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PaintOnDeck
11-18-2011, 08:12 AM
Lolyoo toy make me geek.

lies and deceit
11-18-2011, 08:20 AM
You found bad writing in a toy thread, HOLY SHIT.

spiltink
11-18-2011, 04:10 PM
it looks a bit wierd to me hoe the top of the m goes with the o but ill write both mMs maybe
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2523.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2528.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2529.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100E2527.JPG

Hapa
11-18-2011, 05:26 PM
Yeah I know it's gay I was just copying the name of childishs old mix tape...

Hapa
11-18-2011, 05:47 PM
Ohh alright didn't know it was taken

NouveauP
11-18-2011, 10:06 PM
AMOS- You second picture has the best hands. However, I would change that lowercase a into a capital A with a rounded top. I think it would match the other letters a lot better.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0523.jpg

Hapa
11-18-2011, 11:25 PM
Ok I've made gay name choices.. This is probably another but how does sique sound? I'll post a pic in a bit.. Only on my iPhone

toopski
11-19-2011, 01:08 AM
man weird so many ppl go for smth close to ammo

i started writing amoe, some guy where i live writes amoh/amos someone else used to write aemo

seems to be a common thing

Hapa
11-19-2011, 02:32 AM
Shitty but heres my idea

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Hapa
11-19-2011, 02:34 AM
wasnt shure at all what to do with the Q or the U

gim
11-19-2011, 11:02 AM
get rid of the i think sque sounds cooler imo nice and short

Hapa
11-19-2011, 03:27 PM
Yeah sounds better, thanks. Any ideas on what I should do with the q?

Doz3r
11-19-2011, 04:20 PM
4139041391413924139341394

spiltink
11-19-2011, 05:39 PM
this guy is from the future!!!!

some of your Z's look like a's

TheBlackppl
11-19-2011, 10:26 PM
:O nice tags

H1P30N3R
11-20-2011, 03:22 AM
bump the homie nouv!!
AMOS- You second picture has the best hands. However, I would change that lowercase a into a capital A with a rounded top. I think it would match the other letters a lot better.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0523.jpg

SynOne
11-21-2011, 10:31 AM
^ Definite. Heard Nouv actually lives in my area. I got pretty hyped over that.

Mr. November
11-21-2011, 05:56 PM
New tags. Is this good for pretty much ground zero on the complexity scale?

Crits Please.

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IbuprofenTablets
11-22-2011, 03:47 PM
Lol @ the collage Doz3r put up.
You honestly made my day, man. LOL

Norfsuthr
11-22-2011, 04:52 PM
That action shot lol. Dozer I could give a long ass list of individual letter critiques but I'd rather just say don't be gay.

maizy
11-22-2011, 05:37 PM
New tags. Is this good for pretty much ground zero on the complexity scale?

Crits Please.

41946

Mad respect those tags but if the 'k's at the bottom had bottom bars it would be easier to read. Personally to me they are hard for normal people to read.

But still nice tags.

FuckSandwich
11-22-2011, 07:30 PM
Yeah, I'm shit. But yeah, any ideas?

42088

.Cuore
11-22-2011, 07:50 PM
yeah, try practicing on paper and not on the computer. and work on making the letters simpler and so that they go together, not each one doin its own thing.

maizy
11-22-2011, 07:51 PM
Yeah, I'm shit. But yeah, any ideas?

42088

The the letter 'R' has to be higher to make it look like one word, move the 'R' to the same height as the 'Di t' (the Di t are all on the same "reading" plane but the R is a little to low). Also the bar of the 't' or 'T' is a little to low so it doesn't look the best or you could shorten the 'T' or curve the 't' to make it look lowercase. Also try to make tags done by your hand unless you want your computer to drop tags for you.

PS yeah this post is confusing to simplify it -> http://www.zilefile.com/files/17114_1lkag/dirt.jpg

edit cuore is right

FuckSandwich
11-22-2011, 07:52 PM
Aight cheers man. I always practice on paper, just jumped on the pc quick cause I don't have a scanner, but I'll work on that, cheers

maizy
11-22-2011, 08:18 PM
Aight cheers man. I always practice on paper, just jumped on the pc quick cause I don't have a scanner, but I'll work on that, cheers

You could take a still photo of the drawing.

FuckSandwich
11-22-2011, 10:03 PM
You could take a still photo of the drawing.

I have no camera, only a phone which I don't have the USB cable for, but I used a graphics tablet so it's exactly how it looks on paper

SynOne
11-22-2011, 11:01 PM
Testing shit. I like #3. I can't decide if I should make it a lowercase t or Uppercase.

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.Cuore
11-22-2011, 11:03 PM
i'd give you the same advice, skewt, besides your e and w, your S K and T are off doing their own things. the best handies are simple, and every letter goes together.

H1P30N3R
11-22-2011, 11:18 PM
i'd give you the same advice, skewt, besides your e and w, your S K and T are off doing their own things. the best handies are simple, and every letter goes together.
correction the best handies are from baby drinkin sluts

maizy
11-23-2011, 07:47 AM
Just started, so yeah...
42205

Pretty "special-ED tag" you should just try to make a simple tag then step it up. Don't start out with super advanced stuff.


Testing shit. I like #3. I can't decide if I should make it a lowercase t or Uppercase.

The effect in front of number 3 looks like the letter A, which isn't good. Also the letter w is a too close to it self in number 3 which makes it look like the letter a. But everything looks better in 2. So personally the number 2 looks the best.

SynOne
11-24-2011, 12:50 AM
Re-try. I think this flows better for sure, I feel like this is what I should be doing, naturally flows better than being forced to flow. Still not digging my t though.

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.Cuore
11-24-2011, 01:15 AM
E W and T are going well together, just need to get the S and the K to fit in as well. get rid of the kick at the bottom of the K and make it curved to fit in with the E W and T

H1P30N3R
11-24-2011, 01:17 AM
drop the connection from the s to k, it makes the s look kinda like an 8. 1st hand is simple and nice

FuckSandwich
11-24-2011, 07:47 PM
Alright been practicing, managed to get the usb cable for my phone to work and decided on a better name, still toy as fuck but yeah, any pointers?
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/202/photo019ia.jpg/

MN Nice
11-24-2011, 09:01 PM
Skewt if you wanna connect your S and K, start your S as the bottom and move up.

Lado
11-24-2011, 11:22 PM
Skewt, that last flick definitely has the best hands so far. But try rounding the S at the bottom, rather than what you have going now.

SynOne
11-25-2011, 12:29 AM
Yeah mues I tried that shit. But I can't seem to get a decent s down.

Lado
11-25-2011, 01:44 PM
Just start by doing an S that you would write in your normal handwriting.

AirMaxKid889Bomber
11-25-2011, 01:49 PM
dear toys, you really shouldnt put style into every letter unless youve been tagging for about a year and a half and you know what your doing, not that use will probs become the next step up(throwies) the (piecing) youll see that good writers dont really put style into every letter.

AirMaxKid889Bomber
11-25-2011, 01:52 PM
join the *D* and bring th *R* up and dont put so much style

SynOne
11-26-2011, 03:09 PM
^ Don't put style in every letter till you know what your doing. Says the toy that puts style in every letter and doesnt have a clue whats going on.

MN Nice
11-26-2011, 03:13 PM
lol word, we see your shit tag in toy chat. Shut your fuckin mouth.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00442-20111031-0045.jpg?t=1320040292

Colors
11-26-2011, 03:17 PM
Airmax were you trying to imply you werent a toy?
and mues thats nice and simple but lose the arrow ha

MiDo93
11-26-2011, 06:20 PM
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Hapa
11-27-2011, 12:34 AM
Its shitty but I tried to make it somewhat simple. Just wondering if i should keep the line for the i or just leave it with an x or what.... Any crits please

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someone else on here told me to drop the i, not sure how i really liked it so i was just trying something with the x

ate0
11-27-2011, 01:05 AM
i have been writing and painting cents i was 15ish. im 28 now. im trying to lvl up my sh*t. in this past year i actually bought caps, and some good paint. i am trying to go from "street" to clean, crisp, art. i guess.

so every couple weeks i will post a new vid with my latest sh*t. im trying to be fressh new and creative. i just get inspired when i see the pros,. cope2, seen, agor..etc.. so please give me your criticism. this is along way from my usually 10' tall ol english letters!!

here http://youtu.be/Uf1AnDjNct8

ribcage
11-27-2011, 01:26 AM
yo for starters, cut your lines. Your 0 looks a lot like a D, you gotta define the fuck out them letters or else people gonna eat your shit alive. If you got sketches, post em up in the blackbook thread and get some feed back before you paint it. you got lightweight can control tho so thats a good way to start workin with some artsy fartsy shit

AirMaxKid889Bomber
11-27-2011, 04:05 AM
425674256842569425704257142572

*sumo*

AirMaxKid889Bomber
11-27-2011, 04:22 AM
^ Don't put style in every letter till you know what your doing. Says the toy that puts style in every letter and doesnt have a clue whats going on.

that was my older brother who said that which writes dorpz and he directly did that as a point that i cant tag ^^^

pocket
11-27-2011, 06:47 AM
41013

can i get a mo fuckin crit for once or at least some suggestions

maybe bring the top of the C closer to the O.



somethin i tried this morning, keepin in simple.
i know i need to bring the D further in and do something better with the N

ابن ملك
11-27-2011, 08:56 AM
425774257842579 my old tag (red) says si. doesnt mean anything. and new one (black) is resk. which one is better? thanks.

Lado
11-27-2011, 10:05 AM
425674256842569425704257142572

*sumo*

This reminds me of Alexander Supertramp's bus and set up. I don't think it is, and I'm glad. I'd be so pissed off if it got tagged and shit.
But word up for painting dude, but for now stick to paper and work on structure and all that jazz.

spiltink
11-27-2011, 03:06 PM
42570

*el fagoto*

lmao fagott ahahhahaha

Mr. November
11-27-2011, 06:07 PM
@Airmax You should probably space out your U from your M because it looks like SLMO at first.

@ Pocket You should probably bring your letters closer, and work on all of your letters except for maybe the i.

@ ابن ملك
You should probably make sure that your R looks like an P with an extension from the e hooking up to it. I don't know if I would try to connect all of your letters especially at first. But it's really not that bad I don't think. The Si tag is a little wack though, and the exclamation point looks like it could be an O so you might want to drop that.

jack666
11-28-2011, 04:02 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/1395/img000127.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/59/img000127.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)
there is some of my tag what you guys think ? some are attempt to philly one but i need tips

Mr. November
11-28-2011, 05:05 PM
I still like the bottom two Jack. :D

SkateJunt
11-28-2011, 06:39 PM
crits on this? thr R turned into a B but whatevs
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7162/6419456281_f823588ec3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456281/)
Picture 112 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456281/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

SynOne
11-29-2011, 12:58 AM
Took crits, worked on it. I'm pleased. Need feedback on it still.

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Jack - Bottom left one. Remove the stars and underline.

ribcage
11-29-2011, 01:08 AM
lower case t bro? you got a T as the last letter, you better start fuckin using it. The E and K suck, and the S doesnt match as its the only letter with any kind of extension or misdirection

SynOne
11-29-2011, 06:56 AM
^ I know. I blow at tags. But I'm starting to actually start them. I haven't put in ANY time towards them. But I'm starting to. I just flat out blow cock at them. I just wanted to get down a simple ass tag. As for the S has the extension on the top, I wasn't even suppose to do that but when I started it I did it as that's how my S is in my actual hand writing. Been doing that for years so it's a bad habit I have to break. That T on the end, no clue how to work it... I just need a whole hell of a lot of practice. But in the streets I am getting eaten alive because of my tag. Lesson fucking learned. "Get a fucking tag down".

PETER
11-29-2011, 12:35 PM
Syn: I like the S, W, and T. but for real the K and E need a lot of work. You're making improvement keep it up. Just make sure you keep the marker at the same angle all the time.

SynOne
11-29-2011, 02:25 PM
Just ignore the throwie. Crit it. I tried to do as Ribcage said and started using that T. Not sure if it's good though.

42996

Added another flick of it.

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Hapa
11-29-2011, 11:44 PM
Crits please. Tried to make it simple.

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The halo thats on a few of em is supposed to be part of the i. Tell me if I should cut that.

gim
11-30-2011, 12:47 PM
@hapa i like the idea of the 2nd one on the top with the halo on top of the I, try making an i like that with the dot but instead use a smaller halo?
@syn that k could use some work, i like the idea of the little tail flowing on the S, but the T just looks weird imo but its acceptable

Lado
11-30-2011, 10:12 PM
Took the pictures with my brother's iPod, and they came out sideways. Sorry :/

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43116
43115

Hapa
12-01-2011, 02:09 AM
Changed my name... sique seemed too generic

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Hapa
12-01-2011, 02:10 AM
Oh looking for crits on the name first in general handstyle if its ok

SynOne
12-01-2011, 07:26 AM
Hapa I like that name better personally. But That A - E connection's gotta go. And the Extension on the top of the S needs to go because the other letters don't have any extensions or anything. I think with that name you might have to either be lowercase A and E or Capital. I don't thing you can mix them like Ae or aE. But you might be able to pull it off.

Svc
12-01-2011, 11:18 AM
hapa, likin it, but as said, drop the connected letters43190

SynOne
12-01-2011, 01:20 PM
Svc - Nice shit, I don't know if I agree on the S in the far right one. It connects and looks like a 8 if you are in the street with a mop and you connect it like that. It will look like an 8. What marker you using, looks dope.

PETER
12-01-2011, 01:55 PM
Syn: I'm liking the way that works. The K still needs work, but everything else is good IMO.
Hapa: I'm liking the new name. I suggest using the lower case E from the sique and a lower case A. Which you might be able to use connections with and might vibe a bit better. You're coming a long nicely. Personally I think you should stick with this name for a bit. It's got promise. I like how the K and are keep some balance.

SynOne
12-01-2011, 02:40 PM
Sloppy, but you get the point. Working on that K.

43337

PETER
12-01-2011, 02:55 PM
that works better if you ask me. I just skribbled this up, didn't keep your W/T connection. Hope you like it. 43338

SynOne
12-01-2011, 02:58 PM
^ Thanks bro, I might not keep the W - T connection. Honestly using it was just more of a speed thing. I don't pick up the marker from the Leg on my K to the end of my T. It just flowed naturally and quickly. But Just looking about, not connecting it and letting my T flow over top a bit does seem to work better.

PETER
12-01-2011, 03:05 PM
I like the w/t connection especially with that flowing tail, but whatever feels and looks right for you. You're developing a nice had pretty quick.

H1P30N3R
12-01-2011, 04:45 PM
try the skewr bro that t looks like an i ... it just has more shit goin on than your other letters. Thats how I can tell your trying to work on it, but sometimes doing it simple w/o extra effort comes out the best.

gim
12-01-2011, 05:14 PM
^this
simple over everything nothing like a nice clean tag

Hapa
12-01-2011, 08:36 PM
@peter, syn, svc thanks a ton and Peter that was what I was kinda going for with the K and the R I'll uploa some pics of some new things with your guys crits in mind. Only on my iPhone right now

ERAYS
12-01-2011, 11:21 PM
43531

came up with this one today

Carma7
12-02-2011, 09:10 AM
i gota pretty wack tag style right now. ima upload some pics tonight once i get outa school. and erays im not feelin that R and that Y man. i would do something about the bottom of the Y and just get rid of that stray line and make the R a normal letter but switch up the botton of it to keep it consistent with the rest of the tag. other wise i think its pretty dope

toopski
12-02-2011, 11:36 AM
whats with new cats thinking all tags must have mad over the top style to look fresh

smokeitup
12-03-2011, 09:57 PM
LOL @ toys that sign up and post their shitty tags on paper then change their name 3 or 4 times and continue to post toy shit and not improve.

why are there so many tags on paper, dont u toys ever go out and hit up some walls??

SynOne
12-03-2011, 10:55 PM
^ I do. Only thing is, I have bad can control so I don't like to post shittier handstyles of my shit handstyle.

MN Nice
12-03-2011, 11:48 PM
LOL @ toys that sign up and post their shitty tags on paper then change their name 3 or 4 times and continue to post toy shit and not improve.

why are there so many tags on paper, dont u toys ever go out and hit up some walls??

You kidding? I'd much much much rather see toy ass tags on paper. Those ugly ass tags are what give graff a bad name.

ERA209
12-04-2011, 12:51 AM
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This my Tag tell me what ya think of it...

spiltink
12-04-2011, 10:57 AM
iPhone

why do you have to say iphone?? why not just phone?

what you think your better cause you spent more money on a shitty phone?

ERAYS
12-04-2011, 04:47 PM
LOL @ toys that sign up and post their shitty tags on paper then change their name 3 or 4 times and continue to post toy shit and not improve.

why are there so many tags on paper, dont u toys ever go out and hit up some walls??

personally cause i dont have a camera other then my webcam (phone camera sucks dick) and I i'd rather post shit on paper, get some crits, and then go out and paint it....

Lado
12-04-2011, 04:55 PM
It's only common sense man.

smokeitup
12-04-2011, 09:59 PM
mmmkay well i mean u can just paint in canels or a warehouse or some alley or under a bridge where no one will see it just to get can control down and practice.

smokeitup
12-04-2011, 10:00 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011001-1.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011002-1.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011003.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011004.jpg

smokeitup
12-04-2011, 10:00 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011005.jpg

smokeitup
12-04-2011, 10:02 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011006.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011010.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011011.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011020.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011018.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011017.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011016.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011015.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011014.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011013.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011012.jpg

any tips?

MN Nice
12-04-2011, 10:05 PM
Not bad, got a NY feel to your tags. You from around there?

Edit: lol jk I just now read under your username that you're in Australia lol

Mr. November
12-04-2011, 10:57 PM
New name.

Started practicing this today, what do you think.

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MN Nice
12-04-2011, 11:17 PM
Fuckin around

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00475-20111204-2305.jpg?t=1323062196

November: take off the C extension on top and work on your K

Norfsuthr
12-04-2011, 11:19 PM
Dkode you still got work to do with your od but once you figure something nice out it'll be beautiful. that d looks like an a right now. Keep with that e in the 2nd to last pic but lose the arrow for that tag and use the one coming off that E on the tag to the left.

Hapa
12-04-2011, 11:20 PM
took what a few of you guys said a few days ago and tried to apply it, crits?

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and @spiltink sorry i said iPhone....

Mr. November
12-04-2011, 11:22 PM
Fuckin around

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00475-20111204-2305.jpg?t=1323062196

November: take off the C extension on top and work on your K

Sweet thanks. I know my K needs help..

PETER
12-05-2011, 09:30 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY3RDDECEMBER2011017.jpg


I like this one. I'm just not feeling your K at all honestly. IMO keep your second D like the first and if you use a lower case E be careful not to go overboard with it. It seems you get carried away with it and it kills what was a good tag. Overall you've got a solid hand, just a few things to work out.
edit: for your K maybe try making where it connects a bit highter keeping most of the negative space at the bottom and make it more fluid rather than sharp.

spher
12-05-2011, 11:29 AM
smokeitup lose the aroow at the end
just my opinon

BusiK
12-05-2011, 06:55 PM
43937

I usually get covered up when I post here but it seems a bit dead right now, maybe someone will say something.

Phat 2
12-05-2011, 07:21 PM
kid... please annihilate yourself and never come back to these forums. ever again. graffiti's not for you. try another hobby.

Phat 2
12-05-2011, 07:22 PM
I didn't mean that in a bad way

BusiK
12-05-2011, 07:24 PM
Lol...

SynOne
12-05-2011, 07:24 PM
Phat wtf? What's wrong with that shit. I've seen you do a script handstyle. He just needs to improve it a bit.

BusiK
12-05-2011, 07:26 PM
Thanks for the constructive criticism. I guess this community is exactly what I thought it was

ATAK!:3
12-05-2011, 07:33 PM
well... first off, fuck any cursive shit, forget about it untill your an amazing caligrapher, also it looks like you did this with the pen clenched in your hand while having a seizure. im not sure what your name is, start out simple, thenn you can work on some connections and whatnot.

ribcage
12-05-2011, 07:36 PM
^you and syn, dont know what the fuck is up.

All three of you dudes should quit

Mr. November
12-05-2011, 07:42 PM
Busik drop the cursive handstyle and lock it away for a very long time. You're not good at it and not a lot of people are. Don't try and do that because it looks like shit.

You should on the other hand try to write your name in really legible simple letters. It's what I've been told numerous times and I'm just starting like you.

You wanted the spotlight so there you have it hahaha.

Goolduck ;)

Phat 2
12-05-2011, 08:33 PM
Phat wtf? What's wrong with that shit. I've seen you do a script handstyle. He just needs to improve it a bit.
guy its not THAT hes writing cursive. its HOW hes writing cursive. youre right, my main tag is cursive, so i know how hard it is to pull off properly. ive been practicing for about a full year now and i only just got it down right now...

BusiK
12-05-2011, 08:48 PM
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So is this what you mean? I just showed progression of extensions or whatever, I know you guys are probably going to say to go with the top one. But I figured what the hell.

SkateJunt
12-05-2011, 09:04 PM
go with the first one

SynOne
12-05-2011, 09:29 PM
43948

smokeitup
12-05-2011, 10:53 PM
I like this one. I'm just not feeling your K at all honestly. IMO keep your second D like the first and if you use a lower case E be careful not to go overboard with it. It seems you get carried away with it and it kills what was a good tag. Overall you've got a solid hand, just a few things to work out.
edit: for your K maybe try making where it connects a bit highter keeping most of the negative space at the bottom and make it more fluid rather than sharp.

ok thanks ill try that next time.

Dkode you still got work to do with your od but once you figure something nice out it'll be beautiful. that d looks like an a right now. Keep with that e in the 2nd to last pic but lose the arrow for that tag and use the one coming off that E on the tag to the left.

bit confusing but i think i know what u mean.

smokeitup
12-05-2011, 10:55 PM
smokeitup lose the aroow at the end
just my opinon

yeah i went a bit overboard with the arrows ill admit. my fav of my tags would be the one with a small e the kinda kurls back..

Hapa
12-06-2011, 12:49 AM
I took what a few of you had said a few days ago and tried to apply it.. any crits would be awesome

43970

Hapa
12-06-2011, 12:50 AM
Oh and ignore the dots

PETER
12-06-2011, 11:13 AM
Happa: Try something more fluid vs sharp especially if you're trying to connect letters it will flow more smoothly.

Hapa
12-06-2011, 06:52 PM
Happa: Try something more fluid vs sharp especially if you're trying to connect letters it will flow more smoothly.

I know its not a huge improvement but am i going in the right direction?

44039

sorry to the people who hate pics like that..

MN Nice
12-06-2011, 11:02 PM
Dear god this page needs some help...

Edit: so then I start a new page. oh well! Take notes dudes.


some bs.
http://i1117.photobucket.com/albums/k584/mbsmbsmbsmbs/1-2.jpg
http://i1117.photobucket.com/albums/k584/mbsmbsmbsmbs/2-2.jpg
them crayola markers go hard, nawmeen.



http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0523.jpg


http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6060/6296660968_3b1d5b9071.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6220/6296129641_2bc143cae4.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6236/6296651234_7afcf349dd.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6092/6296111503_2370a82f49.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6234/6296095369_dbf7172b1e.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6239/6296092099_1c1a11f99f.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6106/6296089851_03d6f18e31.jpg


http://i44.tinypic.com/i6cb9z.jpg


38924
MAD TOY but w.e crit


whats a thead?

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1029111623.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1029111621.jpg

Risk_Inicijativa
12-07-2011, 04:52 AM
the risk initiative? hehe I say you're off to an ok start. but you definitely got a long road ahead of you, as we all.
hah Phat :) u think that I far away from graff? well, its true i guess :)

Carma7
12-07-2011, 08:14 AM
yo my wack ass tag style is crazy stupid. can anyone write out carma for me? i need some inpiration for my tags.

Norfsuthr
12-07-2011, 11:18 AM
Carma

aplombson
12-07-2011, 12:16 PM
..respect arketekt, i dig yer tagstyle.

aplombson
12-07-2011, 12:17 PM
definetly dig the west coast LA work!

Norfsuthr
12-07-2011, 03:41 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7163/6473629527_84435a4338.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6473629527/)
oie_7223751EBryA39v (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6473629527/)

Mr. November
12-07-2011, 07:41 PM
I don't know man. It says Vaen? I'm liking the N actually. Don't know why.

Here's my shitty tags. I've been trying to practice as much as possible.

441644416544166

Cynical
12-07-2011, 07:51 PM
@Mock - The first 3 letters look pretty good together, I dunno the K is throwing it off for me but I'm probably not the best one to give crits.


Just realized how bad it actually looks after I scan it, oh well, fuck it.
http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/4325/scan0003vp.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/840/scan0003vp.jpg/)

Phat 2
12-07-2011, 07:58 PM
hah Phat :) u think that I far away from graff? well, its true i guess :)

wow.. 3 months? really?

Mr. November
12-07-2011, 08:11 PM
@Mock - The first 3 letters look pretty good together, I dunno the K is throwing it off for me but I'm probably not the best one to give crits.


Just realized how bad it actually looks after I scan it, oh well, fuck it.
http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/4325/scan0003vp.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/840/scan0003vp.jpg/)

Yeah I know dude, I'm trying to work on my K. I take all the criticism I can. If you want crits you need to give crits.

Your tag needs some rhythm. Just write it down fast. A LOT.

Cynical
12-07-2011, 08:15 PM
I know I lack flow, but fuck seems like everything I put down ends up looks the same without any feel for it.

SkateJunt
12-07-2011, 08:39 PM
hows this? I rarely practice my handys, just recently been workin em out
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7012/6474738349_4cde8c4eb3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6474738349/)
Picture 132 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6474738349/) by akryllian through ya head (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Coleo
12-07-2011, 10:01 PM
black book:
44172441734417444175
44177

Coleo
12-07-2011, 10:04 PM
lol srry same pic twice

Coleo
12-07-2011, 10:07 PM
o crap srry wrong thread

ERA209
12-07-2011, 10:25 PM
44178

Tell what ya think ima young writer trying to learn!

Mr. November
12-07-2011, 10:26 PM
L2Postinrighttopis.

smokeitup
12-07-2011, 11:49 PM
got some tags to post....

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011103.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011104.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011105.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011106.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011109.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011110.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011111.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011094-1.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011095-2.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DECEMBER2011102.jpg

thats it

snoketg
12-07-2011, 11:56 PM
dkodeim feelin the last one and the third one (without the lines in the O)

smokeitup
12-08-2011, 01:03 AM
thanks snoke, i like the pink one myself i kinda fucked the D at the top part i was testing the paint

gim
12-08-2011, 01:36 PM
44230
what i do in my english class, can't wait for the fall semester to be over

Norfsuthr
12-08-2011, 02:19 PM
That's what I love to see^
It's not good yet, but if you keep practicing like that you'll get better so much faster. Keep playing with different ways of writing each letter and combining different ones. Be creative, try new shit, and keep at it.

SkateJunt
12-08-2011, 03:32 PM
crits on this? feelin alooot more confident with hands now, all of these were drawn super fast,I find it flows alot nicer, but i know they still need a fuckload of work
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7027/6478713627_05ec0c570e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6478713627/)
Picture 135 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6478713627/) by akryllian through ya head (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

MN Nice
12-08-2011, 03:38 PM
They all suck. Stop trying so hard on each letter. You're still forcing style onto each letter, just let your natural motion do the work.

Norfsuthr
12-08-2011, 03:42 PM
I feel like you don't really understand the concept of flow as it applies to graff yet. Do what the kid a couple posts above is doing, 100's of simple tags over and over.

SkateJunt
12-08-2011, 03:51 PM
thats what the natural flow is for me right now though, thats why the y is just regular and i write pages and pages of simple tags, just recently started trying to ass style
is this decent? other than the R wich turned into a B
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7162/6419456281_f823588ec3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456281/)
Picture 112 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456281/) by akryllian through ya head (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Norfsuthr
12-08-2011, 05:01 PM
Much better than your last post, fix that L up though its awkward.

SkateJunt
12-08-2011, 05:05 PM
thanks man, yeah im sure practice will help alot, gonna be practicing my handies more now, il try to get some flicks tomorrow mornin of anything nice i do tonight

Hapa
12-08-2011, 11:26 PM
Crits?

44264

just noticed i kinda fucked the r

smokeitup
12-09-2011, 12:15 AM
fix your K A E C and R

smokeitup
12-09-2011, 12:26 AM
im serious.

Hapa
12-09-2011, 02:26 AM
k... awesome

SkateJunt
12-09-2011, 07:48 AM
yeah its fresh man

SkateJunt
12-09-2011, 02:44 PM
any crits on these?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7011/6483388357_34e745c7be.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6483388357/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7168/6483388071_f56a0edc2a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/6941197Picture 148 by akryllian through ya head (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7026/6483387805_15a061d7a8.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6483387805/)
Picture 145 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6483387805/) by akryllian through ya head (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7004/6483388891_d6d801a768.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6483388891/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7152/6483386365_be0a038146.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/64833Picture 150 by akryllian through ya head (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Coleo
12-09-2011, 03:11 PM
cool

Norfsuthr
12-09-2011, 04:22 PM
That R needs to change Kryl. Make the top round maybe.

CHangin shit up..

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7010/6483819941_269ed48f68.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6483819941/)
oie_9231922PtqqX85g (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6483819941/)

Coleo
12-09-2011, 08:38 PM
lol

Norfsuthr
12-09-2011, 10:33 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6485047649_c8433afd82.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6485047649/)
oie_1053024xlRN906d (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6485047649/)

smokeitup
12-10-2011, 06:00 AM
That R needs to change Kryl. Make the top round maybe.

CHangin shit

agreed. looks like an A.

Norfsuthr
12-10-2011, 04:27 PM
More.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7013/6488991969_ea60121281.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6488991969/)
photo-1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6488991969/)

Colors
12-10-2011, 08:06 PM
yeah this hands wack but im proud of myself for the flare feel to it
44551

Saul Gud
12-10-2011, 08:13 PM
44564 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ng7wvJW02CY

mace2200
12-10-2011, 09:25 PM
first one, any coments44570

Colors
12-10-2011, 09:29 PM
well, for starters thats not a handstyle. that is a throw

mace2200
12-10-2011, 09:33 PM
o crap this is the wrong thread lol

mace2200
12-10-2011, 09:34 PM
but still wat u think

Mr. November
12-11-2011, 12:13 AM
I think it's shit and you need to work on your letters dude. Make a handstyle first. That's more important.

Do you have a hand style?

mace2200
12-11-2011, 07:28 AM
I think it's shit and you need to work on your letters dude. Make a handstyle first. That's more important.

Do you have a hand style?

ya i got a handstyle.... still wrkin on it tho ....... non on my computer yet

ERAYS
12-11-2011, 01:46 PM
44690

Mr. November
12-11-2011, 02:15 PM
ya i got a handstyle.... still wrkin on it tho ....... non on my computer yet

Oh, cool dude. One thing more experienced people will tell you over and over again, is to go simple. Over and over again.

That means just work on your letters and get them down to a science, then you can add in the christmas trees ;).

Goodluck.

@Erays I really like that tag. But if I was going to be really nit picky I would tell you to find a way to make that y bigger and more defined.

mace2200
12-11-2011, 02:56 PM
thanks man

mace2200
12-11-2011, 06:58 PM
thinkin bout a new name, "mace" is to common
44718
"ZUS"
or
"COS"

Mr. November
12-11-2011, 07:27 PM
I remember I tried to do something similar like that when I was just starting, and learned it's not cool to cross out your name like that. It seems like a really good idea at first but then you come around hahaha. I would try something different.

Name-wise, I would probably go with COS out of those two. Keep brainstorming though.

kingz131
12-11-2011, 07:34 PM
your a good graffiti artis

mace2200
12-11-2011, 08:22 PM
Im stuck on the name SCAM or COS

Coleo
12-11-2011, 08:43 PM
im tellin you bro go with SCAM!

Coleo
12-11-2011, 08:50 PM
@Mr.November
What do you tag??? post sum pics of ur tags?

Mr. November
12-11-2011, 10:07 PM
Drew you something in bed :D. I just started writing 'MOCK' a while ago.

44738

Any ideas on what to do with my K? I don't really know what to do with it right now.

Hapa
12-11-2011, 11:33 PM
crits?

44742
44743
44744

i know i may be biting too much off of Faust but I just like the calligraphy look more than the basic stuff..

and i am working on how to make the uciu flow better

Hapa
12-12-2011, 01:27 AM
reworked it a bit..

44782
44783

mace2200
12-12-2011, 06:20 AM
i would say 3 is the best idk why i just like how it flows :confused:

mace2200
12-12-2011, 06:29 AM
Damn thts crazy

PETER
12-12-2011, 07:46 AM
Hapa: the pen ones look pretty good, but with the marker they are a little rough (try going bigger). Work on the S. You're getting better. Keep it up.

Mori
12-12-2011, 09:11 AM
44796

Hapa
12-12-2011, 12:57 PM
@mace thanks man

@Peter yeah i was using a chisel tip sharpie and it did seem a little crowded after it bled.. but thanks ill keep workin on it

Hapa
12-12-2011, 12:58 PM
and mor maybe its just me but that r seems a little off, but i may not be the best person to give crits

sadgeh
12-12-2011, 04:16 PM
Haha everyone can crit

Mor - The R looks like an I and E (not capital) its confusing maybe make the rounding more solid to the I thing.

mace2200
12-12-2011, 04:36 PM
chose COS, its rough but watcha think?????? :confused:
44883

Coleo
12-12-2011, 05:26 PM
^ YOU SUCK BALLZZZZZ jk bro

cwks
12-12-2011, 06:20 PM
44972crits on my tags

Coleo
12-12-2011, 06:53 PM
ehhh it ok

cwks
12-12-2011, 06:58 PM
ehhh it ok thanks

Mr. November
12-12-2011, 07:42 PM
OK. In my opinion your first tag should be really legible and contain just letters. No connections. Just letters with minimal style.

Trap - Top right one is the best one, I couldn't read the others.

Mace - Better than the ZUS one I think if you put more effort into it. You're into graffiti so I'm thinking you have some sort of artistic abilities so I'm going to say that was a quick rough draft. Put more effort into it before you ask for crits. I would drop the underline in the C and then put your letters closer together.You're also guna have to find something to do with your O.

mace2200
12-12-2011, 07:46 PM
ya thts y i put it up i wasnt shure what to do with it and ya it was a quikie............... any suggestions with the o?

Mr. November
12-12-2011, 07:53 PM
I usually just make the o and then keep going down with it.. Uhhh hard to explain. Check this out:

http://evan-roth.com/graffititaxonomy/

mace2200
12-12-2011, 08:00 PM
Ya I will tomorrow I'm on my iPod right now.... Thanks for the help though

gim
12-12-2011, 08:02 PM
yall just need to GO SIMPLE and fill up pages and pages and once you got something clean bring it here so we can crit...... no one is gonna sit around and crit garbage!!! stop worrying about posting it here and practice!!!!

Beko
12-12-2011, 09:32 PM
first ever tag! needs a lot of work! whatcha think?
45098

ribcage
12-12-2011, 09:35 PM
looks like shit. this is exactly what my signature means

Hapa
12-12-2011, 09:38 PM
yea mace i would keep it one continuous line with the o like on the second one

also i found it helps to start small like one inch letters or whatever and then build your way up once you get a flow with the letters. it will look a lot cleaner as you practice

Beko
12-12-2011, 09:39 PM
lol it was one of the free cans i got! thats why i used it! i have shit load of crappy dollar cans! i just wanted to try it oout! and the fact that im super short didnt help! i could barley reach it/:

Hapa
12-12-2011, 09:47 PM
A few shitty little slaps i made... Crits?

45099

ribcage
12-12-2011, 09:49 PM
yeah, you not being able to reach it was the problem... free can? I never can comprehend why someone with no bars would buy paint

@hapa its one thing to be "inspired" by someone, but its another thing to bite. cmon breh, cut that shit out.

Hapa
12-12-2011, 10:02 PM
-__- exactly what i had posted on the last page..... i told someone i thought i was biting too much and idk if they didnt read it but yeah i did realize that


annnd really i mean most of the toy shit we're all doing on this thread is biting off of someone else's work till we get our own style.. soo yeah i just like the calligraphy look over the other shit i had been trying

ribcage
12-12-2011, 10:25 PM
thats terrible dude. you think biting is gonna get you "your own style"???? cause it aint, its gonna give u someone elses, and no props

Hapa
12-12-2011, 10:39 PM
yeah i realize that. but really if you look at what all you guys are telling us toys is to make the same basic letters (which i know is where we need to start) and use them soo really there is no like differentiation in styles between one or the other. maybe some of us in this thread have previous graff experience and have developed a way to form our letters and an implemented that into our handstyle, but for those of us like me who have only begun to sketch anything or even draw really within the past 2 or 3 months we have to start with something we like and know.

like heres my handwriting for school or whatever:
45102

so yeah i know i was biting off of FAUST, bad, but i just liked the form of letters and as of now I am working on how to develop my handstyle to look like what you guys only seem to accept and trying to look like the calligraphy shit i was working on with those slaps.

didnt know it was one of the fuckin 7 deadly sins to start with something you like and build away from it

sorry it bothered you so much

ribcage
12-12-2011, 10:51 PM
hahahahaha, you can break out of the toy forum toy ass mold without biting. It pisses me off when I come on here and try to help any of yall out when everyones just biting. Cause if you aint biting a legend, your biting someone else who has posted their work without biting(cant say that for everyone). Biting isnt the only way you will learn ya retard, and please for the love of god dont sit at your computer and try to mimic something you see.

Be influenced, you like caligraphy then do caligraphy. But dont look at a caligraphy handstlyle and mirror things from it. You like that F, go ahead and fuck with it, but dont put the same fuckin F on a sticker and then call it yours.


yeah i realize that. but really if you look at what all you guys are telling us toys is to make the same basic letters (which i know is where we need to start) and use them

I aint tellin none of yall to do shit, except stop biting. You want to try crazy intricate handstyles, by all means do it!!!! But dont whine when your tags look like shit

Hapa
12-12-2011, 10:52 PM
oh and ive never tagged or put up any slaps... havent wrote or drawn on anything but paper so i really havent officially stolen or used anyone else's work and called it my own. I know i bit off Faust and I hadnt planned on using thos slaps anywhere besides my notebooks or room

ribcage
12-12-2011, 10:54 PM
hmmmmmm posting it here, asking for crits. not really stealing eh?

Hapa
12-12-2011, 11:06 PM
ha okay as i said before i had said i was using faust's style as inspiration and biting off of his work even just look at my past posts. I knew it was not my original style.

btw here's on of faust's f compared to mine, if anyone is following this shit (sorry i keep dragging it on, it would just bug me if people think that i thought i made my own style)

45108

Yes i really bit his style and i knew it, I never thought "damn i just made a dope new style" I knew it was his and sure's alone and it just really stood out to me. So again i just wanted to try something different then my basic style cuz i hated my shitty hand i was developing, it just seemed to conform to everyone else.

ribcage
12-12-2011, 11:20 PM
alright, you want to do that bullshit do it. But dont fucking post it.

Hapa
12-12-2011, 11:22 PM
alright sounds good

Mori
12-12-2011, 11:42 PM
45120

Hapa
12-13-2011, 12:05 AM
Sorry again ribcage but here's my tag re-worked:

45121

Still too much? Let me know if i should just quit now..

and i just realized that the angled ones may be too much. droppin those dont worry.

Mori
12-13-2011, 12:06 AM
Keep at it mate

ribcage
12-13-2011, 12:07 AM
quit now

Hapa
12-13-2011, 12:24 AM
@ribcage for some reason I thought youd say that

@mori thanks but did you see my earlier posts? just wondering if it still looks like im completely biting off faust

ribcage
12-13-2011, 01:04 AM
how can you wonder? you straight said like 3 times that you straight bit the ***** faust. smh, gtfo

H1P30N3R
12-13-2011, 02:24 AM
what did you use your credits on rib?

ribcage
12-13-2011, 02:42 AM
a whole lot of nothing. they were redeemed, and not used properly

H1P30N3R
12-13-2011, 02:50 AM
thats lame bro

ribcage
12-13-2011, 02:56 AM
whatev. easy come easy go... its fuckin winter anyways

H1P30N3R
12-13-2011, 03:07 AM
True you will hav4e thousands of creds come spring

ribcage
12-13-2011, 03:48 AM
idk about that...

sadgeh
12-13-2011, 10:49 AM
Sorry again ribcage but here's my tag re-worked:

45121

Still too much? Let me know if i should just quit now..

and i just realized that the angled ones may be too much. droppin those dont worry.

Haha on the side of this one are standing two ''tags'' I was turning my head to the left and i thought about the upside down S uhm that's a really cool F, use some sort of things. Cause in this one about the biting is Rib right.

sadgeh
12-13-2011, 12:43 PM
45186
45187
45188

Crits?

City of Trees
12-13-2011, 12:49 PM
sadgeh
work mor on ur actual style and letters instead of all dat extra shit

sadgeh
12-13-2011, 01:04 PM
i now but i was just fucking around. Well with my tags i have more the idea that the R and K must have the style and the two O's are just hanging around. But im searching for a better R and K

gim
12-14-2011, 08:57 PM
you mean color wise or which one is better?
if its color i like blue and black and your best hands imo are in blue



alright so im fucking finally done with finals and haven't been practicing enough so my hands are kinda sloppy but i still think theyre pretty decent except for my nasty ass O lol
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everyone is a toy.... even heads that have been doing graff for years n years still don't consider themselves good or anything special.... thats the thing about graff is that it makes you want to give up or keep going..... till you finally feel that that tag, throw up or piece you did was done perfect... truth is that it wasn't done perfect and probably won't ever be... and youre driving or walking by it and saying damn i could do that shit way better and so you do it again and again and again... no one will ever be perfect but you can try to be.... i think once you actually realize what im trying to say is when you'll understand where you are in graff... and in that damn moment i think you could truly consider yourself a true writer... whether you just tag your name everwhere, piece walls, do a canvas piece, or bombin everywhere with your throwies etc



just some words for yall..... just keep practicing, let people talk all the want... if youre getting up with a decent tag and they're sitting talking shit on the internet or jacking off at home FUCK THEM, DO YOUR THING because they're not the ones getting up

ChadWarden
12-14-2011, 09:01 PM
as if the janitors at your school didnt have enough shit to look at, now its on the walls, too.

Beko
12-14-2011, 09:12 PM
which one look she best? i know there all shit but is there one that has more potential?
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Coleo
12-14-2011, 09:15 PM
^ 3 over and 4 down has the most potential

Mr. November
12-14-2011, 09:56 PM
I agree with coleo. You need to keep working still

Finals week has been crazy for a couple different reasons and I haven't had a lot of time to practice, but I've been fucking around with my K because it's the letter I struggle with the most in my name. Any suggestions?

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Coleo
12-14-2011, 10:06 PM
@Mr.November how about these?45478

Yofoo
12-14-2011, 10:15 PM
Im new to this game. Plz help a toy out and give some advice

Mr. November
12-14-2011, 11:00 PM
@Coleo Thanks dude I'm shooting for more of the top left one.

@Scardy Scrap everything you have except the concept of the top left one. Start VERY simple. Practicly write your name out in legible letters with maybe one or two of them having style. You don't need to force style on every single letter. Style comes naturally from writing your name over and over again and getting inspiration from better writers.

Goodluck ;)

Norfsuthr
12-15-2011, 03:39 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7141/6515057135_88a591b7fd.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6515057135/)
photo-8 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6515057135/)

SkateJunt
12-15-2011, 07:20 AM
thats really dope but make the cross on the N a bit more at on angle, look like YZEH

Wonky
12-15-2011, 08:27 AM
toy here... switching to the name wake with an upwards pointing arrow to make it read wake up. trying to get it flowing

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Wonky
12-15-2011, 08:28 AM
oh the fake drips are gay ignore them

Skadeem
12-15-2011, 10:26 AM
These threads are always hilarious

"PHYSH"
12-15-2011, 05:05 PM
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bilingual tag Physh in both English and Arabic..... comments???

mace2200
12-16-2011, 03:37 PM
@ mr. november, i agree with coleo on the one that looks the best
@ mr. november and coleo the best k that would work in my eyes is the bottom left one

Simon
12-16-2011, 09:07 PM
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-NiSe-
12-17-2011, 07:12 AM
Two of my tags, not sure how to progress
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Simon
12-17-2011, 12:06 PM
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bump, crits?

mace2200
12-17-2011, 05:32 PM
@simon, i like the top left one but do the r circle thing with out the lines in it

Lado
12-17-2011, 10:26 PM
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gim
12-17-2011, 11:48 PM
@lado i love the S in the first one everything else needs work, go simp and don't kink every corner of the letter