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BlacktodaFuture
05-09-2010, 10:57 AM
Just so you are aware.

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4231/ev2uw8.jpg

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/2925/ev3ug3.jpg

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/8893/ev4ay0.jpg

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7482/trashud8.jpg

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-09-2010, 12:40 PM
yeah man i dont care. there are prolly 20 different evils and ill street i wasnt trying to diss but w.e.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-09-2010, 01:00 PM
well thats all good but i think evil is better than you mers or whatever you write now
jus think hes got nicer letters than you his L need work but the other shit is rockable not sayin he's good but not that bad

ILL STREET BLUES
05-09-2010, 01:11 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg

LOL okay ppl i dont give two shits what you people think. hah

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-09-2010, 01:12 PM
my fill is whack but thats the first colored sketch ive done in an age

ILL STREET BLUES
05-09-2010, 01:13 PM
^its not even bad i like it., just not the L

AteskOne
05-09-2010, 01:15 PM
^^ haha

this isnt a blackbook or graff buttt i like coming to this thread so w/e

fairly quick render of blackbeard the pirate. this was one badass motherfucker
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/BlackBeard-1.jpg
is this done with charcoals? and did you watch the same documentary i did? talking about how blackbeard used to put burning paper in his hat so he had a cloud of smoke around his head so people thought he was a demon. i forget what day that pirate doc. was on but it was sick.

Bilnek
05-09-2010, 03:19 PM
lol i watched that one :D :D

ill street blues gtfo this thread there are way better guys that are posting in toy thread
evil i like the handstyle

duke respect

ILL STREET BLUES
05-09-2010, 08:11 PM
^ oh, im sorry sir i thought this is a thread were people post pics not talk shit. lol ur such a tool

sank.
05-09-2010, 08:30 PM
^^^ if you don't give two shits about what people think than why post mon?
some weak thinking right there

DukeOne
05-09-2010, 09:42 PM
I concur with sank

Astesk - it was done with conte, it's similar to charcoal but quite a bit harder. but ya he would put a cannon fuse in his hat and light it (badass, lol) i was going to add that (you can see the start of it just to the bottom sides of the hat) but you would really wouldn't get the effect on the size of the paper. If you remember the name of that documentary let me know tho, would love to see it. Ive read about him quite a bit when i was younger and stumbled on a book that had him in it recently.

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture069.jpg

AteskOne
05-09-2010, 10:41 PM
yeah i know what conte sticks are. i dont remember the name cause i was drunk when i was watching it...i'll try and find it tho cause it was pretty badass.^ that fill is intense man. handstyles are off the charts too yo.

cocacola
05-09-2010, 10:43 PM
Yo, duke your stuff , always nice man keep it up bro, i also like that fill you did .
some canvases i've done
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1001/4594236770_b452980497.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3660/4593620243_1de640821d_o.jpg

CrustOner
05-09-2010, 10:49 PM
I hate that Banksy ripoff... I hate any Banksy ripoff. I mean, come up with some of your own shit...

ILL STREET BLUES
05-10-2010, 12:01 AM
lolololololol bitin banksy is always a plus right?

cocacola
05-10-2010, 06:48 AM
i did that last one or fun yo not for one of my own

Bilnek
05-10-2010, 09:23 AM
duke go to the big boy's thread already...ur making me feel more toy than i really am :D
and paint that purple bitch


http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe010.jpg

bored

thepekins
05-10-2010, 01:53 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

AteskOne
05-10-2010, 02:14 PM
toy bb thread.

thepekins
05-10-2010, 02:48 PM
yeah i put it in both but I wanted crits from the intermediate fellas who know what they're doing. the toy bb thread isnt as helpful

massacreman
05-10-2010, 03:10 PM
well learn to handle it, cya.

Bilnek
05-10-2010, 03:33 PM
I concur with sank

Astesk - it was done with conte, it's similar to charcoal but quite a bit harder. but ya he would put a cannon fuse in his hat and light it (badass, lol) i was going to add that (you can see the start of it just to the bottom sides of the hat) but you would really wouldn't get the effect on the size of the paper. If you remember the name of that documentary let me know tho, would love to see it. Ive read about him quite a bit when i was younger and stumbled on a book that had him in it recently.

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture069.jpg

im gonna bump this bitch till my fingers go numb :D :D....its sick as hell


massacre i love you

LeaksOne
05-10-2010, 03:38 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1001/4594236770_b452980497.jpg

you know....ive been seeing alot of your shit since ive been on this site and out of everything i think ive liked about 2 sketches. all your shit looks way too forced and alot of it looks similar. now remember this is just my opinion but i think your trying to force yourself to be better then you really are. that piece has different sized letters all over the place and that simp under is HURTING big time. and your handy needs TONS of work.

-Empty-Can-
05-10-2010, 03:40 PM
^agreed

cocacola
05-10-2010, 05:29 PM
alright i guess heres a lil change up
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4596207541_8df5b7d908.jpg

kew1
05-10-2010, 06:02 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-10_1424.jpg

CrustOner
05-10-2010, 06:12 PM
No. You need to learn some letter structure. We've told you over and over again.

im not a cop or anything
05-10-2010, 06:19 PM
im gonna bump this bitch till my fingers go numb :D :D....its sick as hell


massacre i love you

does your throat hurt by any chance?

Scream Out
05-10-2010, 07:19 PM
duke - shits sick as fuck, your e is starting to look a lot like some of mine haha
esoe - nice sketch, its good to see you dropping the arrows for some sketches, you have a prety solid structure to work from it'd be sweet to see you experiment with using some different bars

bored as fuck, heres some ms paint bullshit
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/untitled-1.jpg

CrustOner
05-10-2010, 07:42 PM
Wow. you must have been really bored.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-10-2010, 07:50 PM
leaks i feel you on that...sometimes i feel situr could be good but then i look at his shit and i cant really make my min up if its that he doenst put enough effort into his sketches or he puts way to much effort into it, sometimes you got some decent shit but it does like very similar to all your other shit but can you pull of just a straight letter peice is what i wanna see, just to see how much understandin you have of structure nah mean....i aint hatin im jus sayin
kew my man you need to work on them outlines haha did you try to like go over your shell in certain spot cuz there is just massive amount of drips
but the fill was actually not that bad compared to everythin else....all you can do it keep practicin i geuss man and also work on your letters some more

LeaksOne
05-10-2010, 08:18 PM
alright i guess heres a lil change up
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4596207541_8df5b7d908.jpg

you still have uneven bars. do a straight and post it. if you cant pull it off then its guna make me think you bite.


btw Aever i LOVE your E's

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-10-2010, 09:02 PM
actually that last peice is pretty nice cept the bottom of the leg on the R but this shit is so much better then your other shit

idk401
05-10-2010, 10:49 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_fb522cad10aa45a6abb161b969e8c068.jpg
^^undone

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_1ad3efd9063f4e068c266ec339a28333.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_76f46fb3f10f4486ae92e3adf68c248c.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_f97216544954413cb912f6aef86fa06b.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_7bb46d83ad954a6aaf39332c7645a8db.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_68994ebdbde14c16af16065c8e2482c9.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_84435c729c534424ae6a744398881644.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/l_7873287aadb44c96b3c53e028b236002.jpg

idk401
05-10-2010, 10:51 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/006-2.jpg

ravine
05-10-2010, 10:53 PM
aw hell yeah hey arnold characters!!!


ok but really, ill worship the person who can draw andrew jackson dropkicking james madison in the face. this is a job for you, duke.

unsuccsessfull
05-10-2010, 11:02 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00059.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00053.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00051.jpg
that mspaint is ballin aever

cocacola
05-10-2010, 11:03 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1216/4597632408_549895c148.jpg
IGNORE THE BOTTOM

AteskOne
05-11-2010, 12:44 AM
duke - shits sick as fuck, your e is starting to look a lot like some of mine haha
esoe - nice sketch, its good to see you dropping the arrows for some sketches, you have a prety solid structure to work from it'd be sweet to see you experiment with using some different bars

bored as fuck, heres some ms paint bullshit
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/untitled-1.jpg
wow i just realized that the style i've been trying develope is extremely similar to yours. the way you end bars and just the overall shape of the letters. obviously you're much further along than me but i find it funny. maybe it was a subconcous decision i made after admiring some of your earlier work...

(SoS)Viruz
05-11-2010, 12:46 AM
alright i guess heres a lil change up
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4596207541_8df5b7d908.jpg

This ish has noooo flow what sooooo ever.......Letters everywhere

Scream Out
05-11-2010, 01:21 AM
thanks zoner, your shits allways on point. i wish i had the time to pick up some paint and drop the pencil for a while

and atesk i cant recall the last thing i saw you post but im curious to see your shit now haha. nothing wrong with a similar style, mine is very basic as it is but as it progresses i hope to produce something that looks more unique. not that theres anything wrong with rockin some nice simples

Same ol RobinHood
05-11-2010, 12:43 PM
post something you've painted.

Stussy
05-11-2010, 07:28 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1331/4599427341_35c3ece2da_o.jpg

sex without condoms
05-11-2010, 10:40 PM
yo rayz the toss is on fucking pointttt

NouveauP
05-12-2010, 03:41 AM
Yeah rayz, your throws are sick (that one and the ones I've seen painted).

But your pieces are lacking man. Keep at it. Can't wait for the exchange.

seywhat
05-12-2010, 06:08 PM
im actually feelin that rayz piece alot. letters are pretty solid. but the r dont have any breaks like the rest does and maybe try to round out the top of the y, kinda similar to the r, it'd kill a bit of dead space too. shits dope though u got handys to go along?????

B.S. P0LICE
05-12-2010, 08:18 PM
sup faggots, who wants to battle me?

Stussy
05-12-2010, 09:00 PM
seywhat you know whats up, but my handys have always been a struggle for me.

unsuccsessfull
05-12-2010, 09:04 PM
for okae prety damn sloppy
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00065.jpg

dave the pirate
05-12-2010, 09:41 PM
FUCK YA ZONER IM so stoked on this! I should have yours done by the end of this week..just been mad busy but i havent forgoten.

Scream Out
05-12-2010, 09:53 PM
pretty sick zoner, not a fan of the e, capital might have been a better choice but sick sketch overall man

had some time to sketch today, i feel like its missing something, maybe a silver inline? i don't know
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0606.jpg

kew1
05-12-2010, 10:50 PM
ur letters r just fuckin killer man

Scream Out
05-12-2010, 10:55 PM
thanks, i hate my R. and all my R's. fuck R's

kew1
05-12-2010, 11:10 PM
i mean i have no room to say but i would say ur r is the worst letter but it still flows so nice.

jupsick
05-13-2010, 12:22 PM
scream im in love with your Es
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9990/dsc00117zc.jpg
http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/448/dsc00115ky.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3333/dsc00112pd.jpg
hope for more walls this month

Stussy
05-13-2010, 02:24 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1428/4604627456_4b15e85c0b_o.jpg
for Goya

m+s
05-13-2010, 02:28 PM
dope tize

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 02:55 PM
scream out- that R kills man just work on that 3d


a homie asked if i could do his sons name Isaac he wants a robot theme but only one problem he wants it done on canvas which ive never worked on any tips? here are a few sketches ive came up with so far


http://i40.tinypic.com/zufep0.jpg

NouveauP
05-13-2010, 05:54 PM
Stay- I like em all except the bottom. The rest are pretty solid starting points in my opinion.
I'd like to see Tize painted. Interesting style.

Here's my exchange for RAYZ
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1062/4605115334_ebd8e68c51.jpg

Amends_Ego
05-13-2010, 08:41 PM
scream out- that R kills man just work on that 3d


a homie asked if i could do his sons name Isaac he wants a robot theme but only one problem he wants it done on canvas which ive never worked on any tips? here are a few sketches ive came up with so far


http://i40.tinypic.com/zufep0.jpg

I love working on canvas, theres def a little learning curve to it though. Ive got a few tips i've picked up so far,def try shit out for yourself dont take my word as fact.
1. get your sketch down first and foremost. one thats gonna be easily understood once paint goes on,
2.if your doing letters, Deco markers do a killer job.
3.if you plan on painting a background stick to spray paint when using decos(oils,acrylics,ect. will clog the fuck out of your decos)
4.like i said before there is a learning curve switching from paper to canvas, so if your looking for something clean as fuck id recommend getting your hands on a couple scrap pieces of canvas or goto your local craft shop and pick up some canvas paper.

I hope that helps.

fromthegrave
05-13-2010, 08:59 PM
i like this whole page exept that^
http://i39.tinypic.com/m8laaf.jpg

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:01 PM
thanks guys i appreciate it i might just get some supplies and a extra canvas so i can experiment and practice on before i go on to the final product

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 09:08 PM
stay hye: toy forum.
Noesr: feeling the handstyle, the N with that bar that goes up, how you made that cutty thingy on it doesn't make sense since the bar continues up. and the S and R looks like they have a different style compared to the rest.

goya: i don't like your style but other's do. idk what to say really.

zoner: dope as always.

Scream: im feeling those Es and i actually like your Rs alot.

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:14 PM
i like this whole page exept that^
htt

are you talking about my sketches?

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 09:15 PM
yeah he was.

fromthegrave
05-13-2010, 09:16 PM
ya. i am. and black everything u tell me i already know, i do things on purpose to look different.. so shhh. go play tennis.

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 09:18 PM
go play miniature indiana jones escape scene.

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:20 PM
stay hye: toy forum.
Noesr: feeling the handstyle, the N with that bar that goes up, how you made that cutty thingy on it doesn't make sense since the bar continues up. and the S and R looks like they have a different style compared to the rest.

goya: i don't like your style but other's do. idk what to say really.

zoner: dope as always.

Scream: im feeling those Es and i actually like your Rs alot.

lolol sure dude

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:21 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/1zq7zue.jpg

fromthegrave
05-13-2010, 09:33 PM
hows that faggit?


heres some mo of this balla's shit.

http://i42.tinypic.com/epop61.jpg


should i circle shit hommmmie???

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:40 PM
lul i just pointed out all the fails if i have to explain to you, you really are http://www.autotalkcrew.com/forums/images/smilies/sptimmah.gif make sure you got on your helmet fagget

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-13-2010, 09:40 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/1zq7zue.jpg

Damn he spoted some of the shit I missed, but I think circling the whole handstyle that was a little too far but he's mostly right, sorry grave

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:44 PM
hows that faggit?


heres some mo of this balla's shit.



should i circle shit hommmmie???

yeah ive been here a lot long if youre gonna try and troll you gotta try harder there have been a bunch of cyber toys on here with nothing to back up their mouth keep ethugin youre sure to get far around here. i never said i was the shit for you to look up my work but since youre trash im not even gonna bother chump


/edit circle whatever you want and i'll learn from what ive done wrong and ill take it into consideration

DukeOne
05-13-2010, 09:45 PM
NouveauP- That rays is really dope man, diggin you straight letters
Aever - Man you gotta stick around more, your shit is impeccable, ahah and had no idea how similar our Es were, ill see if i can change mine up a bit in my next sketch

This is an exchange for Massacreman, hopin i get me some goodies
I'm on a pirate kick again, going back to my childhood obsession haha
Portraits are of Thomas Tew (left) and Government Fletcher of New York (right), Tew was a pirate, and bad ass of course,a true pioneer.

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture079.jpg

-Empty-Can-
05-13-2010, 09:47 PM
some simple shit.
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples001Medium.jpg
backwards
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples003Medium.jpg
not intermediate but I don't give a FUCK!

fromthegrave
05-13-2010, 09:49 PM
duke- looks good. likin the e and k

stayhye shut up. what u posted was horrible. n ima chump? where u live>? ill show up. I got $ to blow on airfare.

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:49 PM
the R on the first one the leg sticking out could be straighter and on the bottom one the letters go from small to big if your T was straigher and you made the S bigger it would be cleaner

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:50 PM
duke- looks good. likin the e and k

stayhye shut up. what u posted was horrible.

kill yourself faggot

fromthegrave
05-13-2010, 09:54 PM
k battle ill pick the word. u down.

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 09:58 PM
k battle ill pick the word. u down.

http://i43.tinypic.com/2mo6xro.gif

unsuccsessfull
05-13-2010, 10:00 PM
[QUOTE=Scream Out;1614606] not a fan of the e
QUOTE]

i knooo eh i was tryn somthin diffrent haha wish i would have seen thatcomment befor paintin today
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00067.jpg

fromthegrave
05-13-2010, 10:02 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2mo6xro.gif

SOBER
send me a message wen ur done.


anyone else want in on this shit?

-Empty-Can-
05-13-2010, 10:02 PM
Is that rope to the right?

LeaksOne
05-13-2010, 10:06 PM
SOBER
send me a message wen ur done.


anyone else want in on this shit?

dont bring anyone else in. just you two. post it in the new battle thread

unsuccsessfull
05-13-2010, 10:08 PM
Is that rope to the right?
ye he rallys
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00071.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 10:09 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03609.jpg?t=1273802412

crits on this

trying to do it goodz, so mostly need crits on flow and shit. thx.

zoner: you know what it is so im not gonna insult you
duke: you are alot better then i thought
Stayhye: you're gay, that handstyle is ill as fuck and you spazzed.
Noesr: kill em.
stot: toy forum. i posted your comments there.

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 10:09 PM
SOBER
send me a message wen ur done.


anyone else want in on this shit?

probably by this sat

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 10:12 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03609.jpg?t=1273802412

crits on this

trying to do it goodz, so mostly need crits on flow and shit. thx.

zoner: you know what it is so im not gonna insult you
duke: you are alot better then i thought
Stayhye: you're gay, that handstyle is ill as fuck and you spazzed.
Noesr: kill em.
stot: toy forum. i posted your comments there.

okay so i over did the handstyle but the rest was spot on :D

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 10:13 PM
false, he's not dumb. he said he wants to look different so he is doing somethings different.

Epoc
05-13-2010, 10:15 PM
intermediate thread(life really) should not only be a bout a somewhat higher level of skill but also a lot smaller egos.

notice everyone who is good/progressing doesnt get into beef. lay off kids.

durp durp.

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-13-2010, 10:16 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2mo6xro.gif

Hey that's my old sig lol

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 10:16 PM
like i said man i just want my style to progress im not here to step on anyones toes

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 10:17 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03609.jpg?t=1273802412

crits on this

trying to do it goodz, so mostly need crits on flow and shit. thx.

zoner: you know what it is so im not gonna insult you
duke: you are alot better then i thought
Stayhye: you're gay, that handstyle is ill as fuck and you spazzed.
Noesr: kill em.
stot: toy forum. i posted your comments there.

bump through the yippidee yap.

ravine
05-13-2010, 11:13 PM
ok, come on fromthegrave, dont get down on tennis!!!!!!!

i wanna see this battle royale. im going to post things that i have posted before in an attempt to thoroughly boost my ego.......................

but really, i'm just kind of an asshole. at least i'm straight forward about it though...

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4048/4568172155_6320a3ce35.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3497/4558926825_6ff4bd92cd.jpg
http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/0424001842a.jpg
i'll get a better flick of the last one when i get a work ethic...

CrustOner
05-13-2010, 11:55 PM
I don't really start beef, I just like trolling kids with big egos.

http://i40.tinypic.com/ouqp79.jpg

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 11:58 PM
thats clean crust

(SoS)Viruz
05-13-2010, 11:59 PM
Crust your A is covered up your R is over done compared to the rest of your letters...and the random arrow on the S but I like the fact that you got the concept of pointing them in the direction of the flow of your piece.

NouveauP
05-14-2010, 12:02 AM
I heart Crust and Duke.

And black, what about my style offends? Anything you can pick out specifically? just wondering, trying to improve.
As for your sketch, I'd like to see it finished with maybe 3d on it. The bear looks a little simplified to be effective to me. Keep at it.

And where already knows he owns.

CrustOner
05-14-2010, 12:04 AM
haha yeah, I always take FOREVER on my first letters, then the rest suffer. :C

Especially if the first letter has a kick on it. (ie, R's, K's, etc.)

Sesh-it-up
05-14-2010, 02:18 AM
safer pleasse go home alredy

jupsick
05-14-2010, 04:30 AM
scream im in love with your Es
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9990/dsc00117zc.jpg
http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/448/dsc00115ky.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3333/dsc00112pd.jpg
hope for more walls this month

bump cuz i want crits for these....
where nice wall there
crust i like that t even tho its kinda simplish compared to the other ones

ravine
05-14-2010, 07:06 AM
yeeee torah reading!!!!!!

jupsick
05-14-2010, 10:46 AM
its geometry actually....

Sketched!
05-14-2010, 11:25 AM
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3333/dsc00112pd.jpg

005?

weakfingers
05-14-2010, 12:36 PM
I don't really start beef, I just like trolling kids with big egos.


ahaha yes! ^^^

Ranive-Your style is coming along pretty smoothly nothing to really crit just keep workign on it.
Jupstick- I cant really read your shit, no hate but thats just me, Its clean and nice to look at tho. I'm not trying to be negitive.

This shit probably doesent belong in this thread but yeah, Messing around with shit and trying new shit, I know it looks like shit but crits would be appreceated.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/26.jpg

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-14-2010, 01:17 PM
Hate that n squint idk it just doesn't flow at all and the I sucks too, no hate just nasty

Stussy
05-14-2010, 08:38 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
jupsick- stuff is looking good. the letters are solid and nice but maybe try to throw a shadow on them, it might make it pop better. You should paint more too! shits dope.

kringe
05-14-2010, 10:26 PM
Rays - Chill with those cuts. This one only has one, but normally you over-do it, and place them in bad spots.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1041/4608029794_9743138f37_b.jpg

Still needs a background and some more shit on the "Six Tre One" straight.

funhouseXcast
05-14-2010, 11:02 PM
yo kringe where you at, im in the 631. pm me if you trust.

NouveauP
05-14-2010, 11:39 PM
Unfinished simps. The tops of the C and G are supposed to be like that, trust me.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/battle002.jpg

Destroy2012
05-15-2010, 12:09 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2dlm5u1.jpg

fromthegrave
05-15-2010, 12:22 AM
nouv- diggin that.
destroy- not so much.

kringe
05-15-2010, 12:27 AM
Rays - Chill with those cuts. This one only has one, but normally you over-do it, and place them in bad spots.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1041/4608029794_9743138f37_b.jpg

Still needs a background and some more shit on the "Six Tre One" straight.

bump.

CrustOner
05-15-2010, 01:40 AM
Looks like he's holding a giant silver dildo. The simp on the bottom is clean (except for the S.), the piece, not so much.

DukeOne
05-15-2010, 02:14 AM
^^ lmao, was thinkin the exact same thing, but hes clearly had a lot to drink

TheToy
05-15-2010, 02:21 AM
Unfinished simps. The tops of the C and G are supposed to be like that, trust me.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/battle002.jpg

Awesome concept.

StayHyE
05-15-2010, 03:45 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/9sbgbn.jpg

BoomSlang
05-15-2010, 03:50 AM
looks decent, like the s the r and the 3d

Stussy
05-15-2010, 04:32 AM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
jupsick- stuff is looking good. the letters are solid and nice but maybe try to throw a shadow on them, it might make it pop better. You should paint more too! shits dope.

Kringe- Keep doing simples. The piece and character are really lacking.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-15-2010, 10:49 AM
this thread fucking fails overall

CrustOner
05-15-2010, 10:57 AM
Rayz, that shit is sick. Keep doing what you're doing. I just don't like how the bottom leg of the Z goes, but I can't really think of a better way for it to go, haha.. I see it moving along to look reminiscent of Alts' pieces.

but I agree with Blunted.. this shit is wack. Let's get some better shit in here.

kringe
05-15-2010, 11:20 AM
The piece is really lacking.

Mind elaborating on this? Honestly, I don't see whats wrong with it, you know?

CrustOner
05-15-2010, 12:07 PM
Uh. Toy Bombs and Pieces.

dangeri
05-15-2010, 12:22 PM
My bad

Stussy
05-15-2010, 03:28 PM
i think u should do the same thing

Dont say shit if you dont post anything and cant show you actually know anything! This forum has gotten ridiculous, theres a difference between not liking someones style and someone not having letter structure. I have letter structure i know, if you dont like my shit sorry, but dont just call it whack because some "king of the toys" said it was.
i miss BS in 07-08
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2141/photo975.jpg
old shit for bitchin
PS: crust yea im still messin with shit with the Z

BlacktodaFuture
05-15-2010, 04:07 PM
rayz, im feeling that old shit way more then your new shit.

CrustOner
05-15-2010, 04:27 PM
He's developing the newer shit so he can get it down as much as his older shit. Just wait. I see some maaaad awesome shit in Stussy's future.

AteskOne
05-15-2010, 05:52 PM
have we just done away with the rules of the intermediate thread? not seeing a whole lot of intermediate work. looks like the toy bb thread in here.

props on that old shit rayz...i dont get why your changing that steez? shits funky fresh.
and i'm not gunna lie that newer shit is garabage.

diggin nouveauP's shit too. liking the originality.

MoganOne
05-15-2010, 07:21 PM
Dont say shit if you dont post anything and cant show you actually know anything! This forum has gotten ridiculous, theres a difference between not liking someones style and someone not having letter structure. I have letter structure i know, if you dont like my shit sorry, but dont just call it whack because some "king of the toys" said it was.
i miss BS in 07-08
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2141/photo975.jpg
old shit for bitchin
PS: crust yea im still messin with shit with the Z

This is so sick man! I like the curved letter splits

(SoS)Viruz
05-15-2010, 07:43 PM
Yo this thread is dead....Going to kids who dont know how to cut lines to generic styles from graffitimaker.....WTF is this

fromthegrave
05-15-2010, 09:01 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2dv8wf6.jpg
mine^^
http://i41.tinypic.com/9sbgbn.jpg
stayhye^




whoah

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-15-2010, 10:50 PM
damn the top sober kills it

fromthegrave
05-15-2010, 11:22 PM
thanks home bwoi

idk401
05-15-2010, 11:33 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/P5110012.jpg

im not a cop or anything
05-15-2010, 11:38 PM
yo kringe where you at, im in the 631. pm me if you trust.

hahah you a suffolk nikkah??

Bilnek
05-16-2010, 01:50 AM
can mods delete posts???
this thread is dead....it was supposed to be for the guys developin their own style
now its just a toy bb thread with a cooler name

graff4ever
05-16-2010, 03:05 AM
i agree there is 2 much toy shit in this thread

AteskOne
05-16-2010, 03:33 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2dv8wf6.jpg
mine^^
http://i41.tinypic.com/9sbgbn.jpg
stayhye^




whoah
fromthagrave ftw.no question

agree with bilnek. for real this is depressing. i used to look at this thread for inspiration. now i'm being met with a shit load of dissapiontment.

KRE1
05-16-2010, 06:03 AM
to be honest, this thread shouldnt exist. either you are toy, or not.

just saying.

massacreman
05-16-2010, 09:21 AM
this thread is indeed going to die if you all dont stop bitching.
post pics, comment give GOOD advice or dont give any.
Intermediate's aint kings. No toys either. This thread is made to build a bridge between the two.

intermediate's
They dont make shit like this:
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_BvEwaX8cSJ8/SratAwhd3NI/AAAAAAAAAcQ/rhFBxydCZAU/s400/the+graffiti+design.jpg
They make shit like this:
http://i42.tinypic.com/20j00ba.jpg

So come here if you belong here and get out if you don't.
I'll post pics of my work later.

Scream Out
05-16-2010, 10:58 AM
no offence massacreman but even that is a little rough

i feel like the intermediate thread needs to be moved out of the toy forum to help cut down on the toy posts and hopefully get some more serious moderation happening. also because the blackbook thread in the picture gallery forum is not meant for crit, it would give a chance for the more experienced writters who would like some opinions to get them without leaving the mod to delete a hundred posts of crit and talking.

it would hopefully look more like the experienced thread on PG

massacreman
05-16-2010, 11:46 AM
yeah i was a 'lil rough.
but you cant deny im right

CrustOner
05-16-2010, 02:37 PM
And i haven't seen Alts in a while, and his posts discouraged a lot of toys from posting in here.

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 02:54 PM
if someone posts some shitty looking graff in here they pretty much get ripped apart for it anyway, its just that theres a wave of new ones every week that think theyre intermediate so theres at least a few shit pieces per page...
but the regulars know whose a step up from toy and whose not, just gotta be more of a dick when u see something that doesnt look good in here... my opinion is that if u can keep ur bars flowing then ur intermediate, if ur shit looks wobbly and uneven ur a toy...

people like duke alts crust squint zoner bilnek atesk rayz are intermediate, but blast zen kew safer stotr and people on that level just need a little more time... no hate just bein blunt

Stussy
05-16-2010, 03:44 PM
props on that old shit rayz...i dont get why your changing that steez? shits funky fresh.
and i'm not gunna lie that newer shit is garabage.
ity.

What is garbage about it? i want to get the new style down then combined the old style and new style together. Im getting influence from DC writers.

AteskOne
05-16-2010, 04:01 PM
the structure just seems weak. the bars dont seem very consistant and there's a lot more negative space than there was in your old style. the flow lacks and the extensions seem too forced and random whereas your old style flowed great and the few extensions worked perfectly with the simplicity of the letters. i also dont like how blocky your new style is. idk i just woulda stuck with the original style and developed it more if it was me. dont fix what aint broken.

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 04:12 PM
if this pic is ur old shit id stick with this... its way better than the other stuff ur posting
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2141/photo975.jpg

-Empty-Can-
05-16-2010, 04:22 PM
people like duke alts crust squint zoner bilnek atesk rayz are intermediate, but blast zen kew safer stotr and people on that level just need a little more time... no hate just bein blunt

I feel like I have potential to be intermediate. I'm just not motivated to ever sketch.

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 04:30 PM
yea i think u and safer would be considered intermediate if u took some time on a sketch... like i said im not hatin just givin my opinion on whose intermediate and who isnt ready yet.... but as far as bar consistency u and safer are more advanced than the others i named lol but like i said u just need a little more time

BlacktodaFuture
05-16-2010, 05:21 PM
yea i think u and safer would be considered intermediate if u took some time on a sketch... like i said im not hatin just givin my opinion on whose intermediate and who isnt ready yet.... but as far as bar consistency u and safer are more advanced than the others i named lol but like i said u just need a little more time

the ones i take time on i get frustrated and don't finish. its obvious we understand bars, flow, balance, etc. but i agree some time is needed. GOOD CRITS WOULD HELP lol.

-Empty-Can-
05-16-2010, 05:32 PM
yea yea I agree.
kinda old piece but one of my faves. would this be half intermediate?
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece008.jpg

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 05:57 PM
i try to give the most detailed crits i can without being an ass...

what makes that stotr piece toy is the bars plain and simple, both vertical bars on the Ts are uneven and dont flow well, same with the diagonal bars on the S and R. the chips are in bad places, chips look better coming off the end of a bar. and on a personal note i dont like the popout things on the top of the letters.... the concept of the 8ball isnt bad but when ur making an object especially a round one it has to be on point, the center white part of the 8ball should be a circle like the ball itself but instead its more of a half circle with straight lines on the right side... know what i mean?

to me intermediate pieces should have cleaner lines and ur bars should flow nice, intermediate should be people that have the basics down pat but just need input on what direction to take their style

Epoc
05-16-2010, 06:19 PM
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6940/dsc01397lk.jpg

would put in Ttagz but its always such a circle jerk there.

post a sketch in second too.

unsuccsessfull
05-16-2010, 07:36 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00076.jpg

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-16-2010, 07:43 PM
the roller could use some work

unsuccsessfull
05-16-2010, 07:51 PM
yea, ran out of both colours anythingsbetter than all the bitching and whining tho

NoCanControl
05-16-2010, 08:03 PM
fosheezy. I always wanted to do a roller. looks hella fun.

m+s
05-16-2010, 08:12 PM
yea their aton of fun. a good workout too, i was sore for a couple days after this one
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/6359/dscn1372x.jpg

Hepatitis
05-16-2010, 08:47 PM
I've Always wanted to do a roller.
Didn't know if its alright to post stencils in here but i think i have surpassed the toy stencil thread. http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0071.jpg?t=1274057202

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0114.jpg?t=1274057230
Crits?

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 09:18 PM
rollers are supposed to be huge and sloppy... i like the zoner, i was gonna ask if u ran outta both colors since theres no dot in the R and the incomplete outline... the ms roller looks good though too

408Bomber
05-16-2010, 09:54 PM
so ive been doing some straight letter simples lately with my name.... how do i Progress?i'll get flicks up in a sec..

CrustOner
05-16-2010, 10:23 PM
Start bends. Cuts. little things, without taking it way out of proportion.

408Bomber
05-16-2010, 10:45 PM
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1282.jpg

bleh.... i have no idea how to really work with simples....

edit:

can anyone offer some advice with examples of what to properly do in paint like i see you guys do sometimes?

BlacktodaFuture
05-16-2010, 11:14 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03620.jpg?t=1274065665

stotr: i wouldn't say that's half intermediate. i'd say that's average toy forum
knine: know that you know how to do it, keep practicing post in toy forum, ass you get better add bends and etc. do upper and lower case letters. experiment.
hep: feeling those stencils.
zoner and M+S: nice rollers.

408Bomber
05-16-2010, 11:17 PM
that shit is sick! ^^^

Stussy
05-17-2010, 12:25 AM
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1282.jpg

bleh.... i have no idea how to really work with simples....

edit:

can anyone offer some advice with examples of what to properly do in paint like i see you guys do sometimes?

new to graff thread homie, a lot of posted shit to help you progress.

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 12:30 AM
blehh i've looked thier and ive tried most of those methods but I still can't get shit right lmao.

Stussy
05-17-2010, 12:40 AM
well read more and sketch more and when you think you have progressed some post in the toy blackbook. but just keep sketching over and over.

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 12:46 AM
iite fa sure. imma keep busting out those simples... is thier anything i can improve on though with the simpels i posted?

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 12:47 AM
I've Always wanted to do a roller.
Didn't know if its alright to post stencils in here but i think i have surpassed the toy stencil thread. http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0071.jpg?t=1274057202

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0114.jpg?t=1274057230


Bump for crits?
Black: I think lose some of those extensions seem to detract from the letters.
Knine: Practice super simple stuff. All same width with the bars and all same height.

m+s
05-17-2010, 01:45 AM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0071.jpg?t=1274057202
young boba fett? nice cut, go for more detail, and get rid of the white thats floating to the right of the face and above the arm. that would look doper. the lower left doesnt make a ton of sence visually either, and give that kid a chin. fuckin chinless wonder in this bitch

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 01:50 AM
Thanks for the crit. The white was just to cover up a symbol on the box i was practicing on and his face is supposed to be below his arms but if you can't tell that, i'll rework it.

Kaiser71
05-17-2010, 01:57 AM
Hepatitis...nice stencils

Zoner and MS, dope rollers, the way the top of the M slants down kills it a bit for me, but fuck it, it's a roller

Safe- letters look a bit tangled, and I don't know about the part of the A's leg that folds back up, but i like the way your letters are headed

My scanner doesn't pick up hilighter too well, and I got rushed and slacked on the S, but crits?...
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k280/IanIsBored2000/0039.jpg

graff4ever
05-17-2010, 03:04 AM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03620.jpg?t=1274065665
.

blacktoadfuture this is absolut titties:D:D:D:D:D

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 03:10 AM
when im in art ill bring some more simples and maybe have had a lil something to show you guys.

Scream Out
05-17-2010, 08:11 AM
black - much improvement bro but the extensions off your S and E are weak, they would look much better cut short

408bomber - keep working with those simps man, all your bars should be the same width at first, that "I" is way smaller. if you start getting bored try simply slanting your simps back like \ or something. and dont worry about finished sketches at this stage just draw draw draw, once you got that shit down (im talking a month or two from now) then start working in little breaks cracks colour and minor details, but not extensions yet because you really need to understand your letters first.
hope this helps a little or even makes sence, fuck im tired

sank.
05-17-2010, 12:30 PM
this is why the whole idea of the toy/intermediate forum doesn't really work. people say that sketches are "sick" when they totally aren't. for example, black's sketch is no where sick. extensions coming out of no where and inconsistency in the bars and flow. also if you don't understand how to do simples than that's something you have to figure out, cause if you can't do that there's no way you can come up with more complex stuff. not trying to hate on any of you guys, but it just makes rage when i see people call someone else's shit really good and sick when it's not.

end early morning rant lolol.

as for black, lose the extensions that come out of the top of the s and e and just work on an overall consistency and flow to your letters.

everything in life takes time and practice to get better at and this is no different. just keep at it guys

Zookyook
05-17-2010, 01:15 PM
i think the extensions on the S and A are in good spots, the E not so much... i wouldnt call it a sick sketch though but safer is improving

m+s
05-17-2010, 03:45 PM
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1282.jpg

bleh.... i have no idea how to really work with simples....

edit:

can anyone offer some advice with examples of what to properly do in paint like i see you guys do sometimes?

spend alot of time working on consistancy. look at different serrif and sans serrif fonts. learn what elements of each letter is diffinitive to that letter. pay extremely close attention to your negative space cause that shit needs to be consistant too. repitition. set up a grid so your shit is straight before you hack away at the bars. break each letter down into its proportions on a grid if you need to

m+s
05-17-2010, 03:50 PM
http://chestofbooks.com/architecture/Cyclopedia-Carpentry-Building-4-6/images/Fig-33-Proportion-and-Slant-of-Capitals.jpg

this is an italicised grid but you get what i mean

funhouseXcast
05-17-2010, 03:50 PM
408bomber, simplify your hand too, that will make it easier to get better at peicing because when you're working with your hand, you can learn what curves look good.

BlacktodaFuture
05-17-2010, 04:44 PM
thanks for the crits guys.

i like the extension off the S and i did one off the E so it would make the S but im thinking about scrapping both of them. maybe. i'll think about it.

redz: that E is much better. i was gonna do an E with that kind of middle bar on the E. don't paint that. i'll feel like im biting lol. lose the extension on the R and the D, and fix the S up a little. We can have a drawing session soon or something.

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 05:08 PM
yea thanks for all the crits... tried something new today... ill psot it up in a bit.. whatching house party 4 haha

Kaiser71
05-17-2010, 06:09 PM
redz: i was gonna do an E with that kind of middle bar on the E. don't paint that. i'll feel like im biting lol.

You're like an hour too late man haha

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 06:12 PM
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1283.jpg

bleh this is from today...aint really much improvement but whatever.
my 3d is horrible.

Scream Out
05-17-2010, 06:17 PM
dont even touch 3d yet, you need to figure out block letters first. lose the dot on the i, make it the same size as the other letters, learn the basics
if the "new to graff" thread is still around read that shit, no offense but you need the help

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 06:41 PM
i know i need help :(... lol how should i do the I? bleh! its ironic i cant do simps for shit but on good days i can make letters...
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1219.jpg

idk how i ended up making that..but whatever i was on that day i need to get again haha

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 07:26 PM
Dude 408 why are you still posting in here?
the normal toy blackbook section is just as capable of critiquing your work.

NoCanControl
05-17-2010, 09:32 PM
some good tips in that past page.

ravine
05-17-2010, 10:12 PM
ok for real, let 408 post here. he seems like a good dude.

gestures are fun
http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/P5170038.jpg

medacog1
05-17-2010, 10:46 PM
ok for real, let 408 post here. he seems like a good dude.

gestures are fun
http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/P5170038.jpg
i like it.. but im not feeling the WH or ER connect...

trying to find a new name..
http://i44.tinypic.com/ngu8i.jpg

Crits

-Empty-Can-
05-17-2010, 10:51 PM
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/reverseosmosis002Medium.jpg
Shadow and S are kinda blahh....Took like 3 minutes.

Where=Dopeski. Loving that style dude.Just maybe thin the outline a bit.

medacog1
05-17-2010, 11:08 PM
[QUOTE=-Empty-Can-;1616889]http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/reverseosmosis002Medium.jpg

back to the toy thread

-Empty-Can-
05-17-2010, 11:14 PM
yea whatever..
same for you.

408Bomber
05-17-2010, 11:47 PM
ok for real, let 408 post here. he seems like a good dude.

gestures are fun
http://i770.photobucket.com/albums/xx341/ravines/P5170038.jpg
thanx bruh... it's nice people can actualy recognize someone past thier flaws!


i may not know how to do simples and shit but I am def not a toy. I'd say im toy - intermediate lolz.

AteskOne
05-17-2010, 11:48 PM
both get out.

unsuccsessfull
05-18-2010, 12:25 AM
Werd^
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00077.jpg

sank.
05-18-2010, 12:31 AM
this thread makes me lol

Hepatitis
05-18-2010, 12:33 AM
Yo real people who are actually legitimate contributors is it cool to post stencils in here or no?

DukeOne
05-18-2010, 12:56 AM
Wow what the fuck is happening to this thread?
I cant believe I'm doing this but
medacog1 - Toy BB
-Empty-Can - Toy BB
408Bomber - Toy BB
Hepatitis - This thread is (BlackBook,Throwies,and Exchnages) id stick to the toy stencil thread or the main stencil thread for stencils
ravine- not to bad but not really feeling that Y, not very defined. Also try connecting all the letters instead of just 2 or w/e, just my opinion.

Zoner finally something refreshing from this bullshit

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture086.jpg

m+s
05-18-2010, 12:59 AM
it doesnt make a ton of sense considering their is a stencil thread in the picture gallery

Hepatitis
05-18-2010, 01:02 AM
alright thanks.
Duke:your shit is ill as always but maybe try mixing it up i think. its original and all but they all sort of look the same to me. your a mad good artist i'm sure you can try some different stuff.

m+s
05-18-2010, 01:06 AM
why do you stretch shit so hard dukes?

weakfingers
05-18-2010, 01:17 AM
Sorry if im still in the non intermedeate bracket, heres a quick 5 minut throwie I did for me and a homie.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4009/4617347839_83f4684c6e_b.jpg

DukeOne
05-18-2010, 01:24 AM
why do you stretch shit so hard dukes?

Why not?

Weak - Dope throw, dope spot, dope pic, me likey

m+s
05-18-2010, 01:29 AM
because it makes it more difficult to read. what are the benefits?

NouveauP
05-18-2010, 01:43 AM
The four guys that belong here don't need crits from me.

Zoner, Duke, Where And Squint are killers.

pilerskee
05-18-2010, 02:49 AM
im shifting towards straight line pieces cause i like the challenge and because nobody does em round my area, what do ya all think bout this sorta piece? btw i dont often color my sketches, leave the color for the wall is my thing.

Cyto Aka Son1c
05-18-2010, 03:05 AM
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5120/dscn1876e.jpg

Bilnek
05-18-2010, 03:32 AM
deser thats nice
pillerskee go simplier

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe010.jpg

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 11:35 AM
i like the colors binek but the bars are just not flowin right in that one... i think its the bottom right of the Es that make it look awkard

massacreman
05-18-2010, 11:56 AM
zook is right
cyto: work on your 1st E

Scream Out
05-18-2010, 12:11 PM
too much shit in this thread, people need to spend some time on shit and post some FINISHED INTERMEDIATE SKETCHES imo. if youre intermediate you can probably pull that off and then we can crit you on it.

picture dump for talking and not posting enough art
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0606.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo503.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0585.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0570.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo483.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0541.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0540.jpg
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0537.jpg
enjoy

m+s
05-18-2010, 12:40 PM
lookin good scream

AteskOne
05-18-2010, 02:20 PM
screams steez makes me hard.

NouveauP
05-18-2010, 04:09 PM
That fourth one is nuts. I'm inspired.

m+s
05-18-2010, 04:12 PM
agreed, deffinately the best one

AteskOne
05-18-2010, 04:39 PM
the first 3 did it for me. in comparison i think they made the fill on the fourth seem pretty bland. that brown spot fill is fucking beautiful.

DukeOne
05-18-2010, 07:21 PM
Ahh Sanctuary! Dope shit Aever!

Quicky I did waiting for the doc
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture089.jpg

CrustOner
05-18-2010, 07:24 PM
too much shit in this thread, people need to spend some time on shit and post some FINISHED INTERMEDIATE SKETCHES imo. if youre intermediate you can probably pull that off and then we can crit you on it.
I want to see the A from this one,
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo483.jpg
with the extensions and letter space, from this one
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0541.jpg
with this kind of fill, in green.
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/IMG_0537.jpg

unsuccsessfull
05-18-2010, 07:36 PM
lookin good duke, aevers
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00086.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
05-18-2010, 11:24 PM
LOL, that's EXACTLY what i said to myself... figured i'd see atleast SOME cleavage.

(SoS)Viruz
05-19-2010, 12:00 AM
Aever,Tesk,Duke- do you guys paint??? I want to see some of your ups cause thoses sketches are sick but mean shit if you can't put it on wall-es

Scream Out
05-19-2010, 12:54 AM
workin on that virus, id like to find a chill spot to work on my can control so when i get painting it doesnt look like an 8 year old did it haha. other than some throws and hands i've never attempted painting as of yet

Epoc
05-19-2010, 02:46 AM
workin on that virus, id like to find a chill spot to work on my can control so when i get painting it doesnt look like an 8 year old did it haha. other than some throws and hands i've never attempted painting as of yet

yuup. i went and tried painting for the first time the other day. way harder than i initially thought it would be. figured i could take my half-baked blackbook word and put something similar on a wall...not quit. got some second hand bucket paint to buff it and try again soon. shit is uugggly.

decent simple grave. keep on going.

promise ill put a sketch up next post. feel like a doucher with all text.

heres an alien in the meantime. http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/1259/dsc01359zv.jpg

lord_plankton
05-19-2010, 02:58 AM
Zoner, the hand of your dog is on the wrong side...piece is nice..

m+s
05-19-2010, 03:37 AM
Ahh Sanctuary! Dope shit Aever!

Quicky I did waiting for the doc
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture089.jpg

best letters ive seen from you imo

fromthegrave
05-19-2010, 05:00 AM
thats legit hater.

m+s
05-19-2010, 05:04 AM
are you for real? i like his simpler shit. duke and me are as tight as 2 strangers can be so slow down guy, shits under control here

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 05:09 AM
ive never seen a lowercase D that looked good until now ...

pilerskee
05-19-2010, 09:31 AM
threads improving, keep it up...and hope ya can give us some critzz cheers

massacreman
05-19-2010, 10:39 AM
needs more arrows

DukeOne
05-19-2010, 11:07 AM
thats legit hater.

haha naw man me and M+S are cool as cucumbers

but thanks m+s, ya i approached this sketch as more of a "fuck it" moment so it was more spontaneous and looser than my other pieces, might try that more lol

Zook - Thanks man
SoSVirus - I havn't painted in over a year now, pretty pathetic but i used to paint somewhat often a 2 and 3 years ago
Zoner - Really liken that piece, that Z is by far my fav

Piler - Don't try to blend the L and the E kinda looks like a K when you do that, especially because you didn't connect the other letters. Not a fan of arrows, but some work better than others, take out the on bottom right of the P, top left of the I, actually just don't used arrows lol, they don't help that piece

m+s
05-19-2010, 12:46 PM
nice. yea i been fucking with ball points alot recently, wind up with some ill line width variation and wicked sharp points, shits nice

TheToy
05-19-2010, 01:16 PM
are you for real? i like his simpler shit. duke and me are as tight as 2 strangers can be so slow down guy, shits under control here

Yeah, he's for real. You're a fuckin' hater. Of course when you give props to someone, people might not take you seriously. It's a rarity.

It's like the little boy who cried wolf...

fromthegrave
05-19-2010, 02:39 PM
are you for real? i like his simpler shit. duke and me are as tight as 2 strangers can be so slow down guy, shits under control here

ha whoa i was messin around. i liked that a lot, thats the first simple thing i'v seen him do.

BlacktodaFuture
05-19-2010, 03:39 PM
that lower case D kinda looks like a lower case A

AteskOne
05-19-2010, 03:52 PM
^agree

sanrtizer
05-19-2010, 05:27 PM
Duke- i like your simple shit like thar better, regardless all your styles are nice
quick shit for my girl, i dont really like it too much but whatever///crits would be appreciated
http://img140.imageshack.us/i/elisew.jpg/

m+s
05-19-2010, 05:40 PM
Yeah, he's for real. You're a fuckin' hater. Of course when you give props to someone, people might not take you seriously. It's a rarity.

It's like the little boy who cried wolf...


ok guy. whatever you say dick head. duke knew what i meant so why do you feel it neccesary to hop in. attention whore much?

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 07:06 PM
sanrtizer the chip off the top of that S makes no sense... all of ur little chip things are kinda iffy, id stick to the toy blackbook thread, theyll be more likely to crit that in there

Stussy
05-19-2010, 08:39 PM
workin on that virus, id like to find a chill spot to work on my can control so when i get painting it doesnt look like an 8 year old did it haha. other than some throws and hands i've never attempted painting as of yet
damn that sucks to hear and the bad thing is that goes for half of the this thread.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-19-2010, 09:00 PM
foreal but thats a good thing because if everyone that posts in here was paintin i would be rip shit that all these toys are causin so much heat!!!
gotta love the kids who go bombing with the new krylon cans...pure art

CrustOner
05-19-2010, 09:04 PM
I know, I got sad when I heard it too. :/ Get up Aever! <3

Epoc
05-19-2010, 10:47 PM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1161/dsc01399wr.jpg

needs a lot of work still before trying to get a bit complex. but i think slowly getting better.

AteskOne
05-19-2010, 10:56 PM
i agree. dont worry about complexity too much tho. just keep working at that structure. the width of the S changes a little too drastically in the middle section and the E gets too skinny at the top. it's coming along nicely tho. keep up the good work.

m+s
05-20-2010, 12:59 AM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1161/dsc01399wr.jpg

needs a lot of work still before trying to get a bit complex. but i think slowly getting better.

individually thosr tight letters, fill that neg space with something

DukeOne
05-20-2010, 01:42 AM
I should have made the letters on the hat a U and a E, butttt I'm an idiot so i just put D and 1 lol but w/e it was fun to do

Dukes- Aye Aye Cap'n
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture094.jpg

AteskOne
05-20-2010, 03:15 AM
fuck yes!

Zookyook
05-20-2010, 09:01 AM
DDK1S! yea! lol... that shit is fresh man, the teeth and eyes are effin raw! i like this new direction ur going in