The Intermediate Thread

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/IMG-20110801-00249-1.jpg

[4menace2society0]

Dope shit, but the little swirl script type ish coming off the letters is done by quizm which round your way just letting you know brotha

[-Wings-]

Sear, honestly how often u paint that spot?
New skatepark opened, coverin it soon enough. Not one bit of graff yet!
Did this yesterday kinda sucks, not much effort but cant be bothered.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/008-4.jpg

[ribcage]

you runnin the spot you at dude no doubt, but the hate from errbody else is prolly comin from how big your ego is gettin here from all the nobodys tellin you your shits tight

Im one of those nobodies, I been diggin your style since you started actually postin pics, but I can see where some people confuse you bein you, with you bein arrogant... Aint necessarily how I feel, but it seems you only give love to those who give love. Ibu aint have your style, but hes got style out the ass when it come to those tosses. I know you dont think the *****s in the BB thread that post picks of BB sketches aint be paintin in the real world... You know this ***** in REAL LIFE?? You go bombin w/ him? no? then how you know this *****'s paint aint as good as yours or even better?

I know this shit gonna sound opinionated and shit, and when it comes down to it me and my e-mouth shouldnt be sayin nothin, but shiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttt if this wasnt e-beef and yall was face to face it would have already been settled and yall would be on your way not even trippin bout the outcome.......... In my eyes its an e-beef between who can get the most e-followers to thumbs up their shit

idk if ive made sense in this little 2 min text rant but uh if i dont then ima get jamie foxx up in this bitch and blame it on the alcohol and shit... yall try that autumn sam adams? had about 6 of em, they be pretty tasty... especially after 2 j&c's

[4menace2society0]

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah, guys........go paint.......have a good one
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6127/6002575975_f9437199a5_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6002575975/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6002575975/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

and another for shits and giggles
http://i56.tinypic.com/2po1iz7.jpg

[bloodywarfare]

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah, guys........go paint.......have a good one
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6127/6002575975_f9437199a5_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6002575975/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6002575975/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr



That E has downs

[BlacktodaFuture]

i wanna see more of your boy IKON.

[MoganOne]

That E is dope... @Sear I know who Quiz is and I did not use the scroll as a reference from dude I was just tryin to throw something new to the letters... Thanks tho

[4menace2society0]

word word, ya i figured you werent biting but just saying other heads if they saw that they might think so but just lookin out for a ni99a

[(SoS)Viruz]

Guess whos back....ALright ONE thats the dumbest thing you can do...Paint in your room LOL..........That belongs IN THE TOY THREAD FOR IDIOTRY.
If cops roll on you and are looking and have a warrant and they see that.....Thats evidence against you...And dont think your safe cause you have roll boys or whatever.... Everyone has been ratted out at a time before.....

[(SoS)Viruz]

Sear keep doing ya thing........ Your shit is alot cleaner that alot of the fucks anyway. And he can paint it as much as he wants.
Brians - THATS FIRE MAN.....
Slotr- I see you son....... I like that pencil sketch man

[ierkpeople]

id argue if it was worth it but im glade i wasted atleast a miinute of ur day by acually reply to my comment lol thanks dude!
y dont some of u guys acually paint someting? im pretty sure graff didnt start on paper so throw ur pencils away an pick up a can for god sakes

[-Wings-]

Really diggin this one, jus a bit of bud n a pencil. No markers left to use..
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/015-2.jpg

[bloodywarfare]

Good work Seyor shit is stupid fresh :D

[4menace2society0]

idk
http://i51.tinypic.com/2ibysmd.jpg

[Bilnek]

sear wins on this thread, ovbiously the only one better than him here is me. <3 sear

[MASE P_2s]

anyone down for an exchange?

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/0803111529-1.jpg
I rushed the background when I was drunk lol

[-Wings-]

Leopold that sketch is mad wack no offence dude.
Mogan that sketch is dope as fuck, I think it wouldve looked dope even without the background to be honest bro!
Trupe that throwie is a different style, im diggin it though.
Saint Im not huge on the first one, but the one on the bottom looks dope.
Sear your uppercase R's are much better, the little r's just look lame in my opinion.

I would specificly like critismn on this throwie, because Ive changed up my S & Y a bit so they look similiar but still are clearly obvious to which letter it is. If they look alike Imma change it up somehow.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/017-2.jpg
A oneliner handstyle for shits
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/018-2.jpg
Another throwie I was diggin
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/016-2.jpg
And another piece I whipped up while waitin on some pizza, Not finsihed though, I was thinkin of puttin a city in the back ground with planes droppin bombs to continue the theme of the piece.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/027.jpg

[The Kidz]

yo wings, im diggin that piece. and i agree, the s and y do look a bit too simular

[Shit Outta Luck]

Uhm...if I know one things it's that Kids you shouldnt be in this thread. Go to the Toy Blackbook thread please and thank you.

And wings you should definitely finish that piece and work on more throwies haha. On the first one the S and Y look way too similar though!

[EST2007]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6121/6005807551_f36dd986ec.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

seyo- for your throwie it works only if people know what you write...Know what im saying.... i think their needs to be a vast differnce between the S and y. Cause if someone didn't know they would read it yeyor or sesor

[Ader]

EST might i sugest that you make the left bar of the A a bit more prominent it doesnt quite look right with out some sort of gap between the R and the A

[avore]

So im wondering why my posts keep gettin deleted...
What the fuck!?!??!?

[Mc Satan]

avore i know im toy as fuck but your posts keep getting deleted because it doesn't belong here, not good enough.

[lord_plankton]

something little for my haters...
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/IMG_37341.jpg

[MoganOne]

word

[avore]

Fosho

[always crushin]

wings-feeling that sketch not the o though at first i saw an m. The throw looks tight paint it
mogan-i feel your letters never your extensions but thats just opinion keep doing ur thing.
plankton- your wack blah blah blah naw but serious tho dope sketchs but if ur gunna put shit in negative just color it like that niggguhhhhhh.
work sketch old name
http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/281608_10150737558700244_539650243_20010276_591241 8_n.jpg
did these today killing sometime
http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/223658_10150737553555244_539650243_20010221_289511 9_n.jpg
says slota
http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/262818_10150737214105244_539650243_20006740_461518 9_n.jpg

[ribcage]

that middle one is tight slotr

[extinct]

mone your an addon biter... the spikes on your e come directly of keep sixs piece...
slotr- your stuff looks great, but this time i definately dont see some letters... the middle one i can see but the l in general really sucks on that one

[4menace2society0]

lol, i fucking hate drawing
http://i51.tinypic.com/30n97r4.jpg

[Bilnek]

hah, last time i got crits was a year ago... fuck i feel like a beggar when i say Crits???

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1186.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1322.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1324.jpg

SEAR- keep being simple, your structure is weak, that upper extension on the letter S is makin' me barf, no offence man.
always crushin-the purple one is pretty nice, but try doing a sketch or a piece that has its complexity equal. so your piece doesen't go simple-complex-simple-simple blah blah, getit?
Seyo- i like your stuff, tho try doing your letters a bit fatter than the extensions and see what it turns out like. and bombs are made for walls,not paper.
Mone-nice as always
Plankton-i see what are you tryin' there, it's pretty nice

there you go. love guys

[MoganOne]

mone your an addon biter... the spikes on your e come directly of keep sixs piece...
slotr- your stuff looks great, but this time i definately dont see some letters... the middle one i can see but the l in general really sucks on that one
This does not really even deserve a response... If u actually think that those spikes are the only thing that I have from other writers u are retarded graffiti is all bitin from one eachother Add ons extensions.. You think that everthing is original... Style is original graffiti is not Original.. I have done spikes on my letters nearly a year ago too was that straight from keep six? or is it because Keep six is the only writer you see add them?
@Slotr the second joint would be fire if u kept the bottom of it even across the page.. The third one is dope as shit IMO
Peace

[Shit Outta Luck]

Bait, everything is bitten but it's not seen as biting. It's a learning experience. You see an extension or dope connection and try it out. Change it around maybe and damn enjoy that shit. Bad artists copy, good artists steal. Everything around you and everything you see gives you inspiration for everything you draw. Whether you know it or not.

[-Wings-]

Seyo- i like your stuff, tho try doing your letters a bit fatter than the extensions and see what it turns out like. and bombs are made for walls,not paper.


Bombs are meant for paper when your experimenting and dont want to look like a fool for painting it? Read what I said about them bombs...

[Bilnek]

wings- no need posting them ,no offence man, i aint here to argue.

SEAR- stick a spraycan in both your ass and your mouth, you're an ego trippin' bitch, nothing more, your painting skill is less than average so SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!
truth is i painted yes,but i painted every time i had the chance, i ain't a rich bitch like you so i can ask mommy for spraycan money, and i tried racking, i ended up getting beaten up by 4 cops plus the store owner. bitch.
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT0772-1.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1320.jpg

[lord_plankton]

nice stuff esoe, there you go, hope it helps..

for ribcage who actually gets down to paintbattle...good boy!
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/IMG_3760.jpg
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/IMG_3761.jpg

and some last year shit or so..

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF2195.jpg
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF2198.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

^i hate your graff overall, but your characs are sick. good can control too

[Shit Outta Luck]

Yeah plankton props on that. I don't like your style much but your characters and fill are always dope

[lord_plankton]

bomb the system aint the best movie...plus its a movie.

you rack paint, you have quite a nice stash, but your not down to paintbattle me with a random word??

[Beastizm]

Sear's shit is type fresh imo, n/h

[(SoS)Viruz]

Hai.....:)

A lot of you need to do this......Cut off your computer and get a taste of the real world. Seriously....... A lot of you are sooooo worried about your e fame so when everyone post something up you try to put them down. But on the serious tip, you all need to worry about yourselfs and do you. this is just the internet. Your not going to like a lot of what you see, and a lot of people aren't going to like what you put up. Its all taste and apart of the game. The point of posting it to get CRIT from a persons view point or their OPINION. In which what they say may or may not be right......thats up to you to decided. But when posting on the internet you have to be open to this and not hott headed, then the more you'll learn. DONT GET ME WRONG....There is a differnce between good and bad graffiti......But a lot of you talk like your good and you really need to relax.

On a side note....To all you negative boosters............Instead of saying... "You paint in the same spot, you do this you do that" HOW ABOUT U try painting that much religiously. Paint is fucking expensive, I myself dont rack....But that doesn't make me less of a writer. Its about how much i get up, and the quality of my work......Alright

Viruz has spoken :cool: (Im going to put this after each one of my rants I think its cool)

Sear....THATS A HUGE PAINT STASH......Fuck You'd laugh if I'd flash mine

[ierkpeople]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110805-00118.jpg

[Shroomsh]

Sear has my respect because he paints more than most kids on here, i cant rack though, i live in australia, where the paint is kept in a cage behind the counter and you have to ask for what you want, also i have way too much respect fro the artists that run the shop i buy from, real down to earth blokes. Paint is expensive as fuck here to, like 8 bucks a can for ironlak, thats like 20 dollar us. ;)
and you cant order paint online to australia either

[paintfaceVT]

29272

Coes Battle... fuck you assholes, dont comment.

[bait]

http://i55.tinypic.com/2p253.jpg

[extinct]

Mone - umad? I was just sayin... If you did it last year... Fine... An keep is the only one I've seen use spikes before... So how am I suppose to know... Your addons beside the curls do remind me of keeps sketches an Pieces though

[swae101]

real quick battle what you think?

BASEK'

http://i55.tinypic.com/tafqcg.jpg

DCAE'

http://i55.tinypic.com/ih6zaw.jpg

[Shroomsh]

Swae, first one takes the cake, hel clean, fresh style to, bottom one is wack as fuck though

[bait]

http://i55.tinypic.com/2p253.jpg

Bottom page bump

[4menace2society0]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6134/6015582736_68b942a7f3_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6015582736/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6015582736/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

[MoganOne]

LOl i'n not mad just droppin some quick knowledge for you that's all :)

[MoganOne]

@Bait that piece is pretty dope! Would look good with some light purple 3-d or a dope drop shadow...
@Sear- Your work keeps getting better and better IMO. I am seriously diggin that "R"
mad respect bro. Stay Up

[4menace2society0]

Like i like it overall, but the bottom part of the E where i tryed to do the squiggles type ish just ruins it for me, and the A is a bit lame, but oh well, been granted permission to hit a new wall so im fuckin happy.

[sema]

basek got dat its fresh bro

[ierkpeople]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110806-00120.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110806-00122.jpg

[seywhat]

shoulda cut ur lines, looks like u got enough can control. i dig ur flames too brah

[always crushin]

erk-should put a flame in the e as well the bottom of it.
sear-loookin good ya aint feeling the squiggle thing to
bait-maybe sum purple highlights if ur not gunna do 3d
my r is waaack
http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/281470_10150739808100244_539650243_20039946_506195 8_n.jpg

[ierkpeople]

@seywat - i ran out of my blues

[seywhat]

word, i feel u. i dig that piece alot more that most of urs man, good shit. some of the bars are a lil wonky but work on consistency n ur there mang. maybe fucks wit sum symmetry with the e and k
sear- that s is fire! i think u need to work on makin ur letters more like ur s yo, that shit is always on point, n, of course ur letters are real nice but, idk ur s usually seems different, structure and extension wise. highlights look real nice too
bait- the whole thing is dope but im fuckin lovin the weed leaves!!!! nice touch bro

[paintfaceVT]

29333

any crits?

[MoganOne]

Too much Negative space... you have to try and kill the openings if u want the piece to look as one solid unit IMO

[extinct]

well the 3d took up alot of that negative space... i like the colours but im not feelin the arrow thing at the end of the s

[Shroomsh]

astok sketch battle, well was a battle, plankton said it wasnt on anymore, so this is as far as i got
29341

[seywhat]

thats doooooppppeee!!!! u gettin in on the round robin??? peep the thread

[Tempo718]

29349
not for nothin jus lookin to get a lil word of advice.

[lord_plankton]

astok sketch battle, well was a battle, plankton said it wasnt on anymore, so this is as far as i got
29341

it was a fuckin paint battle, paint it and im in!

[paintfaceVT]

Too much Negative space... you have to try and kill the openings if u want the piece to look as one solid unit IMO



You are retarded, look at any writer today they have some sort of dead space. Im sorry I didnt do a back ground like you always do, the focus was the letters anyways, its for the Coes Battle dude.

[rootpl]

I like this Astok, good solid letters
In this COES, in my opinion this ES colors dont suit to CO colors
colors of this CO letters rox

what do you think about this :

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/PUSSY1.jpg

[Namonto]

Looks good, I think the 'P' is the only letter out of place. Seems like you could've done more with the 'P'.

[FlippingChickens]

can all the bullshit drawings get deleted from this page,including this comment.

[-Wings-]

This page is fucking terrible! & That pussy sketch is bad, I dont think we need to see 6 pictures of how u developed that shit.

[Phat 2]

can all the bullshit drawings get deleted from this page,including this comment.

no

[4menace2society0]

lol

[MoganOne]

You are retarded, look at any writer today they have some sort of dead space. Im sorry I didnt do a back ground like you always do, the focus was the letters anyways, its for the Coes Battle dude.

What ever bro take it or leave it... Not a bad piece btw

[Shit Outta Luck]

That pussy sketch should be in the toy forum me thinks. And phat I love you because you have a real ***** as your avatar. Riley.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/0807112023-1.jpg

[extinct]

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/0807012304.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

This page is bullshit... and I was on acid when I did the crazy two page blue one.

29400
29401
29402

and re-bump
29403

[sadgeh]

I must do acid:D

[FlippingChickens]

for the round robin
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/948/scan0003ie.jpg

mone - that is the best ive seen from you,i really like everything aboout it except the arrow.

phil - fuck that blue sketch is sick as fuck. the skull is perfect and the hair has insane detail.

[swae101]

BASE'

http://i51.tinypic.com/4r4aap.jpg

BASEK'
http://i53.tinypic.com/n1crgh.jpg

THROWIEE'

http://i52.tinypic.com/10z1u87.jpg

[Dkaer1]

http://i53.tinypic.com/jrp3x3.jpg

[Shroomsh]

Dcae letters need to be shorter, so the piece isnt so square, ya dig?
Make the piece look longer, so it only fills like half that page vertically

[ribcage]

^idk man, he used the amount of space on the page to its potential, except for the d shoulda been a little lower. why he chose a lower case D i do not know... also I may be a lil drunk, but im pretty sure it aint 2012 yet...

aside from brains and mone, sketches on this page be kinda slackin, especially with head's consistancy... If it pleases thy mods standards, Ima officially post my sketches in this thread now.

meh, for the RR
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0806111727.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0922102221.jpg

[kringe]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6145/6025251073_2a983b2f8d_z.jpg
Not feeling this one. The bottom of the P should have been to the right more to kill the deadspace in between the P and U a bit more, and then theres just an awkward clusterfuck of busyness in the bottom right. The T shoulda been more like a backwards J too, if you guys get what I mean...Whatever

[Phat 2]

you and sear have some similar looking letters

[Shit Outta Luck]

oh what's good Eons. Wheres my sticker pack at FOOL. Sike I'm just playin haha nice piece. I don't like the right side of the U though, a little to clunky for my tastes.

[paintfaceVT]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6145/6025251073_2a983b2f8d_z.jpg
Not feeling this one. The bottom of the P should have been to the right more to kill the deadspace in between the P and U a bit more, and then theres just an awkward clusterfuck of busyness in the bottom right. The T shoulda been more like a backwards J too, if you guys get what I mean...Whatever

one thing about it is that its better then sear, correct letter structure, proper bars, the only thing thats weird is the tops they are way to pointy, keep at it. reminds me of my style a lot more then sear, very similar, not calling it biting though, just similar.

[seywhat]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/100_4260.jpg
rr piece.. gimme sum crits nigs...
a new style im def still tweakin out, im honestly not to sure bout this overall, feel it needs to be tightened, but it is wat it is..

kringe- mad clean man, plus if u did wat u said shit woulda been ill so keep at it
ribcage- i dig it man, maybe shoulda rounded all the letters or squared em off, good shit tho
dcae- real ill. maybe another capital letter in there could have added sumn, idk lol
basek- keep doin wat u doin, real nice colors n decent letters, keep workin
flippinchickens- i feel it overall, but the letters still arent solid feelin you kno, keep workin on bar consistency
brains n mone- yall nigros already kno wassup...

peace

edit: got my hands on a scanner so figured id throw this freestyle up, crits on this too if u please

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/3.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

sputs - i agree with the crits brute gave u,except the fact that its better than sear.

brute - stop talking about sear,worry about u.

saywhat - bro something about that peice is fresh,but something is not working about it..i felt the same way about my entry ,i was also trying a new style..ima deff keep working on my style and you should work on that style,anything will become dope with practice.

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3239/scan0008f.jpg

^ crits?

* pretty much bited Atlas cbs with the peice at the bottom,tried to change it up in some ways though and make it a bit different than his "maria" peices.

[Phillip McDougall]

You didn't "pretty much" bite him, that's definitely a fat fucking chomp. that A is his.

[FlippingChickens]

yup it is ,i did say it was so relax.just a drawing,i wouldnt paint his letter "a" like that either

[IbuprofenTablets]

Dude, why haven't your letters still changed at all?
It really confuses me.

[4menace2society0]

one thing about it is that its better then sear, correct letter structure, proper bars, the only thing thats weird is the tops they are way to pointy, keep at it. reminds me of my style a lot more then sear, very similar, not calling it biting though, just similar.

ni99a suck my dick, go draw in your little book bitch and come out in the sunlight when you wanna squash it.....were not far away from eachother after all, me and my crew against you get at me

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6190/6027595904_5a7834c22b_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6027595904/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6027595904/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

[MoganOne]

ni99a suck my dick, go draw in your little book bitch and come out in the sunlight when you wanna squash it.....were not far away from eachother after all, me and my crew against you get at me

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6190/6027595904_5a7834c22b_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6027595904/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6027595904/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr
Yes yo! this is straight ill man! Fuck with that fill more I like how it gives the letters more dimension... And correct me if I am wrong you straight freestyled that... No pencil sketchin just applying the paint to the wall... And Paintface get off his Jock and go paint something other than your own face... with jizz I may add... lol

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/tezer1.jpg

[lord_plankton]

yoo tezer saving the page, i enjoy that.

anyone up for a paint battle, decide quickly, i wanna do it today...name the word. doesnt mean youve to do yours today too..

[Phillip McDougall]

ni99a suck my dick, go draw in your little book bitch and come out in the sunlight when you wanna squash it.....were not far away from eachother after all, me and my crew against you get at me

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6190/6027595904_5a7834c22b_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6027595904/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6027595904/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

Ayo, this fill isn't done right... if you're going for dimension, you put it on the wrong sides. That extension coming off the end of your S on the left is hideous, looks like a noodle. The S to mid-E extension looks retarded, your letters are too fat for such drastic change in structure. The E to A extension is too wobbly, it should be more direct and forceful. Your A kills the little amount of flow that the SE make, and the A-wiggle-R extension looks limp and lifeless. it also doesn't go with the flow of the R. That R's also got bad letter structure, because you're flaring it in the wrong spot. Actually, all of these letters have bad structure.. The bars need to be consistent, man. Keep up the painting, but work on your letters while you do it. Just because you can paint doesn't mean you're doing it right. Might as well get better if you're going to be doing it a lot.


http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/tezer1.jpg


Sleazy Tezey always saves the day. Shit looks ill as fuck.

[FlippingChickens]

sear - it doesnt look bad,i do agree that the extension coming off the left side of the "s" is wierd ,but everything is the best ive seen from you yet,especially that color combo.even if phil said it doesnt have dimension,i think it has a good idea of it.

tezer - that looks so clean fuck! love that style,and color. Hope you dont mind if i borrow the idea of the "t" connecting with the "e" ,it would make a dope "t" and "o" connection.


Dude, why haven't your letters still changed at all?
It really confuses me.

go listen to soldier boy bitch

[ierkpeople]

ALL OF YOU SHOULD TRY PAINTING! its this thing that real graff artist do. just my opinion u guys talk way to much shit for drawers. an none of u could even paint the things u draw. u should all learn some respect to while ur at it u internet thugs lol

[toopski]

ALL OF YOU SHOULD TRY PAINTING! its this thing that real graff artist do. just my opinion u guys talk way to much shit for drawers. an none of u could even paint the things u draw. u should all learn some respect to while ur at it u internet thugs lol

lmao i havent actually seen a sketch by you yet so maybe u cant piece what u draw either

but true theres a lotta talk then again this is this thing called the internet where u can do as you fucking please get it

[ribcage]

fucked up the E.

[sadgeh]

tezer - that looks so clean fuck! love that style,and color. Hope you dont mind if i borrow the idea of the "t" connecting with the "e" ,it would make a dope "t" and "o" connection.




haha guess what im doing right now?

[Strange Journeys]

chomp chomp

[sadgeh]

btw its not that i got that idea from flippingchickens, im tagging with the name ''to'' here in holland.

[Graff2k11]

reach.. try a straight letter c, bc it doesnt flow at all.
but heres a quick simple i did lets get some crits
http://i1086.photobucket.com/albums/j454/graff2k11/IMG_0221.png

[4menace2society0]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6074/6033443908_1f23f5be5f_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6033443908/)
Seb (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6033443908/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

[Phat 2]

true colors ^
btw, how can you bear painting over your own pieces? I could never do that, even if I was in fucking NY with 0 empty walls. too painful.

[extinct]

now thats what im talkin bout dawg... that extension on the s is iffy but the eb is dope

[FlippingChickens]

ALL OF YOU SHOULD TRY PAINTING! its this thing that real graff artist do. just my opinion u guys talk way to much shit for drawers. an none of u could even paint the things u draw. u should all learn some respect to while ur at it u internet thugs lol

man doesnt everybody already know that,some people like me are trying to get good so they can rock some fly shit on walls. Stop worrying about everyone else and worry about ur SHIT.

[Bilnek]

i don't find it hard to paint stuff i sketch. only thing is i paint like two times a year. with the cans i get for free.

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT0716.jpg http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT0715.jpg the painted thing

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT0772-1.jpg the lower thingy is the sketch

aaand a sketch for the talk http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/Rasturanje.png

[4menace2society0]

now thats what im talkin bout dawg... that extension on the s is iffy but the eb is dope
its actually a J i just put seb as the title by accident

and ya it doesnt bother me to go over my ish just because at the rate i paint, it would kind of be impossible to find new spots to hit and also without pissing other heads off, also not everyone lives in a big city, walls a limited and chill spots get blown up quicker than an afgan on a plane

[Bilnek]

its actually a J i just put seb as the title by accident

and ya it doesnt bother me to go over my ish just because at the rate i paint, it would kind of be impossible to find new spots to hit and also without pissing other heads off, also not everyone lives in a big city, walls a limited and chill spots get blown up quicker than an afgan on a plane

i like the afgan part <3

[Phat 2]

ouch bilnek... papers yay, walls nay.
practice your can control guy,

[sema]

cant quite work out 3d this ones for battle any tipps?
29782
-bilnek i dig the style try some better paint itll come out 50x's better
-seb strait is clean not much to crit

[seywhat]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/3.jpg
bumpin this for sum crits................

sema- looks like ur on the right track but ur letters got a lil to complicated i think, which in turn messed up ur 3d. work on ur structure a lil and keep it up!
bilnek- not too bad, should stuck to the sketch a lil more cuz that was dope. stay up
sear- thats wat the fuck im talkin bout! i seen the handy n i thought it said jeb. the e does get a lil wierd, n i think you should connected the eb like the je sum how but its all good. nice colors

[swae101]

Kasc Battle
http://i54.tinypic.com/akwd95.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6074/6033443908_1f23f5be5f_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6033443908/)
Seb (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6033443908/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

alright, so ima crit the shit out of this and you're not gonna listen to a single thing i say bc every single one of you is a complete e-thug that things that they know better than the last guy. but fuck it, here you go.

Lets start with the J. Overall the J looks to have started as a simple regular J, although it's obvious that you kinda just went in without having too clear of an image in your head. This is obvious by the awkward-ness of the bottom part of the J that swoops up. There isn't anything wrong with it, it could be a style choice, although to me it just looks awkward and strange how it appears that you wanted the bar to get bigger causing a flair type thing but at the same time you didn't giving it that "awkward" look. The motion of it is going to about a 10 degree measure to the right which is a steady flow but then you gave it that part to kink to almost a 90 degree angle left, that works when you have a harder flow bc it gives it a kick back, this instead gives it a look of again, "im just gonna add this here bc that's what a gar-fee-tee writer do!" Then we look at the lean of the letter compared to the others which throws me off bc it originally looked like a bad "S" but since it's a "J" you have the top bar making it capital and you focused more on the left side of it since that's where it seems to center the letter off which is why it looks like an "S" at first glance. Then you have those extensions which frankly again come from "fuck it, im putting an extension, GARRR-FEEE-TTEEEEE DUDE!" And it's a spiky extension but on the bottom which goes against your curvy bottom of your "J" giving more of an awkward look to the letter. Then the conntector to the "E" starts curvy, flows down, hits a hard road bump, making the piece hard to flow through, and then just shoots up in a "E". Maybe that's just a style choice but me no likey so muchy. And so everyone doesn't ride my dick as hard, that's just my opinon. OH NO! now this whole shit doesn't matter. fuck it. you're still reading. bitches....

Now the "E". Yes im really doing this. I'm nice tonight. Okay, so continuing the from the extension it rises up and connect to the flaring top of the E, i like this, this makes sense but then we look down expecting to see an "e" and we get one of those backwards "3" type "E's" And im like. Why the fuck. Since you have the star it's the new age keepsix bite to put in the middle of letters that round off likr "R's" "E's" and "P's" (I say keepsix bc he's one of the first i saw do it, and no im not asking for a history lesson on the origin of the fuckin' star) So. I can tell this is backwards "3" type "E" bc when we look down past the confusion we see the bar, (which is a little off on the curve fyi, not to be a douche but i feel like we're past that.) and it connects to a penis type thing. A bar that looks like it was turned into a spear, and it's a little wobbly. floppy penis i guess. but then curves following the flow of the J, i like that. good job, and up ending the awkwardness of that E.

Now the B. this is actually your best letter. woot! nah... but for real. the top of the bar that swoops making the top of your E looks awkward at the end. The end of bars is a style preference but to me this one just looks too cut off and comes to not point and is kinda just there. I like how you used that extension to balance off the other extension of the J which is good for symmetry but the problem is the same bc it's spiky and just like the J it comes out at an awkward point. The J's made a little more sense but this one could of flowed better with the bending bar on the bottom of the B. The backbone of your B seems to be just placed there, this is the most important part of the letter and you should take more time with it bc then you would of make the connection of the bottom of the backbone and the swooping bottom part of the "B" better but now it just seems like the back bone stops and it looks like it will connect awkwardly since the backbone is so straight and a bending flow is coming at it giving it a crashing halt. And one last thing about the "B", the part where you make the cool little cut in the middle should be smaller bc since it's so big it's more of an eyesore than a cool addition, it again halts the flow of the bending part connecting to the middle.

Im not even gonna start on the handstyle, we both know it's bad and freestyled.

The 3-d is whatever, off in some spot but i wrote you enough shit for you to ignore. blah blah blah, i should go paint, what do i know, im prob just some loser 14 year old blah blah blah yeah yeah yeah, 8th grade, holla!

[sema]

best crit ive read in years

[thepekins]

sear man you oughta work on your handies homie pieces aint all of it . errbody tells you but forreal listen up

[The Silent One]

Kasc Battle
http://i54.tinypic.com/akwd95.jpg
sweaaaa, back from the dead with real improvement..

where you from anyways? ii've seen some Shit around that looks like yours

[ierkpeople]

lmao i havent actually seen a sketch by you yet so maybe u cant piece what u draw either

but true theres a lotta talk then again this is this thing called the internet where u can do as you fucking please get it
http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110731-00102.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/Warwick-20110705-00072.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110616-00039.jpg http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110519-00085.jpg these are the only ones i have on my comp at the time

[Bilnek]

sear, the more you talk crap the more i love you.

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/cow.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1114.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1116.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1131.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT0333.jpg

and i found alot of old sketches >.< tho i ain't showin' them, im ashamed http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/sinama.png

[-Wings-]

Imma hafta agree wit bait, sear yo get off your high horse. You act like your the shit n your the best in here lately. Your letters themselves still need work, you can paint clean but ya needa chill out dude. Go work on your handys n throwies or summin.
Heres summin really quick 3min sketch.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/seyor-1.jpg
and some shit for infoe
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/info001.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

29897

ALRIGHT........ Flicks and stfu......... I tired of comming here..................... And seeing nothing but a buck of e thugs and internet writers.........Stop hoppin on your homies team and take a step back....... Bilnek you suck... Look at your line control...sketches...........You cant paint.........IM GOING DOWN DOWN THE LINE. NOW TRY ME... I'll band you.... Give you some time off the internet and get some fucking fresh air

[(SoS)Viruz]

you guys are hilaaaaaarious, like I laugh so hard, you guys are ridiculous.


ALL OF YOU SHOULD TRY PAINTING! its this thing that real graff artist do. just my opinion u guys talk way to much shit for drawers. an none of u could even paint the things u draw. u should all learn some respect to while ur at it u internet thugs lol

BUMP this...........................

[(SoS)Viruz]

Alright fucks.......
"There's A BIG difference between a REAL graffiti writer and a 'TOY' writer, or NOT EXPERIENCED. The art originates as VANDALISM. cavemen wrote on walls the longest time ago. Just because you can draw a piece in your book. doesn't mean you can paint it. So put it on the wall, and if not, stick to your coloring books and elementary attitudes. Big ups Sear" -BREW 92 (GK, BAF, AUK)
29898

Also on that note do you guys read the thread.........FLICKS..... If your going post post a flick.... or it will get deleted......... Talking.......Shit will get deleted... this isn't to bring down heads this is to lift them. You all are being herbs. Your toys.... Which is why your posting in this section. For one dont talk like you know when you cant burn, second to all of you book warriors.......Paint a wall other than a legal, or hits some freights.....

[-Wings-]

Imma hafta agree wit bait, sear yo get off your high horse. You act like your the shit n your the best in here lately. Your letters themselves still need work, you can paint clean but ya needa chill out dude. Go work on your handys n throwies or summin.
Heres summin really quick 3min sketch.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/seyor-1.jpg
and some shit for infoe
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/info001.jpg
bump to new page, its a shitty flick but i think its a solid simple

[(SoS)Viruz]

Seyo.... Thank you <3 and sorry for whatever shit we had going on before :cool:

[t.done]

I like that simp seyo, decent. Only thing id change is to remove those extensions on either end, not feelin them.
Haven't posted in time...

http://i1209.photobucket.com/albums/cc386/AdrianN_Photography/My%20Art/IMG_7385.jpg

[Bilnek]

holy crap that is clean <3___<3 and guys im here for the chills, never got pissd here, never will,

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1322.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1186.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1122.jpg

edit: sear eats penises

[ierkpeople]

BUMP this...........................
omg! thank you man ive been saying this for liek a year now.

[swae101]

sweaaaa, back from the dead with real improvement..

where you from anyways? ii've seen some Shit around that looks like yours

yeahh i knoww ive been going through alotta shit lately so i havent posted in a while but im back with a vengance! down for battles and exchanges! and im from California.

[4menace2society0]

Alright fucks.......
"There's A BIG difference between a REAL graffiti writer and a 'TOY' writer, or NOT EXPERIENCED. The art originates as VANDALISM. cavemen wrote on walls the longest time ago. Just because you can draw a piece in your book. doesn't mean you can paint it. So put it on the wall, and if not, stick to your coloring books and elementary attitudes. Big ups Sear" -BREW 92 (GK, BAF, AUK)
29898

Also on that note do you guys read the thread.........FLICKS..... If your going post post a flick.... or it will get deleted......... Talking.......Shit will get deleted... this isn't to bring down heads this is to lift them. You all are being herbs. Your toys.... Which is why your posting in this section. For one dont talk like you know when you cant burn, second to all of you book warriors.......Paint a wall other than a legal, or hits some freights.....

Thanks homie, much love from the six oh trey
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6184/6039144713_f20eaa06c5_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6039144713/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6039144713/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

Hey esoe, come and talk to me when you can paint a simp that isnt dustier than my grandma's attic fool.

[Bilnek]

will do man, you made me get the guts to rack some paint.

kids give crits to get crits. and start a flame war while at it.
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1317.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1318.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

sol- do more like the bottom one, its not bad, but the bars should be more even imo. and that top one is fairly wack, drop connections, extensions, and crazy fills like that for now.

[Shit Outta Luck]

Alright thanks for the crits my dude. And I just wanted to try something new for that first one haha, I was feeling down and needed some fucking rainbow in my book.

[MASE P_2s]

the colors suck on the last one but i like my letter structure http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/262455_230819626960024_100000959666444_622807_4669 128_n.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/mail-1.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/283559_230818580293462_100000959666444_622806_3049 745_n.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/267200_230814450293875_100000959666444_622795_2910 743_n.jpg

[lord_plankton]

everybody can stay!! the lord has spoken!
now smile...
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF31741.jpg

and this one, phat i know you moved it last time but please acknowledge its ueber dope so it can stay...its dirty doesnt mean its bad...
c+h had a strong influence on me back in the days...
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF3068.jpg

[Phat 2]

no worries, plankter
tempo, no I'm sorry. I'm guessing it's gonna be a good while until you can. no hate.
paintfacevt, your crits to tempo were moved to the toy black book thread. dont panic.
sear, that was a huge overkill with all the extensions and the coloring in general, be it the 3D, fill, or even the border with the zigzags
hmmmm. stick to your steezy simple fills man. those burn.

[Tempo718]

its aight I expected it I have to work up some nerve an go paint. Im new here in chicago so idk all the tempting places are so sketchy..

[paintfaceVT]

no worries, plankter
tempo, no I'm sorry. I'm guessing it's gonna be a good while until you can. no hate.
paintfacevt, your crits to tempo were moved to the toy black book thread. dont panic.
sear, that was a huge overkill with all the extensions and the coloring in general, be it the 3D, fill, or even the border with the zigzags
hmmmm. stick to your steezy simple fills man. those burn.
no worries, couldnt care less, and agreed with your comment on that sear piece, its a little shacky of a fill and the fill on the 3D worries me, its just weird, also your extensions that connect to your "A's" middle bar and "E's" middle bar dont make sense, also, Im posting your jeb piece up tomorrow.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs822.snc4/68228_1490328457642_1216895330_31067074_4928939_n. jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3664.jpg?t=1294967981

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8373/winter338.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs199.snc4/38313_10150239666830697_842135696_13352963_341597_ n.jpg

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Duke-Hades.jpg

http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/4561/mertaone0002.jpg

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5959/skull0001.jpg

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/D-Full.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/130/l_b4798ef808e34a7e87a39d4fdb590af8.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0028.jpg

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7121/getattachmentlest.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/smokecrack108.jpg

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7377/getattachmentdesign.jpg

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_2902.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1435.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02584.jpg

http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo497.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2895.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2898.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1036.jpg

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/9130/dsci0147.jpg

Back in the day!

[kringe]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6206/6037083863_a7e8789813_z.jpg
For a battle on AP
Good looks on the love on the Sputs piece guys.
This page is hot.

[4menace2society0]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6209/6043491656_ab37c37bda_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6043491656/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6043491656/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

[kringe]

The upsweep on the bottom of the S is awkward cause of the width, make it more consistent and it'll be tight
The E shouldn't go over the A on the bottom, imo. The middle of the E shoulda been a bit lower too
And the A and R are too far apart. The left leg on the R is angled awkwardly.
And the stars are hella gay.
But it's still tight homie.

[extinct]

lol back to the future lurks hard

[sema]

moved to fl cant stop thinkin bout em hah
30011

[kaykells]

30022
crits, i did this for the HAGIS battle... struggled with my A

[sema]

^ shows alot of potential try simply turning the g upside down n suck the top bar in

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

long time no post. so here it goes.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5947751648_d5e8c24137_b.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5947704362_fe75cb2d9b_b.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5947700398_89b1a221f3_z.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5899479525_5a8163492c.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5899429401_783d69fe41.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5830008782_4e5b524589_z.jpg
there more i havent flicked... but yeah me and my boy vows

[thepekins]

dope shit evil. mad clean

[Phillip McDougall]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs822.snc4/68228_1490328457642_1216895330_31067074_4928939_n. jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3664.jpg?t=1294967981

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8373/winter338.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs199.snc4/38313_10150239666830697_842135696_13352963_341597_ n.jpg

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/Duke-Hades.jpg

http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/4561/mertaone0002.jpg

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5959/skull0001.jpg

http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss260/someguyok/D-Full.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/130/l_b4798ef808e34a7e87a39d4fdb590af8.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/IMG_0028.jpg

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7121/getattachmentlest.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/smokecrack108.jpg

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7377/getattachmentdesign.jpg

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/IMG_2902.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1435.jpg

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02584.jpg

http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu152/Scream_Out/Photo497.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2895.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2898.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/IMG_1036.jpg

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/9130/dsci0147.jpg
Back in the day!

aw I miss these days...

[Bilnek]

blacktoda, u forgot zoner, he and alts were postin' here and were big already.

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1372.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1373.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1374.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1388.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1370.jpg

[MoganOne]

An out line for a Battle
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011-08-15_00-52-21_820-1-1.jpg

[paintfaceVT]

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I thought about it, I didnt want to "waste my paint on a battle against you" so I painted my own shit, no special fill no special 3D just letter focus, No beef I want it dead. Also the Tan one is the one I did today the black one was doen like a month ago, no camera at the time.
Crits, compliments, anything is welcome, including shit talking.

[MoganOne]

I like the "X's" on the letters... It looks like a Tomahawk style peice

[paintfaceVT]

I am confused by what you mean by "Tomahawk"? like an actual Tomahawk or what?



Never mind I got it now!

[4menace2society0]

30025
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I thought about it, I didnt want to "waste my paint on a battle against you" so I painted my own shit, no special fill no special 3D just letter focus, No beef I want it dead. Also the Tan one is the one I did today the black one was doen like a month ago, no camera at the time.
Crits, compliments, anything is welcome, including shit talking.

Okay so here we go, i know you know your proportions are a bit off in places BUT im not here to sit here and trash every party of your piece i dont like, all i want to say is that it need more funk, for example with your T it has that bend and all of your other letters just just straights no curves or nothing, why not give em all that same flow, this is an example of what looks good on paper but boring on a wall, you seem to say i have no structure or what not but thats because i was told by some dope heads to put more funk into my shit because no matter how dope the letters are induvidually, it just looks boring, so i would just say go there and let your hand be free, be wild, it might not come out the best the first couple of times but all you can do is keep going at it.
Painting is all about steez.
No hating here, take it however you want im just throwin my 2 cents in there.

[MoganOne]

I am confused by what you mean by "Tomahawk"? like an actual Tomahawk or what?



Never mind I got it now!

Just to make sure you really got it lol...
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[Phat 2]

https://s-hphotos-snc7.fbcdn.net/288752_259656850720971_202093693143954_1084754_786 8544_o.jpg

In collabo with Deter1

original size image: https://s-hphotos-snc7.fbcdn.net/288752_259656850720971_202093693143954_1084754_786 8544_o.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Those bullets look like flying burritos, man.
Digging the fills, though

[paintfaceVT]

Those bullets look like flying burritos, man.
Digging the fills, though

funny shit, and no I gotchu on that 4menace, I know what you mean, I dont paint very often and the hole "focus on the letters thing I said" was kinda BS now that I think about it, this piece was me basically proving to my self I can paint, clean lines etc. the letters came second, thanks for the crits!

[extinct]

yo brute.... take a roller to that wall... next time you go... looks messy as hell... itll make your pieces pop... or atleast add background

[Bilnek]

phat 2 killed it, no complications and it's still awesome and its done next to a very complex piece to give balance to it all. fuckin' great collaboration in general. Props man.

[jupsick]

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phat2 really awesome peice!!

[Bilnek]

just said i like that, no need to start bitchin'.

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1388.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1374.jpg

[jupsick]

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phat2 really awesome peice!!
next page bump

[Phat 2]

https://s-hphotos-snc7.fbcdn.net/288752_259656850720971_202093693143954_1084754_786 8544_o.jpg

In collabo with Deter1

original size image: https://s-hphotos-snc7.fbcdn.net/288752_259656850720971_202093693143954_1084754_786 8544_o.jpg

bumping on to the new page for some feedback

[Etcha]

Been a while...
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[paintfaceVT]

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anyone got any last crits on this?

[ribcage]

If you did your 3d the other way you would have killed a little more negative space, and the 3d on the E is off

[extinct]

phat... the bullet holes look to well placed... an paint the bullets ... the shells do look like burritos

[paintfaceVT]

mmmmmm.... Burritos!

[Phat 2]

phat... the bullet holes look to well placed... an paint the bullets ... the shells do look like burritos

i got the burrito part and you're prolly right, I wish I had a close up of them, they have 2 different yellows in them, they look like they're shining. but yeah from far away they do look like burritos, that part I got. but I didn't understand what do you mean by the holes look "to well placed" ? and what bullets do you want me to paint dude? they're bullet holes..

[kringe]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6069/6054718626_8381f3f423_z.jpg

[extinct]

Phat the bullet holes are in a line throughout the piece I mean...

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/301292_10150736858625464_883670463_19677744_160705 0_n-1.jpg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHEoZyrjvxM

[Phillip McDougall]

Phat: Your bullet holes are all in the same height on the letter. It doesn't look like someone went crazy and unloaded a magazine, it looks like someone shot four really well aimed shots from a sniper rifle. You should scatter them a little more as to look more like a drive-by, and less like an assassination. I might even suggest having a bullet hole on the edge of one of the letters.

[lord_plankton]

and maybe its was a sniper skill shot...

[homemade.]

bumping on to the new page for some feedback

wtf are those cheesy crisps flying about?

i forget what there called

[PETER]

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crits, i did this for the HAGIS battle... struggled with my A I love that I and S. I find lower case A's to be a bitch and that is a cool take on one. Only thing I really have a complaint on is the H. Looks kinda likd JIAGIS.

[KNS13]

http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/Photo1003.jpg

[Phat 2]

Phat: Your bullet holes are all in the same height on the letter. It doesn't look like someone went crazy and unloaded a magazine, it looks like someone shot four really well aimed shots from a sniper rifle. You should scatter them a little more as to look more like a drive-by, and less like an assassination. I might even suggest having a bullet hole on the edge of one of the letters.
I got it man. no need to go into this much detail with the explanation. to be honest I didn't plan on aligning them, I just painted them randomly and it wasn't until dude pointed it out that I noticed it.
but I like your sniper interpretation, so I'm gonna go with that story then :) that's why they're aligned. someone sniped my soldier

[lord_plankton]

what i just did...

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF3210.jpg4

cant rotate it now..too lzy already uploaded like this...bang!

[scissorcrotch2]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC04331.jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC04332.jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC04335.jpg

crits for crits i guess.

lordplakton: i like the angles on that character, if you followed the angle back and had the head in the distance it would focus on the guns and shit but im not too good with characters so i can't say much

jhiz: hahahaha! "jhiz cannon reppin the 302" you're bustin off.

bilnek: i like your style the most, to me it looks to have the most potential it's original and even if some of the letters arn't the best, it's the originality that has me hooked. kudos.

mone: im not a huge fan of your work bc i feel as though each letter would be okay on it's own and your skill level is there but your pieces don't show it. Remember you arn't drawing letters, you are drawing a piece that will work all together.

kringe: no offence but i feel as though you are not up to par yet, some may disagree but you are doing the black and white scale, this means that i am suppose to focus on the letters and the letters should stand out and make me think "daaammnnnnn!!!" but these letters make me think "NEXT!!!" this is because you used the same letter S and make it the most swagged out letter but you over did it bc the other letters are boring straights, straights can be fire but the fact that you can't make those straights fire yet shows me that you are not intermediate yet, again, just my opinon.

emba: those are both pretty much the same piece and they both have the same kinks. The face in the B is cool but don't over do it, and the B is covering the A too much. The E is leaning down too much and the weird extension on the B that makes it look like it's signing off is just, yeah... i dont like. but. i like your painting. you have great can control it seems. Kudos for that.

Lets remember it's crit for crit.

[KNS13]

jhiz: hahahaha! "jhiz cannon reppin the 302" you're bustin off.

what can i say i go hard in the paint

[extinct]

wtf are those cheesy crisps flying about?

i forget what there called
Taquitos?

[scissorcrotch2]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC04331.jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC04332.jpg

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC04335.jpg

crits for crits i guess.

lordplakton: i like the angles on that character, if you followed the angle back and had the head in the distance it would focus on the guns and shit but im not too good with characters so i can't say much

jhiz: hahahaha! "jhiz cannon reppin the 302" you're bustin off.

bilnek: i like your style the most, to me it looks to have the most potential it's original and even if some of the letters arn't the best, it's the originality that has me hooked. kudos.

mone: im not a huge fan of your work bc i feel as though each letter would be okay on it's own and your skill level is there but your pieces don't show it. Remember you arn't drawing letters, you are drawing a piece that will work all together.

kringe: no offence but i feel as though you are not up to par yet, some may disagree but you are doing the black and white scale, this means that i am suppose to focus on the letters and the letters should stand out and make me think "daaammnnnnn!!!" but these letters make me think "NEXT!!!" this is because you used the same letter S and make it the most swagged out letter but you over did it bc the other letters are boring straights, straights can be fire but the fact that you can't make those straights fire yet shows me that you are not intermediate yet, again, just my opinon.

emba: those are both pretty much the same piece and they both have the same kinks. The face in the B is cool but don't over do it, and the B is covering the A too much. The E is leaning down too much and the weird extension on the B that makes it look like it's signing off is just, yeah... i dont like. but. i like your painting. you have great can control it seems. Kudos for that.


Lets remember it's crit for crit.

bottom page bump.

[extinct]

a quick character... gotta fix the hood next time
]http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6083/6057585751_67e5ae7831.jpg[/url]
an two different styles of pieces... the bottom is more steezy
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6077/6058165886_4d59a4b57a.jpg[/url]

[Phillip McDougall]

Blacktodafuture you're getting there. Keep at it.

[Shroomsh]

I think kringe pulls it off, it is kind of his style, deffs better than the kids that post in the tot blackbooks thread, he belongs here.

[lord_plankton]

a quick character... gotta fix the hood next time
]http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6083/6057585751_67e5ae7831.jpg[/url]
an two different styles of pieces... the bottom is more steezy
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6077/6058165886_4d59a4b57a.jpg[/url]

at first glanc ethe top one looks better, to me theyre equally "good" but the s in the top one deff has style, just kill the two top extensions...

[Etcha]

Been a while...
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Bump for crits

[Bilnek]

Paser, your sketches are pretty dirty and they don't have some kind of, lets call it hype, they aren't got any special stuff that define you... but they are decent, they are nothing special but there's good technique.
Plankton-i like it very much, i would color it in less normal color but hey its still awesome
Jhiz- cool, you can do simple stuff. now risk doing something interesting.
Mone- good as always, keep it up
Kringe- do a mad fill in on that one, it would fit perfectly if you color it all in some psychidelic stuff, with alot of colors,or 3 blending colors and the first letter with one color, or mad, u kno what i mean?
The guys that paint-no crit, keep it up, every painted piece is a good piece.

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1373.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1320.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt320/Iwsho/PICT1318.jpg
old stuff. just to post something.

[IbuprofenTablets]

Dude, seriously, you post the same stuff all the time. It's dope, now draw/paint something new lol.

[Bilnek]

Im broke dude, last stuff i did was on toilet paper. I need to grow balls and start stealin' stuff. Tho i get beaten up by the owners.

[EmptyKrylon]

Bump for crits

Etcha tight work but dont hide your A behind your B's. The A's are looking like 4's since your hiding the bottom left part.

[MoganOne]

what i just did...

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF3210.jpg4

cant rotate it now..too lzy already uploaded like this...bang!
This looks dope

[Etcha]

Etcha tight work but dont hide your A behind your B's. The A's are looking like 4's since your hiding the bottom left part.

Point taken.
Ill try get a bit more space in between the next one.

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo374.jpg

[Shroomsh]

Thats filth, and not in a good way.

[Strange Journeys]

http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/Photo1003.jpg

You always post here and no one gives you any crits, they just say "lol jizz cannon"
make your HI wider and dont make the botom of your J so wide, make it like the bottom of the Z

[KNS13]

Jhiz- cool, you can do simple stuff. now risk doing something interesting
interesting enough or still to simple?

http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/Photo1005.jpg
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/Photo1006.jpg

[extinct]

I like that 1st one... The colour of the handstyle makes me angry though

[kringe]

Lol just throwing it out there, that the last couple of black and white pieces I've posted aren't my normal type shit. That stuff is for other people, that's what they asked for, ya know. I been slacking though on doing own name shit. I haven't done anything since this
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5073/5914018663_31328a4a64_z.jpg
And that was like a month ago...I started a few canvasses recently though, so expect some more to come!

[seywhat]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4378.jpg
rr piece
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4383.jpg
sloppy ass rought draft for Elevation Incorporation

lemme get sum legit crits yooooo

kringe- i been diggin ur b n w pieces lately, the letters that have been ur style have been real ill. that eons piece is dope, there is a lil awkwardness is certain parts of the letters but nice overall, colors are on point
jihz- def work on ur handy, it kinda fucks up the pieces, bottom one aint too bad tho. i think u need to reach a happy medium between the blue and white piece n these two, structure at this point is wat its all about, the checkerboard shit is good tho
paser- the throwie is maad dope! the pieces are nice too, keep it up, try to bend ur letters sum to kill dead space, dont throw too much little shit in there
peace

[Phat 2]

imo it's a long one liner noodle string with a 3D. can't find any letters in there. the whole style looks way too messy and unorganized. I prefer the stuff you used to do before.

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo374.jpg

Bump for crits n' shit. A *****'s trying to develop his style, y'know?
All I got last page was a "that's wack" from some 12y.o. herb.


@Seyar: That last pen freestyle looks really dented in terms of bar width, I know it was a rough draft, but still.
That style's really ill though, dude. Just make sure your bar widths are on point, and don't have any dents in them.
You should do some weird shit with the 3D. Like, warp and distort it or some shit.

[Phillip McDougall]

I like that E, but that R looks like a legit retard. Get rid of the extra bump. Work on your drop shadow. the teeth look cool though. Erm's a pretty cool name.
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[IbuprofenTablets]

I thought so too. Like, I wanted the R to look goofy. The lumps were suppose to be like broken bones smashed together n' shit. Ehh, I'll scrap the broken bone thing. Erm was just kinda' my second name, I still write that shit we exchanged on a while ago.


Your pieces are sooo fucking ill, dude.

Regarding the drop shadow, I never really got an explanation on how to do it properly, so I always just wing it.

[Phillip McDougall]

Here's how you do a drop shadow. Draw the exact piece you just drew, but down and to the left a little bit. and then fill it in with black or grey. it's as if the sun's on the side and the piece/throw is off the wall, casting a shadow onto the wall.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/oaf001.jpg
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/001-1.jpg
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/tezer1.jpg
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/oaf006NEW.jpg


ibuprofen whats up man im digging the throw.

[extinct]

I like that E, but that R looks like a legit retard. Get rid of the extra bump. Work on your drop shadow. the teeth look cool though. Erm's a pretty cool name.
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word on this one

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/DSCN0803.jpg
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/DSCN0802.jpg

[seywhat]

peace to all for the feedback. imma start tryin to integrate my two styles, this new shit just kinda popped into my head n i been tryin to fuck wit it. i kept gettin stuck wit my old shit. peace yall

[IbuprofenTablets]

ibuprofen whats up man im digging the throw.

Chillin', yo'. I really fucks wit' your style.
You down to exchange? I'll Pm you if so.

[EmptyKrylon]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4378.jpg
rr piece
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4383.jpg
sloppy ass rought draft for Elevation Incorporation

lemme get sum legit crits yooooo

kringe- i been diggin ur b n w pieces lately, the letters that have been ur style have been real ill. that eons piece is dope, there is a lil awkwardness is certain parts of the letters but nice overall, colors are on point
jihz- def work on ur handy, it kinda fucks up the pieces, bottom one aint too bad tho. i think u need to reach a happy medium between the blue and white piece n these two, structure at this point is wat its all about, the checkerboard shit is good tho
paser- the throwie is maad dope! the pieces are nice too, keep it up, try to bend ur letters sum to kill dead space, dont throw too much little shit in there
peace

Tight work but like IbuprofenTablets said that Width needs to be on point all around and make the width of it bigger then you got it there. That 3d throw it to one side or make it go to one point in the middle!!

[-Sinn-]

Seywhat unless ur doing alot of lower case cursive e's everywhere I cant see any letters sorry bro just what i see.
Tezer ur stuff amazes me with how it almost looks so simple yet so fuckin hard at the same time lovin the handies and throws
Phillip im in love with that FUCK HIPSTER GRAFFITI piece the drips make it look raw as fuck keep up the good work
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy Shit/Picture337-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy Shit/Picture338.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy Shit/Picture330.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture314.jpg
sometimes i like to smoke a lil hash to get the ideas flowin

Any crits?

[sadgeh]

only a question how much hash is that and what hash?
But the colors are so clean, very nice, its simple but with good ideas.
I must post quick some pieces.

[Phillip McDougall]

The only letters I like out of that are the Broken Hearted Vandals. . And you should work on your handstyles

[Etcha]

Seywhat unless ur doing alot of lower case cursive e's everywhere I cant see any letters sorry bro just what i see.
Tezer ur stuff amazes me with how it almost looks so simple yet so fuckin hard at the same time lovin the handies and throws
Phillip im in love with that FUCK HIPSTER GRAFFITI piece the drips make it look raw as fuck keep up the good work
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy Shit/Picture337-1.jpg

Fresh. Feeling this. Tight fills

New one...

http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/7958/60385026939c36088679b.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/814/60385026939c36088679b.jpg/)

[4menace2society0]

Been caught up in some dumb ol' stupid shit
clearly ran out of rill color, so fills dumb wack and no cuts, oh well just to clear my mind from this bullshitttt
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6193/6066249251_55f5380780_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6066249251/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6066249251/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0820112237.jpg
highlighter freebies from yesterday...

Yo! Anyone in here tryina do some freestyle/outline exchanges this fine evening?

[-Sinn-]

I'm down what u write?

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF4129.jpg

[SEKA24]

hey I'm new to this forum
i switched over from pure g because it kept screwing up so I'm post in here
some flicks
http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff399/KAOS241/EPSON024-1.jpg
http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff399/KAOS241/EPSON026.jpg
http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff399/KAOS241/EPSON020.jpg
http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff399/KAOS241/P1010021.jpg
crits would be awesome

[MoganOne]

I posted this awhile back but I touched it up a bit...
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011-08-19_08-45-54_529.jpg

[ribcage]

^just ballpoint? I like it.

here ya go sin, I wrie reach btw if ya didnt check ya pms
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0821112108.jpg

[ChadWarden]

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couldn't help but notice that your junk seems to be just barely covered by your notebook in this picture.

[MoganOne]

LOL^^^ WHaaa???
@Rib that is Sharpie...
Here is one I just did right Now for my Cuzo Cam
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/301943_10150742051345464_883670463_19739182_110591 7_n-1.jpg

[EmptyKrylon]

I posted this awhile back but I touched it up a bit...
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011-08-19_08-45-54_529.jpg

Bump this shit Tight Work!

[ribcage]

o shit... but is the 3d ballpoint?

[EmptyKrylon]

that shit looks like str8 marker yo....i dont know where you see the ballpoint ink

[4menace2society0]

nope could be an fine point pen, if you really take the time with a pen, you can make shit look super crispy

[ribcage]

yeah thats how I do, so thats what I thought. Also the color difference and thinness of the lines in the 3d and the handy look like a ballpoint...

[Beastizm]

haha yea the 3d looks like either a ballpoint or a dying sharpie

[MoganOne]

The reason it looks like a ballpoint is cus you don't realize how big that thing is lol the piece of paper is like two feet long. Thanks for the comments

[ribcage]

O fuck, lol that explains it. As fo the letters, the arrow on the D makes it look like an S kinda...

[.Cuore]

i like both S's.

[TastyMcNasty]

The reason it looks like a ballpoint is cus you don't realize how big that thing is lol the piece of paper is like two feet long. Thanks for the comments
mind=blown.

both the sketches you just posted are dope as fack! love the A on the second one

[jupsick]

diam mogan im felling your shit alot! got any walls to brag off?
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food fight yo!

[EmptyKrylon]

nope could be an fine point pen, if you really take the time with a pen, you can make shit look super crispy


yeah thats how I do, so thats what I thought. Also the color difference and thinness of the lines in the 3d and the handy look like a ballpoint...



haha yea the 3d looks like either a ballpoint or a dying sharpie

Ball Point pens come out alot shiner cuz of the fact that its diffrent thicker ink than sharpies, you could be crisp with both even if its something small your doing you just need to be more carefull with a sharpie.

[4menace2society0]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6205/6071587980_2114135a39_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6071587980/)
Sear (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ya_boy_p/6071587980/) by StuckInTha90's (http://www.flickr.com/people/ya_boy_p/), on Flickr

[.Cuore]

dont really get the extension that crosses the bottom of the S.

[paintfaceVT]

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Collab

Brute X Omerta.

Acid trip through the 80's

working on fixing the "E" as we speak.

[thepekins]

paintface and jupsick both mad dope characters. the food fight shit is the best painted charac ive seen on here in a while imo