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IllLogic
05-24-2010, 05:28 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4060/4636528803_e4657571ba.jpg

i just ruined 8 or 9 pages with this mess...

i'm gunna need to get my hands on a lot more sketch books.

i do my english homework in that handwriting

Phillip McDougall
05-24-2010, 06:11 PM
Practice flow.. and use lined paper.

Blar
05-24-2010, 08:57 PM
Yeah, keep it simple is pretty much all I can think of to say..

http://i48.tinypic.com/a4ric9.jpg

Flawless Victory
05-24-2010, 09:19 PM
loose leaf paper maybe? Don't waste the good shit


this thread has been giving me a good lol
Really? Because every hand of yours I've seen is total garbage, kid.

-Empty-Can-
05-24-2010, 09:21 PM
If you didn't know already, I don't give a fuck about handstyles.

edit: and I wasn't loling at their handies but at what they were saying about add-ons.

Flawless Victory
05-24-2010, 09:23 PM
It seems like you don't give a fuck about anything but the internet to me.

Also, I've instinctual been using dollar signs in my hands since I first started writing Earn.

-Empty-Can-
05-24-2010, 09:32 PM
I don't give a fuck about much.

mawks
05-24-2010, 10:15 PM
get one of those $.75 spiral notebooks, down... fill up a couple of those.
and to stot.. handstyles are essential in graff. so it might benefit you to get good at those too.

HaLo_07
05-25-2010, 02:01 AM
This thread is pretty much garbage dude...I'm getting a good laugh on these forums now a days...Nothin graff about these forums man. Nothin but toys and net talk all day...What else is on in the television of life...?

-_-.oO(*)

Mr yarbles
05-25-2010, 03:54 PM
http://i50.tinypic.com/k2zt5v.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/23ssuat.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/28k1wue.jpg

Bombin Science Murder Squad


Yous guys are a bunch of retards
None of you can even read a real wicket so stop talking like they're the shit

Saker2000
05-25-2010, 04:02 PM
is this what bombing science has become? shit talk? this is about graff not who gives a fuck about handstyles. if its toy its toy no questions. fuck mang.

Mr yarbles
05-25-2010, 04:04 PM
Has become?
Homey step out you aint even been here a minute

It was always like this

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-25-2010, 04:19 PM
Looks like cirqek, sick k tho yarbs oh and the R on the 1st one is insane

down!
05-25-2010, 05:24 PM
i'm gunna mess around with some different names, i'll come back once i feel like i got something worth showing. thanks for all the help, leaks especially.

nevadaa
05-25-2010, 05:39 PM
yarbles is dopee

http://i49.tinypic.com/2cr4spf.jpg

w.e lol sorry for the size

Get Rekt!
05-25-2010, 07:59 PM
Rekt and Koz, i fixed the r so it doesnt look like a b i just didnt want to take another pic
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0525002052.jpg

Sbal
05-25-2010, 08:01 PM
That Koz is wack and the rekt aint lookin too good either

Get Rekt!
05-25-2010, 08:37 PM
alright well help me out. i got nobody to crit me besides people here on bs cause i dont know anybody that writes in my little ass town.

nevadaa
05-25-2010, 09:01 PM
lose the halo & arrow thing first, idk i think it'd look better if it was simple type

H1P30N3R
05-25-2010, 09:37 PM
dont try connecting letters together to much going on there each one needs its spacing

LeaksOne
05-25-2010, 09:46 PM
http://www.homee.com/pic/thread%20sucks.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-25-2010, 09:48 PM
http://i50.tinypic.com/k2zt5v.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/23ssuat.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/28k1wue.jpg

Bombin Science Murder Squad


Yous guys are a bunch of retards
None of you can even read a real wicket so stop talking like they're the shit

Bumping murder

Bathe in my glory

LeaksOne
05-25-2010, 09:49 PM
except yarbs of course

Wolf Tits
05-25-2010, 09:55 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7669/igp1180.jpg
My try at a philly hand.
Rekt and Koz- Do simples man. Flow will come. And omit the pentagram. No slipknot.
Yarbles- Very nice. What did you use because it kinda looks like a prisma?
Leaks- Many apologies but this is a toy thread

Any other crits besides my useless addon?

LeaksOne
05-25-2010, 09:57 PM
im very aware of that but do you guys really think all these ridculous add-ons and pointless arrow and quotes make you better? everything looks the same. where is this template being used? it needs to be banned

ChadWarden
05-25-2010, 10:22 PM
http://i50.tinypic.com/k2zt5v.jpg


i think you should put an arrow sweeping from the bottom and curving to touch the side of the c as a way of saying "look how fucking dope my c is, my nigguhs"

Mr yarbles
05-25-2010, 10:43 PM
It looks like a regular c to me?

iPwnF00lz
05-26-2010, 12:22 AM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/fab9e088.jpg
spur of the moment flow..

Wolf Tits
05-26-2010, 01:19 AM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/fab9e088.jpg
spur of the moment flow..

No doors. Paper. Sab needs practice because it has no flow at all. Rype as a one liner ain't looking too good. I remember you had a simple Rype a few pages back and I liked that way more.

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-26-2010, 01:58 AM
I don't encourage add ons, sides this is from like 1 1/2 yrs ago or so..and I musta been really bored
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxMzktMjAxMDAxMDMtMjEzM.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDM4ODAuanBn.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BYWxsb3V0LmpwZw.jpg

Oh ya and yarbs idk if you caught my post on the last page but sick shit mayne
Rype-just like leaks always says write it like so..> RYPE (capital E would be much better)
Wolf tits-looks pretty good

iPwnF00lz
05-26-2010, 08:19 AM
Thanks guys, I hear that I should switch the e to an E.

That's some trippy tagging ^

zaco
05-26-2010, 10:07 AM
smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-26-2010, 10:31 AM
Thanks guys feel like reviving the thread a little, go head and shit yourselves some more
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA2NjktMjAxMDAzMjgtMTgyM.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BbXRuIGZsYXJlLmpwZw.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxODUtMjAxMDAxMTAtMjAwN.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/godsent.jpg
Was really bored during economics lol wrote everyone I've seen in my area
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/handstyleheaven.jpg

Sbal
05-26-2010, 11:48 AM
Sab is not flowing at all.
Smoker is dope as fuck.
Crits

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-26-2010, 11:58 AM
Diggin the top left one sbal, like keep the curves tight but don't make em pointy like the top of the S just do them tight and on point and maybe don't drag the bottom of the L__ so far cut it off and maybe put another bar goin kinda inward idk how to explain it and I can't sketch ryte now in a car

iPwnF00lz
05-26-2010, 12:12 PM
Rype was the only thing I was trying to flow, hence the cursive vs print..
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/c8e4a074.jpg

which style should I work with?

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-26-2010, 12:20 PM
On the "3)RYPE" that one looks promising
All the sab's look the same, clean and plain
And the cursive-ish ones look good just keep working at them I'm sure they'll get a lot better

DON'T do the stuff towards the top like the pointy ones

Sbal
05-26-2010, 12:31 PM
Considering that youve been a member since 2008, you should know that you have to give crits to get them, but I think that #3 is best except for the E

iPwnF00lz
05-26-2010, 12:32 PM
I hate the jagged style too I just wanted to switch to something completely different sense I always have curves and simple letters. Thanks for the tips I'll keep goin at it, probably will have more pics up after history of art & early civ class.

My bad, I like the top right most when it comes to width of the letters and the B, work on the s and l some more, they aren't really lackin but I'd like to see different versions of them.

yayo
05-26-2010, 01:01 PM
got 3 tags now.. kinda happy with it

8997

skull-e
05-26-2010, 01:03 PM
crits?
http://img532.imageshack.us/img532/8590/p2080007.jpg (http://img532.imageshack.us/i/p2080007.jpg/)

please, dont write sake............

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2523/3987132189_1202382242_b.jpg

LeaksOne
05-26-2010, 01:15 PM
got 3 tags now.. kinda happy with it

8997

well all 3 need work

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-26-2010, 01:50 PM
>;1621985']Thanks guys feel like reviving the thread a little, go head and shit yourselves some more
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA2NjktMjAxMDAzMjgtMTgyM.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BbXRuIGZsYXJlLmpwZw.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxODUtMjAxMDAxMTAtMjAwN.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/godsent.jpg
Was really bored during economics lol wrote everyone I've seen in my area
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/handstyleheaven.jpg

Bottom page bumpy nuxx
Oh yeah, Yayo the bottom right one would probly be your best one but do some straight keyboard letters capitals have much more style

Sbal
05-26-2010, 02:11 PM
middle two have the most potential for yayo i think, but lose all that unnecesary shit
Another attempt

LeaksOne
05-26-2010, 02:15 PM
dont stretch down the B so much

Sbal
05-26-2010, 02:20 PM
gotchaa

HaLo_07
05-26-2010, 09:56 PM
Has become?
Homey step out you aint even been here a minute

It was always like this

Naw man, I been here for a HOT minute but after awhile I just grew out of is. Naw I seen you around alot and I seen your stuff and post. Gotta give respect but we got some str8 looney ass toys now a days. Not even toys, more like some newbies and hipsters. Things got shitty after awhile man. Gotta stick around with people that talk knowledge and not bullshit no more you know what I mean?

SnailWP
05-27-2010, 03:51 AM
hey guys. Tdot toy here. The name's snail. critique my tag please.
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o270/cronicwizard/tags/Photo37.jpg

Stuck
05-27-2010, 04:11 AM
go lurk around the bombshelter and meet writers theres a tip

HaLo_07
05-27-2010, 04:12 AM
hey guys. Tdot toy here. The name's snail. critique my tag please.
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o270/cronicwizard/tags/Photo37.jpg

Horrible, pointless to do reflections, unsteady hands and lack of flow and collaberation of the letters...Does that help?

Look kid, I'll help you out right now...Step away from the computer and these forums cause theres more bull shitting e beef junkies here than real writers. But all in all, stay off the comp, stop takin 1 min to do your so-called take and take up one book full of just tags of your name then we can see what we're workin with.

Believe it or not, Thats the best help you'll hear for as long as your here...

SnailWP
05-27-2010, 04:15 AM
I buy my paint there, but i don't really hang out. Jedi seems like a nice guy, though i've never had a full length convo with him.

SnailWP
05-27-2010, 04:19 AM
Horrible, pointless to do reflections, unsteady hands and lack of flow and collaberation of the letters...Does that help?

Look kid, I'll help you out right now...Step away from the computer and these forums cause theres more bull shitting e beef junkies here than real writers. But all in all, stay off the comp, stop takin 1 min to do your so-called take and take up one book full of just tags of your name then we can see what we're workin with.

Believe it or not, Thats the best help you'll hear for as long as your here...

the reflection was the computer. i did it to hide my hand. The unsteady hand is ok. that can change.
also, this is actually version 5.0 of this tag. i've been working on it to make it flow better.

Stuck
05-27-2010, 04:39 AM
o u buy ur paint there.....zions a snitch i heard so dont tell dat ***** nuttin and if ur gona be bombin ur gona realize buyin the paint will become to expensive

SnailWP
05-27-2010, 05:51 AM
Thanks for the heads up. i don't think i would be telling anyone i don't know my tag anyways.
also, yeah... it gets kinda pricey, but i like the M94s they have. i don't want to downgrade to krylon :/
Anyone have any more advice on the tag?

YaPp3RoN3R
05-27-2010, 02:20 PM
http://i946.photobucket.com/albums/ad308/slash440022/DCFC0165.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-27-2010, 02:49 PM
i don't want to downgrade to krylon :/


Yous guys are retarted

and quit talkin on Zion like you know him
Get off his dick

SnailWP
05-28-2010, 02:56 PM
(edit) zipping the lip and taking criticism.

Mr yarbles
05-28-2010, 03:06 PM
WHy don't you just shut the fuck up you queer

I aint trollin you guys are all just a bunch of fucking idiots
You don't like being called out for what you really are then just leave.

"awesome"ONE
05-28-2010, 06:05 PM
yap, your tags like a horrible philly bite, thange those letters quick, write your name normal for a while trust me itll look better than that, as for people trolling, just shut up and take the advice or dont post your shit, people are tryign to help you here loose your fucking egos

gotemlikedat
05-28-2010, 09:48 PM
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9831/dsc07238e.jpg
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/1400/dsc07240s.jpg

i write zisor.
bottommost tag is shit.

yap - i agree with awesomeone, keep it simple
snail - listen to halo
smokers - good shit, nice flares.

HaLo_07
05-28-2010, 11:19 PM
Yo Zisor...Naw man keep in the books and then come back after awhile. You sure you wanna use Zisor? its long, the letters don't really flow and the name is what ever...

Heres some names thats on the top of the head...

MIST
KAPA
DECOY
DEE
COOL

And one thing before people hop on my nutz and start talkin shiit...
Who ever has any name above is what ever unless they're king status...Tags, Throws, Burners, to Murals...Other than that zip the e-lip man...As long as you takin it far its all good but don't bite.

Pleasure doin buisness...Come back again...-click- beep*.beep*.beep*

-Empty-Can-
05-28-2010, 11:27 PM
Mist(Myst) is kinged already.

The Average Homeboy
05-29-2010, 12:05 AM
Some dope names I feel flow.

NEMO
GONE
REMO
ODAK
GASP
WOAH
HERPES
INFO
CHEK

-Empty-Can-
05-29-2010, 12:07 AM
Gasp is also taken. lol

The Average Homeboy
05-29-2010, 12:10 AM
I mean I don't care I was just typing shit, but yea dope names are plenty.

Phillip McDougall
05-29-2010, 09:29 AM
I used to have a homie who wrote Herpes.. Then he got caught. Now he's a little bitch about graffiti. Sucks to see.

gotemlikedat
05-29-2010, 02:43 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3867/dsc07244z.jpg

changed the name to sarap, which actually means something compared to "zisor" lol.

trying to keep it simple for now.
edit: mo shit.
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3223/dsc07296j.jpg
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/664/dsc07304z.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/593/dsc07305b.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1768/dsc07309z.jpg

Get Rekt!
05-30-2010, 07:36 PM
still not the greatest but better then last time i guess
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0530002029.jpg

gotemlikedat
05-30-2010, 08:08 PM
^the k is all discombobulated. the t is out of place too. make your letters straighter foreal. btw did you use a marker for that?

Get Rekt!
05-30-2010, 08:30 PM
no a sharpie. i just made the lines pretty thick and dark

gotemlikedat
05-30-2010, 08:33 PM
oh aight, it kinda looks like pencil from the pic ahaa.

Get Rekt!
05-30-2010, 09:43 PM
lol ya that sharpie gets alot of use. its sorta dieing

LeaksOne
05-30-2010, 09:56 PM
its too spaced and that style is kinda lame. straighten your letters up

Blar
05-31-2010, 05:58 AM
I know it's on my arm and all but still crits would be nice haha, if you have been following me from when I first started posting you might notice my change in style and the tightness of my letters etc, I like to think I'm improving pretty quickly.. Anyway REKT, this is how I would throw you up personally.. Get your letters abit tighter.

I also would do the T differently for sure..
http://i45.tinypic.com/nwx7r9.jpg

And here is mine on my arm haha, looking better, any more tips ?
http://i48.tinypic.com/34epao5.jpg

woonybomber
05-31-2010, 09:47 AM
yeah dont write on your self you fucking tard
try a cap b and a lower a

skull-e
05-31-2010, 01:15 PM
I buy my paint there, but i don't really hang out. Jedi seems like a nice guy, though i've never had a full length convo with him.

Snail: Hes not a cool guy actually, he's a douche with an ego worst than his hands. Dont buy from the "Worldwide montana outlet" or whatever they like to call themselves nowadays. I woulda told you to go to outline, but they closed down a while ago.

Blar: srsly

you look like an idiot

Phillip McDougall
05-31-2010, 01:38 PM
Blar, it looks like Baret.

gotemlikedat
05-31-2010, 02:23 PM
buummmpp. crits please? :)
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3223/dsc07296j.jpg
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/664/dsc07304z.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/593/dsc07305b.jpg
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1768/dsc07309z.jpg[/QUOTE]

blar - yes it does look like baret or bare.

Wolf Tits
05-31-2010, 03:47 PM
Sarap-Digging the last two. It looks like you went for a philly hand so all I can say is it looks good, but maybe squeeze the letters a little closer and add some flavor. On the last one, don't bring the hook on the S out so far and maybe make the back on the R down a little longer because it kinda looks like a Z.

iPwnF00lz
05-31-2010, 11:10 PM
Sarap - Keep the S the same size as the rest of your tag for the first 2, the 3rd would look fresh with the S & P the same size as the middle letters.. the 4th is nice, maybe try continuing the line to make the a's more readable, the last looks good.

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/d24e1304.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/12e8356f.jpg

gotemlikedat
06-01-2010, 06:40 PM
rypet(?) - really sloppy, clean it up. the 't' is really out of place and ruins the flow. the 'sab' is okay, i'm diggin the 'b' on dat. add some flavor to that.

random bullshit. i'm still workin on that philly hand, shits frustrating lol.
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2038/dsc07378e.jpg
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9504/dsc07364f.jpg
http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/3606/dsc07356e.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/6333/dsc07383e.jpg

Sbal
06-01-2010, 09:16 PM
Bare I dont like how the a and b overlap
Sarap those fatty S's and p's look weird, and i dont like the stickers

TheToy
06-01-2010, 09:24 PM
First time using a mop. I just put it up to the metal and wrote my name. I didn't really squeeze the mop as much as I pushed it against the metal. I didn't intend for the drips so don't tell me to go simple and fuck drips for now. It just happened. It's an Art Primo small squeeze type mop with a mohair nib and Smash Ink gold.

Sometimes it just pours out like crazy when I hardly squeeze it. Is this just the gold ink? I haven't tried any other colors yet so Im not sure. Can I do anything to thicken the ink?

I noticed that some painted metal reacts differently than others. On some the mop moves nice and fast like it's on ice but on others it feels all rough and frictiony like sandpaper but it's really not that pourous of a surface or rough.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3431

Phillip McDougall
06-01-2010, 09:52 PM
It's probably your nib, not the surface. The dryer it is, the more difficult it'll be to move. try squeezing slowly/lightly when you're writing.

AteskOne
06-01-2010, 09:57 PM
no more pages in the bb.
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5766/012dd.jpg (http://img85.imageshack.us/i/012dd.jpg/)

Zookyook
06-02-2010, 06:53 AM
hey rewt a good way to make the ink thicker is to leave ur bottle sitting upright for like a day, then just dump out some of the clear shit and ull have a thicker pigment to base ratio, feel meh? .... but what kind of mop is it? the huge fat styrofoam kind of the mohair kind? because mohair nibs are better if u dont want super messy drips

i like the lest tag... did u cut back on that shit? lol

massacreman
06-02-2010, 08:28 AM
Sarap: dig the last 1
Rewt: Dope colour, why rewTTT?
Atesk : never cum on your blackbook anymore.

Crits on me now
http://i50.tinypic.com/awb4ti.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/vghobk.jpg

skull-e
06-02-2010, 09:30 AM
make your letters the same size

iPwnF00lz
06-02-2010, 11:26 AM
rypet(?) - really sloppy, clean it up. the 't' is really out of place and ruins the flow. the 'sab' is okay, i'm diggin the 'b' on dat. add some flavor to that.

That's a star. I just write RYPE. Thanks for the crit.

ages- this first one has a lowercase e with all caps.. play with your S and make it the same size as the rest of the letters.
and with the second, just make your letters the same size and lost the arrow.

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/bd651ac1.jpg
The Y and E I fucked up on but still looking for crits to help improve

Zookyook
06-02-2010, 11:51 AM
ages that top tag is real nice, just make the A a little bigger and itd be dopeness

gotemlikedat
06-02-2010, 10:16 PM
rewt -smash ink gold looks yummy as hell. anyway it's kind of illegible, not because of the drips or anything. the spot you tagged was too small and your letters got all scrunched up i think. i wanna see that on a bigger canvas.

lest - good shit, the 'e' looks kinda small though.

ages - first tag is pretty good. the 'g' is really buggin though, and your 's' should be a tiny bit closer to your letters. i say keep the lowercase 'e'.

havoc - lose all the accessories, e.g. the arrow the quotations the line etc. i wanna see that with just 'havoc', none of that add-on shit man

gotemlikedat
06-02-2010, 10:18 PM
rype - make sure all your letters are the same size and consistent. the transition from the 'r' to the 'y' isn't working, fix that up. i'm kinda diggin the 'p' though

double post my bad.

Flawless Victory
06-02-2010, 10:21 PM
http://i46.tinypic.com/x5ypua.jpg

Wolf Tits
06-02-2010, 11:06 PM
Havoc- I like it. Maybe just make your O the same size as the rest of the letters. Also, I feel like you could just cross your A with the middle bar of your H. That might look cool.

Flawless Victory
06-02-2010, 11:16 PM
I was fixing his old one.
combining letters is corny.

Phillip McDougall
06-02-2010, 11:24 PM
Word. Good change, FV.

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
06-03-2010, 12:52 AM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3223/dsc07296j.jpg

Like the bottom one yo mainly the S but the rest is pretty clean

HaLo_07
06-03-2010, 02:42 AM
Sarap: dig the last 1
Rewt: Dope colour, why rewTTT?
Atesk : never cum on your blackbook anymore.

Crits on me now
http://i50.tinypic.com/awb4ti.jpg


Dope shiit. fuck what any one else sais about containing your shiit. Break from the mainstream man, Work on the same shiit that you got goin on here and we'll see whats up. Work on this for EXACTLY a str8 week then put it out here. Don't listen to anymore shiit, get up, pick up the paper and work on this same style tag and YOU figure what YOU want and what makes YOU different from these cats is what WE wanna see on the paper...

Thats some REAL advice so take it and hit me up direct if you want in a week. PEACE

AteskOne
06-03-2010, 02:52 AM
takes a lot longer than a week to get anywhere in graffiti.

massacre- the A is too small on that. make it closer in size to the other letters. also loose that little tale to the left of it. the S could be squeezed in there a little tighter and i would loose the little tale on that too. looks good tho. keep at it.

Gyse
06-03-2010, 10:04 AM
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/5429/dsc0271z.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/dsc0271z.jpg/)

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9389/aygur.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/aygur.jpg/)

Ages- Looks good to me, but it's a bit messy for my taste. I don't like the left extension on the A, maybe there's something else you can do with it. The second tag looks nicer, but I wouldn't go lower case, capital, lower, capital. It doesn't look as good as all caps or lowers. Good otherwise though.

Havoc- Not sure if that names taken, there is a Havok already. Whatever. Keep working on it, stay simple for a long time and don't bother with underlines or stars or halos or anything until you have good letters. Go find some tags with some of the same letters in your name and bite them for practice. Work on it, change their letters, and make them into your own.

Numaga
06-03-2010, 05:06 PM
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0602001953.jpg
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0603001755.jpg

Changed the W on the second one a little. Both are "Flaw".

Ages - Don't like the left hand thing on the A. Maybe fix the R a little bit?

Flawless Victory
06-03-2010, 05:22 PM
naw.

Sbal
06-03-2010, 05:31 PM
Aegr- I like that blue one on top if it were more curvy, same with the orange one, but that bottom blue one needs to lose the fat ass R
Flaw- That's too damn loopy I can only see the AW in that, both W's are wack

gotemlikedat
06-03-2010, 10:11 PM
aegr - the orange/pink tag is pretty good. as sbal said, the big 'r' needs to shrink. it's too obnoxious imo. work on the 'a' and the 'e' too. imo i kinda like the 'g'. props gettin up too.

flaw - start simpler homie, it looks like 'jlaw' or 'jjaw'.

experimenting with some one liner philly style shit.
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4553/dsc07396w.jpg

Sbal
06-03-2010, 11:33 PM
You're name makes me think of syrup. I like it except for how far the A has to stretch for the P. and the ! doesnt fit up in thar.

Blar
06-03-2010, 11:34 PM
Ignore the crown etc.. Just look at the letters.
http://i46.tinypic.com/2wf3j28.jpg
SARAP - I'm liking that.. I really dig the tall thin one liners..

LeaksOne
06-03-2010, 11:50 PM
Blar, No.


http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0602001953.jpg
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0603001755.jpg

Changed the W on the second one a little. Both are "Flaw".

holy shit!!1! this says Flaw?? i thought it was Gnaw. well like FV said.....

No

and Sarap i cant read your name altogether. everytime i see it, it says Sara P.

Sbal
06-03-2010, 11:52 PM
Haha Bare you just fuckin fell off you should know better then that

Blar
06-04-2010, 12:00 AM
Yeah yeah, haha.

Blar
06-04-2010, 12:04 AM
Here we go..
http://i45.tinypic.com/n2muza.jpg

iPwnF00lz
06-04-2010, 03:13 PM
No flo, the line bugs me, I don't like the b or the leg on the e...
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/46441e87.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/2f3db2a2.jpg

Gyse
06-04-2010, 04:34 PM
Bare- Straighten the top part of your B so it looks more like the tops of the A and R. Use a capital E, and maybe like Ɛ or ₤. But on that second example make everything bu the top bar straight.

Rype- the second looks a lot better. Try to put the Y closer to the R, make them touch. Make the opening on the P bigger, it's too small compared to the rest of the tag. And instead of making a curve at the bottom of it, make it pointed like the R. The R and E look good though, I like the underline and star off the E.

Xfish
06-04-2010, 09:53 PM
That's a star. I just write RYPE. Thanks for the crit.

ages- this first one has a lowercase e with all caps.. play with your S and make it the same size as the rest of the letters.
and with the second, just make your letters the same size and lost the arrow.

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/bd651ac1.jpg
The Y and E I fucked up on but still looking for crits to help improve

looks really messy try and slow down and might look better with a thicker marker

Xfish
06-04-2010, 10:13 PM
well i havent really practiced in a long time as you can tell but im going to get back with it oh yeah and crits would be appreciated

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2617/img000026u.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/i/img000026u.jpg/)

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iPwnF00lz
06-04-2010, 10:26 PM
Thanks and it was with a crayola crayon, I'll try it with a mop soon hopefully.

Sbal
06-04-2010, 10:36 PM
Rype has every tag you've posted been done in crayons cause they all have that look

iPwnF00lz
06-05-2010, 12:30 AM
Hah yep. Decided to switch it up from fat nibbed black/red markers and thats the only color I can grip atm.

LeaksOne
06-05-2010, 12:38 AM
get a notebook and a crayola marker. you need to work on your tags. no offense/beef but i havent seen any progression in any of the tags youve posted. steer away from one liners for a while. get your letters donw individually first.

ManeMan
06-05-2010, 03:32 AM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3347/img0408x.jpg
you can crit if you like. But I like it, just like that. For now.

Jrose152
06-05-2010, 06:07 AM
me just trying new things

http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-05-053715.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-04-020536.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-04-014443.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-04-021205.jpg

weakfingers
06-05-2010, 08:06 AM
well i havent really practiced in a long time as you can tell but im going to get back with it oh yeah and crits would be appreciated

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2617/img000026u.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/i/img000026u.jpg/)

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If i saw that on the street I would instantly make fun of you. Chick drink ar gay as fuck but they sure are tasty.
http://s3.amazonaws.com/bzzagent-bzzscapes-prod/my-favorite-vex-flavor-lrg.png

iPwnF00lz
06-05-2010, 08:18 AM
get a notebook and a crayola marker. you need to work on your tags. no offense/beef but i havent seen any progression in any of the tags youve posted. steer away from one liners for a while. get your letters donw individually first.

None taken but I'm steering away from going back to simple letters sense that's what my tags always consist of and has for a long ass time. I'm going to continue to try new things and hopefully improve thanks to crits or the exchange thread.

Xfish
06-05-2010, 08:50 AM
If i saw that on the street I would instantly make fun of you. Chick drink ar gay as fuck but they sure are tasty.
http://s3.amazonaws.com/bzzagent-bzzscapes-prod/my-favorite-vex-flavor-lrg.png

yeah they suck i know i havent tagged at all latley but i want to get better ant crits? ive never tried the drink thou, never even heard of it haha

weakfingers
06-05-2010, 08:58 AM
Its basic generic regular letters, there nothing to crit. Try to use difrent things like chisel markers, it needs flow and tilt, Make your regular everyday handstyle better and itill come. Its all about flow and letter height.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/SDC19873.jpg

Xfish
06-05-2010, 09:25 AM
alright thanks i dont have any other markers right now cus im out of town but im sure i can find some

Jrose152
06-05-2010, 10:02 AM
any love on my pics?

Xfish
06-05-2010, 10:48 AM
not liking the first one at all last is my favorite

Phillip McDougall
06-05-2010, 01:15 PM
No, you need to go back simpler for now.

Sbal
06-05-2010, 01:39 PM
Do you write Spook or Saook? That PO thing looks pretty weird, but i like the rest of the letters for the most part

Jrose152
06-05-2010, 03:24 PM
Do you write Spook or Saook? That PO thing looks pretty weird, but i like the rest of the letters for the most part

sp00k. which one are you talking about? i posted multiple

Sbal
06-05-2010, 03:27 PM
#1 but the PO makes the P look like an A

Jrose152
06-05-2010, 06:02 PM
so you think i should stick with the first style and scratch the others?

NosE2
06-06-2010, 12:39 AM
http://tinypic.com/r/5mrfp/6http://i49.tinypic.com/zo6ofm.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/5mrfp.jpg
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/5342/666pq.jpg

woonybomber
06-06-2010, 08:30 AM
keep it up try and make a one or two liner

NosE2
06-06-2010, 12:10 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2839/iioo.jpglike this..?

SNAP!
06-06-2010, 04:43 PM
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/CopyofIMG_0354.jpg

aekone
06-07-2010, 12:10 PM
Vex- keep trying different shit Don't try to put a crazy amount of style into every letter till you've got the basics.
Spook- Just keep developing and keep it simple.
NosE2- It's fresh but I'd drop the 'ER'. Also your style looks mad familiar. Do you write in Nashville with Nosey and 42? I've seen you in Memphis a couple times too I think.

Well here's my shit I guess.... D:
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo50.jpg

2FNK?
06-07-2010, 06:24 PM
aekone, cut the arrow out on the left one. For both make your shit a little more flow and articulated. Your U and O are alright, but the h's need some extra style since it's repeated.... It'd also make it look better if you lost the dots, and had a few lines extending away from your letters further than the rest.

I don't know bout anybody else buy I always throw quotations on my shit.

Maybe try a one liner after your shit gets dope.

BlacktodaFuture
06-07-2010, 07:19 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1633.jpg?t=1275861734

Sbal
06-07-2010, 07:33 PM
Your A looks like an F

BlacktodaFuture
06-07-2010, 07:58 PM
no it doesn't. good try though.

Jrose152
06-07-2010, 10:37 PM
me just trying new things

http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-05-053715.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-04-020536.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-04-014443.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-04-021205.jpg

Sbal
06-07-2010, 10:46 PM
Sorry, its flawless i just wanted to post something

Spook u already posted that. Shit aint new.

Jrose152
06-08-2010, 12:04 AM
Sorry, its flawless i just wanted to post something

Spook u already posted that. Shit aint new.

i know, just looking for more opinions

ChadOne
06-08-2010, 01:01 AM
fairly new to the game, this is what i write.

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7898/chad10001.th.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/i/chad10001.jpg/)

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Mr yarbles
06-08-2010, 01:17 AM
looks like cmad

LeaksOne
06-08-2010, 01:23 AM
chad thats pretty decent but you gota straighten the line inside the H so it doesnt look like cmad

NosE2
06-08-2010, 10:57 AM
alright well ive always done my hands with an "er" at the end....so heres a few attempts without it...crits?
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/6415/handsjs.jpg

aekone
06-08-2010, 12:19 PM
Shit looks fresh NosE. I mean the ER looked fresh too but overall your style is just really nice. Only crits I could give is to give your letters some breathing room. Some of those tags are super jammed together.

ChadOne
06-08-2010, 02:39 PM
i tried getting the middle bar on the H a bit more flat, tell me what you think

http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/971/chad20001.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/chad20001.jpg/)

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Mr yarbles
06-08-2010, 02:44 PM
Yeah thats dope

2FNK?
06-08-2010, 02:46 PM
Aye yo Chad,
Crits:make the transition off of the A go a little closer to the left line so it looks more like the capital letter, not a lower case 'a'

Other than that, looks fresh.

Idea:Maybe make the spiral a little more flat and have the ends connect the stars? Might look good. Might look gay. You should try it and see.

Mr yarbles
06-08-2010, 02:55 PM
No, your ideas are just terrible.

You'd have single handedly killed that flow

NosE2
06-08-2010, 06:35 PM
ok i see what you're sayin'...i tried, but maybe its just out of habit, they're all pretty much close together..
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/8568/ewl.jpg

ChadOne
06-08-2010, 07:00 PM
Thanks for the crits everyone.

This is how i used to write it, but i changed it cuz i got bored with it. Let me know which you like better.


http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8454/chad30002.jpg (http://img229.imageshack.us/i/chad30002.jpg/)

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2FNK?
06-08-2010, 08:05 PM
Yeah, my bad, it looks better how it was. Lapse of judgement.

The Average Homeboy
06-08-2010, 08:45 PM
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk106/Industry1337/5ffe14ec.jpg
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk106/Industry1337/ce3a5781.jpg
http://www.wvrapscene.com/v2/images/fbfiles/images/photo_19_-a22e59325c4c2858b214fd7bdffbf500.jpg
http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/6671/photo16s.jpg

2FNK?
06-08-2010, 08:51 PM
wore, haha way to get yourself in the picture. Nice tag on the window though, I'd stick with that one.

mefe
06-09-2010, 09:33 AM
HA wore.. lucky for that sticker or you'd be fucked... but yes, i like it

Mr yarbles
06-09-2010, 12:19 PM
.. he wouldn't be fucked at all

"rekt"
06-09-2010, 12:20 PM
I've been trying to adapt my tag by using themes, like here the top half is straight and the bottom is curved. Please give me tips to help me make my tag better or to make different tags. http://webmail.aol.com/31888-111/aim-6/en-us/mail/get-attachment.aspx?uid=40006940&folder=Inbox&partId=1

"rekt"
06-09-2010, 12:21 PM
just a little too big, I'll delete my post after I get some tips.

The Average Homeboy
06-09-2010, 01:49 PM
I put that over my face myself...

ChadOne
06-10-2010, 02:03 AM
practice makes perfect...

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4194/scan0001.th.jpg (http://img820.imageshack.us/i/scan0001.jpg/)

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Blar
06-10-2010, 12:42 PM
http://i50.tinypic.com/2i74lmp.jpg

http://i45.tinypic.com/21msyfk.jpg

Wore - Really liking that flow man, keep it up.

iPwnF00lz
06-10-2010, 01:47 PM
nose - It'd look better if the z didn't drop down so far.

chad - third one down is best

bear 1st - fix the bottom of the E, strike the A through, make the R proportional with the rest.

2nd - fix the top of the A

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/93b18638.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/28cf395b.jpg
..ignore the underline
crits please?

NosE2
06-10-2010, 06:25 PM
work on your T dude...and what do you mean dont drop the z down so far? it all looks pretty proportionate to me

Sbal
06-10-2010, 07:31 PM
Thats not a t -- its some little star thing
Bare that is too damn squished

2FNK?
06-10-2010, 10:03 PM
Bare (or bear) pick a fucking spelling so you can get your flow going. Your letter's don't resemble the style of eachother at all. Work on that, and give your letters room to breathe.

iPwnF00lz
06-10-2010, 10:19 PM
work on your T dude...and what do you mean dont drop the z down so far? it all looks pretty proportionate to me

It's a star. I'll stop writing it.

Drop it to the bottom of the W maybe.

Any more crits?

2FNK?
06-10-2010, 10:24 PM
Rype, the left side of your R isn't flow. Maybe flip it out like your E is on the other side for some symmetry? Just play with the shit, till it looks like your other letters, and till it looks good.

Just stop connecting it at top and bottom. Makes it look closed off and boring.

Sbal
06-10-2010, 10:30 PM
Give me crits muffuckas

2FNK?
06-10-2010, 10:41 PM
Repost, i went back 3 pages and didn't see your shit SBAL. I'll give you crits.

CrookOne
06-10-2010, 11:22 PM
Heres a quickie, still tryna figure out the flash on this camera... fuck.

http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/6051/p1010010w.jpg

Sbal
06-10-2010, 11:25 PM
on page 1535 towars the bottom right above you i did it today

2FNK?
06-10-2010, 11:34 PM
The double back on the B looks kinda funky. The droop on the end of the L, you might want to fix? and the dots might wanna be spaced.

Good for a simple though, maybe turn it into a flow one liner?

CrookOne
06-10-2010, 11:36 PM
nice, active thread! CRITS?

Xfish
06-10-2010, 11:41 PM
can hardly see the damn thing

CrookOne
06-10-2010, 11:49 PM
FLASH IS FUTILE! all your light are belong to us...
tried again, in blue but the the pen is almost dead...

http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6681/p1010012.jpg

CRITS?

Xfish
06-11-2010, 12:02 AM
get rid of the extention above the c and the curly stuff on the end of the k, im not the best maybe someone else can give some crits too

SicK-
06-11-2010, 02:43 AM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Wermhandy.jpg
Crits please?

Sbal
06-11-2010, 08:40 AM
Thanks 2fnk
Sick give crits and you shall recieve, but lose the quotes and arrow, make both parts of the w round and make the last letter legible

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 02:08 PM
Wern- letter size. on your N. Use a capital E

Crook:
you're not number one... change your name.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3363/3191650936_fa468d655d.jpg
http://www.skateallcities.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/2009-05-athroughz03.jpg
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_rKBnCrs1OYs/SURQR_DOlhI/AAAAAAAACO4/eFNigffUpoc/s400/5+Crook.jpg
http://www.street-artists.com/Images/ThumbNails/000000000/Thm340_crook_009.jpg
http://cassandrapages.typepad.com/the_cassandra_pages/images/2007/09/05/graffiti1_2.jpg
(The red and white wildstyle is his.)
Other than that, the halo looks bad, wider, and don't connect it all the way. Lose the swirl off the k, it's not flow. Work on the C and the K.

But seriously, if you're trying to be original, find another name... You might cross paths with him someday.

SicK-
06-11-2010, 02:11 PM
Thanks guys, i actually write WERM lol but yeah my tag def needs work.

IbuprofenTablets
06-11-2010, 02:37 PM
*****'s need to know that adding One to the end of you tag doesn't mean SHIT.
it's merely an extension..

down!
06-11-2010, 02:55 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4691654454_620cfd34d2_m.jpg

Sbal
06-11-2010, 03:10 PM
Dont extend the T soo far over and use a less shitty marker

down!
06-11-2010, 03:18 PM
thanks sbal. i'll work on both.

Xfish
06-11-2010, 03:36 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/993/img000028z.jpg (http://img217.imageshack.us/i/img000028z.jpg/)

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you like hotel or veks better?
crits?

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 03:37 PM
*****'s need to know that adding One to the end of you tag doesn't mean SHIT.
it's merely an extension..

I meant he's not the only one writing that name. Writing one by your name when you have a shit tag just makes you look toy. Extension or not.

CrookOne
06-11-2010, 03:49 PM
Thanks for the heads up, i searched a few forums with no results... Maybe ill start getting up on my other tag erebusone. Ive just been writing crook and im jist starting to have people coming to me saying they've seen me up and it feels good.

And in defence of the halo i intended for it to be a moon, saw it on a crab:cfws tag and thought it was sick.

Thx for crits

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 04:03 PM
Anytime bro, and that's chill, maybe go with a crescent if you wanted it to be defined.

If I were you I would. I wrote consume until I met zookyook on here. Now I write ROMEL.
I found that shit of crook on google, just sounds like it'd be a common name anyways. That Erebusone sounds original, I like it.

woonybomber
06-11-2010, 04:22 PM
here is some old stezzy shit for talking
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff013-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff014-2.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-2-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-6.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/grafff.jpg

down!
06-11-2010, 04:34 PM
there's a lot going on. i don't like the E's in very many of them.

woonybomber
06-11-2010, 05:11 PM
ok

down!
06-11-2010, 06:38 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-2-1.jpg

bottom left of this, i like it.

Mr yarbles
06-11-2010, 07:24 PM
You mean the one that looks exactly like all the other ones?

Sbal
06-12-2010, 12:07 AM
hahaha

Mr yarbles
06-12-2010, 12:27 AM
http://i48.tinypic.com/ou6sg7.jpg

There wont be another MC like me till 5004

IbuprofenTablets
06-12-2010, 01:12 AM
So, i exchanged shit with a few people......
if anyone wants to exchange with me or something, just get at me.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo62.jpg
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo63.jpg
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo64.jpg

Sbal
06-12-2010, 10:24 AM
Yarbles is Runnin Wild

CrookOne
06-12-2010, 11:04 AM
Anytime bro, and that's chill, maybe go with a crescent if you wanted it to be defined.

If I were you I would. I wrote consume until I met zookyook on here. Now I write ROMEL.
I found that shit of crook on google, just sounds like it'd be a common name anyways. That Erebusone sounds original, I like it.

yesterday i went out got up a bunch of erebus tags, flix next time i go out, i'll also take some flix of some of the local stunnas.... and hopefully i can expect more crits from ya :p:p

Phillip McDougall
06-12-2010, 11:17 AM
Erebus? Like Cerebus without a C?

2FNK?
06-12-2010, 05:16 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/coldhardclimber/IMG00901-20100612-1754.jpg

Wasn't really paying attention to the tag, didn't leave enough room to put an L on the ROMEL. Just trying out a super drippy homemade marker. Maybe a little too drippy.
All I did was take a clorox bleach marker and empty it out, fill it up with black ink.
Probably would work better with paint. Definitely easy to ghetto rig. Just pull the nibs off and rinse it out. Haha with the ink in it you can actually squeeze it and spray. Works on all surfaces, even rough plywood.

http://www.washing-machine-wizard.com/images/clorox-bleach-pen-25603.jpg

Sbal
06-12-2010, 07:17 PM
Dope soo messy im about to get one. Where do they have those?

TheBoredOne
06-12-2010, 07:45 PM
Dope soo messy im about to get one. Where do they have those?

In any Walmart/Kmart/Convenient store should have some of those

2FNK?
06-12-2010, 07:55 PM
Haha, I think you could probably put straight oil based can paint in one of these.
They have em up front sometimes, but if not they are in the cleaning/detergent section.

Only problems are
-They run out of ink after 6 or 7 supperrr drippy huge tags. I'm experimenting with ways to make the nib a little less insanely drippy.
-They are REALLY MESSY. You probably need to carry it around in a plastic bag.

But I think it'd be a little more contained with a thick paint inside.

Mr yarbles
06-13-2010, 01:00 AM
Not dope, no flow.

LeaksOne
06-13-2010, 01:05 AM
word. without all those drips the letters SLACK. get your letters down before doing shit like that

Mr yarbles
06-13-2010, 01:42 AM
http://i50.tinypic.com/35i3lvb.jpg
It's Majik Most, everybody knows who I am.

CrookOne
06-13-2010, 11:25 AM
Erebus? Like Cerebus without a C?

(air-uh-bus) so close

2FNK?
06-13-2010, 02:06 PM
If you read my post I wasn't even trying to get good letters, I was just seeing how the marker wrote....

Sbal
06-13-2010, 02:14 PM
Yeah I was calling the drippy marker dope not the tag

kermet_1
06-13-2010, 09:02 PM
EVOLVE


http://i50.tinypic.com/1jp154.jpg

ASHiS
06-13-2010, 09:11 PM
Kinda new at this tag i created... tell me what you think...
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/8547/cimg0012d.th.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/cimg0012d.jpg/)

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http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7118/cimg0013n.th.jpg (http://img339.imageshack.us/i/cimg0013n.jpg/)

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Sbal
06-13-2010, 09:30 PM
Gross

ASHiS
06-13-2010, 09:51 PM
haha! well what should i improve on... i know i need to take the halo out and fix my A because the 2nd one the A looks gross.... but what else...

2FNK?
06-13-2010, 10:55 PM
http://www.graffiti.org/evolve/evolve_hooks.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2204/2430748680_c314a79fd4.jpg
Evolve. Lose the crown. Your not king of that name, and your tag isn't that great.

Your L looks exactly live your second V in the one with the crown.

like your e's in the bottom left one, hate your e's in the bottom right one.

Fix your v's if your still going to write that name, your call.

aekone
06-13-2010, 11:25 PM
Mr Yarbles- Dope ass shit.
Evolve- Dude totally drop the crown. Buuut that shit is fresh to me. Haven't seen a style like that before but your 'V' and 'L' look too similar. Keep developing!
Ashis- Umm drop the add-ons and try to keep is simple for a bit.

Prolly need to follow some of my own advice.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo53.jpg
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo52.jpg

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 01:04 AM
Ok thx... ill post my improved one when i'm finished with it...

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 01:09 AM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9837/cimg0013b.jpg (http://img257.imageshack.us/i/cimg0013b.jpg/)

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hopefully thats better...

weird dough
06-14-2010, 01:18 AM
looks way better, Ashis. not really feeling the I, but it's some good progress. keep it up.

NosE2
06-14-2010, 01:19 AM
^ nah, meng. you are tryin too hard, you know what i mean? you see where you keep tryna connect the letters ( S into the H, H into the I) quit doin that shit. i dont know really what to tell you, you have to just keep practicing hands over and over until you get yours down

lose the quotes

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 01:55 AM
Thx you guys i work on separating the letters more... and the i lol! should it be lower or higher case???

LeaksOne
06-14-2010, 02:12 AM
aeks and 2fnk? crowns dont mean shit on paper. its just an add-on. and crowns arent taken literally anymore anyways. if you can rock it nice no one cares.

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 02:34 AM
I agree with leaksone on the crown...

2FNK?
06-14-2010, 03:59 AM
Yeah, but when someone better than you writes the same thing you do it's kind of disrespect.

Think about it. If some toy ass bitch wrote your name and put a crown on it, and saw it, wouldn't you be pissed? Especially when you put maybe a decade into writing that name?

Not calling anyone a toy ass bitch.

aekone
06-14-2010, 07:28 AM
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo53.jpg
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo52.jpg

Crowns aside can I get any crits?

Sbal
06-14-2010, 08:46 AM
I don't like how that second one is in a square. And the halo seems to far away. And make the u rounder

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 11:33 AM
The top one of the top one is retty tight bro.... stick with that one.

IbuprofenTablets
06-14-2010, 12:08 PM
Yeah, but when someone better than you writes the same thing you do it's kind of disrespect.

Think about it. If some toy ass bitch wrote your name and put a crown on it, and saw it, wouldn't you be pissed? Especially when you put maybe a decade into writing that name?

Not calling anyone a toy ass bitch.

i don't think you fully understand what Leaks told you, add-ons don't mean SHIT. ABSOLUTLEY NOTHING. Like i could start putting crowns on top of my tags, and it wouldn't mean anything.
All this aside, if i was a king, and i saw some toy rock a crown over his shit, I'd just laugh at it, like I do with most shitty tags. I'd probably even laugh at it even harder knowing that he added a crown on the top of his shit, let alone my own tag.

slax
06-14-2010, 12:17 PM
-Aeks, personally I'd get rid of the underlines on the square one

http://www.4freeimagehost.com/resized/PUSHb72d707b362d.jpg (http://www.4freeimagehost.com/show.php?i=PUSHb72d707b362d.jpg)

Blastee
Yeah, I know it's trash

kermet_1
06-14-2010, 01:08 PM
LOL, I obviously know I'm not 'king' not saying I was either, I know there is another person that goes by Evolve, no disrespect to him.
I posted in the TOY section, so I know for a fact that I'm not all that great.
Try holding back the cockyness nextime.

LeaksOne
06-14-2010, 02:19 PM
Yeah, but when someone better than you writes the same thing you do it's kind of disrespect.

Think about it. If some toy ass bitch wrote your name and put a crown on it, and saw it, wouldn't you be pissed? Especially when you put maybe a decade into writing that name?

Not calling anyone a toy ass bitch.

Well lets see, first off evolve wont see the crown unless he makes an account second if I spent a decade writing a name then some toy started writing it like ibuprofen said I would just laugh knowing I'm better then them but commend the effort and the fact they were actually getting up sooner or later they would realize I was the better one writing it. Plus if he's in a different city I wouldn't give a fuck.

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 02:21 PM
the underlines are kinda getting in the way of your letters..

slax
06-14-2010, 03:09 PM
the underlines are kinda getting in the way of your letters..

Is this at me?

Sbal
06-14-2010, 03:15 PM
Slax do keyboard letters

kermet_1
06-14-2010, 05:19 PM
poop
http://i49.tinypic.com/qxw0o9.jpg

aekone
06-14-2010, 05:22 PM
Evolve, that shit is mad fresh. Just work on your throwups now. I think your tags are straight.

I know I just posted but I had an idea for my tag that I ran with today. Do you guys like it?
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo54.jpg
I'm working with fat caps and can control.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo55.jpg

Thanks for looking guys! I'm off to develop for a month or two! See you guys!

slax
06-14-2010, 05:33 PM
I thought that was pretty basic as it was, thats just how my hand writes normal letters. Are you saying you want me to get my letter structure down better?

ASHiS
06-14-2010, 05:52 PM
no it wasn't it was at the box tag that aekone made...

Sbal
06-14-2010, 06:03 PM
Yeah work on basic letter structure

2FNK?
06-14-2010, 08:18 PM
aekone, don't be giving kids a big head. Your new to the game, you can find flaws, but don't tell someone that their shit is perfect and not to improve.

And I get what your saying leaks.

UHOH- I'd say use that first tag, but use the U from the second one.

Evolve, I'm not being cocky or some shit. I'm more toy than you and half the other people in this forum, and I get that. My bad for blowing the crown thing out of proportion.

Phillip McDougall
06-14-2010, 08:38 PM
UHOH's second tag is decent. That Evolve shit has style, but the flow is teeeerrible. And your L looks identical to your V.

pulse1
06-15-2010, 08:26 AM
im just starting out does it matter if my letters arent connected?
thanks guys

ASHiS
06-15-2010, 08:40 AM
No it doesn't matter just make sure there's no print letters in your tag... and try not to copy letters from other ppl.

Sbal
06-15-2010, 08:59 AM
post pictures

zaco
06-15-2010, 09:02 AM
what do you guys think of the use of lower case and capital letters together or should it be consistent. sometimes it could give your handstyle more flow but it does seem kinda random

2FNK?
06-15-2010, 01:40 PM
I think it doesn't look bad when you use lowercase vowels if you pull it off right.

LeaksOne
06-15-2010, 02:11 PM
It doesnt matter at all. Use whatever case letters you want as long as it looks nice.