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MN Nice
08-07-2011, 08:55 PM
To be honest the only thing i'm diggin is the S. Keep at it.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00216-20110807-2127.jpg?t=1312771555

~PVE~
08-07-2011, 09:20 PM
29390
went simpler. any crits?

sifer-
08-07-2011, 09:34 PM
fuck it i suck with siker im stickin to sifer haha

SneeZ
08-08-2011, 08:32 AM
Ye, it works much better with your F.

@mn nice its good. The second also E aint bad, Try to catch the flow of S and C.

Playin with wide marker, 30mm. Not perfectly done here.
29396

Voice207
08-09-2011, 08:52 PM
http://i55.tinypic.com/262vbxd.jpg
I KNOW THE CROWN IS UNDESERVED! I WAS JUST DICKIN' AROUND!
I used to tag like a year ago but this is the first time I have tagged in a year.

Shit Outta Luck
08-09-2011, 09:27 PM
This is my new tag...I've never been good at tags but I finally tried something haha
29641

Strange Journeys
08-09-2011, 11:33 PM
ahh this thread is so lame i never look at it. do all of these look good to u guys? some of the best tags are simple as fuck with some steezy little shit goin on

Voice207
08-10-2011, 09:55 AM
ahh this thread is so lame i never look at it. do all of these look good to u guys? some of the best tags are simple as fuck with some steezy little shit goin on
No... we don't think we're the bomb, thats why we put it in the toy section...

toopski
08-10-2011, 10:36 AM
ahh this thread is so lame i never look at it. do all of these look good to u guys? some of the best tags are simple as fuck with some steezy little shit goin on

idd i agree some of the best tags are simple as fuck i hardly do shit 2 a tag its almost straight handwriting but then again this is the toy section so they can do as they plz

Voice207
08-10-2011, 01:01 PM
This is my standard go to tag at the moment, I know its nothing grate, comments por favor http://i53.tinypic.com/dm63js.jpg

MN Nice
08-10-2011, 01:04 PM
Take the arrow off the E and make your C a lil more vertical.

Voice207
08-10-2011, 01:16 PM
Thanks man, Ill try it out!

Strange Journeys
08-10-2011, 05:49 PM
No... we don't think we're the bomb, thats why we put it in the toy section...

im not saying anyone thinks that theyre the shit, but some people need to use discretion when posting, especially when its obviously super wack

EWL24
08-10-2011, 07:27 PM
MN Nice - i like that, it looks good

crits please
29678
29680

ribcage
08-10-2011, 07:39 PM
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0810111736.jpg
Im the bomb.

sir.to.you.
08-10-2011, 08:08 PM
fuckin round with a new marker durin a blunt figured id post it whoooooooooo-eye not ya know
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6142/6024315339_a71c1ecc9f_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6024315339/)
Photo 231 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6024315339/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

Voice207
08-10-2011, 10:30 PM
MN Nice - i like that, it looks good

crits please
29678
29680

E > e

I like the uppercase way more, but I'm a toy, soooo... haha :p

Dreg one
08-11-2011, 03:35 PM
Got busted, have a few months to fuck around with something new. Crits please. Methad One

29756

Phat 2
08-11-2011, 04:18 PM
name no good. find good name.

Dreg one
08-11-2011, 05:35 PM
I like methadone because graffiti is like my addictive anti-drug. But I will try some things out.

KrazyGraff
08-12-2011, 01:58 AM
Pretty Siick tagz right there man !

toopski
08-12-2011, 02:38 AM
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/2325/dsc0012pz.jpg
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/2930/dsc0011ur.jpg
http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/4936/dsc0010l.jpg
http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/7514/dsc0009ah.jpg
http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/3466/dsc0008wd.jpg
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/6288/dsc0005we.jpg

keeping toops name up for him

Phat 2
08-12-2011, 06:07 AM
the second flick. tags on the concrete are flaaahhy

toopski
08-12-2011, 11:28 AM
the second flick. tags on the concrete are flaaahhy

its what i do when i got a can and aint drunk

thedarkscythe
08-13-2011, 12:12 AM
29894 give me some feed back on the hand style if you like it

ribcage
08-13-2011, 02:57 AM
its what i do when i got a can and aint drunk
woah woah woah, Thats backwards! Your supposed to do it when you are drunk. Works the best. need to take pictures more often...

toopski
08-13-2011, 11:52 AM
woah woah woah, Thats backwards! Your supposed to do it when you are drunk. Works the best. need to take pictures more often...

the problem is when im drunk i hit shit that gets buffed way to quick or i cant remember where i was to go back for the flick

haha as it was half the shit i did got buffed

its annoying that only 2 of the names there still write and well toops in a better place

MoganOne
08-13-2011, 03:21 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/photobucket-3541-1313253801066.jpg

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/photobucket-1640-1313253820423.jpg

Phat 2
08-14-2011, 11:27 AM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/262957_264973046862945_100000507545549_1022695_493 9710_n.jpg

MoganOne
08-14-2011, 02:27 PM
29994

VeX'D
08-14-2011, 09:42 PM
@Scythe, that tag is looking too sketchy man

Strange Journeys
08-14-2011, 11:43 PM
30009

blaaow

MoganOne
08-15-2011, 03:23 AM
Word

Kilgore
08-15-2011, 04:47 AM
i know its not good i just started tagging...Any advice?

30023

PulseWithLife
08-15-2011, 09:01 AM
toopski got some clean styles. im from ADL cant remember ever seenin any of those props. Where you get up ?

MoganOne
08-15-2011, 12:05 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/0306110313.jpg

geargff
08-15-2011, 12:56 PM
30027
30028

.Cuore
08-15-2011, 01:41 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/262957_264973046862945_100000507545549_1022695_493 9710_n.jpg

like the tag but aint diggin the huge arrow under it, phat

NOSEO
08-15-2011, 02:27 PM
30038 Name and tag anygood?

MoganOne
08-15-2011, 03:17 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/0306110313.jpg
Bump

geargff
08-15-2011, 05:35 PM
30027
30028
need critz

EWL24
08-15-2011, 06:14 PM
can i get some crits on this
30071

sifer-
08-16-2011, 02:30 AM
have you w out of the e and make em the same size and dont make your L extend allllll theeee wayyyyyyy. dont get up yet, practise in the books bud

toopski
08-16-2011, 12:22 PM
new pics of some painted shit coming very soon coz i know u all love my handy

geargff
08-16-2011, 12:47 PM
30087
30088
crits please

MakeItTakeIt
08-16-2011, 03:46 PM
old styles30093(NODOZ)
new styles30094(NORTH)

Hate on em both.

nah!
08-16-2011, 03:50 PM
eeh i dont like the t

toopski
08-17-2011, 12:08 AM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2435/dsc0004js.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9526/dsc0001ss.jpg

my inspiration of handstyle was toop

Lemur
08-17-2011, 01:06 AM
30148
Is this any good it took me awhile to make it look somewhat alright to me

id appreciate heavy criticism

ribcage
08-17-2011, 01:08 AM
cant read it, make every letter its own, too early for you to make part of one letter part of another letter like your L to E...

SandmanNZ
08-17-2011, 01:39 AM
Try not to put so much into each letter, style is a good thing to have but legibility is also. Even though i know a lot of writers who don't care who can and cant read their work.

ribcage
08-17-2011, 01:48 AM
writers who know style can usually read/decipher someone elses style tho. Disgiusing your letters when you have mad skill and style is the goal because the people who are on the same level as you are going to be able to read it. IF you dont have mad skill and style, then you shouldnt be trying to disguise your letters at all. If its suuuper convienient for 1 part of one of your letters to be part of 1 of your other letter, than by all means let it happen. But dont go out of your way to do things that way.

for example; the C to H. I only do it that way when Imake the bottom line of that C too long, but its become somewhat convienant to do it that way because each letter is still distinguishable.
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816112345.jpg
lol super blurry pic

toopski
08-18-2011, 03:20 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/3316/imag0214h.jpg
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5649/imag0218pe.jpg
http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/5486/imag0217d.jpg

thepekins
08-19-2011, 08:24 AM
yo Mone I used to do that exact same M lol, the first part of it doesnt really flow with your handie and the loop is mad tall. the end of the R doesnt really flow either. just my 2 centzz

MN Nice
08-20-2011, 02:30 AM
Guess i'll just post up what I'm fuckin with.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00271-20110820-0225.jpg?t=1313825263

~PVE~
08-20-2011, 06:09 AM
30420
Trying to keep the handstyle simple & legible.

fruitfulanomie
08-20-2011, 06:57 AM
http://pic100.picturetrail.com/VOL587/2397355/23754133/398164891.jpg

lordie

TastyMcNasty
08-20-2011, 01:09 PM
new handy. tell me what you think
30477

fruitfulanomie
08-20-2011, 06:49 PM
2 on the bottom i like the most

.Cuore
08-20-2011, 07:18 PM
sorry Im not feelin em. seems like you're trying to be a bit too aggressive in styling all of your letters. the key to a good handy is simplicity and clean-ness. focus on making it coherent, while incorporating subtle bits of style

EWL24
08-21-2011, 07:21 PM
Tasty - the one on its side looks the best, but overall i think its just a bit to crazy

changed my E, A, and L. crits please
30542

ampt
08-21-2011, 07:30 PM
i dont like how far the L goes out

EWL24
08-21-2011, 07:55 PM
^^ really? i kinda liked my L
what would u suggest then, a normal L?

Saiko
08-21-2011, 08:04 PM
I'd say like that, but less flamboyant. make it more chill. Shorter, keep the curve.

KehmONE
08-22-2011, 01:23 PM
haha, it's nice to see another writer from Deadmonton...
our scene is fucking dead though

TastyMcNasty
08-22-2011, 04:46 PM
^word, the only person getting good ups in my area is nark. other then him all we have is a bunch of serious toys thinking they're top shit.

KehmONE
08-23-2011, 02:00 AM
Eh, not even nark is that great.
Toy City, all round.

sadgeh
08-23-2011, 07:40 AM
I'm glad to have a good scene in my hometown.

TastyMcNasty
08-23-2011, 11:55 PM
Eh, not even nark is that great.
Toy City, all round.
his tags and throws are the shit bro. and better then all the ultra toys like tazer and the other faggot toys who go over all of rast's classic shit.

KehmONE
08-24-2011, 02:37 AM
Lol, it must have been too long for me... I haven't seen any Tazer shit.
Lots of old Omaz and Eran shit though.
Actually, a friend of mine got to write with Asper a while ago... was supposed to go paint with him and a bunch of the other big names from ab, but was busy.

ipaint.
08-24-2011, 05:03 AM
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm173/ohhhyeah22/DSCN3097.jpg

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm173/ohhhyeah22/DSCN3098.jpg

PETER
08-24-2011, 12:41 PM
just started fuckin' with blocky stuff like that the last few weeks... I did about 10 of them and the L was weird for me every time. I tend to write quickly and have a hard time keeping straight lines I'm just not used to it. Suggestions for a T in a style like this? Another letter that is weird for me with this style. Here are a couple exaples I was doing for a friends project. 3071130712I

SneeZ
08-25-2011, 07:03 AM
Cipher, maybe try sumthin' like dis
30761

Got inspired by this handy, juss' made this :) gotta get the lines clean.
30762

another small pastel tag
30763

Mischuf
08-25-2011, 10:07 AM
Well i joined this forum cos i wanted to start taking things more seriously, so i guess i should post something for crits.
30769
Yeah its done on computer, but i got a graphics tablet, so its still my actuall handwriting. I like the balance of the larger first and last letter that frame the other letters, but I'm open to suggestion. The little seraph on the M is a remnant from my school days. I'm keeping that no matter what you say.

And then there's this...
30770
Errr... Yeah... I used to write Beast when i started cos i had a couple of mates who tried to get me started. But being the toys we were, we all had names that ended in "ST". We thought that made us a crew. I tagged this around the place as a kid, but i always felt like it wasn't individual enough for me. only one of my friends still writes and i don't reckon he's gotten up anywhere since we were kids, but I'm thinking of getting him back into it. No crits on this one, i don't care. I bit the "B" from another mate too... Even more shameful...

OZON
08-26-2011, 10:35 PM
trying a new name30910crits

NOSEO
08-29-2011, 04:33 PM
30992 Opinions.

Skeng
08-31-2011, 11:02 AM
Noseo, i quite like it but its not that legible.... Some handys

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/6393/60892435404f7ca5646bz.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/36/60892435404f7ca5646bz.jpg/)

http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/8521/608984113630d4b5ab72.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/706/608984113630d4b5ab72.jpg/)

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/5962/6089251752e81b39d417b.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/707/6089251752e81b39d417b.jpg/)

Crits please...

MN Nice
08-31-2011, 11:43 AM
Is that BTC(BTE?) a crew or a friend of yours? I like the Skeng tag though. Practice with your flares.

Skeng
08-31-2011, 12:35 PM
Is that BTC(BTE?) a crew or a friend of yours? I like the Skeng tag though. Practice with your flares.
Thanks for the crits, and its BTE my crew.

MN Nice
08-31-2011, 11:06 PM
Yeah definitely work on that crew tag.

bak
09-02-2011, 04:34 PM
those bte tags r decent except the cramped in t. work on that

Fluffy Bunnies
09-03-2011, 12:52 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/varsikils.jpg

doin my simple thang.
i love simples so much, it's all i like to do. even though my tag doesnt change, it changes me on the inside
best advice is to go simple ladies

Strange Journeys
09-03-2011, 02:22 PM
word on that, simple tags look way better then ones with too much crowns and arrows and halos and shit. keep it steezy kils

.Cuore
09-03-2011, 02:55 PM
word, I really like your handy, kilsr.

MoganOne
09-03-2011, 04:39 PM
Drunk-Ass-Bar-Bathroom-Tag
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011-09-01_22-29-14_709.jpg
lol

An3k
09-04-2011, 11:50 AM
31387

Crits I can't decide.

LIZARD
09-05-2011, 11:11 AM
31432
tryin a one liner handy lmk what ya think

sifer-
09-05-2011, 10:58 PM
trying out a new name
31466

.Cuore
09-05-2011, 11:22 PM
why dont you just stick with sifer

ribcage
09-05-2011, 11:37 PM
because every one and there moms writes sense or sens or senser cause they think theyre original

sifer-
09-06-2011, 12:12 AM
haha im just trying out sensei cause i was watching karate kid and i was like mr miyagi is a boss so i thought sensei would be cool geuss ill stick to sifer

sifer-
09-06-2011, 12:16 AM
what do you think if the sensei tho

MN Nice
09-06-2011, 12:23 AM
haha im just trying out sensei cause i was watching karate kid and i was like mr miyagi is a boss so i thought sensei would be cool geuss ill stick to sifer

Oh god. Hahahahaha.

pic for talking

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00314-20110906-0021.jpg?t=1315286547

sifer-
09-06-2011, 12:30 AM
@nice i dont really like the halo js
what do you think bout my sensei tho LOL no one crit it yet

MN Nice
09-06-2011, 12:36 AM
stick to sifer. its a good name.

.Cuore
09-06-2011, 12:49 AM
@nicer: don't wrap the bottom of the S under the rest of the tag, round it at the bottom and tuck the end of the S right where the end of the E meets the angle in the E... if that makes sense?

MN Nice
09-06-2011, 12:54 AM
Yee

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00315-20110906-0052.jpg?t=1315288417

.Cuore
09-06-2011, 01:19 AM
likin the top one. make sure all the letters are around the same height though, and that the curve on the bottom of the e and the bottom of the s are similar as well. overall looking good though.

ribcage
09-06-2011, 01:23 AM
..............dont take this nigguhs advice! Unless you want your tags to be in the toy forum mold......

you should know what a good tag looks like by now. Your M, sucks. Its a U in between two parralel lines like this- lUl, when it should be lVl. you get it? thas all for now

MN Nice
09-06-2011, 01:26 AM
Yeah I like it like that. Every time I try a pointed middle it comes out shitty. and I haven't found a good way to use a lower case m like Mone's. His is fresh.

ribcage
09-06-2011, 01:28 AM
...you like your M? alright then.

MN Nice
09-06-2011, 01:41 AM
Meh.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00318-20110906-0140.jpg?t=1315291283

and somebody else post up. don't want it being just me postin up.

Fluffy Bunnies
09-06-2011, 02:56 AM
i dont remember if i posted this... or even remember doing this. too drunk man

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/c3f41e06.jpg

Simon
09-06-2011, 03:02 AM
31469 crits?

Phat 2
09-06-2011, 06:44 AM
you know what I REALLY like about your tag, kilsr
is that the bottom bar of the L looks like it's the tail of the S, but detached from it, as if the S's bottom is dunk under the surface and its tail is sticking out next to a lowercase L
i donno if you know what I'm talking about. I didn't know how else to explain it hehe

Risk_Inicijativa
09-06-2011, 07:43 AM
3147131472314733147431475 inicijativa crew from macedonia! Respect

Phat 2
09-06-2011, 07:50 AM
the risk initiative? hehe I say you're off to an ok start. but you definitely got a long road ahead of you, as we all.

Riot!!
09-06-2011, 08:47 AM
31476
Letters need to be same size?
Also I think I may need to change my name.
I'm only just starting out so any crit or name suggestions will be appreciated.

DARE 2 B Different
09-06-2011, 11:54 AM
Back when I was a real toy I threw these up on some more public walls.

Fluffy Bunnies
09-06-2011, 10:54 PM
you know what I REALLY like about your tag, kilsr
is that the bottom bar of the L looks like it's the tail of the S, but detached from it, as if the S's bottom is dunk under the surface and its tail is sticking out next to a lowercase L
i donno if you know what I'm talking about. I didn't know how else to explain it hehe

fuck yeah, thats what's wrong with it. i hate my tag more than i hate myself to be honest. i have been battling a personality disorder btw, feels kinda bad, but then good at the same time, iduno how to explain, but when i write, it feels like the other me.

but in a more recent note, i stumbled upon a tag/stick that has been there for maybe 2 years

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3088fd33.jpg

and gettin mad ups in your arcade on your DDR machines

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/didder.jpg

toopski
09-06-2011, 11:09 PM
ur tags look alot better when its just kils and not kilsr

Fluffy Bunnies
09-06-2011, 11:28 PM
i dont know why i added the r, mostly for fun i think

LiveFreeDieFree
09-07-2011, 12:27 AM
31530

Crits please?

.Cuore
09-07-2011, 01:14 AM
you know what I REALLY like about your tag, kilsr
is that the bottom bar of the L looks like it's the tail of the S, but detached from it, as if the S's bottom is dunk under the surface and its tail is sticking out next to a lowercase L
i donno if you know what I'm talking about. I didn't know how else to explain it hehe

yeah I'm with Phat I feel the same way. some weird magnetism it has. diggin it though for sure.

bak
09-07-2011, 02:04 PM
i like the name kils.
erone else keep practicing

Norfsuthr
09-07-2011, 03:40 PM
yeah kils that one looks hella better than your steaks. Also looks like it hasn't changed much in the ast couple years, but w/e.

I'm trying to change my style up...
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6191/6124577509_5e6d177239.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6124577509/)
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6124577509/]

I still don't know how to flip the picture on a mac, anyone know? Till then, it's backwards and says 'erf'

Fluffy Bunnies
09-07-2011, 08:34 PM
steaks


http://www.meredithvictor.com/images/misc/fluisa.jpg
Did you say steak?


on the real though, looks kinda like a philly thing going on and i am not a big fan of philly tags...

MN Nice
09-07-2011, 08:44 PM
Its like throwing a toothpick in an airport hangar ^

Norfsuthr
09-07-2011, 09:31 PM
Yea meant streaks.

It's closer to LA styles really. I don't fuck with wickets since I'm not in philly.

skinaone
09-07-2011, 09:55 PM
31562

Norfsuthr
09-07-2011, 10:20 PM
How can you think that's good?

Jokes. But you gotta work on doin em left to right before you even fuck with diagonals. Little too much going on with it too, lose some dots and those 3 lines, and get more consistant with each letter that way you can see where it needs improvement.

chinkybone
09-07-2011, 10:20 PM
31566 ive been on and off for like 4 months now. i wanna add like a crown or whatnot but idk :/
and i hope this pic aint sideways...but yeah i tag "dah" lol.

Norfsuthr
09-07-2011, 10:24 PM
Try without quotes, stop thinking about crowns, and try a capital D. Otherwise I can't complain.

Alpha-76
09-08-2011, 12:04 AM
Well if nothing else it goes up quick. Opinions negative, positive, and anywhere between appreciated.

31589
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31590

Norfsuthr
09-08-2011, 12:08 AM
Ima be positive because it's original and not covered in arrows. Right now, its wack. No way around that. But I dont think you should scrap it; Keep working the bottom one until you get it dope. Make the letters level, do something interesting with the L, and no quotes. A circle might be cool tho.

Alpha-76
09-08-2011, 12:28 AM
Solid advice ... apprec

Fluffy Bunnies
09-08-2011, 05:51 AM
iduno if i am just fucking high on mdmA
but i think this is fucking awesome

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/91e2459a.jpg

skinaone
09-08-2011, 11:03 AM
How can you think that's good?

Jokes. But you gotta work on doin em left to right before you even fuck with diagonals. Little too much going on with it too, lose some dots and those 3 lines, and get more consistant with each letter that way you can see where it needs improvement.
someone must not know who i am bruh ive been doing left to right my whole danm life, and consistant? this is an old tag ill post one up later, but if you mean flow i feel ya but yeah any more crits ?

Norfsuthr
09-08-2011, 11:33 AM
Well no I don't know who you are, this is the internet. Still, write straight laterally left to right on the same level until you're good, then fuck around with that. And no I don't mean flow. I mean the shapes of your letters are inconsistent with eachother.

skinaone
09-08-2011, 11:40 AM
Well no I don't know who you are, this is the internet. Still, write straight laterally left to right on the same level until you're good, then fuck around with that. And no I don't mean flow. I mean the shapes of your letters are inconsistent with eachother.
i was just kidding my ***** :) ahahha
and tell me witch ones arent consistent ?

ribcage
09-08-2011, 11:54 AM
on the real tho, do yall not know who I AM?!!!! Im that nigguh thats about to rape your moms. Ima graffiti all up in that pussy

PETER
09-08-2011, 12:25 PM
Cipher, maybe try sumthin' like dis
30761

Got inspired by this handy, juss' made this :) gotta get the lines clean.
30762

another small pastel tag
30763
sorry so late. I don't write cipher. it's a project for my friend. I'll get some pics from the project once we get the legal issues worked out. Thanks for the input. I'll try it out.

Sifer: it's a bit late, but I like it a lot. it's well organized and moves nicely. I say ftw and rock it out.

Norfsuthr
09-08-2011, 03:11 PM
i was just kidding my ***** :) ahahha
and tell me witch ones arent consistent ?

I DONT JOKE.

Anyway your N's and A's are different every time, the S's too to an extent. And now that I've looked at those tags like 3 times, the I's don't really go with the other letters. Put a little style into em.

SynOne
09-08-2011, 03:51 PM
Massive toy here.

http://i56.tinypic.com/2rbz7s9.jpg

chinkybone
09-08-2011, 07:20 PM
i tried a capital D it just throws it wayy off maybe just a star on top?? eh eh?31611

Im Number 7
09-08-2011, 08:58 PM
Chinkbone thats fuckin sick, that probably looks so dope with like a NY Fat in bright green or purple!

Phat 2
09-09-2011, 06:34 AM
hate to rain on the parade but that red tag's illegible. think about people who don't know what it says... the line going through it from the d to the h makes it hard to tell the letters apart. like for example I couldn't tell if the line was supposed to connect with the H and A to make their middle bar or simply a long extension going through a lowercase N and two I's

SneeZ
09-09-2011, 07:56 AM
^^ thought it says dn2, sum crew name or sum stuff.
Kilsr killed it again, nice marker, can see your hand movement, just lovely.

bak
09-09-2011, 01:01 PM
atomk keep practicing nd work on ur bars (letter structure)
nd dah(?) idk bruh not feelin it

bak
09-09-2011, 02:28 PM
quick one flow for sheets n giggles
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00028-20110909-1211.jpg

U.P
09-09-2011, 04:08 PM
My graff name is URBAN PLAYER but it takes to long to write on a wall so i have this: U.P and the P has little devil horns on top

Norfsuthr
09-09-2011, 08:09 PM
my graff name is urban player but it takes to long to write on a wall so i have this: U.p and the p has little devil horns on top
swaga!

dankbudz
09-09-2011, 10:58 PM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-6.jpg
trying to get crits on this, been slightly trying to work on my handys lately

Strange Journeys
09-09-2011, 11:09 PM
lol urban player

Saiko
09-10-2011, 09:05 AM
Pantomime I like it a lot nice and clean no "" no $ no -> just a smooth, clean tag.

SicK-
09-10-2011, 11:28 AM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/snapshot.png

Lemme get dem critz

Saiko
09-10-2011, 06:34 PM
If you make the bottom of the r round,and bring it back to the other loop, it'll have more flow, like a philly hand.

skinaone
09-10-2011, 06:51 PM
im about to slap someone this dude -.-

TastyMcNasty
09-12-2011, 12:08 AM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-6.jpg
trying to get crits on this, been slightly trying to work on my handys lately

thats proper, nice and simple, but still e nough style and flow to look good. my only suggestion would be to flare out the T some more

MakeItTakeIt
09-12-2011, 03:20 AM
Oger dont shoot out the leg of your R like that, it you just bring it down normally till frlow with the rest of your letters that hand will be lookin pretty fresh once you get it more consistent and neater.

experimenting, crits/comments?
31833

Mr yarbles
09-12-2011, 10:19 PM
Downwards rapist one line

http://i54.tinypic.com/2evvyhk.jpg

Keep practicing everyone been in this shit for 5 years and still learn something new daily

SynOne
09-13-2011, 12:00 AM
Top or bottom, I like the bottom, but I dunno why, I have the feeling it's to much =/

Crits?

http://i55.tinypic.com/2aktu8.jpg

MN Nice
09-13-2011, 12:17 AM
Lose the extension on left side of your Y on top.

Couple tries at a new style.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00333-20110913-0013.jpg?t=1315890984
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00332-20110913-0011.jpg?t=1315891012

ribcage
09-13-2011, 12:25 AM
your letters are way to over lapped, space them out a bit and that 1 line might turn out for ya

toopski
09-13-2011, 01:15 AM
http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/2141/imag0222ou.jpg

the crew 1 line tagging it

SynOne
09-13-2011, 07:35 AM
Mues, I like it overlapped more than not, I saw in the throwies thread it not overlapped as much. Seems more flowing overlapped.

pointman
09-13-2011, 03:32 PM
street snapz
32045

MN Nice
09-13-2011, 04:15 PM
What you know about the crayon game, homie? Lol sorry if this is huge, I'll resize it later. Better spaced out?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00335-20110913-1605.jpg

skinaone
09-13-2011, 05:06 PM
no niga
M is weird
S looks like its smart cause of that big as head no homo
seperate it a bit more

LiveFreeDieFree
09-13-2011, 07:25 PM
32060
I need help, please. Haha

bak
09-14-2011, 03:42 AM
go simpler that h needs work nd no face

BEASTOR
09-14-2011, 10:08 AM
Need crits plz
I know i need to loose the quotation marks
#1
32105
#2
32106
#3
32107
#4 Crew name/tag
32108
Trying to keep it simple.

PETER
09-14-2011, 03:06 PM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-6.jpg
trying to get crits on this, been slightly trying to work on my handys lately Looks like you studdered on the T. Maybe try working your M to kinda take the shape of your A or N.... lowercase I guess I am suggesting. The E falls a little flat compaired to the rest, maybe bring the middle portion completely horizontal and in line with the cross portion of the A and draw in the tail so it would line up with the rest of the E as if you where making an O and stopped... man I suck at trying to discribe something. Good luck in the battle. Stay up.




NICE: I love your S.

Norfsuthr
09-14-2011, 03:28 PM
Yo haste I'd stick with that tag, just clean it up. I like the H, but make the lines straighter. When doing long lines in a tag make sure they run parallel or it will look bad unless it's intentional and done right. See if you can make a more original A in the same style, and make it in like 1 or 2 lines. S is good until the end part, smooth it out so it flows with the direction of the letter. Crossbar of the T needs to be a bit higher and at less of an angle, and it would probably look good if it came down as far as the H to balance the tag. E just needs practice and maybe a little flair to finish it off. Good starting point though, it's got potential that's why I critiqued it hard.

Saiko
09-14-2011, 05:31 PM
32113
32114

ERAYS
09-15-2011, 10:22 AM
yo BEASTOR, I like the 1st one the most, keep writing it! You've basically got the idea just stick 2 simples and get your tags as clean as possible and you will develop style!

any crits?32161

BEASTOR
09-15-2011, 03:56 PM
Thanks ERAYS, yeah im thinkin the first one too....your shit is tight man!

Kaskt
09-15-2011, 08:39 PM
That's beast Erays.
I'm a major toy but maybe the middle bar of the E should be shortened a bit?
Also what is that line comming off the bar in the A?

ERAYS
09-15-2011, 09:06 PM
That's beast Erays.
I'm a major toy but maybe the middle bar of the E should be shortened a bit?
Also what is that line comming off the bar in the A?

^haha idk just fuckin around a bit...thanks 4 the crits bro!!

LiveFreeDieFree
09-15-2011, 09:25 PM
32205

I simplified it quite a bit. Any crits?

MN Nice
09-15-2011, 09:28 PM
that erays tag is lackin in some areas. def practice your e's more, and drop those extensions on your letters like on your A and Y and the pointed top to your S is just ugly. keep trying though

@saiko. that atomik tag is aight, but the saiko one is bunk. seems like you aint doing enough homework around your town if you're from philly. get some local influence in ya.

Kaskt
09-15-2011, 10:57 PM
To me the S looks a lil big haste.

Norfsuthr
09-15-2011, 11:04 PM
32205

I simplified it quite a bit. Any crits?

He's right the S is too big. Keep everything the same size and make the H's extension bigger again. And its gotta go straight to the left. Keep at it man

SneeZ
09-16-2011, 05:34 AM
@erays

My 15 cents: Shorten the middle bar of E. The vertical bar of R is too stuffed. Drop or shorten The extension on horizontal bar of A. Y is fine, S is fine too but shorthe the serif on the top and drop that fuzzy extensions on E and S. It haz potential, homs.

Saiko
09-16-2011, 06:56 AM
Thanks MN
32232
Was playing around with this one.
Crizzle?

ERAYS
09-16-2011, 09:00 AM
thanks for all the solid crits guys!! Now its time 2 hit the blackbooks, c ya'll in a month!

Kaskt
09-16-2011, 09:39 PM
Personaly not feelin' any of it Saiko tbh.

Saiko
09-16-2011, 10:01 PM
Okay...What should i change?

Kaskt
09-16-2011, 10:23 PM
I was referring to the last picture.
Iono it just seems way too spaced out and I don't like the circle, your other styles were better.

On the picture before that the top one is alright but maybe lose the question mark.
I agree with NM Nice about the 'Saiko' tag, get some local philly influence in you.

Saiko
09-17-2011, 09:42 AM
Thanks for the help i was fuckin around on that last one. I'll practice my wicked and keep at it.

Alpha-76
09-18-2011, 02:05 PM
Here is me trying to improve the old tag - original on pg. 1708. The first one the letters need more spacing as the "p" can't be read. Not sure I like the rounded curves on the A. The second - I didn't write over the other tag it's a ghost - I like a bit more. Appreciate any feedback ...

32342

32341

"maze"
09-18-2011, 04:56 PM
Needs work but im not sure what to change , any critiz
32458

Kaskt
09-18-2011, 05:39 PM
Alpha:
To be honest bro if your first hit was spaced out a bit more it would look a lot better than the second.
Also if you brought up the right part of the second A up to the underline and the right part of the first A down to it like the other side, ya'know?
Work on the first one IMO.




Maze:
That extension on the top of Z is a bit wack bro.
It almost looks like a U between the M and A.
The way the right side of the M is bent looks weird.
The middle bar of the E doesn't look quite right, maybe make the E smaller as well.

Just my opinions.

Saiko
09-18-2011, 05:49 PM
Yo kaskt no offense here, but i'd like to see a bit of your work.

Kaskt
09-18-2011, 05:53 PM
Rightio I'll post some up later.

Like I mentioned before I'm toy as hell and probably don't know what I'm talking about.
Haven't been writing for very long at all (I'm still actually trying to figure out my style) but I'm just throwing my opinions out there for anyone who wants them, I appologize if I seem ignorant or say stupid shit.
Also helps with the whole crit for crits thing for when I do post up some of my stuff.

"maze"
09-18-2011, 05:54 PM
Yeah i see what you mean about the M and the A looking like a U
And yeah i'll change the Z and E see what i can come up with thanks for the advice

MASE P_2s
09-18-2011, 06:13 PM
yea maze just get rid of the z nd e

SynOne
09-18-2011, 07:03 PM
Crits before I start hitting the streets.

(Terrible Marker so.. just look at structure XD)

32490

H1P30N3R
09-18-2011, 07:27 PM
go alot more simple syn the style and flavor comes later for now use simp letters

LIZARD
09-19-2011, 12:12 AM
don't worry about adding style to every letter, try writin the s and y regular and do a stylish n or the other way do a stylish s and a regular y and n

Kaskt
09-19-2011, 01:26 AM
Fucking around with letters, pretty rough and marker fucked up.
I know that first K needs to be bigger and the bottom of the T needs to be brought up.
Any crits/fedback, except for "get a new marker", appreciated.


32578

toopski
09-19-2011, 03:57 AM
Fucking around with letters, pretty rough and marker fucked up.
I know that first K needs to be bigger and the bottom of the T needs to be brought up.
Any crits/fedback, except for "get a new marker", appreciated.


32578

dont join the bottom of the K its a K not a fucked up S remember

Kaskt
09-19-2011, 04:15 AM
Ight was wondering if that was a bad idea.
After looking at it I see how it can easily look like a fucked up S.
Thanks man.

Kostonee
09-19-2011, 02:00 PM
Well just a few flicks from a few places Ive dropped my tags, with White Grout Reviver and a Black Sharpie w10 Crits welcomed326323263332634326353263632637326383263932 6403264132642

SynOne
09-19-2011, 05:32 PM
Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.

32662

Subv3rt
09-19-2011, 06:09 PM
New member here. Just trying to get more serious about writing, and really my art in general.

Been working with this name, lately. 7 letters is a lil' intimidating since I'm used to 5, but I'm gonna make it work. Filling up the phone-book:

32672

Saiko
09-19-2011, 06:31 PM
Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.

32662
Huge improvement,man. It's ill for a 3 letter tag.

Kaskt
09-19-2011, 06:34 PM
I like that A LOT better Syn.
Big improvement.

@Kost

A lot of them are pretty cool.
Maybe it's just me but sometimes the o looks a lot like a lower case a though?

Brink ASN
09-19-2011, 07:15 PM
its funny how little tags are actually on here

ribcage
09-19-2011, 07:29 PM
for every pic theres like 5 little kids that are compelled to tell them its cool when in reality, it sucks donkey dick

Kaskt
09-19-2011, 07:33 PM
Then maybe give a crit instead of complaining about others?
Why do you automatically assume we are little kids?

ribcage
09-19-2011, 07:36 PM
no.

I apologize if you are not indeed a little kid, I was just using a broad assumption based on the quality of whats been posted, pics and crits.

Kaskt
09-19-2011, 07:40 PM
I previously admitted that I was a major toy and may not know what I am talking about, hence why I am here.
Not everyone starts out as some angsty, prepubescent tween.

Nothing constructive comes out of you comming here and bitching about people who don't quite know what's what, in the TOY forum.

ribcage
09-19-2011, 07:42 PM
Lol indeed, make that 4 little kids compelled to post how cool it is when in reality, it sucks donkey dicks

LiveFreeDieFree
09-19-2011, 08:04 PM
32704

Can someone actually give me a crit?

SynOne
09-19-2011, 08:40 PM
Hayst, I would make the S a little smaller. Lose the Quotes or w/e on the left. Other than that, I can't give any crits, as I'm a huge toy.

Subv3rt
09-19-2011, 09:27 PM
New member here. Just trying to get more serious about writing, and really my art in general.

Been working with this name, lately. 7 letters is a lil' intimidating since I'm used to 5, but I'm gonna make it work. Filling up the phone-book:

32672

Someone mind giving a constructive crit on this? I know it's pretty sloppy as of right now. Working on speed as well as form.

Alpha-76
09-19-2011, 10:11 PM
As I heard once or twice "Who cares if my pieces don't look good bro? My fucking shit is still up. Fuck you all if you don't like it" - from the song Aerosoul

I would take criticism here with a grain of salt. Ultimately if you keep at it something good will form.

Also be careful not to let others direct you to what has already been done too much. By that I mean if you follow all the criticism you receive perfectly you'll probably end up with some homogenized handstyle which - imo - is worse than being a toy. Style isn't developed overnight ...

jayd732
09-19-2011, 10:27 PM
hayst tht handstyles fresh just wrk on tightening it up in certain places... keep writing it.

i write tames11
32728

SynOne
09-20-2011, 07:27 AM
Tames, I would lower the middle bar on your A to match the middle bar on your M, I would also not make the E go ALL the way to the top, I would make it stop halfway to even with the middle bar on the m, or just right below where it is now, just to make that distinction(that S is fresh... I like it.)

Also, as for now, I would lose the star and the halo, seems out of place.

Strange Journeys
09-20-2011, 08:42 AM
I would take criticism here with a grain of salt. Ultimately if you keep at it something good will form.

Also be careful not to let others direct you to what has already been done too much. By that I mean if you follow all the criticism you receive perfectly you'll probably end up with some homogenized handstyle which - imo - is worse than being a toy. Style isn't developed overnight ...

word, this place sucks

and tames11 i would leave the star but lose the halo, the star seems to make it more balanced with that swooped out s u got

PETER
09-20-2011, 09:39 AM
Every once in a while you can get decent advice... but really take it or leave it. Keep writting, keep painting, and keep posting. 32759 crits for the handie on bottom

jayd732
09-20-2011, 03:36 PM
good shit guys ...ima start posting some more flix, blackbook paint nd handstyles

antikone> handies fresh man i think u should bring the left bar on the A a lil lower

Kostonee
09-20-2011, 03:57 PM
@Kost

A lot of them are pretty cool.
Maybe it's just me but sometimes the o looks a lot like a lower case a though?

Hmm thanks for your advice what should I change on it to make it look less like an a?

And any more crtis people?

Kaskt
09-20-2011, 04:30 PM
I relooked at it and I think I was just being retarded, I don't think it looks like an A.

Kostonee
09-20-2011, 05:41 PM
I relooked at it and I think I was just being retarded, I don't think it looks like an A.

Oh I see ok then lol :D thanks, so what can I do to improve my handstyle? any letters need work?

SynOne
09-20-2011, 06:37 PM
Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.

32662

Ribcage, since you seem a bit frustrated about toys on a toy thread. Crits?

LiveFreeDieFree
09-20-2011, 06:51 PM
32873

I personally like this one a lot better. Any crits?

SynOne
09-20-2011, 07:41 PM
Personally I don't feel the S in that one, I do like how it's more simple, I would make the S taller.

LiveFreeDieFree
09-20-2011, 07:59 PM
Personally I don't feel the S in that one, I do like how it's more simple, I would make the S taller.

You think I shouldn't bring the tail of the Y up so high so that I can drop the S down further, then?

Kaskt
09-20-2011, 08:36 PM
You think I shouldn't bring the tail of the Y up so high so that I can drop the S down further, then?
Yes.

lopid2
09-20-2011, 11:25 PM
can somone give me some tips ? 32893

PETER
09-21-2011, 07:17 AM
get a book on typography from your local library. study it, local writers, and burn through a couple hundred books and a few thousand markers.

PETER
09-21-2011, 07:26 AM
Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.

32662 huge improvement IMO.

Maze: work on keeping your marker going one direction the whole time. the reason your M looks weird is because you turn the marker. You can tell by the top of the right side.

Haste: I liked your S before a lot. This hand is sharp, but I am not feeling the S either here. post up a shot with a taller S.

MN Nice
09-21-2011, 08:21 AM
I see you took note from our exchange, Hayst. Its getting better.

SOONER_AMS
09-21-2011, 08:56 AM
yOU ALL SUCK . GO DIE ND STOP WRITING FAGGITS !

SynOne
09-21-2011, 09:26 AM
yOU ALL SUCK . GO DIE ND STOP WRITING FAGGITS !

Obvious Troll is Obvious.

jayd732
09-21-2011, 11:43 AM
SOONER ur wack ass hell shut the fuck up...the SOONER u stop writin the bettr

Phat 2
09-21-2011, 06:18 PM
yOU ALL SUCK . GO DIE ND STOP WRITING FAGGITS !
after seeing the last few pages... I support his rage

bak
09-21-2011, 06:25 PM
yOU ALL SUCK . GO DIE ND STOP WRITING FAGGITS !

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/jelly.png

Zest3
09-21-2011, 07:06 PM
A'ight, long time no see, new name, here we go.
33001

Phat 2
09-21-2011, 07:26 PM
you could've started your one-liner with the S' tail and linked it to the A... dunno if it wouldda looked good, but worth a try, yes?

Zest3
09-21-2011, 07:37 PM
33030
Letters aren't proportional, but just wanted to post this quick.

shush4
09-21-2011, 08:57 PM
Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00111.jpg
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00110.jpg

gim
09-21-2011, 09:49 PM
33102
Just started handstyles a couple of days ago, been practicing this is what I got... suggestions?

skinaone
09-21-2011, 10:01 PM
33103
found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate :)
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava

seone cdk
09-21-2011, 10:07 PM
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/009-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/007-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/006-3.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/005-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/044-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/012-3.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/2a0574fa.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/8b17ab1f.jpg

skinaone
09-21-2011, 10:10 PM
1st one the the right stick to that one
to much going on doe
i have the same prob

MN Nice
09-21-2011, 10:45 PM
Your S has such a hard angle that it sometimes looks like a CA.

skinaone
09-21-2011, 10:53 PM
YES i forgot to put that

shush4
09-21-2011, 11:35 PM
Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00111.jpg
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00110.jpg
bump cuz i got left on the last page

Alpha-76
09-22-2011, 01:33 AM
Since I made a bunch of friends here after my last few posts ... thought i'd run an alt by everyone. Is this too close to normal handwriting? Is that I hear people calling a straight handwriting style - ? Not sure exactly what that means in all honesty.

33144

The h ideally would have extended out of the top of the p but I fucked up.

Zest3
09-22-2011, 07:14 AM
Trying some name alternatives, like this one better than Sae.
33155
I think the last one looks better, but anyways.

SynOne
09-22-2011, 07:30 AM
I wouldn't over lap the S on the O any more than the E on the O. Makes it seem to unsymmetrical and uneven.

gim
09-22-2011, 09:57 AM
33102
Just started handstyles a couple of days ago, been practicing this is what I got... suggestions?
bump

Zest3
09-22-2011, 03:38 PM
33254
Tried over lapping both of the letters.

gim
09-22-2011, 05:23 PM
zest3 i like that one better than the previous ones you posted

LiveFreeDieFree
09-22-2011, 05:50 PM
33271

There isn't suppose to be a loop in the T. And the arrow doesn't feel like it fits, bit I need something there to balance the whole thing out.

shush4
09-22-2011, 05:53 PM
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found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate :)
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava
i thinkg the 2nd one from the top on the left side is the best minus all the drop down things on the g and ss and lose the arrow. but this one has potential

Kaskt
09-22-2011, 05:57 PM
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There isn't suppose to be a loop in the T. And the arrow doesn't feel like it fits, bit I need something there to balance the whole thing out.

Looking good man, ditch the arrow though.
Just and idea but maybe you could add an extension to the T to balance it?
The S looks a lot better bit still a 'lil off to me for some reason, I think it's the empty space below it.