Tags

[Axil]

tbh id rather have 50 tags than 1 good peice just saying

[Wizard]

here lads, im thinking of changing my name to noia. what do yous think?

[toopski]

Quality over quantity.

haha the stuff i keep to myself is quality but sometimes u gotta have quantity as well

[6i9o]

here lads, im thinking of changing my name to noia. what do yous think?

Sounds interesting o.O

[6i9o]

77575 I know this may be toy a'f but is it an improvement? this is how I used to tag my name and it would look way better if I had markers but the cops took em.


The fuck. The cops took your markers?

[Kaze]

Wiz i like the name noia, id go with noia over wiz

[Wizard]

yea i like the name noia cus im always paranoid when i go writing cus im always by myself.. so paranoid = paranoia.. BAAAAAM!!! it hit me, noia.. lmao

[MN Nice]

Not bad. Plus with the N and A at the end you could have some nice symmetrical flow. But let that come naturally, keyboard letters for now.

@axil - you got your shit twisted man, at least in my opinion. no respect from me if they ain't got their shit nice, no matter how up they are. And besides, people talk about how good a piece is and word of mouth gets you a bigger publicity. The ones who don't have style come off as just herbs.

[Kaze]

Axil, id rather be able to do a sick piece and have the shittiest handstyle then have the sickest handstyle and do shitty ass weak pieces....ofcoarse you would want both which is were moderation comes in. and what mn says is true, if you cant put up a nice looking tag or throw then you shouldnt be going all out doing tags all around town.

[aiko]

even though i love the shit out of this tag, i should probably come up with something new, its been awhile, anyway, heres some flicks.
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6gmai2wV31qdde9zo1_500.jpg
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m69db3r5CL1qe2mzwo1_500.jpg
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6evt6s0Vg1qdde9zo1_500.jpg
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sorry the last ones are so big, and i through a little achy in there, ya know who u are

[Kaze]

i like that top one and the one on the car seat or w.e it is, maybe try a more round style or somthing if you wana try somenew shit

[aiko]

yeah thats what I'm thinking, i used to work round, until i got into my one liners, which eventually turned into what i have now.
ill post some shit in a week or so. thx.

[Kaze]

oneliners and round style tags can work together well too, just dont wana rush into it like i did before :( i find doing a "round" style v kinda hard too...with out it looking like a u lol

[PETER]

as solid tag with good flow can lead to a solid piece. with flow. sometimes I write out a word and do my bars around the pieces of the letters.

[aiko]

yeah everyone says my v's look like u's and i notice it with a lot of other writers as well

[Kaze]

@peter iv tried doing that too but it always looked messy after haha, i wish i could do sick pieces or even a burner lol

yeh aiko i know what u mean, i have a similar problem too since theres a v in my name too, i usualy just do a simple old v though

[SSK EVO]

I know this is simple a'f so I'm gonna work on it but is it better than my old shit? Thinking of changing my name to aztec just cause I like the letters and how it sounds but idk. Oh and which evo is the best? 777937779477795

[Kaze]

it looks better, middle pic looks better then the top one just make ur letters the same size...the A looks to big, dont do that line think u did by your C in the top picture. out the the four evo;s id say i like the top righ one best. its looking better keep practicing the simples man

[Z3BRA]

http://i48.tinypic.com/v40wat.png

http://i46.tinypic.com/258s8k1.png

[Kaze]

i think the tag you did with a lower case b and lower case r together looked better, these r getting better though, the one on top right is not good though. keep practicing dude

[MN Nice]

http://i48.tinypic.com/v40wat.png

http://i46.tinypic.com/258s8k1.png

Thought you were strictly a sticker bitch?

[Z3BRA]

Thought you were strictly a sticker bitch?

you know it

[MASE P_2s]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7125/7480391522_91c9849181.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/7480391522/)
snags wec (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/7480391522/) by CantTouchSociety (http://www.flickr.com/people/snagscts/), on Flickr

[6i9o]

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[notmikegiant]

zebra its getting better but i think that extension on the A is hurting you
vamp, try something like this

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out with a buddy

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[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/250891_494794193880828_1811248667_n.jpg

for some d00d

also, biro eyes...

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/534623_494794060547508_1135955191_n.jpg

was bored at work.. dont ask

[6i9o]

The bottom of the S seems awkward. Maybe if you made it like the top of the S it would help fill up some negative space too. Like kick it so it's under the D maybe? Or maybe that would be too much, i dunno
Those eyes are hot. A bit creepy but good looking

[SSK EVO]

crits anyone? btw I don't put stars next to my tags only when I'm practicing. 78253

[bugs-one]

^^ Yo, you from Desert Hot Springs? NO on that evo. Dont leave your letters so close together.

[Kaze]

EVO just spread ur letters abit more but keep it simple, better then before..keep ur letters the same size too

[SSK EVO]

^^ Yo, you from Desert Hot Springs? NO on that evo. Dont leave your letters so close together.
EVO just spread ur letters abit more but keep it simple, better then before..keep ur letters the same size too yeah I'm from the D, where you from? & ok I'll keep working on my shit.

[SSK EVO]

The fuck. The cops took your markers?
xD yeah if they catch you tagging they take anything you could use to tag.

[Tranc]

They'll take them as evidence, you should get them back once you've been to court or whatever happens.

[TastyMcNasty]

with my new grog marker. It's over some of my handies that are now only one year old haah
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[Kaze]

yo tasty looking better, looking cleaner and shit..maybe try a lower case A aswell as the capital, maybe try to get the loop in ur E abit bigger but thats personal preference i think, those soar tags look pretty cool too dude...honestly im liking the R on the soar tags more then the R on the ANER but its all personal preference and that R you do is original so if u want to just keep it, maybe have the top main loop of the R bigger though

[Kaze]

new idea for a more grimey style, crits would be very appreciatd
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[PETER]

make your V more V like.... don't bent the top of the D and R imo. I like it's potential.
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[Kaze]

thanks peter i appreciate it. do u think the V in the right picture second tag down is alright? i was just fukin around with tags last night and wanted a kinda grimey one. do you meen like dont bend my D and R like i did in the bottom middle tag or like dont bend it at all in any direction?

those vamp tags r sick man, at the start i thought it said AMP and that was the very first name i did for graff haha

[ZIK_ONER]

Clear ur pm's kaze, vamp tags are sick yo

[avokamine]

78557 yeeeee homeade mop tag

[KroeGHK]

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[PETER]

Goph: That is dope as fuck. Fat cap that for real.
Zik: I was just talking about the very top portion. Either keep 'em flat all the way across or do them like the D on the very bottom left one (the V in that one is recognizable as a V the rest are easily confused as U's.) The V you are talking about could work if the bottom was slightly more pointed.

[Kaze]

oh k dope thanks peter, i get what u meen now. il do that for sure thanks for the help man

[STOXY]

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My new tag its simple crits anyone ?

[TastyMcNasty]

good job keeping it simple, but go through a few full notebooks of just handies before you touch walls

[STOXY]

thanks for the advice i thought to keep it simple because my last one was shocking and i will try to get it better :)

[Z3BRA]

pen > paint

[SSK EVO]

the u is wack and the n looks awkward because the other letters are lowercase. keep working on it

[PETER]

a few for fun. crits?
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[KroeGHK]

ooooh that bottom right one is dope as fuck

[6i9o]

Vamp
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6sqg2zj2S1r4k9c6o1_500.jpg

Deviser
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6sr6uAicH1r4k9c6o1_500.jpg

Gopher (fuck P's)
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6stsbTl1J1r4k9c6o1_500.jpg

[Mildstyles]

Kroe that gopher is pretty dope, you could fatten that up with some bars and turn it into a piece. I imagine it'd be pretty cool
That's one way i learned to do pieces, do some handstyles and then turn them into pieces by just fattening it up. Unless you got a gay handstyle. Then don't do that.
Bipo practice handstyles for the next 6 months and dont post any pictures...notebooks upon notebooks full of handstyles.
dviser i really like the 3rd one down on those grimey ones, its dopelicious.

[Kaze]

yo peter thanks dude those are sick! i cant decide which one i like best..comes down to the bottom right with the lower case D and the top left one, bottom left sharp one is sick too thanks man, gave me good ideas

thanks Naked, i wana get a solid rounded style down and a grimey one

Bipo keep practicing man you will eventualy get it down. do some tags slower to to get the movement imprinted into ur muscles tissue memory or w.e the fuk it

[dankbudz]

heres some bad shit

[Kaze]

i like the top pic, nice flow

[PETER]

Thanks guys. My personal favorite is the bottom right.
6ido: Keep practicing. Simplify your letters a little more you're almost where you need to start. You're improving for sure, just keep writing and writing.

[snoketg]

78869
simple stee, can i get some crits?

[Shofs17]

7888278883


CRITS por favor

[snoketg]

@dankbuds that seldom is baus
@shof the top one is better imo without the wonkey underline and stars, and use the second s for both S's but take off the top tick thing, aka make it simpler

[Kaze]

snok those r looking good dude keep practicing and you will see more and more improvment

shofs i dig the name, saeso is dope...i kinda like the tags in the bottom picture more, make that E more round perhaps and it could be in the works for a dope rounded tag style

[MN Nice]

7888278883


CRITS por favor
Those flat top a's and e's ain't flowin with the s's and o

[Shofs17]

snok those r looking good dude keep practicing and you will see more and more improvment

shofs i dig the name, saeso is dope...i kinda like the tags in the bottom picture more, make that E more round perhaps and it could be in the works for a dope rounded tag style




Those flat top a's and e's ain't flowin with the s's and o

Yeahh man I need to work on writing better a's and e's so that I will be doing, but preciate the advice.

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8290/7547938318_1357960499.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7547938318/)
photo-6 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7547938318/)

Dank- I like the -eldo- alot but the m could use some curves and put some style on the S.
snoke- is that a u or a v? if its a u put a line going down on the right to define it a bit. and that r throwie looks cool.

[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/563513_464192923600695_674931943_n.jpg

which number's the best?

[6i9o]

2/6/10

[Kaze]

number 10 is fuking sexy, my fav for sure, 2 and 7 are dope too, that bottom left throw PH throw is nice too..just dont really dig the bottom wave things if u get wat im saying

norf i dig that G...looking good keep at it dude

[Norfsuthr]

11, 4, 5, and 6 if you make the h bigger. The cursive is straight but its not something id focus on as a primary tag cause everyone can do that shit.

[Sajmn]

So guys, which one do you think is the best?7905879059

[Sajmn]

Another bunch of pictures of that tag I'm writing ...
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[ven0m]

So guys, which one do you think is the best?7905879059

you tryin to fuck wit me punk?

[Sajmn]

you tryin to fuck wit me punk?

what's wrong?

[saveme]

handstyle in the heavens7912179122

[Kaze]

nice heaven spots saveme

found a piece of wood in my house and put it to good use
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[SCAR26]

nice heaven spots saveme

found a piece of wood in my house and put it to good use
79131

Aghh why can't I get my D's x.x lol looks good man.

[Kaze]

haha thanks, just keep practicing dude

[saveme]

Thnx homie !!

[6i9o]

you tryin to fuck wit me punk?
haha xD

[gim]

79330
been forever since i posted up in here been messing with sacc for a bit now which goes better with the tag in your opinion the under lines or !
i like my tag and hella comfortable with it but yall can still crit if you want

[Kaze]

try writing it sack maybe, so its more interesting, try a lower case A aswell as a capital. keep practicing

[jiffer]

79396

sketchy but if i can get any pics of mine on the street i'll get em' up.

[saveme]

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[KroeGHK]

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stumbled across this the other day, a few years old from my days in NCK

[Tranc]

stumbled across this the other day, a few years old from my days in NCK

Hang your head

[KroeGHK]

um...no?

[saveme]

Hang your head
do us all a favor and hang yourself !!

[Z3BRA]

79437

what marker is that

[saveme]

its a art primo mop wit smash ink

[saveme]

79525

[Kaze]

looks cool saveme

[SSK EVO]

crits??? 79538

[6i9o]

79525

Nice

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m79ji8RRdJ1r4k9c6o1_500.jpg
Exchange with peter. gotta work on my tags =/

[saveme]

nice heaven spots saveme

found a piece of wood in my house and put it to good use
79131 very nice work man!!

[Kaze]

thanks save me, i appreciate it dude

EVO have ur letters more the same size, keep filling up paper with little tags all over the place

6i90, u should have had the A a normal A, looking better then before though keep practicing

[aiko]

79573

[Tranc]

79525

Like this one, H could look more like a H if you get me?

[saveme]

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[PETER]

says hebo

[IbuprofenTablets]

Looks like you tried to either tried to blend the R in with the O, or you seizured the R into a flare.

A beginning rule in this shit is not to fuck with connections just yet. Save that for when your flow's matured...

For now, I suggest working towards a better flow; that flare on either the R, or the O shows me how contained your flow is.
Your shit's a bit forced is what I'm sayin' really. Perhaps not your style, but your execution; it gives off an air that exhibits that you're trying too hard.

Like, you were so busy trying to floss that you forgot to keep the H alligned with the rest of the letters.

Keep your letters alligned as if your tag's inbetween two parrell lines. Make sure not to let a letter lean, unless the rest of letters are leaning in the same manner.

[Kushbombing]

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[Boville]

cool

[6i9o]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=79665&d=1342589176
in this one your K looks too much like an H to me

[Wizard]

holy fuck why does the delete post button not fucking delete the post?! bullshit lol

[Kushbombing]

i dont think it looks like an h at all

[Z3BRA]

i dont think it looks like an h at all

thats because it doesnt

[6i9o]

i dont think it looks like an h at all

I'm just saying your K's look more like K's than this one specifically. It still looks like an K, but I find the other one's are better. Sorry if I didnt really clarify .__.

[MN Nice]

That seventh flick is nice.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/59c87442.jpg

[Kaze]

dope page, MN that tag is fresh dude, kushbombing ur pics r looking good too, ur tag seems to be getting better, that 3rd and 4th last pic r sick, dig the tags onthe pillers and that green box who ever that guy is

[Norfsuthr]

4eyes looks good man
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7126/7606975366_c1d35eeff4.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7606975366/)


Can i get some crits^

[Kushbombing]

yeah dont paint peoples fences

[Norfsuthr]

Actually if you wanna PM me I'll help you out with your tag, nobody wants to see that shit next to a nice little altr.

[no-sleep]

hahahaha

[Kushbombing]

thanx bro i pm'ed u

[toopski]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8013/7617647518_baac30c186.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7617647518/)
handy (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7617647518/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr

[PoresOne]

New to the forum...

I write PoresOne.

Here's a tag I came with on the spot

http://puu.sh/Kzc8

[Kushbombing]

^?
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[KroeGHK]

ew...idk
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[Kaze]

i think it looks pretty cool..maybe could be simplified a little bit bit i think its interesting, i like that P alot

[PoresOne]

Here's another one.

Im toy as fuck lmao.

Crit me please

http://puu.sh/KNtv
http://puu.sh/KNKh
^computer mouse :3

[Kaze]

^not bad at all, work on your R's and with the S, either lose the top extension or make it smaller and tighter to your S

[PETER]

shit's dope gopher. love the P and R.

[Kaze]

Park Bench Bombing 2, kindly named by chadworden...crits would be nice
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[0nly10fmikind]

some stuff i seen today...8026180262802638026480265

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[MN Nice]

Park Bench Bombing 2, kindly named by chadworden...crits would be nice
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Keep the DEV but scrap the S is a ugly squiggle. Try an uppercase I too.

[Kaze]

thanks MN, its a oneliner so thats y the S is all messy like that haha, im not really sure how to get a upper case I in there and make it look good, if you got any suggestions for the I and or S that would be appreciated

[toopski]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7137/7635327388_3a70b0e084_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635327388/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635327388/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7253/7635329512_33bc707ddb_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635329512/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635329512/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8421/7635331764_facc7723f2_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635331764/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635331764/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7258/7635333900_2a1ff1f762_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635333900/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635333900/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7111/7635336118_a5a21f7680_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635336118/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635336118/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8159/7635337862_ff271f049a_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635337862/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635337862/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8148/7635339866_81a57569d7_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635339866/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635339866/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8429/7635341792_98f8b4459c_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635341792/)
sly one (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635341792/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7124/7635343744_bf9b1e3c5d_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635343744/)
xport boredom (http://www.flickr.com/photos/bad_mannered/7635343744/) by hold the pickles (http://www.flickr.com/people/bad_mannered/), on Flickr

just a few things i seen around

[MN Nice]

thanks MN, its a oneliner so thats y the S is all messy like that haha, im not really sure how to get a upper case I in there and make it look good, if you got any suggestions for the I and or S that would be appreciated

I think you're too hung up on one liners. They're convenient but not necessary. I mean, its ok to use when its easy like with e's since the bottom swoop comes up to where you want to start your next letter. Just say fuck it to one liners for a minute and see what you come up with.

flick for talk.
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/1c6597d3.jpg?t=1343112997

[Kaze]

i see what ur saying mn, im having a hard time making the I and S flow with the rest of that particular tag, il try somthing else though so it isnt a big mess lol. im gonna try somthin with the I like u did above..btw that S is sick. thanks for the help dude

nice tags noah

[toopski]

cheers i get around

[PETER]

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[smack1one]

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quick one

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[Kaze]

that warning is dope peter

smack1, maybe take is back a step, bottom one is abit confusing

some guys named devise and resin
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[Coleo]

^sick but the S is looking lika 8

[PETER]

the end of the E comes off like an L or I. This cat Moe here does the same and it looks like Moel. Resin needs to work on his S and the N looks like a W.

[Kaze]

thanks coleo, yeh that S does look like an 8 haha, i noticed that too after

i see wat ur saying peter, shoulda just left the E alone and not done that little flip thing

[SenseTwo]

Where can I get a marker to tag? What kinds do you guys use an where do you get em. Like do you make your own? Nice tags guys.

[Kaze]

if you dont wana get any off bombingscience or some other graff store u can go to a local art/hardware store and they will have something around there...you can really use anything to tag... from a sharpie magnum to a normal ball point pen and even a rock if u have too lol...leaves a grimey affect and may not be the cleanest but it still works..thats wat them cavemen did lol

[smack1one]

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[Axil]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8019/7646501554_8f07dd1deb_z.jpg

Critz please!

[Kaze]

the A is good and the shape of the C is good dont do that C-R oneliner connection yet, keep ur letters as individuals and shit..but place them in a way so they flow together and shit. work on that K too, its better then before though keep practicing and dont rush into it

[Kaze]

writing on some cardboard
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[omiz]

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tags

[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/375631_469783159708338_1237969812_n.jpg

[KroeGHK]

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[Mildstyles]

I like the top one in the first pic gopher
Any crits?
http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w476/awsskat3r/66d0ac40.jpg

[Kaze]

kroe, i like the top pic especialy the third one down in it but the bottom pics seem like u didnt try as much

mild, i like the way ur N goes to the A. all i can say is maybe to have the circular part of your E more rounded/oval, like when ur doing ur K into the E have the right leg of the K come down then have a line go up and then start your E on that line, or just lift off after your K and start the E, maybe try to have the circular part of ur A more rounded/oval aswell. looks good though i like it

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/IMAG0858.jpg
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/IMAG0853.jpg

[Halo161]

Quick Pilot Tag in a Restaraunt Bathroom
http://i1175.photobucket.com/albums/r635/CardsBeenPlayed/Mobile%20Uploads/imagejpeg_2-6.jpg

[PETER]

finger: no one liners yet. get a solid basic tag going first. Work on spacing, lean, and flow first. The one liner is more the direction you need to be working.... that top one is horrible.
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Swine: Your letters still need work. Try and keep all of the marker in contact with the surface and keep it going the same direction the whole time.

[seywhat]

peter- nice and simple
swine- i really dig the s, rest needs a lil bit of time to catch up. keep working that style
finger- ur best is the lil one on the right. keep it simple. jus keep all bars straight on that style(k bends), the others r a lil too wild for now tho
nes- nice, i dig the high spot
naked- dope, kaze was right bout the k-e connec tho, itd look dope with a lil raise
gopher- very dope, the blues r ill as fuck
phat- nice spot.
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same ol shizz lol jus showin im still around. will have sketches posted later.
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[MN Nice]

It's been a minute, man^ you just missed the new RR tourney, maybe you can still squeeze in

[seywhat]

good looks yo

[DirtyDoper]

Seywhat: I dig the simpler blue tint the best.
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[MiDo93]

http://i1175.photobucket.com/albums/r635/CardsBeenPlayed/Mobile%20Uploads/imagejpeg_2-6.jpg

CDC Swine?

[DaFugg]

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/93e6985b.jpg

It's just a concept, but I think after practice, I can match the loops. Good idea?

[dankbudz]

make the loops a cock ring

[DaFugg]

I can't draw dicks.

[PETER]

Never seen one or what?

[HOBEL]

i just want some feedbacks please.
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[PANiC978]

Can I get some criticism on my shit? I'm looking for criticism more so on the tag itself, I know my lines are whack and the halo and the arrow pointing down is retarded,but just the overall style of the tag, what do you like? what would you do to it? Or is it hopeless and I should swap lmk thanks 81293

[DaFugg]

Never seen one or what?

I always felt gay drawing dicks. I've only seen one. How many have you been looking at bud?

[KroeGHK]

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[DirtyDoper]

Lets stop dickin around and give some creative criticisms people.
Panic978: Looks great, cept the end could use a little tweaking to keep your flow going.
Kroe: The top and bottom Look premium, on the middle the P looks like an R but the actual R looks sick.

[fyskl]

Hobel- i would just say work on the e on the bottom one and bring the l a little closer

[PANiC978]

thanks Doper!

[PETER]

i always felt gay drawing dicks. I've only seen one. How many have you been looking at bud?
when you're in highschool gym, the army, play sports, and go to the gym as an adult you see them. Not like i'm trying, but they are usually just hanging out in these locations. Typically them making you that uncomfortable is an indication of a deeper issue.

[HOBEL]

thanks fyskl any other advices/comment would be appreciate. thanks

[fingerlickingchicken]

Can I get some criticism on my shit? I'm looking for criticism more so on the tag itself, I know my lines are whack and the halo and the arrow pointing down is retarded,but just the overall style of the tag, what do you like? what would you do to it? Or is it hopeless and I should swap lmk thanks 81293
Ya homie looks tight, that s on the end is kinda wack tho

[PANiC978]

thanks its actually a C the down arrow makes it look like an S but I got rid of that real quick this was actually the second tag I ever sprayed

[TBS]

Sey still has one of the best hands i've seen.

[Z3BRA]

i think phobia has the best!

[TBS]

yeah each to their own...

[DirtyDoper]

where my crits at?

[PETER]

your E looks like an S. You need to write a little bigger. Go a little more simple until your flow develops a bit more. If your tag looks good in pen it will probably look good in marker. Do a simple tag. Then fill a few dozen pages in just tags then ask for crits then.

[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/399411_508417222518525_2034366436_n.jpg

shit looks like it withstood the test of time. in reality, it's only a few months old

[MADE!]

Aight, so I write MADE, and i have been for a while. But I'm not exactly sure if it's good. Like, I see all these writers with these non-English names and I feel like a dumbass for having an actual word. Can somebody tell me if I should change it?!

[ven0m]

negro all fucking writers have actual english words for their names..what planet u from?. and we don't start our sentences with "alright" here, so check yerself

[Mildstyles]

I think he meant spelled correctly. And starting with alright... I dont get it? Whats wrong

[Gatsoi]

alright, idk why he's so salty... write whatever you want.

[mathew1232]

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What do you guys think, crits appreciated!

[ven0m]

lol u guys are so boring man. i was just fuckin with the newbie nothing serious

[BennyBoii]

been practicing in the books lately
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[DRIG]

been practicing in the books lately
crits?
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i would use a thicker marker, and drop the halo. A lot of people use the halo to do memorial tags for writers that have died. also, i dont know how i feel about the dots, it might be stylish if you keep working on them, but right now it looks like you just held the marker in one spot for too long.

[MADE!]

I meant i feel kinda like different knowing that everyone's name is misspelled. I think that's sick. But should I change my name?? Like theyres so many writers with dope, misspelled names. It makes meh feel like i should change it cause its to normal and basic. I DONT want to change it because i have the tag down. I'll post some pics soon of my sig.

[Mildstyles]

Who cares. If you like it then don't change it, pretty simple

[BennyBoii]

i would use a thicker marker, and drop the halo. A lot of people use the halo to do memorial tags for writers that have died. also, i dont know how i feel about the dots, it might be stylish if you keep working on them, but right now it looks like you just held the marker in one spot for too long.
Thanks, i actually read somewhere last night about the halo away after posting them. Could you give me any feedback on the letters by any chance.

[TastyMcNasty]

^halo's are also used for writers who haven't been caught with a certain name.

[sir.to.you.]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8292/7721545776_c67280c5ee_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/7721545776/)
IMG_3498 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/7721545776/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8426/7721547298_b0453044bb_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/7721547298/)
IMG_3500 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/7721547298/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[TastyMcNasty]

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[MADE!]

Mildstyles, im not sure if i like it tho.

[MADE!]

81730 Ya, i know i belong in the toy threads but i want some tips on what to fix add etc. so, bring it on i can take it i guess

[TastyMcNasty]

^stay on that track of simplicity, til you get it better flow and such. try making them larger too

[MADE!]

Thx brotha

[MADE!]

What if my name is taked. How dufuq do I find a new one

[Kaze]

youjust come up with another god damn fuking word

[PETER]

Lmao^

[Halo161]

Look just figure out if your name is taken by somebody really well known , if not make sure your name isnt taken by anybody in your area, if not keep writing what you write, if so just think of another word and write it

[convert]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/84430116@N07/7734432166/in/ just a quick handstyle

[aiko]

ahahah what happened to this thread

[Kaze]

hahah glad u enjoyed that peter
MADE just find a name with letter you like and can do well..its always good to have a name with a good meaning too but thats up to you...just do somthing that you like..always another name out there

[PETER]

I just changed my name to letters I like to draw. Jesr.... it doesn't make a bit of sense but that's not the point.
This pen is a rightous piece of shit. Still working on gettting it down. Fucked the E up bad. thoughts?
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[Kaze]

i like that style peter, i think that E can work and also a upper case one would look good aswell, the R is dope but it doesnt really seem to match the grimey'r style of the other letters

[PETER]

Ideas on how to make the r fit in a bit more?

[Kaze]

maybe a R more rough/grimey like this..you can obviously make it look alot better then this though..just a general idea
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[quickiehand]

Hey, im new to forums and i write sane

going to post some pics later

[Norfsuthr]

OK BRUHH

Heres a tag, go ahead and bite me if you want Im pretty good n stuff, basically the best in my school. This is behind our field i did it at lunch last year
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7131/7744449482_770c5b4e06.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7744449482/)

[ven0m]

Hey, im new to forums and i write sane

going to post some pics later

of course you write sane, we were expecting you

[wackiwo]

Few different markers, can I get some crits please?
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[wackiwo]

Give me some crits please.
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[PETER]

it feels way to ridged to me and it almost looks like you crossed yourself out. Just me... rock it if you like it.

[convert]

it ok i dont understand why any body wuld bite it

[quickiehand]

of course you write sane, we were expecting you

why is that?

[PETER]

Quickhand: Because everyone writes sane.
Convert: He was kidding.

[quickiehand]

everybody? havent heard even 1 guy that uses that name
and im not from america anyway

[ChadWarden]

hey, im new to forums and i write sane


joins bombing science.





effortlessly sums up internet graffiti in very first post, without even realizing it.

[quickiehand]

I looked it up and there was people named that, I wonder how I didnt saw it when i chose that name.. so I should change it huh

E: thought MOBER would be kinda whack, what ya all think

[Halo161]

Mober would be pretty dope
http://i1175.photobucket.com/albums/r635/CardsBeenPlayed/Mobile%20Uploads/imagejpeg_2-19.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

of course you write sane, we were expecting you

hahahahahahahaha, i don;t remember the last time this site made me laugh so hard

[quickiehand]

that was a good response from ven0m and this a bummer cos i've been writing sane around for month or two lol but its cool.

[MN Nice]

Oh shit, make way guys. ^ we got a veteran here.

[quickiehand]

thanks if you consider me as better than you

[ven0m]

lol tasty... quickiehand, I should also give you some big props on hitting the Brooklyn bridge with Smith back in the day... that was epic

[Norfsuthr]

critics
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8304/7771407714_0dc4d199dd_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7771407714/)

[Kaze]

i like the OWJ part but i think the G could be fixed up abit, just my opinion though

[quickiehand]

thanks I can take credit for that.. just didn't have heard of him no biggies.

crits?
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[Norfsuthr]

what does that even say. i dont actually care what it says. just do



































Simples

[Kaze]

quikhand go much simpler

[quickiehand]

Okay I got alot work to do with new name. I used to do alot simpler though and it says Sober

[Halo161]

Mober would be pretty dope
http://i1175.photobucket.com/albums/r635/CardsBeenPlayed/Mobile%20Uploads/imagejpeg_2-19.jpg
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[MADE!]

FUCK. My name is supposedly taken. It's hard as fuck for me to find a new one.

[Kaze]

wat were u thinking of?

[ven0m]

please say sense !!!!

[B E E R]

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[quickiehand]

finding new name is hard and frustrating, got anything in mind?

and B E E R, I like the 4 ones from bottom

[quickiehand]

yo new name, this time SNEK
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and new gear tomorrow

[Kaze]

nice BEER, those were some cool throwies in that other thread to

quik hand wb the name enks? same letter different order, may sound stupid i unno just a suggestion, all i can say it keep practicing. maybe take it back a step or 2 and work on ur K's simple it down, the S and N in the second pic is really bad, the bottom S and ur other N's r alright with that lower case E, try to have the bottom part loop up abit higher rather then leaving it low like that.

[B E E R]

Thanks its all Local Artist where im from

[B E E R]

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[badder boy]

^^ IM GLAD YOUR POS & PROUD OF IT

https://images.encyclopediadramatica.se/c/c6/Bug_Chasers_-_3.jpg
(that must be you on the front of the boat you dirty bug chaser)

YOU SHOW REAL COURAGE TO HOMOPHOBES

[badder boy]

OK so look here's a tag to look at before everyone catches the gay

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/graff/SAM_0159.JPG

[quickiehand]

Kaze thanks for the critic, S is my strongest letter maybe cause you can strech it so many ways and are u suggesting that I try ENKS?

E: yea got it now u did suggest it okay its nice but I have problems with K and how to connect S to K smoothly enough but the EN or ENK part aint bad. I practice more and post later ty

[B E E R]

your so tuff behind your computer!! quit talking so much trash kid you get up on paper! jeeze give a head a shake before u start floppin your chops.
OK so look here's a tag to look at before everyone catches the gay

[B E E R]

I THINK IT SAY POZ IN THAT PICTURE NOT POS! lol wow kid good ine
^^ IM GLAD YOUR POS & PROUD OF IT

https://images.encyclopediadramatica.se/c/c6/Bug_Chasers_-_3.jpg
(that must be you on the front of the boat you dirty bug chaser)

YOU SHOW REAL COURAGE TO HOMOPHOBES

[quickiehand]

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[Kaze]

bottom one is the nicest i think, i would do that one over and over and perfect it then do the more wild stuff, keep at it dude

[quickiehand]

thanks for the crits

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/IMG_20120816_150556.jpg

[Halo161]

http://i1175.photobucket.com/albums/r635/CardsBeenPlayed/Mobile%20Uploads/imagejpeg_2-21.jpg

[Kaze]

nice gatsoi, somthing bout the N seems slightly off though, prob just me though

halo u never listen to wat i say so saying this is prob useless but id say simple it down and lose that box around ur tag and work on the e, dont have the top left part of ur S come out so far, keep at it

[rock1er]

Yea haven't been on a forum sence forever but got alot of free time.lately anyways Jus.got back into graf have pics up soon

[quickiehand]

Halo what do you write? Can't spot an S in ur tag