Intermediate Thread. {BlackBook,Throwies,Exchanges, and Painted work) Flicks>Talk

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

that bottom kick on that 3rd K looks liek a machete blade, forreal. put the top bar of the 3rd K into the bottom bar

aka make connect, dont place em on top of each other like that

[sinkilla1]

new shit
http://i47.tinypic.com/21949e9.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/i6zecg.jpg

[weakfingers]

Those kinda look like ball sacks hanging from your first picture and I think your asking for redicule on the streets with a name like that.

[sinkilla1]

not mone lol

[weakfingers]

What? That last comment made no sense. Having a dumb name is setting yourself up for fast ridicule with other writers in your hood.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

moan isnt really a stupid name, ive seen a lot worse. but mone has been writin since the 80s or some shit and is a new york style king.

so i wouldnt use the name solely for that reason

[Bilnek]

its hard 2 be a 7thgrader :D
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esou.png



sinkilla- first one is pretty ugly...remove the nutsacks from it and it would be nicer
i dig the 2nd one...u have a nice style

asper don't just do simples...try to do something more sometimes (tho your simps are good)

[sinkilla1]

moan isnt a stupid name lol and yeah i know mone big head dont really care to much and the 1st one is a bad picture the nuts saks are so much better from far away :)

[Watfe]

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv307/Catterack/Picture3.png

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

you should care, he's been doin his thing prolly before you were born. its a shame when you put in 20+ years of work an some kid comes an jocks your name like a punk.

iunno, just how i feel. he may not care cuz he has better things goin on, but it looks wack in my eyes. my 2 cents

anyways, work on the flow of your individual letters. the bars are too forced and the angles dont look that good. your second A could be mistake as an R because of how the A is bent. youre neglecting your O a lot, youre working on the other letters but your still rockin a straight circle, not much style or advancement there in comparison to the other letters. try using the right side of your M in reverse style on the left as well. its half developed in my eyes, keep workin on it. your not that bad

[Bilnek]

watfe thats fresh :D :D
wanna exchange?

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

ehh the letters are ok i guess
didnt put to much time into it im geussin but its straight just keep fuckin with the letters a lil more

[sinkilla1]

no i care i didnt jok his name i had no clue until i looked up the name moan and i saw mone didnt really think much the same

[Watfe]

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv307/Catterack/Picture3.png
uh redo

[weakfingers]

I dont really like that kinda style although it looks cool. I like the oldschool legible simple ish. I see where your going and it looks cool but its getting kinda hip and illedgible in some areas. I cant really read it.
All i can see is tom-b/z/e -ter.

Just keep working at that style if its what you wanna do and itill develope, theres nothing I can really crit cept for just keep working at it, its not bad but its not amazing.

[Watfe]

Tomas

[weakfingers]

I kinda see it now, just tone down the hip abit in the A and S. Looks good though.

[Watfe]

its funny that you say that, because i feel the need to tell you to make your letters less generic...

[AteskOne]

the A's fine. the M and the S need to be fixed. here's a really crude idea of what i would do to fix it...
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/3636/picture3nh.png (http://img718.imageshack.us/i/picture3nh.png/)

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

your S is buggin the fuck out, it looks like a B or something. other than that, its real dope an the letters are bangin

here, perhaps you may liek this

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9219/tomasf.png (http://img63.imageshack.us/i/tomasf.png/)

an the little Z in the M is kinna wierd. but dosent really disguise the letters too much

[Bazer]

bilnek down for an exchange?

[-Wings-]

I havent been on this site for a bit, and the quality of this thread has just gotten worse. But thats all you can expect for a intermeidate thread. Heres a pic of something I drew here at my friends house, ill upload some more pics of some stuff when I get my computer working.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01062010_00000.jpg
Cheers ;D!

[BlacktodaFuture]

seyor is back!!!!!! yay!

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/108_2646.jpg
quik simple, been lazy
feelin that sey

[DukeOne]

Sey and Zone sittin pretty

Exchange for Kater, wish i had a fine point gold pen, but this will have to do for now. hopefully you guys can make out some of the letters haha
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture134-1.jpg

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

not feelin the A, but you got such a crazy style goin on, i love it. untouchable flow, like water. would be doper if the bottom of the spine on your K streatched out to the left to balance the kick on the R. know what imsayin?

[Phillip McDougall]

Your crits were what mine were going to be exactly..

I'm never one for lowercase A's, especially in wildstyles.

[dave the pirate]

FUCK ZONER DOING BIG TINGS, i still owe you a peice gotta get on it

[DukeOne]

not feelin the A, but you got such a crazy style goin on, i love it. untouchable flow, like water. would be doper if the bottom of the spine on your K streatched out to the left to balance the kick on the R. know what imsayin?

Ya man I know exactly what u mean, and i would kicked out the K more, but it was on the edge of the paper and didn't feeling like adding another sheet haha. Appreciate the crits man

The A unfortunately got a bit lost from the K, it is a capital A however

[(SoS)Viruz]

Ya man I know exactly what u mean, and i would kicked out the K more, but it was on the edge of the paper and didn't feeling like adding another sheet haha. Appreciate the crits man

The A unfortunately got a bit lost from the K, it is a capital A however

Yo we got to exchange.....after I get some stuff done Im going to hit you up

[unsuccsessfull]

FUCK ZONER DOING BIG TINGS, i still owe you a peice gotta get on it
word holmes im gonado u up another one you too duke and seyor just for fun that kater sketch is baddasss and tha t is bangin
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/108_2635.jpg
a Z
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00103.jpg

[Mister.Miyagi]

some demor sketches i did a while ago but im just getting around to uploading them... give me some crits on these bitches... bump that zoner.. and im down for an exchange with whom ever.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/8357/114ht.jpg

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/5734/124ap.jpg

http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/2353/087rk.jpg

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8597/075ev.jpg

http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/313/101ek.jpg

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

Damn zoner i dont get how you got the patience to sit there and do full peices like that on paper i get so bored of drawing.
Ive kinda quit usually just bust out freestyles when i paint

[Sesh-it-up]

holy fack zoner
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/108_2646.jpg
BUMMMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

[NoCanControl]

sey and zone, good shit.

just sketching letters, fucking coloring.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c22/xmm89/IMG-4.jpg

[unsuccsessfull]

that lower case A is bangin^
for SOS dontexpect anything back just boredand blunted gettin really baked crackin a nice cold brew n watchin two and a half men helps haha
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00104.jpg
that 3d demor sketch is savage

[I GOT CLOUT]

Dude...You have progressed an immense amount from when you first jumped on this site.

[Phillip McDougall]

What I've been working on.

http://i50.tinypic.com/2isbo6t.jpg
A shits and giggles sketch.

http://i45.tinypic.com/2wd3t49.jpg
Work in progress.

http://i46.tinypic.com/2im8dmo.jpg
Looking for trades if anyone's interested.

[AteskOne]

why the fuck arent you gettin down on the toss battles?

your letters are coming along nice. i would try to fatten them up a little bit tho. looking kinda skinny.

[Bilnek]

zoner u never did me a sketch 4 an exchange

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/zohner.png

[unsuccsessfull]

chea mang i did here
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00013.jpg

[Bilnek]

wow man thanks :D :D

sum new stuff

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/sinama.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoeone.png

[garbage down tha way]

geez unsuccess and demor and zoner. illmatic.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/smokecrack108.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/001.jpg

[TheToy]

Dope as always, Hoer.

Good looks on the extinguisher work. True destruction only for the big boys.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

this page looks dope as fuck. the skill on this shit blew my mind. i wouldnt consider anyone on this page a toy. so ill contribute

its a new style i more or less freestyled. couldnt finish it cuz i ran outta paint then it got dissed by the everyso up "fuck" and his characters of penis'

[Bilnek]

guyguyer you wanna exchange?

[Mister.Miyagi]

Damn guy that styles looking fresh as Fuck .. ill post some new shit soon

[(SoS)Viruz]

Tryin not to ruin this page lol but here:

http://i47.tinypic.com/zjxa45.jpg
^^^^Wish I had more Paint to clean out that E cause its hurtin mega bad...
http://i46.tinypic.com/t02ck6.jpg
The actual sketch befor hand^^^^

Might change meh name...IM not progressing.....Instead my name is forcing me to use this generic evil internet style....BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD lol

Hoer-NICE ups I peeped, Dope spot
Ras-New steez I see you workin with...

[AteskOne]

geez unsuccess and demor and zoner. illmatic.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/smokecrack108.jpg

bottom of the O is sketchy and i think the H could have been a little bigger. shits dope tho.

[lord_plankton]

why you guys do not at least do a thin layer of bucket paint on before you piece..and the e is quiet alright, r is way worse..and i mean you obviously wnat the i to have a diffrent style but i think it doesnt work so well..i would bring the d down because its flyin..

[KillzOne]

Tryin not to ruin this page lol but here:

http://i47.tinypic.com/zjxa45.jpg
^^^^Wish I had more Paint to clean out that E cause its hurtin mega bad...
http://i46.tinypic.com/t02ck6.jpg
The actual sketch befor hand^^^^

Might change meh name...IM not progressing.....Instead my name is forcing me to use this generic evil internet style....BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD lol

Hoer-NICE ups I peeped, Dope spot
Ras-New steez I see you workin with...

Plakton are you dumb or retarded or just both..... the R is way better than the E.......Just look how off the E is.....Also the D is fine its top level with the rest of the letter and works nice,the I is the same style...Just colored different to make it pop more.

What I would say is Fix your Kick on your R, dont ever use that E again in your life.....and maybe make the D a little bigger.

But you dont have to have a roller to make a background cause if you paint enough you should be able to see your lines even if their is another piece under it...After a while you get use to painting on top of things.

But Vi, your name is holding you back I've seen better than this from you....Mabey its is time for a name change, just try to reframe from whack ness names and have a name that flows

IGHT IM OUT TO TROLL HERBS

[Bilnek]

wow man thanks :D :D

sum new stuff

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/sinama.png
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoeone.png



and sum new stuff http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/edna.png


go easy on the plankton....generally go easy on the retards

[RES4]

whats the first letter in that virus piece? the tag looks like a d.

esoe, i like the middle one apart from the way the s connects to the o and the arrows coming from the bottom of the last e

[I GOT CLOUT]

that mustve taken a minute

[Phillip McDougall]

Cool story, bro.

EDIT:


pussies*

[KillzOne]

A bitch their is a difference bettewn trollin for lolz and dumbassercy and you my friend are a dumb ass........Dont fill the thread with stupid shit like that.....Unless its either to help or whatever.......Me I talk shit to ppl and help them realize how dumb they are or how bad they are its my job....Your job is to get out of the toy thread and paint...
herb just cause he didnt exchange with you, and yo how long did it take you to post that.....did you just copy and paste....naw I think you are too dumb for that you seriously hand typed all of that out of ignorantcy....Was it really worth it was it fun?

[Flawless Victory]

HURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

DURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Fixed.

[KinkyStab]

bilnek that e.... :'(

http://i47.tinypic.com/2zdzzna.jpg
jus some shit i just whipped out of my sour cream filled asshole

[I GOT CLOUT]

battle
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/4e5c006a-1.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/6c7e1a4e.jpg

Kinky, I like the grey fade effects that came outta your sour cream filled asshole.

[Phillip McDougall]

http://i46.tinypic.com/99fko5.jpg
Rough draft. Any tips before mass production?

EDIT:
http://i46.tinypic.com/2yjstn4.jpg

Swirls or cloud?

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

guyguyer you wanna exchange?

yeah homie, ill do yours after i do the one i owe

[Sbal]

Those are some nice lookin brains

[LeaksOne]

Clouds, Brains.

[lord_plankton]

you should have entered this..i like the lil fatter letters..just the s not that much and its too small

battle
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/4e5c006a-1.jpg

[I GOT CLOUT]

Eh, I didn't like the fill or the kicks at the end of the R, K, A or how I had to cut off a lot of the last two letters. So I drew up that other one. Don't really like that one either after looking at it. :(

[gunone]

Sup is this good...tell me wat i need to improve on to
BReak the walls of toydom and this aint gun this is
his brother BLiss
BTW do i get pictures on here

[RES4]

no use tinypic or sumthing

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/235323.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/234308.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Clout on the bottom one fix the s and its solid as fuck.

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/235323.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/234308.jpg

bottom page bump.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Clout on the bottom one fix the s and its solid as fuck.

Yeah, I agree that the S is the worst letter. I was tryin to fit the flow of the B but just couldnt quite match it or make it look right. Preciate the crits man.

[NoCanControl]

idk401, is that an i? or k?.
o?ze
if its a k take this bar "<" and make it higher on this bar "|" aim it about one third from the top.

http://i49.tinypic.com/11izdwy.jpg

critts please.

[LeaksOne]

at a glance it looks like kars. and the A is pretty big

[NoCanControl]

ya, i definitely noticed that, the a should of somewhat resembled the s.

[DukeOne]

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture142-1.jpg

[ravine]

dear duke,

go paint, because your delineations are quite sensational.

i'm drunk.

goodnight internet.

your pal,
frankin delano roosevelt

[massacreman]

ahh cool, nothing better than posing about being drunk
nice duke, dope as always.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Duke...that's one of the illest things I've seen in a minute.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

dear duke,

go paint, because your delineations are quite sensational.

i'm drunk.

goodnight internet.

your pal,
frankin delano roosevelt

you spelt your name wrong homie

[Messer]

hi guys, i missed you

duke- you;ve come a long wayyy niceeeeeee.

i have drawn properly in a while, i'll do one for you guys tonighttttt

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100331_135037.jpg

[ravine]

FRANKLIN DELANO ROOSEVELT.


sorry massacreman, i get talkative.

yeah i'm that annoying guy..

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

yo messer, that shit looks wack even when its sideways. clean up your room.

[(SoS)Viruz]

^^^^^^^^Lmao I was just about to say somethin about the room lollolol

[massacreman]

FRANKLIN DELANO ROOSEVELT.


sorry massacreman, i get talkative.

yeah i'm that annoying guy..

i know right

Just a little something i did for school.
I set it private but this is a guest pass so you can still see it.

http://flickr.com/gp/ages_jemo/591P81

[AteskOne]

new style i've been trying to develope over the last couple weeks. still needs a lot of work.
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7121/getattachmentlest.jpg (http://img695.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentlest.jpg/)

[RES4]

i like but the e is a bit squished

[Messer]

yo messer, that shit looks wack even when its sideways. clean up your room.

i didnt claim it was good ;D

and not my room my mums spare room, i live on my own, and it's tidy .

[AteskOne]

i like but the e is a bit squished
yeah i agree. this was just a rough draft tho.

[StayHyE]

Sey and Zone sittin pretty

Exchange for Kater, wish i had a fine point gold pen, but this will have to do for now. hopefully you guys can make out some of the letters haha
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Picture134-1.jpg

bump duke what kind of pens/markers are you working with?

[Destroy2012]

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/4182/gahhh.png (http://img404.imageshack.us/i/gahhh.png/)

[AteskOne]

no.no.no.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

needs moar arrows

[AteskOne]

arrow swastikas? wtf?

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

thats hip hop

[NoCanControl]

fosho

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

new style i've been trying to develope over the last couple weeks. still needs a lot of work.
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7121/getattachmentlest.jpg (http://img695.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentlest.jpg/)

I see nothing wrong.
On point.

[AteskOne]

thanks tez. idk something doesnt look right. i'm gunna keep playing with it for a while.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

the top of the T comes out too much, it tricked me into believin it was an S till i read that tag

[AteskOne]

it's an ugly enough T. it would be hideous as an S.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

put more on the left side of it. balance it out

[AteskOne]

word. will do. it's all a little too compacted too. its needs some spacing. and maybe a few arrow swastikas. yeah that'll do the trick.

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

word on spacin it out more an let the 3D or drop shadow fill up the space in between the letters. the letters are ill though. feel that L

[BlacktodaFuture]

atesk, good improvement. keep it up.

[Messer]

newish flick, month or so old
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100507_172829.jpg

did this at my mums place today
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100607_224155.jpg
i know i need to make the bottom leg of the E extend further to the right.

atesk-i thought it said lost at first, your E is a bit squased there imo.

[FlippingChickens]

just stop doing that,i cant even read it

[Sbal]

It looks like sest, and it sure as hell aint workin

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

it says resp

[.od.]

bored not done will be in a minute gonna say slot.er or slotr
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Untitled.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/sloter.jpg

[LOPe_GCI]

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_3125.jpg
new steez. whatchyall negros think?

[Watfe]

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv307/Catterack/Photo28.jpg
work in progress

[LOPe_GCI]

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_3125.jpg
new steez. whatchyall negros think?

bottom page bump

[BlacktodaFuture]

newish flick, month or so old
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100507_172829.jpg

did this at my mums place today
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/100607_224155.jpg
i know i need to make the bottom leg of the E extend further to the right.

atesk-i thought it said lost at first, your E is a bit squased there imo.

bump. feelin this.

[Sbal]

Im not really likin skate or die

[AteskOne]

It looks like sest, and it sure as hell aint workin
it's a hell of a lot better than anything you can do.

just stop doing that,i cant even read it
try harder.

keep doing what your doing messer. i'm diggin the style.

destil- I'm feeling it. that D goes hard. i wanna see more.

[Sbal]

I know it is

[.od.]

bored not done will be in a minute gonna say slot.er or slotr
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/Untitled.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/sloter.jpg

bump
watfe-id fix that a

[.od.]

bored
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/isloter.jpg

[AteskOne]

I know it is
so why would you say it isnt working? she must be doing something right.

anyways. attempt number 2. changed a few things.
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4811/getattachmentlester.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentlester.jpg/)
still is a bit cramped at the begining and the T has too much space...and the T is mad ugly. i'm having difficulty getting the spacing right for this style. more practice i guess.

[Sbal]

I think the E could use a little more space

[weakfingers]

Okay,

Atesk-The E and the S need to be more tall and follow the postures of the L. The letter breaks are kinda distracting and the T is to stretched out. I see how your trying to mirror the L shape with it but thats not really working, It needs more flow and repition in letter forms. It looks really nice but thats just what i see when i really try to give it harsh crits, Put a nice drop shadow on that instead of a vanishing point.



Hows this S K U connection?

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/SDC19874.jpg

[Wreks]

Rough piece... crit away

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh95/thebomber13/DSC02370.jpg

[lord_plankton]

squint, dunno what to say to the connection...you sinmply connected em, wonder why you didnt connect all the letters that way,s and leg of k is not really suiting the style,in parts too thin n round compared to the uint..u has lots of dead space..mmh you could use two diff style for a sk - unit kinda pun thing..

wreks, i dont like how your using w as r backbone , id do k kinda like the r with a long leg and the short one bend to the left aswell, and last step is the get all the letters the same size. e really sticks out, too fat .

watfe why the hell do people show their stupid faces on here...

[Phillip McDougall]

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv307/Catterack/Photo28.jpg
work in progress

Claaaaaassy. I know that's you, though, Catterack.

I don't dig how the right part of the K isn't connected, while the rest stays together, it kind of fucks up the flow.

[KJay]

dope watfe adn atesk
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4685384266_2b4c872b0e.jpg

[weakfingers]

What He^ said plus him


new style?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/SDC19881.jpg

..yeah thats a cat

[Alts13]

meh, wasn't gonna use this forum anymore but I am bored so here are some recent sketches

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0032.jpg
Kees
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0031.jpg
NinjaJack for my son
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0029.jpg
Ozone
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0028.jpg
Alts Welcome to Paradise
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0027.jpg
vicer
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0023.jpg
Bolsak
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0022.jpg
Alts

[RES4]

the ozone and ninja jack are sick as fuck

[Messer]

kjay- mad diggin' that style, exchange?
wreks- it'd be dop if you fixed up the letter thickness and worked a bit more on the E, and didnt have those little thin bits and didn't use the rightmost leg of the W for the back leg of the R, just my two pennies.

for the fiance, she coloured it-
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/073.jpg

old but i like it.-
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/076.jpg

[KJay]

ye for sure messer ill exchange
henry

[BlacktodaFuture]

messer: lets exchange. im really feeling that style. what do you write?

-Safe

[Alts13]

I dunno I gotta say it seems to really lack structure, personally I wouldn't consider it intermediate. I would have to say to work on your letters, I can probably make out an M but other than that I wouldn't be able to say

[Messer]

i write resp.

exchanges for kjay and blacktodafuture comin' up.

[Hearr!]

I dunno I gotta say it seems to really lack structure, personally I wouldn't consider it intermediate. I would have to say to work on your letters, I can probably make out an M but other than that I wouldn't be able to say

mindgem heads have been telling her this for like 3 years now.

is it cool if I post in here? I write zbre.
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG_0001-21.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG-40.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG-41.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/Picture1226.jpg

would like crits on the last one if possible?

[BlacktodaFuture]

alts: understandable w. the structure idea, yet some of the things you do arn't considered letter structure yet it's still dope. i feel like if he continues the style and masters it then it will definitly be dope.

[Alts13]

it kinda reminds me of an early 90s west coast style that used to be rocked by people like Kems, I just think in order to progress the style and actually make it work it needs a fundamental basis with letter structure which at the moment it is lacking, not hating or anything, just trying to be constructive

personally I think everything I draw has a strong letter structure basis

[Alts13]

meh, wasn't gonna use this forum anymore but I am bored so here are some recent sketches

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0032.jpg
Kees
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0031.jpg
NinjaJack for my son
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0029.jpg
Ozone
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0028.jpg
Alts Welcome to Paradise
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0027.jpg
vicer
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0023.jpg
Bolsak
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0022.jpg
Alts

also bump this to a newpage as I post so rarely haha

[kringe]

lesbian marriage is legal in...wherever you are, resp?

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0034.jpg

also biro/sharpie freestyle in work

[mekosbc]

havent been on im maaaadddd long fuckin comp busted...ive been foolin around with another name beside meko (meckoh)...let me know whatcha think...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0065.jpg

[Sbal]

I would say make the bars on the H more even and I know you did that flip on the far side of the Y so it would flow, but it doesn't look as clean as it could.

[mekosbc]

yeah i see what you mean

[RES4]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1301/4685602393_395de61b33.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4031/4685602629_a6c3a866f3.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1285/4685539147_002be2ee05.jpg

ohmy- the fill is sick no doubt. i agree about the h, make the right bar follow the left and on the m the right bar annoys me, like the right bar and the inside bar should go higher you know what i mean

[Odysse]

alt13 your shits dope. your fills are clean. and aspek I like the last one. the melting letters are tight.

[BlacktodaFuture]

1st one is the best aspek

[Sbal]

Res4 the drips in the a look wierd to me. the other letters drip down but the A ones kinda blob sideways... i dunno

[mister]

^The A's drips are dripping down? It's a trick of the eye, I think.

[weakfingers]

Res-Your coming along way from the last time ive seen your shit. I really like the last one.


I've been dying to do a super trendy style/fill for fun and I just had to get it out.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1281/4689642512_f765278e8f_b.jpg

[idk401]

exchange for 401 SNOE
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/230004.jpg

Battle Piece RETRO against snoe nd code
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/230044.jpg

CRITIQUES!?!?

[AteskOne]

haha is that invader zim??? god damn that brings me back.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

I'm good friends with a sowut.
Aspek I'm digging. That ohmy is fly.
Alts exchange?

[pilerskee]

haha is that invader zim??? god damn that brings me back.

wickedest character designs in invader zim, funny show too..haha gir.

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo3-4.jpg

[Messer]

kjay- mad diggin' that style, exchange?
wreks- it'd be dop if you fixed up the letter thickness and worked a bit more on the E, and didnt have those little thin bits and didn't use the rightmost leg of the W for the back leg of the R, just my two pennies.

for the fiance, she coloured it-
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/073.jpg

old but i like it.-
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/076.jpg

bump.

and yeah, i'm working on my letter structure, my S is hurtin'.

also, yes lesbian marriage is legal, but it's called a "civil partnership".

exchanges up tonight.

[weakfingers]

Stuck, Looks nice, you in the 905?

Messer-Ugh, not really feeling it.


art fag bump


http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1281/4689642512_f765278e8f_b.jpg

[Stuck]

nine oh fiveeeeee *****hhh erryday

[weakfingers]

Then why havent i seen you up anywhere in the area. pm me.

[shalf]

F-fresh

[Stuck]

ur in the wrong thread go to the toy blackbooks bud

[MASE P_2s]

^^^ toy thread....

[shalf]

Soz guys :D

[I GOT CLOUT]

I'm good friends with a sowut.
Aspek I'm digging. That ohmy is fly.
Alts exchange?

Saw a couple sowut tags today while driving around. And that thots, hedake, torso highway barrier near downtown today. Andddd there's a new kids tribute right off 35 right in downtown. Right across from that green EH piece. Musta went up like two nights ago.

[idk401]

exchange for 401 SNOE
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/230004.jpg

Battle Piece RETRO against snoe nd code
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/230044.jpg

CRITIQUES!?!?

end of page and yes atesk invader zim was the shit!!

[lord_plankton]

haha invader zim still is the shit!!! filthy humans!!!! graffwise not bad..snoe, the s is to sharp on the bottom, i dont like the huge connectiong bar
retro..misplaced some letters..i dont like how you connect the letters..re et and so on

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Saw a couple sowut tags today while driving around. And that thots, hedake, torso highway barrier near downtown today. Andddd there's a new kids tribute right off 35 right in downtown. Right across from that green EH piece. Musta went up like two nights ago.
dallas is being revived with young talent i peeped an ease tag on a dumpster in the dallas area not to long ago.

my r's are weak.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/141/l_9c2b908d945044bd9632d62db2d740a6.jpg
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/130/l_b4798ef808e34a7e87a39d4fdb590af8.jpg
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/124/l_f99b115288324fba9690149abe473aec.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

meh, wasn't gonna use this forum anymore but I am bored so here are some recent sketches

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0032.jpg
Kees
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0031.jpg
NinjaJack for my son
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0029.jpg
Ozone
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0028.jpg
Alts Welcome to Paradise
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0027.jpg
vicer
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0023.jpg
Bolsak
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0022.jpg
Alts

fucking fuckity fuck.

alts you continue to make me cream my pants, colours are always dope and pieces are always so well put together, love the char's an shiit keep at it

[MoganOne]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1301/4685602393_395de61b33.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4031/4685602629_a6c3a866f3.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1285/4685539147_002be2ee05.jpg

ohmy- the fill is sick no doubt. i agree about the h, make the right bar follow the left and on the m the right bar annoys me, like the right bar and the inside bar should go higher you know what i mean

On the last one with the drips you should attempt making the 3D also come off of the drips... More Difficult but will look ill

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo1-4.jpg
crits on a new word?

[RES4]

On the last one with the drips you should attempt making the 3D also come off of the drips... More Difficult but will look ill

yea thats what i was planning to do. i did it on the p but i rushed it and just did it normally. if i get time i'l do it again

silo, theres too much space around the I

[MoganOne]

CEMO

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0612001609.jpg

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0612001628.jpg

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0612001658.jpg

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0612001752.jpg

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0612001831.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1281/4689642512_f765278e8f_b.jpg
That INT is what's up!

anyone want to exchange?

[Phillip McDougall]

I'm down, FV.

[Flawless Victory]

word. you write BRAINS, right?

[t.done]

something im working on...http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/ILOVEWEED_album/Picture002.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

something im working on...http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/ILOVEWEED_album/Picture002.jpg

I would say to this man, just loose the little things at the bottom of the letters and dont connect your last 2 letters. Other than that its a fresh simple man keep at it.

YO SQUINT...Man what can I say, Im liking your stuff..Not cuase its like super mege complexed but its simple. I noticed and I know a lot of other ppl have, what ever you sketch you can paint and that a good level to be at. Props man keep it up. AND nice ups

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo4-1.jpg

i can never get my mind around fancy colouring schemes

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo1-1.jpg

[Mutty Ranks]

make the hole either bigger or more to the left on your R

[Phillip McDougall]

word. you write BRAINS, right?
Yeah. What do I write for you?

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0612001831.jpg

Crits?

[Stuck]

heres a crit that i could use myself...try to make ur letters flow alittle more natural

[MoganOne]

Yeah I do need to work on my flow

[AteskOne]

need to work on everything. toy bb.

[Stuck]

somone toss me some crits on adding some style...not letter structs but like the little dodads and watnot.... like cuts into the letters etc is their a way or is it just how u feel like placing shit? crits appreciated

[FlippingChickens]

^i think you should just keep doing what your doing and ignore the dodads,the crome is without a doubt my favorite i have ever seen you do,paint that shit up!

[curlz]

curlzhttp://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5251/prettywellgraffiti.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/prettywellgraffiti.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[Flawless Victory]

Yeah. What do I write for you?
Just do a Flaw for me, man. Thanks.

[IlikePie]

curlzhttp://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5251/prettywellgraffiti.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/prettywellgraffiti.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

Easily the best thing on this page. You guys should be taking notes here.

[Sbal]

I got my pen and pad professor

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-4.jpg
piece for battle thread.

[Bilnek]

curlzhttp://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5251/prettywellgraffiti.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/prettywellgraffiti.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

watafuck???? how old are you?

redeyes-you should have colored only one letter gray...it would turn out better....and work on your handstyle...

mogan-good coloring but i don't like the c....

stuck- try and add 3d on your sketches

squint i like you :D :D

bored

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoetrikkk.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/edna.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/sinama.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/cow.jpg

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoue.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoeonesb.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe2.png

[AteskOne]

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoue.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoeonesb.png

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/esoe2.png
hell yes bilnek. these new E's are fucking dope. good shit bro.

[KJay]

bilnek did you paint that black and purple COW thing? dont get me wrong your sketches are proper, and definitely burn me, but paintin needs maad work

[Bilnek]

i need to paint more definetly
but in this ass of the world there is no good paint...sum italian crap and its expensive as hell

[Sesh-it-up]

dont blame thje cans.. your hands blow when it comes to paint, work with ny fats befor you fuck with stocks.

[weakfingers]

Word, Its the paints fault.. But in his defense some paints make it easier to paint cleaner shit with. Montana 94 is gold in a can.

All done with ny fats
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1293/4700001689_00e8f068a0_b.jpg

[KJay]

i need to paint more definetly
but in this ass of the world there is no good paint...sum italian crap and its expensive as hell

yea right on man not hatin or anything
as someone mentioned try using fat caps for your outlines, stocks are for when u have good can control

(like me cuz im the shit)

[SAID]

TruColorz?

[Hearr!]

squint, all are ridiculously fresh. here's some simple freestyle I whipped up for somebody? tell me if yuh like.
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/Picture12264.jpg

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

paint with stock tips. if you suck with em. get better.

[UKMAN]

http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1275658946869_f.jpg

[UKMAN]

http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274730895599_f.jpg

[UKMAN]

http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274662385563_f.jpg

[UKMAN]

http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274546388401_f.jpg

[UKMAN]

Roller paint Fill
http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274545865096_f.jpg

[UKMAN]

Roller paint fill
http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274454873766_f.jpg

[UKMAN]

roller paint fill.
http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274454672047_f.jpg
positive feed back and critisism welcome.

From England

[Bilnek]

i like the roller paint filled ones :D
wanna exchange?

[UKMAN]

i like the roller paint filled ones :D
wanna exchange?

ahh why not . what u right lad? al get it done for ya

[pilerskee]

hell yes bilnek. these new E's are fucking dope. good shit bro.

there sorta of more like 'c's no diss, i like your old 'e's..but still nice post bilnek..did this one todaybtw...bilnek same here with the painting, ive def gotta practise my can control..my lines are always different sizes when it comes out to painting. anyway..

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i178/erizza101/DSCF1356.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

roller paint fill.
http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274454672047_f.jpg
positive feed back and critisism welcome.

From England

Really lovin this one. Good ups man ,

But yo Ukman I have a question is it Glover, or Clover?

Bilnek- I would pratice simple boxes, and con control techs befor going out or be for trying someting hard. When you peice just take your time and try to cut your lines.

Hearr- Thats a dope simple...Now go and paint it yo

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/190524.jpg
Not feeling the E
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/183329.jpg
Fuck the last A

Other than that crits?

[Sbal]

Nice Star... and is that fucking waldo?

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0037.jpg
knuckleduster for a battle, didn't know what the word was gonna be then it ended up being this monster, I have a hard enough time fitting 5 letters to a page

[idk401]

Nice Star... and is that fucking waldo?

thanks...and was supposed to be but i wasnt having a good day i guess

[Flawless Victory]

that KNUCKL goes hard as fuck, but I feel like it kind of falls off att he E.

[Flawless Victory]

Roller paint fill
http://sp0.fotolog.com/photo/48/55/75/clover1uk/1274454873766_f.jpg

This shit needs a bump, too. My B on the double post.

[I GOT CLOUT]

The hell do you mean falls of at the E? That E is dope, and flows perfect with the rest?

[Flawless Victory]

Oh no, I don't have the same opinion as you. How dare I?!
I, unlike yourself, do not think it flows with the rest of it.
The extra bar on the top is unnecessary, and the Part where the hole would be it too small.
A capital E in a similar style would be much more appropriate.

[HëRbN]

ide have to agree with flawless about where the hole should be being bigger. but i dig the sketch.

[I GOT CLOUT]

Oh no, I don't have the same opinion as you. How dare I?!
I, unlike yourself, do not think it flows with the rest of it.
The extra bar on the top is unnecessary, and the Part where the hole would be it too small.
A capital E in a similar style would be much more appropriate.

Take it however you wanna see it buddy. to each his own.

[mosezone]

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo55.jpg

[LeaksOne]

the A is too hidden and the E is kinda big. and i think it may look better if you didnt put the line in the middle of the E. if you know what i mean

[mosezone]

word. also, some shit i came across on flickr
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/4651470345_7bfd25bb49.jpg

[weakfingers]

FUCK FLICKA!


Sorry duke, Ive been so busy this past week.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4053/4704037476_b244084144_b.jpg

[EsKoNeR!!]

http://i50.tinypic.com/33128nl.jpg

[DukeOne]

Thanks weak man, really feeling that D u did in the pencil sketch and the handstyles, actually i like them all lol. Got yours done a few nights ago, but im not sure when ill get home again, so unfortunately it may be another week. Its a calligraphy style, i know u were messing around with that for a bit so hopefully itll help ya. Thanks again bratha

[massacreman]

wow, intermediate thread is intermediate

[UKMAN]

[QUOTE=(SoS)Viruz;1631262]Really lovin this one. Good ups man ,

But yo Ukman I have a question is it Glover, or Clover?

Bilnek- I would pratice simple boxes, and con control techs befor going out or be for trying someting hard. When you peice just take your time and try to cut your lines.




CLOVER

[weakfingers]

Its a calligraphy style, i know u were messing around with that for a bit so hopefully itll help ya. Thanks again bratha


ahahahah
What i dident flick was the calligraphy style i tried for you. during it i was liek "this gonna be dope!" then when i flicked it i just starting laughing how bad it was compared to all your drawings. I'll flick it when i move to my new house your gonna laugh on how bad it is.

You can see the bottom of it just above the blue pen one.

[KtRL.]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0037.jpg

buuuuuuuump!
it kinda looks like you did this on a computer just cause it's damn cleann.
props on fittting that on one page too haha

[KinkyStab]

this really is more of a toy thread rather than an intermediate thread

that knuckl duster is a buttload of love

[Bilnek]

Ukman your name is hard as hell :S
turned out shitty a couple of times and this one turned out to be nice

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/clover.png

[EsKoNeR!!]

http://i47.tinypic.com/2zyv443.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/246l7o4.jpg

[Bilnek]

i don't like the fill on the down one....tho overall its good
wanna exchange ??

[Alts13]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0038.jpg

this is the finished version of it

[Sbal]

Hell yeah

[.od.]

bilnek that clover is probably the best iv seen from you so far good job man keep it up mad progression
a really old pic
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/my%20pictures/Picture067-1.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

http://i47.tinypic.com/2zyv443.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/246l7o4.jpg

if this is you, get back into letters like this, but fix the K and the R
http://i48.tinypic.com/2po8uhc.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

^ hellaaa ^

[Steal]

Alts- I always dig your style dude its so fresh and new, keep it up!
.od.- That color scheme is dopeee! I like the bubbles too.

Trying to get my bars more consistent, while working on extensions and other stuff. Tell me what you guys think :\

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs522.ash1/30696_1289246829919_1192651709_31510795_2043339_n. jpg

[.od.]

some doodle shit i busted out just and s
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/sssltccv.jpg

[EsKoNeR!!]

http://i47.tinypic.com/2zyv443.jpg
if this is you, get back into letters like this, but fix the K and the R
http://i48.tinypic.com/2po8uhc.jpg
yeah its me. just trying to work on ome new styles. that last one, says esker up top, and alaska underneith it. just trying some new shit

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god damnn alts that knuckl dustersketch is fire
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/z.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00120.jpg
ran outa dark red on this 1
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/Untitled.jpg

[DukeOne]

hot damn zoner, thats the best ive seen from you man, 2nd sketch particularly

[I GOT CLOUT]

Eye <3 your R's.

[seywhat]

everythings just fallin perfectly into place with that style. from letters to extensions, shits on point. i think that second piece stands out cuz the n is different than normal, and that shit goes hard!

[MoganOne]

Wow that Zoner piece is Ridiculously dope

[AteskOne]

zoner i gotta go change my pants. rounding out your style made it like 10000X doper.

[CanalSt]

http://i49.tinypic.com/11ihb38.jpg

http://i47.tinypic.com/2ylo0t3.jpg

http://i46.tinypic.com/6i5p5d.jpg

http://i46.tinypic.com/2n8aqf4.jpg

http://i50.tinypic.com/15eaiz8.jpg

http://i45.tinypic.com/2cws6s8.jpg
This is my kinda old shit, some are pretty new

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appreciate it boys, been sketchin maad hard 2 get some non wierd lookin letters guess itl pay off thanks yo & deffinitly feelin that clover stuff