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Dispute
02-05-2012, 10:22 AM
Cheers bro, Is Ruin a lame name? i'm thinking of changing from dispute cause it can be a pain to right sometimes maybe something more simple, i also kinda like LIGO.

53313

SynOne
02-05-2012, 12:02 PM
Ruin seems like it would be an overused name honestly, I would go with Ligo or find something with your favorite letters.

toopski
02-05-2012, 12:25 PM
is there a ruin where you live? ask around maybe if not i see no reason why u dont stick @ it

Dispute
02-05-2012, 12:28 PM
I've never seen a ruin before near me anyway, there may be one in london though. I like it just cause they are the letters i'm best at, i'll see what i can do with ligo

GONE!
02-05-2012, 12:51 PM
this kind of looks like you got it off graffiti creator... next time, you should just try to get ideas and color schemes from other pieces.

Phat 2
02-05-2012, 01:10 PM
^ wtf are you talking about dumbass? what graffiti creator? what color schemes? and what fucking pieces? it's all tags here and the last post with a flick has an R that looks like a lower case e... too faulty to be taken off graffiti creator, guy?

feel like explaining yourself before you're labelled a cop trying to blend in the crowd?
because I love banning cops

Colors
02-05-2012, 01:16 PM
this kind of looks like you got it off graffiti creator... next time, you should just try to get ideas and color schemes from other pieces.

hahahahaha you are lost.

GONE!
02-05-2012, 01:27 PM
53358

NouveauP
02-05-2012, 03:05 PM
GONE - its alright. The letters are really basic, but they're clean enough. I don't like the lowercase n with the squiggle, might be confused for an A. The squiggles in general are a little much. they're the main focus of your hand instead of your letters. Focus on those.

Trying out a mop. Made my ink way too fucking thick unfortunately.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0403.jpg

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-05-2012, 03:11 PM
thiwck is better than thin, just add a splash or two more of whatever your base was, or maybe a splash of thinner/spirits

NouveauP
02-05-2012, 03:14 PM
Yeah it just needs a little more thinner in it so it runs through that nip a little bit better. I also didn't have a ton of ink in it since it was just my tester so squeezing the shit out of it wasn't really working. haha. But it'll do for now.

SkateJunt
02-05-2012, 04:10 PM
just some tags i did at a chill spot today, crits would be appreciated
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7028/6825728945_fbca180b06.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825728945/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7164/6825732979_1397492a2b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@NUntitled by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

MoganOne
02-05-2012, 05:11 PM
Drunk Bathroom tag. Good shit NP I need to get another Mop
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-04_22-06-59_363.jpg

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-05_17-07-11_679.jpg
I only like the bottom left one. Meh

Stuck
02-05-2012, 05:57 PM
tags dont all have to be oneliners and the letters dont all have to touch as well. Just somthing to think about next time ur dicking around

eipe
02-05-2012, 07:45 PM
Some playing about, I'm not certain on the name so there's an alternative option there. I realize it might not be all mad steez an that. I kinda dig the curly smooth font style. Wtf do i know... Bah!

Norfsuthr
02-05-2012, 07:55 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7029/6826973723_10e3c551e0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6826973723/)
photo-65 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6826973723/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7019/6826568845_df69874566.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6826568845/)
photo-36 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6826568845/)


eipe- ehh keep working at it, you definitely wanna do non cursive styles too.
mone im diggin that bathroom tag. The dot triangle thing is kinda lame, a southwest tagbanger trend thing I guess?
gerb- focus more on letter structure than flares for now

eipe
02-05-2012, 07:58 PM
I really like cursive stuff :/

Stuck
02-05-2012, 08:32 PM
lol

dankbudz
02-07-2012, 12:55 AM
need some crits, on which is better.
the bottom one is mad sloppy, mainly just wondering on the S's

toopski
02-07-2012, 01:52 AM
looks alright reminds me of a guy where i live who writes sober

'Crook'
02-07-2012, 10:30 AM
53675
Any crits for this one ?

PETER
02-07-2012, 11:26 AM
crits? 53693

Coleo
02-07-2012, 04:01 PM
53714
lil plain eeehhhhh
crits?

Skadeem
02-07-2012, 06:50 PM
pete-see what you can do without that west coast bullshit flare
neso-watch the spacing between the e and s and arrows are mostly dumb but we all know that
crook - dont use one line as a bar for so many letters, especially not in that context. just write some tags simple and see what happens

9ToTheOH
02-07-2012, 08:33 PM
Can I get crits? I scrapped that old shit that cause and uproar lol. I would do it simpler but my letters are shit, I blame left handism. Instead of talking about how trash I am, can we talk about how I can improve?

53792

Coleo
02-07-2012, 08:53 PM
53793

crits please

dankbudz
02-08-2012, 12:31 AM
dont overlap the top of the S
the NE is good, just try and separate them a little bit

Walt
02-08-2012, 01:20 AM
use your regular capital handwriting, the only thing you should change is the placement of the letters.
once you get that down, figure out how to make the letters all similar, like for instance the letter k and r, but be able to do that with every letter of the alphabet

@ all of you guys asking for crits.

smokeitup
02-08-2012, 03:21 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0110.jpg

had to use a rock, didnt have a marker.

9ToTheOH
02-08-2012, 12:07 PM
Thanks I've been trying that. I've gotten some of the alphabet but I still need work on being clean.

Norfsuthr
02-08-2012, 02:57 PM
dkode goin primal, i can dig it

VERBS
02-08-2012, 03:40 PM
53819 really old handstyle piece,same tag ecept with an "S" at the end now.

Skadeem
02-08-2012, 05:29 PM
^^dumb

Nothing like walking around in the woods tagging trash because your dealer's a hungover fuck.
53851
^^also dumb

Norfsuthr
02-08-2012, 06:58 PM
those r sum pretty sweet arrows verbs. diggin that crown too, I think ima start doing crowns over all my shit. yea...

MN Nice
02-08-2012, 07:13 PM
Naw dude, you gotta be a graffiti king to put those on your tag. You must be like the biggest toy on earth to not know that.

smokeitup
02-09-2012, 02:03 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC03120.jpg

toopski
02-09-2012, 02:48 AM
^was that done with lak?

smokeitup
02-09-2012, 02:50 AM
nah belton

toopski
02-09-2012, 05:16 AM
ahk looks like how lak turns out for me tho i only paint with exports or cheap shit for fills and anything decent for outlines

Trab
02-09-2012, 10:59 AM
Why are you painting over the pink tag when there's enough space? Got some beef?

toopski
02-09-2012, 11:08 AM
Why are you painting over the pink tag when there's enough space? Got some beef?

who knows ive done that to people and not even noticed since depending on how with it i am depends if i see that kinda light colour bs

Norfsuthr
02-09-2012, 02:48 PM
Naw dude, you gotta be a graffiti king to put those on your tag. You must be like the biggest toy on earth to not know that.
Haha no worries man that was just some really dry sarcasm.. Honestly crowns look like shit to me no matter who rocks them. Like some mark ecko type shit...

MN Nice
02-09-2012, 02:56 PM
I know man I was backing up your sarcasm :p You think I'm that stuck up? lol

pic for talk
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00638-20120208-1713.jpg?t=1328747972

toopski
02-09-2012, 03:17 PM
I know man I was backing up your sarcasm :p You think I'm that stuck up? lol

pic for talk
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00638-20120208-1713.jpg?t=1328747972

nah man them dots aint for toys quit using them OK

dankbudz
02-09-2012, 03:21 PM
yo MN thats dope, the TI is mad bland, and the C could been bigger, still looking good

MN Nice
02-09-2012, 03:27 PM
Agreed. Thanks on it.

Norfsuthr
02-09-2012, 04:21 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7021/6848581161_beb7882c58.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6848581161/)
oie_9231826k4DDGm8 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6848581161/)

MN- I'd definitely say put some flavor in the TIC. U's are a bitch aint they?

PETER
02-09-2012, 04:30 PM
Fucku? it looks cool... a little tough to make out, I was thinking the bit on the F was an I same with the K.

Norfsuthr
02-09-2012, 04:35 PM
ahh I see what you mean, should be able to take care of that with some spacing..

Phat 2
02-09-2012, 04:36 PM
then it would read fiuckiu... which is an also valid, and funny accent. I like.

PETER
02-09-2012, 04:43 PM
lmao good point. Lmao @ asshole mode.

dankbudz
02-09-2012, 09:12 PM
rustic for the battles. crits would be nice
i think i gotta work on takin time with it and spacing out letters

Norfsuthr
02-09-2012, 11:26 PM
R and C from the top rustic, everything else in the bottom one

smokeitup
02-10-2012, 04:50 AM
hate toys that cap me..

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY10THFEB004.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY10THFEB005.jpg

smokeitup
02-10-2012, 05:08 AM
and some other tags...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0111.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0112.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0113.jpg

toopski
02-10-2012, 07:11 AM
haha ive only capped someone once was broad daylight on a main road me n some mates who this faggot capped went and capped his stomper, he didnt touch anything of ours again

Trab
02-10-2012, 07:55 AM
I like your style smokeitup
I will drop something in a few hours when i'm at home.

Norfsuthr
02-10-2012, 01:24 PM
looking good dkode. that simple silver tag on the bench is fine.

My simple hand, that parking lot is empty so this looks pussy, but I did it with a cop 30ft away who had someone pulled over. Just a little thrill in getting over.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7141/6852792627_9f84b49781.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6852792627/)
photo-68 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6852792627/)

'Crook'
02-10-2012, 03:38 PM
53960
Any crits please ?

Norfsuthr
02-10-2012, 05:23 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7011/6853770951_ee93e755f9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6853770951/)
oie_1102015yTJFzNDx (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6853770951/)

shits way higher than it looks, flickr wont let me have it turned the right way...

crook- your i is too small, u should touch the line like all the other letters, t isnt great

'Crook'
02-10-2012, 10:37 PM
Thanks norf !!

toopski
02-10-2012, 10:37 PM
haha norf ive been doing more daytime tags lately and no joke the thrill of maybe getting seen is whats its about

JediGraffiti
02-10-2012, 10:38 PM
:cool:

Skaep
02-10-2012, 11:00 PM
First tag with paint...crits? I realize the arrow didnt help..

53982

Edit: I only liked the A really, just tryin out flares.

MN Nice
02-11-2012, 12:06 AM
>first tag with paint
>trying out flares

wtf?

pic for talk
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00645-20120209-2200.jpg?t=1328941442

Skaep
02-11-2012, 01:51 AM
The pic didn't show up?

smokeitup
02-11-2012, 01:56 AM
the pic did show up, and mn nice it looks like HUES, instead of MUES.

Phat 2
02-11-2012, 01:50 PM
you don't try flares the first time you use a can...

you do it the first time you fiddle with adobe:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/399882_375709339122648_100000507545549_1387860_171 552669_n.jpg

Skadeem
02-11-2012, 02:32 PM
I'm really liking all of fuckyou's stuff

dankbudz
02-11-2012, 05:18 PM
thats pretty cool phat

oldie, don't like the lower case d

Skaep
02-11-2012, 07:07 PM
@phat well what adobe program is that?

Zookyook
02-12-2012, 12:07 PM
hate toys that cap me..

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY10THFEB004.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY10THFEB005.jpg
maybe if u tagged more places than that same local park u wouldnt haveta worry about that problem... toys capping toys is part of the game... i could see getting mad if u werent a toy too, but wtf is the problem u both probably have a lot in common... u both hardcore bomb that family park yo lol that park bench is like a landmark where ur from im sure

smokeitup
02-12-2012, 06:43 PM
lmfao!!! nah thats not the only place i go, its just close so i go there often. that park area goes for ages and theres walls and places to piece all along there.

Skadeem
02-12-2012, 07:32 PM
I always try to avoid retardation like such. I used to have a bad gauge on who was doing what and I'd underestimate a whole lot of folks. hope you don't make that mistake

smokeitup
02-12-2012, 08:01 PM
whats gonna happen??? haha they tag EVERYWHERE i do, i first started doin pieces on this warehouse and cut the fence down with bolt cutters and they go there and use my spot, after i had been there. ive seen my tags get capped by them in other areas too. fuck em.

Colors
02-12-2012, 08:13 PM
Seder that R is nice

smokeitup
02-13-2012, 12:45 AM
maybe im posting too much, i dunno

anyway more flicks:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0115.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0116.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0117.jpg

toopski
02-13-2012, 06:07 AM
you don't try flares the first time you use a can...

you do it the first time you fiddle with adobe:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/399882_375709339122648_100000507545549_1387860_171 552669_n.jpg

looks dope

Norfsuthr
02-13-2012, 03:31 PM
you got some nice Rs dkode

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6872067413_3d33ce5d41.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6872067413/)
photo-1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6872067413/)
I wont lie that's a shout out, just postin for fun..

Colors
02-13-2012, 04:31 PM
norf i <3 your handstyles

Norfsuthr
02-13-2012, 04:35 PM
I appreciate that but like i said it was done by another guy

Colors
02-13-2012, 04:37 PM
Oh i am much too retarded to have realized that, well then i <3 his handstyles. but now that i think about it ive seen yours anyway and i still like them haha

ivin
02-13-2012, 07:00 PM
5444454487
Pointers?

Sp!ff
02-14-2012, 05:51 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7196/6868696405_d88be48bfe_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/that_is_neat/6868696405/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/that_is_neat/6868696405/) by Sp!ff (http://www.flickr.com/people/that_is_neat/), on Flickr
first extinguisher tag... quite pleased.

VERBS
02-14-2012, 07:01 AM
someone handstyle battle me

Trab
02-14-2012, 11:08 AM
someone handstyle battle me
I'm in for that, you can choose a word besides your own.
I can dropp a pic on friday or saturday.

Norfsuthr
02-14-2012, 11:32 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7196/6868696405_d88be48bfe_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/that_is_neat/6868696405/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/that_is_neat/6868696405/) by Sp!ff (http://www.flickr.com/people/that_is_neat/), on Flickr
first extinguisher tag... quite pleased.

Respect. The would E be better without the extra thing on top but what ever. Whats the deal with that house thing on the fence? Maybe im just high but it looks like the front of a haunted house or something haha

PETER
02-14-2012, 02:37 PM
verbs I'm down. hit up the handstyle battles

Sp!ff
02-14-2012, 05:07 PM
Respect. The would E be better without the extra thing on top but what ever. Whats the deal with that house thing on the fence? Maybe im just high but it looks like the front of a haunted house or something haha

ya, first time, gonna be better next time. wound up in the news for it... 5 sites actually. heres one: http://www.castanet.net/news/Kelowna/70988/NEAT-tag-costly-for-business

Colors
02-14-2012, 05:14 PM
Neat that's actually pretty sick, but be careful of posting pics of someone in the act. I read an article once, police tracked a kid from his bombingscience posts and actually ended up arresting him. Probably won't happen but hey it's happened before. Nonetheless thats pretty awesome haha

Skadeem
02-14-2012, 05:16 PM
you got some nice Rs dkode

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6872067413_3d33ce5d41.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6872067413/)
photo-1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6872067413/)
I wont lie that's a shout out, just postin for fun..

Bro! I thought your shit reminded me of my home state! Who did that and how do all the other toys on these forums get in with moms while I sit alone.

colz
02-14-2012, 05:24 PM
clops
54507

SynOne
02-14-2012, 05:32 PM
CZOPS THAT'S COOL. No but for real, chill on that extension on the L.

SkateJunt
02-14-2012, 06:34 PM
Just some pen stuff
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7200/6878326957_f2ce8af679.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6878326957/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6878326957/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Skaep
02-15-2012, 02:08 AM
Using in battle, and i realize i should probably drop the halo or make it bigger.... but crits?

54518

Phat 2
02-15-2012, 03:38 AM
that is not bad at all, you just needed to show the R's right leg a bit more

PETER
02-15-2012, 08:03 AM
Skaep: It's a solid entry. I like it a lot. My gripe and it's a pesonal thing is e's and c's with an overbite. The leg of the R is a little hidden, but it's cool.

Skadeem
02-15-2012, 05:41 PM
Just make it a little longer and its good

the leg on the r that is

SkateJunt
02-15-2012, 05:45 PM
can i get a crit or 2 on the hands in my pic?please

master of seductions
02-15-2012, 06:49 PM
i did this tag with a gold marker on plain white a4 paper

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0079.JPG

snoketg
02-15-2012, 08:53 PM
54587
the bottom ones a one liner can i get come crits?

Norfsuthr
02-15-2012, 08:59 PM
Not to be anal but technically its a 2liner. Id say go with the top one but dont kick the leg of the R out so much and make the e bigger. For you 1 liner work on the r and make the l not look like a v.

snoketg
02-15-2012, 09:06 PM
ha ha yea i didnt really count that thing on the R on the one/two liner lol. but yea thanks for the crits dude ill try that out

Norfsuthr
02-15-2012, 11:51 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7039/6884849995_dc120d415a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6884849995/)
oie_1664652GudZUoyE (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6884849995/)
what i got so far. It's gonna have to change tho cause it totally looks like i bit owl...

Skaep
02-16-2012, 01:18 AM
My tag on some slaps...crits?

54620

PETER
02-16-2012, 06:58 AM
Skate: You've got something going keep working on consistency and finding what feels fluid as you write it and looks good to you. Try using something a little thicker.
Snoke: Both are tight. Like Norf said, the L on the bottom looks like a V.
Norf: I like it.
Skaep: You're getting some style. Keep rockin' it out. Ditch the circle above the A.
Wack: write it a million times.

flick for jabber. Crits?
54623

Skaep
02-16-2012, 02:21 PM
Haha PETER, no joke when i first started with my name I had a tag going that looked almost exactly like that. I noticed it mostly cuz of how you kinda teardropped the p.

And thanks for the crit, ill work on some other stuff without the circle above A

SkateJunt
02-17-2012, 04:48 PM
a couple hands i did today
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7177/6893589381_e83c562647.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6893589381/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6893589381/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7180/6893587863_193684caa3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6893587863/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6893587863/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Mori
02-17-2012, 08:07 PM
thats not half bad gerb, try and keep the top of your letters from leaning in and that would be way fresh

SkateJunt
02-17-2012, 10:09 PM
thanks man, ive never even tried it keeping the tops straight, it will probly look better so thanks for the advice

smokeitup
02-17-2012, 10:54 PM
u paint in some ghetto spots dawg

Colors
02-17-2012, 10:55 PM
LOL those are the backwoods

logesoner
02-18-2012, 01:43 AM
549755497654977 Critz please??

SkateJunt
02-18-2012, 07:45 AM
u paint in some ghetto spots dawg
haha this spots not ghetto at all, its in a huge ravine under a bridge that freights go over and even sometimes stop on
edit: in a rich neighborhood

B-36
02-18-2012, 10:12 AM
Was trying to write poopr lol!

5500955010

MN Nice
02-18-2012, 01:45 PM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/mues.jpg?t=1329594332

Phat 2
02-18-2012, 03:53 PM
saafe negro.. but make the middle of the m pointy to distinguish it... you gotta look out especially since there's a u next to it

dankbudz
02-18-2012, 06:10 PM
balls and silver sharpie

Colors
02-18-2012, 07:21 PM
That silver looks white, from the looks of it the yellow handstyle looks nice.Maybe just space out the silver one, but it's probably just cramped because of the limited space, I like em.

BennyBoii
02-18-2012, 08:34 PM
crits?
55138

smokeitup
02-18-2012, 09:27 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012005.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012007.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012010.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012011.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012012.jpg

kersoner
02-19-2012, 04:45 AM
55180 anyone got some tips for my handstyle.

snoketg
02-19-2012, 03:03 PM
gerb- i like the second one, i wouldnt underline with the bottom of the b though, and try not squaring the bottom of the b also.
loge- i like the first hand the best. space the l out a little bit, and the l kinda looks like a u/v i have that problem to
seder- the silver/white one is the best, i kinda like that its tight together but thats just me
dkode- i dno man hit the books for a while. second is the best looking though
kersoner- drop all the loopy shit and extras and fix that second r. looks nice though simple.

RaWs3kz
02-19-2012, 03:16 PM
552185521955220552215522255223

55224552255522655227552285522955230

55232552335523455235

MN Nice
02-19-2012, 03:22 PM
Lol work on your ink flow control. And I might be seeing this from wake n bake this morning, but is the black and white tag making a zebra face? I mean, theres a mouth, and all the bends on your K look like stripes...

dankbudz
02-19-2012, 03:26 PM
dude its a fucking zebra

master of seductions
02-19-2012, 06:45 PM
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0089.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0088.JPG

RaWs3kz
02-19-2012, 11:06 PM
Lol work on your ink flow control. And I might be seeing this from wake n bake this morning, but is the black and white tag making a zebra face? I mean, theres a mouth, and all the bends on your K look like stripes...

hah i see it now.. i didnt do the mouth on the bottom but i kinda placed the tag like that on purpose ...

RaWs3kz
02-19-2012, 11:07 PM
Lol work on your ink flow control. And I might be seeing this from wake n bake this morning, but is the black and white tag making a zebra face? I mean, theres a mouth, and all the bends on your K look like stripes... yeh haha i see it now... i didnt do the mouth thing but i placed the tag like that on purpose ...

Simon
02-20-2012, 01:53 AM
55340
Crits? sorry the pics shit idk where my cam is haha so I had to use my shit webcam
Also the hit is Bits, looks a bit like Bite or Site or something haha

BennyBoii
02-20-2012, 03:33 AM
crits?
55138
bump for crits

'Crook'
02-20-2012, 04:36 AM
55346
Crits please...

BennyBoii
02-20-2012, 05:35 AM
'Crook'-it has a nice flow, i would work on your e... and i noticed the last three letters aren't in that kind of slant the rest are, so i would work on that as well

'Crook'
02-20-2012, 06:30 AM
yeah i noticed that too thanks anyway !

RaWs3kz
02-20-2012, 11:13 AM
5537455375553765537755378

55379

Skadeem
02-20-2012, 07:25 PM
what spray paint in the tags thread? props lol

IbuprofenTablets
02-20-2012, 08:31 PM
'Crook'-it has a nice flow, i would work on your e... and i noticed the last three letters aren't in that kind of slant the rest are

You contradicted yourself, homie.
Flow is defined by the even composition of letters in a hand.
The H and A need to be on the same level as the rest of the word. Shit like keeping your letters leveled and even is what determines flow. That swoosh you gave the H hurts, too.

Skaep
02-21-2012, 01:40 AM
For battle, but crits?

55459

Phat 2
02-21-2012, 08:36 AM
no crits from me... that's just about perfect.
the right leg of the R could've been straight though.

illegal_drugs
02-21-2012, 12:01 PM
55468

Skaep
02-21-2012, 12:02 PM
@Phat2 Thanks man, ill remember that for the R tho

Norfsuthr
02-21-2012, 04:03 PM
no crits from me... that's just about perfect.
the right leg of the R could've been straight though.

I think this is what phil was talkin about earlier. That hand looks stiff as fuck, flowless more than flawless (haha) not that it's bad, but you seem to like rigid styles I guess and it shows in your own work.

Still developing this really, but heres what i was trying today.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7039/6918502469_fc03417d88.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6918502469/)
photo-40 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6918502469/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7203/6918501179_3a04143997.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6918501179/)
photo-38 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6918501179/)

Phat 2
02-21-2012, 05:42 PM
I think this is what phil was talkin about earlier. That hand looks stiff as fuck, flowless more than flawless (haha) not that it's bad, but you seem to like rigid styles I guess and it shows in your own work.

not necessarily, I said that I got nothing to crit because there's nothing technically wrong with it. it's practically flawless if you think about it.
I didn't say I liked it but I didn't say I hated it either. it's not what matters because I really like fluid, flowy stuff like Dare's work just as much as I like stiff shit.
so I don't think it has anything to do with what I like or hate. the whole reason lies in the lack of experience. shit takes time, and I'm always trying to make my styles more "fluid", like less straightness and stiffness. check my latest post in the blackbooks thread and tell me what you think dude :)

Skaep
02-21-2012, 07:27 PM
I agree with both of you really, when I write these tags, I still feel like im writing in school or taking notes. It still feels choppy I guess. I write the tags like that because its close to my normal handwriting and (i figured) a good starting point. But yes I am trying to work on my flow, realizing that its going to take some time to develop my own style. Nonetheless, thanks for the advice/speculation! :D

Norfsuthr
02-21-2012, 08:17 PM
Phats right though, it's all proper. Youre not doing anything impressive yet, but definitely getting a good foundation in the basics. All I got is the loop in the A could be lower, and fuck with the R.

Skaep
02-21-2012, 08:34 PM
Ok yeah I see what youre saying. Heres my tag, any crits for it?

55488

sadgeh
02-22-2012, 11:48 AM
It's good but make the right leg of the K more straight

R3bel1995
02-22-2012, 01:19 PM
Crits; id straighten out the right bar of your N, either bend the bottom bar of your E or straighten out your upper bar. and point out the hump of your R.

toopski
02-22-2012, 09:36 PM
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/1193/imag0343g.jpg

some quick shit

gemer
02-22-2012, 11:04 PM
55590

snoketg
02-23-2012, 12:33 AM
phat i like what you were saying about the stiff and fluid letters, i just gotta say that.
5559255593
can i get some crits on these/this i wrote out 2 i prefer the revol in marker, but i noticed the l at the end kinda looped like an e so i wrote another without the loop shit but yea.

Negativity
02-23-2012, 06:48 PM
55624

Update

toopski
02-23-2012, 09:12 PM
read my signature please

toopski
02-23-2012, 11:12 PM
RIP
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5101/imag0354po.jpg

crew tags
http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/8833/imag0357n.jpg

TheFedexGuy
02-24-2012, 04:54 PM
http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-02-24175200.jpg

A-MAN
02-25-2012, 01:57 PM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l317/simonn_01/IMG_0294.jpg

Norfsuthr
02-25-2012, 02:10 PM
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l317/simonn_01/IMG_0294.jpg

What is that a park? You're gonna fuck up a park? Thats where people bring their families for picnics and youre gonna smear bird shit on their walls?

dankbudz
02-25-2012, 02:18 PM
crits?
i realize the S is small tho

Colors
02-25-2012, 05:29 PM
I have no idea about handstyles so i cant really crit. although seder i like the M in mardi gras and the AS in gras. haha
I would apprecaite crits on this thing
55998

RaWs3kz
02-25-2012, 06:51 PM
5600756008560095601056011

dankbudz
02-25-2012, 09:28 PM
naked- write that like a thousand times. fill up a comp. book with it, and personally i wouldn't connect any of those letters

dankbudz
02-26-2012, 02:48 AM
sharpie chisel tips don't last for shitttt... but i likem

KingHaole
02-26-2012, 03:00 AM
This shits just pencil late at night I'll get better pics up later.

55597

This isn't really a tag, your mother and I are very disappointed in you
also, your shit doesn't look like shit, give it more dimension, build it up better, if you're gonna draw shit draw it good

toopski
02-26-2012, 06:21 AM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/1377/dsc0001wd.jpg
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5205/dsc0002kz.jpg

for the handy battle

7thIncision
02-26-2012, 01:01 PM
Toopski - I like the first one better, the AU in the second one look pretty whack. Take the K from the second one and everything else from the first one.
as for the I, flair up that dot, squiggles, an asterisk or something... Just balance out the K and E with it.

Some semi-recent flicks. What do you think ?
First pic: The handy next to "nice pen" isn't me, some other badass running around with a junobo scrawler.
5608356084

*Regardless of any previous statements made, I do not practice or condone illegal vandalism, only photograph and document other people's work.

gemer
02-26-2012, 01:23 PM
@seder im diggen ur tags man

7thIncision
02-26-2012, 01:43 PM
Toopski - I like the first one better, the AU in the second one look pretty whack. Take the K from the second one and everything else from the first one.
as for the I, flair up that dot, squiggles, an asterisk or something... Just balance out the K and E with it.

Some semi-recent flicks. What do you think ?
First pic: The handy next to "nice pen" isn't me, some other badass running around with a junobo scrawler.
5608356084

*Regardless of any previous statements made, I do not practice or condone illegal vandalism, only photograph and document other people's work.


Bump for critz

MN Nice
02-26-2012, 08:23 PM
Is that a Z in the beginning? or a 2? I'm diggin the fuck out of it.

toopski
02-26-2012, 09:27 PM
yeah thx on that mate i just cbf these days to do it tho like i see where ur coming from and could redo one but i like trying new things in this battle since my everyday handstyle will never change

Phat 2
02-27-2012, 07:29 AM
@7th incision: thank you. just thank you...

dankbudz
02-27-2012, 09:42 PM
looking for some solid crits on this

MN Nice
02-27-2012, 09:49 PM
roc raida? Those R's are funky in a good way. Get the rest of the letters to match.

dankbudz
02-27-2012, 09:53 PM
yea, does that last A look too much like a Y? thats what I'm kinda thinking.

MN Nice
02-27-2012, 10:02 PM
Nah, a Y with that much of a loop would look retarded.

7thIncision
02-28-2012, 02:06 PM
@Dankbudz, I agree with MN, those R's are ferocious. I like the style of the letters, ever tried just making the rest of them more aggressive? Specifically the C, D and A's, try more straight lines with angles instead of loops.Does that even make sense? Here's a one-liner. Was trying out a new Dalo on some chunky-ass concrete. That shit will write on anything!!! Takin' a look at it though, the Z does kind of look like a 2. Need to work on that shit.56181Always give crit if you wanna get it in the toy forum, punks.

yangski
02-29-2012, 05:47 PM
What do you guys think? i need crits
56295

notmikegiant
02-29-2012, 07:19 PM
@ dank - love your style on this page and the last, i thought the A looked like a Y at first, but only at a glance - maybe see how it looks if you change it up?

@ yang - really digging that R, not personally feeling the line wrapping under the tag, could just be me.

56304

this is just me messing with a fat cap for the first time, AP, and if you think it looks bit its probably because "Apex - Hands"(youtube it, beautiful stuff) was an influence for me on how to approach a flare

56305

and this is my handstyle with a paint marker

PETER
03-01-2012, 07:34 AM
yea, does that last A look too much like a Y? thats what I'm kinda thinking. That was my first impression too.
Yangski: I like it, but can't make it out.

l2U/\*0Ul2
03-01-2012, 09:24 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/deam_oner/denz.gif
LOOK AT MY NEW TAG..ITS DENZ...OH YEAH..
dont flatter yourself man it looks like it says denn

PETER
03-01-2012, 11:44 AM
dont flatter yourself man it looks like it says denn or ein

notmikegiant
03-01-2012, 01:42 PM
^ I also read it as ein, the D is way too small for me to notice

toopski
03-01-2012, 09:26 PM
DE need spacing only i seem to work em together lol

Asis13
03-01-2012, 10:50 PM
564295643056431

throwin some older ones up. gotta get some new flicks from around the soo

toopski
03-02-2012, 12:41 AM
not bad stuff man

toopski
03-02-2012, 10:01 AM
http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/3268/imag037611.jpg
http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/7638/imag0375ye.jpg
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/8185/imag0373mq.jpg
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/9749/imag0372g.jpg
http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2456/imag0371bb.jpg
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/3025/imag0369y.jpg

NouveauP
03-02-2012, 11:57 AM
First NOAH hand is pretty sick.

Same old shit.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0518.jpg

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 12:03 PM
noah work on mixin that ink, ur drips are kinda spiderwebbing out and makin it look all shittayyyy.... that klauser is big pimpin, maybe make the L a teeny bit bigger so it matches the size of the E... but thatd be nice to see all fresh n stanky on a steel box somewhere...

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 12:03 PM
If oyu just brought down the left side of that K so that the leg didnt come out of the bottom, That'd be sick. Although it's already sick

Dossbog
03-02-2012, 12:32 PM
56446

HRbN
03-02-2012, 01:14 PM
your making progress. get rid if the swirl. and ide work on spacing and a new R. Now write that about 1000 times. Also make sure your down kick on the top of the T doesnt touch the bottom of the T causing it to lose its shape and structure. I feel like your rushing your self a bit. dont get too ahead and really do keep it simple. i know you'll hear that a million times.

smokeitup
03-02-2012, 01:16 PM
few tags from tonight:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012005.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012006.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012007.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012008.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012009.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012010.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012012.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012013.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012015.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012016.jpg

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 01:35 PM
You went to 1 spot but wrote your name 100 times?

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 01:52 PM
thats dkodes adlay style lol.... hes doinitwrong still...

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 01:55 PM
yo

smokeitup
03-02-2012, 01:57 PM
You went to 1 spot but wrote your name 100 times?

yeah why not thats whats tagging is all about


thats dkodes adlay style lol.... hes doinitwrong still...


adlay what? how do u know about adlays.

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 01:58 PM
No, thats good for practice but you don't do that to evrery spot you go to haha

Seder the second hand is the best IMO

MN Nice
03-02-2012, 01:59 PM
When I see that many tags of the same guy, first thought is TOY. Quality, not quantity.

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 02:05 PM
i remember u from way back dkode... u might know me better as either consume or nemor... we had that big discussion about the adlay lifestyle lol.... i just feel like u dont really know what tagging is about if u just keep goin back to the park or cemetary or whatever chill ass spot this is and paint over the buff that some old guy probably spent his time and energy cleaning it up because graffiti probably looks mad out of place wherever that is... if u have a clean buffed wall u could do a huge block letter hollow and itd look better and use less paint... im all for practice but it seems like ur putting this shit up where it gets buffed all the time, find places that are abandoned or somethin yanno? or if ur just bombing and u expect it to get buffed soon walk down an avenue or somewhere more populated... but again writing on mom and pop shops is frowned upon, go for abandoned or corporate or government owned things


@dank S and D from the first pic, Es from the second, and connect the exclamation mark on the R so its just a leg that kicks up, that combo would be a real clean tag

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 02:13 PM
for sure ill try that out, thanks

Dossbog
03-02-2012, 02:21 PM
56452

One of the first tags of this style that I did

smokeitup
03-02-2012, 02:21 PM
i remember u from way back dkode... u might know me better as either consume or nemor... we had that big discussion about the adlay lifestyle lol.... i just feel like u dont really know what tagging is about if u just keep goin back to the park or cemetary or whatever chill ass spot this is and paint over the buff that some old guy probably spent his time and energy cleaning it up because graffiti probably looks mad out of place wherever that is... if u have a clean buffed wall u could do a huge block letter hollow and itd look better and use less paint... im all for practice but it seems like ur putting this shit up where it gets buffed all the time, find places that are abandoned or somethin yanno? or if ur just bombing and u expect it to get buffed soon walk down an avenue or somewhere more populated... but again writing on mom and pop shops is frowned upon, go for abandoned or corporate or government owned things



theres not really anywhere else to paint, i go there because its close.

heres a pic i forgot to post:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/sat3march2012004.jpg

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 02:26 PM
well thats fine i mean ill admit when i was young i painted on tons of shit i shouldnt have just cuz i wasnt close enough to anything good.... but when u just cover it with tags it does look bad yanno? if u wanna practice tags like that u can get a piece of drywall or plywood and put it outside when u paint and cover it and put it inside when ur done... i used to do that with drywall in my garage... but if u like painting that wall and u dont care at least go big next time its buffed, make one side a huge throwup and the other side a huge block letter... maybe whoever keeps buffing it will eventually stop if u put up something that doesnt look like total shit to the average person

smokeitup
03-02-2012, 04:26 PM
wha? are u saying my tags are shit?

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 04:32 PM
not completely i guess.. u missed the point... i meant most people looking at it arent gonna be graffiti writers so they wont appreciate it at all if it doesnt jump out to em somehow, big block letters on somethin like that would last longer than 50+ tags in a 20ft space... people just see that and think ew.... and yea im one of those people, but it doesnt mean ur hands suck or u cant paint, it just means ur doinitwrong... less is more sometimes, and if u gotta totally cover the thing do something other than a bunch of the same tag...
so yea i guess to wrap up: 1- it looks dumb when u do that many tags in such a small space, and 2- yes ur tags are shit lol

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 04:34 PM
Hahahaha^^ truth

smokeitup
03-02-2012, 04:44 PM
u make me sad, i think im gonna go cry now!

boohoooooooo

toopski
03-02-2012, 05:23 PM
noah work on mixin that ink, ur drips are kinda spiderwebbing out and makin it look all shittayyyy.... that klauser is big pimpin, maybe make the L a teeny bit bigger so it matches the size of the E... but thatd be nice to see all fresh n stanky on a steel box somewhere...

haha yeah but i aint complaining about stolen ink

Phat 2
03-02-2012, 06:39 PM
I like dkode's tags... im not gonna comment on when where and how much tagging is supposed to happen.. because let's face it: it's useless.
as long as you're tagging, you're fine in my book.
it's probably one of the few things I disagree on with you zookyook.

dkode, it seems to me that it's time for you to slowly start taking some steps further than just tagging. I wouldn't mind seeing you practice a few good throws. I can tell your piecing skills are absolute shit... so maybe practicing hollow throws would be a suitable next step.
you dont wanna be stuck at the tagger level forever, do you?

smokeitup
03-02-2012, 07:18 PM
no. my pieces really suck ive actually got one from last night but i dont think ill post it, ive also got a throwy too but i wont post it its toy as.

i should sketch more, but i just like painting.

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 08:41 PM
thats all i was sayin dkode... u know i dont care if u take me seriously or not... but it IS just kinda pointless to do the same tag a bunch of times, if u cant work out a decent throw or a couple different tags u should exchange with some people that are better in those areas... like im not the best piecer so i like to get pieces when i do exchanges, but i normally prefer doin throwups and tags, piecing just seems like less graffiti the more u go over some shit, the less flow it has... so yea u dont haveta do a big nice piece on it for me to like it... just change up the flow in ur tag or do a nice 2 letter throw or something u think looks good... my whole point was 50 of pretty much the same tag on a piece of concrete that size looks bad unless u fill it up perfectly and use different handstlyes, maybe something like the amaze wall of tags or the earsnot wall of tags (google it)... they kept balance and flow so it looked pretty cool, but ur shit was just all over the place and sloppy i gotta stand by that... if u wanna exchange lemme know lol if u wanna ignore me thats cool too

Bilks
03-03-2012, 10:56 AM
56515
56516

Dossbog
03-03-2012, 02:06 PM
56528

Evow1
03-03-2012, 07:39 PM
Fuckin with a new word.. what you guys think?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/100_0438.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/100_0432.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/100_0431.jpg

dankbudz
03-03-2012, 09:26 PM
top one is ugly as poop
bottom one looks good, same with middle, minus the M and the arrows.

flcik fo talk

Norfsuthr
03-04-2012, 03:41 PM
did about 20 of these gettin practice. http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7196/6953562823_0a19b0e02d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6953562823/)
photo-40 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6953562823/)

sadgeh
03-04-2012, 05:10 PM
the OW is too compact

MN Nice
03-04-2012, 05:23 PM
@Dank - try using all caps, then that A will maybe fit in better.

dankbudz
03-04-2012, 06:03 PM
eh too late already sent it in but that woulda been a good idea haha

norf- thats look sexy. i don't think you gotta separate that, but it could look nice.

toopski
03-04-2012, 06:34 PM
not seperate but its crowded coz its small if it was a bit bigger and a lil more spaced would be dope

MN Nice
03-04-2012, 06:37 PM
I get what he's saying. He can still do the same motion but just keep that left leg of the W from covering half of that O.

toopski
03-04-2012, 07:43 PM
^idd the only reason it doesnt look great atm is because ur GOW is crowded but the J is sitting with space so if u give a lil more space it should even out more

Dossbog
03-05-2012, 10:21 AM
56925 Yes...I am in fact a cat

Asis13
03-05-2012, 09:48 PM
5705557056

Trying to get a little wicked goin on that last one.
The top piece is what ive been stickin to lately.

sir.to.you.
03-05-2012, 10:34 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7069/6957995207_ca1c39294c_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6957995207/)
IMG_0277 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6957995207/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7204/6811884478_84f10b9761_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6811884478/)
IMG_0276 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6811884478/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
drunk!

sir.to.you.
03-05-2012, 11:03 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6958052209_f822e03dc5_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6958052209/)
IMG_0264 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6958052209/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
sloppy drunk

ven0m
03-06-2012, 07:00 AM
stay drunk then!

after
03-06-2012, 09:35 AM
57088 crites

Coleo
03-06-2012, 03:01 PM
57108571095711057111bored at school
571125711357114bored at work... yes i know the naked tag blows

MN Nice
03-06-2012, 03:40 PM
Dalo marker on the top paper ones?

dankbudz
03-06-2012, 03:44 PM
lol
cellphone flick steeeze

Coleo
03-06-2012, 05:04 PM
Dalo marker on the top paper ones?
nah just some cheap ass walmart stuff called puffy paint

ven0m
03-06-2012, 05:27 PM
it's nice to know you're thinking about us at school, coleo... your educational future looks bright :) cheers on the tag though :)
seder, that is terrific! :D

Coleo
03-07-2012, 06:20 AM
it's nice to know you're thinking about us at school, coleo... your educational future looks bright :) cheers on the tag though :)
seder, that is terrific! :D
Lol i was bored outta my mind i couldnt remember everyone though:confused:

after
03-07-2012, 06:27 AM
57088 crites bump for some crites plz

kwu
03-07-2012, 07:05 AM
bring em closer together but not too much, try leaning and dont do that r-e overlap but good start just make subtle changes

rollfatblunts
03-07-2012, 07:15 AM
57338573395734057341573425734357344573455734457346 5734757348573495735057351I dont write this anymore cuz theres a better one in mtl, but here ya go. SOME

Juice323
03-07-2012, 07:21 AM
hey guys I just joined the forum.. i am a toy. and I am messing around with my tag. Please give me ur ideas. feel free to be harsh, just please also leave tips for me as well. here's my tag. please let me know what you think. http://postimage.org/image/amtea16il/

MN Nice
03-07-2012, 10:08 AM
Was the mailbox and tree even worth it? Thats just stupid dude.

@Juice bring your letters together nice and snug and don't try to add style to your letters when you're just starting out. Your normal handwriting will look better hopefully.

Norfsuthr
03-07-2012, 11:33 AM
Yo taggin trees is cool man, im bout that. Sometimes i do rollers on peoples yards, sucks when they cut they grass tho.

RaWs3kz
03-07-2012, 01:07 PM
573655736657367573685736957370 ... lookin for crits on the new upfade handy ...im diggin it i jusss wanna kno if its fresh or not in other peoples eyes nd what i can improve on it ? .. since i posted a couple before a few pages ago nd got zero crits i figured if mayb i asked i would get some .. thanks

MN Nice
03-07-2012, 03:41 PM
I think a capital E would look better in that. And then keep the lower case e for the zebra tag ;)

PETER
03-07-2012, 03:48 PM
sek becareful with the K you tend to go a bit overboard and it becomes too intense. otherwise I like.

Asis13
03-07-2012, 05:01 PM
Just a new tag ive been workin on (says ASKID). think im about done..crits if you dont mind.
@jiksa - sick dude!
574105741157412

MN Nice
03-08-2012, 02:29 PM
dollar can paint drips

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/muestag.jpg?t=1331238569

Norfsuthr
03-08-2012, 02:37 PM
Not a fan of the left star. Get some funk in that M to balance it.

Asis13
03-08-2012, 02:39 PM
@ MN Nice - i know im a toy. but maybe kick out the leg of the M and have it flow into that star

Zookyook
03-08-2012, 02:58 PM
Yo taggin trees is cool man, im bout that. Sometimes i do rollers on peoples yards, sucks when they cut they grass tho.
agreed

Asis13
03-08-2012, 05:00 PM
Alright, so ive been sketching out this new calligraphy style for a tag (ASKID). something i can do large or small..detailed or up down fade. lookin to see some crits on a few versions ive com up with. i know the last one is bit illegible. i like the natural hearts that come at the bottom but im not sure if it obscures the D too much.

57471

ven0m
03-08-2012, 07:11 PM
completely unreadable up there^
mues, I'd go with a pointy M dude... go ahead and try it out, see how you feel it

Zookyook
03-09-2012, 10:27 AM
Alright, so ive been sketching out this new calligraphy style for a tag (ASKID). something i can do large or small..detailed or up down fade. lookin to see some crits on a few versions ive com up with. i know the last one is bit illegible. i like the natural hearts that come at the bottom but im not sure if it obscures the D too much.

57471

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