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[fameone2009]

which one is better
http://i822.photobucket.com/albums/zz142/smukone/sspx0258.jpg
crits?

[OOPS!]

Dont do the S arrow thing. Make it flow better. Maybe look up some stuff on google for inspiration.. just dont do blatent bites..

[thatguy<~]

Fame- keep looking at other handstyles to get the style down, then add your own unique flow to it. keep working in the books.

[fameone2009]

how r all the other letter tho im having a hard time with the S

[OOPS!]

They're all plain man. Make it flow. It's not something that happens overnight. Just work with it all day every day and it'll evolve slowly

[fameone2009]

alright

[mefe]

sinc
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_Image32.jpg

[Anthema]

fame - Rarely(closer to never) does a "S" look good like that. try using a fatter marker (chisel tip), or a soft pencil (6B/9B), or a crayon/oil pastel or something. If you're gonna use the entire page use a fatter tool.

Mefe - The "C" is great IMO, everything else is too smushed. Space it out a tad. The "S" isn't defined enough for my tastes. And the "N" looks a little wonky. Bring more definition to first 3 letter. The "I" is very lost, uppercase perhaps to match the other 3 uppercase letters?

Crits?
http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/7411/1004091259.jpg
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/3645/1004091306.jpg
trying out a new style. Seems plain and boring to me, any suggestions on where to take it? (The second one)

[OOPS!]

I like the second one. The first one is way too cluttered maybe go for a capital B, they're a little easier to be creative with imo. But Simpler is better

[OOPS!]

Crits Pwease.

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0467.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Everyone on this page- you are trying way to hard.
You don't know what flow is, stop trying to utilize it.
Just write your name regular.

[Anthema]

I don't know Oops. I'm really not feeling the "O". I don't have a good reason as to why either. Just not feeling it. Maybe because it dwarfs the other two letters so much. the Round out the "S" instead of having that sharp edge. And drop the curly-Q at the bottom of it as well. I'd lose one or both of the underlines. The question-mark looking one for sure.

BBV: Help me out mate. Specifically what should I work on to improve the flow?

[OOPS!]

Did this one before I read your crit. I'll fix it in a sec. Oner makes it flow a little better. But I feel ya about the dwarfing. O's are tough to me.

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0469.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

your oner looks crispy but whatever the hell is infront of it does not
Go simple with the begging

[fameone2009]

fame - Rarely(closer to never) does a "S" look good like that. try using a fatter marker (chisel tip), or a soft pencil (6B/9B), or a crayon/oil pastel or something. If you're gonna use the entire page use a fatter tool.

Mefe - The "C" is great IMO, everything else is too smushed. Space it out a tad. The "S" isn't defined enough for my tastes. And the "N" looks a little wonky. Bring more definition to first 3 letter. The "I" is very lost, uppercase perhaps to match the other 3 uppercase letters?

Crits?
http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/7411/1004091259.jpg
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/3645/1004091306.jpg
trying out a new style. Seems plain and boring to me, any suggestions on where to take it? (The second one)

i have a 7b pencil and a chisel tip marker

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0470.jpg
http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0471.jpg

[Tonka]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2441/3977265032_9d1222262b_o.jpg

Thanks for the crits I would but theres nothing to crit.
I reallly like this tag any suggestions with it. (first letter is a D)

Can some one tell me how to post the picture on here from flickr i been looking and i cant find the img code and nowhere tells you how online.


No crits or help on the picture problem.

Benso keep trying simple is fine

Opps maybe it slow it down hard to read

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0472.jpg

[Tonka]

no crits or help on the picture problem.

Benso keep trying simple is fine

opps maybe it slow it down hard to read

holy shit

[OOPS!]

Tryin man! haha

[mefe]

i did this after i read your crits.... i cant seem to get a capital i to look good and i agree my n is shit... i like my S though :P
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_Image33-1.jpg

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo181.jpg
Blank- 2nd one is better, the first one is fucking retarted
Oops- The oner looks good but I cant read your name
Kams- Bring your letters closer together and lose the arrow for now
Mefe- Go simpler and lose the addons

[OOPS!]

Ra, looks dope. Lose the Halo and the bottom thing on the second one. Other than that looks clean

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091004_1.jpg
sorry bout the blur.

RA - Looking good man, dont really have much to crit.
oops - the oner part looks good like RA said, but the oops part is a bit hard to read.
mefe - start way simpler.

[OOPS!]

Looks good, just work on the B

[LeaksOne]

ra i like the left one just lose the dots
benso keep it up.
mefe.....no
oops make it more legible

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60053.jpg

[OOPS!]

It's not my fault you motherfuckers cant read. haha.. jk.

Siron the bottom and vertical one look dope.

[Darkeist]

Siron - your S is looking good, but try to change up the other letters, the N needs some work, maybe try a lower case I

[LeaksOne]

my n is inspired by noxer.

and i dont really like lower case I's.

[faser]

thats the most simple N i've ever seen you dont really need to be 'inspired' to draw that up
nice simple siron tags anyway

[fameone2009]

thanx radawg

[Tonka]

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/dale7.jpg
I really like this it says dale if you cant read it. what you think and an suggestions

Benso change it up you keep doing the same stuff.

Siron your trying to make it look like a tag way to much if you know what i mean.

[Tonka]

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/dale7.jpg
I really like this it says dale if you cant read it. what you think and an suggestions

Benso change it up you keep doing the same stuff.

Siron your trying to make it look like a tag way to much if you know what i mean.

[BigBlueViolence]

the A man.

other than that it's dope.

[LeaksOne]

Siron your trying to make it look like a tag way to much if you know what i mean.

i dont know what you mean

[faser]

he's probably talking about the mop tags

[LeaksOne]

what? i dont have any mop tags

edit: thats not mine. its a picture of noxer and some other cat

[faser]

yeah i know that but the other dude didnt

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo181.jpg
Blank- 2nd one is better, the first one is fucking retarted
Oops- The oner looks good but I cant read your name
Kams- Bring your letters closer together and lose the arrow for now
Mefe- Go simpler and lose the addons
.

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091004_1.jpg
sorry bout the blur.

RA - Looking good man, dont really have much to crit.
oops - the oner part looks good like RA said, but the oops part is a bit hard to read.
mefe - start way simpler.

yup

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9060/img0166c.jpg
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/8492/img0167u.jpg
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4110/img0168x.jpg

[Darkeist]

Haha thanks Blue. =)

Told the black hand didnt flow so i tried something else...

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091004_3.jpg

[Tonka]

benso try a bigger marker.

hah thanks blue.

leaks like just start out more simple and you will evolve from there dont try to be all crazy at first.

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/dale7.jpg

You guys think this A works better?

[OOPS!]

Yeah I like that A, its hard to tell what the D is.. and make the L a little straighter

[Tonka]

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/dale8.jpg

Ment to post this and haha ok cool oops will do

[BigBlueViolence]

It isn't the actual A that's the issue, in my opinion.
You just have to make them the same size.

[ChadWarden]

Tonka, dont fuck with the d. shit is solid, but the rest could use some fixing up. i'm thinking that the a needs to be up to scale with the rest of the letters and maybe som more flair with the e? but what the fuck do i know.


edit:this is towards your first pic, not the second.. fuck

[wager@tdot]

7093

A new word I've been working with. I like it.

[OOPS!]

Wager, looks clean. Fix the R, maybe make it capital

[wager@tdot]

Wager, looks clean. Fix the R, maybe make it capital

Thanks. I've only been writing for like a month. I couldn't really figure out what to do with the R, honestly. I thought about making it capital but I heard it's bad form to mix upper/lower case? I dunno.

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0484.jpg

[wager@tdot]

Nice, OOPS!. I already do my W's, A's and E's like that sometimes :)

[OOPS!]

I like your style man. Just fix that R and it's all gravy

[Tonka]

Thanks for the crits i was think about scale to.
thank oops your hand looks almost frisco haha

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0487.jpg

Mo crits! It's more legible now

[Tonka]

OPPS I LIKE IT

Your tags are wack sorry

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/siron.jpg


http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/benso.jpg


How is this

http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/jasonrholtz/dale9.jpg

[wager@tdot]

7094

Better?

[OOPS!]

Dale-I liked your old A better. The lowercase one. Just let your hand flow, try not to make sharp points

Wager- Looks better, try to round out the loop part of the R or something

[Tonka]

no not so many extensions

[Tonka]

ok oop and yesah but that is kinda what i am going for

[wager@tdot]

How 'bout this R? I like it.

7096

[faser]

^keep workin it you'll get it, lose the quotes tho.

[OOPS!]

Looks good man.

[Tonka]

Anyone wanna check out my graffiti review channel on youtube it is actually good. new videos every week

[<<Fathem>>]

so after a few days of lettering and stuff. i came up with a name that id prob preffer, shorter and simpler. heres a first tag for it. i think it flow together pretty good, but my L is boring. Im going to keep tryin a bunch a shit with this. but anyways, get some crits on this particular tag?

[wager@tdot]

AFL? Why... Also those aren't graffiti letters. They're just regular letters with an extra line. Also L's kind of suck in general, there's not a TON you can do with them but they are workable. Try adding more dimension to your letters, change them as much as you can/want to. And put them closer together/make them flow into each other.

[Mr yarbles]

Anyone wanna check out my graffiti review channel on youtube it is actually good. new videos every week

What is it?

[<<Fathem>>]

AFL? Why... Also those aren't graffiti letters. They're just regular letters with an extra line. Also L's kind of suck in general, there's not a TON you can do with them but they are workable. Try adding more dimension to your letters, change them as much as you can/want to. And put them closer together/make them flow into each other.

Ok, heres two out of three pages with random lettering. i just though that one would be good to change up and slowly turn into a tag...

[BigBlueViolence]

Are you a writer or a band?
That's a really weak name.



AFL? Why... Also those aren't graffiti letters. They're just regular letters with an extra line. Also L's kind of suck in general, there's not a TON you can do with them but they are workable. Try adding more dimension to your letters, change them as much as you can/want to. And put them closer together/make them flow into each other.
There isn't such a thing as "graffiti letters".
Graffiti is a noun, not an adjective.
It doesn't have to be any particular style,
it just has to be painted on a wall.
You're doing it WRONG.

[LeaksOne]

not to mention still all weak tags

[Mr yarbles]

Are you an idiot or a retard?
Cus that shit is bangin.
Only complaint I have is connect some of your letters together and throw in an arrow at the beggining and end.

[<<Fathem>>]

Are you a writer or a band?
That's a really weak name.

it was just a thought more then an actuall name change...i have however been working fathem over a bit. and im coming up with what i think looks decent...ill post one in a min or two of fathem....

[BigBlueViolence]

Use one line for the dash in your A and the dash in your F,
that'd be dope.

[Mr yarbles]

There you go bigblue
Sometimes it just takes someone else to realize you're wrong

[LeaksOne]

yarbles yarbles haha. fathem i hope your "new" tags are better then those AFL tags. simple letters look just as good as "graffiti letters"

[Mr yarbles]

On the real we should start doing this to everybody and making everyone just really terrible.
I mean it's their fault they're on the internet
Even tho I started here I still got told many times.
SOme of you retards don't even know when to stop

[LeaksOne]

you know....i think your right. blue you in??

[Mr yarbles]

Oh, he's in alright.

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah man, I'm down.

[<<Fathem>>]

Use one line for the dash in your A and the dash in your F,
that'd be dope.

like so? i kinda connected the dash to the bottom leg of the a as well, thought that might make it look better.

[wager@tdot]

Ok, heres two out of three pages with random lettering. i just though that one would be good to change up and slowly turn into a tag...

as for what is it. AFL- A Father Lies....memory of grandpa who passed away...and since he is technicly a father... woulda had to been there during ceremonys etc to understand.

Look, no offense but that's a bad reason to start writing. Would your grandpa be happy you're writing all over other people's shit? I don't know. You should write for yourself and nothing else.

But this is about the best I can come up with at the moment. These letters really suck ass.


7101

[Mr yarbles]

This reminds me of a time I was in the skatepark and this kid (who's now in the crew I'm in and my friend)
ANyway I was writing tesone all shitt and he just sat there and was like that's sick and shit
He told me like 2 months ago he really just wanted to me o get away from him cus I sucked so bad.
Funny shit.

[LeaksOne]

fathem put a arrow on the end of your L and quotation marks. just to spice it up a little bit

[BigBlueViolence]

Holy shit, those are both great.




oh my god I can't believe that people actually believe this shit.

[<<Fathem>>]

Look, no offense but that's a bad reason to start writing. Would your grandpa be happy you're writing all over other people's shit? I don't know. You should write for yourself and nothing else.

But this is about the best I can come up with at the moment. These letters really suck ass.


7101

w.e over the name, just drop it and act as though i never said that...

but from what big blue told me, (wich apparently now theyre all just out to make ppl terrible) letters are supposed to be the same size? and bars shouldnt make two seperate letters...iunno. im just doin my own shit in reality, workinon stuff that would make it look good to me...but i do like that little tag..

[Mr yarbles]

HAHAHA.
we're having a secret cross conversation.

[<<Fathem>>]

Holy shit, those are both great.




oh my god I can't believe that people actually believe this shit.

too bad i got some advice back when you were out to help. instead of just fuck around...and i know arrows are lame, one bar making two letters lame, different sized letters lame. so basicly trickin me into continuin with this charade is going to take a little more then you think..

[BigBlueViolence]

YOU REALLY ARE THE ONLY DUDE ON THlS THREAD, BRO.

[<<Fathem>>]

YOU REALLY ARE THE ONLY DUDE ON THlS THREAD, BRO.

well then wtf thread should i be in, bro.?

[LeaksOne]

hey hey. dont get snappy kid.

[<<Fathem>>]

hey hey. dont get snappy kid.

fuck off..i mean like fuck threads like thease are to assist ppl...and you guys are just being fags. like i did nothing wrong, i asked for help. like? christ...i have some t hat are more legit graffiti letters. but its not seeming to matter. everyon just says it terrible moves on and does help inmprove it..and then now your just out to make my shit look weaker. so basicly, i dont give a fuck about this place anymore. i know that some of the shit that none of you have seen is good. but w.e

[LeaksOne]

you probably like wear this like when your like sketchin huh??
http://rlv.zcache.com/valley_girl_tshirt-p2358527077757340413op2_400.jpg

if your guna be a little bitch about it go to the big boy threads. they give good help

[iDeemyouSiren]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/Graffffff001.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/ducttheman/Graffffff002.jpg
heres some tags ive been just messing with crits please

[OOPS!]

Hey draw a penis over the tag and it'll be dope

[<<Fathem>>]

you probably like wear this like when your like sketchin huh??
http://rlv.zcache.com/valley_girl_tshirt-p2358527077757340413op2_400.jpg

if your guna be a little bitch about it go to the big boy threads. they give good help

so i can be told to go back to toysRus? nah. im not trying to get snappy and shit. or be a little bitch. all i want is legit crits, instead of ppl making me worse. passing it off as getting better. like why not just gimme a hand? then maybee you wouldnt have to deal with shit work...

[OOPS!]

Honestly that shit looks fine to me dude.

[LeaksOne]

ill give you a hand










http://wwwdelivery.superstock.com/WI/223/1647/PreviewComp/SuperStock_1647R-82808.jpg
http://images.icnetwork.co.uk/upl/covtelegraph/may2008/8/0/B8FEEAD9-9DF6-A6AD-C74316E63CEDAF19.jpg
http://www.pbs.org/journeytopeace/yourturn/hand.jpg

[OOPS!]

Oh yeah the new thing dope writers are doing is putting hearts around all their shit

[<<Fathem>>]

Honestly that shit looks fine to me dude.

and with the letters closer together?

[OOPS!]

Na keep the letters seperated. How do you pronounce that? Just A.F.L.?

[LeaksOne]

no. ah-ful

[<<Fathem>>]

Na keep the letters seperated. How do you pronounce that? Just A.F.L.?

yeah a f l. and seperated is better? why do you think? i kinda preferred them separated, but i think close looks aiight.

[OOPS!]

Because the F and L looks combined and if someone didnt know what it said they'd be like, what the hell?

[<<Fathem>>]

Because the F and L looks combined and if someone didnt know what it said they'd be like, what the hell?

true. what about just disconnecting just the f, that way the letters still stay a little closer together. but the sharpie i used bled...made gay round spots where its supposed to be pointy...but somewhat like so...

[OOPS!]

yeah that looks alot better. I like it rounded more than sharp too.

[suparjafar]

fathem dont write afl lke an abbreviation wtf..think of a word that looks cool sounds cool and are your good letters. dont use A Father Lies or w.e you said it was in that other thread

getting better though

[<<Fathem>>]

yeah that looks alot better. I like it rounded more than sharp too.

it did give it a pretty weird twist...well haha, guess ill work from this...LEGIT suggestions?

[<<Fathem>>]

fathem dont write afl lke an abbreviation wtf..think of a word that looks cool sounds cool and are your good letters. dont use A Father Lies or w.e you said it was in that other thread

getting better though

ok, well in all honesty, this whole afl was a test thing, that just kinda worked sorta...but i know now that some of the stronger letters i have are a f l...and i can probably pull an e off..but now i gotta think on it for a while, for a legit name...then work out a tag.

[LeaksOne]

dont capatalize legit. you look like a jack ass. honestly some true crits your trying way too hard. round your letters. no need for the pointy letters. simple tags are the best ones. look up noxer and skuf and all those cats.

[<<Fathem>>]

dont capatalize legit. you look like a jack ass. honestly some true crits your trying way too hard. round your letters. no need for the pointy letters. simple tags are the best ones. look up noxer and skuf and all those cats.

theres something i havent herd, dont capatalize. iunno, its clearly going to take mad work for me to grasp lower case round letters...but isnt it more personal opinion on round/not round, capital/lower case....Cus superfajar said its gettin better, wich believe me, he had to go threw seeing ALOT of bullshit of mine to even have said that....iunno, who agrees on round lower case???

*wrote afl again just as a test on the lower case round...needs ALOT of work*

[<<Fathem>>]

oh and btw...the trying to hard thing, its just what i do..naturally givin it my all, wich sometimes is too much.

[OOPS!]

No he said dont capitalize legit when you type.. you said "LEGIT". Your tag looks like crap lowercase

[<<Fathem>>]

No he said dont capitalize legit when you type.. you said "LEGIT". Your tag looks like crap lowercase

yeah it does look shit lower case, i didnt catch on, just blazed a bowl...ok yeah ill keep upper case, and im gunna just go on, think of a name, try out some tags with it, post some shit in a few days or somethin.

[OOPS!]

How bout BAFL? Sounds like Baffle.. and you get to keep your existing shit

[Darkeist]

fuck this thread went like 5 pages in like 1 hour.

[<<Fathem>>]

fuck this thread went like 5 pages in like 1 hour.

my bad.

[<<Fathem>>]

How bout BAFL? Sounds like Baffle.. and you get to keep your existing shit

that does have a nice little ring to it, think im gunna snatch that name, thx oops...somethin like this? i think the b needs work...but as i said, just blazin atm, and from past, i cant do shit in my sketchbook high. so im callin it a night.

[OOPS!]

Yeah looks dope. Work on that B. Keep it up.

[Elno]

Agreed work on the B and keep it up

[BigBlueViolence]

no. ah-ful
This made me LOL

[Nurseofgonzo]

Just trying to figure out the basic shape..not sure if I would like it to be taller and tighter, or shorter and longer....

I don't have a digital camera..so it's on my iphone..sorry if it's not the best quality

[OOPS!]

What's it say? It's alright.. needs to be more legible imo

[Nurseofgonzo]

Allce...kinda a name that's stuck with me since highschool for some reason...:P...more legible, for sure for sure. I've been driving around today looking for inspiration, that's where I decided to run the cross though the whole thing..oh and I know it doesn't look like it but I am trying to work a star into the e..but that needs a ton of work

[Beats_His_Wife]

Trying a new name, sounded familiar but i dont really give a fuck.
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5321/lacrosse10.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)
Never done a D in a throw before so there bunk as hell

[OOPS!]

Yeah has potential.. I can do one real quick with my handstyle

[Beats_His_Wife]

Yeah has potential.. I can do one real quick with my handstyle

Yeah PM me I'll do one for you with your name

[OOPS!]

I'll just post it here. Did Allce too

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0491.jpg

[Nurseofgonzo]

I really like your second one on Mad...and the second on allce as well..

you have a pretty interesting style for sure

[Bars]

http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/8137/img000080s.jpg (http://img198.imageshack.us/i/img000080s.jpg/)

eh kinda shit.

oops - the second madman alright just the a looks not so great but its not your name so whatever. Dont mind the a on the first allce tho.

madman - the throw llooks legit.

[BigBlueViolence]

The second ones are the weakest of them all, I don't know why you guys are fucking telling him that.


On the real, dude, not even trolling you, don't listen to these fucking kids.
Both of the Alices are weak, and the first madman is alright, but the D and first M are fucked up.



Beats His Wife's shit is looking legit.
I can tell you are from Philly too, haha

[OOPS!]

I know it's weak. Chill. Haha

[Bars]

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3940/img000082n.jpg (http://img5.imageshack.us/i/img000082n.jpg/)

[OOPS!]

Bars that shit is hot

[Mr yarbles]

lol.

[BigBlueViolence]

I FUCKlNG KNOW, RIGHT?

[LeaksOne]

bars where the fuck is the spunk in that?? add some arrows or undelines or stars or quotes or somethin

[Mr yarbles]

Word dude
If I were you
I mean look at your hand it's got good potential to be a philly hand
GO look up some philly hands and try to imitate them
Then add a sick underline with a slash and a halo.

[Bars]

how bout i spunk in your hair.

what the fuck is a philly.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i38.tinypic.com/adnadi.jpg

[LeaksOne]

how bout you not be gay. fag boy. learn your graffiti kid. cant believe you dont know what a philly hand is.

[faser]

http://assets.sbnation.com/imported_assets/12457/phillycreamcheese2kg.jpg

philly style

[BigBlueViolence]

http://www.greatwraps.com/Philly-cheesesteaks.jpg
Philly Style

[Mr yarbles]

Filly Style

http://i33.tinypic.com/301j5go.jpg

[LeaksOne]

http://themixtapemonster.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/fresh_prince_cast.jpg
willy style

[Mr yarbles]

I lol'd

[Bars]

Was intrigued by these posts and looked philly style up, tried for awhile and gave up cuz it was pissing me off.

[LeaksOne]

you give up to easy squirt. try again.

[Bars]

The k just wont work.

[zennegen]

lol willy from philly hahahahaha. this thread makes me lul.

[Fetusr]

I came to give crits, I leave wanting a sandwich.

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/handsteezus.jpg

MA HANDZR!

[OOPS!]

Dope lose the adds on the left and top

[n8galicia]

i agree with oops... the star and halo are wack

[sike_21]

which one should i stick with??
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_7470.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

number 3 looks tough.

[mmmburgers]

Your S would look dope if it was flipped upside down.

[Epoc]

decent?
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2954/dsc01356c.jpg
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/5459/dsc01357y.jpg

[faser]

wack addons but the letters in the second one are pretty good

[Epoc]

wack addons but the letters in the second one are pretty good

your sister is a wack add on hombre. but i still use her.

[mmmburgers]

No forreals, those addons are whack as fuck.

[Epoc]

can never win in this bitch.


if one picture should be used to help us progress in art it shall be this

http://www.cssplay.co.uk/menu/fail.gif

i actually dont see them being wacker than any other add ons (its true we are our worst critics). but next sesh will be plain jane. just for you two.

[BlacktodaFuture]

need to work on

crits/ suggestions?

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/jhgtfyu002.jpg?t=1254925938

[OOPS!]

2 and 4 are dope

[Darkeist]

Safe , an un-letter crit...Do you have a marker thats not streaky? haha

[Beats_His_Wife]

Blacktoda- Stop with all the addons work with your letters first basic letters, yo.
Epoc- Drop the crown, But everything looks like its on its way to be bank.

Trying to get a lil more flow
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1601/lacrosse15.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

[faser]

your sister is a wack add on hombre. but i still use her.

someones desperate. the addons are fucking wack, accept that and get over it

[Mr yarbles]

Nevermind.

[Epoc]

someones desperate.

your right. she is pretty ass ugly.


ahah you "kids" need to stress less.

i was kinda trolling zennegen. but; produce something or keep your foot in your mouth there Nancy.

madman - i like the loose feel of it. 2nd down on right is my fave.

[.nolove.]

madman is a dope name...keep that shit.as for crits.just keep practicing.i mean thats all you really can do.

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0498.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i33.tinypic.com/t7k2gw.jpg

lol look what I found in my hotmail inbox
Way way back in the day

[.nolove.]

tesone?wow thats pretty horrible haha.how long ago was that?

[Mr yarbles]

4/24/08 haha not even that long ago
Boy did I suck some dick though.

[wager@tdot]

decent?
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2954/dsc01356c.jpg
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/5459/dsc01357y.jpg

Get that fucking crown out of there.

[Mr yarbles]

Shut.the.fuck.up.

[BigBlueViolence]

For real.

[Epoc]

supposed to be linked sparks. i guess not closing it still makes it look like a crown....

and even if it was a crown fuck it. if you can put a halo in and not be angelic you can put a crown in and not be king. getting sick of how taboo this crown shit is. its the safest crit ever. cause apparently somewhere someone agreed that crowns were reserved for legendary writers....
im going to start using a fucking toaster ovens to dot my I's. hopefully quiznos doesn't get pissed off....cause they truly make the best toasted sandwiches.

[faser]

halos should only be used on heaven spots anyways

[BigBlueViolence]

....you trollin', *****aaaaaaaa

[Elno]

http://captionsearch.com/pix/t1gb4klq3.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

halos should only be used on heaven spots anyways

Some of you guys are so retarted it's hilarious
Only toys give a shit about crowns.
and the only time good cats care about a crown is when a complete shit toy tries to rock one.

[BigBlueViolence]

The only people I ever see rocking crowns are toys and old school heads.
Shit's kind of weak, king or not.

[.nolove.]

halos should only be used on heaven spots anyways


man what the fuck is with you cats and this halo bullshit.


HEY FUCKTARDS.HALOS ARE PURELY AESTHETIC AND HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH HEAVEN SPOTS OR NOTHING OF THAT NATURE.ITS FOR SHOW.


seriously i have kids in my town who are sayin this shit now.the halo is just shit people put over their letters.ive heard it atleast 4 or 5 times this week and its getting really annoying explaining it to people.so i hope you fuckers see it.crust in particular.some are you kids are just dense i swear.

quoted for the motherfuckin truth.

[faser]

I should have made my sarcasm a bit more obvious... either way, successful troll is successful.

[BigBlueViolence]

idk man, trolling 2 people isn't entirely successful.
Decent troll was decent.

[faser]

Ok well, part time troll is partly successful?

Plus, it looked like they raged.

[Mr yarbles]

Retard troll should settle with mediocrity.

[gumOnShoe]

on an unrelated note: i've never seen you post anything other than that hand and a toss that was really blurry, mr.yarbles.

[Mr yarbles]

I used to post I'm too lazy to anymore

But just for you I'll post something maybe.

[gumOnShoe]

I used to post I'm too lazy to anymore

But just for you I'll post something maybe.

cool.

[Mr yarbles]

See I used to be pretty cool.

http://i33.tinypic.com/6iz31x.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/vzejk5.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/xga6e.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/14j97yd.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/s3ou1g.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/169kk5e.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2r77b6o.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/ehzn2r.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/2hye8at.jpg


Oh and if you really want to see more then just check out my flickr
http://www.flickr.com/photos/33669198@N08/

and I ain't afraid to admit that I've fallen off
I'm completely aware of it
I'm pretty much just waiting till I can move out of my parents house since I don't wana put them through it and stuff and I'll have my own shit and my own problems
That and I have shit to deal with
I still sketch alot though and I know what does and dosn't look good.

[gumOnShoe]

ahh, all of those look tough, how long you been at it?

[Epoc]

omg you used triangle dots. only predators can do thaaat.

i like several of em.

[Mr yarbles]

Probably two years
I wish I could get at it like that again
Just so much baggage gets along with graffiti after a while and you gotta motivate yourself tog et out there which I havn't been very great at lately.

oh yeah and epoc I have the throws done too
I've had them for like a week sorry :/

[OOPS!]

I swear to God the third one says Rapist Oner. Haha. That's fucked up

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, it does.
I think it's pretty brutal.

[Mr yarbles]

THose were the good days
now I can't even drop a good rapist flow

Oh the last one says rapist too

[Darkeist]

You had some dope tags when you wrote Rapist, i remember seeing some of those awhile back.

ignore the hoe stuff at the top with the arrow. ahaha just fucking arond there.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091008_2.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Bottom red two are fire

[KidReny!]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Straytags.jpg
crits?

[Mr yarbles]

Bottom one aint bad except for that t.

[KRE1]

http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/8668/003fo.jpg

practicing.

[Elno]

http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/8668/003fo.jpg

practicing.

I dnt rele like the L it looks out of place other than that i like it

http://i37.tinypic.com/243enh5.jpg
Crits would be great :)

[chiefy]

im digging the first one but they all look good in my eyes.

[KRE1]

Elno: maybe its just me but your tag looks like its reading CENO

if thats just an extension im looking at i would personally get rid of it so its not as confusing ya dig? but im diggin tha top right one

[fameone2009]

new tag my other ones smuk and kams r taken so here is one i use to do when i was younger but stop and now writing it again
http://i822.photobucket.com/albums/zz142/smukone/sspx0275.jpg
crits?

[Elno]

@chiefy alright cheers bro
@KRE1 i think i got to work on my lower e a bit and yeah i was tryin to give it more flare. Thanks for crits :p

[klic]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2630/3997372534_a02e81722c.jpg

newish style, pretty much the same old boring shit

elno - go simpler, make all your letters the same size

balek - lose the addons, drop the additional thing on your K

[shem]

cool ass bathroom tag.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2444/3997463112_2aed2dd16a.jpg

janek feelin it.

everyone else needs mad work.

[klic]

^looking dope, i wouldnt connect your e to your m though

[BigBlueViolence]

you M spreads out a lot too.
It's kind of like SHE/ \ / \
Tighten it up a bit, bring it closer to all the other letters.

[KRE1]

klic: i get what you saying but i always have a fear that if i dont put ANY extensions its gonna look like just regular lettering... which i dont want. lol. what do you think?

[Darkeist]

Yes, then you start beding the letters and adding add ons one at a time. not all at once.

[srile]

Not the greatest, but its a work in progress. It could have some quotes, lose the star on top of the ! and a bigger o i think.

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/5/l_470c08b55384484c81c605cf81f9cd57.jpg

[klic]

klic: i get what you saying but i always have a fear that if i dont put ANY extensions its gonna look like just regular lettering... which i dont want. lol. what do you think?

yeh, but by adding extensions, its taking away from the actual letters. get simple letters down first, be able to make them flow. you dont need addons to make a hand look good

[KRE1]

thanks for the advice guys

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/photo14.jpg
i love meanstreaks ima start using them.

psychosis - take the exclamation out of your last S it crowds it up a little too much, it looks good if you would seperate the letters and give them a little bit room to breathe, it looks a little squished together.

Janek - your N is incredibly ugly. Im sorry haha i just had to be blunt about it, at first i saw it as a lower case N then i realized it was upper case, you should just take off the two lines that make it upper case and leave it like a little n. if you know what i mean.

shem - lookin good, nice clean handy.

[BigBlueViolence]

Janek, I agree with Darkeist, it looks dope as a lowercase N, not so much as a capital.

Benso, the only thing I'd work on is making your E proportionate to the rest of the tag.
I would make the tail part start closer to the B, and make it bigger.

[Darkeist]

Word, i can see what you mean about it being a ltitle small kinda. Ill make it bigger next time, thanks i didnt notice that.

[BigBlueViolence]

It's not bad, not something I would laugh at if I saw it on the street,
just my personal taste, you know?

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/photo14.jpg
i love meanstreaks ima start using them.

psychosis - take the exclamation out of your last S it crowds it up a little too much, it looks good if you would seperate the letters and give them a little bit room to breathe, it looks a little squished together.

Janek - your N is incredibly ugly. Im sorry haha i just had to be blunt about it, at first i saw it as a lower case N then i realized it was upper case, you should just take off the two lines that make it upper case and leave it like a little n. if you know what i mean.

shem - lookin good, nice clean handy.

bumparrooo

[KRE1]

^^ i like that flow from your e to o.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0215.jpg?t=1255305410

[Darkeist]

bottom one looks good.

[.nolove.]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0215.jpg?t=1255305410

this E is very reminiscent of mine enit haha.dope.

[ChadWarden]

blue, the bottom one for sure is the better of the two.

the first bend in the e in cleaner and more oval-ish versus that harsh turn in the top one.
the a is kinda but in the corner since it's so small, so you might wanna make the bigger and see if that looks better. the bottom arrow is nice since the bends in it are all equal spaced, too.


but im thinking you could us some flair on the n. kind of a dull end to the tag.

[Mr yarbles]

I don't understand what the fuck you're talking about.

Once youg et good and fast you start to learn your tag dosn't look the same everytime
Quit trying to think the tag can be perfect or something the tag is dope as is.

[.nolove.]

dicks everywhere!!!

[mekosbc]

[QUOTE=Mr yarbles;1483434]See I used to be pretty cool.

http://i33.tinypic.com/6iz31x.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/vzejk5.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/xga6e.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/14j97yd.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/s3ou1g.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/169kk5e.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/2r77b6o.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/ehzn2r.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/2hye8at.jpg


Oh and if you really want to see more then just check out my flickr
http://www.flickr.com/photos/33669198@N08/
QUOTE]

BUMP

[-Empty-Can-]

BBV - i like your handstyle period

[ChadWarden]

I don't understand what the fuck you're talking about.

Once youg et good and fast you start to learn your tag dosn't look the same everytime
Quit trying to think the tag can be perfect or something the tag is dope as is.

fuck are you going off for.

im telling him about some shit he should try to avoid.

i told him why the top one looked bad and why the bottom one looked good.

he wanted crits right? or maybe i should just tell him its sick and try to help the megatoys instead?

[klic]

^he wasnt talking to you..

[BigBlueViolence]

http://stuffwhitedbagslike.files.wordpress.com/2008/07/chill-out-photographic-print-c12255139.jpeg

Y'all n****s getting mad over the internet.
I gladly accept any criticism.
I might not listen to all of it, but most of it does go into consideration.
Thanks for the input, chad.
It's kind of like yarbs said, I just pop it out quick, so they aren't all identical,
but I don't expect everyone to feel all of them, either.



this E is very reminiscent of mine enit haha.dope.
I think it's reminiscent of a generic capital E, mayne.
I don't claim to be mad original.
But I don't bite.
No hate, just sayin'.

[Mr yarbles]

I'm jus sayin little shit isn't going to get fixed youc an try and fix it but it will most likely not do anything when you're out bangin tags

[SK2]

http://i038.radikal.ru/0910/ac/e91a3433b466.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[suparjafar]

^^i cant really read that after s-e-w. dont make it so complicated so that its illegible, or maybe im just blind.

[<<Fathem>>]

So ive worked on my tag for a little while, and i've got various b's that ive tried.(dont mind how shit the afl looks, did em quicktime just to get an idea) Basicly heres two pages...personally im finding that the b in the bottom left of the first pic, or the b in the top left of the second page are the two best fitting...runners up being the two b's left and right at the top of the first page. anyways, crits?

[gumOnShoe]

the two bottom right Bs have potential.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics729.jpg

[.nolove.]

what does it say?

[-Empty-Can-]

stot - my first mop tag. came out weird. big space between my O and T. and i ran out of room for my second quotes lol

[.nolove.]

the t isnt very t like and dont overlap your o over your t.your letters are too spaced out too.bring them closer.

[-Empty-Can-]

they are really spaced out.lol i messed up on this one. i was kinda nervous because its like the busiest road in my city. What do you mean by not overlaping my O over my T?

[ChadWarden]

the arrow/underline kinda looks like a squiggly dick.

you might wanna avoid doing that, unless you're gay.

[Epoc]

go slower too.

[KRE1]

empty: seems like there is a lot going on in that tag. but like u said u were rushed for time so eh all gravy.

here's somethin im working on... just a bunch of different names im messing with nothing special. crits?

http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/8784/stillcap0020.png

thinkin i may stick wit ale for a while see how it goes. ideas? crits?

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/8231/stillcap0021.png

EDIT: some of those names are old and wasnt practicing em for use; just somethin to do.

[salem1]

7199

7200

7201

7202


hows my hand style
which one looks the best

[wager@tdot]

hey guys, i've been working on some new names (no pics atm, i'm not at home) but i'm starting to move away from WAGER as i think it's too much of a bite on my buddy who writes WENGER even though our styles are different, they sound so alike and look it too.

i've been messing around with different letter combinations and i'm starting to really like ZR (like ser) together, probably as an ending so now i'm looking for a first pair of letters, preferably with an E or an A... i can't seem to come up with a good combo... so maybe 3 with ZR at the end, i.e. BRUZR (bruiser).

any suggestions?

[KRE1]

empty: seems like there is a lot going on in that tag. but like u said u were rushed for time so eh all gravy.

here's somethin im working on... just a bunch of different names im messing with nothing special. crits?

http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/8784/stillcap0020.png

thinkin i may stick wit ale for a while see how it goes. ideas? crits?

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/8231/stillcap0021.png

EDIT: some of those names are old and wasnt practicing em for use; just somethin to do.

CRIT little doods

[suparjafar]

stot kinda odd space goin on in between the o and t. but i like the t itself


first time using paint, dad had some krylon lying around. yes i know lose the shitty star thing at the top of the w..

[KRE1]

snaw: get rid of that star thing off the W. and the quotes at the bottom. other than that i like the simp tag my dood.

now would u be so kind as to give up some crits for mah stuff as well?