PDA

View Full Version : Tags



Pages : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 [106] 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162

DUNSY
06-26-2009, 12:06 PM
Knive i like it, but your "e" is a little strange/big
Zise i would keep the first one

http://i40.tinypic.com/27wx55h.jpg
is this better? crits pls

bak
06-26-2009, 12:13 PM
ur u looks like a y and u only have one " and a star... i like the colorful y tho =]

skull-e
06-26-2009, 09:06 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0142.jpg

nevermind the2 letter

look at the hand next to it.

CRITS:

Knive: make them all even / on the same anlge

Janek: All i can say is that you've improved a shit load, make that hand a 1liner now.

Zise: Loose the squigly lines, more keyboard-ish letter.

BigBlueViolence
06-26-2009, 09:09 PM
I like your Cust shit more, man

skull-e
06-26-2009, 09:11 PM
Orly?

I'm still fucking proud of my tazr hand, it was one of my biggest accomplishments in graff, tasr wise.

hardwares
06-27-2009, 04:17 AM
dunsy - your s looks like a 5. practice that. looking nice otherwise, although the D underline is iffy.
kn1ve - i like it. what kind of marker you using?
shurik - that shit is weak. i would say work on each letter indivually, starting simple so all of them are the same size style etc and then work some kind of style after you have that down.
http://i42.tinypic.com/102sgaq.jpg
wares

crits plz

skull-e
06-27-2009, 07:36 AM
meh, remindds me of janeks hand

CrustOner
06-27-2009, 10:47 AM
Yeah, the W looks like a J.

killerspeen
06-27-2009, 11:36 AM
hey guyz...I am a rookie at taggin and I hope u can gimme some advice... I've also included some of my work so far..

funhouseXcast
06-27-2009, 11:40 AM
nice stuff, lose the crown.

Wallace
06-27-2009, 05:34 PM
buff got tired real quick

http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/2714/img00393.jpg (http://img44.imageshack.us/i/img00393.jpg/)

went overboard with the lines in the O's

wares- definitely work on making that w, look like a w

hardwares
06-27-2009, 06:30 PM
thanks for the crits
wallace - dope. like the flares. whats going on with that half finished hollow throw?
killerspeen - weak. lose the arrows on the letters, the quotes, and all those extentions. try getting your hand to flow through more simple letters before trying to make it all crazy and shit. just looks toy and over styled.

http://i44.tinypic.com/20hkew9.jpg
any better?

klic
06-27-2009, 06:51 PM
it would look better without all that extra shit on your s, and dont extend the bottom of your w as far

joker12joe
06-27-2009, 07:05 PM
I just started doin graffiti and this is my tag i had to use pen, didnt have a marker!!
criticize and give me suggestions!


http://i467.photobucket.com/albums/rr38/joker12joe/nark.jpg

klic
06-27-2009, 07:10 PM
that looks horrible, start with the simplest letters you can do and we'll help you from there

Wallace
06-27-2009, 08:10 PM
thanks for the crits
wallace - dope. like the flares. whats going on with that half finished hollow throw?
killerspeen - weak. lose the arrows on the letters, the quotes, and all those extentions. try getting your hand to flow through more simple letters before trying to make it all crazy and shit. just looks toy and over styled.

[IMG]http://i44.tinypic.com/20hkew9.jpg[IMG]
any better?

the buff got to it
even out the S, imo dont connect the a and r, and work on the w a little more (try going simpler on it, its a rough letter though not much you can do with it)

joker- what lol :confused:

exitus
06-27-2009, 10:59 PM
I think joker is mocking our board

Shame bump


what do u guys think, its all paper but still, i think ive improved a lot

http://i44.tinypic.com/2e51pup.jpg

http://i42.tinypic.com/2h7gtid.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/2e0rdig.jpg

these arent the best, im pretty high right now

joker12joe
06-28-2009, 11:02 AM
what about this, it was my first ever throw up


http://i467.photobucket.com/albums/rr38/joker12joe/l_634ca52403a5418683e449d25518eb89.jpg

BigBlueViolence
06-28-2009, 11:59 AM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/4477/trollwebd.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-28-2009, 12:46 PM
im a part time troll....did i mention that?

PYT!TLC!
06-28-2009, 04:37 PM
DUNSY - Your 'u' does resemble a y. I don't like the star, replace it with a quotation. Otherwise I dig

skull-e Kinda messy, not sure what it says lol.

hardwares - The extension on the 's' looks kind of weird. Otherwise i like it.

Wallace- nice flares.

joker - not really. like klic said, i think you should start simpler.

exitus - i like the bottom one the best.

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1843/dsc03735h.jpg

Crit please, started graffin two weeks ago. (starve)

thedudeman
06-28-2009, 05:01 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/graff038-1.jpg

Aerosoloholic
06-28-2009, 05:01 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2lcqiyo.jpg

thedudeman
06-28-2009, 05:01 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/graff042-1.jpg

hardwares
06-28-2009, 05:09 PM
post crits when you post your pics. common knowledge.

aerosoloholic- that shit looks weak and rushed. lose all the arrows and curly extensions and spend some time on your letters. make it readable
thedudeman -i like it. alot. although the tag on your first post (bottom left corner) could use some work.
starve -for a two week start thats not half bad. just make your letters not look as generic toy letters, fuck around with them until you like it. take inspiration from other tags. blah blah blah

PYT!TLC!
06-28-2009, 05:15 PM
aerosoloholic - not really liking it either. start simpler.
thedudeman - the top picture is wack, but the other one is dope. work on your letter 't' and 'r'.

Hey where's my crit? lol just playin.

Aerosoloholic
06-28-2009, 05:23 PM
i just wanted a page of tags :)

hardwares
06-28-2009, 06:22 PM
thedudeman - the top picture is wack, but the other one is dope. work on your letter 't' and 'r'.


i think his R's are dope. personal preference i guess.

thedudeman
06-28-2009, 06:46 PM
thanks for the crits guys sorry i didnt crit anybody else im just not that good at it.. my only advice to evryone is to just keep trying and dont give it up.. everyone has potential to be great if theyre willing to open up their minds to new things...

Shurik*n
06-28-2009, 08:40 PM
starve: i think if u lose the tail on the r...or make it a bit smaller it may be better

PYT!TLC!
06-28-2009, 10:32 PM
Thanks for the crits guys. I tweaked my tag up a tiny bit, added an exclamation mark. i dunno if this is any better though. :p
They're both pretty much the same thing, but yeah.
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5940/dsc03736uac.jpg
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/8099/dsc03737e.jpg

KidReny!
06-28-2009, 10:35 PM
thats pretty bad i didnt see your last one but mayb u should just write simples

BigBlueViolence
06-28-2009, 10:42 PM
Also, when you are using a calig. marker,

It normally looks better when you write with it like __ instead of |

PYT!TLC!
06-28-2009, 10:54 PM
I get what you're sayin. So it looks better when I write with the fat side of the nib or the skinny side? Cause I'm kinda using a highlighter for my tags on paper lol.

k'n1ve
06-29-2009, 02:33 AM
starve you gotta give your letters room to breathe...that was some of the best advice i got when i first started. go simp, and progress...

killerspeen
06-29-2009, 03:41 AM
guyz..can I c a tag sayin' "kSpeEnz Design"..or what I wrote in my tags but made by you...I really need advice:( my tagz suck badly!

KNS13
06-29-2009, 04:49 PM
ok my tag crits becides looseing all the extra shit
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0034-2.jpg

klic
06-29-2009, 06:23 PM
shitty tag..
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag47.jpg

starve - make all your letters the same size, it looks stupid where your T and A are on top of your S on the bottom one

bak
06-29-2009, 07:07 PM
shitty indeed lol jk but the j is unnoticeable

PYT!TLC!
06-29-2009, 09:40 PM
Thanks for the crits guys. I'll post what I have so far tomorrow (sister using the camera).

kema - besides losing the underline and that colon in front of it, it's aight. work on it more.

klic - the j isn't noticeable, but otherwise it's not that shitty compared to your other tags.

LeaksOne
06-30-2009, 04:41 AM
Also, when you are using a calig. marker,

It normally looks better when you write with it like __ instead of |

ive played around with a calig pen and its pretty nice when you use it like this / and \ too. either way

hardwares
06-30-2009, 05:12 AM
favorite markers for handstyles have to be brush tipped markers. so much fun! or a brush with ink all over it.

LeaksOne
06-30-2009, 05:20 AM
favorite markers for handstyles have to be brush tipped markers. so much fun! or a brush with ink all over it.

i have some of those. they were ok but i never tried any techniques with it

killerspeen
06-30-2009, 05:36 AM
dudes ... can I talk 2 u in private? I mean trough Y! Mess or WinLive? I just wanna improve my taggin...

hardwares
06-30-2009, 05:42 AM
dudes ... can I talk 2 u in private? I mean trough Y! Mess or WinLive? I just wanna improve my taggin...

no.

LeaksOne
06-30-2009, 05:46 AM
dudes ... can I talk 2 u in private? I mean trough Y! Mess or WinLive? I just wanna improve my taggin...

hahaha
http://www.pittsburghcitypaper.ws/binary/3a12/paulblartcolor_03.jpg

hardwares
06-30-2009, 05:54 AM
but if you have aim hit me up. my sn is smarterchild. im online right now.

LeaksOne
06-30-2009, 05:58 AM
but if you have aim hit me up. my sn is smarterchild. im online right now.

yea hes always online so he can be there when you need him to help you get crazy wildstyle tags


hahaha sucker!!!

killerspeen
06-30-2009, 06:14 AM
I am now installing aim ... just a second , man...:D

killerspeen
06-30-2009, 09:45 AM
yea hes always online so he can be there when you need him to help you get crazy wildstyle tags


hahaha sucker!!!

no s**t .. I am trying 2 talk to him but no response:( "SmarterChild (16:59:34): My brain is retired but watch some cool videos! Send am IM to GossipinGabby and Type VIDEO!"

carlos
06-30-2009, 12:12 PM
fixed the C and got rid of the stick figurehttp://api.photoshop.com/home_27a7c95e9151413ebdb39ddfc535e556/adobe-px-assets/d9d0af8dfca6458d9b168fa038e6d82c

CrustOner
06-30-2009, 12:40 PM
great idea. put up your name.

carlos
06-30-2009, 01:46 PM
its not like im putting up my last name and address

thadanks
06-30-2009, 02:28 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9752/photo38z.jpg

first time posting, been lurkin for a while. crits on this?

Mr yarbles
06-30-2009, 02:43 PM
Start over go simple
and don't tell me that's not a crit
There's nothing you can do with that style to make it good.
Start over write in simple letters focus on structure and flow no uneeded addons or wierd letters just simple shit.

JustChillin
06-30-2009, 03:05 PM
Knive i like it, but your "e" is a little strange/big
Zise i would keep the first one

http://i40.tinypic.com/27wx55h.jpg
is this better? crits plsget rid of the star and the the equal sign. Connect your D to the bottom and make your S not look like a 5. But overall its simple and its starting to flow together. Just play with the letters a little more.

LeaksOne
06-30-2009, 03:18 PM
no s**t .. I am trying 2 talk to him but no response:( "SmarterChild (16:59:34): My brain is retired but watch some cool videos! Send am IM to GossipinGabby and Type VIDEO!"

http://www.profile-comments.com/images/posters/images/dumb.jpg

exitus
06-30-2009, 04:12 PM
fixed the C and got rid of the stick figurehttp://api.photoshop.com/home_27a7c95e9151413ebdb39ddfc535e556/adobe-px-assets/d9d0af8dfca6458d9b168fa038e6d82c

work on the los now. try not to connect things too much. The a and r work prety well together though

Mr yarbles
06-30-2009, 04:33 PM
None of that works well together. start over.

PYT!TLC!
06-30-2009, 07:10 PM
vasil - yeah go simpler. work on the flow first.
carlos - it looks pretty crooked and awkward. start simpler.
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2339/dsc03741c.jpg
I followed all of the advice you guys gave me, and hopefully this is cleaner. Should I start from here or should I start over? Crits please, thanks :)

exitus
06-30-2009, 07:17 PM
good start, now squish the letters together more
DONT CONNECT THEM

KidReny!
06-30-2009, 08:16 PM
no squishing yet dog you still gotta work on proportions in your letters i want you to add some designs to it now like underline in a really cool way and give the 1st letter a really sick toan to it naw mean

CrustOner
06-30-2009, 11:06 PM
:rolleyes: Don't ever listen to KidReny.

BigBlueViolence
06-30-2009, 11:18 PM
gotta agree with crustie.

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2873/photo29buw.jpg

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/4040/photo28goe.jpg


Callig er no?

PYT!TLC!
06-30-2009, 11:27 PM
uhh.
Yeaaahh, so i'll just disregard KidReny's advice for now i guess. ahem?

:confused:

Mr yarbles
07-01-2009, 12:25 AM
yup you should
He means well but he's just not there yet.

BigBlueViolence
07-01-2009, 12:26 AM
Hey yarb, did you ever send that battle in?

CrustOner
07-01-2009, 01:07 AM
I like the non-callig better.

and I'm thinking about getting in on that battle too.. but I need a few new markers.

ha, maybe I'll just hit it up somewhere, considering it's

1: Summer.
2: May get me some mothafuckin' brownie points.


On a sidenote, Mickey's is great.

Mr yarbles
07-01-2009, 02:24 AM
Hey yarb, did you ever send that battle in?

I;ve been done with it for a few days
I fuckingkeep forgetting haha
had shit to do
I promise i;; have it sent in tommorow

Messer
07-01-2009, 09:29 AM
went out on the town last night.....flicks:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0015.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0016.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0016.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0018.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0019.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0020.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0023.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0025.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0025.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0028-1.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0031.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0041.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0042.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0043.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0043.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0051.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/SUNP0051.jpg

KNS13
07-01-2009, 09:59 AM
better?
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0041-1.jpg
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0027-3.jpg

klic
07-01-2009, 10:56 AM
another shitty tag by me, messed up my J again
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag48.jpg

resp - looking good, some of them need to be cleaned up a bit

kema - bottom ones better

exitus
07-01-2009, 12:05 PM
uhh.
Yeaaahh, so i'll just disregard KidReny's advice for now i guess. ahem?

:confused:

try switching around different types of letters. like theres a billion ways to write a, keep trying different ones untill you see something you like

crit for anyone whos starting btw

Messer
07-01-2009, 12:13 PM
yeh i agree klic....but its hard to be clean and fast when your tagging in the middle of your town when people are staring

exitus
07-01-2009, 12:19 PM
then dont do it in the middle of town when people are staring >.>

killerspeen
07-01-2009, 12:39 PM
http://www.profile-comments.com/images/posters/images/dumb.jpg

dude..u r not helpin me at all..wtf dudes ..I am askin 4 ur help and got nothin so far..

Mr yarbles
07-01-2009, 01:33 PM
yeh i agree klic....but its hard to be clean and fast when your tagging in the middle of your town when people are staring

bullshit.
I drop tags in the middle of the day all the damn time

LeaksOne
07-01-2009, 11:25 PM
dude..u r not helpin me at all..wtf dudes ..I am askin 4 ur help and got nothin so far..

listen officer no ones guna help you get those crazy wildstyle tags you have to progress on your own and let people critique you. fuckin idiot. if your a cop give up if your under the age of 14 give up.

bak
07-02-2009, 12:20 AM
^ idk some kids have cool ahnds and are 13 12 etc some guys are 22 cant tag or bomb but have guns and fight COUGH tko COUGH

Mr yarbles
07-02-2009, 12:23 AM
buket can.

provinT13
07-02-2009, 12:36 AM
^ lulz

LeaksOne
07-02-2009, 01:07 AM
^ idk some kids have cool ahnds and are 13 12 etc some guys are 22 cant tag or bomb but have guns and fight COUGH tko COUGH

well the kids who are 13 12 dont act as clueless as this fag or at least i hope not. he kinda reminds me of enlis. hes before your time but yarbles knos. but this is either a kid whose never goin anywhere in graff or a cop who doesnt kno how to fool us. hey killer name one fallen member from BTW.

JustChillin
07-02-2009, 01:31 AM
dude..u r not helpin me at all..wtf dudes ..I am askin 4 ur help and got nothin so far..you are truly a dumbass. and I think you are a cop. if your not then post a picture of yourself holding up a paper that says KillerSpeen to proove your not. If you do then maybewe will consider helping you.

senkz
07-02-2009, 07:16 AM
resp- i think that style has alot of potential, keep workin at it and try to make clean lines everytime
janek- nice and simple, although the letters look a bit too bunched up to me.

havent been on here for awhile, heres a paper handstyle
http://i43.tinypic.com/2r2cj02.jpg
crits?

AcosOne
07-02-2009, 07:24 AM
senkz, it's ok i guess. I don't dig the N, too elementary-school-ish if you know what i mean... the K is nice though. S doesn't flow, E is also a bit too basic. Keep your letters the same size and on one line. Try using a marker too.
edit: and please don't do that random extension on the K, it kills the flow. Just a curly thing is ok, keep it simple for now.

raid123
07-02-2009, 07:30 AM
just starting out, about a week ago. im know my handstyle is pretty weak but crits are tonsss appreciated.

AcosOne
07-02-2009, 07:58 AM
ok, it brobably sais syst, right? :p
stop trying to do all kinds of extensions on your letters yet
start off with basic alphabets, read the new to graff sections
keep letters the same size
don't stretch them out too far
keep 'em on one line
thats about it

raid123
07-02-2009, 08:46 AM
^alright, thanks tons for that
edit: also, is this what you mean by basic letters? and then i can start out from there? sorry bout douche q's, just looking to improve.

Deceptuos
07-02-2009, 02:07 PM
Started not too long ago, got any advice?

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/2098/decept1.png

LeaksOne
07-02-2009, 02:56 PM
kecer? keoer? write regular letters for now

Deceptuos
07-02-2009, 03:46 PM
Says decept. Also, ok.

skull-e
07-02-2009, 04:01 PM
1st- connect your letters properly e;g: your d

2nd- simple simple simple

3rd- seperate your letters

BigBlueViolence
07-02-2009, 04:13 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6751/photo38.jpg


simplicity, *****.


btw, you have a really fun name.

http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/6459/photo37juq.jpg

sirn
07-02-2009, 04:36 PM
i havent been on in awhile, been busy, but
some crits for Deceptuos- dont try and get all complicated just yet, start out simple like BigBlueViolence and skull-e said

heres something of mine, let me know what you all think
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/semk.jpg

Deceptuos
07-02-2009, 04:51 PM
skulle: sure, ill try and do that from now on
bigblueviolence: thanks for the crits.

so is this ok? or do I go simpler?

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8336/decept2.png

BigBlueViolence
07-02-2009, 05:32 PM
Try working on just the letters for now,
the arrow makes it look dookie.
The P and T aren't that great looking

Cure Sure Lure
07-02-2009, 05:39 PM
Word bigblue.

sellers E.
07-02-2009, 11:48 PM
sirn- honestly im not feelin it
deceptuos- the second ones ok.
i was using different letters for my hand today,crits?
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/hotttttt.jpg

EGO31
07-03-2009, 12:07 AM
What does it say?

decept, no arrows, ever.
I like it, just fix the P and watch the spacing with the T a bit more.

ErrorOner...
07-03-2009, 12:35 AM
^he's lying...

Mr yarbles
07-03-2009, 12:37 AM
You can use arrows
You just have to have written for a year year and half to know how to use them right.

killerspeen
07-03-2009, 06:37 AM
1st of all, I'd like 2 apologise 2 u for my inappropiate language and way of requesting help..
2ndly.. I'd like to make it clear dat I am no cop:))
3rdly..I am eager to improve my taggin and u r my only source of improvement...

I feel sorry if I offended u in 1 way or another..

check this out if u like..it's me wasting my time on awful tags..
http://www.megavideo.com/?v=W9TH2EME

PS:I don't mind if u express your sincere opinions regarding my tags..

DUNSY
07-03-2009, 09:31 AM
sellers, like the tag
Decept lose the arrow and draw the second --> "


now wich one is best or do they still all suck ?

http://i39.tinypic.com/2lkb19g.jpg

skull-e
07-03-2009, 11:58 AM
You can use arrows
You just have to have written for a year year and half to know how to use them right.

Amen.

I remember saying this once, but I couldn't formulate properly without sounding like an ass,

skull-e
07-03-2009, 01:29 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00487.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00495.jpg
scrap can
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00516.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00493.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-03-2009, 01:30 PM
but I couldn't formulate properly without sounding like an ass,

i have this problem sometimes....all the time.

Spraycan Stories
07-03-2009, 01:56 PM
^ idk some kids have cool ahnds and are 13 12 etc some guys are 22 cant tag or bomb but have guns and fight COUGH tko COUGH

Haha that would be in my sig, but i dont want everyone in the world knowing you said that.

expozay
07-03-2009, 03:06 PM
dunsy the last one just straight simple looks best.
cust love ur tag just keep workin on that can control

havin a hard time with my handy lately not feelin anything ive been doin....

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2555/3684624431_d509969e65.jpg


best? worst?

Mr yarbles
07-03-2009, 05:29 PM
top middle and left
and two lines down from the top and left most are good
Everything else you just kinda went overboard
Try not to do that

but the one two down on the left is a really good simple tag.

which one's best?

http://i43.tinypic.com/29kp3yo.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/13yjjbm.jpg

ErrorOner...
07-03-2009, 08:31 PM
what's it say?

Black Flag
07-03-2009, 08:48 PM
Looking for a collective answer here.

I am starting to dislike the add-on I use for my tag, so I don't use it as much. But I kind of feel like my tag looks naked without it. So what you guys think, leave it simple or try out every last add-on lol?

add-ons = halos,underlines,stars,arrows,etc.

Mr yarbles
07-03-2009, 11:39 PM
what's it say?

It's hard to read?
summah love

LeaksOne
07-04-2009, 12:49 AM
Looking for a collective answer here.

I am starting to dislike the add-on I use for my tag, so I don't use it as much. But I kind of feel like my tag looks naked without it. So what you guys think, leave it simple or try out every last add-on lol?

add-ons = halos,underlines,stars,arrows,etc.

post a pic with and without the add on

skull-e
07-04-2009, 09:57 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00487.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00495.jpg
scrap can
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00516.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00493.jpg

bump my god-like skills

BigBlueViolence
07-04-2009, 10:01 PM
Dude,
how can your boy Lerch have hands like that?

That piece in the other thread looked sort of dookie.


gotta agree with crustie.

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2873/photo29buw.jpg

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/4040/photo28goe.jpg

Callig er no?

Bump

Yarbeeze- go with no. 1

ErrorOner...
07-05-2009, 12:18 AM
yo yarbs when i first read it i thought it said summaRY of love but i started to doubt it said love cuz the V is a little weird...

klic
07-05-2009, 12:37 AM
Dude,
how can your boy Lerch have hands like that?


im guessin cust did that for him


***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #19***
Word: Wicked Fuck
Deadline: Friday, July 10, 2009 (6PM AST)
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entries to me (klic).
PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

mr.yarbles - top ones better, looks pretty legible to me

cust - i like the bottom one

skull-e
07-05-2009, 10:29 AM
nah, he's a fucking good writer...better than me even

not handwise but his pieces are mmmmmmm

we were really blitzed...like extremely blitzed that day, and it was dark

Mr yarbles
07-05-2009, 01:54 PM
I don't know how you guys can use being high as an excuse
I drop tags better when I'm high
Especially flares

skull-e
07-06-2009, 10:58 AM
No one asked you how good you are compared to others when you're baked.

No beef, just saying you called me out on something really stupid, with no good intentions.

switching up some letters
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00526.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00528.jpg

klic
07-06-2009, 12:28 PM
messy
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag49.jpg

cuser - dope, bottom one would look better without the underline

bbv - im liking the bottom one better

Bink1
07-06-2009, 12:46 PM
havent postyed for sum time.

http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07583.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07574.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07461.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07456.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07453.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07449.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07448.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07447.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07427.jpg

dope page u guys.

Mr yarbles
07-06-2009, 02:39 PM
No one asked you how good you are compared to others when you're baked.



nah nah I got respect for you bro wasn't trying to call you out or anything I was just saying

I think you should stick with custr over cuser
Or if you had a few more e's
That one's just lacking imo

teper the black paint tag is the best

proNYNJA
07-06-2009, 03:48 PM
havent postyed for sum time.

http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07447.jpg


dope page u guys.

how come it says TEPERone then a Crew under ur tag?

klic
07-06-2009, 03:58 PM
^why not? lol

Juicee
07-06-2009, 04:35 PM
how come it says TEPERone then a Crew under ur tag?

its just a number; doesnt mean hes one deep lol

hardwares
07-06-2009, 07:55 PM
bink - dope hands. what kind of paint is that turquoise shit?

PYT!TLC!
07-06-2009, 08:54 PM
bink - i like them too. the 't' on some of your tags looks like a 'j' imo, though.

skull-e - pretty dope, nice color on the bottom flick.

klic - messy indeed lol. nahh, it's alright. neater next time ha.

I don't wanna ruin the page with my wack handstyle so i'll wait till the next page emerges. :p

ErrorOner...
07-06-2009, 09:17 PM
how come it says TEPERone then a Crew under ur tag?

ever seen anyone write TEPERseven, for example, just because they roll with 7 writers?

klic
07-06-2009, 10:38 PM
^well said, lol

teper, i like the black paint one and the one pronynja bumped

JustChillin
07-06-2009, 11:08 PM
messy
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag49.jpg

cuser - dope, bottom one would look better without the underline

bbv - im liking the bottom one betterget rid of that small gap between the A and the N and make them connect more. Besides that I really like it.

Shurik*n
07-06-2009, 11:53 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image545.jpg

i'm really aming for this one (the one that was on the top left)

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image546.jpg

i write bacs.

i'll put up some crits in a bit

Shurik*n
07-07-2009, 12:07 AM
skull e - the bottom one is better, but maybe lose the line...or just do one line.

bink1 - ur t looks like a j on some of them...but other than that, great. i like the bottom one

klic
07-07-2009, 12:22 AM
use the edit button fool,

keep practicing, fill up pages full of handys and it will come

CrustOner
07-07-2009, 12:49 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0706092223.jpg
For the Wicked Shit battle. Trying something new out. Should I use this, or stick with what I usually do?

Bink1
07-07-2009, 03:07 AM
that was some mtn hardcore can with that turquoise shit :D but cant say that color name coz threw the can out...

TaxThis
07-07-2009, 06:01 AM
evow
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/rawr.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/helladrips.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/drriiippp.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/yeye.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/147.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/drips.jpg

crits?

killerspeen
07-07-2009, 06:46 AM
tell me what u think...do I suck badly or do I suck even worse :-s???

kemsshake proper fuck killerspeen graffiti tag molotow sake yahoo bombing science..

klic
07-07-2009, 09:51 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0706092223.jpg
For the Wicked Shit battle. Trying something new out. Should I use this, or stick with what I usually do?

its "wicked fuck" not wicked shit.

evow - the second one from the bottom is dope as hell. not feeling the rest of them

BigBlueViolence
07-07-2009, 10:55 AM
I'm digging all of the lower case Es, evow

TaxThis
07-07-2009, 02:35 PM
word. thanks guys.

PYT!TLC!
07-07-2009, 04:31 PM
bacs - the 'a' doesn't feel right for some reason. work on it.
evow - i like the second one from the bottom too, and also the third one from the top. pretty dope.

ehh.
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8671/dsc03762.jpg

TaxThis
07-07-2009, 07:00 PM
klic, i like that shit but try to do each letter with only one line, i dont like how many seprate line there are.. and starve... let your hand go crazy enough key bord letters cuz there not workin to me.

just my 2 cents. thanks for the crits ill have more pics up after tonight.

BigBlueViolence
07-07-2009, 08:23 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/168ebkg.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/2e4w60y.jpg

Shurik*n
07-07-2009, 09:03 PM
alright, i circled the ones i like the most...

here's all lowercase ones

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image548.jpg

and here's caps

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image549.jpg

u couldn't really see the circles that i drew around them to show u those are the ones i like the best, so i tried drawing a line on it with paint...u still can't really see...o well

JustChillin
07-08-2009, 12:47 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0707092240a.jpg








BACS- Go Caps

killerspeen
07-08-2009, 07:20 AM
crits plz...

http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/2561/scan0001nxc.jpg

iselldope
07-08-2009, 08:04 AM
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/5527/wickedfuck.jpg

iselldope
07-08-2009, 08:12 AM
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5076/wickedfuck2.jpg

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 12:59 PM
add a star or ! after fuck and its good to goo braaa

JustChillin
07-08-2009, 04:01 PM
TaxThis you don't know what your talking about.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 04:03 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0707092240a.jpg








BACS- Go Caps

lol and u do?? look at ur weak handy. ahahahhahahaha i love this site.

Juicee
07-08-2009, 04:04 PM
the whole handy looks fucked anyway...it doesnt need no add ons;; it need a fixer upper lol

LeaksOne
07-08-2009, 04:06 PM
lol and u do?? look at ur weak handy. ahahahhahahaha i love this site.

ok its gettin old fast. post pics of your shit on black books throwies an here then you can talk shit. until please be quiet. please. im not tryna argue anymore just stop

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 04:09 PM
suck it

Juicee
07-08-2009, 04:12 PM
^^shut the fuck up are you 3?

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 04:15 PM
see if u wouldnt of said that i wouldnt of replayed its all u guys doin it to ur self.
yea im 3.

JustChillin
07-08-2009, 04:40 PM
lol and u do?? look at ur weak handy. ahahahhahahaha i love this site.A good tag is one that can still look good with out the add ons. Its not about making each individual letter look cool and then adding stars and arrows and all other kinds of bullshit to it. its about making each letter flow and match with each other to make the word. Its like mixing together a milkshake. You have to make sure you get the mix down and tasting good before you add the cherry on top. I dont give a shit if you think my handstyle is "weak" or not. I know what im talking about and you dont.

BigBlueViolence
07-08-2009, 04:45 PM
NONE OF YOU KNOW WHAT THE FUCK YOU ARE TALKlNG ABOUT
THAT'S WHY YOU ARE lN THE TOY THREAD.
YOU GUY'S NEED TO STOP BlTCHlNG AT EACH OTHER, REALlZE lT'S THE lNTERNET, AND SHUT THE FUCK UP ALREADY.

Juicee
07-08-2009, 04:57 PM
^^
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq39/Apemaster/1223758586476.jpg

BigBlueViolence
07-08-2009, 05:11 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3281/3079877360_0e69015f82.jpg?v=0

Shurik*n
07-08-2009, 06:39 PM
sorry to break the chain but...

i've always wondered. how do u guys decide when/where/what to add to ur tags? like..mine isn't ready yet for that, but i was just wondering

TheWorldGoneMad
07-08-2009, 06:41 PM
http://blogs.nashvillescene.com/pitw/assets_c/2009/06/Billy_Mays-thumb-252x264.jpg

PYT!TLC!
07-08-2009, 07:00 PM
http://blogs.nashvillescene.com/pitw/assets_c/2009/06/Billy_Mays-thumb-252x264.jpg

:(

shuriken - well, my tags aren't quite ready for that either, but i see plenty tags on stop signs, dumpsters, bathroom stalls. I guess whenever you want to. But I barely have any firsthand experience so disregard this post. :p

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 07:44 PM
A good tag is one that can still look good with out the add ons. Its not about making each individual letter look cool and then adding stars and arrows and all other kinds of bullshit to it. its about making each letter flow and match with each other to make the word. Its like mixing together a milkshake. You have to make sure you get the mix down and tasting good before you add the cherry on top. I dont give a shit if you think my handstyle is "weak" or not. I know what im talking about and you dont.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!







you both suck.stfu.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 07:45 PM
heres on for you all to hate on
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000078.jpg

who can hate on it the most?

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 07:48 PM
in all seriousness i cant even read it.i see a e and a v and thats it.thats bad considering that its a basic handstyle and now a wild one.i see it now its evow...make the o bigger.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 08:22 PM
yea lots of ppl say it looks like evan but i dont give a fuck :)

BigBlueViolence
07-08-2009, 09:30 PM
Then why would you post it here?

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 10:22 PM
cuz i can.

Shurik*n
07-08-2009, 10:54 PM
no one answered my questions...so i'll try again haha!

when/where/what do u guys add on stuff to ur tags...like halos, colons, quote marks, all that stuff. i'm still perfecting my tag, but i was jw

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:37 PM
do what u like man, u shouldnt be asking ppl. do what u like and paint it. theres always gona be haters no matter what it looks like. just study other sick tags and u will learn

Shurik*n
07-08-2009, 11:39 PM
so what about this one:

there's an extra line to the left. just ignore it

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image565mlm.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:42 PM
its fucking horrible..

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:43 PM
your trying to hard, just let ur hand go crazy and fast. cut the add ons for now.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-08-2009, 11:45 PM
your trying to hard, just let ur hand go crazy and fast. cut the add ons for now.

thats horrible advice.dont listen to him.going crazy and fast is going to make it look just as shitty the only difference is that people will wonder if you were having an epileptic seizure when you did it...the best advice is frankly to go check up on how other people do their letters and try to build off that.

TaxThis
07-08-2009, 11:49 PM
well dont go to fuckin crazy, but the way i do it is just let my hand go., when i go slow and acully try to make it look good it looks 100X worse in the long run.

JustChillin
07-09-2009, 12:08 AM
NONE OF YOU KNOW WHAT THE FUCK YOU ARE TALKlNG ABOUT
THAT'S WHY YOU ARE lN THE TOY THREAD.
YOU GUY'S NEED TO STOP BlTCHlNG AT EACH OTHER, REALlZE lT'S THE lNTERNET, AND SHUT THE FUCK UP ALREADY.
just because you are a toy doesnt mean you dont know what your talking about.. fuckin dumbass.

Shurik*n
07-09-2009, 12:12 AM
well dont go to fuckin crazy, but the way i do it is just let my hand go., when i go slow and acully try to make it look good it looks 100X worse in the long run.


soo...this is what i got when i just let my hand go...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image566.jpg

TaxThis
07-09-2009, 12:13 AM
now keep workin at it maybe throw in some " " or a halo.

TaxThis
07-09-2009, 12:14 AM
i started by making my own alphabet..twice then picked my fave letters

Shurik*n
07-09-2009, 12:15 AM
alright thx for the crits/help...i'll keep workin

exitus
07-09-2009, 01:13 AM
http://i27.tinypic.com/2mwyzj8.jpg

http://i32.tinypic.com/b3su9i.jpg

exitus
07-09-2009, 01:14 AM
so what about this one:

there's an extra line to the left. just ignore it

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image565mlm.jpg

this has too many addons, pick like one or two you like and drop the rest

iselldope
07-09-2009, 04:50 AM
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5076/wickedfuck2.jpg

bump, taxthis please shut the fuck up,don't give crits man, tags must be readable not hyrogliphes(don't know hot to spell that)
so stfu and die and justchillen you're also sum toy fuck

mero put them in the underground

Namek
07-09-2009, 06:08 AM
not working usb cable + boredom =
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1888/nouohb.jpg

hardwares
07-09-2009, 06:27 AM
nice first post namek..
it looks way better then the other shit i see on this page, but i have no idea what the last letter is (G?) so work on that and lose the arm at the end of the letter imo.

id like to see it on paper.

trowel
07-09-2009, 06:27 AM
none of you guys should be giving advice in my honest opinion....

Perhaps saying what helped you get better might work but serious advice...leave to the big boys...You guys whine like a bunch of dry pussied granny's that just lost a game of bingo...stop fighting and post some flicks.

You guys need to stop getting sore pussies when someone hates on you...trust me no matter how good you get someone will be there to hate...so don't respond just post flicks...That is the same way you earn respect painting...and don't bump yourself...that makes you look desperate.


If you guys don't like what i have to say you can eat my tits...Or, if you want to be a man, set up a battle(on your terms) with the mods and i will politely rip you a new asshole...

until then...stop hating, start appreciating...

Namek
07-09-2009, 06:34 AM
nice first post namek..
it looks way better then the other shit i see on this page, but i have no idea what the last letter is (G?) so work on that and lose the arm at the end of the letter imo.

id like to see it on paper.

haha nah dude its a U :)
when i can be fucked ill find my phone cableee and post some shit up.

trowel
07-09-2009, 06:54 AM
You should type what it says haha...Not a bad first post at all...Keep posting flicks homie!

Namek
07-09-2009, 07:07 AM
You should type what it says haha...Not a bad first post at all...Keep posting flicks homie!

will doooo
and for future reference it says noyou.

medacog1
07-09-2009, 08:39 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/68sdqs.jpg

(I just started working with that bent N and i am just going to keep the basic K because K's are really hard..)

*NGONE*
07-09-2009, 09:38 AM
Thats pretty sick.. nice steez

medacog1
07-09-2009, 09:57 AM
thanks dude..means alot :)

*NGONE*
07-09-2009, 10:06 AM
no problem

CrustOner
07-09-2009, 10:11 AM
Listen, Meda and Ngone. It's not good yet, but it's getting there. haha just keep working at it!

The only thing though, is that NGONE, you probably don't know what you're talking about.

Now constructive crits. Get rid of the bump on the bottom of the N, and take the quotes out of the middle of the O. Judging by the style you look like you're going for, I'd say you skinny up the entire thing. also, draw a line to dot the I. not an actual dot. Works wonders.

*NGONE*
07-09-2009, 10:21 AM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/4952/0709091113.jpg

no longer nage..nag

medacog1
07-09-2009, 10:51 AM
Listen, Meda and Ngone. It's not good yet, but it's getting there. haha just keep working at it!

The only thing though, is that NGONE, you probably don't know what you're talking about.

Now constructive crits. Get rid of the bump on the bottom of the N, and take the quotes out of the middle of the O. Judging by the style you look like you're going for, I'd say you skinny up the entire thing. also, draw a line to dot the I. not an actual dot. Works wonders.

So should i just make the N look like a key board N,or just remove the bump?
Yea i'll knock off the quotes in the middle of the O (i really didn't like them).
But could you please explain what you mean by " draw a line to dot the I. not an actual dot" ?
And skinny up on it? i dont understand...
Sorry for all the questions

CrustOner
07-09-2009, 10:52 AM
Shorten the line at the end of your G.
and Meda:

I say you start with a keyboard N. for now. You'll move on later.
When I say dot the I with a line, I mean where the dot would be, draw a short vertical line.
and by "skinny up on it" I mean make everything thinner. The letters, that is.


PS. I'm playing Platinum right now.

*NGONE*
07-09-2009, 10:58 AM
ok. im used to doing that cuz i used have an e on the end.

Kayn.
07-09-2009, 11:54 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/68sdqs.jpg

(I just started working with that bent N and i am just going to keep the basic K because K's are really hard..)

Id loose the bump on the N, and the parts coming down from the top of the T, but aside from that i like it

medacog1
07-09-2009, 03:24 PM
Shorten the line at the end of your G.
and Meda:

I say you start with a keyboard N. for now. You'll move on later.
When I say dot the I with a line, I mean where the dot would be, draw a short vertical line.
and by "skinny up on it" I mean make everything thinner. The letters, that is.


PS. I'm playing Platinum right now.

lol that rules that your playing that i swear its life changing... but thanks for the help

Zarb
07-09-2009, 03:40 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0709091623.jpg
Tolik- Make the O skinnier and lost the lines inside it. I personally don't like the two lines going down on the T, maybe shorten them a little.
Nag- Spread your letter out alittle more, took me while to read it.
IsellDope- I like the letters, maybe start making them closer together now?
Becks- I think theres too much extra shit, lose that stuff until your better. Im being hypocritical though cause I probably have too much extra crap too...

Crits?

CrustOner
07-09-2009, 06:13 PM
haha Eark, it kinda looks like you stole a different letter from every person on this site.

*NGONE*
07-09-2009, 06:17 PM
i think it looks good. i would just change the bottom part of the k. but otherwise pretty good

hpir
07-09-2009, 06:33 PM
Why the fuck do you think that crust

CrustOner
07-09-2009, 06:53 PM
Hey, chill. It's just graffiti. I'm saying the A doesn't look like the same style as any of the other letters, and looks like Janek's. The E looks original, but it's ugly. the are could be anyone on this site. and the K looks like Revok's K.

but hey, that's just me. Peace.

exitus
07-09-2009, 08:46 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/b3su9i.jpg

bump
cut the drama imo

JustChillin
07-09-2009, 09:08 PM
bump
cut the drama imoexitus-haha i write kinda like you. Make sure you make both of the Rs are the same. You have 2 different Rs.
zarb- The K at the end looks retarded, I dont know why you extended it so much. None of it matches and the R looks stupid with that box thing. Go simpler.

Zarb
07-09-2009, 09:39 PM
That A is a completely generic keyboard letter A haha, it's not any ones A.
And idk who Revok is but whateverrr.
Wreck- I feel like none of the letters go together too well, maybe make them all the same size for now

PYT!TLC!
07-09-2009, 10:11 PM
wreck - i like it. work on the flow.

eark - kinda weak. the 'e' and 'k' look stupid. keep working on it, start simpler, etc. btw, what marker did you use? dope color

tonik - lose the bump on the 'n'. i would also lose the quotations inside the 'o', but that's up to you. either make the lowercase 'i' shorter, or lose the dot on top. make the extensions on the 't' a bit shorter, again that's up to you. i dig the arrow.

nag - i like it, make the 'n' more distinct though.

i'm still fuckin with my letters. =/

exitus
07-09-2009, 10:53 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/123pf75.jpg

nag i would think about something like this

just keep your letters level

http://i30.tinypic.com/10rs7zt.jpg

Tip to people starting, watch a fucking assload of graff flicks to see how the pros do it. Stick with what you like, dont be influence by people on here like me.

Most of all, write your name over and over again and slowly pick up small things to improve the tag. Dont try and force it, the smallest details make the biggest difference.

CrustOner
07-09-2009, 11:00 PM
That A is a completely generic keyboard letter A haha, it's not any ones A.
And idk who Revok is but whateverrr.
Wreck- I feel like none of the letters go together too well, maybe make them all the same size for now

I'm not saying that it's not. It is. But it has absolutely nothing to do with the other letters, and so you threw in what you could find.

oh, and revok1.com (http://www.revok1.com) . learn something. One of the writers I have the most respect for.

JustChillin
07-09-2009, 11:05 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0709092051.jpg

Exitus get creative with the W. Its the first letter so it should stand out and not look like a throw away letter already if u know what I mean. It looks plain and small and then the rest of your other letters aren't

Shurik*n
07-09-2009, 11:11 PM
new name so i'm gonna start it off simple... kinda

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image571.jpg

exitus
07-09-2009, 11:20 PM
i know its small but the idea was that it would build
i dont have any good w's so im gona use the safe one

EGO31
07-10-2009, 12:02 AM
Why don't any of you kids listen.
SIMPLE! Walk around your area, look at tag's, decide what you think is dope and bite. You're a toy, you're allowed to.
Then start changing it.
and never use goddamn fucking arrows. Ever. Period.

Camer
07-10-2009, 02:21 AM
my steez, clean and simple.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw017.jpg

mop tag
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw018.jpg

iselldope
07-10-2009, 03:56 AM
who wants an exxhange,i write zane

Namek
07-10-2009, 04:15 AM
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/6435/imgnewf.jpg
sorry for the quality gaiz.
(noyou)

exitus
07-10-2009, 08:17 AM
camer the first ones dope as fuck

JustChillin
07-10-2009, 01:50 PM
Camer I like it. Keep writing it. I cant come up with any crits

PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 02:06 PM
camer -first one is indeed dope as fuck.
namek - pretty messy, clean those letters up.

Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 02:08 PM
namek...do as ^^^say, and also..maybe start with simple letters

Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 02:14 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image575.jpg

CrustOner
07-10-2009, 05:12 PM
Namek's is dope, you guys don't understand yet. but you should clean it up just a bit.
the N could be easily mistaken for a J.

Mr yarbles
07-10-2009, 05:42 PM
nameks is complete shit
Don't play yourself.

-Dank-DK-
07-10-2009, 07:03 PM
[QUOTE=Camer;1425944]my steez, clean and simple.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw017.jpg

fuckin fresh ! ! !

Namek
07-10-2009, 07:20 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5549/imgnewj.jpg

simple.. ?

BigBlueViolence
07-10-2009, 07:26 PM
I don't like the loopy thing in yer U and the arrow, but I like the hand overall.

Namek
07-10-2009, 07:30 PM
cheers mangggggggg

mindtrix350
07-10-2009, 08:00 PM
Meh...
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/tag.jpg

Crits:
exitus- I like it, but perhaps make the W a little bigger
JustChillin- I think you should stick with the more rounded handies
Shurik*n- Try a line above the I for a dot, I kind of like it though
Camer- First pic is so dope
Namek- I agree with BBV

Camer
07-10-2009, 08:19 PM
Thanks for the feedback. Its what I got from finally listening to the vets when they say "go simple"

Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 08:30 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image576.jpg

i'm trying to see what i can do to the i so it looks more like an i than an l...but crits for the whole thing?

and camer the first one is sick!

BigBlueViolence
07-10-2009, 08:32 PM
Came- not really a fan of your R.
I would personally just get rid of it,
but if you feel like you need it,
I would work on rounding out the ring part of it, and get rid of the kink on the leg.

PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 09:00 PM
namek - the 'u' imo is wack. but it's alright so far. p.s. your image was replaced with this 'anti-sec' movement thing. has to do with full-disclosure and computer security. am i the only one seeing this? :p

mindtrix - have a little space between your letters.

aims - you're getting there. imo i'm digging the 'i'.

http://i32.tinypic.com/23rjn8h.jpg

experimenting with lowercase letters. :)
crayola purple mothafucka.

*NGONE*
07-10-2009, 10:26 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/123pf75.jpg

nag i would think about something like this

just keep your letters level

http://i30.tinypic.com/10rs7zt.jpg

Tip to people starting, watch a fucking assload of graff flicks to see how the pros do it. Stick with what you like, dont be influence by people on here like me.

Most of all, write your name over and over again and slowly pick up small things to improve the tag. Dont try and force it, the smallest details make the biggest difference.


yeah ive tried that style before. but dont u think it seems so simple?

Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 10:37 PM
aims - you're getting there. imo i'm digging the 'i'.
.

...which i. and i like the first one...except make the v bigger

PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 11:41 PM
...which i. and i like the first one...except make the v bigger

the i with the circle as the dot. i would say to make the circle more subtle.

Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 11:44 PM
how so...u mean like..make it so the top of the circle is the same height as the rest...or like, make it look like a halo?

PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 11:54 PM
i would make it the same height as the rest. but that's just my opinion lol.

BigBlueViolence
07-10-2009, 11:58 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/6xvqro.jpg

PYT!TLC!
07-11-2009, 12:36 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/6xvqro.jpg

my bitch is off-limits.
that aside, can't really catch any flow. it looks like you messed up on the 'h' lol.
crit mine please?

BigBlueViolence
07-11-2009, 12:44 AM
You're S is nice.
Your letters don't have any huge problems at all.
your A and V are skinny, and I wouldn't connect the V and E unless You connected them all

Mr yarbles
07-11-2009, 12:55 AM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5549/imgnewj.jpg

simple.. ?

Much better
But lose your end letter.

Big blue thanks for biting my h.
But its okay
I still love you

BigBlueViolence
07-11-2009, 12:58 AM
*****,
that H is passed around more than a Woodward crackwhore.

Mr yarbles
07-11-2009, 01:06 AM
:(
Guess I'll go shoot myself

mindtrix350
07-11-2009, 10:18 AM
mindtrix - have a little space between your letters.

http://i32.tinypic.com/23rjn8h.jpg

experimenting with lowercase letters. :)
crayola purple mothafucka.
Alrighty, other than the spacing, anything else?

My only advice would be to widen up the V, which was said already.
BBV- I like it, nothing else to say about it really.

klic
07-11-2009, 08:06 PM
a couple in the shitters

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag51.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag52.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag53.jpg

starve - your V's too skinny, use an uppercase A. just keep experimenting with shit

earn - dope, not really much more you can do with it, keep playing with different styles

aims - dont dot your I

seaer - some of them look a little too compact, spread it out a little more. good overall though

edit, forgot about this
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag50.jpg

*NGONE*
07-11-2009, 08:55 PM
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5349/0711092139.jpg
I kno i messed up on the e. it needs to be bigger.
Janek- looks good. what kinda marker?
Starve- like everyone else is saying make ur v wider but other than that its good