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Marke
05-13-2009, 11:52 PM
crits on my one line philly tall?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-14-2009, 12:06 AM
Don't do it again, ever.

..romero..
05-14-2009, 12:07 AM
i feel i must reiterate.




phillies should stay in philly

Marke
05-14-2009, 12:10 AM
LoL raped in record time. But those aren't crits, tell me WHY i shouldnt do it again ever.

Mr yarbles
05-14-2009, 12:13 AM
God I'm starting to hate this fucking stupid ass forum
Tell me why why why
SHit
How about take the advice and never fucking do it again
you don't live in philly therefore you shouldn't be a doing a fucking philly hand.
You wouldn't be saying I live in california if you live in iowa would you?

And anyone who starts bitching at me just stop now.

Marke
05-14-2009, 12:16 AM
Well I think your missing the point of criticism, its supposed to be constructive. And what the fuck did you expect your in the toy forum?

BigBlueViolence
05-14-2009, 12:20 AM
LoL raped in record time. But those aren't crits, tell me WHY i shouldnt do it again ever.
Because I said so.
Don't look a gift horse in the mouth, fucker.

..romero..
05-14-2009, 12:23 AM
becuase mero has spoken and you better listen to mero or like....the world will rip apart or some shit like that.so yah.fuck off with the phillies.

BigBlueViolence
05-14-2009, 12:29 AM
An' if you don't like it you can get out!
http://images.southparkstudios.com/img/content/characters/134a.jpg

Marke
05-14-2009, 12:40 AM
Haha alright alright dont write phillies, gotcha. But before I was interested in phillies I was thinking of something classic 70's NY style with the kinda simple letters and street number. I just want to have a different handstyle and I like a lot of the original shit. What do you think of those? Too simple in comparison with shit nowadays?

CrustOner
05-14-2009, 12:42 AM
You won't have a different handstyle. We promise.

Marke
05-14-2009, 12:46 AM
Okay let me rephrase that, I want a handstyle thats different from the MAJORITY. Obviously it isn't going to be 100% completely different when writing a pre-defined style.

BigBlueViolence
05-14-2009, 12:48 AM
What do you even write?
Came?

Marke
05-14-2009, 12:48 AM
Ya my names Cameron so its just the first 4 letters.

CrustOner
05-14-2009, 12:49 AM
It won't be different from the majority. Unless you're MAK or Cust.



^^^^HAHAHAHA Came? really? as in "I just came?"

Marke
05-14-2009, 12:51 AM
It won't be different from the majority. Unless you're MAK or Cust.



^^^^HAHAHAHA Came? really? as in "I just came?"

Ya I figured after I have some style down it would be funny for little phrases like "oops I came" and shit like that.

CrustOner
05-14-2009, 12:52 AM
Yeah, I guess it would. instead of saying you have steez... I'd say you have skeet. I'm keeping that in mind for the future.

BigBlueViolence
05-14-2009, 01:05 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2v3ipn6.jpg

Start somewhere around this area.
The letters may look connected, but they aren't.
Don't try and draw them that way.

proNYNJA
05-14-2009, 01:08 AM
well i have a homie named RAGS, hes pretty dope but never the less we still make fun of his name.

Marke
05-14-2009, 01:22 AM
Okay crits round 2. Hopefully less rape-inviting than the last one.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw006.jpg

http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw007.jpg

with.ease
05-14-2009, 02:27 AM
That upper black one? keep doing tags that simple until you can do them so they look tight every single time, like locked into memory for all time. Dont stray until you can. Thats what I'm doing...

expozay
05-14-2009, 03:42 AM
came stick with the simpler first one. lose the second one completely. try rounding out your letters.


i love pilot jumbo.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2358/3530684108_91f7c3fc41.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2056/3530684102_f88aa71aa7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2245/3530684100_74befd69c2.jpg
^^^drunk. dark.

OE's.

BigBlueViolence
05-14-2009, 10:49 AM
I don't think you get what simple means, homie.
Lose the "big little big" shit, keep all your letters the same size.
I wouldn't connect them either.
hold on, I'll give you an example.

http://i40.tinypic.com/2hf6p9g.jpg
Simple.

on another note...

http://i44.tinypic.com/10qjb6u.jpg
bumpskis

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 04:02 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2n84uvm.png

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 04:10 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/hs9c1w.png

I need to start bringin my camera out nowadays..these are couple of my first times goin out a couple years ago

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 05:16 PM
now its

http://i44.tinypic.com/2a6s4dz.png

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 05:17 PM
the only thing not mine iz thrash's quik tag between thr

CrustOner
05-14-2009, 05:19 PM
came stick with the simpler first one. lose the second one completely. try rounding out your letters.


i love pilot jumbo.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2358/3530684108_91f7c3fc41.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2056/3530684102_f88aa71aa7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2245/3530684100_74befd69c2.jpg
^^^drunk. dark.

OE's.

haha the first one looks like tape!

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 05:49 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2wrnaqt.png

Zarb
05-14-2009, 07:16 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0514091307.jpg
Trying to start simple, let me know if I should go simpler.
Emik- You have nice marker tags
BigBlue- Dope

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 09:05 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/eje9tx.png

clockwork
05-14-2009, 10:35 PM
Loki is already a writer, from MO.

Loki X Sho
05-14-2009, 11:10 PM
i dont really write it anymore anyways so its all good i write SBIZ

walkingcarpet
05-15-2009, 02:12 PM
First time using spray paint. These are the ones I liked/sucked the least ha.
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0059.jpg

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0060.jpg

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0057.jpg

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0058.jpg?t=1242411222

Emik- looks good, not really feeling the k's on the last two but the first is cool

Tez-Graf
05-15-2009, 02:14 PM
Critz plz
http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/My%20Stuff/Tag.jpg

. Walking - 3 one from bottom is best imo, silver one is clearest but the 3rd one from bottom looks best coz of fat letters.
. Loki - Space your letters out and atleast try to keep one word per line... i think it's one word anyways. :)

walkingcarpet
05-15-2009, 02:19 PM
Tez, give crits to get crits.
In my opinion,
loose the arrow
make the e more rounded like how the Z is
or make the Z more rigid

FrizzleFry
05-15-2009, 02:22 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/eje9tx.png

does that say kamikaze ? lol
its to close together IMO

exitus
05-15-2009, 06:36 PM
loki your photo skills are pitiful lol
came your name kinda blows, take a pointer from bigblue. go simpler.
jaek thats fresh. 1 is the best imo but i would do something about the k

Loki X Sho
05-15-2009, 06:53 PM
yeah sweet trac fone pic courtesy of my home girl dont be dissin, and yea it says Kami Kazi...just a new somethin to fuck around with...and I dont like my letters spaced toys cant read it but kings can

exitus
05-15-2009, 07:19 PM
oh its cool, i had to put up with a trac phone for a while.

CrustOner
05-15-2009, 08:08 PM
...

just because you're inconveniencing people with your handies doesn't make you anywhere near a king. or even on par with one.

the easier it is to read, the better you get up. are you following me?

with.ease
05-16-2009, 04:22 AM
...

just because you're inconveniencing people with your handies doesn't make you anywhere near a king. or even on par with one.

the easier it is to read, the better you get up. are you following me?

word.

Tez-Graf
05-16-2009, 07:07 AM
^ ^ exactly. :)

http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/Tag1.jpg

Trying to find an arrow that works. :(

mtown
05-16-2009, 07:40 AM
no arrows man
the arrow just fucks your tag up in 99% of all tags

Tez-Graf
05-16-2009, 07:41 AM
mmn, but mah tag looks bland without it... /ponder.

walkingcarpet
05-16-2009, 09:33 AM
Tez, try make your letter all the same size
and yeah, loose the arrow, Z looks good

klic
05-16-2009, 10:27 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2358/3530684108_91f7c3fc41.jpg


this is dope emik, keep going with it

kinda shaky,crits??
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag41.jpg

tez - dont use an arrow, keep all the letters the same size, round out your letters more so there not as pointy

jaek - i like the second one from the bottom best

CrustOner
05-16-2009, 10:53 AM
mmn, but mah tag looks bland without it... /ponder.

get rid of it. There are plenty more extensions that can make it look better.

expozay
05-16-2009, 11:49 AM
thanks klic. i think i still owe u a throwie exchange ill get on that today been mad busy lately. handy looks good extension on the k is kind of buggin me tho. i think that k would be doper without it.


tez-lose the arrow and make ur t smaller. try and keep your leters all the same size at firstt. just stay simple and lose the addons. it will look alot better and although u think its too plain without that addon it makes it ten times wacker than it already is.

Tez-Graf
05-16-2009, 12:37 PM
Klic - J looks like an extension to the a at first.

http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/Tag-Rounded.jpg

Loki X Sho
05-16-2009, 03:02 PM
welllll nobody around here bitchez about it its a wholeee new game in my jungle, and i dint say i was a king bud, but my kings can read my shit, so im good. Im a Dutchesssssssss...nah but I dont even know about Kami, im just so sick of my current alias I cant stand to see it anymore.

Mr yarbles
05-16-2009, 03:04 PM
this is dope emik, keep going with it

kinda shaky,crits??
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag41.jpg

tez - dont use an arrow, keep all the letters the same size, round out your letters more so there not as pointy

jaek - i like the second one from the bottom best

Getting better
I can dig it

Loki X Sho
05-16-2009, 03:07 PM
yeah thats not bad at all i dig your letters klic

walkingcarpet
05-16-2009, 03:32 PM
First time using spray paint. These are the ones I liked/sucked the least ha.
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0059.jpg

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0060.jpg

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0057.jpg

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/IMG_0058.jpg?t=1242411222

Emik- looks good, not really feeling the k's on the last two but the first is cool
bump..

Klic- looks really good and simple

XskeletorX
05-16-2009, 03:51 PM
pretty damn good for your first time with a can...your "k" looks the best in the silver tag

Loki X Sho
05-16-2009, 04:34 PM
i honestly like the top one the best...the extended line on your J is tight..really not bad for your first

with.ease
05-16-2009, 04:56 PM
klic - I really like that
tez - your letter look to slose together to me

Zarb
05-16-2009, 06:24 PM
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/7097/eark3.th.jpg (http://img39.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eark3.jpg)
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/3044/eark.jpg (http://img39.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eark.jpg)

Crits?
Jaek- I like the simpleness, keep goin with it
Tez- Your getting a better idea of it, but maybe lose the crown thing
Emik- Pretty fresh
Janek- I like it

Wallace
05-16-2009, 09:15 PM
my physics hw, version of my tag is the second from the lefttt. got a little carried away with some stuff, boredom will do that

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5246/img00291.jpg (http://img269.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00291.jpg)

Sieda
05-17-2009, 07:02 AM
i really dont like tags that you cant read, how will someone recognise it if they dont have a clue what it says .

Wallace
05-17-2009, 12:31 PM
much more legible large, and people recognize

sec_1
05-17-2009, 01:02 PM
this is like 2nd time tryn to tag sec i like s but i need help with my e c crit plz

BigBlueViolence
05-17-2009, 01:05 PM
i don't think you get what simple means, homie.
Lose the "big little big" shit, keep all your letters the same size.
I wouldn't connect them either.
Hold on, i'll give you an example.

http://i40.tinypic.com/2hf6p9g.jpg
simple.

On another note...

http://i44.tinypic.com/10qjb6u.jpg

b_mp

..romero..
05-17-2009, 01:37 PM
the ask is pretty dope but the earn needs work.specifically with the e and a.and with that style the litle doodads or what the fuck ever shouldnt be there.like the circle over it and the underline.just do the letters.ill do one for you.mostly becuase im bored haha.personally that simple tag you were rockin was good nd you should stick with that really.

joker954
05-17-2009, 02:04 PM
sec u needa hit the books

Tez-Graf
05-17-2009, 06:00 PM
slight question, how u know if u've got the perfect tag? :P

Big - That ask is nice! The other is a lil bit bumpy... :|
Sec - Stick to letters before you do addons. :)
Wallace - Best to make it readable until you get known.

DECO ONE
05-17-2009, 06:23 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/rewl-2.jpg

Tez-Graf
05-17-2009, 06:42 PM
Deco, keep practicing. :)
http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/Tagnew.jpg

DECO ONE
05-17-2009, 06:48 PM
haha i prefer simple, readable letters... my faves are the bottom 2

hypermann7
05-17-2009, 09:35 PM
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd269/hypermann7/PIC-0029.jpg

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd269/hypermann7/PIC-0030.jpg

tell me what ya think.

expozay
05-17-2009, 10:37 PM
tez lose all the lame ass add ons

klic
05-17-2009, 10:37 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle14.jpg

relik - give crits if you want to get any. just try to get some flow going, lose the quotation marks and star

tez - like i already said, keep all your letters the same size

rewl - give crits to get them. center bottom ones best

bigblue - the ask handy looks dope, the earn handstyle.. not so much. i dunno man, some of the stuff you try looks fresh as hell, but some of the stuff you do looks like something a five year old would do trying to learning their letters (no hate). you have so many unique styles though, i think you just need to stick with one, your stuffs pretty dope for the most part though

wallace - i cant even see it, shitty flick haha

eark - spend a little more time perfecting on paper and get your letters to flow more (for example, make the end of the E join onto the left leg of the A, or atleast make the end of the e parallel to the the A, because it kind of just wrecks the flow when you have the end of your e meeting your A at 90 degree.. just little things like that can ruin the flow of a handstyle) see the handstlye i did for you in the exchange thread and youll see what i mean kind of)

Zarb
05-17-2009, 10:40 PM
Yeah klic I know what you mean. Her;s one I did before I read your crits though. My fitst time really adding extra crap let me know if i should lose the stuff for now guys.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0517092155.jpg
Klic- Ive always like your hand, pretty ill.
Earn- I like the earn tag, its so different.
Relik- Keep to the more basic letters, and lose the extra stuff for now.

Tez-Graf
05-18-2009, 02:55 AM
:) Better.
http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/DSC00042.jpg

Zarb, is the a there for any reason atall? If not, lose it, dosn't flow imo.
Klic, LIke the middle one the best. :)

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
05-18-2009, 06:25 PM
http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs014.snc1/4211_176090005230_573725230_6794252_2386594_n.jpg
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs014.snc1/4211_176090015230_573725230_6794253_5065812_n.jpg
http://photos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs014.snc1/4211_176091245230_573725230_6794267_187355_n.jpg
http://photos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs014.snc1/4211_176092065230_573725230_6794274_503586_n.jpg

CrustOner
05-18-2009, 08:44 PM
ew..

klic
05-18-2009, 09:16 PM
i dont know what your looking at crust but that doesnt look too bad to me, with the exception of the second one from the bottom

CrustOner
05-18-2009, 11:27 PM
both the last two.

BigBlueViolence
05-18-2009, 11:51 PM
I like all four, personally.
I think the second and last are the best, though.

walkingcarpet
05-19-2009, 12:22 AM
I agree with BBV
I'm really not feeling the 3rd one though.
The last one looks pretty good.
Just not feeling the style of the S on the 3rd or the arrow on the 3rd.

CrustOner
05-19-2009, 01:07 AM
the last two are the same, except the S is rounded on the last one, the arrow extensions on the R's are a little different, and there are stars. It's done with a thinner, less drippy marker.

skull-e
05-19-2009, 01:17 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00456.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00455.jpg
Drunk victoria day pics

Sebr: Keep doing what you`re doing, shits sooo tight.

Klikaroo: Try adding some things onto your tag now that you've basicly mastered it.

Zarb: Kinda looks liek you're biting my circled asterikks, but iil let it slide ;D

Bink1
05-19-2009, 02:40 PM
the last two are the same, except the S is rounded on the last one, the arrow extensions on the R's are a little different, and there are stars. It's done with a thinner, less drippy marker.

are you fuking retarded? the last two are the same? WTF? are u doing every next tag in diff style or sumtin , dumb fuck. and ffs those markers and inks are dope.. either your blind or mentaly ill no matter what you write or how long u have been writin

ESKiMO2
05-19-2009, 04:15 PM
Hows this? I'm not a tagger.

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/2247/calortag.jpg

Good or bad?

Tez-Graf
05-19-2009, 04:41 PM
Good, but as i've been told, keep your letters the same size... XD

http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/DSC00042.jpg

Bump

skull-e
05-19-2009, 05:35 PM
Hows this? I'm not a tagger.

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/2247/calortag.jpg

Good or bad?

WHAAAAAT?!

With your fucking pieces, you'd think you're some kind of king =/

Start with keyboard letters, then when you can do those clean and quick, add some shit onto it (stars,quotation marks, dots etc...)

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 05:58 PM
I don't believe him.
He's lying.
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/430/photo30h.jpg
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9448/photo22c.jpg
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7097/photo25.jpg
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5306/photo27qxk.jpg

Each
05-19-2009, 06:25 PM
big blue- looks like your tryin to make each letter as cool as possible istead of the thing as a whole. try and make it flow more. i know your just tryin out new styles. and that looks like it could be sweet if it was real tall and real skinny, but not like a normal tag. but thats just me

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 06:32 PM
which one are you talking about, the last one?
I was doing them to help my homeboy eskimo out.

Each
05-19-2009, 06:37 PM
all of them. they just looks like that.....one style the people in south america do i think

skull-e
05-19-2009, 06:49 PM
why isn't anyone criting my shit?

bigblue, do your job

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 06:53 PM
Your shit is straight dude.
I think your T would look better without the crook in it, though.

CrustOner
05-19-2009, 06:53 PM
are you fuking retarded? the last two are the same? WTF? are u doing every next tag in diff style or sumtin , dumb fuck. and ffs those markers and inks are dope.. either your blind or mentaly ill no matter what you write or how long u have been writin

Maybe I just have different taste. The ink is good, yes. I just hate the handstyle. It's not my taste. It's ugly looking to me.

and the last two thing was directed at Janek, because he said he liked them all but the third one. I was stating that the third and fourth were very similar.

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 06:56 PM
I wouldn't say that the handstyle is shit because it isn't your taste,
I would just say it isn't your taste, leave it at that.
Don't go and try to shit on *****s just because they don't like the same shit you like, feel me?

FrizzleFry
05-19-2009, 06:57 PM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3396/graff001.jpg
needs work i know

skull-e
05-19-2009, 07:06 PM
was that done with a 0.1 micron?

Thoth
05-19-2009, 08:15 PM
5878

so i just started looking at graffiti as something to do about 2 days ago =]

lived in big cities most of my life and loved all of the tags that were all around. but now i live in a suburb and feel like i need to spice some things up.

just want a crit. on my tag..... yes i know work on the e

btw JOKE is not the name i want (that would be asking to be made fun of) its ERA but its been hard to get that to flow so far its crap not worth looking at i may have to scrap the name cus the letters are hard to get to flow. ill keep at it for a few days.

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 08:42 PM
Graff isn't made for the burbs.
Jus' Sayin'

Thoth
05-19-2009, 08:53 PM
^ well if i wanted some one to crit. where i live i would have asked that.

BUT i need to know if the tag is ok not if its good to tag in the burbs. thanks

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 08:59 PM
Well, in that case....



It looks like shit, homie.

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/251/526501990_9e82d43942.jpg

skull-e
05-19-2009, 09:07 PM
haha, fucking owned.

good job bbv

Thoth
05-19-2009, 09:10 PM
ok see now BBV crit. is not CRITICIZING its CRITIQUING. That is for making things better not calling it shit. rather say .... even up the letter... or less arc on the E or shit like that. Thanks bud.

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 09:13 PM
alright dude, fuck off then.
don't fucking ask me to help you out
and then bitch because I shat on you
and told you your shit was garbage,
you snooty bitch.

ESKiMO2
05-19-2009, 09:14 PM
I'm serious: I was never really interested in tagging. I focus on piecing.

Thoth
05-19-2009, 09:16 PM
umm this was a fucking sticky to fucking HELP Toys like me. fuck it ill deal with my shit you deal with yours. people over here like it, so peace. Good luck to all ya'll..... even you BBV.

ESKiMO2
05-19-2009, 09:18 PM
^ looks like the suburbs.

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 09:20 PM
I would say it looks more like a downtown area to me.
Fuck, even downtown detroit looks pretty nice.

klic
05-19-2009, 09:56 PM
Graff isn't made for the burbs.
Jus' Sayin'

i live in the fucking sticks so fuck all of you haha

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 09:58 PM
It's just my personal opinion,
not my fault dude took it offensively.

klic
05-19-2009, 10:00 PM
yea.. sometimes i wonder why i even bother getting up where i live, nobodys going to notice, just look at any of my flicks, theres always trees and shit in the background haha

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 10:03 PM
Just take a bus to the city, crush it, then take a bus home.

skull-e
05-19-2009, 10:15 PM
yeah, that's deff what id do. i think it'd beat tagging sings on the road, i can't even imagine myself doing that...

with.ease
05-19-2009, 11:37 PM
Graff isn't made for the burbs.
Jus' Sayin'

graff is for every surface, everywhere...
bomb. destroy.

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 11:52 PM
No *****, it really ain't.
That shit is corny as fuck

with.ease
05-19-2009, 11:53 PM
no need to get upset man, just my opinion...
you dont have to agree

JackieChanRollin
05-20-2009, 12:45 AM
Damn, someone needs some fucking Midol.

CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K
05-20-2009, 03:32 AM
http://photos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs014.snc1/4211_176385640230_573725230_6803171_8271466_n.jpg
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/6501/roflz.png

Mr yarbles
05-20-2009, 09:04 AM
It's cute you would make a shirt for yourself with your handsyle

CrustOner
05-20-2009, 02:28 PM
It's cute you would make a shirt for yourself with your handsyle

Isn't that a ridiculously horrible idea?

or is it all the rage now?

Mr yarbles
05-20-2009, 03:29 PM
haha that's the worst idea ever
There's evidence right on your shirt for christ sake.
You're not always gonna make it away you need to be able to talk your way out of shit too.

dirtymother.
05-20-2009, 05:09 PM
init.
kind of a bit bigheaded in some ways,
some people would see it that way anyways.

Zarb
05-20-2009, 06:23 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0520091805.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0520091810.jpg
Crits?
Sebr- The shirts a bad idea haha. The tags not too bad though, i dont like that S though.
Zo- I cant read the last letter if its a letter, rest isnt bad though.

And yeah I dont think graff is for the burbs. I almost feel like its disrespectful haha, people worked hard too be able to live in the suburb, plus it will probably get buffed in less then 2 weeks.

BigBlueViolence
05-20-2009, 07:01 PM
Dude, I'm not down with you straight biting the exchange I did for you.
Get the fuck out of here with that shit.



http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/8091/photo3g.jpg

graffdabusup
05-20-2009, 07:34 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/beast.jpg

..romero..
05-20-2009, 08:09 PM
clean.

with.ease
05-20-2009, 08:26 PM
[IMG]
And yeah I dont think graff is for the burbs. I almost feel like its disrespectful haha, people worked hard too be able to live in the suburb, plus it will probably get buffed in less then 2 weeks.

well i do adhere to a certain code like no houses, home fences, churches, cars etc. but out here it's a weird mix sometimes... metro/suburb... you can go a couple of blocks from downtown and it's a neighborhood, right in denver so... maybe i dont see it so cut and dry

Zarb
05-20-2009, 09:18 PM
When did i bite his throw??
and blue its not like im putting it up or anything Im starting to work with what you gave me but I wont post it here if it still looks too much like yours.

Werse
05-20-2009, 09:31 PM
If your gonna play with the style, you dont need to copy the addons and shit.
Then do it in an exchange with someone else.

graffdabusup
05-20-2009, 11:34 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/beast.jpg

bump for this page

skull-e
05-21-2009, 09:25 AM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00456.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00455.jpg
Drunk victoria day pics


bumpadoodle.

Mr yarbles
05-21-2009, 11:45 AM
bump for this page
This is good

http://i44.tinypic.com/34o598o.jpg

http://i42.tinypic.com/x2t7gn.jpg

Some bullshit not very good.

BigBlueViolence
05-21-2009, 02:50 PM
All dope on this page
Yarbles, I would make the legs on the K and R longer, they aren't really the same style as the other letters.
Mostly the one in Prophets.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2zi679w.jpg

FLIP FLOP
05-21-2009, 08:47 PM
big blue - i don't like the extension on your A or the big black dots on some of the letters.
mr yarbles - i don't like how KREW is realy spread out compared to the rest of it, but its still dope.

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt45/actr_2009/thestuff.jpg

crits please.

BigBlueViolence
05-21-2009, 08:53 PM
The big black dots aren't part of the style,
just the marker bleeding from me moving slow.

I think yours is too tall, it doesn't look right with the letters you are using,
and I wouldn't try to go so fast.

Clean lines are more important that speed, IMO.

7thIncision
05-21-2009, 09:40 PM
Flip Flop/Actr - Get a better marker, spread the letters out a little more, try adding some flair to it, and you only need to post ONE. lmao.

7FIVER
05-22-2009, 02:43 PM
http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv355/seven5er/0522091118.jpg

HRbN
05-22-2009, 03:19 PM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8202/0409001.jpg
blump

wrekkk
05-22-2009, 03:29 PM
joining the club... constructive criticism is nice.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/Scan.jpg

CrustOner
05-22-2009, 03:32 PM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8202/0409001.jpg
blump

This would be a lot cleaner if there wasn't that strange extension above the P and the H.

plus the three lines at the top shouldn't have the kinks on the end, but that's just my opinion.

HRbN
05-22-2009, 03:32 PM
trying to hard or something, idk just doesnt have much flow. but give em to get em

CrustOner
05-22-2009, 03:34 PM
joining the club... constructive criticism is nice.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/Scan.jpg

Try to change your E, and your W, I think that's what's holding you down.

get rid of the kink on the left side of the W, and just make the W completely rounded on the bottom.

skull-e
05-22-2009, 04:33 PM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8202/0409001.jpg
blump

How did this stand up to the buff?

you never got back at meh D:

Worms
05-22-2009, 08:33 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/008-1.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/011-1.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-22-2009, 09:08 PM
THat seven fiver hand is fucking sex
and that jamer guy completely bit james from **** art lmao.

expozay
05-22-2009, 09:41 PM
phazer i love that tag howd that ink hold up?
sore dont like the star in the e.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3621/3554897089_13b4c622b4.jpg
tryin out some gj i made. like it alot.

KidReny!
05-22-2009, 09:56 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/tag.jpg

starting fresh with all this jus gonna write Reny! now
crits?

KRE1
05-22-2009, 10:05 PM
thats just cursive in red.

KidReny!
05-22-2009, 10:07 PM
thats just cursive in red.

really? gee i didnt notice

Mr yarbles
05-22-2009, 10:30 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/tag.jpg

starting fresh with all this jus gonna write Reny! now
crits?

Not bad lose the second squigely underline and you're good.
I actually like it it's good flow and a good one line
and that aint cursive where the hell did you go to school

KRE1
05-22-2009, 10:50 PM
tha E N Y connect exactly like cursive. tha E is a cursive E. so is tha N.

but to each his own.

Mr yarbles
05-22-2009, 11:11 PM
Eh I don't really see it
and it's miles ahead of his old shit

CrustOner
05-23-2009, 01:18 AM
thats just cursive in red.

qft.

KRE1
05-23-2009, 07:33 AM
qft.

tha fuck is that.

*NGONE*
05-23-2009, 11:18 AM
do any of u guys no if the name coe is taken. im thinking about switching from nage to coe

CrustOner
05-23-2009, 11:38 AM
tha fuck is that.

Quoted for truth.

HRbN
05-23-2009, 02:49 PM
This would be a lot cleaner if there wasn't that strange extension above the P and the H.

plus the three lines at the top shouldn't have the kinks on the end, but that's just my opinion.

That "extension" is the p lol its the loop in the p. i havent been back to that spot yet guys, i can probly go after work today and ill take some flicks. thanks for the crits.

CrustOner
05-23-2009, 03:07 PM
ha, I noticed that after I posted that. Yeah, I think it'd look better without the loop.

KRE1
05-23-2009, 03:23 PM
Quoted for truth.

haha. was trippin off sum platinum kush thought u meant quit fucking talking.

yo by tha way i had bought a Artline Poster Marker from here shit is out now how do i refill tha lil bastard?

JustChillin
05-23-2009, 04:44 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0523091137.jpg


http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0523091134.jpg

Rate on a scale of 1-10 please?

BigBlueViolence
05-23-2009, 05:06 PM
Like negative 3, bro.

FrizzleFry
05-23-2009, 05:08 PM
lol....sorry i had to :D

Fury
05-23-2009, 06:02 PM
Dirty/Maniac - I don't like the dirty one at all. The letters are different sizes, etc. Same goes for Maniac, and not all of the letters look like they match each other.

HRbN
05-23-2009, 06:51 PM
ha, I noticed that after I posted that. Yeah, I think it'd look better without the loop.

but without a loop it would be an l haha nah i know what you mean

Takeout
05-23-2009, 07:34 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0893.jpg

CrustOner
05-23-2009, 09:15 PM
but without a loop it would be an l haha nah i know what you mean

Noo, I mean the whole twirl thing above the P...

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-23-2009, 09:29 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet4.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet2.jpg
idk why but the m in the tag was faded.

J-Real
05-24-2009, 11:49 AM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh283/Jplaz/P1250197-1.jpg
just started writin shit a few weeks ago...crits?

edit-too big, lemme resize...

CrustOner
05-24-2009, 12:29 PM
Is says Kerv, but it can easily be mistaken for Kepn.

You should either change your R completely, or space the whole thing out a little more.

JustChillin
05-24-2009, 01:42 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0524091033.jpg

CrustOner
05-24-2009, 02:49 PM
Get rid of the Infamous. work on normal letters.

Emediation
05-24-2009, 04:28 PM
changed my tag to ISED..
crits?
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090524_1624.jpg

KRE1
05-24-2009, 04:41 PM
strangers god damn fool that M is fuckin fire. i love that shit.

JustChillin
05-24-2009, 04:49 PM
Get rid of the Infamous. work on normal letters.whats wrong with the infamous?

FLIP FLOP
05-24-2009, 04:52 PM
whats wrong with the infamous?

it looks like shit.

JustChillin
05-24-2009, 04:53 PM
it looks like shit.:(

FLIP FLOP
05-24-2009, 04:55 PM
just practice giving all your letters a similar shape and size.

JustChillin
05-24-2009, 05:00 PM
just practice giving all your letters a similar shape and size.but as far as the eazy goes is that fine?

FLIP FLOP
05-24-2009, 05:01 PM
its slightly better, but definitely not fine.

JustChillin
05-24-2009, 05:09 PM
could you give me an example of a tag that isn't considered toy. Because everyone tells me what's toy and bad but never whats not...

FLIP FLOP
05-24-2009, 05:14 PM
there is probably a tags thread in the picture gallery section of the forums. look in there.

Mr yarbles
05-24-2009, 05:57 PM
its slightly better, but definitely not fine.

Both of them are bad

and that m is not fuckin fire
It's pretty whack.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
05-24-2009, 07:02 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/graffff002.jpg
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/graffff003.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-24-2009, 07:03 PM
That shit on the other hand
Is dope as fuck.

7FIVER
05-24-2009, 10:41 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/graffff002.jpg
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww317/Sleazytezey/graffff003.jpg

that R on the bottom one is dope

*NGONE*
05-24-2009, 10:52 PM
keep it simple. your getting to complicated. dont add all that shit it makes it look more toy. just keep practicing.

*NGONE*
05-24-2009, 11:11 PM
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/1160/05240923030001.jpg

new name. it says coe

Mr yarbles
05-25-2009, 01:08 AM
keep it simple. your getting to complicated. dont add all that shit it makes it look more toy. just keep practicing.

Is that a fucking joke?
get out of here you faggot

God bombing science makes me pissed anymore
Half of you are retarted as fuck.

Bash_The_Bomber
05-25-2009, 02:07 AM
here is one of mine.... sry about that little line on the upper right

5935

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 02:16 AM
The B looks sick.

Manupro7
05-25-2009, 06:22 AM
do u guys think the word dzaster is too long??

Bink1
05-25-2009, 07:26 AM
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/1160/05240923030001.jpg

new name. it says coe

u suck

random
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07100.jpg

Manupro7
05-25-2009, 08:23 AM
which word do u guys think is the best?? they say wuzey,wuzer, airo,dzaster,zork,uzer and uze

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 03:55 PM
pick a name thats YOU. Dont just write any random made up word that sounds cool. Pick a name that means something.

compost
05-25-2009, 05:08 PM
i just started lie a month ago so feedback would be nice...it says "leats"http://<a href="http://s570.photobucket.com/albums/ss149/switchflip92/?action=view&current=001.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss149/switchflip92/001.jpg" border="0" alt="tag"></a>

Mr yarbles
05-25-2009, 05:29 PM
pick a name thats YOU. Dont just write any random made up word that sounds cool. Pick a name that means something.

Is that a joke?
Find a name that flows well
That's all that matters
Every name I;ve ever had dosn't mean jack shit to me.

Chillin all you're doin is damage to these toys you don't know shit so stop trying to help.

And bash that's just terrible
Go simple.

..romero..
05-25-2009, 06:46 PM
rapist bringin the heat haha.yeah man i just picked a name that i could rock and didnt sound stupid....

skull-e
05-25-2009, 06:52 PM
I write cust, i guess that says allot about me >.>











































not rly.

zams
05-25-2009, 07:58 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6084/piece.jpg


hows this

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 08:22 PM
Is that a joke?
Find a name that flows well
That's all that matters
Every name I;ve ever had dosn't mean jack shit to me.

Chillin all you're doin is damage to these toys you don't know shit so stop trying to help.

And bash that's just terrible
Go simple.
but it says here


2)It's gonna take a long time before we even acknowledge your existence, even longer before we can bear to look at that foul scribble you clal your name. To speed the process of acceptance, you can:
A-Choose a clever name that defies the norm of simple-minded slang. An example of a good name is "ARGUE" (RIP). It looks good when written, sounds cool when spoken, and conveys a combatative attitude. On the other hand "ENEMA" (actual name) looks, sounds, and conveys a shitty attitude. BE CHOOSY.

dior
05-25-2009, 08:22 PM
The B looks sick.
no it doesnt

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 08:23 PM
no it doesnt

I think it does.

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 08:33 PM
noone cares waht u think, ur only hurting people by telling them its goodJust because you dont think it looks sick doesnt mean your right. Your pretty childish to tell me my opinions wrong.

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 08:36 PM
Is that a joke?
Find a name that flows well
That's all that matters
Every name I;ve ever had dosn't mean jack shit to me.

Chillin all you're doin is damage to these toys you don't know shit so stop trying to help.

And bash that's just terrible
Go simple.If your name doesn't mean jack shit to you then why do you write?

zams
05-25-2009, 08:38 PM
my name comes from heart feeling love hate life thats what should be thought about when chosing one not wat sound right but what feels right

zams
05-25-2009, 08:54 PM
really now ok good job mr angry if u really felt that way u wouldnt b arguing with but you would b trying to get right with ur pieces and thats all that should matter

zams
05-25-2009, 09:11 PM
sound good ill try that, that was i need to hear

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 09:13 PM
i am right becuz i know what the fuck is up
you dont know shitand as if people care what you think.

Deck
05-25-2009, 09:25 PM
i am right becuz i know what the fuck is up
you dont know shit

wut

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-25-2009, 09:57 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/osef7s.jpg
scratttchymcgee

JustChillin
05-25-2009, 11:22 PM
noone cares what anyone thinks
to me ur just a cactus from LAcongratulations. you've just successfully repeated yourself. now gtfo.

KRE1
05-26-2009, 02:21 AM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7030/005wcp.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-26-2009, 02:28 AM
If your name doesn't mean jack shit to you then why do you write?

I write rapist
You think that really means shit to me?
No.
I liked the flow of the ist and I just decided on rapist
You think that means I enjoy going around and raping shit?
Uh no. the name means nothing to me.
I'm not trying to be a dick but you're hurting these people by telling them shits good
That b was whack.
and yeah we are right

I'm not a dick I'm just trying to help these people
No one responds to me being nice except maybe janek and a few other people cus I know they'll take my crits and turn it into something positive.
until all of you learn to to take mine and other peoples shit to heart we're going to be a dick

Alot of us have been writing for years we now what's wrong and what's right what's good and what's not
you don't. get over it.
Maybe when you know what we know you'll be in my position and understand.
so let's just leave it at that
Listen to those that are better than you and don't bitch

Every time I've ever bitched about crits I've been completely wrong
These people know what they're talking about you guys should realize that.

/endrant

with.ease
05-26-2009, 03:12 AM
thats what i said a ways back, but if it's anything like then some douche will be like "didnt read too long"... it's like those talent shows, everyone gets pissed when your not jerking them off when you've heard cats fuck with more harmony.

when i get crits I use them to my advantage. so should you. be happy someone bothers to help. and learn to take criticism.
ridiculous.

KRE1
05-26-2009, 03:15 AM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7030/005wcp.jpg

bump

7FIVER
05-26-2009, 02:02 PM
http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv355/seven5er/0525091339.jpg

http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv355/seven5er/0525091331.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-26-2009, 02:47 PM
I don't like the R in the first one,
and the F is out of place in the second one,
but they're dopeskis.

and cholo font ftw

http://i44.tinypic.com/r2vww0.jpg

..romero..
05-26-2009, 03:55 PM
I write rapist
You think that really means shit to me?
No.
I liked the flow of the ist and I just decided on rapist
You think that means I enjoy going around and raping shit?
Uh no. the name means nothing to me.
I'm not trying to be a dick but you're hurting these people by telling them shits good
That b was whack.
and yeah we are right

I'm not a dick I'm just trying to help these people
No one responds to me being nice except maybe janek and a few other people cus I know they'll take my crits and turn it into something positive.
until all of you learn to to take mine and other peoples shit to heart we're going to be a dick

Alot of us have been writing for years we now what's wrong and what's right what's good and what's not
you don't. get over it.
Maybe when you know what we know you'll be in my position and understand.
so let's just leave it at that
Listen to those that are better than you and don't bitch

Every time I've ever bitched about crits I've been completely wrong
These people know what they're talking about you guys should realize that.

/endrant

to all you kiddies out there.this foo knows whats up when it comes to handies.listen to em.b.s. police too...

..romero..
05-26-2009, 03:57 PM
I don't like the R in the first one,
and the F is out of place in the second one,
but they're dopeskis.

and cholo font ftw

http://i44.tinypic.com/r2vww0.jpg

http://www.frigginrandom.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/funny-pictures-disregard-females-acquire-currency.jpg

peacebomb
05-26-2009, 04:19 PM
Swob looks ok. That S is over used.
seven fiver I just dont like your name way to long

Dont just bump your stuff to get crits give crits to get them

FLIP FLOP
05-26-2009, 08:27 PM
swine - try and make the I go better with the W and N
kre - mess with the s to get rid of the space between it and the w
sevenfiver - the second one looks like shit, first one isn't that great either but i like the flow, maybe make the IV look less like an N.
bigblue - i like the EARN tag, but not the rest. i ahve no idea what kind of style you are going for though, so i can't really crit it.

switched the t with a c for more flow, don't know if im gonna keep it though.

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt45/actr_2009/acer.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-26-2009, 08:29 PM
yea ut useually dose flow alot better but when your doing the scratchys with mad heads you kinda go fast but yea thanks...

graffdabusup
05-26-2009, 08:51 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/lucifer.jpg
bored with new prisma....

Fury
05-26-2009, 09:16 PM
Acer - Change the A a little bit to match the other letters. It looks good though.
Lucifer - Maybe try rounding your letters a bit more.

graffdabusup
05-26-2009, 09:19 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/lucifer.jpg
bored with new prisma....

bump for new page

Five Sixx Ace
05-26-2009, 09:19 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0370.jpg



crits?


acer- i think that is was it says. try and make the a more ledgeable
lucifer- looks okay for just fucking around.

JustChillin
05-26-2009, 09:22 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0370.jpg



crits?


acer- i think that is was it says. try and make the a more ledgeable
lucifer- looks okay for just fucking around.lol u tagged up your school textbooks. watch out cus that could be a fat burn.

Fury
05-26-2009, 09:53 PM
Soec - I like the simple.

Five Sixx Ace
05-26-2009, 10:48 PM
lol u tagged up your school textbooks. watch out cus that could be a fat burn.

not really since i dropped out a over a year ago and never took them back, and never took the books back so.... i use them for black books.

with.ease
05-26-2009, 11:36 PM
thats a great idea hahaha. I like mail order catalogs for practice. i just sign up for anything and everything that has a glossy catalog lol

Mr yarbles
05-27-2009, 12:40 AM
I go to the store and rack 5 part college spaced books
Shit lasts for ever
and that's the true g thing to do...
:)

proNYNJA
05-27-2009, 12:42 AM
hmmm thats a good idea imma like use my textbook from 6th grade i never gave back.

7FIVER
05-27-2009, 01:43 AM
i write 75er
but i write the whole thing out cus yeah...but yeah my second one looks pretty wack..but to me my first one looks dope..

Emediation
05-27-2009, 12:54 PM
soec - i dig it! looks nice n simple

okay i know these all suck, but i'm just asking if i should develop any of these?
are the letters worth developing or should i reimagine?

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/WebCam_20090527_12481.jpg

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/WebCam_20090527_1248.jpg

massacreman
05-27-2009, 01:15 PM
my advice: separate the first two letters more, use the E of the 1st picture 4th tag and use the d of the 1st picture 3rd tag

CrustOner
05-27-2009, 02:53 PM
soec - i dig it! looks nice n simple

okay i know these all suck, but i'm just asking if i should develop any of these?
are the letters worth developing or should i reimagine?

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/WebCam_20090527_12481.jpg

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/WebCam_20090527_1248.jpg

haha it's cool to watch you get better, Emediation. Like the above said, space out your I and S a little more.

Emediation
05-27-2009, 05:04 PM
that lucifer tag is sick!

is this better?
lower case or upper case i?

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090527_1656.jpg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090527_1702.jpg

7FIVER
05-27-2009, 05:11 PM
that S is dope

CrustOner
05-27-2009, 07:06 PM
much better, but I'd stick with the lowercase.

FLIP FLOP
05-27-2009, 07:17 PM
swine - try and make the I go better with the W and N
kre - mess with the s to get rid of the space between it and the w
sevenfiver - the second one looks like shit, first one isn't that great either but i like the flow, maybe make the IV look less like an N.
bigblue - i like the EARN tag, but not the rest. i ahve no idea what kind of style you are going for though, so i can't really crit it.

switched the t with a c for more flow, don't know if im gonna keep it though.

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt45/actr_2009/acer.jpg

bump for more crits

soec - tighten the letters up a bit.

Darkeist
05-27-2009, 07:39 PM
Getting back into graff after a long break.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20090527_3.jpg
Flip Flop - Looks good, nice flow
emediation - lower case looks better. keep working on it
soec - looks good. work on the S a littl ebit

CrustOner
05-27-2009, 07:53 PM
FLIP FLOP: I'd try to make it so it doesn't just grow bigger, but gets bigger and then goes back to normal size, for ultimate flow. I would also suggest getting rid of the loop in the A, because it looks like cursive, but hey, that's just what I would say because your tag isn't my style. It looks good though, and I'm sure it would look better with a good marker. :D

ALOS: Now that you have the handwriting down, try adding a little bit more of a flair to your letters. Like stems, etc.

SOEC: Add a stem to the S and C, and then bring your letters closer, but not too close.

Emediation
05-27-2009, 08:15 PM
ditto what crust said!

a few changes here and there...
going in the right direction?

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090527_2011.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 08:49 PM
emed- I would make the circle over your I just a line,
like a little line over a long line.

http://i40.tinypic.com/2cwsthz.jpg

Emediation
05-27-2009, 09:06 PM
big blue,
your handstyle is so fresh, i love it.

any of these i's?
i tried vert lines, horizontal, squiggle and smaller circle lol.

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090527_2104.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 09:08 PM
I would either go squiggle,
or smaller circle.

Have you ever tried a capital I?

Emediation
05-27-2009, 09:11 PM
yeye
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090527_1702.jpg[/QUOTE]

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 09:20 PM
Shit man,
I'd just go with the capital I.

Emediation
05-27-2009, 09:25 PM
cool,
yah i think I like it beta too.
thanks!

ErrorOner...
05-27-2009, 09:35 PM
does anybody remember that guy "poet"? i think we critted him to death...

S4d3n
05-27-2009, 10:51 PM
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2241/resizewizard1e.jpg (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=resizewizard1e.jpg)


Just some shit.