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Royalblue
12-30-2009, 01:46 AM
Round 2
http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/MY%20blackbook%20sketching/DSCN0440.jpg
Zookyook
12-30-2009, 09:56 AM
5 is ur best bet... lose the little quotes in the C... and make ur I capital... look at the 'lime' battle i did and steal the I from my tag if u want hah... they all look real close though, try makin some skinny and tall n stuff, flex ur letters, and change that arrow if ur gonna use one
woonybomber
12-30-2009, 09:56 AM
lose the crown
ight gewd looks
woonybomber
12-30-2009, 09:58 AM
I'm not a fan. The R to E combo is weak. The R's look like messy B's. The A doesn't look like an A at all. I would take it away from trying to connect the letters. It doesn't work. And you aren't a king. Not trying to be an ass, I'm just stating my opinion of it.
werd but i never sed i waz king its juss a force of habbit to put the krown mad use to puttin t ther nd yeah i tryed not connect them but it looks lik ass hole
woonybomber
12-30-2009, 10:04 AM
five is gewd juss lose the arow
Daken26
12-30-2009, 02:11 PM
[img=http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/9870/1262202844961.th.jpg] (http://img51.imageshack.us/i/1262202844961.jpg/)
DAKE, critz please
Discretion
12-30-2009, 02:36 PM
get out them hills stalls and be real *****.
bra half the ppl in here do there shit on paper and post it so calm yourself.
i only posted that for crits
Royalblue
12-30-2009, 06:01 PM
http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/MY%20blackbook%20sketching/DSCN0441.jpg
Critz please. And tell me why you think so...thanks
woonybomber
12-30-2009, 06:30 PM
http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/MY%20blackbook%20sketching/DSCN0441.jpg
Critz please. And tell me why you think so...thanks
4 is stright juss space the letters juss a tad bit
Zookyook
12-30-2009, 08:29 PM
have fun with this puzzle...
B-4
I-none... dot it with somethin at least
Z-1
E-1
R-4
C-something new
woonybomber
12-30-2009, 09:29 PM
make your c round in the back but pionty on the top nd botom it would fit your name gewd
a tag with some effects :)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2563/4107113304_d7e1f599e5.jpg
mawks
12-30-2009, 11:59 PM
doap
Royalblue
12-31-2009, 03:28 AM
Thanks for the feedback fellas I appreciate it.
But I actually have to change my name AGAIN, because some dude in portland writes BSERK and has been for years now. SO I've decided to begin with, and stick with...DSERV. I checked flickr to make sure noone else writes this shit so it's official.
here's the handy. critz P's & Q's...
http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/MY%20blackbook%20sketching/DSCN0443.jpg
LeaksOne
12-31-2009, 04:30 AM
NO MORE ADD ONS
just focus on getting your letters straight
suparjafar
12-31-2009, 09:32 AM
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0278.jpg
MoistGarbageCan
12-31-2009, 10:48 AM
YES, you finally fixed that loop at the base of your R, i HATE THAT SHIT personally, lol.
here's a thought,don'''t even do the up and down part, you know what i mean? that part where you used to make the loop, don't do that just go straight in to the R.
ok, i'm bad at describing things or ideas, so here, maybe this'll help.
http://z.about.com/d/homeschooling/1/5/F/j/handzbr1.png
see how the arrow says to go down first? don't, once you start the R go straight up, and do the rest how you usually do it. hope it helps..
suparjafar
12-31-2009, 11:50 AM
yeah i gotcha. for future reference that isnt a piece of a paper
prefer
12-31-2009, 12:16 PM
that is well a shitty tag
suparjafar
12-31-2009, 01:52 PM
thanks for the crit!
herb
prefer
12-31-2009, 02:02 PM
hhaha no prob bitch ooh i mean uh toy, and i dont smoke herb the fuck haha, so im a herb i guesss im a spice lol, okay thanks haha, but the tag sucks
graffdabusup
12-31-2009, 02:05 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Reap.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Reeping.jpg
suparjafar
12-31-2009, 02:07 PM
your an idiot. saying the tag sucks isnt a crit.
prefer
12-31-2009, 02:10 PM
okay to be totally honest its a good tag alright its good, buuutt when you leave a tag dont you want to make it resemble a part of you like dont you want people to feel that shit like pouring emotion out on a wal, your tag aint doin that man, its like, yeah I was here whatev, thats what your tag says to me, make it flow more and still make it legible, thats a good tag, hope that helped
MoistGarbageCan
12-31-2009, 02:47 PM
lol what a troll. but yeah ROES granted you do suck, BUT you have improved so just keep at it.
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 03:35 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-4.jpg
crits^^^^
Royalblue
12-31-2009, 04:16 PM
don't giganticize the Z
get rid of the slashes on the Z tail
work with making the e capitalized
idk aout that trailing halo
try adding quotes into the O (adding flare in a O for handy's usually look pretty ill if you do it right)
just keep workin on it
hope that helps
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 04:29 PM
the tag is rear the is no z nd no o
i lik the lower case e it flows ezer thn the capitel e the o is rerally a cursive a nd the z is a cursive r lol
MoistGarbageCan
12-31-2009, 04:31 PM
work with making the e capitalized
idk man, i've seen some AWESOME Re combos. he'll get it eventually.
fuck it though, i think he should practice his whole shit.
i don't think he should be fucking with oneliners just yet either.
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 04:34 PM
idk man, i've seen some AWESOME Re combos. he'll get it eventually.
fuck it though, i think he should practice his whole shit.
i don't think he should be fucking with oneliners just yet either.
one liners r quick nd esay
MoistGarbageCan
12-31-2009, 04:56 PM
true, i'm sure you do you're oneliner fast, but does it look good? think about that.
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 04:58 PM
yeah i see were your koming from so i tryd this with the tips every one juss gave meh
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff010-2.jpg
crits^^^
MoistGarbageCan
12-31-2009, 05:15 PM
see? that last R looks better now.
stick the E closer to the R next time.
MM crew? the problem with that is it's BIG ASS-NESS, lol.
do some shit like that at the end of a tag or something.
fuck it, scrap that M, it looks bad.
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 05:21 PM
see? that last R looks better now.
stick the E closer to the R next time.
MM crew? the problem with that is it's BIG ASS-NESS, lol.
do some shit like that at the end of a tag or something.
fuck it, scrap that M, it looks bad.
ight i will
graffdabusup
12-31-2009, 07:52 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Reap.jpg
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Reeping.jpg
bump muthafuckaaaa
Mr yarbles
12-31-2009, 08:03 PM
I dig what you got there.
Time to step it up and get some more of your own flare
n8galicia
12-31-2009, 09:01 PM
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/6992/photoon20101231at1902.th.jpg (http://img695.imageshack.us/i/photoon20101231at1902.jpg/)
crits?
prefer
12-31-2009, 09:50 PM
looks like ya dont care
n8galicia
12-31-2009, 09:52 PM
um okay? what does that mean?
edit: i know the halo looks wack though haha
prefer
12-31-2009, 09:54 PM
dude ima draw you some handys just for you alright man becuase i know how hard it can be to come up with handstyles you know, so here goes my lecture, handstyles are interesting becuase you can do alot of different stuff with em for example you can give off a certain vibe with your handy, that i would say is a basic handy which isnt a bad thing, theres really nothing wrong withit but just for you ima give you some handy alphabet styles of my own if you dont mind to help you out. i;ll post it in a sec
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 11:06 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff018-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff017-1.jpg
here is a alphpet nd i did your tagg nd thn the other one is mi taggs i dont know wich ne to run with lol
Mr yarbles
12-31-2009, 11:09 PM
Please don't tell him to use that alphabet.
Looks like you had a stroke then before the ambulance came you're like "fuck it, I'll do some tags"
Truth.
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 11:15 PM
Please don't tell him to use that alphabet.
Looks like you had a stroke then before the ambulance came you're like "fuck it, I'll do some tags"
Truth.
AHAHHHAHAHHAHAHAH LMFAO i juss did simpel ass letters tht shyt wazz funny ^^^^^^^
n8galicia
12-31-2009, 11:35 PM
I know you guys are trying to help...at least I think so, but instead of giving me a damn alphabet, what can I do to improve my handstyle?
woonybomber
12-31-2009, 11:36 PM
i dont know how to tell in werds tht y a juss drew you one lol
graffdabusup
12-31-2009, 11:59 PM
LOL i think the pics of the tags i posted are invisible.... nobody even said they Blow
n8galicia
01-01-2010, 12:01 AM
looks alright to me
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 12:07 AM
some stright one liners
prefer
01-01-2010, 03:49 AM
I know you guys are trying to help...at least I think so, but instead of giving me a damn alphabet, what can I do to improve my handstyle?
just keep practiing it man, the more you do the better it will get man promise
Royalblue
01-01-2010, 04:52 PM
alright I feel I'm ready to get up with this now. critz if u think it's ready or not. thanks
http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/MY%20blackbook%20sketching/DSCN0450.jpg
prefer
01-01-2010, 04:53 PM
cant reall y read it all that well
faser
01-01-2010, 05:02 PM
toy
Xfish
01-01-2010, 05:49 PM
i know i know im a toy and it suks but does anyone have any ideas on how to improve? http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/1926/img000022t.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/i/img000022t.jpg/)
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 05:52 PM
you need some beter markers nd faser no shyt this is the toy forums ewww^^^ i dotn wonna say ne thing els kus it will be roud y r u wrighting xfish tht is the most stupidest name eva
Xfish
01-01-2010, 06:00 PM
lol it was a sharpie i have some paint pens somewhere here and xfish i like it me and my frined came up with it and what you mean i dont wonna say anything kus it will be round?
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 06:18 PM
you need work nd the marker thing waz for some one els nd you juss need a lot of work make all your lewtters dif do you wont meh to do one for you to run with ???
Xfish
01-01-2010, 06:22 PM
that might help thanks :)
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 06:24 PM
ight hold on
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 06:29 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff015-1.jpg
there not tht great butt juss run with it nd add your own swagga
Xfish
01-01-2010, 06:30 PM
sure thing thanks alot for the help i needed it
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 06:32 PM
no prob but soem one is gonna be lik dotn use tht he sucks do your own kus every one on this web site hatess lol
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 06:38 PM
toy
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff014-1.jpg
haha thts you lol lmfao the left side is for faser nd the right side is some haddys crits^^^
Xfish
01-01-2010, 07:23 PM
ok ive been workin on it and its gettin beter still no where near good but it mighteve improved tell me what you think and is there any tips you can suggesthttp://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4025/49720502.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/49720502.jpg/) http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/49720502.jpg/1/w352.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img19/49720502.jpg/1/)
espicaly that one in the middle
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 07:27 PM
make oyur letters full not chicken scrach nd it is getten better
n8galicia
01-01-2010, 08:16 PM
http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/8756/photoon20100101at1813.jpg (http://img693.imageshack.us/i/photoon20100101at1813.jpg/) http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/photoon20100101at1813.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img693/photoon20100101at1813.jpg/1/)
crits? thanks..
xfish- I would change your name, it doesn't sound like a great flowing one but if you can make it work that's chill too. but write it simply first, like how you would read it out of a book. then progress and add your own style
woonybomber
01-01-2010, 08:27 PM
your handdy is gettin better euks
Royalblue
01-01-2010, 08:44 PM
Xfish.
I really suggest you change your name. That's seriously the wackest name I've ever heard in graffiti, for real.
And dude, you need to practice for hours and hours and hours. Don't even think about adding flair, quotes or underlines until you at least have a decent grasp of a good handy style. Just spend time looking at peoples hand styles from this site, 12ozprophet.com and other graff sites and get ideas. you have a lot of work a head of you but with lots of persistence and effort, it will pay off.
Goood luck
btw, any critz on my last post?? I'd appreciate it
Con-Artist
01-01-2010, 10:37 PM
Xfish- beat crits I can give are look up caligraphy, copy ur favorite ones.
New hand, not good yet.. Y'all feelin it yet?
Con-Artist
01-01-2010, 10:57 PM
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/8cb8d1bf.jpg
Xfish
01-01-2010, 10:59 PM
hmm yeah maybe i shud change my name ill try to think about it and i kno i gotta lota work but ill do it for some reason i really wana be good at graff even thou i suck horribly now
Xfish
01-01-2010, 11:32 PM
ok ok hb flash or shutr those sound better eh?
BlacktodaFuture
01-01-2010, 11:48 PM
you should write DUSH or PNES or SUNA or PWHO
I have a new tag style! :) Is it good or shit? Reply please!
http://www.flickr.com/photos/44068141@N05/4236384882/
prefer
01-01-2010, 11:59 PM
yeah euks is gettin alot better, con artist, that tag is cool, i like it.
Royalblue
01-02-2010, 01:08 AM
do NOT write flash. Guarenteed hundreds if not thousands of writers have already written than .
maybe stutr...
whatever name you come up with, be sure to search it on flickr to see if someone else has or is already writing it. also, say you do decide to write stutr and you flickr to find out someone already writes 'stuter' or studer' or anything that sounds like it, change the name. Come up with a name that NO ONE else has. Be original you, nowatimsayin...
Before choosing DZERV, i was thinking about either VIRTUE, or EXZIST....try those out, they are sick names and unclaimed...
Xfish
01-02-2010, 11:22 AM
ok thanks ill look em up
Xfish
01-02-2010, 11:27 AM
and i like exzist alot
Mr yarbles
01-02-2010, 01:03 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff014-1.jpg
haha thts you lol lmfao the left side is for faser nd the right side is some haddys crits^^^
You fucking suck.
LeaksOne
01-02-2010, 05:18 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60073.jpg
woonybomber
01-02-2010, 06:53 PM
You fucking suck.
your mom bitch
Royalblue
01-02-2010, 07:48 PM
leaks one...
I like the top left one the most.
The S is dope, space the I more, tweak the R and mess around with it more, try making the O a piece sign. I would if I had an O in my name...
LeaksOne
01-02-2010, 10:58 PM
thanks but um no. theres no way im putting a peace sign in my O.
n8galicia
01-02-2010, 11:13 PM
lol that would look wack
175~PROPHET
01-04-2010, 05:23 AM
which shud i focus on? what shud i change? crits welcome...
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm406/Bullet2jz/100104_220119.jpg
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm406/Bullet2jz/100104_220612.jpg
M3KA1!
01-04-2010, 07:20 AM
thanks but um no. theres no way im putting a peace sign in my O.
hahaha cmon leakies you dont want a cute lil peace sign in thurrrrr?
woonybomber
01-04-2010, 08:07 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff004-4.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-6.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff006-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff008-2.jpg
juss some home made mop tagg
critts^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^
Flawless Victory
01-04-2010, 08:21 PM
thanks but um no. theres no way im putting a peace sign in my O.
what about a smiley face, yo?
Darkeist
01-04-2010, 08:43 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100104.jpg
i need some halp.
reor - make your R's more similair, also the Re looks kinda crowded
kasper - theres no flow there really...
siron - i feel the top left is the best
woonybomber
01-04-2010, 08:46 PM
it is rear but i fuck up the a im bout to juss right reor lol
LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 09:08 PM
hahaha cmon leakies you dont want a cute lil peace sign in thurrrrr?
what about a smiley face, yo?
disregard the bad lighting
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60074.jpg
for some odd reason i accidently drew O's on the second one so i just made it people
ps im not looking for crits on this so dont bother. crit my other ones towards the top of the page
MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:09 PM
make that bitch a capital I.
LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 09:10 PM
ive tried it looks weird. i shall attempt it again
MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:12 PM
idk, i think the lowercase looks weird,
cause on the top there's like an awkward space between the top area of the S and I.
i just think a capital I will fix that shit.
LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 09:14 PM
I will try gosh darn it.
Darkeist
01-04-2010, 09:23 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100104.jpg
i need some halp.
reor - make your R's more similair, also the Re looks kinda crowded
kasper - theres no flow there really...
siron - i feel the top left is the best
i received no critisizm
woonybomber
01-04-2010, 09:26 PM
i think the letter r way to close to echother and you need a diff s and if you got a s nd a z in your tagg try to make them the same if you know wat i mean
n8galicia
01-04-2010, 09:47 PM
snoozr- the z and the r don't really flow well together, but it looks pretty good
175~PROPHET
01-05-2010, 12:54 AM
ok, what about these 2? the p and e are too close together i reckon...
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm406/Bullet2jz/100105_172953.jpg
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm406/Bullet2jz/100105_172924.jpg
n8galicia
01-05-2010, 01:14 PM
prophet- I'm liking the bottom one. The R in the first one can use some fixing up
Stuck
01-05-2010, 02:27 PM
go simpler and for gods sake dont make letters join in ur tag for example in the first one the p and the e...biig nay nay
n8galicia
01-05-2010, 03:14 PM
http://i46.tinypic.com/xpvxac.jpg
dunno if I should make the E capital
woonybomber
01-05-2010, 03:16 PM
cap e and a better s
ShokZ
01-05-2010, 03:46 PM
http://imgkk.com/i/f4xOlX.jpg
lookin for sum feedback and which ones better
Zookyook
01-05-2010, 03:48 PM
euks man i havent seen much progression in ur tags... use ur imagination! hah... for real though, try somethin new it might work a lot better, start from scratch...
and kasper, dont outline tags with any kind of 3d it looks bad... and if u make the top of ur P and R sharp like the top of ur S itll match better, and make the A capital
and to shokz... make ur H capital, itll flow better, and dont cross the O...
use chisel tip markers to practice ur tags!
woonybomber
01-05-2010, 03:50 PM
not being mean they bouth suck get rid of the slashes on your letters nd the cross thingy in the o nd juss go way simpeler juss right it like you were doing your home work or some thing nd juss keep practicen
ShokZ
01-05-2010, 03:55 PM
thanks guys
n8galicia
01-05-2010, 04:27 PM
lol my letter structure is all messed up
ShokZ
01-05-2010, 05:13 PM
http://imgkk.com/i/33gx1X.jpg
had another go
n8galicia
01-05-2010, 05:55 PM
shokz: I don't like any of your letters
http://i50.tinypic.com/vynptd.jpg
here's my go, dunno if its much of an improvement lol
Zookyook
01-05-2010, 05:58 PM
i think the chisel tips did both of u good... both improved...
shokz i dont like the extensions on the Z...
euks i think u could maybe change the U and K, they look too plain, and move ur quotes in so theyre right up to the letters without touching
and theyll both look better with underlines... and practice
woonybomber
01-05-2010, 07:08 PM
wow shokz its not gewd but it is way better the the other one nice inprovment
honestly euks i think thats just a bad name. cant find any type of flow with it....
shokz youll get there keep practicing.
Darkeist
01-05-2010, 07:40 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100105.jpg
just fucking around. idk about the extension on the R though..
euks - like said before, maybe you should test out other letters, it seems to me you cant really get a flow with those letters at all...
shokz - go simpler, i think your trying too hard, not much flows.
n8galicia
01-05-2010, 08:55 PM
Ill practice my handies some more, haven't really done em too much. Ill experiment with other names too, but euks got a nice ring to me
175~PROPHET
01-06-2010, 12:35 AM
thanks for the tips
yeh the p and e werent meant to join i sorta ran out of room quicker than i thought i would :D
ill get onto it :)
transmission
01-06-2010, 04:05 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8075/80648058.jpg
tips?
BlacktodaFuture
01-06-2010, 04:07 PM
here
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03206-1.jpg?t=1262814675
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03205.jpg?t=1262814737[/QUOTE]
transmission
01-06-2010, 04:08 PM
damm u from jersey?? thats mad ill
BlacktodaFuture
01-06-2010, 04:11 PM
^nope, i was watching the show and a commercial came on.
transmission
01-06-2010, 04:13 PM
pfff that show is bullshit man jersey aint like that at all.... fuckin guitos but whatever nice handstyle
Darkeist
01-06-2010, 04:50 PM
does anybody even remember the "rule" give crits to get them?
lulz
Culture_Shock
01-06-2010, 04:59 PM
Some of you might not appreciate the crayon steez, but it's all i have at my desk. I just want to know which O looks better, with the leg of the R in it or not.
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2880/bsci1.jpg
Snoozr- you're staying nice and simple, I'm sure bsci is very pleased. Remember kids when it comes to graffiti follow the rules...
your tag has potential for a good one liner, im jealous.
edited for huge fucking image, and also tropical typhoon mike and ikes taste like urinal cakes.
transmission
01-06-2010, 10:57 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8075/80648058.jpg
tips?
Crits plzzz
and btw those god dam mike and ikes do taste like urinal cakes ik excactly what u mean and I like the first O better
Culture_Shock
01-07-2010, 12:03 AM
It looks good so far. tighten up your letterforms, make sure the E is an E, work on that lowercase A. and that exclamation lost me at first, i thought you were putting a halo under your tag, which is shit I ain't seen before, so I'm gonna start doing it...
RemoZ
01-07-2010, 01:14 PM
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/418/photo6yx.jpg
n8galicia
01-07-2010, 01:29 PM
I was thinking bout renz, and I saw some flix online. Don't know where they get up, but might be ok if I take it?
n8galicia
01-07-2010, 01:29 PM
I was thinking bout renz, and I saw some flix online. Don't know where they get up, but might be ok if I take it?
cornelious
01-07-2010, 01:34 PM
heres my new tag
http://i754.photobucket.com/albums/xx182/cornelious101/Mobile%20Uploads/1259195255.jpg
crits?
Zookyook
01-07-2010, 01:46 PM
hey n8... just pick a name that means something to u and go with it... dont try to just find a name no one has and write it for that reason only... make that shit mean something, fuck other people that write it, if it bothers u u can always put a number 2 after it lol
and evens7 i dont like that, maybe cuz it looks like it was done on mspaint... get some markers homes... make ur letters touch but not overlap, and just practice with easier letters first, ur N looks like an h
my question is why would you draw it on your computer and then instead of saving and uploading, you decide to take a picture of your computer screen which you then have to upload to your computer save and upload to the internet?
Zookyook
01-07-2010, 02:02 PM
... it would show too much shitty detail i think lol.... no offense evens7
Darkeist
01-07-2010, 06:11 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100107.jpg
n8galicia
01-07-2010, 09:53 PM
dark: I'm liking your letters, not too big a fan of the Z though.
http://i48.tinypic.com/2m7tfk5.jpg
Darkeist
01-08-2010, 01:18 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100107.jpg
renze make it flow more, dont use a 3 instead of an E, doesnt really look good.
Darkeist
01-08-2010, 02:02 PM
renze make it flow more, dont use a 3 instead of an E, doesnt really look good.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100108.jpg
eh
bored.. some shitty ass handstyles..
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2804/4257519895_1d2952ac9f_o.jpg
BlacktodaFuture
01-08-2010, 08:15 PM
here
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03206-1.jpg?t=1262814675
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03205.jpg?t=1262814737[/QUOTE]
bump bc it was on last night haha and crits too
snoozr: not bad, ive never been on for arrows.
shem: i like
kace: make sure that yur C looks like a C and not a O
RemoZ
01-08-2010, 11:22 PM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/134/l_760419dd77a94c57b2c31bf2fb5a8831.jpg
Bump for Crits
Blacktoda: Looks good, the first snore looks like wore haha
Kace: make it simpler. Sometimes a good handstyle is just writing it normally with little style. an underline and exlacmation point can really do alot
Messer
01-09-2010, 10:46 AM
shem: i like one on the bottom of the page.
remoz:nice and simple, i dig.
tag practise, i'm fucking snowed in:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/handypractiseeeee.jpg
Xfish
01-09-2010, 02:17 PM
blacktodafuture: really like the second one
Messer: dude im snowed in too it 20 somthn degrees outside and cars are spinning wheels on the ice
massacreman
01-09-2010, 02:18 PM
jers/backtothafuture you are the only decent one in 3 pages
nice stuff man
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2765/4259600839_a3ab79351a.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/4260356744_6843888846.jpg
Vagrant
01-09-2010, 04:04 PM
Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle
Word: Doner | Deadline: Saturday, January 16, 2010
One entry per person. | PM your entries to me (Vagrant).
Damn... I want to enter that but its sunday already :mad:
PRANEONE
01-10-2010, 08:23 PM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/2285/picture054th.jpg
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9981/picture053wl.jpg
BlacktodaFuture
01-10-2010, 08:31 PM
Damn... I want to enter that but its sunday already :mad:
check the date dumbass
RADAWG
01-10-2010, 10:18 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0109101316.jpg
Prane- Lose the star for now but your on the right track keepin it simple.
Darkeist
01-10-2010, 11:32 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100108.jpg
eh
bamp
Flawless Victory
01-11-2010, 12:21 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0109101316.jpg
Prane- Lose the star for now but your on the right track keepin it simple.
Why the fuck are you rocking forks up?
are you trying to get all your shit lined/yourself stabbed?
Darkeist
01-11-2010, 01:16 AM
whats "forks up"?
anyone wanna help me with my gay ass name lol all my tags blows..: Kow... Kowster... 269ster.. (all mean kow lol) or cow
.nolove.
01-11-2010, 10:12 AM
whats "forks up"?
you gonna get stabbed.by a bunch of kings...hahaha.
dont use pitchforks like that thats GD shit you could get fucked up for that.
.nolove.
01-11-2010, 10:13 AM
anyone wanna help me with my gay ass name lol all my tags blows..: Kow... Kowster... 269ster.. (all mean kow lol) or cow
you cant right kow becuase its to close to kaws...you should find a new name guy...
you cant write kow becuase its to close to kaws...you should find a new name guy...
corrected in bold
and ummm nah me mommy even calls me cow
when i got outta high school they announced me as cow... soo nahh
prefer
01-11-2010, 01:46 PM
Heres
Zookyook
01-11-2010, 02:17 PM
god damn prefer thats pretty good... ill see what i can do for that battle
.nolove.
01-11-2010, 03:15 PM
corrected in bold
and ummm nah me mommy even calls me cow
when i got outta high school they announced me as cow... soo nahh
dont correct me.i meant what i said and i meant how i wrote it...i know kaws personally..i have him on speed dial as a matter of fact(we frequently call eachohter to swap recipes) and i know for a fact that he would be mad pissed if you wrote that.so dont...unless you want the wrath of kaws on your ass.and i dont think you do...
both are shitty (haven't really tried ether yet) but which should i pursue? sinc or birk.
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image51.jpg?t=1263256669
Darkeist
01-11-2010, 07:05 PM
you cant right kow becuase its to close to kaws...you should find a new name guy...
get over it. people are ghonna write the same thing/close to the same thing, stop crying about it. no one cares how close you and your boyfriend are. what the fuck is he going to do about some kid over the internet writing something CLOSE to his name. if hes gonna get his panties up in a bunch over that, then tell him to grow the fuck up.
Darkeist
01-11-2010, 07:08 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100108.jpg
eh
bump.
dont correct me.i meant what i said and i meant how i wrote it...i know kaws personally..i have him on speed dial as a matter of fact(we frequently call eachohter to swap recipes) and i know for a fact that he would be mad pissed if you wrote that.so dont...unless you want the wrath of kaws on your ass.and i dont think you do...
Wouldn't mind
.nolove.
01-11-2010, 08:03 PM
get over it. people are ghonna write the same thing/close to the same thing, stop crying about it. no one cares how close you and your boyfriend are. what the fuck is he going to do about some kid over the internet writing something CLOSE to his name. if hes gonna get his panties up in a bunch over that, then tell him to grow the fuck up.
lol your fucking slow.of course i dont know kaws.if you would have paid attention to anything ive said in the last 3 years ive been here you would have known my position on this subject...
skull-e
01-11-2010, 09:26 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3475/3945116837_f0fc27fbb5_b.jpg
http://www.flickr.com/photos/mentholdarts/3945121175/sizes/l/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/mentholdarts/3945902134/sizes/l/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/mentholdarts/3945127199/sizes/l/
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2583/3799286480_8771648ef9_b.jpg
Darkeist
01-11-2010, 09:59 PM
lol your fucking slow.of course i dont know kaws.if you would have paid attention to anything ive said in the last 3 years ive been here you would have known my position on this subject...
I'm sorry im not reading your posts like they fucking matter. i just skimmed them. your acting stupid. if your sarcastic. your not funny. you caught me in a bad mood, sorry.:mad:
Royalblue
01-12-2010, 02:37 AM
bump.
The S is koo, everything else ain't, especially the z is looks like a 2. get rid of the quotes and arrow, or change the way your write them. make the arrow go to the right or up, not down.
keep experimenting with CAPS, all with lower case etc, cuz honestly, that's not looking good. Just keep practicing.
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 06:37 AM
my entry for the doner battle... haters hatehttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2757/4266979185_7edae94b99.jpg
skull-e
01-12-2010, 08:11 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2604/3945121175_a86e2c158d_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2502/3780924287_0097d1ac2d_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2650/3779226607_145811d549_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2509/3778709495_4bb1d3d0f0_b.jpg
Because I'm that cool of a chef...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2555/3945114935_4def47c60d_b.jpg
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 10:01 AM
please give up... or stick to ruining things mommy paid for... god damn rich kids and their marc ecko complexes
M3KA1!
01-12-2010, 01:21 PM
my entry for the doner battle... haters hatehttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2757/4266979185_7edae94b99.jpg
not bad mayne. i aint got shit for handies or throws. they need a lot of work. front up and honest
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 01:24 PM
thanks... prefer actually had a dope one but he took it down... every time i see a handy battle that i missed i regret it cuz i know i can get SOME goddamn votes lol duke usually just rapes people... hes a predator
Loki X Sho
01-12-2010, 01:27 PM
i dig the steez but there are way too many dots man
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 01:33 PM
yea i knew id get a lot of that, and i feel ya...but i was tryin somethin new to me, kinda making it look like it has more motion to it... thanks though
M3KA1!
01-12-2010, 01:34 PM
thanks... prefer actually had a dope one but he took it down... every time i see a handy battle that i missed i regret it cuz i know i can get SOME goddamn votes lol duke usually just rapes people... hes a predator
yea dukes got his shit under ball n chain. its pretty dope. but i do agree with loki. lose some of the dots. other than that its pretty clean. p.s. i sent that to the vagr
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 01:39 PM
man we gotta talk on one thread lol ... ill just wait and let vagr post mine when the time comes... and fuck u i like my dots! (side note: i can totally see where u guys r comin from, i even said after i uploaded the pic "too many dots" but i gotta maintain my integrity)
M3KA1!
01-12-2010, 01:44 PM
yea i knew id get a lot of that, and i feel ya...but i was tryin somethin new to me, kinda making it look like it has more motion to it... thanks though
well by all means try out new shit. and dont let my opinion sway you. do what yer feelin ya dig? ill post some handies later but ima nod back off. catch you cats later
M3KA1!
01-12-2010, 01:49 PM
double post. okay disregard my last post in the int. thread. we'll wait on vag
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 01:51 PM
i was waitin for u to figure that out lol... well keep the chat to the chat thread for shit like this from now on
prefer
01-12-2010, 02:02 PM
zook york pretty sweet man i like it, it reminds me of a horror film with all seriousness becuase it kinda looks like a ghost or something either way its cool
Zookyook
01-12-2010, 03:14 PM
hah... its weird that i know what u mean... i think its cuz i wanted the 'one' to be separate and the D and R are kinda creepy in a way
n8galicia
01-12-2010, 03:27 PM
sorry if this is hard to see...
http://i48.tinypic.com/263ge1i.jpg
suparjafar
01-12-2010, 03:48 PM
dude try and write all your letters capital and if you cant, atleast the same size horizontal AND vertical.
daoist
01-12-2010, 07:58 PM
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7152/tagakag.jpg
--
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/4180/savao.jpg
CO_SNAIL
01-13-2010, 12:23 AM
been a long time, new tag "iwnsb" let me know what ya think
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h221/BHALE1987/CIMG0833.jpg
notos
01-13-2010, 01:07 AM
"notos"
new to the game
any suggestions
http://i47.tinypic.com/2rgksg1.jpg
notos
01-13-2010, 01:07 AM
"notos"
new to the game
any suggestions
http://i47.tinypic.com/2rgksg1.jpg
massacreman
01-13-2010, 08:59 AM
ur better then the half of this forum
this is my advice: dont double post
notos
01-13-2010, 12:07 PM
^^ yo thanks massacre and i double clicked the submit button and i guess it double posted, my bad, didnt mean to spam my shit
Zookyook
01-13-2010, 12:36 PM
not my half! OOOOOH!!!! hahah jk man... i dont like how the cross of the T goes over the top of the S like that, make the s pointy on top or make the cross of the T loop around it or something... try some new shit so we can see what styles ur workin with and give better crits
oh and u can delete ur posts just click the edit button....
Darkeist
01-13-2010, 02:53 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Grafffeeety/photo20.jpg
ignore the word tag. i didnt know what i was thinking. proportion is funked. haha anyway.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Grafffeeety/photo19.jpg
lol. oops.
Zookyook
01-13-2010, 02:57 PM
that is some shitty ass ink whatever ur using lol.... and it looks like u tried to squeeze it the entire time and u went real slow... be patient, drips will come if u lay it out right... u should just write ur name normal and then squeeze for the underline so u get drips without losing ur word... thats a good start at least
LeaksOne
01-13-2010, 03:00 PM
daoist that sewer is raw but im not really feelin the second one
co snail not a fan of that at all and why are you writing random letters?
notos do a tag with a skinnier marker. im not feelin that one.
snoozr i like your tags. how come you didnt go bigger?
Darkeist
01-13-2010, 03:09 PM
that is some shitty ass ink whatever ur using lol.... and it looks like u tried to squeeze it the entire time and u went real slow... be patient, drips will come if u lay it out right... u should just write ur name normal and then squeeze for the underline so u get drips without losing ur word... thats a good start at least
um it was real cold, reall flimsy mop and i squeezed a shtiload on accident. i didnt underline it. i went fast with it.
and the reason i didnt go bigger is, that marker sucks i thought it was a good marker, but not for outisdes, so i just did little odd tags in weird places. shits fun.
I got alot of other flicks, but theyre tags from awhile back that have been runnin for a minute.
Zookyook
01-13-2010, 03:20 PM
i know u didnt underline it... im tellin u to just write ur name like u normally would without drips then squeeze for an underline and ull get drips that dont cover ur letters
Darkeist
01-13-2010, 03:33 PM
i didnt mean to drip it.
notos
01-13-2010, 04:08 PM
http://i46.tinypic.com/2uf6r1c.jpg
theres different styles i just came up of...
the blue one is a oneliner and the orange one..
and some pen ones cuz some guy wanted thin lines so ye
suggestions?
Darkeist
01-13-2010, 04:12 PM
you shoudl take off the extension on the capital N and make it regular, i think thatd look better. i like the ones with a little N too.
notos
01-13-2010, 04:22 PM
^^ thanks dark
ima try that,
and ye i prefer the ones with minuscule "n" but a guy said to show other styles..so i mixed it up a bit ha
let me see some of your stuff dark?
that dripper u posted..i couldnt understand anything lol
skull-e
01-13-2010, 05:33 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2604/3945121175_a86e2c158d_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2502/3780924287_0097d1ac2d_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2509/3778709495_4bb1d3d0f0_b.jpg
Because I'm that cool of a chef...
bump 4 prez
skull-e
01-13-2010, 05:35 PM
please give up... or stick to ruining things mommy paid for... god damn rich kids and their marc ecko complexes
typical bombing science reply...im not even gonna bother dealing with you
Zookyook
01-13-2010, 05:37 PM
thats great because u have nothing to say to me to change my mind... ur pics let me form an opinion already.......... rich boy
oh and ur fucking terrible.... terrible
sSimpleMindeded
01-13-2010, 05:46 PM
What is the saying...pot calling a kettle black?
fucking loser.
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/3050/grok3.th.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/grok3.jpg/)
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8237/grok8.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/i/grok8.jpg/)
flicks for talking.
Zookyook
01-13-2010, 05:52 PM
more shit talking now? dont get ur panties in a bunch... some kids shouldnt bother writing
skull-e
01-13-2010, 05:55 PM
do you come on to bombingscience hoping to make a name for yourself in this so called community by going to the TOY forum and ripping on some next dudes
and for what? love? respect? self satisfaction? pft...
simpleminded,
I don't the your analogy
edit* never mind, i googled it
sSimpleMindeded
01-13-2010, 05:56 PM
its not shit talking if its true. and it is true. your right some kids shouldnt write and since you dont already why dont you just stop while your ahead :D
skull-e
01-13-2010, 05:58 PM
more shit talking now? dont get ur panties in a bunch... some kids shouldnt bother writing
tl;dr
wahwah
shut the fuck up and get off your computer
put in some work
edit
your entry from the donor battle is terrible
how dare you call me out on my post if your hand doesnt burn anything in my post...
Zookyook
01-13-2010, 05:59 PM
typical bombing science reply...im not even gonna bother dealing with you
and see, i knew ya would because u BOTHERED writing this to talk shit to me... and i have respect for and from some people on here but when i see kids from the burbs in mansions doing graff it pisses me off because they dont really need to in my opinion, mom and dad probably buy all ur paint and markers and then u probably go write on shit where theres no other graff and in parks and all that, not to mention u suck... and ur boyfriend coming in on ur side doesnt make u right about shit
ok well i see both of u wanna 'talk shit' and ive been writing longer than both of u put together so battle me or shut the fuck up, pm me with a word if u wanna get embarrassed... im gonna go eat some spaghetti lol cuz thats what us po folk eat sometimes... toys
skull-e
01-13-2010, 06:03 PM
You dont know anything about me where ui live where im from where ive been or where im going
if you're trying to tell me that im rich because of the picture of me cooking
not my house
if you want to settle this reasonably, lets have a handstyle battle
iil burn you anyday
if you're down pm me
the words dutch
sSimpleMindeded
01-13-2010, 06:08 PM
talk talk talk talk talk. and just wondering how would you know if you have written longer then me...and if you have why are you still so much worst then me?
second...no one really needs graffiti. Dont give someone shit just because they were born with money it dosent make them any less of a person or any worst of a writer. For example you probably have an extremely small dick but that dosent make you a worst writer despite you being a terrible writer.
third. I sort of dissed him and you at the same time. So dont think im taking his side I just think your a bitch.
daoist
01-13-2010, 09:29 PM
Saber was from the suburbs and would become one of the greatest writers.
Stop judging how good a writer will be based off an economic background.
How about you worry about yourself instead of trying to put others down.
175~PROPHET
01-13-2010, 09:52 PM
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm406/Bullet2jz/100113_192246.jpg
http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm406/Bullet2jz/100108_183602.jpg
both r weak i know, so dont tell me again. how to fix? thanks
EDIT: on the bottom one, the bottem extension of the e is actually from where i was juicing the nib, just happened to be there
||BREAD||
01-13-2010, 11:24 PM
im diggin that "kasper" lose that notch on the bottom of the E
edit: looked at photos, posted, then read haha shouldn't do that. haha :D
LeaksOne
01-14-2010, 12:15 AM
and see, i knew ya would because u BOTHERED writing this to talk shit to me... and i have respect for and from some people on here but when i see kids from the burbs in mansions doing graff it pisses me off because they dont really need to in my opinion, mom and dad probably buy all ur paint and markers and then u probably go write on shit where theres no other graff and in parks and all that, not to mention u suck... and ur boyfriend coming in on ur side doesnt make u right about shit
ok well i see both of u wanna 'talk shit' and ive been writing longer than both of u put together so battle me or shut the fuck up, pm me with a word if u wanna get embarrassed... im gonna go eat some spaghetti lol cuz thats what us po folk eat sometimes... toys
zook shut your bitch ass up you suck. ive seen your shit. you really have no rooom to talk about anybody. regardless if his parents make good moeny hes puttin in work and hes better then you. take your hand off your mouse go practice and come talk shit again when you can show your better then the person your talkin about.
skull keep doin work my nig.
Zookyook
01-14-2010, 12:54 PM
hey leaks, get outta my argument and back on vagr and fv's dick... ive honestly seen about nothing from u on here so u have no room to talk about being on computers and not getting up...
and skull-e if u think my entry for the doner battle sucks so bad why dont u just enter that SAME battle and see how good u do... and i wasnt judging by the pic of the stove, which was clearly a mansion and u probably do live there, it was honestly more of the places where ur actual tags were, its hardcore suburban and one pic looked like a gazebo or something in some yuppie park that u just made look like shit, thats the main one that pissed me off, and that u feel the need to destroy ur desk and chair that ur parents bought for u.... u can kiss my ass kid ill never respect u and everyone coming in taking ur side can kiss my ass too because theyre judging me just as much as i judged u, except when they say i suck, theyre wrong, and when i say u suck im right... see the difference?
so again if u wanna battle me just enter the doner battle and do better than me, u already have a head start since u have like 6 people that will definitely vote for u no matter how bad u suck, and u obviously think my shits terrible.... end of subject
LeaksOne
01-14-2010, 02:36 PM
haha so because i dont document EVERYTHING i do to an internet audience i dont get up? yeah your right im wrong haha
zook no beef but his handstyle burns yours.
Zookyook
01-14-2010, 03:05 PM
u can say im better and hes better but what im sayin is that if i cant SEE what uve done thats better than my shit how can i just take ur word man? i dont know what shems basing his handstyles over mine off of because i havent seen his shit, i looked through his posts and found 4 pics in 20 pages of his work, and its not on par with mine, he basically said dont talk shit unless ur better... and he was doggin me and ive never seen anything hes done thats better, or skull-e or simpleminded... wheres the proof if ur the one tellin me to SHOW that im better, check our posts man
theres a handstyl in his post that burns your handstyle that you posted for the doner battle no need to go through his posts.
Zookyook
01-14-2010, 05:42 PM
who are u even talking about? which post??? ill give u my honest opinion
"Sin"
01-14-2010, 05:49 PM
"kasper" your shit is kinda cool man.
any crits on mine.. i know it needs hella work
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-14154041.jpg
Darkeist
01-14-2010, 05:58 PM
^^ thanks dark
ima try that,
and ye i prefer the ones with minuscule "n" but a guy said to show other styles..so i mixed it up a bit ha
let me see some of your stuff dark?
that dripper u posted..i couldnt understand anything lol
here you go...
caught alot of tags today since i walked across town. but only flicked one.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/photo27.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2509/3778709495_4bb1d3d0f0_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2583/3799286480_8771648ef9_b.jpg
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im talking about this post the one you were talking shit about... both of these handstyles burn yours... anyone whos telling you your handstyle is nice is gookin that shits wack homie and im tellin you this not just to piss you off but so that you can improve i feel like you shouldnt be talkin shit about homeboy when your handstyle needs alot more work than his does... anyone who knows anything about handstyles knows that all those dots are making shit wack... theres really no flow in it... if i were you i would lose the dots the arrow and the underline focus on my letters having some sort of flow... instead of wasting time tellin some one else to quit based on assumptions that he's rich ... im really not a fan of letters like your D and R... take this as you will.
Darkeist
01-15-2010, 01:49 AM
who the fuck are you talking to buddy.
Darkeist
01-15-2010, 09:30 AM
alright. just wondering, cuz it came outta nowhere i was like. wtf.
just checking before i retaliated and looked like an idiot.
well if you follow the above conversation it doesnt come out of no where.
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 12:10 PM
keeep it on the hussssh..dont say nothin.
ha.
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Zookyook
01-15-2010, 12:43 PM
im talking about this post the one you were talking shit about... both of these handstyles burn yours... anyone whos telling you your handstyle is nice is gookin that shits wack homie and im tellin you this not just to piss you off but so that you can improve i feel like you shouldnt be talkin shit about homeboy when your handstyle needs alot more work than his does... anyone who knows anything about handstyles knows that all those dots are making shit wack... theres really no flow in it... if i were you i would lose the dots the arrow and the underline focus on my letters having some sort of flow... instead of wasting time tellin some one else to quit based on assumptions that he's rich ... im really not a fan of letters like your D and R... take this as you will.
ok man im officially in the twilight zone... my shits original, and if u read my posts about it i even said it had too many dots lol... his shit is fugly as shit, if i saw his tags next to one like mine in the street id much prefer mine over his, and i dont think im alone, things dont haveta look like traditional played out graff to have flow and style... and i hope he enters that battle and 'burns' me lol it wont happen... if the tag on the side of the payphone was a clear picture ud see how adolescent that shit was, and the brown one looks like any bullshit ud see anywhere, its average as fuck... and his throws are the weakest shit ive ever seen in my life, and his tags with a can in the park on that nice wood totally make him look toy... i cant even begin to see what ur talking about... i was hoping ud post something thatd make me say 'wow i didnt see that maybe this kid is better' lol but u posted that homo shit
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 12:51 PM
in more simple and nicer way you could have said he needs work, and throw some pointers in there. Just post graffitis and crits guize. This is ridiculous up in here.
That Doner up there.. Some little quirks are cool, but the dots are a bit much..You gots the idea down, but to get some more flow with it choose whether you're going to keep your letters boxy or rounded. Good start man.
Zookyook
01-15-2010, 12:55 PM
im not starting, my names not done, its for this weeks handstyle battle.... and im not nice to rich folk, my whole life everytime i trust one they snitch or bitch out... and for the most part they take everything in life for granted, so in my own opinion i hate rich people and ill talk some shit if i see one doing some C- graff... thats where this all started... and i know theres goddamn too many dots lol i was tryin somethin new, read the last page or so
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 01:03 PM
I know its not Done, and I was just doing what you're supposed to do in here. Critique people's graffiti. I'm jus saying the internet doesn't have a face man. Who cares whos sitting behind that screen...they're posting their art. It comes from within and I think its pretty ignorant and arrogant to not positively influence someone when they're showing you an inner reflection like that. People don't understand man..not anymore.
I value art..its innate to create.
It doesn't matter who you are or where you come from.
Darkeist
01-15-2010, 01:06 PM
The fuck dude? Your obviously the one bringing it back up after trying to move on and get to the THREADS FUCKING PURPOSE. you wanna beef? take it to pm's. no one else cares about this shit. we want crits god dammit.
to zookyook.
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 01:11 PM
Troof.
So yeah man..Your Snoozr is on its way. Pretty simple stuff, but its a good core. Start steezing it a little bit. I'd like to see what you come up with.
Zookyook
01-15-2010, 01:12 PM
i agree with what lokis sayin... never really thought about it that way, ive just had a bad history with stereotypical rebel-wannabes... and stereotypes exist for a reason... but its deaded now, there were more people dogging my shit than i ever said about anyone though so darkeist u cant just direct that comment to me... but ill shut my fucking mouth and let the thread move on, for real
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 01:20 PM
Righteous.
Now can I get some crits nikka? haha
Its not my tag..I'm lookin' more for some handstyle crits.
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Zookyook
01-15-2010, 01:25 PM
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if ur talkin bout this one i just dont like double lined tags unless its grey and black cuz thats the only shit that looks right to me... as far as the letters though id just make em more the same size, and if u have the same letter u haveta make them match, like ur Ns and Is... the arrow is ugly, no flow... just write it with normal capital letters and make them touch, then do it faster and add style as it comes to u i guess
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 01:33 PM
alrighty dude man.
I'm sketching it up right now so I'll put some more up in a bit..
Vagrant
01-15-2010, 01:52 PM
loki, zook's crit was correct about the colors.
those color clash way too much and make it almost illegible.
try using a second color that would compliment the first or look like a shadow, then it would pop off the fucking paper
but once zook started talking about letter size his crit turns to shit
Do something about the curl on the M and the A. Also try different C's
Examine the picture gallery tag's thread for better add-ons
ps. i miss you
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 01:56 PM
I was high and playing with 3d glasses lol. Hence, funkeh ass colors.
I like my arrow.
It pertains to my positioning on walls. :)
I miss you too dear.
Zookyook
01-15-2010, 01:57 PM
i dont think it was a shit crit, the core of each letter needs to be about the same size or the shit wont look right, u can do extensions like on the M and I but i think the O should be bigger is basically where i was comin from... and i like the direction of ur arrow... but the way it crosses at the end kills the flow
Loki X Sho
01-15-2010, 02:04 PM
I can't help it. It just comes out that way. It feels unnatural to change it.
I try to level things up a bit but I just feel like I fuck it up more when I try harder.
RustySpoon
01-15-2010, 04:25 PM
"REBO" Critz? I know it's shitty. :(
7889
woonybomber
01-15-2010, 04:29 PM
yeo mang thts bad you need alot of work
first id make the letters closer together
then keep practicen nd develope a swagga
nd i think you should right repo in sted of rebo
RustySpoon
01-15-2010, 04:36 PM
yeo mang thts bad you need alot of work
first id make the letters closer together
then keep practicen nd develope a swagga
nd i think you should right repo in sted of rebo
Aight. Thanks.
bomb tha world
01-15-2010, 06:38 PM
zook im not feeling the two color thing but other than that it looks pretty tight.
can anybody tell me on how to post pictures? lol..
woonybomber
01-15-2010, 06:41 PM
make a photobucket account and upload you pic to it then copy and past you pic to wat forum you wont
bomb tha world
01-15-2010, 06:41 PM
alright thanks man.
sinkilla1
01-15-2010, 06:41 PM
send it to your email download it save it tiny pic browse find it resize it click the insert image its a mountain and a sun i think copy and past the url when you upload past in the insert image walah you got pictures lolz
bomb tha world
01-15-2010, 06:50 PM
hmm..what do i resize it too?
-Empty-Can-
01-15-2010, 06:52 PM
It's easier to just get a photobucket or flickr
bomb tha world
01-15-2010, 06:53 PM
aight ill check out the flickr stuff thanks man.
sinkilla1
01-15-2010, 06:54 PM
any you can make it any size your heart desires
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