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Kaze
04-24-2012, 09:03 PM
The K is kinda fuked, goes abit wide i think but w.e here it is.
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9ToTheOH
04-24-2012, 09:43 PM
eh


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9ToTheOH
04-24-2012, 09:47 PM
You *****s are posting some real dope shit.

Kaze
04-24-2012, 09:57 PM
nice 9, your handstyle has gotten alot better from before

saveme
04-24-2012, 10:33 PM
I'm lovin that style kaze I like how it nonstops at the end n the style at the end of the e make u stickers man !

saveme
04-24-2012, 10:35 PM
9 that s is fukn dope !

Kaze
04-24-2012, 10:52 PM
thanks saveme i really appreciate it man. il make some stickers soon here, just wana get better at the flare things at the end of the names.
9- i like your a the most its dope and clean and how the middle part of it kinda makes a wave, only thing im not diggin is the E but overal its a nice tag man
Dank still gonna post his??

Restart
04-24-2012, 11:21 PM
crits would be appreciated

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Kaze
04-24-2012, 11:27 PM
looks good restart, maybe try to do more with the G and just keep practicing.

Restart
04-24-2012, 11:30 PM
thanks man. i was trying to making them all slanted but its harder than i thought. i dont know what to do with the g for now.

Kaze
04-24-2012, 11:38 PM
yeh i know what u meen, just keep practicing and in time you will be able to do crazier stuff. maybe with ur G at the bottom part when it comes up and curls in, instead of leaving it there drag it back out then down or somshit...hard to explain but just browse around for ideas/inspiration. i cant really do a good G but if u want i could upload a photo with something u could use if u like it, its nothing special though lol

Restart
04-25-2012, 12:19 AM
go ahead man. trying to make it more curvy/slanted

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H1P30N3R
04-25-2012, 12:45 AM
omega I see potential keep your letters same size width for now drop the add ons and dont swing the m and a down. That e is raw son the m is good too minus that dropped down leg. remember keep it simple for now minor tweaks and add ons as you go. Dont listen to most these cats on here everything they see they say thats tight thats nice and so on.

Kaze
04-25-2012, 01:15 AM
here omega, hope this helps you...its pretty generic looking and its the same G i used in the past so its nothing special or anything
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saveme
04-25-2012, 01:51 AM
@ restart like that e 4sure that g and a def need some serious work tho

aiko
04-25-2012, 02:11 AM
eh


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This is cleaaaaaan. mmmmm.

9ToTheOH
04-25-2012, 06:56 AM
Thanks for the feed back yo, for real but I can see a few problems. If I have time to get new markers today I'll drop a new one.

PETER
04-25-2012, 08:22 AM
Omega: that your O doesn't seem to fit the style of the rest of your letters. Use the KISS method for now. Your can do the drop down bits like hipe mentioned later once you get your letters together. I would do the drop bit on the end of the G too.
Snake: I hate to be that guy, but don't let them fool you.... It needs serious work. There is potential there, but the S is booty, the E needs serious work, the bottom right leg of the K looks like doo doo... the NA isn't bad. The extras just do a bad job of hiding the fact your letters need work.

MN Nice
04-25-2012, 08:51 AM
Listen to Peter.

9ToTheOH
04-25-2012, 10:05 AM
Snake: I hate to be that guy, but don't let them fool you.... It needs serious work. There is potential there, but the S is booty, the E needs serious work, the bottom right leg of the K looks like doo doo... the NA isn't bad. The extras just do a bad job of hiding the fact your letters need work.

Aha I kno. Thanks. Can't think of a new E, and all my markers and shit went dead so I need to get more packs tonight. The N,A is the only thing I'm keeping cause that's my actually shit not me just trying to look pretty.

PETER
04-25-2012, 10:48 AM
The e has potential don't scrap it entirely, but a sharp edged s and swirly e won't work. I say get a new s and work on perfecting that e. The s and k need the most tlc.

Restart
04-25-2012, 11:26 AM
Omega: that your O doesn't seem to fit the style of the rest of your letters. Use the KISS method for now. Your can do the drop down bits like hipe mentioned later once you get your letters together. I would do the drop bit on the end of the G

Thanks for the input. What exactly do u mean by the KISS method?

PETER
04-25-2012, 01:19 PM
Keep it simple stupid. Not trying to be mean.... It's a term us old farts use. Of the handies posted lately you've got the most potential of the bunch.

Axil
04-25-2012, 04:52 PM
New name New Tag :)

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Coleo
04-25-2012, 05:46 PM
you seem queer... but i geuss dont make the 'A' so pointy...

dankbudz
04-25-2012, 05:51 PM
axil, post less and practice more

peter, i tried to do a KSRD throw but i failed cause K's are hard and KR is even harder.... maybe ill succeed later but i did a hand for ya

Kaze
04-25-2012, 08:33 PM
^ looks good, dont like that e or k really though but k's are tough

H1P30N3R
04-25-2012, 09:13 PM
krsd hmmm ill try a throw later peter

Norfsuthr
04-25-2012, 09:41 PM
Lol axil, I love how you change your sig to what you write and shit.Classic... Im high as fuck *****

9ToTheOH
04-25-2012, 10:18 PM
Lol axil, I love how you change your sig to what you write and shit.Classic... Im high as fuck *****

Aha I can tell. That random shit you just posted up. Lol

Restart
04-26-2012, 12:05 AM
something random. crits i guess

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H1P30N3R
04-26-2012, 12:14 AM
drop the g to a connection and the lil face and you got a solid handstyle now get it up everywhere.

dankbudz
04-26-2012, 12:21 AM
i would drop the lil thing you did at the end of the E and A, just keep it simple like that and work on even spacing and cleanliness and it'll look good. and you can only improve from there.. also try working on a M with the points in the middle, there just aint much you can do or anywhere you can go with the middle of the M you gots.

yo dude.. .that red omega you had last page was hoot, where did that steeze go?


thought i posted this, guess i didn't.
9oh- did you still wanna put it in the battle thread?

Kaze
04-26-2012, 12:42 AM
thats clean dank, nice

Restart
04-26-2012, 12:59 AM
that red omega you had last page was hoot, where did that steeze go?

woah woah woah before u lose faith

1. Im practicing/improving the one u saw. I just dont see the point of reposting it over and over. Plus ill only post it if it is something i am proud of (or it doesnt look like shit)

2. Always gotta work on different styles. Its more fun that way. This is my simple style and just wanted some feedback.


drop the g to a connection

Could u rephrase that?

H1P30N3R
04-26-2012, 01:05 AM
the middle line for your a runs into the g which made it look like a connection. If it wasn't meant to be just clean that up a bit.

Restart
04-26-2012, 01:33 AM
the middle line for your a runs into the g which made it look like a connection. If it wasn't meant to be just clean that up a bit.

It was ment to be a connection but i forgot to connect them until i was writing the A

9ToTheOH
04-26-2012, 06:14 AM
9oh- did you still wanna put it in the battle thread?

uhh, idk haha. Got crits, which was what I was looking for. Got a better E,and S just waiting to jack some markers today.

KehmONE
04-26-2012, 07:09 AM
66422

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Few different styles I was playing with.

Kaze
04-26-2012, 07:52 PM
kehm, looking good, try spicing up your letters or something...keep the handstyle you got there its clean and what not but work on another one that is a little bit more complex...dont over do it, just smalllll tweaks and shit

Mr.Zorak
04-26-2012, 10:22 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oY63wOonR58&feature=youtu.be here's my tag, a shitty one, but it's a starting idea.

Kaze
04-26-2012, 10:39 PM
^ lol i like how you throw the rock through the glass at the end. lose that thing coming outa your O that loops around, go more simple and for now make ur Z look like a normal Z, it looks like a weird 5 sorta, your k is decent and ur R is ok just keep working on it and maybe dont have ur k and r hang down like that. keep practicing man, you will see improvement.

Mildstyles
04-27-2012, 11:23 AM
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Norfsuthr
04-27-2012, 02:04 PM
^nice D haha. I dont think that K goes with the rest tho.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7264/7119290915_66fd7dd9df.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7119290915/)
photo-10 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7119290915/)

Kaze
04-27-2012, 03:08 PM
thats a funky tag norfsuthr, i like it, whats the letter in between the O and the J though? a handwriting e or something?
mildstyles, i dont like that E at all but the other letters are dope, maybe try to spice up your N abit or somthing, play with your N and D or somthing.

MN Nice
04-27-2012, 03:25 PM
Its a W tard.

Mild, try a K with a downward extension like so

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/7a73b5e4.jpg?t=1335558327

PETER
04-27-2012, 04:20 PM
He told you to play with your d!!!! I am in agreement about your k naked.

Kaze
04-27-2012, 04:29 PM
oh shit how did i not see it was a w before

MiDo93
04-27-2012, 05:56 PM
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blackmath
04-27-2012, 05:56 PM
Crits? I fucked up the T but it was cold as a mother fucker last night

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blackmath
04-27-2012, 05:58 PM
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I'd say bring your D down a little bit and maybe change up the I just a little bit so it doesnt look like "modo" I like that M though

Kaze
04-27-2012, 06:10 PM
looks decent tak, id lose that line at the bottom and either make it a straight line or that fading to the bottum thing. maybe lose the kick thing on the K practice other kicks for it on paper and for now make it more simple, maybe try a lower case A along with working on your current uppercase A. just keep practicing man

Mido- try to close up ur D more, dont have the line in it so short. make ur I a little bit longer but it looks decent, keep working at it

blackmath
04-27-2012, 06:54 PM
Thanks Kaze, I usually do a straight line actually hahaha I dont know why I decided to do that last night

Axil
04-27-2012, 07:31 PM
Mido - sick drips and on the D Pull down the line and leave the gap at the top

Tak - Almost there got a sick throw up and now all you need to do is fix that tag up a bit and it be sick in my mind :)

Critz please:)

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8163/7119970035_b5359b0ae1_z.jpg

Kaze
04-27-2012, 08:14 PM
yeh i know what u meen blackmath, just spur the moment type thing lol.
axil-i like this one the most out of the stuff uv posted i think, maybe make ur C abit skinnier, like dont have it come out so much and i would lose the hanging leg on ur R, try making it normal or try to do somthing else with it. also make ur A abiiiittt wider...good progress though

MiDo93
04-27-2012, 09:31 PM
blackmath,Kaze, and Axil thanks for the crits. I'll try to fix the D and the i
Axil, like kaze said its a good progression from your other stuff. The C should be a bit more skinny to cancel out that negative space.

Mildstyles
04-27-2012, 09:58 PM
appearantly me and norf went to the same spot with the same paint... lol

H1P30N3R
04-27-2012, 10:27 PM
^^^ was thinking the same thing both tags look pretty good though guys

Skaep
04-27-2012, 10:56 PM
crits? tryin out the chisel tip

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Norfsuthr
04-27-2012, 10:59 PM
Top left and the one under it look best, that lower case A is lookin good.

ven0m
04-28-2012, 04:15 AM
your other tag was way better man, but those aren't that bad either... just need some more life

MN Nice
04-28-2012, 10:31 AM
Shout out page. the names that first came to my head so sorry if I miss ya.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/e125fe14.jpg?t=1335627054

dankbudz
04-28-2012, 01:08 PM
goood lookins

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 01:17 PM
yo!! nice shit tho mues

Mildstyles
04-28-2012, 02:35 PM
I made it on the page <3 this is cray

ven0m
04-28-2012, 05:05 PM
shout out to all the homies hell yeah mues. peace dawg :)

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 12:25 AM
jacked your idea mues I need the practice anyway...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_001758.jpg

Coleo
04-29-2012, 11:28 AM
^i dont see my name wtf
anyways just gettin my boys name out there...66885

and heres one of mine...66886

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 02:09 PM
taggin bathrooms, gnarcore brohemian

Axil
04-29-2012, 06:13 PM
your one looks clean what marker did u use?

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 06:58 PM
hopin on the love boat... ;)
don't be too heart broken for those who aint on here. i swear i did another page but i must not taken a picture

the hands are pretty shit too

Norfsuthr
04-29-2012, 07:17 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7197/7126477345_c88e06e5a1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/7126477345/)
oie_3023562qD6rnuZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/7126477345/)
haha sorry kopr.

Kaze
04-29-2012, 07:34 PM
just experimenting, first time trying these...would have to clean them up and shit. Crits please
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DRIG
04-29-2012, 09:07 PM
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fast tag and bomb i did. my can was almost out of paint so i didnt do the full tag, and I had to ditch the bomb because of a Metrobus that opened up, but i thought it was worth a post anyway.

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 09:09 PM
dope stuff, norf

Kaze
04-29-2012, 09:46 PM
i need crits^^^ anyone think those 2 pictures got potential? or does it still look like a 3 year old scribbling like before lol

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 09:51 PM
kaze your just over doing everything start simple clean letters

Kaze
04-29-2012, 10:17 PM
i appreciate the crit hipe, i have a simpler tag too just kinda wanted to try something new. but i guess theres no point in trying to do something that i cant do right. il just stick to the simpler ones for now.

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 10:19 PM
yea its good to expirement thats the only way to progress but start simple and do small tweaks .

Kaze
04-29-2012, 10:26 PM
alright thanks for the advice, appreciate it. i wanted to have a more sharp tag but it cant just change like that i guess lol.
and im guessing i shouldnt use the name seak cuz of sear? i honestly did use that name before though so im not biting the idea from sear but it could still be weird i guess

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 10:31 PM
nothing weird about that, its the internet. just don't bite him

Kaze
04-29-2012, 10:47 PM
alright, il prob just try to think of a new name but if i end up going back to seak i for sure wont bite any of his work.

IronyATB
04-30-2012, 06:13 AM
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fast tag and bomb i did. my can was almost out of paint so i didnt do the full tag, and I had to ditch the bomb because of a Metrobus that opened up, but i thought it was worth a post anyway.

The 'bomb' on the right looks like a fucking bear paw. Keyboard letters and shit holmes.

Coleo
04-30-2012, 06:19 AM
your one looks clean what marker did u use?

just a pump dripper marker i got from BEDAROC look him up in the member list

ven0m
04-30-2012, 07:30 AM
just woke up and still didn't get my funk on yet, so excuse the sloppiness:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/545670_435200846506830_100000507545549_1569564_602 072229_n.jpg

IronyATB
04-30-2012, 07:35 AM
I dig your "R" on "Cred"

MN Nice
04-30-2012, 07:43 AM
Boxed A's with curvy letters = :D

KehmONE
04-30-2012, 08:30 AM
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Some of them are pretty shitty, was using a brush tip marker that is about as close to dry as you can get... made the strokes kinda rough and sloppy.
Actually, they're all pretty shitty... not a big fan of any markers that aren't a chisel tip... can never get my letters to look any good with a rounded tip.

PETER
04-30-2012, 02:33 PM
The name seak has been used a lot.... No worries. A good handy has a solid base. Just like anything else. If you really want to explore and develop your hand try checking out a typography book. Study basic caligraphy. I'll post up some pics of the style i'm working on once i get my phone back from htc.

Mildstyles
04-30-2012, 02:58 PM
I wish i could do handstyles, id hop on this shoutout stuffz

aiko
04-30-2012, 03:50 PM
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fast tag and bomb i did. my can was almost out of paint so i didnt do the full tag, and I had to ditch the bomb because of a Metrobus that opened up, but i thought it was worth a post anyway.

yo this looks like a steaming pile of shit

Kaze
04-30-2012, 04:18 PM
thanks for the advice peter. im going to just think of another name beside seak...still cant decide though

dankbudz
04-30-2012, 05:24 PM
aiko, YOU are a steaming pile of shit

aiko
04-30-2012, 05:56 PM
awww you're so adorable when you pms dankz

dankbudz
04-30-2012, 06:04 PM
aren't you a girl?

dmgraff
04-30-2012, 06:43 PM
dank i dont think he was insulting you. it seriusly looks like a turd.

iPwnF00lz
04-30-2012, 06:48 PM
dope and dope.

(I'm baack)

dankbudz
04-30-2012, 06:59 PM
dank i dont think he was insulting you. it seriusly looks like a turd.

you do realize he wasn't dissing my stuff... he's just a bitch...

aiko
04-30-2012, 07:07 PM
big mouth, little dick
and yeah i am a girl which doesn't change a thing

MN Nice
04-30-2012, 11:57 PM
Been focusing on my handstyles a lot lately. Maybe some improvement. Don't mind the effect, just some photoshop fun.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/b467bbf9.jpg?t=1335848204

PREA672
05-01-2012, 12:02 AM
Really digging that four eyes tag. propitos

MN Nice
05-01-2012, 12:03 AM
Much appreciated.

Edit: BPB



Been focusing on my handstyles a lot lately. Maybe some improvement. Don't mind the effect, just some photoshop fun.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/b467bbf9.jpg?t=1335848204

Kaze
05-01-2012, 12:11 AM
that 4eyes is clean as fuck...i like it alot, you should try it with an uppercase R too maybe, dont get me wrong i like the lowercase R as well

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 12:22 AM
yeah diggin the hand mues has a nice ass flow...

gottapaintdaily
05-01-2012, 11:03 AM
alright thanks for the advice, appreciate it. i wanted to have a more sharp tag but it cant just change like that i guess lol.
and im guessing i shouldnt use the name seak cuz of sear? i honestly did use that name before though so im not biting the idea from sear but it could still be weird i guess

do you still write seak?

Coleo
05-01-2012, 03:00 PM
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Kaze
05-01-2012, 04:35 PM
do you still write seak?
No im not gonna use it. why?

coleo- the tags look cool, black one is kinda blurry but the yellow one looks good, maybe make your S more round so it matches the other letters. you should practice a sharper N and E for that sharper S or somthing

Coleo
05-01-2012, 04:42 PM
^yah the blurry one my tag i alredy posted i was postin my boys above it...

Spy10327
05-01-2012, 08:58 PM
67424 Crits?

MiDo93
05-01-2012, 09:11 PM
lose the arrows

Kaze
05-01-2012, 10:40 PM
spy-take out those arrows and keep practicing, fill page after page or tags.

Would appreciate crits on these, still gotta long way to go.
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Alli
05-02-2012, 12:13 AM
Everybody has to start somewhere, simple signature. Hoping to be able to put it on something sick later on.
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Restart
05-02-2012, 12:52 AM
made it less crazy. fucked up on the "E". crits would be nice

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cred1384
05-02-2012, 01:39 AM
attempting to work on my handstyle.. could use a few hundred more pages but fuck my arm got tired.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_3162352x.jpg

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
05-02-2012, 01:43 AM
thats a terrible one liner man. you really do that a 100 times already?

dankbudz
05-02-2012, 02:03 AM
^^^CPEO

go slower, don't sketch em and define them letters, no gay lil shit

lies and deceit
05-02-2012, 10:27 AM
pretty sure this is still looking bad, crits would be helpful 67489

aiko
05-02-2012, 12:45 PM
is that supposed to be an m? and what the hell is that circle on the bottom of your g, just drop the bar down, don't rap it

lies and deceit
05-02-2012, 12:53 PM
yeah my M is shit, ill get on it

lies and deceit
05-02-2012, 12:57 PM
is this better? 67502

KehmONE
05-02-2012, 12:58 PM
G is better, M still sucks.

aiko
05-02-2012, 01:05 PM
yeah def, its decipherable now. the rest of your letters have got good flow but the m is just weird, just try doing something taller with it

lies and deceit
05-02-2012, 02:02 PM
Tried to point the M a bit, ill try and maker bigger on something on the next 100 or so. 67504

KehmONE
05-02-2012, 03:29 PM
675256752467526

Was screwing with the word Hops cuz it's fun to write, and I caught a flick of a handy from a few weeks ago that's still on the bus.

Kaze
05-02-2012, 06:07 PM
looks better then before magus, change your A though and work on your M. maybe dont have your U so fat

Would appreciate crits on these.
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gottapaintdaily
05-02-2012, 08:11 PM
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first 2 were just quick hands, fuckin around. crits? and the third is just one of my boys

BigFaggot
05-02-2012, 08:19 PM
tryin to work on it, crits would help. just cropped this from a diffent pic, so its kinda blurry67624

notmikegiant
05-02-2012, 09:40 PM
@ kaze - i like the bottom right one the most, the K is kinda funky, but i like it
@ kasm - did you really paint a fucking childrens park? drop the crown, you're no king
@ neer - looks like it could all use a little work, i like where you're going with the R though

MN Nice
05-02-2012, 09:42 PM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/16bff94f.jpg?t=1336012958

Lil sumptin sumptin

Kaze
05-02-2012, 09:46 PM
thanks mike i appreciate it, im still working on making it more smooth, got a long way to go lol
those look real fresh MNnice

Restart
05-03-2012, 12:00 AM
any crits?

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H1P30N3R
05-03-2012, 12:16 AM
pretty solid handy now skip over to throws and or pieces... dont dwell on one certain aspect to long as I have learned the hard way.

Restart
05-03-2012, 12:19 AM
thanks man and elaborate?

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
05-03-2012, 12:57 AM
Lil sumptin sumptin
looks like a bunch of nothin.

Kaze
05-03-2012, 12:59 AM
That G is dope i think, dont really like your E in the first pic but its chill in the second pic, try to change up your M but like hipeoner said work on ur other stuff too

smokeitup
05-03-2012, 01:01 AM
@ kasm - did you really paint a fucking childrens park? drop the crown, you're no king


hahahaha i saw that and thought what a bad cunt!!! haa

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
05-03-2012, 01:09 AM
^whats it like being in the future?

Willis1989
05-03-2012, 05:02 AM
Why would you tag all over a little kids playground? Some writers are really immature.

MN Nice
05-03-2012, 07:37 AM
looks like a bunch of nothin.

Y u no like.

lies and deceit
05-03-2012, 10:46 AM
Im not sure if its better here is where i went yesterday. 67658

Norfsuthr
05-03-2012, 10:53 AM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/16bff94f.jpg?t=1336012958

Lil sumptin sumptin

bump for not hurting my delicate eyes.

Nice capital E, the 4 one is nice too, good work man.

Norfsuthr
05-03-2012, 10:54 AM
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lol

H1P30N3R
05-03-2012, 11:00 AM
^^ he can be a toy and play with toys at the same time .

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 11:02 AM
^^ he can be a toy and play with toys at the same time .
HA! play on words, i like it.

PETER
05-03-2012, 03:24 PM
Magus: Use a smaller marker. It's too big to really get a picture of how your letters work and you'll save a fuck load of paper. You can even take a standard sharpie and circumsize it ( cut a little bit of the tip. Do this at a slight angle) to make it more of a chisel point.... You can do this with anything cheap or easily rackable really. That new m is an improvement imo, but the a isn't and i don't like that s at all.

blackmath
05-03-2012, 09:33 PM
What do you think of this? didnt get many crits last time so throwin it up again

67761

aiko
05-03-2012, 09:37 PM
kinda weak and pushing for style, id say try a fatter cap

dmgraff
05-03-2012, 11:16 PM
@black i think that looks pretty good but not the second line on the top of the T. and ya try a fatter cap

H1P30N3R
05-04-2012, 12:25 AM
thanks man and elaborate?

Ive been around here since 2010 and progressed only with throws because I let myself get so wrapped up in doing throws that I didnt work on anything else pieces or tags. Ive been working on pieces for about a month while some other heads that have been around as long as I are way more advanced because they covered pieces,tags, and throws.

KehmONE
05-04-2012, 02:04 PM
678606786167862

The yellow is more concentrated and trying to form my letters.
The silvers are more of a quick flow to see how my hand moves.

PANiC978
05-04-2012, 05:10 PM
67873
The first tag I ever sprayed with a can

aiko
05-04-2012, 05:13 PM
i like that it starts off rounded, but you got pointy, you need to soften dat shit up, 2 ton cans of wupasss

6788367884

GpersKreepers
05-05-2012, 04:58 AM
that second vamp is dope, not liking the first,

Coleo
05-05-2012, 01:54 PM
for dune:67913

MyTagNameIsDune
05-05-2012, 02:20 PM
Thanks coleo! I'll definitely try to work with that, it looks really good.

Coleo
05-05-2012, 03:42 PM
np just dont bitee

H1P30N3R
05-05-2012, 07:37 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120505_200545.jpg

Jake_NN_Bake
05-06-2012, 11:15 AM
that second vamp is dope, not liking the first,
Agreed. The second vamp is sick!

DRIG
05-06-2012, 11:41 AM
679856798667987

Mildstyles
05-06-2012, 12:53 PM
Dats hardcore^^
679916799267993

gottapaintdaily
05-06-2012, 01:49 PM
679966799767998
been messin round wit characters again, any crits?

pover
05-06-2012, 02:04 PM
I like the popeye one... The other two are a bit messy, but I like them too...

68003

Spy10327
05-06-2012, 02:59 PM
is this better? 67502
First off, I see flow in this it's all rounded more or less, but the m looks like an E fell over keep the shape of the m but make it straight. The g would look sick if you took the very bottom extension/bit off of it. and then the S its nice but maybe try leaving a bit more space between the middle and the top part and the bottom part after you get the g and the m fixed.

BigFaggot
05-06-2012, 05:16 PM
Dats hardcore^^
679916799267993
Marker ones look nicee

MyTagNameIsDune
05-06-2012, 07:45 PM
i never bite, but I'll probably try to work with the tri-dot

DRIG
05-06-2012, 07:47 PM
thanks for the compliment mild.

Zookyook
05-06-2012, 08:18 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=67619&d=1336007412
....http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQJhspGdWMhx7hiTiNI4SRmtMtQVw_lX ibStUshGfRUOYpzDiw75CxX5mz8



vamp is murkin all u bitches on them handstyles lol

H1P30N3R
05-06-2012, 08:19 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120506_210311.jpg

Coleo
05-06-2012, 10:19 PM
^ dude your sig is fucking hilarious

Skaep
05-07-2012, 02:44 AM
tried to add some "life" back to em

68066

68067

dankbudz
05-07-2012, 03:09 AM
pretty solid overall, but ever letter is a bit sloppy, you gotta fix that, then get it up without the hallow and arrow.

do like a hundred of em, like 2 time bigger and do em nice n slooww making sure you get everything good. then when you do em fast it'll look better and more consistent. at least it works for me

DRIG
05-07-2012, 02:47 PM
[QUOTE=Skaep;1795636]tried to add some "life" back to em

careful buddy, your looking an awful lot like "scape" there. i personally avoid halos unless its a tribute to a fallen writer.

Jake_NN_Bake
05-07-2012, 07:15 PM
[QUOTE=Skaep;1795636]tried to add some "life" back to em

careful buddy, your looking an awful lot like "scape" there. i personally avoid halos unless its a tribute to a fallen writer.

That's why I write halo. But mine is just for a loved one.
Here's my re done tag. Crits are definetely needed seeing as its pretty bad compared to the great stuff on here. Sorry I can't resize on my phone D:
68134

8=====D
05-08-2012, 07:18 PM
h-4xl-o

hahah you faggot i crossed your toy ass out on paper before you could even take a picture ahha

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 07:24 PM
Scaep - I definitely think you're going in a good direction, that top right black one is my personal favorite, the P is dope and the letter widths & distances are working, play with that more for sure
Halo - idk, I'd say start off simpler, it kinda almost looks like you know where you're going with the ALO but the H, arrow and lines through the O make it look like you're trying a bit too hard to connect it and give it style, go simple and just let it come naturally, hope that helps

pics for talking:
68237
68238
68239
68240

Jake_NN_Bake
05-08-2012, 08:49 PM
hahah you faggot i crossed your toy ass out on paper before you could even take a picture ahha

Nice 4 posts buddy. One of which is about islam and the others are spam. Why don't you get your fat ass off of the computer and try the outdoors for a little bit? Go write you faggot. Oh wait, don't. Leave the wall space for people who know how to use a can. I swear, its little Call of Duty fags like you that make writing less enjoyable.

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 08:53 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120508_213815.jpg

Kaze
05-08-2012, 11:22 PM
looks good, that K is dope.

Coleo
05-09-2012, 07:31 AM
That's why I write halo. But mine is just for a loved one.
Here's my re done tag. Crits are definetely needed seeing as its pretty bad compared to the great stuff on here. Sorry I can't resize on my phone D:
68134

nnneeevvvveerrrr cross out your name may seem cool but its not!!!

Kushbombing
05-09-2012, 09:09 AM
westbrant
not mine but i like
68274

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 10:33 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7102/7165226060_09f112317d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7165226060/)
photo-15 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7165226060/)
Actually climbed that pipe to the top of the pillar and got the highway facing side of the square section on top there. Heres to hoping the buff wont go that high, already hit the pictured part and been buffed...

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 11:44 AM
highway spot + nice hand=success

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 12:51 PM
Highway spots are the best man, the few people out at 2am aren't really looking out for taggers in the shadows. Then in the morning rush hour traffic is at a standstill right next to your shit. Feels good man.

PETER
05-09-2012, 04:12 PM
Vamp that second one is tight.

aiko
05-09-2012, 04:28 PM
Vamp that second one is tight.
i dont understand why nobody digs the first, i love it. but ahh whatevs. thanks dude

PETER
05-09-2012, 04:33 PM
I like the first one too. The line through the whole thing coming off the p is a bit dangerous. But i dig the boxy biz.

PETER
05-09-2012, 04:35 PM
i like the first one too. The line through the whole thing coming off the p is a bit dangerous. But i dig the boxy biz.

scaep: You've improved a lot. I'm digging where you're going.

8=====D
05-09-2012, 06:17 PM
Nice 4 posts buddy. One of which is about islam and the others are spam. Why don't you get your fat ass off of the computer and try the outdoors for a little bit? Go write you faggot. Oh wait, don't. Leave the wall space for people who know how to use a can. I swear, its little Call of Duty fags like you that make writing less enjoyable.
What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I'll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I've been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I'm the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You're fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that's just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little "clever" comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn't, you didn't, and now you're paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You're fucking dead, kiddo.

dankbudz
05-09-2012, 06:35 PM
your such a fag dude ^^

shitty flick for talk

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 06:42 PM
that red selder is heat

Coleo
05-09-2012, 06:43 PM
not really feelin the box part of the M

Jake_NN_Bake
05-09-2012, 07:43 PM
What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I'll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I've been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I'm the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You're fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that's just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little "clever" comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn't, you didn't, and now you're paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You're fucking dead, kiddo.

You're going to poop on me?

Jake_NN_Bake
05-09-2012, 07:48 PM
Halo - idk, I'd say start off simpler, it kinda almost looks like you know where you're going with the ALO but the H, arrow and lines through the O make it look like you're trying a bit too hard to connect it and give it style, go simple and just let it come naturally, hope that helps


Better or worse than it was before?
68405

KroeGHK
05-09-2012, 08:21 PM
better than before, lose the line through the O and just play with making the letters more consistent

Jake_NN_Bake
05-09-2012, 08:30 PM
better than before, lose the line through the O and just play with making the letters more consistent

Aww the line through the o is my steez lol. I will see what it looks like without. Thanks so much for the crits. Its nice to have people actually help instead of just saying you're a toy.

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 08:40 PM
steez is something you develop not just have lol

dankbudz
05-09-2012, 09:19 PM
i was born with steeze
(not really)

Coleo
05-09-2012, 09:23 PM
68415

Coleo
05-09-2012, 09:29 PM
68417flic for talk and crits on my handstyle i guess

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 10:11 PM
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5451/7168596448_1f8bbac358.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/7168596448/)
jerman (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/7168596448/)
I put a ER at the end to spice it up a bit... not too happy with it but I think its got potential. Thoughts?

dankbudz
05-09-2012, 10:21 PM
I like, not fond of the loop to arrow

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 10:36 PM
yea i wished i didnt do it right after haha

KroeGHK
05-09-2012, 11:41 PM
68415

Halo. Do this. ASAP. 500 times.

KehmONE
05-10-2012, 12:54 AM
6843168432

Reposting, because I didn't get any crits last time.

KroeGHK
05-10-2012, 01:51 AM
I dig it, but bring down the left leg of the A, its doin somethin weird to the overall balance and makes the A look like a 4, maybe do the same with the M, its less noticeable in that though

MoganOne
05-10-2012, 01:13 PM
HHad to move quick as shit for this one
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-05-10_13-05-16_190.jpg

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 03:41 PM
nice 1 mone always love some drips too

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120510_134449.jpg

PETER
05-10-2012, 03:46 PM
Hip3: Your b's are inconsistant up top and the bottom is booty. All the letters are boxy, but the a. Your d and b (seeing as they are nearly the same letter.) should be more uniform. Keep it up though you're makin' headway.

Kaze
05-10-2012, 03:49 PM
mone-thats clean and sick, nice suttle drips too
hipe i like ur first B with the boxy top, if u made the A match it it would be dope. nice write though it looks good

8======D
05-10-2012, 05:56 PM
halo reacharound2 getting up edition

your fucking wackest halo fan ever, what the fuck is that? a highlighter around your tag??? your mom might think its nice and hang it on the fridge for you but in reality she and everyone else knows its shit just write it like a normal fucking person maybe you might get one thing right in your life

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 06:22 AM
thats all great and all but i think its time to return to scheduled programming
Mone that N is pure freshness, i dig it a lot
trying out a new name, crits?
68669
68670
68671
68672
68673

6i9o
05-11-2012, 09:11 AM
^ I like the second the best
68676
Life goes on

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 03:13 PM
that xenophobe shit for the handstyle battle...i hate the letter X -__-
68705

pover
05-11-2012, 03:20 PM
I like that big ass G in gopher.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 03:40 PM
the lowercase one? yeah i cheesed so hard when i started doin that not to toot my own horn but i think it looks fresh

pover
05-11-2012, 03:41 PM
the lowercase one? yeah i cheesed so hard when i started doin that not to toot my own horn but i think it looks fresh

Hahah, so are you changing your name or just messing around?

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 04:08 PM
havent decided yet, im kinda thinking its time for a change just cos i got reallyyyy ignorant one night with my boy and just dont want that association anymore lol

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 04:19 PM
@Kroe - Not digging the lowercase g, idk... just not my thing. Top 2 and the bottom one are best imo, aside from the G.
Those xenophobe's are tight though.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 04:22 PM
damn :/ idk my only issue with the lowercase g was that it might kinda look like a shitty S but i do like the bottom one a lot

pover
05-11-2012, 04:23 PM
havent decided yet, im kinda thinking its time for a change just cos i got reallyyyy ignorant one night with my boy and just dont want that association anymore lol

Haha someone's afraid of getting raped?

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 04:26 PM
that xenophobe shit for the handstyle battle...i hate the letter X -__-
68705

Those X's are dope imo, all of those are fresh. I like the bottom left the best.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 04:26 PM
@pover you could say that haha.......ha...............ha....hmm.......
@kehm thanks, im glad you dig them cos i definitely dont lol

6i9o
05-11-2012, 04:56 PM
^More of a fan of the bottom right X. Maybe it's just me

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 05:26 PM
68736
Trying a new A.

dankbudz
05-11-2012, 05:26 PM
land of oppor-fucking-tunity
fucking poopin shit
highlighter accent

pover
05-11-2012, 05:28 PM
68736
Trying a new A.

Lol is that a celtic cross on your O?

Restart
05-11-2012, 11:52 PM
take the cross out of your O

ChadWarden
05-11-2012, 11:58 PM
why the fuck did you circle your t?

and your z is backwards.

dankbudz
05-12-2012, 12:21 AM
Kehm do it own style..

HOERS
05-12-2012, 02:20 AM
shirtey...shirt

68859

KehmONE
05-12-2012, 02:52 PM
Kehm do it own style..

What?

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 03:38 PM
yo hoers wanna do a hand exchange? i write gophe

HOERS
05-12-2012, 03:52 PM
yo hoers wanna do a hand exchange? i write gophe

I'm down. my g's are whack as fuck though

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 03:59 PM
lol thats alright, im not too good with H's

blackmath
05-12-2012, 05:01 PM
crits?
68909

Coleo
05-12-2012, 05:21 PM
leave out the 2 dots the squigely line and only do 2 out of the 3 lines on the left

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 05:35 PM
meh..crits?
68914
68915
68916

pover
05-12-2012, 05:48 PM
meh..crits?
68914
68915
68916


Hey man, you're already getting on that new name? I like the bottom one, but the H divides the letters too much.

Also here's some shit testing my new mtn 94 marker. Shit flows really nice.

68918

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 05:52 PM
lol nah those arent up and around yet, just some secluded tests and that top hand is absolute fire, im feelin it a lot, the bottom one is good too, that R is dope

pover
05-12-2012, 06:01 PM
lol nah those arent up and around yet, just some secluded tests and that top hand is absolute fire, im feelin it a lot, the bottom one is good too, that R is dope

Thank you, so you are one of those people who have their garage all painted up and shit or what?

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 06:03 PM
no no that was just on something i found and i happened to have paint and a name to practice, sheer coincidence i promise(not sarcasm either)

pover
05-12-2012, 06:05 PM
Haha cool, what a "coincidence".

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 06:11 PM
pretty convenient imo

dankbudz
05-12-2012, 08:33 PM
thats a montana marker? you got ripped son! sharpie markers write better than that. that looks like one of my slightly dead chisel tip bic markers..

MN Nice
05-12-2012, 10:38 PM
Sharpie chisels on paper for life

pover
05-13-2012, 02:14 AM
Yeah lol but it's not meant to paint on paper.

dankbudz
05-13-2012, 03:55 AM
¿que?

pover
05-13-2012, 04:04 AM
Digo que no es un rotulador hecho para el papel. Has entendido?

SenseTwo
05-13-2012, 12:49 PM
Heres some of mine on paper, sometimes ill add stars of quotes or dots or periods these are just basic. i dont like to go all full out and fancy with my tags. the dude i get my inspiration from writes his really simple too. open to crits and will listen to anything you guys say. i might go post in sticker thread, i got some toy stickers lol :p
69050

HOERS
05-13-2012, 12:53 PM
@sense bottom two look nice. one above thats cool too... but the two top ones are ugly.

and i agree. i like to keep it simple with the handies