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weakfingers
05-22-2010, 01:34 AM
Im really Diggin those Easer Sketches last page.

Havent been sketching in a quick minute but Im getting kinda frustrated with drawing lately. I have an idea of how I want things to look but its just not coming out on paper or paint...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/SDC19795.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC00564.jpg

unsuccsessfull
05-22-2010, 01:55 AM
jst keep workin on it mengu goten alot beter
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00087.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
05-22-2010, 02:22 AM
sqwint on the sketch the dead space with the w needs to be eradicated. It kills all flow of the sketch. paint doesnt look bad.

And zoner..dope. Your r's especially are usually fire.

m+s
05-22-2010, 04:43 AM
thanks for the feedback seyar

W_G_O_N_E
05-22-2010, 10:35 AM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8730/dscn8621.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
05-22-2010, 11:01 AM
Thats pretty dope son. Not lovin the background so much, but the letters and color scheme are on point.

AteskOne
05-22-2010, 12:07 PM
only letter i'm not feeling is the D. i would have made it look more rounded like the O.

MoganOne
05-22-2010, 01:58 PM
jst keep workin on it mengu goten alot beter
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00087.jpg

This looks so raw man... Keep it up

MoganOne
05-22-2010, 02:06 PM
Solrac
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0520001415.jpg

PRS
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0520001502.jpg

Attempting to make the letters look lifely lol

Bilnek
05-22-2010, 04:31 PM
sum jibba jabba wit pens :)
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/bilnofhilche.png
mogan-1st one is nuce...loose the eyes on the 2nd one
weaks-make the ''s'' a little bit cleaner....and work on your structure
zoner and wgone props


crit meh nao

I GOT CLOUT
05-22-2010, 04:42 PM
could use some more arrows.
Mogan that solrac is nice.

MoganOne
05-22-2010, 04:50 PM
sum jibba jabba wit pens :)
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/bilnofhilche.png
mogan-1st one is nuce...loose the eyes on the 2nd one
weaks-make the ''s'' a little bit cleaner....and work on your structure
zoner and wgone props


crit meh nao

Thanks bro but the Eyes where the whole point in me doing that piece lol... The letterstructures suck I just wanted to see if I was capable of working the eyes into it.... Nice piece btw

I GOT CLOUT
05-22-2010, 05:03 PM
Bilnek. The letters need the most work. Which until you have those down you shouldnt be doing any extensions. The background doesnt look horrible, but like I said, until you have the letters down pact everything else is pointless.

idk401
05-22-2010, 09:54 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/may008.jpg

massacreman
05-23-2010, 05:22 AM
skey, good job, you actually listened to your crits, not alot people do that on this forum.
really good job,keep it up
if i were you id fix the cut in the upper bars of the Y and make the Y flow more with the other letters, they are bending like this (((| get it?

pleasedontstayr
05-23-2010, 10:40 AM
also Skey, i would move the E a bit more out to the right, it almost looks like an F.

Epoc
05-23-2010, 03:28 PM
slowly moving.

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7984/dsc01402i.jpg

Stuck
05-23-2010, 03:34 PM
no

408Bomber
05-23-2010, 03:40 PM
slowly moving.

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7984/dsc01402i.jpg
toy bb

Epoc
05-23-2010, 03:45 PM
^^^ lol

alrighty thats a clear negator one the trial of extensions.

next one will be no bullshit added.



http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/8572/dsc01402f.jpg

408Bomber
05-23-2010, 03:52 PM
do simples...nothing else.

AteskOne
05-23-2010, 03:56 PM
no. as you can see from what he just posted he can do simples. simples are just to learn structure. if you do nothing but simples your never gunna progress. keep working at that style you were working with. the only way to develope a style is trial and error. some things work somethings dont. you wont figure out what works if you just stick to simples.

408Bomber
05-23-2010, 04:02 PM
no. as you can see from what he just posted he can do simples. simples are just to learn structure. if you do nothing but simples your never gunna progress. keep working at that style you were working with. the only way to develope a style is trial and error. some things work somethings dont. you wont figure out what works if you just stick to simples.
well from what people told me a few pages back. simples are what u should do to make ur structure better.

Epoc
05-23-2010, 04:06 PM
*highfive*

i dont really bother posting reality/counter argument like that anymore since it never leads anywhere buts its nice when people like atesk say watsup.

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 04:07 PM
yeah but once you learn it, start doing things alittle more complex, and a little more and a little more till you get to the top.

408Bomber
05-23-2010, 04:09 PM
fa sho....what happend black? I was waiting in the mw2 lobby for like 20 mintues

Epoc
05-23-2010, 04:12 PM
yeah but once you learn it, start doing things alittle more complex, and a little more and a little more till you get to the top.

ahmen. people are quick to either shoot you down or prop you up.

i post here cause i know the basics and a bit (believe it or not) and its a good place to get a wide response.

enough bs though. ill make something new tomorrow. and we can all have a little discussion again.

AteskOne
05-23-2010, 04:20 PM
well from what people told me a few pages back. simples are what u should do to make ur structure better.
this is true. but simples dont have to be just plain block letters. that style that epoc's trying to devolpe is relatively simple. he's just bending the bars of the letters. that's what you wanna do after you get a good feeling for simples is start experimenting with bending the letters and changing widths and shit. that's how you begin to develope a style.

idk401
05-23-2010, 04:21 PM
good lookz massacreman and plsdntstayr

408Bomber
05-23-2010, 04:32 PM
this is true. but simples dont have to be just plain block letters. that style that epoc's trying to devolpe is relatively simple. he's just bending the bars of the letters. that's what you wanna do after you get a good feeling for simples is start experimenting with bending the letters and changing widths and shit. that's how you begin to develope a style.
i think i see whatchu mean, I was playing around and made this a while ago.
http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/BanditxSwagg/Graffiti/SSPX1218.jpg
i know it aint much but is that whatchu mean

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 04:47 PM
progression
oldest to newest

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck002.jpg?t=1274646782

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/peices002.jpg?t=1274646853

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/peices001.jpg?t=1274646873

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/mlknkjbkhb.jpg?t=1274646913

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/kn.jpg?t=1274647014

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/dsc03170.jpg?t=1274647041

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03216.jpg?t=1274647293

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03303.jpg?t=1274647322

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03373.jpg?t=1274647205

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/Scan1.jpg?t=1274647392

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1274647432

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1359.jpg?t=1274647482

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1374.jpg?t=1274647592

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1368.jpg?t=1274647611

sank.
05-23-2010, 05:14 PM
^^^ neither of ya have the right to tell people to leave this thread. especially you 408, i don't know why but you the piss the hell out of me. probably because you remind me of that little euro cunt ras back when he posted like 10 times a day and all he did was bitch and moan. you need to to take a hiatus from here and figure some shit out on your own homie...

unsuccsessfull
05-23-2010, 06:06 PM
some bridges have some nutty/facinatin supports if u take the time 2 look at em
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00093.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00101.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00102.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00100.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00098.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00096.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00091.jpg

NoCanControl
05-23-2010, 06:17 PM
Is that a oneliner throw???

unsuccsessfull
05-23-2010, 06:22 PM
the 1st one is

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-23-2010, 06:24 PM
zoner man that shit is howt. fuck man
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/052310_181500.jpg
kinda fucked up the 3-d- but fuck it

(SoS)Viruz
05-23-2010, 07:27 PM
EVERYONE ON THIS PAGE EXCEPT FOR ZONER..............GTFO go to the Toybb thread please

chill spots r my home
05-23-2010, 08:07 PM
EVERYONE ON THIS PAGE EXCEPT FOR ZONER..............GTFO go to the Toybb thread please

stfu....

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 08:11 PM
keep it up safe, you got some skill. keep the flow natural. dont force it in wierd angles ya know? half are pretty dope, half arnt.

the 7th,8th,11th,12th,13th are dope. the rest are not

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 08:22 PM
not you. just cuz you made a thread dosent make you good at graffiti.

(SoS)Viruz
05-23-2010, 08:28 PM
Oh really why dont you post some of your stuff up or hop off the bandwagon buddy....AND I did not say cause I made this thread Im good I simply know the difference between good and bad....Internet and Original styles

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 08:37 PM
lets see yours then mr original. i dont need to be showin off mine.

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 08:40 PM
yo zoner you qot skills. and wherever ur painting looks mad nice. id like to live there.

first time when a girlfriend found out i do graff she doesnt go OMG MAKE MY NAME.
so im drawing her name... romantic rite?

http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1803/dsc03022td.jpg

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 09:07 PM
i thought you were original. thats a straight internet style. the edges and everything. ive seen that 100 times before.

ive got enough to show for it, i just dont need to flex my clout anymore than i already have.

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 09:12 PM
hey guy. it's a progression. about a year of progression. first is oldest. last is newest.

(SoS)Viruz
05-23-2010, 09:14 PM
i thought you were original. thats a straight internet style. the edges and everything. ive seen that 100 times before.

ive got enough to show for it, i just dont need to flex my clout anymore than i already have.

Useless Chatter.....Yo got anything else to say to me PM me which I doubt you'll do

pleasedontstayr
05-23-2010, 09:17 PM
this guyguyer is about to get raped...

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 09:20 PM
hahahahaha, oh right. a battle solves everything. and by refusing to accept, that means im a toy. right?

i can gaurentee you if i posted my shit youd all be like "oh, damn. guess he's not a toy"

or some shit along those lines. oh well, this is fun. why spoil it by posting my shit?

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 09:21 PM
just battle and end it >_>

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 09:27 PM
hahahahaha, oh right. a battle solves everything. and by refusing to accept, that means im a toy. right?

i can gaurentee you if i posted my shit youd all be like "oh, damn. guess he's not a toy"

or some shit along those lines. oh well, this is fun. why spoil it by posting my shit?

how about you do something productive and stop talking shit about ppls art. we got enough motherfuckers who come up in this forum just to talk shit and your just part of the herd of haters that has nothing better to do. post your work or something idc give crits but dont come up here with ur bullshit

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 09:31 PM
im knockin down the ego of a toy who thinks he can call out heads for being a toy or not because he created a thread on the internet and his shit is uncreative and wack.. its very productive.

you want critism? youve got too many uneeded jags an hooks on your letters which make it more difficult to read than it needs to be. the second half of your letters are too different than the first half. and the flow could be a lot better rather than having weak individual letter flows try having one uniform flow to the piece

youre a taurus, arnt you?

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 09:35 PM
no sir, im original.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 09:37 PM
this is why i dont offer critism, because everyones "too good" to take it. just because you have an original style dosent mean you have a good style. your extensions are ugly and have no flow to them.

original and dope are not the same thing.

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 09:42 PM
look, im not gonna argue over the internet about my style. im gonna keep doing my thing you can love it or hate it idc. im sure someone out there will like and thats great it but im nopt trying to please anyone...

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 09:47 PM
thats the proper attitude, glad to see you have that.

but dont be telling me to give critism then critize my critism. thats straight hypocritical bullshit

I GOT CLOUT
05-23-2010, 09:51 PM
You gonna post something yet? Or just invade this thread with fuckin talk?

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 09:53 PM
you still write easer? an no, im done. BS is coming out to protect each other now. now im wasting my time.

Stuck
05-23-2010, 10:01 PM
i stopped coming on this shit cus way to much bullshit but no pics

I GOT CLOUT
05-23-2010, 10:05 PM
Why you saying still write Easer like you know me?

And im not protecting anybody, I would just like to see more flicks.

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 10:09 PM
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9853/stylez.jpg

not the only style i flip mind you. point blank

I GOT CLOUT
05-23-2010, 10:17 PM
Since the Random battle thread was closed...
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/ebd114cc.jpg

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 10:24 PM
eskimo, clout, virus. 4 way battle, since im a toy until proving myself.

idk401
05-23-2010, 10:27 PM
im dwn for this battle too!!

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 10:28 PM
me deuce.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 10:29 PM
sure, why not. but you fucks gotta put it on a wall. unless if thats toy these days

idk401
05-23-2010, 10:30 PM
danm nah i was gonna say something like by 12 today (a PIECE)

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 10:37 PM
1 week. individual names. best thing you got. from the books.

I GOT CLOUT
05-23-2010, 10:39 PM
eskimo, clout, virus. 4 way battle, since im a toy until proving myself.

Haha, whats with the hard act sally?

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 10:42 PM
its what the internet is designed for.

its been a while since we've had a battle, my friend.

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 10:48 PM
this guy is so gassed

I GOT CLOUT
05-23-2010, 10:48 PM
Im down. Whats the word, guy who apparently knows me.

ESKiMO2
05-23-2010, 10:51 PM
its gonna be virus all along
i qot a court date so as long as its after all that

(SoS)Viruz
05-23-2010, 10:52 PM
its what the internet is designed for.

its been a while since we've had a battle, my friend.

your such a fuckin herb put up or shut up.......Stop post pointless shit

Yo that shit face isn't me

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 10:53 PM
my covers blown, so fuck the front. and i dont plan on doing a piece tomorrow. have alterior plans. but im down for one later this week. definatly

I GOT CLOUT
05-23-2010, 10:54 PM
Just make it a sketch due by tue. or wed.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-23-2010, 11:06 PM
id rather paint, but im gonna have a head full of acid the next few days. this is why im sayin later. unless i sketch up something on my buzz

actually, ill just scan a flick if its our own words were paintin. an we can battle away tomorrow. yeah, ill cheat like that

BlacktodaFuture
05-23-2010, 11:11 PM
sketch. do in one week. anything you want. go!

ravine
05-23-2010, 11:30 PM
this guy is so gassed

i'll tell you who was gassed...


the jews.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3306/4607486566_5d4ce98866.jpg

DukeOne
05-24-2010, 12:04 AM
Not bad ravine, only thing I might play around with is the W to E transition. It seems like the WH flow well and so do the ERE, but its a bit choppy in between. Just my opinion

Zoner - You been busy man, looking good

Exchange for Bank over at 12oz
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture102-1.jpg

AteskOne
05-24-2010, 12:53 AM
you gotta pirate fetish duke? haha i joke.

DukeOne
05-24-2010, 02:15 AM
haha as of late I sure do, it was a childhood obsession but apparently its back lol

Bilnek
05-24-2010, 07:42 AM
ur up 4 those pirates eh????
peeps that battle im up 4 it too... just for fun
(tho some of you said very very bad words out there)

safer did sum progress...ill do that shit too :P

older to newer

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Picture.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Picture005.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/ss.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Picture001.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/thesoe.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Govno.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe007.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esooooe.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/bilnofhilche.png


guys post pics don't talk shit...

lord_plankton
05-24-2010, 07:59 AM
oh yeah, your arrows have been developing greatly..

Bilnek
05-24-2010, 08:08 AM
oh shut the fuck up....post atleast one picture before you start talkin shit...

woonybomber
05-24-2010, 08:11 AM
hahahahaha, oh right. a battle solves everything. and by refusing to accept, that means im a toy. right?

i can gaurentee you if i posted my shit youd all be like "oh, damn. guess he's not a toy"

or some shit along those lines. oh well, this is fun. why spoil it by posting my shit?

you sir are a bitch faggit nigguh who needs to take his moms tit out of his mouth and do some real graff you wont post cuz you know you suck big fat sloppy donkey DICK!!!


zoner keep it up

and safe you came a long way keep working on it

massacreman
05-24-2010, 08:50 AM
bilnek safer, no hate but we have a progression thread.

ToNiC
05-24-2010, 09:18 AM
id rather paint, but im gonna have a head full of acid the next few days. this is why im sayin later. unless i sketch up something on my buzz

You're straight dumb fool.

Bilnek
05-24-2010, 09:36 AM
bilnek safer, no hate but we have a progression thread.

then lets just say i posted some of my old stuff

CrustOner
05-24-2010, 11:07 AM
You guys are stupid. He was trolling. And he does get up. Now chill.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-24-2010, 11:48 AM
:)

i just got bored. but ill be nice now.

bilnke, work on the letters more and forget about the arrows until youve got sick letters then you can add sick arrows to it. youll progress faster

duke, that bank sketch is fresh, feelin the BA

AteskOne
05-24-2010, 12:21 PM
you sir are a bitch faggit nigguh who needs to take his moms tit out of his mouth and do some real graff you wont post cuz you know you suck big fat sloppy donkey DICK!!!


zoner keep it up

and safe you came a long way keep working on it
oh great this faggots back. i thot we were done with his dislexic ass posts. actually i just assumed he made another account to troll out with.

edit* his post sounds alot like what was said to him not too long ago when he was posting as perfer...amiright?

CrustOner
05-24-2010, 01:26 PM
urrite

massacreman
05-24-2010, 01:31 PM
[QUOTE=AteskOne;1620694]oh great this faggots back. QUOTE]


am i a faggot too :(
i want you to like me atesk... :'(

AteskOne
05-24-2010, 01:37 PM
i love you massacre ;).

massacreman
05-24-2010, 01:38 PM
yay! :)

Bilnek
05-24-2010, 03:30 PM
what about me??? noone loves me :( im starting to be emo now
thanks alot guys

i actually did what u told me...turned out nice
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/theesoone.png

and some character crap

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/bqqman.png

Phillip McDougall
05-24-2010, 03:49 PM
I dig that character, Esoe, but I don't see much progress in your letter forms. Why not try something different?

I GOT CLOUT
05-24-2010, 03:50 PM
I hope youre not in dallas. Cause Esoe would rapes you. But that definately does look better than your previous attempts.

LeaksOne
05-24-2010, 03:51 PM
angle you E's at a 90 degree angle

Phillip McDougall
05-24-2010, 07:16 PM
http://i49.tinypic.com/vr79tf.jpg

Brains. Just a sketch.. I'll probably redo this some other time and make it better, but this is it for now.

Also, fuck the letter I and N.

unsuccsessfull
05-24-2010, 08:07 PM
guy to the right not much intermediate but some crits on my piece?
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/30394_1477632543445_1312702757_3129.jpg

Stuck
05-24-2010, 08:35 PM
i feel the peice would look better without the round blob/extension between the n and the e as well as the dashes underneith it

BlacktodaFuture
05-24-2010, 08:38 PM
doens't look like Zoner. N looks like an A. the o is kinda a wonky E. and the E looks like a fucked up P. im feeling the style just make your letters looks more like themselves.

idk401
05-24-2010, 08:41 PM
the piece itself is kinda tilted

unsuccsessfull
05-24-2010, 09:39 PM
wordil work on it
dukeim likin them pirates

ravine
05-24-2010, 10:39 PM
haha bilnek, that character rules in a big way

kew1
05-24-2010, 11:00 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-24_1331.jpg

kew1
05-24-2010, 11:02 PM
o yea i used them elmers glue rusto fats on this whole simp they work much better then i expected. thanks for the tip grose.

MoganOne
05-25-2010, 03:26 AM
Not bad ravine, only thing I might play around with is the W to E transition. It seems like the WH flow well and so do the ERE, but its a bit choppy in between. Just my opinion

Zoner - You been busy man, looking good

Exchange for Bank over at 12oz
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture102-1.jpg
Yo this is real tight! Pirates are water gangsters! hence very cool lol

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-25-2010, 03:42 AM
Ya duke always comin correct, but I couldn't help but think of this when I saw your char.
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BdW5jbGUrcnVja3VzLmpwZw.jpg

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-25-2010, 11:05 AM
i actually did what u told me...turned out nice
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/theesoone.png

thereya go homie, looks a lot better. try an make all your letters flow the same direction. so either tilt your SO down like your Es or even out your Es ya know?

lord_plankton
05-25-2010, 11:16 AM
disagree.. they do flow, just the letters aint that nice..

weakfingers
05-25-2010, 12:32 PM
Bilnek- Try to give your letters some height, That way you can bring them closer together giving it a tighter complete look. I like the perspective of your character.

Phillip- You should try to sketch our your letters so they overlap each other in different ways, kinda like the r leg goes behind the A so on.

Unsuccessful - I feel that for that specific style if you made the right side of the R have a similar shape as the S it would give is a balanced aesthetic.

Kew - Toy bombs and peices, Your letters need alot of work. That pink shine is just ugly. No hate towards you im just being truthful.


Been stuck in a rut and haven't been feeling anything ive been drawing.
If any one wants to draw me up any T's I can work off I would be very happy. Anyone half decent down for an exchange?
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/4639410750_b6e39bc92e.jpg

AteskOne
05-25-2010, 12:37 PM
nice squint. i think the Q could be a little more rounded at the top for flow but it's still sexy. nice job cutting out negative space too. keep up the good work. i see some serious steez coming from you in the near future.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-25-2010, 12:37 PM
disagree.. they do flow, just the letters aint that nice..

they do flow, yes. but not well. id think his letters would build more if he tried to make em flow in the same direction for now. then once he's got more funk to the S and O then flip back to an upwards like flow ya know?

but its all opinion. whatever helps him develop a nicer style ya know?

bilnek, try both. practice dosent hurt. frankly, i wouldnt add any height to them. you can always paint em big an wide ya know? add more height to em an you get the same shit as everyone else. not many cats are rockin real wide styles ya know?

squint. either space out your letters more or add more inlines in the letters to define each letter more ya know? its real blocky. the bottom of your S could be kicked out to the left some, i think itd add flow/staayell

Phillip McDougall
05-25-2010, 12:48 PM
Duke rocks wide styles like no other. It all depends on what you're going for.

Bilnek
05-25-2010, 12:52 PM
i aint plannin givin mah letters some height...i like it wider .. i appreciate the comments guys...thanks

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-25-2010, 12:57 PM
No hate against you week but I hate that S its horrible imo you've done much better ones befor

lord_plankton
05-25-2010, 01:39 PM
they do flow, yes. but not well. id think his letters would build more if he tried to make em flow in the same direction for now. then once he's got more funk to the S and O then flip back to an upwards like flow ya know?

but its all opinion. whatever helps him develop a nicer style ya know?

bilnek, try both. practice dosent hurt. frankly, i wouldnt add any height to them. you can always paint em big an wide ya know? add more height to em an you get the same shit as everyone else. not many cats are rockin real wide styles ya know?


yeah, your right practice doesnt hurt ya know? try shit out is always good ya know ? and i mean it, ya know? seriously.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-25-2010, 02:10 PM
insecure people mock how others talk, ya know? their not comfortable with the sense that not everyone talks like a straight edged herb, ya know? sorry if my vocabulary bugs you, but not everyone is perfect. ya know?

goof..

Bilnek
05-25-2010, 02:31 PM
ya know that proves alot of things :D

weakfingers
05-25-2010, 02:49 PM
Had the itch to paint so I got off my ass and tried to paint the sketch i posted higher up on the page.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3335/4639185683_6b2d186676.jpg

m+s
05-25-2010, 03:40 PM
nice squint

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-25-2010, 04:41 PM
Looks much better on paint squint props I retract my statement

btw, what did you use for the ff, looks like vampire violet(2g)

Zookyook
05-25-2010, 04:47 PM
those big fat highlights make it pop... like candy!

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-25-2010, 04:57 PM
squint, maybe next time try throwin a forcefield around the outline as well. itll clean up the outline and make it bolder.

youve got a lot of dead space between the faded aura and the outline.

Zookyook
05-25-2010, 05:10 PM
i think thats what he was goin for guy... that space in between basically IS the outline, the purple would be like a background yanno?

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-25-2010, 05:20 PM
i understand that. im sayin a thin forcefield would clean it up an make it pop. im not sayin kill all or even a lot of the negative space.

weakfingers
05-25-2010, 05:47 PM
Thanks everyone, I wanted to do a disconnected force this time for fun, Ill do a solid force field next time. and the colour I used was "Blue Violet" from the montana black line

I GOT CLOUT
05-25-2010, 05:55 PM
Thats prolly the best thing Ive seen from you, squint. even though I havent seen much. So, good job. And ill do that exchange, even though im not stoked about your letters, haha.

mister
05-25-2010, 07:43 PM
damn squint shits pretty ill. i would just work on the bars and make your forcefield touch the outline and make it solid instead of fade, i'd like to see how that looks.

one more thing that extention on the "u" doesnt seem to fit the letter structure if u take that off that shit is super nice, great job though

Alts13
05-25-2010, 08:06 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0026.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0023.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0022.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0021.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0018.jpg

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-25-2010, 08:37 PM
http://i47.tinypic.com/hs15c7.jpg
shhhh.....

Phillip McDougall
05-25-2010, 08:46 PM
Altssss! You're back!

woonybomber
05-25-2010, 08:49 PM
shit is dope im juss not feeling the thing on the top of the s

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-25-2010, 08:54 PM
ya just tryin diffrent shit out...got sick of the simplicity

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-25-2010, 08:58 PM
maybe make the hole in your R a bit bigger. the middle bar that connects the kick to the R looks a little thick to me. try lowering the middle bar of your A a bit too, itll even out the deadspace a bit.

woonybomber
05-25-2010, 09:00 PM
and space out the thing on the s and it will look better the e is fresh i dont got nottin to say bout it

I GOT CLOUT
05-25-2010, 09:18 PM
Alts...fuckin killin it man. That Bolsak is beyond fresh.
Sear...The S and R killed it for me man. E and A look on point though.

Squint, I drew your name anyway...got bored.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/2bc3abe3-1.jpg

And bump my own shit since I keep drawin shit for battles that just get closed.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/1d97876e.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/ebd114cc.jpg

KillzOne
05-25-2010, 11:13 PM
http://i47.tinypic.com/hs15c7.jpg
shhhh.....

What kind of shit is this...........Look to me like a some one who trys a little toooo hard at GRAFFITI, haha, look at this dude alts attempting EURO stryle or what ever you bustas call it........Clout is about the only decent thing I've seen on these pages soooo far

KillzOne
05-25-2010, 11:15 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-24_1331.jpg

This would have been semi decent but with the amount of generic bites on this shit made it mad dumb to look at

Sesh-it-up
05-26-2010, 12:33 AM
skwint the high lights are hurrtt but i like the style/ colorssss

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-26-2010, 07:23 AM
ayo kills you faggot fucker who are you where you from what you write do you get up? do you have any type of can control do you have ne friends either comin on here actin like that u must be pissed off or is that cuz i cummed all up in your moms twat???
also alts would prolly poop on you...you obv have been doing graffiti for bout 3 months n your stepfather beats you cuz your gothic,fat and got hiv from fatbitch you fucked at a rave
and do you really write killz?haha i wish i could just see this kid so i could fuck you up and piss in your mouth and possibly i might just fuck you to watch your asshole rip and might even visit you in the hospital while its gettin all stitched up......hmmm

EST2007
05-26-2010, 08:03 AM
ayo kills you faggot fucker who are you where you from what you write do you get up? do you have any type of can control do you have ne friends either comin on here actin like that u must be pissed off or is that cuz i cummed all up in your moms twat???
also alts would prolly poop on you...you obv have been doing graffiti for bout 3 months n your stepfather beats you cuz your gothic,fat and got hiv from fatbitch you fucked at a rave
and do you really write killz?haha i wish i could just see this kid so i could fuck you up and piss in your mouth and possibly i might just fuck you to watch your asshole rip and might even visit you in the hospital while its gettin all stitched up......hmmm

whoa dude, its the internets. who cares where/when/what this dude writes. who cares about his can control?! I'm sure alts can stand up for himself.

dont get all worked up cuz someone doesnt like your work. u cant please everyone.

Inlyn08
05-26-2010, 08:29 AM
Had the itch to paint so I got off my ass and tried to paint the sketch i posted higher up on the page.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3335/4639185683_6b2d186676.jpg

Just figured I'd ask..
What's the deal with the random yellow.. thing? Under your S? Like it though.

Inlyn08
05-26-2010, 08:36 AM
ayo kills you faggot fucker who are you where you from what you write do you get up? do you have any type of can control do you have ne friends either comin on here actin like that u must be pissed off or is that cuz i cummed all up in your moms twat???
also alts would prolly poop on you...you obv have been doing graffiti for bout 3 months n your stepfather beats you cuz your gothic,fat and got hiv from fatbitch you fucked at a rave
and do you really write killz?haha i wish i could just see this kid so i could fuck you up and piss in your mouth and possibly i might just fuck you to watch your asshole rip and might even visit you in the hospital while its gettin all stitched up......hmmm
http://static.rcgroups.com/forums/attachments/2/2/8/3/8/3/a2958010-37-obamam-lol-y-u-mad-tho.jpg

weakfingers
05-26-2010, 09:32 AM
The rest of my letters where all taller then the S and Q so i just threw it under there to just make the proportion of the piece match up.

Scream Out
05-26-2010, 09:38 AM
random sketch i got into while my ps3 was updating
lots of flaws but it was just a quick little simp to break away from my boring old letters for a sec
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo524.jpg

squint that shits come a looooong way man, its looking real nice now

alts allways nice to see what you've been up too, that uncoloured sketch inspired me

clout you have some solid simples man, a real nice place to work from. more so the battle sketches. you should push it a little farther and maybe add a few breaks and maybe an extension or two? looks good though

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-26-2010, 11:26 AM
it was the heat of the moment it was 7 15 in the mornin n like 90 degrees and plus i cant stand little faggots on this site but its all good
ima jus have to ground him tonight when i go see his sexy ass mom but shes a heroin addict =/

Epoc
05-26-2010, 01:40 PM
random sketch i got into while my ps3 was updating
lots of flaws but it was just a quick little simp to break away from my boring old letters for a sec
http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo524.jpg

squint that shits come a looooong way man, its looking real nice now

alts allways nice to see what you've been up too, that uncoloured sketch inspired me

clout you have some solid simples man, a real nice place to work from. more so the battle sketches. you should push it a little farther and maybe add a few breaks and maybe an extension or two? looks good though

listening to this song (im addicted to) as i saw you sketch. they fit perfectly http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xo5AoDz33U4

loookn tight bud. only thing that doesnt really fit is the tiny extendor or break at the end of the first e

dave the pirate
05-26-2010, 03:59 PM
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs302.snc3/28700_10150182117230014_532660013_12770451_7488390 _n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs322.snc3/28700_10150182117245014_532660013_12770453_4021453 _n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs302.snc3/28700_10150182117215014_532660013_12770449_6162028 _n.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
05-26-2010, 04:06 PM
Yo Blunt NO Beef man, I can see progress but not a lot. To me it seems like your progressing but super slowly...I dont know why tho, might just be me man. But yo check it I know some ppl who have been rockin the same outlines for ever and their shit is MAD CLEAN bro. But yo keep at it peace

Aever....I like that man its somethin different it reminds me of Augor just cause of the

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-26-2010, 04:15 PM
word ya well i think what people dont understand on this website is because your sketch is sloppy or you letters aint the best but once again these are prolly the kids who dont paint a single thing besides their school bathrooms with deco markers but anyways back to my point....even tho you might not have some crazy wild style but you can rock solid thick simps which i love and if you actually can paint and have some dope can control you can make that simp look like some saber shit.....but people aint to smart on here so that shit just gets me heated na mean but its all good nikkas
and that last peice with all the extensions n shit was pretty new to me...i stick to nice solid rockers usually
but still kills can lick my dick with his momzzzz

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-26-2010, 06:07 PM
zonerrrrr
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/151/l_77e6c0f4e3dc49b6a760b1cecddf834c.jpg

Epoc
05-26-2010, 06:24 PM
^^sick

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/7773/dsc01403c.jpg

welly ass coloring. was going to go all out for fun then realized how bleedy sketch paper is compared to the proper stuff. pretty wack all in all.

okae -minus most of the junk and keep going with it. O reminds me of alts. (ps. i hate those colours. not that it matters)
tez - perfect post to prove what blunt was saying

Flawless Victory
05-26-2010, 06:42 PM
yer Z looks sort of like an L to me.

AteskOne
05-26-2010, 08:00 PM
^agreed. the I is too wide also.

Epoc
05-26-2010, 08:06 PM
^agreed

and

^also agreed. that or the E isnt wide enough.

spacing increases towards the end. got some shit to do but ill repost later on.

appreciate the crits gents.

dave the pirate
05-26-2010, 08:33 PM
yo can i get som crits on my peice above, theres not many writers where i reside and id like som feed back ight 1

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-26-2010, 08:39 PM
okae you got some decent shit but the letter are lackin...you got decent can control tho you 3D is off ina couple spots but besides that its straight son
also the color scheme is kinda yucky...big turn off to me anyways

dave the pirate
05-26-2010, 08:44 PM
thanks yo, yeah it turned out differnt from the sketch just started flowning, i noticed the 3d was off too theres always next time, This was my 3rd peice ever painted so ima keep knockin em out ight peace

weakfingers
05-26-2010, 11:58 PM
Scream - your fuzzy letters are fucking amazing
Tezer- Looks so sick

This page is going pretty well... Hope I dont mess it up.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4068/4641727155_d2825612a9_b.jpg

Epoc
05-27-2010, 12:39 AM
squint - hard working my man. top portion of S is weird with no gap at all. and T looks a little out of place with the amount of space you give the bars. but thats a tough letter combo to work with. keep going.

feeling what aever had and alts and tez with the drips. forgot how gay 3-d is especially to keep a consistent 2-tone freehanding. no excuses though.

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/7743/dsc01405is.jpg

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-27-2010, 07:02 AM
deff keep fuckin with it shits straight, but your 3d is kinda off

Stuck
05-27-2010, 07:39 AM
squint i like ur shit but the only thing that bugs me is your letters seem to flow the same way a throwie would.....i mean if you where to round off some corners it could easily turn into a throw....its hard to explain but its still good non the less maybe try thinking about the negative space as well as the positive space

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-27-2010, 04:10 PM
fucking around.



http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/116/l_965668da044f4f94bea5038d999fd8b5.jpg
i like this color scheme better.


http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/142/l_aa7a182085de4051862f403544cc9d3b.jpg

siler- nice simple shit maybe for the time being keep all your letters the same size throughout and i like my letters not so spaced out but somewhat overlapping. your on the right track.
squint- define your q more if i didnt know you wrote squint it would be hard to tell. give your letters a little bit more space. dead space is legit play with it. keep it up homie.
okae- good effort. lose the arrows for now, keep it simple your letters can have funk with out a bunch of arrows your letters are decent but you can make them solid. keep it simple, keep painting.

Epoc
05-27-2010, 04:45 PM
siler- nice simple shit maybe for the time being keep all your letters the same size throughout and i like my letters not so spaced out but somewhat

lol fuck obviously the changes to the "Z" from the previous one werent enough. yeh ill try one with 1 main bar length, gooo idear.

tez - sick again. im liking the purple yellow more myself. only thing id say is the two bars of Z hide a bit much. they almost look attached like and 8

AteskOne
05-27-2010, 06:25 PM
nice shit tezr. loving those fills. the two fills look identical too bro. good fucking work.

edit* i'ma make up a bunch of slaps tonight and i'll send you some pics. my bad it's taking me so long. been having writers block like a mother fucker.

dave the pirate
05-27-2010, 06:38 PM
Thanks for the crits everyone,

A canvas me and my homie are working on

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs322.snc3/28700_10150182138875014_532660013_12771196_1094645 _n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs302.snc3/28700_10150182138880014_532660013_12771197_3685877 _n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs322.snc3/28700_10150182138905014_532660013_12771198_6898850 _n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs331.ash1/28700_10150182138915014_532660013_12771199_6268137 _n.jpg

Fineshed flick later

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-27-2010, 07:36 PM
Okae-The O is probly the only good solid letter, no hate just my opinion, and that's only because of the arrows

ibchivas1
05-28-2010, 12:55 AM
http://img17.imageshack.us/g/27873130001370343553100.jpg/

.od.
05-28-2010, 02:46 AM
yo okae hit me up with a pm if u the same okae from edmonton

Stuck
05-28-2010, 07:09 AM
duno if im good enough for this section yet u guys tell me
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10-3.jpg

lord_plankton
05-28-2010, 07:19 AM
yeah , id say yes but why you put the bricks on top of your e`s ?? and h is too small...

Stuck
05-28-2010, 07:21 AM
duno i was bored so i just started cramming shit in there aha and ye i know the H is small i made it that way im tryna play with sizing, extensions add ons etc

massacreman
05-28-2010, 09:15 AM
im seeing everyone progress, really good job all of you.

no sarcasm

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-28-2010, 01:57 PM
here- pretty nice man ,lose the arrows amd the random things above the e's. space your letters out some more and keep playing with the little add ons you got going ie. the swirl the lnibs on your letters.


goofly letters. i know.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/133/l_8bea1ba1f89e498183803c58f4cd6b22.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
05-28-2010, 02:01 PM
nice shit tezr. loving those fills. the two fills look identical too bro. good fucking work.

edit* i'ma make up a bunch of slaps tonight and i'll send you some pics. my bad it's taking me so long. been having writers block like a mother fucker.

thats cause they were identical. haha, it was the same flick...he just tweaked the color settings.

Alts13
05-28-2010, 05:00 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0028.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0029.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0030.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
05-28-2010, 06:16 PM
Here - Thats pretty nice man. Letters are solid. I actually dont hate the arrows, which you wont hear me say a lot.
Tezer - I just cant dig that R man. Otherwise, solid.
Alts - With the first one, on the 3D, it looks straight in itself, but when all the cracks and jagged edges dont correlate into the letters it makes it look misplaced, you know?

Fucksin around
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/660cc3ee.jpg

AteskOne
05-28-2010, 07:36 PM
duno if im good enough for this section yet u guys tell me
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10-3.jpg
i say yes. i'm feeling this. the R could use some work tho.

thank god bigdaddy alts is back around to clean this thread up.

DukeOne
05-28-2010, 08:48 PM
Alts the 3d on that Welcome to Paradise piece is absolutely insaineee

Playing around with some Rembrandt and his Anatomy Lesson of Dr Tulp
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture105-1.jpg

Phillip McDougall
05-29-2010, 12:20 AM
That E's a little too covered up, but the rest of the letters are sickkkkk.

ESKiMO2
05-29-2010, 10:22 AM
i dedded the piece i was doing for my girl wen i fucked up the coloring and i did this one...

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/148/a/e/Lindsey_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

aesop rock

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/134/c/0/Aesop_Rock_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

o yea alts is killin it
tezer is always on some fresh shit
here is looking good

edit...

some sketches i got going

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2750/dsc03035m.jpg

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/1130/dsc03034xe.jpg

Stuck
05-29-2010, 10:45 AM
i listen to aesop wen im high and i honest just trip to the shit he says

funhouseXcast
05-29-2010, 11:02 AM
i listen to aesop all the time and i don't even smoke and I still trip on the shit he says.

Bilnek
05-29-2010, 11:31 AM
alts duke and eskimo are for dis thread....rest of you toy bb
just look at the first 5 pages and you will c what im talkin 'bout

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/theesoone.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/bilnofhilche.png

old stuff....just to post something :D :D

Stuck
05-29-2010, 11:55 AM
not really feeling that style

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-29-2010, 02:23 PM
eskimo- heat.
esoe- i got a homie over here that writes esoe, keep developing that style.

some bullshit.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/126/l_944f67c445d94b71884a7c82599dd6ee.jpg
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/135/l_b7b65b6dafff4200924c086151835288.jpg
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/129/l_7bf70a81b93046c28b965931affe0201.jpg
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/139/l_d1ae9ca85b6d424c94eb678c0c4101c3.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/119/l_7d98fc30a5594a5885a53e6cc4161fe6.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/148/l_3d445274a2c44738ae2ae3fb9d6e691a.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/150/l_bb61b4a65a714f14bf7a5377ca9d3eb2.jpg

pleasedontstayr
05-29-2010, 03:13 PM
alts just fucking murdered that page.

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
05-29-2010, 04:12 PM
i feel like duke killed it more.....and what

Bilnek
05-29-2010, 04:14 PM
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoetrikkk.png

school work

LeaksOne
05-29-2010, 04:37 PM
STILL need to fix those E's.

RES4
05-29-2010, 04:46 PM
i think the s is worse

I GOT CLOUT
05-29-2010, 07:20 PM
Esoe, I think you need to worry more about your letters then callin people out and tellin em to go to the toy thread. Cause the same thing could be said for you.


out of town and have no colors.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/4b5b66b6.jpg

DukeOne
05-29-2010, 07:58 PM
Haha Blunted

I don't know why you guys are so hard on Esoe, the kids got style and some flair, and in that last sketch i finally see some progress being made. Res4 i really don't anything wrong with that S...

Esoe if you took the top section of your Es (< This Part) and rotated it even 10 degrees to the left it would work a lot better. Just my 2 cents

KillzOne
05-29-2010, 10:28 PM
Esoe, I think you need to worry more about your letters then callin people out and tellin em to go to the toy thread. Cause the same thing could be said for you.


out of town and have no colors.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/4b5b66b6.jpg

Your simps are love or hate IMO but they are better than 98% of the shit that is gettin postin in the bonk thread

Scream Out
05-30-2010, 02:58 AM
eskimo - good sjit man im feelin it
bilnek - niceshit man its nice to see you do something else but id like to see you try somethig outiside your comfort zone man
clout, nice somps but id like to seeem you do something diffierent for a change

haha sorry for the drunkin cits dudes, gnight

Bilnek
05-30-2010, 06:26 AM
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/zejeni.png

still no colors :/
tried somthing wit the e's but that ain't what i wan't....so ill post stuff wit these letters untill i fix em

dangeri
05-30-2010, 07:47 AM
I like the general idea of those e's bud, all of that style (with varios tweaks) are nice, I like the s from the blue one above more, but it's the o's I'm not too keen on, like your style overall tho man, good shit!

Stuck
05-30-2010, 08:33 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo12-2.jpg

dave the pirate
05-30-2010, 04:37 PM
older... THAT HERE IS FUCKIN ON POINT!

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs036.snc3/12417_10150110988340014_532660013_11550510_1149504 _n.jpg

MoganOne
05-30-2010, 06:22 PM
Nice Pig character bro

dave the pirate
05-30-2010, 07:16 PM
qausimoto my dude

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/47/Quasimoto.gif

I GOT CLOUT
05-30-2010, 07:47 PM
Esoe on the green peice, the second E is way hidden and needs to come out more right. The S might look better if you add a another bar at the top of it to help kill some of that negative space. And your arrows are coming out of completely nowhere. It helps the flow of the peice if you can find a way to make them break off from the letters instead of coming from behind them or whatever theyre doing, as if it was all connected. you know what im trying to say?

Here - The top half of the second E needs to lean more right. It would help the balance and kill some of the negative space over there. Also in accordance with what Guyer said in the toybb that shit will look legit.

Okae - I still say lose the arrows, but for the letters, The K needs the most work. The right leg of the A needs to swing out some more to the right cause right now it just looks all smushed.



Oh...and did anyone wanna do an exchange maybe? and possibly knock it out tonight?

I GOT CLOUT
05-30-2010, 11:34 PM
Exchange with amends, not diggin my E.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/6b15facd.jpg

GuyGuyer of Guyland
05-30-2010, 11:36 PM
nice letters bro, feelin the I

ILL STREET BLUES
05-30-2010, 11:47 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/blueangels.jpg quick sketch not inked. blue angels baby!

Amends_Ego
05-30-2010, 11:51 PM
Xchange with clout, all my art shits packed up and im getting ready to dip so I wont be able to outline right meow. heres my sketch though
http://i46.tinypic.com/smfzw7.jpg
and before I get burned I know this isnt my place

Edit: mad flash on the stainless steel, my bad. ill get a better pic up laaatterr tonight, maybe ink'd outline if im sober enough.

Edit 2: danm that flash makes it almost unseeable heres a better one.
http://i46.tinypic.com/wbdk77.jpg

cocacola
05-30-2010, 11:59 PM
yo bilnek i personally think your shit is experienced bro
and clout n ego , nice simple
i got real bored
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4044/4654532595_144d48fcac_b.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
05-31-2010, 01:07 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5d623ced.jpg

Amends_Ego
05-31-2010, 01:26 AM
fresh shit clout, is that a one line handy? only crit is the leg of the R is awkward. After I ink this exchange im gonna throw it on toybb and it'd be great if you could crit me. I really like what youve got to say for other people.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-31-2010, 02:10 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/blueangels.jpg quick sketch not inked. blue angels baby!

Feeling it.

AteskOne
05-31-2010, 09:04 AM
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoetrikkk.png

school work


http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/zejeni.png

still no colors :/
tried somthing wit the e's but that ain't what i wan't....so ill post stuff wit these letters untill i fix em
man yall are a bunch of haters. i'm seeing mad progression. the E's may be a little off still but i like how you're not changing them despite endless heckling. i see you gotta very specific style you want to develope and you're gunna keep at it no matter what these kids keep telling you. i respect that. your O's are fucking steezin man. that blue S is sick too. also you're starting to get your extensions down correctly. i see some real nice stuff coming from you in the near future. keep at it.

DieHippie
05-31-2010, 10:43 AM
hell yea ur O's are crucial

pic for tlkn
http://i47.tinypic.com/22nksx.jpg
shitter fone pic
says Scitz

I GOT CLOUT
05-31-2010, 12:35 PM
fresh shit clout, is that a one line handy? only crit is the leg of the R is awkward. After I ink this exchange im gonna throw it on toybb and it'd be great if you could crit me. I really like what youve got to say for other people.

Nah its not a one liner. Although, its one connection away from being one. But preciate the crits. And yeah man, ill give my two cents whenever I see it.

idk401
05-31-2010, 12:55 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/125029.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/124940.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/124959.jpg

a new name im trying out crits??

H薌bN
05-31-2010, 01:04 PM
Easer your shits gay man, ya fuckin fruit bat. go die. :)

fromthegrave
06-01-2010, 05:57 AM
idk- those simple letters like the z e and s in the first one are fuckin legit. then it looks like u tried, then sucked. do simples. u'll kill it.

ease- wtf man.. what happend to ur other style? not likin this one at alllll

I GOT CLOUT
06-01-2010, 12:23 PM
Haha calm down man. I was just pumpin a bunch of shit out Sunday night and was tryin different shit. Nothing permanent.

RES4
06-01-2010, 12:39 PM
okze- its pronounced like oaks right? if it is its a good name
i would work on that bottom sketch, i think it has more potential than the middle one. the letters are a bit too broke up tho

i dont know if i belong here or not

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4028/4659908723_6033d1dac0.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4070/4660530972_babd825b24.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4049/4659909569_27afcde03c.jpg

I GOT CLOUT
06-01-2010, 01:31 PM
I'm not gonna be the one to say if you do or not but your k's need work. The one on the third piece shows some progress though.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
06-01-2010, 01:35 PM
that bottom kick on that 3rd K looks liek a machete blade, forreal. put the top bar of the 3rd K into the bottom bar

aka make connect, dont place em on top of each other like that

sinkilla1
06-01-2010, 01:42 PM
new shit
http://i47.tinypic.com/21949e9.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/i6zecg.jpg

weakfingers
06-01-2010, 01:49 PM
Those kinda look like ball sacks hanging from your first picture and I think your asking for redicule on the streets with a name like that.

sinkilla1
06-01-2010, 01:53 PM
not mone lol

weakfingers
06-01-2010, 02:15 PM
What? That last comment made no sense. Having a dumb name is setting yourself up for fast ridicule with other writers in your hood.

GuyGuyer of Guyland
06-01-2010, 02:20 PM
moan isnt really a stupid name, ive seen a lot worse. but mone has been writin since the 80s or some shit and is a new york style king.

so i wouldnt use the name solely for that reason

Bilnek
06-01-2010, 02:36 PM
its hard 2 be a 7thgrader :D
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esou.png



sinkilla- first one is pretty ugly...remove the nutsacks from it and it would be nicer
i dig the 2nd one...u have a nice style

asper don't just do simples...try to do something more sometimes (tho your simps are good)

sinkilla1
06-01-2010, 03:23 PM
moan isnt a stupid name lol and yeah i know mone big head dont really care to much and the 1st one is a bad picture the nuts saks are so much better from far away :)

Watfe
06-01-2010, 03:26 PM
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv307/Catterack/Picture3.png

GuyGuyer of Guyland
06-01-2010, 03:33 PM
you should care, he's been doin his thing prolly before you were born. its a shame when you put in 20+ years of work an some kid comes an jocks your name like a punk.

iunno, just how i feel. he may not care cuz he has better things goin on, but it looks wack in my eyes. my 2 cents

anyways, work on the flow of your individual letters. the bars are too forced and the angles dont look that good. your second A could be mistake as an R because of how the A is bent. youre neglecting your O a lot, youre working on the other letters but your still rockin a straight circle, not much style or advancement there in comparison to the other letters. try using the right side of your M in reverse style on the left as well. its half developed in my eyes, keep workin on it. your not that bad

Bilnek
06-01-2010, 03:34 PM
watfe thats fresh :D :D
wanna exchange?

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
06-01-2010, 03:35 PM
ehh the letters are ok i guess
didnt put to much time into it im geussin but its straight just keep fuckin with the letters a lil more

sinkilla1
06-01-2010, 03:44 PM
no i care i didnt jok his name i had no clue until i looked up the name moan and i saw mone didnt really think much the same

Watfe
06-01-2010, 04:01 PM
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv307/Catterack/Picture3.png
uh redo

weakfingers
06-01-2010, 04:16 PM
I dont really like that kinda style although it looks cool. I like the oldschool legible simple ish. I see where your going and it looks cool but its getting kinda hip and illedgible in some areas. I cant really read it.
All i can see is tom-b/z/e -ter.

Just keep working at that style if its what you wanna do and itill develope, theres nothing I can really crit cept for just keep working at it, its not bad but its not amazing.

Watfe
06-01-2010, 04:34 PM
Tomas

weakfingers
06-01-2010, 04:39 PM
I kinda see it now, just tone down the hip abit in the A and S. Looks good though.

Watfe
06-01-2010, 04:54 PM
its funny that you say that, because i feel the need to tell you to make your letters less generic...

AteskOne
06-01-2010, 04:56 PM
the A's fine. the M and the S need to be fixed. here's a really crude idea of what i would do to fix it...
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/3636/picture3nh.png (http://img718.imageshack.us/i/picture3nh.png/)

GuyGuyer of Guyland
06-01-2010, 04:57 PM
your S is buggin the fuck out, it looks like a B or something. other than that, its real dope an the letters are bangin

here, perhaps you may liek this

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9219/tomasf.png (http://img63.imageshack.us/i/tomasf.png/)

an the little Z in the M is kinna wierd. but dosent really disguise the letters too much

Bazer
06-01-2010, 05:04 PM
bilnek down for an exchange?

-Wings-
06-01-2010, 05:42 PM
I havent been on this site for a bit, and the quality of this thread has just gotten worse. But thats all you can expect for a intermeidate thread. Heres a pic of something I drew here at my friends house, ill upload some more pics of some stuff when I get my computer working.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01062010_00000.jpg
Cheers ;D!

BlacktodaFuture
06-01-2010, 05:58 PM
seyor is back!!!!!! yay!

unsuccsessfull
06-01-2010, 06:57 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/108_2646.jpg
quik simple, been lazy
feelin that sey

DukeOne
06-01-2010, 10:56 PM
Sey and Zone sittin pretty

Exchange for Kater, wish i had a fine point gold pen, but this will have to do for now. hopefully you guys can make out some of the letters haha
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture134-1.jpg

GuyGuyer of Guyland
06-01-2010, 11:04 PM
not feelin the A, but you got such a crazy style goin on, i love it. untouchable flow, like water. would be doper if the bottom of the spine on your K streatched out to the left to balance the kick on the R. know what imsayin?

Phillip McDougall
06-01-2010, 11:09 PM
Your crits were what mine were going to be exactly..

I'm never one for lowercase A's, especially in wildstyles.

dave the pirate
06-01-2010, 11:44 PM
FUCK ZONER DOING BIG TINGS, i still owe you a peice gotta get on it