care its just crust oner is a douche and sucks reall bad and has a terrible throw and everything

and your hella better by talking shit on the internet in what way lol
fuuuck its lame

[sinkilla1]

trest i dont care hes been talking shit on me and hes yet top post anything that states hes good cause the throwes he put up are like a retard could do it never said i was good

[408Bomber]

Hmmm....should thier be a blackbook cover thread? For pics of people's cover and inside cover page?

[RedEyes]

shit i got some crazy ones, most done by other people but crazy non the less.

[408Bomber]

shit i got some crazy ones, most done by other people but crazy non the less.Can you post em?

[RedEyes]

i gotta flick them but ill post them here cuz there far from toy.

[BlacktodaFuture]

lolcoming from the kid who never posted a peice just a bunch of shitty throws and faces ^^

he's right, out. not talking shit, you can come in here when you are ready.

[BlacktodaFuture]

caeser you too holmes

[ESKiMO2]

Really old... back in the simple days

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs44/f/2009/074/f/e/Honey_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

i like the creativity in the O the E is weird, and H is a hard letter, ive been trying to draw a SAPH(SAFE) peice but im stuck on the H.

[CrustOner]

lolcoming from the kid who never posted a peice just a bunch of shitty throws and faces ^^

Shitty throws and faces? ha, piece two/three pages back. Not to mention that my throws and faces, no matter how shitty, kill any piece of shit you can do you hardest to draw.

[408Bomber]

Really old... back in the simple days

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs44/f/2009/074/f/e/Honey_by_Rhino_fish.jpgDope, simples with a lil twist.

[<J-one>]

zoner im diggin your stuff

too broke to paint as usual
but heres a few doodles
older to new


edit: apparently it doesnt want to show the photo, so i'll post the links instead, sorry for any inconvenience

still oldest to newest

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/3978840694/in/photostream/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4188782233/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4188777279/

pen freestyle

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4188790695/

tips and crits still appreciated

[BlacktodaFuture]

cnt see them

[<J-one>]

edited

[408Bomber]

edited You'r style is tight, pretty unique also. Keep it up.

[Zookyook]

Zooky and Sinkilla, out.
Od.: Those sketches are sick, I'm not digging the pentacles in your canvas piece.. Not drawn well enough in my opinion. And I think you need to work on how you paint.. haha.
Zoner: You need to work on your throws, but your simples are nice, and I'm diggin the piece that Eskimo bumped. Keep working at that! I see good things in your future.

out? please tell me why im out sir? i wanna be in so bad!

[BlacktodaFuture]

out? please tell me why im out sir? i wanna be in so bad!

didnt make the cut junior. this thread needs filtering and it's being done

[.od.]

yikes. i thought i had no can control. keep it in the back yard yo.
your a funny how many times have i paint a whopping 4 im pretty sure im better then u were/are lets see some of your painted shit then cuz you've problably painted more times then me unless you just draw it......

[fromthegrave]

getting kinda sick of all the toy forum kids in the intermediate forum

shit meee too. back in 802. new sketches soon

[CrustOner]

Hey, it's true man. He's saying practice your can control.

[MeanMug]

Between the board drama and Xmas I've been pretty uninspired. I don't expect any good crits just wanted to get something up. I like turtles.

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/8376/kib2.jpg

[408Bomber]

Between the board drama and Xmas I've been pretty uninspired. I don't expect any good crits just wanted to get something up. I like turtles.

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/8376/kib2.jpggood fill just work on that structure.

[Zookyook]

well if the thread "needs filtering" why dont the people that constantly post here put up some flicks that are decent? the rest of the toy thread is so sad that the ones that dont completely suck should be able to post here... its annoying to post for crits and get ignored or dismissed, god damn tell me WHY u think i suck so bad...

[CrustOner]

We don't think you SUCK bad. We just don't think you're ready yet. Read what I said in the Toy BB. Just keep bumping. I had to deal with that, and probably will continue to have to deal with that. ha. If you want crits, give epic crits.

[Zookyook]

i feel ya, but theres people that post in here that im just as good as... or at least close enough to the point where id rather see and critique their shit than some colored pencil bullshit in the other threads... im here to see shit grow and learn new shit and hear peoples input, but not goddamn people that literally just started writing, shits annoying

[CrustOner]

Yeah, I know what you mean. It used to be WAY better, like half a year ago. Give it a month for these kids to drop off like flies hitting their heads against glass.

Just don't be one of those.

[Zookyook]

alright well shit... check my battle with bets out i guess hah... im out for today, peace

[<J-one>]

zoner im diggin your stuff

too broke to paint as usual
but heres a few doodles
older to new


edit: apparently it doesnt want to show the photo, so i'll post the links instead, sorry for any inconvenience

still oldest to newest

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/3978840694/in/photostream/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4188782233/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4188777279/

pen freestyle

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4188790695/

tips and crits still appreciated

end of the page bump

jesus christ
one comment with critisism, and seen more filled with useless yammerin as usual.
post flicks and give tips
meanmug - bomber is right nice fill, work on the structure, straights and simples, turtles are definently dope

just outed this pen freestyle

sorry its a link again, somethins goin wrong for me
let me know what you think

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/4189029743/?eOrig=4189790302

[CrustOner]

I could have sworn I've seen that before... did you used to write Germz?

[<J-one>]

couldnta seen it before she was just birthed
nope, had a few names but never germz

any tips on it?

edit:
may as well post this too
for a buddy
"Kid Wicked"

http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/3178535033/

[CrustOner]

Your shit is RIDICULOUS. God. I can't even manage a decent negative thing about it. ha.

[Bets369R]

Gasr, i dont like how the G and A use the same bar. im also not a huge fan of the Dollar bill sign S, it makes it seem like you were about to run out of space so you squeezed it in. even if that wasnt the case. plus, dollar bill signs are played out unless its a money theme. Lose the crown too.

I like your style though, and im honestly just knit picking to find things you can work on.

Edit: Kid wicked can work on his I's. the spade is way over used, and the I in wicked isnt great.

Neither of you belong in the toy forum though.

[M3KA1!]

anyone up for an exchange or battle pm me

[Rank-oner!]

^^^
loose the crown
Also these two work sketches
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/SDC17518.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/SDC17520.jpg

[M3KA1!]

Rank yer shit aint bad. down for a battle? im bored

[Bets369R]

my entry for my battle with zookyook

http://i46.tinypic.com/2psq63k.jpg

[M3KA1!]

i dig

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2639/4189396203_50b20fe829.jpg

[M3KA1!]

dope fill. yer 3d looks a lil off but overall pretty ill

[fromthegrave]

rank. i like those. keep that style going

and people who dont belong here dont get crits cusssssssss they arnt even supose to post in here. Why not just call u a toy who is also a fag if your being ignorant?

[stekone]

seems to me that you are the ignorant one.....just sayin :D

[Scream Out]

havent done fuck all in ages, heres a highlighter freestyle i did at work, dont even bother critting it its horrible and i can see whats wrong with it
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo472.jpg
and heres a coffee oneliner just for shits and giggles
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo471.jpg

[RedEyes]

JONe-its sweet and all but dude it looks like ALTS shit straight up.

[mawks]

^not really, a lot of people use that style
looks fresh

[b SQUARED 08]

Yeah, that looks nothing like Alts style to me whatsoever. Looks more like milfhunter's style if I were to compare, but nice work nonetheless.

[Zookyook]

if bets can post here so can i.... yo bets, send ur pic to vagrant so he can set up a battle thread.... i sent mine to him already

[RedEyes]

zoo you nor i can post here, were not ready yet. if you look back at the beginning pages of the Toy BB its got alot of decent stuff. Ill make sure to give some good crits but for now we belong in the toy forum.

[Zookyook]

yea but thats the thing... this IS the goddamn toy forum... the people saying we cant post here dont make the rules so fuck em, im gonna look in this thread and if i have something to say im saying it... graffiti in itself didnt come about by doing what ur told

[Bets369R]

if bets can post here so can i.... yo bets, send ur pic to vagrant so he can set up a battle thread.... i sent mine to him already

i sent it to him. now just gotta wait for him to post the thread. i wont be home till 9pst. fuck working at walmart.

[Zookyook]

its all good... thanks for poppin my battle cherry hahaha... no hard feelings

[LeaksOne]

damn you *****s are really trippin over this thread haha

[caesar1]

http://i1000.photobucket.com/albums/af130/Caesarkyd1/throwie.jpg

any crits or tips

[Queezy]

yea but thats the thing... this IS the goddamn toy forum... the people saying we cant post here dont make the rules so fuck em, im gonna look in this thread and if i have something to say im saying it... graffiti in itself didnt come about by doing what ur told

It's a branch off of the toy forum hence the name "Intermediate". It's a very small step above "toy" but it's still a step and you aren't ready yet. And graffiti might not have been bred from doing what your told, but you also don't go into a yard where there are much better writers and do some horrible bombs over really good pieces. My main point being, toy blackbook....

[408Bomber]

http://i1000.photobucket.com/albums/af130/Caesarkyd1/throwie.jpg

any crits or tips

Crit/Tip: Stay in the toy forum a lil longer unless you wanna get slayed.

Try making it flow in all 1 style, it looks like you put cope's style plus you'r own, you needa clean it up.