Tags

[graffiti bad boy]

i do surgery very cheap yes

i can cure a cancer

but they wont listen

listen to me!!

listen listen listen

[H1P30N3R]

crits please and thank you !! dvise devise gettin it up nice work man keep doin your thing!

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120611_225412.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

^The letters lean in slightly different directions and get bigger and smaller on different letters. city is straight

[Kaze]

Thanks hipe, for ur tag maybe try to do the L straighter with a bit of an angle, also maybe have the bottom part of your R abit more sharp and straight, i dig that N

[Saul Gud]

start your A's a little higher, last one almost looks like a lowercase e

[H1P30N3R]

word thanks for the crits my handstyle need alot of help ....trying to get em goin tho!

[Brosef Stalin]

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[notmikegiant]

this isnt so hot but i didnt do much else tonight

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[Kaze]

stalin this could just be personal preference but i think ur E's should be tighter in the middle, i think that open gap in the middle kinda makes it look weird but other then that looking pretty good, just keep practicing and try doing some tags slower

a fat cap would compliment ur tag alot norfsuthr, maybe the loop in ur W should be a little bit smaller?

nice little character notmikegiant, looks dope lol...even just doodling some handstyles in a book is decent practice to keep from getting rusty

[skinaone]

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i got bored and i wanted to do KLAUS name andwell me NERK

[Coleo]

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i dont know why but i thought this was someone on here...
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[Kaze]

^^Cool Flicks
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[Coleo]

the first R in the tag on the left would fit better in the tag on the right ... if you know what im saying...

[Kaze]

yeh i get what u mean, i just generally dont like the R in the 2nd, i tryed what you said and it does actualy look decent with that tag, gonna try to experiment with it. thanks for the feedback

[Coleo]

no problemo brotha

[aiko]

Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?

[MN Nice]

Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?

Ever heard of a fucking mop?

[Sicotik13]

i really like that neso for some reason lol

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/3b145310.jpg?t=1339663233

[GpersKreepers]

love the name 4eyes, so dope, loving your hands too man

good looks gowj, Dviser

neso looking alright too, oil based paint? looks nice and thick,

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/3b145310.jpg?t=1339663233

Bump

[6i9o]

Four is good
The kink in the Y messes up the flow for me

[Kaze]

^thanks Gpers. looks good MN,with the Y u shouldnt have had it bend so much but a slight. suttle bend with not really sharp corners would look real sick i think, the four part looks real nice, just maybe practice on having the top loop of your R a littttle bit smaller or somshit but i dunno, the tag looks good...i have lots of problems with R's

[ZIK_ONER]

75171 Tryin a new style

[Kaze]

I like the G and the little kicker at the bottom of your first N but the bombing part is really congested, try to do it abit slower and spaced out, then bring in the speed factor when you feel ready. just keep practicing man

[Axil]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7232/7372435416_d5a9c1217a_z.jpg
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8028/7372571042_3ab12798fb_z.jpg


Homemade is the best its the only one that lasted 8 layers of mtn

[Kaze]

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[Coleo]

badass^ you should don some 1 liners...

[Kaze]

thanks coleo, yeh iv tried doing oneliners in the past but they didnt up that clean lol, the V and I beside eachother is the hardest part i think, any suggestions from anyone would be helpfull lol

[skinaone]

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not bad D is niceish E is ok V is ight I is hidding to much S is weird and for the last E try doing something like
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to take up more space

[Kaze]

thanks skinaone i appreciate ur advice, il work on some extensions for the last E, that S was just fuked...kinda screwed up on it lol

[H1P30N3R]

I need to make and or order some markers the otr hard to buff is my shit ! but mine is dead :(... nice ups dvise

[Kaze]

if u order a marker try a black molotow burner, they r abit more then otr's typicaly but they r really sick...i like them atleast. and thanks for the props dude

[Tranc]

Axil, are you dumb?

[Axil]

Because i used mtn to buff :P?

[skinaone]

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for saulguds bitch ass

[Z3BRA]

lol toys calling eachother toys

[skinaone]

lol you post pics that arent yours lol

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-06-15_21-20-24_882-1.jpg

[Kaze]

^ that looks sick, dig that R alot.

ignore the retarded star in the first picture, other 2 pics r just ideas for extensions with the E, crits would be appreciated
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[Z3BRA]

http://i48.tinypic.com/b8vjog.jpg

[Kaze]

thanks zebra, il try to clean that one up

[MN Nice]

http://i48.tinypic.com/b8vjog.jpg

***** please, your hand style is mediocre at best, that tag shits on yours.

[Tranc]

Because i used mtn to buff :P?

No.1 Wasting paint on covering your own tags.
No.2 You're a fucking moron.
No.3 Posting the exact same tag over and over and over.
No.4 Never listening to people's crits and keeping the same old handstyle.
No.5 Having a bad tag.
No.6 Putting a stupid fucking :P all the time.

[BigFaggot]

No.1 Wasting paint on covering your own tags.
No.2 You're a fucking moron.
No.3 Posting the exact same tag over and over and over.
No.4 Never listening to people's crits and keeping the same old handstyle.
No.5 Having a bad tag.
No.6 Putting a stupid fucking :P all the time.
no.6 is my favorite, but all of those are spot on.

[Kaze]

^^ haha thanks MN

[Tranc]

Kaze you should try a love heart, it would look pwetty

[Axil]

Exchange anyone? - Tranc if anything i thank you for the kick up ass all the critz i get will be used - and i will not post a pic unless its a new tag

[Kaze]

tranc what do u meen a love heart?? haha i was trying to make it look like a heart sorta but it could have been better :/

axil il try and do some creak tags for u

[ZIK_ONER]

Axil, I want you to sit down right now, and stop fucking putting that tag up, it's ugly, I'll do you some creaks soon..

[Axil]

Thanks

[Cynical]

Pretty shit, but I guess it's a start.

http://i.imgur.com/zYpKC.jpg

[MN Nice]

Those curvy lower case f's look familiar... Hmm...

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/b467bbf9.jpg?t=1335848204

[Kaze]

^that tag is too fresh, real eye candy haha

Cynical- keep practicing them simple letters and ul eventually get it down, just dont bite letters from other writers...getting ideas is ok but you shouldnt be trying to make ur stuff evolve right now anyways...just keep practicing.

doodle shit
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[ven0m]

Those curvy lower case f's look familiar... Hmm...

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/b467bbf9.jpg?t=1335848204

no one likes a dick, mn nice... some letters are bound to look similar with other writers, get over it

[Tranc]

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The extension of the e at the end, see what it looks like as a love heart if you get me?

[Kaze]

i dont know if MN was necessarily being a dick but i dont got any say in it

lol thanks tranc, im trying to make it look like a love heart haha

[aiko]

third last from the second line cynical

[Axil]

1 Liner

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Critz

[Cynical]

I'll be honest, it's not something I bit, just how I write my 'f's, same way with my notes or whatever.
But I can see the similarities and I'll keep it in mind.

[Axil]

lastpage - bump
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Critz for oneliner :/

[6i9o]

I like your A. The R to E seems off
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[Tranc]

Axil, A and the K are off, rest isnt too bad...

[ZIK_ONER]

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[Axil]

Zik - try doing a curved n other than that its sick in my opinion

Any better
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Critz

[ZIK_ONER]

Aight I'll do some creaks for ya now

[Axil]

Thanks

[Kaze]

creak its looking better but still needs work, its not bad to experiemtn with one liners but still make sure ur drawing out lots of regular letter by letter tags. u dont want to have so much space inbetween ur letters like u do above...kinda same thing with throwies and burners with the negative space aspect. the lower case R looks nice though, try to have a tag with all lower case and one all upper case...even though a C and K are typicaly the same in both. just keep working at it and dont rush things

Cast that looks dope, dig ur T. i think the Cast part of the tag outshines the botton one part, looks dope man keep working at it

[ZIK_ONER]

75492 Tagged whatever first came to mind.

[Kaze]

shhit i dig those 2 dvizer'a hahaha may start putting some up like that..dig that style

[Brosef Stalin]

Digging a few of the things I see on the last few pages anyone wanna do a handstyle exhange?

@axil - that one liner... don't do that.
@6i9o - Go back to simple letters, you're doing it wrong.
@zik - looking good, keep it up.

[Coleo]

ZIK_ONER
i see how it is no neso?

["MONSTER"]

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[aiko]

you really need to chill out on the s and t. don't hook the s into the t, and don't flow the top bar so much

[Z3BRA]

never really work on tags (obviously)

need help

http://i45.tinypic.com/sgsd54.png

[Norfsuthr]

^^^
Bad.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7215/7392020174_8c5348600d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7392020174/)
oie_1871237yOX2RY4P-3 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7392020174/)

[MN Nice]

no one likes a dick, mn nice... some letters are bound to look similar with other writers, get over it

Just keepin em in check

[Kaze]

^ Zebra, second picture is better, first pic is not good i dont think. go more simple and just keep practicing, B and R beside eachother is tricky i think

norfsuthr does that say gowjer? it could be cleaned up abit

[Swirve]

75602 i worked on my handstyle, what do you guys think?

[omiz]

not bad.
style is a little common. In my own opinion, i like it.

[PETER]

Keep working. The c, i, and e's need a lot more work. The r is your best letter.

[Kaze]

Swirve that say ciseoner? i thought ur first E was a P for a second. ur on the right trak but still needs work. if it is suppose to say ciseoner then i suggest making ur O look more like an O and not an alien head lol, try to make the bottom part of ur R a bit more sharp and work on getting that S real nice, S's and E's r prob my fav letters lol

[Z3BRA]

http://i45.tinypic.com/sgsd54.png


Zebra is actually really hard to write, because of the BR

can someone give me more help on this shit

[Kaze]

maybe consider a name change with letters you like more, theres too much empty space between ur Z and E

[Swirve]

Swirve that say ciseoner? i thought ur first E was a P for a second. ur on the right trak but still needs work. if it is suppose to say ciseoner then i suggest making ur O look more like an O and not an alien head lol, try to make the bottom part of ur R a bit more sharp and work on getting that S real nice, S's and E's r prob my fav letters lol

yeah man thanks for the tips, much appreciated, i really just want a nice tag so its mostly what ive been practicing. and its supposed to say cise oner but i just put it all together lol

[Swirve]

not bad.
style is a little common. In my own opinion, i like it.

yeah i know it has to be common but i like it because its simple, idk, i like crazy shit but simple always looks nice too lol

[Coleo]

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mace and zobe are not me only want crits on the neso's... the one on the cement was done with witches brew with the dobber it came out very shitty...

[IbuprofenTablets]

Some crits would be cool.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Snapbucket/0514EFAE.jpg
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Snapbucket/6DCCCFE1.jpg

[ven0m]

i ccant tell if it's a snob or snore or what...
first one has ok flow, but neither are well legible. maybe if you distinnguished your letters or defined them better. ESPECIALLY if the last letter's a B

[Tempa]

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Gotta start somewhere

[SilentVandal]

Used up a ton of paper working on this new style!
what do you think so far?

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[cas]

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[PETER]

Silent: It's solid. Not feeling the dot above the K. I wanna see how you do with other words too.
Cas: Work on making your letters the same size for now. All your letters are round really, try making your letters more fluid.

[6i9o]

75893
Gotta start somewhere

I always thought you were Tempo. In that case, your O looks too much like an A. If you're now Tempa, good tag.

[KroeGHK]

http://i45.tinypic.com/sgsd54.png


Zebra is actually really hard to write, because of the BR

can someone give me more help on this shit
nahh yo im kinda diggin the way you got the BR, i tried your name and took like an hour and came up with these haha, hope it helps
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[Tempa]

I always thought you were Tempo. In that case, your O looks too much like an A. If you're now Tempa, good tag.
yea its tempa and thanks

[ZIK_ONER]

@6i9o No, not good tag, shit tag. Tempa, lose the quotations, make all your letters the same size, lose the shitty extension on the T, and always make 1 FULL LINE, as an example, you made a normal T at first and then added the extension, no, do the top part of the T all at once, thats if youre gonna stick with that horrible tag.

[Tempa]

@zik_oner Thanks for the crit helped me ***** i'm gonna work on my hand-style cause I know its shit

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/c26089e4.jpg?t=1340221547

[Kaze]

^^those r looking dope kroe...bottom one and top one r my favorites

that tag is nice MN, steezy and clean

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/c26089e4.jpg?t=1340221547

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[Norfsuthr]

Dope man, the R is my favorite. Get more original and funky with the first E and itll be perfect imo. Good spot too, if it rides.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7278/7410448292_61fff78d55.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7410448292/)
dege543d3s (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7410448292/)

Also bumping this, lets make it a good page eh

Some crits would be cool.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Snapbucket/0514EFAE.jpg
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Snapbucket/6DCCCFE1.jpg
N is sick, the O needs to be round or square or at least just bigger. I like the idea for the B but it could be developed more.

[KroeGHK]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/c26089e4.jpg?t=1340221547
flow.

[SilentVandal]

Not as good as my last one..
I did the bombing science to mess around with new letters.
Crits?

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[Kaze]

looks cool, try to have the first line of your M and A closer to the letter like it is on your K. i dig that K

[STOXY]

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this was my old style i have changed it now but what do youse think ?

[Wizard]

eww

[ZIK_ONER]

Wiz, you're one to talk for sure, but stoxy, that shit sucks. Stop painting, back to the books, keyboard letters are key for now. Dont put to much style in, i dont know if i can call it style what you just did, but, you get the point, look up local writers, pick up some ideas and get at it.

[KroeGHK]

I know i tend to post a variety of styles of how i do my name but honestly when I'm out with a marker this is how i get down
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crits?

[PETER]

It's my favorite from you Gopher. I would bring the middle part of the E down a bit and make the top of it similar in size to the O,P, and R and round it out a little to match. Just a thougt.

[Kaze]

looks dope gopher...its (gopher://gopher...its) good to have various of styles for ur name i think..ofcoarse u wana have ur own style and shit and like a certain tag style that u get up with mostly prob but its good to have a variety of diff tag styles...all done with pretty similar hand movements cuz its the same person. maybe try fuking around with some kind of extension/kick at the end of your R...i dig ur handstyles

Stoxy sorry but that is bad, go much more simple and do wat Zik said, start with keyboard letters. it will help

[KroeGHK]

@PETER word I think I know what you mean, I just make all my E's like that out of habit and cos I like the way it looks, but I'll definitely play around with it, thanks bro
@Kaze Yeah I hear you, honestly up until recently i was taking handstyes for granted but it really is a huge part of graff, and theres so many different ways to do one letter let alone ways to combine different letters, as far as the R i really struggle with those, idk why but unless its a one-lined R they all just come out crappy imo but I'll work on it

[Kaze]

yeh handstyles r like the signature of graff, just takes 3-7 seconds or w.e to get ur name up, cant compare to pieces and even throwies but i just really love handstyles haha, yeh i love when letters form into another letter or w.e but its hard haha. your R's looks good to me man, and i know jwhat u meen with the one line thing to make a letter, its muscle memory and flow, just get a piece of paper and try doing a bunch of R's with 2 lines or maybe even if u find something that looks kool..i use to hate R's and K's but now i like em, still need toons of work on them though, i like to draw my R's in one line too except in some tags that r just really simple

[PETER]

Don't get me wrong Gophe your hand is dope and that E looks good. I just feel it would make the over all composition of it have more continuity. I've started exploring stuff like Retna.... I'm not nearly as good but if I work on a work for a while I can get something decent looking. Speaking of which I like the letters you got going. If I find some free time at work I might have something for you.

[6i9o]

flow.

That^

Crits? Still unsure what to write anymore. This is KREAPS
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m60zeekSEv1r4k9c6o1_500.jpg
And this was for a friend
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m60yqgR2cK1r4k9c6o1_500.jpg
I only like the U and Y :|

[PETER]

you're trying to force style. tone it down, do some basic letters and go from there.

[ZIK_ONER]

^ what he said. Chill the fuck out and write keyboard letters.

[Wizard]

few old tags.. the bottom one i did lastnight...763377633876340

[-tang-]

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[Wizard]

wow holy shit, calm down dude lol.. make that much more simple.. that looks so bad with all the extras. try just simple letters and work on that.

[-tang-]

thanks for the tips but everytime i do like simple tags everyone just like its boring people who dont do graff think its looks better i guess thats why i do it

[Mildstyles]

Thats why they think its cooler....cuz they dont do it

[-tang-]

haha yeah

[Coleo]

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just the people that came to mind...

[Saul Gud]

lookin good coleo, took some pics of denver writers today, maybe some inspiration for ya'll
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[Mildstyles]

http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w476/awsskat3r/z3-2.jpg

[Saul Gud]

cool dumpsterhttp://farm6.staticflickr.com/5453/7426256476_3a9320e531_c.jpg

[SSK EVO]

Outta town right now but when I get back post some handies from around town.76629

[KroeGHK]

thanks for the tips but everytime i do like simple tags everyone just like its boring people who dont do graff think its looks better i guess thats why i do it

im just gonna say it right now, plain and simple, if youre not gonna listen and take crits when experienced people are trying to help beginner toys like you(no offense, but yeah..) then theres really no point in making an account here or asking for crits.
im not saying this to be a dick im just being straight up, its not just you, theres at least three other people on here who just post up the same shit, get the same crits, and use the same excuses for why they cant take their hand and draw out simple letters and progress like everyone else, its just annoying for those TRYING to progress and for those wasting finger muscle on typing the same crits over and over, once again, not trying to be a dick, but i just scrolled through the usual threads and found them flooded with oversized images of the same illegible (or bitten from mr. wiggles....cmon now...) stuff, shits discouraging...
anywho...
flick for turning this into a soap opera lmao
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[Z3BRA]

What I have been doing, it's basic lettering.

http://i46.tinypic.com/2h2mnty.png

[Kaze]

i dig that tag gopher and well put lol

looking good zebra, i like the bottom Z, work on the B man, it seems like a hard letter. keep at it dude

[Z3BRA]

i think lowe case A looks better

[Kaze]

the capital A needs to be taller, i like the lower case A more too, just keep practicing it and make it look more smooth

[Z3BRA]

http://i48.tinypic.com/160as0i.png

[Kaze]

the Z in the middle picture bottom row is nice, same with the E in that one and the E above it. try some with the capital A aswell and with a capital E, those would look good too...just keep practicing

[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/179917_407101386002958_372857836_n.jpg

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/401882_407101302669633_1868949609_n.jpg

my boy and I

[Saul Gud]

That venom tag is dope. what marker did you use?

[ven0m]

smash supreme / witches brew mop

[Kaze]

that venom tag is sick, yo venom do u live in the middle east or around there???? the writing on pole in pic of ur tag tripped me out lol

[karecard]

76969 haha alright im done usin care my new tag evoke is underneath tell me wat u think this time haha

that kare is a one liner btw

[ven0m]

that venom tag is sick, yo venom do u live in the middle east or around there???? the writing on pole in pic of ur tag tripped me out lol

yeah I'm living in Beirut right now because I work here

and bump:


https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/179917_407101386002958_372857836_n.jpg

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/401882_407101302669633_1868949609_n.jpg

my boy and I

[Kaze]

oh thats dope, are they really strict about graff there?

[ven0m]

not at all

and karecard, stop doing what you're doing because you're wayyyyy off track. go back to the drawing board. if you're here to learn, then you better start listening to what people tell you

[karecard]

recomenmd me a new tag all u nothin i seem 2 do is right ugh

[ZIK_ONER]

Because it isnt. How old are you? Seriously. First of all, you post your shitty ass tags and throwies in every single thread. People gave you crits and you didnt take them. Now everyone cant care less about your ass. We told you to use bars, we told you to go to the new to graffiti thread, we told you to use keyboard letters, and now we tell you to fuck off. FUCK OFF.

[KroeGHK]

because youre literally ignoring ALL OF THE ADVICE BEING GIVEN TO YOU
see those keyboard letters. YOU WILL DRAW THEM. YOU WON'T LIKE IT. YOU WILL DO IT 500 TIMES SO IT LOOKS CLEAN AS FUCK WITHOUT EVEN LOOKING AT THE KEYBOARD. YOU WILL NOT WHINE ABOUT HOW BORING IT IS OR WHAT YOUR NON-WRITER FRIENDS THINK. Nothing you seem to do is right because you keep doing the same thing, changing your tagname will not help, stop crying and flooding oversized pictures of the same stuff, go look at what other people are doing, study the letter structures DO NOT ATTEMPT THEM......yet. Report back when you have learned to resize your images and when youre keyboard letters can give everyone in MSK a hard on the size of Lil Wayne's ego

[ZIK_ONER]

Kroe... I love you.

[6i9o]

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[ZIK_ONER]

No no no, keyboard letters please! Trust me. You need to. For the love of inflating demon horned dolphins.

[Z3BRA]

well thats... different

[KroeGHK]

@6i9o (please see above comment)

[TastyMcNasty]

i hate my handstlye

[Kaze]

the aner handstyle in one of ur blackbook posts looked dope

[TastyMcNasty]

i hate everyone i've ever done lol. excluding my bombing science ones that i occasionally enjoy

[SSK EVO]

crits? 77004

[TastyMcNasty]

try again

[Kaze]

Evo that isnt working, try somthing simpler

Tasty post a tag or 2...i remember seeing a real nice smooth aner one once...looked good to me atleast

[TastyMcNasty]

meh
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0117.jpg

[Kesar]

Tasty I would make your loop on your R bigger to help define it more. It took me a good minute to read it.

[TastyMcNasty]

not taking crits from you

[Kaze]

Tasty i know ur way better then me so dont think im trying to act like a teacher or somshit cuz i know i aint in no possition to be giving "advice" to u and other pple on here but crits r crits i guess. feel free to disagree but i would say lose the upwards loop thing on the R, i like the kick thing at the bottom though, try to have the main middle loop of your E bigger and i like to have it real round and ovel but that is all up to personal preference. i like the A in the middle left picture but just try to have the bottom loop of the A not touch the top bar as much and shit. just spend a decent amount time doing tag after tag and it will look cleaner and cleaner.

[TastyMcNasty]

bottom loop of the R? are you talking about the part thats connected to the E? and ive filled several books of just handies, and im only this far lol. i think that if i actually get out and tag more, it'll progress on its own, ya know?

[Kaze]

not the part thats connected to ur E, like when u do the top loop of your r then it looks like you go out and up to the top then down into the kick, srry it sounds confusing but i hope u get wat i meen, it looks like u already have flow in ur handmovements just need to clean it up and shit. and yeh going out and tagging shit helps cuz it pushes you to want to progress and put up really clean stuff. just keep practicing dude

[TastyMcNasty]

i have no clue what you're talking about hahha

[Kaze]

haha fuck and i dont got a cellphone anymore either so i cant draw out what i meen. when you do the R you make your first vertical bar with your E right, that looks good, then u do the first circle/loop at top of R then it looks like from there u go up and out to the top were then it comes back down around to the bottom going into the kick of your R. i hope that helps more :/ but just reading it over sounds confusing lol

[TastyMcNasty]

i get it now haha, but i dont see whats wrong with it? its all done in one fluent motion

[Kaze]

its all up to personal preference, i see its done in one smooth fluent motion but i just think it would look better if you went out and down into the bottom kick rather then up and around down into the kick of the R. or maybe try having it where when you make the main top loop/circle of your R go out as u normaly would then down but on an angle back towards ur main veritcal bar then out into the kick....sounds confusing, i suk at explaining this stuff lol

[karecard]

77025 hey guys got my new tag, avoke, thought of evoke but realized an a would look better, and apparantly theres some "revoke" guy already. any way tell me wat u think

[Rasm]

Revok, dipshit.

[TastyMcNasty]

77025 apparantly theres some "revoke" guy already.

I FUCKING DIED!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Ya who is this Revok guy???? i've never heard of him bahahahah
77026
77027
77028

[karecard]

[QUOTE=TastyMcNasty;1807807]I FUCKING DIED!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Ya who is this Revok guy???? i've never heard of him bahahahah


haha ya you did die your right

[Z3BRA]

http://i46.tinypic.com/28cn40y.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

haha ya you did die your right


nice one? learn to at least quote properly haha

[karecard]

why, shouldnt matter aslong as you get the point.

[Rasm]

Just picked up a new word; it's pretty original.
Like my tag guys?
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8793/karecardsuckscock.jpg

[Z3BRA]

clearly says ReDOlb

[SilentVandal]

Been working on it some more.. Crits?
77032
77033
77034
Just experementing on this last one.

[Kaze]

^ looks good but il say the same thign i said last time, i think you should have the first vertical lines of your M and A closer to ur letter so the letter is more clear and it doesnt just look like sharp waves. its not as bad on the bottom one minus the A..keep practicing dude

[Z3BRA]

@MARY

I like the third one

[zachatnca]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/deam_oner/denz.gif
LOOK AT MY NEW TAG..ITS DENZ...OH YEAH..

theres a well known writer in new york who writes denz...

[zachatnca]

77039

friend wants some crits, whatcha guys think?

[Z3BRA]

you should cut the one liners

[SSK EVO]

crits? Better,worse? It says Reskew btw. 77040

[TastyMcNasty]

meh
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0117.jpg

sloppy, but i'll bump for crits

[PETER]

I like the middle one. I don't like a's like the others, but that's personal preferance. I am having a dificult time making it out. It does look cool though.

[ven0m]

I personally don't like any of em... your lines are all too messy and wacky for my taste, the word looks twitchy and scribbly if you catch my drift... not solid enough to be looked at more than once, and you would want people to wanna look at your tag more than once, know what I mean?

but like I said, that's just my opinion

[Kaze]

Tasty if you like that R then you just keep it and just work on making the tag there looking more solid and clean, do it slowly couple times then fast bunch of times....when u write out ur tag on paper, do u use ur hole arm or just wrist?

[TastyMcNasty]

whole arm. only reason why i love that R is because I have never seen anything like it

[Kaze]

yeh i havnt ever seen anything like it before either, just stick with it then and just try to make the overal tag look cleaner and what not...overtime that R could progress into some really funky style if u keep persistent

[Tranc]

crits? Better,worse? It says Reskew btw. 77040



http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=reskew+tag&um=1&hl=en&sa=N&biw=1366&bih=667&tbm=isch&tbnid=rnA1qTzm7BxKIM:&imgrefurl=http://video.agaclip.com/w%3D05prdvpwiUD&docid=AYMvGQvqKMoMuM&imgurl=http://videoclipsimage.agaclip.com/4p_WgDok5br-_-graffiti-tag-handstyle-reskew-acc.jpg&w=480&h=360&ei=bdfoT9OAHM-h-QaSlayxAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=912&vpy=286&dur=1940&hovh=194&hovw=259&tx=148&ty=153&sig=107013612764657888211&page=2&tbnh=145&tbnw=168&start=18&ndsp=24&ved=1t:429,r:16,s:18,i:181

OH NO, I CALL A BITEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[Z3BRA]

^ nice find

[Tranc]

I thought Reskew was a pretty well known writer?

[KroeGHK]

lmao as if anyone is surprised, y'all saw what evo was puttin up before no way in hell he couldve gone from
77113
to
77114
with such quickness
cmon dude, dont try and bullshit internet graff trolls, you'll just end up looking like an idiot

[Kushbombing]

That red tag is still crap

[SSK EVO]

xD not even my scribes. It was a friends. I wanted to see if I do actually suck or if you guys were just hating on everything I posted. The only reason I did it is was everyone I know IRL says my tags are dope. Didn't know how mad people would get over the interwbez so chill out guise.

[TastyMcNasty]

they probably tell you they're sick, because all your friends are wack and/or biters

[dankbudz]

this^

[Kushbombing]

xD not even my scribes. It was a friends. I wanted to see if I do actually suck or if you guys were just hating on everything I posted. The only reason I did it is was everyone I know IRL says my tags are dope. Didn't know how mad people would get over the interwbez so chill out guise.

People are guna think you sucks for months, especially graff writers, after a few months you can upgrade to TOY status, keep sketching

[Tranc]

Evo, you've just fucked yourself

[toopski]

for the crew, was a bit wet
http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/5453/imgp0115x.jpg

just a couple
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/5519/imgp0136k.jpg

[Kushbombing]

Mmmm

http://i1244.photobucket.com/albums/gg580/kushbombing/4e1b7df4.jpg

[Kaze]

looking good to those above^

short break
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[SSK EVO]

People are guna think you sucks for months, especially graff writers, after a few months you can upgrade to TOY status, keep sketching
Been graffing for 4 months. I've been practicing everyday. My throwies and pieces aren't that bad but I'll keep working on my shit. I didn't just start graffing when I joined bombing science.

[Norfsuthr]

Dviser- not a fan of the top R. theyre cool other than that

CRITS PLEASE
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8015/7452825148_a2781ef766.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7452825148/)
photo-1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7452825148/)

[Kaze]

Thanks norfsuthr, yeh i dont dig that R either, i fuked up on it and sorta the botton one too but w.e, there both gone now haha

i dig the tag but i just think the top of the G kinda throws it off, maybe try to make it so the 2 lines are closer together...sharper i guess, somthing more like the top right edge of the R, i dig the J and that R is trippy, i dig it, would be cool to see what it could progress into

[Saul Gud]

7719077191771927719377194

[MN Nice]

xD not even my scribes. It was a friends. I wanted to see if I do actually suck or if you guys were just hating on everything I posted. The only reason I did it is was everyone I know IRL says my tags are dope. Didn't know how mad people would get over the interwbez so chill out guise.

My mom says I'm all city. Get at me.

[toopski]

My mom says I'm all shitty Get at me.

fixed that for ya

[toopski]

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9555/imgp0152g.jpg
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/964/imgp0151z.jpg
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/7910/imgp0150e.jpg

[Coleo]

775387753977540775417754277543

[6i9o]

7754477545
Grogy/Gragy
Gettin any better? :|
I know the G's on the bottom one are wack, but at least to G to R flowed ok on the top one
@Coleo, Third one's probably my fav

[MN Nice]

fixed that for ya


day flicks
http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6576/imgp0138c.jpg
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9441/imgp0139g.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/9001/imgp0140j.jpg

bm crew by xaqt
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/6372/imgp0141u.jpg

buff me crew by noah, ran out of keyline
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/8674/imgp0142y.jpg

bm cru by xaqt and noah
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1392/imgp0146w.jpg

some dogs this was done last night and goto get day flicks in the arvo and bam
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4109/imgp0145.JPG
Bowel Movement Chewers.

[toopski]

awww ur butt hurt over the net please suck some more dick and neck yaself thx

[skinaone]

77574
meh

[MN Nice]

awww ur butt hurt over the net please suck some more dick and neck yaself thx

lol i might get butt hurt about someone better than me telling me I suck, but you?

NAWWW. Tell your boys to keep those MAD BURNERS up, Xaqt is 2 fre$h with doze arroez.

and Lesen SDK wants his style back that you stole.

http://i.ytimg.com/vi/CZffGXgAGEw/0.jpg

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9441/imgp0139g.jpg

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

he's aloud to bite because he paints a piece EVERY night. Plus, he's in the future, so this also means hes better than you

[SSK EVO]

77575 I know this may be toy a'f but is it an improvement? this is how I used to tag my name and it would look way better if I had markers but the cops took em.

[Z3BRA]

Thats not a v

[skinaone]

he's aloud to bite because he paints a piece every night. Plus, he's in the future, so this also means hes better than you
lol ^^^

[SSK EVO]

Thats not a v yeah it is. Simple v's are too simple and wack. I like to add a little bit of steez to it and you never gave me a real crit.

[Tranc]

yeah it is. Simple v's are too simple and wack. I like to add a little bit of steez to it and you never gave me a real crit.

Yeah... Steeze...

[PETER]

No it is not a V a V looks like ---> V a fucking V. A W broke in half. That is some sort of fucked up L at best. No amount of markers is going to fix that. Go simple, start over, and build slowly. You can't force style especially if you have none. You want a real crit here it is. Write this just like you see it. EVO. You can keep the money thing I guess, but work on making it consistant. Quit scribbling letters. If you can take a caligraphy class do it. Burn a fuck load and when I say fuck load I'm not talking a little ruled note book from school, a sketchbook, a ream of printer paper.... I mean every scrap you can find for the next year should have as many tags as you can fit on it.

[Kaze]

yeah it is. Simple v's are too simple and wack. I like to add a little bit of steez to it and you never gave me a real crit.

LOL...sorry to say but that tag is wack...i dont think ur in a position right now to be saying simple letters r wak. i suck too so i use simple letters...and ateast it looks decent...were as those letters looks like a 9 year old playing with a marker. Take peters advice. you dont just add steez when ur starting out lol...takes tons and tons of practice to develope it

[ZIK_ONER]

Kaze stfu your tags are dope. SSK, "steez" isnt what i would call it, and those people that say your tags are dope, they must SUCK SHIT to say that. Sorry, but, keyboard letters for now.

[avokamine]

sup guys just made my acccount, i write mawk1 hows it look? critss yo77579:cool:

[DEMPO]

77581

[Kaze]

HAHAha thanks Zik

Mawk, your m and a are good, the w is alright but outa place, the K is bad and so is the one part, work on making ur letters more consistent in size and what not, try to clean it up abit, keep working at it dude.

thats looking dope dempo

[avokamine]

alright man thanks will post back in an hour or so with a new pic. its alright to do that right

[Kaze]

yeh thats fine lol, all about getting feedback and shit

[avokamine]

haha k ttyl

[Rasm]

This isn't instant messaging

[avokamine]

theres no need to inform us,

[avokamine]

7758377584

[Kaze]

try doing a couple tags slower, i know u want to go fast so it has that look to it and when ur out tagging u will want to do them fast but do some slow ones so it gets imprinted into ur brain and arm muscles to y ur hand is making those movements and not just moving for the sake of making the letter. try to make ur letters the same size and consistent in placement. keep practicing dude and keep doing simple tags for now, i think you will get the hang of it, just keep practicing

[aiko]

7758377584

more like sauk one









big fat cock

[Kaze]

we all gotta start somewere

[Z3BRA]

the only thing i like is the a to be honest

[toopski]

lol i might get butt hurt about someone better than me telling me I suck, but you?

NAWWW. Tell your boys to keep those MAD BURNERS up, Xaqt is 2 fre$h with doze arroez.

and Lesen SDK wants his style back that you stole.

http://i.ytimg.com/vi/CZffGXgAGEw/0.jpg

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9441/imgp0139g.jpg

other then the fact i dont sketch shit and just paint off the top of my head, haha yeah mate 100% bite because lesen is the only one painting that style ive seen aussies doing it since the late 80's so maybe lesen aint an original either i dont take influence from international writers i still to learning from my country men

[PETER]

For sure toops. I've seen that style in every Zine, website, video, etc since I discoverd graff. Once again... nearly nothing if not nothing is original anymore

[toopski]

exactly haha id of understood if my stuff looked more then 50% like anything he does but it doesnt

cunts shouldnt get all butt hurt over things on the net im out painting more then most cunts around the net i just keep the more important shit to myself

[Kesar]

Welcome back Kare, I don't think anyone missed you.

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77685

[avokamine]

whats goin on?

[avokamine]

77731 hows it lookin

[ZIK_ONER]

I have a feeling kare is Mr.graffiti bad boy aka badder boy aka 8=====>~~ or just a dumbass bitch.

[Kaze]

that A did look firmiliar lol...but anyways it still looks out of place and shit, work on making ur letter the same size, do a normal plane K and dont have the bottom of ur E so sharp

[SSK EVO]

A real crit thats all I was asking for. Yeah, yeah I'll keep practicing and I'll take this urban art class at my high school (they even give you spray paint to tag with.)

[Kaze]

just go very simple, use simple letters, just adding bends and sharp corners or w.e to ur "tags" dont make it look better. we all gotta start simple when we start out so take the crits pple give u and do much simpler stuff

[avokamine]

77744

[MN Nice]

exactly haha id of understood if my stuff looked more then 50% like anything he does but it doesnt

cunts shouldnt get all butt hurt over things on the net im out painting more then most cunts around the net i just keep the more important shit to myself

Quality over quantity.

[Axil]

tbh id rather have 50 tags than 1 good peice just saying