PDA

View Full Version : Tags



Pages : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 [107] 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162

klic
07-11-2009, 09:05 PM
nace? - cant really tell what that third letter is, looks good overall. and i was using a meanstreak

Shurik*n
07-11-2009, 09:07 PM
I think it says nace...if it does u might wanna make the c a bit clearer

*NGONE*
07-11-2009, 09:07 PM
its a g. nage. thats i sloppy one. ill post some better ones up later

*NGONE*
07-11-2009, 09:46 PM
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4572/0711092215.jpg
http://img6.imageshack.us/i/0711092144.jpg/

klic
07-11-2009, 10:07 PM
it doesnt really look like a G.it just looks like you extended the middle line of your E into your C. work on defining that

Shurik*n
07-12-2009, 12:09 AM
they're all the same so no need to scan through all of em. just one

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image579.jpg

nage: what klic said

CrustOner
07-12-2009, 12:31 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0711092220.jpg

Aims, keep practicing with those, and every now and again, throw something new in.
Nage, what Klic said, you're scrunching too much.
Janek, you know I dig your handy, but you should shake it up a bit. Add something. :]

raid123
07-12-2009, 04:14 AM
crits would be much appreciated

trowel
07-12-2009, 06:22 AM
you have a real good base for a good hand style, i think you should just be practicing it with variations...In all honesty to really find a good hand style you need to be fillin up pages...not doing just one little hand style...I can't give you any solid crits until i see you try to take this to another level...it's good to get crazy but not to get stupid...post some variations up on a full page homie

hpir
07-12-2009, 07:16 PM
crustoner-dope
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/k3M0nee001.jpg
crits?

Shurik*n
07-12-2009, 09:31 PM
^^i quite like it...only thing i would do is make the k a bit wider

PYT!TLC!
07-12-2009, 11:29 PM
janek - dope. the 'j' looks a bit skinny on some, but maybe that's just the angle you're shooting at.

nage - make the 'g' more distinct. maybe put some add-ons, i dunno lol.

aims - good start. i agree with crust, keep fuckin with that and slowly variate, remove, add, etc to it.

crust - dope shit, can't really think of anything. i would love to see that in black. :p

kem - i don't really like the extension on the 'k'. give your letters some room and maybe remove the add-on's. looks ok so far though keep practicing.

JustChillin
07-13-2009, 01:00 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0707092232.jpgI was suppose to enter this into the Almost Perfect Battle but I forgot to send it in.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-13-2009, 03:32 AM
you would have lost...

Mr yarbles
07-13-2009, 08:52 AM
Naw he woulda kinged shit

http://i26.tinypic.com/2wgelb5.jpg

janek I don't mean to bea dick but you need to start steppinn it up and tryin to expand your style
I mean it's alright but that's really all it is

Dessik
07-13-2009, 12:28 PM
hey there was a dude on here with da name tonik if you see this, i was practicing with not stealing
http://i856.photobucket.com/albums/ab123/AesikA/0713091239.jpg?t=1247506110

Dessik
07-13-2009, 01:00 PM
crits?
http://i856.photobucket.com/albums/ab123/AesikA/0713091337.jpg?t=1247507968

Drakk
07-13-2009, 02:42 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a44/StupidCube/0713091539.jpg
HAHAHAHAHA :confused:

medacog1
07-13-2009, 03:20 PM
crits?
http://i856.photobucket.com/albums/ab123/AesikA/0713091337.jpg?t=1247507968

I know my handys aren't good...but i'm not liking your K's...their so hard to write...and try to keep all the letter the same hight.

klic
07-13-2009, 06:29 PM
Naw he woulda kinged shit

http://i26.tinypic.com/2wgelb5.jpg

janek I don't mean to bea dick but you need to start steppinn it up and tryin to expand your style
I mean it's alright but that's really all it is

i know, i cant get anything going, i try making my letters more complex and adding stuff to it but nothing seems to work. it sucks though, my hand hasnt improved at all in the last couple months

yours is looking good, your I and S look a little too jumbled though. not feeling the R in RSK that much either. just my thoughts, looks dope overall though

hpir
07-13-2009, 09:32 PM
janek-saw you were haveing sometrouble, my imput may not be that good but you have a fun name to mess around with.
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek001.jpg
throw somthin of mine in there vvv
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek002.jpg

Mr yarbles
07-13-2009, 09:41 PM
i know, i cant get anything going, i try making my letters more complex and adding stuff to it but nothing seems to work. it sucks though, my hand hasnt improved at all in the last couple months

yours is looking good, your I and S look a little too jumbled though. not feeling the R in RSK that much either. just my thoughts, looks dope overall though

ha its a p psk.

yeah just practice with different letters and different names and stuff

MARTYRaz
07-13-2009, 10:56 PM
relish nigg???went from rapist to relish..wowzerz..diggin it tho..other than i thoughti it said rsk too..

Shurik*n
07-13-2009, 11:04 PM
i'm trying to make my tag not look like im just writing it like on a school paper or something...the original one is the one below the top left. any of these better? or keep trying?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image585.jpg

janek: i like everything but the a seems out of place to me. maybe make the top of it more rounded?...that's my opinion.

kem: like it...maybe make the k a little bit wider

Eon 1
07-13-2009, 11:13 PM
^^ I like the "A" on the one thats in the top left corner

exitus
07-14-2009, 12:50 AM
janek im at the same spot, kinda locked into one style.
Yours looks good though, practice and get the flow down.

Mr yarbles
07-14-2009, 01:18 AM
I've hit that point many times
That was also the time most people ended getting frustrated at my post whoring and told me what they really thought

you're gonna ned up starting over 3 or 4 times it's just how it works.

raid123
07-14-2009, 07:59 PM
ugh heres my new tag, found out syst is taken and hopefully this one isnt. still sticking to the simple letters as ive been told, crits are much appreciated.

Shurik*n
07-14-2009, 10:31 PM
keep trying to make my letter not looking like i'm just writing

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image589.jpg

JustChillin
07-14-2009, 11:20 PM
Dont make a circle on top of your I. instead just dot it like a normal I. and move the M closer to the I.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-14-2009, 11:56 PM
dont listen to chillin he's fucking horrible at tags.the I is the least of your problems that s is just hooooooorible.make it look like an actual S insead of trying to make it underline.that never looks good ever.everevereverever.and the A.the /\ part should be one line not two lines you try to connect in the middle.

JustChillin
07-15-2009, 01:49 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0714092318.jpg

medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:00 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0714092318.jpg

Man i dont know.... i would lose the lines on the bottom of the sharp (MANIAK)
And it looks like you took the K from the TONIK example mero did for me..(on the sharp MANIAK)
also i don't think im feeling the long flingy line on the bottom of the M (sharp MANIAK still)

and the just plain maniak i thnk you should just scrap it..

( by the way thats just me....you could be just fucking with us and you could be amazing)

Azul
07-15-2009, 03:46 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0714092318.jpg

I saw a maniak tag on the bus the other day are you by any chance from Brisbane?

JustChillin
07-15-2009, 03:54 AM
nope. Im in LA.

exitus
07-15-2009, 09:30 AM
Aims, that name kinda sucks. even if you were good at writing it be hard to make a good tag because those letters just dont really work
maniak, same kinda thing. If you work hard maybe it can look halfway decent. Both the ones you put up arent very good and need to be cleaned up more. Pick the one you like more and write it again and again to get your flow down

KNS13
07-15-2009, 01:12 PM
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0020-3.jpg

KNS13
07-15-2009, 01:34 PM
no crits?

klic
07-15-2009, 02:14 PM
dude, its been 20 minutes lol

medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:26 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/oqh9us.jpg

Its like im not improving..and its pissing me off so much....help
?....(i really dont like add-ons other then ARROWS)

medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:36 PM
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0020-3.jpg
idk..
It looks like you tried so hard.

BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 02:53 PM
Meda- start with the bottom one, it doesn't look bad at all.
After you start working with that for a long ass time, you'll start noticing things to do with the letters without having to try.

medacog1
07-15-2009, 02:54 PM
Meda- start with the bottom one, it doesn't look bad at all.
After you start working with that for a long ass time, you'll start noticing things to do with the letters without having to try.
So i should just write it alot until i see something?

BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 02:57 PM
Right, it's almost like the changes come on there own.
Don't worry about making it look like what you think graffiti looks like,
just write it.

Bink1
07-15-2009, 03:19 PM
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07620.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07619.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07616.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07615.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07609.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07607.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07606.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07605.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07602.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07601.jpg

what u think guys my hand still rubbish?

BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 03:20 PM
I dig it,
but your T looks a little plain compared to the other letters.

exitus
07-15-2009, 03:28 PM
Bink-looks good especialy some of the lower ones
KNS-has potential but i dont 100% know what it says, try and make it cleaner. And less addons
Tonik-looks good but the I is conflicting with the n and the k. Try to use a different I to break it up

klic
07-15-2009, 06:10 PM
i was sketched out on this one, cars kept going by below and above me lol
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag54.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag55.jpg

teper - havnt seen much of you lately, good to see your still getting up. im not a huge fan of drippy tags, i like the third flick, the ctms one. pretty dope overall though

aims - shitty name, your not going to get any flow with that letter combo, just play with different letters

BigBlueViolence
07-15-2009, 07:51 PM
I don't think Aims is a shitty word at all
http://i26.tinypic.com/pvk9c.jpg

klic
07-15-2009, 07:56 PM
i dunno, in my opinion, it would flow a lot better if you had the S for the first letter, like saim or siam


janek-saw you were haveing sometrouble, my imput may not be that good but you have a fun name to mess around with.
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek001.jpg
throw somthin of mine in there vvv
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemjanek002.jpg

thanks, just noticed this

exitus
07-15-2009, 08:08 PM
silly bbv, not everyone is as good as you.
Since hes new to this maybe he can take a less creative name and bite others untill he gets a half good handy

expozay
07-15-2009, 08:34 PM
tonik that bottom one is best by far. work with that just keep it simple the steez will come.

kem lose the extension on the k shits wack. and the halo seems to big for your tag id say lose that for now too and the quotes. just stay simple.

janek ur shit looks better everyday.

considering a name change. too many *****s in my area with similar names. emir enmity shit gets confusing. crits?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2592/3725509528_280cbc6eb1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2445/3725546302_cdc197f9fb.jpg

PYT!TLC!
07-15-2009, 08:43 PM
still experimentating. :p
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/552/dsc03768r.jpg
(close-upz)
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4872/dsc03769f.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5365/dsc03770.jpg

tonik - work with the basic one.
maniak - the wildstyle-ish maniak tag is ok. the bottom one flows a bit better, but the 'i' is disproportionate with the rest of the tag. in other words it feels out of place lol.
bink - dope sauce, but like bbv said your t looks bland compared to the rest of the tag.
janek - can't really say anything lol. it's still dope, but spice it up or something homie. getting a tad bit boring :p
emik - i personally dig the one to the right. work on the 'e' and 'k' a bit.

exitus
07-15-2009, 08:43 PM
i like shem top one

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-15-2009, 09:19 PM
tonik the o is WAAAAAY to big.and the space between the n,i,k is to small.the space between each letter should be the same.basicly the letters should take up the same amount of space.

Mr yarbles
07-15-2009, 09:22 PM
I don't think Aims is a shitty word at all
http://i26.tinypic.com/pvk9c.jpg

It is to me
It's the arizonas instrument to measure standards over here
Fucking test is annoying as shit we have to pass it to graduate thank god I passed
that and we have to take it like every year since first grade
Me and that word have beef.

Shurik*n
07-15-2009, 11:58 PM
Damnit...now i'm gonna just think of a nother name...this might take a while.

JustChillin
07-16-2009, 12:01 AM
QUIZ or QWIZ sounds pretty cool. I would write it if i knew how.

Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 12:08 AM
QUIZ or QWIZ sounds pretty cool. I would write it if i knew how.

haha yea, but the throwies/bomb...and that stuff wouldn't look too good

exitus
07-16-2009, 12:23 AM
Use letters that are balanced and dont blend into each other.
For example, P is a big no no because theres a huge gap in the bottom right.
And I tends to blend into other letters so try not to use I unless you have to.

AIMS can still be salvaged but you need to seriously rethink how you write it

exitus
07-16-2009, 12:38 AM
http://i25.tinypic.com/j5wm4j.jpg
lots of work this week, practiced on these
http://i25.tinypic.com/nvci6o.jpg
shity picture but came out awesome in real life.
http://i26.tinypic.com/116htfm.jpg
playing around with this style, def. needs to be cleaned up
http://i29.tinypic.com/4zwbbt.jpg
tag atm
http://i28.tinypic.com/xnhmol.jpg
tried to work with aims and this was the best i could get, my handy isnt very good at all. But if your totaly stuck on aims i would drop the s and just be aim

medacog1
07-16-2009, 01:17 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg

YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)

Bink1
07-16-2009, 02:31 AM
teper - havnt seen much of you lately, good to see your still getting up. im not a huge fan of drippy tags, i like the third flick, the ctms one. pretty dope overall though



im too lazy to upload all the crap i do. im getting up hardcore right now :D

exitus
07-16-2009, 08:13 AM
tonik- looks alright but it wont get better until you do something about the I

Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 09:11 AM
Hey guys, thx for trying to help me out with the handy. i'm still trying to find something that will flow (no luck yet haha)...but at the same time thinking of a name

klic
07-16-2009, 10:51 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg

YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)

good job dude that looks dope, get that up

iThrow
07-16-2009, 12:04 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/23r0ep3.jpg
mehhh

PYT!TLC!
07-16-2009, 12:19 PM
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/552/dsc03768r.jpg


bump.

wreck - on the orange tag, work on making the last 'r' looking the same as the first one. dope though.

tonik - looking good so far.

sers - give crits to get crits. :p clean it up a bit and it will look better.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-16-2009, 12:42 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg

YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)

this looks muuuuuuuuuuch much much better.keep this and tweak it every once in a while but this is pretty good.i can see someone rocking this on a wall.i think it would look nice.im impressed.and i dont say that often.

B.S. POLICE
07-16-2009, 01:20 PM
tonik try adding flares to the kicks of your k and t
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5606/screencapture2x.png

JustChillin
07-16-2009, 02:31 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg

YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)i would get rid of the arrow.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-16-2009, 02:36 PM
i like the arrow.id keep it.

BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 02:37 PM
I would shorten the < part of it.

expozay
07-16-2009, 02:43 PM
tonik good shit.

BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 02:57 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/2z6f4wg.jpg

for the next battle

medacog1
07-16-2009, 03:06 PM
tonik- looks alright but it wont get better until you do something about the I

What would you do about the I?
Thanks for the good comments...everyones opinion helped out alot

medacog1
07-16-2009, 03:13 PM
tonik try adding flares to the kicks of your k and t
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/5606/screencapture2x.png

Dude thats good..but i dont think i could do anything like that right now, is that how you write your name aswell?

expozay
07-16-2009, 04:15 PM
considering a name change. crits?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2592/3725509528_280cbc6eb1.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2445/3725546302_cdc197f9fb.jpg[/QUOTE]

bummmp

ErrorOner...
07-16-2009, 04:55 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14dmw3o.jpg

YOu guys told me tokep it basic...and all the same size...so i wrote it about 1000000 times to day...and this is all i can come up with...tell me whats you think...( i kinda like it more just because is't simpler to write)

maybe try it with horizontal lines on the top and bottom of the I <---like that
and def don't get rid of that arrow it compliments the Ks lines...

BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 05:44 PM
That Shem stuff shits on the Emik stuff, Expo.
I'm for the name change.

Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 06:52 PM
alright...changed my name. hopefully this one flows better..does it? the tags are just simple ones..didn't play around with the letters much, i'm just seeing if it has potential

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image596.jpg

exitus
07-16-2009, 07:09 PM
Tonik-keep the arrow, add like a dot to the i or a slash or the two lines. Idk dude just look at what other people do. If you see an I that you like then try and use it in your tag and see if it looks good. Def stick with that one though.

shur- im not digging the name but your on the right track. keep playing around

i like BS's "tonik" but i wouldnt use the extension on the top leg of the k. The bottom one looks nice though, i might bite it >.>

starve-im not really digging the name. t's are hard to write and the a+r doesnt look too good. Plus the letters are kinda conflicting styles. Like there all uppercase except for the a and the e

colz
07-16-2009, 07:36 PM
nocs-pretty basic but i dont blame you cause you just got a new name
tonik-its alright but you can change it up more

got a new name. CLOS, what do you guys think. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Clos.jpg

Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 07:36 PM
shur- im not digging the name but your on the right track. keep playing around

ehh...i think i'll stick with it for now though caz odds are i'm gonna change it again in the future...

B.S. POLICE
07-16-2009, 08:14 PM
Dude thats good..but i dont think i could do anything like that right now, is that how you write your name aswell?

no i dont have any of those letters in my name

iThrow
07-16-2009, 08:16 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/23r0ep3.jpg
mehhh

buuuump

clos lose the " and the underlines and just work on the lettering

LeaksOne
07-16-2009, 08:16 PM
snap youve been workin on your tags eh?

PYT!TLC!
07-16-2009, 08:31 PM
starve-im not really digging the name. t's are hard to write and the a+r doesnt look too good. Plus the letters are kinda conflicting styles. Like there all uppercase except for the a and the e

should i change my name or should i just start over with this one? =/

iThrow
07-16-2009, 08:38 PM
just keep workin homie

*NGONE*
07-16-2009, 09:17 PM
clos- im not really feelin it. those letters dont flow that well. you should probally think about mixing them around. but keep working you will get it.

Sers- work on your lettering, it kinda looks like u just scribled on the bottom part.

iThrow
07-16-2009, 10:08 PM
wtf are you talking about? it obviously isnt meant to say anything, its like a swirl

Drakk
07-16-2009, 10:57 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a44/StupidCube/0713091539.jpg
HAHAHAHAHA :confused:

Crits at all? hahaha

Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 11:05 PM
any of these look better?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image599.jpg

and drakk: WTF?!

BigBlueViolence
07-16-2009, 11:07 PM
drak- even philly heads don't start off doing wickeds.
definitely not looking good, homie.

B.S. POLICE
07-16-2009, 11:07 PM
snap youve been workin on your tags eh?

the sad part is that i havent at all

Anthema
07-16-2009, 11:10 PM
Spent a couple months practicing before I posted up again. . . let's see if I've improved. . .

Firstly:

CLOS: if you're stuck on that name, go for it. It doesn't have enough vertical lines in the letters themselves for my taste. In the mean time, loose the "flair" (underline and "" )and focus on the lettering, close up the gaps etc.

TONIK: In my opinion def. going in the right direction. I like the simplicity, and the italics feel. however the letters are a li'l too font-like and lack [your] personality.

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated!

slipyslipyslipymegeee
07-16-2009, 11:12 PM
any of these look better?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image599.jpg

and drakk: WTF?!

nocs from rb! idiot
also
noxer dod! moron
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=poXGqm5uWzs

medacog1
07-16-2009, 11:14 PM
Spent a couple months practicing before I posted up again. . . let's see if I've improved. . .

Firstly:

CLOS: if you're stuck on that name, go for it. It doesn't have enough vertical lines in the letters themselves for my taste. In the mean time, loose the "flair" (underline and "" )and focus on the lettering, close up the gaps etc.

TONIK: In my opinion def. going in the right direction. I like the simplicity, and the italics feel. however the letters are a li'l too font-like and lack [your] personality.

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated!
uhmm..whats that thing at the beggining of the shash through the A? it lookslike its coming out of no where?

Anthema
07-16-2009, 11:16 PM
uhmm..whats that thing at the beggining of the shash through the A? it lookslike its coming out of no where?

You mean the "L" ?

I write: blank.

medacog1
07-16-2009, 11:19 PM
You mean the "L" ?

I write: blank.

what that rules i like your alot.. like i couldnt do this fast at all... but like your probably really good at it.

I like your N and K combo kinda.

Drakk
07-16-2009, 11:21 PM
drak- even philly heads don't start off doing wickeds.
definitely not looking good, homie.

Alright dude thanks im just trying to learn how to do them I have no way of anyone teaching me hahaha I just look at flix

Shurik*n
07-16-2009, 11:24 PM
nocs from rb! idiot
also
noxer dod! moron
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=poXGqm5uWzs

alright well sorry...u didn't have to freak out

Mr yarbles
07-16-2009, 11:32 PM
Alright dude thanks im just trying to learn how to do them I have no way of anyone teaching me hahaha I just look at flix

That's never going to happen.

Drakk
07-16-2009, 11:33 PM
That's never going to happen.

HAHAHAHA most likely not but I can tryyyyyy :D lol

LeaksOne
07-16-2009, 11:43 PM
the sad part is that i havent at all

well that tonik you did is pretty decent. makin progress without tryin i see you snap

Mr yarbles
07-17-2009, 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA most likely not but I can tryyyyyy :D lol

Yeah I mean you can go for it but you really don't understand the technical parts of a philly hand unless you get tought by someone who knows or you're exposed to it up close and personakl
Philly goes by a lot of different rules letter structure wise

raid123
07-17-2009, 03:38 AM
crits would be tons appreciated. just simple letters and i know my handstyle is weak, but im really stuck atm for what to do after i keep just doing in simples?

JustChillin
07-17-2009, 02:58 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0715091957.jpghttp://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717090001.jpg

medacog1
07-17-2009, 03:47 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0715091957.jpghttp://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717090001.jpg

dude i like it..the k looks like a t, and the AN combo looks .....just separate them and see with it looks like.

Slant One
07-17-2009, 05:59 PM
I Dont Have Have Any Pics If the Tags Ive Done Yet

Slant One
07-17-2009, 06:06 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated![/QUOTE]

Yo Thats Pretty Ill

proNYNJA
07-17-2009, 09:08 PM
maniac the tag lookz dope. keep it up.
i needa get a digital camera so i can take pictures of my shit.

medacog1
07-17-2009, 09:11 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated!

Yo Thats Pretty Ill[/QUOTE]

now that i look at it again dude... i think you should change the L and the A combo.
(im looking at it again)
and now your N looks like a u..
( welp i guess the first ctri i did on this was a Lie...)

JustChillin
07-17-2009, 10:33 PM
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/121/2009resized.jpg
Any crits greatly appreciated! thanks for compliments meda and nynja.
Bank- i wouldnt connect the letters with the N and the K. and i also wouldnt make a loop extension at the end of the K.
Um some new tags i did today. I changed the name up to Manik just because it sounds better and its shorter and easier to write. These wernt the best ones I did, just the ones I could take pics of before my phone died
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717091915.jpghttp://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0717091923.jpg

MARTYRaz
07-17-2009, 10:35 PM
BLANK...start like those letters..fuck the fancy schmancy bullshit..

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-17-2009, 10:59 PM
i suck at graffiti:(

http://i29.tinypic.com/2hqgdo7.jpg

Shurik*n
07-17-2009, 11:21 PM
damnit! all the names i was thinking of are taken and i don't feel like using someone else's name and adding numbers. but here's some of them i came up with. i just wrote them how anyone else that's starting would write them...sorry that it's blurry. Which one do u guys think i should go with?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image602.jpg

blank: i would say not to make the L also the line of the A

Alone_NC
07-18-2009, 05:13 AM
http://i641.photobucket.com/albums/uu137/Alone_NC/DSC03058.jpg

Top is an old name

I know I'm toy. I just don't quite know how to work with the name Alone. I love the name, but hate every handstyle I try.

pornobitelogic
07-18-2009, 09:56 AM
start off simple alone, dont do any of those swerves. yet.
practice with regular keyboard letters,

klic
07-18-2009, 09:57 AM
trying to spice it up like you guys said

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle16.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle17.jpg

manik - not looking too bad, the first ones better

CrustOner
07-18-2009, 01:50 PM
I like the top one, and the bottom one on the first page, and the second page would be good for tight spaces.

EDIT: although they are all good. seriously. haha. i would stop with the two-toning though.. but hey, if that's your thing, go for it.

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 05:00 PM
http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Tags/SDC10883.jpg?t=1247954377

Any helpful critique will really be appreciated

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 05:01 PM
just keep practicing it.

medacog1
07-18-2009, 08:01 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2ijgdfs.jpg

Me( before you guys gave me advice) and Jones....
Whats you guys think of both?

Shurik*n
07-18-2009, 10:01 PM
alright...officially decided my new names is Aces (pronounce like aches)...the name kinda just popped up into my mind so it's a shitty name. but seeing that i'm still only sketching in my book, and not that good yet, it's probably gonna change in the future again...anyways...does it have a better flow?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image608.jpg


tonik:i think the k is a bit too big

Slushi
07-18-2009, 11:00 PM
start off simple alone, dont do any of those swerves. yet.
practice with regular keyboard letters,
Contrary to what people in this thread seem to think, you will never, ever, ever, ever, ever progress by doing this.

JustChillin
07-19-2009, 12:10 AM
Is it ok to flair out a little on your tags with your marker if it doesnt look bad?

PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 12:57 AM
i guess it is ok to flair with markers. as long as it looks ok lol. i've seen a lot of dope handies with flairs(with markers).

kind of going for symmetry here. crappy picture i know.
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
once again, reppin dat crayola bizznatch. =/

and also, i'm gonna start getting up places. stop signs, electrical boxes, etc. gonna be my first time out. tips?

btw i'll post crits tommorow. pretty tired. :(

bak
07-19-2009, 01:00 AM
the s and e are too much try all the letters like that toy u did that one is fresh

DEA
07-19-2009, 04:18 AM
http://www.aitsafe.com/go.htm?go=www.bombingscience.com%2Ffree-marker1.htm&afid=47887&tm=2&im= (http://www.aitsafe.com/go.htm?go=www.bombingscience.com%2Ffree-marker1.htm&afid=47887&tm=2&im=1)
^^ free otr marker with buy over 15 $ / $ 4.75 MTN spanish paint!

raid123
07-19-2009, 06:13 AM
crits? i suck at tagging and this isnt the best ones but its all i got atm.

rewz
07-19-2009, 09:37 AM
i guess it is ok to flair with markers. as long as it looks ok lol. i've seen a lot of dope handies with flairs(with markers).

kind of going for symmetry here. crappy picture i know.
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
once again, reppin dat crayola bizznatch. =/

and also, i'm gonna start getting up places. stop signs, electrical boxes, etc. gonna be my first time out. tips?

btw i'll post crits tommorow. pretty tired. :(
simple i like it alot thats really all u have to do is keep it simple and u will get better faster crayola is the shit

Gully Head
07-19-2009, 10:43 AM
PYT!TLC!-im feeling that one,i like the S,its something different imo
raid-try and keep it simple,get that down before adding some things

medacog1
07-19-2009, 02:10 PM
i guess it is ok to flair with markers. as long as it looks ok lol. i've seen a lot of dope handies with flairs(with markers).

kind of going for symmetry here. crappy picture i know.
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg
once again, reppin dat crayola bizznatch. =/

and also, i'm gonna start getting up places. stop signs, electrical boxes, etc. gonna be my first time out. tips?

btw i'll post crits tommorow. pretty tired. :(

uhmm it looks kinda ARTY?....
Make the letters the same size.
Lose the starting and ending strips.
And lose the add-ons
or you dont have to do anything really
Ps...it looks really pretty.

Gully Head
07-19-2009, 02:16 PM
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo40.jpg

medacog1
07-19-2009, 02:20 PM
Dude whats that even say? narg? nerg?

Gully Head
07-19-2009, 02:27 PM
suppose to say merg lol

medacog1
07-19-2009, 02:36 PM
ok well im my opinion don't keep that close...(the letters) and well the only add on i use is an arrow..but keep it pointing at your name (unless you wrote a message with it)
i think some of the best writers have horrible handys if it cannot be read...
(bvut i could be dead wrong)

Gully Head
07-19-2009, 02:37 PM
k thanks i will keep that in mind

hpir
07-19-2009, 02:44 PM
nerg-i like the second one
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE008.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE007.jpg
crits?

expozay
07-19-2009, 02:58 PM
kem lose all the addons. just go simple. both of those are ugly. dont do that leg kick on ur k. SIMPLE. KEM

PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 03:17 PM
Why hello, skateVolcom4994. LOL jk.
anyway...
step - post a picture of your tag on paper. it looks alright but i can't really tell from the picture.
tonik - the 'k' is a bit wonky, make them all the same size i think. keep doing that shit though.
aces - doesn't have a better flow. change it again i guess lol. up to you homie.
nerg - space out your letters.
kem - lose some of the addons. imo looks cheesy as fuck. start simpler and we'll take you from there. :)

lol medacog. is being arty/pretty good? :p

btw thanks for the crits guys.

medacog1
07-19-2009, 03:31 PM
Why hello, skateVolcom4994. LOL jk.
anyway...
step - post a picture of your tag on paper. it looks alright but i can't really tell from the picture.
tonik - the 'k' is a bit wonky, make them all the same size i think. keep doing that shit though.
aces - doesn't have a better flow. change it again i guess lol. up to you homie.
nerg - space out your letters.
kem - lose some of the addons. imo looks cheesy as fuck. start simpler and we'll take you from there. :)

lol medacog. is being arty/pretty good? :p

btw thanks for the crits guys.


Arty is like.....uhmm...putting alot of add-ons and like trying to get noticed on flair
* but thats just me

klic
07-19-2009, 03:32 PM
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo40.jpg


Dude whats that even say? narg? nerg?

looks pretty obvious to me. doesnt get much simpler than that

medacog1
07-19-2009, 03:34 PM
well yea dude but your amazing.

klic
07-19-2009, 08:27 PM
no, im pretty average. and that merg is still pretty simple compared to most people in this thread

PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 10:00 PM
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4135/downsize.jpg


bump.

klic, you're better than a lot of people in here. :cool:

BigBlueViolence
07-19-2009, 10:15 PM
Starve- Nothing personal, but your S T and R really bug the hell out of me.

PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 10:33 PM
Starve- Nothing personal, but your S T and R really bug the hell out of me.

lol, it justs pisses you off or it doesn't flow?

BigBlueViolence
07-19-2009, 10:37 PM
The S having a flat bottom,
the T being too long,
and the loop in the R being too big.

http://i29.tinypic.com/2s0ihi8.jpg

funhouseXcast
07-19-2009, 10:40 PM
make the S smaller.

Shurik*n
07-19-2009, 10:53 PM
aces - doesn't have a better flow. change it again i guess lol. up to you .

alright thx....but before i start thinking...i don't wanna bother u guys a lot until i think i've found a better name with a better flow...so my question is:

how do u know if it has a good flow?

stupid question, but i just started....kinda

the fat kid
07-19-2009, 11:04 PM
whats up, first post, throwing some digi stuff out there as i dont have a scanner.;) crits, go.

PYT!TLC!
07-19-2009, 11:31 PM
aight thanks for the crits guys. and bbv thanks for doing my name, what do you write though?

also, my personal-toy definition of something flowing is if everything kind of moves in one direction, with an exception of an extension here or there. if something doesn't fit right, it doesn't flow. i.e., if i were to type a word in all different fonts, then it would look pretty fucked up, therefore lacking flow. check out that new to graff thread for a better definition lol.

hectik: i like it. 'k' looks kinda off though, work on that. also make the 'h' more 'h' looking yom sayin lol. i wouldn't say start simpler though. do that shit on paper and i can crit better.

Camer
07-20-2009, 04:56 AM
This thread doesnt get nearly enough street flicks, so here ya go.

keepin it simple
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw021.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw022.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw023.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw024.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw025.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw027.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw028.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw030.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw031.jpg

LeaksOne
07-20-2009, 05:25 AM
i think you should do a regular C instead of adding that thing on the top

Gully Head
07-20-2009, 10:17 AM
i think you should do a regular C instead of adding that thing on the top

agreed

JustChillin
07-20-2009, 01:15 PM
This thread doesnt get nearly enough street flicks, so here ya go.

keepin it simple
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw021.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw022.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw023.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw024.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw025.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw027.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw028.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw030.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw031.jpgwhat markers are you using?

BigBlueViolence
07-20-2009, 01:31 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/24pyn2o.jpg

Working on a 1line

not feeling my N

LeaksOne
07-20-2009, 03:01 PM
i dont see a problem with it. shit hot earn

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-20-2009, 03:03 PM
camer i think the r fucks it up.like i disrupts the flow of the letters.think of a new one.the last blue one is decent its just the R fucks it up i think.

medacog1
07-20-2009, 05:21 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2ni33he.jpg

*I know some of these are beat but it just feels like im not improving..

klic
07-20-2009, 06:50 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKHandstyle18.jpg

tonik - go back to the last thing you posted, that was dope

earn - id use the backwars uppercase N that you use sometimes

camer - lose the thing on the top of your C, and your R doesnt really flow

hectik - dope, just dont make the swirl go out so far

medacog1
07-20-2009, 08:16 PM
no i dont have any of those letters in my name

I mean with the same flairy style

JustChillin
07-20-2009, 10:11 PM
holy shit meda can u put anything bigger in your sig? lol

KidReny!
07-21-2009, 12:08 AM
experimenting
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_00511.jpg

kilc- Its real sick yo
meda- real nice

Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 12:38 AM
I think you should write renie it's got better flow y's are just a shitty letter imo

KidReny!
07-21-2009, 12:46 AM
i'll look into that i was thinkin of writing noise cause im good at those letters rlly

Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 12:51 AM
Yea but the word noise is used alot
Don't focus so much on a word that sounds good focus more on letters that you can do good together

KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:11 AM
i jus wrote up "renie" it looks mad whack i dont like it lol, ive been writin noise on the side though for a while though so ive gotten it down, ill post some of those up tommorow, but im jus doin random shit now, Havoc, and Static are ones that look good but im jus experimentin now though

LeaksOne
07-21-2009, 01:11 AM
and also try changing up your R. it was the same in all those tags

KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:12 AM
cause i like my R the way it is right now

Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 01:16 AM
Yeah
Whatev once we get back in school I'll help you out a bit

KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:38 AM
experimenting
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_0233.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_02331.jpg

graffdabusup
07-21-2009, 12:12 PM
name change... got roped =/

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0296jpeg.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0295jpeg.jpg

bak
07-21-2009, 12:39 PM
reep both look clean nice drips not too much but just right

Anthema
07-21-2009, 01:06 PM
I don't know KidReny. When you got more addons than letters something is not right.
Try lower case, but disconnect the letters (i.e. less cursive) keep experiementing. . .

colz
07-21-2009, 02:06 PM
reep-lookin good, and the drips are really ncie
KidReny-same what Anthema, loose all the addons

trying to mess around a little with letters. Crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/clostag-1-1.jpg

JustChillin
07-22-2009, 01:15 PM
kidreny- dont use so many add ons and keep practicing till you find the flow your looking for.Your letters look played out. try other names.
graffdabusup- i like it.
colz- Dont connect your letters like your L and the S. Ls are hard to do and are hard to make look good but if you really want to write that keep working with it.

Anthema
07-22-2009, 03:18 PM
colz: I agree, break it up. move letters along both axis' . Also the legs on the "c" and the "s" look like an afterthought and non-organic.

graffdabusup: lovin' it. I'm not a huge fan of drips either. The second flick is ace.

Took some advice from the folks a few pages back, here's a set of the results.
Tried to keep it as simple as possible:
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9611/0722091346.jpg

HalfGangstaShit
07-22-2009, 08:56 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00369.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00338.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00345.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00344.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00334.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00324.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00319.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00329.jpg

JustChillin
07-22-2009, 09:49 PM
HGS i like your style.

this is the first time i tagged with a can.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0722092001.jpg

GoGetSome
07-23-2009, 04:20 PM
trying out some new styles
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/pict0019.jpg
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0017.jpg


knar HGS- i like the knar's but u should work on ur hgs but its ok
manik - try and keep all your letters the same size as your M

Shurik*n
07-24-2009, 10:22 PM
hey guys remember me? haha

anyways..i'm gonna stick with name one of these names (probably con.2) caz cons is already taken so i added a 2 (and left out the s for con.2)...anyways, didn't really do much to them yet.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image612.jpg

manik - ur I is kinda wobbly in the middle
blank - i would make the l a separate letter and not part of the a...ur choice though

Anthema
07-24-2009, 11:34 PM
Shurik*n: Thanks for the crit. In my opinion the [dot] is kinda gimmicky and unnecessary.

GoGetSome: Lovin' the "R" esp on the top black piece. I'd disconnect the O and the N, kinda looks like an "a".

Shurik*n
07-24-2009, 11:59 PM
^^thx for the crit..yea i was kinda thinking that too...and the one on the top right is better imo (for ur tags)

PegCityBoy
07-25-2009, 11:32 AM
101 |R 0n 73h 1337 p4g3

Shurik*n
07-25-2009, 11:05 PM
hey guys remember me? haha

anyways..i'm gonna stick with name one of these names (probably con.2) caz cons is already taken so i added a 2 (and left out the s for con.2)...anyways, didn't really do much to them yet.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image612.jpg

manik - ur I is kinda wobbly in the middle
blank - i would make the l a separate letter and not part of the a...ur choice though

alright, i'm workin with the bottom one...u think i think should write out the 2? or make it a number?..can't decide

medacog1
07-26-2009, 09:47 AM
alright, i'm workin with the bottom one...u think i think should write out the 2? or make it a number?..can't decide

The # is the common..i think ive seen pieces with twos though.

bulltimeJAMP
07-26-2009, 10:17 AM
Ahhh this page number!

PYT!TLC!
07-26-2009, 11:06 PM
I must post in this page number.

That aside,

hgs - love that style. the 's' needs a bit tweaking imo.
umer - pretty dope, the 'e' looks weird though.
cons - lookin alright, keep workin with that.
manik - looks a bit too much, simplify JUST a tiny bit.
bank - looks alright, the 'a' is stupid though.

Btw, is the name 'save' taken already? im tryin to take some letters off of starve.

Shurik*n
07-26-2009, 11:26 PM
^^i don't think so..might wanna check robotswillkill.com or something...or search "save graffiti" on google

PYT!TLC!
07-26-2009, 11:45 PM
^thanks for that website man. and yeah save is taken. :(

Anthema
07-26-2009, 11:58 PM
I must post in this page number.

That aside,

hgs - love that style. the 's' needs a bit tweaking imo.
umer - pretty dope, the 'e' looks weird though.
cons - lookin alright, keep workin with that.
manik - looks a bit too much, simplify JUST a tiny bit.
bank - looks alright, the 'a' is stupid though.

Btw, is the name 'save' taken already? im tryin to take some letters off of starve.

Is the "LA" combo really that bad? that people can't read my tag correctly? If so, it's time for a big change. . .

PYT!TLC!
07-27-2009, 12:00 AM
well from a glance it looks dope, but otherwise change the 'L' a bit.

Nero1
07-27-2009, 12:52 PM
Posted In the 1337 page, HGS love the style, and like the blue MD Metro Bus seat =p. When they going to stop raising the prices on those P.O.S's? lulz.
Tag will be up when I find a damn cam, too poor! >.<

mindtrix350
07-27-2009, 03:46 PM
I like your style hgs.

Shurik*n
07-27-2009, 11:01 PM
damnit! i have no imagination today...so i'm just gonna bump this...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image612.jpg'

gogetsome: that says umer right?...anyways...looks good to me

LeaksOne
07-28-2009, 04:05 AM
what the fuck is the big deal about the page number?

Mr yarbles
07-28-2009, 04:53 AM
1337=leet
as in elite

But that page was from from anything leet status
esept umer

LeaksOne
07-28-2009, 05:34 AM
you guys are fuckin nerds haha but that umer was raw

CrustOner
07-29-2009, 10:42 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0728092213.jpg

Umer was the only thing worth a damn on the last page.

JustChillin
07-29-2009, 02:18 PM
and this page doesnt start off to well..

Spar1
07-29-2009, 02:25 PM
Hi! This is my first tag ever (Spar1). So what do u guys think of it? Crits? http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk268/Leoppardi/Kuva5-2.png

JustChillin
07-29-2009, 02:43 PM
Make the A bigger in proportion to the other letters and make the R look more like an R because at first i thought it was a P.

CrustOner
07-29-2009, 03:51 PM
JustChillin, suck my dick.

dreaken1993
07-29-2009, 03:59 PM
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-1.jpg
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-3.jpg
working on em

colz
07-29-2009, 04:02 PM
spar-pretty good start, your R to me looks like P
crust-nice

tags. i dont know which to stick with. what do you guys think. crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/blackclopstag.jpg
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/newclopstagmaybe-1.jpg

dreaken1993
07-29-2009, 04:07 PM
your cs and ls on both tags suck
on the second one dont make the c go over the l and shit

Shurik*n
07-29-2009, 05:13 PM
i don't really like any of these...but..

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0628.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0627.jpg

..i kinda like the one in the second pic even though it's the simplest thing ever!..but crits?

Clop: just like what he ^^ said, don't make ur c go over things

dreaken1993
07-29-2009, 05:18 PM
yeah i was tryna simplify my shit then work on it and add some flavor too it

Shurik*n
07-29-2009, 05:33 PM
^^i really like the second one anex (or aneks...whichever u want)

PYT!TLC!
07-29-2009, 05:44 PM
name change from starve to straz.
starve was taken :(
http://i25.tinypic.com/e8mkw8.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/4lm1pf.jpg
still in its developing stages.

depends - the second 'd' looks fucked. but otherwise it looks alright haha.
spar - space them letters out homie.
aneks - looks like your trying too hard imo. go simpler.
clops - basically what everyone else is saying, don't have your 'c' extend.
con2 - i personally like the very first one haha. but keep working at that

Shurik*n
07-29-2009, 05:48 PM
^^i like ur the very first one (in urs)...to me, if u put the z too close to the a like in 2nd and 3rd one it kinda just looks like a huge r.

and i kinda like my first one too...come to think of it haha

JustChillin
07-30-2009, 01:06 AM
JustChillin, suck my dick.you would like that wouldnt you?


dreaken the A on the first tag looks weird, like what you did with the squiggly thing.
clops- try to make the L look better and fit in with the tag.

crossfire101
07-30-2009, 05:45 AM
Here's mine: Bacon

I only started this tag this morning by the way

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/7552/81587340.jpg

CrustOner
07-30-2009, 10:04 AM
you would like that wouldnt you?


I just assumed you would like it, with all the riding you've been doing on it.

Zarb
07-30-2009, 10:08 AM
Clops lose all the addons and shit for now and just try to write basic letters but make them flow

PYT!TLC!
07-30-2009, 12:43 PM
bacon - if you're gonna stick with that name, then know that there's a ton of writers writing bacon around the world. but anyway, start to clean it up a bit. also the 'ba' combo looks stupid.

CrustOner
07-30-2009, 02:06 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0730091127.jpg

changed the E. thoughts? I'm losing hope in this thread.

UncleFester
07-30-2009, 02:57 PM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w136/mxcp204/004-1.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w136/mxcp204/002-1.jpg
The second one sucks pretty bad, it was done with a sharpie on divider.

BigBlueViolence
07-30-2009, 03:30 PM
Crust- I think you should bring the back of your D closer.

http://i27.tinypic.com/2598nkj.jpg

Shake.And.Bake.
07-31-2009, 04:55 PM
Okay, so Heres A Tagg of Mine, This Was Done With A White Krink Marker, taking any critz, thanks....

http://i478.photobucket.com/albums/rr149/tyler_walker_idci/DSCF0114.jpg

returned
07-31-2009, 05:00 PM
new tag sry for size http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/newtag.jpg

rewz
07-31-2009, 06:54 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/qn0g35.jpg
some what old hand a little better now though crits?

klic
07-31-2009, 08:28 PM
i need 2 more entries for the asthmatic handstyle battle and we'll have an advanced and regular toy battle. once i get 2 more entries i'll poll it

klic
07-31-2009, 10:46 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag57.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag58.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag59.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag60.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag61.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag62.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag63.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag64.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag65.jpg

bbv - i like that D

Darko
08-01-2009, 03:17 PM
and can i get some constructive criticism on how i can improve my tag?
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee145/RexRapt0r/Photo-0042.jpg

rewz
08-01-2009, 03:25 PM
and can i get some constructive criticism on how i can improve my tag?
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee145/RexRapt0r/Photo-0042.jpg

ahahahahaha well first of all dont try to make it all complicated and keep the hand simple like regular letters hen just keep doing it over and over thats how u get better

Eon 1
08-01-2009, 03:37 PM
The D looks good and Im kinda feelen the Backwards R but mainly don't try to make everything connect.

LeaksOne
08-01-2009, 04:05 PM
darko do regular letters.
janek your tag is still nice. try messin with it a bit

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60032.jpg
calig marker

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60031.jpg
not likin my S

crits??

BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK
08-01-2009, 04:43 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag57.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag58.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag59.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag60.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag61.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag62.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag63.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag64.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag65.jpg

bbv - i like that D

very nice

PYT!TLC!
08-01-2009, 10:41 PM
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2416/dsc03795bic.jpg
i'm still messin with my 'z'.

janek - dope, but that vertical tag doesn't look too good from what i can see.
grats - i don't like the calig marker one, but the skinny marker tag doesn't look too bad. imo you should lose the question mark underneath.
darko - use keyboard letters first. i just wrote your name and it actually flows pretty good imo. :p

Shurik*n
08-01-2009, 10:48 PM
so just focusing on the con part for now..but should i write out the number two..or use the number?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0636.jpg

straz: i like the middle one
janek: very nice
grate: i kinda like ur s..maybe make the top of it wider...like a little bit less than the same width as the bottom..idk how to describe it haha

PYT!TLC!
08-01-2009, 11:15 PM
if you make the 't' uppercase, then contwo wouldn't look too bad.

Obiz_BFM
08-01-2009, 11:31 PM
Lolz i need to get a cam

Bink1
08-02-2009, 02:41 AM
janek is there anyone else writing in your city ,coz looks like your alone and thats like very fast way to get cought.

klic
08-02-2009, 02:46 AM
im the only half decent writer here, there is a fair amount of other vandalism though. all of those tags are like 2 hours away though

Bink1
08-02-2009, 02:54 AM
cool cool

-Empty-Can-
08-02-2009, 01:25 PM
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics560.jpg

It's my first with a can. Came out sloppy because i used a pink dot and i never practiced with a pink dot.

FLIP FLOP
08-02-2009, 02:02 PM
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics560.jpg

It's my first with a can. Came out sloppy because i used a pink dot and i never practiced with a pink dot.

It looks like you started taking a seizure half way through the tag.

FLIP FLOP
08-02-2009, 02:07 PM
oh, and i think klic should lose the loopy thing on the end of the J

gumOnShoe
08-02-2009, 03:35 PM
klic: looks dope, but i've noticed that you sometimes place the J way too close to the A which looks bad Imo, try bending the top/middle of the J a little farther from the A, But still keeping the whole J close to the A.
Shurik*n: the C seems familiar but it looks good to me, the O and N however, doesn't flow good w/ the C or doesn't fit. try a new O and N that'll fit with that C.
PYT!TLC!: i think you should make the stem of the T a little bigger so you can play around w/ the S and the "r",make the A flow a little better, in other words, make the A wider oh, and drop the bottom of that Z a little lower and move the Z a little closer to the A


v Handstyle i did v
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo4.jpg
^^ Crits? ^^

medacog1
08-02-2009, 06:20 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/ojf30n.jpg

Had to change my name...
The P line is to short and the L is a bit small but i know their is way more wrong with it.

klic
08-02-2009, 06:25 PM
thats actually pretty nice, the R ruins it though. make it the same as your P with an extra leg. and maybe try and uppercase A

edit: 1500 posts

edit again

THE WORD FOR THIS WEEKS TOY HANDSTYLE BATTLE IS "CRACK PIPES". ITS DUE FRIDAY. LETS TRY AND GET ENOUGH ENTRIES SO WE CAN HAVE A REGULAR AND ADVANCED POLL

gumOnShoe
08-02-2009, 07:42 PM
how do i enter?

klic
08-02-2009, 08:22 PM
send me a flick of your entry

killerspeen
08-04-2009, 06:32 AM
can u show me how to make a "j"?

medacog1
08-04-2009, 08:30 AM
yes

snackmachine
08-04-2009, 10:08 AM
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00490.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00701.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00580.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00707.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00690.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00713.jpg
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/DSC00709.jpg