Tags

[Vice Two 518]

vice- just start out with simple letters, then just keep writing it over and over and you'll start to develop something out of that

i think your new in general, take the advice of those above and start simple and let it evolve, that one looks like your trying too hard. Style cant be forced

All right, I'm working on going simpler. Does a "cereal box"-style E work better?
http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww208/Vice_Two/0424091215.jpg
EDIT: Image was too large, changed to link.

Blurry pic, cell camera while in my Psych course.

[ErrorOner...]

bored as fuck and i would love to see what you come up with for my name...how's this?
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0353.jpg

[tanka]

http://img28.picoodle.com/img/img28/2/4/24/tanka07/t_Tank14m_b5dcc32.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/2/4/24/tanka07/f_Tank14m_b5dcc32.jpg&srv=img28)

Crits? (tilt head left)

[klic]

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #10***
Word: Orions Belt
Deadline: Friday, May 1, 2009 (6PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic).
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word
Week 8 Winner: skull-e

[weakfingers]

Rayz-Sorry man, I tried for 10 minuts but its the Y and the Z that are hard for me.
Semk- Thats good, Starting simple and legible is a great start.

I just started to try to add some style into my letters coming from straight up simple letters.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0814.jpg


and for jokes I wanna get "ups" on the sides of coins I'll post one if i get a legible one.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0813.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/3645/photo3u.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7065/photo5e.jpg

There you go, Stuss.
Y and Z should never go together.


Why have the words for the handstyle battles been absurdly long lately?

[Stussy]

thanks blue... yea that Z is a bitch...

I'll do you a throw :D

lol what do you write?

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle11.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag28.jpg

zyar - looks good, the Z doesnt really go with the other letters though

sqwint - its decent, doesnt really have that much flow to it though

[Mr yarbles]

I think your biggest problem is your flow
You need to kill the space between your letters

Here's some ish, free of charge

http://i44.tinypic.com/elaauv.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/281t05k.jpg

[sex without condoms]

eww

[sex without condoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/135649.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/IMG00160-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/234900.jpg

[GoGetSome]

janek- good work on having the simple letters start working on developing style

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0007.jpg

crits?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/serttruck2.jpg

[Vice Two 518]

I've been working on mine a bit:
http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww208/Vice_Two/0425092047-1.jpg
Any further suggestions? Excuse the shitty lighting.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/tag-1.jpg
Janek- I like your hand its pretty simple and legible
Vice- Nice job going more simple, keep workin on it
Mers- I like it but maybe go alittle slower next time cause its alil sloppy

I suck at tags

[Hundred]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6248/photo858.jpg
im not too good at tags... but this it what i've got
crits?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Yea ino someone was coming so I did a really quick one

[klic]

I think your biggest problem is your flow
You need to kill the space between your letters

Here's some ish, free of charge

http://i44.tinypic.com/elaauv.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/281t05k.jpg

thanks dude, i guess i get what your saying

vera - give crits if you wanna get them

las - the drips on your L are ugly

umer - the E and R are dope in the top two, but the U and M need a lot of work

[Stussy]

klic dont be a dick... obvilousely Vera is new...

vera- you got the idea just keep messing with it... maybe make your letters a little closer together

[klic]

hes gotta learn at some point, might as well be now.

vera round out the top of your A, bring the letters closer, round out the bottom of the V, lose the little extension on the top of the V

[Mr yarbles]

thanks dude, i guess i get what your saying

vera - give crits if you wanna get them

las - the drips on your L are ugly

umer - the E and R are dope in the top two, but the U and M need a lot of work

hah alright
THe tag I did for you wasn't all that good I was trying to get you to see to close your letter flow
BUt yeah you're on the right track right now homie

[harmlessart]

criiits. Shitty phone pics, avoid the shittiness.
http://i44.tinypic.com/2yn2xrm.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2vd0az6.jpg

hundred-don't space your letters out so much

[Hundred]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2earxg3.jpg
crits?

sex- nice style, i like the first one not the biggest fan of the second

go get some - keep working on it, i like the first one and the one on the right the best

[snackmachine]

Hundred- i like the one on the very left in red.
janek- ur shits always tight, keep it up.

[H3TT1NG3R]

toys giving toys crits...whaaaaa hows that work

[sham]

ster- thats wack dont use all those halos and 12 underlines and shit
vera- pretty ill
harmless- bad

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/06/14/c6ff9198b26c.jpg
meh. crits?

[Mr yarbles]

Not bad^

http://i40.tinypic.com/1601moi.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^looks dope

[Vice Two 518]

Don't take my crits to mean too much. Still working on my own tag.
Vera: The curved A and other changes are an improvement.
Grime: Looks good, I like how that pen writes. What do you use?
Ster: Lose the add-ons for now, and try using an upper-case T.
Harmless: Is that ZDAK or ZCAK? I'm not feeling it.

http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww208/Vice_Two/0426091908.jpg
Working on mine still, Ignore most of the ones in black, from what I can tell the circle doesn't have much potential.
The white is the best, I think. Crits?

[faser]

Vice - the C and E doesnt look that good, lose the extensions on them and try that

[HëRbN]

Tryin out some new ink i made and DAMN i like it, honeslty cant really wait till it gets buffed or painted over i wanna see how it holds up.
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/5515/0409002l.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8202/0409001.jpg

[Fury]

Herbn - I like it, it has a nice flow to it

[klic]

Not bad^

http://i40.tinypic.com/1601moi.jpg

that looks sick, i get what your saying about getting rid of dead space from that

phazer, i didnt know you could bust handstyles like that, that bottom one looks dope other than the P

[..romero..]

rapist,your handstlyes are mega dope homie,im jealous haha.

phazer.you need to go waaay simpler.dont try to go all crazy like that.it almost always fails miserably.trust me i know.i went through it too...


http://i39.tinypic.com/htd3ee.jpg
did your name...this kinda simple.bite all you want.i odnt really care.

[expozay]

phase i think that shit looks dope. i wouldnt go simpler.

[Mr yarbles]

It's really not though.
Unless your talking about romero

and rom just practice practice practice homie you're already on your way to bein hella dope

[HëRbN]

well love it or hate it, its stayin how it is for now and will evolve for the better over time.

[..romero..]

on my way to dope???? pssh im already the bombdiggity haha.jk.yeah i havent practiced my hands for a loooooong ass time.probably a good month or two.i need to practice.

[Mr yarbles]

You could always make all the letters the same size
That'll help out alot
You wouldn't even have to change your letter style

[faser]

phazer - the ink looks tight, nice drips on it
the handy tho... some say iuts ok, but i reckon too much wild shit is comin out here and there, try go simpler.... romero's simple tag looks good

[Erm...]

Vice - the C and E doesnt look that good, lose the extensions on them and try that

looks good man :p

[Erm...]

Hope ppl like this. is therfe many people from the UK in here???:cool:

[sufr]

Tryin out some new ink i made and DAMN i like it, honeslty cant really wait till it gets buffed or painted over i wanna see how it holds up.
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/5515/0409002l.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8202/0409001.jpg
the second one looks dope, what ink is it?

[sufr]

Ohh shit just realised you made it, what'd you put in it?

[sufr]

ok took everyones advice, i decided to change my name( dont tell me some legend writer writes this too) and take it simple. It says "Genesis"
first ones with a highligher(excuse the smudging) and 2nd one with a sharpie.
still gotta clean em up a bit and im gonna go rack a pilot or something tomorow

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e250/sk8er_az/DSC_00185.jpg

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e250/sk8er_az/DSC_00182.jpg

[HëRbN]

Its a Pen ink super concentrate with a PVC primer base and a few little secrets ;) you cant tell from the flicks but its semi metallic too. It comes out like a black metallic.. its pretty sick. im excited it turned out so well. I may post up the whole recipe one day.

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00358.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00249.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00310.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00225.jpg

sufr: I wouldn't put a halo that's bigger than the actual tag
herbn: I fucking love how your tag is so chaotic yet, readable. *saved in my graff folder*

[expozay]

yoh herbn definitely post that recipe asap.

[HëRbN]

Thanks Skull e, glad some people dig it. I like it though cause it is alittle crazy but its easily readable and memorable, doesnt look like every other simple NY or philly handstyle.

And expo im thinking about it. Im about to make a second batch and if it works as well as the first then ill probly post it.

[sufr]

ok cleaned it up, got a better marker(bingo dabber :P)
skull e: its supposed to be the top of the I but yeah, think your first 2 would look better without all the messy drips.

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e250/sk8er_az/DSC_00191.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i43.tinypic.com/dq3j8p.jpg
New style shit.

CUst still sick
But why you keep bumpin them go out and get some new flicks homie

[Fury]

Yarbles - That looks friggin' sweet.
Sufr - Try to space out your letters a little bit.

Been trying some simple stuff.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4614/img1409k.jpg

[KASE2]

YARBLES-thatz dope, im jus tryna picture it w/out all the add ons haha

crits por favor
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/wngstphmp.jpg
jus a new style im workin on, still in the erly stages, lemme kno watchu think
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/phillyhemp.jpg

[Vice Two 518]

KASE2: The first one looks alright, though I don't like some of the horizontal extensions. The second is a little jumbled for my taste.
Fobia: The horizontal line on the I makes it almost look like an L. Also, try tilting the A in the opposite direction to reduce dead space.
Genesis: Try giving it just a tad more space.
http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww208/Vice_Two/0428090241.jpg
Trying out a new E. I think it matches the beginning of the tag a lot better, creating a bit of a frame as opposed to ending weakly in a different style. I'm working on sizing it down to match the other letters, now that I look at the pic here. Crits appreciated.

[Fury]

By changing the A, you mean tilt it to the left right?
I like this E better by the way.

[sufr]

Yarbles: Thats Dope
Fury: Try and get letters that flow together. Clean it up..and go simplier.
Kase: I like the first one, the second one looks really messy..just like scrible.
Vice: The new E looks good, but doesnt flow with the E. Lose all the dashes and underlines n shit.

[Vice Two 518]

By changing the A, you mean tilt it to the left right?
I like this E better by the way.
Correct, try tilting the A to the left, almost mirroring the look of the F. It might give the whole thing some symmetry. The letters also need to flow together better. The O doesn't quite match the look of the other letters, try to keep them seeming as if they belong together.

[sufr]

ok gave it a bit more space, still needs developing, especially on the N
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e250/sk8er_az/DSC_00192.jpg
crits?

[Fury]

Sufr - I like this more, but as you have already stated, change the N

[tru?]

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8039/28042009573.th.jpg (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=28042009573.jpg)

[klic]

today...
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle12.jpg
quick ish, a car was coming
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag34.jpg

last couple days
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag29.jpg
messy can killer
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag33.jpg
dick move?
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag31.jpg
J's ugly on these ones
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag30.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag32.jpg

edit:

lsd tru? - go simpler, dont try to deform your letters, ie. just make a normal question mark, it would look a lot better, and give crits to get them

genesis - not feeling the S's they look to much like 8's

vice - i think it would look better with a lowercase E, handstyles are almost always look better with lowercase E's unless you can rock on of those crazy curly E's that everyone attempts at one point haha, and round out the bottom of your V

hemp - not really feeling it, the letters are decent but there isnt really all that much flow to it, that bottom style could be dope though keep working on it

fobia - keep all the letters the same size and round your letters out, dont make them so sharp

rapist - that looks ill, i think you should drop the circle with the cross underneath it though, but keep the swirls coming off the R and T

skull-e - the cust tags are growing on me, i like that kinda grimy style you got going for it, but your tazr tags are clean as hell. i like them both but for completely different reasons

[Fury]

Janek - I like your style, but I don't like the long extension of the K.
I took your advice a little while after doing some of these:
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7650/img1411.jpg

[skull-e]

New style
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/ertyer.jpg
My crew
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/ebe.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/ertyw.jpg
Old ass TASRs
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/rtey.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/NewImage.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/wtry5.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/wngstphmp.jpg

This one is dope, not really digging the half arrow line on the H, but dope overall.

But my dude, you have to get rid of that second one.
Maybe it's just not my style, but I don't see any flow at all in it.

[white]

fobia - keep practicing
hemp - like the second one better
janek - i would make your j come off your a a little bit more caus at first glance i thought it was an extension

crits?

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0001-3.jpg

[skull-e]

white: I like #1 the best tbh. and close the gap under your throws

[KASE2]

thnx eray1 bout the help on the second, but yea not really 2 much flow 2 it, started as an attempt at my own philly but as you can see...

SUFR-yea id say put sum flavor on a lower case N and try usin that, and also leave one of the ends on ur S's open otherwise it looks more like an 8, overall its koo

KLIC - there pretty cool, but i just dont like the whole one flow aspect and then breakin off 4 the K ya know. but thats just cuz im a dick haha, but overall its pretty good (K's are fuckin horrible 4 1 flows tho... and F's)

VICE - im not trying to be a dick, but 2 me it's just ugly, im sorry, id say just use a few peices of paper practicing different ways for each letter. try looking at othere peoples tags and keep those in your mind while your desiging yours. dont bite em but keep them in mind and possibly peice three different ones into your own. jus keep preacticin.

WHITE - im not feelin the small E's, add some flare on the lower leg of the K and try a short str8 line for the top leg, and dont tilt the V

[Fury]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7650/img1411.jpg
Bump for crits

[KASE2]

^^^^ theres not really any flow, some letters are square and others r rounded, make them all uniform

[Bink1]

fobia just remove addons. and try to keep leters same style some of your letters are edgy sum plain.

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7051/attls008.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=attls008.jpg)

with queezer and grog full metal

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9711/attls003.th.jpg (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=attls003.jpg)

molotow burner chrome + nycfat.

[tru?]

Sufr- Really good mate seems to flow really well to me.

Vice- Id change the v at the beginning but then again that might just be me?

Kilc- Some really nice stuff going on there specially the hand style practice bit.

White- I really like number 5 on that picture maybe try to make the e abit more like the other letters and not just left small on its own.

[tru?]

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2781/29042009593.th.jpg (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=29042009593.jpg)

[Bink1]

http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06746.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06744.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06740.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06739.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06727.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06726.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06725.jpg

tru-try to do some keyboard letters.

[klic]

i like that first one tep, i fixed your pack and sent it out today

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3616/3488111368_2d5cda2560.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3583/3488111358_d0c3d15648.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3565/3488107988_117b43d673.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3325/3488107998_c6e284b932.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3662/3488107972_3aa5a3579d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3650/3488107914_8286ec93d9.jpg
first time using a mop and ghetto krink. squeezin a little to hard. mad dripss.


yea tep that first one is fresh.
fobia no.

[klic]

emik - i think you should start rounding out your letters

[Fury]

Emik - No...what? Suggestions would be cool. I like your simpleness though, it looks clean.
Teper - I really like that highway one, but the rest are cool too

[expozay]

sry fury i was just in a weird mood when i wrote that.

i wud suggest not mixing capitals and lowercase also dont make your A square like the one on the right. and get rid of the lines in your O.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7997/photo30e.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/4391/photo29i.jpg

[klic]

second ones dope earn, not feeling the first one

edit:



KLIC - there pretty cool, but i just dont like the whole one flow aspect and then breakin off 4 the K ya know. but thats just cuz im a dick haha, but overall its pretty good (K's are fuckin horrible 4 1 flows tho... and F's)

yea i know what you mean, all of the letters are a simple up and down motion but the K sorta fucks it up

[Fury]

EARN - Fucking sweet on the second one, but I know the first is a joke (I believe you said).
Expozay - Nah, don't trip about it dude

[xDrowsyx]

Earn - second one def
Expozay - like the simplier straight one the best
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x85/faceoffman7/Lametag.jpg
just trying new things out never had a great tag so this is a try on my new name crits???

[white]

teper and emik lovin it
fobia - no underline arrow thing.....

crits....i write NUKES.....

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0002-3.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003-3.jpg

[flowtag]

nukes- sick tag! hard to see the u on some of em tho. diggin #1 or # 27 the most
late - looks like it says "lame" to me.
emik - always fresh...i like your name. the drippy tag is sick!!

[ErrorOner...]

http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0362.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0363.jpg

[white]

looks like a nice neighborhood...

[..romero..]

fobia-practice
earn-2nd ones dope.do it.
lame-the line thingy your rockin...dont,its lame(teehee)
teper-go simpler...like the one on the power box
tru-horrible.just terrible.practice.

http://i44.tinypic.com/1pikxu.jpg
crit me bitches.

[EJ.exe]

man I bit this shit hard from Enem, but it was sick and I'm working on my own adaptation...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3635/3491021296_987814ee04.jpg

this is my own, I've been embellishing more each time I do it.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3401/3491021172_1fca8e4b0b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3378/3491021108_1645bcf144.jpg

crits? =D

[sufr]

Blink: Really like it, especially the 1st one.
Emik: Try and get some flavour into it, other wise it looks pretty good.
BigBlue: Like the second one, Dont like the style of the first tho.
Nukes: Like your style, try using a chisel tip marker instead of a pen and see how it turns out.
Error: Keep practising, even it up. Did you write the "No toys aloud?" If so why are you posting in a toy forum....
EJ: Does it actually say anything? Cant read it...it looks more like a symbol or something. dont really like the style man

[Azul]

romero: try some simps
EJ: I like the last one, but if its supposed to say something I think it needs a bit of work.. :P

Hey guys,
I was thinking of changing my name from azule to azer because I think it looks better. Persian for fire.. Do you think it sounds better? I also thought maybe Venom or venum

[..romero..]

lol that is a simple.for a handstyle at least.

[EJ.exe]

it says "faim" haha. you can't read it?

the first one is a straight philly rip off, no one has any styles around here at all haha. the second one is philly-influenced, but mostly my own.

[CrustOner]

Hey, Klic, when does the handy battle go up?

[Azul]

it says "faim" haha. you can't read it?

the first one is a straight philly rip off, no one has any styles around here at all haha. the second one is philly-influenced, but mostly my own.

you've been looking at this.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8U-8pDUYhs
haven't you

[..romero..]

man I bit this shit hard from Enem, but it was sick and I'm working on my own adaptation...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3635/3491021296_987814ee04.jpg

this is my own, I've been embellishing more each time I do it.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3401/3491021172_1fca8e4b0b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3378/3491021108_1645bcf144.jpg

crits? =D
ive said this before i shall say it again.philly handstyles should stay in philly

[exitus]

/\ agreed
and i cant read that shit at all

[EJ.exe]

lol I'm not trying to steal the style altogether, but you have to bite to develop something of your own. I'm not trying to put philly style in california, I'm trying to make a style of my own..

and I didn't even click on the youtube link, but I probably have been. haha I've been reading a lot about Kadism and the old-school writers.

[paintkid]

heres some of my tags...crits

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lastag-2.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/tag-1.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lastag-1.jpg
Erroroner- I like it
Earn- I like the second one alot more, mostly cause I dont like the underline
I need some serious help haha I feel like my letters just cant flow together well at all in a hand style.

[with.ease]

I'm fuckin no one so... what do I know, but people say crits for crits so heres the shiz, cause I just need to know what direction to push in

Fobia - I'd say more simple, I hate using a pencil, pens and markers are just a different feel, imo
tru - damn, simples...
emik - I'd change the e, but thats just me, otherwise.. at my level i dont think i can crit this much
earn - the first one is a no, the second is better. that first one, i see what you wanted to do, but...
lame - i get it with the line, but I dont think it worked like you were hopin
nukes - i like that, it's not bad, i dont think i can really crit this at my level past that
error - or this, but i think this looks good

idk... some of this is a little older. at this point i dont if i should just be looking at other styles to just get the movements or what. i just sit around and draw pages and pages of letters. i do differeent words all the time to get a well rounded alphabet. theres no other people here though so i just want some other perspective.

http://unitedalone.com/aq/fuck.jpg

[Scheme*119]

lickle somting i and i whipped up for dah boy proper

http://i44.tinypic.com/20p3ifr.jpg

wucha know rudeboy?

[skull-e]

used my new mini mop with black grog, I shal post pics when I get my phone back from my buds house

[Zarb]

I need to try some grog. How is it?

[..romero..]

lickle somting i and i whipped up for dah boy proper

http://i44.tinypic.com/20p3ifr.jpg

wucha know rudeboy?

practice dude...i think your tryng to hard..go simpler

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/hgjdfgsd.jpg

[markingz.]

oh shit that tag right there looks like some kinda nyc style or somethin lol

[XskeletorX]

man I bit this shit hard from Enem, but it was sick and I'm working on my own adaptation...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3635/3491021296_987814ee04.jpg

this is my own, I've been embellishing more each time I do it.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3401/3491021172_1fca8e4b0b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3378/3491021108_1645bcf144.jpg

crits? =D

yo, someone already writes faim...as seen in this video about around 2 minutes in

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgK2P2zl7xM

[Queezy]

Throwie Battle: Due on Friday May 8th (this friday)
Word: AUZE
3 colors or less, and no digital mods.
Send entries to me

[white]

i would have to agree - philly handstyles should stay in philly

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/hgjdfgsd.jpg

bumppp

[oxiclean]

mone-i like it.
with ease-go simpler and get some flow going
las-its ok.. but the drips are kind of shitty
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/SDC10175-1.jpg

[Basikk]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2d9cxsi.jpg

Very new to this. Any crit is appreciated.

[skull-e]

SOME NEW SHIT
----------------
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00413.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00415.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00402.jpg

CRITS
------
Basik: Don't squish your letters so much
Oxi: You are improving very quickly
Mone: Maybe add some dots near the end and make all the lines in your asteriks the same lenght

[..romero..]

mone-lookin good
oxi-pretty dope
cust-lol.wtf is cust??? dope tho
basik-go more basikererer.
http://i42.tinypic.com/zsk0hc.jpg
]http://i39.tinypic.com/20sayl3.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2q3ozmq.jpg

VDK...all fuckin day.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lastag-2.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/tag-1.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lastag-1.jpg
Erroroner- I like it
Earn- I like the second one alot more, mostly cause I dont like the underline
I need some serious help haha I feel like my letters just cant flow together well at all in a hand style.

Bumpp
This whole page looks pretty good, sorry i had to ruin it

[Bink1]

so dont bump that shit

[Basikk]

Thanks for the crit. I am not sure how to make it more simple though, like it would just looks like normal printing when I try to make it simpler. It does look good spaced out a bit more, thanks.

[BigBlueViolence]

Normal print is better than what you have going right now, homie.

[sex without condoms]

normal print tags are some of my favorites they'reusually super dope

[Bink1]

http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC06727.jpg

something totally like this :D

[Facedorateur]

nice spot^

First tag pic in like ever
Crtis plz

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5884/pict0581.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8611/pict0572g.jpg

[..romero..]

mone-lookin good
oxi-pretty dope
cust-lol.wtf is cust??? dope tho
basik-go more basikererer.
http://i42.tinypic.com/zsk0hc.jpg
]http://i39.tinypic.com/20sayl3.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2q3ozmq.jpg

VDK...all fuckin day.

bump because i rock.any crits for romero??

[Facedorateur]

Bring your H and your E closer

[Basikk]

Ok I will try.

[skull-e]

romero, wtf do you write?

[..romero..]

hels.ive decided on hels....so yah.haha.i know i keep changin it but im happy with this one so its saaaaayin.

[sirn]

graffdabusup- i like that, i think it looks good, got nice flow

oxiclean- maybe take the extra line going down off the s, but i think everything else looks good

Basikk- i think fix up the first letter, make it a little more clear then i think you have something pretty good

skull-e - i think the first one looks the best

..romero.. - i like the first picture the most, i think its good

Zarb- i dont really like the top of the a, maybe keep it a more straighter line, like the top of the s in the first pic

Bink1- that is a good normal print tag, i like where it is too

Facedorateur- those both have good flow and style, i like the first one more though


http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/2-1.jpg
crits on this please

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2im2kjl.jpg
quick revision.

[with.ease]

I change names constantly. I love that name Hels and those hels tags rock.

sirn - i love that s, maybe look even better without k extention
oxiclean - i like that, though i hate shit in o's
basik - space that out maybe... idk i cant tell what it'll look like spaced, but alone like it is i cant even make it out if i hadnt known what you were writing

more simple... so how about this... oh sorry about the medium, haha, easy, cheap, and abundant, love those gloss pages

http://unitedalone.com/aq/newer.jpg

[.The.OhZ.]

i like those simple hands good job

[Fury]

^ I read that as "I like those simple hand jobs"

But they look good man.

Earn - Not digging the E too much

[skull-e]

Earn: Not digging the a or the n
Ease: I like the top tag the most, work on the top getting bigger, it's getting somewhere
==============================================
Grog in a mop:
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00416.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00417.jpg

[eel2]

i like to do my taggys with a glue stick, then i throw a bag of sparkles on to the wall, but they only stick to the glue, so i just have sparkle tags

[skull-e]

that sounds cool man

[eel2]

io could probly burn u........... gaylord

[eel2]

besides man, alot of people think their sick, like my little brother and all his friends man love that hsit, and like if u knew my dad u could ask him trust there dope

[skull-e]

fuck you man, I've been nice to allk these fags on the toy forums for quite a bit now, and now some lil douchebag from buttfuck nowhere is gonna come here and tell me I suck?

put the fuck up or shut the fuck up

bitch ass toy

[jel0n3uh]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3616/3488111368_2d5cda2560.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3583/3488111358_d0c3d15648.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3565/3488107988_117b43d673.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3325/3488107998_c6e284b932.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3662/3488107972_3aa5a3579d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3650/3488107914_8286ec93d9.jpg
first time using a mop and ghetto krink. squeezin a little to hard. mad dripss.


yea tep that first one is fresh.
fobia no.

my boy writes emik and hes all city APN well your prob not even from NY so it dont matter

[eel2]

dog u ever heard of the Green Gators? lets just say i have connections with them and man my big brother hes messed up yo cocaine gngs sex drugs rock n roolll freestyle rappin all day long dont mess with me or hell mess u up

[acereborn]

that sounds cool man

yo, your L looks like a C. your iks doesnt really flow either. nice though

[skull-e]

Emik: is that just straight up silver paint with thinner?

and eel: b&fag

[sirn]

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/2-1.jpg
crits on this please

bump for crits

[with.ease]

earn - im nit sure how to get across what i want to say here, i kinda want to say do more by doing leess i think

sirn - i still say if you take that extra little piece off the K it look perfect.

man, whats a complicated hand job? lol

[iPwnF00lz]

skull-e did you change your name homie?

[skull-e]

yezzir, I write CUST now, TASR was waayyy too heated

[iPwnF00lz]

I feel you I have changed names a couple times just because this tiny ass city is too fuckin loaded with cops that try to get any kid for any little thing they can.

I haven't written in a while, trying to come up with another name has been pissing me off.

[BigBlueViolence]

Earn: Not digging the a or the n
Ease: I like the top tag the most, work on the top getting bigger, it's getting somewhere
==============================================
Grog in a mop:
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00416.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00417.jpg
Yeah I know man, I just kind of winged it.
I'm going to spend some time cleaning it up.

On the critisism end,
I really dig the first one,
but I'm not really feeling what's going on in the second one.

[THEGREATSOUTHERNTRENDKILL]

thats strange, i like the second one more....

[iPwnF00lz]

I like the first one more too. I think I am going to write sound, I just winged it and I can flow with it very nicely and quick.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i43.tinypic.com/ieeafm.jpg

[expozay]

earn: love your handys dude..
cust: fressh.
semk:like the simplicity.

whoever that was that said their boy writes emik: im not in new york and feel like if he was all city i would have heard about him by now. but w.e its cool.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3651/3508832815_b00f4ce0f2_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3316/3509645396_c2b32d20d2_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3656/3509645394_271e3f357c_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3409/3508832819_dca70256fa_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3626/3509645392_2f830b62a7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3338/3509645390_fcd207f906.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3347/3509645386_7c8e287864.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3393/3508832823_8a7c5dd0ff.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3632/3508832813_3ac38dc7c7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3611/3508832807_aa4688394b.jpg
crits? best? worst?

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm kind of at the point where I feel like experimenting with everything.
Just sitting down and doing whatever.
Sometimes it turns out decent, most of the time it doesn't, haha.

My favorite thing of yours are the plain jane, simple letters that have mad drips.
I dig the fuck out of it.

[iPwnF00lz]

Just google "emik graffiti" when you were thinking about changing your name to emik, ___ graffiti on google images and flickr always makes sure that your the only one using the name.
http://www.graffiti.org/miami/enzo_046_edited.jpg

And yeah the simple drippy is the best of the styles, and bake sale is a great album always have it in the car.

[.The.OhZ.]

i dont really see the big deal if you have the same name as someone else as long as your not in the same state/country. just dont bite him

[nine one]

fuck you man, I've been nice to allk these fags on the toy forums for quite a bit now, and now some lil douchebag from buttfuck nowhere is gonna come here and tell me I suck?

put the fuck up or shut the fuck up

bitch ass toy



dooont fuck with cust, trust. i tought it was smart, i met up with him , he kicked the shit out of me blind folded with his hands tied to his back. true story.

this ***** has bodies hanging from his roof.

[Mr yarbles]

Seriously
I met skull one time and he raped my cat, no joke.
Then stabbed me and took all my paint
When I asked him why he tied hammers to his shoe and kicked me in the face.

[expozay]

Emik: is that just straight up silver paint with thinner?

and eel: b&fag

yes it is.

[nine one]

Seriously
I met skull one time and he raped my cat, no joke.
Then stabbed me and took all my paint
When I asked him why he tied hammers to his shoe and kicked me in the face.


you too man? you got the hammer aswell? ohh shit. this niqqa knocked on my door, flicked a 100 bill at me, and then when i was about to pick it up he started pissing on me.

this guy is hardcore, no joke.

P.S, he made me swallow a chainsaw, i currently have no legs nor arms. im typing with my eyes, is that win?

[Fury]

Skull-E beat the shit out of me, killed me, brought me back to life, and kicked my ass again.

[BigBlueViolence]

I heard skull-e killed this fucking joke because it wasn't funny anymore.

[skull-e]

*directed at fury*

[with.ease]

eh... I say take a name you like, maybe... maybe search to see if say a king has your name, then once your good, you can battle anyone who says otherwise. whoever wins deserves the name right?

[..romero..]

one time i saw skull-e try to rape fury...i say try becuase you cant rape the willing.



















...but he was definitely trying.

[Fury]

Emik - I really like what you put out man, it looks sweet. The only suggestion I really have is try something different, but I'm not sure really what.

[lacrosseplayer80]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/0508092134.jpg

criticize please lol

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/icetea2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/townhouse222-1.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/serttruck2.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/townhouse111.jpg
oldies just felt like posting

[BigBlueViolence]

Lacrosse, Strangers, not feeling either
I'd scrap them.

http://i39.tinypic.com/hv3247.jpg
whoring the fuck out of this for some possible criticism

[Each]

bigblue- that red one looks like it could be hella tight, but i'm not thinkin its your name cause i kinda remember seein somewhere on some sight that you wrote earn. haha.

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, there is no way in hell that the number 13
would go anywhere near my fuckin' name.
I'm not trying to get stabbed.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Big blue. I ain't feelin that.

[BigBlueViolence]

What about it aren't you feeling?
Just not your style?

[klic]

bigblue i dont really like it, guess its just not my style either

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle13.jpg

and some shit from like a week ago
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag35.jpg
signs were wet and my marker wouldnt write
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag36.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag37.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag38.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag39.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag40.jpg

[..romero..]

the last one is dope klic...keep that one.

[ErrorOner...]

some funky shit...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0369.jpg

[CrustOner]

This is my usual handstyle. It was with a Micron. Ha, go figure?

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/CrustOnerHandy.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/las.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/last-1.jpg

Crust- I like the letters but maybe lose some of the extra shit around it

[Bink1]

dont write that shit las it sucks.

[Emediation]

I currently write ask,
but I know it exists elsewhere out there.
this is my tag,
what do you think?
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/utf-8BSU1HMDAwMzguanBn.jpg


should I replace it with this?
Aston is my new idea,
i only like the letters,
so there's def meaning lacking.
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/utf-8BSU1HMDAwMzkuanBn.jpg

[CrustOner]

I currently write ask,
but I know it exists elsewhere out there.
this is my tag,
what do you think?
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/utf-8BSU1HMDAwMzguanBn.jpg


should I replace it with this?
Aston is my new idea,
i only like the letters,
so there's def meaning lacking.
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/utf-8BSU1HMDAwMzkuanBn.jpg

try practicing your letters, then put in minimal extensions. like take the quotes out of the middle of your S.

[exitus]

Yea what he said, less extensions, i cant even tell what the name is

Also "las" or whatever, that sucks, hard to read also.

http://i42.tinypic.com/2s1knq9.jpg

crits please, still trying to get a decent tag down

[klic]

Also "las" or whatever, that sucks, hard to read also.


you have no right to talk shit haha, your handstyle is ten times worse than his bro

[exitus]

help me out, how do i get better

and whatever, i just think its a lame attempt at a one liner. drop the line to the a and the circle around the thing and id be good.
and i was talking more about the name, not the handstyle. I know i suck, thats why im here lol

[Emediation]

the first reads ASK,
the second ASTON.
should i get rid of the halo?

[CrustOner]

definitely. That means you've hit high spots. Like billboards and water towers. High enough, that if you fall, you die. That's when you put a halo on your handies.

[..romero..]

definitely. That means you've hit high spots. Like billboards and water towers. High enough, that if you fall, you die. That's when you put a halo on your handies.

where are yall fools comin up with this shit??? a halo is purely aesthetic.fuck it put it if you want...seriously you kids say the dumbest shit some times...

[Each]

crust- looks good
scrapo- simple but nice.
las- i wouldnt connect the l and a because it kinda resembles a u
ask- on the first one, the k looks nice

[Zarb]

Thanks for the crits I think i've just been trying to hard I'm gonna start over again with just simple letters

[Emediation]

changed the 's' a bit...
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_1449.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

God awful.

[eel2]

has anyone used pencils and pens to do their taggys with? i cant really get anything proper like big markers or mops and spray paint, cuz my mom would find it shes so smart too shed figure it out that i write. so ya could i use pencils or pens or somethin any one know?

thanks

steel eel

[Emediation]

God awful.

well,
tell me why.

[JasK]

Emediation, I like it a lot.
Especially the new S, but it's very complicated, less is more sometimes.

[CrustOner]

changed the 's' a bit...
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_1449.jpg

try to simplify your a and your k. like ^^^ said, less is usually more.

try going very simple, then progress up from there.

[haze4life]

has anyone used pencils and pens to do their taggys with? i cant really get anything proper like big markers or mops and spray paint, cuz my mom would find it shes so smart too shed figure it out that i write. so ya could i use pencils or pens or somethin any one know?

thanks

steel eel

this is a joke again, right?

[graffdabusup]

hahahahah

[CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K]

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/107/0424091736.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9725/0424091750.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5439/0429091710.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2213/0429091701.jpg

[klic]

has anyone used pencils and pens to do their taggys with? i cant really get anything proper like big markers or mops and spray paint, cuz my mom would find it shes so smart too shed figure it out that i write. so ya could i use pencils or pens or somethin any one know?

thanks

steel eel

i think there should be a thread called "guess which bs member eel2 is" haha

[..romero..]

the youth are lost the youth are lost.who will find them???

[Emediation]

this is what I tag on the street ,
much simpler,
and about 3 strokes, so quick too.
@sebr = that yellow one is awesome

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_2022.jpg

[JasK]

[LIKE A BOSS TAG]

I lol'd.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/1111111111111.jpg

[..romero..]

your tag needs maaaaaajor work.it reminds me of my style starting out.the r and s are identical to mine...dont get so crazy and shit...like how your r spikes up.yah...fuck the world.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

well, ima post som of my other handies. i have better ones, i havent been carrying around a marker i will post better. ull see.

[Mr yarbles]

Ask it's still terrible you're trying too hard
DOn't listen to anyone who tries to tell you you're good they don't know what their talking about.

[JasK]

Ask it's still terrible you're trying too hard
DOn't listen to anyone who tries to tell you you're good they don't know what their talking about.

lol, wdf. People get so raged/sad about bad tags, this is the fucking toy board.
Ask, middle row on the right is my favorite of those.

http://wimg.co.uk/QoqZ5G.jpg

[CrustOner]

this is what I tag on the street ,
much simpler,
and about 3 strokes, so quick too.
@sebr = that yellow one is awesome

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_2022.jpg
some of those look like they say "AEK"

[JasK]

some of those look like they say "AEK"

Lol, I see one, very top right.

[Emediation]

lol
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_2126.jpg

[JasK]

AEK is a crew, though.
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/01012007110620AEKLUST.jpg

[Emediation]

im not changing it.

[JasK]

Oh, lol.

[Emediation]

just entertaining the idea haha

[Emediation]

but,
how about this 'S'?
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_2245.jpg

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00422.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00423.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00428.jpg
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___________

CRITS
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Cross em...: Holly shit, I love your style
Strangers: I'm really feeling the s, but the M is sloppy as fuuuuck
AEK: no

[CrustOner]

On the street? what did you use for that? it doesn't look like paint..

[skull-e]

its white out ona bus shelter, I had to make it look like it wa on the road to be able to see it clearly, considering its white.

[CrustOner]

OH! I just now notice the reflection. Ha, I feel like a dumbass now.

[Mr yarbles]

lol, wdf. People get so raged/sad about bad tags, this is the fucking toy board.
Ask, middle row on the right is my favorite of those.

http://wimg.co.uk/QoqZ5G.jpg

Fuck off.
Just cus it's a toy board dosn't give you the right to be fucking terrible.
I wish people would've been hard on me back in the day
Then maybe I wouldn't have wasted some much damn time with some wack ass shit.
Consider it a blessing that I'm willing to be a dick to you guys.

[..romero..]

word.jeva you suck...get over it.i wish someone would have told me how whack my shit was...then again im very self critical so i dont need people to hate on my shit i do it myself but trust.rapist rapes you in handstyles if he says you suck you suck.practice until you stop doing so...

[exitus]

i can understand you being a tightass but for real at least help us out. when you just say no or it sucks then were not getting better.
ask, make sure your k looks like a k not an n
jask u suck too so dont chalenge the pros.
mad respect to romero too

[CrustOner]

^^ wait... Don't you suck?

[exitus]

yea i suck too but at least were here trying to get better.

[CrustOner]

alright.

[with.ease]

where are yall fools comin up with this shit??? a halo is purely aesthetic.fuck it put it if you want...seriously you kids say the dumbest shit some times...

I've never heard this either, in fact of all the cats I know that paint heavens not one of them uses it, but plenty that i know that dont go heaven do use them.

also..
man look, graff is not about apologies and given each other handjobs in the back of paint shops. this is not football or some fucking art class. if you have a crew they might stroke your ego, but not if they've been at it for any amount of time, unless your related. these guys arent being dicks, you asked, their telling you... theres only so much adivce you can give kid, go simple, practice, too much, etc. past that it's "you suck, try some more" sure you'll get it, but no one can climb through and make you the shit, theres no step by step guide to a perfect tag or whatever and there never will be... imo thats impossible. you have your emotions all tangled up and your pointing that shit at everyone but the right guy,a dn thats you. sure it sucks, but thats graff man.. or fuck, idk, thats how i was taught

wait till you got a guy whos been writing for ages just laugh at you. you cant get pissed, he's doin you a favor, cause thats what every head from coast to coast will do if you put that shit on a train. w/e, just roll with it and practice and grow some skin kid. the faster the better. thats how i know it. if you ask, be ready for an answer

[skull-e]

tl;dr

more crity less talky

[JasK]

Fuck off.
Just cus it's a toy board dosn't give you the right to be fucking terrible.
I wish people would've been hard on me back in the day
Then maybe I wouldn't have wasted some much damn time with some wack ass shit.
Consider it a blessing that I'm willing to be a dick to you guys.

Lol, you just contradicted yourself, toys are terrible, that's why they're toys.
And I know I suck, I'm a fucking toy trying to get better, which is why I'm up in the toy board posting to get crits. And, what the fuck, you're telling Ask he sucks, which may be true, but I can see how super cool critic you are without even telling him how to get better. Post up some of your shit, we can tell how hardcore you are, even if you are good you have no reason to be a cunt.
And I don't give a shit about respecting the pros unless they're mellow, if they're cocky as shit about their art they're still douchebags.

[BigBlueViolence]

Lacrosse, Strangers, not feeling either
I'd scrap them.

http://i39.tinypic.com/hv3247.jpg
whoring the fuck out of this for some possible criticism


Bump

Skull- dope.

Everything else- NOT dope.

How's that for crits?

[Sieda]

(:
http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj316/the-unknown-1/PICT0166.jpg

[.The.OhZ.]

^^^ not feelin it
heres a few i did
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/1513/graff002.jpg

[Sieda]

^^^
top right (Y)
To much of a glow on mine?
maybe pink is a bit much ?

[.The.OhZ.]

no its all wiggly and awkward lol

[BigBlueViolence]

Lacrosse, Strangers, not feeling either
I'd scrap them.

http://i39.tinypic.com/hv3247.jpg
whoring the fuck out of this for some possible criticism

Bump... again

Sheda?- Don't connect letters.
Lose the god forsaken multi-quotes
Keep your letters at a similar size.

Ozoe- top left, for sure.
The Z underline is hurting it, though.

[exitus]

what markers u use to practice

[..romero..]

big blue if your gonna rock that style lose that y.the way it uderlines shouldnt be happening with those kidna letters.their supposed to be very uniform.at least thats how it should look.rework the y and its straight.and all those little things you threw in on the sid drop them.just do letters.

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture133.jpg
this ones for you romero

CRITS

bigvlue: I like your cholo style better than your simple kinda wild style handys
sieda:idk...
ozoe: Don't stick to one kid of letter, make your movements omewhat erratic when you tag and something nice will turn up eventually

[Sieda]

(:
http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj316/the-unknown-1/PICT0166.jpg

i need all the help i can get, kinda a new tag.
Is the style all good , or does it need alot of work ?
Crits.
writting Sieda

[CrustOner]

Too many quotation marks. try to make it all one size. the I looks like a lowercase T. get rid of the wiggle on the E. the A looks like a 4. and get that star out of there. practice the star before you put it in.

And don't outline it, much less in pink highlighter.

[..romero..]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture133.jpg
this ones for you romero

CRITS

bigvlue: I like your cholo style better than your simple kinda wild style handys
sieda:idk...
ozoe: Don't stick to one kid of letter, make your movements omewhat erratic when you tag and something nice will turn up eventually

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w


how thoughtful..

[Mr yarbles]

Lol, you just contradicted yourself, toys are terrible, that's why they're toys.
And I know I suck, I'm a fucking toy trying to get better, which is why I'm up in the toy board posting to get crits. And, what the fuck, you're telling Ask he sucks, which may be true, but I can see how super cool critic you are without even telling him how to get better. Post up some of your shit, we can tell how hardcore you are, even if you are good you have no reason to be a cunt.
And I don't give a shit about respecting the pros unless they're mellow, if they're cocky as shit about their art they're still douchebags.

http://i42.tinypic.com/15k6d5.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2w2m25i.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/f4hds1.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/6hox7p.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/uc04.jpg

You were saying?
Take some fucking advice fag and shut the fuck up.
The streets arn't fucking easy I'm being a whole hell of a lot nicer then some cat who will beat your ass for being a toy

[..romero..]

i beat up/rob toys...when i catch them.i dont usually tho....:(






edit:700TH POST!!! YAY FOR MAJOR POST WHORING.







i need a life.real real bad.

[JasK]

Yeah, dude, I never said you were bad. But how the fuck are toys supposed to get better without crits? Just saying it's terrible doesn't really help. Coming in here with your dick in your ego just makes you seem like a douchebag.

[..romero..]

when he says you suck and practice that means your waaaay off and just need to scrap the whole thing and start over.if their was a way you could improve that we would have said so but no...there isnt.thats why he said you suck and get over it and do it over until it looks decent or you at least have something to work off of....

[Mr yarbles]

hah seriously
WHat do you guys think some fool on thes treet is going to cross you and put "it looks decent but if you worked on your flow and straightend up that a and made the whole thing a little less jaged it would look way better :)"
Fuck no
Take me telling you you suck as a warning
Pretty mucha freeebie to let you know
Hmm maybe it sucks adn I should scrap it

[Sieda]

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj316/the-unknown-1/PICT0197.jpghttp://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj316/the-unknown-1/PICT0196.jpg

[Emediation]

hah seriously
WHat do you guys think some fool on thes treet is going to cross you and put "it looks decent but if you worked on your flow and straightend up that a and made the whole thing a little less jaged it would look way better :)"
Fuck no
Take me telling you you suck as a warning
Pretty mucha freeebie to let you know
Hmm maybe it sucks adn I should scrap it

that is why we're on here,
so it doesn't happen out there,
so why make both places shitty?

[exitus]

/\ thank you
and we post shit here to see if its any good first. so i guess thanks for telling us that we suck.

[Mr yarbles]

Exactly
You can't sit here and tell me oh well we post it on here to see if it's good
Obviously it fucking wasn't or I else I would've said so.
and I doubt you're not dropping a few tags on the street, everyone is.

[Emediation]

ignore the bottom part lol,

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090513_0041-1.jpg

[with.ease]

Yeah, dude, I never said you were bad. But how the fuck are toys supposed to get better without crits? Just saying it's terrible doesn't really help. Coming in here with your dick in your ego just makes you seem like a douchebag.

let me try again... once shit is so far wrong it's easier to say fuck this try again than to point out everything.. romero said it better..

shit go back and read what i wrote last time... tl;dr my ass, it should be must read

[skull-e]

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bum my sexiness for crits