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illegal_drugs
11-06-2010, 02:33 PM
thanks for the reply
in not H, its N lol

Minx
11-06-2010, 02:39 PM
thanks for the reply
in not H, its N lol
Ah, looks like an H to me, looks like it says "Rash." I knew a kid with a similar writing style so that's probably why...

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 02:42 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1105102330-1.jpg

illegal_drugs
11-06-2010, 02:46 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1105102330-1.jpg

looks good to me

Bounty
11-06-2010, 06:50 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1105102330-1.jpg

Man what are you doing here? This is "Toy Tags Only". I cummed when i saw this one :);):o:D:cool:

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 06:52 PM
Lol I am still developing flow man... I need a lot of work still.. I did this one in a Bar called Brothers

Bounty
11-06-2010, 06:56 PM
:)) Hehe,damn im bored with this tag,I cant develop flow,good tag even the name is crappy :SSSS
Anyone got an advice?

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 08:10 PM
Did you get my Pm bro?

MET156
11-07-2010, 01:48 AM
Just trying to improve my lettering style. Any tips would be appreciated. I've been told that my M's look like H's sometimes. I feel that I'm lacking a certain level of flow.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/310/2/d/metis_tag_by_badikal-d32bv28.jpg (Sorry about the shitty webcam quality.)

NosE2
11-07-2010, 09:19 AM
ahhahahahaahaha this ***** is tryin to write met. i just spit water everywhere for real

MET156
11-07-2010, 10:08 AM
My goodness! It appears that you are using the name 'met'. That is already in use by a well known artist. Perhaps you were not aware, ha ha!

Snip snap.

Peera12
11-07-2010, 10:53 AM
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3906/img8813xw.th.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/i/img8813xw.jpg/)

what can I do to improve it ?
it writes [ naiba ] . ty :)
i give 20$ on paypal to whom rewrites its with the changes it needs ^^.
ty.

Flawless Victory
11-07-2010, 01:06 PM
Send that money first and you got a fuckin' deal.

Gyse
11-07-2010, 01:58 PM
Damn, a kid with money to blow and no pride at all.

NosE2
11-07-2010, 02:01 PM
" it writes "

hahahahaha

MET156
11-07-2010, 02:07 PM
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3906/img8813xw.th.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/i/img8813xw.jpg/)

what can I do to improve it ?
it writes [ naiba ] . ty :)
i give 20$ on paypal to whom rewrites its with the changes it needs ^^.
ty.

The "s in the middle of the tag look kinda funny. The N overlapping the A kinda throws the entire thing off, and the lower bit on the b looks too fat. Also leave the swirly shit at the end off. Simplify it and I think you'll be happy.

http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/1654/naiba.png

cg22stoner
11-07-2010, 03:00 PM
This look good?

cg22stoner
11-07-2010, 03:01 PM
sorry for the size.....

FuckTheFame
11-07-2010, 05:46 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4069/5156085648_4b1c43248c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5156085648/)

zewl - nice ups man
mone - oneline madness

IbuprofenTablets
11-07-2010, 06:00 PM
Youch.

Phillip McDougall
11-07-2010, 06:01 PM
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3906/img8813xw.th.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/i/img8813xw.jpg/)

what can I do to improve it ?
it writes [ naiba ] . ty :)
i give 20$ on paypal to whom rewrites its with the changes it needs ^^.
ty.

I agree with FV. Send the money and I'll do it.

EXI
11-07-2010, 07:19 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289175130126.jpg
i know im horrible at handstlye, if anyone wants to help me please help haha

Gyse
11-07-2010, 08:59 PM
#1. Except the L, what the hell is that on the end of it?

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 09:36 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1105102330-1.jpg

this is the kind of thing i would see and fantasize that a really sexy chick who is into graff did it. its just too curvy for me not too. but it's definitely nice.

EXI
11-07-2010, 09:41 PM
#1. Except the L, what the hell is that on the end of it?

tbh idk.. im gunna post another picturw hold on

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 10:41 PM
any crit? thoughts? anything?

EXI
11-07-2010, 10:51 PM
shits fresh villiage.. your own style and i love it
crits/which one you like?
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289185477710.jpg

NosE2
11-07-2010, 10:56 PM
that shit is not fresh village. work on your legibility, but overall i think you can turn it into somethin dope.


edit: rewlll i like that r on the 3d one. thats what you want your shit to start to look like. if your tryin to do your e's like me, its kind of like drawin a c, and then a c right under it but you connect the bottom of the first one and top of the second is the best way i can describe it

H1P30N3R
11-07-2010, 11:34 PM
rewl -listen to zewl letters are almost the same and his handys are fresh..
village- what do u write anyway? it does have potential style wise.
fuckthefame- nice overall and that 1st e on the word "the" is sick.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0069.jpg

EXI
11-08-2010, 12:04 AM
that shit is not fresh village. work on your legibility, but overall i think you can turn it into somethin dope.


edit: rewlll i like that r on the 3d one. thats what you want your shit to start to look like. if your tryin to do your e's like me, its kind of like drawin a c, and then a c right under it but you connect the bottom of the first one and top of the second is the best way i can describe it

nahh not tryin to copy you, just thought that was the coolest E i could come up with, haha. but i guess anything you write is copying someone.. so here's what i have now.. what you think
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289192525661.jpg

MoganOne
11-08-2010, 12:53 AM
LOL the E is literally 2 C's stacked on top of each other in this one

EXI
11-08-2010, 12:06 PM
yeah haha its usually not was just trying to picture what he was saying.. look at my latest piece in black book and youll see the latest

yeah
11-08-2010, 06:50 PM
what you think
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289192525661.jpg

it's fucking terrible. start over from scratch.

Gyse
11-08-2010, 09:08 PM
Rewl, just do regular caps letters in your normal handwriting about 6000 times. Seriously.

Village Idiot
11-08-2010, 11:22 PM
r
village- what do u write anyway? it does have potential style wise.


phylum mostly. i use agoni occasionally. more just for pieces.

Sbal
11-09-2010, 12:08 AM
Hipe i like the letters but some of the extension what-not is making it seem forced.

Llnknown
11-10-2010, 02:12 PM
Just gettin started. My buddy let me borrow his Magnum so I'm workin on my flow.. Still tryin to think of a name


Kar
Bkar
Stuk
Stak
Kage
Tak

Like Bkar & Kar the most.. I feel like I can progress pretty well with them

13365

MoganOne
11-10-2010, 04:21 PM
rewl -listen to zewl letters are almost the same and his handys are fresh..
village- what do u write anyway? it does have potential style wise.
fuckthefame- nice overall and that 1st e on the word "the" is sick.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0069.jpg

Don't do this to yourself man... You got to go way simpler bro loose those crazy extensions under the HIP... Try not to plan to make it look cool and just focus on the smoothness and cleanliness

MoganOne
11-10-2010, 04:24 PM
rewl -listen to zewl letters are almost the same and his handys are fresh..
village- what do u write anyway? it does have potential style wise.
fuckthefame- nice overall and that 1st e on the word "the" is sick.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0069.jpg

Don't do this to yourself man... You got to go way simpler bro loose those crazy extensions under the HIP... Try not to plan to make it look cool and just focus on the smoothness and cleanliness

illegal_drugs
11-10-2010, 05:41 PM
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/2012/scan002r.jpg (http://img833.imageshack.us/i/scan002r.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

any crits?

Minx
11-10-2010, 05:49 PM
Just gettin started. My buddy let me borrow his Magnum so I'm workin on my flow.. Still tryin to think of a name


Kar
Bkar
Stuk
Stak
Kage
Tak

Like Bkar & Kar the most.. I feel like I can progress pretty well with them

13365

I like the first "tak" best...

Bounty
11-10-2010, 05:56 PM
Speaking of "Tak" i was doing some shit on a wall for a guy whos tag was "Tak" so i practiced on a wall in my room so here it is :P
Next time i have free time i will picture real graff on the wall :)
http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4866/dsc00071ra.jpg
Btw sorry for the smudges and stuff its an old graff...its been there for 2 years xD

Gyse
11-10-2010, 09:56 PM
I used to see a pretty dope Tak in my area. Just sayin the name's common. Stuk is a better name anyway, and you'll probably go through names on a monthly basis until you're decent and serious.

edit- and bounty, honestly its terrible. Start with simples in bombing, just like tags. There is absolutely no structure in that, and I looked at it a second time to try to find something positive to say. I failed.

Llnknown
11-10-2010, 10:05 PM
yeah i like Stuk too but i cant keep a good momentum with the U in there. practice practice practiceeee

H1P30N3R
11-10-2010, 10:12 PM
i see what you sayin mogan thanks for the crits

NouveauP
11-11-2010, 12:36 AM
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0004.jpg

Bounty
11-11-2010, 01:25 AM
Gyse man i told ya that shit is 2 years old...

illegal_drugs
11-11-2010, 04:24 AM
anyone has any suggestions on my tags?

NouveauP
11-11-2010, 11:00 AM
Throw out your top hand altogether.

On the bottom hand. Keep your RA simple like they are, but clean up your lines, make all of your letters the same size, work on spacing, etc. as for the SN, they both need to go. Make your S look like the S on your keyboard. And use a capital N until you learn a little bit more, then you can play around with it. Hope that helps.

Crits for me?

NosE2
11-11-2010, 11:12 AM
t'was clean ^^
http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/9197/imgp3319y.jpg

Gyse
11-11-2010, 11:28 AM
Goya- looks good, maybe tweak the G somehow to make it more original. Thats all I can think of

Zewl- Also nice, i just dont like the underline thing.

dubbed
11-11-2010, 01:30 PM
nose does that say zewer? shits crazy haha, you might want to slow down

NouveauP
11-11-2010, 01:53 PM
Damn nose, you've got a grimey ass style for sure. Shit's dope. Paint it!

Sbal
11-12-2010, 12:43 AM
noice

AnonymousWaaa
11-12-2010, 06:54 AM
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/SSC_0004.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/SSC_0002.jpg
Crits and advice please

ghostwriter
11-12-2010, 10:15 AM
Ja Ja Ja one you know

AnonymousWaaa
11-12-2010, 03:46 PM
Hell, yes. One of my favorite bombers and I love seeing his hands. I'm a long way from NYC...

Meant a lot to me to be able to put paint on a panel JA was standin' infront of bombin'.

That boxtruck was a hollow/handstyle gangbang.

Love - There's a pro that uses that name. It's one of them names that can't be used twice. Not to mention there's a LOVE in every city and they all tag the same...Lol.

really dont care, uk here anyway.. and yeah theirs a love in tko, and thats the only big writer who writes love..+ to me its more than just a name

Zookyook
11-12-2010, 04:43 PM
i love you is from nyc, whoever it is just writes i love you or love me etc... its artfag shit...

props on the JA freight rewt, that nigle has hit so many trucks, never seen one out here in the midwest though, not with my own eyes at least, i bet the bean has a lot of trucks from nyc that pass through though

Gyse
11-12-2010, 08:37 PM
love- bottom one looks ok, clean up the o and make a point on the V.

NoCanControl
11-12-2010, 08:39 PM
LOVE, If i seen it rocking I wouldn't slash it. (That's a good thing) hahah Just keep doing what you're doing.

http://i53.tinypic.com/2utjh48.jpg

weedeater
11-12-2010, 09:41 PM
just started writing a couple of weeks ago. looking for crits.

http://i54.tinypic.com/1z6e32h.jpg
http://i56.tinypic.com/vfhgo.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/xdmw2.jpg

DECO ONE
11-13-2010, 01:17 AM
LOVE me some One liners ...
RESIN


http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1236/5164741766_8255491060.jpg


and this ones old... about 5 years now... haha.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4153/5066565969_44f7901f7c.jpg

H1P30N3R
11-13-2010, 10:01 AM
love the progression shot deco gives me hope lol but for real sick ass handy

ReSeM
11-13-2010, 10:23 AM
why does everyone wanna fucking write love
be creative people names aren't that hard to come by

MoganOne
11-13-2010, 07:54 PM
LOVE me some One liners ...
RESIN


http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1236/5164741766_8255491060.jpg


and this ones old... about 5 years now... haha.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4153/5066565969_44f7901f7c.jpg
That one you did 5 years ago looks better then the one you did recently imo

Sbal
11-13-2010, 09:55 PM
yeah it looks cleaner and more styleee

DECO ONE
11-14-2010, 12:36 PM
the Top one is the recent one... the bottom one with the arrow is the old one

MET156
11-14-2010, 12:48 PM
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/315/5/e/bigtoe_tag_fat_drip_marker_by_badikal-d32m99f.jpg

Gyse
11-14-2010, 02:36 PM
why did you slash it?

MET156
11-14-2010, 02:39 PM
why did you slash it?

I noticed there was a lot of extra space at the bottom of the letters so instead of going with an underline, I went with sort of a slash type thing. I felt that it brought the entire thing together a bit. Not kosher?

Delyte
11-14-2010, 02:43 PM
13508

what do u guys think of this one??

MoganOne
11-14-2010, 05:18 PM
the Top one is the recent one... the bottom one with the arrow is the old one

The one in white with the Arrow has a better solid style IMO... The newer one is not bad though...
Everyone else on this page is hurting my eyes... Look at your keybourd and try to practice the letters on the Keys... People don't understand that you can not have style unless you can do a clean lettering first

Delyte
11-14-2010, 06:39 PM
advice?

weedeater
11-14-2010, 07:24 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1384/111310100700.jpg (http://img181.imageshack.us/i/111310100700.jpg/)
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/6146/111310100100.jpg (http://img338.imageshack.us/i/111310100100.jpg/)


my nib bit the dust on the bottom of the shorter one. i dont remember what i was trying to do. but enough excuses on my shit hands. crits?

bumping for crits

MoganOne
11-14-2010, 07:34 PM
Does that say Shaman? Dude I don't know if thos circles connecting your letters is what you want to continue doing. but they are not looking to hot

weedeater
11-14-2010, 07:37 PM
yeah it does, and the one above it says SHAW. Ill write one or the other depending on the surface size. and the only reason the circles are there is its the best way ive found to connect everything without picking the marker up, and put a line through the A's at the same time. i appreciate it man, thats exactly what i was looking for. ill try to kill the circles.

MoganOne
11-14-2010, 08:00 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1114101851-1.jpg
If you want to connect the A's doing them in lower case may be better

Gyse
11-14-2010, 10:11 PM
I noticed there was a lot of extra space at the bottom of the letters so instead of going with an underline, I went with sort of a slash type thing. I felt that it brought the entire thing together a bit. Not kosher?

haha you know what, do what you gotta man lol. try normal letters a while though.

Delyte, that last ones looking a little better; keep working. The D is lacking, and the cursive L is not working.

And shaman, that S-h connect is weak too.

Delyte
11-14-2010, 10:46 PM
The D is lacking, and the cursive L is not working.

I switched to the cursive L because i thought it flows way better with the Y...any suggestions?

weakfingers
11-15-2010, 12:50 AM
Havent posted in here for a while
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1036/5177238361_56f4399267.jpg

weedeater
11-15-2010, 08:13 AM
alright, thanks guys, ill start working on the points you brought up.

dj3hac
11-15-2010, 02:09 PM
looking pretty good delyte, i wouldn't use the tail of the Y for an underline and the cursive L doesn't really work for me. Keep it up though, you'll go to good places!

weakfingers
11-15-2010, 04:34 PM
Do you airbrush, aside from graffiti?

I want an airbrush but thats all mop right there, I got my secretes

Gyse
11-15-2010, 05:21 PM
It looks like sqwint just did an ink tag on a wet surface. Maybe not, whatever.

Rewt, I wouldn't be talking shit if my tag looked like that. It's not really bad, but it doesn't have much style, at all really. It's where toys should start with their tags, simple with no add ons or anything. Nice spot though.

DECO ONE
11-15-2010, 05:58 PM
I want an airbrush but thats all mop right there, I got my secretes
secrets are... it was wet.. LOL.. same way i rocked this Ish

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4104/5066565945_596acdbae7.jpg

H1P30N3R
11-15-2010, 06:03 PM
what fat caps other than rusto fats can u use on rusto w/o it leaking everywhere?

weakfingers
11-15-2010, 06:12 PM
Gyse got it, the ink was really thick and the water just started to bleed it in weird ways.



Dear Anion-Heckler 1 & 2-Rewt -Troll
You suck, your trolling attempts suck, Im the shit, Im amazing, Im the greatest, I will kill you all day everyday.


cough sarcasm cough

NosE2
11-15-2010, 07:39 PM
yo rewt my favorite cap on rusto is definitely the one's off of the elmer's glue, nice flairs. i posted some painted hands a few pages back, too lazy to go get new flicks atm.

But yo EXI, I just came across a notebook from like last year. This is what you're gonna' want most of the pages to look like.
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/5956/zzzzaz.jpg
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/6857/zzzzbw.jpg
i fuckin forgot i was kickin it with pask for a bit haha..qyb everyone
http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/518/zzzzzs.jpg

covert_Con
11-15-2010, 08:28 PM
New to this fourm...guess ill start postin here.

NosE2
11-15-2010, 08:36 PM
Does that say Frist or Frost? 'Cause there's already a dude that's up that writes Frost.

covert_Con
11-15-2010, 08:49 PM
Does that say Frist or Frost? 'Cause there's already a dude that's up that writes Frost.

Man. Ive been writing that for 2 years bra. Im from dallas anyway dont think that would matter to him.

Gyse
11-15-2010, 08:54 PM
If that's what your tag looks like after 2 years you should just give up. Or admit you're lying, and change your name out of respect. Either way, I don't really care and real writers in your area will always cap you.

covert_Con
11-15-2010, 09:27 PM
Well one year. I gave it up for the past year. I got some more stuff comin but my computer is to damn slow.

NosE2
11-15-2010, 10:09 PM
You can either take our advice (which is what this forum is for), or you can keep wasting your time and never get respect. Up to you
http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/7696/frostn.jpg

Delyte
11-16-2010, 11:33 AM
so a bunch of people told me they dont like the cursive L., i just think it flows better. Any suggestions on how to make the non cursive L work better.

IbuprofenTablets
11-16-2010, 11:51 AM
I'm not trollin' you...
Just givin' you a reality check.


You are just trolling.
You've been trolling ever since you lost that paint battle to FV.

Ever since then, I've been loling at you.

You'd think that someone decent would be giving the "reality checks" to people.
Instead, it's just some toy that's been writing for like 12months.

I guess I can't hate, cause you've been the biggest clown on here since you joined, and you still maintain your title with pride. At least you're persistant.

dj3hac
11-16-2010, 11:54 AM
coming along Delyte. I'm currently working on paper to see if I can help you get that flow better.

Here is something I've been trying to develop:

13570

It says "Fraga En" which is "Ask One" in Swedish.

IbuprofenTablets
11-16-2010, 02:58 PM
Nope, not even.
You'll never see me typing paragraphs about people that come to this forum, or the forum in general like you do.

I just find it funny that you're the one giving reality checks to the people who need it.

ghostwriter
11-16-2010, 03:05 PM
ZEN DORE THAose tagggggs are ill,

IbuprofenTablets
11-16-2010, 08:10 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo83-2.jpg

dj3hac
11-16-2010, 08:13 PM
Ibu and heklr, this forum is called "Toy tags... Only" not "Bitch each other out", not trying to be a wanker but please keep it in the PM's.

NosE2
11-16-2010, 08:47 PM
your hands are legit, but i don't like the way you write it on top of eachother like that... and on that R, you should make the V like you did in the H and A ....you know kinda like revok's R.


edit: make the "R" like the H and A.

Gyse
11-16-2010, 09:46 PM
fragra- Do less connections for now, and lose some of the add ons and fancy shit until you have basic letters down better.
delyte- I see what you mean about the normal L not looking as good. Try changing up the E's and find a way to make it fit better w/ the bottom part of the Y.

I've been trying to make a better simple tag, crits so far?
http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/8414/image52v.jpg (http://img809.imageshack.us/i/image52v.jpg/)

1 or 2? I thought the curves made it look a little sloppy
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/2370/image56x.jpg (http://img252.imageshack.us/i/image56x.jpg/)

IbuprofenTablets
11-16-2010, 09:57 PM
Ibu and heklr, this forum is called "Toy tags... Only" not "Bitch each other out", not trying to be a wanker but please keep it in the PM's.

Shut the fuck up. Complaining about how other people are clogging threads up is a waste in itself.



your hands are legit, but i don't like the way you write it on top of eachother like that... and on that R, you should make the V like you did in the H and A ....you know kinda like revok's R.


edit: make the "R" like the H and A.

Ahh, I'll try that next time.

I knew that it wasn't matching once the shit was laid out, and while it was being laid out, but I just said fuck it.
As for the stacking letters thing: I'm leaving it like that.
It's just something that I like to do.
I do feel you on the R not matching, though.

ChadWarden
11-16-2010, 09:58 PM
im defiently feeling the symmetry in the second two, but have you considered making all you letters the same size? just seems like the e and g are afterthought and that you focused only on the a and r.

MoganOne
11-16-2010, 10:11 PM
Yo Aegr "1" is a lot better looking then "2"
I don't like how your simple tag came out

Delyte
11-16-2010, 10:29 PM
same^^ i think 1 looks better

Gyse
11-16-2010, 10:35 PM
Thanks for the opinions.

Chad, I've tried making them all the same size but this looked better to me. I'll work with it, thanks guys.

Edit- actually mogan can you tell me what you dont like about it? I have more trouble with simples for some reason..

JustME
11-17-2010, 12:10 PM
opinions?

ghostwriter
11-17-2010, 01:04 PM
dope vandles

JustME
11-17-2010, 01:21 PM
that bad?

MoganOne
11-17-2010, 01:49 PM
Thanks for the opinions.

Chad, I've tried making them all the same size but this looked better to me. I'll work with it, thanks guys.

Edit- actually mogan can you tell me what you dont like about it? I have more trouble with simples for some reason..

It really depens on how simple you are trying to go.My advice would be real simple and proper straight up solid letters.
That E is way to wack man lol... the only letter I like is the R... If you make a simp try to make all of the letters the same consistency

Delyte
11-17-2010, 05:28 PM
1363113632

Crits?? I like the bottom one better, but thats only because i cant really get the L and Y to go together real nice...any advice??

Diabolical
11-17-2010, 05:36 PM
Delyte your tag is dope its coming along, you could consider making your L a lower case one with a fish hook like a backwards J so its less blocky ya dig? I'm working on my name as well I am thinking of:

Empyre
Krazed
Zero
Zone
Beast
Aerosol

Let me know what you guys think of some of these names or if any are taken that you know of.. ty

Gyse
11-17-2010, 05:59 PM
Beast is taken, I just saw a couple panels of his today actually.
Zero is probably taken 10000000 times at least
Empyre might not be, but its long for a toy. Just play around with different names for a while.

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9693/image57n.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/image57n.jpg/)

Diabolical
11-17-2010, 06:52 PM
Ya i just assumed some of the generic ones were taken but they are short cuz like u said aerosol and empyre are just a bit long. thanks for the crit any other critiquing would be much appreciated

Sbal
11-17-2010, 08:09 PM
Zone is taken hard

WoRdSmYtH
11-17-2010, 08:26 PM
Yah, ZERO is way overdone, not very original.
Aerosol seems a little cliche to me. I'd say your EMPYRE idea is the most original...

@ JUSTME, that's lookin' pretty ill, but I'd try and clean it up a bit by working on your control.
When you double back on your N, D, and mostly your As, try and stay on the same line, if you know what I mean...
If you can get that down, it'll look a lot fresher IMO, unless you're diggin' the messier look.
Personally, I'd also try something a little more elaborate with the L, and something diff with the V too, tho not as complex as the L.
Then I'd throw some shit on top...
Anyways, looks sweet dude.

Gyse, what is that one sayin'?

Gyse
11-17-2010, 10:27 PM
^says aegr.

Maybe this one's more legible
http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/6996/image58u.jpg (http://img41.imageshack.us/i/image58u.jpg/)

Diabolical
11-17-2010, 11:03 PM
I like aegr thats tite. Thanks for the feedback, Im trying to think of something more original so far Ive come up with:

Aeros
Xero
Raze
Retro
Scrybe

Any thoughts on those or any taken? critics welcome

JustME
11-18-2010, 07:16 AM
@ JUSTME, that's lookin' pretty ill, but I'd try and clean it up a bit by working on your control.
When you double back on your N, D, and mostly your As, try and stay on the same line, if you know what I mean...
If you can get that down, it'll look a lot fresher IMO, unless you're diggin' the messier look.
Personally, I'd also try something a little more elaborate with the L, and something diff with the V too, tho not as complex as the L.
Then I'd throw some shit on top...
Anyways, looks sweet dude.



im gonna work on cleaning it up. i kinda like the messy look. for the more elaborate with the V and L im gonna have to work on that. i just dont know how to make them more elaborate. examples are welcome lol.

and thanks word smith much appricated.

ReackOne
11-19-2010, 04:33 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4109/5026749746_7af28e7d8e.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5026749754_b3f08fc962.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4105/5026749738_e43eeeb8aa.jpg

Crits on the handies :cool:

AnonymousWaaa
11-20-2010, 04:27 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4109/5026749746_7af28e7d8e.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5026749754_b3f08fc962.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4105/5026749738_e43eeeb8aa.jpg

Crits on the handies :cool:

Work on your flow, and practice with a pen/pen with a small nib, the thick nib kind of lies to you, just keep at it and try to get your letters flowing, i can see youve got some pretty good ideas though..

Few i thought of today, crits and advice please?
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/DSC_0001.jpg
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/DSC_0002.jpg
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/DSC_0004.jpg
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/DSC_0003-1.jpg

ribcage
11-20-2010, 04:42 PM
Reack? dangerously close to what i write... hope u aint in cali

MoganOne
11-20-2010, 05:23 PM
Doctor looking pretty proper

Phillip McDougall
11-21-2010, 12:23 PM
Doctor, looking clean.

Diabolical
11-21-2010, 12:35 PM
Just fuxin around, comments or crits? I think this will be my new name "Wyze"

AnonymousWaaa
11-21-2010, 01:23 PM
stay simple, no need for all those random lines and extensions

Diabolical
11-21-2010, 08:48 PM
just what the doctor ordered

MoganOne
11-21-2010, 10:33 PM
The doctor ordered shit? lol nah I'm playing What program did you use to make that tag? it does not look too bad the W could use work...
The Z could go with out the slash

Diabolical
11-21-2010, 11:01 PM
haha I used graffiti.playdo.com its free and I can waste hours away on it, u should check it out. I agree looking back on that I dont like the slash in the z either, the w is just hella plain

ReackOne
11-22-2010, 12:58 PM
Reack? dangerously close to what i write... hope u aint in cali



haha... Thing is I been writing reack long time now. and even if I was in cali, what would you do?
Its highly unlikely that you and me are gonna cross paths, because I live in UK.
And besides its dangerously close, its not the same thing. So back off, buddy.

ribcage
11-22-2010, 05:00 PM
^ wasn't tryin to come across hostile, if you lived in cali id say we would have to see who writes better and go from there

ReackOne
11-22-2010, 05:21 PM
^ Fair enough, bro...

What do you write thats so dangerously close to reack?

ribcage
11-22-2010, 05:39 PM
reach

Flawless Victory
11-22-2010, 06:13 PM
hey wyze kid, do you live in the midwest?

Diabolical
11-22-2010, 06:23 PM
yerp

NosE2
11-22-2010, 08:10 PM
blurry pic for talk.
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1123/imgp3383.jpg

j3d10n3r
11-23-2010, 03:45 PM
http://i56.tinypic.com/r7lt3q.jpg

AnonymousWaaa
11-23-2010, 04:05 PM
that i looks really off place man ^ could be lower

something i thought looked pretty good..
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/DSC_0010.jpg

MoganOne
11-23-2010, 06:29 PM
Looks bad man

weedeater
11-23-2010, 06:38 PM
obviously, thats why its in the toy section. my question is how can i correct it.

Diabolical
11-23-2010, 08:29 PM
great advice mogan.... Weed, I like the S it's looking good, you should maybe try and keep the consistency so the letter styling is uniform throughout. Your spacing isnt bad tho, I think the h is a little too close to the S... If that is an h.. Im not sure

ChadWarden
11-23-2010, 11:05 PM
just a quickie to show you guys my handstyle.


http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2541/img002qh.jpg





edit: i'll post some more up later.

Flawless Victory
11-23-2010, 11:38 PM
yerp
you know about Wyse D30 from chicago, right?

Flawless Victory
11-23-2010, 11:58 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4128/5033275566_cd07f186aa_z.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2643/3708985142_7da66b7e2a_z.jpg?zz=1
Clearly not mine.

Not trying to clog the thread, just helping a young ***** out.

Rask Wsk LA
11-24-2010, 12:10 AM
This one of my tags, im not so good with handstyles, lookin for some crits
il prolly get more up later

weedeater
11-24-2010, 12:27 AM
thanks for the crits guys. Ill work on it and hopefully post some progress soon.

Diabolical
11-24-2010, 01:12 AM
I did not know of this fellow street artist, hes got some dope pieces

Diabolical
11-24-2010, 03:05 AM
wyse is a little too close to myne I think.. prob gonna change it up. u guys like this new one?

AnonymousWaaa
11-24-2010, 02:15 PM
In my opinion i think it would look better with wider letters and having all the letters level, pretty much in capslock style "AEROS" but with your own style to it.. dont know if that made sense but yeah

Delyte
11-24-2010, 03:06 PM
crits on this one??

NosE2
11-24-2010, 05:08 PM
dog everytime I see you post a handstyle it looks exactly the same...like all you do to switch it up is make the L cursive or a capital

here's an oldie
http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/3770/imgp3398.jpg

Delyte
11-24-2010, 06:05 PM
dog everytime I see you post a handstyle it looks exactly the same...like all you do to switch it up is make the L cursive or a capital

yea their all pretty similar but they all have slight differences. For example i made the D and E bigger on either side and played around with the Y and I try doing some stuff with the top of the T, but yes they are all basically the same. I'll post some definitely post some other shit soon, but i just wanted to work on getting one handstyle down solid before I do something completely different.

Delyte
11-24-2010, 06:06 PM
^^^ On that note, any suggestions??

ribcage
11-25-2010, 12:19 AM
^choose a style and do all yo letters in that style, dont just throw a cursive letter or a different styled letter in there for fun cause it will most likely turn out wack

NouveauP
11-25-2010, 04:30 PM
Nose- It all looks too spaced out. I'd like to see a tighter hand from you.

I attempted a one liner. It reads "RECKON"

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0048.jpg

Gyse
11-25-2010, 06:07 PM
Reckon- It looks good, but the K looks like an R. Keep the O from looking like the E, its not bad though. Really nice looking C.

AnonymousWaaa
11-25-2010, 07:38 PM
also the R looks like an n/s

NosE2
11-26-2010, 02:34 PM
Nouv you have a really smooth hand...I see how you tried to make a big lowercause cursive R....i'm diggin it...and I think your K looks like a Z...to me at least. Here's a more compact one I think.
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3614/imgp3218p.jpg

ribcage
11-27-2010, 05:05 AM
one on the gerder is dope, wood 1 i like it, but if i didnt already know what it said i might not be able to read it

Bounty
11-28-2010, 01:16 PM
Im back with a new tag "Morz/s"
Here are some pics, tomorrow will be more..
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5935/dsc00085do.jpg
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6466/dsc00082ee.jpg
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2805/dsc00081cn.jpg
Its bad for now..comment it..

MoganOne
11-28-2010, 11:33 PM
Nice name bro! Props

smokeitup
11-29-2010, 12:25 AM
Nice name bro! Props

sarcasm??? u cant be serious

Bounty
11-29-2010, 09:11 AM
sarcasm??? u cant be serious
Talking about Morz?

HugzNotThugz
11-29-2010, 12:42 PM
14035

some steezys.
RASK I like it, do something more creative with the K though.
AEROS Ditch the stars, and don't make the leg if your R curvy like that. You could get some good symmetry with that A and if you put a tail coming off the bottom of the S towards the right, nah meen?
DELYTE looks good meng, the jog in the bottom extension in the Y is a little random though, and I think you could do something to your last E to either make it similar to the D or differentiate it from the other E-- try adding a vertical extension from the bottom just see how it looks? You may like the similar E's though, just my 2 cents.
RECKON I like that style, do what the others said but keep working with it, good shit.
ZEWL It's legit, only thing I find weird is the E in the top pic
BOUNTY make the bubble of your R smaller

Culture_Shock
11-29-2010, 02:17 PM
That Reckon reads like Necron

Stuck
11-30-2010, 03:48 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_0005.jpg

ribcage
11-30-2010, 04:56 PM
^ that could be a 1 liner easy, ...u prolly already fucked w/ it tho

Heksz
11-30-2010, 05:34 PM
A few tags on the street.. simple handy,old but not really old but only pictures i have,

http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/8373/tag1q.jpg (http://img811.imageshack.us/i/tag1q.jpg/)

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http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1966/tag2y.jpg (http://img251.imageshack.us/i/tag2y.jpg/)

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http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/5375/tag3.jpg (http://img585.imageshack.us/i/tag3.jpg/)

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ribcage
11-30-2010, 05:44 PM
^ haha y u tag a sofa?

Heksz
11-30-2010, 05:45 PM
^ haha y u tag a sofa?

its a bus seat LOL

Stuck
11-30-2010, 06:13 PM
^ that could be a 1 liner easy, ...u prolly already fucked w/ it tho

lol http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_0009.jpg

ribcage
11-30-2010, 06:56 PM
^o yup, looks clean too

Sbal
11-30-2010, 08:41 PM
not really feelin the ea in the one liner

NouveauP
11-30-2010, 09:55 PM
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0050.jpg

Ha. I found myself back at a bathroom I did randomly a month ago. Apparently Beeftips and another artist or two added to the fun. :cool:

MoganOne
11-30-2010, 10:11 PM
Dude that shit is funny man!! Someone did that to your tag??? Lolzy

NouveauP
11-30-2010, 11:00 PM
Yeah, it was funny to see. Beeftips is a homie of mine, but I dunno when he did that and whoever else did the other shit. Makes my shit way more noticeable. Haha.

Lado
12-01-2010, 09:05 PM
Yeah.. I'm definitely a toy :P

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/dumpstertag.jpg

ribcage
12-01-2010, 10:39 PM
^yikes, you managed to make simple letters look bad

Lado
12-02-2010, 02:12 PM
I don't think they look bad really. The D and O and L are on point with keyboard lettering. I do admit though, the A is sloppy. Otherwise, it isn't that bad.

Task977
12-02-2010, 08:35 PM
Lado - when you first start you cant tell what works and what doesnt, so even if you think you have the dopest handy in the country it most likely isnt too hot
Hugz - I agree with Heklr, that one in the bottom middle is dope
anyways heres somethin i sketched up today, developing a decent handstyle is a struggle
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/5141/scan0004hi.jpg (http://img195.imageshack.us/i/scan0004hi.jpg/)

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Lado
12-03-2010, 12:16 AM
Yeah Task, I did basically just start writing. And thanks. I'm not claiming to be a dope writer, I was just standing up for myself a little bit. But thanks for the advice.

ribcage
12-03-2010, 12:21 AM
isnt that bad? alright dude keep tellin yourself that

Lado
12-03-2010, 12:26 AM
Bro, don't get nasty, I'm not looking to start any beef. If I saw someone new to graffiti, I'd want to help them and bring them up with crits, not look to crush them. I was going to ask if you could possibly show me how to do a better throw, but don't worry about it now. I'm sorry for messing with the vibe.

ribcage
12-03-2010, 12:32 AM
^ was my comment nasty? nah i could have straight dissed you but instead I held back and left a 7 word comment and was gonna leave it at that
and part of getting better is doin shitty stuff but when you do something shitty expect for people to tell you its shitty not spoon feed you ways to get better

Lado
12-03-2010, 12:43 AM
Alright, sometimes it's hard to transfer emotions over the computer by reading the text. And thanks for the advice man. Have a nice night and enjoy the weekend.

ribcage
12-03-2010, 12:54 AM
u want help pm me and try to work out an exchange

Heksz
12-03-2010, 08:15 AM
A few tags on the street.. simple handy,old but not really old but only pictures i have,

http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/8373/tag1q.jpg (http://img811.imageshack.us/i/tag1q.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)


http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1966/tag2y.jpg (http://img251.imageshack.us/i/tag2y.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)


http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/5375/tag3.jpg (http://img585.imageshack.us/i/tag3.jpg/)

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bumpity bump, crits?

and i really like that jestr tag, i really like that style tbh

Delyte
12-04-2010, 01:06 AM
14209

any tips on making this tag better? changed up the style for this one

ribcage
12-04-2010, 01:17 AM
^ id go with a capital d but thats just me

"InsaYne"17
12-04-2010, 12:21 PM
ok so i've always loved graffiti for as long as i could remember but i cannot get past a pretty generic not-too-good handstyle were you guys able to write good right out the gate or did it take time? I really need tips on how to get better because this is a huge passion of mine but i fail hard on it.

Delyte
12-04-2010, 01:51 PM
ok so i've always loved graffiti for as long as i could remember but i cannot get past a pretty generic not-too-good handstyle were you guys able to write good right out the gate or did it take time? I really need tips on how to get better because this is a huge passion of mine but i fail hard on it.

Do you know/talk to other writers? I'm pretty new to graffiti myself but I know my friends helped my out a lot in improving my handstyle better. As long as you hang out with other writers and show them your stuff they'll help you out. Also, look for inspiration, look at the "tags tags tags" forum and look at how the good tags look. Don't try to copy their style but look at what elements make their tag good and try to apply this to your own. Its just like writing music, you have to listen to it in order to create it. As far as actual advice for your tag, I'd loose all the arrows and make your e look more like an e and play around with different styles. I don't wanna say too much cause I'm a toy myself.

"InsaYne"17
12-04-2010, 02:21 PM
Do you know/talk to other writers? I'm pretty new to graffiti myself but I know my friends helped my out a lot in improving my handstyle better. As long as you hang out with other writers and show them your stuff they'll help you out. Also, look for inspiration, look at the "tags tags tags" forum and look at how the good tags look. Don't try to copy their style but look at what elements make their tag good and try to apply this to your own. Its just like writing music, you have to listen to it in order to create it. As far as actual advice for your tag, I'd loose all the arrows and make your e look more like an e and play around with different styles. I don't wanna say too much cause I'm a toy myself.

I don't know any other writers and I know that's a huge problem. My friends aren't into this kinda stuff so I don't even try to show them. I write music too and the genre I write is also something I would never show my friends. Thanks for the info though I agree the "e" looks not too much like an "e" and more like an "o".

Flawless Victory
12-04-2010, 02:59 PM
Simplicity, bro.
Hands aren't about looking super hip hop phresh to death, man.
They're just the simplest, easiest, most desperate attempt people have to get up.
Can't do a fill? Catch a hand.
Want to catch street spots in the day? Catch a hand.
These are the things you will use more than just about anything else in graffiti, you don't want them to be super complicated and difficult, because then they'll probably just end up looking stupid.
First off, I would tell you not to write "insayne".
It's a long word, and it just sounds stupid.
Try to shoot for a word no more than 4 or 5 letters long.
Second, don't overlap the letters in your hand, it just looks goofy; and make the letters look like letters, your name isn't "arrowpointingupnsayncircled17"

If you aren't going to change your name (which I personally REALLY suggest you do), then just start writing INSAYNE, just like that.
The point of a hand is not to make it look like something else, it's just supposed to look like you wrote your name.
Any amount of tweaking done to a hand, 9 times out of 10, is simply to make the flow easier and the letters match.

"InsaYne"17
12-04-2010, 03:08 PM
Simplicity, bro.
Hands aren't about looking super hip hop phresh to death, man.
They're just the simplest, easiest, most desperate attempt people have to get up.
Can't do a fill? Catch a hand.
Want to catch street spots in the day? Catch a hand.
These are the things you will use more than just about anything else in graffiti, you don't want them to be super complicated and difficult, because then they'll probably just end up looking stupid.
First off, I would tell you not to write "insayne".
It's a long word, and it just sounds stupid.
Try to shoot for a word no more than 4 or 5 letters long.
Second, don't overlap the letters in your hand, it just looks goofy; and make the letters look like letters, your name isn't "arrowpointingupnsayncircled17"

If you aren't going to change your name (which I personally REALLY suggest you do), then just start writing INSAYNE, just like that.
The point of a hand is not to make it look like something else, it's just supposed to look like you wrote your name.
Any amount of tweaking done to a hand, 9 times out of 10, is simply to make the flow easier and the letters match.

Thanks man after doing this I was thinking of making it shorter but I couldn't really think of anything. How do you feel about Nors or Norse?

Rask Wsk LA
12-04-2010, 04:01 PM
Was just messin around and got this? any siggestions or crits, i think theres good to come from this one

Delyte, make that d uppercase and have a shape like the T

insayne, lose the graphics go simple.... Norce

"InsaYne"17
12-04-2010, 04:05 PM
I'm no good to be giving anyone crits but imo i think it is a little sloppy. The s and k arent really legible as s and k but it beats mine.

Rask Wsk LA
12-04-2010, 04:11 PM
yeah i just hit that shit up in 4 sec, just came out of my head, and obviosly a one liner, ima work some shit out and post later

MoganOne
12-04-2010, 05:45 PM
Rask it looks legit... Change the K up it is wack

"InsaYne"17
12-04-2010, 05:51 PM
Better or Worse than Insayne?
14234

*edit*
really sorry for size it got distorted when i tried to make it smaller

Culture_Shock
12-04-2010, 07:52 PM
Rask looks nice. One liners are where it's at, but don't lose the S by going too fast.
Insayne- Norse is a great improvement. you're still trying to get too fancy, but you can draw a straight fucking line, which is more than some people can handle. i try to direct toys to mop style tags, mops lend themselves better towards straight steez.

Flawless Victory
12-04-2010, 08:30 PM
Dude, trust, you don't want to be getting any more complicated than this for a minute.

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/3091/89320996.png

BALE
12-04-2010, 09:17 PM
Fresh. I know. Ill leave the toy section.

SOHRI
12-04-2010, 09:36 PM
Fresh. I know. Ill leave the toy section.

No, you just sit your pretty little ass right back down.

CHOWDER 36
12-04-2010, 09:59 PM
14255

CHOWDER 36
12-04-2010, 10:00 PM
that something for u to look at while ur sitting BALE

BALE
12-04-2010, 10:03 PM
Post your shit. lets go?

BALE
12-04-2010, 10:03 PM
14255

kids fressssssh.

SOHRI
12-04-2010, 11:00 PM
This is my tag, it's a lot easier to write in a hurry then SOHRI.

Advice?

NouveauP
12-04-2010, 11:17 PM
uhhh.... don't get in a hurry

SicK-
12-05-2010, 12:02 AM
Crits?
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/a6133ba5.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
12-05-2010, 08:13 AM
Looks like you bit Zewler's "W".

SicK-
12-05-2010, 10:35 AM
Don't even know who zewler is, post a picture? And it's a pretty simple w

"InsaYne"17
12-05-2010, 11:09 AM
Insayne- Norse is a great improvement. you're still trying to get too fancy, but you can draw a straight fucking line, which is more than some people can handle. i try to direct toys to mop style tags, mops lend themselves better towards straight steez.

Dude, trust, you don't want to be getting any more complicated than this for a minute.

ok i get what you guys are saying i gotta keep it as simple as possible for now until i can progress and shit. thanks for the crits.

Task977
12-05-2010, 01:33 PM
Don't even know who zewler is, post a picture? And it's a pretty simple w
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1120/imgp3314k.jpg
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4277/imgp3313i.jpg
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4071/imgp3310.jpg
thats zewler

hecktor
12-05-2010, 01:50 PM
lol http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_0009.jpg

oh rlllyyyy

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/DSC_3900.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/TranscamAutoSales.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/DSC_3758.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/TranscamAutoSales015.jpg

thatswhatshesaid
12-05-2010, 01:52 PM
^^^^


also shori. Flow/style>Speed

SicK-
12-05-2010, 03:01 PM
Thanks task. and i honestly dont know how someone would call a bite on that w lmao.

ribcage
12-05-2010, 03:45 PM
dont see a bite cause all w's look the goddamn same, but that heck&hear do look pretty close

"InsaYne"17
12-05-2010, 03:49 PM
the h's are identical but there are differences throughout the eck and ear

MoganOne
12-05-2010, 05:22 PM
Heck's dope

"InsaYne"17
12-05-2010, 06:58 PM
i tried this instead of norse because this kind of fits me better and i feel i can do a lot more with it. i know it's toy as hell but that's why i'm in this thread. crits please.
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mikk
12-05-2010, 07:14 PM
http://i1202.photobucket.com/albums/bb365/latemikk/Photo117.jpg
crits????
first tag just trying things out. lemme know any sugestions.

weedeater
12-05-2010, 07:22 PM
norse was more original, and you might want to search emo graff on flickr.

"InsaYne"17
12-05-2010, 07:30 PM
norse was more original, and you might want to search emo graff on flickr.

yea i know emo is used by more people but its hard to find a good 3-5 letter word thats not taken but i'll keep thinking of a good name i'm still trying to figure out who i am right now in terms of writing and shit like that.

mikk
12-05-2010, 08:13 PM
just did up a new tag. don't really like teh word but want some crits.
http://i1202.photobucket.com/albums/bb365/latemikk/Photo122.jpg

NosE2
12-05-2010, 08:13 PM
my beer is warm but thats not holdin me back
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/3492/imgp3411.jpg
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/3641/imgp3412s.jpg

SOHRI
12-05-2010, 08:13 PM
yea i know emo is used by more people but its hard to find a good 3-5 letter word thats not taken but i'll keep thinking of a good name i'm still trying to figure out who i am right now in terms of writing and shit like that.

Just do what I did, take 3 letters. Add more letters until you get something that sounds intriguing.

mikk
12-05-2010, 08:14 PM
my beer is warm but thats not holdin me back
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/3492/imgp3411.jpg
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/3641/imgp3412s.jpg

are you in the 40 oz crew??

Rask Wsk LA
12-05-2010, 10:36 PM
Heres what i been workin with, any crits?

SicK-
12-05-2010, 10:39 PM
Yo nose thanks for that that tag is sick

MoganOne
12-06-2010, 02:26 AM
Rask it is starting to look more legit... the bottom of the s does not look good to me

"InsaYne"17
12-06-2010, 08:36 AM
i like that a lot rask, looks good..also is the name JaKeT taken by many people?

Sbal
12-06-2010, 11:06 AM
Yes

Heak no flow

Flawless Victory
12-06-2010, 02:27 PM
i tried this instead of norse because this kind of fits me better and i feel i can do a lot more with it. i know it's toy as hell but that's why i'm in this thread. crits please.
14296
What the fuck are you doing, dude?
You lost it, kind of had it, then lost it again.
Emo should not be a word that fits anyone, dude.

"InsaYne"17
12-06-2010, 02:55 PM
What the fuck are you doing, dude?
You lost it, kind of had it, then lost it again.
Emo should not be a word that fits anyone, dude.
i know like i said im just trying to think of a good name that was a bad idea i mostly was looking at it cause it was easy. I'm gonna try this one. I know I'm like mega-toy but I'm trying to learn so crits would help.
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MoganOne
12-06-2010, 02:55 PM
lol

YeSnOmAyBe
12-06-2010, 06:30 PM
cridics please

MoganOne
12-06-2010, 06:56 PM
Your tag does not have flow... the arrow looks wack and the curls coming out of the R look bad... Start simple

YeSnOmAyBe
12-06-2010, 07:07 PM
nodoubt i wanted to have the end of the s come in, could you give me some pointers on how to get it to come in without bending the letter to much and without leaving a huge space inbetween the e and s... or should i just start over....?

thatswhatshesaid
12-06-2010, 07:18 PM
new handy

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture009-4.jpg

fckyeu
12-06-2010, 10:32 PM
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i dunno, just playing around with the new marker.

MoganOne
12-06-2010, 11:58 PM
looks kind of cool

YeSnOmAyBe
12-07-2010, 01:52 AM
just finished this outline i NEED some tips on filling it please

thatswhatshesaid
12-07-2010, 11:33 AM
new handy

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture009-4.jpg

self bum-page

also i have no idea what that even says sorry guy, simple is keeeeeyyyyy

Sticky
12-07-2010, 11:45 AM
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Ima new writer, so my first two tags arent the best, but this is what i got so far:)

Airplanefood
12-07-2010, 03:41 PM
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Need to work on my Ls and flow, but some of my recent shit.

ribcage
12-07-2010, 03:51 PM
^ all your l's look like u's except for the last 1, i say keep the s and change the rest

hecktor
12-07-2010, 10:23 PM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/DSC_3763-1.jpg

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/DSC_3897.jpg


derp