Tags

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

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bbv - i like that D

very nice

[PYT!TLC!]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2416/dsc03795bic.jpg
i'm still messin with my 'z'.

janek - dope, but that vertical tag doesn't look too good from what i can see.
grats - i don't like the calig marker one, but the skinny marker tag doesn't look too bad. imo you should lose the question mark underneath.
darko - use keyboard letters first. i just wrote your name and it actually flows pretty good imo. :p

[Shurik*n]

so just focusing on the con part for now..but should i write out the number two..or use the number?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0636.jpg

straz: i like the middle one
janek: very nice
grate: i kinda like ur s..maybe make the top of it wider...like a little bit less than the same width as the bottom..idk how to describe it haha

[PYT!TLC!]

if you make the 't' uppercase, then contwo wouldn't look too bad.

[Obiz_BFM]

Lolz i need to get a cam

[Bink1]

janek is there anyone else writing in your city ,coz looks like your alone and thats like very fast way to get cought.

[klic]

im the only half decent writer here, there is a fair amount of other vandalism though. all of those tags are like 2 hours away though

[Bink1]

cool cool

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics560.jpg

It's my first with a can. Came out sloppy because i used a pink dot and i never practiced with a pink dot.

[FLIP FLOP]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics560.jpg

It's my first with a can. Came out sloppy because i used a pink dot and i never practiced with a pink dot.

It looks like you started taking a seizure half way through the tag.

[FLIP FLOP]

oh, and i think klic should lose the loopy thing on the end of the J

[gumOnShoe]

klic: looks dope, but i've noticed that you sometimes place the J way too close to the A which looks bad Imo, try bending the top/middle of the J a little farther from the A, But still keeping the whole J close to the A.
Shurik*n: the C seems familiar but it looks good to me, the O and N however, doesn't flow good w/ the C or doesn't fit. try a new O and N that'll fit with that C.
PYT!TLC!: i think you should make the stem of the T a little bigger so you can play around w/ the S and the "r",make the A flow a little better, in other words, make the A wider oh, and drop the bottom of that Z a little lower and move the Z a little closer to the A


v Handstyle i did v
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo4.jpg
^^ Crits? ^^

[medacog1]

http://i30.tinypic.com/ojf30n.jpg

Had to change my name...
The P line is to short and the L is a bit small but i know their is way more wrong with it.

[klic]

thats actually pretty nice, the R ruins it though. make it the same as your P with an extra leg. and maybe try and uppercase A

edit: 1500 posts

edit again

THE WORD FOR THIS WEEKS TOY HANDSTYLE BATTLE IS "CRACK PIPES". ITS DUE FRIDAY. LETS TRY AND GET ENOUGH ENTRIES SO WE CAN HAVE A REGULAR AND ADVANCED POLL

[gumOnShoe]

how do i enter?

[klic]

send me a flick of your entry

[killerspeen]

can u show me how to make a "j"?

[medacog1]

yes

[snackmachine]

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[thadanks]

Ster- The mirror tag is probably the nicest but I'd say lose the "5" and work on flow

[BigBlueViolence]

and wtf is up with the forks down?
Are you trying to rep bloods, or are you just a clown?

[medacog1]

snackmachine
dude lose the fork thing and bend your letters let the shit flow dude..and what are you using a pentel?

[-Empty-Can-]

^^

whats with the black blob?

My freind used to write ster but he changed his name

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0639.jpg

-empty-can-: i think there's too much other stuff going on...
polar: it's good, the r kinda messes up the rest imo caz it's too long

[gumOnShoe]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0639.jpg

-empty-can-: i think there's too much other stuff going on...
polar: it's good, the r kinda messes up the rest imo caz it's too long

the last one is an improvement, try using the C i said i liked and the last ON TWO yo did on this one, also try bending the first bar of the N closer tothe o.
here's my hand, reads SPArE.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-2.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

[QUOTE=Shurik*n;1443802]
-empty-can-: i think there's too much other stuff going on...
Are you talking about my tag or my post?

[kenrararar]

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1280/photo33.jpg

[99%Shit]

Stay away from '5' type 's'es, especially ones made to look like dollar signs. Both the '5' and '$' can work as an 's', but not when you're starting. Same goes for the arrow on your 'R'.

[KNS13]

man i miss my evoke tag
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0038-1.jpg

[Fury]

^ I wouldn't miss it. Not to be an ass, I just don't really like it.

[kenrararar]

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1280/photo33.jpg

bottom of page bump

KNS - I'd start over and go simpler that just doesnt flow

[LeaksOne]

this page is pretty bad so far. both you guys need to just write simple letters

[tilt]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7721/p6260002a.jpg

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2vm7a6h.jpg

[medacog1]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2vm7a6h.jpg

dude im liking the crack pipes.

[kisforkoolie]

what should i improve on and is it decent?
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pubstarmike/rehab1-1.jpg

[medacog1]

straight letters...and lose the add-ons.
start from their.

[ecke]

hey everyone, im new to this, just started writing ecke for a little, tell me what you think
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/untitled-1.jpg
i dont know what to do with the k, it feels like it doesnt flow good with the rest

[Epoc]

^^^ thats cause your trying to force the loop on the top. DONT.

it doesnt suit that letter.

heres a whole bunch of shit. put some obsolete ones in just to see how the old n new stack up.
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6121/dsc01336r.jpg

[colz]

epoc-my favorite is the one under the circled tag
ecke-start simplier, dont add the loops on each letter
rehab-do straight letters and improve from there

trying a little simplier. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/vvvv-1.jpg

[klic]

im going to be away all weekend so the deadline for the 'crack pipes' handstyle battle has been extended to sunday

[gumOnShoe]

here's my hand, reads SPArE.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-2.jpg
bump. crits?

[KNS13]

http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0028-4.jpg

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image619.jpg

ecke: start with keyboard letters first, and then experiment.

spare: everything looks good, but the just isn't looking so good to me...idk y. maybe the middle bar (the extension) is too big/long

[Alts13]

KNS don't write Kema he is already well established in Transcend and is fucking dope

Con - I would drop the Two, just reminds me too much of CanTwo and ConTwo just seems unoriginal

[Fury]

Con - Don't make your C too big, keep it the same size as the other letters.
KNS - Lose the dots and the arrows.
Gumonshoe - Please take a new picture, I can't see it.
Clops - Try and make the L uppercase (it has a leg)
Epoc - Go simpler.

[moonboots]

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e359/no-clue/yoirrrr.jpg

[faser]

yoir- the I doesnt flow much

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image629.jpg

[FLIP FLOP]

the C doesn't fit in with the O and N, plus they are just the normal letters.

[Beats_His_Wife]

the last one is an improvement, try using the C i said i liked and the last ON TWO yo did on this one, also try bending the first bar of the N closer tothe o.
here's my hand, reads SPArE.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-2.jpg

Really feelin that

[ecke]

faser that looks pretty good, maybe you should make the s in just the same as the s in sucks

Con- make all the letters round or keep'em all sharp

Spare- that looks bueno, make it darker next time

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e369/splitlip54/SSPX0069.png
any crits on this

[JustChillin]

ecke please go simpler

[klic]

hmm
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekHandstyle19.jpg

ecke - EC isnt bad, KE ruins it

con - not liking your C

faser - doesnt have much flow, i dont like your S

clops - dont make your S go over your P as much

resk - pretty cool, i like the bottom right one

[PYT!TLC!]

Just got back from dominican republic for a week. crazy cigars there. i visited a legitimate tobacco store run by the local villagers. too bad i couldn't try the samples...parents were on my back the whole time. :(

rehab - start with keyboard letters and progress from there. it looks very lumpy.
ecke - looking alright, 'k' still looks stupid though.
epoc - looks good, imo i don't like the e.
clops - space them letters out.
kema - the 'e' doesn't fit.
con - the 'c' doesn't flow.
yoir - start simpler, on paper.

[crossfire101]

Just started writing this, crits ?

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7130/failans.jpg

[kermet_1]

^ Try taking away all the add-ons and keep trying out different letters
Consistency is the key.
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1527/212018.jpg

[-sense-]

kilc-i like when i k swooshes around the whole tag and cuts threw the j
kerm- i think it would look better vertical.. i cant really make it out tho..

[99%Shit]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3452/3816648774_f375060cac.jpg

Can't seem to rock 'U's at the moment. I haven't posted much for work, so figured I'd do some and get some crits. I don't have any of my hands with dece Rs or Ys at home, which is bumming me out, 'cause they all seem off tonight. The last S is way off, they normally are like the second, when I got calming nug in me.

[PYT!TLC!]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9356/dsc04868e.jpg
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/2593/dsc04867b.jpg
Convenience store bathroom. :p

janek - the swoosh imo isn't that bad, although i don't like it when the swoosh cuts through the letters.
fate(?) - looks stupid. start simpler.
kermet - no idea what it says, although it looks nice. make it a bit cleaner.
mewser(?) - the 'e' is out of place and doesn't flow. doesn't look that bad though overall. work on making some of your letters less awkward.

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't think that the E is out of place,
but I do think that hand should be a single line.

[PYT!TLC!]

BBV, my handy? or someone else

[BigBlueViolence]

99% shit.

[PYT!TLC!]

oh.
anyway critique mine? :P

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't really like it man, all the letters are different, no flow.

Good luck with those letters too, bro.

[PYT!TLC!]

thanks. back to the drawing board.

[klic]

pick a new name, horrible letter combination

[PYT!TLC!]

alright, btw should i drop the 's' completely? or what do you think of it

[klic]

nah the s is good, s's are good for first letters. r's suck in the middle of words, t's just suck in general

[lacrosseplayer80]

ok so i have a new tag ive been working on for awhile.. i wana add some more flow and flare can anyone help me out and tell me if its good or not

[99%Shit]

Word, tried getting a oneline of that up, but it's not happening at the moment. Gotta figure out how to do the W to S. Maybe I'll do a muse(r) oneline later.

There's a pretty good Kasp from Western Canada(I think that's where he is), perhaps try another name while it's early on in your game.

Straz, perhaps Star(s/z) if you want to work with those letters. Work with the letter T, it's tough, but worthwhile to learn.

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3552/3817520097_b080bea255.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2665/3817520095_208c114b8e.jpg

KASP lose all the addons for now. the k is ur best letter. dont make ur s square like that. try and stay simple and the flow will come. just write it over and over and over and you willl eventually start to notice ur letters changing and haaving some steeezzz. so write KASP just like that for now.

[skull-e]

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99%shit: What do you write? I could give your name a shot

Kasp: That took you a while? *cough*

loose the doo dads and do a simple handwriting tag, once ou can do it upside down, eyes closed and no hands, then start adding shit onto it. till then keyboard letttaars

[99%Shit]

You don't have to do much to come up with one. Swap that C for an M and you got one for me. If you go back a page, you'll see the hand I was trying to one line as suggested by BBV. I was just not having too much luck getting the W to S transition to come out clean enough to post. That cuser is similar to some of my other hands. nicee.

[PYT!TLC!]

http://i27.tinypic.com/2ryk2eh.jpg
new name, sheal. starting simple, tried to add some kind of crappy style to it at the bottom. haha.

shem - very nice drips. work on that 'm' i guess.
cuser - drips are pretty nice, work on your one-liner. the s-e transition looks weird.

[BigBlueViolence]

Skull, catching a tag on an escalator has to be mad awkward.

[rewz]

http://i26.tinypic.com/2cdeteb.jpg

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2454/3819594090_bf3b97963e_b.jpg

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

suck it you cunts.

[faser]

screwed the s up bad

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i26.tinypic.com/2cdeteb.jpg

Get some better paint man.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/saferonehandstyle.jpg?t=1250219521

[DestroyLA]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2454/3819594090_bf3b97963e_b.jpg

that looks nice. i dont think your a toy.

[Stuck]

a little to overlapped to my liking

[BigBlueViolence]

That E is trying to fuck your precious O, Mero.
You should probably move it over a little bit

[BlacktodaFuture]

crits on my handstyle? i like it bc i can do it fast.

[Stuck]

safer one? its weak...simplify that shit

[BlacktodaFuture]

safer one? its weak...simplify that shit

meaning...?

[99%Shit]

Your R is in the middle of nowhere. And toss those connex, they don't work.

Meroe, too bunchy, but it's all there, prime stuff.

[klic]

if you sent me an entry for the 'little vagina' handstyle battle or 'cyan' throwie battle, send it to me again because i did a system recovery on my computer and deleted everything. The deadline for both of these battles has been extended until sunday if your still looking to get in

[skull-e]

Skull, catching a tag on an escalator has to be mad awkward.

I sat down on the escalator to do it that time, I usually bend over and slowly walk down so i can writ at my own pace.

[cesspool]

hahahaha.. bend over....
-L

[DestroyLA]

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0814091700.jpg

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/0297jpeg.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/reep.jpg
Stock Tips. My Homie Did The Rane.

[markingz.]

haha yo destroyla, thats versus kog, if you like that you should check out other kog artists stuff like arbe korea, etc there mad good i like their stuff too

[rewz]

Get some better paint man.

ahah wasnt the paint the wall trust me not the best wall paint was rusto gloss

[DestroyLA]

graffdabus up on your first pic i like the top tag the best, it looks smoother. The bottom one would be good too if the box on the P" wasnt so big. Tell your homie he needs to practice more with his can control.

markings and yea that shit was dope. That hung right over the Freeway n i use to see it everyday and it was there for a good 2 weeks i would say before it got buffed.

[inpho_211]

da inpho mus 211!
crits?http://i683.photobucket.com/albums/vv199/inpho_211/scan0001.jpg

[graffdabusup]

thanks for da crits guys..

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1994.jpg
n e ideas?

[modown]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1994.jpg
n e ideas?

i like the one with the face in it

[aekone]

Devor- Diggin tha top one.
inpho-Can't really read it. Hit up some of that legibility.
Reep- I'm diggin all of those except for the wall.
Bezar- Work on flow.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo25.jpg

Crits?

[Stuck]

try to make all ur letters touch...and using capitoal letters helps especially with H and L and try to make em all the same size and dont do any doodads n shit

[thephillafromma]

alright so ive been progressing nicely on throwies and bubble letttrs and stuff but i cant get anywhere with my tags and it pisses me off any advice ??

[Stuck]

work on it...id say tags are the hardest aspect of graffiti to get good at...but once u get it thats it and ur good....keep trying

[BigBlueViolence]

I agree that it's one of the hardest parts,
there's no bullshit to hide behind.
No fruity fills, 5 color 3D, just straight style.

I'm feeling that first hand, Reep.

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000098.jpg
new paint brush pen im tryin.

[Black Flag]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000098.jpg
new paint brush pen im tryin.

I know this is a bit off topic, but I really don't understand why people even joke around/ practice styles with a crown in the tag. Honestly, there is a 98% chance you will never be worthy of using a crown in your work. Even if you are just fucking around with writing something, it still looks lame putting a crown.

[Sesh-it-up]

cry about it.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000099.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

dude, I think that shit looks loads better with a bigger O.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck001.jpg?t=1250465914

[exitus]

lots of potential but the letters are crammed so much that i cant read it

[BlacktodaFuture]

lots of potential but the letters are crammed so much that i cant read it

Safe. and idk if i should spread it bc it actually is fairly legible compared to alot of other handstyles i have seen.

[ErrorOner...]

Just cuz a tag is illegible doesn't mean it's all crammed...most illegible tags are just too intricate for your feeble toy mind to process...no offence...

[Stuck]

i prefer simple tags over complex tags anyday....just because i want ppl to be able to read it and be able to recongize the word plastered all over the city.... weather its them comparin a tag to a throw burner bomb roller w.e

[crystalmeth and abortions]

black. i really like the s and the e has potential.. but the letters in the middle, i feel like they dont flow, slow down maybe and structure them to fit better between the s and e. i have an idea for a safe tag if ud want to see it
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/89/l_8102a181396f4179bb64b2c54aa2548b.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/72/l_e5111ed4fe7c435a91f07733f37a532e.jpg
...camera phone flicks... but my two main tags. if u got shit to talk... dont. but crit plz

[BlacktodaFuture]

just keep practicing different letter styles

[exitus]

i see it now, looks like everythings fine except for the A, id work on that

[crystalmeth and abortions]

if u see an x then your a fuckin retard. u straight do suck. that throw u just made sucked my dick. sloppy squiggly lines. but black. u got anything in mind? cuz we both got four letter words starting with s and third letter is f.. i dig your s, maybe i can change it up a little and make it my own? so im not bitin?

[BlacktodaFuture]

if u see an x then your a fuckin retard. u straight do suck. that throw u just made sucked my dick. sloppy squiggly lines. but black. u got anything in mind? cuz we both got four letter words starting with s and third letter is f.. i dig your s, maybe i can change it up a little and make it my own? so im not bitin?

dont bite my shit, toys biting toys that are better is just madness.

[Stuck]

soft? fix ur o dont make it extend fix the top of the f so it doesnt make that x....do a simpler S and you t is a bit to low...and get rid of the random squiggles and ur good and im talkin about the bottom one
BEFOR
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/72/l_e5111ed4fe7c435a91f07733f37a532e.jpg
AFTER
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Untitled-1.jpg

keep in mind im no ms paint master

[iPwnF00lz]

Yeah you might want to go more simple, I thought it said sock.

[aekone]

Soft- It looks a little too... Jagged. Like you just kind of threw some sharp angles on some regular letters and threw them together. Try to put a little more effort into developing letters that flow.
Black- That is E is pretty dope. The S kind of matches the E but all the other letters need a little more flow.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo26.jpg

Ignore the tag on the bottom please.
Crits?

[Mr yarbles]

WAy to just steal the h me and big blue use
Shit.

[BigBlueViolence]

FUCKlNG LOL'D

http://www.everyjoe.com/hockeybeat/files/2007/10/miloventimigliaandhaydenpanettiereatkingsgame.jpg

[aekone]

You act like it's unique.... I've seen that H mad times. A zig zag crossbar... Not crazy original.

[BigBlueViolence]

Take everything on the internet seriously, bro.

[thadanks]

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/5778/56194ab4ba8012505306810.jpg

sat down with a fat cap and a board last night and worked on flow for a while, here's what i came up with. I think it has more flow than other stuff ive done, im still working on different things with the k, any suggestions?

[Mr yarbles]

You act like it's unique.... I've seen that H mad times. A zig zag crossbar... Not crazy original.

Is this a joke me and blue contemplated for fucking hours on this shit
Like "how should we make this h mad original?" then you come in and just steal it
Just like aids stealing life from a fetus, that's what you are, an aids fetus.


oh and dank is the gayest graffiti name ever
You have good style though

[klic]

same old shit

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag66.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag67.jpg

dank - i like it, keep working on your K

ghoul - top ones best, im not feeling the zigzag H though, and use the O from the second one

[FLIP FLOP]

Dank - Do something else with the arms of the K.

Janek - Try to make your letters stay level, like if you were trying to write on a line. (basically what you did in the top one)

[graffdabusup]

janek.. bottom ones fire

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Mobile%20Uploads/Image0-1.jpg

[klic]

janek.. bottom ones fire


jokes? thats one of the worst handstyles ive ever done in my opinion haha

[graffdabusup]

nah its good. the k especially.

[klic]

thanks i guess haha, the reep looks ill, maybe add an underline or something

[graffdabusup]

lol i think i put one

[klic]

hahah, the fuck?? i could have sworn there wasnt an underline there before

[graffdabusup]

lol magiccccc:eek:

[DestroyLA]

You act like it's unique.... I've seen that H mad times. A zig zag crossbar... Not crazy original.dont even see why you would want to jock that H" anyways. It lacks flow and doesnt fit with any of the rest of the letters. to be honest even if it did fit i still wouldnt like it just cus writing an H" like that is just stupid in my opinion. Not trying to offend mryarbles or bigblue
janek I dont think you give yourself enough credit. and Reep that look flows well.i still would make the P" just a tad smaller.

[Sesh-it-up]

ghoul!!!... i like the middle the best/

[Bombing With Insurance]

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0530.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0527.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0528.jpg

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-20-09_0529.jpg

Begin with just markers and paper to get the feel for graff lettering. Replicate these letters at first, then go off on your own. Hope this helps!

[graffdabusup]

my battle entry
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Mobile%20Uploads/Image0-3.jpg

[Shurik*n]

kinda simple..but i kinda like it. what do u guys think? o and sorry for the bluriness

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090820193140.jpg

reep: i feel like the p's circle is just a little bit too big. and ur entry is good imo. but i don't think the colon on top of the f is necessary

[-Empty-Can-]

kinda simple..but i kinda like it. what do u guys think? o and sorry for the bluriness

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090820193140.jpg


Its very small. It doesn't look like an handstyle at all.It looks like you just wrote it.

[BlacktodaFuture]

i tried doing a con handstyle and i dont like any of the letters. cant do much w. it

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000101.jpg
CRITSSS ON THE FACE

[-AnTi-]

Janek - love your tags man.
Con - Just keep working on it and you'll get something eventually, try tweaking the letters a bit each time til you get something you like.
Seshitup - im digging it but try make the face more face like if you know waht I mean, Give it a smile =D.

heres something i've been messing with.
http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx326/_LERT_/tagz.jpg

tried fucking about with halos but i dont like em too much. shome I keep the one on the end or just leave it as lert?.
many thanks yall

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag68.jpg

LertOne - go simpler man, lose all the doodads and attachments, dont clump your letters so much

Evow - dope, make your O a little bigger

[medacog1]

[QUOTE=klic;1455405]http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag68.jpg


Do your letters get further and further apart?
and are you using a streak?

[klic]

yeah, i guess i did accidentaly

and i used a zig woodcraft

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0446.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0447.jpg

idk yeah.

janek- looks sick man.

[klic]

soec - the oec on the first one looks good. keep working on your S. dont add the little notch to your S and C

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/CIMG0089.jpg

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/CIMG4020.jpg

[*NGONE*]

i like it alot barks. maybe just loose some of the add ons

[Five Sixx Ace]

alright thanks klic.

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823175212.jpg

Yea barks..lose some of the add ons.

Klic, always looks amazing

[Black Flag]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0446.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0447.jpg

idk yeah.

janek- looks sick man.

get rid of that arrow underline, it looks a lot better without it.


http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823175212.jpg

Yea barks..lose some of the add ons.

Klic, always looks amazing

that tag is no good, way too squished.

I think you should just get a new name to be honest.

[DestroyLA]

barks if i were you i wouldnt put any add ons. especially that crown, your asking for beef their.
Con i would use another name.

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemstickers002.jpg
critz?

[Sesh-it-up]

meh its kinda plain and blahh add some flava to that shit

[klic]

the ksc's nice, not feeling the kemone though

[milk boxx]

kem - man you gotta let loose, every letter doesnt needa be the exactt same size, get some flow goin.. and drop those pointy E's


anyone down for an exchange?

[Fayless]

http://i31.tinypic.com/2iurg5v.png
For a friend.

Milk, I'll do an exchange. What do you write? I write Jaz

[smokeandmirrors]

hey im trying to add some flare to this what do you guys think i shud add. show me any ideas?


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1009.jpg

[Fayless]

your letters are all pretty loose and flowy besides the K. Work on flow before you work on flare.

[smokeandmirrors]

loose and flowy is good right?

[Fayless]

If its all loose and flowy, yes, but if its struggling between Tight and hard corners and such and Circular loose letters, its not good. One or the other.

[klic]

it doesnt flow, loose the addons and pointless extensions to your letters (ie the right leg of your K). and what that guy said ^ make all of your corners rounded one way, that will help it flow more

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo118.jpg
Been workin on a one liner, does it look alright? or is it just a mess of lines?

[Fayless]

I can see a G, an A, a I(?) and two Rs.. Gairr?

looks like a mess of lines.

[iPwnF00lz]

If it says eark it's tight as a midget''s pussy.


Alright maybe not that tight but not a mess of lines.

[BigBlueViolence]

No, it's definitely a mess of lines.

edit- Fuck it.
http://i26.tinypic.com/2djtbae.jpg

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-3.jpg
hm? constructive criticism appreciated even if you tell me its shit.

[Fayless]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2gx001t.png
Take out the part circled in Red (Unless its absolutely necessary to make it all in 1 line, which it doesn't look like it is). Take it out because it makes it look like a G. Above the R's straightest side the circle threw me off thinking it was a shitty I. Figure out someway to do the K better and you've got yourself some tight shit. I guess it just needed to be more overlooked.
@Clokkz, Whys there a line going directly threw it? If thats intentional, It may make people believe that you've been lined. I'm no fan of tight hand styles, try and loosen it up and don't worry about flare until you have some good letters down. All the flare you've added makes it look worse than it should be

[smokeandmirrors]

hows this for some flow?

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1011.jpg

[Fayless]

Close up the A a little more and you've got yourself a nice handy. Now go for some flare.

[smokeandmirrors]

alright! but like what is flare? lol

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachment.jpg
changed my name and made it alot looser. crits?
@ smokeandmirrors : flare is the extra stuff people add on. you know like crowns and stars and lines?

[klic]

^what is that ? haha

just do normal letters man

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachment-1.jpg
what like this? just handwriting?

[klic]

looks better than the first thing you posted. id make them all capitals, and try and get some flow

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachment-3.jpg

can i get somewhere with this?

[the strange one]

http://img40.imagefra.me/img/img40/2/8/21/f_2s5q7ygu3wtm_fbf4084.jpg (http://imagefra.me/)

simple enough?? or just plain shit?

[smokeandmirrors]

this any better? ive been goin out taggin with this one is it ok or should i stop goin out with it for now?


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1012.jpg

[Loki X Sho]

http://i31.tinypic.com/j6s6qt.png
http://i25.tinypic.com/5th1t.png
http://i32.tinypic.com/2ppbjfo.png
http://i32.tinypic.com/2ppbjfo.png
http://i26.tinypic.com/2wog54w.png

[the strange one]

smoke n mirrors- i like the kasp but i'm not to keen on the double arrowed line myself :)

[smokeandmirrors]

so if i just dropped on of the arrows itd be good? but shud i go out with it yet?

[Loki X Sho]

the letters look good, the arrows give it character...you can always switch it up....just to keep it fresh...

[BigBlueViolence]

Everything posted on the last page blows.

[smokeandmirrors]

haha ight ill keep goin out with it then but ill drop the double arrows and keep it a single one

@ BigBlueViolence: haha that makes me sad :(

[the strange one]

so if i just dropped on of the arrows itd be good? but shud i go out with it yet?

well that was just my opinion so thats really up to you...either you can sit there hoping it will be good and people will like it or you can go lay a few down and see what YOU think to it when its up there???? :)

[-Empty-Can-]

BBV is right. Those were terrible.

[smokeandmirrors]

ill post sum flix of my work around

[Epoc]

defiantly not the best from last night, but closest to my house....
note: the OTR .06 colours orange, pink and apparently green are all watery and seem to fade quickly.

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2650/dsc01342r.jpg

[the strange one]

BBV is right. Those were terrible.

i can live with that at least their where other people on the page that suck too lol

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1300/photo41x.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/462/photo43l.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3661/photo50f.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

^^Get your camera fixed?

Epoc: Make those 3 lines a little smaller. That marker looks terrible.

[BigBlueViolence]

Nah, it's just the webcam on my Mac.

[milk boxx]

Milk, I'll do an exchange. What do you write? I write Jaz

aight mang, i write Emek.

[Loki X Sho]

http://i26.tinypic.com/xqgjv8.png
http://i31.tinypic.com/30wxgjt.png

[Epoc]

^^Get your camera fixed?

Epoc: Make those 3 lines a little smaller. That marker looks terrible.

tell me about. it i didnt feel like messing around with it last night, but i think the ticket is have it fully pumped while writing and go slow....burnt as fuck though.

blue - lets see em up :)

[milk boxx]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/jazone.jpg

xchange with Jaz..
Fuck the letter Z....

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1850.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

Try to make your quote marks even. Thats one of my bad habits too. And space your letters apart a little.

[clokkz]

http://i963.photobucket.com/albums/ae119/clokkz/get-attachmentaspx-4.jpg
@barks : i agree with empty can about your letter spacing.
Crits appreciated.

[W_G_O_N_E]

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/3115/dscn4138.jpg

[Bombing With Insurance]

not feelin that "I"
But those A's are dope\

My badd

[Loki X Sho]

its an I...and I feel it

[Bombing With Insurance]

I corrected it my bad...
I just dont like the top part of it...

[W_G_O_N_E]

maybe shoulda left out the curl on the top right of the "I" just ended it str8 but it still looks ahhight 2me , thnx 4 the crits

[Bombing With Insurance]

Yeah it's got great flow just that curl is alil much, ya know???

[hpir]

anybody down for an exchange i need some insperation for my handy

[Bombing With Insurance]

sure, what do u write?
Ill do a trade with anyone, just let me know what you write.
I write AFLAK

[Speedy]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2lk5rgh.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Dope.
Not feeling the K or the bend in the L

[Fayless]

http://i25.tinypic.com/sphyf6.jpg
exchange with emek

[LeaksOne]

whose tryna do a handie exchange? fyi i dont do fancy shit my hands are simple

[hpir]

whose tryna do a handie exchange? fyi i dont do fancy shit my hands are simple

im down ill do yrs now and post it later ,grate right?

[Bombing With Insurance]

whose tryna do a handie exchange? fyi i dont do fancy shit my hands are simple

I'm down i write Aflak
Leaks,right?

[hpir]

for leaks
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grates001.jpg
the middle one

[hpir]

aflak ill exchange with you too here
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/aflak.jpg

[Bombing With Insurance]

Hpir is that what you right?
BTW thanks dood

[LeaksOne]

I'm down i write Aflak
Leaks,right?

no Grate

ill have you guys up later tonight.
hpir what do you write??

[Fayless]

I wanna get in on some more exchanges, If you guys don't wanna do one back for me, its cool. I just wanted some practice with more names. I write Jaz if you do though.
Aflak
http://i28.tinypic.com/6f61jt.jpg
Grate
http://i30.tinypic.com/w03llu.jpg

[Bombing With Insurance]

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-27-09_2254.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-27-09_2255.jpg

I'll do some better ones tomorrow kind of in a hurry

["art threat"]

bombing with insurance- those are straight

["art threat"]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat003.jpg

crits?

[shem]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3511/3863685081_d254371853.jpg

everyone on this page besides speedy needs to write keyboard letters. everythign is wack. start simple flow and steeeez will come. hpir youve got the idea.

art lose all those addons and make ur letters the same size

[faser]

shem - you could make it flow a lot better...... just mess around ;)

["art threat"]

hold up

["art threat"]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat004.jpg

that better??

[shem]

much better. id say lose that little extension on the s and move ur letters a little closer together.

["art threat"]

yee.. i will.. thanks for the crits

[hpir]

no Grate

ill have you guys up later tonight.
hpir what do you write??

leaks and aflak i right kem

[dingd0ng]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat004.jpg

that better??

its looking decent so far, its been said just keep the letters a little closer and shit

[LeaksOne]

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60038.jpg
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60037.jpg
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60039.jpg
BLEH!!!

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i31.tinypic.com/wrc6kg.jpg

[hpir]

bbv- nice i like it

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0828092112.jpg
Tryin to stay simple

[hpir]

leaks kinda used yr k tell me if yr not cool with it
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/tagkem.jpg
crits?

[nickstix]

Hpir..letters look good, try adding some flare to it to make it more interesting
Zarn...maybe try extending the line under the A and R across the whole thing

A Quick idea i tried...not sure if im gunna make it better or get rid of it

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0828092304.jpg

crits?

[smokeandmirrors]

@ shem not a bad tag try adding some flare to it

@ hpir: same as nickstix said add some flare now

also guys what do you think of this i changed it up a little

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/get-attachmentaspx.jpg

[LeaksOne]

leaks kinda used yr k tell me if yr not cool with it
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/tagkem.jpg
crits?

im coo with it. its pretty generic but if you wana use it be my guest. that looks pretty decent too. just drop the underline for now

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0828092112.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0829091245.jpg
Is my one liner just a mess of lines?

Bump.
Kem- Nice and simple but yeah the underline kinda ruins it

[Bombing With Insurance]

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1442.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1443.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1444.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1445.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1447.jpg
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-29-09_1448.jpg

Some stuff i did quick

I'm really happy with all the swaps, thats pretty tight

[W_G_O_N_E]

energizer hand battle entry think i was late turnin it thoughhttp://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6353/dscn4178.jpg

[klic]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0829091245.jpg


your K looks awfully familiar..
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKTag57.jpg

wgone - i only had 1 entry so i was waiting for another one so your good. i just set it up. i only have one entry for the throwie battle so someone should get down on that

bombingwithinsurance - get some flow going man, letters dont go together at all

kasp - not feeling all the swirls and whatnot

rek - too much extra stuff, tone it down

bbv - do it with the same style of the bbv one

shem - looks dope, your the guy that used to write emik right ?

edit: some recent hands.. mostly wack

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag69.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag70.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag71.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag72.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekTag73.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

THis has got to be like the 50th time this kid has been caught biting.

[BigBlueViolence]

Why would a toy want to bite other toys?
I'm baffled.

[LeaksOne]

yarbles are you serious?? only 50? whatever his post count is thats how many times hes got called on a bite.