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mindtrix350
07-10-2009, 08:00 PM
Meh...
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/tag.jpg
Crits:
exitus- I like it, but perhaps make the W a little bigger
JustChillin- I think you should stick with the more rounded handies
Shurik*n- Try a line above the I for a dot, I kind of like it though
Camer- First pic is so dope
Namek- I agree with BBV
Camer
07-10-2009, 08:19 PM
Thanks for the feedback. Its what I got from finally listening to the vets when they say "go simple"
Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 08:30 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image576.jpg
i'm trying to see what i can do to the i so it looks more like an i than an l...but crits for the whole thing?
and camer the first one is sick!
BigBlueViolence
07-10-2009, 08:32 PM
Came- not really a fan of your R.
I would personally just get rid of it,
but if you feel like you need it,
I would work on rounding out the ring part of it, and get rid of the kink on the leg.
PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 09:00 PM
namek - the 'u' imo is wack. but it's alright so far. p.s. your image was replaced with this 'anti-sec' movement thing. has to do with full-disclosure and computer security. am i the only one seeing this? :p
mindtrix - have a little space between your letters.
aims - you're getting there. imo i'm digging the 'i'.
http://i32.tinypic.com/23rjn8h.jpg
experimenting with lowercase letters. :)
crayola purple mothafucka.
*NGONE*
07-10-2009, 10:26 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/123pf75.jpg
nag i would think about something like this
just keep your letters level
http://i30.tinypic.com/10rs7zt.jpg
Tip to people starting, watch a fucking assload of graff flicks to see how the pros do it. Stick with what you like, dont be influence by people on here like me.
Most of all, write your name over and over again and slowly pick up small things to improve the tag. Dont try and force it, the smallest details make the biggest difference.
yeah ive tried that style before. but dont u think it seems so simple?
Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 10:37 PM
aims - you're getting there. imo i'm digging the 'i'.
.
...which i. and i like the first one...except make the v bigger
PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 11:41 PM
...which i. and i like the first one...except make the v bigger
the i with the circle as the dot. i would say to make the circle more subtle.
Shurik*n
07-10-2009, 11:44 PM
how so...u mean like..make it so the top of the circle is the same height as the rest...or like, make it look like a halo?
PYT!TLC!
07-10-2009, 11:54 PM
i would make it the same height as the rest. but that's just my opinion lol.
BigBlueViolence
07-10-2009, 11:58 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/6xvqro.jpg
PYT!TLC!
07-11-2009, 12:36 AM
http://i30.tinypic.com/6xvqro.jpg
my bitch is off-limits.
that aside, can't really catch any flow. it looks like you messed up on the 'h' lol.
crit mine please?
BigBlueViolence
07-11-2009, 12:44 AM
You're S is nice.
Your letters don't have any huge problems at all.
your A and V are skinny, and I wouldn't connect the V and E unless You connected them all
Mr yarbles
07-11-2009, 12:55 AM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5549/imgnewj.jpg
simple.. ?
Much better
But lose your end letter.
Big blue thanks for biting my h.
But its okay
I still love you
BigBlueViolence
07-11-2009, 12:58 AM
*****,
that H is passed around more than a Woodward crackwhore.
Mr yarbles
07-11-2009, 01:06 AM
:(
Guess I'll go shoot myself
mindtrix350
07-11-2009, 10:18 AM
mindtrix - have a little space between your letters.
http://i32.tinypic.com/23rjn8h.jpg
experimenting with lowercase letters. :)
crayola purple mothafucka.
Alrighty, other than the spacing, anything else?
My only advice would be to widen up the V, which was said already.
BBV- I like it, nothing else to say about it really.
a couple in the shitters
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag51.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag52.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag53.jpg
starve - your V's too skinny, use an uppercase A. just keep experimenting with shit
earn - dope, not really much more you can do with it, keep playing with different styles
aims - dont dot your I
seaer - some of them look a little too compact, spread it out a little more. good overall though
edit, forgot about this
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag50.jpg
*NGONE*
07-11-2009, 08:55 PM
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5349/0711092139.jpg
I kno i messed up on the e. it needs to be bigger.
Janek- looks good. what kinda marker?
Starve- like everyone else is saying make ur v wider but other than that its good
nace? - cant really tell what that third letter is, looks good overall. and i was using a meanstreak
Shurik*n
07-11-2009, 09:07 PM
I think it says nace...if it does u might wanna make the c a bit clearer
*NGONE*
07-11-2009, 09:07 PM
its a g. nage. thats i sloppy one. ill post some better ones up later
*NGONE*
07-11-2009, 09:46 PM
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4572/0711092215.jpg
http://img6.imageshack.us/i/0711092144.jpg/
it doesnt really look like a G.it just looks like you extended the middle line of your E into your C. work on defining that
Shurik*n
07-12-2009, 12:09 AM
they're all the same so no need to scan through all of em. just one
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image579.jpg
nage: what klic said
CrustOner
07-12-2009, 12:31 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0711092220.jpg
Aims, keep practicing with those, and every now and again, throw something new in.
Nage, what Klic said, you're scrunching too much.
Janek, you know I dig your handy, but you should shake it up a bit. Add something. :]
raid123
07-12-2009, 04:14 AM
crits would be much appreciated
trowel
07-12-2009, 06:22 AM
you have a real good base for a good hand style, i think you should just be practicing it with variations...In all honesty to really find a good hand style you need to be fillin up pages...not doing just one little hand style...I can't give you any solid crits until i see you try to take this to another level...it's good to get crazy but not to get stupid...post some variations up on a full page homie
crustoner-dope
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/k3M0nee001.jpg
crits?
Shurik*n
07-12-2009, 09:31 PM
^^i quite like it...only thing i would do is make the k a bit wider
PYT!TLC!
07-12-2009, 11:29 PM
janek - dope. the 'j' looks a bit skinny on some, but maybe that's just the angle you're shooting at.
nage - make the 'g' more distinct. maybe put some add-ons, i dunno lol.
aims - good start. i agree with crust, keep fuckin with that and slowly variate, remove, add, etc to it.
crust - dope shit, can't really think of anything. i would love to see that in black. :p
kem - i don't really like the extension on the 'k'. give your letters some room and maybe remove the add-on's. looks ok so far though keep practicing.
JustChillin
07-13-2009, 01:00 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0707092232.jpgI was suppose to enter this into the Almost Perfect Battle but I forgot to send it in.
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-13-2009, 03:32 AM
you would have lost...
Mr yarbles
07-13-2009, 08:52 AM
Naw he woulda kinged shit
http://i26.tinypic.com/2wgelb5.jpg
janek I don't mean to bea dick but you need to start steppinn it up and tryin to expand your style
I mean it's alright but that's really all it is
Dessik
07-13-2009, 12:28 PM
hey there was a dude on here with da name tonik if you see this, i was practicing with not stealing
http://i856.photobucket.com/albums/ab123/AesikA/0713091239.jpg?t=1247506110
Dessik
07-13-2009, 01:00 PM
crits?
http://i856.photobucket.com/albums/ab123/AesikA/0713091337.jpg?t=1247507968
Drakk
07-13-2009, 02:42 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a44/StupidCube/0713091539.jpg
HAHAHAHAHA :confused:
medacog1
07-13-2009, 03:20 PM
crits?
http://i856.photobucket.com/albums/ab123/AesikA/0713091337.jpg?t=1247507968
I know my handys aren't good...but i'm not liking your K's...their so hard to write...and try to keep all the letter the same hight.
Naw he woulda kinged shit
http://i26.tinypic.com/2wgelb5.jpg
janek I don't mean to bea dick but you need to start steppinn it up and tryin to expand your style
I mean it's alright but that's really all it is
i know, i cant get anything going, i try making my letters more complex and adding stuff to it but nothing seems to work. it sucks though, my hand hasnt improved at all in the last couple months
yours is looking good, your I and S look a little too jumbled though. not feeling the R in RSK that much either. just my thoughts, looks dope overall though
janek-saw you were haveing sometrouble, my imput may not be that good but you have a fun name to mess around with.
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek001.jpg
throw somthin of mine in there vvv
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek002.jpg
Mr yarbles
07-13-2009, 09:41 PM
i know, i cant get anything going, i try making my letters more complex and adding stuff to it but nothing seems to work. it sucks though, my hand hasnt improved at all in the last couple months
yours is looking good, your I and S look a little too jumbled though. not feeling the R in RSK that much either. just my thoughts, looks dope overall though
ha its a p psk.
yeah just practice with different letters and different names and stuff
MARTYRaz
07-13-2009, 10:56 PM
relish nigg???went from rapist to relish..wowzerz..diggin it tho..other than i thoughti it said rsk too..
Shurik*n
07-13-2009, 11:04 PM
i'm trying to make my tag not look like im just writing it like on a school paper or something...the original one is the one below the top left. any of these better? or keep trying?
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image585.jpg
janek: i like everything but the a seems out of place to me. maybe make the top of it more rounded?...that's my opinion.
kem: like it...maybe make the k a little bit wider
Eon 1
07-13-2009, 11:13 PM
^^ I like the "A" on the one thats in the top left corner
exitus
07-14-2009, 12:50 AM
janek im at the same spot, kinda locked into one style.
Yours looks good though, practice and get the flow down.
Mr yarbles
07-14-2009, 01:18 AM
I've hit that point many times
That was also the time most people ended getting frustrated at my post whoring and told me what they really thought
you're gonna ned up starting over 3 or 4 times it's just how it works.
raid123
07-14-2009, 07:59 PM
ugh heres my new tag, found out syst is taken and hopefully this one isnt. still sticking to the simple letters as ive been told, crits are much appreciated.
Shurik*n
07-14-2009, 10:31 PM
keep trying to make my letter not looking like i'm just writing
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image589.jpg
JustChillin
07-14-2009, 11:20 PM
Dont make a circle on top of your I. instead just dot it like a normal I. and move the M closer to the I.
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-14-2009, 11:56 PM
dont listen to chillin he's fucking horrible at tags.the I is the least of your problems that s is just hooooooorible.make it look like an actual S insead of trying to make it underline.that never looks good ever.everevereverever.and the A.the /\ part should be one line not two lines you try to connect in the middle.
JustChillin
07-15-2009, 01:49 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0714092318.jpg
medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:00 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0714092318.jpg
Man i dont know.... i would lose the lines on the bottom of the sharp (MANIAK)
And it looks like you took the K from the TONIK example mero did for me..(on the sharp MANIAK)
also i don't think im feeling the long flingy line on the bottom of the M (sharp MANIAK still)
and the just plain maniak i thnk you should just scrap it..
( by the way thats just me....you could be just fucking with us and you could be amazing)
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0714092318.jpg
I saw a maniak tag on the bus the other day are you by any chance from Brisbane?
JustChillin
07-15-2009, 03:54 AM
nope. Im in LA.
exitus
07-15-2009, 09:30 AM
Aims, that name kinda sucks. even if you were good at writing it be hard to make a good tag because those letters just dont really work
maniak, same kinda thing. If you work hard maybe it can look halfway decent. Both the ones you put up arent very good and need to be cleaned up more. Pick the one you like more and write it again and again to get your flow down
KNS13
07-15-2009, 01:12 PM
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0020-3.jpg
KNS13
07-15-2009, 01:34 PM
no crits?
dude, its been 20 minutes lol
medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:26 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/oqh9us.jpg
Its like im not improving..and its pissing me off so much....help
?....(i really dont like add-ons other then ARROWS)
medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:36 PM
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0020-3.jpg
idk..
It looks like you tried so hard.
BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 02:53 PM
Meda- start with the bottom one, it doesn't look bad at all.
After you start working with that for a long ass time, you'll start noticing things to do with the letters without having to try.
medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:54 PM
Meda- start with the bottom one, it doesn't look bad at all.
After you start working with that for a long ass time, you'll start noticing things to do with the letters without having to try.
So i should just write it alot until i see something?
BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 02:57 PM
Right, it's almost like the changes come on there own.
Don't worry about making it look like what you think graffiti looks like,
just write it.
Bink1
07-15-2009, 03:19 PM
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07620.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07619.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07616.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07615.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07609.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07607.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07606.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07605.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07602.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07601.jpg
what u think guys my hand still rubbish?
BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 03:20 PM
I dig it,
but your T looks a little plain compared to the other letters.
exitus
07-15-2009, 03:28 PM
Bink-looks good especialy some of the lower ones
KNS-has potential but i dont 100% know what it says, try and make it cleaner. And less addons
Tonik-looks good but the I is conflicting with the n and the k. Try to use a different I to break it up
i was sketched out on this one, cars kept going by below and above me lol
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag54.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag55.jpg
teper - havnt seen much of you lately, good to see your still getting up. im not a huge fan of drippy tags, i like the third flick, the ctms one. pretty dope overall though
aims - shitty name, your not going to get any flow with that letter combo, just play with different letters
BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 07:51 PM
I don't think Aims is a shitty word at all
http://i26.tinypic.com/pvk9c.jpg
i dunno, in my opinion, it would flow a lot better if you had the S for the first letter, like saim or siam
janek-saw you were haveing sometrouble, my imput may not be that good but you have a fun name to mess around with.
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek001.jpg
throw somthin of mine in there vvv
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek002.jpg
thanks, just noticed this
exitus
07-15-2009, 08:08 PM
silly bbv, not everyone is as good as you.
Since hes new to this maybe he can take a less creative name and bite others untill he gets a half good handy
expozay
07-15-2009, 08:34 PM
tonik that bottom one is best by far. work with that just keep it simple the steez will come.
kem lose the extension on the k shits wack. and the halo seems to big for your tag id say lose that for now too and the quotes. just stay simple.
janek ur shit looks better everyday.
considering a name change. too many *****s in my area with similar names. emir enmity shit gets confusing. crits?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2592/3725509528_280cbc6eb1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2445/3725546302_cdc197f9fb.jpg
PYT!TLC!
07-15-2009, 08:43 PM
still experimentating. :p
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/552/dsc03768r.jpg
(close-upz)
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4872/dsc03769f.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5365/dsc03770.jpg
tonik - work with the basic one.
maniak - the wildstyle-ish maniak tag is ok. the bottom one flows a bit better, but the 'i' is disproportionate with the rest of the tag. in other words it feels out of place lol.
bink - dope sauce, but like bbv said your t looks bland compared to the rest of the tag.
janek - can't really say anything lol. it's still dope, but spice it up or something homie. getting a tad bit boring :p
emik - i personally dig the one to the right. work on the 'e' and 'k' a bit.
exitus
07-15-2009, 08:43 PM
i like shem top one
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-15-2009, 09:19 PM
tonik the o is WAAAAAY to big.and the space between the n,i,k is to small.the space between each letter should be the same.basicly the letters should take up the same amount of space.
Mr yarbles
07-15-2009, 09:22 PM
I don't think Aims is a shitty word at all
http://i26.tinypic.com/pvk9c.jpg
It is to me
It's the arizonas instrument to measure standards over here
Fucking test is annoying as shit we have to pass it to graduate thank god I passed
that and we have to take it like every year since first grade
Me and that word have beef.
Shurik*n
07-15-2009, 11:58 PM
Damnit...now i'm gonna just think of a nother name...this might take a while.
JustChillin
07-16-2009, 12:01 AM
QUIZ or QWIZ sounds pretty cool. I would write it if i knew how.
Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 12:08 AM
QUIZ or QWIZ sounds pretty cool. I would write it if i knew how.
haha yea, but the throwies/bomb...and that stuff wouldn't look too good
exitus
07-16-2009, 12:23 AM
Use letters that are balanced and dont blend into each other.
For example, P is a big no no because theres a huge gap in the bottom right.
And I tends to blend into other letters so try not to use I unless you have to.
AIMS can still be salvaged but you need to seriously rethink how you write it
exitus
07-16-2009, 12:38 AM
http://i25.tinypic.com/j5wm4j.jpg
lots of work this week, practiced on these
http://i25.tinypic.com/nvci6o.jpg
shity picture but came out awesome in real life.
http://i26.tinypic.com/116htfm.jpg
playing around with this style, def. needs to be cleaned up
http://i29.tinypic.com/4zwbbt.jpg
tag atm
http://i28.tinypic.com/xnhmol.jpg
tried to work with aims and this was the best i could get, my handy isnt very good at all. But if your totaly stuck on aims i would drop the s and just be aim
medacog1
07-16-2009, 01:17 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg
YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)
Bink1
07-16-2009, 02:31 AM
teper - havnt seen much of you lately, good to see your still getting up. im not a huge fan of drippy tags, i like the third flick, the ctms one. pretty dope overall though
im too lazy to upload all the crap i do. im getting up hardcore right now :D
exitus
07-16-2009, 08:13 AM
tonik- looks alright but it wont get better until you do something about the I
Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 09:11 AM
Hey guys, thx for trying to help me out with the handy. i'm still trying to find something that will flow (no luck yet haha)...but at the same time thinking of a name
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg
YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)
good job dude that looks dope, get that up
iThrow
07-16-2009, 12:04 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/23r0ep3.jpg
mehhh
PYT!TLC!
07-16-2009, 12:19 PM
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/552/dsc03768r.jpg
bump.
wreck - on the orange tag, work on making the last 'r' looking the same as the first one. dope though.
tonik - looking good so far.
sers - give crits to get crits. :p clean it up a bit and it will look better.
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-16-2009, 12:42 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg
YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)
this looks muuuuuuuuuuch much much better.keep this and tweak it every once in a while but this is pretty good.i can see someone rocking this on a wall.i think it would look nice.im impressed.and i dont say that often.
B.S. POLICE
07-16-2009, 01:20 PM
tonik try adding flares to the kicks of your k and t
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5606/screencapture2x.png
JustChillin
07-16-2009, 02:31 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg
YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)i would get rid of the arrow.
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-16-2009, 02:36 PM
i like the arrow.id keep it.
BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 02:37 PM
I would shorten the < part of it.
expozay
07-16-2009, 02:43 PM
tonik good shit.
BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 02:57 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/2z6f4wg.jpg
for the next battle
medacog1
07-16-2009, 03:06 PM
tonik- looks alright but it wont get better until you do something about the I
What would you do about the I?
Thanks for the good comments...everyones opinion helped out alot
medacog1
07-16-2009, 03:13 PM
tonik try adding flares to the kicks of your k and t
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5606/screencapture2x.png
Dude thats good..but i dont think i could do anything like that right now, is that how you write your name aswell?
expozay
07-16-2009, 04:15 PM
considering a name change. crits?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2592/3725509528_280cbc6eb1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2445/3725546302_cdc197f9fb.jpg[/QUOTE]
bummmp
ErrorOner...
07-16-2009, 04:55 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg
YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)
maybe try it with horizontal lines on the top and bottom of the I <---like that
and def don't get rid of that arrow it compliments the Ks lines...
BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 05:44 PM
That Shem stuff shits on the Emik stuff, Expo.
I'm for the name change.
Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 06:52 PM
alright...changed my name. hopefully this one flows better..does it? the tags are just simple ones..didn't play around with the letters much, i'm just seeing if it has potential
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image596.jpg
exitus
07-16-2009, 07:09 PM
Tonik-keep the arrow, add like a dot to the i or a slash or the two lines. Idk dude just look at what other people do. If you see an I that you like then try and use it in your tag and see if it looks good. Def stick with that one though.
shur- im not digging the name but your on the right track. keep playing around
i like BS's "tonik" but i wouldnt use the extension on the top leg of the k. The bottom one looks nice though, i might bite it >.>
starve-im not really digging the name. t's are hard to write and the a+r doesnt look too good. Plus the letters are kinda conflicting styles. Like there all uppercase except for the a and the e
nocs-pretty basic but i dont blame you cause you just got a new name
tonik-its alright but you can change it up more
got a new name. CLOS, what do you guys think. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Clos.jpg
Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 07:36 PM
shur- im not digging the name but your on the right track. keep playing around
ehh...i think i'll stick with it for now though caz odds are i'm gonna change it again in the future...
B.S. POLICE
07-16-2009, 08:14 PM
Dude thats good..but i dont think i could do anything like that right now, is that how you write your name aswell?
no i dont have any of those letters in my name
iThrow
07-16-2009, 08:16 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/23r0ep3.jpg
mehhh
buuuump
clos lose the " and the underlines and just work on the lettering
LeaksOne
07-16-2009, 08:16 PM
snap youve been workin on your tags eh?
PYT!TLC!
07-16-2009, 08:31 PM
starve-im not really digging the name. t's are hard to write and the a+r doesnt look too good. Plus the letters are kinda conflicting styles. Like there all uppercase except for the a and the e
should i change my name or should i just start over with this one? =/
iThrow
07-16-2009, 08:38 PM
just keep workin homie
*NGONE*
07-16-2009, 09:17 PM
clos- im not really feelin it. those letters dont flow that well. you should probally think about mixing them around. but keep working you will get it.
Sers- work on your lettering, it kinda looks like u just scribled on the bottom part.
iThrow
07-16-2009, 10:08 PM
wtf are you talking about? it obviously isnt meant to say anything, its like a swirl
Drakk
07-16-2009, 10:57 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a44/StupidCube/0713091539.jpg
HAHAHAHAHA :confused:
Crits at all? hahaha
Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 11:05 PM
any of these look better?
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image599.jpg
and drakk: WTF?!
BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 11:07 PM
drak- even philly heads don't start off doing wickeds.
definitely not looking good, homie.
B.S. POLICE
07-16-2009, 11:07 PM
snap youve been workin on your tags eh?
the sad part is that i havent at all
Anthema
07-16-2009, 11:10 PM
Spent a couple months practicing before I posted up again. . . let's see if I've improved. . .
Firstly:
CLOS: if you're stuck on that name, go for it. It doesn't have enough vertical lines in the letters themselves for my taste. In the mean time, loose the "flair" (underline and "" )and focus on the lettering, close up the gaps etc.
TONIK: In my opinion def. going in the right direction. I like the simplicity, and the italics feel. however the letters are a li'l too font-like and lack [your] personality.
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated!
slipyslipyslipymegeee
07-16-2009, 11:12 PM
any of these look better?
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image599.jpg
and drakk: WTF?!
nocs from rb! idiot
also
noxer dod! moron
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=poXGqm5uWzs
medacog1
07-16-2009, 11:14 PM
Spent a couple months practicing before I posted up again. . . let's see if I've improved. . .
Firstly:
CLOS: if you're stuck on that name, go for it. It doesn't have enough vertical lines in the letters themselves for my taste. In the mean time, loose the "flair" (underline and "" )and focus on the lettering, close up the gaps etc.
TONIK: In my opinion def. going in the right direction. I like the simplicity, and the italics feel. however the letters are a li'l too font-like and lack [your] personality.
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated!
uhmm..whats that thing at the beggining of the shash through the A? it lookslike its coming out of no where?
Anthema
07-16-2009, 11:16 PM
uhmm..whats that thing at the beggining of the shash through the A? it lookslike its coming out of no where?
You mean the "L" ?
I write: blank.
medacog1
07-16-2009, 11:19 PM
You mean the "L" ?
I write: blank.
what that rules i like your alot.. like i couldnt do this fast at all... but like your probably really good at it.
I like your N and K combo kinda.
Drakk
07-16-2009, 11:21 PM
drak- even philly heads don't start off doing wickeds.
definitely not looking good, homie.
Alright dude thanks im just trying to learn how to do them I have no way of anyone teaching me hahaha I just look at flix
Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 11:24 PM
nocs from rb! idiot
also
noxer dod! moron
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=poXGqm5uWzs
alright well sorry...u didn't have to freak out
Mr yarbles
07-16-2009, 11:32 PM
Alright dude thanks im just trying to learn how to do them I have no way of anyone teaching me hahaha I just look at flix
That's never going to happen.
Drakk
07-16-2009, 11:33 PM
That's never going to happen.
HAHAHAHA most likely not but I can tryyyyyy :D lol
LeaksOne
07-16-2009, 11:43 PM
the sad part is that i havent at all
well that tonik you did is pretty decent. makin progress without tryin i see you snap
Mr yarbles
07-17-2009, 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA most likely not but I can tryyyyyy :D lol
Yeah I mean you can go for it but you really don't understand the technical parts of a philly hand unless you get tought by someone who knows or you're exposed to it up close and personakl
Philly goes by a lot of different rules letter structure wise
raid123
07-17-2009, 03:38 AM
crits would be tons appreciated. just simple letters and i know my handstyle is weak, but im really stuck atm for what to do after i keep just doing in simples?
JustChillin
07-17-2009, 02:58 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0715091957.jpghttp://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717090001.jpg
medacog1
07-17-2009, 03:47 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0715091957.jpghttp://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717090001.jpg
dude i like it..the k looks like a t, and the AN combo looks .....just separate them and see with it looks like.
Slant One
07-17-2009, 05:59 PM
I Dont Have Have Any Pics If the Tags Ive Done Yet
Slant One
07-17-2009, 06:06 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated![/QUOTE]
Yo Thats Pretty Ill
proNYNJA
07-17-2009, 09:08 PM
maniac the tag lookz dope. keep it up.
i needa get a digital camera so i can take pictures of my shit.
medacog1
07-17-2009, 09:11 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated!
Yo Thats Pretty Ill[/QUOTE]
now that i look at it again dude... i think you should change the L and the A combo.
(im looking at it again)
and now your N looks like a u..
( welp i guess the first ctri i did on this was a Lie...)
JustChillin
07-17-2009, 10:33 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated! thanks for compliments meda and nynja.
Bank- i wouldnt connect the letters with the N and the K. and i also wouldnt make a loop extension at the end of the K.
Um some new tags i did today. I changed the name up to Manik just because it sounds better and its shorter and easier to write. These wernt the best ones I did, just the ones I could take pics of before my phone died
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717091915.jpghttp://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717091923.jpg
MARTYRaz
07-17-2009, 10:35 PM
BLANK...start like those letters..fuck the fancy schmancy bullshit..
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-17-2009, 10:59 PM
i suck at graffiti:(
http://i29.tinypic.com/2hqgdo7.jpg
Shurik*n
07-17-2009, 11:21 PM
damnit! all the names i was thinking of are taken and i don't feel like using someone else's name and adding numbers. but here's some of them i came up with. i just wrote them how anyone else that's starting would write them...sorry that it's blurry. Which one do u guys think i should go with?
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image602.jpg
blank: i would say not to make the L also the line of the A
Alone_NC
07-18-2009, 05:13 AM
http://i641.photobucket.com/albums/uu137/Alone_NC/DSC03058.jpg
Top is an old name
I know I'm toy. I just don't quite know how to work with the name Alone. I love the name, but hate every handstyle I try.
pornobitelogic
07-18-2009, 09:56 AM
start off simple alone, dont do any of those swerves. yet.
practice with regular keyboard letters,
trying to spice it up like you guys said
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle16.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle17.jpg
manik - not looking too bad, the first ones better
CrustOner
07-18-2009, 01:50 PM
I like the top one, and the bottom one on the first page, and the second page would be good for tight spaces.
EDIT: although they are all good. seriously. haha. i would stop with the two-toning though.. but hey, if that's your thing, go for it.
dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 05:00 PM
http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Tags/SDC10883.jpg?t=1247954377
Any helpful critique will really be appreciated
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 05:01 PM
just keep practicing it.
medacog1
07-18-2009, 08:01 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2ijgdfs.jpg
Me( before you guys gave me advice) and Jones....
Whats you guys think of both?
Shurik*n
07-18-2009, 10:01 PM
alright...officially decided my new names is Aces (pronounce like aches)...the name kinda just popped up into my mind so it's a shitty name. but seeing that i'm still only sketching in my book, and not that good yet, it's probably gonna change in the future again...anyways...does it have a better flow?
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image608.jpg
tonik:i think the k is a bit too big
Slushi
07-18-2009, 11:00 PM
start off simple alone, dont do any of those swerves. yet.
practice with regular keyboard letters,
Contrary to what people in this thread seem to think, you will never, ever, ever, ever, ever progress by doing this.
JustChillin
07-19-2009, 12:10 AM
Is it ok to flair out a little on your tags with your marker if it doesnt look bad?
PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 12:57 AM
i guess it is ok to flair with markers. as long as it looks ok lol. i've seen a lot of dope handies with flairs(with markers).
kind of going for symmetry here. crappy picture i know.
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
once again, reppin dat crayola bizznatch. =/
and also, i'm gonna start getting up places. stop signs, electrical boxes, etc. gonna be my first time out. tips?
btw i'll post crits tommorow. pretty tired. :(
the s and e are too much try all the letters like that toy u did that one is fresh
http://www.aitsafe.com/go.htm?go=www.bombingscience.com%2Ffree-marker1.htm&afid=47887&tm=2&im= (http://www.aitsafe.com/go.htm?go=www.bombingscience.com%2Ffree-marker1.htm&afid=47887&tm=2&im=1)
^^ free otr marker with buy over 15 $ / $ 4.75 MTN spanish paint!
raid123
07-19-2009, 06:13 AM
crits? i suck at tagging and this isnt the best ones but its all i got atm.
i guess it is ok to flair with markers. as long as it looks ok lol. i've seen a lot of dope handies with flairs(with markers).
kind of going for symmetry here. crappy picture i know.
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
once again, reppin dat crayola bizznatch. =/
and also, i'm gonna start getting up places. stop signs, electrical boxes, etc. gonna be my first time out. tips?
btw i'll post crits tommorow. pretty tired. :(
simple i like it alot thats really all u have to do is keep it simple and u will get better faster crayola is the shit
Gully Head
07-19-2009, 10:43 AM
PYT!TLC!-im feeling that one,i like the S,its something different imo
raid-try and keep it simple,get that down before adding some things
medacog1
07-19-2009, 02:10 PM
i guess it is ok to flair with markers. as long as it looks ok lol. i've seen a lot of dope handies with flairs(with markers).
kind of going for symmetry here. crappy picture i know.
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
once again, reppin dat crayola bizznatch. =/
and also, i'm gonna start getting up places. stop signs, electrical boxes, etc. gonna be my first time out. tips?
btw i'll post crits tommorow. pretty tired. :(
uhmm it looks kinda ARTY?....
Make the letters the same size.
Lose the starting and ending strips.
And lose the add-ons
or you dont have to do anything really
Ps...it looks really pretty.
Gully Head
07-19-2009, 02:16 PM
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo40.jpg
medacog1
07-19-2009, 02:20 PM
Dude whats that even say? narg? nerg?
Gully Head
07-19-2009, 02:27 PM
suppose to say merg lol
medacog1
07-19-2009, 02:36 PM
ok well im my opinion don't keep that close...(the letters) and well the only add on i use is an arrow..but keep it pointing at your name (unless you wrote a message with it)
i think some of the best writers have horrible handys if it cannot be read...
(bvut i could be dead wrong)
Gully Head
07-19-2009, 02:37 PM
k thanks i will keep that in mind
nerg-i like the second one
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE008.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE007.jpg
crits?
expozay
07-19-2009, 02:58 PM
kem lose all the addons. just go simple. both of those are ugly. dont do that leg kick on ur k. SIMPLE. KEM
PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 03:17 PM
Why hello, skateVolcom4994. LOL jk.
anyway...
step - post a picture of your tag on paper. it looks alright but i can't really tell from the picture.
tonik - the 'k' is a bit wonky, make them all the same size i think. keep doing that shit though.
aces - doesn't have a better flow. change it again i guess lol. up to you homie.
nerg - space out your letters.
kem - lose some of the addons. imo looks cheesy as fuck. start simpler and we'll take you from there. :)
lol medacog. is being arty/pretty good? :p
btw thanks for the crits guys.
medacog1
07-19-2009, 03:31 PM
Why hello, skateVolcom4994. LOL jk.
anyway...
step - post a picture of your tag on paper. it looks alright but i can't really tell from the picture.
tonik - the 'k' is a bit wonky, make them all the same size i think. keep doing that shit though.
aces - doesn't have a better flow. change it again i guess lol. up to you homie.
nerg - space out your letters.
kem - lose some of the addons. imo looks cheesy as fuck. start simpler and we'll take you from there. :)
lol medacog. is being arty/pretty good? :p
btw thanks for the crits guys.
Arty is like.....uhmm...putting alot of add-ons and like trying to get noticed on flair
* but thats just me
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo40.jpg
Dude whats that even say? narg? nerg?
looks pretty obvious to me. doesnt get much simpler than that
medacog1
07-19-2009, 03:34 PM
well yea dude but your amazing.
no, im pretty average. and that merg is still pretty simple compared to most people in this thread
PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 10:00 PM
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
bump.
klic, you're better than a lot of people in here. :cool:
BigBlueViolence
07-19-2009, 10:15 PM
Starve- Nothing personal, but your S T and R really bug the hell out of me.
PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 10:33 PM
Starve- Nothing personal, but your S T and R really bug the hell out of me.
lol, it justs pisses you off or it doesn't flow?
BigBlueViolence
07-19-2009, 10:37 PM
The S having a flat bottom,
the T being too long,
and the loop in the R being too big.
http://i29.tinypic.com/2s0ihi8.jpg
funhouseXcast
07-19-2009, 10:40 PM
make the S smaller.
Shurik*n
07-19-2009, 10:53 PM
aces - doesn't have a better flow. change it again i guess lol. up to you .
alright thx....but before i start thinking...i don't wanna bother u guys a lot until i think i've found a better name with a better flow...so my question is:
how do u know if it has a good flow?
stupid question, but i just started....kinda
the fat kid
07-19-2009, 11:04 PM
whats up, first post, throwing some digi stuff out there as i dont have a scanner.;) crits, go.
PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 11:31 PM
aight thanks for the crits guys. and bbv thanks for doing my name, what do you write though?
also, my personal-toy definition of something flowing is if everything kind of moves in one direction, with an exception of an extension here or there. if something doesn't fit right, it doesn't flow. i.e., if i were to type a word in all different fonts, then it would look pretty fucked up, therefore lacking flow. check out that new to graff thread for a better definition lol.
hectik: i like it. 'k' looks kinda off though, work on that. also make the 'h' more 'h' looking yom sayin lol. i wouldn't say start simpler though. do that shit on paper and i can crit better.
Camer
07-20-2009, 04:56 AM
This thread doesnt get nearly enough street flicks, so here ya go.
keepin it simple
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw021.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw022.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw023.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw024.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw025.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw027.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw028.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw030.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw031.jpg
LeaksOne
07-20-2009, 05:25 AM
i think you should do a regular C instead of adding that thing on the top
Gully Head
07-20-2009, 10:17 AM
i think you should do a regular C instead of adding that thing on the top
agreed
JustChillin
07-20-2009, 01:15 PM
This thread doesnt get nearly enough street flicks, so here ya go.
keepin it simple
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw021.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw022.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw023.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw024.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw025.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw027.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw028.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw030.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw031.jpgwhat markers are you using?
BigBlueViolence
07-20-2009, 01:31 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/24pyn2o.jpg
Working on a 1line
not feeling my N
LeaksOne
07-20-2009, 03:01 PM
i dont see a problem with it. shit hot earn
TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-20-2009, 03:03 PM
camer i think the r fucks it up.like i disrupts the flow of the letters.think of a new one.the last blue one is decent its just the R fucks it up i think.
medacog1
07-20-2009, 05:21 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2ni33he.jpg
*I know some of these are beat but it just feels like im not improving..
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle18.jpg
tonik - go back to the last thing you posted, that was dope
earn - id use the backwars uppercase N that you use sometimes
camer - lose the thing on the top of your C, and your R doesnt really flow
hectik - dope, just dont make the swirl go out so far
medacog1
07-20-2009, 08:16 PM
no i dont have any of those letters in my name
I mean with the same flairy style
JustChillin
07-20-2009, 10:11 PM
holy shit meda can u put anything bigger in your sig? lol
KidReny!
07-21-2009, 12:08 AM
experimenting
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_00511.jpg
kilc- Its real sick yo
meda- real nice
Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 12:38 AM
I think you should write renie it's got better flow y's are just a shitty letter imo
KidReny!
07-21-2009, 12:46 AM
i'll look into that i was thinkin of writing noise cause im good at those letters rlly
Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 12:51 AM
Yea but the word noise is used alot
Don't focus so much on a word that sounds good focus more on letters that you can do good together
KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:11 AM
i jus wrote up "renie" it looks mad whack i dont like it lol, ive been writin noise on the side though for a while though so ive gotten it down, ill post some of those up tommorow, but im jus doin random shit now, Havoc, and Static are ones that look good but im jus experimentin now though
LeaksOne
07-21-2009, 01:11 AM
and also try changing up your R. it was the same in all those tags
KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:12 AM
cause i like my R the way it is right now
Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 01:16 AM
Yeah
Whatev once we get back in school I'll help you out a bit
KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:38 AM
experimenting
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_0233.jpg
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_02331.jpg
graffdabusup
07-21-2009, 12:12 PM
name change... got roped =/
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0296jpeg.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0295jpeg.jpg
reep both look clean nice drips not too much but just right
Anthema
07-21-2009, 01:06 PM
I don't know KidReny. When you got more addons than letters something is not right.
Try lower case, but disconnect the letters (i.e. less cursive) keep experiementing. . .
reep-lookin good, and the drips are really ncie
KidReny-same what Anthema, loose all the addons
trying to mess around a little with letters. Crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/clostag-1-1.jpg
JustChillin
07-22-2009, 01:15 PM
kidreny- dont use so many add ons and keep practicing till you find the flow your looking for.Your letters look played out. try other names.
graffdabusup- i like it.
colz- Dont connect your letters like your L and the S. Ls are hard to do and are hard to make look good but if you really want to write that keep working with it.
Anthema
07-22-2009, 03:18 PM
colz: I agree, break it up. move letters along both axis' . Also the legs on the "c" and the "s" look like an afterthought and non-organic.
graffdabusup: lovin' it. I'm not a huge fan of drips either. The second flick is ace.
Took some advice from the folks a few pages back, here's a set of the results.
Tried to keep it as simple as possible:
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9611/0722091346.jpg
HalfGangstaShit
07-22-2009, 08:56 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00369.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00338.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00345.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00344.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00334.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00324.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00319.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00329.jpg
JustChillin
07-22-2009, 09:49 PM
HGS i like your style.
this is the first time i tagged with a can.
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0722092001.jpg
GoGetSome
07-23-2009, 04:20 PM
trying out some new styles
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/pict0019.jpg
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0017.jpg
knar HGS- i like the knar's but u should work on ur hgs but its ok
manik - try and keep all your letters the same size as your M
Shurik*n
07-24-2009, 10:22 PM
hey guys remember me? haha
anyways..i'm gonna stick with name one of these names (probably con.2) caz cons is already taken so i added a 2 (and left out the s for con.2)...anyways, didn't really do much to them yet.
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image612.jpg
manik - ur I is kinda wobbly in the middle
blank - i would make the l a separate letter and not part of the a...ur choice though
Anthema
07-24-2009, 11:34 PM
Shurik*n: Thanks for the crit. In my opinion the [dot] is kinda gimmicky and unnecessary.
GoGetSome: Lovin' the "R" esp on the top black piece. I'd disconnect the O and the N, kinda looks like an "a".
Shurik*n
07-24-2009, 11:59 PM
^^thx for the crit..yea i was kinda thinking that too...and the one on the top right is better imo (for ur tags)
PegCityBoy
07-25-2009, 11:32 AM
101 |R 0n 73h 1337 p4g3
Shurik*n
07-25-2009, 11:05 PM
hey guys remember me? haha
anyways..i'm gonna stick with name one of these names (probably con.2) caz cons is already taken so i added a 2 (and left out the s for con.2)...anyways, didn't really do much to them yet.
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image612.jpg
manik - ur I is kinda wobbly in the middle
blank - i would make the l a separate letter and not part of the a...ur choice though
alright, i'm workin with the bottom one...u think i think should write out the 2? or make it a number?..can't decide
medacog1
07-26-2009, 09:47 AM
alright, i'm workin with the bottom one...u think i think should write out the 2? or make it a number?..can't decide
The # is the common..i think ive seen pieces with twos though.
bulltimeJAMP
07-26-2009, 10:17 AM
Ahhh this page number!
PYT!TLC!
07-26-2009, 11:06 PM
I must post in this page number.
That aside,
hgs - love that style. the 's' needs a bit tweaking imo.
umer - pretty dope, the 'e' looks weird though.
cons - lookin alright, keep workin with that.
manik - looks a bit too much, simplify JUST a tiny bit.
bank - looks alright, the 'a' is stupid though.
Btw, is the name 'save' taken already? im tryin to take some letters off of starve.
Shurik*n
07-26-2009, 11:26 PM
^^i don't think so..might wanna check robotswillkill.com or something...or search "save graffiti" on google
PYT!TLC!
07-26-2009, 11:45 PM
^thanks for that website man. and yeah save is taken. :(
Anthema
07-26-2009, 11:58 PM
I must post in this page number.
That aside,
hgs - love that style. the 's' needs a bit tweaking imo.
umer - pretty dope, the 'e' looks weird though.
cons - lookin alright, keep workin with that.
manik - looks a bit too much, simplify JUST a tiny bit.
bank - looks alright, the 'a' is stupid though.
Btw, is the name 'save' taken already? im tryin to take some letters off of starve.
Is the "LA" combo really that bad? that people can't read my tag correctly? If so, it's time for a big change. . .
PYT!TLC!
07-27-2009, 12:00 AM
well from a glance it looks dope, but otherwise change the 'L' a bit.
Nero1
07-27-2009, 12:52 PM
Posted In the 1337 page, HGS love the style, and like the blue MD Metro Bus seat =p. When they going to stop raising the prices on those P.O.S's? lulz.
Tag will be up when I find a damn cam, too poor! >.<
mindtrix350
07-27-2009, 03:46 PM
I like your style hgs.
Shurik*n
07-27-2009, 11:01 PM
damnit! i have no imagination today...so i'm just gonna bump this...
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image612.jpg'
gogetsome: that says umer right?...anyways...looks good to me
LeaksOne
07-28-2009, 04:05 AM
what the fuck is the big deal about the page number?
Mr yarbles
07-28-2009, 04:53 AM
1337=leet
as in elite
But that page was from from anything leet status
esept umer
LeaksOne
07-28-2009, 05:34 AM
you guys are fuckin nerds haha but that umer was raw
CrustOner
07-29-2009, 10:42 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0728092213.jpg
Umer was the only thing worth a damn on the last page.
JustChillin
07-29-2009, 02:18 PM
and this page doesnt start off to well..
Spar1
07-29-2009, 02:25 PM
Hi! This is my first tag ever (Spar1). So what do u guys think of it? Crits? http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk268/Leoppardi/Kuva5-2.png
JustChillin
07-29-2009, 02:43 PM
Make the A bigger in proportion to the other letters and make the R look more like an R because at first i thought it was a P.
CrustOner
07-29-2009, 03:51 PM
JustChillin, suck my dick.
dreaken1993
07-29-2009, 03:59 PM
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-1.jpg
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-3.jpg
working on em
spar-pretty good start, your R to me looks like P
crust-nice
tags. i dont know which to stick with. what do you guys think. crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/blackclopstag.jpg
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/newclopstagmaybe-1.jpg
dreaken1993
07-29-2009, 04:07 PM
your cs and ls on both tags suck
on the second one dont make the c go over the l and shit
Shurik*n
07-29-2009, 05:13 PM
i don't really like any of these...but..
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0628.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0627.jpg
..i kinda like the one in the second pic even though it's the simplest thing ever!..but crits?
Clop: just like what he ^^ said, don't make ur c go over things
dreaken1993
07-29-2009, 05:18 PM
yeah i was tryna simplify my shit then work on it and add some flavor too it
Shurik*n
07-29-2009, 05:33 PM
^^i really like the second one anex (or aneks...whichever u want)
PYT!TLC!
07-29-2009, 05:44 PM
name change from starve to straz.
starve was taken :(
http://i25.tinypic.com/e8mkw8.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/4lm1pf.jpg
still in its developing stages.
depends - the second 'd' looks fucked. but otherwise it looks alright haha.
spar - space them letters out homie.
aneks - looks like your trying too hard imo. go simpler.
clops - basically what everyone else is saying, don't have your 'c' extend.
con2 - i personally like the very first one haha. but keep working at that
Shurik*n
07-29-2009, 05:48 PM
^^i like ur the very first one (in urs)...to me, if u put the z too close to the a like in 2nd and 3rd one it kinda just looks like a huge r.
and i kinda like my first one too...come to think of it haha
JustChillin
07-30-2009, 01:06 AM
JustChillin, suck my dick.you would like that wouldnt you?
dreaken the A on the first tag looks weird, like what you did with the squiggly thing.
clops- try to make the L look better and fit in with the tag.
crossfire101
07-30-2009, 05:45 AM
Here's mine: Bacon
I only started this tag this morning by the way
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/7552/81587340.jpg
CrustOner
07-30-2009, 10:04 AM
you would like that wouldnt you?
I just assumed you would like it, with all the riding you've been doing on it.
Clops lose all the addons and shit for now and just try to write basic letters but make them flow
PYT!TLC!
07-30-2009, 12:43 PM
bacon - if you're gonna stick with that name, then know that there's a ton of writers writing bacon around the world. but anyway, start to clean it up a bit. also the 'ba' combo looks stupid.
CrustOner
07-30-2009, 02:06 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0730091127.jpg
changed the E. thoughts? I'm losing hope in this thread.
UncleFester
07-30-2009, 02:57 PM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w136/mxcp204/004-1.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w136/mxcp204/002-1.jpg
The second one sucks pretty bad, it was done with a sharpie on divider.
BigBlueViolence
07-30-2009, 03:30 PM
Crust- I think you should bring the back of your D closer.
http://i27.tinypic.com/2598nkj.jpg
Shake.And.Bake.
07-31-2009, 04:55 PM
Okay, so Heres A Tagg of Mine, This Was Done With A White Krink Marker, taking any critz, thanks....
http://i478.photobucket.com/albums/rr149/tyler_walker_idci/DSCF0114.jpg
returned
07-31-2009, 05:00 PM
new tag sry for size http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/newtag.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/qn0g35.jpg
some what old hand a little better now though crits?
i need 2 more entries for the asthmatic handstyle battle and we'll have an advanced and regular toy battle. once i get 2 more entries i'll poll it
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag57.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag58.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag59.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag60.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag61.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag62.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag63.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag64.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag65.jpg
bbv - i like that D
Darko
08-01-2009, 03:17 PM
and can i get some constructive criticism on how i can improve my tag?
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee145/RexRapt0r/Photo-0042.jpg
and can i get some constructive criticism on how i can improve my tag?
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee145/RexRapt0r/Photo-0042.jpg
ahahahahaha well first of all dont try to make it all complicated and keep the hand simple like regular letters hen just keep doing it over and over thats how u get better
Eon 1
08-01-2009, 03:37 PM
The D looks good and Im kinda feelen the Backwards R but mainly don't try to make everything connect.
LeaksOne
08-01-2009, 04:05 PM
darko do regular letters.
janek your tag is still nice. try messin with it a bit
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60032.jpg
calig marker
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60031.jpg
not likin my S
crits??
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