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DukeOne
04-11-2010, 11:39 PM
zoner - looking good man, ur handstlye and flairs are doper than ever
Alts - loving that psychedelic fill man, actually i always love ur fills lol
wgone - that peice isnt to bad, but the letter look like there kinda fighting with each other for room. maybe space them out a bit, and shorten the extensions

anyways been working on this for abit, gonna see if it itll fly in the big boy thread. did some progression flicks for the hell of it :)
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture006-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture009-2.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture012-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture013-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture018-1-1.jpg

kew1
04-11-2010, 11:48 PM
ummmm.............

weakfingers
04-11-2010, 11:56 PM
DUKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy fuck man! that shit is wild, im tripping over that whole thing!

TheToy
04-12-2010, 01:21 AM
Duke, what kind of markers do you use? And what was the turn time on that page?

You got a lot of shades of blue in there. I like all that depth and dimension with only blue/white.

I just started using markers and all I can say is 'Damn'. I know you put some serious time and effort into it. Keep it up.

viseversa101
04-12-2010, 01:28 AM
pretty sure duke said b4 he was doing watercolor paper so0..

TheToy
04-12-2010, 01:31 AM
pretty sure duke said b4 he was doing watercolor paper so0..

Looked back a couple pages. Didn't see anything. Just curious.

DukeOne
04-12-2010, 02:22 AM
haha thanks weakkk (congrats on the sketch battle battle btw, 1 more to go haha)


Duke, what kind of markers do you use? And what was the turn time on that page?

You got a lot of shades of blue in there. I like all that depth and dimension with only blue/white.


i use pretty much anything i can get my hands on, so i dont have a full or specific marker set. but for this i used a bunch of different markets like....

-TRIA markers (i think they stopped making them or something)
-Superstrong permanent markers (dollar store)
-Sharpies
-more dollar store shit
-a blue montana bombing marker

and just did touch ups with white acrylic

oh and i dont use watercolour or watercolour paper, just plain old printer paper

AteskOne
04-12-2010, 03:15 AM
duke is on some other shit. gtfo of here and hit up the big boy forum already.

viseversa101
04-12-2010, 03:19 AM
true, i scoped out dukes flikr.....definately should roll big boy status...nice characters btw duke

massacreman
04-12-2010, 07:45 AM
whats his flickr? pm it me
thankx vise :D

viseversa101
04-12-2010, 09:20 AM
flickr.com/photos/dukeone/

i believe its his sig

NICCSACC
04-12-2010, 03:04 PM
pretty awesome

RedEyes
04-12-2010, 03:33 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo9-3.jpg
A work in progress, any crits?

IlikePie
04-12-2010, 03:35 PM
Don't try so hard.

LeaksOne
04-12-2010, 03:36 PM
the R looks weird. point the top right. it shouldnt be curved

W_G_O_N_E
04-12-2010, 05:05 PM
thnx for that crit duke. def gonna space em out a little bit more i always seem to run out of room for connections or bits and shit , thats explains why . awesome piece love the hands comin out the sides.

sinkilla1
04-12-2010, 06:18 PM
hey guys duke fucking amazing bro
just a redo freestyle no pencil didnt have one kinda messy but oh well
http://i41.tinypic.com/24ymgqh.jpg

skeetz
04-12-2010, 06:53 PM
duke- that u is looking more and more like a y to me, love the overall concept and delivery though. nicely worked out man.
Redo- for a freestyle thats not bad, the proportions on the R are a little off but i like the overall look.

for some reason ive been liking swirls lately, but i cant really figure out why/what to do with them. kinda shitty pics but w/e.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/Photoon2010-04-12at1738.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/Photoon2010-04-12at1739.jpg
second one is a pen freestyle that i went over with markers, its hard to see here but i kinda like the way some of the sketchiness shows through on the real thing.

still lookin to do some exchanges to get this new feel im going for down pm me if anyone is down.

sinkilla1
04-12-2010, 07:04 PM
yo desk ill exchange with u i writ redo as you may know ^^

GrimeTime
04-12-2010, 09:45 PM
pfff duke is killer! wasnt sure if i belong here or toy blackbooks but that duke guy might have just made my mind up, what you guys think? just finished this, quick sketch

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/xPNGx/P1160073.jpg

ravine
04-12-2010, 10:34 PM
ijooookrvqhbl4o;p3nlkgjr hvqwe

that is the sound of my brain exploding due to duke

I_FLOAT
04-13-2010, 04:28 PM
^im digging it bro^
duke...holy shit man
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/Photo51-1.jpg
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/Photo35.jpg

AteskOne
04-13-2010, 05:08 PM
grime time & ifloat- decent but not intermediate. you both need a good amount of work on your structure.

sinkilla1
04-13-2010, 05:20 PM
what about me atesk does u tink i does belong herez?

NouveauP
04-13-2010, 05:45 PM
Might not belong here, but a quick sketch for a new name.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2706/4519169844_85b32ccd5e_b.jpg

Sesh-it-up
04-13-2010, 05:47 PM
that G is primeeeeee^

Kaiser71
04-13-2010, 06:01 PM
NouveauP- I like the G the most too...isn't GOYA the name of like a tropical fruit company..like pineapple and stuff? Just wonderin

IFloat- letter structure is all over the place. I can't really tell if you're trying to use bars or not

Trying a couple different letters...crits? EDIT: forgot to connect the top of the E so it wouldn't like a weird i or something:
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/red.jpg

NouveauP
04-13-2010, 06:06 PM
Goya might be a fruit company, I've never heard that. Goya is a great Spanish artist from the 1800s. On any note, I kind of like your bar stacking style. Your R seems to be aligning in an odd way, though. Might just be me.

Karma
04-13-2010, 06:11 PM
Goya used to be a head around these parts, PM me

Keso
04-13-2010, 09:49 PM
I need some serious crits on this one.

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/84/l_0ebff172019e49b5a355322304a62f1a.jpg

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-13-2010, 10:39 PM
^ needs more arrows.

Sooo I did some next level type of shit over the weekend and watched solvent abuse from beginning to end and got mad inspired. If anyone torrents I highly recommend searching this video its fucking nuts, awesome way to waste away 2 hours. But this is what came of it.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/IMG_0244.jpg

sorry for a weak photo, spot is pretty narrow.

Keso
04-13-2010, 10:44 PM
Yo Reds! I'm not really feelin it man. The letters are too far apart for me. Bring em closer

sinkilla1
04-13-2010, 10:52 PM
holy fuck is that a squint next to it

weakfingers
04-13-2010, 11:34 PM
no, your eyes are playing a trick on you.

Culture_Shock
04-13-2010, 11:45 PM
I thought I liked goya and reds pieces, but I think I just have a thing for hollows. but for serious, they're great, just make sure it says reds and not aids.

gumOnShoe
04-13-2010, 11:47 PM
^ needs more arrows.

Sooo I did some next level type of shit over the weekend and watched solvent abuse from beginning to end and got mad inspired. If anyone torrents I highly recommend searching this video its fucking nuts, awesome way to waste away 2 hours. But this is what came of it.


sorry for a weak photo, spot is pretty narrow.

heh?
the movie must've beens cool if it made you do some shit like that...
sadly i can't torrent, know where i could watch it on the net streamed?

garbage down tha way
04-13-2010, 11:49 PM
i like this piece alot but i feel like its too sloppy for the big boy thread, dollar cans holla.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1740.jpg
i like the keso and goya and reds needs work with the e and the s and authr???? its good cept the R's too funkay.

Stuck
04-14-2010, 12:16 AM
fuck u hoer i love the letters and the name but u kill that it....fucker :D

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-14-2010, 12:22 AM
heh?
the movie must've beens cool if it made you do some shit like that...
sadly i can't torrent, know where i could watch it on the net streamed?

No idea, maybe just google it, if not you could prob scope the trailers atleast, the things got styles that span over ten years, worst comes to worse I think everyone with an open mind should just see whats going on over seas, crazy original styles over there that you just dont see in north america, a couple crews that stood out to me in that video were ATG and DPV.. scope those.

unsuccsessfull
04-14-2010, 12:25 AM
lookn good hoer
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/100_2630.jpg

RedEyes
04-14-2010, 02:22 AM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo2-4.jpg
New word possibly.
Zoner-love the ticks and the style got alot of steez.
Hoer- i think it would have looked better with out so many highlights.
Reds-looks like a couple different styles going on their all solid though.

m+s
04-14-2010, 02:31 AM
i like this piece alot but i feel like its too sloppy for the big boy thread, dollar cans holla.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1740.jpg
i like the keso and goya and reds needs work with the e and the s and authr???? its good cept the R's too funkay.


shits pimp. stay up

Keso
04-14-2010, 09:17 AM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo2-4.jpg
New word possibly.
Zoner-love the ticks and the style got alot of steez.
Hoer- i think it would have looked better with out so many highlights.
Reds-looks like a couple different styles going on their all solid though.

Wrong thread homie

NouveauP
04-14-2010, 11:30 AM
Thanks for the crits guys. I like the piece, HOER, but you did go a little overboard with the highlights. I'm also not a fan of the 3 arrows on each side. But you burn me, so keep doing ya thang. Wrong thread Akor. I get kind of lost in unsucc's piece. The E is sick. Keep it up guys.

Kaiser71
04-14-2010, 11:46 AM
Zoner: I feel like your letters overlap too much, so it's way shorter than it should it ends up looking short and tall, but I think thats kinda just your steeze so whatever if it works for ya. I also think the right side of your N could be a bit stronger, it looks kinda small

Jokz
04-14-2010, 12:56 PM
I need some serious crits on this one.

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/84/l_0ebff172019e49b5a355322304a62f1a.jpg

i digg the "e" and the "s". i think i dislike the "k" the most. try to work on both the other letters, but the es looks dope.

NICCSACC
04-14-2010, 01:15 PM
shits pretty OOOLD

http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a446/biggniccsacc/DSC00062.jpg

Alts13
04-14-2010, 05:04 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02689.jpg
Stoke exchange

NICCSACC
04-14-2010, 05:17 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02689.jpg
Stoke exchange
i love how you made that pink part look sooo fresh and clean. the grey shades lookin great too.

sinkilla1
04-14-2010, 06:30 PM
before you all shit you pants a fuck storm evolves i did bit the character off of weakfingers no big deal idc u guys can say oh what a bite i dont give 2 fucks
http://i41.tinypic.com/n4in0o.jpg
kk

markingz.
04-14-2010, 07:23 PM
ahah sin dont do simples man get wild with your style:D

sinkilla1
04-14-2010, 08:21 PM
simples are my shit though :(
http://i44.tinypic.com/23if11g.jpg

Kimo13
04-14-2010, 09:45 PM
zoner - looking good man, ur handstlye and flairs are doper than ever
Alts - loving that psychedelic fill man, actually i always love ur fills lol
wgone - that peice isnt to bad, but the letter look like there kinda fighting with each other for room. maybe space them out a bit, and shorten the extensions

anyways been working on this for abit, gonna see if it itll fly in the big boy thread. did some progression flicks for the hell of it :)
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture006-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture009-2.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture012-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture013-1.jpg
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture018-1-1.jpg

dude that is ill...you know who that reminds me of? cortes from NYC. idk if u know who that is but look it up on youtube if you dont that shit is right up ur alley man.

and ps, im thinkin you'd be more than fine to post that in the big boy thread.

DukeOne
04-14-2010, 11:59 PM
dude that is ill...you know who that reminds me of? cortes from NYC. idk if u know who that is but look it up on youtube if you dont that shit is right up ur alley man.

and ps, im thinkin you'd be more than fine to post that in the big boy thread.

naw man never heard of him till now, but ya his shit is fucking doppee, so much work into all his sketches. thanks for the info maynee
but the big boys hate my letters, so deffs gotta keep working on that :S

trying to work on new fill styles too
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture021-1.jpg

oh and alts that colour skeme is ridiccc

Sesh-it-up
04-15-2010, 12:59 AM
lol looks kinda like puke, wicked fill.

MeanMug
04-15-2010, 03:41 AM
Duke I just skeeted!

Alts props as usual.

Alts13
04-15-2010, 07:26 AM
Duke your shit is fucking dope man
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02690.jpg

DukeOne
04-15-2010, 08:45 AM
ALTSS thats S is with the face is insainee, how do u come up with just funky colour skemes

milk bar star
04-15-2010, 08:54 AM
duke you're shit is mad

nice one alts, a is sort of funky for me though

Alts13
04-15-2010, 08:56 AM
I dunno how I come up with them haha they just come to me as I go

NouveauP
04-15-2010, 09:09 AM
Duke and Alts are fucking coming with it and I'm taking notes.

Yeah, that S character is nuts.

Bilnek
04-15-2010, 09:15 AM
alts and duke....back to the toy thread ur the toyest ppl on this forum :D
jk jk u guys are pure dopeness

NICCSACC
04-15-2010, 10:42 AM
shits pretty OOOLD

http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a446/biggniccsacc/DSC00062.jpg
i hate bumping shit but whatever. GOOD? WACK?

Alts13
04-15-2010, 11:36 AM
its alright could do with some work but overall ok

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02692.jpg

Gutrot/Alts

NouveauP
04-15-2010, 11:47 AM
Yeah, I'm not really feeling it nickel. Keep at it.

And that Gutrot is nice.

NICCSACC
04-15-2010, 12:33 PM
wow ok

AteskOne
04-15-2010, 01:05 PM
i've seen better from you niccs even if it was a couple years ago.

Flawless Victory
04-15-2010, 01:10 PM
I don't like the "sack", or the mushroom character.
The nickel portion of it is straight. The E could be a little bigger, but whatever.

NICCSACC
04-15-2010, 01:36 PM
Cool just tryin some mario pipe kinda style. Hence the mushroom.

Flawless Victory
04-15-2010, 01:38 PM
I think it's more of the placement on top of the N then the actual character that I dislike.
Also, did you draw that on an oven?

NICCSACC
04-15-2010, 01:44 PM
No its a sticker i made just took the pic on the stove.

Alts13
04-15-2010, 02:08 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02694.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02693.jpg

couple of quick ones

NICCSACC
04-15-2010, 02:10 PM
Is that euro style?

Alts13
04-15-2010, 02:13 PM
well I live in europe so suppose you could say so, I don't do throws so that is kinda my version of a throw, something that can be done real quick

NICCSACC
04-15-2010, 03:00 PM
im not talkin shit. i like it. mabye a fat black outline.. ? either way, you got skills fa sheezy.

lord_plankton
04-15-2010, 03:43 PM
I think it's more of the placement on top of the N then the actual character that I dislike.
Also, did you draw that on an oven?

i was just about to say what the fuck??!!! because the shroom is dope ! i like the placement,but i guess a lil shroom on the right bottom will help to balance..

sinkilla1
04-15-2010, 05:38 PM
fucking fine point decos suck wen they break but there so dirty didnt learn my listen on the top and it fucking exploded on my D ruined it but thought i would post it anyway
http://i41.tinypic.com/jt02f6.jpg

MisterMan
04-15-2010, 06:43 PM
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n171/LuthAH/CCF04152010_00002.jpg
Haven't posted anything in a while, but what do you guys think? And I love Alts, you're a great inspiration.

ravine
04-15-2010, 08:04 PM
yall lookin' gooooooooooood. alts has got some sweet awkward looking letters.


http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/whereenglish.jpg

Kaiser71
04-15-2010, 09:31 PM
WHERE: your stuffs always solid, the W/H combo tripped me up for a sec though

ALTS: Still dont know where you find the time. I usually dont like faces in pieces, but the eyes on the gutrot page, and the S in the other one are straight

and I loved the green fill on the DUKE alst page.

Some bullshit from work:
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/reds.jpg

And dunno if I posted this finished, my bad if I did
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/roomfinished.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
04-15-2010, 10:10 PM
Reds: That E is busted and is killing the flow. feeling the R.

NICCSACC
04-16-2010, 02:17 AM
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n171/LuthAH/CCF04152010_00002.jpg
Haven't posted anything in a while, but what do you guys think? And I love Alts, you're a great inspiration.
mabye im beating a dead horse but i cant really read this at all. i htink theres an e or an r and an a i think. id keep at it if i were you.

dave the pirate
04-16-2010, 02:19 AM
there are waaaaaaay to many cracks nukka

medacog1
04-16-2010, 04:45 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ntlb2q.jpg

idk if i belong here.

lord_plankton
04-16-2010, 05:32 AM
i dont give a shit, there are way more people in here with less skill
id say your greatest problem is the work in the l decently, because the way you do it , it takes to much away from the a but when you try to make it fit at the bottom your creating way to much dead space on the top...also i wouldnt connect jut two letters out of 5 but whatever...your r is too big.

NICCSACC
04-16-2010, 05:41 AM
oh yeah, youre exactly in the right area on BS.

medacog1
04-16-2010, 06:02 AM
i dont give a shit, there are way more people in here with less skill
id say your greatest problem is the work in the l decently, because the way you do it , it takes to much away from the a but when you try to make it fit at the bottom your creating way to much dead space on the top...also i wouldnt connect jut two letters out of 5 but whatever...your r is too big.

yea i noticed that about my R...but your saying i should lose the connect, but i should also lose the bottom of the L that loops back up a little?

NICCSACC
04-16-2010, 06:17 AM
but, yeah... you are in the exact area you need to be in.

lord_plankton
04-16-2010, 06:52 AM
yea i noticed that about my R...but your saying i should lose the connect, but i should also lose the bottom of the L that loops back up a little?

what im saying is, lose the connection(or keep it who cares), resize your r, and try to fit in your L more without covering up the a, dont just cut off the bottom...

smoke, 2nd has most potential, but its lacking consistency, some letters are fat some skinny..why ppl post their friends stuff??

smokeitup
04-16-2010, 07:27 AM
heres some sketches a friend did, tell me what u think:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/001-3.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/002-5.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/003-4.jpg

crits?

CrustOner
04-16-2010, 11:10 AM
Those B's are all fucking uuuuuugly.

markingz.
04-16-2010, 12:23 PM
Reds: That E is busted and is killing the flow. feeling the R.
backto the fuckin drawing board lol

.od.
04-16-2010, 03:07 PM
that second habits is dope

viseversa101
04-16-2010, 03:18 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/003-4.jpg
i think if the first leg of the h layed over like in the 1st piece n u reoutlined the letters this piece would be the keeper

haze4life
04-16-2010, 03:24 PM
smokeitup- take that to the toy thread dude, youll get more crits there

ravine
04-16-2010, 04:22 PM
yall lookin' gooooooooooood. alts has got some sweet awkward looking letters.


http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/whereenglish.jpg

habitatatatat. don't lean your letters on one another. make's em look weak.

Zookyook
04-16-2010, 04:37 PM
wud up bs... the intermediate forums hurtin when polar has the best piece on the page lol... i havent drawn a piece in a long time, but i sprained my ankle and i got nothin better to do... this ones kind of a mess but i feel like hearing real crits... it says NAT
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4042/4526098483_f1c2c02a9b_o.jpg

NICCSACC
04-16-2010, 04:58 PM
that looks dope. itsso fuckin crispy. props

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
04-16-2010, 05:08 PM
habit man the top two b's loom like m's with on squiglly leg. thought it said hamit :P

Zookyook
04-16-2010, 05:09 PM
thanks... just realized i didnt even highlight my 3d... maybe ill do that and post it later

BlacktodaFuture
04-16-2010, 05:41 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1359.jpg?t=1271453760

zook: idont know wtf that is. not in a bad way. just don't know.

where: i like it, solid sketch

habit: the B seems too large on the one that vise commented on.

polar: the R killed it for me (not in good way)

lord_plankton
04-16-2010, 06:19 PM
habit man the top two b's loom like m's with on squiglly leg. thought it said hamit :P

thats just you...

where, why on gods earth do you not connect the e! re is weak, lose the connection n let the e somehow flow out like the w, other than that its good.

zook, i like the tentacle thing but i dont like the letters,

black, real bloody mess...fucked up the skull too...

Zookyook
04-16-2010, 06:29 PM
i feel where u guys r comin from....

safer i dont like the bar at the bottom of the A, and with the red drips itd look better if it did that all around not just on the very top... and ur letters are close enough to where u can put them through each other... the left bar of the A could come through the S and the left bar of the R could come through the E if u tweaked it... itd give it more dimension i think... get u some paint markers!

KinkyStab
04-16-2010, 08:15 PM
zooky ook on that peice the only thing that was good was that blue shit the rest was shit

Zookyook
04-16-2010, 08:34 PM
zooky ook on that peice the only thing that was good was that blue shit the rest was shit

i know my styles different but why would u say the rest is shit? give me a reason or keep ur opinions to urself cuz thats not a crit

wait nevermind i checked ur posts... ur a joke

BlacktodaFuture
04-16-2010, 08:54 PM
zook take crits. its illegable, not really any structure. the goo is the only interesting part and its only an addon. do gooder.

Zookyook
04-16-2010, 09:11 PM
ok well that works, saying theres no structure is somewhat of a crit... but what u said earlier and what he said arent, so theres no way to take it other than pointless shit talking... i give real crits and i wish people would too thats all

NICCSACC
04-16-2010, 10:38 PM
...as the world turns...

NICCSACC
04-17-2010, 12:08 AM
http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a446/biggniccsacc/DSC00066-1.jpg

KinkyStab
04-17-2010, 01:10 AM
didnt mean to be an ass its just the actual letters are boring and thers nothing going on the most interesting part of a peice shouldnt be an addon

markingz.
04-17-2010, 01:17 AM
zook take crits. its illegable, not really any structure. the goo is the only interesting part and its only an addon. do gooder.
i wouldnt be talkin back to the drawing board lol

markingz.
04-17-2010, 01:19 AM
nic gobigger than that thats hurt mang

NICCSACC
04-17-2010, 11:12 AM
thnx.

Zookyook
04-17-2010, 11:18 AM
i wouldnt be talkin back to the drawing board lol
not sure what this means.??

nicc i like that a lot, the 3d looks good with just the lines and not filled in, but i think u need another bar on the K cuz it kinda just looks like an h now... if i pissed anyone off sorry i just hardly ever get crits i can do anything with on here

NICCSACC
04-17-2010, 11:24 AM
thx

yeah its a one off with a sharpie needle point.

i just try to distort my "K's" cuz iom bored with the usual way a "K" is did.

*oh yeah... now i remember, i made the bar of the "K" too wide so i tried to save it by breaking off the fat part by just bringing the outline of it all the way around to make it more proportionate. so now the top bar of the "K's" bend got lost behind it or whatever. lolz

Sesh-it-up
04-17-2010, 07:37 PM
lol @ safer
nick your almost redy but stick to the toy fourm

BlacktodaFuture
04-17-2010, 07:55 PM
i wouldnt be talkin back to the drawing board lol

what are you trying to say? i have structure. its legible, and has style. if you are trying to talk shit do it better.

ravine
04-17-2010, 08:30 PM
ya'll is crazy maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaan(s)

weakfingers
04-17-2010, 10:24 PM
Simple style's Any crits would be appreceated.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4065/4529348597_3cfa7135fb_o.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-17-2010, 10:29 PM
I think you should redo your outline after you add the highlights 'cause it's covering up the black. Shit like that just bothers me man.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
04-17-2010, 10:31 PM
ya well thats usually the routine but maybe someone isnt to confident in their can control ehh? :rolleyes:

Zookyook
04-18-2010, 12:35 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4065/4529348597_3cfa7135fb_o.jpgbump

not bad squint, looks like someone dissed u on the top left there hah... i agree with what empty said but u wouldnt haveta go back with the black if u used a skinny cap for ur highlights instead of an orange tip like it looks like u used... id lose the green in the fill too, definitely big enough though hah

unsuccsessfull
04-18-2010, 02:28 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/108_2630.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00004.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00005.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00003.jpg

garbage down tha way
04-18-2010, 03:53 AM
ZONER that throw is perfect! holy shit i love it.

TheToy
04-18-2010, 09:34 AM
Nice work, Zoner. That second flair hand in purple is fresh.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-18-2010, 11:32 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00004.jpg
that e.....

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/beers.jpg

CrustOner
04-18-2010, 12:03 PM
It's a pretty generic E, man...

Zookyook
04-18-2010, 01:34 PM
yea im sure weve all had an E that looked like that at some point...

zoner=consistancy

cocacola
04-18-2010, 01:49 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4027/4530243740_42f7abde6f.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4072/4526641017_e2e86e77fe.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4002/4523601917_7c4c63e3d9.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4044/4503395528_728b62f1bd.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
04-18-2010, 01:50 PM
1st one is looking the best. And great looking chipmunk. (Situr)

KinkyStab
04-18-2010, 03:20 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/35mgrbp.jpg
you think i should finish it?
http://i42.tinypic.com/2dp75k.jpg
some simp i did with some shitty free otr markers with lids that dont fit on

Zookyook
04-18-2010, 03:55 PM
im feelin the top one for sure... but if it says buts the u looks too much like an A, take out the middle bar next time

DukeOne
04-18-2010, 05:50 PM
ya that top one is dopee, love the style

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture-1.jpg

viseversa101
04-18-2010, 05:53 PM
omg duke, much props

Flawless Victory
04-18-2010, 05:56 PM
that e.....

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/beers.jpg

And YOU got caught biting an A, *****.
Pot calling the kettle black sounding ass.

Sesh-it-up
04-18-2010, 06:02 PM
why would he bite from his own province.. get a grip goofs.. and like squint said its hella gereric, ive even used it befor till i saw beerguts uses it every throwie..

zone get at me!!

AteskOne
04-18-2010, 06:06 PM
zoners toss is like 10 times fresher than that beer throwy anyways. props to zoner and duke.

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-18-2010, 07:02 PM
haha chill out, chill out, you kids get mad so easy these days. I was just sayin, that those e's are the same, I dont care, and neither should any of you. Props to zoner pretty much everything he paints is fire, I dont even know why he's posting in the toy forum, shits dope. Just lettin yous know, not getting all pissy like the majority.. you know?

Vinnie Paz
04-18-2010, 07:49 PM
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_00017.jpg

unsuccsessfull
04-18-2010, 08:41 PM
i postin here cause i sloppy at paintin and my letters are still pretty weak....
thats a bullshit call tho
for esoe
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00013.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00007.jpg

TheToy
04-18-2010, 08:50 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00004.jpg
that e.....

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/beers.jpg

You just mad you got called out on a bite...

A thousand writers in the USA probably use that same 'e'. Like Crust said, It's pretty generic. It's not like an 'A' with the same exact face or something...now that would be understandable.

weakfingers
04-18-2010, 09:02 PM
I like the letter E,

I'm trying to get a sharper style and trying to save my simple style so more high traffic stuff. Again your crits are valuable to me. I Know I messed the shadow on the S.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4069/4532561791_70afafa4e5_b.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
04-18-2010, 09:31 PM
the flow of some of the letters is alittle messed up bc you have such as in the K at the leg the bottom of it is rounded while in the S there is nothing rounded. So if you added a few rounded parts in the S it would be better.

KinkyStab
04-18-2010, 10:26 PM
yeah weakfingers try to follow one style it looks a lil messy

DukeOne
04-18-2010, 10:32 PM
squint that looks dope, but ya man just watch ur consitance and flow. liek Black said the S is just out of place with no curves

But thanks again for that site its sooo dope, not really a black book but w/e
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Soldier.png

KinkyStab
04-18-2010, 10:38 PM
was that from your computer, the face is wonky but it looks pretty nice

Kaiser71
04-18-2010, 10:42 PM
ZONER: love your R's, the NE looks a bit bigger than the ZO and R in the bottom one (on the last page)

Vinnie..looks pretty clean, chrome and red is alwyas nice


Lost interest as I went through this sketch, please excuse the S
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/reds3.jpg

Kaiser71
04-18-2010, 10:52 PM
squint that looks dope, but ya man just watch ur consitance and flow. liek Black said the S is just out of place with no curves

But thanks again for that site its sooo dope, not really a black book but w/e
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Soldier.png

What was the link to that site? I remember seeing a couple of you talking about it a few pages back..or maybe that was a different one..

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-18-2010, 10:54 PM
Haha the toy you seem madder than I am.. your the one who trolls on almost all my posts, that aren't even directed at you. Im still not sure why YOU, are so concerned and interested in MY graffiti, I didnt even post the shit in the first place, it was a piece I painted 3 months after I dropped the A you were talking about (after I used it..fucking twoooo times), quite frankly Im worried you are developing a crush on me.. or something. I think we should just drop the entire thing so we can both progress and get better, fighting between two writers, two toys at that, is counter productive to what we're both trying to do, paint walls, have fun and get better, or whatever your painting for, I personally would like to see these threads filled up with good work, like what squint and duke just posted, and not pointless bickering that will never settle because this is the internet. Lets just both shut up and post some work in this thread.

Squint man Im really liking that piece, Im feeling that sharp style you got going, I also notice that your getting better at keeping your outlines the same width through out, good job. The things I would fix though is that your not taking your finger off the can fast enough doing your outlines so they kind of intersect at the top and over extend the letters, a good way to fix that would be just outlining the entire thing and covering them up. I dont really like the tweak at the top of the u and it could have been a bit cleaner with that triple outline you got going, but good fucking work man, thats tight.

Duke man that is so fucking cool what medium did you use for that I wanna try it out

KinkyStab
04-18-2010, 11:44 PM
E-Beef makes you hard, doesn't it?

MyManRoyGBiv!
04-19-2010, 12:44 AM
Only way to be hard over the internet is porn. nuff said.

markingz.
04-19-2010, 01:01 AM
^ haha hey squint thats fuckin hard brah no joke, id change the double outline and just forcefeild the shit in red if i were you, otherwise sick letter structure

m+s
04-19-2010, 01:10 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/35mgrbp.jpg

insanity, paint it



http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_00017.jpg

deisel outline, good stuff

I like the letter E,

I'm trying to get a sharper style and trying to save my simple style so more high traffic stuff. Again your crits are valuable to me. I Know I messed the shadow on the S.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4069/4532561791_70afafa4e5_b.jpg
nice execution.
this is how i would have done it
http://img532.imageshack.us/img532/2912/453256179170afafa4e5b.jpg

TheToy
04-19-2010, 01:13 AM
Haha the toy you seem madder than I am.. your the one who trolls on almost all my posts, that aren't even directed at you. Im still not sure why YOU, are so concerned and interested in MY graffiti, I didnt even post the shit in the first place, it was a piece I painted 3 months after I dropped the A you were talking about (after I used it..fucking twoooo times), quite frankly Im worried you are developing a crush on me.. or something. I think we should just drop the entire thing so we can both progress and get better, fighting between two writers, two toys at that, is counter productive to what we're both trying to do, paint walls, have fun and get better, or whatever your painting for, I personally would like to see these threads filled up with good work, like what squint and duke just posted, and not pointless bickering that will never settle because this is the internet. Lets just both shut up and post some work in this thread.

I've heard all this shit before...blah blah blah.

I'm not the only one who said something.

I don't wanna' hear it. You're a bitch.

Welcome to TheToy's Ignore List. Party Down.

weakfingers
04-19-2010, 01:25 AM
Thanks ms, Ill think about that into consideration and work on that,

I thought i was cutting through paper half way through drawing this, Fact of the matter that program is a riot to use.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/index.png

viseversa101
04-19-2010, 01:35 AM
which program we talking here?

weakfingers
04-19-2010, 01:37 AM
...microsoft paint.



Ok, I'm out for the night.

m+s
04-19-2010, 01:50 AM
speaking of sharp letters
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3949/dscn1701.jpg

NICCSACC
04-19-2010, 11:24 AM
ugh keep working on it.

LIZARD
04-19-2010, 11:39 AM
agreed

Zookyook
04-19-2010, 11:58 AM
mspaint my ass lol i had some fun with that program... u can make some acid trip shit...

bump squint
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4069/4532561791_70afafa4e5_b.jpg

squint i think thats one of the best flicks uve posted, take crits from above fo sho but also i would have brought the light blue outline right up against ur letters if u want it to look cleaner and sharper, i can see a few places it would have helped like the top of ur K U and N the black lines cross and theres some fill showing outside of the lines, the blue woulda cleaned that up and then u could use the green for another outline if u wanted


we require more minerals... i laughed, starcraft is epic

weakfingers
04-19-2010, 12:11 PM
Thanks alot for the tips I'll definatly spend more time on my imperfections next time, The spot is far in the forest in a hunting grounds tho so i was kinda sketching i was gonna get shot ahahaha, Canada is so hood!

Alts13
04-19-2010, 01:00 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02696.jpg
Abes exchange, tried to have the AB and E squashed and the S not, but it ended up that the AB are squashed and the rest is normal

Alts13
04-19-2010, 01:01 PM
squint that looks dope, but ya man just watch ur consitance and flow. liek Black said the S is just out of place with no curves

But thanks again for that site its sooo dope, not really a black book but w/e
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Soldier.png

dope I gotta spend some more time on this programme

Zookyook
04-19-2010, 06:47 PM
alts im really not feelin that A or E... but just because its u and i know uve done way better hah... the fill on the top half is definitely slick though, but u shouldve made more blue bubbles overflowing on the yellow yanno? or the other way around

NICCSACC
04-19-2010, 06:56 PM
thx

KinkyStab
04-19-2010, 10:53 PM
insanity, paint it




deisel outline, good stuff

nice execution.
this is how i would have done it
http://img532.imageshack.us/img532/2912/453256179170afafa4e5b.jpg
too bad i suck at paintiing

NICCSACC
04-19-2010, 11:27 PM
thats a tight peice man seruiously. its kinda cool how the ms paint dont even really take away from it. IMHO

BlacktodaFuture
04-19-2010, 11:32 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03588.jpg?t=1271733064

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03587.jpg?t=1271733167

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03586.jpg?t=1271733237

Crits:

To me: I'm iffy on the S bc of the extension on the bottom. The arrow is kinda big and the double extensions off that bar im not really feeling and they seem unnessary

Squint: i already gave you crits but other wise you got some painting skills.
Duke: Your ghost pirate is fucking bonkers
Alts: The first time i looked at it, it looked like AR?S. I feel like the top part of the E is kinda strange but i like that idea about making the ABE squished and the S not.
nicc: Your sig scares the shit outta me.

ZOOKYORK KNOWS HOW TO GIVE CRITS![/QUOTE]

NICCSACC
04-19-2010, 11:34 PM
that dexter is raw as fyuck.....

BlacktodaFuture
04-19-2010, 11:35 PM
http://cdn2.ioffer.com/img/item/139/330/777/9KdxDLdgETYaEEN.jpg

yeah, decided to make him a little taller. didn't like the squashed face.

KinkyStab
04-19-2010, 11:36 PM
watch out with that sig guys, i was just looking at the page all chill ballancing a plate full of steamy food while in my underwear and now my dick is covered in general taos spicy fucking chicken!

NICCSACC
04-19-2010, 11:39 PM
black to da... that "fuck china" is dope too love the statement.

LeaksOne
04-19-2010, 11:42 PM
so your dick was out of your underwear?

NICCSACC
04-19-2010, 11:44 PM
he was eating that shuit of course he was nude.

LeaksOne
04-20-2010, 12:00 AM
well no he said he was in his underwear. so im guessing he pulled his dick out once he got to the comp with his steamy food. a meal after fapping. good planning

NICCSACC
04-20-2010, 12:12 AM
damn

ravine
04-20-2010, 12:44 AM
gotta love dexter

TheToy
04-20-2010, 12:52 AM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03588.jpg?t=1271733064

I concur. I like this.

Paint it.

:D

weakfingers
04-20-2010, 01:33 AM
random racism... awesome.

m+s
04-20-2010, 03:39 AM
chinas not a race

m+s
04-20-2010, 03:43 AM
thats a tight peice man seruiously. its kinda cool how the ms paint dont even really take away from it. IMHO

oh i get it done

TheToy
04-20-2010, 04:20 AM
random racism... awesome.

Are you a Chinese citizen?

I thought you were just a Canadian of Asian decent...
You can't really be mad if you're a natural born citizen of Canada.

If you're an immigrant from China to Canada and now a Canadian citizen you also have nothing to worry about.

If you're a Chinese citizen living in Canada, well, obviously you would've hated China to migrate to Canada...

I dunno' what you're mad about...

People drop random hate about whites/blacks/hispanic in here daily. People hardly rip on Asians...

Relax.

BlacktodaFuture
04-20-2010, 05:53 PM
it was because of a united nations thing. no real hate on china lol.

crits on the S? im gonna do that on a canvas with my boy Brute so i wanna make it good

evade one
04-20-2010, 06:40 PM
just wanted to say that zoner and alts ur shittt is tight. keep up the dope work its looking fresh.

take2
04-20-2010, 07:14 PM
Not sure if I belong here but idc it's just one post soo don't get your panties in a knot. Just want some crits pwease...
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/b1f3e278.jpg

KinkyStab
04-20-2010, 09:32 PM
yeah sure you can stay, welcome in your room is down the hallway turn right and second on the left. the bathroom is at the end of that hallway, have a great stay!

ravine
04-20-2010, 11:12 PM
take2, the letters are really fine, just fix the left part of the a. watch that connection from the foot to the mid-bar, shit can get confusing. i recommend just mirroring your right half.
just my two cents holmes.

CrustOner
04-20-2010, 11:27 PM
I say you can, you've got letter structure down.

NICCSACC
04-21-2010, 01:46 AM
beware: this place is like the movie HOSTEL. youll get slaughtered with sarcasm if you ask for it.

C-Lurk
04-21-2010, 01:50 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/rr5w5h.jpg

it's been a while...

NICCSACC
04-21-2010, 01:54 AM
random racism... awesome.
fuxck china. its an american view of the orientals.

NICCSACC
04-21-2010, 01:59 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/rr5w5h.jpg

it's been a while...
would look alot better with some drop shadows or SOMEthing . other than that, level out the letters and make it a fuckin presentation, ese. like throw some bubbles or cloude or whatever to make it like a block shape not that sloping motion im seeing. no beef real talk. tight tho ive seen waaay worse.

gunone
04-21-2010, 09:21 AM
Technically am i still a toy if i can pull off tight wildstyles because i been praticing straights since i was ten and doing graff since 14 years old now im 16 am i ready or wat

AteskOne
04-21-2010, 09:33 AM
depends on if they are actually tight or if you and your 16 year old friends just think they're tight. post pics and let us judge.

Zookyook
04-21-2010, 09:51 AM
yea let us be the judges of ur tight wildstyles... if uve only been in it for 2 years i doubt u can really pull off a wildstyle piece mayn... just sayin

NICCSACC
04-21-2010, 10:05 AM
also, youre gonna get reamed reguardless.
lets see that wildstyle burnerrr, bruh.

C-Lurk
04-21-2010, 11:30 AM
would look alot better with some drop shadows or SOMEthing . other than that, level out the letters and make it a fuckin presentation, ese. like throw some bubbles or cloude or whatever to make it like a block shape not that sloping motion im seeing. no beef real talk. tight tho ive seen waaay worse.

Thanks dude, I'll see what I can do.

SDgrafnewb
04-21-2010, 01:56 PM
New here and new to the whole graffing scene so I wont give crits, but i think the shit you guys write is crazy... so sick, made me want to try and get into it all

Alts: Dig your style man, creative and clean... what do you use to color ur fills?
Duke: I check your photo page... absolutely nuts

C-Lurk
04-21-2010, 02:06 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2ykkl75.jpg

math class ugh

Alts13
04-21-2010, 02:14 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02699.jpg

re did the Abes exchange

kringe
04-21-2010, 03:20 PM
Piece in my friends book..
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4050/4538550595_318c54f7ff.jpg
Crits?

NICCSACC
04-21-2010, 03:22 PM
shits hot. that pink is fresh. the letters are simple wildstyle.
keep it up.

Zookyook
04-21-2010, 03:42 PM
way better than the first alts... im feelin the inside of that E a lot

gunone
04-21-2010, 03:56 PM
I need help like i know.... i was boasting about the wildstyle.... but what
do i do when i get stuck on my letters i mean like it looks like shit but imma show my old piece but like damn i dont know what im sayn dude confused as hell and fustrated word

Zookyook
04-21-2010, 04:05 PM
you gotta post somethin to get critiqued my friend... post in the toy blackbook thread first though

Atomik
04-21-2010, 04:46 PM
something i did for a friend
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b245/skills_831/bdubbfinished.jpg

NICCSACC
04-21-2010, 04:53 PM
thats fuckin awesome bro i mean in an intermediate sort of way... jk its frersh to deth

Graff J up
04-21-2010, 05:45 PM
what happened to hoer and seyor and all them??

markingz.
04-21-2010, 06:02 PM
that peice is fuckin fire god damn

CrustOner
04-21-2010, 07:20 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02699.jpg

re did the Abes exchange

FFFFFFFFFUUUUUCK. that is crazy.


what happened to hoer and seyor and all them??

They lurk more than they post.

markingz.
04-21-2010, 07:35 PM
big alts in the house, dope man real dope, but i cant read it but still your good with colors, people really into characters, nice styles everyone very nice

weakfingers
04-21-2010, 08:39 PM
Doesent the rule go "if you cant read it then its good".

Life is hard up here in canada.....
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4541567641_2aa6d8c134_b.jpg

unsuccsessfull
04-21-2010, 08:49 PM
Life is hard up here in canada.....

agreed
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00015.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-21-2010, 09:07 PM
squint-those bullet holes are dopeski!!

weakfingers
04-21-2010, 09:14 PM
well.... they are real bullet holes, I got caught slippin, They stole all my roll up the rim wins...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0047.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-21-2010, 09:22 PM
It looks like somebody was shooting armor piercing bullets at you then. lol

Scream Out
04-21-2010, 09:39 PM
alts - looks fresh though i am not a fan of the colour combo, kinda get lost in it and it all looks a little bland imo but the letters are still looking solid

kringe - not inter imo, you need to get some solid letter foundations to build on before you even think about bending letters that way, but on a lighter note it kind of reminds me of keane when he was starting out

atomik - i've always kind of liked your style but there just seems to be something off about that sketch, the part bothering me most about it is just a few of the little random extensions, i feel like it could look a lot better if you weren't trying to make it look so wild

squint - a little overkill with the bullet holes but overall nice structure and control, i had no idea you were canadian so thats pretty cool i guess? more of us here that i once thought. and im not a big fan of that sketch the "int" part and the throws look nice though

zoner - dope as always man, i'm envious of that style

been busy lately with work and my band and shit like that but i managed to pull off an okay sketch today, crits always welcome
reads snare3, just playin around
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0602.jpg

AteskOne
04-21-2010, 09:56 PM
dope as fuck. what kinda marker are you using to do them super fine highlights?

Scream Out
04-21-2010, 09:57 PM
sharpie extra fine silver

Atomik
04-21-2010, 11:12 PM
it wasnt really what i write so yeah i did go alittle over board with the extensions, i dont write any of those letters so yeah haha it was kinda a on the fly type of thing thanks for the crits tho!

markingz.
04-21-2010, 11:42 PM
Doesent the rule go "if you cant read it then its good".

Life is hard up here in canada.....
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4541567641_2aa6d8c134_b.jpg

thats dope man

haha i was joking before man chill out

markingz.
04-21-2010, 11:47 PM
you and me both rush our shit which is i think why our stuff always looks rushed, if i were you id slow down, i should take my own advice, fuck it

DukeOne
04-22-2010, 01:21 AM
Squint - haha those bullet holes are on point man, maybe u over did them abit, but they look dope so w/e

Scream - its always good to see ya man, ur stuff is always looking sharp

Zoner. Alts, Atomik - dope...dont think i need to say more lol

Just a quicky, looked better without the highlights
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture029-1.jpg

m+s
04-22-2010, 03:47 AM
thosr a bitch, nib gets all fuzzy and shat on, then they die 3 minutes later. hate em. sleep, no/ thats a nice fade. hahah fadd upsIdown crosses should be faded, or fadded, either way. play on words, train wreck/

m+s
04-22-2010, 03:48 AM
whoah i was lookin at 2 pages ago, shits wild. what huh? dukes nice.

Atomik
04-22-2010, 09:25 AM
someones high or drunk ha

Zookyook
04-22-2010, 10:44 AM
bumpin dopeness...
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00015.jpg
zoner thats the cleanest shit ive ever seen u post, the handstyles in the middle are right on point

squint thats pretty clean too, maybe next time with the bullet holes just do a quick line through it like it was sprayed with an auto lol it just looks like too many holes there

duke that shit looks quick n steezy, but we all know its not on par with what ur capable of

StayHyE
04-22-2010, 04:38 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2irpw03.jpg


for a homies photoblog

Graff J up
04-22-2010, 06:35 PM
well.... they are real bullet holes, I got caught slippin, They stole all my roll up the rim wins...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0047.jpg

those throwies are firee
also zoner shits niceee

W_G_O_N_E
04-22-2010, 10:43 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4913/dscn7650.jpggood stuff on this page those bullet holes on sqwints , love duke's style , zoners style is so evil , and my favr on the page has gotta be that snare piece from scream. first time usin tracing paper so messed with a couple diff color schemes.http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/4223/dscn7661.jpg

KinkyStab
04-23-2010, 12:00 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2qx3k85.jpg

markingz.
04-23-2010, 12:39 AM
you and me both rush our shit which is i think why our stuff always looks rushed, if i were you id slow down, i should take my own advice, fuck it
on a darker note, how the fuck you gonna clown on me for doin a piece occasionally in backyard spots when your ass is doin throws in the middle of the woods? seems fuckin heat in the woods yo, a tiger might spot you

markingz.
04-23-2010, 12:40 AM
to top it off weak fuck your idea of heat spots yo

markingz.
04-23-2010, 01:09 AM
life is hard in canada? the laws down there pertaining graff a a fuckin joke homie compared to the states

DukeOne
04-23-2010, 01:12 AM
life is hard in canada? the laws down there pertaining graff a a fuckin joke homie compared to the states

lmao, im pretty sure weak was making a "fucking joke" by saying life is hard in Canada.... and Canada is up from the U.S btw :)

markingz.
04-23-2010, 01:24 AM
aight then if it was a joke its cool, yeah i know where canada is

weakfingers
04-23-2010, 12:54 PM
Markingz, Theres a edit button below your posts learn to use it. Why you so heated towards me and my paintings, you paint your backyard. Dont fill the forums with E-beef just private message me and lets settle this like men.... OVER THE INTERNET!


Battle flick for talking,
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4066/4545576721_7edb123055.jpg

markingz.
04-23-2010, 12:56 PM
yeah i paint my back yard so what you paint in the forest, same thing really ;)

why do you always bring up my backyard to make me look bad, your trying to distract the fact that you dont have alot of skills so you bring up the illegal aspect, painting illegally wont buy you skills homie, anyone can destroy some shit

m+s
04-23-2010, 05:08 PM
actually he is trying to disengage from you, so stop filling this thread with crap please, and take it to private messages.

battle that never got approved;
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4002/linedpaperkiller.jpg


duke- i like it, your high lights dont make a ton of sence though

zoner/ansr- dope as fuck, o is too squished for me, but thats liable to be cause of the angle im seeing it at.

stay hye- looks like you forgot outlines around your 3ds, in general you need to thicken up those black outlines imo

squint- im not a huge fan of that s, also i think your k should be a little less slanted. good shit though bro. as for the trophy peice, i think your o needs to get smaller, and the char kinda detracts from it over all. keep at it

wgone- i think you need to tone down those fills and shrink your 3d and focus on the letters. sorry i know that not what anyone wants to hear.

kinky stab- i like overall, the u needs to be bigger and the top bar of the b looks weird and lumpy. and yo work on drawing sheep.

crit me if you want, im open to feedback

SmoothOne
04-23-2010, 05:36 PM
Sketch battle that wasn't approved:
For the battle (5 color max)
http://www.smoothjoy.com/images/pixels-01.jpg

Touched up with additional colors
http://www.smoothjoy.com/images/lawman-pixels-00001a.jpg

Zookyook
04-23-2010, 06:53 PM
ms i like that piece even though ur style is awkward for me... i likee

weak thats pretty tight with the head comin out the top... the T and Y look like theyre slanted kinda weird though

smoothone ur not too shabby at coloring, the fill is creative... but ur letter structure and 3d arent up to par... the P looks like it should be 2 letters and the arrows and extensions are just a bit sloppy... the 3d goes in about 20 different directions and its doesnt even exist where it should in a lot of places, mostly the extensions... the eyes and mouths and shading looks good though... get the basics down first

cocacola
04-23-2010, 07:48 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4023/4547008836_cec3200414.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2422/4546961674_828ebc813c.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2794/4531282123_810f5d3c13_o.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4006/4543151580_8265972cfb_o.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4005/4543151634_739d235c33_o.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4041/4542519491_1a356ff5c0_o.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4068/4546384501_2d68d52c47_o.jpg

KinkyStab
04-23-2010, 08:51 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2yxjk1g.jpg
very sloppy did it in 15 minutes for this battle that never came

cocacola
04-23-2010, 09:35 PM
yo you gota unique style man i like it

KinkyStab
04-23-2010, 09:38 PM
thanks but i only just started doing it this way im a far way away from perfecting it

cocacola
04-23-2010, 09:59 PM
hey since when did it started comment approvals?

DukeOne
04-24-2010, 12:43 AM
MS - keep working on ur bars for constancy man. Both the E and the Ls right leg seem pinch, working on constant bars would help fix a lot of the problem areas
Smooth - those colours came out soo nice, shits poppin b lol
Situr - that 2nd brown piece is dope man

anyway really my first attempt at a calligraphy style piece, so i donno, not feeling my K at all
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture034-1.jpg

milk bar star
04-24-2010, 12:55 AM
what are you using duke?

in your bbook

ravine
04-24-2010, 12:59 AM
I'LL SHOW YOU WHAT HE'S USING!!!!!!!!!!

BEEEEEEYAAAAAHWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!


i love you