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thadanks
08-04-2009, 10:32 AM
Ster- The mirror tag is probably the nicest but I'd say lose the "5" and work on flow

BigBlueViolence
08-04-2009, 11:03 AM
and wtf is up with the forks down?
Are you trying to rep bloods, or are you just a clown?

medacog1
08-04-2009, 11:12 AM
snackmachine
dude lose the fork thing and bend your letters let the shit flow dude..and what are you using a pentel?

-Empty-Can-
08-04-2009, 01:55 PM
^^

whats with the black blob?

My freind used to write ster but he changed his name

Shurik*n
08-04-2009, 04:42 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0639.jpg

-empty-can-: i think there's too much other stuff going on...
polar: it's good, the r kinda messes up the rest imo caz it's too long

gumOnShoe
08-04-2009, 05:27 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0639.jpg

-empty-can-: i think there's too much other stuff going on...
polar: it's good, the r kinda messes up the rest imo caz it's too long

the last one is an improvement, try using the C i said i liked and the last ON TWO yo did on this one, also try bending the first bar of the N closer tothe o.
here's my hand, reads SPArE.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-2.jpg

-Empty-Can-
08-04-2009, 05:30 PM
[QUOTE=Shurik*n;1443802]
-empty-can-: i think there's too much other stuff going on...
Are you talking about my tag or my post?

kenrararar
08-04-2009, 05:57 PM
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1280/photo33.jpg

99%Shit
08-04-2009, 07:03 PM
Stay away from '5' type 's'es, especially ones made to look like dollar signs. Both the '5' and '$' can work as an 's', but not when you're starting. Same goes for the arrow on your 'R'.

KNS13
08-05-2009, 04:55 PM
man i miss my evoke tag
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0038-1.jpg

Fury
08-05-2009, 06:18 PM
^ I wouldn't miss it. Not to be an ass, I just don't really like it.

kenrararar
08-05-2009, 11:26 PM
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1280/photo33.jpg

bottom of page bump

KNS - I'd start over and go simpler that just doesnt flow

LeaksOne
08-06-2009, 07:07 AM
this page is pretty bad so far. both you guys need to just write simple letters

tilt
08-06-2009, 09:32 AM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7721/p6260002a.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
08-06-2009, 11:19 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2vm7a6h.jpg

medacog1
08-06-2009, 11:50 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2vm7a6h.jpg

dude im liking the crack pipes.

kisforkoolie
08-06-2009, 10:36 PM
what should i improve on and is it decent?
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pubstarmike/rehab1-1.jpg

medacog1
08-06-2009, 10:39 PM
straight letters...and lose the add-ons.
start from their.

ecke
08-07-2009, 12:38 AM
hey everyone, im new to this, just started writing ecke for a little, tell me what you think
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/untitled-1.jpg
i dont know what to do with the k, it feels like it doesnt flow good with the rest

Epoc
08-07-2009, 12:46 AM
^^^ thats cause your trying to force the loop on the top. DONT.

it doesnt suit that letter.

heres a whole bunch of shit. put some obsolete ones in just to see how the old n new stack up.
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6121/dsc01336r.jpg

colz
08-07-2009, 02:56 PM
epoc-my favorite is the one under the circled tag
ecke-start simplier, dont add the loops on each letter
rehab-do straight letters and improve from there

trying a little simplier. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/vvvv-1.jpg

klic
08-07-2009, 03:28 PM
im going to be away all weekend so the deadline for the 'crack pipes' handstyle battle has been extended to sunday

gumOnShoe
08-07-2009, 05:09 PM
here's my hand, reads SPArE.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-2.jpg
bump. crits?

KNS13
08-07-2009, 07:38 PM
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0028-4.jpg

Shurik*n
08-08-2009, 07:48 AM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image619.jpg

ecke: start with keyboard letters first, and then experiment.

spare: everything looks good, but the just isn't looking so good to me...idk y. maybe the middle bar (the extension) is too big/long

Alts13
08-08-2009, 08:09 AM
KNS don't write Kema he is already well established in Transcend and is fucking dope

Con - I would drop the Two, just reminds me too much of CanTwo and ConTwo just seems unoriginal

Fury
08-08-2009, 12:31 PM
Con - Don't make your C too big, keep it the same size as the other letters.
KNS - Lose the dots and the arrows.
Gumonshoe - Please take a new picture, I can't see it.
Clops - Try and make the L uppercase (it has a leg)
Epoc - Go simpler.

moonboots
08-08-2009, 07:11 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e359/no-clue/yoirrrr.jpg

faser
08-09-2009, 01:34 AM
yoir- the I doesnt flow much

Shurik*n
08-09-2009, 03:59 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image629.jpg

FLIP FLOP
08-09-2009, 06:12 PM
the C doesn't fit in with the O and N, plus they are just the normal letters.

Beats_His_Wife
08-09-2009, 06:30 PM
the last one is an improvement, try using the C i said i liked and the last ON TWO yo did on this one, also try bending the first bar of the N closer tothe o.
here's my hand, reads SPArE.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-2.jpg

Really feelin that

ecke
08-09-2009, 07:53 PM
faser that looks pretty good, maybe you should make the s in just the same as the s in sucks

Con- make all the letters round or keep'em all sharp

Spare- that looks bueno, make it darker next time

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/SSPX0069.png
any crits on this

JustChillin
08-09-2009, 10:57 PM
ecke please go simpler

klic
08-10-2009, 12:42 AM
hmm
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekHandstyle19.jpg

ecke - EC isnt bad, KE ruins it

con - not liking your C

faser - doesnt have much flow, i dont like your S

clops - dont make your S go over your P as much

resk - pretty cool, i like the bottom right one

PYT!TLC!
08-10-2009, 12:47 AM
Just got back from dominican republic for a week. crazy cigars there. i visited a legitimate tobacco store run by the local villagers. too bad i couldn't try the samples...parents were on my back the whole time. :(

rehab - start with keyboard letters and progress from there. it looks very lumpy.
ecke - looking alright, 'k' still looks stupid though.
epoc - looks good, imo i don't like the e.
clops - space them letters out.
kema - the 'e' doesn't fit.
con - the 'c' doesn't flow.
yoir - start simpler, on paper.

crossfire101
08-10-2009, 04:16 PM
Just started writing this, crits ?

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7130/failans.jpg

kermet_1
08-10-2009, 10:37 PM
^ Try taking away all the add-ons and keep trying out different letters
Consistency is the key.
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1527/212018.jpg

-sense-
08-12-2009, 01:47 PM
kilc-i like when i k swooshes around the whole tag and cuts threw the j
kerm- i think it would look better vertical.. i cant really make it out tho..

99%Shit
08-12-2009, 09:00 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3452/3816648774_f375060cac.jpg

Can't seem to rock 'U's at the moment. I haven't posted much for work, so figured I'd do some and get some crits. I don't have any of my hands with dece Rs or Ys at home, which is bumming me out, 'cause they all seem off tonight. The last S is way off, they normally are like the second, when I got calming nug in me.

PYT!TLC!
08-12-2009, 09:17 PM
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9356/dsc04868e.jpg
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/2593/dsc04867b.jpg
Convenience store bathroom. :p

janek - the swoosh imo isn't that bad, although i don't like it when the swoosh cuts through the letters.
fate(?) - looks stupid. start simpler.
kermet - no idea what it says, although it looks nice. make it a bit cleaner.
mewser(?) - the 'e' is out of place and doesn't flow. doesn't look that bad though overall. work on making some of your letters less awkward.

BigBlueViolence
08-12-2009, 09:22 PM
I don't think that the E is out of place,
but I do think that hand should be a single line.

PYT!TLC!
08-12-2009, 09:49 PM
BBV, my handy? or someone else

BigBlueViolence
08-12-2009, 09:50 PM
99% shit.

PYT!TLC!
08-12-2009, 09:57 PM
oh.
anyway critique mine? :P

BigBlueViolence
08-12-2009, 10:04 PM
I don't really like it man, all the letters are different, no flow.

Good luck with those letters too, bro.

PYT!TLC!
08-12-2009, 10:10 PM
thanks. back to the drawing board.

klic
08-12-2009, 10:16 PM
pick a new name, horrible letter combination

PYT!TLC!
08-12-2009, 10:24 PM
alright, btw should i drop the 's' completely? or what do you think of it

klic
08-12-2009, 10:30 PM
nah the s is good, s's are good for first letters. r's suck in the middle of words, t's just suck in general

lacrosseplayer80
08-12-2009, 11:11 PM
ok so i have a new tag ive been working on for awhile.. i wana add some more flow and flare can anyone help me out and tell me if its good or not

99%Shit
08-12-2009, 11:33 PM
Word, tried getting a oneline of that up, but it's not happening at the moment. Gotta figure out how to do the W to S. Maybe I'll do a muse(r) oneline later.

There's a pretty good Kasp from Western Canada(I think that's where he is), perhaps try another name while it's early on in your game.

Straz, perhaps Star(s/z) if you want to work with those letters. Work with the letter T, it's tough, but worthwhile to learn.

expozay
08-13-2009, 12:21 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3552/3817520097_b080bea255.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2665/3817520095_208c114b8e.jpg

KASP lose all the addons for now. the k is ur best letter. dont make ur s square like that. try and stay simple and the flow will come. just write it over and over and over and you willl eventually start to notice ur letters changing and haaving some steeezzz. so write KASP just like that for now.

skull-e
08-13-2009, 01:23 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0375.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0376.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0394.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0395.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0409.jpg

99%shit: What do you write? I could give your name a shot

Kasp: That took you a while? *cough*

loose the doo dads and do a simple handwriting tag, once ou can do it upside down, eyes closed and no hands, then start adding shit onto it. till then keyboard letttaars

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 02:06 PM
You don't have to do much to come up with one. Swap that C for an M and you got one for me. If you go back a page, you'll see the hand I was trying to one line as suggested by BBV. I was just not having too much luck getting the W to S transition to come out clean enough to post. That cuser is similar to some of my other hands. nicee.

PYT!TLC!
08-13-2009, 06:01 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/2ryk2eh.jpg
new name, sheal. starting simple, tried to add some kind of crappy style to it at the bottom. haha.

shem - very nice drips. work on that 'm' i guess.
cuser - drips are pretty nice, work on your one-liner. the s-e transition looks weird.

BigBlueViolence
08-13-2009, 06:06 PM
Skull, catching a tag on an escalator has to be mad awkward.

rewz
08-13-2009, 09:30 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/2cdeteb.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
08-13-2009, 09:32 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2454/3819594090_bf3b97963e_b.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
08-13-2009, 09:35 PM
suck it you cunts.

faser
08-13-2009, 09:51 PM
screwed the s up bad

-Empty-Can-
08-13-2009, 09:52 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/2cdeteb.jpg

Get some better paint man.

BlacktodaFuture
08-13-2009, 10:11 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/saferonehandstyle.jpg?t=1250219521

DestroyLA
08-13-2009, 10:28 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2454/3819594090_bf3b97963e_b.jpg

that looks nice. i dont think your a toy.

Stuck
08-13-2009, 10:36 PM
a little to overlapped to my liking

BigBlueViolence
08-13-2009, 10:36 PM
That E is trying to fuck your precious O, Mero.
You should probably move it over a little bit

BlacktodaFuture
08-13-2009, 10:38 PM
crits on my handstyle? i like it bc i can do it fast.

Stuck
08-13-2009, 10:40 PM
safer one? its weak...simplify that shit

BlacktodaFuture
08-13-2009, 10:44 PM
safer one? its weak...simplify that shit

meaning...?

99%Shit
08-13-2009, 11:02 PM
Your R is in the middle of nowhere. And toss those connex, they don't work.

Meroe, too bunchy, but it's all there, prime stuff.

klic
08-14-2009, 12:38 AM
if you sent me an entry for the 'little vagina' handstyle battle or 'cyan' throwie battle, send it to me again because i did a system recovery on my computer and deleted everything. The deadline for both of these battles has been extended until sunday if your still looking to get in

skull-e
08-14-2009, 03:48 PM
Skull, catching a tag on an escalator has to be mad awkward.

I sat down on the escalator to do it that time, I usually bend over and slowly walk down so i can writ at my own pace.

cesspool
08-14-2009, 03:49 PM
hahahaha.. bend over....
-L

DestroyLA
08-14-2009, 07:07 PM
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0814091700.jpg

graffdabusup
08-15-2009, 10:28 AM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0297jpeg.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/reep.jpg
Stock Tips. My Homie Did The Rane.

markingz.
08-15-2009, 01:01 PM
haha yo destroyla, thats versus kog, if you like that you should check out other kog artists stuff like arbe korea, etc there mad good i like their stuff too

rewz
08-15-2009, 01:36 PM
Get some better paint man.

ahah wasnt the paint the wall trust me not the best wall paint was rusto gloss

DestroyLA
08-15-2009, 01:58 PM
graffdabus up on your first pic i like the top tag the best, it looks smoother. The bottom one would be good too if the box on the P" wasnt so big. Tell your homie he needs to practice more with his can control.

markings and yea that shit was dope. That hung right over the Freeway n i use to see it everyday and it was there for a good 2 weeks i would say before it got buffed.

inpho_211
08-15-2009, 04:04 PM
da inpho mus 211!
crits?http://i683.photobucket.com/albums/vv199/inpho_211/scan0001.jpg

graffdabusup
08-15-2009, 07:09 PM
thanks for da crits guys..

Stuck
08-15-2009, 09:49 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1994.jpg
n e ideas?

modown
08-15-2009, 09:53 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1994.jpg
n e ideas?

i like the one with the face in it

aekone
08-15-2009, 10:08 PM
Devor- Diggin tha top one.
inpho-Can't really read it. Hit up some of that legibility.
Reep- I'm diggin all of those except for the wall.
Bezar- Work on flow.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo25.jpg

Crits?

Stuck
08-15-2009, 10:11 PM
try to make all ur letters touch...and using capitoal letters helps especially with H and L and try to make em all the same size and dont do any doodads n shit

thephillafromma
08-15-2009, 10:18 PM
alright so ive been progressing nicely on throwies and bubble letttrs and stuff but i cant get anywhere with my tags and it pisses me off any advice ??

Stuck
08-15-2009, 10:24 PM
work on it...id say tags are the hardest aspect of graffiti to get good at...but once u get it thats it and ur good....keep trying

BigBlueViolence
08-15-2009, 10:31 PM
I agree that it's one of the hardest parts,
there's no bullshit to hide behind.
No fruity fills, 5 color 3D, just straight style.

I'm feeling that first hand, Reep.

Sesh-it-up
08-16-2009, 03:02 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000098.jpg
new paint brush pen im tryin.

Black Flag
08-16-2009, 03:06 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000098.jpg
new paint brush pen im tryin.

I know this is a bit off topic, but I really don't understand why people even joke around/ practice styles with a crown in the tag. Honestly, there is a 98% chance you will never be worthy of using a crown in your work. Even if you are just fucking around with writing something, it still looks lame putting a crown.

Sesh-it-up
08-16-2009, 03:21 PM
cry about it.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000099.jpg

BigBlueViolence
08-16-2009, 03:58 PM
dude, I think that shit looks loads better with a bigger O.

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 06:38 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck001.jpg?t=1250465914

exitus
08-16-2009, 07:01 PM
lots of potential but the letters are crammed so much that i cant read it

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 07:18 PM
lots of potential but the letters are crammed so much that i cant read it

Safe. and idk if i should spread it bc it actually is fairly legible compared to alot of other handstyles i have seen.

ErrorOner...
08-16-2009, 07:44 PM
Just cuz a tag is illegible doesn't mean it's all crammed...most illegible tags are just too intricate for your feeble toy mind to process...no offence...

Stuck
08-16-2009, 07:50 PM
i prefer simple tags over complex tags anyday....just because i want ppl to be able to read it and be able to recongize the word plastered all over the city.... weather its them comparin a tag to a throw burner bomb roller w.e

crystalmeth and abortions
08-16-2009, 08:36 PM
black. i really like the s and the e has potential.. but the letters in the middle, i feel like they dont flow, slow down maybe and structure them to fit better between the s and e. i have an idea for a safe tag if ud want to see it
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/89/l_8102a181396f4179bb64b2c54aa2548b.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/72/l_e5111ed4fe7c435a91f07733f37a532e.jpg
...camera phone flicks... but my two main tags. if u got shit to talk... dont. but crit plz

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 08:40 PM
just keep practicing different letter styles

exitus
08-16-2009, 08:44 PM
i see it now, looks like everythings fine except for the A, id work on that

crystalmeth and abortions
08-16-2009, 08:49 PM
if u see an x then your a fuckin retard. u straight do suck. that throw u just made sucked my dick. sloppy squiggly lines. but black. u got anything in mind? cuz we both got four letter words starting with s and third letter is f.. i dig your s, maybe i can change it up a little and make it my own? so im not bitin?

BlacktodaFuture
08-16-2009, 08:53 PM
if u see an x then your a fuckin retard. u straight do suck. that throw u just made sucked my dick. sloppy squiggly lines. but black. u got anything in mind? cuz we both got four letter words starting with s and third letter is f.. i dig your s, maybe i can change it up a little and make it my own? so im not bitin?

dont bite my shit, toys biting toys that are better is just madness.

Stuck
08-16-2009, 09:43 PM
soft? fix ur o dont make it extend fix the top of the f so it doesnt make that x....do a simpler S and you t is a bit to low...and get rid of the random squiggles and ur good and im talkin about the bottom one
BEFOR
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/72/l_e5111ed4fe7c435a91f07733f37a532e.jpg
AFTER
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Untitled-1.jpg

keep in mind im no ms paint master

iPwnF00lz
08-16-2009, 09:46 PM
Yeah you might want to go more simple, I thought it said sock.

aekone
08-17-2009, 10:04 PM
Soft- It looks a little too... Jagged. Like you just kind of threw some sharp angles on some regular letters and threw them together. Try to put a little more effort into developing letters that flow.
Black- That is E is pretty dope. The S kind of matches the E but all the other letters need a little more flow.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo26.jpg

Ignore the tag on the bottom please.
Crits?

Mr yarbles
08-17-2009, 10:10 PM
WAy to just steal the h me and big blue use
Shit.

BigBlueViolence
08-17-2009, 10:19 PM
FUCKlNG LOL'D

http://www.everyjoe.com/hockeybeat/files/2007/10/miloventimigliaandhaydenpanettiereatkingsgame.jpg

aekone
08-17-2009, 10:35 PM
You act like it's unique.... I've seen that H mad times. A zig zag crossbar... Not crazy original.

BigBlueViolence
08-17-2009, 10:40 PM
Take everything on the internet seriously, bro.

thadanks
08-18-2009, 10:16 AM
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/5778/56194ab4ba8012505306810.jpg

sat down with a fat cap and a board last night and worked on flow for a while, here's what i came up with. I think it has more flow than other stuff ive done, im still working on different things with the k, any suggestions?

Mr yarbles
08-18-2009, 04:48 PM
You act like it's unique.... I've seen that H mad times. A zig zag crossbar... Not crazy original.

Is this a joke me and blue contemplated for fucking hours on this shit
Like "how should we make this h mad original?" then you come in and just steal it
Just like aids stealing life from a fetus, that's what you are, an aids fetus.


oh and dank is the gayest graffiti name ever
You have good style though

klic
08-19-2009, 10:29 AM
same old shit

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag66.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag67.jpg

dank - i like it, keep working on your K

ghoul - top ones best, im not feeling the zigzag H though, and use the O from the second one

FLIP FLOP
08-19-2009, 04:45 PM
Dank - Do something else with the arms of the K.

Janek - Try to make your letters stay level, like if you were trying to write on a line. (basically what you did in the top one)

graffdabusup
08-19-2009, 05:09 PM
janek.. bottom ones fire

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Mobile%20Uploads/Image0-1.jpg

klic
08-19-2009, 05:24 PM
janek.. bottom ones fire


jokes? thats one of the worst handstyles ive ever done in my opinion haha

graffdabusup
08-19-2009, 06:25 PM
nah its good. the k especially.

klic
08-19-2009, 06:43 PM
thanks i guess haha, the reep looks ill, maybe add an underline or something

graffdabusup
08-19-2009, 06:59 PM
lol i think i put one

klic
08-19-2009, 07:02 PM
hahah, the fuck?? i could have sworn there wasnt an underline there before

graffdabusup
08-19-2009, 07:12 PM
lol magiccccc:eek:

DestroyLA
08-20-2009, 01:13 AM
You act like it's unique.... I've seen that H mad times. A zig zag crossbar... Not crazy original.dont even see why you would want to jock that H" anyways. It lacks flow and doesnt fit with any of the rest of the letters. to be honest even if it did fit i still wouldnt like it just cus writing an H" like that is just stupid in my opinion. Not trying to offend mryarbles or bigblue
janek I dont think you give yourself enough credit. and Reep that look flows well.i still would make the P" just a tad smaller.

Sesh-it-up
08-20-2009, 04:23 AM
ghoul!!!... i like the middle the best/

Bombing With Insurance
08-20-2009, 04:33 AM
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0530.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0527.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0528.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0529.jpg

Begin with just markers and paper to get the feel for graff lettering. Replicate these letters at first, then go off on your own. Hope this helps!

graffdabusup
08-20-2009, 03:56 PM
my battle entry
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Mobile%20Uploads/Image0-3.jpg

Shurik*n
08-20-2009, 06:44 PM
kinda simple..but i kinda like it. what do u guys think? o and sorry for the bluriness

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090820193140.jpg

reep: i feel like the p's circle is just a little bit too big. and ur entry is good imo. but i don't think the colon on top of the f is necessary

-Empty-Can-
08-20-2009, 06:49 PM
kinda simple..but i kinda like it. what do u guys think? o and sorry for the bluriness

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090820193140.jpg


Its very small. It doesn't look like an handstyle at all.It looks like you just wrote it.

BlacktodaFuture
08-20-2009, 07:25 PM
i tried doing a con handstyle and i dont like any of the letters. cant do much w. it

Sesh-it-up
08-20-2009, 07:47 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000101.jpg
CRITSSS ON THE FACE

-AnTi-
08-22-2009, 11:04 AM
Janek - love your tags man.
Con - Just keep working on it and you'll get something eventually, try tweaking the letters a bit each time til you get something you like.
Seshitup - im digging it but try make the face more face like if you know waht I mean, Give it a smile =D.

heres something i've been messing with.
http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx326/_LERT_/tagz.jpg

tried fucking about with halos but i dont like em too much. shome I keep the one on the end or just leave it as lert?.
many thanks yall

klic
08-22-2009, 02:12 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag68.jpg

LertOne - go simpler man, lose all the doodads and attachments, dont clump your letters so much

Evow - dope, make your O a little bigger

medacog1
08-22-2009, 02:39 PM
[QUOTE=klic;1455405]http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag68.jpg


Do your letters get further and further apart?
and are you using a streak?

klic
08-22-2009, 02:45 PM
yeah, i guess i did accidentaly

and i used a zig woodcraft

Five Sixx Ace
08-22-2009, 11:34 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0446.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0447.jpg

idk yeah.

janek- looks sick man.

klic
08-22-2009, 11:57 PM
soec - the oec on the first one looks good. keep working on your S. dont add the little notch to your S and C

barks
08-23-2009, 12:22 AM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/CIMG0089.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/CIMG4020.jpg

*NGONE*
08-23-2009, 09:49 AM
i like it alot barks. maybe just loose some of the add ons

Five Sixx Ace
08-23-2009, 10:54 AM
alright thanks klic.

Shurik*n
08-23-2009, 04:55 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823175212.jpg

Yea barks..lose some of the add ons.

Klic, always looks amazing

Black Flag
08-23-2009, 06:47 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0446.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0447.jpg

idk yeah.

janek- looks sick man.

get rid of that arrow underline, it looks a lot better without it.


http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823175212.jpg

Yea barks..lose some of the add ons.

Klic, always looks amazing

that tag is no good, way too squished.

I think you should just get a new name to be honest.

DestroyLA
08-24-2009, 05:25 PM
barks if i were you i wouldnt put any add ons. especially that crown, your asking for beef their.
Con i would use another name.

hpir
08-24-2009, 06:42 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemstickers002.jpg
critz?

Sesh-it-up
08-24-2009, 07:17 PM
meh its kinda plain and blahh add some flava to that shit

klic
08-24-2009, 07:49 PM
the ksc's nice, not feeling the kemone though

milk boxx
08-24-2009, 07:58 PM
kem - man you gotta let loose, every letter doesnt needa be the exactt same size, get some flow goin.. and drop those pointy E's


anyone down for an exchange?

Fayless
08-24-2009, 08:51 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/2iurg5v.png
For a friend.

Milk, I'll do an exchange. What do you write? I write Jaz

smokeandmirrors
08-24-2009, 09:17 PM
hey im trying to add some flare to this what do you guys think i shud add. show me any ideas?


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1009.jpg

Fayless
08-24-2009, 09:22 PM
your letters are all pretty loose and flowy besides the K. Work on flow before you work on flare.

smokeandmirrors
08-24-2009, 09:30 PM
loose and flowy is good right?

Fayless
08-24-2009, 09:32 PM
If its all loose and flowy, yes, but if its struggling between Tight and hard corners and such and Circular loose letters, its not good. One or the other.

klic
08-24-2009, 09:38 PM
it doesnt flow, loose the addons and pointless extensions to your letters (ie the right leg of your K). and what that guy said ^ make all of your corners rounded one way, that will help it flow more

Zarb
08-24-2009, 10:10 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo118.jpg
Been workin on a one liner, does it look alright? or is it just a mess of lines?

Fayless
08-24-2009, 11:00 PM
I can see a G, an A, a I(?) and two Rs.. Gairr?

looks like a mess of lines.

iPwnF00lz
08-24-2009, 11:33 PM
If it says eark it's tight as a midget''s pussy.


Alright maybe not that tight but not a mess of lines.

BigBlueViolence
08-24-2009, 11:41 PM
No, it's definitely a mess of lines.

edit- Fuck it.
http://i26.tinypic.com/2djtbae.jpg

clokkz
08-24-2009, 11:57 PM
http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-3.jpg
hm? constructive criticism appreciated even if you tell me its shit.

Fayless
08-25-2009, 07:40 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2gx001t.png
Take out the part circled in Red (Unless its absolutely necessary to make it all in 1 line, which it doesn't look like it is). Take it out because it makes it look like a G. Above the R's straightest side the circle threw me off thinking it was a shitty I. Figure out someway to do the K better and you've got yourself some tight shit. I guess it just needed to be more overlooked.
@Clokkz, Whys there a line going directly threw it? If thats intentional, It may make people believe that you've been lined. I'm no fan of tight hand styles, try and loosen it up and don't worry about flare until you have some good letters down. All the flare you've added makes it look worse than it should be

smokeandmirrors
08-25-2009, 09:05 AM
hows this for some flow?

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1011.jpg

Fayless
08-25-2009, 09:12 AM
Close up the A a little more and you've got yourself a nice handy. Now go for some flare.

smokeandmirrors
08-25-2009, 09:22 AM
alright! but like what is flare? lol

clokkz
08-25-2009, 01:12 PM
http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachment.jpg
changed my name and made it alot looser. crits?
@ smokeandmirrors : flare is the extra stuff people add on. you know like crowns and stars and lines?

klic
08-25-2009, 01:18 PM
^what is that ? haha

just do normal letters man

clokkz
08-25-2009, 01:24 PM
http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachment-1.jpg
what like this? just handwriting?

klic
08-25-2009, 01:26 PM
looks better than the first thing you posted. id make them all capitals, and try and get some flow

clokkz
08-25-2009, 02:11 PM
http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachment-3.jpg

can i get somewhere with this?

the strange one
08-25-2009, 02:32 PM
http://img40.imagefra.me/img/img40/2/8/21/f_2s5q7ygu3wtm_fbf4084.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

simple enough?? or just plain shit?

smokeandmirrors
08-25-2009, 02:34 PM
this any better? ive been goin out taggin with this one is it ok or should i stop goin out with it for now?


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1012.jpg

Loki X Sho
08-25-2009, 02:40 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/j6s6qt.png
http://i25.tinypic.com/5th1t.png
http://i32.tinypic.com/2ppbjfo.png
http://i32.tinypic.com/2ppbjfo.png
http://i26.tinypic.com/2wog54w.png

the strange one
08-25-2009, 02:42 PM
smoke n mirrors- i like the kasp but i'm not to keen on the double arrowed line myself :)

smokeandmirrors
08-25-2009, 02:44 PM
so if i just dropped on of the arrows itd be good? but shud i go out with it yet?

Loki X Sho
08-25-2009, 02:47 PM
the letters look good, the arrows give it character...you can always switch it up....just to keep it fresh...

BigBlueViolence
08-25-2009, 02:53 PM
Everything posted on the last page blows.

smokeandmirrors
08-25-2009, 02:57 PM
haha ight ill keep goin out with it then but ill drop the double arrows and keep it a single one

@ BigBlueViolence: haha that makes me sad :(

the strange one
08-25-2009, 02:58 PM
so if i just dropped on of the arrows itd be good? but shud i go out with it yet?

well that was just my opinion so thats really up to you...either you can sit there hoping it will be good and people will like it or you can go lay a few down and see what YOU think to it when its up there???? :)

-Empty-Can-
08-25-2009, 03:00 PM
BBV is right. Those were terrible.

smokeandmirrors
08-25-2009, 03:03 PM
ill post sum flix of my work around

Epoc
08-25-2009, 03:04 PM
defiantly not the best from last night, but closest to my house....
note: the OTR .06 colours orange, pink and apparently green are all watery and seem to fade quickly.

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2650/dsc01342r.jpg

the strange one
08-25-2009, 03:04 PM
BBV is right. Those were terrible.

i can live with that at least their where other people on the page that suck too lol

BigBlueViolence
08-25-2009, 03:13 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1300/photo41x.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/462/photo43l.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3661/photo50f.jpg

-Empty-Can-
08-25-2009, 03:21 PM
^^Get your camera fixed?

Epoc: Make those 3 lines a little smaller. That marker looks terrible.

BigBlueViolence
08-25-2009, 03:24 PM
Nah, it's just the webcam on my Mac.

milk boxx
08-25-2009, 03:33 PM
Milk, I'll do an exchange. What do you write? I write Jaz

aight mang, i write Emek.

Loki X Sho
08-25-2009, 03:50 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/xqgjv8.png
http://i31.tinypic.com/30wxgjt.png

Epoc
08-25-2009, 03:50 PM
^^Get your camera fixed?

Epoc: Make those 3 lines a little smaller. That marker looks terrible.

tell me about. it i didnt feel like messing around with it last night, but i think the ticket is have it fully pumped while writing and go slow....burnt as fuck though.

blue - lets see em up :)

milk boxx
08-25-2009, 04:02 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/jazone.jpg

xchange with Jaz..
Fuck the letter Z....

barks
08-25-2009, 05:47 PM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1850.jpg

-Empty-Can-
08-25-2009, 05:52 PM
Try to make your quote marks even. Thats one of my bad habits too. And space your letters apart a little.

clokkz
08-25-2009, 06:14 PM
http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-4.jpg
@barks : i agree with empty can about your letter spacing.
Crits appreciated.

W_G_O_N_E
08-25-2009, 10:00 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/3115/dscn4138.jpg

Bombing With Insurance
08-26-2009, 03:53 PM
not feelin that "I"
But those A's are dope\

My badd

Loki X Sho
08-26-2009, 03:56 PM
its an I...and I feel it

Bombing With Insurance
08-26-2009, 04:05 PM
I corrected it my bad...
I just dont like the top part of it...

W_G_O_N_E
08-26-2009, 04:22 PM
maybe shoulda left out the curl on the top right of the "I" just ended it str8 but it still looks ahhight 2me , thnx 4 the crits

Bombing With Insurance
08-26-2009, 04:43 PM
Yeah it's got great flow just that curl is alil much, ya know???

hpir
08-26-2009, 05:57 PM
anybody down for an exchange i need some insperation for my handy

Bombing With Insurance
08-26-2009, 08:13 PM
sure, what do u write?
Ill do a trade with anyone, just let me know what you write.
I write AFLAK

Speedy
08-26-2009, 09:18 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2lk5rgh.jpg

BigBlueViolence
08-26-2009, 11:01 PM
Dope.
Not feeling the K or the bend in the L

Fayless
08-27-2009, 12:14 AM
http://i25.tinypic.com/sphyf6.jpg
exchange with emek

LeaksOne
08-27-2009, 04:19 PM
whose tryna do a handie exchange? fyi i dont do fancy shit my hands are simple

hpir
08-27-2009, 07:18 PM
whose tryna do a handie exchange? fyi i dont do fancy shit my hands are simple

im down ill do yrs now and post it later ,grate right?

Bombing With Insurance
08-27-2009, 07:28 PM
whose tryna do a handie exchange? fyi i dont do fancy shit my hands are simple

I'm down i write Aflak
Leaks,right?

hpir
08-27-2009, 08:17 PM
for leaks
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grates001.jpg
the middle one

hpir
08-27-2009, 08:29 PM
aflak ill exchange with you too here
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/aflak.jpg

Bombing With Insurance
08-27-2009, 08:52 PM
Hpir is that what you right?
BTW thanks dood

LeaksOne
08-27-2009, 09:27 PM
I'm down i write Aflak
Leaks,right?

no Grate

ill have you guys up later tonight.
hpir what do you write??

Fayless
08-27-2009, 09:39 PM
I wanna get in on some more exchanges, If you guys don't wanna do one back for me, its cool. I just wanted some practice with more names. I write Jaz if you do though.
Aflak
http://i28.tinypic.com/6f61jt.jpg
Grate
http://i30.tinypic.com/w03llu.jpg

Bombing With Insurance
08-27-2009, 10:09 PM
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-27-09_2254.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-27-09_2255.jpg

I'll do some better ones tomorrow kind of in a hurry

"art threat"
08-28-2009, 02:19 AM
bombing with insurance- those are straight

"art threat"
08-28-2009, 02:25 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat003.jpg

crits?

shem
08-28-2009, 02:26 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3511/3863685081_d254371853.jpg

everyone on this page besides speedy needs to write keyboard letters. everythign is wack. start simple flow and steeeez will come. hpir youve got the idea.

art lose all those addons and make ur letters the same size

faser
08-28-2009, 02:33 AM
shem - you could make it flow a lot better...... just mess around ;)

"art threat"
08-28-2009, 02:35 AM
hold up

"art threat"
08-28-2009, 02:46 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat004.jpg

that better??

shem
08-28-2009, 02:48 AM
much better. id say lose that little extension on the s and move ur letters a little closer together.

"art threat"
08-28-2009, 02:49 AM
yee.. i will.. thanks for the crits

hpir
08-28-2009, 09:45 AM
no Grate

ill have you guys up later tonight.
hpir what do you write??

leaks and aflak i right kem

dingd0ng
08-28-2009, 11:13 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat004.jpg

that better??

its looking decent so far, its been said just keep the letters a little closer and shit

LeaksOne
08-28-2009, 03:55 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60038.jpg
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60037.jpg
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60039.jpg
BLEH!!!

BigBlueViolence
08-28-2009, 05:23 PM
http://i31.tinypic.com/wrc6kg.jpg

hpir
08-28-2009, 06:24 PM
bbv- nice i like it

Zarb
08-28-2009, 08:27 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0828092112.jpg
Tryin to stay simple

hpir
08-28-2009, 08:48 PM
leaks kinda used yr k tell me if yr not cool with it
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/tagkem.jpg
crits?

nickstix
08-28-2009, 10:28 PM
Hpir..letters look good, try adding some flare to it to make it more interesting
Zarn...maybe try extending the line under the A and R across the whole thing

A Quick idea i tried...not sure if im gunna make it better or get rid of it

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0828092304.jpg

crits?

smokeandmirrors
08-28-2009, 10:40 PM
@ shem not a bad tag try adding some flare to it

@ hpir: same as nickstix said add some flare now

also guys what do you think of this i changed it up a little

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/get-attachmentaspx.jpg

LeaksOne
08-29-2009, 01:35 AM
leaks kinda used yr k tell me if yr not cool with it
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/tagkem.jpg
crits?

im coo with it. its pretty generic but if you wana use it be my guest. that looks pretty decent too. just drop the underline for now

Zarb
08-29-2009, 01:35 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0828092112.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0829091245.jpg
Is my one liner just a mess of lines?

Bump.
Kem- Nice and simple but yeah the underline kinda ruins it

Bombing With Insurance
08-29-2009, 01:59 PM
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1442.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1443.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1444.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1445.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1447.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1448.jpg

Some stuff i did quick

I'm really happy with all the swaps, thats pretty tight

W_G_O_N_E
08-29-2009, 03:39 PM
energizer hand battle entry think i was late turnin it thoughhttp://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6353/dscn4178.jpg

klic
08-29-2009, 06:19 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0829091245.jpg


your K looks awfully familiar..
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag57.jpg

wgone - i only had 1 entry so i was waiting for another one so your good. i just set it up. i only have one entry for the throwie battle so someone should get down on that

bombingwithinsurance - get some flow going man, letters dont go together at all

kasp - not feeling all the swirls and whatnot

rek - too much extra stuff, tone it down

bbv - do it with the same style of the bbv one

shem - looks dope, your the guy that used to write emik right ?

edit: some recent hands.. mostly wack

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag69.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag70.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag71.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag72.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag73.jpg

Mr yarbles
08-29-2009, 06:20 PM
THis has got to be like the 50th time this kid has been caught biting.

BigBlueViolence
08-29-2009, 06:25 PM
Why would a toy want to bite other toys?
I'm baffled.

LeaksOne
08-29-2009, 07:48 PM
yarbles are you serious?? only 50? whatever his post count is thats how many times hes got called on a bite.

smokeandmirrors
08-29-2009, 08:17 PM
@ klic: haha really? idk i thought it added some flare

klic
08-29-2009, 08:28 PM
get a good simple hand down first, then add flare

smokeandmirrors
08-29-2009, 08:55 PM
@ klic: haha i do have a simple handy here check it lol

klic
08-29-2009, 09:00 PM
its simple but its not good, no hate. keep working on it, lose the arrow underline, uppercase A, the right leg of your K doesnt flow. the whole thing doesnt really flow to be honest

BigBlueViolence
08-29-2009, 09:01 PM
It's going in so many different directions man,
a good hand should just come out of you without having to think.
It's instinctual, *****!

Fayless
08-29-2009, 09:45 PM
Anyone up for a Handy exchange with me? I write Jaz.

faser
08-30-2009, 02:46 AM
i went bombin today and i dont like my tag anymore
someone wnna exchange so i can get some ideas? i write jers

DestroyLA
08-30-2009, 02:16 PM
It's going in so many different directions man,
a good hand should just come out of you without having to think.
It's instinctual, *****!i agree. sometimes its hard to just write normal handwriting on my school papers. every now and then ill accidently start writing in my handstyle.

-rane
08-30-2009, 03:00 PM
some tags of mine.
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/8070/photocwf.jpg

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/6637/photo2ylb.jpg

crits? just reference them 1st 2nd 3rd 4th, so i know what tag your talking about
thanks everyone!

Firm
08-30-2009, 03:05 PM
Yo rain I like the second one it looks good, any crits on mine?
http://i28.tinypic.com/fk623l.jpg
Some tips on how to improve?

BigBlueViolence
08-30-2009, 03:20 PM
Rane- the RA in the very first one is dope, but that's all I'm feeling.

Firm- you're doing it wrong.

-rane
08-30-2009, 03:31 PM
thanks for the crits guys!

firm - i think you need to try to be a little bit more simple with your letters, dont break up your letters much, if at all. Your R should be one piece

klic
08-30-2009, 03:34 PM
rane, the top ones the best for sure, just lose the halo, maybe add an underline

-rane
08-30-2009, 03:41 PM
rane, the top ones the best for sure, just lose the halo, maybe add an underline

Yea i usually never put the halo on it, i dont know why i did.
I would post some more of that style that i have been doing recently.

The very bottom one is my one liner.

Firm
08-30-2009, 04:02 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/24cbmrm.jpg
Crits...

Lsd
08-30-2009, 04:46 PM
Some tags and such..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture270.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture528.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture263.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture732.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture666.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture671.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture658.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture650.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture646.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture645.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture621.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Picture794.jpg

Critsssssss?

Fayless
08-30-2009, 07:31 PM
@Firm, Add some Steez and fix that M
@Slunk, couldn't read the L for awhile and didn't know what the first few hands said. fix that.

Firm
08-30-2009, 08:06 PM
I'm trying to keep it simple, not sure what else to do with it...
http://i31.tinypic.com/262xhyh.jpg

BigBlueViolence
08-30-2009, 08:16 PM
Stop making your F so big.