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CrustOner
04-02-2010, 09:05 AM
Good shit, Batler and Hoers.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-02-2010, 09:27 AM
From the grave - Looking consistent, no real crits i can think of atm.
Sin - I dont liek the letters that much, its just clean and colourfull
SixSixThree- I'm guessing you used to write zoner? :)
Alts- your on that next level.
Duke- The top of the S needs abit more definition but the drawing is amazing,


Still trying to break away from my previous style and start with something new, any crit would be greatly appreceated
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0011-1.jpg

Dont hide your K like that mang, the little bend in the U isnt a very good idea imo as well, if your looking for inspiration start immersing yourself in different forms of art, if you havent done so already, I find things like cubism really get the pencil moving, give it a shot.

Alts13
04-02-2010, 11:27 AM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02657.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02658.jpg
couple of freestyles in work (gonna finish the piece in full biro I think)
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02654.jpg
simples (I know I posted the Blue one before but to get a pic of the brown one I had to include it)

SIXSIXTHREE
04-02-2010, 12:29 PM
i dig your style alts. do you paint?

http://i44.tinypic.com/4tlx1d.jpg

Alts13
04-02-2010, 12:49 PM
Not so much recently I have fulltime job a wife and child so don't really have the time and weather has been so shit, hopefully gonna be out a lot this summer get back into it

viseversa101
04-02-2010, 12:50 PM
i always dig alts style....gg my man, glad to see batler makin a home here too

SIXSIXTHREE
04-02-2010, 01:00 PM
yeah alts i know how that goes with the priorities

vise thanks for the warm welcome

Sesh-it-up
04-02-2010, 01:37 PM
Hoer!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bilnek
04-02-2010, 02:13 PM
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Esoj.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/3u1.png


batle thats sick but work on sumtin more complicated.....its only simps on here
alts there is no need to crit you...ur style rocks, but man how old are you?? u say u got a wife and a kid....that sounds ooold =P

408Bomber
04-02-2010, 02:17 PM
here's some an old stlye i was playing with..but i dropped it...like msot styles i start >.>
its supposed to say fresh but the h got cut off n i lost the paper.
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1185.jpg

here's my new style im working on...
before
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1218.jpg
after
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1219.jpg


some ewok stuff from my boy's blackbo0k
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1001.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX0999.jpg
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1000.jpg



crits on my work?

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 02:23 PM
bilnek you may want to revise those E's. they look alot like M's.

Bilnek
04-02-2010, 02:26 PM
Leaks i should post sumtin funny to be in your signature


i ain't definetly gonna crit ewok but bomber go back to the toy thread

Alts13
04-02-2010, 02:51 PM
31 I'm certified old man status

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 02:55 PM
Leaks i should post sumtin funny to be in your signature

haha nice try

Alts13
04-02-2010, 03:34 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02661.jpg

tried something a bit different

ravine
04-02-2010, 03:51 PM
alts with the early 90s steez. feeling the triple outline

Sesh-it-up
04-02-2010, 03:56 PM
god damn alts that is wicked.

.od.
04-02-2010, 04:12 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/my%20pictures/pre.jpg

Sesh-it-up
04-02-2010, 04:41 PM
lookin good so far^

pookienuts
04-02-2010, 08:21 PM
maybe a little better???
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3399.jpg

my new crew old farts gettin down

BlacktodaFuture
04-02-2010, 08:33 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02657.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02658.jpg
couple of freestyles in work (gonna finish the piece in full biro I think)
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02654.jpg
simples (I know I posted the Blue one before but to get a pic of the brown one I had to include it)

that A is alot like Nacs from SDK. not calling bite, you have to much of a good reputation for it, but im just saying.

408Bomber
04-02-2010, 09:17 PM
before
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1218.jpg
after
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1219.jpg



crit on my c?

SIXSIXTHREE
04-03-2010, 12:43 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/241qcde.jpg

Sesh-it-up
04-03-2010, 01:20 AM
shit batle, is that high trafic?

Bilnek
04-03-2010, 03:39 AM
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Esoj.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/3u1.png



http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/thesoe.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/eraser.png


Batle- not bad....post sum of your work on paper....
408bomber-toy thread....
pookienuts- i like it cept that broken first letter....but the letters are good
.od.-too much of tiny stuff...go simplier
alts-one outline is enough =S

massacreman
04-03-2010, 03:44 AM
bilnek i dont like the arrows of the last one, i like the fill really much tho
dont like the E on the 2nd one
i dont like the chess E fill in with the blue and yellow.

but its overall really really fresh

408Bomber
04-03-2010, 04:21 AM
not tryna start nothing but ummm...

why should i go to toy thread? what's wrong with my c?

Bilnek
04-03-2010, 04:42 AM
nothing wrong....its just not intermediate..
ur postin only one letter and that is screaming with toyness

weakfingers
04-03-2010, 10:37 AM
Bilnek - Your stle is looking good, its abit hard to read but thats just my lack of skill on reading graffiti but i can defiantly see it going somewhere.
408bomber - I think posting a 1 letter is dumb, you really shouldent be concentrating on a comples style of 1 letter, work on your whole name and flow of it and a solid structure, you just kinda outlines that C and put a few black boxes,





For the roound robin battle with homeboy klic

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2678/4477478011_ca065726e7.jpg


inb4bspolice bite (iknow)

Alts13
04-03-2010, 11:13 AM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02662.jpg

pen freestyle in work

thanks for the Nacs heads up BlacktodaFuture, I have never even heard of him should really check other threads on here a little more, only tend to check more stuff on 12oz haha, actually just checked some of Nacs stuff, pretty dope, I think the As are different enough.

I like that throw Weak, only thing that throws it off for me is the middle of the E, it is too pointy

Bilnek
04-03-2010, 12:01 PM
^^ nicee....cept it aint gangsta cuz it has no arrows =P

408Bomber
04-03-2010, 12:56 PM
iite well i see what yall mean.... it's just the start of a piece im doing for a friend... i had already ink'd it so thats why i posted...gunna finish it up.. than post the whole thing :p

massacreman
04-03-2010, 03:02 PM
^^ nicee....cept it aint gangsta cuz it has no arrows =P

watch out with what you say bil, start saying this stuff and the next day you see 100 toy pieces with 500 arrows popping up from outta nowere :p

Flawless Victory
04-03-2010, 03:11 PM
Exactly how it should be.
Illegibility is the only thing more hip-hop than arrows.

-Empty-Can-
04-03-2010, 05:25 PM
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg36/arvinsmee/IMG_1309.jpg

Hey guys I just painted this piece. Not sure if I need moar arrows. canihasintermediate
nothatsnotreallyme

viseversa101
04-03-2010, 05:27 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10873.jpg

TheToy
04-03-2010, 08:06 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02662.jpg

Bump this. Fire. Fire. Fire. No really, I'm catching on fire it's so hot. Call the ambylamps.

I find your work to be very inspirational, Alts.

CrustOner
04-03-2010, 09:09 PM
Then start working toward that, Rewt. You've got straights down. Try a little bit of crazy shit out.

TheToy
04-03-2010, 09:49 PM
Then start working toward that, Rewt. You've got straights down. Try a little bit of crazy shit out.

I might just have to do that. I love that Euro style.

I guess I should start with some minor extensions and slight bends?

-Empty-Can-
04-03-2010, 09:50 PM
No. You just need moar arrows.

SIXSIXTHREE
04-03-2010, 09:53 PM
Batle- not bad....post sum of your work on paper....

i paint more than i do blackbook work.

heres a canvas for you :) oldie but goodie

http://i39.tinypic.com/2zsuv4g.jpg

CrustOner
04-03-2010, 09:53 PM
Yes, minor extensions and short bends.

I'd quote you, but I have downloads going and don't want to risk it taking 10 minutes to post this -__-

SIXSIXTHREE
04-03-2010, 09:57 PM
i paint more than i do blackbook work.

heres a canvas for you :) oldie but goodie

http://i39.tinypic.com/2zsuv4g.jpg

bump to the new page

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
04-03-2010, 09:57 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/3509x5s.jpg
jus a freestyle i did a few days ago

weakfingers
04-03-2010, 10:00 PM
keep it going!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2803/4488156530_e4d9f71100.jpg

TheToy
04-03-2010, 10:47 PM
keep it going!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2803/4488156530_e4d9f71100.jpg

Nice throw, man. I like that 'T'. ;)

gumOnShoe
04-04-2010, 12:38 AM
you still use the same N as your old COEN joints, use that lower case N you have. :o

Bilnek
04-04-2010, 03:41 AM
i paint more than i do blackbook work.

heres a canvas for you :) oldie but goodie

http://i39.tinypic.com/2zsuv4g.jpg

now thats what im talkin about :)

LeaksOne
04-04-2010, 03:43 AM
holy shit theres graff on those boobs...weird.

nice shit batle

Bilnek
04-04-2010, 04:06 AM
leaks im still not in your signature....
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Govno.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Trowi.png

CrustOner
04-04-2010, 09:51 AM
You have to be funny first.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-04-2010, 10:11 AM
Coming to a bit of a stand still style wise so fuck it Ill post in here, any suggestions would be appreciated, squint that throw is getting pretty tight I just think it looks a bit too squished together and the T is a little to round like a circle, but thats just me, some recent ish..

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0217-1.jpg
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0235.jpg
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0237.jpg
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0238.jpg

seywhat
04-04-2010, 10:34 AM
You have to be funny first.

lol that "suck my dick asshole" was pretty good, from that bottom piece of his

CrustOner
04-04-2010, 11:14 AM
haha oh shit, I didn't even realize.

Authr, why not try some minor extensions? Get some inspiration, homie. haha. I have a friend who did that exact same fill on your second picture, colors and all.

W_G_O_N_E
04-04-2010, 11:26 AM
did this freestyle for my other half genia , some shits not so clean but i like the way it came out overall http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/2663/dscn7166do.jpg

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-04-2010, 11:53 AM
Yeah I guess it might be time to break out some extendies, Im all about the letter structure for my style though, but Ill give it a shot

weakfingers
04-04-2010, 07:38 PM
Roygbif - Your bars are still kinda wonky so make sure to step back eveyr once and a while and keep that shit in line, The U bar on the left looks really fat. Also your missing shine/highlights in alot of places. In the Ska throw, you should open up your S so its legible and that K has one to many bumps.
and for that authr throw that A has that weird ass box and that R needs to have a smaller hole to compensate for the size. no hate jst trying to help you out with your style

BlacktodaFuture
04-04-2010, 09:00 PM
fix the A on the SKA throw.

your throw like weak said, but i would also add that the H is all "fuck you im an H" idk if thats a good thing or bad thing but just looks out of place.

glad to see someone is painting.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-04-2010, 11:20 PM
Thanks for the suggestions, my throws do get a little fucked but Ill draw up some some bombs with some of that in mind.

SIXSIXTHREE
04-05-2010, 12:59 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/aucx77.jpg

crits?

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
04-05-2010, 02:27 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2772/4492419086_61ef218dae_b.jpg

KRE1
04-05-2010, 04:10 AM
purple people eater took a shit ^

viseversa101
04-05-2010, 04:47 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2772/4492419086_61ef218dae_b.jpg


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Random%20graff/SDC10873.jpg

SIXSIXTHREE
04-05-2010, 05:37 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/aucx77.jpg

crits?

bump

massacreman
04-05-2010, 06:16 AM
give crits to get them everyone, have a nice day

Bilnek
04-05-2010, 08:06 AM
ow u dood wit the long name....that shit ain't even for the toy thread


CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K - was talkin to you

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
04-05-2010, 10:14 AM
that shits is straight battle style is a little funky lookin...could use a few touch ups but why you post stuff from 09

CrustOner
04-05-2010, 11:19 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2772/4492419086_61ef218dae_b.jpg

I see some serious steez in your future. That R is sick.

and shut the fuck up, Vice.

Alts13
04-05-2010, 12:14 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02663.jpg

trying to mix my main style with the one I have been playing with recently

Flawless Victory
04-05-2010, 12:37 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2772/4492419086_61ef218dae_b.jpg
yes.

TheToy
04-05-2010, 12:40 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2772/4492419086_61ef218dae_b.jpg

No.

Hardly intermediate.

Alts13
04-05-2010, 12:46 PM
I would say it deserves to be here, I don't like that particular piece as a whole however there are aspects I like, I would say keep working at it and spend some time, that looks so rushed

TheToy
04-05-2010, 12:52 PM
If that's intermediate, Woony is the king of all graffiti.

Alts13
04-05-2010, 12:56 PM
only reason I say it deserves to be here is there is a solid letter structure in there and he appears to be trying to elaborate on that

CrustOner
04-05-2010, 01:13 PM
And because of that R.. it's amazing. The S could use a better bottom bar, and the E is ugly, but that B is pretty nice too.

Bilnek
04-05-2010, 01:23 PM
its dirty as fuck...

unsuccsessfull
04-05-2010, 01:53 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/108_2614.jpg

Alts13
04-05-2010, 02:11 PM
Probably the best I have seen from you zoner, generally I'm not a fanof that particular style but you do pull it off well

SIXSIXTHREE
04-05-2010, 02:19 PM
that shits is straight battle style is a little funky lookin...could use a few touch ups but why you post stuff from 09

it was toward the end of 09 so its not that old yet

sike_21
04-05-2010, 03:21 PM
some shit after sleepin for months
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00123.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00113.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00083.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00073.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00064.jpg

CrustOner
04-05-2010, 03:24 PM
I dig that shit for sure.

gumOnShoe
04-05-2010, 03:33 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Random%20graff/SDC10873.jpg

ironically, that shit YOU posted is wack.


stay up, CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K.
i fucks with that grimey style you have.

sike_21
04-05-2010, 03:36 PM
end page bump

some shit after sleepin for months
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00123.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00113.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00083.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00073.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/SSPX00064.jpg

Alts13
04-05-2010, 04:40 PM
not such a fan of the throws, especially the bits exploding out of one of them but the simples are dope
started doing this fill but not sure what to do next was thinking medium green low lights/details but then maybe a different colour would pop more
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02664.jpg

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
04-05-2010, 05:08 PM
sike you got some straight bombs but wheres the peices at mayneee

umire
04-05-2010, 05:48 PM
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img085.jpg
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img082-1.jpg
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img081-1.jpg
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img079.jpg
the last three are exchanges
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/091205_021746.jpg
inspiration :)

Stussy
04-05-2010, 05:50 PM
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5236/photo1055.jpg
Its been a while
Sike- your shit has looked the same for a good while, ya need to progress some.

Loki X Sho
04-05-2010, 06:02 PM
all are widdit, but the second one especially...dang!

Flawless Victory
04-05-2010, 06:09 PM
There needs to be some crazy shit going on with that simple, stussy.

Stussy
04-05-2010, 06:13 PM
like what?

weakfingers
04-05-2010, 07:07 PM
Keep the page going! I gotta give a shout out to zoner for me biting this squiggle style, no disrespect i just had to try it atleast once.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Bday.jpg

TheToy
04-05-2010, 07:52 PM
Weak, best I've seen from you. I like that a lot. Props on takin' your time and workin' that shadow with each individual spikey ridge thing. Time consuming but shows you're dedicated. Good can control. I wanna' see a close up of just your piece.

Alts, I just used that same color combo with the greens lastnight. Same kind of fade style with yellow as well. You gotta' get some pink in there. I love the contrast between the greens and the pink with a black outline. Poppin' fresh.

cocacola
04-05-2010, 09:18 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4053/4495129923_da1f80fcb4.jpg

EST2007
04-05-2010, 09:28 PM
some friends doing work back home

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs430.snc3/24783_609983321509_13806028_35633837_357959_n.jpg
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs450.ash1/24783_609983326499_13806028_35633838_8087353_n.jpg
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs450.ash1/24783_609983331489_13806028_35633839_3518073_n.jpg
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs450.ash1/24783_609983336479_13806028_35633840_5374921_n.jpg

CrustOner
04-05-2010, 09:37 PM
Gerrrrrrrrsss!

EDIT: haven't sketched in a while.. I dig the S.. but my K killed it D: I'm not even going to bother finishing this.

http://i41.tinypic.com/33c2gdw.jpg

m+s
04-06-2010, 12:25 AM
bump osek nem and gers

and stussy, thats kinda tight

SIXSIXTHREE
04-06-2010, 12:28 AM
your k would look better if the bar was bent a little and have more flow in it like the S does

m+s
04-06-2010, 12:30 AM
claim to e fame
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3123/24783609983321509138060.jpg

SIXSIXTHREE
04-06-2010, 12:34 AM
that pic is tiny.

fromthegrave
04-06-2010, 12:44 AM
this page subtract nem is legit.

http://i39.tinypic.com/2ag6eqo.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/35iwtgg.jpg

CrustOner
04-06-2010, 12:48 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2zg6hbt.jpg

Apparently a freestyle pen character was more my steez tonight.

Bilnek
04-06-2010, 02:01 AM
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img085.jpg
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img082-1.jpg
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img081-1.jpg
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/img079.jpg
the last three are exchanges
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa53/oz187/091205_021746.jpg
inspiration :)

bump

RedEyes
04-06-2010, 02:15 AM
^^learn to roll a blunt, other than that just use a thicker outline to define your letters more clearly.

m+s
04-06-2010, 02:30 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2zg6hbt.jpg

Apparently a freestyle pen character was more my steez tonight.

thats a proper ball point eye ball their guy

smokeitup
04-06-2010, 03:21 AM
dont know what this says...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000145.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000144.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000143.jpg

-Sinn-
04-06-2010, 03:37 AM
smokeitup - Im not gonna lie I can't read a letter of it but i think its suck as fuck from a graphic aspect

I wanna see that umire stuff done with a clean fill that would be mind blowing
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture367-3.jpg
crits?

massacreman
04-06-2010, 08:47 AM
pretty cool, its a bit too bizzy imo tho

JoseBuerto
04-06-2010, 09:39 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4053/4495129923_da1f80fcb4.jpg

ya. I dont think so.

TheToy
04-06-2010, 10:00 AM
learn to roll a blunt

Smoke a real Euro Joint and you'll hardly smoke a blunt again...

Smoke real weed and you'll know it's a waste of flavor to smoke it in a blunt.

RedEyes
04-06-2010, 11:17 AM
real bud? dude i only smoke the cali kush and the canadian chron! blunts all day!

rush2
04-06-2010, 11:42 AM
cali medical ftw!!

Alts13
04-06-2010, 11:57 AM
Smoke a real Euro Joint and you'll hardly smoke a blunt again...

Smoke real weed and you'll know it's a waste of flavor to smoke it in a blunt.

I agree I don't fuck with Blunts I prefer to smoke a nice joint instead, plus if i smoked Blunts I would kill my weed too quickly, I only smoke real high grade buds anyway, my man won't pick up unless it is high grade

fromthegrave
04-06-2010, 12:48 PM
bump for crits?

http://i39.tinypic.com/2ag6eqo.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/35iwtgg.jpg[/QUOTE]

TheToy
04-06-2010, 01:26 PM
i only smoke the cali kush and the canadian chron! blunts all day!

Mainstream 'Cali Kush' is blunt weed. It's the new modern day commercial mid grades. I hate all that overpriced, over-fertilized, dried improperly without cure, thrown in a tumbler for a trimjob that knocks off all the trichomes, wrapped and bailed bullshit that gets thrown in an oven of a box truck and carted across the country, you seem to think is the best bud.


That shit's trippy, fromthegrave.

massacreman
04-06-2010, 01:32 PM
everyone, no matter how much you like kush or weed, take it to the herbal remedy thread or whatever its called

fromthegrave: get better markers, will help you in the 1st sketch
cocacola : dope
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2698/4497751008_4471c91c5f.jpg

CrustOner
04-06-2010, 01:39 PM
Sorry homie.. but that looks like Toy BB to me.

massacreman
04-06-2010, 02:23 PM
dude there is much worse in here and you can clearly see im not the worst

rush2
04-06-2010, 04:46 PM
id still say go to the toy thead

Alts13
04-06-2010, 04:50 PM
if the people that were truely intermediate stayed to this thread and the toys to their own then this thread would be dead

Massace - out of all of them the top right is the only one with potential in my eyes, but it goes from curvu at the start to very straight at the ends, i would say to make it more angular throughout and that could be the start of a good style to develop

ravine
04-06-2010, 05:25 PM
stussy is on that awesome awkward lookin' shit. would look super ill with a nice and thick drop shadow.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
04-06-2010, 05:52 PM
ok im sorry but just because your better than another toy doesnt give you the right to post here lol thats like sayin i killed my mom but my friends killed my dad and brother...you kno it doesnt give you the right
but at the end of the day this website shouldnt effect your thought on any graff because this shit is pathetic
just mad egomaniacs who want to hear complimants from other writers who are worse than them lol and this usually doenst leave the pen and note pad

ravine
04-06-2010, 07:19 PM
http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/wherenofill.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-06-2010, 07:29 PM
That H is too simple for the other letters. Add some steez so It doesn't look out of place.

ravine
04-06-2010, 07:41 PM
i would agree, h's are kind of a bitch, simply put.

DukeOne
04-06-2010, 09:42 PM
if the people that were truely intermediate stayed to this thread and the toys to their own then this thread would be dead

unfortunately so true

from the grave - the piece looks pretty toy to me. it just seems like your trying to include too many "effects" into ur graff, (like arrows, onion style, and cracks) just keep working on ur letters man. theres definitely potential in ur basic letters tho
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture011-1.jpg

weakfingers
04-06-2010, 10:30 PM
I have to admit my shit shouldent be in this thread but i wasent getting crits in that toy blackbook anymore, The first couples pages of here where fucking gold I go there for so much inspiration

m+s
04-07-2010, 02:19 AM
na, your good

cocacola
04-07-2010, 11:42 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2682/4499870917_ab6a87fe80.jpg

AteskOne
04-07-2010, 01:48 PM
colored pencils?

cocacola
04-07-2010, 02:54 PM
yea i didnt have any markers around

Stussy
04-07-2010, 06:43 PM
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5236/photo1055.jpg
Its been a while
Sike- your shit has looked the same for a good while, ya need to progress some.

bumpskies

jupsick
04-07-2010, 06:50 PM
good to see you back rayz, looking good!
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/1803/dsci0004c.jpg
on a wall on sunday hopefully...
also a wall i did revently
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4070/4496102869_d319c633b3_o.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
04-07-2010, 07:26 PM
how is there a boardwalk and grass inbetween what you painted if it is on a wall? (bottom right corner)

Sesh-it-up
04-07-2010, 10:34 PM
duke's steez is impeccable..

weakfingers
04-07-2010, 10:54 PM
Duke- What can i say I have a crush on your drawings
Coca Cola - Work on your letter structure that shit is all wonkey and what not
Rays- theres nothign to really crit its an uber simple style no flaws or anything I can see.
Jupstick- Not really feeling the overall flow


A fun little wall I got to paint tongiht with a friend, Nice & Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2717/4501965562_9f758f4409_b.jpg

sex without condoms
04-07-2010, 11:34 PM
^dope

Sesh-it-up
04-07-2010, 11:59 PM
Keep the page going! I gotta give a shout out to zoner for me biting this squiggle style, no disrespect i just had to try it atleast once.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Bday.jpg

he aint the first haha.. every writer in vancity drops it, cool idea tho, till it got over used.

edit ....that sead is dopeeeeee, and can i be on ur next back ground :D

m+s
04-08-2010, 04:31 AM
how is there a boardwalk and grass inbetween what you painted if it is on a wall? (bottom right corner)

lookat it more carefully and you will see that you are looking through a hole in the bottom of the wall that you can see a board walk through. thats a flat straight wall. thats real nice by the way, heal


nice squint, thats dope, you went a little overboard with the 5 flash burns though imo.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-08-2010, 07:22 AM
Duke- What can i say I have a crush on your drawings
Coca Cola - Work on your letter structure that shit is all wonkey and what not
Rays- theres nothign to really crit its an uber simple style no flaws or anything I can see.
Jupstick- Not really feeling the overall flow


A fun little wall I got to paint tongiht with a friend, Nice & Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2717/4501965562_9f758f4409_b.jpg

maaaaaaaaaaaaan please put a bit more work into your handstyle, that piece is looking fresh but then I see the hand and Im like damn. Not hating or anything Im just sayin that your handstyles are not at par with your pieces so it kinda takes me back, put a bit more work into hand styles and you'll see the overall aesthetics of your work go way up man.

CrustOner
04-08-2010, 11:42 AM
Homie, it's a cursive handstyle.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-08-2010, 12:28 PM
Really? No shit guy.

I aint hating at all, you come here to get crits Im just giving my opinion, piece is ill, I just think the handstyle is lacking compared to it, I know its not his thing but just tryin to help out a fellow writer. Peace.

cocacola
04-08-2010, 01:03 PM
^^ qwhats wrong with the guy's handie?
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4044/4503395528_728b62f1bd.jpg

massacreman
04-08-2010, 02:07 PM
well. its not really special but it flows really well, id say stick with it, its quite good

edit:
cocacola: work on your structure again dude, its weak on this 1, your others are gud tho

weakfingers
04-08-2010, 02:51 PM
Cocacola take you time.



I'm just trying to keep it classy, I do have a regular hand, i just choose not to use it, cursive is faster and imo noone really does it other then one or two other writers in my area.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9700-1.jpg

And Bump!




with a friend, Nice & Simple
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2717/4501965562_9f758f4409_b.jpg

DukeOne
04-08-2010, 03:28 PM
ya weak deffinatly dont stop trying with the 1 liner handstyle, people hatted on mine enough times. it will take a while tho to make it more then just straight cursive, so just keep working on it man, pieces are looking dope too

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture015-1.jpg

Write_Now
04-08-2010, 04:02 PM
What u think about my 3D new piece?....

here
http://www.siz.co.il/my.php?i=zgyym1zxn42y.jpg
or here
http://www.flickr.com/photos/45916050@N05/4496925825/

Alts13
04-08-2010, 04:17 PM
dope as always Duke

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02667.jpg

got bored redid a canvas, all it had on it before was the face so kinda turned it into a lightbulb and added a piece at the bottom

lord_plankton
04-08-2010, 05:41 PM
i like it, dont know about top t though...kinda lifts the piece strangely, especially the top l t "connection"..charack reminds me of those stone faces easter island

Sesh-it-up
04-08-2010, 05:57 PM
oneliners is where its at..
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000241.jpg
few shouts to the big homies doin big things.

sinkilla1
04-08-2010, 07:22 PM
sesh your gay lol and suck

Karma
04-08-2010, 07:49 PM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6572/image87.jpg

stuff i sketched this morning, bored as fuck. Wish I had a nice set of colors.

Karma
04-08-2010, 09:47 PM
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/1199/image97g.jpg

Re-did that bottom piece, like this way better.

weakfingers
04-08-2010, 09:55 PM
Theres another guy who writes ohno up in my hood justa give you a heads up and his ish is way tighter.

Karma
04-08-2010, 10:08 PM
that's cool, I'm not him and we prob don't live round the same area.

Rank-oner!
04-08-2010, 10:23 PM
No but there's already an Oh No on the East coast pimpin and you're right you aren't him, cause you obviously don't paint. Your O's look like A's in your throwy and your simples, well just suck. So you should probably just stop now since you haven't invested much time.

Squint looking better but dont over do those shines.
Duke dope as usual, still waiting to see shit painted
Alts, i would agree that extension gives it a weird feel but not to overbearing. And i like the face in the bulb

Karma
04-08-2010, 10:54 PM
I dont care what any of you fools think. Lots of people in with my birth name and I dont give a fuck. You dont like it dont say shit, Im not looking for crits or advice.

viseversa101
04-08-2010, 10:59 PM
1.if ur not biting their style
2.they live 4 states+ over
3. they arent obvious legends

then i vote write what the fuck u wana

Sesh-it-up
04-08-2010, 11:13 PM
thers tuns of ohno's
ive seen about 4 around my province..

AteskOne
04-08-2010, 11:13 PM
if you dont know of ohno you should quit now. reguardless you dont belong in this thread. sorry bro but that shit's garbage. and if you arent looking for crits or advice wtf are you doing here? i hope you're not looking for props.

Sesh-it-up
04-08-2010, 11:16 PM
karma dont listin to these goofs. do what ever help you sleep at night, no sarcasm..

Bilnek
04-08-2010, 11:59 PM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6572/image87.jpg

stuff i sketched this morning, bored as fuck. Wish I had a nice set of colors.

id' like the first throw if it was on the wall
the second sketch has too slim letters and big 3d
third one sucks

u aint for this thread....go back to the toy forum


the rest of you guys (in my opinion) don't need critz from me =)

Karma
04-09-2010, 12:03 AM
I don't want anything, I posted cause i felt like it. I like my shit, you don't have to. No one cares but thanks for your opinion?

CrustOner
04-09-2010, 12:46 AM
You wouldn't "post if you felt like it" unless you wanted something, kid.

Back to Toy BB. I don't have a problem with you, but come on. What do you expect? For everyone to kiss the ground you walk on? Your shit isn't good, and how do you expect to get better at it without realizing you aren't as good as you think you are? You sound cocky, and that shit doesn't fly in the graffiti community.

Number two, if you're trying to pull that "I like it, therefore nothing else matters" shit, then you aren't being dada enough. the OhNo on this site has his complete own style, and gets shit for it all the time, but he has at least elevated to a level where he knows he's got structure down. You haven't even mastered that yet.

massacreman
04-09-2010, 04:19 AM
karma get off bs, stop writing, stop being oh no...

Bilnek
04-09-2010, 04:22 AM
I don't want anything, I posted cause i felt like it. I like my shit, you don't have to. No one cares but thanks for your opinion?

go and draw flowers....i like my stuff but that doesen't make me a pro.....
and u ain't even a writer....u got to respect ppl for your own sake....

Messer
04-09-2010, 05:41 AM
something i'm working on...

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100331_135009.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100331_135037.jpg

smokeitup
04-09-2010, 07:28 AM
sesh your gay lol and suck

i agree.

Karma
04-09-2010, 10:11 AM
Man what a lot of idiots this site has taken in over the years. I've been around just as long as At or whoever. I dont give a FUCK if you think I paint or not and I don't care about no mother fucker from Ohio. You heard of him I have not, he's not doin shit where I am from.

All you idiots are wrapped in some kind of good manor lore, fuck your shit I'm out to bomb and I don't give a fuck what a piece looks like, I don't give a fuck of whose who I haven't heard of this guy, and other people haven't either. My name will get up and I don't care how it looks or reads. Its simple. I'm not gonna sweat half of your shit I cant read in a blank ass book when I'm out catching wreck bombing.

Lol have to put that in my sig or something :I DONT FUCKING CARE ABOUT YOUR OPINIONS :)

ToNiC
04-09-2010, 10:12 AM
http://yfrog.com/0itonicsketchj

Threw this sketch up in seventh period. Boreddd.

Crit hard, cuz I don't really like it. Tear it to pieces, Dependable Naysayers.

CrustOner
04-09-2010, 10:22 AM
Tonic, that's toy thread material.

Man what a lot of idiots this site has taken in over the years. I've been around just as long as At or whoever. I dont give a FUCK if you think I paint or not and I don't care about no mother fucker from Ohio. You heard of him I have not, he's not doin shit where I am from.

All you idiots are wrapped in some kind of good manor lore, fuck your shit I'm out to bomb and I don't give a fuck what a piece looks like, I don't give a fuck of whose who I haven't heard of this guy, and other people haven't either. My name will get up and I don't care how it looks or reads. Its simple. I'm not gonna sweat half of your shit I cant read in a blank ass book when I'm out catching wreck bombing.

Lol have to put that in my sig or something :I DONT FUCKING CARE ABOUT YOUR OPINIONS :)

Then y u on da intarnet tho?

viseversa101
04-09-2010, 10:32 AM
why do i see a fucking resp here? u from ra?

something i'm working on...

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100331_135009.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100331_135037.jpg

AteskOne
04-09-2010, 12:11 PM
Man what a lot of idiots this site has taken in over the years. I've been around just as long as At or whoever.
ok so i'm not tryna hate or anything but if you've been putting it down for at least 4 years why do you have no structure at all? you're throwy isnt half bad but those pieces are trash. did you just spend all your time on bombs or something? not tryna beef just curious.

messer that shits dope. only letter i'm not feelin is the E

Bilnek
04-09-2010, 12:33 PM
Man what a lot of idiots this site has taken in over the years. I've been around just as long as At or whoever. I dont give a FUCK if you think I paint or not and I don't care about no mother fucker from Ohio. You heard of him I have not, he's not doin shit where I am from.

All you idiots are wrapped in some kind of good manor lore, fuck your shit I'm out to bomb and I don't give a fuck what a piece looks like, I don't give a fuck of whose who I haven't heard of this guy, and other people haven't either. My name will get up and I don't care how it looks or reads. Its simple. I'm not gonna sweat half of your shit I cant read in a blank ass book when I'm out catching wreck bombing.

Lol have to put that in my sig or something :I DONT FUCKING CARE ABOUT YOUR OPINIONS :)

will you just respect the better??

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/eraser.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Govno.png

wich one is better 4 a wall wacha think??

CrustOner
04-09-2010, 12:41 PM
Bottom with the top one's O. the top's E's are hideous.

Karma
04-09-2010, 12:52 PM
did you just spend all your time on bombs or something? not tryna beef just curious.


I like bombin, I don't care about piecing. I like catchin bomb after bomb, not one or two burners in a night.

Bilnek
04-09-2010, 02:25 PM
then posr ur painted stuff
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Untitled-3.png

CrustOner
04-09-2010, 02:48 PM
Better.

Karma
04-09-2010, 02:52 PM
then posr ur painted stuff


Nah I'm pretty sure I'll pass on "posr"ing my painteds. I'm not gonna get caught up in shit; I don't need to post anything to prove dick. Do what you do and I'll be on my grind.

7400
04-09-2010, 02:56 PM
<.......

ravine
04-09-2010, 04:32 PM
esoe, try to flip yer e's over, just so they kind of look more.. e-ish... thats not a word. the last one is your best.
resp has a really cool production going too, i kinda dig the real grimey style.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4063/4505782701_f55cc18711_b.jpg
had a little time in english today

lord_plankton
04-09-2010, 05:20 PM
i dont like how you disconnected your h (and the middle bar is too thick), w e are solo and r e connected..other than that pretty solid...

CrustOner
04-09-2010, 05:28 PM
Clean as fuck. Props.

RES4
04-09-2010, 05:29 PM
i think that you started off really well with that w and h and the ere is completely different. i sort of like it overall though just try and fit the last three letters in with the first more

Sesh-it-up
04-09-2010, 06:17 PM
ok so i'm not tryna hate or anything but if you've been putting it down for at least 4 years why do you have no structure at all? you're throwy isnt half bad but those pieces are trash. did you just spend all your time on bombs or something? not tryna beef just curious.

messer that shits dope. only letter i'm not feelin is the E

ive been around four years and i dont piece, ive bombed hard tho. and sorry karma, i was kinda on your side till u had your lil hissy fit, just stop posting for a few days and chill the fuck out, then come back with a new word if u dont wanna get ragged on.

jupsick
04-09-2010, 06:34 PM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8784/dsci0002q.jpg
i need some tips on howto keep style from start to the end of the piece....cuz as u can see ty are diff from ze thats not good...
anyone?

Sesh-it-up
04-09-2010, 06:42 PM
toy thread.. ^^^^^

Keso
04-09-2010, 06:51 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4494996781_4cdeef13dc.jpg

Karma
04-09-2010, 07:33 PM
Im not here to argue, I dont care plain and simple. Thats whats good, get up.

Messer
04-09-2010, 07:37 PM
why do i see a fucking resp here? u from ra?

im from thew UK?

m.ziggy
04-09-2010, 09:08 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo8.jpg

struggle with the s that day

ravine
04-09-2010, 10:44 PM
esoe, try to flip yer e's over, just so they kind of look more.. e-ish... thats not a word. the last one is your best.
resp has a really cool production going too, i kinda dig the real grimey style.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4063/4505782701_f55cc18711_b.jpg
had a little time in english today

bottom page bump. the split in the h is on accident, i.e. me being careless using a marker

Flawless Victory
04-09-2010, 10:46 PM
That's what's up.
It'd look dope with some fat ass highlights.

Bilnek
04-10-2010, 04:10 AM
esoe, try to flip yer e's over, just so they kind of look more.. e-ish... thats not a word. the last one is your best.
resp has a really cool production going too, i kinda dig the real grimey style.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4063/4505782701_f55cc18711_b.jpg
had a little time in english today

marry me =)

want an exchange??

weakfingers
04-10-2010, 10:27 AM
thinks looking good on this page,

For the round robin battle,
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4027/4499259730_df4cb0ae99.jpg

ManikOner
04-10-2010, 10:34 AM
toy thread.. ^^^^^
yea its the toy thread man, but the point of the threads for toys is for the pros to help them out like hes askin. if you dont know how to help him then just give props.

Tyze?? - looks pretty dope, the Z (if a z) caught me off guard, kinda iffy/hard to see. looks sick tho. i have the same problem with keepin style and steeze :( Also just make sure the top and bottom of your letters all meet up at the same heights. my problem too.

Ravine - that shit is DOPE as FUCK! wish i could do that in english class man.... fuck. yea the fuck up in the H would look better gone but screw it man, its a doodle in class that turned out fucking ILL! :D love the purple too

Weakfingers - first off i love your name lol. the piece is pretty damn sick, only thing is the handstyles below are hard for me to read. love it though

CrustOner
04-10-2010, 10:57 AM
That Tyze isn't toy thread material. That ZE is, but the TY balances it out. It stays.

RedEyes
04-10-2010, 11:23 AM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8784/dsci0002q.jpg
i need some tips on howto keep style from start to the end of the piece....cuz as u can see ty are diff from ze thats not good...
anyone?

The TY is dope, but you got rounded edges up top and sharp at the bottom, for the rest of the letters just look at your previous bars and form the letter. My suggestion.

AteskOne
04-10-2010, 11:32 AM
thinks looking good on this page,

For the round robin battle,
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4027/4499259730_df4cb0ae99.jpg
dont like the handsteez but its a dope entry. glad i wasnt battling you cause i didnt try that hard on my entry. crust i hope you brought it just as hard.

i'm definitely digging that tyze idk why you kids think its toy forum material. i dont really see anything wrong with the letters. the style varies but its still a similar style. i'm feeling that E too. dont listen to the kids that cant post in here, your shit's dope jupsick

Culture_Shock
04-10-2010, 12:59 PM
Oh so that's why the rest of the toy forum is in the fucking dark ages, you're all holed up in this "intermediate thread". Whatever, shit's dope. Weakfingers delivers, and Ravines piece is nice, but whats going on between the R and the E?

Bilnek
04-10-2010, 02:08 PM
there are some ppl that are better than sum ppl that post in the big boys thread (alts13,ravine etc....) http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/kjava.png

Sesh-it-up
04-10-2010, 02:18 PM
lmao tyze?? i couldnt read that wack shit. ill give you crits when you post in the thread you should be in. keep tryin
weak- im not feelin that at all, thought u woulda had somthing iller. i think crusty will take that one, i thought u had it for sure.

EDIT not saying anyone in here NEEDS my crits, i was just sayin.

AteskOne
04-10-2010, 02:18 PM
sesh- if you cant do better you should stop hating. you dont even belong in this thread so how are you gunna tell people they dont?

bilnek- dont like the bend at the top of the C. if you had cut it off a little lower it would have looked a lot better imo...like this:
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3174/kjava.png (http://img96.imageshack.us/i/kjava.png/)

Sesh-it-up
04-10-2010, 02:22 PM
cuz if there in here why should i stay out? atlest i dont post my work. not diggin the green oputline on that one either^ woulda looked better without it.

ManikOner
04-10-2010, 02:29 PM
Bilnek - im feelin it, just where Atesk dont like the bend, keep it up that high, just dont bent it, maybe make it a sharp coner/edge goin up to the same height as the W. im feelin the green. maybe if it was a lighter green?

Sesh-it-up
04-10-2010, 02:55 PM
to much white papper showing threw, someone has shaky hands.

Jokz
04-10-2010, 03:03 PM
sesh- if you cant do better you should stop hating. you dont even belong in this thread so how are you gunna tell people they dont?

bilnek- dont like the bend at the top of the C. if you had cut it off a little lower it would have looked a lot better imo...like this:
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3174/kjava.png (http://img96.imageshack.us/i/kjava.png/)

the green works for an outline, but i think it should be fatter.
or look into a light blue ish colour.

Sesh-it-up
04-10-2010, 03:07 PM
yea thats true if it was thick it coulda rocked.

ravine
04-10-2010, 04:15 PM
culture shock, its just kinda of a merger for the r and e bar

AteskOne
04-10-2010, 05:40 PM
the green works for an outline, but i think it should be fatter.
or look into a light blue ish colour.
not my piece. just edited it to try and help bilnek out.

Jokz
04-10-2010, 11:26 PM
not my piece. just edited it to try and help bilnek out.

yea i found out after lol. either way he'll see his piece being edited. so he'll get the deal i hope. ur edit works but i think his version works too. its upto him

Bilnek
04-11-2010, 03:34 AM
you 2 guys thanks.....i was goin to do it on a pretty hot spot....i see what u were triyin to say...i already fixed it on teh paper

Jokz
04-11-2010, 11:00 AM
you 2 guys thanks.....i was goin to do it on a pretty hot spot....i see what u were triyin to say...i already fixed it on teh paper

i digg ur letters man. makes me think of cantwo. ur style is defs better than mine

W_G_O_N_E
04-11-2010, 12:46 PM
says "zyps" could be spyz backwardz or throw an r in there it'd be zyprs or whatever . i finally got a combo i really like gonna stick with these letters and this style and keep workin on it.http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8305/dscn7345.jpgthe "y" coulda been seperated at the top to make it not look like a "g" so much but i'll work on that

Jokz
04-11-2010, 01:11 PM
says "zyps" could be spyz backwardz or throw an r in there it'd be zyprs or whatever . i finally got a combo i really like gonna stick with these letters and this style and keep workin on it.http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8305/dscn7345.jpgthe "y" coulda been seperated at the top to make it not look like a "g" so much but i'll work on that

yea man i digg it a lot. but the y does look like a g. keep it up

The Average Homeboy
04-11-2010, 01:33 PM
I would have read it as ZGES

still fresh though, I think it would look better if you did a nicer color scheme.

Alts13
04-11-2010, 05:42 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02688.jpg

AteskOne
04-11-2010, 06:22 PM
that fill is fucking orgasmic alts.

KinkyStab
04-11-2010, 07:25 PM
i think that last peice is lackin compared to your others alts

CrustOner
04-11-2010, 07:25 PM
that fill is fucking orgasmic alts.

No joke. That shit is griiiimy.

unsuccsessfull
04-11-2010, 07:52 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/100_2620.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/100215_205551-1.jpg

KinkyStab
04-11-2010, 08:21 PM
^^^^^^^^^^^^^that...is yummy like a donut, work on 2nd n 3rd letters they arent up to par
some bullshit for talking
http://i42.tinypic.com/27y5uu0.jpg

DukeOne
04-11-2010, 10:39 PM
zoner - looking good man, ur handstlye and flairs are doper than ever
Alts - loving that psychedelic fill man, actually i always love ur fills lol
wgone - that peice isnt to bad, but the letter look like there kinda fighting with each other for room. maybe space them out a bit, and shorten the extensions

anyways been working on this for abit, gonna see if it itll fly in the big boy thread. did some progression flicks for the hell of it :)
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture006-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture009-2.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture012-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture013-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture018-1-1.jpg

kew1
04-11-2010, 10:48 PM
ummmm.............

weakfingers
04-11-2010, 10:56 PM
DUKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy fuck man! that shit is wild, im tripping over that whole thing!

TheToy
04-12-2010, 12:21 AM
Duke, what kind of markers do you use? And what was the turn time on that page?

You got a lot of shades of blue in there. I like all that depth and dimension with only blue/white.

I just started using markers and all I can say is 'Damn'. I know you put some serious time and effort into it. Keep it up.

viseversa101
04-12-2010, 12:28 AM
pretty sure duke said b4 he was doing watercolor paper so0..

TheToy
04-12-2010, 12:31 AM
pretty sure duke said b4 he was doing watercolor paper so0..

Looked back a couple pages. Didn't see anything. Just curious.

DukeOne
04-12-2010, 01:22 AM
haha thanks weakkk (congrats on the sketch battle battle btw, 1 more to go haha)


Duke, what kind of markers do you use? And what was the turn time on that page?

You got a lot of shades of blue in there. I like all that depth and dimension with only blue/white.


i use pretty much anything i can get my hands on, so i dont have a full or specific marker set. but for this i used a bunch of different markets like....

-TRIA markers (i think they stopped making them or something)
-Superstrong permanent markers (dollar store)
-Sharpies
-more dollar store shit
-a blue montana bombing marker

and just did touch ups with white acrylic

oh and i dont use watercolour or watercolour paper, just plain old printer paper

AteskOne
04-12-2010, 02:15 AM
duke is on some other shit. gtfo of here and hit up the big boy forum already.

viseversa101
04-12-2010, 02:19 AM
true, i scoped out dukes flikr.....definately should roll big boy status...nice characters btw duke

massacreman
04-12-2010, 06:45 AM
whats his flickr? pm it me
thankx vise :D

viseversa101
04-12-2010, 08:20 AM
flickr.com/photos/dukeone/

i believe its his sig

NICCSACC
04-12-2010, 02:04 PM
pretty awesome

RedEyes
04-12-2010, 02:33 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo9-3.jpg
A work in progress, any crits?

IlikePie
04-12-2010, 02:35 PM
Don't try so hard.

LeaksOne
04-12-2010, 02:36 PM
the R looks weird. point the top right. it shouldnt be curved

W_G_O_N_E
04-12-2010, 04:05 PM
thnx for that crit duke. def gonna space em out a little bit more i always seem to run out of room for connections or bits and shit , thats explains why . awesome piece love the hands comin out the sides.

sinkilla1
04-12-2010, 05:18 PM
hey guys duke fucking amazing bro
just a redo freestyle no pencil didnt have one kinda messy but oh well
http://i41.tinypic.com/24ymgqh.jpg

skeetz
04-12-2010, 05:53 PM
duke- that u is looking more and more like a y to me, love the overall concept and delivery though. nicely worked out man.
Redo- for a freestyle thats not bad, the proportions on the R are a little off but i like the overall look.

for some reason ive been liking swirls lately, but i cant really figure out why/what to do with them. kinda shitty pics but w/e.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/Photoon2010-04-12at1738.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/Photoon2010-04-12at1739.jpg
second one is a pen freestyle that i went over with markers, its hard to see here but i kinda like the way some of the sketchiness shows through on the real thing.

still lookin to do some exchanges to get this new feel im going for down pm me if anyone is down.

sinkilla1
04-12-2010, 06:04 PM
yo desk ill exchange with u i writ redo as you may know ^^

GrimeTime
04-12-2010, 08:45 PM
pfff duke is killer! wasnt sure if i belong here or toy blackbooks but that duke guy might have just made my mind up, what you guys think? just finished this, quick sketch

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/P1160073.jpg

ravine
04-12-2010, 09:34 PM
ijooookrvqhbl4o;p3nlkgjr hvqwe

that is the sound of my brain exploding due to duke

I_FLOAT
04-13-2010, 03:28 PM
^im digging it bro^
duke...holy shit man
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/Photo51-1.jpg
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/Photo35.jpg

AteskOne
04-13-2010, 04:08 PM
grime time & ifloat- decent but not intermediate. you both need a good amount of work on your structure.

sinkilla1
04-13-2010, 04:20 PM
what about me atesk does u tink i does belong herez?

NouveauP
04-13-2010, 04:45 PM
Might not belong here, but a quick sketch for a new name.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2706/4519169844_85b32ccd5e_b.jpg

Sesh-it-up
04-13-2010, 04:47 PM
that G is primeeeeee^

Kaiser71
04-13-2010, 05:01 PM
NouveauP- I like the G the most too...isn't GOYA the name of like a tropical fruit company..like pineapple and stuff? Just wonderin

IFloat- letter structure is all over the place. I can't really tell if you're trying to use bars or not

Trying a couple different letters...crits? EDIT: forgot to connect the top of the E so it wouldn't like a weird i or something:
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/red.jpg

NouveauP
04-13-2010, 05:06 PM
Goya might be a fruit company, I've never heard that. Goya is a great Spanish artist from the 1800s. On any note, I kind of like your bar stacking style. Your R seems to be aligning in an odd way, though. Might just be me.

Karma
04-13-2010, 05:11 PM
Goya used to be a head around these parts, PM me