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LiveFreeDieFree
09-22-2011, 07:03 PM
Looking good man, ditch the arrow though.
Just and idea but maybe you could add an extension to the T to balance it?
The S looks a lot better bit still a 'lil off to me for some reason, I think it's the empty space below it.

It's cause I'm an idiot and can't manage to do the tail of the Y in one fell swoop without making it too high. Haha

I'll add an extension to the T and see.

LiveFreeDieFree
09-22-2011, 07:09 PM
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I'm feelin' the second one forsure.

MN Nice
09-22-2011, 07:10 PM
Mad improvement ^ Keep working on your A and keep your S the same size.

Kaskt
09-22-2011, 08:38 PM
They are sick hayst but your S is still too small.
The T on the top one is best.

Zest3
09-22-2011, 08:58 PM
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Trying new names.
Trying So here, with One after it.

skinaone
09-22-2011, 09:14 PM
better, try a longer name

Zest3
09-22-2011, 09:36 PM
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I like the name So, just got a throwie to go with it, so trying a diff tag.

PETER
09-23-2011, 12:43 PM
your throw is good... tag is a bit too plain, but then again.... it is SO... I'll post some pics of ideas you're welcom to play with.

Zest3
09-23-2011, 12:51 PM
Aight.
New one, testing new stuff.
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PETER
09-23-2011, 01:16 PM
I am thinking taller thinner letters would work really well here.... but I can't seem to get a tall skinny S to work for me. Here's the only one out of a few tries at different styles I liked.

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Zest3
09-23-2011, 01:27 PM
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Watcha think of this ?
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Or this ?

PETER
09-23-2011, 01:37 PM
I am liking that a lot. Check out MN Nice's S. I like his a lot and think it would work great here. I might go so far as to skinny it up a little more and go a little taller.... like a 6 foot tall anorexic chick.

Zest3
09-23-2011, 01:59 PM
What the heck is MN ?
Anyways, last try, added some stuff, gonna stop posting for a while this fucking tag cuz I'm spamming this thread like crazy.
Tell me if it's too much...
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PETER
09-23-2011, 02:39 PM
he's a user on here. writes mues. he has some a few pages back. Personnally I like it dude. rock it out.

Zest3
09-23-2011, 02:55 PM
Promised this would be my last post but couldn't resist.
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Like it alot, will probably stick to it, just wanted your opinion.

PETER
09-23-2011, 03:50 PM
That's what's up. I like the nice up and down motion and it's clean. will look good with that throw of yours.

gim
09-23-2011, 06:08 PM
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Zest3
09-23-2011, 06:15 PM
Try makng the letters closer to each others, and try making all of the letters the same height. I would ditch that exclamation mark for the moment, you should concentrate on your letters first. Your C and S are acceptable, try working on the rest.

559_JK
09-24-2011, 04:41 AM
3344533446 My Tag and My Throw Up i Usually do Wacha Think? Ill try n Take Pics of this Abandon Liqour Store i Bombed

MN Nice
09-24-2011, 09:43 AM
he's a user on here. writes mues. he has some a few pages back. Personnally I like it dude. rock it out.

Yo, what the fuck. Don't tell him to bite my shit.

Zest3
09-24-2011, 10:13 AM
No beef here, but toys biting other writers just mean those writers earned some respect and are good at the game.
Just saying.

gim
09-24-2011, 10:43 AM
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Kinda messed up on the I, I'm having trouble finding an T and I that flows nice

@559_JK looks pretty cool try using a thicker marker

vems
09-24-2011, 10:44 AM
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Kinda messed up on the I, I'm having trouble finding an T and I that flows nice

@559_JK looks pretty cool try using a thicker marker

try to make your t and i a bit like your L, have your T essentialy be your L with a cross, and your i, just base it off that.

MN Nice
09-24-2011, 10:46 AM
That doesn't give you the right to use it as you please. its not the best, but i've been putting hella time into trying to get a style. I've gone through a lot of notebooks of just tags. I recommend you do the same. experiment with your letters.

gim
09-24-2011, 10:51 AM
try to make your t and i a bit like your L, have your T essentialy be your L with a cross, and your i, just base it off that.
thanks for the help but I'm kinda confused by what you mean, your saying I should have the lowercase t cross to make an L at the end? sorry I'm such a fucking toy lol

Zest3
09-24-2011, 11:00 AM
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Been testing different styles and letters for more than 2 years now, and this is the final result. I don't think I've really bitten you or anyone else, if so than it's a coincidence, cuz' I don't like biting either.

Flawless Victory
09-24-2011, 11:02 AM
No beef here, but toys biting other writers just mean those writers earned some respect and are good at the game.
Just saying.
You have shit WAY twisted bro.
Toys biting other writers means that those writers have to deal with some fuckhead kid that isn't good enough to rock his own shit. Not a good look.

PETER
09-24-2011, 11:06 AM
Take it as a compliment. I was mearly making the point that you have a damn good looking S and that he might use that as inspiration.

vems
09-24-2011, 11:40 AM
thanks for the help but I'm kinda confused by what you mean, your saying I should have the lowercase t cross to make an L at the end? sorry I'm such a fucking toy lol

this is what i mean by basing them off eachother, making them have similar structure to maintain flow(note these letters are spaced out so you could clearly see each letter.)

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hope this was helpful.

gim
09-24-2011, 12:11 PM
this is what i mean by basing them off eachother, making them have similar structure to maintain flow(note these letters are spaced out so you could clearly see each letter.)

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hope this was helpful.

oh okay thanks a lot man!!

559_JK
09-24-2011, 01:57 PM
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Kinda messed up on the I, I'm having trouble finding an T and I that flows nice

@559_JK looks pretty cool try using a thicker markerhey thanks and yeah i just did that real quick i got a fat sharpie

Alpha-76
09-24-2011, 02:02 PM
QUOTE=SynOne;1745347]Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.

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Syn: I really like this tag personally. The square quotes look cool and it has a cool flow to it. I know I am supposed to be somewhat critical so perhaps the bottom of the "S" could extend out as far as the top and have a consistent width with the top as well. Nice improvement.


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Can someone actually give me a crit?

I think this looks pretty dope Hayst. I don’t think the upward stroke on the end of the “y” tail is necessary. It almost looks like it might be trying to form another letter but didn’t get completed. “T” could be a tad more snug next to the “S”.


Every once in a while you can get decent advice... but really take it or leave it. Keep writting, keep painting, and keep posting. 32759 crits for the handie on bottom

Agreed … Here I’ll show what a toy I am. I can’t read your whole tag bro. I got the end where it looks to be an “itone” or “ixone”. If I had to guess it says Artixone … let’s play some charades! First word one syllable haha Anyway you write it consistent so that’s dope. The outline above is pretty sick.


Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc233/drzflyest4/Queens-20110921-00111.jpg

Well to start it looks like you wrote your name jacked up on speed. ☺ Just a tad shaky on the letters. Try writing it a bit slower - ? If I saw your name up I would think you were trying to name yourself “Sushi” which just makes me hungry.

[QUOTE=gim;1745934]33102
Just started handstyles a couple of days ago, been practicing this is what I got... suggestions?

Uhh … make the letters the same height and width. So that the “E” is as wide as the “S” and as tall. Mixing lower and uppercase letters feels weird imo. Do not have the “E” center hash line cross into the “S”. Maybe bend the “I” in the same direction as the main stem of the “E”.


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found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate :)
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava

Looks dope! Also looks like a gang handstyle from what I have seen around. Tall and angular.

BUMP


Since I made a bunch of friends here after my last few posts ... thought i'd run an alt by everyone. Is this too close to normal handwriting? Is that I hear people calling a straight handwriting style - ? Not sure exactly what that means in all honesty.

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The h ideally would have extended out of the top of the p but I fucked up.

- Never received any crits on the above post so I bumped it.

Sorry for the mega long post but I didn’t want to double post so I crammed it all into one. I’ll try to go through the newer pages later. So busy I can only get on here once in a while to check out the new tags and comment.

PETER
09-24-2011, 02:14 PM
Alpha: I like the circular one. It's got character. I would like to see it done with a mop with some drips comming off the bottom of the circle bit. Can you post up one in marker? ohhh it says Antik One by the way.

LIZARD
09-25-2011, 04:03 AM
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tryin a one liner handy lmk what ya think

bump for crits

shush4
09-25-2011, 12:10 PM
went from this:
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234

to this :
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33942&d=1316965274

crits on the new one?

Phat 2
09-25-2011, 12:41 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/309789_280159062004083_202093693143954_1168307_209 0554466_n.jpg

skinaone
09-25-2011, 12:58 PM
not feeling it
you havent changed your handstyle since like 3 months ago

gim
09-25-2011, 01:25 PM
went from this:
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33941&d=1316965234

to this :
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33942&d=1316965274

crits on the new one?
looks dope i don't like the star inside or whatever that it is inside the S just my opinion though

PETER
09-25-2011, 02:01 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33942&d=1316965274

Your H's seem to dissapear. give them more deffinitnion.

shush4
09-25-2011, 03:16 PM
tried to take what was said into consideration:
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33956&d=1316978013
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33955&d=1316978002
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33954&d=1316977999

PETER
09-25-2011, 03:31 PM
I think that works a lot better. I am digging the first S on the first one, the second H on the second one, and the U on the last one. I think if you combine those into one you will have something solid going on. Well done. Work on consistency if you like it and tweek as needed. Or if you made the U from the first one you posted with the * and vanishing H's in two strokes (the left portion and right portion seperate. it looks like you did it in one starting with the left then up and back down for the right) I think that would clean it up and give you a good looking U.

skinaone
09-25-2011, 07:04 PM
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wow this came out mad toy

Norfsuthr
09-25-2011, 07:13 PM
Shush its lookin better but make the letters the same size and either level with eachother or at a consistent slant.
Phat I dig that shit. H looks too close to the p tohugh.

SynOne
09-25-2011, 08:16 PM
Crits? Never got any last time but "Looks better"

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skinaone
09-25-2011, 08:21 PM
dont go so long with the N and the Y looks like a U make it bigger and make it flow more with the other letters
S not really feeling it

Phat 2
09-25-2011, 08:30 PM
not feeling it
you havent changed your handstyle since like 3 months ago

why the fuck should I change it if I like it?
I've been using it for a while now, yes, and until I get bored with it, I'm gonna keep using it... it's easy, fast, flowy, classy, nice and effective at the same time.
it might suck balls in this flick right there because it's a train and the surface is rounded as opposed to flat. I don't know if you've sprayed on such surfaces before, but it's not the easiest task too get an even and clean result

skinaone
09-25-2011, 08:34 PM
lol dont get mad nig ga
and yes yes i have i just dont have that much trouble with it

gim
09-25-2011, 09:10 PM
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just gotta work on the sizing i think.. open to crits and opinions also let me know which you like the better...
waiting for my pilot jumbo to ship in so i can practice with fatter lines too

MTK
09-25-2011, 10:05 PM
@gim..... i like the 2nd one the best and if you dont like waiting just go to walmart and get a sharpie MAGNUM... you dont have to be 18 and i got 2 for like 4$ great my still aint dead nd ive had mine for like 8 months

gim
09-26-2011, 02:32 PM
@gim..... i like the 2nd one the best and if you dont like waiting just go to walmart and get a sharpie MAGNUM... you dont have to be 18 and i got 2 for like 4$ great my still aint dead nd ive had mine for like 8 months
yeah word ima cop some of those i heard they smell like shit though

PETER
09-26-2011, 02:48 PM
they smell... but you are not obligated to sit there and sniff it.

MN Nice
09-26-2011, 05:13 PM
I still do.

gim
09-26-2011, 05:32 PM
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can i get some critiques on my hand style?
i like everything except the and the lines under it id stay away from that for now. id say trying going for a normal lower case e <---like that one maybe even reverse it? who knows fuck with it
just my opinion though

gim
09-26-2011, 05:33 PM
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can i get some critiques on my hand style?

i like everything except the E and the lines under it id stay away from that for now. id say trying going for a normal lower case e <---like that one maybe even reverse it? who knows fuck with it
just my opinion though

vems
09-26-2011, 05:45 PM
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just gotta work on the sizing i think.. open to crits and opinions also let me know which you like the better...
waiting for my pilot jumbo to ship in so i can practice with fatter lines too

shorten your letters, they are too tall and skinny imo

gim
09-26-2011, 08:32 PM
thanks for the info y'all probably gonna post a pic once i get my pilot

snoketg
09-26-2011, 09:10 PM
34127

can i get some critiques on my hand style?

skinaone
09-26-2011, 11:01 PM
SMOKE try that first ge that down then try putting flavor into it
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crts

Skeletor1134
09-26-2011, 11:03 PM
snoke, dont extend your e and work on the curves of your s.

geza_arts
09-26-2011, 11:05 PM
skinaone is that your shit cuss if it is thats down!!! props kid!!

skinaone
09-26-2011, 11:07 PM
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crit ma dudes -.-

ribcage
09-26-2011, 11:13 PM
not too shabby, tighten up that O, maybe square it off to fit the rest. Aside from the 1, your handie lookin grood

skinaone
09-26-2011, 11:17 PM
i normaly put ONE but i felt like changing it
thanks my dude. are you coming to the meeting of styles?

ribcage
09-26-2011, 11:23 PM
Nah, the venue in the U.S. already passed, it was invite only to paint, and you have to be 21+. Maybe next year

skinaone
09-26-2011, 11:46 PM
but theres one here in venezuela the 21 22 23 of october
and nope i got invited cause of my gothic handstyle -.-

dankbudz
09-26-2011, 11:51 PM
skina thats dope but im dont like that astrik youre throwing in that S. but its all preference maan
for that handy battle... crits
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-8.jpg

skinaone
09-26-2011, 11:54 PM
ight thanks my man and i kinda fucked it up lol
and CRIT
O is good nice and simple R is like a P but witha - on it put somehting on top of the I to make it look better G looks like a C with an ARROW and N isnt really flowing
overall not that bad

CloseToExtinction
09-27-2011, 08:05 AM
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Ehhhh tag says derp.
Crits?

SneeZ
09-27-2011, 10:36 AM
my advice, dont fuck with oneliners for now, cuz R and P looks like shit. no offense mate.

gim
09-27-2011, 10:58 AM
@dankbudz i don't like the R and how its extended jut my opinion though

MyNipsAreHard
09-27-2011, 10:23 PM
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which one do you guys like better... need some crits aswell

Norfsuthr
09-28-2011, 12:33 AM
1 so easily. Just fix up the B a little and do an actual L. The K in 2 is swag tho.

rolling fresh kush
09-28-2011, 03:02 AM
http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/amsb.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/j-2.jpg SWAG

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/meth.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/jkjgv.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/020.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/tn-1.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/g.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/ilov.jpg

gim
09-28-2011, 09:38 AM
@myhipsarehard yeah def 1, i just don't O with the peace sign kinda wack imo, number 2 is pretty cool too work with that one too

Norfsuthr
09-28-2011, 03:02 PM
Fokes your hands are nowhere near the level your simps and shit are on. The simple purple ones look straight, but the marker tags need some work. Make those lines smoother, it looks like you're jerking your hand around on the o,e and t.

zwerx
09-28-2011, 07:08 PM
Heres one of my sketches during class35003

FatallyUnderEstimated
09-28-2011, 07:22 PM
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if anyone wants more lemme know. crits are welcome but ill probably just say fcuk you

MakeItTakeIt
09-29-2011, 05:17 AM
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Phat 2
09-29-2011, 08:10 AM
^ moar of dis steez pleez!

gim
09-29-2011, 12:27 PM
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sup y'all finally got my pilot jumbo
fucked up on the L on the second one... decided to experiment with the I which one you guys feeling better? 1st or 2nd crits and opinions are welcomed too

MyNipsAreHard
09-29-2011, 02:17 PM
gim- the first one looks like you were jerking your hand.( not smooth lines) however the second one is a lil more smooth but i suggest maybe bringing the bottom of the C up a litte and i prefer S taht are a little wider. And maybe do a capital T- idk- i like the I and L tho

MN Nice
09-29-2011, 04:20 PM
Handstyle exchange Fatally? :)

FatallyUnderEstimated
09-29-2011, 07:52 PM
I'm down, i could do em right now. what do you write?

MN Nice
09-29-2011, 07:53 PM
Mues. you?

FatallyUnderEstimated
09-29-2011, 07:56 PM
donate(llo) fue.. one sec.

FatallyUnderEstimated
09-29-2011, 08:07 PM
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MN Nice
09-29-2011, 08:14 PM
Philly's for the win. Good shit.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00375-20110929-1908.jpg?t=1317341564

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00377-20110929-1909.jpg?t=1317341644

Norfsuthr
09-29-2011, 08:54 PM
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Straighter lines with the diagonals, and make a couple a bit longer or something

Raphael
09-29-2011, 09:16 PM
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this is my old one

Norfsuthr
09-29-2011, 11:44 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6197076584_d7f1a08d09.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6197076584/)
oie_3054016h83GL30S (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6197076584/)

^Absacker? I'd just go more simple for a while

SneeZ
09-30-2011, 05:45 AM
@Absacker, no need to go simpler, just shorten extensions on b and first a, and don't overlap second a with s, you need to cover the space beetwin s and a, and dont make r directly from e. You fucked it up totally with R, change it.

@Norfusthr, doesnt look bad, but if it says fed, than its too much going on, cuz the circle after D looks like o and the arrow looks like Z, know im sayin? Reduce that shit and itll be nice.

PETER
09-30-2011, 12:08 PM
top left is sick there fatal

Im Acro
09-30-2011, 04:22 PM
Hey i've only been doing graffiti for 5 or 6 days and I was looking for help and found this forums.
Heres my tag still working on my flow.... Give me critic?
http://i51.tinypic.com/o5qrko.jpg

Also anyone know a good cheap marker for tags on paper I'm not going to the streets till i find my style nd flow so wont need paint for a while but whats a good marker?

MN Nice
09-30-2011, 04:56 PM
First donatello and now raphael? when did the fucking teenage mutant ninja turtles start writing?

Raphael
09-30-2011, 04:58 PM
here are my newer ones
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vems
09-30-2011, 08:22 PM
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Raphael
09-30-2011, 09:12 PM
vems i really like the bottem one in gray on your second picture

MN Nice
09-30-2011, 10:47 PM
Quality hands from Vems.

"remo"
10-01-2011, 02:16 AM
super shitty
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vems
10-01-2011, 12:43 PM
vems i really like the bottem one in gray on your second picture


Quality hands from Vems.


thanks for the love fellas

FatallyUnderEstimated
10-01-2011, 08:31 PM
let me know if anyone wants an exchange. happy to for the credits^________________________^

Raphael
10-01-2011, 10:59 PM
what do you mean exchange?

MyNipsAreHard
10-01-2011, 11:20 PM
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Chillin in the bathroom

ZETA
10-01-2011, 11:22 PM
Real simple one-liner. Ive been using this tag for a while now... i dig, just wondering what anyone else feels about it

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gim
10-02-2011, 02:04 AM
looks nice zeta, real talk
i like it

Simon
10-02-2011, 05:21 AM
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Crits?

Shell703
10-02-2011, 10:05 AM
I'd work with the black one, get rid of all the quotes though and get some solid letters and a consistent flow going down first

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/MongKokHongKong028.jpg

Im Acro
10-02-2011, 11:41 AM
Hey i've only been doing graffiti for 5 or 6 days and I was looking for help and found this forums.
Heres my tag still working on my flow.... Give me critic?
http://i51.tinypic.com/o5qrko.jpg

Also anyone know a good cheap marker for tags on paper I'm not going to the streets till i find my style nd flow so wont need paint for a while but whats a good marker?
Bump for crits please.

FatallyUnderEstimated
10-02-2011, 01:53 PM
you kids just need to practice! not the same thing over and over but keep trying different styles. when u get something u like then practice

gim
10-02-2011, 03:32 PM
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messing around going with tall letters tell me what y'all think

gim
10-02-2011, 03:42 PM
Bump for crits please.
don't try to go crazy with your letters. start off simple just write a simple A,C,R and O then start to twirk them and mess with them. do that over and over and over again, keep posting up your progress on here so we can crit

and as for markers just stick with sharpies if you wanna go a little thick get a king sized sharpie
if you don't want sharpies to bleed through your paper trying getting some paint markers like decos

idk thats all i got man just work with it

sunnyjim
10-02-2011, 04:03 PM
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i really like cursive tags, so yeah, feedback?

MoganOne
10-02-2011, 04:07 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011-09-30_22-22-00_920.jpg
i just did my tag her friend wrote the rest on my girl lol... it says "I Love my boyfriends dick"

ribcage
10-02-2011, 04:10 PM
lol thats a classic

skinaone
10-02-2011, 09:09 PM
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lol, with a number four paint brush

Shell703
10-02-2011, 09:32 PM
GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS

MENE - Space out your letters

ACRO - I agreee with Gin, start with simple plain letters first

Bump for crits...

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/MongKokHongKong028.jpg

gim
10-02-2011, 09:40 PM
@shell try merging all your letters closers together, i like the E and V
mess around with your C and I
just my opinion though

@sunny looks nice dude, id like to see a bigger pic, it'll prob look dope with a thicker marker
@morgan lol

gim
10-02-2011, 09:42 PM
35593
bump

Norfsuthr
10-02-2011, 10:03 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6022/6205640465_ae910eaf7d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6205640465/)
oie_340450Gw0UTzT (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6205640465/)

skinaone
10-02-2011, 10:33 PM
i didnt crit cause all yalls shits all ready been crited-.-
and i like your other simple tagg better @ norfsur

Im Acro
10-02-2011, 10:55 PM
don't try to go crazy with your letters. start off simple just write a simple A,C,R and O then start to twirk them and mess with them. do that over and over and over again, keep posting up your progress on here so we can crit

and as for markers just stick with sharpies if you wanna go a little thick get a king sized sharpie
if you don't want sharpies to bleed through your paper trying getting some paint markers like decos

idk thats all i got man just work with it

Ok thanks I'll work on it but I got to go to bed for tonight... Peace

Shell703
10-03-2011, 05:18 AM
NORF - I dont know what that is- JERDER, JERPER - Keep it clean; simple and clear for right now,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/Tags001.jpg

Phat 2
10-03-2011, 05:29 AM
on the right track^ bring the letters closer to each other so that they at least touch, and write in italic (either leaning to the left or right)

skinaone
10-03-2011, 03:07 PM
35592
lol, with a number four paint brush
uhhh bump for crits

MN Nice
10-03-2011, 04:04 PM
I like it Skin. Its a nice mix of gothic and old english.

skinaone
10-03-2011, 04:30 PM
should i work on anything ?

gim
10-03-2011, 04:53 PM
35593
bump
BUMPP :mad: lol

MN Nice
10-03-2011, 10:27 PM
should i work on anything ?

make sure every letter gets good defintion. Looks like sometimes letters get covered up by the others.

skinaone
10-03-2011, 10:35 PM
35735
nevermind the ONE but something like that?

MN Nice
10-03-2011, 10:45 PM
Me gusta ^

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00386-20111003-2143.jpg?t=1317696314

MRBC0706
10-03-2011, 10:56 PM
35736
Crits?
And MN Nice I really like that first one. Second one seems a little cramped but that's coming from a toy...

aiaw
10-04-2011, 12:17 AM
thanks i appreciate it..i got these that i think fit a little better here.35741

toopski
10-04-2011, 06:22 AM
http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/374/imag0242ag.jpg
http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5341/imag0241g.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1848/imag0239s.jpg

last one is old as the tag is actually like 15cm's thick

the crew
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6483/imag0240i.jpg

gim
10-04-2011, 04:55 PM
35811

skinaone
10-04-2011, 05:07 PM
nope still not doing it right, try CSTIL just like i wrote it and then start trying to get some style

skinaone
10-04-2011, 05:08 PM
thanks i appreciate it..i got these that i think fit a little better here.35741
K AIAW try your keyboard letters, and dont fill the I thats whack

gim
10-04-2011, 05:40 PM
@skinaone alright ill mess with that, thanks

i tried working with a new name simple and short i like it though
35812

MyNipsAreHard
10-04-2011, 06:15 PM
toopski- lookin dope. i like the handies alot.
Gim- the most recent one is alot better than your other ones. but dont do the point at the top of the O
35817

ZETA
10-04-2011, 09:25 PM
Simp one liners are the way to go. And toopski, lovin that youre actually getting out there, not just blackbooks... or sleeping stoners...35825

snoketg
10-04-2011, 11:04 PM
35833


i know i fudged up the n n shit but thats basically my hand style crits?

Kaskt
10-04-2011, 11:25 PM
35838

Is writing snor a bad idea?
I'm in NZ.

toopski
10-05-2011, 12:27 AM
35838

Is writing snor a bad idea?
I'm in NZ.

only person with smth similar i know is slor from gbak and hes QLD so no biggy since u aint in aus snore from sa has no reason to hate

Kaskt
10-05-2011, 01:01 AM
only person with smth similar i know is slor from gbak and hes QLD so no biggy since u aint in aus snore from sa has no reason to hate
Sweet man thanks for the info.
Crit on the handy?

toopski
10-05-2011, 01:34 AM
im not a big crit guy for handstyles since i see heaps where i live and tbh ppl can rock a wak handy but make it look dope just by getting it up heaps

sometimes im one of them kinda ppl else i rock simple shit

Kaskt
10-05-2011, 01:50 AM
That's a good way of thinking in my opinion.

I like your handstyles btw.

PETER
10-05-2011, 10:08 AM
Snor: drop the quotes. maybe try bringing the top or your R up to match the height of the S or bring the S down to match the height of the rest of the letters. I like it though.

knowtheledge
10-05-2011, 10:21 AM
Sup people.. some tags caught when I was writin bruzr
35845
35846
35847
35848
35849
35850
35851

sunnyjim
10-05-2011, 10:37 AM
i like it

MN Nice
10-05-2011, 11:17 AM
Bruzr, that electrical box tag is supreme

Kaskt
10-05-2011, 03:23 PM
Yeah I see what you mean about the S/R, I'll try it.

Lovin' the "Danger due to: Bruzr" hahaha.

SynOne
10-05-2011, 05:26 PM
Crit it. (Ignore the dying marker =/)

35894

gim
10-05-2011, 05:59 PM
@bruzr were you located that place looks mad familiar

ERAYS
10-05-2011, 06:31 PM
yo those bruzr tags are pretty tight!!

SynOne - I would keep your letters all the same size for now and keep it simple, maybe loose the quotations, and that thing with the 'R', just make it a plain R thats real clean and eventually it will progress. A simple, clean, nicely spaced out tag will always look better then one that has "sloppy style", but it takes a shit ton of time.

Been working on my stuff for a bit, wat do u guys think?? (personally i dont think the 1st one's proportional, but that just needs practice)

3589535896

gim
10-05-2011, 09:03 PM
yo erays i like the style man real talk, maybe lose the underlines and hit some quotation marks on the bottom not the top
maybe lose the tail of the E since you already have a tail on the S idk just my opinion though

35906
meh

Kaskt
10-06-2011, 12:02 AM
Not really a crit but that's sick ERAYS.

knowtheledge
10-06-2011, 12:11 AM
ERAYS - i'm feelin that second one keep fuckin wid it!
GIM- 519 Lontario homie.. u?

OZON
10-06-2011, 02:33 AM
35922 crits

PETER
10-06-2011, 08:33 AM
Erays: That second one has something going for it. You seem to have a line that runs the middle then the bottom of your S goes way over it. Try keeping it in line with the rest. I say keep the "tail" on the E. It helps keep ballance.

gim
10-06-2011, 10:42 AM
@bruzr - 305 that pic looks like the suburbs of my area haha

knowtheledge
10-06-2011, 10:25 PM
aha word

showin ltc some love

36025

MN Nice
10-06-2011, 10:39 PM
Yo.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00393-20111006-1814.jpg?t=1317954946

OZON
10-07-2011, 02:54 AM
36064 crits plz

gim
10-07-2011, 04:56 PM
36101

knowtheledge
10-07-2011, 04:59 PM
ayo TOGA what marker you use on dat?

36102

OZON
10-07-2011, 05:23 PM
NYC mop love it but it leaks

knowtheledge
10-07-2011, 07:36 PM
haha word

36128
36129
36130

gim
10-07-2011, 07:37 PM
feeling these

bak
10-07-2011, 10:40 PM
that shits illegible

knowtheledge
10-07-2011, 11:35 PM
good muhfucka

Shell703
10-08-2011, 12:50 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/HardstylezPhotoColored.jpg

some shit for a t-shirt, whatcha think??

Phillip McDougall
10-08-2011, 01:53 PM
Too "graffiti" not enough "design"
Looks like a toy trying to make money off of his graffiti.
Try some cleaner lines, less fade, and a completely different style.

skinaone
10-08-2011, 02:39 PM
Too "graffiti" not enough "design"
Looks like a toy trying to make money off of his graffiti.
Try some cleaner lines, less fade, and a completely different style.
+2

Flawless Victory
10-08-2011, 04:50 PM
I would have to suggest against combining bad graffiti and bad techno music.

OZON
10-08-2011, 08:37 PM
3615836159361603616136162 crits are welcome

TBS
10-08-2011, 09:39 PM
i agree with that thing about the not enough design..

TOGA, it's pretty simple and to be honest a bit shit.. but at least you're writing on things. get a FUCK LOAD of paper and just keep writing toga over and over and over and over, then it'll start getting some more flow to it and start looking a bit cooler.

skinaone
10-08-2011, 09:45 PM
man fuck this page is dead
36177

OZON
10-09-2011, 12:04 AM
I like simple and I do right on paper but it's not the same as walls

killroywashere
10-09-2011, 02:59 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6114/6227336496_26ae5fc16e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227336496/)

bak
10-09-2011, 04:29 PM
mbinz one?

seywhat
10-09-2011, 11:11 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4471.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4472.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4473.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4474.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/102_4475.jpg

some new shit developin, n the old still rockin of course...

youth- stay up, but def work on ur structure some more, ur hand looks pretty straight tho. and we still got a couple months til 2012 :p
skina- niice, the s seems a lil wierd for some reason but shit is fresh, keep workin yo

killroywashere
10-09-2011, 11:19 PM
@seywhat - its about the message these days homie, hands are looking fresh tho. especially them E's in the beginning

toopski
10-10-2011, 12:44 AM
handstyles these days can be toy or great if u keep ur name up enough people will respect you, then over time you can actually develope style

i dont know anyone who had a brillant style when they first started, or in the first few years they were going

killroywashere
10-10-2011, 04:36 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6031/6231565785_b70ccdcd68.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6231565785/)

Phat 2
10-10-2011, 05:55 PM
lol the end isn't near, stupid killroywashere
oh and wtf is an "ere" and why did your killroy wash it ?

killroywashere
10-10-2011, 08:11 PM
i couldnt begin to tell you the mind that is killroy phat
honestly wish i could

skinaone
10-10-2011, 10:59 PM
still gay

toopski
10-10-2011, 11:20 PM
lol the end isn't near, stupid killroywashere
oh and wtf is an "ere" and why did your killroy wash it ?

seriously u didnt get his user name?

Googie
10-11-2011, 03:31 AM
Just thought I would post this, it is Dosil... Any comments welcomed...

http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/6558/dosil1.jpg

SynOne
10-11-2011, 08:37 AM
Googie, is this your tag? If so, I'm digging it I'd say drop the quotes.

ZETA
10-11-2011, 12:53 PM
seriously u didnt get his user name?

pretty sure its a joke bro... ha

Phat 2
10-11-2011, 03:53 PM
thank you! damn man, I donno why are all these people so constipated lately :P

gim
10-11-2011, 03:53 PM
36672
this underline is gay but i'm looking for something else to add to this
i don't like quotation marks cause i always fuck up on em and i think they look wack

OZON
10-12-2011, 02:40 AM
36717

ChadWarden
10-12-2011, 08:00 PM
thats dope.

the guy above is dope.


youre all so dope.

gim
10-12-2011, 09:05 PM
whats dope

bak
10-12-2011, 10:32 PM
that toga is bad . honestly, wackkkkk

Flawless Victory
10-12-2011, 11:05 PM
thats dope.

the guy above is dope.


youre all so dope.

They really do have their swag on 100,000,000

LiveFreeDieFree
10-12-2011, 11:27 PM
36785

SERO.TWO
10-12-2011, 11:43 PM
Crit please!
36786

LiveFreeDieFree
10-12-2011, 11:48 PM
[QUOTE=SERO.TWO;1751057]Crit please!

Your hand is really unsteady. Work on letting your hand flow through each letter. Also, I feel like having the tail of the R circle around the tag is unnecessary. Just work on the flow and steadiness for now.

Oh yeah, and if you're going to be "SERO2" then have the 2 in your tag.

Kaskt
10-13-2011, 09:02 AM
Hayst your tags getting good imo.

PETER
10-13-2011, 10:13 AM
hayst: you are certainly improving. Starting to get some funk. I like the Y. Try giving your T some more attitude.

MyNipsAreHard
10-13-2011, 05:54 PM
36830

Hayst- i feel like the H doesnt really flow. and the T is kinda plain. i like everything else tho.
Sero- i feel like if would just tag faster the lines would be cleaner. no need for the loop around the tag. not a bad simple style tag tho. i love simple style tags. clean and easy to read.
Bak- quit hating. at least give criticism

ERAYS
10-13-2011, 06:18 PM
yo hayst - i like that, gettin better, i would loose the "halo" or w.e above the H IMO but i like it, keep fuckin with it...also your Y looks exactly the same as in one of my tags lol and i swear i didnt bite that :P ...now go on, KEEP WRITTING!!!

Sero - keep the letters simple and try to get a stable hand, it'll come through practice...also i wouldn't do the loop but its art so w.e

Block - i like it, the only thing i would change is the L, i feel like you could fit it in better with the B if u keep messin with it, otherwise not bad

here's some random tags on scrap paper that I actually kinda like...crits??

368313683236833

on second thought i only like the 1st one, the rest have sketchy unproportional letters but crit/comment anyway if you want

MTK
10-13-2011, 06:54 PM
crits?
36836



sorry its sooo big? whats a site to size it?

gim
10-13-2011, 09:59 PM
36888
fucked up on the !
crits?

@erays i like the first one just remove the extra lines under the y line
@mtk try flipping that shit so i can actually try to read it lol, upload it tinypic.com it lets you choose any size

sifer-
10-13-2011, 11:14 PM
crits please :}

36918

erayss uhh i geuss make it flow more the y has like a lotta fuckin corners but i geuss i like the first one imo

mtk uhh idk what to say i dont know what it says and it looks weird LOL

soa lookin better mann write it over and over again on paper and itll gfet beetter

FatallyUnderEstimated
10-14-2011, 12:18 AM
36934 don8r fue. crits

FatallyUnderEstimated
10-14-2011, 12:20 AM
36938 sorry.

OZON
10-14-2011, 02:22 AM
369593696036961369623696336964

Tempo718
10-14-2011, 02:32 AM
36965
is a character considerd a tag... the main question of the day on my mind.

Phat 2
10-14-2011, 06:03 AM
Toga reppin bs krue !!!

gim
10-14-2011, 08:55 AM
lol at the BS stickers
BSTTT crew
(bs toy tag thread)

Norfsuthr
10-15-2011, 12:45 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6177/6245131881_f9e4e794b3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6245131881/)
oie_1565813dBn5vu7d (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6245131881/)
purrrrrrtyyyy drunk so idk if this sucks but im heading out to hit ths upp allover town around fiveish so crits before that wuld b nice

also all above m except donerr sux mad cockz so work on your shit dudes. lol thats a horrible crit... uhh naked do a simpler n and d. do your tag a 100 times till you get steezy.

tempo- hard t read, the t looks like an i. looks like an e after the m, and the po is hard tosee. go simpler too and just develop your swag my man. maybe make the staight down bar of th T longer and lose the horzontsl bar at the botton,. and finish your O. letters dont hide behinsd eachotehr in tags

r4wrs4uce
10-15-2011, 10:56 AM
Just 2 simple stickers hate if you want i found these laying around so why not post.

thotz.one
10-15-2011, 04:06 PM
3707837079

37080

out bombing
3712937130371313713237133

MyNipsAreHard
10-15-2011, 04:56 PM
Thotz- like it except for the bottom arrow loop thing
3708437085370863708737088


What do you guys think

Phat 2
10-15-2011, 06:36 PM
first one: bik
second one: biocro
third and 4th: biock
last one's the only one you spelled right... dunno if it's your spelling or your letters..
but in general they look ok

ribcage
10-16-2011, 01:46 AM
your marker tags are doodoo. The third one down is aight tho, work off the ones you did with a spray can

Flawless Victory
10-16-2011, 12:30 PM
Yo Block, don't listen to Phat. Your hands are straight.
Those crew hands could use some tightening up, though.

MyNipsAreHard
10-16-2011, 01:21 PM
thanks flawless. yeah if it was an i then it would have a dot on top. or it would be capital. not just a line. but yeah i dont work on thoe crew ones too much

skinaone
10-16-2011, 02:31 PM
block has a nice hand shut up phat

MyNipsAreHard
10-16-2011, 04:43 PM
Derk- i love the simple handstyles
Zebra- dank. but you should probably move them

sunnyjim
10-16-2011, 05:09 PM
37170

37171

sunnyjim
10-16-2011, 05:12 PM
opinions?

Z3BRA
10-16-2011, 05:14 PM
Looks nice, but the : and * don't look right.

Try lower case dip.

DERK.ONE
10-16-2011, 05:32 PM
yea get the D a lil sharper n it will be on point

skinaone
10-16-2011, 05:44 PM
what? sharper D ? noooo needs to be rounder like the rest of the letters bro
37174
37175
bump for crits

DERK.ONE
10-16-2011, 05:46 PM
sharper meaning on point lol my b. but yo skina that hand is nice on the top pic. the K is on slackmode tho but i like that style son.

ERAYS
10-16-2011, 11:58 PM
Derk --> I like the simples, i would just keep working on/writting them until more and more style comes out overtime

Skina --> the top blue handstlye's pretty good, i would move the middle bars on the K down a bit so their even with the middle bar on the A....but thats just me

i've came up with this one today...still workin on it but i thought it was kinda cool, wat do u guys think??37217

sifer-
10-17-2011, 12:05 AM
37220

smokeitup
10-17-2011, 12:37 AM
369593696036961369623696336964

lol this guys still here posting his toy ass shit, them stickers dont take away from the fact that your tags are shit.

went for a walk, dropped a few tags

http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/706/photo0029d.jpg

http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/1598/photo0030h.jpg

http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/853/photo0031n.jpg

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/1763/photo0032u.jpg

http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/4613/photo0033u.jpg

and came across a tag id done 6 years ago...

http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/6755/photo0034k.jpg

still there after 6 years, ha.

OZON
10-17-2011, 02:36 AM
ive come to terms with the fact that im not good fact is i just love vandalizing shit so your positive feedback is doesnt phase me it makes me giggle like a small child

gim
10-17-2011, 05:06 PM
philly attempt lol
37338

Z3BRA
10-17-2011, 06:49 PM
looks like an ass just sayin

does it say 100?

FatallyUnderEstimated
10-17-2011, 07:14 PM
37350
STOP. BITING. you kids suck, stick to your own shit. don't mess with styles that don't represent you

Z3BRA
10-17-2011, 10:26 PM
http://i51.tinypic.com/el4ky0.png

gim
10-17-2011, 11:14 PM
just messing around.. relax..

Z3BRA
10-18-2011, 12:07 AM
anyone like mine? ive used it for like 10 years haha

FatallyUnderEstimated
10-18-2011, 12:54 AM
im relaxed, son. be yourself is what im saying,,, dont be a toy and try to use other styles that aren't at least MOSTLY original. you suck, so practice!

gim
10-18-2011, 12:06 PM
ya i feel you just eating shit tho

MyNipsAreHard
10-18-2011, 02:46 PM
topha- stick to the books
zebra- your letters are a lil smushed
fatally- dope

skinaone
10-18-2011, 05:50 PM
anyone like mine? ive used it for like 10 years haha
no its mad toy lol
but youve been painting for aged so i shouldnt really matter im just giving my 2cents

Googie
10-18-2011, 07:45 PM
37569Hello Guys,

Im new to this forum and graffiti as well. Im posting a pic that I made with my new graphics tablet. All crits welcomed.

http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/5512/bombingscience.jpg

Thanks,

Googie.

H1P30N3R
10-18-2011, 08:33 PM
im relaxed, son. be yourself is what im saying,,, dont be a toy and try to use other styles that aren't at least MOSTLY original. you suck, so practice!
Word!! just try and do your own thing man use your creativity to build YOUR style

SynOne
10-18-2011, 10:07 PM
2 Handstyles. Which one, or even a mix of the two lol.

37578

Z3BRA
10-18-2011, 10:09 PM
second

Googie
10-19-2011, 12:05 AM
37587

tophaa
10-19-2011, 05:47 AM
37634376353763637637


I through these around the past hour. 3 of these contain crowns (which is not an image I have earned or particularly care for, I was just messing around.) Please give me feedback, they say Trill and Strobe. I could use some advice with the "obe" part of strobe, thanks.

SynOne
10-19-2011, 11:30 AM
Tophaa. Write it simply. For the love of god. Please just write it regularly.