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[jayd732]

SOONER ur wack ass hell shut the fuck up...the SOONER u stop writin the bettr

[Phat 2]

yOU ALL SUCK . GO DIE ND STOP WRITING FAGGITS !
after seeing the last few pages... I support his rage

[bak]

yOU ALL SUCK . GO DIE ND STOP WRITING FAGGITS !

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/jelly.png

[Zest3]

A'ight, long time no see, new name, here we go.
33001

[Phat 2]

you could've started your one-liner with the S' tail and linked it to the A... dunno if it wouldda looked good, but worth a try, yes?

[Zest3]

33030
Letters aren't proportional, but just wanted to post this quick.

[shush4]

Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00111.jpg
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00110.jpg

[gim]

33102
Just started handstyles a couple of days ago, been practicing this is what I got... suggestions?

[skinaone]

33103
found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate :)
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava

[seone cdk]

http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/009-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/007-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/006-3.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/005-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/044-2.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/012-3.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/2a0574fa.jpg
http://i1019.photobucket.com/albums/af317/soneoner/8b17ab1f.jpg

[skinaone]

1st one the the right stick to that one
to much going on doe
i have the same prob

[MN Nice]

Your S has such a hard angle that it sometimes looks like a CA.

[skinaone]

YES i forgot to put that

[shush4]

Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00111.jpg
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00110.jpg
bump cuz i got left on the last page

[Alpha-76]

Since I made a bunch of friends here after my last few posts ... thought i'd run an alt by everyone. Is this too close to normal handwriting? Is that I hear people calling a straight handwriting style - ? Not sure exactly what that means in all honesty.

33144

The h ideally would have extended out of the top of the p but I fucked up.

[Zest3]

Trying some name alternatives, like this one better than Sae.
33155
I think the last one looks better, but anyways.

[SynOne]

I wouldn't over lap the S on the O any more than the E on the O. Makes it seem to unsymmetrical and uneven.

[gim]

33102
Just started handstyles a couple of days ago, been practicing this is what I got... suggestions?
bump

[Zest3]

33254
Tried over lapping both of the letters.

[gim]

zest3 i like that one better than the previous ones you posted

[LiveFreeDieFree]

33271

There isn't suppose to be a loop in the T. And the arrow doesn't feel like it fits, bit I need something there to balance the whole thing out.

[shush4]

33103
found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate :)
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava
i thinkg the 2nd one from the top on the left side is the best minus all the drop down things on the g and ss and lose the arrow. but this one has potential

[Kaskt]

33271

There isn't suppose to be a loop in the T. And the arrow doesn't feel like it fits, bit I need something there to balance the whole thing out.

Looking good man, ditch the arrow though.
Just and idea but maybe you could add an extension to the T to balance it?
The S looks a lot better bit still a 'lil off to me for some reason, I think it's the empty space below it.

[LiveFreeDieFree]

Looking good man, ditch the arrow though.
Just and idea but maybe you could add an extension to the T to balance it?
The S looks a lot better bit still a 'lil off to me for some reason, I think it's the empty space below it.

It's cause I'm an idiot and can't manage to do the tail of the Y in one fell swoop without making it too high. Haha

I'll add an extension to the T and see.

[LiveFreeDieFree]

3327333274


I'm feelin' the second one forsure.

[MN Nice]

Mad improvement ^ Keep working on your A and keep your S the same size.

[Kaskt]

They are sick hayst but your S is still too small.
The T on the top one is best.

[Zest3]

33283
Trying new names.
Trying So here, with One after it.

[skinaone]

better, try a longer name

[Zest3]

33285
I like the name So, just got a throwie to go with it, so trying a diff tag.

[PETER]

your throw is good... tag is a bit too plain, but then again.... it is SO... I'll post some pics of ideas you're welcom to play with.

[Zest3]

Aight.
New one, testing new stuff.
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[PETER]

I am thinking taller thinner letters would work really well here.... but I can't seem to get a tall skinny S to work for me. Here's the only one out of a few tries at different styles I liked.

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[Zest3]

33375
Watcha think of this ?
33376
Or this ?

[PETER]

I am liking that a lot. Check out MN Nice's S. I like his a lot and think it would work great here. I might go so far as to skinny it up a little more and go a little taller.... like a 6 foot tall anorexic chick.

[Zest3]

What the heck is MN ?
Anyways, last try, added some stuff, gonna stop posting for a while this fucking tag cuz I'm spamming this thread like crazy.
Tell me if it's too much...
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[PETER]

he's a user on here. writes mues. he has some a few pages back. Personnally I like it dude. rock it out.

[Zest3]

Promised this would be my last post but couldn't resist.
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Like it alot, will probably stick to it, just wanted your opinion.

[PETER]

That's what's up. I like the nice up and down motion and it's clean. will look good with that throw of yours.

[gim]

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[Zest3]

Try makng the letters closer to each others, and try making all of the letters the same height. I would ditch that exclamation mark for the moment, you should concentrate on your letters first. Your C and S are acceptable, try working on the rest.

[559_JK]

3344533446 My Tag and My Throw Up i Usually do Wacha Think? Ill try n Take Pics of this Abandon Liqour Store i Bombed

[MN Nice]

he's a user on here. writes mues. he has some a few pages back. Personnally I like it dude. rock it out.

Yo, what the fuck. Don't tell him to bite my shit.

[Zest3]

No beef here, but toys biting other writers just mean those writers earned some respect and are good at the game.
Just saying.

[gim]

33454
Kinda messed up on the I, I'm having trouble finding an T and I that flows nice

@559_JK looks pretty cool try using a thicker marker

[vems]

33454
Kinda messed up on the I, I'm having trouble finding an T and I that flows nice

@559_JK looks pretty cool try using a thicker marker

try to make your t and i a bit like your L, have your T essentialy be your L with a cross, and your i, just base it off that.

[MN Nice]

That doesn't give you the right to use it as you please. its not the best, but i've been putting hella time into trying to get a style. I've gone through a lot of notebooks of just tags. I recommend you do the same. experiment with your letters.

[gim]

try to make your t and i a bit like your L, have your T essentialy be your L with a cross, and your i, just base it off that.
thanks for the help but I'm kinda confused by what you mean, your saying I should have the lowercase t cross to make an L at the end? sorry I'm such a fucking toy lol

[Zest3]

33455
Been testing different styles and letters for more than 2 years now, and this is the final result. I don't think I've really bitten you or anyone else, if so than it's a coincidence, cuz' I don't like biting either.

[Flawless Victory]

No beef here, but toys biting other writers just mean those writers earned some respect and are good at the game.
Just saying.
You have shit WAY twisted bro.
Toys biting other writers means that those writers have to deal with some fuckhead kid that isn't good enough to rock his own shit. Not a good look.

[PETER]

Take it as a compliment. I was mearly making the point that you have a damn good looking S and that he might use that as inspiration.

[vems]

thanks for the help but I'm kinda confused by what you mean, your saying I should have the lowercase t cross to make an L at the end? sorry I'm such a fucking toy lol

this is what i mean by basing them off eachother, making them have similar structure to maintain flow(note these letters are spaced out so you could clearly see each letter.)

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hope this was helpful.

[gim]

this is what i mean by basing them off eachother, making them have similar structure to maintain flow(note these letters are spaced out so you could clearly see each letter.)

3345733458

hope this was helpful.

oh okay thanks a lot man!!

[559_JK]

33454
Kinda messed up on the I, I'm having trouble finding an T and I that flows nice

@559_JK looks pretty cool try using a thicker markerhey thanks and yeah i just did that real quick i got a fat sharpie

[Alpha-76]

QUOTE=SynOne;1745347]Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.

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Syn: I really like this tag personally. The square quotes look cool and it has a cool flow to it. I know I am supposed to be somewhat critical so perhaps the bottom of the "S" could extend out as far as the top and have a consistent width with the top as well. Nice improvement.


32704

Can someone actually give me a crit?

I think this looks pretty dope Hayst. I don’t think the upward stroke on the end of the “y” tail is necessary. It almost looks like it might be trying to form another letter but didn’t get completed. “T” could be a tad more snug next to the “S”.


Every once in a while you can get decent advice... but really take it or leave it. Keep writting, keep painting, and keep posting. 32759 crits for the handie on bottom

Agreed … Here I’ll show what a toy I am. I can’t read your whole tag bro. I got the end where it looks to be an “itone” or “ixone”. If I had to guess it says Artixone … let’s play some charades! First word one syllable haha Anyway you write it consistent so that’s dope. The outline above is pretty sick.


Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00111.jpg

Well to start it looks like you wrote your name jacked up on speed. ☺ Just a tad shaky on the letters. Try writing it a bit slower - ? If I saw your name up I would think you were trying to name yourself “Sushi” which just makes me hungry.

[QUOTE=gim;1745934]33102
Just started handstyles a couple of days ago, been practicing this is what I got... suggestions?

Uhh … make the letters the same height and width. So that the “E” is as wide as the “S” and as tall. Mixing lower and uppercase letters feels weird imo. Do not have the “E” center hash line cross into the “S”. Maybe bend the “I” in the same direction as the main stem of the “E”.


33103
found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate :)
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava

Looks dope! Also looks like a gang handstyle from what I have seen around. Tall and angular.

BUMP


Since I made a bunch of friends here after my last few posts ... thought i'd run an alt by everyone. Is this too close to normal handwriting? Is that I hear people calling a straight handwriting style - ? Not sure exactly what that means in all honesty.

33144

The h ideally would have extended out of the top of the p but I fucked up.

- Never received any crits on the above post so I bumped it.

Sorry for the mega long post but I didn’t want to double post so I crammed it all into one. I’ll try to go through the newer pages later. So busy I can only get on here once in a while to check out the new tags and comment.

[PETER]

Alpha: I like the circular one. It's got character. I would like to see it done with a mop with some drips comming off the bottom of the circle bit. Can you post up one in marker? ohhh it says Antik One by the way.

[LIZARD]

31432
tryin a one liner handy lmk what ya think

bump for crits

[shush4]

went from this:
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234

to this :
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33942&d=1316965274

crits on the new one?

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/309789_280159062004083_202093693143954_1168307_209 0554466_n.jpg

[skinaone]

not feeling it
you havent changed your handstyle since like 3 months ago

[gim]

went from this:
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234

to this :
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33942&d=1316965274

crits on the new one?
looks dope i don't like the star inside or whatever that it is inside the S just my opinion though

[PETER]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33942&d=1316965274

Your H's seem to dissapear. give them more deffinitnion.

[shush4]

tried to take what was said into consideration:
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33956&d=1316978013
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33955&d=1316978002
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33954&d=1316977999

[PETER]

I think that works a lot better. I am digging the first S on the first one, the second H on the second one, and the U on the last one. I think if you combine those into one you will have something solid going on. Well done. Work on consistency if you like it and tweek as needed. Or if you made the U from the first one you posted with the * and vanishing H's in two strokes (the left portion and right portion seperate. it looks like you did it in one starting with the left then up and back down for the right) I think that would clean it up and give you a good looking U.

[skinaone]

33997
wow this came out mad toy

[Norfsuthr]

Shush its lookin better but make the letters the same size and either level with eachother or at a consistent slant.
Phat I dig that shit. H looks too close to the p tohugh.

[SynOne]

Crits? Never got any last time but "Looks better"

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[skinaone]

dont go so long with the N and the Y looks like a U make it bigger and make it flow more with the other letters
S not really feeling it

[Phat 2]

not feeling it
you havent changed your handstyle since like 3 months ago

why the fuck should I change it if I like it?
I've been using it for a while now, yes, and until I get bored with it, I'm gonna keep using it... it's easy, fast, flowy, classy, nice and effective at the same time.
it might suck balls in this flick right there because it's a train and the surface is rounded as opposed to flat. I don't know if you've sprayed on such surfaces before, but it's not the easiest task too get an even and clean result

[skinaone]

lol dont get mad nig ga
and yes yes i have i just dont have that much trouble with it

[gim]

3401534016
just gotta work on the sizing i think.. open to crits and opinions also let me know which you like the better...
waiting for my pilot jumbo to ship in so i can practice with fatter lines too

[MTK]

@gim..... i like the 2nd one the best and if you dont like waiting just go to walmart and get a sharpie MAGNUM... you dont have to be 18 and i got 2 for like 4$ great my still aint dead nd ive had mine for like 8 months

[gim]

@gim..... i like the 2nd one the best and if you dont like waiting just go to walmart and get a sharpie MAGNUM... you dont have to be 18 and i got 2 for like 4$ great my still aint dead nd ive had mine for like 8 months
yeah word ima cop some of those i heard they smell like shit though

[PETER]

they smell... but you are not obligated to sit there and sniff it.

[MN Nice]

I still do.

[gim]

34127

can i get some critiques on my hand style?
i like everything except the and the lines under it id stay away from that for now. id say trying going for a normal lower case e <---like that one maybe even reverse it? who knows fuck with it
just my opinion though

[gim]

34127

can i get some critiques on my hand style?

i like everything except the E and the lines under it id stay away from that for now. id say trying going for a normal lower case e <---like that one maybe even reverse it? who knows fuck with it
just my opinion though

[vems]

3401534016
just gotta work on the sizing i think.. open to crits and opinions also let me know which you like the better...
waiting for my pilot jumbo to ship in so i can practice with fatter lines too

shorten your letters, they are too tall and skinny imo

[gim]

thanks for the info y'all probably gonna post a pic once i get my pilot

[snoketg]

34127

can i get some critiques on my hand style?

[skinaone]

SMOKE try that first ge that down then try putting flavor into it
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crts

[Skeletor1134]

snoke, dont extend your e and work on the curves of your s.

[geza_arts]

skinaone is that your shit cuss if it is thats down!!! props kid!!

[skinaone]

34192
crit ma dudes -.-

[ribcage]

not too shabby, tighten up that O, maybe square it off to fit the rest. Aside from the 1, your handie lookin grood

[skinaone]

i normaly put ONE but i felt like changing it
thanks my dude. are you coming to the meeting of styles?

[ribcage]

Nah, the venue in the U.S. already passed, it was invite only to paint, and you have to be 21+. Maybe next year

[skinaone]

but theres one here in venezuela the 21 22 23 of october
and nope i got invited cause of my gothic handstyle -.-

[dankbudz]

skina thats dope but im dont like that astrik youre throwing in that S. but its all preference maan
for that handy battle... crits
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-8.jpg

[skinaone]

ight thanks my man and i kinda fucked it up lol
and CRIT
O is good nice and simple R is like a P but witha - on it put somehting on top of the I to make it look better G looks like a C with an ARROW and N isnt really flowing
overall not that bad

[CloseToExtinction]

34435

Ehhhh tag says derp.
Crits?

[SneeZ]

my advice, dont fuck with oneliners for now, cuz R and P looks like shit. no offense mate.

[gim]

@dankbudz i don't like the R and how its extended jut my opinion though

[MyNipsAreHard]

34688
which one do you guys like better... need some crits aswell

[Norfsuthr]

1 so easily. Just fix up the B a little and do an actual L. The K in 2 is swag tho.

[rolling fresh kush]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/amsb.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/j-2.jpg SWAG

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/meth.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/jkjgv.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/020.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/tn-1.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/g.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/ilov.jpg

[gim]

@myhipsarehard yeah def 1, i just don't O with the peace sign kinda wack imo, number 2 is pretty cool too work with that one too

[Norfsuthr]

Fokes your hands are nowhere near the level your simps and shit are on. The simple purple ones look straight, but the marker tags need some work. Make those lines smoother, it looks like you're jerking your hand around on the o,e and t.

[zwerx]

Heres one of my sketches during class35003

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

35006

if anyone wants more lemme know. crits are welcome but ill probably just say fcuk you

[MakeItTakeIt]

35187

[Phat 2]

^ moar of dis steez pleez!

[gim]

3519735198
sup y'all finally got my pilot jumbo
fucked up on the L on the second one... decided to experiment with the I which one you guys feeling better? 1st or 2nd crits and opinions are welcomed too

[MyNipsAreHard]

gim- the first one looks like you were jerking your hand.( not smooth lines) however the second one is a lil more smooth but i suggest maybe bringing the bottom of the C up a litte and i prefer S taht are a little wider. And maybe do a capital T- idk- i like the I and L tho

[MN Nice]

Handstyle exchange Fatally? :)

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

I'm down, i could do em right now. what do you write?

[MN Nice]

Mues. you?

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

donate(llo) fue.. one sec.

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

35266

[MN Nice]

Philly's for the win. Good shit.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00375-20110929-1908.jpg?t=1317341564

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00377-20110929-1909.jpg?t=1317341644

[Norfsuthr]

35187
Straighter lines with the diagonals, and make a couple a bit longer or something

[Raphael]

35338

this is my old one

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6197076584_d7f1a08d09.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6197076584/)
oie_3054016h83GL30S (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6197076584/)

^Absacker? I'd just go more simple for a while

[SneeZ]

@Absacker, no need to go simpler, just shorten extensions on b and first a, and don't overlap second a with s, you need to cover the space beetwin s and a, and dont make r directly from e. You fucked it up totally with R, change it.

@Norfusthr, doesnt look bad, but if it says fed, than its too much going on, cuz the circle after D looks like o and the arrow looks like Z, know im sayin? Reduce that shit and itll be nice.

[PETER]

top left is sick there fatal

[Im Acro]

Hey i've only been doing graffiti for 5 or 6 days and I was looking for help and found this forums.
Heres my tag still working on my flow.... Give me critic?
http://i51.tinypic.com/o5qrko.jpg

Also anyone know a good cheap marker for tags on paper I'm not going to the streets till i find my style nd flow so wont need paint for a while but whats a good marker?

[MN Nice]

First donatello and now raphael? when did the fucking teenage mutant ninja turtles start writing?

[Raphael]

here are my newer ones
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[vems]

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[Raphael]

vems i really like the bottem one in gray on your second picture

[MN Nice]

Quality hands from Vems.

["remo"]

super shitty
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[vems]

vems i really like the bottem one in gray on your second picture


Quality hands from Vems.


thanks for the love fellas

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

let me know if anyone wants an exchange. happy to for the credits^________________________^

[Raphael]

what do you mean exchange?

[MyNipsAreHard]

35480
Chillin in the bathroom

[ZETA]

Real simple one-liner. Ive been using this tag for a while now... i dig, just wondering what anyone else feels about it

35481

[gim]

looks nice zeta, real talk
i like it

[Simon]

35494
Crits?

[Shell703]

I'd work with the black one, get rid of all the quotes though and get some solid letters and a consistent flow going down first

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/MongKokHongKong028.jpg

[Im Acro]

Hey i've only been doing graffiti for 5 or 6 days and I was looking for help and found this forums.
Heres my tag still working on my flow.... Give me critic?
http://i51.tinypic.com/o5qrko.jpg

Also anyone know a good cheap marker for tags on paper I'm not going to the streets till i find my style nd flow so wont need paint for a while but whats a good marker?
Bump for crits please.

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

you kids just need to practice! not the same thing over and over but keep trying different styles. when u get something u like then practice

[gim]

35546
messing around going with tall letters tell me what y'all think

[gim]

Bump for crits please.
don't try to go crazy with your letters. start off simple just write a simple A,C,R and O then start to twirk them and mess with them. do that over and over and over again, keep posting up your progress on here so we can crit

and as for markers just stick with sharpies if you wanna go a little thick get a king sized sharpie
if you don't want sharpies to bleed through your paper trying getting some paint markers like decos

idk thats all i got man just work with it

[sunnyjim]

35558

i really like cursive tags, so yeah, feedback?

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011-09-30_22-22-00_920.jpg
i just did my tag her friend wrote the rest on my girl lol... it says "I Love my boyfriends dick"

[ribcage]

lol thats a classic

[skinaone]

35592
lol, with a number four paint brush

[Shell703]

GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS

MENE - Space out your letters

ACRO - I agreee with Gin, start with simple plain letters first

Bump for crits...

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/MongKokHongKong028.jpg

[gim]

@shell try merging all your letters closers together, i like the E and V
mess around with your C and I
just my opinion though

@sunny looks nice dude, id like to see a bigger pic, it'll prob look dope with a thicker marker
@morgan lol

[gim]

35593
bump

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6022/6205640465_ae910eaf7d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6205640465/)
oie_340450Gw0UTzT (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6205640465/)

[skinaone]

i didnt crit cause all yalls shits all ready been crited-.-
and i like your other simple tagg better @ norfsur

[Im Acro]

don't try to go crazy with your letters. start off simple just write a simple A,C,R and O then start to twirk them and mess with them. do that over and over and over again, keep posting up your progress on here so we can crit

and as for markers just stick with sharpies if you wanna go a little thick get a king sized sharpie
if you don't want sharpies to bleed through your paper trying getting some paint markers like decos

idk thats all i got man just work with it

Ok thanks I'll work on it but I got to go to bed for tonight... Peace

[Shell703]

NORF - I dont know what that is- JERDER, JERPER - Keep it clean; simple and clear for right now,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/Tags001.jpg

[Phat 2]

on the right track^ bring the letters closer to each other so that they at least touch, and write in italic (either leaning to the left or right)

[skinaone]

35592
lol, with a number four paint brush
uhhh bump for crits

[MN Nice]

I like it Skin. Its a nice mix of gothic and old english.

[skinaone]

should i work on anything ?

[gim]

35593
bump
BUMPP :mad: lol

[MN Nice]

should i work on anything ?

make sure every letter gets good defintion. Looks like sometimes letters get covered up by the others.

[skinaone]

35735
nevermind the ONE but something like that?

[MN Nice]

Me gusta ^

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00386-20111003-2143.jpg?t=1317696314

[MRBC0706]

35736
Crits?
And MN Nice I really like that first one. Second one seems a little cramped but that's coming from a toy...

[aiaw]

thanks i appreciate it..i got these that i think fit a little better here.35741

[toopski]

http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/374/imag0242ag.jpg
http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5341/imag0241g.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1848/imag0239s.jpg

last one is old as the tag is actually like 15cm's thick

the crew
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6483/imag0240i.jpg

[gim]

35811

[skinaone]

nope still not doing it right, try CSTIL just like i wrote it and then start trying to get some style

[skinaone]

thanks i appreciate it..i got these that i think fit a little better here.35741
K AIAW try your keyboard letters, and dont fill the I thats whack

[gim]

@skinaone alright ill mess with that, thanks

i tried working with a new name simple and short i like it though
35812

[MyNipsAreHard]

toopski- lookin dope. i like the handies alot.
Gim- the most recent one is alot better than your other ones. but dont do the point at the top of the O
35817

[ZETA]

Simp one liners are the way to go. And toopski, lovin that youre actually getting out there, not just blackbooks... or sleeping stoners...35825

[snoketg]

35833


i know i fudged up the n n shit but thats basically my hand style crits?

[Kaskt]

35838

Is writing snor a bad idea?
I'm in NZ.

[toopski]

35838

Is writing snor a bad idea?
I'm in NZ.

only person with smth similar i know is slor from gbak and hes QLD so no biggy since u aint in aus snore from sa has no reason to hate

[Kaskt]

only person with smth similar i know is slor from gbak and hes QLD so no biggy since u aint in aus snore from sa has no reason to hate
Sweet man thanks for the info.
Crit on the handy?

[toopski]

im not a big crit guy for handstyles since i see heaps where i live and tbh ppl can rock a wak handy but make it look dope just by getting it up heaps

sometimes im one of them kinda ppl else i rock simple shit

[Kaskt]

That's a good way of thinking in my opinion.

I like your handstyles btw.

[PETER]

Snor: drop the quotes. maybe try bringing the top or your R up to match the height of the S or bring the S down to match the height of the rest of the letters. I like it though.

[knowtheledge]

Sup people.. some tags caught when I was writin bruzr
35845
35846
35847
35848
35849
35850
35851

[sunnyjim]

i like it

[MN Nice]

Bruzr, that electrical box tag is supreme

[Kaskt]

Yeah I see what you mean about the S/R, I'll try it.

Lovin' the "Danger due to: Bruzr" hahaha.

[SynOne]

Crit it. (Ignore the dying marker =/)

35894

[gim]

@bruzr were you located that place looks mad familiar

[ERAYS]

yo those bruzr tags are pretty tight!!

SynOne - I would keep your letters all the same size for now and keep it simple, maybe loose the quotations, and that thing with the 'R', just make it a plain R thats real clean and eventually it will progress. A simple, clean, nicely spaced out tag will always look better then one that has "sloppy style", but it takes a shit ton of time.

Been working on my stuff for a bit, wat do u guys think?? (personally i dont think the 1st one's proportional, but that just needs practice)

3589535896

[gim]

yo erays i like the style man real talk, maybe lose the underlines and hit some quotation marks on the bottom not the top
maybe lose the tail of the E since you already have a tail on the S idk just my opinion though

35906
meh

[Kaskt]

Not really a crit but that's sick ERAYS.

[knowtheledge]

ERAYS - i'm feelin that second one keep fuckin wid it!
GIM- 519 Lontario homie.. u?

[OZON]

35922 crits

[PETER]

Erays: That second one has something going for it. You seem to have a line that runs the middle then the bottom of your S goes way over it. Try keeping it in line with the rest. I say keep the "tail" on the E. It helps keep ballance.

[gim]

@bruzr - 305 that pic looks like the suburbs of my area haha

[knowtheledge]

aha word

showin ltc some love

36025

[MN Nice]

Yo.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00393-20111006-1814.jpg?t=1317954946

[OZON]

36064 crits plz

[gim]

36101

[knowtheledge]

ayo TOGA what marker you use on dat?

36102

[OZON]

NYC mop love it but it leaks

[knowtheledge]

haha word

36128
36129
36130

[gim]

feeling these

[bak]

that shits illegible

[knowtheledge]

good muhfucka

[Shell703]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/HardstylezPhotoColored.jpg

some shit for a t-shirt, whatcha think??

[Phillip McDougall]

Too "graffiti" not enough "design"
Looks like a toy trying to make money off of his graffiti.
Try some cleaner lines, less fade, and a completely different style.

[skinaone]

Too "graffiti" not enough "design"
Looks like a toy trying to make money off of his graffiti.
Try some cleaner lines, less fade, and a completely different style.
+2

[Flawless Victory]

I would have to suggest against combining bad graffiti and bad techno music.

[OZON]

3615836159361603616136162 crits are welcome

[TBS]

i agree with that thing about the not enough design..

TOGA, it's pretty simple and to be honest a bit shit.. but at least you're writing on things. get a FUCK LOAD of paper and just keep writing toga over and over and over and over, then it'll start getting some more flow to it and start looking a bit cooler.

[skinaone]

man fuck this page is dead
36177

[OZON]

I like simple and I do right on paper but it's not the same as walls

[killroywashere]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6114/6227336496_26ae5fc16e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227336496/)

[bak]

mbinz one?

[seywhat]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4471.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4472.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4473.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4474.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4475.jpg

some new shit developin, n the old still rockin of course...

youth- stay up, but def work on ur structure some more, ur hand looks pretty straight tho. and we still got a couple months til 2012 :p
skina- niice, the s seems a lil wierd for some reason but shit is fresh, keep workin yo

[killroywashere]

@seywhat - its about the message these days homie, hands are looking fresh tho. especially them E's in the beginning

[toopski]

handstyles these days can be toy or great if u keep ur name up enough people will respect you, then over time you can actually develope style

i dont know anyone who had a brillant style when they first started, or in the first few years they were going

[killroywashere]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6031/6231565785_b70ccdcd68.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6231565785/)

[Phat 2]

lol the end isn't near, stupid killroywashere
oh and wtf is an "ere" and why did your killroy wash it ?

[killroywashere]

i couldnt begin to tell you the mind that is killroy phat
honestly wish i could

[skinaone]

still gay

[toopski]

lol the end isn't near, stupid killroywashere
oh and wtf is an "ere" and why did your killroy wash it ?

seriously u didnt get his user name?

[Googie]

Just thought I would post this, it is Dosil... Any comments welcomed...

http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/6558/dosil1.jpg

[SynOne]

Googie, is this your tag? If so, I'm digging it I'd say drop the quotes.

[ZETA]

seriously u didnt get his user name?

pretty sure its a joke bro... ha

[Phat 2]

thank you! damn man, I donno why are all these people so constipated lately :P

[gim]

36672
this underline is gay but i'm looking for something else to add to this
i don't like quotation marks cause i always fuck up on em and i think they look wack

[OZON]

36717

[ChadWarden]

thats dope.

the guy above is dope.


youre all so dope.

[gim]

whats dope

[bak]

that toga is bad . honestly, wackkkkk

[Flawless Victory]

thats dope.

the guy above is dope.


youre all so dope.

They really do have their swag on 100,000,000

[LiveFreeDieFree]

36785

[SERO.TWO]

Crit please!
36786

[LiveFreeDieFree]

[QUOTE=SERO.TWO;1751057]Crit please!

Your hand is really unsteady. Work on letting your hand flow through each letter. Also, I feel like having the tail of the R circle around the tag is unnecessary. Just work on the flow and steadiness for now.

Oh yeah, and if you're going to be "SERO2" then have the 2 in your tag.

[Kaskt]

Hayst your tags getting good imo.

[PETER]

hayst: you are certainly improving. Starting to get some funk. I like the Y. Try giving your T some more attitude.

[MyNipsAreHard]

36830

Hayst- i feel like the H doesnt really flow. and the T is kinda plain. i like everything else tho.
Sero- i feel like if would just tag faster the lines would be cleaner. no need for the loop around the tag. not a bad simple style tag tho. i love simple style tags. clean and easy to read.
Bak- quit hating. at least give criticism

[ERAYS]

yo hayst - i like that, gettin better, i would loose the "halo" or w.e above the H IMO but i like it, keep fuckin with it...also your Y looks exactly the same as in one of my tags lol and i swear i didnt bite that :P ...now go on, KEEP WRITTING!!!

Sero - keep the letters simple and try to get a stable hand, it'll come through practice...also i wouldn't do the loop but its art so w.e

Block - i like it, the only thing i would change is the L, i feel like you could fit it in better with the B if u keep messin with it, otherwise not bad

here's some random tags on scrap paper that I actually kinda like...crits??

368313683236833

on second thought i only like the 1st one, the rest have sketchy unproportional letters but crit/comment anyway if you want

[MTK]

crits?
36836



sorry its sooo big? whats a site to size it?

[gim]

36888
fucked up on the !
crits?

@erays i like the first one just remove the extra lines under the y line
@mtk try flipping that shit so i can actually try to read it lol, upload it tinypic.com it lets you choose any size

[sifer-]

crits please :}

36918

erayss uhh i geuss make it flow more the y has like a lotta fuckin corners but i geuss i like the first one imo

mtk uhh idk what to say i dont know what it says and it looks weird LOL

soa lookin better mann write it over and over again on paper and itll gfet beetter

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

36934 don8r fue. crits

[FatallyUnderEstimated]

36938 sorry.

[OZON]

369593696036961369623696336964

[Tempo718]

36965
is a character considerd a tag... the main question of the day on my mind.

[Phat 2]

Toga reppin bs krue !!!

[gim]

lol at the BS stickers
BSTTT crew
(bs toy tag thread)

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6177/6245131881_f9e4e794b3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6245131881/)
oie_1565813dBn5vu7d (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6245131881/)
purrrrrrtyyyy drunk so idk if this sucks but im heading out to hit ths upp allover town around fiveish so crits before that wuld b nice

also all above m except donerr sux mad cockz so work on your shit dudes. lol thats a horrible crit... uhh naked do a simpler n and d. do your tag a 100 times till you get steezy.

tempo- hard t read, the t looks like an i. looks like an e after the m, and the po is hard tosee. go simpler too and just develop your swag my man. maybe make the staight down bar of th T longer and lose the horzontsl bar at the botton,. and finish your O. letters dont hide behinsd eachotehr in tags

[r4wrs4uce]

Just 2 simple stickers hate if you want i found these laying around so why not post.

[thotz.one]

3707837079

37080

out bombing
3712937130371313713237133

[MyNipsAreHard]

Thotz- like it except for the bottom arrow loop thing
3708437085370863708737088


What do you guys think

[Phat 2]

first one: bik
second one: biocro
third and 4th: biock
last one's the only one you spelled right... dunno if it's your spelling or your letters..
but in general they look ok

[ribcage]

your marker tags are doodoo. The third one down is aight tho, work off the ones you did with a spray can

[Flawless Victory]

Yo Block, don't listen to Phat. Your hands are straight.
Those crew hands could use some tightening up, though.

[MyNipsAreHard]

thanks flawless. yeah if it was an i then it would have a dot on top. or it would be capital. not just a line. but yeah i dont work on thoe crew ones too much

[skinaone]

block has a nice hand shut up phat

[MyNipsAreHard]

Derk- i love the simple handstyles
Zebra- dank. but you should probably move them

[sunnyjim]

37170

37171

[sunnyjim]

opinions?

[Z3BRA]

Looks nice, but the : and * don't look right.

Try lower case dip.

[DERK.ONE]

yea get the D a lil sharper n it will be on point